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by behrinthecity
Sun Mar 08, 2020 1:27 pm
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Part 52A

Hi all! First, I'd like to say thank you SO much for your comments. You're all so kind, and I really appreciate your continued interest. keepsmiling7- When I put this part as a heart to heart between Max and Maria, I just had to include Enigma! I loved that the show gave them that storyline to just ...
by behrinthecity
Mon Mar 02, 2020 9:51 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Part 52

Hi everyone! Apologies for the slight delay, was dealing with internet issues this weekend and today was a busy work day. But before I crash for the night wanted to post the next part. This part will also be posted in two installments due to its sheer length. Keepsmiling7 and Flamehair -- thank you ...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 23, 2020 10:30 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Re: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 51A 2/22/20 (WIP)

Thank you so much for your comment keepsmiling7! And sorry for inadvertently misspelling your username! Will be editing that in the prior post shortly. And yes, this story definitely will not sweep what happened in the white room under the rug like the show did. In fact, when I first started writing...
by behrinthecity
Sat Feb 22, 2020 11:04 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Part 51A

Hey everyone! A little note first: Originally, Part 51 was going to include both Max and Liz’s perspectives, but then it always ended with them being quite taciturn. So I separated their perspectives, and since Max’s was already so long, I decided to split it. So here is Liz’s perspective in the con...
by behrinthecity
Sat Feb 15, 2020 8:04 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Part 51

Hi all, taking a little breather from RL and decided to post the next part. :) But first... keepsmiling7-- Thank YOU for your wonderful comments. I hope I continue to thrill with upcoming 'twists'. :twisted: :D Flamehair Thank you for your kind wishes and comments on the story. I understood what you...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 09, 2020 6:20 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Part 50

Many thanks to Liz for beta-ing this part. Previously… [From Toy House] Isabel implored her brothers, “Maybe it'll help us out one day to have an adult on our side.” As always, Michael with his “us against the world” attitude was quick to point out the negative. “Here's the problem...when you tell h...
by behrinthecity
Sun Feb 09, 2020 6:13 am
Forum: The Alien Abyss
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)
Replies: 176
Views: 228373

Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 65 2/19 (WIP)

Yes, you read that right. I am finally back to complete this story. I profusely apologize for the incredibly long hiatus... numerous serious health issues made it very difficult to continue writing. But my health is more steady these days, and I decided at the end of last year that since I had writt...
by behrinthecity
Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:52 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 49 1/29/09(WIP)
Replies: 65
Views: 115226

Part 49

So I caught my beta during a busy period, but she finally had a chance to see it today. [ LTF , you're the best! :D] So without any more delay... here's Part 49. :) Previously… [From Part 11] Agent Hammers lightly touched Max’s chest near to where he had been shot at graduation. The touch for once n...
by behrinthecity
Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:49 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 49 1/29/09(WIP)
Replies: 65
Views: 115226

Many thanks and apologies

Wow... I have really been away from this site far too long... and am really embarrassed to admit I missed thanking you guys for another award! http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c248/behritc/BestFicNoonesReading-vi.jpg (The irony of this award is not lost on me... ;p) and Runner-up for Fic That Made ...
by behrinthecity
Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:27 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 49 1/29/09(WIP)
Replies: 65
Views: 115226

A/N

Thank you so much cindylmy.93, sprayadhesive, wistful dreamer, Misha and cardinalgirl . My apologies for being away from this thread for so long... I've been having a tough time finishing this transition part, and was hoping to have it ready as a way to thank you all for the nominations and just for...