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by behrinthecity
Mon Oct 26, 2020 8:48 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)

keepsmiling7 wrote:
Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:14 pm
The parents were so ready to bring their children home.
It was known that Kyle was the rock for everyone.
Will their suffering really be over??
Now everyone needs to rest, then work together tomorrow.
Great Part!
Thank you, keepsmiling7!
by behrinthecity
Sun Oct 25, 2020 7:12 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)

It took me a long while to get this part where I felt it still covered what I wanted to set up for the upcoming parts, especially given that it's after midnight for these guys and these poor kids (especially Max) should have some rest before making important decisions about their future. In fact, I ...
by behrinthecity
Sat Oct 24, 2020 12:06 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 57 8/22/20 (WIP)

I hope you are feeling better! It’s great to have you back and thank you for another great part! clueless , thank you for the wishes and comments. I've rewritten the latest part 20 times, but I think I finally have it in satisfactory form. I just want to do one more read through to catch typos, but...
by behrinthecity
Sat Aug 22, 2020 9:20 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 57 8/22/20 (WIP)

Thank you keepsmiling7 for the welcome and comments. I didn't fall though, was just really sick. Yes, Max's mind still has a ways to go after his maltreatment at the hands of the Special Unit. But the others will make sure he knows he's loved and not alone. Currently, reworking Part 58 because the m...
by behrinthecity
Sat Aug 22, 2020 11:57 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 56 5/12/20 (WIP)

Hi everyone. Hope you all are safe and well. Am back much later than intended. I fell ill after my conference, but after some rest and meds, I did my best to write a little bit each day even if it was only a few words. And so I finally present you Part 57. clueless - Thank you for checking in. Previ...
by behrinthecity
Wed Jun 17, 2020 12:37 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 56 5/12/20 (WIP)

Quick update announcement-- as this next part was only partially written before I started posting, I still am fleshing out certain scenes. Due to an online conference I'm presenting in this week, it will be a bit longer for the part to be updated. Will try to get it up in a week. keepsmiling7, cluel...
by behrinthecity
Wed May 13, 2020 1:52 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 56 5/12/20 (WIP)

Even if you did warn that this fic was in the AA because of this chapter, I still didn't see that coming, and now I'm crying. Poor Max, this is so horrible that he had to learn about that. I'm wondering where Tess took the replacement baby... And the fact that he felt disgusted about not being stro...
by behrinthecity
Tue May 12, 2020 6:55 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Part 56

Hi everyone. Thank you so much for your comments. I am so happy people enjoyed the Buffy reference. :mrgreen: Stefuh- hehe The cuteness is all inspired by my niece and nephew's adorable mischievousness when they were toddlers. Thank you for commenting about the conversation between Fields and Max. I...
by behrinthecity
Thu Apr 30, 2020 10:03 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 55 4/30/20 (WIP)

clueless wrote:
Thu Apr 30, 2020 9:00 am
This was a great transitional part and my favorite scene was when Max thought about the possibility of him and Liz having kids!
Aww glad you liked it! As a dreamer you know I had to include at least one musing about that possibility! ;)
by behrinthecity
Thu Apr 30, 2020 12:39 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 56
Views: 10615

Part 55

Hi everyone. Hope you all are staying safe and well. Work has been intense the last few weeks, but I finally had some time to finish my edits to Part 55. keepsmiling7- This part should illuminate the reason for the special outfit. Thank you for your comments. For now, the detail about the Duprees is...