The Engagement (CC,M/L,Mature) {COMPLETE}

[CandyDreamQueen]

Title: The Engagement
Author: Candice AKA CandyH #1 Dreamer
Disclaimer: I don’t own jack. Not even a pot to piss in or a window to throw it out.
Category: M/L
Rating: Mature but not all of it. Only as much as my crazy mind can come up with.
Summary: I hate it when authors don’t leave a summary. So we're just going to pretend like the whole **** (god I can’t even write her name) thing never happened. Accept I am going to be sticking to the same story with the aliens. You fallow me? Same story minus the gerbil. Max and Liz stayed together. This story takes place after their prom.
A/N: This is a short little story that I wrote a while back but I never posted it. Don’t know why I just never did. Also keep in mind that this is the first love seen that I ever wrote so I guess it leaves a little to be desired. I guess you could say that it’s a little more romantic then actually steamy. Enjoy. I was actually planning to write a sequel to this story entitled The Wedding but I never did. Let me know if you think I should. Feedback is always preheated
LaLaLa, Sorry people that’s just to clear my writer’s block. Here we go.




It was a beautiful night. Liz thought as she and Max walked through the park hand and hand. The stars wear shining brightly above them. Liz looked up at the stars above their heads. They wear so beautiful she thought as she and Max continued to stroll aimlessly. It was truly the perfect end to the perfect night. It had begun when he and Michael had picked her and Maria up for the prom. The whole night had been wonderful. They had danced all night. And she had saved every one of the slow songs for him. After prom Max had drove hem out here and asked her to take a walk with him.

“This night was perfect.” She whispered to Max as a brilliant smile lit up her face.

“The night isn’t over yet.” Max answered back.

Liz looked at him questionably

“Come on.” He only said as he led her to a small boat at the end of the lake.

“Max, where are we going?”

“Just get in and you’ll see.” Max answered her.

He took her hand and helped her into the boat and just smiled. She was by far the most beautiful person he had ever seen. That had been his thoughts when he had went to the door and picked her up for the prom. He had not thought it possible at the time. But she was even more beautiful now.

“What?” Liz asked worriedly as she caught Max staring at her.

“You.” He answered shaking his head in bewilderment. “You’re just beautiful.” He finished causing Liz to blush.

Leaning back in the little boat Max began to row them out to the little island that sat in the middle of the lake.

Helping her out of the boat she and Max walked a little longer until they came upon a blanked that was laid out on the ground. On each corner of the blanket lie a dozen white roses.

“Oh my God, Max!” Liz gasped. “These are absolutely beautiful.”

“So you like them?” Max asked taking her hand in his.

“No Max, I love them. I love you.”

Max smiled against her lips as she huged him to her and then kisseed him passionately. Then she bent down on the blanket and began to gather the roses. As she lifted up the last bunch of roses she noticeed a small white box placed under them.

“Max?” Liz ask as she spots the box.

Max walks over to the box and takes it in his hands then turns and kneels in front of Liz

“Liz, all my life I’ve been searching for something. A place where I belonged. A place that felt like home, and when I’m with you that’s exactly how I feel. Like I have a place to call home in you. I always want that. I always want to look at you and know that I will always be with you and there is nothing that can ever bring us apart. I always want to love you.”

Max took a deep breath and willed himself to continue.

“Elizabeth Parker, will you be my home? Will you be my wife? Will you marry me?”

All Liz could do was gasp as she heard Max’s words. He was really doing this. He was really proposing to her. He was asking her to marry him. Then she watched as Max opened the box reveling the most beautiful ring she had ever seen. Her engagement ring.

“Oh, Max, Oh my God.” Sometime during his speech she had begun to cry. Wiping her eyes with the back of her hand Liz began to nod her head vigorously.

“Oh yes Max! Yes I will marry you!”

Smiling up at her Max placed the ring on her finger.

Standing up Max wrapped his arms around her.

“Liz,” He whispered against her skin. “You are the most important person in the world to me. I love you and now we are going to be together forever “

“Max I can’t believe this. It’s just so wonderful.”

Max sighed and placed a kiss on her forehead.

“You are the most wonderful man in the world. In any world. I love you dose not even touch how much I feel about you.”

“Liz Parker,” Max said looking down at her. “I adore you, I need you, I love you, I want you...”

“Max what did you say?” she asked. Her eyes looking up to meet his.

“I need you.” He repeated

“I need you.” She echoed

“I love you”

“I know.”

“I,” he started looking down at their joined hands then back straight into her eyes, into her soul.

“I want you.”

Liz raised her hand and placed it on his cheek.

“And I want you.” She answered.

In an instant she and Max were wrapped in each other’s embrace. And immediately Liz got a flash of the stars. Enraptured by her passion Liz began to remove Max’s suit jacket and starts to unbutton his shirt finally revealing his behr (hehehe) chest. Max smiled at her and reached for the end of her dress then he lifted it completely over her head.

Soon they both lay completely naked on the blanket. Max tuuk one of the roses and ran it all over Liz’s body. Over her cheek, down her neck, down her breast, over her stomach, down her leg , to her foot. Then he placeed a kiss on every part of her body that the rose touches.

After placing the rose beside her Max then positioned himself on top of her and stares deep into her eyes. The most beautiful eyes he has ever seen.

“Let me know if I hurt you.” He whispered down to her.

“Oh, Max. You could never hurt me.” She whispered back.

With that Max pushed inside of her and they just stared into each other’s eyes.

“Max,” Liz whispered but was stopped by my Max's finger on her lips.

“Sshh, Just feel.”

Liz did. And at that moment she realized that everything in her life was perfect and would always be perfect as long as she has Max.

“I love you” she sighed as he began to move inside of her.

“I love you” he sighed back. “Forever.”

Liz closed her eyes at the feeling of Max moving inside of her. Her whole world seemed to slow down and every feeling and emotion inside of her seemed to flood over her entire body. Max was slowly bringing her to life. And the feeling was incredible. Liz could no longer keep her eyes closed.

Smiling down at her Max placed his hand on her right cheek.

“Hi,” he whispered down to her breathlessly.

“Hi,” she whispered back equally as breathless.

Suddenly Liz had an overwhelming feeling of witlessness and her breaths started coming in in short gasps.

“Or you okay?” Max asked looking down at her worriedly.

“Mm-hm.” Was all that she could manage to answer him.

“Tell me how you feel?” He said.

“I…I…Max.”

He smiled.

“It’s okay, It’s okay.”

Max leaned down and kissed her forehead and a new wave of feelings ran through her body.

“Warm.” Is all she is able to whisper.

“Warm?” Max asked as he continued to move his body in a steady rhythm inside hers. The feel of being inside of her was the most wondrous thing he had ever felt.

“Un-hn…and like…I’m completely waitress. Like nothing I’ve ever felt before.” Liz moaned at an exceptionally good feeling that passed through her body. She wraped her legs around him in an attempt to pull him closer. Max leaned down and placed his cheek against hers and whispered in her ear.

“What else love? What else do you feel when I make love to you?”

She breathed deeply and looked up at the stars above their head finally realizing that they were the same stars from her flash.

“You Max” she answered honestly. “I feel you…You touching my soul, you touching my heart, you giving me life.”

She reached up and pulled his lips to hers.

“I love you.” She whispered over and over as their lips parted.

Max wraps his arms around her back and sat up with his body steal inside of hers. And their bodies flush against each others. Liz layed her head on his chest as he pulled her tighter to him.

“What do you feel Max? When you make love to me.”

Max placed a soft kiss on the to of her head.

“I feel like I could do this forever. Like I could be inside of you forever. I love you…this feeling I have…it makes me feel…you make me feel…whole.”

“Liz closed her eyes tight.

“Yes.” Is all she could manage to say.

She kissed up his neck to his lips and he kissed her back. The passion that she was feeling was becoming unbearable. Max maked love to her mouth the same way that he was doing her body. He pulled her even tighter to him and then lay her back down on the blanket.

Liz’s arms wraped around Max as he began to suck lightly on her neck. She tightened her hold on him at the fierce sensation that traveled through her body.

“Oh god yes Max.”

She pulled him away from her neck and brought his lips to hers. The pleasure she was receiving from Max was out of control. She looked up at Max’s glowing eyes. Glowing. He was glowing. His eyes were beautiful and she had never seen them like this.

“Max” she whispered not understanding what was happening.

“Max what’s happening.”

Max just smiled and placed his forehead against hers. As he closed his eyes Liz watched in awe as the glow passed from his body to hers along with an intense pleasure.

“Can you feel it Liz?” he kissed her before she could answer.

“It’s our soul Liz. I’m giving you my soul and you are giving me yours.

Liz rubed her lips against his.

“Max how do you know that.”

“I don’t know.” He answered truthfully. “I just do. Does that scare you?”

“No it doesn’t I…I feel it to. Your soul passing through mine. I’ve never felt this close to you before.”

“I know Liz.” Max breathed against her skin. “I know.”

As they continued to move their bodies together they both knew the precise moment when they were about to reach the ultimate fulfillment. Liz could feel herself ready to come apart form the extreme pleasure she was feeling. Not just her feelings but Max’s as well. And then it happened. An intense wave of pleasure pulsed through her body causing her to cry out in ecstasy. She could feel her orgasm along with Max’s as the pleasure swept through both of their bodies leaving them spent and sated.

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About an hour later Max and Liz lay on the blanket with Max’s suit jacket wrapped around Liz to cover her naked body. She was peacefully asleep with her head resting on his chest.

Max looked down at her and smiled as he brunched a stray strand of hair from her face. She was the most wonderful girl in the world to him and she always would be.

Slowly Liz began to open her eyes.

“Hey sleepyhead.” He whispered kissing her forehead. “How did you sleep?” he asked his voice laced with concern.

“Wonderful. I always do when you hold me. What about you?” she asked

“I always sleep wonderfully when I hold you.” he responded

Liz smiled and placed a kiss on his lips.

“How do you feel.” He asked her.

“Fine as long as I have you.”

Max took her hand in his and played with the ring on her finger.

“You will always have me. As long as we both shall live.”

Max kissed her on the top of her head as she began to drift off again.

“Are you ready to go?” he asked looking down at her almost sleeping form.

“No.” she sighed half asleep. “Lets just be together tonight. Just you and me.” And with that she drifted back off to sleep.

“Yes.” Max said looking up at the star lit sky. “Just you and me.”

Looking down at her sleeping form Max couldn’t help but smile to himself. It really was the perfect end to the perfect night.


The End