Of Cabbages and Kings (CC,M/L,ADULT) (Complete)

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Of Cabbages and Kings (CC,M/L,ADULT) (Complete)

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The time has come, the walrus said,
To talk of many things,
Of ships--- and shoes--- and sealing wax,
Of Cabbages and Kings,
And why the sea is boiling hot,
And whether pigs have wings.


Disclaimer: I, in no way, am associated with the actors, writers, producers, etc. of Roswell. The rights to the show belong to 20th Century Fox, Jason Katims, the WB, Melinda Metz, UPN, etc. Which is probably why there was no Season 4. ;-) Where used, and where possible, songs are attributed to the artist. I have no idea who owns the rights to them.

Authors Note: I will try to post weekly, but won't promise it. There will also be some short chapters, but I hope the quality will make up for it. There will also be long chapters, so it should all even up in the end.

Summary: Everything happens up to Max's proposal in 'Graduation'. Things progress a little differently from there when Liz finds her friends' reaction not what she'd have hoped for.

Category: Uhmm....

Rating: Some ADULT - I'll give advanced warning so if you don't want to read it, skipp over to the end of it. I'll put a START and END marker


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Dream a Little Dream Of Me.
The Mamas The Papas


Stars shining bright above you
Night breezes seem to whisper "I love you"
Birds singin' in the sycamore tree
Dream a little dream of me

Say nighty-night and kiss me
Just hold me tight and tell me you'll miss me
While I'm alone and blue as can be
Dream a little dream of me

Stars fading but I linger on dear
Still craving your kiss
I'm longing to linger till dawn dear
Just saying this

Sweet dreams till sunbeams find you
Sweet dreams that leave all worries behind you
But in your dreams whatever they be
Dream a little dream of me

Stars fading but I linger on dear
Still craving your kiss
I'm longing to linger till dawn dear
Just saying this

Sweet dreams till sunbeams find you
Sweet dreams that leave all worries far behind you
But in your dreams whatever they be
Dream a little dream of me




Part 1

With an almost religious reverence, Max carefully folded some blankets together and laid them out on the sun lounger, resting in the middle of Liz's balcony. If they were going to spend the evening wrapped in each other's arms, why not make it as comfortable as his lady deserved? Liz stood to one side of her romantic haven, lighting an array of candles sheltered in deep, glass pots, whose soft flickering lights would add to the ambience already formed by the chains of tiny colored lights. She looked up at Max and frowned at the serious expression that had appeared on his face.
"Liz, I've been thinking about what happened, before," he looked up at her at last. "We saved that woman's life."
"I know," she smiled, returning her attention to the candle.
"I just...," he shrugged. "I have this weird feeling about it."
"Oh, what do you mean?" Liz turned back to Max.
"I've just been feeling like... I have no path, you know?" He sounded lost. "Maybe that's why I've been put here. To help people. Maybe that's what I should do with my life after I leave Roswell.
"Like Tom Jode in Grapes of Wrath," she smiled and stepped beside him. "Doing good deeds and avoiding the law."
"Thing is," a hopeful expression appeared on his face. "I can't do that without you."
Liz's face lit up. Her heart soared. She had waited for so long to hear him admit that.
"I would do anything if it means being with you." She meant it, too. All of their differences had been resolved. She had accepted him, accepted his love, warts and all. There was no person in all of creation that she would rather be with.
Max studied Liz for a moment with a small smile of almost disbelief, like he had only imagined her saying those words in his best dreams. He stepped to the small barbecue and reached towards its cold contents. He picked up a piece of charcoal and held it in his closed fist.
"Trick I learned from Superman," he grinned. "Let's see if it works."
Liz watched as his hand started to glow. Her eyes widened with amazement as she understood what he was doing.
"Oh... my... G..."
"Liz," he turned to look at her, "they're taking our homes from us... and they might..." Max crossed to stand before her. "But when I look in your eyes, I don't feel angry or... deprived. I feel like the luckiest half human on the planet. You're pure, you're true and... you're real. Right now, that seems like the only thing that's important. I want to be with you, Liz. Forever."
"Forever might only be twelve days." Tears shone in her eyes, mixed with the emotion of regret in her voice. Sometimes, life could be so unfair.
"Then we'll take those twelve days and we'll live twelve lifetimes." Max smiled as he placed a pure, bright diamond into her hand, and closed her fingers over it. Liz Parker, will you marry me?"
"Yes," she pulled him into a fierce embrace. There was no hesitation, no doubt. She would marry Max, and live whatever life she had left, happy in his arms. Many had tried, but no one could take their love away. Not then, not now, not ever.
"After graduation," Max chuckled.

The kiss had started out as normal. They nibbled and sucked at each others lips while they gently probed one another with their tongues. At last, their romantic clinch grew in passion, burning with their love and their hope, illuminated by the pure romance that existed between them. They stumbled back toward the lounger until their legs bumped against it. Their next step was inevitable. It had been a long time coming, and they had endured so much to find themselves in this moment. No two lovers in all the cosmos had ever endured what these two had, and yet still they emerged from the forges of doubt with their love intact. Still, they were apprehensive. In spite of their deeply intensive love for each other, in spite of their promise to remain together forever and regardless of all the events that had shaped and molded them, they were both still nervous teenagers. They sat together on the edge of her sun lounger holding hands timidly, looking into the well of one another's eyes. Considering how well they knew each other's souls, how they had seen the other's deepest desires, their shyness seemed out of place, yet so totally in character for the two young spiritual lovers. Soon, their love would finally reach the physical plane where it would doubtless burn as brightly as on any other.

"I love you," Liz breathed in a tentative, trembling voice. She felt that he would need this encouragement. She knew how Max would, even now, fear for her safety. She leaned in for his reaction.
Max was still looking at his feet but he gave a wide grin.
"I love you too," he muttered glancing up at her. "You do know that, right?"
She could see the amusement dancing in his eyes. She was already aware of the true depth of his feelings for her, just as she was aware that he knew the depth of hers for him. He looked deeply into her eyes. The smile disappeared as he searched her for a sign of what she wanted. She hoped that he could see the love and desire that had been building up since they had met those many years ago. True, they had endured obstacles such as none have ever seen before, but they stood triumphant against the forces of darkness and anti-love and had emerged triumphant, as much in love today as they had fallen so deeply that night in the café when Max shared with her his soul. He knew what he wanted now and he knew that she wanted it too. It was time to collect their reward.

Max leaned toward her suddenly and kissed her, swallowing her lips in his, his tongue finding hers. She felt mild surprise as her tongue tickled the roof of his mouth, then her teeth gently closed onto his lower lip. Their passion, when together had never been in doubt. Both knew that once this dam had been unblocked, there would be no closing it. Their love would know no bounds; it would be all or nothing. Their arms tangled in an embrace that grew tighter with each second. Slowly he lowered her to the sun bed next to him. He turned to lean over her and with one hand caressing her hair, he kissed a line down her throat, down into the concave spot at the base of her neck. His hand slid from her hair, leaving a glowing trail where his fingers brushed her velveteen skin along her cheek, her neck, down her arm to her hand, where his fingers meshed with hers. Still nibbling and kissing her neck, he moved his other hand, resting on her stomach, up to the valley between her breasts. Breaking from kissing her neck, he held himself up with his other arm. He trailed his fingertips over her curves and his lips moved back to hers. She moved her hands on his neck and hip, starting to grip him with firm pressure.

She stopped him for a second to sit up and pulled her shirt from her, slowly, wanting to torment him. Her eyes sparkled with merriment. His own, dark yet burning eyes followed her every graceful movement. With her eyes glued to his, she leaned forward. He eagerly accepted her unspoken invitation and reached behind her where he unclasped the back of her delicate, white bra. Teasing and seductive, she slid it off with the grace of an accomplished stripper, covering her now bare breasts with flushed arms. His eyes widened for a moment and moved over her naked, yet hidden breasts. She leaned back to the bed arching her back and stretching. He stared momentarily at her, his mouth watering, his desire burning. Her arms left their protective stance and wrapped around his neck as she pulled him to kiss her again.
"You are so beautiful," he groaned into her lips.
They were the first words spoken, but there was no need for words between them. She could see what he thought of her. He could never hide his feelings where she was concerned. They shared another long, languid kiss but temptation soon took hold of him and he pulled back to move to her breasts. His lips brushed all around her nipples, now erect with exposure to the cool night air and her own excitement, leaving little butterfly kisses to help torment her. He took one of her firm nipples into his mouth and sucked on it, gently. The feelings that swept through her were incredible. She closed her eyes and sighed, pushing herself at Max, offering herself for him to do as he pleased. He moved his hand over to her other breast and he massaged it with a delicate, gentle brushing of his hand. Max took his mouth from her nipple and leaned back a little bit, need visual confirmation that he was pleasing her. Not so much glowing any more, Liz was on fire.

He smiled when she looked up at him. She knew that he could see that she liked it. She knew that he could feel her pleasure. His hands roamed down to her jeans. He cupped his hand over her inner thigh and rubbed gently through the thick denim fabric.
"I'm sorry I didn't wear something more... romantic," she sighed, giving her approval at his touch.
"They're just clothes, darling Liz," his eyes drooped to half-mast. His voice was low, thick with emotion. "Underneath you're still you. Beautiful, wonderful... true. I love you, whatever you wear."

She blinked away the tear that formed in the corner of her eye and slid her hands down to the bottom of his shirt. He was so wonderful. She reached inside and pressed her cool hands on his torso, smiling to hear his almost silent groan. In an easy, fluid movement, she lifted his shirt over his head, regretting the brief loss of touch from his hands. He paused to remove it completely for her. She felt the heat rising in him as well as herself, and he reached down to fumble with her button and unzip her pants. She raised her hips from the bed and he helped her wriggle out of her jeans. Aware of the location of his gaze, she sat up unbuttoned his jeans. He stood up to pull them off. She couldn't help stare. His manhood was already well on its way to a full erection.
"Max," she mouthed, but no sound came out.
"I love you," his silent mouth replied.
She stood up next to him, both of them only in underwear, and pressed her body against his, her naked breasts pressing against him, her erect nipples boring into him. He wrapped his arms around her in a close, protective hug. She knew that he would allow nothing to come between them ever again.

She hugged him, then slid her hands down and hooked her thumbs in his boxer's waistband. She disrobed him in silence, then wordlessly sat him on the edge of the bed. She knelt at his legs, eagerly pawing his thighs open wider so she could lean between his knees. She looked up and found him staring down at her with a somber look of love and desire.
"Are you sure?" he asked. "Liz, you don't..."
"Shhh," she reached her finger to his lips. "I love you, Max. Let me show you how much."
With his eyes showing what he wanted, Max just nodded when she pulled her fingers back.

She smiled a little and raised herself to kiss his lips before reaching in to handle his manhood. She looked with curiosity at his fully hard manliness and gave it a gentle stroke with her innocent hands, feeling the tip, running her finger around the smooth, pliant head. She felt Max shudder beneath her gentle grasp. Holding him in her hand, she kissed his stomach, then, with butterflies fluttering in her stomach, closed her eyes and lovingly touched her lips to the head. She felt his whole body tense when her hot breath teased him. She placed a gentle hand under his testicles, cupping them lightly and then her tongue brushed between her lips and onto his cock. His whole body jumped. Liz had complete and total control of Max and she doubted that he cared one little bit.

Slowly, her mouth enveloped his silken dome, and her tongue swirled over it and around in her mouth.
"Oh, god, Liz," he moaned in a low, husky tone. "That feels so... incredible. You don't know what that is doing to me."
She took him out of her mouth and smiled at him. She grasped him and licked down to the base of his shaft and began kissing and sucking not only on his erect ridge, but alternating onto his taught flesh at the top of his thighs. As she returned her attention to his manhood, he felt himself getting close to his release. He placed his hand to the side of her head as a warning.
"Liz," he warned in an almost guttural plea. "Aahhh"
He stroked her head before suddenly reaching back down and grabbing a handful of blanket. She didn't want to stop, however. She wanted to pay him this ultimate of compliments.

Having had no previous experience, she pulled away when she felt the first of his ejaculations. His fluids landed in her hair. She jumped slightly, then reached up and touched it. She brought her finger to her lips and tasted him. He looked at her with amazement and pure, unadulterated love. Liz looked up with a sheepish smile and he lifted her chin and kissed her. He pulled her to a standing position and still sitting on the bed, kissed directly below her navel as he pulled her against him. She giggled when Max stood up and passed his hand over her head, cleaning her of the mess he had left on her.

They kissed again as he turned her to lay her back on the bed. It was her turn to be loved now. She lay back against the pillows and closed her eyes as Max crawled above her. He kissed her breasts again, nibbling gently on her nipples, sending spasms of burning desire through her. He trailed his kisses to the top of her panties and grabbed them by the sides. She lifted her hips in response and was soon rid of her last piece of clothing. Then there was nothing. It was almost as if Max had gone, though she still felt his presence, and his love for her. She opened her eyes to see him looking into her feminine core, shaking his head slowly.
"You are so beautiful Liz. From the inside out. I love you so much. No matter where or when our souls meet, I will always love and treasure you."
"I know, Max," she gasped as a feeling of warmth swept through her.

His lips resumed where they left off, kissing just above where her panty line had been and continued kissing down onto her mound. She couldn't help the surprised squeak that escaped her. Through half closed eyes, she looked at him gazing at her swollen, parted charms and her pink button peeking out at him. He began sliding his tongue out onto her lower lips. Sensation such that she had never felt before swept through her. Her hands clasped the blanket and her cries echoed off the wall of her balcony. His tongue worked at her, mixing his saliva with her own nectar as it slid inside her, pushing her to her first of many minor climaxes. He slid out and to the far edge and pushed inside. He dragged his tongue up the whole length of her silken folds and onto the hard nub of her female flower that cried for attention. Her whole body went into spasms of glorious delights as she peaked, again and again crying Max's name, giving little care for who heard her. He tried it again and again, and every time his tongue reached her button she jolted as if shocked as she experienced another orgasm. Her leg muscles flexed with every charge.

How different his tongue felt from her own knowing fingers surprised her. She had never known anything that electric, or so intimate. He tasted her wetness as it mixed with his saliva, drinking her, devouring her. He stopped the long strokes and started concentrating only on the hard bud of flesh that brought her so much pleasure. She clutched at her pillow beneath her, then at his head, pressing him into her. He plunged two fingers inside her and she crossed her feet over the back of his head. She felt a sudden rush of pure heat shoot from her toes up through her legs, stomach, chest and neck.

After a moment Liz started to descend from the heights Max had taken her to, and she realized that he had stopped his ravening and that he was sitting up and looking from between her legs to her flushed face. She released him from her grasp.
"That was..." she could scarcely breathe. "That was... wow, Max."
"Yeah," he nodded, a little breathless himself. "You are... wow."
He crawled up on top of her, pressing his lips to hers as his hardness nudged her soaking folds. She reached down and felt the effect her orgasms had had on him.

She guided him so that his tip was pressing at her naked core.
"Are you sure, Liz?" his eyes searched her, hoping she would say yes, but prepared to stop is she said no.
"I want this, Max. I want you."
He kissed her again, and she felt his hand slide between them where she knew he would guide himself inside her.
"Max," she called.
"Yeah," he looked back at her, his face filled with concern.
"Go really slow...please?"
"Of course," he nodded, care now filling his face. "I love you."
"I'm just..." she trailed off as she felt him gently ease into her.
She felt it when his swollen flesh met the membrane that marked her as unspoiled. She felt Max tense up too.
"Relax," he soothed in her ear. "I love you, Elizabeth Parker. And by this sign, as claim you as mine for all eternity."
"Take me, Max," she begged. "I'm yours."
She winced as she felt him thrust into her, breaking her maidenhead. The pain was instantly taken away, dissolved not by any alien ability, but by Max's overriding love for her.
"Oh, Max!" she cried as the overwhelming sensation of love and devotion swept through her. She pulled his body tighter to her.
"Did I hurt you?" He looked stricken.
"No," she shook her head. He had healed her pain and hadn't even realized it. "It was... it was... Please, keep going. Make love to me, Max."

He withdrew a little, filling Liz with a sense of loss while he waited for her to give him a sign. She opened her eyes and nodded. He pressed again, a little more into her this time and waited. Again, she allowed her body to adjust to him before she nodded. He pulled out and started over, going a little farther. He repeated his action, allowing the response from her body to guide him. She started moaning her approval as he pushed into her very hot, very wet, velvet cavern. Her cries started low, a murmuring whimper, which gradually grew in volume until she was only dimly aware that she was screaming. She tightened around him each time he got deeper until she felt him fully inside her. He looked into her eyes again and she burrowed her head deeper into the pillow behind her before languidly closing her eyes. He pumped into her, speeding up as he neared his second orgasm. She spread her legs even further and started rising to meet each thrust. He reached down to her engorged button and rubbed frantically. She could not help herself, and it felt that each of his thrusts caused her to climax. Again and again, her body was wracked with minor spasms. Their efforts seemed to double with every loving thrust until at last, she felt an incredible sensation building deep inside her. She felt him tensing, as he too was sharing this feeling. They both cried out as they shared their climax, one that seemed to take their bodies on a roller coaster ride around the world, through the rings of distant planets, through nebulae, across unknown suns and finally back down to the sun lounger on Liz's balcony in Roswell, New Mexico.

Max allowed his body to relax, and with his manliness still embedded in her, he started to rain gentle kisses on her upturned face.
"Reality is so much better than the dream, darling Liz," he gasped. "I love you. I need you. You don't know just how much I need you. Come to me."
"I'm here, Max," Liz smiled, stroking the dark locks from his forehead. "I would love you in any lifetime, in any world. Our souls would find each other across the entire universe. That's why you came here, Max. Not as a last hope for your people, but to find me."
"I love you Liz. Never, ever forget that. As Zan, or as Max, I love you, and we will be together."
"I know," Liz smiled, reveling in their new closeness. "And I love you. Don't ever doubt that. It's like you said. I belong to you, now."
"And I belong to you. I only hope you still feel that way when you wake up."
"I will," she again pressed her finger to his lips, silencing him. She threw him a shy smile. "Since when did you get so talkative?"

* * *

"Liz!" she heard her best friend, Maria DeLuca calling. She could feel her friend's hand on her shoulder, shaking her from her deep slumber. "Liz! Wake up, babe."
"Maria," Liz groaned. "What are you doing here?"
"Shaking your ass awake," Maria smirked. "Heavy night last night?"
A contented, dreamy smile spread across Liz's sleep filled face as she stretched her lithe body.
"Mmm Hmm," she agreed. A knowing smile spread across her face. "You could say that." Her eyes popped open. "Where'd he go? He was right here when we fell asleep. Hey! How did I get into my bed?" She broke into a smile again. "He must have put me here. Before he left."
"Liz!" Maria's eyes flew wide and her mouth dropped open. "No! You didn't! I mean... Oh my God! Liz? Did you like, go... beyond?"
"Oh my God, Maria," Liz's eyes grew distant as she pulled her blankets to her breast. Her smile was wide, and bright. "Beyond doesn't even begin to describe where we went. I saw stars, Maria. I mean, real stars. I don't mean figuratively. It was just like our first real kiss, you know? Like that time, when things got so out of hand. Our real kiss. I saw real stars, you know? Maria? He took me to heaven and back."
"Wow," was all Maria could murmur. "I'd never of guessed... I mean, who'd a thought..." Maria shook her head, though the disapproving look remained. "Liz? Great as it sounds, are you sure you were ready for that step? I mean..."
"How can you ask me that, Maria?" Liz glared at her friend. There was more than a hint of annoyance in her voice. "After everything we've been through. You know that we were ready. More than ready, I'd say. In fact, long overdue."
"Well, I gotta tell you, Chica," Maria was shaking her head. "I'm surprised. Disappointed and surprised. Disappointed that you did it at all, and surprised that it was as good as you say it was."
"Yeah," Liz smiled again. She knew Maria would get over her shock. It wasn't as though it was something Maria hadn't already experienced. "It was... It was incredible. And you know what? It's all been worth it. Everything. All of those terrible things I had to live through? Those things I had to do? It was all worth it. Oh, and Maria? He asked me to marry him."
"What?" Maria shrieked. Her face fell. "Liz? I hope you said no. Tell me you turned him down."
"Of course not," Liz snapped, her eyes blazing for a moment. "Of course I said yes."
"Who are you?" Maria demanded. "What are you thinking? I mean, Liz? Are you sure? Like, come on. What about all of your plans? Your dreams?"
"My dream is to always be in his arms, now, Maria."
"Wow," Maria shook her head with dismay. "This is worse than I thought."
"Maria?" Liz looked at her friend, her eyes narrowed in confusion. "When did you cut your hair?"
"What do you mean?"
"Your hair. When did you cut it short again? It looked better before. Long hair suits you. This way makes you look younger, though."
"Uh huh," Maria backed toward the door. "Look, Liz? Happy as I am that you've taken that next step in your relationship... not, are you going to haul yourself out of that bed and get your ass downstairs? We have got hungry masses downstairs demanding alien themed fats and carbohydrates, and I refuse to face them alone."
"We're working today?"
"That would be, yeah," Maria rolled her eyes.
"Okay, Maria. Can you give me ten? I need to shower and dress."

* * *

"Hi, my name's Liz and I'll be your waitress this morning," she delivered her memorized greeting to the old man sitting in one of her booths.
"You have quite a selection here," the man kept studying the menu. "What can you recommend?"
"Well," Liz turned the page for him. "The burgers are all pretty good, if you like them, that is. But I know that our heavenly hash special is popular."
"I think that's more my style than a burger," he nodded. "Especially for breakfast."
"Okay," she wrote his order down on her pad. "Can I get you anything else with that? Coke? Smoothie?" She looked around the room, wondering where Max might be. When she was working the early shift, he always came in for breakfast. She hoped he wouldn't be too long. After what they had shared last night, her heart, no her soul wanted to see him again.
"Just a coffee, please," the man handed her his menu. "Black. No sugar."
"Sure," Liz nodded. "I'll be right back with your coffee. Your meal will be a little longer, I'm afraid."

"Michael not working this morning?" Liz asked as she clipped her order to the carousel.
"Just Jose," Maria shook her head. Her eyes narrowed as she looked at her friend. "Are you all right?"
"Yeah, why?"
"It's just..."
"I wonder where he is?" Liz looked toward the front door.
"Who? Romeo? Relax. He'll be here. He probably met up with the guys. You know. Bragging. About last night."
"What?" Liz turned and faced her friend. "You know he would never..."
"Table eight wants you," Maria nodded at the heavyset man waving in their direction.
"I can't believe you would say such a thing," Liz picked up the coffeepot, a spare mug and turned toward the man attracting her attention.
"What can I say," Maria shrugged her shoulders at her retreating friend. "He's a guy."

* * *

The elderly gentleman attracted Liz's attention. She saw that he had eaten his meal.
"Either he wants desert, or the bill," Liz shrugged.
"Or a refill," Maria nodded.
"Yes, sir?" Liz stepped up next to his table. "Can I get you anything else?"
"No, thank you, Liz. Just the bill."
"Okay," Liz pulled out her pad and picked through the pages to his order. "So that was the Heavenly Hash special and a cup of coffee." She scribbled the figures she knew by heart onto the bill, and tore it from her pad, handing it to the man.
"Excuse me, miss?" the man called as Liz turned away. "Uhm, Liz? You've got the price wrong."
"I have?" Liz turned back with a frown.
"Yeah," he nodded and pointed to the board. "It says five ninety nine up there, but you've written six forty nine."
Liz looked from her written bill to the board and back again.
"I'm sorry," she shook her head, taking the bill back. She corrected the figures and handed him the corrected figures.
"I guess you were daydreaming, huh?"
"Yeah," Liz smiled. "I do apologize, sir."
"That's okay," the man placed a ten dollar bill on the table. "Time gets away from me, too, sometimes. I'm always finding myself in a strange dream."
"Right," Liz nodded with a frown.
"Thank you for the recommendation, Liz. The meal was lovely. My compliments to the chef."
"Of course," Liz picked up the money. "I'll just..."
"That's okay. You can keep it." He placed his hat on his head.
"Thank you," Liz smiled. "Please come again."
"Of course," the man tapped his fingers to the brim of his hat. "I hope to see you soon, Elizabeth."

* * *

Liz sat by the counter with her chin propped up by her hand.
"What's up babe?" Maria asked. "I thought you'd still be floating after your journey through outer space last night."
"Can you say that a little louder," Liz clapped her hand over Maria's mouth and looked to the other end of the counter where her father was pouring some coffee. "I don't think my dad quite heard you."
"Relax," Maria shook her complaint away. "He never heard, okay? So what's up?"
"He hasn't been in yet."
"Liz, get a grip. Okay? He's probably met up with some friends."
"What friends?" Liz stared at her friend. "Maria, there's only two places he would be. And you know that when I'm working, he's always here."
"Well, relax, Chica," Maria smirked. "Here he comes now."
Liz turned to the door, her heart beating wildly.
Kyle entered the café, and started walking toward them with a smile on his face. Liz looked behind him, expecting to see Max but there was no sign of him. Kyle stepped up next to Liz and pulled her into an embrace, trying to capture her lips.
"Kyle!" Liz started to push him away when he tried to kiss her. "What do you think you're doing?"
"I'm trying to kiss my girlfriend," he frowned at her. "What do you think you're doing?"
"Girlfriend?" Liz spluttered. "What are you talking about, Kyle?"
"Uh, Liz?" Kyle looked confused. He glanced at Maria and then back at Liz. "Has something happened since last night?"
"Liz," Maria put her arm around her. "Are you okay?"
"What is up with you two?" Liz demanded. "First, Maria gets all weird on me because Max and I finally took that next step in our relationship. Then she flips 'cause I told her that he asked me to marry him. And now Kyle pretends were still together."
"Who's Max?" Kyle glared at Liz, his face flushed with anger.
"What?" Liz blinked.
"Yeah, Liz?" Maria narrowed her eyes. Her face broke into a pout. "When you said, beyond, and marriage, I assumed you meant with Kyle. Who's this Max guy, and how long have you been holding out on me?"
"Wait," Kyle snapped. "What do you mean, beyond? Marriage? What the fuck's going on?"
"She told me that the two of you did the wild thing last night."
"Not with me, she didn't," Kyle glared at Liz. "I've never even got past first base. Are you trying to tell me you stayed all virginal with me but you put out for some guy none of us even knows?"
"Max," she grabbed Maria's sleeve. "You know, Max Evans. My soul mate. The guy we've lived through two years of hell for. Max Max."
"Who the hell is Max Evans?" Maria and Kyle asked, looking at each other.
The bell above the door rang out. Liz turned to the door hoping to see Max come in and her friends all shout surprise at her, or something. It was a surprise all right. Through the door, with a stupid grin on his face, walked Alex Whitman. The world went black as the floor raced up to meet Liz's head.

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Of Cabbages and Kings, Part 2

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Hi everyone :)

Thanks for such a positive response to the start of my story. When I first thought of this concept (ages and ages ago) I knew it had the potential to become a good story if only I could come up with a story to weave onto it. I think I have found that story.

It's great to be back writing, and great to have your feedback again. A big hello to all you who followed me through my previous tales, and a big welcome to all my new readers.

Itzstacie - Well, if I revealed too much too soon, you miught not come back! :wink:

BehrObsession - Why is it every old man in my stories immediately arouses suspicion? :wink:

AJK001 - Glad the seatbelt is ready, but I doubt you will need it for this story as it was for BRH. But this story will have it's moments, like when.... ooops. Better keep that a secret. :wink:

youre my dreamgirl - Timeline will be revealed tonight. Can't you guess? :wink: And yes. Her head is spinning and will keep spinning for some time, I'm afraid. :)

mareli - Well, as Max doesn't exist (apparently), how can FMax exist? :wink: As to where Max is... Who's Max? LOL

silverwolf - I'm sorry that my NC17 warnings put you off somewhat. In future, I'll put the warning at the top. My intention was to warn readers so that those who don't like it can skip it. Oh well. Anyway, I'm glad you think I have written this well. I have had a lot of practice, and have such a discerning audience! :wink:

polar vixen - Well, I figured you were about to e-maiul, so I beat you to the punch! :wink: Glad that I have made your Fridays special again. :) :wink:

Smac - Well, when I wote that chapter, I had to make sure I dropped no hints that Max was going to turn out to me a dream. Like when Liz keeps asking where 'he' is, and Maria says 'he' is bragging to his buddies, etc. SO, you are supposed to be confused. :wink:

smokie - Well, as you know, confusion and me walk hand in hand, along with cliff hangers and evil machinations and ... :wink: Toture? Moi?
Nope. The old guy was not Max. Max who?

roswellluver - Thank you :)

isis7777 - Thank you. :) Glad you appreciated the NC17. I had to have BordersInsanity triple check it for mw. Well, you know my previous confessions about writing NC17. Glad to see that I hit the mark. :) Who is this Max everyone keeps talking about? :wink:

Zevrillion - Thank you. :) Oh, and Skot om dig. :D :wink:

MamaDee52 - It's interesting that when questioned, many people did not know where that poem comes from. :wink: As for the tune, yup, one of my favs too. :) And nope. Not an alternate universe. If I knew who Max was, maybe I could turn him into a fairy godfather. LOL Dallas? I'd need a shower scene and I already did one of those. :wink:

alienmom - :) Glad to have you aboard from the start. :) Enjoy the ride, though this one is more gentle than BRH. :) No divergent timelines in this storie, sorry to say. ;)

TrueLoveConquersAll - Well, I hope that I can live up to your expectations. :) Have you read any of my other work? Enjoy the ride. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Wow. :wink: Well, I'm glad that you enjoyed that first pert. And I hope you continue to enhoy. Hey. I'm always open to bribery, especially where home made fudge a d Oreo cookies are involved (ESPECIALLY Oreo cookies.)

Scottie - Well, wonder no more. I have been working on this for ages now. I managed to tie myselkf in a knot once or twice with the plot, but it's ironed out, now. Feel free to emial the speculations if you don;t want to post them. I'd love to see where your leaning, to see if my misdirection is pointing you in the right (wrong) direction. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Ah. Did Liz go back in time or did time go back on Liz? Wow, now there's a real para-wotsit. :wink: Max doesn't exist. ;) Or does he?

cherie - Glad you liked it. Hope you enjoy more of my 'time-trippin' as I reveal it all. :wink:

LTL - Somehow, I doubt the TV show would have been as explicit regarding the 'cementing' (did you know there's a type of cement called granolithic? It's stronger. :wink: ) as I was. Yup, start as I mean to go on. That's my moto. That and 'Be mean'. :wink: So, you think you know who the king part refers to, do you?> And the cabbage? Hmmm.... Yup. You have me sussed. :wink: Point taken about the NC17 warning. :)

kitkat405 - Welcome. I hope you enjoy the rest, and that I will continue to see you name appearing. Have you read my other stuff?

BelevnDreamsToo - 'Cause I missed you once (or twice) I'll make up for it here. :wink: Thanks, and glad you liked it. :) LOL Hope to see you soon. :)


Well, as you all you 'regulars' are aware, don;t put too much stock in any comment I throw away in my feedback to your feedback. Right guys and gals? :)

Once I get going, I will bring back my "Previously on Roswell..." as I seem to remember that many of you appreciated it. :)

Okay, on with the story. Now. The question you are all asking is... Where Is Max?...



These Dreams
Heart


Spare a little candle
Save some light for me
Figures up ahead
Moving in the trees
White skin in linen
Perfume on my wrist
And the full moon that hangs over
These dreams in the mist

Darkness on the edge
Shadows where I stand
I search for the time
On a watch with no hands
I want to see you clearly
Come closer than this
But all I remember
Are the dreams in the mist

These dreams go on when I close my eyes
Every second of the night I live another life
These dreams that sleep when it's cold outside
Every moment I'm awake the further I'm away

Is it cloak n dagger
Could it be spring or fall
I walk without a cut
Through a stained glass wall
Weaker in my eyesight
The candle in my grip
And words that have no form
Are falling from my lips

These dreams go on when I close my eyes
Every second of the night I live another life
These dreams that sleep when it's cold outside
Every moment I'm awake the further I'm away

There's something out there
I can't resist
I need to hide away from the pain
There's something out there
I can't resist

The sweetest song is silence
That I've ever heard
Funny how your feet
In dreams never touch the earth
In a wood full of princes
Freedom is a kiss
But the prince hides his face
From dreams in the mist

These dreams go on when I close my eyes
Every second of the night I live another life
These dreams that sleep when it's cold outside
Every moment I'm awake the further I'm away


Of Cabbages And Kings

Part 2

“Kyle, you can’t just dump her. Not when she’s feeling like this!” Maria snapped. “It was obviously just a dream, okay? Haven’t you had dreams involving other women?”
“Sure I have,” he nodded, his anger still burning in his face. “But as soon as I wake up, I don’t announce to everyone that I scored with her and that she asked me to marry her, especially in front of Liz.”
“It’s not everyone, Kyle. It was just you and me.”
“And me, sorta,” Alex nodded. He looked confused. “Who exactly did Liz dream about?”
“Keep out of this, Whitman,” Kyle growled. “And you know what I mean, DeLuca. You saw it in her face, how disappointed she was when she realized she was still a virgin and this Max guy was just a dream. Shit. I bet she’s dreaming about banging him again now.”
They all turned to look at Liz, still unconscious on the bed they had carried her to after her earlier collapse. Her face was contorted in misery while tears continued to rain from her eyes.
“Or not,” Maria sighed. She turned back to Kyle. “Look. The dream must have been just really vivid, okay? Realistic. We both know that this Max Evans guy doesn’t even exist, okay? Give her some time to come to terms with this, and everything will be all right. I mean, this is Liz were talking about. Not one of those mindless bimbos who are all boobs and blonde you normally go out with.”

“What’s the date?” Liz groaned from her bed.
She sounded distant.
“Liz, chica,” Maria was at her side in an instant. Her hand swept across her forehead, sweeping her tangled brown hair from her face. “Are you okay?”
“Yeah,” Liz nodded. Her face was still pale and her bloodshot eyes were rimmed with tears. “What’s the date today?”
“It’s September the nineteenth,” Alex stood on the other side of her bed. “Why?”
Although she glanced at him, Liz ignored Alex’s question. She closed her eyes and nodded.
“Maria,” she looked back to her friend. “Could you pass me my journal?”
“Sure, babe,” Maria walked over to Liz chest of drawers and opened the bottom drawer. She pulled out a thick leather bound journal and handed it to Liz.
“Not this one,” Liz shook her head as she leafed through the blank pages of the book. “The one that’s hidden behind the loose brick, in the wall over there.” She pointed toward the far wall.
Maria crossed to the wall that Liz had indicated, and started to run her hands along the brickwork.
“Uhm,” Maria called. “There’s nothing here. No loose bricks, nothing.”
Liz closed her eyes again and gave a sad shake of her head. A tear slid from the corner of her eye and followed the path left by the score or more of her previous tears. She finally slammed the journal in front of her shut.
“What were you hoping to find?” Maria asked as she sat beside Liz and wrapped her arms around her. Her voice was filled with sympathy.
“I got shot,” Liz squeezed her eyelids together. More tears rolled down her cheeks. Her speech was punctuated with harsh intakes of breath. “In the diner, today. At least… that’s what happened in my dream. I would have died except Max, he was there, and he… he came up and healed me.”
“This is ridiculous,” Kyle snapped.
While Maria glared at him, Liz ignored Kyle and continued.
“Afterwards, he told me that he was this…” she pointed upwards, mimicking the signal Max had used for her. “An alien.”
“Alien?” three voices cried with dismay.
Maria backed away.
“And he did this reverse connection thing on me… and I saw his soul. It was beautiful. I knew from that moment, I would never love anyone as much as I loved him and that no one would ever love me like he did.”
“That’s it,” Kyle rose. “It’s bad enough that she dreamed of this guy. But an alien? I’m outa here. Don’t bother to call, Parker. I’m not dating no god-damned alien whore freak.” Kyle stormed from her room and slammed the door shut behind him.
“Good riddance,” Alex murmured.
“But it didn’t really happen,” Liz looked up to Maria. “Max isn’t here, is he? He didn’t put a force on me. It was all just a dream.”
As she started to sob again, Maria gathered her friend in her arms.
“Perhaps it’s just as well,” Maria stroked Liz’s long, dark hair. “I mean, if the dream of this guy affects you this bad, what would the reality do to you?”

* * *

Alex pushed in through the door of the Crashdown Café and, ignoring the ringing out of the Close Encounters theme, slid into an empty booth. He glanced around the room, taking in who was in, and who was not. Maria came to serve him almost instantly.
“How’s she been?” Alex asked as he looked over at Liz who was serving another table. His eyes showed his concern, amongst the other feelings for her that he wore on his sleeve.
“Moody. Miserable. Moody. Oh yeah, she goes to bed really early now, hoping to have that dream again. Oh, and did I say she was moody?”
“I think so,” Alex nodded. “Want me to talk to her?”
“Be my guest, Alex. Just don’t expect to have any kind of coherent conversation with her.”
“It’s been three days, Maria. It was just a damned dream. It’s time she forgot about it.”
“I found her staring at a locker at school today,” Maria shook her head. “Guess whose it was? In her dream, I mean.”
They both looked over to Liz, serving the three football players. She was taking down their orders with a blank, expressionless face. She showed no reaction to their comments, or their invitations to go out on a date with them. Kyle had, as yet, neglected to tell anyone why he had broken up with Liz.
“If that will be all, gentleman,” they heard Liz tell them in a single toned voice. There was no warmth to her voice, no smile. She was so unlike the Liz everyone knew. “Your order will be ready shortly.” She slapped the stub on their table and took their order to the kitchen.
“For someone who goes to bed early,” Alex observed, “she doesn’t look like she’s getting much sleep.”
“I never said she was sleeping,” Maria rolled her eyes. “She lays there in bed and just remembers all of the dream moments. It’s like she has it all committed to memory or something.”
“Maybe she should write it all down. It would make a great TV show. All that angst.”
“Who would believe all that?” Maria shook her head. “Besides, you haven’t heard the half of what happened. I mean, ‘I’ haven’t heard the half of it.”

* * *

From his vantage point, Jeff Parker watched as his daughter moved around the evening crowd, serving them in what was definitely not a Liz like manner. Something was clearly bothering his normally bright and witty little girl, but he couldn’t put his finger on it. Naturally, being a concerned parent, he had his suspicions. Suspicions that he was almost too frightened to contemplate.
“Maria,” Jeff called her over.
He knew that as her best friend, Maria would know everything about his daughter. He also knew that she would never betray her confidence, but he had to ask someone. Who better than Maria DeLuca?
“Yes, Mr. P.?”
“Is Liz okay?” he nodded in her direction where she was serving another table in a robot like fashion that had become her normal.
“Oh, absolutely,” Maria lied with an emphatic nod of her head.
“Are you sure?” Jeff queried. He nodded at his daughter. “‘Cause that is not the Liz that I know. You hear so many stories. I’ve read all the leaflets. I know all the signs. Is Liz doing drugs?”
“What?” Maria looked surprised. She shook her head violently. “Liz? Drugs? No. Nu-uh.”
“Well, something’s bothering her.” His eyes widened. “Wait. She’s not… she’s not…”
“No way,” Maria laughed. “Definitely not, unless dreams count.”
“What?”
“Nothing. Look, Mr. P. Liz isn’t on drugs and she’s not pregnant. Anyway, her and Kyle never… and besides, they broke up last weekend.”
“Ah,” Jeff nodded, relieved to hear that his daughter was neither a junkie nor pregnant. “I guess she’s just upset about breaking up with Kyle, then.”
“Yeah,” Maria agreed. It was easier to let him believe that than the truth. How could she explain that Liz was upset because the man of her dreams was just that? A dream.
“Maybe I should give her some time off,” he studied his daughter closely. “She looks tired. Maybe she could use the time to try and patch things up with Kyle.”
“No,” Maria shook her head. “Trust me, Mr. P. Liz is better off here with the people she loves. You know, keeping busy.”
“Okay, Maria,” he ran his hand through his hair. “But if things don’t start getting back to normal soon, I may have to take matters into my own hands.”

* * *

“Liz,” Alex called as she walked past his table. “Could I have a word?”
“Sure, Alex. What’s up?” She pulled out her order pad. “What can I get you?”
“Sit down,” he indicated the seat across from him.
“I’m kind of busy, Alex,” she looked around for a customer to serve.
“Please?”
Liz sat down and sighed, shaking her head. “What’s up, Alex?”
“It’s just… since, you know, the other day, you’ve been… It’s like you’ve been somewhere else.”
“Oh,” Liz shrugged. “Well… you know… sorry.”
“No, no. It’s okay. I understand. It’s just…” He waved his hands in the air. “Maybe you should try living in reality again.”
“What do you mean?”
“I mean, maybe you should stop trying to live in your dream world, and live in this one. Max doesn’t exist. He never has, he never will.”
“You don’t understand, Alex,” Liz’s face fell. Her eyes filled with a momentary disappointment in her friend. “That dream meant something. It just has to.”
“It was only a dream, Liz. A really, really realistic dream. Look, why don’t you go out with me tonight? On a date.”
Liz looked at her friend for a moment.
“I can’t, Alex. I’m sorry. You’re a good friend, but that’s just all you are. A very good friend. And I can’t go out on a date. Not with you and not with anyone. I need to be unattached for when Max shows up, ‘cause he’s just too nice to ask me out if I was already seeing someone.”

* * *

“Have you seen Liz?” Maria was rushed off of her feet. The café was at its busiest with the lunchtime crowd and they were a member of staff down. “She hasn’t shown for her shift and it’s Saturday afternoon.”
“Sorry,” Alex shrugged with a shake of his head. “I haven’t seen her since the other day when she turned me down for a date.”
“I tried to warn you Alex,” Maria could see his disappointment. “She just doesn’t see you that way. She looks on you like her brother, or a cousin.”
“I’m not going to give up, Maria,” Alex shook his head. “You know what she said? She said that she needs to keep unattached so she can date this Max guy when he shows up. It’s been over a week, Maria. She should be over this by now.”
“What can I say?” Maria shrugged. “Look, maybe you should find someone else. I hear Kimberly is interested in you.” Maria placed a sympathetic hand over Alex’s.
“I want Liz.”
“And so do I,” Maria growled. “And, boy, when I find her, I’m going to…”
“Miss! Miss!” an annoyed customer waved at Maria. “I’ve been waiting here like, forever.”
“Coming,” Maria faked a big smile. “Liz is so dead,” she hissed to Alex through the side of her mouth.

* * *

Still dressed in her alien themed waitress uniform, Maria entered the public library. She approached the main desk.
“I don’t suppose Liz is here, is she?” she asked the spectacled woman sorting through an old rolodex file.
“Uh-huh,” the woman nodded. “Science section.”
“Where else,” Maria shook her head. This was a good sign. Perhaps Liz had finally realized just how stupid she had been behaving, and was now making a conscious effort to catch up in her schoolwork. “Thanks.”
“Don’t mention it,” the woman shrugged.
She returned to inserting a new card into her filing system as Maria headed toward the science section of the library. There, sitting at a table, surrounded by a mountain of reference books, Liz sat with her head buried in her arms. Her dark hair cascaded over her head and arms like a curtain. From the way her head and shoulders were shaking, Maria knew that Liz was crying.
“Hey,” Maria soothed as she sat next to her and wrapped her arms around her friend. “It’s okay Liz. I’m here.” All traces of her anger evaporated.
Liz turned from the table and clung to Maria, crying into her shoulder.
“Schoolwork?” Maria asked, indicating the books, when Liz had calmed herself down.
“No,” Liz shook her head. “I was just doing some research.” She showed Maria her notepad. Figures and equations filled over twenty pages of it. “I got all the statistics of the latest space ship designs…”
“Liz,” Maria frowned.
“And the distance to the Whirlwind galaxy. With our current technology, it would take me…” she leafed through her notebook while tears dropped onto it, joining the stains of earlier tears. “Three thousand eight hundred and forty seven years to get there.”
“Liz, you have to stop doing this to yourself. You can’t live your life chasing after someone that appeared to you in a dream.”
“I suppose you’re right,” Liz sniffed. “It’s just… it was so…”
“I know, Liz,” Maria hugged her again.
“You know,” Liz wiped the tears from her eyes. “The only good thing about this all being a dream is that Alex is still alive, and so is Grandma Claudia.”
“Uh, Liz?” Maria leaned back. “Who is Grandma Claudia?”
“I don’t have a Grandma Claudia?” Liz stared at Maria before she started to cry again. “You mean I dreamed her, too?” She collapsed once more into Maria’s comforting arms as she surrendered to another bout of hysterical sobbing.

* * *
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Part 3

Post by WR »

Hi everyone,

Okay, the secret's out. I deliberately left out the credit to my poen, to help keep some confusion going. But there have been enough remarks to warrent it's credits now. The title (and the verse) come from "The Walrus And The Carpenter", by Lewis Carroll. It's from Through the Looking-Glass and
What Alice Found There.

Doesn't the week go quick? It seems like only yesterday that I posted part 2 and left you with the horrible news that Grandma Claudia was as real as Max Evans. :(

Well, tonight, I start to mke things a little clearer. Well, in Wayne terms, anyway. But I bet you will want next week to go as fast as last week. :wink:

Thank you all so very much for the feedback yoyu left me. I love seeing your comments, and especially your guesses and assumptions about the direction this will take and what is going on. No one is even close! :twisted:

AJK001 - Well, the road will not be too long but it will cetainly twist. Oh yes. Certainly twist! :evil:

roswellluver - It certainly looks that way. Do the songs give it away? :wink:

Itzstacie - Nope. No Grandma Claudia. Apparently. LOL

smokie - Because I can! :twisted: What? I threw a crumb?? I'd better re-edit my written chapters to make sure this doesn't happen again! LOL But then again, can you be sure that what you imagine to be true is?
Didn't anyone else think that Alex had a secret soft spot for Liz?

polar vixen - Hmmmm.... Proof of aliens existance, huh? Now where could she go for that? :wink:

TrueLoveConquersAll - Yup, cleared al the decks so that when Max does show up, Liz will be waiting with open arms. Now, if only Max would show up. :wink:

Dreamer - Ah - another idea for a song I could use - "Hey, you, get out of my dreams, and into my car." :wink:

Devil Kitty - Well, she certainly hasn't found a bottle with "Drink Me" on its label. ;)

kitkat405 - Hmmmm.... So you see Tess in my story already? Is the part of Tessophobia? LOL. Not even Tess has made an appearance. Yet.

frenchkiss70 - Back in time? Wouldn't the others notice how she looks older? And alternate timeline? Maybe, but how did she get there? Or even time travelling? How did she get sent back? Hmm....

Zevrillion - Sorry, I only speak those words, taught to be by a young lady from Sweden from Waayyyyy up north. But I can hazard a guess as to what you wrote. :) Yup. You won't find too many answers yet. Too many questions to ask still. :wink:

MamaDee52 - Well, it's definately alternate. :wink: Maybe I should pick up on the trend and post on alternate weeks. :wink: As for the discombobulation, it will pass. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Eventually.

cherie - Not confused? Not confused? Note to self. Increase the confusion factors in my stories. :wink:

mareli - Well, glad to see that it still works on some people! :wink:

Craig Beatty - Hello, welcome, and I hope you enjpoy this as well as my other stories. :) Ahh! Someone is already looking forward to the Skins and Kivar. But everyone still looks to the alternate dimension/timeline. :) Someone wrote a fic a whil ago that had Dreams in the title. I was so scared they were using the same premise. Well, if Max doesn;t exist, how can Isabel? :wink:

BelevnDreamsToo - Glad you liked it! :) Hmmm.. Interesting take on Max's reaction. I wonder if that is really what was happening? As for Max chaning the timeline to stop Liz from getting shot, how is it that Liz retained her memory of it all?

LTL - I love how Grandma Claudia, appearing in only a single episode, became such a well loved woman. Yup. Super duper eveil mode coming up! :wink: As for the songs, it's a little of both, but mainly, I find songs (usually hear them on the radio and think - that would fit this chapter) to fit the chapters.

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Yup. I don't think Liz wants to go on much longer, either. Liz is just as confused and depressed as you are. LOL Brink Max BACK to Liz? But he was just a dream. Apparently. :wink:

Scottie - Hmmm... Another wrong place and time assumption. I wonder what you will all think when the truth, which is out there, somewhere, come out? :wink:

BehrObsession - OOops. Did I state the category of this as nbeing Max and Liz? Silly me. My mistake. :wink: :evil: How can it be Max and Liz if Max doesn't even exist. Damn. Another crumb.


Okay, enough of my ramblings. Lets get on with the confusion and torture.... er.... my story.



Stuck in the Moment
U2


I'm not afraid of anything in this world
There's nothing you can throw at me that I haven't already heard
I'm just trying to find a decent melody
A song that I can sing in my own company
I never thought you were a fool
But darling, look at you
You gotta stand up straight, carry your own weight
These tears are going nowhere, baby
You've got to get yourself together
You've got stuck in a moment and now you can't get out of it
Don't say that later will be better now you're stuck in a moment
And you can't get out of it
I will not forsake, the colors that you bring
The nights you filled with fireworks
They, they left you with nothing
I am still enchanted by the light you brought to me
I listen through your ears, and through your eyes I can see
And you are such a fool
To worry like you do
I know it's tough, and you can never get enough
Of what you don't really need now... my oh my
You've got to get yourself together
You've got stuck in a moment and now you can't get out of it
Oh love look at you now
You've got yourself stuck in a moment and now you can't get out of it
I was unconscious, half asleep
The water is warm till you discover how deep...
I wasn't jumping... for me it was a fall
It's a long way down to nothing at all
You've got to get yourself together
You've got stuck in a moment and now you can't get out of it
Don't say that later will be better now
You're stuck in a moment and you can't get out of it

And if the night runs over
And if the day won't last
And if our way should falter
Along the stony pass
And if the night runs over / And if, and if the night runs over
And if the day won't last / And if the day won't last
And if our way should falter / And if your way should falter
Along the stony pass / Along that stony pass
It's just a moment
This time will pass


Part 3

"Why does she do this to me?" Maria groaned from behind her steering wheel as she cruised the streets of Roswell looking for Liz. She had been missing since breakfast and it was already dark. "I mean, why can't she be normal and have an unhealthy infatuation with somebody real? Like Justin Timberlake."
She had tried all of the haunts that she knew Liz would visit. She had already been to the library. That was her first port of call, because this was where Liz spent most of her free time. Especially since she had started her search for a way to reach this planet with the strange name that she was always talking about. She was so sure that she would find this Max there. But the library was closed, so she couldn't be in there. She tried the museum next, but as with all the municipal buildings, it was locked up. She tried the book store in the mall and even the observatory over in the park. As with everywhere else, there was no sign of Liz. Finally, she tried the one place she knew that she wouldn't be, but hoped she was. She knocked firmly on the door.

"Maria DeLuca," the middle aged man who answered greeted her. He touched two fingers to the Stetson that he wore. "What brings you on over?"
"Hi, Sheriff Valenti," Maria nodded. "Is Kyle here?"
"No," he shook his head. "He went out on a date."
"A date?" Maria perked up. "Is it with Liz?"
"No," the sheriff shook his head. "I believe it was with Vicky. You know, Vicky Delaney? Why?"
"I'm just looking for Liz," Maria's shoulders fell. "I was hoping she was here."
"Nope. Sorry. Want me to ask my deputies to keep an eye out for her?"
"Oh, no," Maria shook her head. "You know what? She's probably at home by now. Thanks anyway."
"No problem," he again touched his finger to the brim of his hat. "You have a nice night now."
"I will, Sheriff Valenti. Thanks. You too."
"Drive safely, now. Arrive alive."
Back in her Volkswagen Jetta, Maria slumped behind her steering wheel.
"Where would I go if I dreamed of someone so wonderful, that I couldn't let go? A dream so real that I knew where he lived and..."
Maria sat bolt upright, her eyes widened. She started her car, and pulled out into the road. Ten minutes later, she turned into Murray Lane. Her lights picked her out in the gloom. There was Liz, sitting on the side of the road, with her arms wrapped around her knees, staring at the large corner house as she rocked to and fro. The house was empty; it's windows darkened. Illuminated by a street lamp, a large board advertising that it had recently been leased.

She parked her Jetta a little up the road. With a sad shake of her head, Maria climbed out of her car and walked to join her friend. She sat next to Liz on the curb.
"Liz."
"Maria," Liz mumbled.
Maria placed her arm around her shoulder.
"Are you okay?"
"No," her friend sobbed. The tear tracks that marred her eyes, visible even in the darkness, gave evidence that she had been crying all day.
"Want to talk about it?" Maria sat next to her friend.
"No."
"Liz," Maria sighed. "We've been through this before. You can't..."
"He's not real, is he?"
"Excuse me."
"Max. He's not real. I thought that my dream was a warning; you know that he was going to come, and I'd been chosen to help him. But that's all he is, isn't he. A dream."
"I'm so sorry, Liz. That he isn't real, I mean. I know how much the idea of him meant to you."
"What am I going to do, Maria? It was so real. I really can't imagine myself being with anyone else. I'll just never love anyone as much as I love him. Or rather, the dream of him."
"Then you need to find someone who will settle for that Liz. Someone who won't care that you can never love him as much as he loves you."
"You mean Alex."
"Is it that obvious?"
"I might be a little flakey right now, Maria, but I'm not blind. He's been in love with me, like, since grade nine."
"Eight, actually."
"Whatever. Maria, he's like a brother. I can't date him."
"Why not give it a try? He's okay with this whole dream thing, and who knows? It may even work out."
Liz stared at Maria as she wiped the tears from her eyes.
"Oh, Maria," she sobbed. "What am I going to do?"
"First? Let's get you home. Have you had anything to eat?"

* * *

"Hey, Liz," Jeff Parker smiled at his daughter as she descended the staircase in a tight black dress and matching pumps. "Are you going somewhere?"
"Dad," Liz rolled her eyes, smiling at her father. "You know it's the school dance tonight."
"Oh yeah," he nodded, feigning sudden realization. "Who's the lucky guy? Are you back with Kyle?"
"No," Liz shook her head. "Alex."
"Alex, huh? Good choice," Jeff approved.
"Why do you say that?"
"'Cause Alex won't try to do anything clever. Plus, he can't drive which means you are. I trust you over those other guys any day."
"Dad," Liz laughed. "Quit it."
"Just teasing, Lizzie."
"I know."
"You have a good time. See you later."
"You know what? You don't have to wait up."
"Well, you know me. I'm going to, anyway."
"See you later."
"Bye, munchkin."
He watched Liz as she went to his car, climbed in and started the engine.
"She seems out of that funk at last," Nancy came up behind Jeff to watch Liz leave.
"Why do you say that?" Jeff wrapped his arm around his wife.
"I saw her smile at you. I heard her laugh. I think Alex asking her out was just the tonic she needed."
"Don't count on it, hun," Jeff sighed. "For all her smiles, for all her laughter, they never once reached her eyes. She's faking it all."

* * *

Maria stood by the door to the High School auditorium, watching the people as they entered. Periodically, she would scan the kids already inside, in case she missed who she was looking for.
"Maria," Brandon, one of her classmates called. "Care to dance?"
Maria looked around and then turned to Brandon.
"Sure," she nodded. She had always liked Brandon.
Brandon led her to the dance floor, and leaving a respectable distance between them, they started to dance to the ballad that the band had just started to play. Maria caught herself wishing he would close the distance.
"You know Maria," Brandon finally spoke after two verses. "I've been kinda noticing you lately, sorta."
"Kinda?" Maria teased. "Sorta?" Her heart started to pound.
"Yeah," he chuckled. "And I was wondering, kinda..."
"Sorta," Maria smiled.
"You're funny, Maria. I like that. I was wondering if you..."
Maria's phone started to ring. She rolled her eyes, and looked at Brandon.
"Hold that thought," Maria pressed the button and holding her phone to her ear, turned away from her dance partner. "Alex! This had better be good or I'm tearing you a new..."
"Where's Liz?"
"What do you mean, where's Liz? She supposed to be with you."
"She was supposed to pick me up, like, an hour ago. She never showed up. I called her cell phone, but there's no answer. I called her at home and now her folks are freaking out."
"That was hardly a good move, Alex," Maria groaned.
"I know that, now."
"Maybe she, like stopped somewhere on the way?"
"Maria? What for? Face it. She's got cold feet and is probably going with someone else."
"She hasn't turned up here, Alex."
"She hasn't?" There was a silent pause. "Where can she be?"
"Stay put, Alex," Maria closed her eyes and sighed. "I'll come and get you."
"Okay. Oh, and Maria? Sorry."
"Ah, don't sweat it."
"I'm sooo sorry, Brandon," Maria frowned, putting her phone away. "Something's come up. My friend Liz has gone missing."
"You mean Psycho Liz?" Brandon started to laugh. "Maybe she's out trying to pick up more aliens."
"Yeah," she flashed a fake smile. "And Kyle's Valenti's got a big mouth."

* * *

"Any ideas where she might be?" Alex asked as he climbed into Maria's Jetta.
Maria stared at Alex in amazement. Her eyes drifted up and down his body.
"What?" he frowned.
"Is that what you were going to wear for your date with Liz tonight?"
"What's wrong with it?" He looked down at his checked flannel shirt and his baggy pants with his chain hanging from his belt and into his pocket. He did not look like he was dressed for a date. "What?"
"You so do not deserve her," Maria shook her head.
"Look, do you know where she is, or not?"
"Yeah," Maria was still shaking her head. "I think so."
"Well, what are we waiting for? Let's go get her, and we can finish the date."
Maria looked over her shoulder, and pulled off into the road, heading back toward the other side of town.
"Can't be the library, or the museum," Alex considered through narrowed eyes. "They're closed. So is the mall now. Wait!" he spotted the street sign. "Murray Lane? What are we doing down here? Who lives on Murray Lane?"
"Max does," Maria sighed.
"But Max..."
"I know, okay!" Maria spat. "But Liz thinks he's real. She was here just last week, staring at his house."
"But it's not his house!"
"Alex, I swear, I am going to brain you."

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Fallen
Sara McLachlan


Heaven Bend to take my hand,
And lead me through the fire
Be the long awaited answer
To a long and painful fight
Truth be told I tried my best
But somewhere long the way
I got caught up in all there was to offer
But the cost was so much more than I could bear

Though I've tried I've fallen
I have sunk so low
I messed up
Better I should know
So don't come round here and
Tell me I told you so

We all begin out with good intent
When love is raw and young
We believe that we can change ourselves
The past can be undone
But we carry on our back the burdens time always reveals
In the lonely light of morning
In the wound that would not heal
It's the bitter taste of losing everything
I've held so dear

Though I've tried I've fallen
I have sunk so low
I messed up
Better I should know
So don't come round here and
Tell me I told you so

Heaven bend to take my hand
I've nowhere left to turn
I'm lost to these I thought were friends
To everyone I know
Oh they turn their heads embarrassed
Pretend that they don't see
That it's one wrong step one slip before you know it
And there doesn't seem away to be revealed

Though I've tried I've fallen
I have sunk so low
I messed up
Better I should know
So don't come round here and
Tell me I told you so
I messed up
Better I should know
So don't come round here and
Tell me I told you so


The sun that rose that morning found Liz, still dressed up for her missed date with Alex, sitting in her father's car at the base of Vazquez Rocks. She had hardly moved since she had arrived the previous evening. On her way to collect Alex, she realized that she could not go through with a charade. She drove instead, and ended up here. Supported by her elbow against the car door, her head lay in her hand as she stared at the prominent features of the strangely shaped peaks. Her heart ached. Her soul pined. Every breath was a pure torment, sent to remind her that she was not with her soul mate, who was somewhere out among the cosmos. Was he perhaps feeling the same sense of despair as her? The passenger door opened, someone climbed in to the car and slammed the door shut behind them. Liz didn't even blink.
"Liz," Maria sighed.
"Maria," Liz intoned. Her eyes never left the rocks.
"What are we going to do with you?" she sighed.
"Sorry, Maria," Liz shrugged. Her voice was low and sad. "I just couldn't do it. Is Alex mad at me?"
"Ask him yourself."
The door behind her opened, someone climbed into the car and the door closed again.
"Sorry, Alex," Liz stated. Her voice indicated that she did not care if he believed her or not. She still hadn't moved at all.
"Your parents are freaking out, Liz. They've called the Sheriff's department and everything. You should have at least called them."
"I just wanted to be alone."
"Liz," Maria was almost in tears. She had watched the steady deterioration of her friend, and had reached her breaking point. "Will you see someone? A doctor? You're starting to scare me with this obsession of yours. I don't want to see you get put away in some nut house."

"This is where he was born," tears started to roll from Liz's eyes.
"Who?" though Maria knew the answer before she even asked.
"They all were. Max, Michael, Isabel," her voice faltered. "Tess."
"There's more of them?" Alex groaned from the back seat. "Isn't this getting a little out of hand? Liz? Have you even listened to yourself?"
"Max, Michael and Isabel came out first," Liz ignored him. "It was night and they made their way to the road back there." Her head nodded. The first move she had made. "The Evans drove by, and Isabel made Max stay still, so they were found. Michael was afraid and hid. He wasn't found till later."
"Liz," Maria tried to interrupt.
"This is where Tess brought him, when she arrived on the scene to steal him away from me," Liz ignored her. "She said she was his destiny, but he chose me. Then we heard the message from his real mom. He was a leader." She turned to look at Maria. Tears were pouring from Liz's eyes. "Even after everything he had gone through in the white room, I abandoned him. I let him go to fulfill his destiny. It was the right thing to do, wasn't it? I just couldn't be... He still wanted me, though. The things I did to him, Maria. But he still loved me."
"Liz!" Maria snapped. "It was a dream."
"I ran down that hill," she pointed, "and didn't stop until I reached Florida. I just couldn't face him. Or her."
"Liz, we've got to get you home," Alex placed his hand on her shoulder from behind. "We need to get you to a doctor."
"A year later, we were all here again," Liz continued. "He was going back with her. They all were. Max and I... he... we... But Michael chose to stay, and we knew that Tess killed Alex." More tears flowed. "And I couldn't get in. But Michael stayed, for you, Maria so we did. Get in. And Max stayed, too. For me. Because he did, you see? After everything, he still loved... me." Her sobbing was almost uncontrollable.

Alex attracted Maria's attention and using a strange sign language, indicated that he should take Liz and put her on the back seat. Maria nodded her agreement. They had to get her home to bed. Liz was breaking down in front of their very eyes. It was time to bring in the parents. Alex climbed out of the car, and opened the front door.
"Come on, Liz," he urged, trying to help her out.
Liz looked up at him with a blank expression.
"Yes," she nodded. "I've been thinking about that all night."
Alex frowned at her strange words. While he tried to turn her to the back door, and while Maria was sliding across the front to take the driver's seat, Liz pulled away and started to walk up the slope to the jagged peaks.
"Liz, now where are you going?" Alex cried in frustration.
"The pod chamber," was her answer.
Maria climbed from the car and started to follow Alex who was following Liz. In spite of her high heels, the small girl was moving too quick for Alex to catch. At last Liz stopped in front of flat rock face.
"It was here," Liz sighed. "The doorway that led to the pod chamber. Inside were the four pods, where their bodies were stored during their journey from Antar. When their ship crashed in 'forty seven, one of their protectors brought them and the Granolith here."
"Oh, I see," Alex rolled his eyes. "So not only was he an alien, he was like, fifty years older than you?"
"No," Liz shook her head. "He was the same age. They came out of their pods when we were six or seven."
"Okay. So how did they get in? To the chamber, I mean."
"There was like, a secret door. Whenever one of them passed their hand across the right spot, a silver handprint glowed. Just like the one Max left on my stomach when he healed me."
"Like this?" Alex passed his hand across the rock face. His voice betrayed his rising anger. "See? Nothing. Liz, have you been hearing yourself? We really need to get you home."
"No," Liz shook her head as she concentrated. "It was higher up. It was about... here." She waved her hand across the rock's surface.
"Oh my God!" Maria squealed, reaching into her purse for her vial of cedar oil.
"Shit!" Alex exclaimed, stepping back. His eyes grew wide.
Where Liz had passed her hand over the surface of the rock, a silver handprint had appeared, glowing in the cliff face.

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Hi everyone!

A big hello to all you newcomers who have left feedback to me for the fist time. I hope you stay a while :) I love your comments, your questions and your speculations.

A note to you, and all my regulars. Your feedback is important to me. So important, it's why I take the (long) time to reply to each and every comment. So, if I miss you, please pm me and I will rectify it. Okay? :) Thanks.

Can I just say, I love how everyone has jumped to the same two conclusions. 1 - That her friends will believe her now, and 2 - Liz has powers. Hmmmm.... I wonder how many you got right? :wink:


kitkat405 - It was inevitable, given that she found her way there, that she would run UP the maountain :wink:

youre my dreamgirl - Given the choice, WR with cliffies, or no WR, which would you choose? :twisted:

kissme4ever123 - Thank you :) Wait till you see where it's going :wink:

polar vixen - Alex if difficult to decide how he would be, pre Max. I'm positive that Alex would have had a crush on Liz.

mareli - Well, if Liz didn't find anything, there wouldn't be much of a story left, right? :wink:

BehrObsession - checking up my sleeve, I see an evil wrist attached to the evil hand that types my evility! LOL

Itzstacie - LOL. But where is the Drink Me bottle?

AJK001 - What door? :wink:

smokie - Enjoying myself? Loving every moment of your confusion. Sadly, all great things must end and the fog starts to clear. Obvious and simple? From me? :twisted:

roswellluver - Ah, but do they? :wink

BelevnDreamsToo - LOL - Longer than this last one? :wink: Whoa! Post more than once per week? Do you mean shorter parts? If not, when should I actually write the story? :wink:

mezz - But maybe you aren't :wink:

xmag - WHAT?!?!? YOu weren't going to read my new fic? Ever? :( ONLY once per week? Is there a more regular poster out there? LOL> Glad to see you :) However, you have come up with an idea that is the closest so far. :) As for Maria, she thinks Michael was part of Liz's dream. Why would she be intrigued?

Breathless - I would have loved to have seen that post you lost. Pity it went... what was it? flahoowey? This is a technical term, right? LOL As for Liz's scientific mind ... :wink: Watch this space.

Zevrillion - Wait no more! :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Oh, sorry. That M/L stands for... uhm... Mark. Yeah, that's it. MArk. He turns up in a chapter ot two. :wink:

Craig Beatty - Maybe that handprint isn't as important as you think! :wink: MAYBE the handprint appearing means that Liz ids an alien, or altered, or MAYBE it's nothing. :wink:

MamaDee52 - Yup - Liz with powers, angry and frustrated, wow, what a combo! :wink: I love how people pick up on little things I throw in, like the house on Murray Lane. :wink: I wonder if herrings come in any other colors?

Devil Kitty - Glad that my writing can get across the feelings I want to portray. Hope I can keep this up. :)

Smac - I always write Kyle as a good guy. Thought I'd try something different for a change. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Hopefully, the painful parts are behind you now. At least, for a while. I think it's frustration that follows. :wink:

Asabetha - Better late than naver. :wink: AT least you are with us, now. :)

Roswelllostcause - Hang on, let me check my rollodex. Hmmm... Ah, here it is. Yup, it says here. Roswelllostcause. Hates ckiffhangers. Ensure that ALL chapters end with one. :wink:
I am SO sorry for forgetting you last time. :( Please forgive me.

aurorasky - Every one seems to think so. :)

Scottie - Innocent until proven guitly. Where is your evidence. Oh. Yeah. Okay, it's a fair cop, guv. :wink: As for your nyah nyah comment, remind me after part 5. :wink:

Liz Parker Evans - As you can see, it hasn't been up long. You haven't missed to much yet. According to everyone, you haven't missed a thing as no one knows what the hello is going on. :wink:

RedRoze68 - Please, pester away. I may not answer the questions, but I love seeing where people THINK the story is going. :)

Dorothy PArker - Thank you :)

podsquad rocks - Thank you :) And thank you, Nora, for promoting me. :) As for NC 17 - as the only guy in Liz's life right now is Alex, are you suggesting ... ? :wink: We'll see.

cherie - Well, it SEEMS more than a dream, doesn't it. But are you sure? :wink:


Okay, sorry it's a short one this week.
Wayne. :)

Okay, cue intro music ....


As I Lay Me Down
Sophie B. Hawkins


It felt like spring time on this February morning
In the courtyard birds were singing your praise
I'm still recalling things you said to make me feel
Alright I carried them with me today now

As I lay me down to sleep
This I pray
That you will hold me dear
Though I'm far away
I'll whisper your name
Into the sky
And I will wake up happy

I wonder why
I feel so high though I am not above the sorrow
Heavy hearted 'till you call my name
And it sounds like church bells or the whistle of a train
On a summer evening I'll run to meet you barefoot
Barely breathing

As I lay me down to sleep
This I pray
That you will hold me dear
Though I'm far away
I'll whisper your name
Into the sky
And I will wake up happy (oh darling)

As I lay me down to sleep
This I pray
That you will hold me dear
Though I'm far away
I'll whisper your name
Into the sky
And I will wake up happy

It's not too near for me
Like a flower I need the rain
Though it's not clear to me
Every season has its change
And I will see you
When the sun comes out again

As I lay me down to sleep
This I pray
That you will hold me dear
Though I'm far away
I'll whisper your name
Into the sky
And I will wake up happy (oh oh...)

As I lay me down to sleep
This I pray
That you will hold me dear
Though I'm far away
I'll whisper your name
Into the sky
And I will wake up happy

I wonder why
When the sun comes out again
And I will wake up happy
So I pray


Part 4

For the longest time, the three friends stared at the strange sight before them. The glowing hand seemed to mock Alex and Maria's disbelief. Liz stared with a smile on her face. At long last, feeling a sense of justification, Liz reached out to place her hand over the glowing print.
"What are you doing?" Alex hissed as he grabbed her arm and pulled her away. He kept his hand firmly locked on her wrist.
"Let me go, Alex," Liz tried to snatch her hand back. "I want to open the door."
"What door?" Alex cried. "There's no door there!"
"Then how do you explain that?" Liz demanded, nodding at the handprint.
"It's probably just..." he searched for inspiration. His eyes lit up. "Some special tribal painting, or something. I mean, the Native Americans have left all kinds of..."
"So how come it reacted when my hand passed over it?"
"I don't know," Alex tried to hide his exasperation. "Maybe it's a temperature thing? Maybe it glows when the air reaches a certain..."
"But I told you it was there, Alex. I knew exactly where it was. Don't you see that this proves my dream was real? I'm going to open the door."
"No Liz," Alex shook his head. "We don't know what we're dealing with here."
"I do, Alex. We're dealing with the truth. Inside I'll find the answers to my dream. I'll find Max."
"He doesn't exist, Liz," Alex threw his hand into the air. He was resisting the urge to really shout at her. "He's not real." He looked directly at her. "Okay. Okay. What if nothing happens? What if, when you place your hand on that painting, nothing happens? In your current state of mind, how is that going to affect you? Or say it 'is' just some special Native American thing, and that somehow, a door that we can't even see does open? Okay? Suppose you go inside and it's just old pots and native stuff. How are you going to react when you find out that there really is no Max Evans?"
"I have to try!" Fresh tears flooded Liz's eyes. "Don't you see that? I have to try."
"Liz," Maria placed her hand on her friend's shoulder. She turned her friend to face her and cupped Liz's face in her hands. "If you try this, and we find nothing that leads us to this Max, do you promise me that you'll see a specialist? That you'll stop this obsessive search and get some help?"
Liz screwed her face in frustration. She looked at her hand, tightly held by Alex in a grip that she could not break. She had no choice but to go along with Maria. After all, the proof she needed was in front of her. Her friends could not deny her after this.
"Yes," she whispered.
"Let her go, Alex," Maria nodded.
"But..." Alex looked shocked.
"Let her go!" Maria growled.
Alex narrowed his eyes while he stared hard at Maria. He released his hold of Liz's hand.
"I don't like this," he stated.

Liz looked at her two friends, and threw a grateful smile at Maria. She stared at the hand print still glowing in the rock face. With an almost regal posture and an air of complete confidence, she lifted her hand and laid it over the symbol. It felt warm to the touch and a tingle ran the full length of her arm. At once, a circular crack appeared in the stone. Alex and Maria exchanged nervous glances. The circular stone slid backwards and then rolled to one side, revealing a strange entranceway. It was dark inside.
"Oh... my... god!" Maria held her oil vial to her face and inhaled deeply.
Liz started to step into the cavern, but once again, Alex stopped her, grabbing her arm and pulling her back.
"Now what, Alex?" she demanded. Frustration burned through every fiber of Liz's being.
"You're my friend, Liz," he argued. "I don't want to see you any more hurt than you already are. You may not care for me as much as I care for you, but I won't let you go in there."
"So how are you going to stop me, Alex?" Liz demanded. "Are you going to beat me up to stop me going in? 'Cause using physical force is the only way you'll stop me, now. Are you going to drag me home, have me committed to a mental institution? I know this place is here now, Alex. I know that I can get in any time I choose and you can't watch me all the time. You say you're my friend? Fine. Start acting like one and let me go inside. If you stop me, then not only will I never forgive you, but I'll forever wonder what I would have found in there. And let me tell you, you think I'm going insane now? You won't have seen anything yet."
Alex looked at Maria for support, but she just nodded. Once again, though filled with reluctance, Alex let go of Liz. Before her friends could change their minds, Liz slipped inside the doorway, ducking below the low, round lintel.
"Well?" Maria asked.
"Well, what?" Alex frowned.
"Are we going in or what?"
"What?" he demanded.
"God, you are so hopeless!" Maria rolled her eyes and climbed into the cavern behind Liz.

* * *

To say that Maria was dumbstruck was an understatement. She stood for a moment and stared at what she saw, scarcely believing her eyes. She even rubbed them to make sure that she hadn't stepped into Liz's dream. She was in a domed chamber with a kind of crystalline, hourglass shaped structure filling its center, the whole strange... thing gave off a golden blue glow. Her eyes were drawn to it, like a magnet. Alex arrived behind her and he too stared in disbelief at what he found. Liz was walking around the structure with a gentle, almost serene smile on her lips.
"What is it?" Maria asked at last, though she whispered her question. She turned to look at Liz, tearing her eyes away with a great reluctance.
"It's the Granolith," Liz smiled. It was a real smile. For the first time in weeks, Liz's eyes were smiling too. "He is real. I knew it."
"So where are the pods you said were here," Alex found his voice.
"I... I don't know," Liz's voice dropped as she looked around the chamber. There were no other rooms. "In my dream, this was in another chamber, through a wall that was here." She waved her hands across the space in front of her. "The four pods were on the wall, in a square. The four square. Two on top, two underneath. A tunnel led through the back of one of them into the room where this was housed. They didn't know it was there until Isabel found it one night."
"What exactly were these pods, Liz?" Maria joined her.
"I guess they were like incubators. They were only small when they crashed. I guess they had to stay in them while they developed or something. Or maybe the crash threw their timing off. I'm not sure. It's not something we tried to find out, what with the FBI and the enemy aliens running amok and everything."

"So it hardly proves he is real, Liz," Alex called from his position near the door from which he had not moved. "There's nothing to say that this even does anything. It could just be some Native artifact. Not extra terrestrial at all."
"So how would I have known about it?" Liz spun herself around to face him. "How would I have known what I would find in here?"
"Maybe you were guessing?"
"Yeah," Liz rolled her eyes.
"So what 'does' it do?" Maria stared back at the strange device. "The grano-whats-it."
"The Granolith? In my dream, it was a way for them to go home. Like a space ship, I guess. Tess used it when she..." Liz allowed her voice to tail away.
"When she what?" Alex asked. He sensed that Liz was being a little economical with the facts about her dream.
"Oh, look. This was how they activated it." Liz picked up a tube shaped crystal rod. "It must go..." she looked at the base of the structure where a small beveled platform stuck out a little. There appeared to be a small opening. "In here."
"Okay, Liz? We believe you okay?" Alex sounded nervous. "But there's no Max here. We made an agreement, right Maria? Now come on. Let's go." Alex turned for the opening.
"You know what?" Liz tapped the crystal against her shoulder. You're right. It's time to go."
"Just like that?" Alex looked taken aback. He gave a broad smile. He stood back, made a slight bow and waved his hand toward the door. "Let's go, then, Ladies."
"Not me," Liz shook her head. "You. Maybe you should go," Liz glared at Alex. "With all your negative vibes, you're not helping us any."
Alex's face fell.
"Fine!" he threw his hands in the air. "I'll be outside. Just don't come crawling to me when you find out that all this really is nothing."
"Alex," Maria groaned. "Don't be like this."
"Like what?" he snapped. "Okay, so she doesn't think of me as boyfriend material, but does she have to rub my face in it? She would rather be with some guy who doesn't exist than be with me. So what? I can handle it."
Alex turned and stepped through the doorway and back out into the daylight. Maria turned back from Alex to see Liz kneeling down at the small platform.
"He's right, Liz," Maria sighed. "You have to ease up on him. You know how little self esteem he has."
"I'll make it up to him, somehow," Liz shrugged as she lifted the crystal over the slot. "Later."
"Liz! No!" Maria cried.
Liz allowed the crystal to slide into the hole, but nothing happened. She looked disappointed. She looked up at Maria and frowned.
"I thought..."
A grating sound behind them caused them to turn.
"The door!" Maria leapt at the closing portal.
"Don't worry, Maria," Liz seemed her old self again. Confident, alert, sure of herself. "I can open it again."
The cavern started to shake, as though a small earth tremor was taking place.
"Well, open it now, Liz," she begged, reaching for her vial of oil. "Please!" Maria sounded almost desperate. "Before this place comes crashing around our ears. I so do not want to die trapped in a strange cavern."
Seeing the real fear in her friend's face, Liz nodded and crossed the shaking room to the door. By the time she reached it, the tremor had stopped and there was no sign of any damage. She waved her hand across the rocks until she found another silver handprint. She placed her hand over it and once again felt the warmth and the tingling sensation. The door opened but Liz quickly stepped back, confusion and surprise written all over her face.
"Liz?" Maria called. "What's the matter?"
She rushed to Liz's side and she too looked out through the door. Her eyes widened.
"Where are we, Liz?" she demanded, her voice shrilling on the edge of panic.
"I guess we're not in Kansas anymore, Toto," Liz laughed.

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Hi everyone!

Thanks for all your great feedback, and a big hello to those who have responded for the first time. I love the feedback, because it lets me know that I am keeping you guys entertainded.


Asabetha - Well, it's not Kansas, That's for sure. :)

Dorothy Parker - LOL - I love how I get complaints that I post only once a week. But sorry, it's not going to happen any more frequently. I have a life, you know. Well, okay. Maybe not much of one, but I do have other interests as well. :wink:

kitkat405 - Alex is trying to protect Liz. He was afraid of what might happen to Liz if this proved to be a dead end.

polar vixen - Alex is doing his best by what HE feels is right. :)

Biged - Thank you :)

AJK001 - :wink: I'm such a tease! :wink:

LysCat - Well, at least you found it :) Welcome aboard.

aurorasky - You find out what happened tonight. :) Hope you like it. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Okay. I won;t tell you any of that. :wink: Who's Mark? :wink: Hope the week wasn't too long for you :wink:

Itzstacie - And Liz without her ruby slippers! :wink:

roswck - Ah, but does it? How do you know what the Granolith can do? Liz only dreamed of it's power. It doesn't necessarily follow that it can still do that. :wink:

Zevrillon - Leave Alex behind? Would I do that? :wink: Probably

kissme4ever123 - LOL - I love saying this; Because I can! :wink:

MamaDee52 - Okay. Party at your house. I'll be there in two shakes! :wink:

podsquad rocks - Ooooo! There's a thought. Hastily rewrites chapter 5 so that Max has gone to where Liz was while Liz is now where Max was. There:)

Craig Beatty - Your patience is rewarded. :) Yes. Lots of lovely interesting possibilities. But who saw this one?

BelevnDreamsToo - Wow - Well, I hope this parts answeres all those questions. :wink:

xmag - And you were soo close. You over-qualified it. :wink: Cruel, yes. Unusual? You read Blue Remembered Hills weekly, didn't you? LOL :wink:

mareli - Good points, except that it appears no pods WERE ever left there. :wink:

alienmom - As am I. :) I hope this surprise was worth the wait. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Are you sure you have seen the cabbages? As for the King... I wonder if this might surprise you. :wink: Me? Substance abuse? Not in this lifetime. I don't need wacky backy to come up with these twisted stories. :wink: I'm already twisted to start with! LOL

roswellfiend - Glad you found it and that you like it. :) So far, though, Maria and Alex have seen no proof that Max is real. Only the Granolith, which verifies that maybe her dream had SOME veracity to it. But it could be something native, couldn't it?

Roswelllostcause - Gosh! I hope I never inherit that Troll nickname :wink: I'd like to see you raving like Maria. Can you send a video? :wink:

I love Orli - Is this soon enough? :wink: I know. Probably not. :wink:

RedRoz68 - Yup. Just ask the regulars. They know now to expect the worst. :wink: YOu have to understand that to Alex and Maria, Liz is falling apart. Maria is trying to be calm and strong for her friend, who is always strong and calm for her. Strength in the face of adversity. As for Alex, he is terrified that Liz is doing all this harm herself and feels that he can prevent her by using physical force. His points are completely valid. What if the cave did contain only pots and stuff? However, he did not stop to consider the flip side, like Liz forever thinking what the cave might hold. Liz stuck the crystal into the Granolith because she wanted the truth. She believes the Granolith will reveal Max to her. Nice speculation. See how close you came. :wink:

smokie - Wonderland, Oz, heck, anywhere else I can dredge up confusion is good. :) No, you can have all your answeres tonight. Well, most of them, anyway. Different era, eh? :) Take half a brownie point.

Behrlover04 - I'm ba-ack! :wink: :)

Scottie - Wonder if you think I'm still a genius after this? :wink: - Okay. Go back and re-read your post about how you have got me and 'nyah nyah'. Now come back and write one hundred times - "This will teach me to second guess Wayne 'coz he is cleverer than what I am." :wink:

LTL - I noticed! :wink: Better have a good excuse! LOL. I think everyone loved the handprint appearing, and how LIZ HAS STILL GOT HER POWERS!!!!! :wink: LOL
C3 - Maria and Brandon, no clue. Just me making Brandon polite. It's been a year or twenty since I was at a high school dance. Hang on. I never went to High School. I left Canada during Junior High. Alex and his clothes. No clue there either. Alex's actions were in Liz's dream. She's too nice to dream badley of her friends. :wink:

Like I mentioned before, I start to clear the mist a little now, so that I can get on with the next phase of this story. However, there will still be some confusion, but that is mostly generated by what you learn tonight, so...

Anyway, keep you cocoa handy, settle back, loosen that seatbelt (cause no need fot it tonight) and enjoy the situation I have created for your edification. :)

Oh, and have a great week.
Wayne.




A Thousand Miles
Vanessa Carlton


Making my way downtown
Walking fast
Faces passed
And I'm home bound
Staring blankly ahead
Just making my way
Making my way
Through the crowd
And I need you
And I miss you
And now I wonder
If I could fall
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass me by
'Cos you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
Tonight
It's always times like these
When I think of you
And I wonder
If you ever
Think of me
'Cos everything's so wrong
And I don't belong
Living in your
Precious memories
'Cos I need you
And I miss you
And now I wonder
If I could fall
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass me by
'Cos you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
Tonight
And I, I don't want to let you know
I, I drown in your memory
I, I don't want to let this go
I, I don't
Making my way downtown
Walking fast
Faces passed
And I'm home bound
Staring blankly ahead
Just making my way
Making my way
Through the crowd
And I still need you
And I still miss you
And now I wonder
If I could fall
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass us by
'Cos you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
If I could fall
Into the sky
Do you think time
Would pass me by
'Cos you know I'd walk
A thousand miles
If I could
Just see you
If I could
Just hold you
Tonight


Part 5

"There's no place like home," Maria repeated for the fourth or fifth time, clicking her heels together.
"Stop that, Maria," Liz shook her head. "That only worked for Dorothy in 'The Wizard of Oz.' It was just a film."
"Yeah, and this was just supposed to be a dream, Liz."
"It appears to be more than that," she grinned.
"This isn't happening, is it?" Maria groaned. "This is like, some huge mass hallucination, right? We spent all night looking for you, and we're really tired. Any minute now, we'll wake up in the car where we found you and find out it's all just been another huge dream."
"It's not a dream," Liz confirmed, although she sounded far too cheerful about it for Maria's liking. "And it really is happening."
"But I thought you said they were, like, more advanced than us, or something."

Through the door from the chamber that should have revealed Alex and the New Mexico desert, was a scene right out of Arthurian legend. A medieval cityscape stared back at them. Thatched houses dating from the middle ages were watched over by a huge, stone castle perched high on a hill. The castle was complete with ramparts, battlements, towers, turrets and long, brightly colored pennants waving in the breeze. People walked by them wearing colored, flowing robes and gowns with strange, high peaked hats. Ribbons and lace trailed in the feint breeze.
"Are you sure we're even in the right place?" Maria looked doubtful. "This looks like old England or somewhere."
"We're in the right place," Liz nodded. "Look."
She pointed at a small group of soldiers sauntering past them. They wore gleaming silver chain mail, round pot helmets and carried tall halberds. Over their mail, they wore a tabard of pale blue. On the chest of the tabard, they wore a strange, purple crest - a triangle surrounded a pair of spirals.
"So?" Maria shrugged.
"The whirlwind galaxy," Liz murmured. "I saw that symbol in my dream, Maria."
"Wait, wait," Maria shook her head. Her eyes widened. "We're in the Whirlwind Galaxy?" Her face fell in disbelief. "You told me it would take us, like, five thousand years or something to get here. But we were only in this cave for a few seconds. Please explain."
"Like I told you," Liz shrugged. "They're more advanced than us."
"This," she waved her hand at the scene through the door, "does not look advanced."
"Okay, Maria," Liz took a deep breath. "I can't explain why it looks like we're in the middle ages. I can't explain how we crossed the universe in seconds. All I know is what I dreamed, okay? Now let's go and see if we can find someone who can explain all this. Let's go find Max."
"No," Maria shouted. "We stay right here, close that door, and try to work out how to get home.
"Fine," Liz shrugged. "You can stay here and work out how to get home, if you want. I'm going to find Max. I want... no, I need answers. And this is the only way I know how to get them. Now are you staying here, or do you want to come with?"
"If it turns out no one knows who this Max guy is, will you take us home? Wait. Can you even take us home?"
"I think we'll be able to go home when this is resolved, Maria." Liz paused and looked back at Maria in earnest. "I... I think I've been summoned."
"Okay," Maria huffed. "Let's go and see this Max guy. The sooner we find him, the sooner I can kick his butt for doing this to my best friend."
They linked arms and stepped out into the strange world.

"It may look medieval," Liz observed, "but look at the construction. No way are those bricks made of rough clay. And it looks all so... perfect. I'd have thought that it would have been more... dirty. I mean, squalid, smelly and stuff. According to all the history books, streets were just made of mud, and the houses were practically falling down. They had no sanitation or anything then, garbage and stuff was just dumped onto the streets. But it's almost... like... perfect."
"So you think this is what? A facade?"
"Could be," she shrugged. "The roads are paved with... is that marble? Even the thatched roofs look... permanent. Windows, doors, everything is just so... solid. This isn't how I imagined medieval architecture."
"I'll tell you what isn't a facade," Maria was looking around.
"What's that?"
"Us. Have you noticed how everyone is giving us the evil eye?"
"I guess doing that strange symbol thing is the equivalent of the sign of the cross. It looks like our dresses are a little different to what they're used to."
"Like they've never seen mini dresses before? Or high heels?"
"Probably not. I mean, showing of legs was definitely a no-no back then."
"And they think they're more advanced? I bet women are treated like slaves here. Advanced my backside."
"They probably think we're witches or something," Liz giggled.
Maria suspected the giggle was more to hide her nerves than amusement at her own joke.
"Where do we go first?" Maria looked around.
"The castle," Liz shrugged. "In my dream, he was royalty. A king. If everything else is proving correct, I don't see why that should have changed."
"So we march up to the castle, knock on the gates and they'll let us in?"
"Someone left the granolith there for me, Maria. Someone is expecting me. So, yeah. That's exactly what we do.
"Alright then. If you say so."

They turned toward the street that looked like it might head up the hill to the castle.
"A street sign or two wouldn't go amiss," Maria grumbled.
"I guess they didn't think they needed them."
"Is that man signaling us?" Maria pointed at the nearby church. A man was half in, half out of the door, beckoning at them. "If he asks me how much we charge, I swear, I'll..."
"Let's go see what he wants," Liz interrupted.
"What? Liz, what has gotten into you?"
"He looks familiar, Maria."
"Unless he's Max, how can someone look familiar to you?" Maria demanded. "You've never been here before. Wait! Did you dream about him?"
"No. I don't think so. Come on. Maybe he can give us some answers. Maybe he can take me to Max."
"I wish you weren't so calm about this," Maria muttered through the side of her mouth as Liz led them to the man.
"Welcome, ladies," he nodded at them. ""Lady Elizabeth." He paused at Maria. "Lady Elizabeth's friend."
"Maria," she rolled her eyes.
"Lady Maria. Come in. Come in. You do tend to stand out somewhat."
Inside the church, it was cool. Goosebumps rose on their skin and both girls started to rub their arms.
"You're the heavenly hash man!" Liz remembered.
"That's right," he beamed, pleased that she remembered him.
"I never did catch your name."
"You may call me Syrus. And I must say, Lady Elizabeth, I am very surprised to see you here so soon. You are earlier than expected."
"Early?" Maria's mouth dropped. "You mean she's supposed to have come here?"
"Of course," he nodded whilst leading them down the aisle to the front of the church. "Why else would we go to the trouble of sending her that dream?"
"Yeah," Maria glared. "About that. Do you have any idea what it did to her? How obsessed she's become? Wait." Realization dawned on her face. You 'sent' her a dream?"
"Obsessed?" Syrus raised his eyebrows. "I apologize for that." He turned to face Liz. "That should not have happened. Right after you consummated your relationship, the night of the festival, your dreams should have returned to normal. You should not have remembered much of the dream, only being reminded by visual clues that would have been placed before you over the following weeks. You would have been led to the Granolith chamber, and been brought here."
"To see Max?" Liz looked expectantly.
"To see me," he shook his head.
"Yeah, well it didn't go to plan," Maria ground through clenched teeth. "When I woke her up, she was convinced that the dream was real. She was convinced that Max Evans was real. And that's why we're here. To find him. So where is he?"
"I... I'm sorry," Syrus spluttered. "But Max Evans doesn't exist."
"What?" both girls exclaimed.
"At least, not yet," he raised his hands as though it provided a protective barrier. "Let me explain."
"Yeah," Maria spat. "You do that."

"Okay," Syrus took a deep breath. "Before I start, there's something you need to know about us. A... history lesson."
"All this and school, too," Maria groaned.
"As you saw outside," Syrus ignored her, "it appears as though we are still in what you would call, the middle ages."
"We noticed," Maria's response was dry.
"Anatomically, we are identical in every way to the people of your... Earth."
"No shapeshifters?" Liz raised her eyebrows.
"No shapeshifters," Syrus shook his head. "For a while, we followed the same evolutionary path as you, except that around the time you emerged from your middle ages, we discovered the power of our mind. So we turned it to our current civilization. Our minds were turned to solving the problems of the day: hunger, disease, and so on. While your civilization was making weapons of war, ours was making our life easier and healthier than ever before. So our houses are built in a style that suits us with hot and cold running water. They are strong and sturdy. Our roads are paved. We have an efficient recycling system that negates the need for any sanitation or waste disposal system. We produce no excess gases as we never went through the need to burn fossil fuels. We can produce as much food from a single acre of land as you produce from a whole farm. We have energy in abundance. In short, life is good."
"I'm sensing a but here," Liz injected.
"Yes," he nodded. "We are, after all, much like you. As our wealth grew, so too did our greed. It was inevitable that someone would eventually develop a weapon. On the one hand, our minds are such that projectile weapons are pretty much useless. We can shield ourselves against them. But close quarter weapons... swords and the like, well, with the added force of our minds...they can still kill us. So we still fight with swords. Energy swords to negate our energy shields. Not quite the light sabers from your science fiction films, but I guess the concept is the same. Today, the King is still the highest entity in the land. His word is law. It's a good system that works well, but it wasn't always like that. Once we were split into factions, and... you know, Earls and barons and things. Infighting, rebellion, coups... It was a mess. Pretty much as it was in your own middle ages. But then one particular king, came to power and set about putting all that trouble behind them, for the good of the people.

"Anyway, Antar is one of the five main countries of our world."
"Country?" Liz exclaimed. "You mean Antar isn't a planet?"
"No," he shook his head. "Sometimes, the truth will be less fantastic than the dream, and it seemed that exaggerating the situation might somehow prove to us to be a better way of finding one suitable for the task ahead."
"And what task would that be?" Maria cocked her head.
"I think it might be best if I'm allowed to tell you what you need to know in the order that's best suited for all concerned, don't you think?"
"Continue, Syrus," Liz wrapped her hand over Maria's mouth.
"As I was saying, Antar is one of the five major countries. There are many others of course, and all allied to one or another of the five main ones, and for the most part are wholly insignificant. Now, at the moment, of the five, Antar holds the balance of power. There is usually a state of war between us, and another, but at the moment, there's a kind of peace; thanks mainly to the power that Antar commands. This is because Antar's king is very strong. He is without a doubt, the strongest king that Antar, or indeed, any of the five have ever known."
"King Zan," Liz beamed.
"No," he gave a wry smile as he shook his head. "King Azande. Zan's father. As I said, a very strong king. There was a time, perhaps sixty to seventy years ago, when Antar was one of the minor nations. Because we were plagued with particularly quarrelsome Barons, Earls and other landowners, it was nigh on impossible to muster a complete army of any significance. Petty jealousies and rivalry meant that most kept back the bigger chunk of their forces, sending the green recruits and the old veterans to fight with the king, retaining their best warriors for their own plans, or indeed, their own defense. Our lands had been slowly stolen from us, the results of conquests by the other four. We were poor, our armies weak, and our population riddled with disease and hunger as we were forced to pay hefty tributes to our conquerors. The old King died without issue, and a power struggle ensued. Azande, a distant cousin to the king and a powerful Baron, managed to gain enough support to take control, thanks mainly to the fact that he was at least related, albeit distantly, to the current line.

"King Azande gratefully accepted the offers of peace from the other nations, and started upon the task of rebuilding his country. First, he turned the greatest minds to solving the problems of disease and hunger. Through some startling innovations, the health of the population was improved, as the food situation got better. Azande then started to rebuild his army. Not a massive one, you understand, but one that could, and would protect our borders from the other, more greedy neighbors. He had his best generals consider their tactics, encouraging them to develop new strategies. He trained large bodies of local militia, ready to defend their land if needed. By day, they worked the many farms, but at night, the men trained in the art of warfare. It wasn't long before nearly three quarters of all healthy males left in the country was a trained soldier to some degree, ready to defend their country at a moments notice. Azande knew that sooner or later, one of the big four, or maybe more would seek to annex our whole country. He would not let that happen. He could not have foreseen that all four would make their move at the same time.

"The alarms went up one morning when all four borders were breached at almost the same time. The reaction by our new army was swift, and the invaders were repelled. So great were our initial successes that we not only pushed all four invaders back, but we reclaimed all the land that we had lost in previous battles. As our people were once more reunited into our kingdom, men flocked to our cause. Our armies grew. Only when King Azande reclaimed all of the land we had lost, did he ordered a halt. He then sent out emissaries to the other kingdoms and told them that he had no intention of taking land that did not belong to him. It was time for peace. Having won the war, Azande set about looking after his kingdom. He turned to make sure that his people were happy. He deduced that the best way to do that was to make sure that everyone had something to do and enough to eat. He introduced policies to ensure maximum employment. Food was plentiful. All was good with the world.

"However, and it always seems that there is a however, being the wealthiest among the five is not necessarily a good thing. Afraid that Azande might try to take the rest of their land, one by one and set himself up as Emperor of the world, a fact that is completely untrue, the other four have formed an alliance against us. Although there is peace at the moment, we know that they are biding their time. Because they know that there is one thing that Azande cannot control. Time. King Azande is getting old, and his sons are not half the men he is. They are waiting for a new King to take the throne and then, when all is in turmoil, they will strike. This is where you come in, Lady Elizabeth. I am hoping that you will find your Max Evans, and deliver us the king that might one day bring peace to our entire planet."

"Hang on," Maria shook her head. "You said he doesn't exist."
"He doesn't," Syrus nodded. "But Prince Zan does. And I know that inside Zan is a Max Evans waiting to come out. He just needs the right..."
"Motivation?" Maria arched an eyebrow.
"Motivation," he nodded.
"What's the catch?" Liz asked.
"Excuse me?"
"Why would you need someone to bring out the person we know as Max? Why isn't he already like Max?"
"It seems to me that there's more that he's not telling us," Maria nodded at Liz. "You'd better spill the beans, Pops. Or we're on the next train outta here."

The old man nodded, shook his head and sucked in a deep breath.
"Do you know what 'primogeniture' means?"
"Nope," Maria shook her head.
"It's the rule or tradition of inheritance by the firstborn," Liz nodded. "Like, in this case, the firstborn male automatically becomes the heir to the throne."
"That's right," Syrus smiled. "It keeps things simple. Everyone knows where they stand. Except, that rule doesn't apply here. Prince Zan, being the firstborn, is not the automatic heir to the throne. He has a half brother. When King Azande dies, there's bound to be a power struggle. Well, that's not really true. You see, Zan, he... As it stands, Zan is not a strong Prince. He is totally uninterested in ruling. He would rather fool around with his friend Rath than attend to his studies, or his training. He shows no interest in any of these. He is, in short, a weakling. A coward. He grew up under his mother's influence, pampered and spoiled beyond belief. You see, after Zan was born, Azande took a second wife, and she was far more beautiful than his first. She has become a... bit player, I guess. So I guess she poured all her love into Zan, as she no longer had her husbands affection. His timid nature took shape. Azande was furious with Zan's mother but there was little he could do. Meanwhile, his second wife gave birth to another son. Three years younger than Zan, he is brighter, stronger, braver, more skilled with a sword, a natural leader... and ruthless. When Azande dies, it will be down to the two of them to fight for the throne... if they don't sort it out sooner. Only one will survive to take it. Need I go on?"
"We get the picture," Maria snorted. "So basically, you want Liz to take a sniveling momma's boy and turn him into a lion." She paused for confirmation. Syrus nodded. "Let's get out of here, Liz."

"Wait," he called. "There's something you should know. Denda is an animal. A beast."
"Denda?" Liz cocked her head.
"Zan's half brother. He is, perhaps, too strong. Should he become king, he would become a tyrant. A despot. He would crush the rest of the world with his armies and bankrupt his own people while doing it. Then, who knows where he would turn? He is ambitious, is Denda. Perhaps he might seek to expand his empire. Perhaps he might turn his attention to your planet? No one wants to see that. All we want you to do is to turn Zan into a good king. Like his father. Perhaps not as strong a King, but strong enough yet with some flexibility there: a good one. Turn him into someone better suited to ruling a kingdom. Someone who will fight back against Denda, defeat him. Turn Zan into what Max would have become had the dream followed its path to a natural conclusion. Please. The fate of a whole nation... a planet... planets, rests in your decision. Elizabeth Parker. Max needs you. Will you run down that hill a second time?"
"Do you really want to get involved, Liz?" Maria frowned. "I mean, looking for this Max is one thing, but finding you've got to put him together first... It's like buying the best furniture imaginable and having it delivered, self assembly required."
"Yes," Liz gave a slow nod. "Yes. I think I do."
"No way!" Maria shook her head in astonishment. "I think this is a stupid idea, Liz. You came here expecting to find Max. Not to create him."
"But in my dream, I sorta helped define who Max was. I mean, it was because of me that he..."
"I need to know if you will stay," Syrus told her. "Is it yes, or no."
"Why me?" Liz asked.
"You were the only one to take the dream to its conclusion, at least, to a satisfactory conclusion. Everyone else gave up at one of the many obstacles that were in your way."
"Everyone else?" Liz looked surprised. "How many other girls had this dream?"
"Altogether?"
Liz nodded.
"Worldwide?"
Liz continued to nod although her eyes widened.
"Ten million."
"Ten Million?" the two girls exclaimed.
"Give or take," he shrugged.
"And I was the only one to reach the end?"
"Yes. Most gave up when they discovered that their savior was an alien. Only you and one other made it past Ava and her attempt to seduce him. Only you remained to free him from the authorities. Only you refused to give up. Only you can deliver us the future we crave. Will you help us, Lady Elizabeth? Will you deliver Max Evans to us?"
"Yes." There was no hesitation.
Maria looked long and hard at Liz.
"Where can I find him?" Liz continued.
"Take this," he handed her a rose colored crystal, similar to the one they had used to bring them here. "Return to the Granolith and place it in the base. It will take you to him."
"I'm going with her," Maria added. "Just call me Jiminy Cricket."
"Perhaps you could work on Rath," he shrugged.
"Yeah, perhaps," she rolled her eyes. "He's a guy isn't he? How hard can it be to wrap him around my finger? Flash him a little thigh and kapow! Instant mush."
"Now, about that," he walked over to a cupboard against the wall. He pulled out two dresses in the style worn by those women they had seen outside.
Maria looked at Liz and then back at Syrus.
"And just why are their a couple of dresses in that wardrobe?" she smirked.
"Actually," he opened the cupboard to reveal that is was stuffed with clothing. "It's more than a couple. We have charity here, too."
"Oh," Maria blushed.
"You'll probably feel more comfortable wearing these."
"You mean you'll feel more comfortable," Maria snorted.
"If it means we can move around without being stared at..." Liz started.
"Leered at, you mean."
"I don't think the citizens of Antar are ready for twenty-first century Earth fashions," Syrus shook his head. "I doubt that they're even ready for you, Lady Maria; but needs must... Now, I'll help you all I can, Lady Elizabeth, but once you leave this room, you must tell no one how you came to be here. And please, keep the fact that you and I have met before a secret. We could both end up in a lot of trouble. Now put on your clothing to blend with the crowd, go back to the Granolith, and use your crystal."

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Linking arms again, the two girls walked back up the aisle in silence, making their way to the huge doors at the back of the church. There had been so much to take in, so much to consider. Too much.
"So," Maria spoke in a hushed tone reserved for churches, museums and monuments. "What happens now?"
"Everyone kept asking Max that," Liz laughed. "He didn't like it much, either."
"Well, you're in charge here. It was your dream, after all."
"Like the man said," Liz shrugged. "We put on these clothes to blend with the crowd, go back to the Granolith, and use my crystal"
"And then?"
"Then we find Max."
"And then you live happily ever after," Maria snorted. "Liz, I don't think it's going to be as easy as that. You heard the man. You heard what's going down. We're in the middle of some medieval power struggle with light sabers and the force thrown in for good measure. And it sounds like we've picked the losing side. Pardon the expression, but what on Earth can we do?"
With the old fashioned dress held over her head, Liz paused, cocked her head and looked at Maria.
"We can make sure that Max becomes the man I know he can be. Now come on. Let's get out of here. I normally like churches, but for some reason, this place gives me the heebee jeebees."
"That's a technical term," Maria's voice was muffled by her own dress being pulled over her head. Her head popped free. "Right?"
"Right," Liz grinned, as she wriggled her hips to help the dress fall smoothly into place. "We should really have taken our other dresses off, first."
"Change in here? A semi public place? With what I'm wearing underneath mine?" Maria shook her head. "Nuh uh. There's a better chance of me streaking across the football field during the next home game."
"Come on," Liz giggled.

"The solid doors swung open with little effort and without making a sound. They stepped out into the sunshine and started to cross the strangely paved street to the building that they knew was actually the Granolith. They blended in with the indigenous population this time and the only stares they received were the ones from people wondering who the two fine ladies might be. Once inside the privacy of the Granolith, Liz started to pull off her dress.
"Now what?" Maria sounded hopeful. "Have you given up? Are we going home?"
"Nuh uh," Liz shook her head. "I plan on being comfortable. I'm going to take off my other dress, put this new one back on, and then go on."
"Okay, Liz," Maria started to pull off her own clothing. "You know that I'll always be there for you, right? But if I'm going to be in this for the long haul, then I need to know everything, so that I know just what to expect. I want you to tell me everything that happened in that dream. And I mean everything. The whole Sergio Leone."
"Sergio Leone?" Liz looked puzzled.
"Yeah. The good, the bad and the ugly."
"Oh," Liz chuckled. "Well, there was certainly a lot of bad, definitely some ugly, but, oh! Maria! The good was so incredible it more than made up for it all. Okay. It all started the morning after I had the dream, remember? We were working in the café, and you told me that Max Evans was watching me again, and I said, no way..."

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Hi everyone,

Thanks again for all your wonderful feedback, your words of encouragement and your speculations. Interesting analogies being mooted. Some I never even thought about.

Now, some have you have mentioned how losing the three yeards is kind of bummer for you. I'm just trying to write a story that comes from a different angle. There are so many stories written now, it's hard not to get repetative, so I approached it from a different angle. It all started when I one day asked someone, what if Liz was dreaming the whole thing? Better still, what if she wasn't the only one?"

It took off from there.


youre my dreamgirl - I just wonder if Maria will find it as easy as that! :wink:

AJK001 - Hmmmm..... Max doesn't exist. Liz has to develop the qualities that made Max, Max, so he is just Zan at the present. So maybe there won;t be any recognition.

woodwinds - I never saw Timelines, but this isn't a time travel story. Evolution taking different paths in different places.

Biged - Thank you :)

polar vixen - Glad you are enjoying it. Maria will continue to have moments. :wink:

LTL - Liz probably did feel guilt at that line, but we all knew she was going to take the job. LOL

RedRoze68 - Well, good job you didn;t bet on the dream. It really was one. Just a dream to test Liz. And, as Liz was the only one to stick with dream Max, then no one else had the relationship they did. does that make it better?

mezz - I hope that I can keep surprising you. :)

roswck - Sorry. No signifigance to the other girl. She abandoned Max to the White Room, so she failed. Yup, gotta feel for Alex. A looney bin will probably be the worst of his worries. Who would believe him? "They went into that cave that you can't see and never came out." Hmmmm.... Sounds like a long prison sentence to me.

Behrluver04 - Is Max of age? Did I say so, yet? :wink: As for being just a prince... you remain a prince until you are crowned King. Look at Prince Charles, Would you say he is of age? :wink:

podsquad rocks - Sorry. This is not a dream. What happened in what she now thinks was a dream, was, and this is her reality. Please don't keep thinking that what Liz is experiancing right now is not really happening. Okay? :)

Smac - All I can say is that I have a very twisted imagination, some great friends to bounce ideas off, and a wide range of literary likes. (I used to work for a large publishing company) :)

xmag - Sorry. Syrus was telling it like it is. If his plan is to find someone to turn Zan into someone like Max, then how would he know which girl would have the strength and determination to push aside obstacles for her love? So, send the dream to as many girls as possible, and test them. As for the door, once Liz passed, the Granolith was placed near to her, and coded to recognise her. Hence, no change needed. :)

lovealien - Like I said. Twisted imagination. :wink: Oh, and I have a great trick up my sleeve. Really great. You guys are going to hate me! :twisted:

frenchkiss70 - Dream, yes. This is reality. :)

Devil Kitty - Well, it's a big Rabbit hole, so were having quite a party! :wink: Fop? LOL

aurorasky - Well, I certainly strived to get interesting and uniquw, so, it appears to have worked :)

MamaDee52 - I 'could' be related, except that apparently, I'm already related to the Marquis De Sade and Alfred Hitchcock, so... Maybe. :wink:

lyra - You would be surprised. :wink: Amazing, I hope so. Epic? Sorry. As I said earlier, this will not be a long story. Long enough but not too long. Okay?

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Wow. I'm glad that I wrote a part that made you smile again. :) Thanks again. :)

roswellluver - I think so, yes. :wink:

Roswelllostcause - What? You didn't get the dream? Hang on. Let me check my records. Hmm... Yep. Here it is. Roswelllostcause started to dream.... when best friend informed you that Max Evans was staring again, you said... "Who? By the way. Where is that boyfriend of mine? You now, poodleboy." Your dream then ended. Sorry. :wink:

BelevnDreamsToo - Yes, this was one you voted on. It came second. The first placed one was way too angsty, and after comments made by a few of you in feedback to BRH, I decided to put that one on the backburner.

smokie - Hmm... simpering fop, eh? :twisted: Did you find any clues? Do you understand that this is real, and everything prior really was a dream?

Dorothy Parker - Well, he's definately male, if that's what you mean. :wink:

BehrObsession - The higher the mountain, the more exilerating the climb. :wink:

Itstacie - Does that mean you won't leave feedback unles I stun you some more? LOL!!! :wink:

Zevrillion - I hope I can keep putting you on your back foot. :)

Okay, lets get on with reality. :) At least, whatever passes for reality in this twisted mind of mine. LOL.



No Frontiers
The Corrs


If life is a river and your heart is a boat
And just like a water baby, born to float,
And if life is a wild wind that blows way on high,
And your heart is Amelia dying to fly,
Heaven knows no frontiers and I've seen heaven in your eyes

And if life is a bar room in which we must wait,
'round the man with his fingers on the ivory gates,
Where we sing until dawn of our fears and our fates,
And we stack all the dead men in self addressed crates,
In your eyes faint as the singing of a lark,
That somehow this black night,
Feels warmer for the spark,
Warmer for the spark,
To hold us 'til the day,
When fear will lose its grip,
And heaven has its way,
Heaven knows no frontiers,
And I've seen heaven in your eyes

If your life is a rough bed of brambles and nails,
And your spirit's a slave to man's whips and man's jails,
Where you thirst and you hunger for justice and right,
And your heart is a pure flame of man's constant night,
In your eyes faint as the singing of a lark,
That somehow this black night,
Feels warmer for the spark,
Warmer for the spark,
To hold us 'til the day when fear will lose its grip,
And heaven has its way,
And heaven has its way,
When all will harmonise,
And know what's in our hearts,
The dream will realise

Heaven knows no frontiers,
And I've seen heaven in your eyes,
Heaven knows no frontiers,
And I've seen heaven in your eyes



Part 6

"What is it, old woman?"
"She comes!"
"She? Wait... You mean..."
"Yes. I do. And you know the power she possesses."
"Reputed to possess."
"Then you are a fool if you do not believe the warnings you have been given."
"I'm no fool, old woman. Only a fool acts on the council of one voice, no matter how gifted. I'll wait till I see this power for myself before I abandon all my plans just because I receive a warning. But I am aware that she can undo everything I have striven to achieve."
"More than that. She can undo you..."
"I am prepared to make certain... sacrifices.
"Or, she can... make you."
"No. Her heart is set on one and one alone. I will have to make sure that he is dead and buried."
"Can you afford to be sidetracked?"
"I must do what I must. It is all part of the same path. I must not fail in my task. I WILL succeed in this. I will not rest until I have destroyed the monarchy, and a new power rules over all."
"But she will seek to prevent you. She seeks to find a strong king. She will willingly become his Queen."
"Then she will become a widow. And if she becomes troublesome, she will be... dispatched."
"You have a hard heart."
"That is not true. I must, by need possess no heart at all. A heart is a weakness I can ill afford. Perhaps when I have finished my stern duty... Perhaps then I may unbury that which has lain dormant all these long years."
"She intrigues you."
"Naturally. She is unlike any I have met before. Of course she intrigues me, but I am all too aware of the danger she poses to my progression. I will take the steps necessary to protect myself. I will deal with her as I see fit; as and when the time comes."
"Be careful that you do not get too close to the flames. You will surely be burned."
"Do you doubt my strength? Do you doubt that I will eliminate her in the same way I have eliminated all others who have sought to prevent me from attaining my goal? Where did she come from? How did she come to be here?"
"That, I cannot see. But here she is."
"It was all going so well. Things were starting to fall into place. I... This girl. She is trusting?"
"She chooses her friends wisely, I'd say. She did not come alone."
"Ah. Male or female?"
"Female."
"Interesting. One such as her inspiring loyalty is not something I need to deal with right now. Not when I have worked so hard to make sure that loyalty is such a rare commodity. You have a friendly nature about you when you need it. Visit her."
"And?"
"And what? You know full well what I mean."
"I wish for you to say it. I want it clearly understood what it is you are telling me to do."
"Get rid of her."
"As you command."
"Yes. As I command. Now go. I have a village that needs attending to."


* * *

"Then, we lay in each other's arms, basking in our deep love for one another. We knew that there was no one, no force, nothing would ever come between us again. This was forever. Then we fell asleep. And then you woke me up," Liz wiped a tear away from her eye. "And that's it."
Maria stared, deep in thought. She remained silent. Liz didn't know what to say so she too remained silent.
"Wow," Maria finally broke the silence.
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "Wow."
"But something's not right," Maria looked puzzled.
"What's not right is that it was all a dream, Maria," Liz whispered. She was looking down at the floor. "What's not right is that I still have to work to find my perfect love."
"No," Maria shook her head. "About what Syrus said. What festival was on the night you and Max... you know."
"None," Liz narrowed her eyes in concentration. "At least, as far as I'm aware. At least, not in my dream."
"He said that the dream ended when you consummated, right? The night of the festival. He was quite specific about that. What festival?"
"The only festival that he could be talking about was the Gomez concert. You know, that first timeline when we should have consummated but didn't 'cause another Max came back and told me we had to change the future. Max and I should have gone to the Gomez concert, but instead, we, ah..."
"But you didn't. Instead, you tricked your Max into seeing something you wanted him to see and the dream continued"
"Nightmare, Maria. After that, things got really bad."
"But you and Max... Things got more..."
"Intense. Yeah, eventually."
"But Syrus didn't know any of that. Liz, you dreamed another whole year and a half. Things happened that he knows nothing about."
"And you think that's why I became so obsessed?"
Because he forgot to... I don't know. Forget to switch the VCR off or something?"
"No," Liz shook her head. "You're on the right lines, Maria, but there's more to it than that."
"Well, let's go and find Max so we can get this sorted out."
"You just want to see Michael," Liz grinned.
"In your drea..." She paused. Maria started to laugh. "Oh yeah."

Dressed again in their medieval costumes, although with underwear never dreamed about in those days, Liz and Maria folded their party dresses over a convenient ledge within the Granolith chamber. Liz then bent down at the small pedestal, and removed the clear crystal. She held up the rose colored one and looked to Maria for confirmation. Maria nodded. Liz slid the new crystal into the slot. Nothing happened.
"He gave us a dud," Maria shook her head. "Take it out, Liz. Open the door. Let's go find Syrus and give him a piece of our mind."
Liz removed the crystal and crossed to the door. She waved her hand to produce the handprint and used it to open the door.
"Oh," she stepped back. Through the door, they could no longer see the city. Instead, the door opened into a stone corridor. "I think we're inside the castle."
"Yep," Maria agreed looking over Liz's shoulder. "Looks like a castle, all right." She gave her friend a nudge. "Well, let's go."
They started to step into the corridor when Maria paused.
"Now what?" Liz frowned.
"No plan, Liz? I mean, you heard what Syrus said. Shouldn't we have some sort of cover story?"
"How about we just wing it?"
"That's my line. Yours is the plan thing."
"Let's go, Maria," Liz rolled her eyes.

* * *

There was a strange stillness in the air, one that suggested peace and tranquility. A thin mist, lit orange by the light floated upon the still air. It could have been a scene of serenity were it not for the fact that the mist was actually smoke, and was illuminated not by a setting sun but by the many fires that burned whole houses a few short feet away from the green foliage of the forest wall. The scene of total devastation was sickening. The smell of blood and of burned flesh hung heavy in the air. The cries of the wounded and the dying replaced the absent calls of the woodland birds. Some birds did call out in this disaster area, however. Black carrion birds called out their warnings to each other as they fought over and feasted upon the still remains of the many corpses that littered the grounds, their gaping wounds attracting them and any other nearby scavengers. The air swarmed with blow-flies.

Two tall men rode on large, jet-black horses into the midst of the chaos. Anger and determination burned in the leader's gray eyes. His long, silver hair hung over his shoulders, covered with a mail shirt of blood red links. In his hand, he clutched a short sword, although it was evident that it had seen no action. As he passed any of his men, they all bowed to him. He snarled at them in response.
"He is good at his job, Nikolas," the man surveyed the scene.
"It's what he does best, Kivar," Nikolas nodded.
As tall as Kivar, and appearing the same age, perhaps approaching his thirtieth year, Nikolas wore a similar shirt of blood red chain mail, but he held a round shield and a long, wickedly curved cutlass. His unkempt red hair stuck out in all directions, giving him a frightening visage, not helped by the black demonic-like streaks painted onto his face.
"They didn't put up much of a fight."
"They never do," Nikolas shrugged. "They know by now how useless it is to try. They always hope that they'll be shown mercy if they don't resist." He looked over at Kivar. "They never are."
Kivar looked around the field of... - it wasn't so much a battle as a massacre. His head made barely perceptible nods as he turned it from one side to the other in a slow arc.
"Sixty one," he said to no one in particular. "A good omen, I think."
"Yes sir," Nikoas nodded, though he clearly did not understand what Kivar had just said.
Kivar looked up at the sun.
"Nearly midday," he noted. "We haven't much time. Azande will have sent his reinforcements by now. You know what to do."
Kivar turned his horse away from the carnage and cantered off into the trees.
"You heard Kivar!" Nikolas snapped. "Take care of any survivors. Make sure that the only 'subjects' left to pay homage to his majesty are the dead. No one is to be left alive for Azande to find. Not even a woman to breed another soldier nor a child to grow up into one. Seize everything of value. Our need is greater than theirs. Leave nothing behind. Nothing."
Nikolas listened to the screams for a while until at last, he too turned away and followed Kivar.

* * *

In the end, Liz did come up with a plan. It seemed that they had been located in a wing of the castle that was very underpopulated. They hadn't seen a single soul in what felt like hours. Afraid of losing where the Granolith was, they explored every corridor, making sure that they would be able to find it again in a hurry if the need ever arose. They passed most corridors three or even four times. During their exploration, the light had steadily changed. When they had first passed a certain window, the sunlight was falling on the floor to its left. Beyond the window, the large forest was bathed in brilliant sunshine. The many times that they had subsequently passed the same window again, identified because it had been marked with a torn piece of lace, the light had slowly crept toward the right. Now, it was fading altogether as the sun disappeared behind some distant mountains, yet inside the corridor, it was as though the sun was still shining brightly. There was no hint of darkness and no sign of where the illumination was coming from. Liz had spent considerable time investigating this until Maria got bored and Liz realized that she was wasting time. She knew that Max would explain everything when she found him.
"There aren't even any guards," Maria moaned. "I mean, a whole army could invade through this part of the castle and no one would know a damned thing. I mean, have we even seen a staircase or anything?"
"I'm sure we'll find someone soon, Maria."
"I hope so. But more than that, I hope we find a chair or something soon. These high heels are killing me right now."
"I think I hear someone," Liz twisted her head and looked down the corridor. She had tuned out of Maria's ramblings ages ago.
"I'd even sit on the throne, if we could find the throne room," Maria was concentrating so hard on her pains that she was ignoring whatever Liz was babbling on about. "My feet are threatening to go on strike."
"I... I think I see someone."
"And you seem to keep on going. How do you do that, by the way? Your heels are higher than mine. I just gotta sit down."
"Yes, look, Maria there's someone coming," Liz stared at the figures. "Soldiers. And someone else. Not a soldier.
Coming toward them, in very ornate regalia, a double file of soldiers were clearly escorting some noblemen.
"What if I take my shoes off? Do you suppose they'd get offended at bare feet?"
"Wait... Is that? I mean, he looks different, but..."
"As if I care. I'm taking them off."
Maria reached down to her shoes.
"It is!" Liz started to bounce. Her voice was filled with excitement. "I'd know him anywhere. Maria! It's Max!"
"Huh?" Maria realized that Liz was saying something to her. "Who?"
Liz was already running down the corridor to meet him.
"Liz?" Balancing on one bare foot, bouncing up and down while trying to remove the other shoe, one hand clutching her removed one, Maria looked up to see Liz running hell for leather toward a group of soldiers. Her eyes widened. "Liz!" she screamed.
"Max!" Liz cried, rushing at the men.
Two soldiers hurried forward while the others surrounded a figure no longer visible. They stopped, lowered their halberds and braced them against the smooth flagstone effect floor. Liz stopped as though she had hit a wall. She bounced three feet backwards and collapsed into a heap on the floor.

* * *
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Wow. Friday already?

Hi Everyone :)

Can I first say a big thankyou to everyone who nominated me for an award and an even bigger thankyou to those of you who voted for me.

Those who know me know that the feedback you leave me means more to me than any award. It's nice to have won the award I did (Best Supporting Liz) but I can only experiance that thrill once. I experiance your feedback on a weekly basis! :)

Now, some confusion has arisen over who was speaking at the beginning of the last chapter. Some thought it might be Zan's half brother, Prince Denda. But why would he want to eliminate the monarchy, himself being a part of it, and the one consodered most likely to rule? So that leaves... dan dan dahhh! Yep.

polar vixen - Try imagining what might happen if someone ran at Prince Charles screaming out something. :wink:

AJK001 - A Roswell story without the evilness of Kivar and his sidekick would not be a Roswell story (except for AU). It's a good job that Liz only has to figure how to keep Kivar away and bring Max to the fore, isn;t it? I mean, imagine if someone else wanted Zan dead? :wink:

Roswellluver - And the meeting aint over yet! LOL :twisted:

woodwinds - Stopped is right. She's unconscious. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Can you blame her? She's been on edge for ages now. Her reaction was inevitable. :wink:

roswellfiend - Sorry :( Thanks for the vote on cliffhangers. Lots of practice :)

aurorasky - There was a huge clue in that first part. Did you catch it yet? See my note above. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Hating Kivar and Nikolas is a given. Better to hate them than me! :wink: Do you understand that first conversation now? :)

smokie - Thank you for your comiserations regarding the awards. :) As long as I get read, and left feedback, that's enough for me. :) Ah, are you sure he's adult? :twisted: Let me know your thoughts on that matter later :wink: Canada? skuldaugery and intrigue? Oh, you mean Trudea. :wink: Hmmmm.. We haven't met Denda yet and already we have all these opinions of him. :) Time elapsing? Troble at home? I shall leave that to your imagination. LOL.

Smac - Oh yes. Zan's reaction. :wink: What do you think, huh? This is ME writing a M&L story. Come on. What possible reaction COULD there be?

cherie - Don't get hung up on the words. A concert can also be a festival, can it not? And remember, they will think in terms of the middle ages, not ouyr 21st century. Remember how he told Liz that she was the only one who rescued Max from the authorities? So, it was something after that.

RedRoze68 - Well, give her a break. :wink: She's desperate to see Max. LOL. As for the dream, well, what better way to FIND a soulmate when it's on the other side of the galaxy. After all, no one asked Syrus if anyone on Antar was tested.

Roswelllostcause - A good thing, is it? :wink: Oh yes. Kivar, Nikolas, murder and mayhem. Trouble all right. :wink:

Itzstacie - :) Thank you. :) Reactions on their way. :)

BehrObsession - Could have been Kivar. :wink: Just wasn't Denda.

mareli - Well, Liz isn;t concerned with the King's enemies, is she? She's only interested in one person. :)

BelevnDreamsToo - Remember that the speaker at the beginning said he had a village to attend to? Full of clues. I do leave them, you know. :wink: Castle big. Maria and Liz lost. :)

LTL - A race against time, them. Where's the granolith when you need it? :wink:

Okay, on with the story. Now, I have a prediction to make. You guys are *REALLY* going to hate me. :Twisted: :evil:




Hello
Lionel Ritchie


I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?

I can see it in your eyes,
I can see it in your smile
You're all I've ever wanted
and my arms are open wide
'Cause you know just what to say
and you know just what to do
And I want to tell you so much,
I love you

I long to see the sunlight in your hair
And tell you time and time again, how much I care
Sometimes I feel my heart will overflow
Hello, I've just got to let you know

'Cause I wonder where you are and
I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely
or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
for I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying,
I love you

Hello, is it me you're looking for?

'Cause I wonder where you are
and I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely
or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
for I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying,
I love you




Part 7

The light stabbed into Liz's eyes, forcing her to squeeze them shut again. A groan escaped her lips. She held her eyes closed tight for a while before slowly releasing them, allowing the light to hit her at a pace that she dictated. Eventually, they were opened. What she saw did little to soothe her. From her prone position, she could see that she was in a small room. The window above her head had bars in it. She could hear someone breathing nearby.
"Am I in some sort of prison?" she asked out loud. She hoped that it was Maria she could sense.
"Lucky for you that's just where you are," a male's nasally voice droned. "If I had 'my' way, you'd have been executed on the spot. We execute assassins here."
"I'm not an assassin," Liz tried to sit up. Her head started to pound so she gave up. Instead, she lay back and tried to look around to see who she was talking to. He remained out of sight, by her feet. "My name's Liz. I'm here to see..."
"Yes, yes," the nasally voice interrupted. "Your friend said..."
"Where is Maria?"
"I'll ask the questions, if you don't mind." There was a sullen arrogance to his voice. "You say you're not an assassin? How can we know if you're telling the truth? Huh? I mean, if 'I' were an assassin, I would hardly go about announcing the fact, now would I?"
"I don't know," Liz muttered. The voice was starting to annoy her. She would dearly love to strangle its supercilious owner. "Would you?"
"I get it. That's a joke right? Well I'm not laughing."
"I only want to talk to Ma... Prince Zan. That's all. Just talk. I mean, I presume you had me searched when I was brought here. Did you find any weapons?"
"There are people who can kill with their bare hands, you know," the voice was smug. "I've seen it."
"Bully for you," Liz sighed. She was getting nowhere. "So, what happens now?"
"Like I said, if it was up to me, I'd have you executed. But it's not."
"Lucky me," she would have rolled her eyes had they not hurt so much. Liz saw a moment of opportunity. "Is it up to Zan? Will I get a chance to talk to him?"
"You're not listening, are you? I just told you it's not up to me."
In spite of her pain, Liz raised her head and forced her eyes open. Her heart fell. On the other side of a set of bars, just past her feet was the man she had come to see. Rather, it was an approximation of the man that she wanted to see. He looked very much like Max, except for the hair that hung around his head like a bad version of Moe from the Three Stooges having a good hair day. It was lank, and greasy and appeared to have been cut using a pair of blunt shears and a large bowl. He sported an uneven, splotchy beard and a horrible, lop sided moustache. His eyes, however, were nothing like the Max of her dreams. His eyes were not amber with his entire being so visible to her; they were dark, sullen and cold. There was no drive, no ambition, no... This was not the kind-hearted Max who wore his very soul on his sleeve. This was... someone else. This was Zan. Liz closed her eyes, hoping that when she opened them again, she would find that they had been playing a trick on her. They weren't.
"No," Liz fell back and started to weep. "No. This isn't happening. It's another dream. It's a nightmare. Please God. Let me wake up on my balcony with Max in my arms. Please let that be real and all this be the dream."
"Who's Max?" the nasal voiced one demanded. "Is he your accomplice?"
"No," Liz sobbed. "He's you. No, no. He's who you're supposed to be."
"That's one thing I never considered," he shook his head. "You're a raving lunatic."
"What are you going to do with me," Liz could not stop her weeping. "I want to see Maria. I want to go home."
"I can help with the first," Zan shrugged. "But the second. Well, I'm afraid that you're going to have to wait until your fate has been decided. I wonder if I can persuade the court that you're a witch. I haven't seen a good burning in such a long time."
"Go away," Liz snarled. "Leave me alone."
"I hardly think that you're in a position to..."
"Go away!" she screamed.
He seemed totally unconcerned by her reaction.
"So... who exactly are you?" his eyes narrowed as he peered at her. Suspicion oozed from every pore. "Why have you come here? If it wasn't your intention to kill me, why did you run at me like a demented banshee?"
Her eyes flared.
"A demen..." She started to reply in anger, but bit her tongue. She took in a deep breath and exhaled slowly. "Like I said, my name is Liz. I came here because... because I wanted to meet you."
"I see," he reached through his greasy locks and scratched his ear. "Because of my reputation, I suppose." He gave a smirk. "You wanted to experience being pleasured by me, right?"
"Not you," she spat under her breath. "I... you see... Look. It's really complicated, okay? You wouldn't understand."
"Try me," he shrugged.
"You're not Max," Liz shook her head.
"How do you know that? You just said that I was. Try me."
"Max would have understood," her voice was distant. "He would have known that I was telling the truth just by looking at me. He would have felt things. And not just physically, like you," she glared at his leering looks. "He would look into my eyes and we would see... ourselves. He knew me better than I knew myself and... Look, just forget it, okay? You're not Max. You never will be."
"I have no doubt about that," he nodded. "I am Zan. Prince Zan. This Max sounds a bit of a weirdo. A nobody. And as forgetting it, how can I? Unless you tell me what brought you here, I will have to assume that it was either to be my assassin, in which case I will have you executed, or to be my mistress, in which case I will take you to my bed chamber and..."
"Kill me now," Liz shook her head.
"I see," he raised his eyebrows.
"It was a dream, okay?" Liz spat.
"A dream?"
"Yes."
"I see. About me?"
"Yes. No." Liz grabbed two hands full of her hair. "I don't know. About Max, who used to be you. Or who you became. I don't know. But he was different. The dream led me here. To find him."
"I see. And how exactly did you get here? I mean, there's no way you would have been able to sneak past the guards, at least, not without inside help. So how did you get here?"
"I came in the Granolith." Liz realized her mistake at once.
"The..." Zan paused.
He stood up, and started to pace.
"You lie!" he spat. "You've been sent by my enemies."
"No," she shook her head. "No one sent me. I came 'cause..."
"Because?"
"Because..." Liz's voice fell to a hoarse whisper. "I wanted to find the man who would love me like no other man can." She looked up. Disgust dripped from her very being. "I wanted to find Max. But instead, I found you."
He turned on his heel and stormed from the cell. Liz curled into a ball and started to sob. This dream was not turning out so nice after all.

* * *

She heard a key turn in the lock. The door opened, but it made no sound. She heard the door shut and the lock turn again.
"Liz," Maria's voice whispered from above her. She felt her friend's arms wrap around, pulling her into a protective embrace. "Are you okay?"
"Oh, Maria," Liz wailed. "What have I done?"
"So you met Romeo, huh?"
"He... he's nothing like Max," her voice shook. "Nothing at all."
"I would hope not," Maria stroked her hair. "I mean, I always knew that whoever you give your virginity to would have to be special."
"Max was," Liz nodded. "Very special. But nothing like... like..."
"The nose?"
"He has a big nose?" Liz hadn't noticed.
"No," Maria grinned. "He just sounds like he does. But look at it this way. We only have the bad, and then the good to go."
"What do you mean?" Liz frowned.
"We already met the ugly."
In spite of her feelings, Liz started to laugh. Maria laughed with her.
"That's better."
"What are we going to do, Maria?" Liz rested her head on Maria's shoulder.
"Something will turn up. I mean, no way Syrus is going to let anything happen to us. Not after he went to all that trouble to bring you here."
"But even if he gets us out? What then?"
"As I see it, we have two choices. Either we can sneak away and try to find the Granolith..."
"Do you know the way there?" Wiping the tears from her eyes, Liz looked hopeful. "Did you memorize the route or something?"
"No," Maria shook her head with an apologetic frown. "There were just too many turns and I was more concerned about how they were treating you. They weren't exactly gentle."
"So what's my other choice?"
"We try and turn that... that... thing into someone that might, just might, stand a chance against a real man. And let's face it. Seeing as he's not Max, do we care if he does or not? I mean, going home wasn't conditional on Zan winning." Maria's face fell. "Was it?"
"You mean I have to spend time with that... arrogant..."
"Smelly."
"No," Liz's face fell. "Tell me he doesn't smell, Maria."
"I don't know. I mean, he looks like he would."
"Yeah," she nodded. "Oh God. I must have been so evil in my previous life to be punished like this."

* * *

How long they sat in the cell, they couldn't say. With the constant illumination, the source of which they never found, it was impossible to tell what time of day it was.
"I met Rath, by the way," Maria informed Liz. "While his 'arroganceness' was in here, they wouldn't let me near you. He left Rath to keep an eye on me."
"Oh," Liz nodded.
"And you tell me that I fell for that... that..."
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "You were in love with him. I was in love with Max and Alex..."
"God, I hope Alex is okay."
"I expect they're all going frantic," Liz whispered as she nodded at Maria. "Searching for us. I hope they don't think Alex did something to us. I wish we could get a message home."
"We'll be home in no time, Liz," Maria was adamant. "Yes siree, any minute now, someone is going to come and open that door and say, 'So sorry, my dear. It's all been a terrible mistake.'"
"That would be funny," Liz forced a grin. "If you hadn't been saying it, like, for the last few hours."
"Like I said." Maria hoped she sounded confident. "Syrus needs you. He'll release us, or see to it that we are."
"So... What was Rath like?" Liz did not want to dwell on Syrus and his task for her.
"Like... a total... dork."
"You and him fought in my dream, too." Liz smiled.
"If he had a spine, maybe we could fight," Maria rolled her eyes. "He spent most of the time hiding behind the guards. I kept shouting at him and he kept hiding. Oh yeah. And want to know what Ma... Zan did? When you ran toward him, I mean? He tried to hide behind Rath. Rath was busy trying to hide behind him. What a pair of sissys. And I'll tell you something else. Those guards don't like either of them. I think they were wishing you were an assassin, and that you were too clever for them. They looked... disappointed that you failed."
"Sorry, Maria," Liz started a fresh wave of tears.

* * *

A guard appeared at the cell. He unlocked the door and allowed it to swing open.
"Now what?" Maria roused herself from the half doze they had fallen into.
"You will come with me," the guard requested in a neutral voice. He stepped back from the door.
"Who?" Maria looked from the guard to Liz. "Which one of us?"
"Both of you," he shrugged.
"Now what?" Liz echoed Maria's groan as she rose to her feet.
Maria studied her friend, wondering just how much she could take before she... disintegrated.
"Where are you taking us?" she demanded as she followed Liz through the cell door.
"You will see," the guard replied.

They followed the lone guard along corridors, past doorways and up flights of steps.
"They don't seem to be too concerned about us taking off," Maria observed. "Only one guard."
"Where would we go, Maria?" Liz asked. "Do you have any idea where we are? How to find the Granolith from here?"
In spite of the embarrassment she felt, Maria was pleased with herself. Liz had been too quiet, immersed in her dark thoughts. She wanted her friend focussed so that they could both be alert to an opportunity of escape.
"So, where do you suppose they're taking us?"
"Don't know," Liz shrugged. "If it was to see the king, I think we might have had a larger escort." Her eyes grew hard. "What with me being so dangerous."
"He really got to you," Maria placed an arm around Liz's shoulder. "Didn't he?"
"It's just... He was so different to Max. I mean, yeah, in the early days, Max seemed shy and removed. But that was because of his terrible secret. But he was never so... unsure of himself. He was never a coward. This Zan, he's a..."
"A wuss?"
"Got it," Liz touched Maria's elbow. "I mean, it's not as if Zan has got some life threatening secret here, has he?"
"As a Prince, I would think he's got it made. Which is probably why he's the way he is." A sudden realization struck her. "You're going to help him, aren't you?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "I'm going to turn Zan into Max or die trying."
"That's a figure of speech. Right?"
Liz smiled.
"You know I'll always be here for you, Liz..."
"Thank you, Maria," Liz hugged her.
"But I am so afraid that it really is going to cost you your life."

At last, the guard stopped by a large door. He opened it, and stepped back. He indicated that they should enter.
"In here?" Maria peered through the portal.
"In there," the guard confirmed.
"Come on, Maria," Liz brushed past the two of them and stepped into the room.
She stopped at once, forcing Maria to collide into the back of her.
"Whoa!" they both exclaimed as they stared around the room impressed with what they were seeing.
Unlike the cell which, although comfortable, had been pretty spartan, this room could only be described as...
"Opulent," Maria nodded her approval.
"It's like how I would imagine Buckingham Palace to look," Liz looked around.
The large room held luxurious furnishings - thick carpets, heavy curtains, comfortable looking chairs and sofas. The room had been decorated in gold and pastel greens. Through two separate doorways, two bedrooms could be seen. Both were identically decorated, containing a large four poster bed with matching green and gold curtains.
"Who do you suppose arranged all this?" Maria shook her head in wonder.
"I'll give you three guesses," Liz's eyes grew hard. "But if he thinks he's going to use me as his mistress, he's in for a big surprise."
A woman walked out from one of the bedrooms. She paused, and stared at them with wide eyes. Liz and Maria exchanged glances.
"And you would be...?" Maria looked at he woman.
"I would be Adaile," the woman curtsied with a smile. "I guess I'm to be your Lady in waiting."
"What's that?" Maria turned to Liz.
"Fancy name for a maid."
"Maid?" Maria's mouth dropped.
"That's your room, Lady Maria" she pointed to the other door.
"Lady Maria?" Maria mouthed in silenced to Liz.
"And this room is yours, Lady Elizabeth. If you would like to come in here, I'll show you everything you need to know."
They both entered Liz's room, looking around to take everything in.
"You each have a complete wardrobe," Adaile opened a doorway to a small closet holding several dresses.
"How did you know our sizes?" Maria frowned.
Adaile cast a strange look at Maria, as if the question were foolish.
"Through here is the bathroom. Now, if you wish to have a bath, you set the temperature here, and fill from here." Adaile pointed at two small levers. "There are plenty of perfumes and soaps, and I will replenish any that you run short of. If there is anything else you need, just ask."
"Are we allowed razors?" Maria asked. "You know. To shave our legs?"
"You still...?" Adaile stared with widened eyes. "I will see if I can find you any. Now, I'm sure that you are fatigued by your ordeal. I'll leave you to freshen up."
"Thank you, Adaile," Liz's voice was tight. "But can you tell me who made the arrangements for our release, and for these rooms?" She had her hands on her hips.
"You may leave now, Adaile," a familiar voice called from the doorway. "I wish to question our visitors."
"At once, your grace," Adaile curtsied as Syrus entered the living quarters. He held his hand up to silence both Liz and Maria while Adaile scampered out of the room. He followed her to the door and watched out down the corridor. Certain that she was gone, he closed the door behind him, and passed his hand over it. "Just making certain we won't be over heard."
"Your Grace?" Liz raised one eyebrow. "Was there something you forgot to tell us?"
"Oh, that," he shrugged. "You see, I'm the senior Archpriest," Syrus shrugged, as though the title meant nothing. "The church's representative to the king."
"So this Granolith that you used to send me the dream, it's a...?" Liz waited.
"A religious Icon, yes," he nodded, his eyes darting from side to side. "Just an artifact. Powerful, I'll admit, but still..."
"And was it you who sorted this out for us?" Maria crossed her arms and tilted her body.
"Well, not for the both of you, no," he shook his head. "I thought that only Elizabeth would come. I didn't expect her to bring a friend."
"Good job she did," Maria huffed. "I'm the only one she's got on this planet."
"I too am a friend," he looked hurt. "I had sent someone to find you, to bring you to your chamber, but you went exploring. He failed to find you until after you ran into Zan."
"Yeah," Maria glared. "About that, how come Zan is so different from the dream, huh?"
"He's not that different, surely? I tried to make the two of them similar, highlighting those qualities I believe Elizabeth can bring out."
"Highlighting?" Maria rolled her eyes. "Magnification times one hundred."
"So what's next?" Liz collapsed into a seat. "I've met Zan. He's a jerk, he doesn't like me, and I certainly don't like him."
"Then all is lost," Syrus seemed upset.
"I didn't say I had given up," Liz continued. "I just want to know if you have any suggestions for the next step."
"Well, tomorrow is a full day. You will be presented to the King as relatives of the King of a distant state that we have had no conflict with. You will see Zan there. When the King holds summons you, you attend. Whether you're his son or the lowest of workers. I suggest you meet him there and speak with him on a more even footing."
"It will be a pleasure," Liz's dark eyes sparkled with malice.

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Hi everyone.

That you are still with me is a good sign, I think. :) That you don;t hate me is even better! :wink: If I made Zan too much like Max already, where would the conflict be? As you all know, I gota have my conflict. :) And my cliffhangers. LOL

Thank you for your feedbavck, and continued support. I know there hasn't been much L/Z interaction, and I 'm afraid that it will remain so for a while, because there are things you guys need to know before we start. You know, my little clues, hints and red herrings, of which I have already laced three or four. :wink:

BTW - for the record, Zan doesn't smell. Maria only thought that he looks like he should. Okay? I would never be THAT cruel to our Liz. :wink:

Oh, a plea for help. Does anyone know where Faith Evan's site moved to? I like to keep a track of the websites that have my stories, and I can't find this one any more. Thanks.

PS - Due to home commitments, my posts on Fridays could be at any time. Sorry.

roswellluver - And it was so fun! LOL

youre my dreamgirl - Liz kicking Max's ass? Now, when could she EVER do that? :wink:

polar vixen - I had to double check moes name. It's been so long since Isaw the three stooges, but I never forgot his haircut! :wink:

smokie - Max's promise was part of her dream. Wasn't it? :wink: Okay. Wait till you meet Denda (Zan's half brother) then tell me what you think. :) Typical Englishman? I am anything but typical. Ask LTL. Then again, how many Englishmen does she know? I have never worn a bowler hat and the only umbrellaI posses is for golf! LOL

Zevrillon - Funy you should say that. In my first draft, Liz slapped him. I changed it when I thought she might feel too intimidated, being in a cell.

Lyscat - The way Zan looks is not considered fashion. He's just a geek. :wink: And remember, he is a Prince. There are always gold diggers, no matter what society. As for Ava and Vilondra, wel, we shall have to wait and see, but considering what I did to Zan and Rath, hazard a guess???

I love Orli - You might be surorised at just what Liz has to do to get through to Zan and how long it takes. :wink:

Smac - I must confess that although I was chuckling as I wrote, I did worry that you might not see the funny side. :wink:

woodwinds - As Zan was the one 'attacked', I guess he felt it only natural to interrogate her first. :wink: Crow over her to restore some self esteem, perhaps?

frenchkiss70 - I sureely did! :twisted: Don't forget his splotchy beard.

aurorasky - Well, the scene where Liz starts to whip zan into shape should interest you, then. Anyone want to guess how Liz schieves this? :wink:

AJK001 - Understanding is good :) I'm sure we will see Max in this story. Eventually. :wink:

mareli - Yeah. He was the real Zan. Sorry. :(

Asabetha - LOL - you mean, you DO hate me? :wink: WILL be fun :wink:

roswellfiend - Hey, have to give Liz a little work to do. Make the end product all the more loveable. :) YOu know, in all the times I've shaved, my eyes never changed color! LOL :wink:

kissme4ever123 - what. :wink: Do you rteally think Liz would submit to Zan when she wouldn't submit to Max for ages (according to TEOTW) :wink:

BehrObsession - Yes, Liz has a long and winding road to travel before she finds the yellow brivk one. :wink:

RedRoze68 - I'm sorry that the dream thing disappoints you, but, maybe it will all come out in the wash. :wink: There will be a better explanation of the dream thing later on. Okay?

BelevnDreamsToo - Maybe Zan is a frog, and one kiss... At least he doesn't have Shrek's fairy godmother! :wink: Liz's room does come with a price. She must deliver Zan. Syrus provided the room, not Zan.

podsquad rocks - Adaile's question about shaving (if not already obvious) will be adressed later. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - If you hated me, then I would have known that I messed up for sure! LOL And FYI, that mysterious woman is NOT the lady in waiting. :)

SarahWhitman - Ah yes. The $64000 question. Why are Zan and Rath so diamtrically opposite the dream Max and Michael. You will have to read the whole story for that answer. :)

LTL - Tell them I am noit a typical Englishman. I don't even own a bearskin hat! No, I couyld never leave Liz in a cell. I had to make her comfortable. Syrus will no doubt explain. :wink:

Itzstacie - I must warn you that I will concentrate more on Zan and Liz that what Maria is up to with Rath. Sorry. But you will get glimpses.

Roswelllostcause - I'm sure Liz has it in her. After all, she stayed with the dream! :wink:

Devil Kitty - LOL Hey, If Liz ran, there would be no story, and you won;t see how this pans out! :wink:

cherie - Yup. Major makeover, but at least they know what the end product should be like. :)

Scottie - Did you have a nice time? Where id you go? :) I'm sure Liz's seamstress work will amuse you :)



Love Will Come Through,
Travis



If I told you a secret
You won't tell a soul
Will you hold it and
Keep it alive

Cause it's burning a hole
And I can't get to sleep
And I can't live alone
In this life

So look up, take it away
Don't look da-da-da-down
The mountain

If the world isn't turning
Your heart won't return
Anyone, anything, anyhow

So take me, don't leave me
Take me, don't leave me
Baby, love will come through
It's just waiting for you

And you stand at the crossroads
Of highroads and lowroads
And I've got a feeling
It's right

If it's real what I'm feeling
There's no make believing
The sound of the wings
Of the flight

Of a dove, take it away
Don't look da-da-da-down
The mountain

If the world isn't turning
Your heart won't return
Anyone, anything, anyhow

So take me, don't leave me
Take me, don't leave me
Baby, love will come through
It's just waiting for you

Oh, look up, take it away
Don't look da-da-da-down

If the world isn't turning
Your heart won't return
Anyone, anything, anyhow

So take me, don't leave me
Take me, don't leave me
Baby, love will come through
It's just waiting for you

Love will come through
Love will come through
Love will come through



Part 8

"I'm sure we look fine, Adaile," Liz tutted as their Lady in waiting fussed about them one more time, ensuring that everything was as it should be.
Although she didn't really mind the maid checking her, Liz voiced her complaint only as a means of breaking the silence in which her nervousness grew.
"It took us long enough," Maria lifted the heavy cloth that made up her ornate dress and allowed it to fall again. "I'm so glad I'm a ninety's girl. Give me a mini dress and Victoria's Secret over all this..." she wrinkled her nose, "stuff any day."
"You could always wear the dress you arrived in, Maria," Liz giggled.
Maria knew that although Liz sounded chipper, inside, she was still numb from her initial meeting with the man who was supposed to be her soul mate.
"Only if you wear yours," Maria rolled her eyes. "Are you as nervous as I feel?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "It's the first time I've ever met a King."
"Are you kidding, Liz?" Maria raised her eyebrows. "In your dream, you fu..."
"Maria," Liz scolded, pressing her hand over Maria's mouth. Liz raised her eyebrows and indicated Adaile's presence with a nod of her head.
"Sorry," Maria mouthed.
There was an urgent knocking at the door. Adaile gave her charges the final once over and scurried to the door. She opened it to reveal a soldier dressed in ceremonial regalia.
"My Lady," the soldier gave a small bow. "I have come to escort the visitors to court." His voice was filled with self-importance.
"Court?" Maria wailed. Her face looked fearful.
"Stop being such a drama queen, Maria," Liz rolled her eyes. "When the King meets and greets people, it's called his court."
"I knew that," Maria started to breath again.

The soldier gave them a brief bow as they stepped passed Adaile, who continued to hiss her instructions at them.
"Don't speak unless spoken to, curtsey the first time you're introduced, he's 'your majesty' the first time and 'sire' after that..."
"Adaile," Liz rolled her eyes. "We're not a couple of country bumpkins."
"Speak for yourself," Maria murmured. "I really, really feel like a bumpkin just now."
They followed the guard along the corridor and through some doorways.
"Do you think he's lost?" Maria whispered. "I'm sure we passed that door before."
Liz shook her head.
The soldier turned down a staircase, which descended three flights. They emerged through some double doors into a huge, airy, bright room. It was filled with people, and the soft susurrus of people holding urgent, whispered conversations. Some people looked worried while others looked terrified. The noise stopped while everyone turned to view the newcomers. After their curiosity had been sated, the sound picked up again.
"Is this the throne room?" Maria's whispers added to the atmosphere.
"I'm not sure," Liz shook her head as she looked around the room. "I don't think so."
The guard ignored everyone in the room, and continued to lead the two girls to the other side. People parted like water to let them past. Maria almost walked into the back of their escort before she realized that he had stopped. They were in front of a large ornate door, decorated with gold trimming. Two guards with vicious looking halberds, crossed to prevent access to the door, stood sentry.
"I require passage to see the King," their guard chanted with such a regular cadence that Liz knew this was ceremonial.
"On whose authority do you seek passage?" one of the sentries called back.
"On the King's authority. I bring visitors seeking audience."
"Do you vouchsafe the visitors?"
"I do."
"Then you may enter, with the King's blessings. May his almighty eminence bless you for carrying out his duty."
"And be blessed for yours also."
The halberds parted, and the door opened.
"This is it," Liz sucked in a lung full of air.

The room that they entered could not have been anything else other than the throne room. It was grand and ornate, like the pictures of the great European cathedrals Liz has once seen with high stone arches and vari-colored windows. Great colorful banners hung from poles high up the smooth walls. To one end of the hall, a raised dais held two thrones with intricate carved decorations. The room was packed with people, some looking content, some had strange gleams in their eye while many looked apprehensive. There was a lot of tension in the air that buzzed with muted whispers.
"Doesn't seem to be a cheerful place," Maria looked around at he crowd.
"No," Liz agreed. "I kind of thought... I mean... I didn't really know what I expected," she sighed. "You know, Max was so... I don't know... easy going. If he had been king, I don't think people would have seemed nervous in his presence. I guess this Azande isn't much like Max either."
The room fell to a hush when a courtier dressed in a black tabard stepped up onto the dais.
"Blessed are you, who are about to be graced by the company of their magnificent Majesties, the righteous and good benefactors of our society, God and Goddess of all Antar and the five kingdoms, I give you their royal highnesses, King Azande and his favorite concubine, Queen Layola."
The room fell to one knee with their backs bent over and their heads bowed low. Liz and Maria glanced at the people, before copying. Liz looked up as she saw movement from the corner of her eye. Two figures climbed onto the dais. King Azande, though clearly aging, held the look that suggested he was once an imposing man. His graying hair and graying beard barely hid his weathered, lined face. His robes were of the purest white, streaked with gold trimming. He carried a scepter, though he held it more like a weapon than a badge of office. His wife, Queen Layola stepped one pace behind him, similarly clad in white, but unlike her husband, she was adorned with jewels. She was smaller than him, perhaps the same size as Liz. Her face was hidden from her, but Liz could see that she was only young. When the younger Queen looked up and Liz saw her face, she gasped, the sound echoing around the still chamber. People near to her, including Maria, glanced at her.

"All rise," the courtier called when the royal couple had sat on the throne.
"What was that about?" Maria whispered as the audience rose.
"The Queen," Liz's heart was pounding. "She's the spitting image of Tess."
"What?" Maria's mouth fell open. "Tess, from your dream?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded, unable to look away from the Queen. "Only older."
"But that doesn't make sense. In your dream, she was Zan's young bride. Not his father's. Unless. Eeew!" Maria screwed up her face. "I read Oedipus."
"No," Liz shook her head. "Zan isn't her son, the other one is."
"She hardly looks old enough to have had a son." She looked up at the king. "Pervert. So where's Ma... Zan?"
"I don't know," Liz was looking around the room, but because of her height, rather, her lack of it, she couldn't see very much. "I can't see him."
"Oh, look," Maria pointed back to the dais. "Syrus is here."
"What's he doing up there with the King?" Liz sounded concerned.
"Maybe he like, wants to introduce us or something."
"Hail, your majestic divinities," he prostrated himself on the floor. "All blessed are those who worship at your feet. On behalf of the Church of Antar, I, Arch-priest Syrus, pledge our wholehearted allegiance to our Gods."
"Arch-priest?" Maria whispered to Liz.
"That is good, Syrus," Azande nodded. "We are pleased with our church. You may rise."
Syrus climbed to his feet and moved to the side of the dais.
"Seneschal," Azande called. "Proceed with the day's business.
"At once, sire," a small oily man dressed in black, carrying a large leather bound book leapt onto the dais. He opened it, leafing through pages.

"What the heck is going on, Liz?" Maria hissed. "What's all that about divinity and stuff?"
"It sounds," Liz looked disgusted, "like the King thinks he's a God. I know the Roman emperors compared themselves to living gods, but I've never heard of it in Kings or anything."
"There's always a first. No wonder Zan is so arrogant," Maria rolled her eyes. "And what the heck is a sene... senshral?"
"Seneschal?" Liz smiled. "It's another name for... like, a chamberlain or something. Like the Secretary of State."
"A big name for such a little man," she shrugged. "Does he remind you of Danny Devito as the Penguin?"

"The first order of the day, my lord," the oily man called, "is with Baron Tordran."
"Then summon him, Seneschal," the King gave a bored shrug.
"Baron Tordan," the Seneschal called. "Make yourself known to your King and God."
"I am here, my liege," Tordan stepped through the crowds to the base of the dais. A tall, impressive man, Liz was reminded of Russell Crowe from Gladiator, only older. Here was a man who had seen many battles. He even wore the uniform of a military man, his breast glinting with medals.
"Ah," Azande nodded in recognition. "General Tordan. How good it is to see you again. What is it that you have done this time?"
"Baron... ah, General Tordan executed twenty villagers he caught hiding supplies and weapons for the bandits," the Seneschal informed the King.
"Did he now?" He turned to Tordan. "I'm surprised that your people are foolish enough to support them."
"They were not my people, sire," the general bowed. "They belonged to my neighbor, the Earl of Sadolan."
"How is it that you discovered their plot to supply these bandits?"
"One of my gamekeepers was hunting a wolf that had slain one of my deer. He tracked it into Sadolan's forest when he came upon the villagers laying down supplies in a small cave. Being a loyal subject to you and me both, he hurried to inform me of this treachery. With a body of armed men, we rode to the cave and laid in wait. Sure enough, a small group of bandits arrived and started to load the goods onto a wagon. We tried to capture them... but they fought... to the last man. Afterwards, we rode to the nearby village and arrested the culprits, identified by my gamekeeper. We executed them on the spot and hung their bodies in the trees as a warning to all those who would support such treasonous scum."
"Very good, Tordan," the King nodded with approval in his eyes. "And where is the Earl of Sadolan? Just what does he have to say about all this?"

"The Earl of Sadolan," the oily Seneschal called out again. "Make yourself known to your King and God."
An older, smaller man dressed in normal clothing, for Antar, stepped through the crowd.
"I am the Earl of Sadolan," he bowed. "And I refute before my God, the claims of the butcher, Tordan."
"Take care of what you say, Sadolan," Azande warned. "Tordan is one of my most trusted generals."
"Nevertheless, sire, Tordan has falsely accused my villagers. There is no such cave on my land, and my people do not support the bandits. He murdered my villagers because they would not submit their women for his soldier's delight. He is using the story of supplying the bandits to cover his murderous actions and to curry favor with you, sire."
"Are you daring to suggest, Sadolan, that as your God, I am unable to see into the soul of my worshipers and see the guilt?" He turned to his Queen. Liz could have sworn that he saw a hint of nervousness cross his face. "What do you think, my dear?"
"I think that Sadolan's villagers have far too much time on their hands if they have time to store goods away for the bandits. I also think that they produce far too much excess that they can give it away like that. Make Sadolan's people work harder so they have no such spare time, and increase their taxes so that we may feed 'our' armies rather than the bandits."
"Let it be so," Azande nodded at the Seneschal who scribbled the punishment down in his book. "Additionally, give one fifth of Sadolan's land to Tordan in reward for his vigilance. And to impress upon the others how I will not tolerate such support for the bandits that plague our Kingdom. I want Sadolan flogged. Immediately!"

Stocks were wheeled in through the doorway. Screaming his innocence, Sadolan was grabbed by some soldiers and tied to the stocks. They were not too gentle with the old man. A very large and very mean looking soldier with an ugly scar across one eye ripped the shirt from Sadolan's back.
"This is horrible," Liz turned away. "That poor man."
"You realize that this is Zan's father, right?" Maria too looked away.
When they heard the sickening sound of leather striking the man's back, they closed their eyes and covered their ears. They kept them squeezed close until they could no longer hear the muffled screams of the old man. When they finally uncovered their ears and open their eyes, they heard Azande's comment.
"Quite exhilarating."
Liz's blood boiled, and only Maria's hand grabbing her arm stopped her from saying anything.
"What's next?" Azande turned to his Seneschal.

"Ambassador Rualadin from Helsadoria is here, at your summons, my Lord."
"Ah yes," the King nodded. "Refresh my memory. Just why did I summon him, again?"
"You wish to reprimand him over the large numbers of Helsadorian soldiers that have been seen amassing just over our common borders."
"Ah yes," Azande nodded, his face turning pink with anger. "Summon the... man, now."
"I'm here, Azande," the ambassador bowed, but it was only a minute gesture. "No need to have your sycophantic monkey bellow out my summons."
The ambassador was a tall, thin man, perhaps in his forties. He reminded Liz of Sheriff Valenti in the way that he did not seem to be afraid of his surroundings.
"Well, Rualdin," Azande's face was red. "Just what do you have to say for yourself? Why is your army gathering in the forests across from my border?"
"They are there merely as a precaution, your majesty," he gave a thin smile. "My king decided to place them there in response to the army you have garrisoned on your side of our common border. If you removed your soldiers, then King Plantagette would remove his."
Azande exploded in anger. He rose to his full height.
"Are you trying to tell me where I may and may not place my own soldiers within the boundaries of my own country?"
"No more than you would try to tell King Plantagette where he may or may not station his own soldiers, your majesty."
"Don't try to play games with your betters, Rualdin!" Azande bellowed. "Remove those soldiers or I will send mine over and remove them myself. Permanently!"
Rualdin remained calm. He gave a courteous bow.
"Then that would be seen by my country as an act of war. Naturally, our allies would agree and we would feel honor bound to stop you."
"You do that, Rualdin. See that those soldiers are removed. You are dismissed."
Rualdin gave another bow and was escorted from the place room by some armed guards.
"Does this seem like the King that Syrus described to you?" Maria cocked an eye at Liz.
"No," Liz shook her head. "But I can see that putting someone like Max in his place would be a good thing."
"Except that Max doesn't exist," Maria pointed out.
"Yet," Liz smiled.

The Seneschal interrupted their conversation.
"Lady Elizabeth of America," he called out. "Make yourself known to your King and God."
"Oh my God," Maria exploded. "That's you."
"I know that, Maria," Liz rolled her eyes. "Come on."
Like the others before them, Liz and Maria pushed through the crowds to the base of the dais.
"You realize," Maria murmured through the side of her mouth, "that everyone is watching us."
"Did you bring your cedar oil, Maria?"
"Yeah, why?"
"You might just need it."
"Tell me you're not going to do anything stupid, Liz."
Liz did not reply. Maria reached into her pocket for her oil.
"She's going to do something stupid," she told no one in particular.
Liz made no indication of acknowledgement when she reached the dais, but Maria gave a weak curtsy and an even weaker smile.
"What have we here?" Azande demanded.
Syrus stepped from the position he had taken earlier.
"The Lady Elizabeth and her companion, Lady Maria have traveled a great distance from the small country of America, my Lord."
"I see," Azande stared at them with suspicion. "And why are they here?"
"Lady Elizabeth once met Zan, some time ago, and has come to... uh... renew their acquaintance. There might be political gain from such a union, sire."
"And why do they not pay homage?"
Liz answered before Syrus could speak.
"Because you are neither my King, nor my God. As such, I won't worship you any way, any when."
Azande stared at her. All around the court, the loud susurrus of outraged whispers echoed off the high vaulted walls. Maria tried to swallow, but with a dry mouth, found it impossible.
Azande started to laugh.
"I like your spirit," he chortled. "You would make someone a fine Queen."
His laughter was cut short by the evil glare Queen Layola threw him. She was not pleased.
"Yes," he coughed, fidgeting in his chair. "So you have an interest in the useless, spineless fruit of my loins that calls himself my eldest son, do you?"
From the King's side, Syrus gave Liz a small, almost imperceptible nod of his head.
"Yes," Liz gave a polite curtsy. "You could say that."
"I think," he grinned at his court. "That you may have taken a shine to the wrong one. Of my two sons, Zan is the least... disposed towards manhood."
"I've seen a side to him that no one else has," Liz grinned.
Syrus smiled at her, delighted with her answer.
"It must be well hidden then," the King started to chuckle. The rest of the court laughed with him. "No one else seems to have seen it."
"If anyone can find it," Maria jumped to her friend's defense. "It's Liz!"
"Liz?" Azande looked confused.
"Lady Elizabeth," Maria looked down and shuffled her feet.
"I see," the King shrugged. "Well, I wish you luck on your search. But if it proves to be like my firstborn, a waste of time, perhaps you would do well to meet with Denda. My other son. I'm told that the ladies prefer his company to Zan's in any case." Azande smirked with pride. "Quite the ladies man. I could arrange a meeting for you."
"That won't be necessary," Liz shook her head.
"Well, whomever you choose," he leered as he looked Liz up and down. "I look forward to your wedding night with great anticipation."
Liz's eyes widened in horror.
She opened her mouth to respond but was cut short by a crash from the door. Through a gap in the crowd, Liz saw a soldier, muddy and covered with blood collapse to the floor.

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Hi everyone,

Thanks for all your feedback. Considering that we seem to be nowhere near any 'nice' M&L moments in this story, I'm glad that you are all still here. :) And I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

Now, some of you seemed not to have picked up on the comment that King Azande made to Liz. It wasn't so much that he was giving his blessing for Liz to mary Zan, rather than his desire to see her getting married so that he can, as smokie pointed out, take up his "droit du seigneur"

From the Encyclopedia Britannica:

droit du seigneur
(French: "right of the lord"), a feudal right said to have existed in medieval Europe giving the lord to whom it belonged the right to sleep the first night with the bride of any one of his vassals. The custom is paralleled in various primitive societies, but the evidence of its existence in Europe is almost all indirect, involving records of redemption dues paid by the vassal.

Now, as to whether Azande gets his right or not...


polar vixen - I love hearing it every week :)

woodwinds - As to chaninging Zan, I think he is looked upon as a lost cause.

roswck - I'm sure you will like Denda. :)

Itzstacie - Sorry. You read it wrong. See the explanation above. :wink:

I love Orli - So far so good, then :wink: The explanation for my title, okay, here goes. Normally, I get the title idea as I get the main story plot idea. It just jumps out and bites me. This story, however, had two different titles before I this one leapt out. (My first working title was "Becoming Max" which I never felt happy with. The second title gave the plot away and I am sure one of you would have made the connection.) It came about when I wrote the notes about starting to reel in the plots. I typed "the time has come" and stopped. My mind carried on and said the rest. I thought "Bingo!" and there we have it. :)

frenchkiss70 - Yes. Although Layola looks like Tess, she IS Denda's mother. :evil:

smokie - As for p---y whipped males, it certainly seems so. :wink: Note that it is FRENCH! Not English!!!! However, I doubt that the English Lords did not take such advantages :wink: Smaller than Canada. :wink:

LTL - Jolly good show, what? Awfully decent of you, old chap(pette). :wink: Yes, it seems that Syrus sees our King through rose coloured spectacles, what, what?

LysCat - I'm glad I didn't have to explain Oedipus! :wink:

roswellluver - They sure are! :wink:

BelevnDreamsToo - You seem to have grasped the finer details! :wink:

kittens - Well, although it does appear the the Queen is in charge, he's not so senile as to recognise pretty girls when he sees them! :wink:

mezz - LOL - Updating more than once a week would be difficult. Once a week is hard enough! :wink:

aurorasky - The scene you are waiting for has been written. Hope you enjoy it (when it's posted! :wink:

AJK001 - Have you needed that seat belt yet? Not too difficult so far, is it? :wink:

Rookie - Thanks :)

kissme4ever123 - My reply is becoming a cliche :wink:

BehrObsession - Yeah. Somehow, Liz bowing to Azande didn't feel right. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Hmmm.. Just 'cause Layola looks like Tess, everyone thinks she's evil. LOL. The king is only interested in power (and young girls, it seems.)

BrinatheDream - Hello and welcome :) Maybe Liz will find Max in Denda. :wink:

SarahWhitman - I do indeed. :twisted:

Roswelllostcause - Note to self - turn up the heat. :wink:

Scottie - Love your thoughts. Been fishing lately? :wink:

mareli - Nieter. Do you understand now? And the dislike for Zan... yeah. Pity the poor guy but remember, Liz still wants him. Sort of. :wink:

podsquad rocks - Saturday? I post Fridays :) (Note, Freya was considered to be the Norse Goddess of love and beauty. :wink:)

cherie - Well, at least no one has screamed, "Off with her head!" ... yet. :wink:

Oh, check out the banner that Jen made for me. :)

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Black Magic Woman
Santana


I got a Black Magic Woman.
I got a Black Magic Woman.
Yes, I got a Black Magic Woman,
She's got me so blind I can't see;
But she's a Black Magic Woman and
she's trying to make a devil out of me.

Don't turn your back on me, baby.
Don't turn your back on me, baby.
Yes, don't turn your back on me, baby,
Don't mess around with your tricks;
Don't turn your back on me, baby,
'cause you might just wake up my magic sticks.

You got your spell on me, baby.
You got your spell on me, baby.
Yes, you got your spell on me, baby,
Turnin' my heart into stone;
I need you so bad,
Magic Woman I can't leave you alone.




Part 9

Women screamed while men rushed to the wounded soldier's assistance.
"Bring him here," Azande called. He snapped his fingers in rapid succession.
Two soldiers grabbed their colleague by his armpits and dragged him across the hall, leaving a trail of red and brown behind him.
"Speak!" Azande ordered.
"Sire," he croaked. "I have just come from the village of Westendeep. It was raised to the ground, my Lord. All the inhabitants butchered. The women and children too!" The room echoed to sounds of outrage. "There was nothing of value left. Kivar and his locusts have taken everything!"
"Damn that Kivar," Azande spat.

"Kivar?" Maria murmured. "Wasn't he in your dream?"
"Yeah," Liz nodded. "I wonder why Syrus didn't tell me about him?"
"He must be the bandit that the other guy was flogged for."
"Probably," Liz agreed.

"There's more," the wounded soldier gasped. "When we got there, it was too late. There was nothing we could do, so we followed the trail left by Kivar and his men. We... we were ambushed. They... they wiped us out."
"I bet Kivar enjoyed watching that," Azande glared. "Don't my soldiers put up a decent fight any more?"
"Kivar wasn't with them, sire," the soldier pushed on with a shake of his head. "Neither was Nikolas."
"Everyone knows that Kivar fights alongside his men. Could it be that someone else has taken over? Dare we hope that Kivar has been... ousted?"
"It could just mean that he had split his forces," someone from the crowd suggested. People turned to see who might have said this.
"You mean to suggest that my column was overrun by just half an army of ragtag peasants?" Azande was in a rage again."
"We fought as best we could," the messenger defended. "We did our duty."
"Yet you survived, I see."
"Someone had to bring you the news."
"Well, such a stern duty must not go un-rewarded," Azande thundered. "We must see to it that you are held up as an example to everyone else."
The messenger did not look happy as soldiers dragged him away.
"No prizes for guessing his reward," Liz pointed to the mean looking soldier who had flogged the Earl. He was following the grim procession, carrying a large, hooked sword, looking far too eager.

"Send for my generals!" Azande roared.
"Send for His Glorious Majesties' generals!" the Seneschal repeated.
From the audience, a number of men pushed through the crowd. They all looked to be impressive warriors, except that every one of them looked like they had been indulging in good living. Their bellies bulged around their middle.
"I want Kivar found!" Azande ordered. "Look for any trail, any clue as to where he might be hiding. I want the entire country searched. There can't be too many places a large army of peasants can hide. Question the villagers. Punish any you find helping Kivar. Find him!"
"My Lord," Syrus stepped forward. "Perhaps I might try some divination? Perhaps I... that is, the church..."
Azande and the generals laughed.
"Surely divination would be praying to your God for guidance, would it not? Why bother praying when he is right in front of you? Just ask him. Unless, of course, you have another god you worship."
"Is that so, Syrus?" Azande sounded dangerous. Liz suddenly felt exposed. "Do you worship another god?"
"Only you, my Lord," Syrus dropped to his knees. "You and Queen Layola. I only sought to offer the church's assistance to serve you."
"When I want your help, Syrus, I'll ask for it." He waved him away with one hand. "Go back to doing what you are good at." Azande's eyes sought out Liz. "Finding suitable maidens for my court."
When his eyes left her, Liz started to back away. Maria followed.

* * *

Liz found her path of escape blocked. She bumped into someone. She spun around to see who, or what. She found herself looking at Zan. He was leering at her.
"I knew you had the hots for me," he smirked. "I knew that you wanted to bed me."
"Could you be any more repulsive?" Liz looked disgusted. "I told you. It's not 'you' I want. It's Max."
"Uh huh," he winked. "And didn't you say that Max was me? I must say, I like what I see. I can't wait to see more of you." His gaze stopped at her breasts. "Although, I wish you were better stacked. Something... you know," he held his hands out in front of his chest. "To here."
"If this wasn't so important to me," Liz seethed through gritted teeth, "I would leave right now and leave your miserable ass to whatever fate has planned for you." She barged past him. "And for god's sake," she threw over her shoulder. "Get a haircut!"

"Your meetings with Zan keep on getting better and better," Maria smirked.
"Shut up Maria," Liz spat, turning to face her.
"Liz!" Maria gasped. "Watch out!"
Liz backed into another person. This time, it was a woman. From the way she held herself, she appeared old. Unlike everyone else in the room who wore colorful outfits, this woman wore a black robe with a high hood that left her face in shadow.
"Oh, excuse me," Liz apologized. "I wasn't watching where I was going."
"You're wasting your time, young lady."
"Well," Liz shrugged, trying to peer at the shadowed face. "My parents brought me up to be polite, especially towards my elders."
"No," the woman's hood moved as though she was shaking her head. "Zan. His days are numbered, as are all members of this cheap circus act."
"Is that some kind of threat?" Maria looked at her with wide eyes.
"No," the woman stated. "Merely a fact. Go now, before it's too late for you. Return from whence you came."
"You know," Liz shook her head. "I can't do that. I came to do something and I mean to stay till it's done."
"Then I foresee a great sorrow for you, my dear. And a heart torn by two."
The woman started to scurry away.
"That's torn 'IN' two," Maria rolled her eyes. "Duh."
The woman stopped, turned to face them, and called back.
"Don't let Zan's doom be your own. Go now while you still have the choice."
"What was that?" Maria narrowed her eyes.
"Not sure," Liz watched the old woman vanish in the crowd. "I think I've been warned off."

"There you are," a young woman's voice called. The voice was arrogant and haughty. "I've been looking everywhere for you."
"You found us." Maria shrugged.
"Lucky me," the tall, fair haired woman looked down her nose at Maria. She held a look of distaste.
"Can I help you with something?" Liz asked with a politeness that belied her true feelings for this tall, young woman.
"Where did you say you come from?" she demanded.
Liz and Maria exchanged looks.
"America," Liz confirmed.
"I have not heard of such a country," the woman stated. "Where exactly does it lie?"
"Uhm..."
"Across the ocean," Maria blurted. "It's a long, long way away."
"I see," she stared with narrowed eyes. "So where was it exactly that you met Zan?"
"Oh," Maria waved her hands. "It was in...
"That place..." Liz continued.
"When we..."
"Were looking for a school to go to."
"Which was where?" the young woman did not seem convinced.
"You know what?" Liz stared up at the beautiful woman. "I don't really remember where I met him, and I don't really know what business it is of yours, so..."
"I see. And your father? He's a...?" She left the question hanging.
"Oh," Liz blinked, looking at Maria.
"He's a merchant," Maria offered.
"An important one," Liz agreed with a nod.
"Oh, absolutely," Maria confirmed. "One of the most important merchants in our city."
"People would starve if it wasn't for him," Liz exchanged a grin with Maria.
"Everyone comes to him. People travel from all over America to see him. They even hold conventions in his..."
"Place of work."
"Yeah," Maria bit back her laughter.
"And he is wealthy?" the haughty woman demanded.
"He believes so, yes," Liz nodded. "He once told me that he was the richest man in all the world." She neglected to add that her father believed this because he had his health, his wife and a daughter that made him so very proud. She smiled at the memory.
"What are you really doing here?"
"Excuse me?" Liz blinked.
"I didn't believe a word of what you told my father. I know my brother is a less than admirable person, but he is still my brother. You've met him. He's not exactly a ladies man, now is he? I can't believe that someone as beautiful as you, and, if you are to be believed, with your station would be interested in... someone like Zan."
"Well, that's where you are going wrong, Vilondra. I'm..."
"How did you know my name?" Vilondra gasped.
"I know many things about you," Liz smirked. "Didn't you know that merchants sometimes make use of spies? But like I was saying. You see, I have no interest in someone like Zan whatsoever. In fact, I don't even have an interest in Zan."
"But you said..."
"I am interested in Max, who Zan will become, if I have anything to do with it."
Vilondra stared through narrowed eyes at Liz.
"Then I shall do everything in my power to make sure that you have little to do with it. You don't belong here." She turned and stormed away.
"That's refreshing," Liz grinned.
"What is?" Maria frowned. "Being warned off again?"
"No," Liz laughed. "Vilondra is the only person I've met so far who has been anything like the person they were in my dream."

* * *

It took them a while to retrace their steps, but the pair managed to find their way back to their room. They felt somewhat relieved to find that Adaile was not there. They felt that they needed some alone time to sort through the madness that they had just witnessed.
"So, what was Zan's father like?" Maria asked. "In your dream, I mean."
"Dead," Liz shrugged, collapsing into the comfortable sofa. "Max... I mean, Zan was the king when he was... they were murdered. Max's mother arranged to have their cloned bodies sent to Earth."
"So basically," Maria fell onto the sofa beside her, "what's happening here is nothing like your dream."
"Nothing," Liz shook her head. "But I can see why Syrus wants someone like Max on the throne. His father is some kind of..."
"Monster?" Maria prompted.
"Yeah," Liz agreed. "Max would never have acted like that. And all the deity stuff? He thinks he's a God."
"What was with that looking forward to your wedding night?"
"Ugh!" Liz blanched. "Don't remind me. It's... It means he has the right to... uhm..."
"No!" Maria gasped in understanding.
"Uh huh."
"Whatever you do, Liz? Don't get married. At least, not here in Antar."
"No chance," Liz shook her head.
"You still want to continue?"
"You know I'm not a quitter, Maria."
"Yeah," Maria nodded. "But this is kinda... out there, though, isn't it?"

The door opened, cutting short their talk. Adaile walked in carrying a long, white cloth bag.
"Hello, ladies," she gave a short curtsy. "All went well, I trust? You met the king?"
"We met an egotistical, arrogant, fat headed pig," Maria shrugged. "I think he was wearing a crown."
Adaile's eyes widened.
"Please don't make such jokes, my lady," she gasped. "The king has eyes and ears everywhere. And he has brought great wealth and prosperity to the land."
"To his sycophants," Liz rolled her eyes. "He doesn't seem to be a very fair man, does he?"
"He is the king," Adaile stated as though it was explanation enough. "He is very wise."
"Yeah, right," Maria muttered. "Something that clearly runs in the family."
"What's that?" Liz nodded at the bag Adaile was carrying, hiding her smile at Maria's comment.
"It's a gift," Adaile held it up as if the two girls could see through the bag.
"A gift?" Liz raised her eyebrows. "For you?"
"No," Adaile smirked. "For you. It's a dress."
"A dress?" Liz asked. "From Syrus? Has he sent more dresses for us to wear?"
"No, silly," Adaile started to laugh. "It's from the Prince."
"A gift. From the prince. For me?" Liz narrowed her eyes. "What's the catch?"
"There's no catch, my lady," Adaile looked shocked. "It's for you to wear tonight. When he sends for you."
"When he sends for me?"
"Is there an echo in here?" Maria laughed.
"Yes," Adaile ignored Maria and nodded at Liz. "His Highness commands that you dine with him tonight." There was an unmistakable hint of jealousy to her voice.
"I'm not really up to dining with him," Liz shook her head. "Not until I've set the record straight."
"You do not disobey the Prince's command," Adaile looked shocked. "You would make things bad for yourself. For all of us." She indicated all three of them.
"Let's see the dress," Maria interrupted.
Adaile pulled the white covering from the dark red dress. At least, it looked like it might be a dress. The material was thin, with a plunging neckline, and long slits up the sides of the skirt. All in all, it looked very... revealing. Maria gave a long, low whistle.
"He really did like what he saw," Maria reminded Liz with widened eyes and a shake of her head.
"Max would never have done this," Liz glared at the dress. "He took things slow and left it up to me to decide how to dress. The more I get to know about Zan, the less like Max he seems."
"Who is this Max?" Adaile frowned.
"Long story," Maria laughed.
"I'll return after you have rested to help with your preparations," Adaile took the dress through to Liz's room. "We need to prepare your hair and your make up. We want to make an impression, don't we?" She left the room.
"We?" Liz stared at the door and shook her head.
"Sounds like you've already made quite an impression on the 'Prince'," Maria mimicked the reverential way Adaile spoke the word. "A dinner date already."
"But so unlike Max," Liz shook her head. "He would never command. He would have asked me, and been all hopeful I would say yes, yet afraid I would say no. He could be quite adorable." Liz rolled her eyes. "When he wasn't being so... frustrating."
"And that's some dress."
"I'm not wearing it," Liz shook her head. "He can command me to eat with him, but he can't control me."
"Come on," Maria led Liz toward the bed. "We could both use a nap. Me 'cause I'm tired. You 'cause you need your beauty sleep."

* * *

"Come on," Maria called out again. "Let's have a look."
Maria had sat in the living room, listening to Liz fighting Adaile every step of the way. Adaile had turned up to assist Liz in her preparations for her date, and had taken umbrage at being bathed by another woman. A few moments ago, when Adaile had been helping Liz into the dress that Adaile had brought with her, Liz had gone very quiet.
"I... I can't wear this, Maria," Liz shouted back at last.
"You already told me that once," Maria replied. "Let's have a look."
"Of course you can," Maria heard the maid tell Liz. "You have the prefect figure for it."
"It's obscene," Liz snapped. "If I have to wear this, I'm not going."
"You have to," Adaile wailed. The sudden fear in her voice did not go unnoticed. "You have to," she composed herself. "When the Prince gives an order, you must obey."
"Well?" Liz asked, stepping into the room.
Maria's mouth dropped open. Liz's red dress appeared to have been molded to her skin, showing nearly every contour and abrasion of her body. The neckline plunged to reveal the swell of her breasts while the slits in the skirt revealed an expanse of Liz's thighs at every step. Her hair had been piled upon her head, leaving a few tendrils twisting down the side of her face while her makeup had been mere touches to accentuate what Mother Nature had already provided.
"I think she looks lovely," Adaile breathed, clutching her hands to her bosom. "A final touch..." Adaile scurried back into Liz's bedroom.
"I don't care what she thinks," Maria glared. "It's not her dignity at stake. You are not going commando, I hope. Go and change, Liz.
"I'm not going commando, Maria," she shook her head. Looking in the large mirror, Liz started to grin. "You know what?" she asked softly. "I think I will wear this dress after all."
"Come again?" Maria's eyes widened with surprise. "But... Why?"
"To show him what he could have, but not until he becomes Max."
"Tell me you are not going to go, like, beyond with this guy."
"Of course not, Maria," Liz cast a stern look at her. "Not until he becomes the Max of my dreams, and not before I'm ready."
"Here," Adaile returned, holding a lace shawl which she wrapped over Liz's shoulders, covering at least some of her dignity.

There was a knock at the door. Adaile left Liz's side and scurried to open it. She pulled it open and stepped back to reveal two guards dressed in ceremonial uniform. If they liked what they saw standing before them, they made a good job of not showing it.
"This is your escort, Lady Elizabeth," Adaile told her. "They will escort you to the Inn where you are to meet the Prince."
"If you would be so kind as to follow me," one of the guards invited.
"Liz!" Maria called. "Be careful, yeah? Don't let him get fresh, and don't, I repeat don't fall for him."
Liz nodded in reply and looking apprehensive followed the guards. They took the same route to the throne room, but in the antechamber, they turned away from the ornate doors, and through a huge pair of shiny metal gates. They were outside now; it was evening. Overhead, a full moon cast its yellow glow across the landscape. There was an intricately designed carriage sitting by the gates. It appeared to be constructed entirely of gold scrolling and glass.
"Where are the horses?" Liz looked at the guards.
"We don't need any," the guard, holding a door open for her looked confused.
Liz shrugged and with as much modesty as she could muster, climbed into the carriage. After closing the door behind her, the guards climbed up onto the drivers' seats and the carriage started to roll. There was no obvious source of power and Liz's scientific mind started to conjure up all kinds of possibilities. The carriage rolled through the portcullis, across a bridge and left the huge castle walls behind them as they drove into the brightly illuminated city below. After passing by rows of tightly packed houses, they stopped outside of an Inn that reminded Liz of pictures she had seen from England. A huge sign hanging from the wall indicated that they had stopped at "The Crown." The guards climbed from their lofty perch and assisted Liz from the carriage. One of them opened the Inn's door and motioned for Liz to enter.

It was obvious that the Inn had been cleared out by royal command. In a room that should have been packed with the city's finest, there was no one to be seen. Someone had gone to a lot of trouble to set up a romantic ambiance. There was a roaring fire in the fireplace, though no heat or smoke emanated from it. Candles burning in wall mounted sconces bathed the room in a golden glow. Red, sweet smelling flowers seemed to have been stuffed into every available container, their heady bouquet filling the room. Soft music was playing, different from anything Liz had ever heard but pleasant nonetheless. She could see no sign of any speakers. A single table had been placed in the middle of the room, set for two people. A single red candle, tall and thin with a solitary red rose like flower entwined around it burned as a centerpiece. From the amount of glasses and cutlery that had been set, this was no ordinary dinner.
"Ten out of ten for style," Liz grinned.
"Thank you," a soft, high voice murmured from behind Liz. She turned to face him. "One should try ones best for a lady so lovely as yourself. The dress really suits you. I'm so delighted that I sent it. I am even more so that you wore it."
She looked at him, openly leering, as he looked her up and down.
"Who are you?" she demanded as she pulled her shawl to cover more of herself.

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Hi everyone,

Thanks again for your feedback, and I hope you all remembered what you had written previously, so that my comments made sense, because as you can see, I got purged. :wink:

Well, there wasn't much to explain about that part. Pretty straight forward.






frenchkiss70 - It sure seems that Antar is one crazy world. :wink:

mezz - Ah, but is Denda really what she wants Zan to be like?

BrinatheDreama - Ah, if mixing the two were that simple. But maybe you won;t want any of Denda in Zan! :wink:

roswellluver - Who indeed! A little too obvious, really. :wink:

Smac - The royal family are the Simpsons of Antar! LOL

AJK001 - I will certainly try! :wink:

I love Orli - Here's hoping! :wink:

mareli - Hmmm.... maybe that comment was one of my red herrings. :twisted:

aurorasky - Are you sure? Maybe Liz will be swept off her fet. :wink:

alienmom - Oh yeah! Another adjective to add to my reputation. :)

BehrObsession - Maybe. Maybe Liz will fall in love with both of them, to add a little zest to the claim for the throne! LOL

woodwinds - Seeing as 'Adaile' brought the dress to Liz, you can bet that she knows who invited her. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Giving up trying to second guess me seems to be a common theme. :wink: I am particularly proud of this one.

BelevnDreamsToo - Adaile, knowing who the invite (command is more like) is probably secretly in love with him. I say probably because I'm not sure if I know what's going on, either! :wink:

Devil Kitty - LOL. I guess you know only too well how hard it is coming up with a unique story line these days. I'm glad I found one. :)

Sarah Whitman - Definately not Max as he doesn;t exist yet. :wink: Pronbably not Zan, either.

Roswelllostcause - Hmmmm..... she said don't answere so... :wink:

Scottie - Ah. Please don;t get caught up in my lack of certain things. I.e - horses, heat, etc. It's my attempt to show that while in some ways backwards, their civilization is ahead of ours. So, I guess it's WRness.

cherie - Again, not artificial, just advanced. Food will have taste. Please don't try to find evidence that this is a dream. It's not. THIS is reality.

kissme4ever123 - Thank you :)

Serephinah - Thank you :) Well, if Liz is successful with Zan, I gusee Rath too will come around. :)

smokie - Liz might want to give up on the kingdom, but does she want to give up on Max? And boy. Talk about nailing the next part! But not 100%.

Okay, on with the date. :)




If It Doesn’t Come Naturally, Leave It
Al Stewart


Nothing that's forced can ever be right
If it doesn't come naturally, leave it
That's what she said as she turned out the light
And we bent our backs as slaves of the night
Then she lowered her guard and showed me the scars
She got from trying to fight
Saying oh, you'd better believe it.

Well I'm up to my neck in the crumbling wreckage
Of all that I wanted from life
When I looked for respect all I got was neglect
Though I swallowed the line as a sign of the times
But dealing a jack from the back of the pack
They said-"You lose again"
Oh, I said, who needs it?

Well don't get me wrong now I tried to get on
With the jokers that got in my way
And I put on a smile and I tried all the while to be straight
But they just wanted more all the time and I'm sure
That you know what I mean when I say
That I'm sick of the touch and there's only so much you can take.

Well nothing that's real is ever for free
And you just have to pay for it sometime
She said it before, she said it to me
I suppose she believed there was nothing to see
But the same old four imaginary walls
She built for living inside
I said oh, you just can't mean it

Well there was never a doubt that she had to get out
she was just looking around for a way
In the pit of the night there was nowhere to hide any more
She was out on a limb, she was reaching for things
That she wanted, but just couldn't say
And she had to be sure that she wouldn't get caught like before.

Well nothing that's forced can ever be right
If it doesn't come naturally, leave it
That's what she said as she turned out the light
And she may have been wrong, and she may have been right
But I woke with the frost, and noticed she'd lost
The veil that covered her eyes
I said oh, you can leave it.




Part 10

Maria watched Adaile tidy up the rooms that had been left in a mess after seeing to Liz’s preparations. She was amused at the jealousy their ‘maid’ was not hiding very well. She put things away with a little too much force while muttering to herself.
“Have a thing for him, yourself, do you?” Maria asked as she leaned against the doorframe and watched Adaile tidy the bathroom
The maid looked up, her head jerking to an upright position.
“No,” Adaile shook her head, looking more than a little guilty. “As if he would even look at me.” She rolled her eyes. “The very idea!”
“Well, I gotta warn you. Once Liz has him hooked, he’ll be a goner.”
“You say that like it should concern me,” she tried to sound casual.
“Whatever,” Maria shrugged. “You never did bring a razor. Did Liz shave her legs?”
“No,” Adaile shook her head. “I dealt with it for her.”
“What do you mean?” Maria frowned. “Dealt with it?”
“You people from America are truly backward,” Adaile shook her head. “Watch.” She pulled up her skirts, exposing her shin. She then passed her hand over the bare skin. Maria watched as a light coating of hair grew, in the same way that the handprint had appeared when Liz passed her hand over the rock wall. Adaile then swept her hand over the hair, and it vanished. “Like that,” Adaile smirked.
“Impressive,” Maria nodded.
“Can’t you do that?”
“Do you think Liz would have let you do it if she could have?”
“Was there anything else, Lady Maria?”
“Nah,” Maria pushed herself off the frame. “I’m going for a stroll.” She left the room before Adaile could try to stop her.

Maria tried to keep a map of her wanderings in her head, but she soon managed to lose herself again. The problem was, she decided, that every corridor looked exactly the same. She had turned through so many doors, Maria knew that she now stood no chance of finding her way back to her room. All she could hope for now was that she would bump into someone. After what seemed like hours, Maria heard voices ahead. The voices however, sounded like their owners would not appreciate being disturbed. Knowing full well what had purportedly happened to the cat who had been consumed by curiosity, Maria ignored her natural inclination to retreat and instead moved with as much stealth as she could muster to a dark alcove where she could try to eavesdrop. The two voices were low, whispered and strange to her ear.
“She’s with Denda?” the voice sounded surprised, yet sure of himself. “And she went willingly?”
“Maybe she’s in league with him. Maybe she’s part of some trap.”
The second voice, while sounding just as assured as the first, was a little deferential.
“Maybe,” the first agreed. “We’ll need to keep a close eye on her. Her friend, too.”
“I think we need to get rid of her,” a third voice added.
This was a voice Maria recognized instantly. It belonged to the ice princess herself, Vilondra. What was she doing here?
“I think she could cause trouble for us,” Vilondra’s voice continued.
“Let’s see what happens,” the first voice said after a pause. “Perhaps she will find him more attractive, and turn her attention to him. She seems intelligent enough to see where the wind blows. Maybe she will stir things up. It might give us the opportunity we need.”
“You mean she might help bring forward the day of Zan’s death?” Vilondra’s voice sounded like a smirk.
“Perhaps. Though that would in turn, bring the day forward when we…”
“Maybe the girl’s an assassin,” the second voice considered. “Maybe Denda brought her in to kill Zan for her.”
“That is something I think Denda wants to do himself. He’s never struck me as the cowardly type, especially when it comes to his half-brother. But regardless, it is a situation that warrants monitoring. It ‘has’ to be seen that Zan is killed at my hands.”
‘My hands?’ Maria mouthed in silence. Was this Kivar plotting with Vilondra, the death of her own brother? Liz had said that Vilondra had betrayed Zan in her dream. She needed to get back, but she knew that she dared not move.
“Someone’s coming,” the second voice hissed.
‘That has to be Nikolas,’ Maria clenched her fists. ‘The adolescent little…’
She heard the sounds of people scurrying away. Knowing that they could not have heard her - for she had remained motionless throughout – Maria waited until she could hear no more from the departing conspirators before she slipped from her alcove and started to try and retrace her steps. She did wonder whom it was that might be moving around in this part of the castle and wondered if she might find directions from them. Maria turned the corner, looking back over her shoulder and walked into something.

“Oof!” she grunted, realizing that the ‘something’ was actually a ‘someone’.
Maria was surprised when the person she had collided with bounced backwards and fell to the ground. Surprised, that is, until she saw who it was.
“Why don’t you watch where you’re going,” she snapped at Rath. She glanced over her shoulder, fearful that the voices might return and catch them.
“Me?” he whined, covering a quick look of fear as she stood himself up and dusted his backside. His eyes scanned his surroundings, as though he was looking for a way to escape. “You were the one who wasn’t watching what they were doing. What are you doing back here, anyway?”
“My friend Liz has gone out on a date with Zan, so I thought I would do some exploring. I kind of got lost.”
“Liz?” Rath narrowed his eyes. “Who’s Liz?”
“My friend. Lady Elizabeth?” Maria shook her head at Rath’s weak voice. “You know, the mighty female warrior assassin that terrified you guys so badly, protected as you were with all those soldiers.”
“Oh,” he nodded. “Her. Well, she’s not with Zan.”
“What do you mean,” Maria’s voice rose several decibels. “She’s not with Zan?”
Rath winced, covering his ears.
“Can you shout any louder?” he demanded. “I don’t think they heard you down in the city.”
“Of course she’s with Zan. He invited her to dinner.”
“No,” Rath shook his head. “I just left Zan a while ago. We were drinking, and…” His voice fell away.
“So then who…” Maria looked puzzled. “Oh my god. Liz is with the other one. He sent her the dress and Liz thought… Where are they eating? I have to find her.”
“What are you talking about?” Rath frowned.
“Listen. My friend thought she had a date with Ma… I mean, Zan. Okay? Only it wasn’t him and she dressed like she’s never dressed up before so his eyes would pop out thinking it was Zan cause she wanted him to see, see, and if I don’t find her she’s gonna be so embarrassed and she won’t know how to handle him and might end up doing something stupid ‘cause she’s not really experienced enough with guys and if Zan’s brother is the kind of guy I think he is he’s going to try and seduce her and I don’t think Liz can cope unless I get there to ride shotgun so if you know where they’re eating can you take me there please?”
“Did you say all that on only one breath?”
“Do you know where they are?” Maria grabbed Rath by the scruff of his neck and pulled him so that his face was millimeters from her own.
“No,” he shook his head, his eyes blazing in terror.
“Will you help me look for them?”
“Yes,” he nodded. “If it means you’ll let me go and stop shouting at me.”
Maria released him.
“Now, where might they have gone? His rooms?”
“No,” he shook his head. “He would have taken her to an Inn. In the city.”
“Lets go then. I thought you said you didn’t know where they were.”
“There are twenty Inns or more in the city,” he shook his head. “And another twenty in the surrounding hamlets. And those are just the high quality ones.”
“What are we waiting for, then?” she pulled him up the corridor. “The sooner we start looking…”
“We need to go that way,” Rath, struggling to keep his feet, pointed in the opposite direction.

* * *

“I’m most disappointed in you, Lady Elizabeth,” the man stepped toward her. He was not as tall as Zan and only a little taller than Liz, but he was stocky. Not the overindulgent stockiness of a lazy young man, but one similar to a powerful athlete. His blonde hair was kept short but wound in tight ringlets. He wore a suit of silvery gray with red trimming. His voice was every bit as arrogant as Zan’s, but this one seemed far more confident. There was an almost child like quality to his voice, and he looked young; no older than Liz. “I rather hoped you would know who I was. I see you chose to wear the dress I sent you. You look positively… ravishing.”
Liz felt naked under his leering gaze as his eyes traveled up and down her body. She couldn’t help the blush that colored her face.
“Thank you,” she mumbled, taking a step back as she glanced about her for the door. She tried to cover herself more with her shawl, thankful that Adaile had given it to her. She looked down to ensure she wasn’t exposing too much of her legs. “I, uh… I thought the invitation was from Zan.”
“You wound me,” he smiled, clasping his hands over his heart. “That I do not measure up to my older brother in your eyes makes me consider the fact that my life is no longer worth living.”
“Sorry,” she gave a half smile.
“Oh,” he shook his head. “But where are my manners. We have not been formally introduced. You, I know, are Lady Elizabeth from America. Do you have a pet name?”
“Uh…” she blushed. “Elizabeth. Elizabeth is fine.”
“Well, Elizabeth. I am Prince Denda of Antar. My brother’s rival for the throne… and for your affections.” He reached out and took Liz’s hand, holding it with a gentle but firm grip. He raised it to his lips and kissed the back of it. “I am charmed to make your acquaintance.”
“Uh, yeah,” Liz nodded. “Me too.” She pulled her hand back and turned away, heading for the door.
“Where are you going?” he asked in an amused tone.
“Back to the castle,” Liz huddled into her shawl. “Uh… This is a mistake. Big mistake.”
“But my Lady Elizabeth, we have not yet dined.”
“You know what? I’m not all that hungry.” She turned to face him. “Thank you for the invitation, but, uh… I have to go.”
“You seemed frightened,” he crossed the room and stood by the door. “Has someone been saying unkind things about me behind my back?”
“It’s not that,” Liz shook her head. “I shouldn’t be here.”
“Where should you be? Have you somewhere else to go? Had it been Zan awaiting you in this tavern, would you have told him the same thing?”
Liz shook her head, here eyes wide like a rabbit’s caught in some oncoming headlights.
“You are here now,” his voice was soothing, yet insistent. “The landlord of this fine hostelry had worked hard to prepare a banquet worthy of a wedding feast. It would be a shame to waste it, and he would feel so dishonored. Please,” he indicated the seat. “Sit. Tell me about yourself and your life so that I may get to know all about Lady Elizabeth of America. Perhaps, once you get to know me, you might change your low opinion of me.”
“I really think I should go.” Liz wished she sounded more defiant.
“Please,” his voice wheedled. “Sit. Your carriage will not return for ages yet, so you might as well make the best of it.” Denda walked to the chair and pulled it out. “Please don’t let vile rumor and innuendo form your opinion of me. Do me the honor, at least, of forming it from your own observations.”
Liz paused for a moment, looked back at the door and closed her eyes.
“Okay,” she sighed. “But all we’re going to do is talk.”
“Perhaps,” he shrugged, trying to peer down Liz’s top as she sat. Her shawl covered everything. “Let us see what the night brings. Who knows what emotions may change over good food and good wine.”

While they ate the first course, a dish not dissimilar to a Caesar Salad, Denda asked her questions about her life in ‘America’ and of her father. Denda made free with some spicy wine, poured into one of the many glasses. Apart from the minutest of sips, Liz did not touch it.
“So, do you have a suitor back home in America?” he asked as he pushed his empty dish away.
“I have one or two who’ve shown an interest,” Liz replied after careful consideration. She had eaten only a leaf or two of the lettuce.
“Are they wealthy? Do they have station?”
“We’re, uh pretty informal,” Liz shrugged. “Wealth and station doesn’t impress me much. If my soul mate was the poorest tramp on skid row, I would still love him.”
“Love,” Denda laughed as a serving girl removed their used plates and cutlery. “It often amuses me when ladies talk of it so. I do not know what skid row is, but a tramp, I assume is like a vagabond? That a lady thinks she could love someone even when her belly is empty and her brats cling to her skirts bawling for food while their love is drinking or whoreing the last of their money way... I think, Elizabeth, that you would soon tire of living the life of a vagabond when you have the knowledge that you could have lived as a Queen.”
“So what about you,” Liz’s eyes barely raised from the table. “What are you looking for if it’s not love?”
He stared at her for a while.
“It is enough to desire someone, is it not?” he shrugged. “Without the complication of allowing ones emotions to confuse the issues.”
“And what exactly are these issues?”
“Ah,” he laughed with a shake of his head. “Lady Elizabeth! And here I thought we were discussing you. May I know the names of your suitors?”
Liz twisted her head and looked sideways at him. Her eyes narrowed. The way he was listening suggested that he was going to memorize their names. It’s as though he might send someone to remove his competition, she thought. She felt a pang of remorse over her recent treatment of Alex. Her stomach lurched at the thought of never seeing her family or friends again.
“Alex Whitman and Kyle Valenti,” she murmured. “But the one who truly holds my heart, my soul mate, well, his name is Max Evans.” She looked at him. “And if your spies can find him, could you let me know where he is?”
“Spies?” he laughed. “Are you suggesting that you think me to hunt them down and eliminate them?”
“Sorry,” Liz dropped her eyes.

“So. This Max Evans,” he nodded, as though he knew the name. “A lucky man, I think. But what of Zan?”
“What about Zan?”
“You told my father that you had an interest in my brother, did you not?” Denda seemed to almost spit the words father and brother out.
“I did,” she nodded. “But it’s kind of complicated.”
“People always say that,” Denda stared hard at her. “But it isn’t really. You make your choice and go for it. Either you desire him or you don’t. Why cloud the issue with thoughts of love? Love implies trust. Without love, there can be no betrayal. You need only consider hard facts.”
“You’ve never been in love, then,” Liz stated with an edge to her voice.
“Love is for the weak who have nothing else. But tell me.” He leaned forward. “What is the point of wanting the love of a dead man?”
“What do you mean?” Liz frowned. “Zan’s not dead. I saw him this morning.”
Denda shrugged and waved his hand in the air.

“I desire you, Lady Elizabeth of America,” he nodded. “You seem as intelligent as you are witty. There is steel in you, I’ll warrant. You would make an excellent Queen. For the right King. Do you feel any desire for me?”
“Sorry,” Liz shook her head after a moments thought. “No.”
“I’m sure it is something that can be changed,” he shrugged.
“I wonder if your interest in me is because it appears that I’m more interested in Zan,” Liz looked up at Denda, watching his reaction. “I guess you don’t like your older brother getting more attention than you.”
“You mean, envy?” Denda raised his eyebrows.
“Call it want you want,” Liz hunched her shoulders. “I know jealousy when I see it.”
“Jealous,” Denda started to laugh loud guffaws of mirth. “You really have no idea what you are getting yourself into, do you? Do you really think you have a future with that… with Zan?”
“I think that I have more of a future with Zan than with you, that’s for sure.”
“Where does all this animosity come from?” he leaned back. “Have I not been charming to you?”
“You, uh… you come on a bit too strong.”
“I see. And these suitors of yours? They do not come on too strong?”
“Kyle does… did. Sometimes. Alex? Well, he’s… he’s just Alex. And Max. Yeah, Max had to be prodded in the right direction but once he did,” her eyes glazed over, “he could be as strong as he wanted.”
“These all sound in the past tense to me,” he seemed brighter. “There is no one in your heart right now?”
“You’re not listening, are you. Besides, I have, uh… some unfinished business with Zan.”
“Zan is a walking corpse,” Denda smirked. “He just doesn’t know he’s dead yet.”
“He seemed very much alive to me.”
“You really don’t know Zan very well, do you?”
“I know what he can become. That’s enough.”
“I would hate to be the one to shatter the illusion of love that you wish to find with him, but I really think you should know that in which you are becoming involved.”
Denda picked up the half empty wine bottle to refill Liz’s glass. He frowned when he saw that she had not drunk any.
“Drink your wine,” he urged.
Liz picked up the glass, held it to her lips and placed it down again. This seemed to satisfy Denda as he placed the bottle down again.
“Zan is a wastrel,” he stared at her wineglass as though willing her to drink. “He cares only for the games he can play. He never attends his lessons and not that I care but he really has no interest in…”
“I know all this,” Liz rolled her eyes. “He has no interest in ruling, blah blah blah.”
“That is not altogether true,” Denda smirked. “Zan does have an interest in ruling but he lacks the drive and ambition to go for it. That and the fact that the moron worships the ground I walk on. So, he leaves me to do all the hard work, the diplomacy, the military training, the studies and so on leaving himself free to spend his days drinking, gambling and carousing with his lay-about sidekick. He has this habit of… vanishing. Often for days at a time.”
“Where does he go?” Liz could not help her curiosity.
“I had him followed once. He goes to a part of town that… let’s just say that it’s not a part that a lady would wish to visit unless she was desperate to earn some easy money where she could lay down on the job.”
“I get the picture,” her face blanched.
“It would not surprise me to discover that he has a harem of doxies in the rather… dilapidated tavern of ill repute in which he spends so much of his time. He has a friend, Rath,” his voice made another sneer at the name. “A vile and nasty piece of work who whispers poisons in Zan’s ear and encourages him in his licentiousness.”
“You don’t like Rath.”
“Does it show?” Denda grinned with widened eyes. “The two of them have probably sampled the delights of every woman of easy virtue in the city. And beyond.”
Liz frowned.
“Zan has one redeeming quality,” Denda continued. “He dotes on his sister, Vilondra. But she is a treacherous one. Oh, sure. In court, my older half-sister plays the perfect princess. A loving sister, a dutiful daughter, but she is a schemer. She is self centered and cares only for her visits to the dressmakers in the city. That, and sneaking out to see her lover whenever she can.”
“I take it,” Liz looked down at the plate that the serving girl placed before her. It looked like chicken. “That you are referring to Kivar.”
The young girl removed Liz’s undrunk wine, and placed a new bottle on the table.
“Ah,” he nodded as he poured the new wine into fresh glasses. “So you know about our resident upstart?”
“It sounds to me like he’s more than an upstart. It sounds like you are on the verge of a full-blown civil war. It seemed to me, from what I heard in the throne room, that he has the upper hand.”
“Once he stops skulking in the mountains and faces our armies in open combat, or when my spies discover the whereabouts of his base, we shall see who has the upper hand. When I take full command of the military, it will be a different story, I can assure you of that. Once we have Kivar in custody, he will be minus his hands, upper or otherwise. And minus his head.”
“Does no one try to stop Vilondra? I mean, if you know she’s seeing him, why don’t you say anything?”
“I doubt that anyone else even knows of her assignations. As for me, I know how to play the game, Elizabeth,” Denda grinned. “Vilondra may think she’s getting away with it, but one day, she will slip up and lead my spies straight to Kivar’s lair. But it isn’t just Kivar she has an interest in,” he smirked. “She has been seen in dalliance with his top general, Nikolas. I doubt that either cares who is bedding her, but I suspect that Kivar will plan a marriage to her in some flea-ridden mud built chapel somewhere near to his lair, and raise some spurious claim to the throne. And as long as her new husband lavishes money for her to spend on dresses, she will grant him whatever power he wishes.”
“Where does Ava come in to all this?”
“Kivar’s young sister?” he raised his eyebrows. “You have learned much since your arrival to have heard about her. I thought that only Zan’s mother, Zan and myself knew of ‘that’ particular connection.”
“So there is a connection?” Liz tried to hide the dismay from her voice.
“Zan’s mother would like there to be,” Denda missed Liz’s concern. “She discovered that Zan is in love with Ava, and foolishly believes that she loves him. I suspect that they met on one of his… trips, recently. They believe they are conducting their sordid little affair in secret, but if Zan’s mother knows, and I know, you can be sure that Azande knows. Anyway, his mother plots an arranged marriage between Zan and Ava hoping thereby to unite Zan and Kivar, bringing the rebel armies under his… or should I say, her control. She plans to wield the power of the throne through Zan. And that is something I cannot allow. Of course, I rather suspect that Ava has plans of her own which again, is something I cannot allow.”
“So she is… considering… marriage to Zan?”
“I believe so, yes.”
“And what about Zan? Does he agree to this? Does Zan wish to marry Ava?”
“Zan will do as his mother tells him,” Denda shrugged. “It may even be that Zan, being led by his, erm… manhood, will do whatever Ava says. As long as he gets his grubby way with her, he will accept any deal, I think.”

They fell silent as they continued eating their meal.
“So,” Liz pushed away the plate from which she had eaten no more than a quarter. “Zan doesn’t want to rule, but his mother, and probably Ava too, wants him to. They want to rule through him. Won’t they be in competition with each other?”
“I would imagine so. And as Ava has something between her legs with which she can control Zan, his mother will be luckless, again. I think that is one perversion that even Zan is beyond.”
“And still Zan pays no attention to his lessons,” Liz’s mind drifted away for a moment. “What about you? What do you want?”
“What I want, apart from you…”
“I uh… really don’t think that’s going to happen,” Liz blushed, looking down at the floor.
“As to what I want… it’s rather simple. I will take the throne, a Queen that I desire,” his gaze was fixed on Liz, “rule all of Antar and eventually, unite the whole planet beneath my banner.”
“But what about Zan? He might decide that he wants to rule, after all.”
“Ah,” Denda nodded. He narrowed his eyes and looked long and hard at Liz. “Is that what you seek to do? Do you seek to entice Zan into claiming the throne and then ruling through him as Ava does? I thought better of you.”
“No,” Liz shook her head. “I mean, yeah. I’d like to see Zan start to stand up for himself, but trust me. I have no interest in power of any kind.”
“When the time comes, and that is soon, I will make my move. At the next Ball beneath the full moon, I will destroy Zan. I will challenge him to a duel, in front of my father. The laws by which we are irrevocably bound forbid him to refuse, and we will fight. I will take my time, carving Zan into little pieces before I finally finish him. I will have then removed the threat to my ascendancy. Believe me when I say that I will be actually doing Zan a favor. His is not a worthwhile life.”
“And I’m supposed to be impressed by this? You…” Liz searched for a word. “You sound like a megalomaniac.”
“It is the way of kings,” Denda shrugged. “The powerful ones, at least.”

They ate the desert in silence, a rich and succulent cake made from cream and aromatic berries that looked like blueberries. A sweet smelling wine accompanied this. Liz again did not drink any, much to Denda’s annoyance.
“So why does everyone try to warn me off of Zan? I mean, what are you all afraid of?”
“Of you, is my guess,” Denda shook his head. “Judging from what you tell me, you wish for Zan to stand on his own two feet. I would imagine that everyone in the game firmly believes that they are winning. That their plans are on the verge of fruition. They would see you as an obstacle. What’s the point of planning to rule through someone who will not let himself be used? And that is how you wish Zan to be, correct? As for me, there is nothing that can help Zan. Not even you. I play the adorable young brother to a fine art, so no one suspects that I will soon be slaying all their hopes.”
“I could warn them.”
“You could. Do you think they would believe you? You have already seen, first hand I think, that they do not trust you.” Denda started to chuckle. “They will believe only what they want to. And they want to believe in their own success.”
“What about you? What are you afraid of?”
“I fear nothing,” Denda looked insulted.
“Okay,” Liz tried another tack. “What are you afraid for?”
The question caught Denda unawares. He blinked in astonishment.
“I was right,” he nodded. “You are very intelligent. All right. I’ll tell you what I am afraid for. You.”
“I don’t understand.”
“Every once in a while, a star shines out amongst the heavens. Brighter than any other. But eventually, it vanishes, leaving nothing behind but an emptiness in the night sky and a vague memory to those who witnessed its waxing and waning. There is something about you, Lady Elizabeth. You could become the greatest women of all time. The brightest of stars. Will you choose to shine the brightest among the heavens for all eternity? Or will you choose to fade away into the darkness? The choice you make will determine that. I am very much afraid that you will choose the wrong path.”
“It’s not certain that you’ll beat Zan,” Liz stared at the fire. “Have you heard of David and Goliath?”
“Not defeat Zan?” Denda smirked. “Please, Lady Elizabeth. Give me some credit. The greatest swordsman that ever lived taught me to fence. I could beat Zan even with this David and Goliath at his side.”
“Then,” Liz smiled, “I will find this swordsman and ask him to train Zan, too.”
“Firstly, Zan never attends his lessons, remember? And if he ever does, he uses it to catch up on his sleep. And secondly, my trainer is, alas, no longer with us.”
“You mean he’s dead,” Liz stated.
“Sadly, yes,” he grinned. “It seemed that some hooded miscreant challenged him to a duel one rather moonless night. My teacher lost, I’m afraid.”
“He couldn’t have been that good, then.”
“He ‘was’ the best, my lady. Well, perhaps second best. And even if Zan should defeat me, how long do you think he would last against Kivar? He commands no loyalty amongst the guard. There is not one general who would follow Zan, not one soldier who would give his life for him. They would rather see the bandit, Kivar on the throne than Zan. In fact, they might even defect to his side. At least Kivar has ‘some’ balls. So you see, I am truly the only logical choice you could make.”
Denda pushed his chair back from the table and rose. He held out his hand to Liz.
“Come, my lady,” he smiled. “Enough of this talk. Let us withdraw from this place and allow the serving wench to clear up. I have taken lodgings upstairs. Let us retire.”

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Maria sat on the edge of her seat in the carriage that was propelled by some unseen force twisting her fingers as she stared through the window at the passing buildings, illuminated by some unseen light source.
“They’re not in that one,” Rath’s high-pitched voice intoned as they passed another gaily lit inn.
“Okay,” Maria exploded. She turned to face Rath who was trying to bury himself into upholstery as be scurried back from her. “That’s the twelfth inn we’ve passed and we haven’t stopped to check any of them. You say they’re not there, right? So how do you know? Are you like, telepathic?” Or just tele-pathetic, she wondered.
Rath blinked. He looked around the carriage as though he were searching for some place to hide from her anger.
“No guards,” he struggled to keep his voice even. “Prince Denda would never visit the city without his guards. And he, uh, would have them posted outside, not in, so he can, uh, be alone to uh… seduce your friend in peace.”
“Oh, God,” Maria groaned as she inhaled deeply from her bottle. Can this thing go any faster?”
“He won’t hurt her,” Rath told her, almost in fear. “Well, not if she surrenders to him willingly.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Maria’s wailed.
“One way or another, your friend will be losing her virtue tonight.”
“But not willingly,” Maria’s eyes were filled with dread. “I know Liz, and she wouldn’t give it up to her soul mate until she was ready, so she’s not giving in to some stranger on a first date without a fight.”
“They all give in to Denda,” Rath shrugged.
“You don’t know Liz,” Maria shook her head.
“And you, Lady Maria, do not know Prince Denda.”
“She’ll fight him.”
“And he will enjoy it all the more. Her fighting will be in vain. She will become Denda’s mistress until he tires of her. You should not have stayed.”
“Can you make this thing go any faster?”

* * *

“Excuse me?” Liz blinked as she stared at Denda’s outstretched hand.
“We will go upstairs now,” he stepped toward her.
Liz leapt from her seat and stood behind it, holding the back uprights like a shield.
“I don’t know where you get off thinking things like that, but I wouldn’t even do that with people I like.”
“You will not regret it,” he smirked. “It might even help you decide which choice to make, for I doubt that Zan could give you even a fraction of the pleasure I plan to bestow upon you tonight.”
“You guys are all sick,” she snapped. “What is it about this place?”
Denda approached her, reaching to grab her.
“Stay away!” Liz yelled as she darted to the other side of the table.
“Ah,” he smiled. “I see. You liked to be chased, first. Very well. I enjoy a good sport as much as the next man. This will help race the blood and raise the levels of passion.”
He darted at the table. Feinting one way, Denda moved the other, nearly catching Liz who had the presence of mind to topple the chair into Denda’s path. Her escape route, however, took her away from the table. She now had nothing to protect her from his advance.

“Alright,” Liz gave a seductive smile. “You’ve passed the test.”
“Test?” he grinned.
“Sure,” she nodded. “I was hoping to hear what you had to offer. And the sound of being Queen is… yeah, pretty good. But I needed to see how badly you wanted me. It look’s like you’ve won.”
Liz started to raise the hem of her skirts, first past her knees and then up to reveal the creamy tops of her thighs. Denda stopped, and watched the slow progression of the hemline. He licked his lips in anticipation.
“You know how to heat a man’s blood, my lady.”
“So what are you gonna do about it, stud?” Liz moistened her lips.
“I am going to see to it that you will become addicted to me. We will spend an eternity worshipping each other’s bodies. You will never imagine yourself with any other. Come. Enough of the sport. Let us withdraw upstairs.”
His face was an open leer as his hot gaze undressed her. His breathing grew hoarse and he made no secret of the bulge in his pants. He moved closer, starting to undo the fastenings at his waist. Liz chose that moment to pull back her leg, balancing on the other. She swung out with a force that she was sure would have kicked a sixty yard field goal. She connected with Denda’s groin. He stopped short, emitting a soft whine. His eyes crossed as the whine grew louder. Clutching his afflicted area, he fell to his knees. Denda looked up and tried to focus on Liz’s face, his mouth hung open as the gurgled sound of his pain bubbled out. He fell forward in a straight arc, his face bouncing off of the flagstone with a sickening thud. Dropping her skirt, Liz threw both of her arms straight up in the air.
“The kick is good!” she yelled.
The barmaid appeared. She looked at Denda lying prone on the floor and then at Liz, dropping her arms and hastily pulling the dress’s material over the nipple that had become exposed by her arms actions.
“What did you do?” the young girl gasped.
“Won the game in the dying seconds,” Liz grinned. “It was a shutout.”

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