Scars of White (AA, CC, MATURE) Part 66 edited + Part 67 1/9/25 (WIP)

[keepsmiling7]

So glad to see the return of this story, and I hope you are doing much better now.

Unwell, yes Max has a problem. The problem is Zan taking over, even the energy shield can't stop that.

[behrinthecity]

Any dreamer moment is my favorite part! Lol

As a fellow dreamer, I get that!

[behrinthecity]

OMG, yes it was! Now I’m thinking does anyone still have access to the chip? What ramifications does it have on Max not just mentally but physically too. And who’s going to take it out and will there be any negative effects with taking it out? So many questions…so this just means that we need longer parts

Excellent questions. As for the answers... we shall see!

[behrinthecity]

So glad to see the return of this story, and I hope you are doing much better now.

Unwell, yes Max has a problem. The problem is Zan taking over, even the energy shield can't stop that.

Hi keepsmiling7! Thank you for the wishes and comments. I am able to withstand being at the computer more and more, so am healing well.

That is a good point regarding Zan, but notice the color of the shield and when it stopped. Zan may not be as malicious as we thought...

[keepsmiling7]

okay, the energy of the shield was blue, not green.......this was better at stopping the bullets. It appears Zan was helping!

[MP]

Is it to soon to ask for another part

[dreamon]

Just stopping by…

[behrinthecity]

A/N: My computer died after I presented a lecture this week meaning the next part is inaccessible at the moment.

After i redo some work documents, I will start rewriting the next part. Really annoyed at myself for not backing up the latest part.

Apologies for the further delay.

[dreamon]

Oh no! That sucks

[clueless]

What brand is your computer?! I’m willing to write them a strongly worded email on your behalf for this immense inconvenience. Don’t they know that you have fans waiting eagerly for an update!