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by RavenSprite
Sun Oct 03, 2004 7:30 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

begonia9580 I agree, this part was intense. Writing it FELT intense. Thanks for reviewing! frenchkiss70 I’m sorry, I do realize how hard it might have been to read, and it was kind of hard for me to write but necessary. Max is going to run hot and cold with Liz and there’s never going to be middle ...
by RavenSprite
Sat Oct 02, 2004 3:40 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

I was going to reply to each and everyone who left feedback, but the board was swiped. Someone, thankfully, pruned my thread and left me all my feedback on my email, so I will get to it and hopefully I can reply later. I just wanted to leave the next chapter here in case I can't get on for the next ...
by RavenSprite
Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:51 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: The Wish (UC,K/L,YTEEN/ADULT) Ch 6 - 10/01/04 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 5380

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v411/RavenSpriteSam/f7b99b72.jpg CHAPTER #6 She remembers what she’d always felt since she was a small girl living in a small town in her small existence. She’d always remained unseen. She’d had many dreams and many goals and so, so much inside of her that no one h...
by RavenSprite
Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:45 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: The Wish (UC,K/L,YTEEN/ADULT) Ch 6 - 10/01/04 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 5380

CHAPTER #5 Liz decided that she truly hated her stupid curtains in the future. They were a distasteful shade of mustard yellow, but they were also so thin and useless that the sun would blaze through the windows, onto her face the first thing in the morning. She yawned, stretching like a purring ki...
by RavenSprite
Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:43 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: The Wish (UC,K/L,YTEEN/ADULT) Ch 6 - 10/01/04 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 5380

Previously... "We haven't seen each other since we graduated from high school." Chapter #4 She stared at him flabbergasted, she felt the ground move from underneath her feet, her heart was beating relentlessly against her chest, and she felt her legs slightly give themselves as they swayed...
by RavenSprite
Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:39 am
Forum: Dead and Buried
Topic: The Wish (UC,K/L,YTEEN/ADULT) Ch 6 - 10/01/04 [WIP]
Replies: 6
Views: 5380

Chapter #3 She faintly hears a voice that is calling out her name, only not really because it’s ‘Beth.’ She has never, ever liked anyone calling her that, much less this man, who was still in his towel, grabbing at her cheeks and shaking her about. He had green eyes, vivid and gorgeous but… he was o...
by RavenSprite
Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:57 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

Okay, I’m finally here! With a new chapter!! And all I can say is, once again, your feedback rocks and thank you for the bumps! I promise every question you have all asked will be answered sooner or later. I just don’t want to give everything out just yet. Enjoy!! And thank you so much, really. CHAP...
by RavenSprite
Sat Sep 18, 2004 8:26 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

You are all amazing. Your feedback... ROCKS. From the bottom of my heart... thank you. That is all. CHAPTER #7 ~My only love… sprung from my only hate. Liz had heard so many times of life being one huge joke, and many never understanding the punch line. She’d never understood that saying more then s...
by RavenSprite
Mon Sep 13, 2004 3:41 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

I guess I should have put this in the disclaimer. This idea, is not entirely mine. I was given it by a person who watches a Spanish soap. The storyline resembles it only slightly in the beginning, and later on I’m giving it my own ideas. I own nothing, I’m just someone who loves to write. FSUMSW94 ...
by RavenSprite
Sat Sep 11, 2004 10:45 pm
Forum: Complete - AU without Aliens
Topic: Shattered Pieces (AU,M/L,TEEN/MATURE) [COMPLETE]
Replies: 30
Views: 94561

Your feedback is AMAZING. You are all an insightful and wonderful bunch. It's flattering and encouraging. I hope you like this part! CHAPTER #6 Every time Isabel would comb Georgie’s hair before going to bed, she’d always let an involuntary tear fall down her cheek. It had been kind of hard for Isa...