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by Kachie
Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:44 am
Forum: FanFic Discussion
Topic: What makes a good Adult fic?
Replies: 16
Views: 13096

Re: What makes a good Adult fic?

I completely agree with April on this one. Thanks for all the great points. For me, the key is to not make it too cheesy. The problem is that Max and Liz were totally cheesy on the show (and I'm a Dreamer, but come on, the "glowing" scene?). So you have to balance whether to stay true to ...
by Kachie
Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:03 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Part 5 - 3/31/09 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 6525

Re: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Chap 3 - 3/12/09

AN: So my mind has come up with way too many possibilities for where this should go, and when I finally decided on the main course of action, I realized that it has pretty much forced me to abandon the challenge. What was originally intended was this: #94 What if instead of Liz, Maria and Kyle showi...
by Kachie
Tue Mar 10, 2009 4:38 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Part 5 - 3/31/09 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 6525

Re: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Chap 2 - 3/10/09

AN: Thanks again for all of your input! I still haven't decided if Tess is going to bite it. But before she does or doesn't, she is going to mess with everyone's minds at least one more time. . . but maybe not in the way you might imagine. Anyways, here's some Max =) Max never angered easily. It was...
by Kachie
Mon Mar 09, 2009 7:14 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Part 5 - 3/31/09 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 6525

Re: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Chap 1 - 3/9/09

A.N: This part was a little difficult to write. I'm finding myself trying to make Tess a sympathetic character rather than just a big bad. I don't know if that's coming across very well. But anyways, hope you like! Some dialogue taken from "The Departure" "Max? I can't go." She w...
by Kachie
Fri Mar 06, 2009 4:25 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Part 5 - 3/31/09 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 6525

Wiped Away (CC, M/L, ADULT) Part 5 - 3/31/09 [WIP]

Title: Wiped Away Author: Kachie Rating: ADULT(eventually) Pairings/Category: CC, M/L. Disclaimer: Don’t own anything pertaining to Roswell, just having some fun. Summary: Set in "The Departure" and alters from there A.N: Based off of a challenge that I'm going to keep a secret so not to s...
by Kachie
Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:01 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09
Replies: 5
Views: 5557

Re: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 2/23/09

Have they aged since the last chapter because they were little kids but it seems like they're teens now (or at least pre-teens). Anyway, I hope you come back soon. I really like how you're building their characters. This last part is set during the day of the shooting. (50 minutes beforehand)I want...
by Kachie
Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:03 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09
Replies: 5
Views: 5557

Re: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) - 2/23/09

A.N: A quick update. Not sure if the end makes enough sense. Trying to get into Max’s shoes and describe what he might be feeling was a bit confusing. September 18, 1999 (50 minutes left) “Oh Lizzeo, Lizzeo! Wherefore art the milkshake I ordered?” The much too overdramatic call echoed from the lips ...
by Kachie
Thu Feb 19, 2009 12:04 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09
Replies: 5
Views: 5557

Re: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) Pt 3 - 2/19/09

A.N: A fair warning, I am my own pre-reader. So if you see any glaring typos or other such inaccuracies, please feel free to let me know. =) 7 years ago, the night before first day of fourth grade. His mirror image wasn’t very convincing. For Max, the first year at school had gone by both at the spe...
by Kachie
Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:30 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09
Replies: 5
Views: 5557

Re: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) Pt 1 - 1/20/09

A.N: Glad you guys are liking it so far. And yeah, I dig details. =) 8 years ago continued. . Isabel pulled Max steadily down the isle. He almost stumbled on the last step to the outside but used her handhold as a support to catch himself at the last moment. Isabel glanced back and grinned, attempti...
by Kachie
Tue Jan 20, 2009 6:52 pm
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09
Replies: 5
Views: 5557

Ready, Set, Wait (AU, M/L,CHILD/ADULT) 4/30/09

Title: Ready, Set, Wait Author: Kachie Rating: CHILD/ADULT Pairings/Category: L/M (implied), AU (prequel) Disclaimer: Don’t own anything pertaining to Roswell, just having some fun. Summary: Main setting is the Crashdown, the hour or so before the infamous gun shot. Max POV, musing on the past eight...