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Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:23 am
by L-J-L 76
Carrie
Another great chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon. I can't believe Michael just left. I know he is worried about Max. But Max is just trying to help Liz. I'm glad that Max and Liz are talking. I can't believe Max had Liz listen to the tape. I would be scared of the doctor too about what he said about locking Liz up and keep watching her home and work place. Will Max tell Liz the truth? Will Max have Liz remember? Will Max keep Liz with him? Will Liz be safe with Max? Will Liz go back to her life? Will Max and Liz talk? Will Max and Michael be able to protect Liz? Will Max and Michael save Liz if she is in trouble? Will Liz run to Max? Will Max and Liz run away together? Will Max and Liz fall in love with each other again? Will Max and Liz get married? Will the doctor and the bad men find Liz and Max? Will the doctor and bad men hurt Max and Liz? Will Max and Liz be safe? Will Max and Liz have a safe and happy ending together? Will Max and Liz have kids? Will Max and Liz go somewhere safe? Sorry for all the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz.

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L-J-L 76

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 8:57 am
by begonia9508
Wow! Carrie, that's something I not expected!...

Now, the one million $ question is, who is behind this? the FBI or aliens...

I just hope that Liz will react well, when she heard the truth... or part of it! Because she is so not in position to think clearly...

I don't know what she will do, when Max told her he was her husband! :? Maybe she will accept his reasons for doing the mindwarp or whatever he did to her, without trying to kill him again!!

Thanks and I am impatiently waiting for more! EVE :mrgreen:

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 9:16 am
by jake17
begonia9508 wrote:Wow! Carrie, that's something I not expected!...

Now, the one million $ question is, who is behind this? the FBI or aliens...

I just hope that Liz will react well, when she heard the truth... or part of it! Because she is so not in position to think clearly...

I don't know what she will do, when Max told her he was her husband! :? Maybe she will accept his reasons for doing the mindwarp or whatever he did to her, without trying to kill him again!!

Thanks and I am impatiently waiting for more! EVE :mrgreen:

:oops: damn I suck lol must be really rusty, I'm so sorry Eve, Max wasn't her husband, she's talking about memories of Max that have been blocked by the mind warp. It's coming back to her in dreams, these memories are from before the massacre at the high school.
I'm sorry for the confusion Eve.
Thank you so much for reading.

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:05 am
by keepsmiling7
Oh Carrie, what beautiful writing, but what a terrible situation we have Max and Liz in....
Michael wants no part of it now wants to move on, Max misses and needs Liz........but really can't keep her with him, or can he????
And who is Dr. Dexter...........I'm sure part of that group that Max took care of 10 years ago???
Looking forward to more of your amazing writing now that school has started for your daughter.
Carolyn

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 1:59 pm
by sarammlover
Aww! A great part. I am glad Max made Liz listen to that tape and I have to say, she isn't safe at her apt anymore and I am glad Michael didn't take her back! I can't wait for more.

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 2:33 pm
by Roswelllostcause
Carrie, this is great! Who is this Doctor really working for? He isn't helping Liz at all!

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:24 pm
by saori_1902
Oh, great part!!! :mrgreen:

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2014 4:52 am
by L-J-L 76
Carrie
Please please please please please please please please come back and update this story really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Will Liz remember who Max really is? Will Liz remember everything that happened? Will Max be there for Liz when she remembers? Will Liz see Michael again? Will Liz remember Michael?

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L-J-L 76

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2014 8:40 pm
by Evans3
Oh!!!! Carrie! That was beautiful written.

All I was thinking...shit...Michael left. Is he not coming back? Someone will find out Liz is MISSING. I am biting my nails thinking...crap crap crap crap...now what? You better come back with another beautiful part for us!! Please Please!!!

Wendy :mrgreen:

Re: The Intimacy of Strangers (CC,M/L,Adult) chpt 4 8/26/14

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:20 pm
by dreambeliever
Awesome Carrie :D I can't wait to read the next chapter.