TAT: In The Beginning (M/L, AU, Mature) (Complete)

BehrObsession · Post by **BehrObsession** » Mon Apr 03, 2006 10:40 am

That was wonderful, right up until the last sentence. We really could have done without those ominous words. Did someone else survive the crash or is there a rescue party on the way? There's gotta be something other-worldly just waiting to happen to our beautiful pair. They deserve to be together happily, so don't let whatever it is last for too long, please!

Roswell 10/2/00 · Post by **Roswell 10/2/00** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:18 pm

Amazing part!!! I love it esp the visuals when it comes to tribal dress!!!

Wow you have a way with words girl thats for sure!!!

I loved how Max is going to be the healer! What a perfect role for him. I just hope that it won't take up too much of his time and that he will have some much needed one on one time with LeeLee!

Come back and post more soon!! I love this story but then again they went with teh best to write us the first Max and Liz story in the time after time series.

Again amazing chapter!! Post more soon!!

Hope all is well. Keep on dreaming.

Love,
Erin aka Roswell 10/2/00
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What happends when two worlds collide?
Would you be willing to risk it all of the sake of Love?
Read my fic Abduction Seduction

Michelle in LA · Post by **Michelle in LA** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:32 pm

MamaDee52 said:
Michelle, you're killin' me! Maybe we should start calling Max "The Loin King"!

ROFLMAO! I hear you! Works for me!

Smac
...I have been pretty depressed by several stories I have been reading lately and I needed something uplifting like this to get me out of my funk! The thought of Max in a loincloth and those dimples did it!

True, how true! We must have been reading some of the same stories! One in particular was recommended to me, and of course the moment she did, it turned bad. (Just like when you recommend a restaurant to someone, and they go on the one night that the good chef is away.)

I spent a long evening diving into this one, only in time to have Liz (on Antar) make love to Max, then ritually slaughter him in his sleep because she had decided it would be best (while he pleads with her through their 'connection' to spare him, and slowly bleeds to death). Euggghh!

I needed some serious images of delight to make that stuff go away! And this provides Eden-like, idyllic images of The Way Things Ought to Be!

frenchkiss70
How are we going to go through this angst without some Breathless dreamer nookie, have mercy on us, Debbi...

True, how true, but—are you insane, woman? Begging Breathless for mercy? Don't you know what that does, what you have unleashed?

Yikes!

You've done it, now.

Now we're in for it!

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Alien614 · Post by **Alien614** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 10:41 pm

Beautiful part!

Breathless · Post by **Breathless** » Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:57 pm

I hate leaving this kind of message, but... no new part this week.

I came back from vacation with a cold - the worst cold I've had in 10 years - and just when I thought I was getting over it, it came roaring back. I've had laryngitis since last Thursday, and now the cold seems to be settling in my chest. Since I've been doped up on cold medication for days, needless to say, the next part isn't ready to post.

Hopefully, this thing will clear up this week and I'll be able to post this coming weekend.

Debbi

Morning Dreamgirl · Post by **Morning Dreamgirl** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 12:02 am

Aw! I'm sorry you're sick darlin'! There seems to be a lot of that going around on the board lately!

Get to feeling better! We'll still be here when you return!

If all else fails - I suggest alcohol!

Thanks for letting us know!

Ashley

BelevnDreamsToo · Post by **BelevnDreamsToo** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 12:17 am

Morning Dreamgirl wrote:If all else fails - I suggest alcohol!

Sound medical advice if ever I heard it!!

Take care, get better and get writing, Sweetie!! J

roswell3053 · Post by **roswell3053** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:52 am

Thanks for the note. I hope that you feel better. Take your time.

Flamehair · Post by **Flamehair** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 4:39 am

Hope you are better soon.

Zanity · Post by **Zanity** » Mon Apr 10, 2006 10:13 am

You have my sympathies, and my prayers. Get better soon.