The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 27 COMPLETE 11-5-09

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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 11 5-8-09

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maxnlizforever-You'll see a bit more of their past in today's episode. They had been close when younger, and that has been rekindled now. :D
behr_able-Welcome to my little insane world :lol: More heat to come soon!
Natalie-rubber duckies all around! :lol:
Ginger-You know me--I never lie! 8)
Carrie-You are so sweet--thank you so much! :D Much love!
Eve-Well thank you so much! :D
Zoey-I'm glad you appreciated it--I was a little afraid it might come off as too oddball, but I thought it fit her character :wink:
elci, abbs, dreamer19 & jessah-I think we're gonna' need a bigger bathtub! :lol:
Michelle-Of course, Max has the added advantage of not having seen Liz for the past few months, so her transformation is a little more dramatic. Max is a bit more experienced, but it is a bit of a fine line to keep it sexy and still describe Liz's innocence. :wink:
Kris-Thanks so much! Enjoy! 8)
LilLoucfer-Thanks so much! :D

A/N-I'm sending out this update a day early so everyone can have a chance to read before my author's chat tomorrow evening at Roswell Heaven. If you aren't already signed up please do so and join us to discuss this story, Every Picture Tells a Story, and Just What I Wanted. I hope to see you there.

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“Explain to me how you just happened to have some bubble bath lying around?” Liz teased as she climbed into the tub, settling herself between Max’s spread legs in the candlelit room.


“I think I belonged to one of Michael’s ex-girlfriends—she kept it under the bathroom sink—didn’t take it with her when she left, ” Max smirked as he wet a bath sponge and showered the water down onto Liz’s chest, thereby revealing her rosy nipples as the bubbles washed away.

Noting his playful game, Liz grabbed a fistful of the frothy foam and swiped at Max’s nose, leaving him with bubbles dangling from it. He smiled as he swiped them away with the sponge.

“I’m glad she did,” Liz commented in self-satisfaction, “So we could have our first bubble bath together,” she said with a touch of pride.

“Actually Liz…” Max hedged, “This isn’t our first bath together,” he confessed.

“Excuse me?” Liz questioned, wondering when in the hell she had taken a bath with Max Evans without her knowledge.

Max heaved a heavy sigh as Liz turned halfway to face him.

“Well, when Michael and I were six and you were three, I came over to spend the night—,”

“Of course,” Liz chimed in.

“Well, it was getting late, and Michael and I wanted to play Navy SEALS in the bathtub, so we hauled in all the action figures and plastic boats we could find, used up the last of your Mr. Bubble, climbed in the tub and started planning our covert ops,” Max recalled with a self-deprecating laugh.

“Ok…” Liz encouraged.

“So, anyway, there’s some commotion going on downstairs, apparently, then deputy Valenti had come in, told Agnes he had picked up her underage daughter out at Buckley Point with some drunk college guys, and she needed to come down to the station right away and bail her out. So your mom hollers at Michael and me to watch you, but she didn’t know we were in the bathtub.”

“This still doesn’t explain how I wound up in the tub with you,” Liz’s eyebrows rose in disbelief.

“I’m getting to that,” Max chuckled. “So Michael and I are busy saving the world from evil, watery regimes, and you come in, insisting that you want to take a bath too, and you start taking all your clothes off.”

“Quite the exhibitionist wasn’t I?” Liz flirtatiously batted her eyelashes at Max.

“Yes, you were,” he teased, “So, Michael is shouting at you to get out, but you insist that it is time for your bath, and you climb on in the middle of the tub, splashing and playing like it was the most natural thing in the world. You grabbed Michael’s favorite G.I. Joe and stuck him in one of the little boats and started making motorboat sounds with your tongue and lips.”

“I can still do that—wanna’ see?” Liz teased lasciviously.

“Maybe later,” Max laughed, continuing his story.

“Your brother, of course, gets pissed, so he grabs a towel and troops downstairs to complain to your mother that you are naked in the bathtub with us. Well, your mom is busy cause a busload of tourists had just ordered and she couldn’t come back up. Naturally, Michael won’t take no for an answer, so he keeps shouting from the bottom steps, dripping all over the place, I’m sure.”

“So you saw my naughty bits—did I see any of yours?” Liz queried mischievously.

“There were still plenty of bubbles, thank you very much,” Max replied, flushing. “But you started yawning and begging me to wash your hair and give you a bath,” Max sucked in a big breath, “And you looked at me with those big brown eyes and then leaned back against me, strangely enough like you’re doing right now,” Max commented as the two chuckled lightly, “And so, I just gave in—soaped up the wash cloth—bathed you,” Max ran the soapy sponge down Liz’s arms and across her chest and tummy, clearing away the remnants of their recent activities, “Found an old Slurpee cup on the side of the tub…um,” Max scanned the floor beside the tub, then reached down and found a similar tumbler, dunked it in the water, filling it, “And washed your hair,” Max gently poured the warm water down Liz’s long tresses as she lay against his chest.

“Mmmm,” Liz closed her eyes at the relaxing feeling of the warm water, now coupled with Max’s fingers massaging shampoo into her hair.

“Keeping in mind, it wasn’t nearly as porny when we were little kids,” Max joked, eliciting a laugh from Liz as she wiped the suds away from her face. Max rinsed the shampoo and slathered on conditioner in its place.

“I’ll take your word for it,” Liz giggled as she leaned back again so Max could rinse her hair once more.

“You yawned again and said you were sleepy, so I dried us off and got our pajamas on, blew dry your hair and brushed your teeth, read you a story and you were asleep by the time your mother and a still-wet and naked Michael came back upstairs.

Liz chuckled at the reminiscence, placing sweet kisses on Max’s chest as she cuddled into him. “What book was it—the one you read to me?”

“Hmm, I think it was I am a Bunny, if I remember right. You always liked the picture with all the butterflies, and it was easy enough that I could read it to you,” Max kissed the top of Liz’s wet hair and smiled.

“So how is it I never heard this bathtub story before?” Liz challenged as she turned to straddle Max’s lap, filling the tumbler to wash his hair in turn.

“Well, I threatened Michael with his life if he ever mentioned it to anyone.”

Liz poured the warm water over Max’s head, though he shook his head to get it out of his eyes. She ran soapy fingers through Max’s long locks as she felt Max’s cock revive between her legs.

“Though he did threaten to reveal the details whenever he wanted me to go along with one of his more foolhardy plans,” Max explained as he held onto Liz’s waist, her rounded breasts near his face.

Liz rinsed the shampoo and added conditioner in its place, sliding her nether lips along the length of Max’s cock as she did so.

“I know you said you wanted to wait, and that my first time should be special,” Liz recited, “But there are other things we could do,” she hinted as she dragged her clit along Max’s hardened length.

“You’re liable to get all messy again,” Max teased as he pulled Liz in closer.

Liz smiled and looked down at Max, his face poised to be nestled between her breasts, “At least we’re already in the tub.”
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Max and Liz simply ordered a pizza for dinner, Max deigning to throw on a robe long enough to answer the front door and pay the driver. Grabbing a couple more beers from the fridge and a few paper towels, Max rejoined Liz in his bed to watch a little ESPN before they went to sleep.

"Mmm, did you get the cheese and red pepper?” Liz asked as she propped up Max’s pillow.

“In my robe pocket,” Max turned so that Liz could fish the little packets out of his navy terry cloth robe before taking the pizza box from him so he could climb back in bed. Popping the tops off their beers, Max handed Liz hers as she gave him a piece of pizza from the box.

“Yum—pepperoni, mushrooms and extra cheese—just the way I like it,” Liz swirled her finger around a string of errant cheese and licked it off.

“Naturally,” Max quipped, “Of course I remember how you like your pizza, ya silly girl,” he teased.

“We could’ve eaten in the living room, so you could watch the game you recorded, and not just the highlight reels,” Liz offered.

“Actually, pizza in bed with you is exactly what I was looking forward to tonight,” Max smiled, offering Liz a bite of his own pizza, which she happily took. “And this way—I can catch up on several games at once and don’t have to sit through all the boring parts,” Max took another drink of his beer and then sat it back on the nightstand.

Watching a few more minutes of Sports Center, Max finally worked up the nerve to make a suggestion to Liz who was still munching happily on her pizza.

“Hey, Liz, Monday, when I go in for my bio lab, would you like to go with me?”

“Your professor won’t care?” Liz looked over her slice at Max.

“Naw, he’s cool. But, if you’d like to go, I could show you around the campus, introduce you to some of the instructors you might have if you decided on UNM.”

“Max, I--,” Liz began.

“Now, I’m not trying to pressure you. I know you got a lot of great offers from very prestigious schools, but I think you should at least give UNM a chance,” Max looked at Liz hopefully. “Now, I know the thought of going to school with your brother is a big turn-off, but, I promise, the campus is really large, and you probably won’t even see him—the business college and the science buildings are a couple of miles apart.”

“You want me to come to Albuquerque?” Liz looked at Max, a little baffled as her pizza-laden hand dropped to her lap softly.

“Well, yeah, Liz, of course I want you at UNM. Why wouldn’t I?” Max smiled softly at Liz, a little surprised by her incredulous expression.

Liz sniffed a little and smiled, her eyes glazing a little as she spoke, “Um, it’s been awhile since someone wanted me nearby, I guess. I mean—when Dad sent me to Winnaman—I just felt like he didn’t want me around, you know,” a tear slid down Liz’s cheek as she smiled, trying to fight back the other tears that threatened to fall.

“Oh, baby, no—I didn’t mean to make you cry,” Max tossed his half-eaten slice back in the box and then gently took Liz’s from her hand to place back in the cardboard container, wrapping her small body in his arms once his hands were free. “Liz, I just want you to do what’s best for you, sweetheart. You’ve spent so much time with other people making your decisions for you that I didn’t want to pressure you into deciding on Albuquerque.

Liz nodded as she wiped at her tears with her fingers, sucking in an audible breath, “I know, Max. You wouldn’t do that.”

“Ah, you may be giving me too much credit. I’m really just a selfish bastard underneath it all, and it’s taking all my restraint not to fall down on my knees and beg you to come to school here,” Max teased as he tickled Liz’s bare tummy, causing her to squirm and laugh as she writhed against him.

“Ok, ok—will you stop tickling if I promise to go to campus with you Monday?” Liz retaliated by turning around on Max’s lap and tickling him under the arms—knowing full well he would be forced to stop tormenting her. She knew all his ticklish spots as well.

“Ah, Liz,” Max entreated as he tried to wriggle out of her grasp, “I’ll quit, I’ll quit,” Max stilled his tickling fingers and smoothed his palms around Liz’s back, pulling her close for a kiss on the lips.

Liz smiled as they finished the tender kiss, sliding down Max’s chest as she wrapped her arms around his muscular back. Yawning, Liz snuggled against Max’s chest as he turned off the TV, wiggling his way down the pillow with Liz’s petite body lying on top of him. The day’s events, her first orgasms in particular, seemed to have taken their toll as Liz’s eyes began to grow heavy and her breathing to grow steady.

“Love you, Lizzie,” Max kissed the top of her head softly.

“Love you too, Max,” Liz muttered sleepily, offering a small kiss against his strong chest.

Max stroked Liz’s long, dark hair as her small puffs of breath tickled his skin, though he held still, not wanting to disturb her slumber. As he drifted to sleep himself, Max thought about the last words they uttered to each other just moments ago—a quick ‘love you’—they’d said it a thousand times before. But it wasn’t exactly what he wanted to say to Liz.

He wanted to say, “I love you, Liz. I’m in love with you. I want you to stay.”

But, he didn’t say that--not wanting to pressure her, not wanting to keep her from pursuing her dreams—he couldn’t tell Liz the truth about his feelings toward her. They had always been close, ever since they were small, but now as Liz lay there in his arms, Max understood what was missing from all his previous relationships that never seemed to work out—those girls just weren’t Liz. The sweet little girl he had known his entire life had returned to him as a woman. She had shown up on his doorstep just yesterday wanting Max to be her “first,” but what Max was beginning to understand was that he wanted to be … her “only.”
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Crazedearthgirl-Glad you’re all caught up! Enjoy!
Alien_Friend-Max is sort of innately great. They really have had a long-term connection.
Natalie-Liz has some big choices to make (and other people will be making their choices as well…)
Kris-I’m back—never fear!
Behr_able-Ah, yes, the eternal question…
LilLoucfer-Glad you like it!
Michelle-Well, I’m glad you caught your breath already cause…
Dreamers-fan-Glad you enjoyed!
Jessah-You’re right about the fact that Max won’t be able to hide his feelings when that moment arrives. We’re at a point where Max doesn’t want to force her to choose to stay when she has so many opportunities ahead of her, and Liz doesn’t yet believe that Max would love her in that way. She has been pushed away by her family and can’t really understand that Max would want a permanent relationship with her.
Addicted-It won’t be too long now…
Sara-Hope you enjoy this next part!

A/N-Sorry I didn’t have this out sooner, but I’ve been trying to finish grading final papers and distribute yearbooks this week! Agghh! One more week—then it’s summer break—if I can hold out till then :D

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Morning sunlight peeked through the opening between Max’s curtains, coaxing him from his slumber. He was further awakened as Liz’s warm little body rolled off of him, taking most of the sheet with her as she went, the scant covering now wadded on the far side of Max’s bed or trailing on the floor.

Max breathed deeply and smiled as he woke from another satisfying sleep. Even though they hadn’t made love yet, waking up with Liz for a second night, this time without any nightclothes, was definitely something he could quickly become accustomed to. Taking things slowly with Liz was becoming more difficult with every moment—more trying to delay what they both wanted, what was inevitable.

Max rolled onto his side, his head propped on his left hand while his right instinctively went to his cock, as if wanton image in front of him was still part of the lust-filled fantasy that had pervaded his thoughts as he slept. He smiled wryly to himself as he slowly stroked at his flesh, figuring that Liz must have rolled onto her back because she was prodded in the stomach by his morning erection, fueled by the provocative dreams that played out in his mind as he held Liz’s bare body during the night.

Absently stroking his shaft, Max watched Liz as she slept, watched as her flat tummy contracted a little with each steady breath, watched the rhythmic rise and fall of her breasts, watched as her nipples hardened in the cool breeze of the bedside fan—and then he watched her face. Max studied the angelic expression of repose as her cheek lay against the silky cotton pillowcase. As Max slowly stroked himself, he watched as Liz’s peaceful countenance shifted—her forehead creased; her eyebrows scrunched together, and Max started to wake her, afraid that she was having a bad dream, but his efforts were stopped short as her lips parted, sleepily uttering one word—

“Max…”

Still asleep and obviously dreaming, Liz writhed gently against the sheet underneath, her right leg splaying out a little from her body, releasing her feminine scent as she did so.

“Max…” she cooed softly, “please, Max…”

Liz’s hips rose a little off the bed, trying to reach the ephemeral Max that existed in her dreams. She groaned softly as her hand went to her breast, seeking the hardened nipples that ached for relief.

Max smiled to himself as he watched a still-sleeping Liz dream of him, of the things he promised her, of the release she knew he could provide.

Max’s gaze traveled back down Liz’s body to the tiny strip of dark curls that lay at the juncture of her thighs. As if aware of his notice, Liz’s left leg turned out as well, opening the folds of her flower as she did so. Max shifted position, moving gently between her legs, trying not to wake her, though hungry for the treasure that now waited before him.

In her dream-state, Liz’s hips jutted forward again calling to Max once more.

Max propped himself up on his elbows, ignoring his throbbing cock that now pressed between himself and the mattress below. Gently, as not to startle her, Max opened Liz’s folds with his fingers, groaning softly as the beauty of her sex was revealed. Though he had touched her, bathed with her, and slept with her, this was the first he had seen of her soft, pink, wet center. Her scent filled his senses as a drop of her nectar glistened along her nether-lips, swollen with longing. His finger gathered the moisture and traced along her folds, drawing small, gentle circles on her clit when he reached their meeting-point.

“Max…” Liz called out again, her voice rising a little in desperation, her hips once again seeking him out.

Unable to resist any longer, Max’s lips sought out her fruit, suckling at her lips, tracing his tongue along the warm, wet folds, nibbling gently at her little pink pearl. Long forgotten was Max’s duty, the tutelage that Liz had begged of him—laying between her legs, holding her thrusting hips, his tongue buried in her depths, he was driven by his desire, his yearning to have this woman, to know every inch of her, to make her his own.

Max looked up from his position to see Liz’s nipples peek out from between her fingers as she kneaded her breasts, to see her head thrown back as she arched off the bed at his ministrations, to hear her moans increase as he licked and nibbled, suckled and drank at her nectar. When her hands slid down from her breasts, Max was momentarily disappointed, but gratified when he felt her hands unconsciously go to his hair, pushing him harder against her body.

As his slid first one finger and then another into her slick heat, Max grinned against her nether lips when Liz’s low moans changed to a wicked giggle, indicating that Liz had awakened and was very pleased to note that Max was making her dream into a reality.

Just as Liz’s eyes opened , she looked down at Max, his amber eyes gazing back at hers, grinning as he continued to stroke her hardened clit with his tongue while his fingers kept tantalizing that small bundle of nerves buried deep within her body.

“Oh, Max…” Liz drawled softly as her hips rose rhythmically to meet his lips and tongue. The newness of the sensation, the feel of his warm mouth kissing, licking, suckling her sex was beyond imagining. While initially frustrated by Max’s demands to take things slowly, to learn all the wonderful things their bodies could do, she certainly appreciated this part of the lesson.

Liz strained against Max’s grip, her fingers intertwined in his hair, pulling him deeply to her body. A now familiar tingling was building in her depths, her legs began to quiver and her heart started to flutter wildly.

“Max…Max, I’m…,”

But Liz’s words became moans as she writhed against his mouth, and Max lapped at her nectar as she continued to come, waves of pleasure washing over her, one after the other.

Bringing her down with gentle strokes and kisses, Max slowly traveled back up Liz’s body, a mischievous smile gracing his face. He kissed his way back up her belly, her breasts, her neck, until he reached her full lips, swollen as she had bitten them during her orgasm.

“Morning beautiful,” Max smiled, kissing Liz passionately on the lips while his erection slid between her wet nether lips, grazing her still-tingling clitoris.

Liz kissed Max lustily, tasting her own juices on his lips and tongue.

“Hmm…tangy,” she concluded as she savored her own taste on Max’s mouth.

“Tasty,” Max smiled back and grinned.

“I don’t suppose I could wake up that way every morning?” Liz playfully teased.

“It could be arranged,” Max crooned, giving her another kiss and he instinctively thrust forward, forgetting how close he was to her ready entrance. Knowing he had something special planned for tonight, he kissed Liz again and rolled from his position and onto his side facing her, his shaft still as hard as ever.

“That was wonderful, Max. I loved it,” Liz rose up and kissed Max again as he now lay on his back, his erection unwilling to subside after his recent activities.

Liz began to plant succulent kisses down Max’s tender neck, his muscular chest, even stopping at his nipples to suckle and nibble them with her teeth. Max’s breath grew raspy as her mouth traveled down his abdominals, Liz’s tongue dipping in his belly button as she left a glistening trail behind. Her fingers found his dark curls, making her way to his shaft that stood firm and proud.

For all the control that Max had earlier had, the satisfaction that he took in bringing her pleasure, he now realized that the tables were turned. His breath hitched a little as Liz’s hot breath blew against his cock, her fingers traced the veins and ridges, and finally, she gave to tip a gentle kiss as she looked into Max’s dark eyes and grinned.

Liz smiled mischievously as she held Max’s cock in hand and traced the smooth head across her soft cheek, “Now,” she began as she gave his warm flesh an experimental lick and grinned, “Whatever shall I do with this?”
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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 13 5-23-09

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Natalie-Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Michelle-She is certainly about to follow through! 8)
Eve-There will certainly be plenty to go around! :lol:
Yas-Yes, we had graduation last night, so I spent today reading and writing! :D
Sara-I think it seems to be a reasonable request. 8)
Jan-And just where have you been woman??? 8) Missed you!
Crazedearthgirl-Me tease! Never! :lol:
Jessah-Now, if you don’t know what to say, I’m really in trouble! :lol:
Monica-Thanks so much! :D
Keepsmiling-Liz, a tease? Well, she’s pretty willing to return the favor… :lol:
8) LilLoucfer-Seriously, Max is in his happy place today…
8) Ginger-You better keep up :lol: —Liz is moving pretty fast
Kris-Hanging?? I promise, Max will be a very happy camper… 8)
Behr_able-I’m thinking tropical for the fruit basket…you know, mangoes and such :lol:
Alien_friend-Ah, don’t we all (envy Liz that is)! :roll:
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Liz looked up at Max, her expression at once seductive yet innocent. She brushed the smooth head of Max’s stiff cock along her lips and cheek, trying to feign confidence in the task she was about to undertake, though her nervousness shone in her eyes as she wondered if she would be able to take his full length into her mouth.

“Liz, don’t feel like you have to--,” Max saw the uncertainty on Liz’s face, and he mistook that for hesitancy.

“No, Max,” Liz smiled as she continued to hold him intimately, “I want to—I just don’t know how, exactly,” Liz looked up at Max sheepishly. “I mean, one of the girls on my floor snuck in a porno one time—she was asked to leave Winnaman shortly thereafter,” Liz laughed wryly, “but, I don’t know if I could do what that girl in the movie did,” Liz swallowed nervously.

“Baby, no, don’t worry about that. I don’t want you to do anything that makes you uncomfortable. Trust me—whatever you do will feel wonderful,” Max reached down to gently stroke her long, dark hair that was now grazing his thigh.

“So…what do I do exactly?” Liz bit her lip, as she continued to slide Max’s cock down her cheek, causing his muscles to flex every time he came close to her mouth.

Max’s face flushed brightly as he stammered, “Um, well, you lick—it, and, um, you suck—it,” Max’s breathing grew heavier in anticipation as he unconsciously lifted his hips, thrusting a little toward Liz’s mouth.

“Like an ice cream cone?” Liz’s tongue swiped around Max’s engorged head, licking at the glistening drop that collected there, and around the sensitive ridge underneath, his appreciative groan revealing his pleasure, “or like a popsicle?” Liz took a deep breath and took several inches of Max’s length into her mouth, gently sucking as she pulled back up. After his length left her mouth with a wet plop, Liz looked back at Max’s for his reaction, though his eyes were closed and his mouth open, heavy breaths coming from between his lips.

“How about a little of both?” Max squeaked out.

“Ok,” Liz smiled. She licked Max’s full length, exploring the texture and size with her tongue. Max sighed in appreciation as she began her ministrations.

Liz grinned as Max’s cock twitched in her hand. Her mouth dipped over his head again, her tongue swirling around the smooth flesh like a lollipop. Max again strained forward, resisting the urge to thrust further into her mouth. Liz smiled as she felt his restraint, knowing that he wouldn’t push her any further than she was ready to go. That knowledge made her even more excited about her explorations of his amazing body.

Liz continued taking Max further into her mouth, her hand moving along the base of his shaft as her lips wrapped around his length, her tongue suckling at his rigid shaft. Max groaned as his hand fisted in her hair, his hips only just able to keep from thrusting his cock hard into her wet mouth.

“Liz, it feels so good,” Max moaned softly as he gently coaxed more of his length between her lips.

Liz smiled at Max’s appreciative words, happy that she could bring him pleasure since this was a new experience for her. Her fingers that had been grazing Max’s muscular thighs, traveled to his balls, stroking the tender flesh as she continued to lick and suck at his massive length.

“Liz--,” Max breathed, as her attentions at both his cock and his balls threatened to send him over the edge. Liz grinned—though she may have been inexperienced at giving oral pleasure, her knowledge of anatomy was fairly extensive. As she felt Max’s orgasm beginning to build, she applied pressure to the underside of Max’s shaft, halting the flow that would have brought an end to this encounter.

“Not so fast,” she teased as Liz kissed the tip, her eyes smiling wickedly as she looked up, still gently stroking Max’s shaft as she allowed the first hint of his orgasm to subside.

“Oh, God, Liz,” Max groaned as he chuckled lightly, not at all prepared for Liz’s tantalizing delay tactics.

Liz took Max’s length into her mouth once again as she resumed massaging his tightened balls, her fingers then traveling to the tender skin below them as well. Max nearly bucked off the bed from all of Liz’s stimulation, but she then applied pressure to the base of his penis, once again staving off his impending eruption.

Though not yet able to take his full length, her lips were able to meet her fingers that were wrapped at the base of his shaft. Of course, Max was highly gratified with any attention she was ready to provide. A fleeting thought ran through his cloudy mind—that he was supposed to be instructing her, teaching her—but as he couldn’t form a coherent series of words, he hoped his moans and thrusts would be encouragement enough that what she was doing to him felt wonderful.

Max felt his head hit the back of her throat and tried to pull back a little, knowing it would be too much for her, but she held him there, grasping at his hips so that he wouldn’t escape her grasp. She sucked a little harder as her tongue slithered along the sensitive underside of his shaft, her head bobbing up and down against his length.

“Lizzie, come here baby,” Max panted, trying to lift up, afraid that the massive orgasm he felt building would be too much for her.

A muffled “Huh-uh,” came from Liz’s full mouth as she continued her hold on Max’s strong hips as they involuntarily bucked toward her.

“Liz, I’m coming,” Max warned, but Liz stayed her course, wanting to take all that Max had to offer. Max moaned loudly as his body tensed, Liz’s mouth swallowing his salty seed. She gasped and pulled back, her hand still surrounding his pulsing shaft and she pumped up and down, continuing to extract the essence from his body. Ropes of come splashed on her breasts and stomach before she was able to catch her breath and bring her mouth back down to his cock, milking him of all that remained.

Spent from her attentions, Max reached for Liz, bringing her near to join him once again. Embarrassedly wiping at the corners of her mouth with her fingers, Liz swallowed all of Max’s essence that remained in her mouth. Max fisted his fingers at the back of her hair, bringing her in for a passionate kiss, their essences mingling on their mouths.

Liz’s eyes searched Max’s face, “Was that all right? Did you like it?” Liz asked, suddenly a little self conscious as she bit her lip.

“Was it all right?” Max chuckled, incredulous at her question. He pulled back at bit to look at Liz. “All right?” he teased as he ran his hand over her breasts and stomach, smearing the come that resided there. “What do you think?” his eyes danced as he looked at Liz, still insecure even though she was coated in the evidence of her sexual power.

“Baby, that was way more than just all right,” Max assured, giving Liz another sweet kiss. “I certainly wouldn’t mind waking up like that every morning myself,” Max teased, reminding Liz of her earlier request.

“It could be arranged,” Liz smiled, finally satisfied that she had done a passable job of pleasing Max.

Max stroked Liz’s back lovingly as they gave each other gentle kisses and sweet touches. “I know this is a bit out of order,” Max noted considering they were already naked and spent in his bed, “but would you like to go out with me tonight—on a real date, I mean. You know dinner and dancing—that kind of thing?”

“Ooh,” Liz teased, “Snooty waiters and the fox trot?” she smiled.

“Not that kind of dinner and dancing,” Max growled, grinning as he raised an eyebrow.

“I’d love to, Max,” Liz smiled as she kissed him deeply once more.

“Ok, then,” why don’t you jump in the shower. I’ve got a few favors to call in.”
Once Max was satisfied that she shower was running and Liz out of earshot, he flipped through his contact list on his phone till he found the number for his lab partner, Jillian.

Jillian and her new husband, Eric, were both in Max’s bio lab. Max had lent them copies of his notes that they missed during their honeymoon a couple of weeks ago and even spent several hours tutoring them on the lectures they had missed. Max figured that Jillian’s experience as a part-time party planner would prove repayment enough for his kindness.

“Hello,” a still-groggy Jillian muttered into her phone.

“Hey Jill, sorry to call so early, but I need to call in that favor you owe me.”

“It’s Max,” Jill muttered to her husband, curious as to who was calling so damn early on a Sunday morning.

“Ok,” muttered Eric as he rolled back over and threw the covers over his head.

“What’s up, Max? It must be pretty big to call at…frick—6:30 in the morning?” Jill groaned.

“Sorry about the time. I swear I’ll make it up to you. I just need a little help tonight , if you can. I was thinking candles, white roses, Champagne? Can you get all that together on a Sunday?”

“Sure thing—I’ve got a nice bottle of Champagne at the shop along with the candles. I can get Clyde at the flower shop to sell me some roses today. I’ll sweet-talk him into opening the store.”

“Thank you so much, Jill. I’ll leave the key under the doormat and settle up with you on Monday,” Max said excitedly. We’ll be gone from seven till ten. Will that work for you?”

“Sure, I’ll have Eric come help me and will have your apartment looking like Seduction Central in no time.”

“It’s not like that, Jillian. I just want tonight to be really special,” Max replied softly.

“No problem,” Jill smiled into the phone. “I’m happy to help.”
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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 14 5-30-09

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Eve-Hope it wasn’t too porny for you.
Ginger-Naturally!
Abbs-I expect she will love it!
LilLoucfer-He is a sweetie! I expect Liz will enjoy the surprise thoroughly.
Kris-Hope you enjoy—we’ll come back to the porny bits shortly.
Behr_able-PM me with your idea! (and thanks so much for the complement!)
Dreamers-He is very sweet!
Carrie-Thanks so much!
Crazedearthgirl-I appreciate it!
Cocogurl-More heat coming up shortly.
Jessah-One of those moments where intelligence and experience seem to collide. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Sara-She is a curious young thing, isn’t she?
Kristin-Yes, yes they are.
*****
“Table 47—one ham and cheese omelet, one Belgian waffle with strawberries?” the aproned waiter queried as Max and Liz each cleared a spot for their respective plates, Max with his omelet and Liz with her waffles. “Can I get you anything else?” the waiter asked as he placed the napkin and silverware at each place.

“Some more coffee, please?” Liz smiled.

“Sure thing,” the waiter stepped away to the drink station for the coffee pot, bringing back the carafe to refill Max and Liz’s coffee mugs.

“So what do you think? You like?” Max gestured with his fork at the bistro’s patio area, filled with people enjoying Sunday brunch.

“It’s perfect, Max. I love it,” Liz beamed as she soaked in the afternoon sun and popped a bite of waffle and a strawberry into her mouth. “You want one?” Liz teased as she speared another strawberry with her fork, offering it to Max.

“Of course,” Max grasped the strawberry with his teeth, pulling it from Liza’s fork with a mischievous smile. “Here, have a bite of eggs—you need to keep your strength up, you know,” Max cut away a bite from his omelet and placed it at Liz’s lips.

“Ooh, sounds promising,” Liz teased as she accepted the cheesy morsel.

Liz picked up the syrup pitcher and swirled the gooey topping all over her waffle.

“Too bad there’s such a crowd,” Liz smiled with playful wistfulness, catching Max’s grin as she dutifully placed the container back on the table.

“I’ll have to remember to feed you breakfast at home from now on,” Max declared, remembering well their previous high-jinx with pancake syrup. He playfully snatched a small cluster of grapes from Liz’s plate and plucked one from the stem, popping it in his mouth.

“Hey!” Liz feigned a complaint poking at another bite of Max’s omelet in retaliation.

“It’s not like you’re going to eat the grapes anyway,” Max countered with a smirk.

“That’s true,” Liz laughed, “I blame it all on the Kiwanis’ House of Horrors when I was eight.”

“I told you, you were too young to go in, but did you listen—hell no,” Max chuckled as he sipped his coffee.

“Now, I was doing fine until they made us stick our hands into a vat of supposed ‘eyeballs,’” Liz flicked a lone remaining grape at Max which he deftly caught and ate with a smile.

“I know—the beginning of your long-running hatred of the poor, innocent grape,” Max teased Liz with another grape from her plate, which she squeamishly turned away from.

“Thank you, no. I’m more of a strawberry girl myself,” Liz raised her eyebrows as she nibbled another bite of waffle and fruit.

“Mmm—give me another one—plenty of syrup, too,” Max opened his mouth slightly waiting for the bite that Liz brought to his lips.

“Thank you,” came the muffled reply from Max’s full mouth. “Well, I know you like wine, of course a direct descendant of the grape. What about raisins—any unnatural hatred for those little dried morsels?”

“I like Raisinettes,” Liz considered thoughtfully, “Mmm—oatmeal cookies with raisins, rice pudding with raisins….”

“All good choices,” Max smiled at Liz’s playful response. He reached for another creamer to add to his coffee, only to discover that the bowl was empty. “Hey, Liz, do you have any more creamer over there?” Max peaked around, trying to spy any of the small, white containers.

“No, but I see some at the drink station. I’ll get them,” Liz rose before Max could protest and go get them for himself. As Liz walked away, Max noticed her flip-flops slapping against the concrete patio, grimacing as he realized that Liz would need dancing shoes for tonight.

“There you go,” Liz gingerly deposited the creamers into the small bowl.

“Thanks,” Max smiled as he doctored his coffee. He waved over the waiter, handing him his credit card to settle their bill. “So, Liz Parker, you up for a little shopping this afternoon?” Max asked with a twinkle in his eye.

“I’m a girl, aren’t I?” Liz quipped.

“Last time I checked,” Max growled lasciviously, his eyebrows waggling as he grinned.

“Then, yes, shopping it is.”
****
Max pushed open the heavy wood and glass doors of Harold’s Clothiers, the overstuffed leather chairs and vintage collegiate décor exuding an atmosphere of comfortable elegance. Liz smiled as Max held the door for her, the inviting ambiance of the shop immediately welcoming.

“Max, good to see you again,” a tall, blond young man in khakis, a stylish blue and white striped shirt and tie approached the couple, extending his hand to Max.

“Hey, Jackson, good to see you. This is Liz,” Max slipped his arm around Liz as Jackson reached out to clasp Liz’s hand after the introduction. “We will both be needing some help this afternoon,” Max looked over at the counter, Jackson calling another available co-worker as he did so.

“Sophie, this young lady will be needing your assistance today,” Jackson grinned as the petite redhead came to the entry.

“Max, good to see you again,” Sophie shook hands with Max, “and this is?” Sophie grinned, her eyes traveling to Liz.

“Sophie, this is Liz. We are going out for a little dinner, a little dancing,” Max suggested, “so, anything she needs—dress, shoes, whatever, just don’t let her see the tags,” Max warned playfully as Sophie took in her instructions with a smile.

“Max, no, I can’t let you--,” Liz was taken aback at Max’s generosity.

“Shush,” Max chuckled, “And don’t argue with me about it,” Max grinned as he planted a sweet kiss against Liz’s lips, still agape in surprise. “Jackson’s going to help me find a shirt and slacks for tonight, so why don’t you let poor Sophie here do her job and help you look more beautiful than you already are,” Max smiled and kissed Liz firmly, waggling his eyebrows as he broke the kiss.

“Come on, Liz. I think I’ve got the perfect little black dress for you right over here,” Sophie led Liz to the ladies’ section of the store as Max grinned, he and Jackson finally turning to head to the men’s department.
****
“So, how long have you known Max?” Sophie asked as she and Liz began looking through a rack of cocktail dresses.

“All my life,” Liz answered. “Why do you ask?”

“Oh, no reason, really. I’ve just never seen him in here with a girl before,” Sophie explained as she held up a dress and eyed Liz thoughtfully.

“Yeah?” Liz responded as she held the dress against her briefly and looked in a nearby mirror.

“Mm, he’s been in here with a tall guy, blonde hair, concert t-shirts and holey jeans.”

“That would be Michael, my brother,” Liz looked at Sophie in the mirror and swallowed nervously, “who doesn’t know I’m here,” Liz confessed as she bit her lip.

“Oh…OH! Ok, then,” the nature of Liz’s visit was becoming clear to Sophie. “So we are looking for something very sexy then,” Sophie smiled at Liz as she plucked another dress from the rack.

Liz blushed at the admission, then met Sophie’s eyes in the mirror, “Yes, sexy would be a very good thing.”

“Then this is the one, I think,” Sophie pulled out a halter-style black dress, with a fitted bodice and flared skirt that ended at Liz’s mid-thigh as she held it up. Sophie clipped the tags at Liz’s telling smile and gently pushed her toward the dressing room. “You start undressing, and I’ll be back with some shoes and undies. Size five on the shoes?”

“Better bring a five and half too, just in case,” Liz conceded with a smile as she disappeared behind the thick curtain.
****
“Ok, Max what can we do for you today?” Jackson asked as Max looked over the collection of new dress shirts that had just arrived yesterday.

“Um,” Max slid the hangers along the brass bar until he found what he was looking for, “How about this shadow-striped shirt, black slacks, socks and shoes…oh, and that charcoal tie,” Max lifted the silk tie from the round mahogany table.

“Ok, well, why don’t you get started in the dressing room, I’ll grab your shoe size, and then we’ll mark the hem for tailoring. Martha can get started on them upstairs while the girls are still looking. Who knows how long they’ll be,” Jackson scoffed good-naturedly.

“It’s ok,” Max smiled. “I don’t mind waiting for Liz. She’s worth it.”
****
“Well, Liz,” Sophie zipped up the dress from behind Liz and adjusted the tie at the halter, “you won’t need a bra with the dress as the top is fitted, and, of course, there’s no back to speak of,” Liz turned halfway around and smiled at what her image would be from behind, “but you put on the cheeky panties I handed you, right?”

“Yes, Sophie. I feel rather scandalous,” Liz blushed again at the vision of herself in strappy heels, barely-there panties and a revealing dress, “but I kind of like it,” Liz grinned.

“I knew you would,” Sophie smiled, feeling a bit like the fairy godmother herself. “Now for a few final touches—come with me,” Sophie walked away toward the cosmetics and accessories counter, with Liz scurrying behind. As they arrived Sophie perched Liz on a barstool and set about to finish her transformation.

Taking a tortoise-shell clip from a tray, Sophie swept up Liz’s hair, allowing a few strands in front to hang free.

“Ooh, perfect for a little neck-nibbling later on,” Sophie encouraged as Liz flushed again.

“Now for a little make up,” Sophie glanced at the sample tray beside them.

“I really don’t wear that much make up, Sophie. I went to an all-girls’ school for the last three years—there really wasn’t much call for it,” Liz eyed the colored palette suspiciously.

“Honey, you’re going out with one of the hunkiest guys in Albuquerque tonight—a little lip gloss and mascara is in order,” Sophie ignored Liz’s protests and began brushing powder and blush over her cheeks. “We’ve got a gift with purchase, so we can find a good foundation for you and then all the other goodies will come with it, and you get the cute little evening bag to boot,” Sophie insisted as she dipped the lip brush in a cherry color. After adding a little shadow, liner and mascara, Sophie turned Liz around in the chair to face the mirror that rested on the counter.

“Wow,” Liz breathed out as she saw her reflection.
****
“Martha just sent these back down, so try them on again, and make sure we got them right,” Jackson handed the trousers to Max who rose from his spot in a cozy club chair to return to the dressing room.

‘I’m sure they’re fine. Martha is the bomb—I never have to send anything back,” Max smiled as he examined the tailoring. “Hey, let’s clip the tags, and I’ll just wear the new clothes out. Our reservations are in about an hour. Make sure you get the tags from Liz’s things and put all this on my account.”

Jackson snipped the hang tags from the garments Max had chosen, then handed Max a large shopping bag for the casual clothes he had worn into the store.

“I’ll slip over to the other side and collect the tags from Sophie,” came Jackson’s muffled voice after Max closed the door to change.
****
“And for the final touch, something a little sparkly,” Sophie held up various rhinestone earrings next to Liz’s face, studying which might be the best choice.

“Which one is the least expensive?” Liz grimaced lightly in guilt as she perused the jewelry tray.

“Uh-uh, no looking at the tags, remember? Just pick what you like best,” Sophie encouraged as she tilted the tray a little in her hands, the rhinestones catching the light. Liz spied a set with stars that dangled down from the earrings and necklace.

“This one,” Liz decided confidently as she plucked the pieces from the velvet tray. “My last summer in Roswell, Max and I would lie out on my balcony every night and look at the stars,” Liz’s eyes got a little glazed with tears at the memory.

“Hey, hey—none of that—your mascara will run, and then we’ll have to start all over,” Sophie grinned at Liz, each sharing a light laugh.

“You’re right,” Liz put on the earrings as Sophie helped her fasten the necklace.

Jackson’s footsteps against the wood floor alerted the girls to his presence.

“Soph, you have some things for me?” Jackson asked, as if he were speaking in code.

“The stack by the register, Jack,” Sophie winked as Jackson whisked away the evidence in question.

As Jack turned to face Liz and Sophie after pocketing the tags, he gasped, “Oh, Liz, you look stunning. Max is not going to know what hit him.”
****
After Sophie stowed Liz’s other clothes and make up in a shopping bag, their attention was drawn to the two deep voices they heard coming closer.

“Thanks, Jackson, I really appreciate all your help today. I--,” Max stopped short as he entered the ladies’ department.

“Liz—wow, you look beautiful. I—I mean, you always look beautiful, but…wow…you’re absolutely gorgeous.”

“You don’t look so bad yourself,” Liz fought back the urge to blush at Max’s complement. “Anyway, I can’t begin to thank you enough. Sophie, Jackson,” Liz turned to each of them, “it was so nice meeting both of you.”

“Now, we fully expect to see you back here this fall, you know,” Sophie smiled, knowing that Liz was still trying to decide on colleges for the upcoming year.

“That’s right, Max. Convince this girl that UNM is the place for her,” Jackson grinned as he walked around the counter to hand the shopping bags to Max.

“I promise, I’ll do whatever it takes,” Max smiled at a beaming Liz as they headed out the door for Liz’s first real date.
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A/N -Hi guys! Just a quick post and run--I've got to leave for a nephew's birthday party, but I'll be back with the rest of the date chapter in the next two days. I'll answer your feedback when I post the rest of the evening's details.

“Here we are, Liz,” Max stopped in front of the large mosaic glass doors after perusing the neon lit sidewalks of Nob Hill, “La Estrella de Plata.”

“The Silver Star,” Liz translated with a smile. “Are we having Mexican?” she questioned as Max held the door while she stepped inside.

“Spanish, actually,” Max indicated as he led Liz to the hostess stand. “Tapas, paella, sangria—that kind of thing.

“Mmm, sounds yummy,” Liz grinned as they turned toward a tall, brunette woman with menus in her arms.

“Max, good to see you again.”

“Hi, Lousia, this is Liz,” Max indicated as he rubbed Liz’s bare back.

“Nice to meet you, Liz,” the hostess nodded, then checked her reservation book.

“Max, you are in the alcove, and Carlos will be your server this evening. I’m glad you showed up—I’ve had people begging all night for that table.”

Louisa led Max and Liz back to a very private and secluded table, a small semi-circular booth accented all around with a mosaic of dark blue glass pebbles, punctuated with silver ones, making the scene resemble a starry night when the glow from the outside lights shone through.

“Well, I am glad I was very specific with the reservation, then,” Max smiled. “The best table in the house,” Max held Liz’s hand as she scooted around the plush cushion, the white table cloth resting in sharp contrast against Liz’s black dress.

“Max, are you going to come fill in for us again this fall?” Louisa asked.

“Sure, whenever you need an extra bartender, just call,” Max replied.

“Very well then,” Louisa handed Liz and Max their menus, “I will leave you in Carlos’ capable hands,” Louisa turned halfway around to make way for the waiter who had arrived with appetizer plates, rolled silverware and ice water. “Liz, it was very nice to meet you, and I hope you two have a lovely dinner,” Louisa smiled as she made her way back to the front in order to greet the couple who just came through the door.

“Max, good to see you again, and who is this lovely young lady?” Carlos inquired as he set the table for the pair.

“Liz, this is Carlos, a good friend of mine. Carlos—Liz,” Max introduced the two, as Liz nodded and Carlos smiled and nodded in return.

“I take it this is your first time here? Cause I would have remembered if Evans had brought in someone as beautiful as yourself,” Carlos winked.

“No, I haven’t-- it’s been a really long time since I’ve been to Albuquerque,” Liz explained.

“Well, I certainly hope you are enjoying your stay. Any hope of making it a permanent arrangement?”

“That’s the second time today I’ve been asked that,” Liz smiled. “Maybe so,” she grinned at Max and bit her lip playfully.

“I’ll let Max explain the menu to you, since he knows it as well as I do. Max, do you want me to bring you the Pintxos Platter to start?”

“Yeah, Carlos, that’d be great. And how about a pitcher of the passion fruit sangria as well,” Max chose.

“I’ll be right back,” Carlos nodded and headed toward the kitchen with the order.

Liz smiled and ducked her head slightly, a little overwhelmed at all the experiences of this—her first real date. Strands of hair that were not caught up in the tortoise shell clasp fell into her eyes.

Max smiled as his finger traced along Liz’s forehead and cheek, smoothing the errant strands of wind-blown hair out of her eyes.

“Sorry, I probably should’ve borrowed a real car tonight, so you wouldn’t have get so blown around,” Max smoothed back the other trailing locks as he apologized.

“Are you kidding? I love Bob! You taught me to drive in Bob—I even took my driver’s license test in him! No dissing Bob,” Liz playfully pointed a finger at Max who chuckled in response. “Promise me—no getting rid of Bob—ever! Bob’s a classic,” Liz smiled at her vehement defense of the old, battered jeep.

“Fine, fine—no selling, trading or driving Bob off a cliff,” Max joked, amused at Liz’s attachment to the ancient conveyance.

“Good,” Liz giggled. The pair took notice of Carlos’ approach and sat back, so he could place the appetizers and wine pitcher on the table.

“Your pintxos and passion fruit sangria,” Carlos poured two glasses of the deep red wine and arranged the small cutting board dotted with tiny appetizers in front of Max and Liz. “Now what did you decide on?”

Max and Liz quickly studied the menu again.

“What do you think Liz, the salchichon?” Max inquired with a teasing note.

Liz scanned the menu,” Garlic and black pepper salami?” Liz scrunched her nose, “Maybe another night for that one. How about the crispy calamari?” she offered.

“Sounds good,” Max chuckled, “Let’s also have the beef tenderloin, chicken empanada, and stuffed mushrooms, and the Valenciana paella.”

“Excellent,” Carlos smiled, “I’ll have your tapas out in a few minutes.”

“Ok, so what’s all this?” Liz questioned as she twirled her finger above the tiny cutting board.

“Here, try the ham and pineapple,” Max lifted the tiny skewer to Liz’s mouth.

She smiled mischievously and bit above the second morsel on the skewer, sliding the bite off the small metal rod.

“Yummy,” she declared as Max finished off the remainder.

“That one,” Max indicated, “Is a piquillo pepper stuffed with short ribs.”

“We’ll give it a go,” Liz picked up the pepper, offering the delicacy to Max who bit off half, leaving the rest for Liz to try.

“Mmm, I need a drink,” Liz picked up her glass and took a deep sip, the sweet wine a delicious surprise. “The sangria is yummy,” Liz grinned, but as she placed her glass back down, the stem of the glass caught against her plate, causing a drop of the red wine to seep into the white tablecloth.

Liz blushed and looked down at the spreading stain, biting her lip in worry.

“Hey,” Max whispered as he placed Liz’s glass back down securely and slid the cutting board to cover the red circle, “Relax—there’s nothing to worry about,” Max slid his finger under Liz’s chin, drawing her eyes up to him. “I’ll take care of you.”

“I know,” Liz softly replied, embarrassed by the reminder of her inexperience.

“Goat cheese,” Max declared, trying to shift the mood, offered up another tiny skewer to Liz’s lips. “Goat cheese and quince—it’s very good. No sense being nervous when you’re eating goat cheese,” Max teased lightly as he finished off its contents.

Liz laughed at the ridiculous paradox Max had suggested.

Carlos approached with a tray full of tiny plates. “Your tapas are ready,” Carlos doled out the tiny bright plates on the small table. “Are you finished with this?” he put a hand on the small cutting board that still contained two of the pintxos.

“No, just leave it,” Max smiled as he held up his hand.

Carlos nodded and refilled Max and Liz’s wine glasses from the pitcher.

“Your paella should be ready in about ten minutes,” Carlos informed the pair before heading back to the kitchen.

“This one looks safe,” Liz joked as she picked up the empanada, biting into the savory morsel that resembled a fried pie. “Ooh, still hot,” Liz waved her hand in front of her mouth and grabbed her wine glass, taking a large drink, the warmth of the alcohol spreading through her as her blush now was no longer from nervousness.

“Careful, honey,” Max chuckled as he lifted the rest of the empanada from her fingers and popped it in his mouth.

“Of course,” Liz giggled, picking up her fork to examine the contents of the inverted mushroom cap. “So what is the mushroom stuffed with?” she inquired.

“Spinach and manchego cheese,” Max informed. “Give it a try.”

Liz wiggled in pleasure at the delightful morsel as the fork slid from between her teeth.

“Give me some of your squid there,” Max nodded at the plate on Liz’s far side.

Liz picked up a piece of the fried calamari and swirled it in the tomato salsa that accompanied it.

“Here you go,” Liz fed Max the deep fried seafood. “I gave you the tentacles. They’re more fun cause they’re kinda’ tickly,” Liz giggled as she picked up another piece of the fried bites and dipped it in the sauce, popping it in her mouth with aplomb.

Max could only chuckle at Liz’s description of the appetizer.

“Mm—one more,” Max’s fork pierced a bite of the tenderloin as he gave it to Liz.

“That’s interesting. Bleu cheese?” Liz questioned as she tried to discern the flavor that highlighted the juicy beef.

“Mmm hmm,” Max concurred as he finished his bite of the beef dish.

Liz smiled as she surmised the forgotten cutting board.

“We have to finish these, so Carlos can make room for our paella,” she held up the two remaining croquettas from the tray, wiggling them a bit so that Max would choose one or the other.

Max smiled to himself at Liz’s playfulness.

“I’ll take the cheese, and you can have the mushroom,” he smiled as he took the small bite from her fingers, Liz finishing off the last pintxos with flair.

She stacked up their empty tapas plates and sat them atop the small cutting board for Carlos to take away. Liz refilled their glasses from the pitcher, then before sitting the pitcher back down, she cleaned up an errant drip from the side and sucked it off her finger with a wink.

Carlos arrived with a large metal shallow bowl and fresh plates, “Your paella is served.” He placed the large metal bowl between them and Max and Liz’s individual plates at each setting. In the bowl before them was a mélange of saffron rice, vegetables and a variety of meats. Carlos dished out a portion on the two plates before returning the serving spoon back to the larger dish.

“Our dessert tonight is the dulce de leche over bananas and ice cream,” Carlos tempted.

“Sounds yummy,” Liz’s eyes sparkled as she cast a glance at Max to see if he wanted dessert as well.

“Whatever the lady wants—the lady gets,” Max teased as he nodded toward Carlos.

“Coffee as well?”

Max nodded as Carlos left to place their dessert order.

“So what do you think of the paella?” Max studied Liz as she swallowed her first bite.

“Really good,” Liz smiled, taking a sip of her wine. “Everything tonight has been delicious,” she complimented as she took another bite.

“Well, if you like this place so much, then I know what we should do next spring break,” Max hinted.

“What?” Liz questioned once she had swallowed her mouthful.

“We should go to Barcelona—you know, rent some little rustic villa, go to the beach, check out the architecture, eat all the paella we want,” Max smiled as he took a bite from his plate.

“Barcelona? Are you serious?” Liz put her fork down against her plate, wide-eyed.

“Sure, I can pick up a few extra bartending shifts every month. You could tutor, or if you came to Albuquerque, you could get a pretty decent waitressing job. I know dozens of managers and could put in a good word for you,” Max grinned as he took another bite.

“Another checkmark in the UNM column,” Liz teased in retaliation as she took a drink of her wine.

“To be fair,” Max conceded, “Even if you choose another school, we could still go to Barcelona. We could go in June instead of March if we had to,” Max smiled, trying to be supportive of Liz’s decision-making process.

Carlos approached with their dessert and coffee, clearing away their other empty bowl and plates.

Liz grinned as the caramel concoction was placed between them with two spoons perched on each side of the bowl.

“So, Max, when we go to Barcelona,” Liz’s voice dropped to a husky whisper, “are there other things we could do besides eat and swim?” Liz asked with a mischievous grin as she fed Max a bite of the sinful dessert.

“Like I said before,” Max scooped up a spoonful and placed it at Liz’s lips, “Whatever the lady wants—they lady gets…”
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Sara-Hope you got something good to eat after! Thanks for reading
Jessah-Yeah-Liz had a little case of nerves, but she loosened up. As far as you partner goes—just leave the story open to a dirty part and maybe he’ll catch the romantic parts too!
Crazedearthgirl-aren’t we always?

A/N-Hope you guys enjoy the rest of the date. They will head back to Max's after this chapter (I swear!)
I don't own any of the music in this chapter.


Max pressed ‘send’ after texting a short message while leading Liz to the side entrance of a tall brick building, the muffled sounds of dance music pounding through the walls.

“Tell me again, why are we sneaking in?” Liz inquired with playful suspicion.

“Because you aren’t twenty-one,” Max reminded. “But, hey, I won’t tell, if you won’t.”

Liz smiled, a little embarrassed.

Suddenly, the heavy metal door opened with a rush of cool air and loud, clear music.

“Hey, Max,” a tall, lanky blonde young man in a black tee and slacks greeted the pair.

“Hi, Sam—thanks,” Max took the edge of the thick door to allow Liz through.

“Sam—Liz, Liz—Sam,” Max introduced.

“Nice to meet you.”

“You, too,” Sam replied as he jerked the pushed bar on the door, so it would fall closed after Max stepped through.

“Gotta get back to the bar, but hopefully I’ll see you guys later,” Sam headed back to work.

“What is this place, Max?” Liz questioned, stepping from a service area behind cases of beer and alcohol.

“It’s called The Firehouse—three different floors, three different DJs, three different kinds of music playing all night. I fill in here sometimes, so no one will notice that we came in the side door,” Max explained. You wanna’ start at the top and work our way down?” Max suggested.

Liz glanced at the writhing bodies in the distance and glanced down, biting her lip. “Um, I don’t really know how to dance, Max,” she grimaced slightly before looking back up into Max’s amused eyes.

“Hey,” Max turned Liz to face him, his hands around her waist. “I’ve been a pretty good teacher so far, haven’t I?” he teased.

Liz giggled a little in the embarrassed recollection of all she had learned in the last few days.

“Of course you have,” she conceded with a wide grin, her cheeks still visibly red even in the low light of the club.

“So why should dancing be any different?” Max waggled his eyebrows as he led Liz up a broad winding staircase.
****
Max and Liz made their way to the third floor of The Firehouse, where 80’s music played from the DJ’s speakers as colored lights swirled around the dance floor. The old fireman’s pole still stood, but the floor had been built around it to keep the music from one level wafting up to the next.

“Ok, third floor—tonight, obviously it’s 80’s night, usually the third floor is either retro or electronica-- sometimes they have disco nights where everybody dresses up. It’s really quite something,” Max explained with a chuckle.

Max and Liz stopped near one of the tiny tables that dotted the sidelines of the dance floor.

“You want a drink or anything?” Max inquired as Liz watched the people dancing in the center of the room. A Robert Palmer tune started up and Liz nodded.
“Water, if that’s ok,” Liz replied.

“Coming right up,” Max gave Liz a quick kiss before heading to the bar, Liz still standing beside the table looking on at the crowd.

How can it be permissible
She compromised my principle, yeah yeah
That kind of love is mythical
She's anything but typical


Smiling, Liz started swaying to the rhythm of the song, the hips and shoulders keeping time to the beat.

Facing the bar, Max noticed the bartender busy restocking the cooler at the back.

“Hey, Manny, just getting a couple of waters,” Max called.

“You know where everything is, man,” the Hispanic bartender replied with a grin.

Max leaned over the bar and scooped ice into two low-ball glasses before grabbing the hose and flipping the black lever at the end, filling the cups. Smiling, he grabbed two slivers of lime and twisted them into the ice water before turning back to face Liz. He was momentarily mesmerized at the sight before him as Liz danced, forgetting her self-consciousness as her hips made sexy figure-eights and the colors of the party lights played across her creamy cleavage.

She's a craze you'd endorse, she's a powerful force
You're obliged to conform when there's no other course
She used to look good to me, but now I find her

Simply irresistible
Simply irresistible


“I thought you said you couldn’t dance,” Max teased with humorous accusation.

“I can’t,” Liz smiled as she took the glass from Max and sipped a refreshing drink. “When Isabel used to babysit us in the summers, she’d play old 45’s on the record player and I’d stand up on the bed and dance with her.”

“Babysit us? Oh no, she babysat you,” Max teased. “Michael and I were just along for the ride.”

“You were only seven, Max. Call it what you want, but you were babysat, too,” Liz playfully pinched Max on the waist.

“But I never danced with my sister,” Max defended, “Ok, well maybe just once or twice,” he laughed, taking Liz’s hand and leading her to the dance floor.

Her loving is so powerful, huh
It's simply unavoidable
The trend is irreversible
The woman is invincible


Max grasped Liz’s right hand and pulled her close to him with the hand at her lower back, their hips still keeping time to the upbeat tune.

“I didn’t think they danced this close in the 80’s,” Liz teased.

“Too bad for them,” Max replied with a mischievous grin as he pulled Liz into his body even further, letting her know the effect she was having on him.

She's a natural law, and she leaves me in awe
She deserves the applause, I surrender because
She used to look good to me, but now I find her


Taking Liz’s hand, Max twirled her, leaving Liz happily dizzy from the spin and from the excitement of the evening.

Simply irresistible
Simply irresistible


Max and Liz grinned as Max pulled Liz back firmly into his grasp, as their joined hips swung to the beat.

Simply irresistible she's so fine, there's no tellin' where the money went
Simply irresistible she's all mine, there's no other way to go


Their hips moved side-to-side in short, powerful strokes, their hips rolling in unison at the end of each line. Liz grew braver and let her left hand drop to the cleft of Max’s ass, pulling his body to hers just as forcefully as he was.

She's unavoidable, I'm backed against the wall
She gives me feelings like I never felt before
I'm breaking promises, she's breaking every law
She used to look good to me, but now I find her


Max moved to spin her again, but this time, Liz was ready, her turn sure-footed and confident. The hem of her dress twirled up briefly, revealing a tiny glimpse of her lacy panties to Max.

Simply irresistible
She's so fine, there's no tellin' where the money went
Simply irresistible she's all mine, there's no other way to
Go


As Max pulled Liz back, he couldn’t help but capture her mouth with his own as they continued to sway to the music. Their tongues danced as their bodies did the same, Max’s hand grabbing a fistful of Liz’s dress at the back, the hem unwittingly rising a little higher than he would’ve otherwise intended.

Her methods are inscrutable
The proof is irrefutable, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
She's so completely kissable, huh
Our lives are indivisible


She's a craze you'd endorse, she's a powerful force
You're obliged to conform when there's no other course
She used to look good to me, but now I find her


Max grinned as he turned Liz in one more spiral, her eyes alight with happiness.

Simply irresistible
Simply irresistible


Max brought Liz’s body back to his own with a little laugh as he nibbled on the sensitive flesh of her neck, his finger grazing a taut nipple through her dress, her breath growing heavy as he did so.

She's so fine, there's no tellin' where the money went
Simply irresistible she's all mine, there's no other way to go
She's so fine, there's no tellin' where the money went
Simply irresistible she's all mine, there's no other way to go

Simply irresistible.


Liz gave Max another full kiss as the song ended. They made their way back to their table to finish off their waters, thirsty after their dance.

“So you want to head to the second floor, and see what’s going on there?” Max asked as Liz sat down her empty glass.

“Of course,” she grinned as they headed back toward the heavy wooden staircase.
***

“Hmm, second floor tonight is country,” Max and Liz took note of the participants in jeans, boots, and long-sleeved woven shirts.

“We don’t exactly look the part,” Liz noticed the contrast of their clothes against the others in the room.

“Don’t worry about it. People travel from floor to floor all the time. No one really thinks anything about it,” Max waved away Liz’s concern with a good-natured smirk.

“Some nights the second floor is country—sometimes, salsa, reggae. There’s a calendar posted outside the club, so everyone will know what’s playing each night. Sometimes they’ll have live acts perform as well.”

Liz nodded as she watched the dancers moving in a large circle around the floor.

“What are they doing?” she asked as she studied the footwork from a distance.

“The two-step. It can get really involved,” Max pointed to a couple executing precise turns and follow-throughs, weaving deftly around each other as they danced. “Or, you can keep it simple with the basic footwork,” Max nodded to another couple, focused intently on each other as their steps followed a simple pattern.

“You wanna’ give it a try?” Max offered, Liz nodding in agreement as he led her to the floor. The tempo slowed a bit as a Rascal Flatts’ song faded up. Max took Liz’s hand once again, leading her to the floor.
Liz took her steps back, letting Max lead her through the song.

I set out on a narrow way many years ago
Hoping I would find true love along the broken road
But I got lost a time or two
Wiped my brow and kept pushing through
I couldn't see how every sign pointed straight to you


Though Max held Liz similarly just moments ago, this was different—softer, more tender. Her dark eyes gazed into his as their bodies moved in sync, no longer needing to watch the other couples—they might as well have been the only people in the room.

Every long lost dream led me to where you are
Others who broke my heart they were like Northern stars
Pointing me on my way into your loving arms
This much I know is true
That God blessed the broken road
That led me straight to you


Liz trusted Max as he moved them around the swirl of people. He pulled her close once again, not as he had upstairs, their bodies playfully teasing each other, but now they were lost in the intimacy of the moment—the feelings they couldn’t voice played out in the words of the song.

I think about the years I spent just passing through
I'd like to have the time I lost and give it back to you
But you just smile and take my hand
You've been there you understand
It's all part of a grander plan that is coming true


Liz’s eyes misted with tears as Max sang along softly near her ear, her body pulled tightly into his, their feet now moving of their own accord.

Every long lost dream led me to where you are
Others who broke my heart they were like Northern stars
Pointing me on my way into your loving arms
This much I know is true
That God blessed the broken road
That led me straight to you

Now I'm just rolling home
Into my lover's arms
This much I know is true
That God blessed the broken road
That led me straight to you


That God blessed the broken road
That led me straight to you.


As the song wound to its close, Liz smiled as Max finished the dance, spinning her gently and ending the song with a gentlemanly bow.

“Thank you for the dance, Liz Parker,” Max grinned as he held Liz’s outstretched hand.

“You are very welcome,” Liz played the part of the Southern belle for a moment.

“We’re gonna’ speed things up with a little Garth Brooks,” the DJ’s drawl crooned from the microphone.

“One more before we head downstairs?” Max asked. “This one’s a lot faster,” he teasingly warned.

“I’m ready,” Liz grinned wickedly as the fast beat sounded from the speakers.

Their feet shuffled to the rapid-fire lyrics as grins spread across both their faces. Liz’s lesson in the basic footwork proved invaluable as the people on the dance floor sped along.

Six o'clock on Friday evening
Momma doesn' t know she's leaving
'Til she hears the screen door slamming
Rubber squealin', gears a-jamming
Local country station just a blaring on the radio
Pick him up at seven and they're headin' to the rodeo
Momma's on the front porch screamin' out her warning
Girl you better get your red head
Back in bed before the morning


“You ok?” Max shouted over the loud music, concerned at first that the quick pace might be too much for Liz.

Liz nodded in response, exhilarated at how quickly she was mastering the dance. Max felt she was ready and turned them, reversing their positions for a moment. Liz raised her eyebrow at the change, but quickly adapted, shifting her footwork as she went forward. Max turned them again without missing a beat.

Nine o'clock the show is ending
But the fun is just beginning
She knows he's anticipating
But she's gonna keep him waiting
Grab a bite to eat
And then they're heading to the honkey tonk
But loud crowds and line dancing
Just ain't what they really want
Drive out to the boondocks and park down by the creek
And where it's George Strait 'til real late
And dancing cheek to cheek


Max turned Liz at the chorus, her skirt flipping up slightly in contrast to most of the jeans—clad ladies on the floor. Liz remembered her childhood dance lessons and whipped her head around quickly, spotting so she wouldn’t lose her balance.

Ain't going down 'til the sun comes up
Ain't givin' in 'til they get enough
Going 'round the world in a pickup truck
Ain't goin' down 'til the sun comes up


Pulling her out of the spin, Max again wove Liz through the crowd, deftly dodging other couple on the crowded dance floor. As he had suspected Liz was a quick study and could pick up the steps after only a few moments. Their hearts beat rapidly as he turned them quickly to extract themselves from the throngs of people on the far side of the floor.

Ten 'til twelve is wine and dancing
Midnight starts the hard romancing
One o'clock that truck is rocking
Two is coming, still no stopping
Break to check the clock at three
They're right on where they want to be
Four o'clock get up and going
Five o'clock that rooster's crowing


Liz was breathless as the pitch of the song rose, their feet flying fast around the dance floor, she readied for the turns and spins once again, quickly becoming more expert at reading Max’s movements and intentions.

Ain't going down 'til the sun comes up
Ain't givin' in 'til they get enough
Going 'round the world in a pickup truck
Ain't goin' down 'til the sun comes up


Max spun their bodies in tandem as the song wound to its frenetic close. Their breath coming fast as they spun nearly out of control save for Max’s deft movements and awareness of the other dancers around him.

Six o'clock on Saturday
Her folks don't know he's on his way
The stalls are clean, the horses fed
They say she's grounded 'til she's dead
Well here he comes around the bend
Slowing down, she's jumping in
Hey mom, you're daughter's gone
And there they go again

Ain't going down 'til the sun comes up
Ain't givin' in 'til they get enough
Going 'round the world in a pickup truck
Ain't goin' down 'til the sun comes up


The smiled through panted gasps making their way to the 2nd floor bar as the song came to an end, Max grabbing two more glasses of water for them as he reached over the brass railing.

“So, one more floor, and then we head home?” Max inquired, making sure that Liz’s first date was all that she hoped it would be.

“Downstairs it is,” Liz agreed, finishing off her glass of water. Beads of condensation dripped from Liz’s glass onto her glistening cleavage as she rolled the cool glass against her hot skin.

“Hopefully I can last one more floor,” Max groaned as he smiled and led her downstairs.
****
A Ciara and Justin Timberlake duet pounded from the speakers as Max and Liz turned down the last flight of stairs.

Liz was a little startled as the crowd came into view—the bodies on the floor writhing together—groups of people even, nearly joined save for the scraps of clothing between them.

Ya touch is so magic to me
Stangest things can happen
The way that you react to me
I wanna do something you can't imagine
Imagine, if it was a million me's talking sexy to ya like that
Ya think ya can handle, boy if I give you my sleaze
And I need you to push it right back


“This floor is hip-hop and top 40 dance mixes, primarily,” Max explained as Liz’s gaze was captivated by the grinding bodies that seemed to move together as one.

“I can see why you saved it for last,” Liz joked though Max was a bit afraid that the very public sensuality of the place might make her uncomfortable.

Baby show me, show me,
What's your favorite trick that you wanna use on me
And I'll volunteer...
And I'll be flowing, and going to go the distant place
And nothing but shoes on me
Ohh baby...


“Liz, we don’t have to dance out there if you don’t want to,” Max offered out of concern.

Liz whipped around to face Max again, the mischievous twinkle in her eyes giving Max his answer.

“Are you kidding? Come on!” Liz pulled Max into the crowd of bodies.

All night showing, just you and ya crowd
Doin' tricks you never seen...
And I bet that I can make ya believe
In love and sex and magic
So let me drive my body around ya
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In love and sex and magic


Max and Liz found a spot within the mass of people, but still with enough space that they were not intruded upon. Max slid behind Liz, grasping her hips, her body following his as they rolled against the heady beat of the song.

Everything ain't what it seems
I wave my hands and I got you
And ya feel so fly, assistantin' me
But now is my turn to watch you
I ain't gonna stop you
If ya wanna grab my neck, talk sexy to me like that
Just do what I taught you, girl when I give you my heat
And I need you to push it right back


Liz responded in kind as she ground her backside into Max’s crotch, she heard the low groan issue from his throat as their bodies rolled again, the hem of her skirt caught up between them, Max’s tented erection even closer to the thin piece of lace covering her heat.

Baby show me, show me,
What's your favorite trick that you wanna use on me
And I'll volunteer...
And I'll be flowing, and going to go the distant place
And nothing but shoes on me
Ohh baby..



Though the floor was crowded, the other dancers were too caught up in their own partners to notice. Though the rest of Liz’s skirt adequately covered them, and Max and Liz were dancing so closely that there was no distance between. Max and Liz could feel the heat emanating from their bodies as their bodies grinded together.

All night showing, just you and ya crowd
Doin' tricks you never seen...
And I bet that I can make ya believe
In love and sex and magic
So let me drive my body around ya
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In love and sex and magic


Max was grateful that Liz’s hair was up, giving his mouth access to the warm, sensitive skin there. He felt a little moan build in her throat as his lips traced a path along her neck. He nibbled at the tender skin behind her ear, Liz’s hand rising to fist through his hair to encourage his ministrations.

This is the part where we fall in love (Ohh, suga..)
Let's slow it down, so we fall in love (Ohh...)
But don't stop when you give it to me


Liz turned her head back to face Max, her lips parting for a passionate kiss as his finger traced along the edge of her neckline, groaning as his finger dipped inside to graze the taut flesh of her nipple.

All night showing, just you and ya crowd
Doin' tricks you never seen...
And I bet that I can make ya believe
In love and sex and magic
So let me drive my body around ya
I bet you know what I mean
(You know what I mean)
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In love and sex and magic


Liz’s hand went to Max’s backside, her fingers making a path to his inner thigh, holding him close to her as they continued to writhe as one. Just a few more moments, Liz thought, then they would be home, but moving like this without the hindrance of clothing.

All night showing, just you and ya crowd
Doin' tricks you never seen...
And I bet that I can make ya believe
In love and sex and magic
So let me drive my body around ya
I bet you know what I mean
(You know what I mean)
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In love and sex and magic


Unable to resist, Max’s hand secretly dipped underneath the hem of Liz’s dress as their bodies continued to roll together, palming her round bottom clad only in the tiny panties they bought that afternoon, his fingers touching the soft skin where the lace met her tender flesh, following the path down until the warmth of her body increased and the dampness there became evident.

Yeah...
Uh, uh, uh...
Yeah, I see you on the floor
Get it girl
Love, sex and magic
I see you on the floor
You know what I mean
Get it girl
I bet that I can make you believe
In love and sex and magic, ow!
I See you on the floor
Get it girl...


As the song faded into the next, Max surreptitiously glanced around to make certain no one was taking notice, then slipped a finger inside Liz’s panties, the wet heat drawing him as she pushed back against his searching hands.
Closer
Closer
Closer
Closer


“Max,” Liz groaned softly as she strengthened her grip on him, so he couldn’t move away.


Turn the lights off in this place
And she shines just like a star
And I swear I know her face
I just don’t know who you are
Turn the music up in here
I still hear her loud and clear
Like she’s right there in my ear
Telling me
That she wants to own me
To control me
Come closer
Come closer


With his left arm wrapped securely around her waist and the other tracing secretly along her wet folds, their bodies moved like waves with the sensuous music.

And I just can’t pull myself away
Under a spell I can't break
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


The hand on Liz’s waist traveled up the silky black material, Max’s palm caressing the underside of Liz’s breast as his fingers grazed the nipple through the fabric. Liz’s hand covered Max’s, keeping it there as their bodies rehearsed for what they both hoped would happen momentarily.

And I just can’t bring myself no way
But I don’t want to escape

I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


Max’s fingers continued on their path, certain that no one was taking notice of his indiscretion. He felt the catch in Liz’s breath as his finger grazed against her clit, Max’s mouth suckled at her neck while his fingertips sought the little pearl buried within her folds.

I can feel her on my skin
I can taste her on my tongue
She’s the sweetest taste of sin
The more I get the more I want
She wants to own me
Come closer
She says "come closer"


Liz’s left hand slid forward from where she had held him so securely against her, tracing back across his thigh and higher, where his shaft strained against the fabric that could barely contain his desire. Through his silky trousers, Liz felt the pulsing length that she wanted buried deep within her body.

And I just can’t pull myself away
Under a spell I can't break
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


Her fingertips caressed his thick erection, wondering how quickly they could close the distance between the club and Max’s apartment, knowing that tonight she couldn’t bear to wait any longer as Max’s fingers were igniting a insatiable need deep within her.

And I just can’t bring myself no way
But I don’t want to escape

I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


Liz writhed against Max’s hand as she danced, knowing that they risked exposing their actions if they went too far on the dance floor, but equally unable to pull away from his attentive hands.

Come closer
Come closer
Come closer
Come closer
Come closer
Come closer
Come closer


Liz’s hands traveled to his heavy balls, her exploring fingers causing Max to grind into her, desperate with need.

I just can’t stop nooooo
I just can’t stop nooooo
I just can’t stop nooooo
I just can’t stop nooooo


Max felt Liz’s breath grow ragged as he secretly rubbed small circles on her clit, Liz’s panties threatening to slip down her legs as Max’s hand sought her warm, wet depths.


And I just can’t pull myself away
Under a spell I can't break

I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


And I just can’t bring myself no way
But I don’t want to escape


As Max watched Liz’s breast rise and fall quickly, felt her heartbeat against his body grow rapid, he spun Liz around to face him. Liz almost cried out in protest, but as he covered her mouth with his own, he plunged two fingers deep inside of her as he reached beneath her skirt and easily underneath under the panties hanging dangerously from the tops of her thighs.

I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


Max swallowed Liz’s moans of pleasure with his mouth, as he rhythmically plunged his fingers into her deep, warm heat, while his thumb continued to stroke her clit as waves of pleasure coursed through her body.

And I just can’t pull myself away
Under a spell I can't break


Liz’s heavy breaths slowed, smiling as she realized she had just came in a room crowded with people, knowing that she wanted the man in front of her more than anything in the world, and realizing that they needed to get out of the club and quickly.

I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop
I just can’t stop


“Max,” Liz panted as she whispered into his ear, “Let’s go…”
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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 16 6-18-09

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Alien_Friend-She’s about to get even luckier!
Ginger-Does that mean you liked it???
Em-Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy what’s to come!
Abby-You won’t have to wait long for dessert at all!
Veronica-As fast as my fingers will fly across the keyboard!
Jessah-Good advice is always appreciated! Glad you liked it!
Natalie-There’s more to come!
LilLoucfer-Don’t we all want to be Liz for a moment?
Zoey-There certainly was a method to my madness when it came to the club. There will have to be a certain balance of romance and ripping off the clothes when they get home.
Sara-Hopefully you will need to regain your composure after this part as well.
Darkmoon-Just leave the shower on for this one (if I’ve done what I intended to do, that is!)
Kris-Hopefully, you’ll enjoy this part as well!

*****
Racing up the apartment complex stairs hand in hand, a nervous and excited Max fumbled with the keys in his fingers while his lips hungrily sought Liz’s.

“I can’t find…” mumbled Max against Liz’s lips as he blindly sorted the jagged puzzle of his key ring.

“Hurry, Max,” Liz pleaded, her hot breath against his neck as she suckled the tender flesh below his ear.

“Here we are,” Max gave Liz a quick but passionate kiss before sliding the elusive brass key into the lock. Their arms entwined around each other’s bodies, they entered Max’s apartment with a gasp.

Dozens upon dozens of flickering ivory candles cast their light on the apartment walls. White roses spilled their heady scent throughout the room. Soft music sounded from the stereo speakers. An antique mirror leaned against the mantle ledge, multiplying the dancing flames over and again.

“Max,” Liz gazed around the room in wonder, “what’s all this?” she whispered slowly.

Max smiled as he watched the amazement in Liz’s expression.

“Do you like it?” he asked softly.

“It’s beautiful,” Liz blinked, tears glazing her eyes, “but how did you…?”

“I called in a favor or two,” Max smiled as he turned Liz back to face him, their breath still short from their frenzied sprint back to the apartment. He swallowed hard, a little self-conscious now, “I..I just wanted everything to be--,”

“Perfect,” Liz finished. “It’s perfect, Max. The whole day—everything has been beyond my wildest dreams.” Liz put her arms around Max’s neck, her lips parting as her tongue searched for his. His hands sought the bare skin of her back as he drew her body close to his, their hunger for each other building again.

“I hope you think the rest of the night is just as perfect,” Max looked hopefully into Liz’s dark eyes and smiled, the little blush rising to his cheeks visible even in the dim light of the room.

Liz smiled and glanced down briefly, a little embarrassed herself.

“Look, Max,” Liz gasped a little and smiled, “a trail of rose petals,” Liz drew Max’s attention to the hallway leading to his bedroom.

“Hmm, maybe we should follow them and see where they lead,” Max teased sultrily, picking up Liz in his arms, kissing her thoroughly as he carried her into his room, also graced with candles, roses, and a chilled bottle of champagne and chocolate strawberries on the nightstand. Max lay Liz down on the black comforter sprinkled with more of the white rose petals.

Grinning mischievously, Liz grabbed Max’s tie, pulling him down hard on top of her, his tented length pressing hard against her panty-covered core as their mouths crashed onto one another. Her hand still on the charcoal-colored silk, Liz reached for the knot at Max’s throat, tugging till it was loosened. In a swift motion, Max reached for the tie, whipping it off his neck rapidly.

Liz made quick work of Max’s shirt buttons, deftly threading each fastener back through the eyelet until Max’s beautifully sculpted chest came into view. As Liz tugged the shirttail from his pants, Max shrugged it off his shoulders quickly, ready to return his attentions to Liz.

Unfastening the tiny buckles at Liz’s ankles, Max dropped the delicate sandals to the floor, kissing his way from Liz’s ankle to thigh as her skirt ruched past her hips.

“Your dress--,” Max indicated breathlessly, anxious to remove it.

“Your pants--,” Liz retaliated, smiling.

Max reached behind Liz, unzipping the fastener at the base of her spine and untying the strings at the back of her neck before standing at the foot of the bed, ready to relieve her of the silky dress. He gathered the hem in his hands, lifting it above her head, leaving Liz naked, save for her skimpy panties.

Her body free of the garment, Liz’s fingers went to work at Max’s buckle, the metal rattling to the floor after Liz unzipped his trousers. Shucking off his shoes and socks along with the puddle of clothing at his feet, Max’s attention was quickly brought back when Liz hooked her thumbs in the waistband of his boxers, his very rigid cock springing from its confines. He sucked in a deep breath as her mouth closed around him, one hand around his cock, the other at the cleft of his ass, holding his body to her mouth.

“Oh my God, Liz,” Max moaned as his fingers fisted through her hair. Though his intention was to make the night special for Liz, his body could not deny the desire he felt. His shaft slid within the warmth of her mouth, her tongue tracing along the ridges and veins, licking along the sensitive edge, tasting the evidence of his arousal at the very tip. She took his body deep within her mouth, and as much as he wanted to make love to Liz right now, there was no denying the pleasure she was giving him. She licked and sucked intently, knowing that he needed release before they continued any further. So many times that night, she had felt his hardness between her thighs or nestled at her backside. There was no way to bring him that secret pleasure he had given her in the nightclub, so as soon as they returned home, Liz knew what she wanted to give Max.

Max knew that he couldn’t last long right now, in fact, there were many moments during that evening where his hunger for Liz’s body was so intense, he nearly embarrassed himself as if he were fifteen once again. And as selfless as Max intended to be tonight, there was no way he could ask her to stop.

Liz had no intention of stopping. Though this was only the second time she had her lips wrapped around Max’s length, Liz was quickly learning how Max’s body would react—how he grew hard to fill her mouth with his size, how the muscles of his ass flexed as her hands traveled across his firm backside, how he lost his breath when she traced her tongue along the underside of his cock, how his knees buckled when--.

“Liz, honey,” Max panted, though Liz was undeterred. The hand she had kept at his cock slipped to his tightened balls as she felt the pressure build within his swollen flesh, sensed that every muscle in his body had tensed, and finally her mouth was filled with his warm, wet seed which she took hungrily.

As Liz released the spent flesh from her mouth, Max dropped to his knees at the foot of the bed, his warm breath against Liz’s bare thigh as his head lay in her lap. Liz’s fingers stroked through his dark locks as he recovered his strength. Max kissed the soft skin of her thighs as he nuzzled in Liz’s lap. She giggled at the tickling attentions, Max playfully turning toward her panty-covered mound, nipping teasingly at the puffy lips encased in the sheer lace.

“You naughty girl,” Max chuckled, “this night was supposed to be all about you,” Max teased as he continued sprinkling her thighs with tender kisses as he reached behind Liz, his hands pulling the comforter away from the headboard.

Liz played along, batting her eyelashes coquettishly as she crawled backward toward the pillows, “Well, if I was a bad girl, then what should my punishment be?” she inquired, feigning innocence as a grinning Max crawled up the bed, following her.

“Hmmm, what should your punishment be?” Max played, the kisses he delivered to the insides of Liz’s thighs nearly driving her to distraction. Max hooked his finger through the right side of her panties, tugging at them enough to expose a few inches of her smooth, creamy flesh.

“A very…,” Max kissed the bare skin he had just exposed causing Liz to whimper in anticipation and buck her hips, trying to force him closer, but Max was enjoying turning the tables on her.

“Thorough…,” Max pulled at the left side of her panties, delivering more kisses to the places he had just uncovered.

Max smiled wolfishly as from between her spread legs, his eyes met Liz’s. His hands remaining on both sides of her panties, he stripped them from her bottom swiftly.

“Tongue-lashing,” he grinned as his tongue spread her lips in a deep stroke, an appreciative groan escaping Liz’s throat as Max dove into her heat, the scent of her arousal driving his hunger as he traced her sensitive folds, kissed the warm lips, and suckled at Liz’s yearning clit.

“I kinda’ like being a bad girl after all,” Liz cooed as she writhed against Max’s mouth, bucking her hips against his attentive tongue. Max chuckled against her warm, wet flesh as he dipped into her heat, her juices sweet with desire.

It was Liz’s turn to fist her fingers through Max’s hair, grinding her body to his mouth. Even though she had come at the nightclub, her arousal was stronger than ever, each orgasm she experienced with Max making her want the next one all the more. He attended to every inch of tender flesh, his tongue stoking the fires of her body, his teeth nipping gently at the swollen lips, his breath tickling against the tender pearl that lay buried in her folds. The tip of his tongue teased her clit with playful strokes as her hands held him closely, his mouth lapping at her core.

Max slipped a finger into her heat, her tight walls fitting snugly around him. Giving steady pressure to her clit, Max continued sliding his finger in and out of her passageway, her body becoming accustomed to the intrusion. He slipped in another, as she bucked against his hand and mouth, responding gratefully to the added pressure.

“Max…,” Liz groaned, her eyes closed as she savored Max lapping at her tender skin, his fingers moving steadily within her. Dipping his tongue inside, Max gathered the nectar flowing there, bringing it to her clit to bathe in her juices. He slipped in another finger and watched for her reaction, looking for a sign that it might be too much, Max still seeing pure pleasure written on Liz’s face as she writhed against his hands and face.

Max felt her pulse quicken, could sense her temperature rise as her body flushed, and felt the walls contract against his fingers as she began to come. His tongue stroked deeply, firmly against her tender folds. Her thighs clenched around him as her cries echoed off the bedroom walls.

“Max,” she breathed out, panting, as Liz’s dark eyes met his, the hunger for something more written clearly in her expression. “Max, please,” her hands reached down to guide him up to meet her.

As Max rose to join her, he gave one last sweep of his tongue to her folds, coating them in her sweet nectar.

Traveling back up her body, he kissed the flat length of her belly, then reaching her taut darkened nipples, he suckled each of them in turn, heightening her hunger all the more.

“Max…,” she pleaded, groaning with need.

As he kissed the tender skin of her neck, below her ear, her cheek, his lips finally met hers, their tongues seeking each other as their bodies longed to.

She bucked against his hard length that now rested at her entrance, desperate for his body to finally be inside hers.

Max broke the kiss to search her face, to make certain that she was ready.

“Are you sure?” he asked.

“Yes, Max,” Liz smiled up at him. “I’m sure.”

Max’s lips met Liz’s as he slid in part way, meeting her barrier. He looked in her eyes once more to see all the love and trust that shone behind them.

He raised up, sliding his arms under her shoulders and placed a sweet kiss on her forehead.

“I love you,” he whispered, almost inaudibly, against her skin, wishing he could tell her boldly, wanting to make her his forever, but not wanting to force her hand when she had so many choices yet to make.

Before Liz could question what she heard, when she thought she heard Max announce his love for her, not just the quick sentiments that they had exchanged for years, but a real ‘I love you,’ as she wanted him to repeat it over and again, a sharp pain made her gasp instead, the final vestige of her virginity torn away as Max pushed forward, his shaft buried deep within her body.

“I’m sorry, baby,” Max said aloud as he kissed away the tear in the corner of her eye. He hated to cause Liz any pain, but he knew what awaited them on the other side, knew the pleasure that they could have together after this moment.

“Just give me a minute,” Liz breathed out as the flash of pain passed and she adjusted to Max’s size, the fullness, the completeness she now felt. Pain giving way to pleasure, Liz rocked her hips experimentally, her slick folds grasping at Max’s length. The earlier sting had gone, and in its place Liz felt Max’s length inside her, felt the delicious pressure of his weight on top of her, and she smiled and nodded, Max moving gently against her as she grew accustomed to the rhythm of their bodies.

“Are you ok?” Max asked softly as he continued to move within Liz.

“I’m fine,” Liz assured with a smile, pulling Max against her for a passionate kiss as their movements began to pick up speed. She wrapped her legs around him, pulling Max snugly against her core as he delved deeper inside her.

“You feel amazing inside me,” Liz breathed out as she clutched against Max, her arms wrapped around his broad shoulders, her hands tracing the muscles of his back as she clung to him.

You are so warm, wet, snug…delicious,” Max suckled at the soft skin at Liz’s neck, his tongue swiping at the salty flesh he found there.

Liz giggled softly at his words, bucking against him with even greater intensity as he nuzzled her neck, dropping his head to take her breast in his mouth once more. Liz moaned as that feeling shot through her, her hand reaching up to roll the nipple of her other breast as Max sucked at her taut rosy flesh. She groaned in satisfaction at his attentions, the grinding of her hips to his proof that all Max was doing brought her pleasure of the sweetest sort.

Max was now free to thrust more deeply, sliding in and out of Liz’s slick walls as her hips rose to meet him. Liz reveled in the feeling of Max moving within her over and again, his deep, sure strokes stimulating those places in her body she had only read about in books or heard about in the whispers of the more experienced girls at school.

Max moved Liz’s thighs inside his own, her delight obvious as every thrust of Max’s shaft stroked firmly against her swollen clit. In the flickering candlelight, she watched his body enter hers over and again, his slick cock, coated with her juices, plunging into her depths with strong, sure movements.

“My God, Max,” Liz panted as she grinded her body to his, the delicious friction of his length sliding along her clit and driving into her depths made her body hum with a hunger she had never known before. Her hands went to Max’s face, bringing his lips to her own as her tongue plunged into his mouth, dueling with his own as he lifted her hips, the bundle of nerves buried deep in her body awakened with each stroke.

Lifting her body to meet his, Max suckled again at her breast, as he heard the catch in Liz’s breath, saw the flush of her skin, and finally, could feel her walls constrict around him, pulsing with her rapid heartbeats.

“Max!” Liz cried out, her orgasm wracking her body as her juices flowed, her warmth coating Max’s cock.

“Oh, Liz!” Max groaned, his seed spilling into her depths as her tight walls closed around him, milking him of all that was left in his body. Their foreheads touched as their panted breaths mingled, moving slowly, gently as they recovered from their powerful orgasm.

Max lay down against Liz’s chest, listening to her thudding heartbeats as they slowly began to return to normal. Realizing that his weight must be crushing her, Max rolled over onto his back, guiding Liz to lay on top of him.

“Thank you, Max,” Liz said softly, placing tender kisses against his chest as she looked up at him, grateful that Max had fulfilled her deepest desire.

“Hmm mm,” Max shook his head gently and smiled, “Thank you,” he gently corrected, bringing Liz up to meet him for a deep kiss. They smiled as they kissed, overjoyed at what they shared together.

The melting ice in the bucket on the nightstand caused the bottle of champagne to contact the metal rim with a soft ring, drawing Max and Liz’s attention.

“Are you thirsty?” Max asked as they raised up against the pillows slightly.

“Yeah,” Liz agreed as she gathered the sheet and comforter to spread over them.

Max popped the cork on the champagne with a practiced hand, expertly pouring two glasses full of the bubbly golden liquid.

“So, care to explain how the champagne arrived by the bedside?” Liz asked teasingly as Max handed her a glass.

“Um, my friends Jill and Eric, you’ll meet them tomorrow. She’s a part-time party planner, and he tags along carrying heavy boxes and things like that,” Max explained. They owed me a bit of a favor, so I called them when you were in the shower this morning.”

“Good to know,” Liz smiled, laughing lightly. “I guess not every girl loses her virginity like this,” Liz grinned giving the candlelit and rose-filled room another appreciative look.

“No, I suppose not,” Max chuckled softly. “I really wanted everything about tonight to be special, Liz,” Max looked hopefully at Liz.

“Max, it was perfect. You were perfect,” Liz smiled as she kissed him again. “It was more than I ever hoped for, Max,” Liz confessed.

“You deserve it, Liz,” Max lifted her chin with the crook of his index finger, kissing her again. Noting the condensation rolling off the champagne flute, he asked, “What should we drink to? Losing your virginity?” he teased.

Biting her lip and smiling, Liz shook her head, “To us,” she announced as they clinked their glasses.

“To us,” Max repeated softly taking a long sip from the tall glass.

“What else do we have over there?” Liz leaned across Max’s chest, her nipples pressing his flesh as she did so.

“Looks like chocolate-covered strawberries—want one?” Max asked.

“Yes, please,” Liz answered as Max brought the dark-chocolate berry to her lips as she bit off a succulent chunk, her hand darting under her chin to catch the juice that dripped.

‘Here, let me get that,” Max teased as he kissed the pink drips on her chin.

Liz giggled, “Here, try some,” she lifted the fruit to Max’s lips as he took a bite, Liz’s finger wiping up any errant trails which she brought to her mouth to suck clean.

“Yummy,” she said with her next mouthful of berry. They each took a long drink and sat their glasses back on the nightstand for the moment.

Liz settled against Max’s chest as each of them nibbled on another berry.

“I’ve been wondering something, Max,” Liz questioned as she lay against his chest.

“About what?” he responded with a mix of curiosity and caution.

“Did you ever think about me like this when we were younger? Sexually, I mean.”

“Well, you did have a serious over-attachment to that spring horse that I couldn’t begin to understand,” Max laughed.

“Oh my God, that’s right, ‘Wonder-the spring horse’—I had forgotten about that. You know, when I first got him for Christmas, I wanted to name him ‘Max’ but my mom wouldn’t let me,” Liz laughed in recollection. “She said his name was ‘Wonder’ and he might get confused if I called him something else,” Liz laughed as she finally caught on to her mother’s insistence at the name.

“I swear you could hear the squeak of those springs downstairs in the Crashdown,” Max laughed at the memory.

“Jeez, I cried and cried when that poor horse finally broke down and Dad took the pieces to the dump,” Liz sighed.

“I bet you did,” Max chuckled as he pulled Liz close and kissed the top of her head.

“No, anyway, I’m serious. Did you ever think of me like this before?” Liz repeated the question as Max heaved a sigh.

“Liz, there is no way I’m answering that question. If I answer one way, your feelings will be hurt—if I answer the other way, I’ll look like a perv!” Max exclaimed as he pulled back to look at Liz.

“No, I promise—I won’t be mad or think any less of you either way. I just remember something, and I want to know if I’m right.”

“When? What are you thinking of?” Max searched her face.

“Just answer the question, Max…” Liz drawled softly as she cuddled him.

“Baby, I really don’t think you want me to bring this up,” Max cautioned gently.

“I do,” Liz whispered insistently.

Max heaved a sigh and spoke, looking ahead as he held Liz closely to his body.

“You had just turned fifteen, and I was still a couple of weeks away from turning eighteen, and we were up in your room. You had just lost your grandmother, then your mom. Your dad had just told you that day he was sending you to Winnaman. We locked the door, and you cried till my shirt was soaked,” Max kissed the top of Liz’s head as she clung to him.

“And, I know it seems strange,” Max sighed as he tried to make sense of those feelings, “but you were so hurt and lost, and, I know it sounds crazy, but I did want to make love to you, to take away some of that pain and hurt, if only for a moment. I thought something was wrong with me for feeling like that, and I didn’t want to upset you or confuse you any more than you already were, so I just kept holding you, giving you the time to cry…” Max stroked her long dark hair as they lay in the same position they did so many years ago, this time, of course, with far fewer clothes on.
Turning toward Max’s chest, Liz mouthed silently, ‘I love you’ against his warm chest.

Feeling the tickle of her lips and tongue against his skin, Max smiled and looked down.

“So, were you right?” he questioned softly.

He felt her head nod against his chest as she kissed him once again,

“I was right,” she responded gently, her eyes shining in the candlelight.

“We’d better get to sleep,” Max sweetly warned, “We’ve got school tomorrow.”

They scooted down the bed, though Liz’s head remained snuggled into Max’s chest.

“Love you, Max,” Liz said tenderly, as she kissed his chest once more.

“Love you, Lizzie,” Max responded in kind as he kissed her forehead and blew out the candles beside him.
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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 17 6-27-09

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Sara-Max certainly was a little naughty. But then again, you can hardly blame him right? 8)
Kris-Yes, he certainly is a sweetie! :D
Alien_Friend-They were certainly made for each other (even if they weren’t aware of it at the time)! :roll:
Ginger-Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! :P
LilLoucfer-He did make it really special…we can dream can’t we??? :D
Keepsmiling-why yes, yes he is!
Behr_able-
I need a tissue
I think I have one crumpled in the bottom of my purse...now let me just see if I can find it... :lol:
Darkmoon-Thanks so much—ah, if we were all so lucky! :D
Molly-Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :P
Cocogurl-He did think of everything, didn’t he…
:D Em-Thanks so much! :P
Eve-I’m glad you liked it. Max did try to cover all the bases. :D
Monica-There will be more to come *ahem* never fear! :lol:
Abby-It wasa pretty perfect and btw—love your new sig! :D
Natalie-Thanks so much! I’m glad you are enjoying it! :P
Twilight-Thanks so much! :D
Jan-Innocent minds—oh please, honey—we haven’t had innocent minds for a hell of a long time! I’m glad you got caught up, and I hope you got your household issues all squared away. :wink:
roswells_angel285 wrote:OMG, that was AMAZING!!! I loved it! My only worry was that Michael was gonna make an unscheduled appearance. Might've been kinda funny- Michael standing there in the mist of the candles and flowers. *rofl*--
Michael will make an appearance later--but I really want to give Max and Liz a little more time before that happens. You'll see why...I promise :wink: .
I've been finding a lot of stories that have horrible spelling and grammer lately, and I'm a total English buff, so it drives me nuts. *rofl* I'm a dork, I know. --
Hey, I just figure I'd better practice what I preach. :lol: Although I will admit to playing fast and loose with my dialogue sometimes :oops: . Last week I found a couple of typos back in part one and felt compelled to go back and fix them, so, hey, you're not the only dork around here :lol: .


Thanks everyone for your feedback! I have a new story on this same board titled "Under One Roof." It will take a little longer for Max and Liz's romance to come to fruition, but I think you might like it. :wink:

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Ch 17


Liz awoke as the dappled sunlight peeked through the gaps in Max’s curtains. The smell of candle smoke and roses still hung heavily in the air. She also noted the unusual cool slickness between her legs that reminded her of last night. Liz smiled at the memory of the wonderful day they shared, their exciting evening on the town, and then, the apartment—the candles, flowers and music—it was like something out of a fairytale.

But more than all of that, Liz remembered their lovemaking—how he touched her, how he tasted her, how he felt inside her. Liz couldn’t imagine a more perfect way to lose her virginity or a more perfect man to take it. Liz turned to look behind her. Even asleep, Max was the most handsome man she had ever known--and not just handsome, but sweet, smart, well-liked, not to mention sexy as hell. What could he possibly want with a small town girl who wasn’t even a college freshman yet?

He had done what she asked of him—he made love to her, taken her virginity—and it was everything she could hope for, but where would it go from here? Liz loved Max, she had always loved Max, but Liz’s fear of rejection was starting to creep into the back of her mind. The thought of leaving him was unbearable; the thought of another man taking his place was unthinkable; the thought of never making love with him again…

Liz pulled back her corner of the comforter, ready to escape to the solitude of the shower and deal with the prospect of never feeling him inside her again.

She wouldn’t get that far.

Just as her weight shifted against the mattress, two strong arms pulled her back.

“Just where do you think you’re going?” Max teasingly whispered as he nuzzled the tender skin behind Liz’s ear.

“The shower,” Liz giggled lightly as the weight of so many fears was suddenly allayed.

“Un-uh,” Max playfully corrected as he nibbled along the smooth slope of Liz’s neck. “There’s no sense taking a shower when you’re just going to get dirty again,” Max slid his hard length along her slick nether lips as he snuggled her closely from behind.

“I am?” Liz questioned teasingly as she arched her backside against Max’s rigid shaft.

“If you’re ready for your next lesson, that is,” Max nudged gently at her entrance.

“There’s more?”

“Oh, baby girl, there’s plenty more,” Max chuckled suggestively as his hand snaked around to Liz’s breast, her nipples growing stiff as Max’s fingers spiraled against the rosy flesh. “It could take months, years even,” he predicted in all seriousness as the head of his cock began to part her swollen lips, “and then there’s always practice.”

“Practice?” Liz grinned as she looked over her shoulder and into Max’s warm eyes. “I like the sound of that,” she cooed as she grinded into Max once more.

“So are you ready for a little snuggly, early-morning lovemaking?” Max queried as his hand slipped down between Liz’s legs, but then a sudden thought stayed his movements, “or are you too sore from last night? Honey, we don’t have to if you’re not ready,” concern was written over Max’s face as he realized that Liz may not be ready for him so soon.

“There’s only one way to find out, now isn’t there?” Liz smiled back at Max as she rolled her hips back to meet him.

Slowly, Max slid his rigid shaft deeper within her body, cautiously watching her face for any sign of pain.

Grasping his thigh behind her, Liz arched into Max, meeting his unhurried thrusts until he was buried inside her completely.

Liz groaned in satisfaction as Max filled her body—the new position producing sensations she hadn’t experienced before.

“You ok?” Max asked softly as Liz nodded against his shoulder, smiling happily.

“Mmm-hmm,” Liz purred as she rolled her hips against him, reveling in the feeling of Max’s warm, strong body behind her, his arms surrounding her, and his thick cock filling her so completely.

“God, Liz, you feel amazing,” Max moaned as he continued thrusting into her over and again, as he slipped his hand back to her dark furrow, gathering their slick juices before bringing his fingers to her hard button, stroking that bundle of nerves as he thrust into her from behind.

“I really like waking up like this,” Liz drawled as she closed her eyes dreamily, her hips rocking back to meet Max, her fingers reaching for her nipples, rolling the puckered flesh while Max’s hand was buried between her thighs.

“We’ll add it to the list,” Max promised as they thought of the other early-morning delights already experienced within the last few days.

A low, honeyed laugh rumbled in Liz’s throat as she ground her core down the length of Max’s rigid shaft. Max was right—making love like this was different and new. While she missed the weight of his body pressing down on hers and his attentions paid to her breasts, her curiosity was piqued by the sensations of Max’s cock sliding along her bottom and how the difference in position made unknown places come alive. Liz forgot those fleeting fears that plagued her when she first woke, and decided that if Max had more to teach her, then she would be his more-than-willing student.

Liz’s hand left her puckered nipple and slid to where their legs were intertwined, crossed his powerful thighs, and reached behind Max to explore his wonderfully taut backside, groaning in appreciation as the flex and release of his muscles rippled underneath her hand. As her hands traveled further down, his flesh grew more sensitive, more tender, and her touch seemed to drive his thrusts with greater intensity.

“God, I love making love with you, Liz,” Max groaned. He wanted to say more—he needed to say more, but at the same time, trying so hard to give her the freedom to make the choices that she thought best. He could only hope that she would choose to stay.

“I do too, Max,” Liz moaned, responding to what Max had said out loud, though he hoped her words also answered his unspoken plea.

She lifted his fingers to her mouth, her tongue sliding along their length, tasting herself on his hands. He whimpered playfully as her attentions to his fingers seemed to go straight to his cock. When Liz finally released his fingers from her mouth, he immediately plunged them between her lower lips, stroking firmly with his fingers as his engorged shaft plundered her depths.

Their bodies rolled sinuously, much like they did on the dance floor the night before. Pulling out to the edge of her entrance and sliding his full length into her tight passageway over and again, Max knew that he never wanted to be anywhere else.

Max suckled on the curve where Liz’s neck met her shoulder as his thrusts and strokes increased in intensity. He could feel her walls tighten around him, could hear her breath grow ragged and her pulse increase under his lips.

“Come for me, Liz,” he whispered throatily as his lips brushed her ear, his body filling hers over and again as their rhythm increased and their skin grew salty with sweat.

“Max!” she cried grasping at his backside again, desperate for his full length to plunder her core as her juices drenched their bodies.

As Liz’s walls began to pulse and clench against his aching shaft, Max could hold back no longer.

“Liz! Oh God!” Max groaned as his seed filled her body, her passage slick as he continued to pump his essence deep within her. Max held Liz tightly, his body nearly circling her own as they both gasped for breath. Their embrace wasn’t broken until the rising sun streamed through the curtains once more, momentarily blinding them both with its strong early summer rays.

Max threw up his hand to try and block the offending light.

“We have got to buy new curtains next time we go to the mall,” he declared, squinting against the sunlight.

“Yes, we do,” Liz concurred grinning at her inclusion in the matter.

“Mmm, come here,” Max requested as he pulled Liz around to face him, parting her lips for a deep kiss as his hands cupped her breasts. “See, this is the only problem with being behind you—I miss kissing you,” he rectified that slight by plunging into Liz’s mouth, his tongue dueling with hers until the need for oxygen became too great.

“And these,” he waggled his eyebrows as he leaned up to take a rosy nipple into his mouth.

Liz squealed in surprise at the sensitivity of her nipples after her orgasm.

Max couldn’t help but chuckle, “Can’t forget the other one,” he quickly took her other nipple in her mouth offering it a sweet kiss as well.

They both laughed as Liz squirmed and covered her nipples with her hands.

Low rumbles were heard as Liz rose to her knees, her hands still erotically cupping her breasts.

“Was that your stomach or mine?” Max joked as their bodies growled for sustenance.

“I don’t know,” Liz laughed as she fell back against the bed, planting sweet kisses against Max’s stomach.

“Why don’t you jump in the shower because I’m afraid if we take one together, we will never make it to school,” Max laughed, “I will get breakfast ready and grab a shower after you’re through in the bathroom,” he playfully swatted her behind as he rose from the bed and offered his hand to help pull her up.

Before he sent Liz to the bathroom he couldn’t resist stealing one more kiss and whispering in her ear, “Now, you’re dirty enough for a shower.”

As the shower ran in the bathroom, Max slipped on a pair of shorts and a t-shirt, grabbing bacon and eggs from the fridge and a skillet from the cabinet when he heard a knock at the door.

Laying the breakfast items on the counter by the stove, Max answered it.

“Mr. Evans?” the shorts-clad postman inquired.

“Yeah, that’s me,” Max’s brow furrowed, wondering why the postman was making a personal stop at his door.

“You had more mail than would fit in your box, so I needed to bring it up. Most of it is forwarded to a ‘Liz Parker’, is that right?”

“Um, yeah, she’s my girlfriend—she’s here,” Max took the rubber-banded bundle from the mail carrier. “Thanks man, appreciate it,” Max nodded as he shut the door. He unbanded the packet, noting the heaps of college catalogs in his hands.

Grinning to himself, Max ignored the urge to trash the ones that were too far away, but did take care to place the UNM catalog neatly on top of the pile. Smiling at his one little act of selfishness, he returned to arranging the slices of bacon in the skillet.

Liz soon came out of the bathroom in her red robe, toweling the dampness from her hair, following the smell of breakfast cooking.

“Mmm, smells yummy,” Liz complemented as she poured herself a cup of coffee that Max had prepared.

“Thanks—oh, the mail came. It’s on the table,” Max nodded to the impressive stack.

Liz headed to the table to check out what had come for her.

“Would you look at that—UNM right on top,” Liz teased as she noticed the Albuquerque catalog prominently displayed.

“Local mail, I guess,” Max teased.

“Uh-huh, especially seeing as it was forwarded from Winnaman,” Liz countered, her eyebrow raised playfully.

“Hey, I gotta’ do something to compete against Harvard and Northwestern,” Max fessed up as he brought their plates to the table.

“Thank you, honey,” Liz took her plate and sat down at the table, shoving the catalogs aside, groaning slightly.

“Ugh, I’ll look at them later. I don’t even want to think about that right now,” she looked despairingly at the looming stack of choices.

“Take all the time you need, Liz,” Max looked her squarely in the eye. “Sweetheart, whatever you decide, I’ll support you one hundred percent,” he slid his hand over her own, letting her know that his feelings for her weren’t dependent on which school she chose.

“Thank you, Max—for everything,” she added as she gave him a quick kiss before picking up her fork.

They continued their breakfast, ignoring the stack of glossy flyers and pamphlets, unaware of the fact that buried in the depths of all those numerous course guides and campus maps was an envelope from Ticketmaster addressed to one Michael G. Parker.
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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 18 7-2-09

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Twilight-It is quite difficult for Max to try and restrain his feelings here. He doesn’t want Liz to feel pressured to stay if she wants to choose another school. :roll:

Zoey-Michael’s appearance will really provide the conflict of the story. I wanted to make sure that Liz was very sure of herself and what she wanted before he arrived. :wink:

Eve-His best friend having sex with his sister? I’ll give you three guesses as to how Michael will feel about that… :twisted:

Jan-No, Michael’s unhappiness is pretty much a given. But, yeah, I’m thinking that Max’s lessons are totally worth it! :lol:

Abby-Practice, practice, practice… :lol:

Em-Yes, I suspect he might! :twisted:

Keepsmiling-The Max and Liz kind of practice does seem like a lot of fun! :P
Carrie wrote-
One of these days I'm simply going to just pass out and fall on the floor... then someone in my family is going to find me and I’m going to have to explain what the hell made me black out and the hardest thing I'll have to explain is why during my unconscious state I will somehow will be repeating Max's name over and over again.
I can relate—I just ordered this big Roswell blanket and received it in the mail. My husband took one look at it, said he was going to do naughty things to me on it and make Max watch! :twisted: At least he has a sense of humour about it! :lol:

Oh, and yes, I did end up getting the tattoos I mentioned in your fb for Tender is the Night. Three in one day! Eek! And you don’t even have to ask—you know exactly what I was thinking as the guy worked on my back... :wink:

LilLoucfer-Michael’s arrival will be a big transition for everyone. :wink:

Ginger—Some good could come of it though... :wink:

Natalie—Max will certainly make his feelings known concerning that issue. :?

Kris—The next part will add a little more back story and a bit more of Liz acclimating to Albuquerque. :D

Darkmoon—There will be two sides to the smackdown—never fear! 8)

Behr_Able-I’m certain those classes would fill up very quickly! :lol:

Alien_Friend-Michael’s visit will certainly be a catalyst for change... :wink:

Dreamers_fan-I shall-enjoy! :D

P.S. If you hear echoes of Mockingbird in this chapter, you're not wrong :wink: .

“Welcome to Castetter Hall,” Max declared as he pushed open the heavy door and led Liz through. Hand in hand they made their way down the long tile-covered hallway toward the biology lab.

Liz smiled as she held Max’s hand and thought of a day much like this one—thirteen years ago…

“Michael, wait up!” Elizabeth Parker cried from the front door of the Crashdown, her parents busy with their early morning duties at the restaurant.

“Sweetie, I wish I could take you to school this morning, but Agnes just called in sick, and I don’t have anyone to cover,” a frazzled Nancy Parker squatted down to apologize to her young daughter, brushing Liz’s hair out of her eyes. “Michael will be happy to show you where your room is,” Nancy looked out the large windows, noticing that her eight-year-old son was already to the end of the block.

The bells tinkled against the glass door as Nancy pushed it open, “Michael Guerin Parker, get back here this instant and walk your sister to school!”
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An aggravated groan was heard from the end of the block. Michael begrudgingly turned around, trudging back to the café at his mother’s insistence.

“Mom, I gotta go—the guys and I are gonna’ shoot hoops before class. If I get there late, I’ll have to pick Sean to be on my team, and he sucks at shooting the ball”.

“Don’t say ‘sucks,’” Nancy sternly corrected.

Jeff called out, “Order up!” from the pass through, drawing Nancy’s attention momentarily.

“Now, she’s in Mrs. Cooper’s kindergarten class. I need you to make sure she gets there,” Nancy firmly instructed.

“Nance…” Jeff called out again.

Nancy smiled at her rather obstinate young son, tousling his unruly hair and giving him a kiss on the cheek.

“Ewww, Mom!” Michael wiped at his cheek, eliminating any evidence of his mother’s kiss.

Nancy turned back to the pass through to pick up table nine’s order.

“Don’t forget your lunches!” Jeff called to his children from the kitchen. From the countertop they picked up the brown paper bags with the folded-down tops and their names printed in wide red marker.

“Wait! I gotta’ get my backpack,” Liz’s feet scrambled to the back booth which held her belongings.

“What do you need a backpack for anyway? You’re just in kindergarten,” Michael growled and rolled his eyes in impatience, huffing as he helped his little sister with the padded straps of her Powerpuff Girls’ backpack.

“It has my crayons, pencils and books,” Liz explained, looking up at her big brother as they made their way out the door.

“Your teacher will have all that stuff at school. She’ll have a big tub in the middle of each table with a bunch of crayons in it already. Same way with the pencils,” Michael explained off-handedly.

“Ewww, sounds messy,” the five-year-old declared in disgust. I like to keep mine all nice and neat,” Liz smiled proudly. “Will I get books to take home?” she queried, a little unsure as to the policies and procedures of Roswell Elementary.

Sighing with impatience, Michael was forced to continue the explanation, “No, the teacher will read you books and show you the pictures.”

“I don’t need her to read books to me. I can read my own books,” the precocious kindergartener insisted. “Well, I brought a couple with me, just in case I get bored,” little Liz nodded once with her lips pressed together in determination.

Max was to blame for that, Michael supposed. Whenever Michael was busy arguing with his parents over some chore left undone and Max was waiting for him to be finished so they could go play in the park, Liz would thrust a pile of books in Max’s lap and snuggle up beside him in a booth so he could read out loud to her--A Very Hungry Caterpillar, Where the Wild Things Are, mountains of Dr. Seuss—Max would read to Liz as long as it took for Michael to finish whining and complaining before finally completing his assigned task.

“Hey guys,” Michael called out as they neared the school playground. Approaching the basketball court, Michael noted all his buddies, Sean, Kyle, Alex, Pauley and Max all practicing shots on the rusty outdoor hoop with the chain for a basket, the satisfying sound of ‘ching’ ringing with every point.

“Did we choose up sides yet?” the tall eight-year-old inquired as he tossed down his Ninja Turtles backpack and crumpled brown bag onto the grass by the concrete slab.

“No, man, we were waiting on you,” young Kyle Valenti threw the worn leather ball at Michael who caught it deftly.

“Heh, I got Max,” Michael declared with self-satisfaction as Kyle eyed the remaining line-up.

“I got Pauley, then” Kyle waved the tall but stocky boy over to his team.

Liz watched this interchange with increasing concern. “Michael, you’re supposed to walk me to my class. I don’t know where it is,” Liz looked toward the elementary campus, unsure as to which of the many small buildings might house her classroom, and certain that she would be late if she had to search each one.

“It’s over there, Liz,” Michael pointed to a group of several portable buildings grouped together on the far side of the campus.”You’re a smart girl,” he added wryly. “Figure it out. If you get lost, just ask somebody where Mrs. Cooley’s class is,” Michael had already turned his attention back to the game, dribbling the ball back and forth between his hands.

“It’s Cooper! Mrs. Cooper’s class, Michael,” Liz stamped her foot and started to get teary-eyed, once again left to her own devices by her less- than- attentive brother.

“I’ll show you where your class is, Liz,” Max walked off the cement court and took Liz’s small hand in his, heading off to the kindergarten center.

“Max! I thought we were gonna’ play?” an annoyed Michael shouted toward the retreating figures.

“Sean can play in my spot and Alex can ref,” Max called back without turning around as he and Liz continued toward her class.

As they made their way hand in hand across the grassy field, Max directed Liz up the steps of one of the portable buildings, an air-conditioner in the window blowing its heated exhaust on the pair as they entered the door.

“Max, what a surprise,” the middle-aged, pleasantly-plump teacher greeted her former student, “I didn’t remember you having a younger sister?” Mrs. Cooper scrunched her face in confusion.

“No, ma’m,” Max answered politely, “This is Michael’s little sister, Liz,” he introduced.

Mrs. Cooper’s face grew wary, wondering if little Liz would be the trial her older brother had been.

“What’s going to be on our first test, Mrs. Cooper? I want to start studying now, so I can make an A,” Liz inquired earnestly, ready to demonstrate her academic abilities as soon as possible.

Mrs. Cooper had to stifle a chuckle as she considered the petite brunette, “We’ll get to that soon enough,” Mrs. Cooper smiled, noting that little Lizzie seemed to be nothing like her rowdy brother, “I’ll put your things in your cubby and you can say good bye to Max.”

Max kneeled down to help Liz with her backpack which he handed to Mrs. Cooper. Mrs. Cooper took Liz’s things to the coat closet at the back of the room.

“Will you play with me at recess?” Liz questioned, her dark eyes looking up at his.

“I’m sorry, Liz, but the third grade doesn’t have the same recess as the kindergarten. I’m sure you’ll make lots of friends today, though. You’ll have fun at recess, I promise,” Max smiled reassuringly at Liz who remained a little unsure. “I’ll come by at three o’clock and walk you home, ok?” he offered, hoping that would finally make his young friend smile.

It did. An enthusiastic Liz wrapped her small arms round Max’s shoulders, giving him a big hug before he had to leave.

“Love you, Max,” Liz said, her face cradled against his shoulder.

‘Love you, Lizzie,” Max said in reply, patting her back as the eight-o’clock bell rang…

~~~
“Liz Parker, this is Professor Edwards,” Max introduced the two as Liz was startled out of her reminiscence.

“Oh, yes, how do you do, Professor?” Liz shook hands with the educator, a thin man with graying hair and glasses.

“Very well, thank you.”

“Liz just graduated with honors from Winnaman Academy. She’ll be a freshman in the fall,” Max explained.

“Um, actually, I’ll be a second semester freshman. I have eighteen AP credits already,” Liz noted, then became a little self-conscious of the correction.

“Elizabeth Parker? From Roswell?” the professor’s forehead wrinkled as he tried to puzzle out the connection.

“Yes, sir,” Liz responded, a bit worried at the recognition.

“I’m on the scholarship committee, and I recall your application--very impressive, but I don’t think we’ve heard back from you about our offer…” the professor hinted.

“I’m still trying to decide on a school,” Liz explained apologetically.

“Well, Miss Parker, we would certainly love to have someone with your potential here at UNM. We have state of the art labs here and an outstanding faculty,” Professor Edwards turned his attention to Max, “Mr. Evans, I’m sure that you will do everything in your power to assure that Miss Parker, here, chooses UNM.”

Max and Liz had difficulty in restraining their mischievous grins, “I am certainly trying my best, Sir,” Max tried to reply with sincerity. Max cleared his throat to try to regain his composure, “Liz is here visiting, and I thought she might like to sit-in on the lab today.”

“Certainly, certainly,” Professor Edwards extended his hand toward the classroom. “Join us please, Miss Parker.”

“Thank you,” Liz replied graciously.

Max led her to the table where he greeted his classmates.

“Liz, this is Jill and Eric,” Max introduced as the three shook hands. “Oh, Jill, before I forget,” Max dug in his pocket and produced a shiny ipod with two hundreds folded discreetly underneath, “Here’s your ipod…”

Jillian smiled at Max’s covert payment for the champagne, candles and flowers.

“And we boxed up the candlesticks, ice bucket, vases—all that stuff. It’s in the jeep, so after class we can drive around to your car and drop it off.”

“Thanks for bringing it. We’ve got a wedding reception scheduled for Saturday, so that will give me time to get everything cleaned and ready,” Jill explained.

“You did a lovely job on the apartment,” Liz complimented. “It was just beautiful,” she gushed.

“Well, we just hope you had a wonderful evening,” Jill replied graciously.

“We did,” Liz blushed as glanced away briefly, a little embarrassed at her admission. “Thank you both, again,” Liz pulled her hair behind her ear in nervousness.

Max slid his arm behind Liz, rubbing calming circles at her back as he led her to two empty spots.

“Henry’s gone today, so you can take his seat,” Max offered, pulling out the lab stool for Liz.

“Thanks, Max,” Liz breathed out, happy to return to her element—the biology lab. “So, what’s the experiment?” she inquired.

“Well, the class is researching genetic markers in hereditary disease. Our group has the Alzheimer’s test samples.”

“Sounds interesting,” Liz settled in over the microscope.

The professor made his way to the front of the class, smiling again at Liz who looked up from the microscope as he cleared his throat, “Ok, class, let’s begin…”

~~~
After introducing Liz to more of his classmates following the lab session, Max and Liz grabbed a quick bite in the student union food court with Jill and Eric, Liz growing more comfortable with the pair as the meal continued. Forgetting her earlier self-consciousness, Liz described the previous days shopping, dining and dancing, blushing only slightly this time as she again remarked on the beautiful, romantic atmosphere that Jillian had created. Jill winked in understanding to indicate that Liz’s description of last night’s events needn’t go any further. She was a new bride herself, of course—no further explanation was necessary.

As the two men finished their discussion of the weekend’s baseball game that Max just happened to miss, the four cleared their table and retreated to the parking lot where Max and Liz drove to meet the other car and unload the box of wrapped vases and candlesticks, Jillian thanking Max and Liz once again for their return before she and her husband pulled away.
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“We have one more stop before we head home. You up for it?” Max asked as he shifted gears.

Grinning to smile at Max as the wind whipped at her hair, Liz replied, “Just lead the way…”


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Re: The Schoolgirl (M/L Adult) ch 19 7-11-09

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Carolyn-Oh, yes, very special indeed! :P

Kris-Michael has some new ground to cover with his sister (a few chapters away, though) :wink:

Behr-able-Thanks so much. Michael will have a lot to say, but also a lot to hear.

LilLoucfer-I’m glad you like it! Dealing with Michael will be their toughest challenge yet… :wink:

Eternal_dreamer-Well, here’s hoping today will elicit another cold shower!
Yes, Jeff and Michael, while not exactly evil, certainly weren’t the ideal examples of caring family members. I think for Michael, it was primarily childish self-centeredness. For Jeff, it was his own heartbreak and fear over not being an adequate parent on his own.
Glad you joined us! :D

Alien_Friend-Down deep, Michael has the potential to become a decent brother. Certainly Max and Liz have had a long-term bond that she did not share with Michael, but I really don’t want him seen as an absolute villain.
Liz was definitely in her element in the lab. She needs to make her choices not only in relation to Max, but in her other concerns as well. :D

Carrie-Hi ! Good to hear from you!
http://www.tvmerch.com/ This is the link for the blanket and some other goodies I’ve ordered from them.
The tats—I got a Sailor-jerry style swallow on my left foot, double cherries on my right ankle, and a heart with wings on my back (that was the one that really hurt)!
My hubby is an absolute doll—we watched The last International Playboy the other night, and he really liked it (and not just all the tits in the first five minutes!) :lol:

Ginger-Michael will evolve a bit over the course of the story. Maria’s influence has helped a bit as well. :D

D-Eager for the throwdown are you? A few more chapters before we get there—a little more bliss before the shit hits the fan. :lol:

Jan-If you look up at Carrie’s note, I included the site that sold the blanket.
Michael certainly has a single-minded view of brotherhood, but Max will have a chance to speak his piece .
Speaking of new goodies—I’ve still got to figure out what to do with the Skinwalkers shirt I won at auction—needing ideas. (and yeah, I’ve already thought of the dirty ones). :lol:

Natalie-So glad you’re enjoying it! :D

Zoey-Liz needs to feel like this is a place where she belongs—not just with Max, but with other facets of her life as well. I think you’ll like where they are going next. :D

Sara-Max is certainly rolling out the red carpet for her. In her inexperience, Liz is still a little uncertain that she would be ‘the one’ for Max, her insecurity telling her that he would ultimately want someone more sophisticated. Max is trying very hard to encourage her to stay without taking away Liz’s ability to choose what is right for her. He feels a little selfish but at the same time, he can’t quite help himself, either.

ch 19
Pulling the jeep into a large, winding driveway and up to a sprawling, luxurious home, Max shut off the engine and pulled the parking brake.

“Whose house is this, Max?” Liz asked, wondering why they had come to this place.

“My friend, Corey—well, more precisely, Corey’s parents. He lives in the pool house out back. They left for a family vacation this morning, and the dog sitter can’t be here till tomorrow, so I said that we’d come feed the dogs for them tonight,” Max climbed out of the jeep and walked around to Liz’s side.

“Oh, no problem,” Liz unbuckled her seatbelt and took Max’s hand as he helped her down. Max fished a spare key from his pocket and opened the tall front doors, punching the security code he’d been given to turn off the alarm.

“This place is amazing,” Liz’s eyes swept the room, taking in the high ceilings, large windows and comfortable furnishings.

“Yeah…,” Max viewed the room from Liz’s perspective, even though he had been here many times before. “Corey’s dad is a doctor and his mom is a professor at UNM.”

Max watched Liz’s reaction, looked for the little fantasy he hoped would play out in her expression—the daydream where she saw the two of them living in a house much like this one. Catching her eye again, Liz blushed and looked down, smiling at her secret thoughts. Max chuckled to himself at his correct assumption.

“Come on, let’s go meet Duke and Sadie,” Max opened the double French doors at the far end of the living room, two large Weimaraners bounding to greet them as Max and Liz entered the backyard.

“Whoa, hey guys,” Max petted the large silvery-brown animals, “don’t knock the nice lady down,” he gently scolded the two.

Liz giggled as the dogs snuffed around her, decided she was acceptable, and nudged her hands to be petted.

“Not exactly the world’s best guard dogs are they?” Liz laughed at how quickly the animals had taken to her.

“They know when someone is gentle,” Max kissed Liz’s cheek as he slid his arm around her waist, “and sweet,” he planted another kiss, “and apparently tastes good as well,” Max nodded to the slobbery licks Liz’s hands were receiving.

“Ewww,” Liz laughed as she wiped her hands on her clothes. Max moved behind Liz, wrapping both arms around her waist. Duke raised his head challengingly, peeved at the loss of Liz’s petting and Max’s intrusion.

“Now, Duke, you have no right to be jealous--she’s mine,” Max snuggled Liz playfully as the dog still surveyed him curiously. Liz chuckled at the silly interchange. “You have Sadie, and she’s enough for you.”

At the mention of his mate’s name, Duke cocked his head toward the female, as if considering Max’s admonition.

Max and Liz chuckled at the antics of their canine friends.

“Come on, let’s eat,” Max released Liz and clapped his hands, the dogs galloping full speed toward their bowls. Liz located an outside tap and filled their water dishes while Max scooped a generous amount of food into the remaining bowls.

“There, that should hold them until the dog sitter gets here tomorrow,” Max dusted off his hands after replacing the lid on the barrel containing their kibble.

Liz turned to survey the rest of the backyard after the dogs were well-occupied with dinner.

“Wow, Max, the pool is really beautiful,” Liz commented, a little awe-struck once again. A waterfall cascaded from one end of the grotto-style pool, surrounded by a wall of fitted flat rocks dotted with flowers and foliage.

“So, you wanna’ go for a swim?” Max wrapped his arms around Liz from behind as she looked toward the inviting blue water.

“We can’t do that!” Liz insisted, not wanting to trespass.

“When Corey asked me to feed the dogs, I asked if we could use the pool, and he said yes,” Max explained.

“But I didn’t bring a swimsuit,” a flash of confusion crossed Liz’s face.

“Neither did I,” Max growled playfully into Liz’s ear, his belt buckle hitting the stones seconds later.

“Max, no!” Liz gasped and chuckled, her eyes wide, watching Max.

“I promise—no one can see. It’s totally private.”

Max stripped off his shirt, and Liz’s pulse raced at the sight. He couldn’t help but smirk a little at the flush that came over Liz’s body and how her eyes darkened, even in the late afternoon sun.

Fairly certain he had convinced Liz to come skinny-dipping, Max dropped his boxers to the ground, and smiling mischievously, dove into the water.

Breaking the water, Max came up for a breath, running his hands through his hair to slick it back and away from his face, he swam to the side where Liz still stood with her arms crossed, her hip jutted out and an eyebrow raised. She couldn’t help but smile as Max grinned up at her, water droplets on his hair shining in the afternoon sun.

“Come on…,” Max goaded, “It’ll be something we can tell our grandchildren.”

“You are not telling our grandchildren how you talked me into getting naked in a stranger’s backyard!” Liz bit her lip and blushed, grinning down at Max.

“So I talked you into it, baby girl?” Max questioned in a low, husky voice.

“Maybe…,” Liz teased, stepping out of her flip flops. Turning around, Liz looked behind her to watch Max’s face as she reached around, lowering the zipper on her sundress. Giving a sexy sway of her hips and wrapping her arms over the top of her head, the dress slid down of its own accord, landing in a puddle at her feet, leaving Liz clad only in a pair of silky, white bikini panties.

“Oh God,” Max groaned, tantalized by the sight and Liz’s newfound daring.

Whipping around, Liz smiled as she covered her breasts with her hands, making Max wait to see them was deliciously cruel.

Wearing only her panties, Liz stepped closer to the edge when Max summoned her.

“Come here,” Max curled his finger and motioned Liz forward.

“What do you want?” Liz teased, moving her hands to her hips once again, this time exposing her breasts to Max as she did so.

“I want you,” he said huskily, his voice filled with hunger. Reaching his hands up, water running down his arms, he grasped Liz white panties, the water on his hands turning them transparent. Pulling slowly, he leisurely revealed her creamy mound, the thin line of dark curls, her swollen nether lips. Max enjoyed the view from his perspective as he tugged the panties away, her scent, the fullness of her folds, the nectar gathering at her lips, revealing Liz’s desire regardless of her teasing.

As Liz stepped out of her panties, Max tossed them with her other clothes.

Grinning, Liz asked, “You ready to catch me?”

Max backed away from the side in preparation, “Always.”

Taking a few steps back, Liz took a running leap into the pool, landing squarely in Max’s arms as they briefly sank from the force, breaking the water and laughing as they came up.

Liz toyed with Max as he took them into deeper waters, her arms wrapped round his neck, “So, I’m just wondering, exactly what part of my education is this?” she asked in sultry tones.

“Hmmm,” Max thought as he played along, “Well, there are new positions…,” Max grasped her waist and turned Liz so that her legs straddled his hips, his stiff cock grazing along her parted folds. Liz moaned in appreciation at the contact.

“New places,” he cooed, creating little waves as he moved them in the water and toward the side, his shoulders now resting against the edge.

Liz grinned at Max’s erotic list of objectives, thrusting a little against him in anticipation.

“Not to mention a little exhibitionism thrown in for good measure,” Max teased.

“I thought you said no one could see,” Liz playfully admonished, her eyes going wide at the thought.

“Well, just Duke and Sadie,” Max drawled, his eyes gleaming with mischief.

Hearing their names, the dogs cocked inquisitive heads toward Max and Liz, but then deciding their presence wasn’t required, returned to their dinners.

Max and Liz chuckled at their onlookers.

“And, hey, bonus points for the little striptease,” Max added rocking his hips forward.

“But you didn’t let me finish,” Liz playfully pouted as she ran her fingers through Max’s wet locks.

“I just couldn’t wait,” Max growled, holding Liz tightly to his body as his mouth crashed down on hers.

In a bold move, Liz shifted her hips back, then clutching onto Max’s broad shoulders, impaled herself on Max’s hard shaft, nearly taking his breath away as the coolness of the surrounding water was quickly displaced by Liz’s heat.

“Neither could I,” Liz growled in return, claiming Max’s lips once again as they pulled their bodies more tightly together.

“Oh, God,” Max panted as he broke the kiss to catch his breath, his heading resting against the fullness of her breast as Liz rocked her hips forward, concentric circles of water spreading away from their bodies with each movement.

Moving experimentally in the water, Liz soon found her rhythm, and rode Max as the water lapped round their bodies. Max suckled at her breasts that hovered before him, the saltiness of the water contrasting with the sweetness of her skin, which glowed in the waning sun. Max grasped at Liz’s hips, needing to drive himself deeper, his hunger for her increasing as she controlled their movements.

This was the challenge, the test of will—Liz taking charge, setting the pace--Max seeing the unbridled desire in her expression which only fueled his fire all the more. Fighting the urge to shift their positions and thrust into her body with masterful strokes, Max took pleasure in her confidence, her freedom, and all she had in store for him. She had come to him nervous, uncertain--but with each movement, each experience, Liz was blossoming, eager to explore the pleasures of her body and his own.

Liz arched her back, tightening, changing the angle at which her body closed around his. Her long dark hair dipped into the water as Max held the small of her back, her rosy nipples pointing toward the sun. Max ran his free hand down the length of Liz’s stomach, traveling to her dark furrow. The sudden stimulation at her clit caught Liz’s attention as she pulled her body close to his once again, her long locks casting glowing droplets onto the water as she moved, Max’s fingers securely buried between them as she closed the distance.

Smiling as he won back just a tiny bit of control, Max devilishly inquired, “So, do you like this part of the lesson?” nibbling on Liz’s salty neck with a grin.

“Mmm hmm,” Liz continued to roll her hips, grinding against Max’s fingers and his cock, “I especially like being in charge of the class,” she teased in return, gripping Max’s shoulders tightly, riding him with a steady pace.

“Is there anything I can do for a gold star?” Max teased, looking up impishly as he thrust just a little harder.

“Mmm,” Liz considered as she continued grinding her hips into Max’s, “You could…” Liz drew a watery trail from between her breasts, pausing as she reached her golden nipple, “kiss me here…”

Smiling, Max bent his head, placing a soft kiss on the sensitive tip.

“Like this?” he asked, watching her breasts heave as she panted, her grinding against his cock growing insistent, urgent. His thumb kept a steady stroke at Liz’s clit while he moved them closer to the waterfall at the far end of the pool.

“More,” Liz entreated, somewhere between a request and a demand; the sound of the waterfall growing louder, though Liz hadn’t noticed they’d moved.

“What do you want me to do, Liz?” Max tantalized her breasts with small teasing kisses as he kept a steady pace at her core.

“Suck them,” Liz breathed out desperately. “Suck my nipples—“

With a satisfied grin, Max latched onto one of her rosy buds, suckling hard as his tongue swirled around the puckered flesh.

Liz’s moans began to echo as she opened her eyes to the shadows, a curtain of water between them and the rest of the world. Moving to the other nipple, Max offered it the same treatment, thrusting deeply into her core, his fingers and mouth matching the rhythm of his throbbing shaft.

“Max!” Liz’s cries rang off the rocks surrounding them, her arms clutching his body to hers as her core tightened and pulsed around his cock. Her slick heat urged him deeper, the tightening of her legs around his hips pulled him closer still.

“Liz!” Max called out in a breathless reply, his cock swelling against her heated walls as the thrust into her fervently, any control he may have had vanished when she called his name. Max’s own groans echoed while his seed warmed the spaces of her body. While her breathing could only start to slow, Liz felt Max continue to come, his thick ropes filling her channel as he panted.

Liz buried her face in Max’s dark, wet hair as she rode out her orgasm, a whispered ‘I love you’ said against his skin as she held his shuddering body closely.

Though her words were obscured by the rushing water and his own orgasm that had left him dizzy, Max felt Liz’s lips move against him while she clutched at his hair, and he could only hope his response would be the match for hers.

Slowly thrusting as he held her body close to his, Max placed his lips to the fullness of Liz’s breast once more, a whispered ‘I love you, too’ hidden within the kiss.

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