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by SnowWhite22
Sat Nov 01, 2003 10:17 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Ordinary Moment 18-Conclusion

Part 18 7:35 am “You call me reckless? What the hell were you thinking?” Michael raged. Max lifted his head off of his hands and shrugged. “I wasn’t.” He put his head back down. “No shit! You call yourself our leader? You could have exposed us all!” Michael spun around. Isabel shoved away from the k...
by SnowWhite22
Sat Nov 01, 2003 10:12 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Parts 14-17

Part 14 3:40 am Liz wondered if she was ever going to be able to move again. Her body felt thick, weighted, as if she had suddenly become a part of the sand instead of just laying on top of it. There was something wonderful in the heavy way her body was feeling. The aftershock of the way Max had tou...
by SnowWhite22
Sat Nov 01, 2003 10:02 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Ordinary Moment Part 11-13

Part 11 1:35 am Highway 1 was dark and solitude as the Plymouth curved along the road. Liz hummed along lightly to the radio as they drove. Every once in a while she would look over at Max and smile. They didn’t talk much and that was okay with Liz. She was so overwhelmed by everything that had gone...
by SnowWhite22
Tue Oct 28, 2003 11:06 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Parts 7-10

Part 7 11:43 pm Liz knew she was being swept away. And she now longer cared. Who cared about time and familiarity and incessant little details when it was so easy to just be carried off like this? There was an intimacy between her and Max now that was undeniable. She looked over at Max in the car as...
by SnowWhite22
Tue Oct 28, 2003 10:47 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Parts 4-6

Part 4 9:25 pm “Do you know where they could have gone?” Liz asked Max as they strolled along the pier. The sun had now set and the sky was a brilliant indigo color. Max shrugged. “You know this place better than I do.” “It’s your sister.” She pointed out. Max flashed a quick grin and Liz felt her h...
by SnowWhite22
Tue Oct 28, 2003 10:42 pm
Forum: Complete - AU with Aliens
Topic: Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]
Replies: 5
Views: 9602

Ordinary Moment M/L AU TEEN [COMPLETE]

HI guys! I know, I disappeared after I finished the story. But I wanted to repost it so I could get the creative joices flowing, so to speak. Please feel free to leave feedback and any critiques you would like! In fact, I implore you, PLEASE! Leave feedback! Thanks guys! Snow White Ordinary Moment M...