okay sorry its taking longer to get these out, RL is really hetic right now it seems like i dont have enough hours in the day, I get home from work and have an hour to feed kids and make sure homework is done before we have to leave for the playground where my son has football practice and I need to couch my daughters cheerleading squad and the spirit bowl competition is coming up so were like practing every night to make sure the routines are done right and clean. by the time i get home its like 9 at night and have to make sure kids are bathed and get to bed so I'm like exhausted by the time i'm done with all that and doesnt leave me much time to write right now. so please forgive me....okay enough babble.
one more small thing, I got the idea from the movie 'ten things I hate about you'
and hopefully it hasnt been done before atleast i dont remember seeing it done in another fic.
Part 21
Liz’s POV
Okay so I’ll admit it wasn’t the best move but at least I’ll get to spend more time with Max.
I know what your going to say what the hell was I thinking, but you have to realize at the time I thought it was a good idea.
I mean I was going out of mind, I just wanted to see Max and I couldn’t wait another minute.
I just felt like I would lose it if I didn’t see him right that minute, that my lips would disappear or something if he didn’t kiss me in that instant.
So I did it, I Liz Parker sweet, innocent, perfect, all American good girl flashed a teacher.
I know your shocked huh, didn’t think I had it in me to do something like that, don’t worry I shocked myself too. The things you do for love.
Max was in dentition serving his sentence for his show he put on, let me just add that it was the most romantic, the most beautiful thing anyone has ever done for me, how could I not believe him after that.
He was really in love with, head over heels, fireworks on the fourth of July in love with me how could any girl resist that.
Afterwards we did talk and decide to give us a try, I’m still a little ticked at him for telling me the only reason he flirted with Tess was to try and make me jealous.
AS IF! I could never be jealous of her but it did make me not hate her so much and I’ll feel even better once I get her and Kyle together.
But back to my little flasher incident, here’s a small recap incase you forgot. Max was in dentition and I was slowly becoming a mental patient not seeing him.
So I decided I was going to sneak him out of detention, I mean Mr. Miller wouldn’t even miss him, the man sleeps most of the time away.
I meant the guy just makes you sign in then conveniently hides behind a book, everyone knows he’s napping behind there.
I came up with the perfect plan, I strode thru the door with a purpose, a mission and I wasn’t going to fail, and when sixteen heads popped up to stare at me, I knew I was going to be the talk of the school, I mean come on lets face it teenagers are nosy and gossipy.
‘What can I do for you Miss Parker’ he asks me, I quickly glance at Max and see him staring at me in confusion but with a smile too.
‘I just wanted to get your…uh…your opinion for my act at the talent show sir’ I wasn’t really going to be in it but I needed a cover.
‘Well Miss Parker the tryouts are tonight I’ll see what you have then…as you can see I am in the middle of something’.
Oh shut up you big lug, this is more important than your nap ‘I know sir but I really really want to show it to you now…I mean I may get nervous tonight sir and when do that I tend to get sick, so I just wanted to see if it was good enough now that I have the courage’.
He sighs ‘okay show me’ leaning back on his chair.
‘Well sir I need to you to…uh…just come stand right here’ I point to in front of me.
He shakes his head and gets up, I quickly look at Max and see he has his eyebrow rose wondering what I’m doing; I quickly motion my head towards the door.
He looks at the door then back to me, motioning my head again he catches on and smiles big giving me a nod.
Making sure Mr. Miller’s back is to the class I watch out of the corner of my eye as Max quietly sneaks out ‘All right Miss Parker what do you want to show me’ he says folding his arms over his chest.
“Well I thought for my talent I could be a…a flasher’ and just as quickly as the words leave my mouth I yank my shirt and bra up baring my breasts to him.
I hear the classroom erupt into loud claps and whistles as I roll my eyes.
I put my shirt back down quickly and see Mr. Miller standing there with a horrified look on his face and his mouth wide open in disbelief.
I take that as my cue ‘well as I can see its not going to work, so I’ll just’ I point to the door ‘okay bye’ I yell as I run out of the classroom.
I don’t stop until I’m flinging myself into Max’s arm by the exit door, he catches me instantly ‘what’ he starts but I stop him by plunging my lips onto his, he tightens his hold on me and eagerly accepts my greedy mouth.
Only when the fog clears and I realized we need to get out of here before we get caught do I break away ‘God I needed that’ I sigh breathlessly.
‘Not that I’m complaining but what was that for’ he asks me as we walk out of the doors, I take his hand ‘I was just thinking how much I wanted to kiss you before I died’.
‘Before you die huh’ he smirks as we get to his jeep, he leans my back against the side and stands in front of me fitting his body closely to mine.
‘Well you know’ I say teasingly as I start to nuzzle his nose with mine, I wrap my arms around his neck ‘I think I like that idea of wanting to kiss me, but no dying’.
‘But that’s what I have an alien boyfriend for you could just bring me back’.
He smiles ‘it wont get to that I’ll just have to make sure I leave you well satisfied each time I leave you’.
“Oh I think we can arrange that, and let me add I like that plan of yours ‘I say before taking him in another mind blowing kiss.
After a few minutes he pulls back and helps me into the jeep ‘by the way what exactly did you do, I heard all the whistling and clapping’.
‘Oh’ I say now blushing and lowering my head ‘well I sorta, kinda of flashed Mr. Miller’.
‘LIZZZ’ he says surprised and I can’t help but blush harder.
I look up ready to take his bitching but instead I find him staring at me intently and his eyes are dark. He leans in a little closer to me ‘can I get a private replay later’ he asks me huskily.
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here you go sorry its short but wanted to get something out...those waiting on an update of PMAP Its going to be longer, I'm sorry I dont see me getting anything out until after NOV 7th when my daughters cheerleading competition is over, Its such an intense story to write and I just dont have the time to sit down and really work on it with practices everynight.
Part 22 Max’s POV
‘TAKE THAT!” I yell as I jump and slam the controller down throwing my hands up in victory.
I look down to see the others looking at me like I just lost my head.
‘You do know you’re getting excited over beating Mario…a game that a five year old could beat’ Kyle says smirking.
‘Whatever’ I say as I sit back down ‘ your just jealous my time was still faster than yours…so go ahead and say it I’m the man, I’m the king’.
‘King of shit maybe’ Kyle says tossing his controller down.
‘Awe leave him alone he’s just frustrated’ Alex speaks up.
I narrow my eyes at him.
‘Sexually frustrated you mean’ Michael coughs behind his hand.
‘Shut up’ I growl at him.
‘What’s the matter Liz won’t do the tango with you’ Kyle says.
‘Leave me alone’.
‘Would you stop growling Max your not an animal…It’s not our fault if your woman wont give in’ Alex grinning.
Michael breaks out laughing ‘she’ll flash the school but won’t give you a peek…man you should have just stayed in detention’.
“Holy Shit that was true’ Kyle says choking on his drink ‘ I thought it was just a rumor’ he snorts ‘damm didn’t think Parker had it in her…man I wish I –
‘Don’t even finish that’ I snap.
Kyle puts his hands up ‘chill out dude it was only a joke, the only assets I want to see are the ones belonging to a blue eyed bombshell’.
I flop back down and throw my arms over my eyes ‘she says she scared’.
Michael raises his eyebrow ‘scared’.
‘Yes because of you know’ I say pointing up towards the sky.
‘Is she whacked…what does she think you’re going to shed a skin and go all species on her’
I can’t help but crack a smile at Michaels analogy, honestly I don’t know what she’s scared of, other than the fact that we just started this thing and shouldn’t rush into it, but at the same time its not like we don’t know each other, we’ve know each other most of our lives, I really cant think of anything else that would be holding her back.
‘Maybe Maria can let her know how it is’.
Michael spits out his chips ‘Uh…NO...I do not wish my sex life to be an open biliogy lesson’
‘Oh come on you know that’s exactly what they are talking about right now, why else would they pull a girl’s only night on a Friday night’ Kyle says.
He picks his fingernails for a minute then looks up ‘by the way how is it really…you know enlighten with your wise knowledge for us mere folks who haven’t experience the alien bliss yet’.
‘It’s perfectly normal’ Alex says without a second thought.
Well that’s good to know, at least….wait a minute ‘YOU DEFLOWERED MY SISTER’ I yell standing up.
Alex looks up at me with guilty wide eyes gulping ‘did I say that out loud’.
‘Yes you did’
“Oh well you know it’s...and…you…oh wow would you look at that my bladders kicking in have to go’ and he beelines for the bathroom.
‘Oh God I’m forever scared’ I so didn’t need to know that.
“Well you wanted to know if it was normal’ Kyle says laughing.
‘No you did and Oh God that’s just so gross…I didn’t need that knowledge about my sister’.
‘Max relax why are so freaked out, you want to do the thing to Liz’ Michael reminds me.
‘But…but that’s different, were talking about my sister, oh god my poor innocent sister –
‘- not so innocent anymore’ (yelp) ‘Awe Shit Max that hurt like hell’ Kyle says rubbing his ass check ‘damm that better not leave a mark’.
‘IS THE ALIEN TAMMED YET’ I hear a nervous voice yell from the back of the house, I crack a smile and sit back down.
‘Yea he’s cool…aren’t you Max’ Michael says giving me a look, I roll my eyes ‘your safe Alex’ I yell out.
We watch as he slinks back in keeping his back to the wall as he slowly walks, he watches to make sure I’m not going to zap him.
‘I’m sorry Max not exactly how I wanted you to know….but don’t worry I think Isabel will make me pay when she finds out’ he says.
‘Its okay Alex…just caught me off guard, It was something I would have rather not known about my sister’ I shudder.
The room goes silent and we all sit there staring at the TV which is still playing that annoying theme from Mario.
I raise my hand and sent a blast to the TV shutting it up, Kyle looks at us “this blows lets go crash the girls only night’.
We all look at each other and break out into smiles as we jump up and grab our jackets.
Part 22 Max’s POV
‘TAKE THAT!” I yell as I jump and slam the controller down throwing my hands up in victory.
I look down to see the others looking at me like I just lost my head.
‘You do know you’re getting excited over beating Mario…a game that a five year old could beat’ Kyle says smirking.
‘Whatever’ I say as I sit back down ‘ your just jealous my time was still faster than yours…so go ahead and say it I’m the man, I’m the king’.
‘King of shit maybe’ Kyle says tossing his controller down.
‘Awe leave him alone he’s just frustrated’ Alex speaks up.
I narrow my eyes at him.
‘Sexually frustrated you mean’ Michael coughs behind his hand.
‘Shut up’ I growl at him.
‘What’s the matter Liz won’t do the tango with you’ Kyle says.
‘Leave me alone’.
‘Would you stop growling Max your not an animal…It’s not our fault if your woman wont give in’ Alex grinning.
Michael breaks out laughing ‘she’ll flash the school but won’t give you a peek…man you should have just stayed in detention’.
“Holy Shit that was true’ Kyle says choking on his drink ‘ I thought it was just a rumor’ he snorts ‘damm didn’t think Parker had it in her…man I wish I –
‘Don’t even finish that’ I snap.
Kyle puts his hands up ‘chill out dude it was only a joke, the only assets I want to see are the ones belonging to a blue eyed bombshell’.
I flop back down and throw my arms over my eyes ‘she says she scared’.
Michael raises his eyebrow ‘scared’.
‘Yes because of you know’ I say pointing up towards the sky.
‘Is she whacked…what does she think you’re going to shed a skin and go all species on her’
I can’t help but crack a smile at Michaels analogy, honestly I don’t know what she’s scared of, other than the fact that we just started this thing and shouldn’t rush into it, but at the same time its not like we don’t know each other, we’ve know each other most of our lives, I really cant think of anything else that would be holding her back.
‘Maybe Maria can let her know how it is’.
Michael spits out his chips ‘Uh…NO...I do not wish my sex life to be an open biliogy lesson’
‘Oh come on you know that’s exactly what they are talking about right now, why else would they pull a girl’s only night on a Friday night’ Kyle says.
He picks his fingernails for a minute then looks up ‘by the way how is it really…you know enlighten with your wise knowledge for us mere folks who haven’t experience the alien bliss yet’.
‘It’s perfectly normal’ Alex says without a second thought.
Well that’s good to know, at least….wait a minute ‘YOU DEFLOWERED MY SISTER’ I yell standing up.
Alex looks up at me with guilty wide eyes gulping ‘did I say that out loud’.
‘Yes you did’
“Oh well you know it’s...and…you…oh wow would you look at that my bladders kicking in have to go’ and he beelines for the bathroom.
‘Oh God I’m forever scared’ I so didn’t need to know that.
“Well you wanted to know if it was normal’ Kyle says laughing.
‘No you did and Oh God that’s just so gross…I didn’t need that knowledge about my sister’.
‘Max relax why are so freaked out, you want to do the thing to Liz’ Michael reminds me.
‘But…but that’s different, were talking about my sister, oh god my poor innocent sister –
‘- not so innocent anymore’ (yelp) ‘Awe Shit Max that hurt like hell’ Kyle says rubbing his ass check ‘damm that better not leave a mark’.
‘IS THE ALIEN TAMMED YET’ I hear a nervous voice yell from the back of the house, I crack a smile and sit back down.
‘Yea he’s cool…aren’t you Max’ Michael says giving me a look, I roll my eyes ‘your safe Alex’ I yell out.
We watch as he slinks back in keeping his back to the wall as he slowly walks, he watches to make sure I’m not going to zap him.
‘I’m sorry Max not exactly how I wanted you to know….but don’t worry I think Isabel will make me pay when she finds out’ he says.
‘Its okay Alex…just caught me off guard, It was something I would have rather not known about my sister’ I shudder.
The room goes silent and we all sit there staring at the TV which is still playing that annoying theme from Mario.
I raise my hand and sent a blast to the TV shutting it up, Kyle looks at us “this blows lets go crash the girls only night’.
We all look at each other and break out into smiles as we jump up and grab our jackets.
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Part 23 Liz’s Pov
‘Oh my God turn that off’ I shout as I see what is playing on the TV coming out of the bathroom.
‘No way just look at him go’ Maria shouts.
‘Yeah baby stick it to her’ Tess shouts.
‘Oh my God I don’t even think Alex is that big’ Isabel says.
‘ISABEL’ we all shout shocked looking at her.
She rolls her eyes ‘what’
Maria takes the remote and hits pause ‘you had sex with Alex’ I ask.
‘Yes now leave it alone’ she says.
‘No way girlfriend you spill the beans and expect us to be quiet, we want details…nice juicy details’ Maria says.
‘Maria you are so morbid’
She pushes my shoulder ‘oh come on just because you want to play Virgin Mary doesn’t mean the rest of us are going to join your nunnery’ she says.
Tess breaks out laughing as I glare at her ‘I’m not playing nothing’ I quickly defend myself “I’m just waiting for the right time; besides you already did the deed with Michael you don’t need info’ I say turning back towards Maria.
‘And your point’
‘I swear I think your all conspiring against me, why is it so important for me to have sex, and if you didn’t notice I’m not the only virgin in the room’.
‘Not for long’ Tess says, I roll my eyes and look at her ‘I plan on giving Kyle a nice little ride on the alien express soon’.
‘Oh God’ I groan, it’s not that I don’t want to have sex, believe me I’m more than ready, but Max and I just started out past the friendship stage. I don’t want our relationship to be all about sex, I have a feeling that once I cross that line with him I’ll turn into a nympho, I mean who wouldn’t when you have a hunk for a boyfriend.
‘Can we please just change the subject, my sex life is my business and when I decide to take that step it will be between Max and I and not you nosy people’.
‘Okay Prude’ Maria says yanking me down next to her on the edge of the bed ‘Now lets get back to Happy Harry and the porno express’ she says wiggling her eyebrows.
I roll my eyes ‘I can’t believe your watching this’.
‘Shush who knows maybe you will learn something you can use on Max’.
‘Okay enough talk about my brother, you’re ruining the movie’.
‘It’s not a movie…it’s a porno’.
‘Hush or I’ll zap your lips together, I want to able to watch this and not get visuals of my brother’.
‘You know-
‘SHUSH!’
I glare and turn my head to the TV, cocking my head on side Holy Shit how the hell did he get her legs to go like that.
An hour later were sitting around bullshitting and letting Isabel and Tess use their voodoo on our hair and makeup. I find it funny how I’m getting along with Tess now, before it was so easy to hate her because I thought she was with Max but it turns out underneath that sometimes whinny voice is a pretty cool person.
‘You know I wonder something’ she says smiling at me, I raise my eyebrow ‘what’.
She smiles bigger and reaches up to my hair ‘just wonder what you would look like with-‘a loud banging breaks up our commotion as we all stare at each other.
Maria gets up stomping to the living room ‘that better not be who I think it is or we all are going to be making the rabbit our new best friends because our boyfriends will be out of commission’.
The rest of us start cracking up laughing as we follow her, watching as she yanks the door open.
‘What are you doing here’ she screams ‘Girls only…G.I.R.L.S…O.N.L.Y’ she spells out real slow ‘you know humans who don’t have penis’s’.
‘Oh shut up Blondie, I was lonely without you’ Michael says causing her to melt into a puddle of glue as he leans forward and plants his lips on hers before she can utter another sound.
He pulls back and his eyes go wide ‘what the- but Max cuts him off pushing him out of the way and stalking towards me ‘LIZ WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO YOUR HAIR’.
Oh shit someone’s in trouble.
‘Oh my God turn that off’ I shout as I see what is playing on the TV coming out of the bathroom.
‘No way just look at him go’ Maria shouts.
‘Yeah baby stick it to her’ Tess shouts.
‘Oh my God I don’t even think Alex is that big’ Isabel says.
‘ISABEL’ we all shout shocked looking at her.
She rolls her eyes ‘what’
Maria takes the remote and hits pause ‘you had sex with Alex’ I ask.
‘Yes now leave it alone’ she says.
‘No way girlfriend you spill the beans and expect us to be quiet, we want details…nice juicy details’ Maria says.
‘Maria you are so morbid’
She pushes my shoulder ‘oh come on just because you want to play Virgin Mary doesn’t mean the rest of us are going to join your nunnery’ she says.
Tess breaks out laughing as I glare at her ‘I’m not playing nothing’ I quickly defend myself “I’m just waiting for the right time; besides you already did the deed with Michael you don’t need info’ I say turning back towards Maria.
‘And your point’
‘I swear I think your all conspiring against me, why is it so important for me to have sex, and if you didn’t notice I’m not the only virgin in the room’.
‘Not for long’ Tess says, I roll my eyes and look at her ‘I plan on giving Kyle a nice little ride on the alien express soon’.
‘Oh God’ I groan, it’s not that I don’t want to have sex, believe me I’m more than ready, but Max and I just started out past the friendship stage. I don’t want our relationship to be all about sex, I have a feeling that once I cross that line with him I’ll turn into a nympho, I mean who wouldn’t when you have a hunk for a boyfriend.
‘Can we please just change the subject, my sex life is my business and when I decide to take that step it will be between Max and I and not you nosy people’.
‘Okay Prude’ Maria says yanking me down next to her on the edge of the bed ‘Now lets get back to Happy Harry and the porno express’ she says wiggling her eyebrows.
I roll my eyes ‘I can’t believe your watching this’.
‘Shush who knows maybe you will learn something you can use on Max’.
‘Okay enough talk about my brother, you’re ruining the movie’.
‘It’s not a movie…it’s a porno’.
‘Hush or I’ll zap your lips together, I want to able to watch this and not get visuals of my brother’.
‘You know-
‘SHUSH!’
I glare and turn my head to the TV, cocking my head on side Holy Shit how the hell did he get her legs to go like that.
An hour later were sitting around bullshitting and letting Isabel and Tess use their voodoo on our hair and makeup. I find it funny how I’m getting along with Tess now, before it was so easy to hate her because I thought she was with Max but it turns out underneath that sometimes whinny voice is a pretty cool person.
‘You know I wonder something’ she says smiling at me, I raise my eyebrow ‘what’.
She smiles bigger and reaches up to my hair ‘just wonder what you would look like with-‘a loud banging breaks up our commotion as we all stare at each other.
Maria gets up stomping to the living room ‘that better not be who I think it is or we all are going to be making the rabbit our new best friends because our boyfriends will be out of commission’.
The rest of us start cracking up laughing as we follow her, watching as she yanks the door open.
‘What are you doing here’ she screams ‘Girls only…G.I.R.L.S…O.N.L.Y’ she spells out real slow ‘you know humans who don’t have penis’s’.
‘Oh shut up Blondie, I was lonely without you’ Michael says causing her to melt into a puddle of glue as he leans forward and plants his lips on hers before she can utter another sound.
He pulls back and his eyes go wide ‘what the- but Max cuts him off pushing him out of the way and stalking towards me ‘LIZ WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO YOUR HAIR’.
Oh shit someone’s in trouble.
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Part 24 Max’s POV
No…no…no…I don’t think so.
They are all staring at me like I’m a crazed man, but I don’t care, glaring at the women who are behind giving me a heart attack. The yearly “Alien Takedown is about to become Alien Smack down’.
My poor beautiful Liz, how could they do this to her, her luscious brown hair how could they make her…make her…BLONDE?
I think I’m going to cry.
‘Max’ I jerk my head around looking at her ‘we were just experimenting that’s all’ she says shrugging her shoulders.
‘Experimenting’ I repeat shaking my head as I land in front of her ‘no…no…no do makeup, fingernails, and clothes but don’t touch my hair’ I whine bringing my hands up ‘my poor beautiful hair’ I choke.
‘Max’ I hear Tess say, I snap my head to hers, grabbing Liz I drag her over there ‘change it back….change it back right now…right now’ I say stomping my feet.
‘Jesus Christ your acting like a child’ Kyle says smirking ‘I think she looks hot’.
I glare at him.
‘Oh alright you big baby, it wasn’t going to say that way…geez we were just having fun’ Tess says rolling her eyes. ‘You know you could have just as easily did it without throwing a hissy fit’ she says as she changes it back to its natural color.
‘So’ I say reaching up and running my fingers thru her dark locks now that my heart rate has returned to normal beating level.
‘Don’t do that again please’ I pout looking at her… Utoh she’s glaring at me.
‘Your hair’ she says.
‘Liz-
‘The last time I checked this was my head -
‘But Liz-
‘Who do you think you are, if I want to change my hair it’s my choice -
‘Baby just –
‘How do you know I didn’t like it blonde, how do you know I may have like it like that, hell I kind of like it short….I just may cut it off’
‘Huh’ I squeak out as the air whooshes out of my lungs.
‘In fact you know what, Isabel…Tess one of you come here I think I’m ready for a change’ she says.
I snap my head toward them ‘either of you take one step in this direction and you’ll both be missing assets that I know Alex and Kyle worship.’
Tess and Isabel look at Alex and Kyle who are looking everywhere else as we argue, Kyle turns to me quick ‘Hey leave us of out of this.’
‘Max Evans!’ Liz screams. ‘How dare you’.
Okay so I know I’ve gone overboard but she doesn’t understand, her hair is my obsession among other things, and it’s at stake here.
‘Baby –
‘Don’t you baby me, I can’t believe you’ she humphs and storms towards the back.
I immediately chase after her ‘Liz’.
‘Go away’ she hollers behind the closed door.
I try the doorknob finding it locked, I’m about to use my powers when I hear ‘if you unlock that door I’ll not only cut my hair I’ll shave it all off and get a tattoo on my head’.
I yank my hand back as if being burned ‘please open the door’ I beg.
‘NO….go away I’m mad at you’.
‘Liz please I’m sorry okay…it’s just….it just caught me off guard, I was in shock’.
She doesn’t say anything I lean my head against the door ‘baby please don’t be mad at…I really am sorry, I just love your hair the way it is, I love how soft it always feels, I love how shiny it always looks and I love how it smells like strawberries and vanilla all the time, I love running my fingers thru it and…and one day I hope to be able to feel it run over my body….my whole body’.
I hear a gasp behind the door and smile, I start tracing patterns on the door ‘did I ever tell you that when I used to sleep at your house I would wait until you fell asleep and I would just lay there touching your hair running it thru my fingers, and I would always wish that I could have the courage to just wake you up and tell you how I felt about you and then after that I wouldn’t need to make excuses just to touch your hair’.
I stumble forward when she yanks the door open putting my hands out she launches herself at me holding me upright as she buries her head in my chest, I wrap my arms around her as she sniffles ‘okay I wont touch my hair’ she says.
I smile bigger as I pull her chin to look at me ‘thank you’ I say as I lean down and kiss her.
“Awe now wasn’t that just the sappiest thing ever’ Kyle says clapping his hands together ‘now that the queen has made her king happy…anyone care to tell me what you guys are doing with my porn collection’ he says pointing to the TV that still has the porno movie paused.
No…no…no…I don’t think so.
They are all staring at me like I’m a crazed man, but I don’t care, glaring at the women who are behind giving me a heart attack. The yearly “Alien Takedown is about to become Alien Smack down’.
My poor beautiful Liz, how could they do this to her, her luscious brown hair how could they make her…make her…BLONDE?
I think I’m going to cry.
‘Max’ I jerk my head around looking at her ‘we were just experimenting that’s all’ she says shrugging her shoulders.
‘Experimenting’ I repeat shaking my head as I land in front of her ‘no…no…no do makeup, fingernails, and clothes but don’t touch my hair’ I whine bringing my hands up ‘my poor beautiful hair’ I choke.
‘Max’ I hear Tess say, I snap my head to hers, grabbing Liz I drag her over there ‘change it back….change it back right now…right now’ I say stomping my feet.
‘Jesus Christ your acting like a child’ Kyle says smirking ‘I think she looks hot’.
I glare at him.
‘Oh alright you big baby, it wasn’t going to say that way…geez we were just having fun’ Tess says rolling her eyes. ‘You know you could have just as easily did it without throwing a hissy fit’ she says as she changes it back to its natural color.
‘So’ I say reaching up and running my fingers thru her dark locks now that my heart rate has returned to normal beating level.
‘Don’t do that again please’ I pout looking at her… Utoh she’s glaring at me.
‘Your hair’ she says.
‘Liz-
‘The last time I checked this was my head -
‘But Liz-
‘Who do you think you are, if I want to change my hair it’s my choice -
‘Baby just –
‘How do you know I didn’t like it blonde, how do you know I may have like it like that, hell I kind of like it short….I just may cut it off’
‘Huh’ I squeak out as the air whooshes out of my lungs.
‘In fact you know what, Isabel…Tess one of you come here I think I’m ready for a change’ she says.
I snap my head toward them ‘either of you take one step in this direction and you’ll both be missing assets that I know Alex and Kyle worship.’
Tess and Isabel look at Alex and Kyle who are looking everywhere else as we argue, Kyle turns to me quick ‘Hey leave us of out of this.’
‘Max Evans!’ Liz screams. ‘How dare you’.
Okay so I know I’ve gone overboard but she doesn’t understand, her hair is my obsession among other things, and it’s at stake here.
‘Baby –
‘Don’t you baby me, I can’t believe you’ she humphs and storms towards the back.
I immediately chase after her ‘Liz’.
‘Go away’ she hollers behind the closed door.
I try the doorknob finding it locked, I’m about to use my powers when I hear ‘if you unlock that door I’ll not only cut my hair I’ll shave it all off and get a tattoo on my head’.
I yank my hand back as if being burned ‘please open the door’ I beg.
‘NO….go away I’m mad at you’.
‘Liz please I’m sorry okay…it’s just….it just caught me off guard, I was in shock’.
She doesn’t say anything I lean my head against the door ‘baby please don’t be mad at…I really am sorry, I just love your hair the way it is, I love how soft it always feels, I love how shiny it always looks and I love how it smells like strawberries and vanilla all the time, I love running my fingers thru it and…and one day I hope to be able to feel it run over my body….my whole body’.
I hear a gasp behind the door and smile, I start tracing patterns on the door ‘did I ever tell you that when I used to sleep at your house I would wait until you fell asleep and I would just lay there touching your hair running it thru my fingers, and I would always wish that I could have the courage to just wake you up and tell you how I felt about you and then after that I wouldn’t need to make excuses just to touch your hair’.
I stumble forward when she yanks the door open putting my hands out she launches herself at me holding me upright as she buries her head in my chest, I wrap my arms around her as she sniffles ‘okay I wont touch my hair’ she says.
I smile bigger as I pull her chin to look at me ‘thank you’ I say as I lean down and kiss her.
“Awe now wasn’t that just the sappiest thing ever’ Kyle says clapping his hands together ‘now that the queen has made her king happy…anyone care to tell me what you guys are doing with my porn collection’ he says pointing to the TV that still has the porno movie paused.
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Chapter 25
Liz’s Pov
‘Maria Ann Deluca’ we all jump up at the sound of Amy’s voice. She stands there with her hands on her hips tapping her foot looking at all of us.
‘Mom’ she says getting up and I bit my lip from smiling as I spy Michael trying to sneak away. I don’t know how we all managed to fall asleep, one minute we were watching a movie and the next we are finding out where Maria gets her hurricane name from.
‘Oh no you don’t’ she yells grabbing Michael by his collar ‘care to explain yourself young lady I gave you permission for a girls sleepover not an orgy’.
“Mom please your way overreacting’ she says rolling her eyes.
‘Don’t tell me what I’m doing, I was a teenager once I know how you kids think these days, think once the parents are gone you can romp all over the place…well let me tell you something there will be no romping going on under my roof’.
“Mom’ Maria says.
“Do I make myself clear’.
‘God I can’t-
‘Am I clear’ she says again.
‘Yes ma’am’ we all agree quickly.
“Good now I want all you boys to line up right here’
I glance at Max and have to hold in my laughter as his expression, he looks like he is getting ready to face a firing squad. He’s too cute to pass up and I lean in to kiss him “MAX’ Amy yells causing him to jump and scurry over the others.
I give him an apologetic look and sit down on the couch ‘Mom what are you doing’ Maria exclaims ‘Sit’ she points to the couch ‘I will deal with you in a minute’ ‘Mom-‘ ‘SIT’.
Maria mumbles under her breath as she sits down ‘God please just kill me now’.
We all watch as Amy begins to pace back and forth in front of the boys ‘Now I want you boys to promise me that you will treat these girls with respect…that you will not refer to them as piece of meat’.
They go to answer and she holds up her hand ‘not finished…now do you promise to be understanding ant cherish them the way they are meant to be.
You will not pressure them into sex or any form of sexual activity until you are well over twenty and married’.
I cover my mouth trying to hide my smile, If she knew half the people in this room already had sex I think she would keel over especially with Maria being one of them.
I glance at Isabel and see her trying to hide behind Tess, Amy stops pacing and folds her arms over her chest ‘well’ she says.
‘Yes Ma’am’ all four of them say at once.
‘Good now why are you here’ she asks.
They all at once point at Kyle ‘It was his idea’ they all say.
‘HEY’ Kyle says ‘man why do I always get the blame, everyone is always picking on me’ he mumbles shaking his head.
Amy pats his arm ‘awe honey its only because it’s usually true’, his eyes widened and I can’t help it the laugh escapes me.
Amy whips her head to mine ‘Sorry’ I squeak out, ‘this is not funny young lady…sex is a very serious things’.
‘Jesus mom were not having sex, we were watching a movie and fell asleep that is all…there is no hanky panky, no groping or body fluids being passed around’.
‘Uh-huh and which movie were you watching’ she asks with a raised eyebrow.
My eyes widen suddenly looking for the porn tape we were watching before the boys got here, I see Tess out of the corner of my eye quietly hiding it behind her back and I let out my breath.
‘Steppford Wives and it was boring we can’t help it if we fell asleep…look its still in the player’ she says pointing.
We watch as she walks over and looks at the TV to check it out ‘humph’ is all she says and walks back over to the boys.
‘One more thing then you can go…now I may be old but I’m not stupid, I want to know if you boys have protection’.
Isabel starts choking on her drink and I quickly pat her back, I look over and see all four boys turning beat red. I’m curious to see if Max does even though we haven’t crossed that line yet. I wonder if wants to sometime soon.
They all nod their head obediently and my mouth drops open when Amy says ‘Not good enough, I want to see the proof with my own eyes’.
They all look at each other, then glance to us…we see them all gulp.
‘Come on I know you probably carrying them in your wallets…let’s see them’.
We watch as they all slowly pull out their wallets pulling out the wrapped condoms.
‘Good boys…you can go now’ she says, they quickly shout bye and run for the door.
‘Michael’ Amy calls out and he stops and looks back ‘Just a little advice, you may want to buy some new ones, I think you got the wrong size yours had large on it, those may be too big’.
“MOMMMM’ Maria screeches.
Liz’s Pov
‘Maria Ann Deluca’ we all jump up at the sound of Amy’s voice. She stands there with her hands on her hips tapping her foot looking at all of us.
‘Mom’ she says getting up and I bit my lip from smiling as I spy Michael trying to sneak away. I don’t know how we all managed to fall asleep, one minute we were watching a movie and the next we are finding out where Maria gets her hurricane name from.
‘Oh no you don’t’ she yells grabbing Michael by his collar ‘care to explain yourself young lady I gave you permission for a girls sleepover not an orgy’.
“Mom please your way overreacting’ she says rolling her eyes.
‘Don’t tell me what I’m doing, I was a teenager once I know how you kids think these days, think once the parents are gone you can romp all over the place…well let me tell you something there will be no romping going on under my roof’.
“Mom’ Maria says.
“Do I make myself clear’.
‘God I can’t-
‘Am I clear’ she says again.
‘Yes ma’am’ we all agree quickly.
“Good now I want all you boys to line up right here’
I glance at Max and have to hold in my laughter as his expression, he looks like he is getting ready to face a firing squad. He’s too cute to pass up and I lean in to kiss him “MAX’ Amy yells causing him to jump and scurry over the others.
I give him an apologetic look and sit down on the couch ‘Mom what are you doing’ Maria exclaims ‘Sit’ she points to the couch ‘I will deal with you in a minute’ ‘Mom-‘ ‘SIT’.
Maria mumbles under her breath as she sits down ‘God please just kill me now’.
We all watch as Amy begins to pace back and forth in front of the boys ‘Now I want you boys to promise me that you will treat these girls with respect…that you will not refer to them as piece of meat’.
They go to answer and she holds up her hand ‘not finished…now do you promise to be understanding ant cherish them the way they are meant to be.
You will not pressure them into sex or any form of sexual activity until you are well over twenty and married’.
I cover my mouth trying to hide my smile, If she knew half the people in this room already had sex I think she would keel over especially with Maria being one of them.
I glance at Isabel and see her trying to hide behind Tess, Amy stops pacing and folds her arms over her chest ‘well’ she says.
‘Yes Ma’am’ all four of them say at once.
‘Good now why are you here’ she asks.
They all at once point at Kyle ‘It was his idea’ they all say.
‘HEY’ Kyle says ‘man why do I always get the blame, everyone is always picking on me’ he mumbles shaking his head.
Amy pats his arm ‘awe honey its only because it’s usually true’, his eyes widened and I can’t help it the laugh escapes me.
Amy whips her head to mine ‘Sorry’ I squeak out, ‘this is not funny young lady…sex is a very serious things’.
‘Jesus mom were not having sex, we were watching a movie and fell asleep that is all…there is no hanky panky, no groping or body fluids being passed around’.
‘Uh-huh and which movie were you watching’ she asks with a raised eyebrow.
My eyes widen suddenly looking for the porn tape we were watching before the boys got here, I see Tess out of the corner of my eye quietly hiding it behind her back and I let out my breath.
‘Steppford Wives and it was boring we can’t help it if we fell asleep…look its still in the player’ she says pointing.
We watch as she walks over and looks at the TV to check it out ‘humph’ is all she says and walks back over to the boys.
‘One more thing then you can go…now I may be old but I’m not stupid, I want to know if you boys have protection’.
Isabel starts choking on her drink and I quickly pat her back, I look over and see all four boys turning beat red. I’m curious to see if Max does even though we haven’t crossed that line yet. I wonder if wants to sometime soon.
They all nod their head obediently and my mouth drops open when Amy says ‘Not good enough, I want to see the proof with my own eyes’.
They all look at each other, then glance to us…we see them all gulp.
‘Come on I know you probably carrying them in your wallets…let’s see them’.
We watch as they all slowly pull out their wallets pulling out the wrapped condoms.
‘Good boys…you can go now’ she says, they quickly shout bye and run for the door.
‘Michael’ Amy calls out and he stops and looks back ‘Just a little advice, you may want to buy some new ones, I think you got the wrong size yours had large on it, those may be too big’.
“MOMMMM’ Maria screeches.
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I know everyone wants the nookie between Max and Liz...its getting there, the truth is I hate writing it because I suck at it and I have a hard time writing those scenes, I keep telling myself i shouldn't have one espically with the many detailed nookie scenes I wrote in "A Part Of You'. So its coming just taking me a while to get up the courage to sit there and write it. It's easier to write the flirty playing around than the actual act 
Chapter 26
Max’s POV
I conveniently try and hide my snickers behind the menu, last night is still fresh in my mind. I have to say facing Amy Deluca topped the embarrassing conversation I had with my father about sex.
I would rather face an army of aliens than have to live through that again, but all in all as scared as I was hearing Amy tell Michael his condoms were too big was worth it all.
‘Shut up’ he growls across the booth from me as we sit here waiting for our girls to show.
‘Sorry’ I say even as the laugh bubbles out.
‘I mean it Maxwell…it wasn’t funny’.
‘If you say so’
‘How would you like it if that would have been Liz’s mom or better yet her dad telling you that’.
That does it, the smirk is immediately gone as a nightmare replaces it, the idea of Jeff Parker talking to me about condoms scares the hell out of me, I would rather eat glass.
I look up and see Liz stepping through the back wearing her uniform; she smiles before making her way over.
‘Morning’ she smiles and leans down kissing me on the lips.
‘Morning’ I grin.
Maria flops down next to Michael ‘God I’m so sorry about last night, I can’t believe my mother’.
Michael grunts and she turns her head towards him ‘don’t worry baby, I think your condoms are just the right size’.
‘Maria I so did not need to know that’ Liz blushes.
Maria just grins big ‘hey babe I can’t help it if my man has a big d-
‘MARIA’ she yells.
“Okay I think that’s enough talk about my lower reigns…besides wouldn’t want old Max here to get jealous’.
‘You wish’ I can’t believe he said that, me jealous of him…as if.
‘Oh come on you know I’m well more packaged in certain areas than you’ he goads.
‘Keep telling yourself that…I’m a king remember I’ll always be bigger and better’.
‘You think…how about we just whip them out right here and now and see who is bigger’.
‘OH MY GOD’ Liz shrieks and gets up ‘I’m going to put your orders in…the usual right’.
Maria gets up laughing ‘that’s my Lizzie always a prude…. Please try and keep your assets in your pants please this is a family place after all’.
My eyes roam over to my obsession and I immediately groan as she bends over to pick something up causing her uniform to ride up.
I really think those things should be illegal, I mean what was Mr. Parker thinking…scratch that I know exactly what Jeff Parker was thinking when he came up with those uniforms.
I think he knew he would have a ton of teenage boys in here ordering food just so they could sit there and have something to think about at night when they were jacking off.
I know what your thinking, you think I’m morbid but come on you cant tell me that if you were a guy you wouldn’t have a million of fantasies about those little short uniforms that purposely tease and taunt you.
Take it from me eating with a hard on is a real bitch, but its worth every pain staking bit because when I’m alone at night in my bed thinking about Liz in that uniform, sometimes it makes me cum faster than blinking an eye.
I know I’m going to have to pray to every God, Alien and high beings alike just to be able to last longer than two seconds if we ever get that far.
“Any plans for tonight’ Liz asks me breaking me out of daydream as she puts my food down.
I look up at her and smile ‘was hoping we could do something’
‘I like that idea’ she smiles and leans down closer to my ear, I close my eyes as I feel her warm breath on me ‘could it be just the two of us’ she asks.
I gulp and eagerly nod my head incoherent to form any type of speech right now, she laughs and stands back up stealing one of my fries ‘until then’ she says and bends down quickly placing her lips on mine.
I quickly open my mouth letting her tongue massage mine as I reach up and cup the back of her hair to keep her there, I whimper when I feel the tightening in my jeans and I shift in my seat.
She pulls away smiling seductively and pops the fry in her mouth ‘just needed something to get me through the day’ she winks and saunters off.
My eyes immediately zero in on her ass, biting my lip I groan I think I’m going to have to go home and take a nap alone in my room.
Chapter 26
Max’s POV
I conveniently try and hide my snickers behind the menu, last night is still fresh in my mind. I have to say facing Amy Deluca topped the embarrassing conversation I had with my father about sex.
I would rather face an army of aliens than have to live through that again, but all in all as scared as I was hearing Amy tell Michael his condoms were too big was worth it all.
‘Shut up’ he growls across the booth from me as we sit here waiting for our girls to show.
‘Sorry’ I say even as the laugh bubbles out.
‘I mean it Maxwell…it wasn’t funny’.
‘If you say so’
‘How would you like it if that would have been Liz’s mom or better yet her dad telling you that’.
That does it, the smirk is immediately gone as a nightmare replaces it, the idea of Jeff Parker talking to me about condoms scares the hell out of me, I would rather eat glass.
I look up and see Liz stepping through the back wearing her uniform; she smiles before making her way over.
‘Morning’ she smiles and leans down kissing me on the lips.
‘Morning’ I grin.
Maria flops down next to Michael ‘God I’m so sorry about last night, I can’t believe my mother’.
Michael grunts and she turns her head towards him ‘don’t worry baby, I think your condoms are just the right size’.
‘Maria I so did not need to know that’ Liz blushes.
Maria just grins big ‘hey babe I can’t help it if my man has a big d-
‘MARIA’ she yells.
“Okay I think that’s enough talk about my lower reigns…besides wouldn’t want old Max here to get jealous’.
‘You wish’ I can’t believe he said that, me jealous of him…as if.
‘Oh come on you know I’m well more packaged in certain areas than you’ he goads.
‘Keep telling yourself that…I’m a king remember I’ll always be bigger and better’.
‘You think…how about we just whip them out right here and now and see who is bigger’.
‘OH MY GOD’ Liz shrieks and gets up ‘I’m going to put your orders in…the usual right’.
Maria gets up laughing ‘that’s my Lizzie always a prude…. Please try and keep your assets in your pants please this is a family place after all’.
My eyes roam over to my obsession and I immediately groan as she bends over to pick something up causing her uniform to ride up.
I really think those things should be illegal, I mean what was Mr. Parker thinking…scratch that I know exactly what Jeff Parker was thinking when he came up with those uniforms.
I think he knew he would have a ton of teenage boys in here ordering food just so they could sit there and have something to think about at night when they were jacking off.
I know what your thinking, you think I’m morbid but come on you cant tell me that if you were a guy you wouldn’t have a million of fantasies about those little short uniforms that purposely tease and taunt you.
Take it from me eating with a hard on is a real bitch, but its worth every pain staking bit because when I’m alone at night in my bed thinking about Liz in that uniform, sometimes it makes me cum faster than blinking an eye.
I know I’m going to have to pray to every God, Alien and high beings alike just to be able to last longer than two seconds if we ever get that far.
“Any plans for tonight’ Liz asks me breaking me out of daydream as she puts my food down.
I look up at her and smile ‘was hoping we could do something’
‘I like that idea’ she smiles and leans down closer to my ear, I close my eyes as I feel her warm breath on me ‘could it be just the two of us’ she asks.
I gulp and eagerly nod my head incoherent to form any type of speech right now, she laughs and stands back up stealing one of my fries ‘until then’ she says and bends down quickly placing her lips on mine.
I quickly open my mouth letting her tongue massage mine as I reach up and cup the back of her hair to keep her there, I whimper when I feel the tightening in my jeans and I shift in my seat.
She pulls away smiling seductively and pops the fry in her mouth ‘just needed something to get me through the day’ she winks and saunters off.
My eyes immediately zero in on her ass, biting my lip I groan I think I’m going to have to go home and take a nap alone in my room.
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Chapter 27
Liz’s POV
Can you say Nervous?
I’ve been alone with Max a hundred of times before, but this is the first time we are going to be alone as a couple going out on an actual date.
It will be so good to get away from the ‘I told you so’ eyes, which everyone has been sporting lately. After the fiftieth time you hear it, you kind of get sick of hearing it.
I stare at myself in the mirror taking deep breaths; I don’t know why I’m so nervous, well scratch that, I’m ready to take it to the next level.
Granted Max doesn’t know it yet so you keep your mouth shut, I want it to be a surprise and I know your just itching to run your mouth, so just hold it in until after tonight okay…okay (I knew you would see it my way).
“Liz, Max is here honey’ my mom shouts at me.
Ok guys its ShowTime.
I make my way downstairs preparing to knock him off his feet but manage to knock myself off my feet instead.
My god he looks hotter, do guys actually get hotter once they become your boyfriends, or we girls just that blind to the hotness level that a guy can get.
Looking at him again I bit my lip from laughing when I see him stand there with this mouth hanging open and my father walks by casually closing his jaw for him on the way.
‘Not to late Lizzie’ he tells me heading upstairs.
‘Yes sir’
I make my way over to Max “Hey’ I lean up and kiss him.
He snaps back to reality ‘Hey…you look beautiful’
‘Thanks you look good too…so where are we headed’.
‘I thought maybe dinner then just see where the night takes us’.
‘Sounds good’ I reply as he leads me towards the jeep.
Twenty minutes later we are sitting in Senor Chows in a cozy little booth towards the back.
‘I can’t believe we actually were able to ditch the friends tonight’ he says.
‘I know I think Maria must have called me like twenty times’.
The waiter comes over and I watch as he smirks at Max, raising my eyebrow at him ‘is something the matter’ I ask.
He shakes his head and looks back, I follow his gaze and see half the staff watching us, okay that’s weird, and he gives a little laugh ‘well the staff was just wondering’.
‘Wondering what’
He blushes and fidgets with this order pad ‘well we just um wondering if you were actually going to eat this time or if we were going to get another performance of being carried out’.
Max starts blushing and I can’t help but laugh ‘were here to eat’ Max says picking up his glass of water. ‘Well in that case what can I get you’ he says smiling.
We both order and Max looks at me ‘it wasn’t that funny’ he tells me when he sees me still chuckling.
I stop smiling and look at him ‘your right it wasn’t…it was actually kind of sexy’ I say huskily.
His eyes widen and I lean in a little closer crooking my finger to draw him closer, he leans in and I whisper ‘ It really turned me on’.
I bit my lip as I hear his sudden intake of breath ‘You know going all caveman gave me a really good view of your tight sexy ass’.
‘OK then’ he exclaims and picks up his water gulping it down, he quirks an eyebrow when he sees me smirking.
‘You better behave or we won’t be having dinner at all’.
‘Is that a promise’
“LIZ’
“Okay…okay I’ll behave’ I laugh as I take in his flustered expression.
I bite my lip again when I hear him mumble going to be the death of me.
We actually make it through dinner nicely and wind out in the desert with the top off watching the stars shine brightly.
‘It’s really breath taking out here’ I say leaning my head back.
‘Yes it is’ I glance out of the corner of my eye and find him not looking at the sky at all.
I blush and turn my head towards him’ I was talking about the sky’.
‘So was I’ he says but his eyes are still trained on me.
I watch as his eyes darken and his gaze drops down to my lips then slowly back to my eyes.
One minute we are staring at each other and the next I’m attacking him.
I whimper and moan and he drags his lips from mouth and latches on to my neck.
‘God Liz’ he whispers out.
I grab him by the ears ‘(hey told you they could come in handy) and attack his mouth again.
I can feel a fire starting deep inside me and I feel like I’m going to explode any minute. He moves his hands to my waist lifting me so I’m straddling his lap.
I moan louder when I feel my heated core come in contact with this hardness, he presses his arousal tighter against me and I know he can feel how wet I am even through his jeans and my panties.
“Liz’ he pants while I nip at his ear lobe.
‘Yes Max’ I whisper heatedly as I run my hands up and down his chest.
I can hear him breathing heavy and his hands roam up and down my back, teasing underneath my shirt every now and then.
‘Liz’ he moans.
‘mmm’ I move down his neck.
‘Would you –
‘Yes’
‘Do you- ‘he gulps as I slide my hand underneath his shirt while brining my lips back to his, I run my tongue along his bottom one teasing him.
“Yes Max’ I ask as I prepare myself, this is it I’m ready to take our relationship to the next level and at this point I don’t care that we are in the back of his jeep.
But what comes out of his mouth is the last thing I expect.
‘Would you go to prom with me’ he blurts out.
Liz’s POV
Can you say Nervous?
I’ve been alone with Max a hundred of times before, but this is the first time we are going to be alone as a couple going out on an actual date.
It will be so good to get away from the ‘I told you so’ eyes, which everyone has been sporting lately. After the fiftieth time you hear it, you kind of get sick of hearing it.
I stare at myself in the mirror taking deep breaths; I don’t know why I’m so nervous, well scratch that, I’m ready to take it to the next level.
Granted Max doesn’t know it yet so you keep your mouth shut, I want it to be a surprise and I know your just itching to run your mouth, so just hold it in until after tonight okay…okay (I knew you would see it my way).
“Liz, Max is here honey’ my mom shouts at me.
Ok guys its ShowTime.
I make my way downstairs preparing to knock him off his feet but manage to knock myself off my feet instead.
My god he looks hotter, do guys actually get hotter once they become your boyfriends, or we girls just that blind to the hotness level that a guy can get.
Looking at him again I bit my lip from laughing when I see him stand there with this mouth hanging open and my father walks by casually closing his jaw for him on the way.
‘Not to late Lizzie’ he tells me heading upstairs.
‘Yes sir’
I make my way over to Max “Hey’ I lean up and kiss him.
He snaps back to reality ‘Hey…you look beautiful’
‘Thanks you look good too…so where are we headed’.
‘I thought maybe dinner then just see where the night takes us’.
‘Sounds good’ I reply as he leads me towards the jeep.
Twenty minutes later we are sitting in Senor Chows in a cozy little booth towards the back.
‘I can’t believe we actually were able to ditch the friends tonight’ he says.
‘I know I think Maria must have called me like twenty times’.
The waiter comes over and I watch as he smirks at Max, raising my eyebrow at him ‘is something the matter’ I ask.
He shakes his head and looks back, I follow his gaze and see half the staff watching us, okay that’s weird, and he gives a little laugh ‘well the staff was just wondering’.
‘Wondering what’
He blushes and fidgets with this order pad ‘well we just um wondering if you were actually going to eat this time or if we were going to get another performance of being carried out’.
Max starts blushing and I can’t help but laugh ‘were here to eat’ Max says picking up his glass of water. ‘Well in that case what can I get you’ he says smiling.
We both order and Max looks at me ‘it wasn’t that funny’ he tells me when he sees me still chuckling.
I stop smiling and look at him ‘your right it wasn’t…it was actually kind of sexy’ I say huskily.
His eyes widen and I lean in a little closer crooking my finger to draw him closer, he leans in and I whisper ‘ It really turned me on’.
I bit my lip as I hear his sudden intake of breath ‘You know going all caveman gave me a really good view of your tight sexy ass’.
‘OK then’ he exclaims and picks up his water gulping it down, he quirks an eyebrow when he sees me smirking.
‘You better behave or we won’t be having dinner at all’.
‘Is that a promise’
“LIZ’
“Okay…okay I’ll behave’ I laugh as I take in his flustered expression.
I bite my lip again when I hear him mumble going to be the death of me.
We actually make it through dinner nicely and wind out in the desert with the top off watching the stars shine brightly.
‘It’s really breath taking out here’ I say leaning my head back.
‘Yes it is’ I glance out of the corner of my eye and find him not looking at the sky at all.
I blush and turn my head towards him’ I was talking about the sky’.
‘So was I’ he says but his eyes are still trained on me.
I watch as his eyes darken and his gaze drops down to my lips then slowly back to my eyes.
One minute we are staring at each other and the next I’m attacking him.
I whimper and moan and he drags his lips from mouth and latches on to my neck.
‘God Liz’ he whispers out.
I grab him by the ears ‘(hey told you they could come in handy) and attack his mouth again.
I can feel a fire starting deep inside me and I feel like I’m going to explode any minute. He moves his hands to my waist lifting me so I’m straddling his lap.
I moan louder when I feel my heated core come in contact with this hardness, he presses his arousal tighter against me and I know he can feel how wet I am even through his jeans and my panties.
“Liz’ he pants while I nip at his ear lobe.
‘Yes Max’ I whisper heatedly as I run my hands up and down his chest.
I can hear him breathing heavy and his hands roam up and down my back, teasing underneath my shirt every now and then.
‘Liz’ he moans.
‘mmm’ I move down his neck.
‘Would you –
‘Yes’
‘Do you- ‘he gulps as I slide my hand underneath his shirt while brining my lips back to his, I run my tongue along his bottom one teasing him.
“Yes Max’ I ask as I prepare myself, this is it I’m ready to take our relationship to the next level and at this point I don’t care that we are in the back of his jeep.
But what comes out of his mouth is the last thing I expect.
‘Would you go to prom with me’ he blurts out.
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Chapter 28
Max's Pov
Okay I know I’m stupid, jeez out of all the things to come out of mouth...would you go to prom with me, could I be any more retarded.
She sits there with her mouth hanging open blinking her eyes.
‘Your asking me to prom’ she says surprised.
Gulping I nod my head while trying to get my heart and body under control.
‘Now…your asking me now’ she says in disbelief looking down at the obvious erection in my jeans.
‘I know…I know I’m sorry…I just…uh…its –
‘Spit it out Max’.
‘Okay…okay I’m just really really nervous…it was getting really intense and I don’t want our first time to be in the back of my jeep. Even thou I really…really would like to take you right here and now, I want our first time to be special’.
“Max-
I place my finger on her lips cutting her off ‘Liz listen please…our first time should be something we’ll never forget, something we both will remember for the rest of our lives.
I know what your thinking, yea right with sex being on my mind almost twenty-four seven, I should be jumping at the chance to jump her bones right now…trust me its really taking a lot of control not to just sink my missle into her ship.
.
.
.
.
Seriously stop looking at me like I’m some perverted maniac, I may walk around with a raging boner half the time, but I do know that your first time should be special.
After that look out thou because making love to Liz Parker will probably turn me into a groveling dog in heat and I’ll be whining and panting for it. And I’m talking about the tongue hanging out paws up kind of begging.
I watch as she nibbles on her bottom lip and I can tell you its not helping my current state of erection, her lips are the sexiest pair of lips I have ever seen and no you can’t sample the goods they are all mine.
‘Are you mad at me’ I ask her getting ready to turn into a five year ready to beg and plead for forgiveness.
She sighs and shakes her head ‘no I’m not mad…kind of relieved actually, I seem to lose my head when I’m around you and your right we shouldn’t do this here in the back of your jeep’.
I smile and tuck a strand behind her ear ‘I lose my head around you too, along with other body parts’.
She laughs and slides off sitting next to me; I bring my arm around her and tuck her head underneath my chin. ‘I love you…we don’t have to rush this, we have all the time in the world and trust me I don’t plan on letting you go anytime soon Miss Parker’.
‘Your right…God I’m so embarrassed now, I can’t believe I actually tried to maul you’.
‘Hey don’t be okay, knowing that you’re ready to take our relationship to the next step…I can’t describe how that makes me feel’.
I tighten my arm around her and we sit in silence for a few minutes before I look down at her.
‘Besides trust me I’ll be kicking myself tonight when I’m laying in bed…I’ll probably have to jack off just to get to sleep’.
She smiles and looks up at me ‘hmm now that might be something I would love to see’.
“LIZ’ I exclaim, causing my ears to turn red.
Two can play this game.
I smile and lean in close nuzzling her ear ‘maybe one day you’ll get an up close and personal show’ I say huskily causing her gasp.
‘I’m gonna hold you to that’ she says leaning up and kissing me.
Chapter 28
Max's Pov
Okay I know I’m stupid, jeez out of all the things to come out of mouth...would you go to prom with me, could I be any more retarded.
She sits there with her mouth hanging open blinking her eyes.
‘Your asking me to prom’ she says surprised.
Gulping I nod my head while trying to get my heart and body under control.
‘Now…your asking me now’ she says in disbelief looking down at the obvious erection in my jeans.
‘I know…I know I’m sorry…I just…uh…its –
‘Spit it out Max’.
‘Okay…okay I’m just really really nervous…it was getting really intense and I don’t want our first time to be in the back of my jeep. Even thou I really…really would like to take you right here and now, I want our first time to be special’.
“Max-
I place my finger on her lips cutting her off ‘Liz listen please…our first time should be something we’ll never forget, something we both will remember for the rest of our lives.
I know what your thinking, yea right with sex being on my mind almost twenty-four seven, I should be jumping at the chance to jump her bones right now…trust me its really taking a lot of control not to just sink my missle into her ship.
.
.
.
.
Seriously stop looking at me like I’m some perverted maniac, I may walk around with a raging boner half the time, but I do know that your first time should be special.
After that look out thou because making love to Liz Parker will probably turn me into a groveling dog in heat and I’ll be whining and panting for it. And I’m talking about the tongue hanging out paws up kind of begging.
I watch as she nibbles on her bottom lip and I can tell you its not helping my current state of erection, her lips are the sexiest pair of lips I have ever seen and no you can’t sample the goods they are all mine.
‘Are you mad at me’ I ask her getting ready to turn into a five year ready to beg and plead for forgiveness.
She sighs and shakes her head ‘no I’m not mad…kind of relieved actually, I seem to lose my head when I’m around you and your right we shouldn’t do this here in the back of your jeep’.
I smile and tuck a strand behind her ear ‘I lose my head around you too, along with other body parts’.
She laughs and slides off sitting next to me; I bring my arm around her and tuck her head underneath my chin. ‘I love you…we don’t have to rush this, we have all the time in the world and trust me I don’t plan on letting you go anytime soon Miss Parker’.
‘Your right…God I’m so embarrassed now, I can’t believe I actually tried to maul you’.
‘Hey don’t be okay, knowing that you’re ready to take our relationship to the next step…I can’t describe how that makes me feel’.
I tighten my arm around her and we sit in silence for a few minutes before I look down at her.
‘Besides trust me I’ll be kicking myself tonight when I’m laying in bed…I’ll probably have to jack off just to get to sleep’.
She smiles and looks up at me ‘hmm now that might be something I would love to see’.
“LIZ’ I exclaim, causing my ears to turn red.
Two can play this game.
I smile and lean in close nuzzling her ear ‘maybe one day you’ll get an up close and personal show’ I say huskily causing her gasp.
‘I’m gonna hold you to that’ she says leaning up and kissing me.
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Chapter 29
Liz’s Pov
I walk into the café smiling when I see my tall dark and handsome boyfriend sitting there waiting for his order.
I walk over and sit down across from him ‘Hey’.
‘Hey beautiful’ he says smiling.
‘So did you’ I ask smirking as I lean across the table.
‘Did I what’ he ask as he picks up his drink.
‘You know’ I say letting my gaze drop below the table.
He looks at me in confusion as he takes a sip of his drink shrugging his shoulders ‘I was suppose to do something’ he asks.
I roll my eyes as I motion him closer “ I want to know if you choked your chicken’.
‘My—‘ he trails off as his eyes get wide “LIZ I can’t believe you asked that’.
I laugh as he gets all flustered ‘well’.
“Liz’ he whines.
I quickly get up and scoot next to him whispering huskily in his ear ‘I want to know…did you think of me last night and touch yourself’ I suck the bottom of his ear and trail my tongue up the outer part.
‘Jesus Liz I have to go to work’
‘And your point’.
‘I think your hanging around Maria too much, I’m going to have to talk to Michael and tell him to tame his girlfriend’.
I laugh and stand up ‘Maria has nothing to do with it…I can’t help it if you bring out’ I let my gaze drop below again ‘certain urges in me’.
He closes his eyes and bangs his head on the table ‘your killing me’.
Before I can reply we look up to see Maria barreling towards us with her finger in her ear.
‘Okay who was talking about me…I know someone was my ear was ringing’.
‘Unbelievable’ Max chuckles as he gets up and digs some money out, “We’ll continue this later’ he says giving me a quick kiss ‘I have to get to work’.
I tilt my head to the side and watch as he walks across the street, I just want to sink my teeth into that ass, I know you want to too, don’t you.
I turn back around and quirk an eyebrow at Maria who is standing there staring at me.
‘What’ I say trying to play it off.
‘What did you mean by that’.
‘By what’
‘Don’t you play innocent with me’.
‘I don’t know what your talking about’ I head towards the pick up window.
‘Oh no you don’t, get back here…you two were talking about me weren’t you…don’t lie I know when someone is talking about me’.
‘We weren’t’
‘Uh huh’
‘I promise’
‘Liar’
“Maria’
“Liz’
She stands there tapping her foot and narrowing her eyes at me ‘then what were you talking about’.
‘None of your business’
‘Not going to work’
‘You do know that I don’t have to tell you everything little thing’.
‘Yes you do’
‘Maria we have work to do…you know the thing my father pays you money for’.
‘Pfft…he pays me because I’m good looking’.
‘Keep telling yourself that’.
I pick up an order and proceed to the table and of course she trails behind me.
‘Now see I know you were talking about me because my ears were ringing when I was at my locker…which means that it was someone close by’.
‘Maria it could have been anyone, maybe Michael…Alex…Isabel take your pick’.
‘Nope it was you otherwise you wouldn't be this tight lipped about it’.
‘For the last time I was not talking about you’ don’t you dare say anything…yes I’m talking to you the one sitting there right now looking at me.
‘Then what were you talking about’
‘UGH…fine if you really want to know I asked him if he whacked off last night, there are you happy now’
She stands there with her mouth dropped open the slowly she slides into a huge grin.
‘Liz…I’m so proud of you’.
Later after our shift ended Isabel and Tess came over and we ended up just sitting around looking through some magazines trying to get a fell on what we want for prom.
‘So is anyone else renting a hotel room prom night’ Tess asks.
I raise my eyebrow and look at her as Maria asks if she’s finally going to sleep with Kyle, she confirms and they all look at me ‘what’.
‘What are you and Max planning’.
‘I don’t know he only asked me last night to go’
‘I swear my brother got the short end of the stick when they cloned us…and he was king’.
I can’t help but laugh ‘He’s not that bad-
‘Liz…a king is suppose to be superior and confident, standing tall above everyone, I can make my brother hide in his closet for a week with just a look’.
‘Isabel you could make superman run and hide’.
She narrows her eyes at me then cocks her head to the side ‘I could couldn’t I, but still’ she laughs.
‘I think you guys should get one’ Maria says.
‘I’m pretty sure we will’
‘Then you can finally pop that cherry’.
‘God Maria when did you become such a skank’.
‘I am not a skank…I’m just sexually driven’.
‘Whatever…my first time is not going to be in some cheap nookie motel on prom night, that’s just so cliché…no offense Tess’.
‘None taken’ she says.
‘Trust me Maria just because we are not you and Michael humping every five minutes doesn’t mean we aren’t ready, we are and when the time comes we’ll know’.
‘We don’t hump…we make love’.
‘I think you need to lay off the aroma- therapy for a while it’s gone to your head’.
‘Liz dear I said it once I’ll say it again you are just a old fuddy duddy’.
‘I am not, hell I can be seductive…I got Max so flustered this morning I thought the boy was going to explode right there’.
‘What did you do’ Tess asks.
‘Liz asking Max if he jacked off last night is not being seductive’.
‘Oh My God is that what all that noise coming from his room last night was’ Isabel shrieks, my eyes get big…guess I got my answer.
Liz’s Pov
I walk into the café smiling when I see my tall dark and handsome boyfriend sitting there waiting for his order.
I walk over and sit down across from him ‘Hey’.
‘Hey beautiful’ he says smiling.
‘So did you’ I ask smirking as I lean across the table.
‘Did I what’ he ask as he picks up his drink.
‘You know’ I say letting my gaze drop below the table.
He looks at me in confusion as he takes a sip of his drink shrugging his shoulders ‘I was suppose to do something’ he asks.
I roll my eyes as I motion him closer “ I want to know if you choked your chicken’.
‘My—‘ he trails off as his eyes get wide “LIZ I can’t believe you asked that’.
I laugh as he gets all flustered ‘well’.
“Liz’ he whines.
I quickly get up and scoot next to him whispering huskily in his ear ‘I want to know…did you think of me last night and touch yourself’ I suck the bottom of his ear and trail my tongue up the outer part.
‘Jesus Liz I have to go to work’
‘And your point’.
‘I think your hanging around Maria too much, I’m going to have to talk to Michael and tell him to tame his girlfriend’.
I laugh and stand up ‘Maria has nothing to do with it…I can’t help it if you bring out’ I let my gaze drop below again ‘certain urges in me’.
He closes his eyes and bangs his head on the table ‘your killing me’.
Before I can reply we look up to see Maria barreling towards us with her finger in her ear.
‘Okay who was talking about me…I know someone was my ear was ringing’.
‘Unbelievable’ Max chuckles as he gets up and digs some money out, “We’ll continue this later’ he says giving me a quick kiss ‘I have to get to work’.
I tilt my head to the side and watch as he walks across the street, I just want to sink my teeth into that ass, I know you want to too, don’t you.
I turn back around and quirk an eyebrow at Maria who is standing there staring at me.
‘What’ I say trying to play it off.
‘What did you mean by that’.
‘By what’
‘Don’t you play innocent with me’.
‘I don’t know what your talking about’ I head towards the pick up window.
‘Oh no you don’t, get back here…you two were talking about me weren’t you…don’t lie I know when someone is talking about me’.
‘We weren’t’
‘Uh huh’
‘I promise’
‘Liar’
“Maria’
“Liz’
She stands there tapping her foot and narrowing her eyes at me ‘then what were you talking about’.
‘None of your business’
‘Not going to work’
‘You do know that I don’t have to tell you everything little thing’.
‘Yes you do’
‘Maria we have work to do…you know the thing my father pays you money for’.
‘Pfft…he pays me because I’m good looking’.
‘Keep telling yourself that’.
I pick up an order and proceed to the table and of course she trails behind me.
‘Now see I know you were talking about me because my ears were ringing when I was at my locker…which means that it was someone close by’.
‘Maria it could have been anyone, maybe Michael…Alex…Isabel take your pick’.
‘Nope it was you otherwise you wouldn't be this tight lipped about it’.
‘For the last time I was not talking about you’ don’t you dare say anything…yes I’m talking to you the one sitting there right now looking at me.
‘Then what were you talking about’
‘UGH…fine if you really want to know I asked him if he whacked off last night, there are you happy now’
She stands there with her mouth dropped open the slowly she slides into a huge grin.
‘Liz…I’m so proud of you’.
Later after our shift ended Isabel and Tess came over and we ended up just sitting around looking through some magazines trying to get a fell on what we want for prom.
‘So is anyone else renting a hotel room prom night’ Tess asks.
I raise my eyebrow and look at her as Maria asks if she’s finally going to sleep with Kyle, she confirms and they all look at me ‘what’.
‘What are you and Max planning’.
‘I don’t know he only asked me last night to go’
‘I swear my brother got the short end of the stick when they cloned us…and he was king’.
I can’t help but laugh ‘He’s not that bad-
‘Liz…a king is suppose to be superior and confident, standing tall above everyone, I can make my brother hide in his closet for a week with just a look’.
‘Isabel you could make superman run and hide’.
She narrows her eyes at me then cocks her head to the side ‘I could couldn’t I, but still’ she laughs.
‘I think you guys should get one’ Maria says.
‘I’m pretty sure we will’
‘Then you can finally pop that cherry’.
‘God Maria when did you become such a skank’.
‘I am not a skank…I’m just sexually driven’.
‘Whatever…my first time is not going to be in some cheap nookie motel on prom night, that’s just so cliché…no offense Tess’.
‘None taken’ she says.
‘Trust me Maria just because we are not you and Michael humping every five minutes doesn’t mean we aren’t ready, we are and when the time comes we’ll know’.
‘We don’t hump…we make love’.
‘I think you need to lay off the aroma- therapy for a while it’s gone to your head’.
‘Liz dear I said it once I’ll say it again you are just a old fuddy duddy’.
‘I am not, hell I can be seductive…I got Max so flustered this morning I thought the boy was going to explode right there’.
‘What did you do’ Tess asks.
‘Liz asking Max if he jacked off last night is not being seductive’.
‘Oh My God is that what all that noise coming from his room last night was’ Isabel shrieks, my eyes get big…guess I got my answer.
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not happy with it and I hope its okay,
Chapter 30
Max's Pov
I walk into the CrashDown looking for my brown haired beauty frowning when I don’t see her anywhere.
Maria walks by with a plate of food ‘Gidget’s upstairs Moondoggie’.
I crack a smile as I walk towards the back shaking my head, Maria and her analogies.
I knock on the door waiting for someone to answer, when I remember her parents are out of town I use my powers and let myself in.
‘Liz’ I call out as I make my way towards her bedroom, walking into her room I notice music playing and few candles lit, but I don’t see her anywhere. I walk towards her balcony and peak out where I hear “SHIT’ and I turn and bolt towards the bathroom.
‘Liz’
Immediately panicking thinking she hurt herself and I prepare to heal her, however I am not prepared for a naked Liz sitting in a bubble bath with one leg resting on the side of the tub.
‘Max’ she shrieks in surprise.
‘Oh God’ I quickly turn around and close my eyes get out, get out, get out I repeat trying to get the image out, too late its forever branded and my lower half is very much awake now.
‘What are you doing here’ she asks.
‘I heard you scream, I thought you were hurt’.
‘Oh…I cut myself shaving…see’
She holds up her leg and all I can see is one tan leg with nice white soapy bubbles glistening on her skin. Oh how I want to be that bubble as it slithers down her thigh back to the depths of her most precious treasure.
‘Max’
‘I-
‘Max’
‘Um-
I know I can change molecular structures, I wonder if its possible to turn myself into foaming white bubble bath so I can cling to her skin.
‘Max’
‘Huh’
She laughs and I finally break out of my daydream, oh Jesus I have to get out of here but my feet are glued to the floor.
‘Could you-
Could I what, strip off all of my clothes and join you, yeah…yeah I can do that, I start to unbutton my shirt when I hear.
‘What are you doing’.
‘What’ I still my process.
‘I asked if you would heal my cut it stings…why are you taking your shirt off’.
‘Oh…uh’ I look down to where my fingers are on my buttons, then I look up ‘don’t want to get my shirt wet…yep that’s it cant get the clothes wet’ I say as I quickly shed my shirt.
Her mouth pops open and her eyes roam my body, I see them get big when she see my erection pushing against my jeans, I know I should be embarrassed but I want her to see just how much she turns me on.
‘Now about that cut’ I say huskily dropping to my knees in front of the tub.
Resting my hand on her ankle I slowly start to slide my hand up healing her cut and going upwards, when my hand reaches her knee ‘Max’ she says breathing heavier
‘Hmm’ I keep my eyes trained on my hand watching as the bubbles disappear from my touch.
“I don’t have a cut there’ she says
“Well I don’t want you to have to worry about shaving for a while’ I say huskily
My hand reaches her inner thigh.
‘Max’ her chest heaves heavily and I can feel my jeans tighten more.
‘I uh…Max…there’s…hair doesn’t grow there’.
My hand stops and I look up at her sucking in my breath at her heated stare.
We stare at each for a few minutes both breathing heavy until she leans forward wrapping a hand around my neck ‘but I know somewhere that you could trim’ she says before launching me forward and capturing my lips.
I attack her lips hungrily as my hand goes straight for her center, tracing the outline of her lips she moans in my mouth making my cock twitch.
Slipping a finger in I gasp at how hot and wet she is, she breaks our kiss and throws her head back ‘Oh God’.
Attaching my lips to her neck I slip another finger into her and slowly start pumping them in and out.
Her hips start moving in tune with my fingers and her moans grow louder, Jesus I’m going to blow my load right here.
‘Oh…oh…oh God’.
‘Come for me Liz’ I whisper as I nip at her earlobe and start trailing my lips down her neck, while my fingers pick up speed.
‘Max…oh…oh God…Max’.
‘That’s it’ I snake my thumb forward and start rubbing on her nub.
She arches her back as her orgasm nears, digging her nails into my shoulder, I feel her stiffen and her walls clamp down on my fingers as she climaxes ‘Maxxx’.
I rest my head in the crock of her neck while she tries to regain her breathing, closing my eyes tightly I try to get my body back under control I am so hard I am aching for release.
‘Wow’ she breathes out.
I pull back and look at her ‘are you okay’.
‘More than okay’ she smiles then leans over kissing my lips softly.
‘One thing thou’
‘What’ I ask.
‘You still need to do the other leg’ she says pulling me into the tub jeans and all.
Chapter 30
Max's Pov
I walk into the CrashDown looking for my brown haired beauty frowning when I don’t see her anywhere.
Maria walks by with a plate of food ‘Gidget’s upstairs Moondoggie’.
I crack a smile as I walk towards the back shaking my head, Maria and her analogies.
I knock on the door waiting for someone to answer, when I remember her parents are out of town I use my powers and let myself in.
‘Liz’ I call out as I make my way towards her bedroom, walking into her room I notice music playing and few candles lit, but I don’t see her anywhere. I walk towards her balcony and peak out where I hear “SHIT’ and I turn and bolt towards the bathroom.
‘Liz’
Immediately panicking thinking she hurt herself and I prepare to heal her, however I am not prepared for a naked Liz sitting in a bubble bath with one leg resting on the side of the tub.
‘Max’ she shrieks in surprise.
‘Oh God’ I quickly turn around and close my eyes get out, get out, get out I repeat trying to get the image out, too late its forever branded and my lower half is very much awake now.
‘What are you doing here’ she asks.
‘I heard you scream, I thought you were hurt’.
‘Oh…I cut myself shaving…see’
She holds up her leg and all I can see is one tan leg with nice white soapy bubbles glistening on her skin. Oh how I want to be that bubble as it slithers down her thigh back to the depths of her most precious treasure.
‘Max’
‘I-
‘Max’
‘Um-
I know I can change molecular structures, I wonder if its possible to turn myself into foaming white bubble bath so I can cling to her skin.
‘Max’
‘Huh’
She laughs and I finally break out of my daydream, oh Jesus I have to get out of here but my feet are glued to the floor.
‘Could you-
Could I what, strip off all of my clothes and join you, yeah…yeah I can do that, I start to unbutton my shirt when I hear.
‘What are you doing’.
‘What’ I still my process.
‘I asked if you would heal my cut it stings…why are you taking your shirt off’.
‘Oh…uh’ I look down to where my fingers are on my buttons, then I look up ‘don’t want to get my shirt wet…yep that’s it cant get the clothes wet’ I say as I quickly shed my shirt.
Her mouth pops open and her eyes roam my body, I see them get big when she see my erection pushing against my jeans, I know I should be embarrassed but I want her to see just how much she turns me on.
‘Now about that cut’ I say huskily dropping to my knees in front of the tub.
Resting my hand on her ankle I slowly start to slide my hand up healing her cut and going upwards, when my hand reaches her knee ‘Max’ she says breathing heavier
‘Hmm’ I keep my eyes trained on my hand watching as the bubbles disappear from my touch.
“I don’t have a cut there’ she says
“Well I don’t want you to have to worry about shaving for a while’ I say huskily
My hand reaches her inner thigh.
‘Max’ her chest heaves heavily and I can feel my jeans tighten more.
‘I uh…Max…there’s…hair doesn’t grow there’.
My hand stops and I look up at her sucking in my breath at her heated stare.
We stare at each for a few minutes both breathing heavy until she leans forward wrapping a hand around my neck ‘but I know somewhere that you could trim’ she says before launching me forward and capturing my lips.
I attack her lips hungrily as my hand goes straight for her center, tracing the outline of her lips she moans in my mouth making my cock twitch.
Slipping a finger in I gasp at how hot and wet she is, she breaks our kiss and throws her head back ‘Oh God’.
Attaching my lips to her neck I slip another finger into her and slowly start pumping them in and out.
Her hips start moving in tune with my fingers and her moans grow louder, Jesus I’m going to blow my load right here.
‘Oh…oh…oh God’.
‘Come for me Liz’ I whisper as I nip at her earlobe and start trailing my lips down her neck, while my fingers pick up speed.
‘Max…oh…oh God…Max’.
‘That’s it’ I snake my thumb forward and start rubbing on her nub.
She arches her back as her orgasm nears, digging her nails into my shoulder, I feel her stiffen and her walls clamp down on my fingers as she climaxes ‘Maxxx’.
I rest my head in the crock of her neck while she tries to regain her breathing, closing my eyes tightly I try to get my body back under control I am so hard I am aching for release.
‘Wow’ she breathes out.
I pull back and look at her ‘are you okay’.
‘More than okay’ she smiles then leans over kissing my lips softly.
‘One thing thou’
‘What’ I ask.
‘You still need to do the other leg’ she says pulling me into the tub jeans and all.
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