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by behrinthecity
Sun Apr 05, 2020 1:35 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 54

Hi everyone. Apologies for the delay, have not been feeling well these last couple of weeks. Thankfully, nothing related to the pandemic, but it's been tough wanting to get on the computer. Anyway, after resting quite a bit, I finally got my way here. Hope you're staying safe and well! keepsmiling7 ...
by behrinthecity
Sun Mar 22, 2020 1:49 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 53

Thank you all for your patience. keepsmiling7 - Thank you for your super prompt comments! And yes, Max surrendering was definitely the ultimate martyrdom. This part will give an answer to your question... at least somewhat. :p dreamon - Thank you! For what Cal is going to say-- wait no more! As for ...
by behrinthecity
Sun Mar 22, 2020 1:29 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 52A 3/8/20 (WIP)

Thank you for another great installment! I hope you and your family are safe and healthy with this covid19 craziness going on. I hope for everyone of you that you and your family stay safe clueless, Flamehair and to all readers on this site, I hope all of you and your families are staying safe and ...
by behrinthecity
Sun Mar 08, 2020 1:27 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 52A

Hi all! First, I'd like to say thank you SO much for your comments. You're all so kind, and I really appreciate your continued interest. keepsmiling7- When I put this part as a heart to heart between Max and Maria, I just had to include Enigma! I loved that the show gave them that storyline to just ...
by behrinthecity
Mon Mar 02, 2020 9:51 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 52

Hi everyone! Apologies for the slight delay, was dealing with internet issues this weekend and today was a busy work day. But before I crash for the night wanted to post the next part. This part will also be posted in two installments due to its sheer length. Keepsmiling7 and Flamehair -- thank you ...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 23, 2020 10:30 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 51A 2/22/20 (WIP)

Thank you so much for your comment keepsmiling7! And sorry for inadvertently misspelling your username! Will be editing that in the prior post shortly. And yes, this story definitely will not sweep what happened in the white room under the rug like the show did. In fact, when I first started writing...
by behrinthecity
Sat Feb 22, 2020 11:04 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 51A

Hey everyone! A little note first: Originally, Part 51 was going to include both Max and Liz’s perspectives, but then it always ended with them being quite taciturn. So I separated their perspectives, and since Max’s was already so long, I decided to split it. So here is Liz’s perspective in the con...
by behrinthecity
Sat Feb 15, 2020 8:04 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 51

Hi all, taking a little breather from RL and decided to post the next part. :) But first... keepsmiling7-- Thank YOU for your wonderful comments. I hope I continue to thrill with upcoming 'twists'. :twisted: :D Flamehair Thank you for your kind wishes and comments on the story. I understood what you...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 09, 2020 6:20 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Part 50

Many thanks to Liz for beta-ing this part. Previously… [From Toy House] Isabel implored her brothers, “Maybe it'll help us out one day to have an adult on our side.” As always, Michael with his “us against the world” attitude was quick to point out the negative. “Here's the problem...when you tell h...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 09, 2020 6:13 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Replies: 57
Views: 12289

Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)

Yes, you read that right. I am finally back to complete this story. I profusely apologize for the incredibly long hiatus... numerous serious health issues made if very difficult to continue writing. But my health is more steady these days, and I decided at the end of last year that since I had writt...