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by behrinthecity
Wed Aug 31, 2022 9:29 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

dreamon - I am so sorry for how much time has past! I am mostly recuperated from my hospitalization (long story short-- anemia is way more debilitating than I expected, but dietary changes are helping to reduce body weakness/dizzy spells). Anyway, your message is good timing-- I am currently review...
by behrinthecity
Tue May 31, 2022 12:47 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

glad you liked my comment! I wasn’t joking :lol: Happy to see a new part! And loved the fact that it was dreamer focused. Looking forward to more. :mrgreen: I'll keep that mind! Though it shouldn't happen again before I finish! (At least it better not. :| ) Now that we're entering the final stretch...
by behrinthecity
Sun May 29, 2022 11:19 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

keepsmiling7 wrote: Sun May 29, 2022 9:23 am Welcome back!
Thanks for this great chapter. I felt the emotion......
Thank you for the comments, especially on feeling the emotions. I was worried about whether this part was ok given that I had to include so much info.
by behrinthecity
Sat May 28, 2022 9:42 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

keepsmiling7 - :mrgreen: MP - :mrgreen: Thank you for checking in! I was hoping to get this part soon after your comment and well... we know how that went. :cry: dreamon - thanks for checking in. What brand is your computer?! I’m willing to write them a strongly worded email on your behalf for this...
by behrinthecity
Sat May 28, 2022 8:18 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 62 5/28/22 (WIP)

Hot off the presses! I guess one benefit of my computer woes is that I ended up adding more between Max and Liz, and have decided to separate the other scenes for part 63. I didn't want to delay this any longer. So apologies if there are any typos I missed. I will respond to feedback in the followin...
by behrinthecity
Fri Apr 22, 2022 6:19 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

A/N: My computer died after I presented a lecture this week meaning the next part is inaccessible at the moment. :(

After i redo some work documents, I will start rewriting the next part. Really annoyed at myself for not backing up the latest part. :x

Apologies for the further delay.
by behrinthecity
Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:48 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

So glad to see the return of this story, and I hope you are doing much better now. Unwell, yes Max has a problem. The problem is Zan taking over, even the energy shield can't stop that. Hi keepsmiling7 ! Thank you for the wishes and comments. I am able to withstand being at the computer more and mo...
by behrinthecity
Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:45 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

OMG, yes it was! Now I’m thinking does anyone still have access to the chip? What ramifications does it have on Max not just mentally but physically too. And who’s going to take it out and will there be any negative effects with taking it out? So many questions…so this just means that we need longe...
by behrinthecity
Fri Mar 04, 2022 11:38 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)


Any dreamer moment is my favorite part! Lol

:D As a fellow dreamer, I get that! :wink:
by behrinthecity
Mon Feb 28, 2022 7:13 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 7/15 (WIP)
Replies: 186
Views: 316120

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 61 2/26/22 (WIP)

dreamon- Wow! Thank you for your comments. I am so pleased the part had something not seen in Roswell fanfic, thus far! Just to confirm, was it the revelation at the end of the part? Thank you for wishes. clueless - Thank you for the wishes and comment! Am totally blushing knowing my story is the r...