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- Sat Sep 04, 2021 11:22 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Part 60
Thank you everyone for your patience and support. I bring you FINALLY Part 60. Response to your feedback in the following post. Previously… [From Max in the City] Blinding blue light danced before Max’s eyes. There was an uncomfortable tingling in the back of his head as the emissary used him as a p...
- Mon Aug 23, 2021 6:57 pm
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 59 1/25/21 (WIP)
Flamehair, clueless, dreamon thank you for checking in. I'm still quite exhausted... will try to post by the end of the week
Hope you all are doing well.
Hope you all are doing well.
- Sat May 29, 2021 6:38 pm
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 59 1/25/21 (WIP)
Thank you clueless and Flamehair for checking in. Been dealing with a serious health issue so haven't had the energy and focus to complete and post the part yet.
Gaining some strength again.
I will aim to poat next weekend.
Gaining some strength again.
I will aim to poat next weekend.
- Mon Jan 25, 2021 9:56 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 59 1/25/21 (WIP)
Thanks, clueless! The Tabasco flavored whipped cream was inspired by a Tabasco cream pasta I've had in my college dining hall. It surprisingly worked, so I figured it would be a good way to entice Max to eat. 

- Mon Jan 25, 2021 7:42 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Part 59
I struggled with this part, but finally got it to what I hope is a decent stopping point. The actual conversation with Cal is getting bumped to Part 60, which I hopefully will finalize and post soon. jbcna - Welcome. Did you mean to quote the chapter? keepsmiling7 - thanks again for your lovely comm...
- Mon Jan 25, 2021 1:31 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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- Fri Jan 01, 2021 7:07 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Just wanted to wish you and your family a safe and happy new year! Happy New Year to you and your family as well, clueless !! Wishing all my wonderful readers good health and happiness for 2021! Part 59 is halfway done. If I can find a decent stopping point, I"ll post that first and then follo...
- Mon Oct 26, 2020 8:48 pm
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
Thank you, keepsmiling7!keepsmiling7 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:14 pm The parents were so ready to bring their children home.
It was known that Kyle was the rock for everyone.
Will their suffering really be over??
Now everyone needs to rest, then work together tomorrow.
Great Part!
- Sun Oct 25, 2020 7:12 am
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 58 10/25/20 (WIP)
It took me a long while to get this part where I felt it still covered what I wanted to set up for the upcoming parts, especially given that it's after midnight for these guys and these poor kids (especially Max) should have some rest before making important decisions about their future. In fact, I ...
- Sat Oct 24, 2020 12:06 pm
- Forum: The Alien Abyss
- Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)
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Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 57 8/22/20 (WIP)
I hope you are feeling better! It’s great to have you back and thank you for another great part! clueless , thank you for the wishes and comments. I've rewritten the latest part 20 times, but I think I finally have it in satisfactory form. I just want to do one more read through to catch typos, but...