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Friends Till the End (AU,M/L,TEEN) Pt17 10/21/05 p.2 [WIP]

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  • Title: Friends Till the End
    Author: GottaFeedTheMonkey1257...y'all can just call me Kristen, though.
    Disclaimer: I don't own, nor do I have any rights to Roswell or it's characters. I'm just borrowing them for the time being. I always get the short end of the stick...
    Pairings/Couples/Category: M/L mostly, but a tad M/M and A/I...AU story
    Rating: Hmm...well, for starters I'm going to say YTEEN to TEEN. It may get a little ADULT but we'll deal with that when the time comes.
    Summary: It's another one of those best friends with unrequited love stories. Liz has loved Max ever since Junior High, but she doesn't think he feels the same way. Max has loved Liz ever since High School, but he doesn't think she feels the same way. Besides being so damn confusing, they're relationship is put to the test when something happens in the sleepy town of Roswell, New Mexico.
    Author's Note: Ok, guys, this is my very first fanfic! I'm so proud of myself for finally getting it on here. If I suck, which I just may, please tell me. Feedback of all kinds is greatly appreciated. Oh, and please give my fic a chance. I know, you've probably seen a bazillion of these best friends in love fics, but mine just may be different! If the title has been used before, don't hesitate to tell me. I can change it no problem. Thanks! Oh, and I forgot to mention that the title, Friends Till the End is actually a movie, but this story has nothing to do with it whatsoever. I just liked the title hehe. I also don't have any rights to it. I should've wrote that in the disclaimer, but eh, you take what you can get.


PROLOGUE . . . Welcome to My Life

"Lizzz," my best friend, Maria DeLuca, said in an annoyingly whiny voice as she moved closer to me in my bed.

I know what you're thinking, so you might as well stop now, you dirty minded people. Tsk, tsk, tsk.

"No, Maria and get out of my bed!" I said in a voice still groggy with sleep.

Maria just had to come and wake me up at the freakin' crack of dawn. Well, 10:00 a.m.

"Pleaaase, Liz?" she pleaded, looking at me with her trademark puppy dog eyes. Uh uh, not going to work.

"No, Maria, I'm not going to that stupid party with you Friday!" I said exasperatedly, rubbing the sleep from my eyes.

"Oh, come on! You'll have a blast, and I think that getting out would be good for you!" Maria said, sitting cross-legged on my bed. I groaned and pulled the comforter tighter around me.

"Maria, read my flapping lips. NO!" I exclaimed. "Now, get out of my room, so I can get ready for my shift. A shift, need I remind you, that includes you."

I forgot to mention that my father owns a diner. The Crashdown Cafe is one of Roswell's finest establishments, and I get the utter privilege of working there. I even get to live above the diner in a two-bedroom apartment with my parents!

If you didn't catch the sarcasm in there, this is going to be a long story.

"I am ready for our shift if you haven't already noticed by the uniform I'm wearing," she said, gesturing to her aqua-green clad body.

Yes, I said aqua-green. My father, who is slightly fashion challenged, designed our striking uniforms. They consist of an aqua-green dress that is extremely low cut and short. An alien head shaped apron compliments the stunning outfit. After all, this is Roswell, alien capital of the world.

"Well, then get out and let me change," I mumbled from under the comforter. I felt the bed lift as Maria got off, and I wiggled around to face her.

"Fine, but I am going to get you to come Friday. Mark my words, Elizabeth Parker, I will get you to attend the frat party with me tonight!" Maria cried dramatically, pumping her fist in the air for effect.

Maria tends to be a drama queen at times, but we tend to overlook that.

"Alrighty," I said as Maria tossed me a glare and left the room. I sighed and got out of bed. Grabbing my uniform from my dresser, I headed into the bathroom to shower and change.

Ok, I'm guessing most of you are a bit confused about what's going on here. Just breathe and I'll explain it all for you.

First of all, my name is Elizabeth Marie Parker. I'm a junior at West Roswell High, home of the mighty comets. I'm the daughter of Jeffrey and Nancy Parker. We live in Roswell, New Mexico where there was a supposed space ship crash. Don't worry, my body hasn't been snatched by aliens. Yet.

I'm pretty much your every day, small town girl. I go to school, get good grades, go to work, and come home. There's not much to do in Roswell, anyway. I really used to hate it here, but it's finally starting to grow on me. You just have to get used to the fact that everyone knows everyone else. Creepy, I know.

I have three best friends in the world. One of them is Maria DeLuca. From what you've already read about her, she can be a major drama queen, incredibly annoying, and downright rude. But, she also is very sweet, caring, and she is just a good person. She's always been there for me, no matter what. I love her to death. Like a sister, that is.

Alex Whitman is another one of my best friends. I've known him since I was in diapers, and we've been inseparable since then. He's probably the funniest guy I know, and he's just an easy person to be around. When Alex and I are together, there's never a dull moment. He's such a great friend, also.

My other best friend is Max Evans. There is so much to say about him. I'll start off by saying that I am head-over-heels in love with the guy. I know, I said he was my best friend, but that doesn't stop me from having romantic feelings toward the guy. I've known him since the good ole sandbox days, but I haven't felt things for him since Junior High. He still views me as a friend, so I haven't ever confessed my love for him. I don't want to lose a friend, or worse, scare him off.

Isabel Evans is one of my good friends. I'm only friends with her through Alex because she is his girlfriend. When I first met her, she was the bitchiest girl I've ever known. It takes some time to knock down the walls of ice surrounding her heart, but once you do, there's no way you can't love the girl. She is such a caring, loving person.

Micheal Guerin is one of Max's good friends and Maria's current boyfriend. Through these people, I've gotten to know Stone Wall Guerin, and we've gotten quite close. We don't have all that much in common, but the guy is fun to be around.

So, that pretty much covers all the people in my life. Now, I'll let you read about our interesting (ha) lives in Roswell. Keep in mind that this is Roswell.


Yes, I know that part was extremely short, so I'm going to give you the first part too! Chalk it up to a generous mood. ~Kristen

PART 1 . . . Slippery When Wet

"You're late for your shift," Maria chirped as I ran down the stairs from my apartment leading to the Crashdown, pulling my antennae head band on as I went.

Oh, that's another accessory that accompanies our uniform. Yes, they do look like alien antennas, and they're sparkly! No, I'm not kidding. My life really is that sad.

"I've still got 30 seconds," I said breathlessly as I checked my reflection in the mirror and headed into the dining room. I picked up my order book and looked around the room. Quite a few people were there, but it was a Saturday morning, after all.

"So, what time do you want me to pick you up Friday to go to the party?" Maria asked casually as she walked into the dining room behind me. I rolled my eyes at her.

"Uh, no time 'cause I'm not going to that stupid party," I said as I headed over to the group of guys sitting in my section. I plastered on my happy hostess smile before approaching them.

"What can I getcha, guys?" I asked as they ogled me.

Did I mention that I hate these uniforms with a fiery passion? I think I should sue my father for emotional damages. I am a young, impressionable teen, after all.

"That depends. Are you on the menu?" a guy with sandy blonde hair and piercing blue eyes asked with a coy smile. I resisted the urge to roll my eyes at the cheesy remark.

"Has that line ever worked for you?" I asked, keeping my smile in place. He frowned at me as his friends chuckled.

"Well, I've never wanted a waitress before, but you seem to be quite the catch," he said, his smile back on. Lord almighty, give me some strength. It is way too early to deal with guys like this.

"Save it for a trout. Look, if you're not going to get anything, then just leave," I said rather impatiently.

"Give us a round of cokes, sugar," Rico Suave said, flashing me a grin.

"Ok, I'll be back with your drinks in a second," I said, flashing them another smile before I headed behind the counter to the soda machine.

"Is 9:45 alright with you?" Maria asked as I started to fill their drink order. "I was thinking that we didn't want to get there too early or else we'd be branded dorks, but we don't want to get there to late either. What do you think?" she said in one breath.

"Maria, get this through your thick skull: I'm not going!" I cried, slamming down a cup full of coke on the counter and spilling it all over the floor. I groaned and grabbed a rag off the counter.

"But it's going to be so much fun, Liz!" Maria said, throwing her hands up in the air, as I bent down to clean up the spilt soda.

"I'm not going," I said for about the thousandth time that day.

"A lot of people will be there."

"Not even Adam Brody could get me there," I mumbled from my crouched position on the floor. Now, that's saying a lot 'cause Adam Brody is one hot piece of man. He was so damn cute on Gilmore Girls!

"A certain dark haired hottie will be there," Maria said, breaking me from my fantasy of me, Adam Brody, and a can of whip cream.

"Oh, and who would that be," I asked as if I cared. Which I didn't.

Ok, maybe a little.

"Max Evans," she said in a nonchalant type of voice. I immediately popped up only to realize that there was still a massive amount of soda on the floor.

Too late. I ended up on my back, the wind knocked right out of me. So, there I was, on the stcky floor. The sticky floor that also had about a hundred food scraps all over it. Eww...

"Oh my God, Liz, are you ok?" Maria shrieked as she bent down to help me up. I couldn't really answer her considering that I could barely breathe on my own.

Oh my God, I can't breathe! I'm going to die at the age of 17! I'm going to die a virgin! Oh my God, my cherry's still hasn't been popped and I'm about to die on a sticky, greasy floor in the middle of a cheap-ass dinner!

Just then, Maria came crashing down on top of me as about three other people piled behind the counter. Those three would be none other than Alex, Isabel, and finally Max. Oh Lord, take me now.

Huh, I didn't even realize they were here. Well, that just goes to show what happens when you get caught up in your work. Or at least pretend.

"Oh my God, where's Liz?" I heard Isabel ask in a frightened voice. I could hardly answer her as I was still shocked, and just now regaining control of my breathing ability.

It was just in...out...in...out. Ok, I'm good. I'm cool.

"Under Maria," I choked out as she still hadn't gotten off of me. Oh, I think I'm about to pass out from lack of oxygen. The girl looks tiny, but she weighs as much as a Buick.

"Maria, get off her!" Isabel screeches. Well, it's nice to know someone still cares about my health. Isabel is definitely getting a Christmas Card from me. Maria, however...

Suddenly, I felt Maria shaking on top of me. Oh my God, the girl's becoming epileptic! What to do, what to do?!

"Maria!" I yelled hoarsely 'cause I still couldn't breathe all that well.

"I k-killed L-Liz," came Maria's broken voice.

Dear Lord, the girl was sobbing. Not just my-cell-phone-is-out-of-minutes sobbing but my-puppy-got-ran-over-by-an-eighteen-wheeler crying.

"Maria, you didn't. I'm fine. Just please get off me!" I said, trying to cheer her up, but the sobbing didn't stop. Did I mention that she was a drama queen?

Just then Maria was lifted off me, and I took a moment to thank God for small miracles.

Oh, air! How I missed that greasy food smell! I took in big gulps of air, and I still could hear Maria's sobbing. I looked up to see her wrapped in Alex's arms as Max and Isabel looked down at me.

Oh, please tell me my underwear isn't showing. I looked up at Isabel and she quickly looked down then back up in my eyes, her own eyes wide.

Yep, my underwear was showing. At least I chose the sexy pink ones. Now we know that there is a silver lining to every cloud.

I leaped up like a salmon, only to realize that there was still coke on the floor. This time, however, as I started to slip back down to the ground, a pair of strong arms gripped mine tightly.

Those arms belonged to a certain dark-haired hottie. Ooer.

"You ok?" he asked me, concern showing in his amber eyes. Oh, look at the little gold flecks in them. It's like gold fish swimming around in chocolate pudding. Oooh, pudding.

"Liz?" Isabel's voice snapped me out of my daze. I refocused on Max to see him still staring at me with concern.

"Yeah, I'm good," I answered, turning to Maria who was still sobbing uncontrollably into Alex's chest. He looked kind of freaked out, but kept on patting her back.

Yep, our Alex is a trooper. Not many men can stand the sight of a blubbering female.

"Maria?" I asked loudly, trying to be heard over her sniffling and grunting.

Yes, I said grunting. Don't even ask.

"L-Liz?" she asked, turning around to face me. I gave her a reassuring smile. Then she pounced on me like a lion on a baby gazelle.

"Maria, don't kill her," Isabel said kindly as Maria smothered me in a huge hug.

"Yeah, it's ok, Maria; I'm fine. No harm done," I said, forcefully pushing her back. Times like those are when the "2 feet only" rule comes in to play.

"I am so sorry, Liz!" she said, trying to pull me into another hug, but I kept my vice-like grip on her arms, preventing her from getting near me.

"Well, not that I don't like to see some girl-on-girl action, but I think you two have some angry customers waiting," Alex said. Thank the Lord for this boy.

"Yeah, we need to get back to work," I said, trying to reach my back to wipe off some of the nasty food scarps, comfort Maria, and straighten my head band all at the same time.

"Here," Max said, straightening my head band for me. Oh, I think I just got shivers in my scalp. What a strange feeling. Strange, but nice.

"Thanks," I said, giving him a small smile in return.

"Oh, and I like the underwear," he said, nudging me playfully. I took on that nice deer-caught-in-the-headlights look that men find oh so attractive.

Just friggin' great.

So?? You like or should I give it all up for a job in the traveling circus? Let me know! ~Kristen
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Yay I've got feedback! Who's got feedback? I've got feedback! Ok, I'm good. Anyway, here is another part for you all. I'm sorry if it's a tad short, but I just now realized that my friends birthday is this Saturday instead of next. Whoops. Thanks guys for all the lovely feedback, and I hope you enjoy this next part!! ~Kristen

PART 2. . . Biceps, Car Rides, and Bland Bagels

Sometimes I wonder why I even bother pining over Max. I mean, why can't I just be friends with the guy, dammit?! Then, I think of how hot he looked in that black button up he wore last week. I can just feel the drool dripping down my chin.

That's what I thought as I laid in my bed at approximately 7:14 on Monday morning. Yes, I should've been getting up, not thinking about Max's biceps. Ok, well maybe a little longer of picturing his gorgeous bod wouldn't be so bad...

30 minutes later, I jumped out of bed like a startled gazelle. Well, thinking of Max wasn't such a good idea after all. Oh, who am I kidding? It's always a great idea! I hopped into the shower and got out in record time. Whoever says girls take long to get ready should take a peek into my life. I'm dressed and downstairs in 10 minutes flat.

Just as I was grabbing a bagel, picking up my Trig book from the kitchen table, and trying to tie my shoe all at the same time, I heard the honking of Maria's Jetta outside.

"Shit," I mumbled to myself as I stuffed my Trig book into my backpack. I hopped outside, my shoe still wasn't tied, and jumped into the Jetta.

"Wake up late again?" Maria asked amusedly. It's so nice that other people take glee in my misery.

"Yeah," I said, stuffing the bagel in my mouth. Damn, I forgot to put some cream cheese on it. How the hell can I eat a bagel without cream cheese?

"We've still got to swing by and pick up Max and Iz," Maria said as she headed toward the Evans' house.

Well, that's just great. Max is going to see me looking like a flustered fool before I even have time to stop off in the girls' bathroom. This day just keeps getting better and better.

"Shit," I mumbled, desperately trying to consume my bagel in one bite. Let me tell you now that it didn't work to well.

"Grumpy too?" she asked with an arched eyebrow. I just shot her a glare.

You know, asking people if they're grumpy is never a good thing to do. If they weren't grumpy before, they certainly will be after you ask them that.

"Shut up, Maria," I said through a mouthful of bland bagel.

"Touchy," Maria said with a smile.

"Just drive," I growled. I tried to straighten my clothes and tie my shoe, all the while chomping on my bagel.

Just as I felt that I looked presentable, Maria pulled into the Evans' driveway. Max and Isabel were already outside, waiting on the porch. Oh, Max looked really good. He had on that same black button up shirt I was daydreaming about earlier. Is it hot in here or what?

"Hey guys," Isabel said with a smile as she and Max climbed into the back seat of the Jetta. Maria gave a cheerful hello whilst I just grunted. "Wake up late again, Liz?" she asked amusedly.

"Yeah, she was grumpy the entire way here," Maria chimed in.

"Oh, was she doing the whole, shut-up-and-let-me-wallow-in-self-pity act?" Isabel asked.

"Uh, hello, still in the car," I said, pointing at myself.

I have the crappiest friends in the world. Why do I hang out with them again? Lately, I have only been finding myself in these crap situations, all due to them.

"Well, you do act like that," Isabel said grudgingly. I just gave her the evil eye.

"Oh, come on guys, Liz isn't that bad," Max said, coming to my rescue once again.

Did you hear that? Yes, that was the sound of my heart puffing up like a marshmallow in the microwave.

"Thank you, Max," I said pointedly, looking between Maria and Isabel.

"Just wait until you see her go a whole night without sleep. Now, that's grumpy!" he said, slapping me playfully on the arm.

And that was the hiss of air as my heart just deflated.

I started to tune out my friends as they went on to talk about the many moods of Liz, and contemplated my sad existence.

It's becoming blatantly obvious that Max views me as one of the guys. I mean, he would act differently if he liked me, right? Right.

"LIZ!" Maria shouted right in my left ear. I jerked back, rubbing my ear, and gave her a death glare. I'm famous for 'em, you know.

"What? Christ, I think you just deafened my ear," I said.

"Well, you weren't listening to us! Max asked you a question," she said, adding stress to Max's name, all the while smirking like a fool.

Maria can safely rule out any career choice that involves secrecy because the girl doesn't know the meaning of subtle.

"Yeah, I wanted to know if you were going to that party on Friday?" Max asked, turning his delicious amber eyes on me. Wait, what did he ask? Party. Friday. Right.

"Um...yeah, I think Maria and I were going to go," I said, giving Maria a pleading look. I didn't want her to go on and on about how I didn't want to go.

"You are?" Maria asked suspiciously.

"Yeah," I replied, looking out the window.

"Are you only going to see a certain someone whose name starts with a "M" and ends with AH!" Maria screeched as I casually smacked her upside the head. "What the hell, Liz!"

"Bug," I replied, shrugging. She gave me a funny look, still rubbing the side of her head. Well, one crisis diverted.

"Who are you going to see?" Max asked curiously.

"No one. Maria's just confused. You all know how she gets when she hasn't had her morning Red Bull," I told them. They all nodded knowingly and Maria shot me a glare as she pulled into the school's parking lot.

Just then, some kids walked right in front of Maria, causing her to slam on the brakes. We all jerked forward in our seats as Maria rolled down the window and stuck her head out.

"Hey, asswipes, watch where you're going! I payed big bucks for these brakes, so you better thank your lucky stars that they can stop on a dime!" she yelled to the now frightened Freshman. She pulled her head back in and rolled up the window as the Freshman scurried away.

"Jeez, Maria, it's nice to know that you're not as big a bitch as people say you are," I said sarcastically as Maria swung into a parking spot.

"Who said I was a bitch?" she asked angrily. Whoops.

"Uh...no one you know. Is that Micheal?" I said quickly, pointing to some random person in the distance.

"Where?" she asked, looking around wildly for Micheal, the boy-hair wonder. I made a hasty exit before she realized that Micheal was nowhere in sight.
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Yay more feedback! You know, it's really nice to know that other people think I'm funny too. Sometimes I wonder if people get my sense of humor 'cause I've had those moments where you say something you think is hi-lar-ious but no one laughs. Thanks guys for reading and leaving me FB to read. Y'all rock! Ok...so, here is the next part for my nifty little story for you all to enjoy. Hope you like! ~Kristen

PART 3. . . Cheeto Wars

"So, what time do you want me to pick you up Friday, or are you going to do another 180 on me and change your mind about going?" Maria asked me with a smirk. I shot her a glare as we continued on our merry way to the quad for lunch.

"I guess I kind of have to go now that I told Max that I would be there," I said with a sigh. Damn him and his good looks. This would be so much easier if he wasn't so damn sexy.

"Ok, so I'm going to pick you up at 9:30. That ok?" she asked as we stopped off at the vending machine so Maria could get herself a Mountain Dew.

It's amazing the girl can actually function with all the caffeine she chugs. She's bouncy enough without the added energy. It really is unhealthy.

"Maria, have you ever thought of laying off the caffeine for awhile?" I asked her, looking pointedly at the Mountain Dew she just fished out of the machine.

"You're kidding, right?" she asked incredulously with a laugh.

"Of course," I said sarcastically, rolling my eyes.

"Good. For a minute there, I thought that you were serious!" she cries, going into a fit of laughter, a snort here and there.

"Right. To answer your previous question, yes, 9:30 is fine with me," I said as we neared the lunch table that Micheal, Maria, Max, Isabel, Alex, and I all shared.

"There they are!" Alex cried as we reached the table. Maria sat next to Micheal, or rather in his lap, so I took the only seat that was open, which was by Max. Yes!

"Hey Alex, what's up?" I asked as I pulled out my lunch. Good ole PB&J. You just can't beat the classics. I pulled it apart and gave half to Max, and he gave me half of his ham and cheese sandwich in return. What? It's tradition.

"Nothing much. So, I hear you ladies are going to the party at my brother's frat house this Friday," Alex said, smirking at me from his seat next to Isabel and across from me and Max. He, of course, knew about my stubborn refusal to go to the party because he was the one that invited us. His brother just enrolled at UNM, and he always invites us to all the parties at his fraternity house.

"Yeah, I decided that I needed to get out," I replied casually, avoiding everyone's eyes.

"That's never swayed your opinion before," Micheal commented as he and Maria came up for air after their heated make out session.

It's quite interesting how he can be sucking face with Maria and paying attention to the conversation at hand all at the same time. He is the master at multi-tasking. That's probably why he and Maria go together so well. Maria tends to have many personalities.

"Ok people, I'm only going to tell you this once," I started angrily, slamming my sandwich back down on the table. I waited until everyone's attention was on me before I continued. "I've decided to go to this stupid party to have fun. You remember what that is right? Right. Now, if you ask me one more time why I chose to go, I swear, I'm going to open a can of whoop ass!" I screeched.

"Ok, Liz, you don't have to spaz out on us," Maria said, giving me an odd look. Ok, so maybe I did fly off the handle a bit, but I'm damn well justified!

"I was just clearing it up before I get asked again," I mumbled picking my sandwich back up.

"You know what? I think we need a shopping trip. It's so obvious that something crawled up Liz's ass, so let's cure it with a trip to the strip!" Maria said excitedly. Oh joy, a trip to Roswell's lovely strip mall. Well, I do need something to wear Friday.

"Oh, definitely!" Isabel cried, just as excitedly. They both turned to me expectantly.

"I'm in, but I don't know why after you made that crack about something crawling up my butt," I replied grudgingly.

"All in the name of fun, sweetie!" Maria said, patting my arm. I shot her another glare as she and Isabel went into happy shopper mode.

"Do you need a ride Friday, or are you going with Maria?" Max asked me. I looked over at him and gave him a small smile.

"I think I'm signed up to go in Maria's car of fun," I replied.

"So, who are you really going to see?" Max asked. I looked over at him and noticed something different in his eyes. I don't mean dirt or something, I mean a different look. Hmm...

"No one," I said with a shrug. "Really," I added as I saw that he didn't believe me.

"Right," he said sounding unconvinced.

"Really! Maria got confused. Jeez, the least you could do is believe your best friend," I said, rolling my eyes. I pulled my bag of Cheetos out of my lunch bag and opened them. I held them out to Max, and he took a handful of them.

"Who said you were my best friend?" he asked with a twinkle of amusement in his eyes. I glared at him and threw a Cheeto in his face. "Oh, now it's on," he said, throwing a Cheeto at me.

"I'll have you know that I always win in the Cheeto Wars. Just ask Maria," I said, throwing another Cheeto at him.

"Oh yeah?" he asked, stuffing a Cheeto in my opened can of Mr. Pibb.

"Yeah!" I yelled, dropping one in his bottle of apple juice.

"Ok, children, enough," Isabel said in a motherly tone.

"She started it," Max said grudgingly as he attempted to fish the Cheeto out of his drink.

"How old are you again?" I asked with a smile.

"Hardy har har," he said as he rescued the cheesy corn chip from the apple juice. He then popped it in his mouth and ate it.

"Ugh! That is disgusting!" I said with a grimace as I watched him chew the soggy chip.

"It isn't that bad," he said with a shrug. Well, that just proves that Max is a guy. Not that I had any doubts before.

"Ok, Liz, we're going to the mall tomorrow 'cause we have to work tonight, so don't make any plans," Maria said, breaking into my Cheeto War with Max.

"Alrighty," I said, popping another Cheeto in my mouth.

I really think that Cheetos are the best chip ever made. It's a tasty corn chip covered in cheesy goodness. Yum.

"Hey! Have you two been having a Cheeto War without me?" Maria cried as she noticed the trails of cheese left behind on Max's shirt. I guess he doesn't understand the concept of a napkin.

"Of course not, Maria," I said, humoring the girl.

"Good, 'cause you know I'd beat you all," she said.

"Ha! You wish!" I exclaimed. "I am the grand master in Cheeto Wars."

"You guys are so juvenile. You're fighting over a stupid chip war like it's actually worthwhile," Isabel said with a toss of her long, blonde hair. Maria and I shared a look before I dumped the rest of my Cheetos on her. Juvenile, my ass.
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Ok, here's the new part for my story, and I hope you all enjoy it! This part is kind of a little girl time/transition period for the story. I know, I know, it doesn't have M/L action, but next part will be oozing with M/L goodness! Hope you like this part anyway. ~Kristen

PART 4. . . Blind Receiver

"Ok, ladies, let's haul to the mall!" Maria cried excitedly as she, Isabel, and I walked out the front doors of West Roswell High into the parking lot the next day.

"Maria, can you stop with the dorky rhymes?" I asked with a sigh. It was enough that I had to be here, the least she could do is not embarrass me. Or annoy me. That's highly unlikely, though.

Don't get me wrong, I love shopping, but Maria and Isabel together in a mall is not a good combination. Trust me.

"Oh come on! Let's head to the Jetta, Loretta," she said, snorting at her own joke.

"Maria my name's not Loretta. I know, it's hard for you to remember things with all the caffeine running through your system, but please try to remember our names. I'm Liz and this is Isabel," I said in a voice as if I was speaking to a five-year-old. "Say it with me. LIZ and ISABEL."

"Oh, shut up, Liz," Maria said, rolling her eyes. I'm beginning to think that no one understands my humor around here.

"I've been dying to go to the mall all week. I went on Saturday, but I never did get anything to wear to the party Friday," Isabel said as we neared the Jetta. She got into the passenger seat as I climbed in back.

Maria didn't trust me sitting next to her ever since I hit her. I told her that it was a bug, but she won't hear it. Figures.

"Oh, me too! I want something sexy to wear that will have Micheal begging for it," Maria said slyly as she started the car.

"Yeah, me too. Alex won't know what hit him," Isabel said with a wink.

And now I feel like an outsider because I don't have a significant other at the moment. I've been too busy Max-scoping to take in any of the other Roswell men.

"So, Liz, how are things coming with your plan to seduce my brother?" Isabel asked, turning around in her seat to regard me with a grin.

As I said before, Maria can't keep a secret to save her life.

"Uh...not that well, actually. I think he still views me as a friend," I answered woefully.

Just then, I was thrown to the other side of the car as Maria took a turn at about 80 mph. I'm always wondering why I still accept rides from the girl, considering that she had to take her driving test about four times before she passed.

"Maria, turns should not be taken at 40 mph!" I screeched as I pulled myself back to my seat and fastened my seat belt hastily.

"Don't mock my driving, or you'll be walking," Maria said.

She means it too. I know from experience. One time, Maria was driving us to school when she ran over a curb, went through a stop sign, and nearly hit an elderly woman as she crossed the street. I told her, quite honestly I might add, that she couldn't drive her way out of a paper bag, and Hell would have to freeze over and become an ice skating rink for the elderly before I get back in the car with her. She totally overreacted and ordered me out of the car. I ended up taking the bus or walking for the next week, but I did give in when I broke one of my heels.

"You know, Liz, I'm not so sure that Max views you as just a friend," Isabel said, breaking me out of my walk down memory lane. I perked up at this bit of news but tried not to get my hopes up.

"What makes you say that?" I asked, trying to keep my voice casual.

"Well, I've seen the way he looks at you. It isn't so friendly," she answered, turning back around in her seat to face the front. I've never seen those looks.

"I've never seen those looks," I said out loud.

"That's because they're directed at you. Now, if you were not the receiver to looks like those, you would see them clearly. In this case, you are the receiver, and Max is the giver. If you like the giver of the looks, you will most definitely be blind to them," Maria said. Right. Good point. Well made. Not.

"What the hell are you talking about, Maria?" I asked in an annoyed voice.

"I said that you are the receiver of the lo-" Maria started but I cut her off.

"Yeah, yeah. I'm the receiver, Max is the giver. What I want to know is what that means in English."

"It means that you don't notice them because you like Max," Isabel clarified for me. That girl always was quicker with the Maria filter than me.

"Oh." Well ain't that a mind boggler. I still think that I would've seen these looks that are so popular, but I don't have the strength to argue with them. "Well, then how do you suggest that I lure him into my web of loooove?" I asked.

"Max likes your hair," Isabel said out of the blue.

"And?" I asked in confusion. What the hell does that have to do with anything? And I thought I didn't pay attention.

"You should wear it down more. Max has a hair fetish," Isabel said with a nod of her head. I'm not even sure I want to know how she found this out, yet I can't resist.

"How do you know this?" I asked.

"He was talking about it in his sleep once. I overheard," she replied with a shrug. Now that really confused me. Was he dreaming about my hair? Was I attached to the hair? Why does he like my hair so much? It isn't that great. It just kind of hangs there all straight and what not.

"Ok, I guess I'll wear it down Friday," I said slowly. Well, this certainly is a break-through.

"You should get a backless halter top," Maria suggested. Do I even want to know why?

"Ok," I decided to go for the simple answer 'cause I'm just so damn confused. This is a new revelation. I mean, Isabel says that Max may like me, and he dreams about my hair! To bad it's not my sexy bod, but I'll take what I can get.

"I think you should get a red halter top because you look fabulous in red and wear it with a pair of low rise jeans," Isabel, fashion guru on this little expedition, said.

"Okey doke," I answered, glad to have something to shop for. Otherwise, I would've been there until closing, still not knowing what to wear. I probably will be there until closing, considering who I'm with, but at least now I'll know what to buy! See, a silver lining to every cloud.

I looked out the window and realized that we were already at the strip mall. Time flies when you're confused.

"Ok ladies, let's get our shopping on," Maria said excitedly as she hopped out of the car. Isabel and I climbed out, and then we were on our way to our first stop: Alien Invasion.

Yes, that's another witty alien reference. I know, how many more can there be? As I said many times before, this is Roswell. You sell what can be sold.

"Oh, this is so cute!" Isabel said, looking at a short jean skirt in the window of Alien Invasion. It certainly was short.

"I like the one behind it," Maria said, pointing to the black frilly skirt behind the eensy-weensy skirt Isabel liked as we walked into the store.

"So, how about this halter top?" I asked, pulling out the first red halter top that I could find. Maria and Liz looked at it and wrinkled their noses.

"No way," Maria said, taking the offending top from me and stuffing it in some random clothes rack. Well, now we know why those sales ladies are always so grumpy. People like Maria actually make them do somehting.

"How about this one, Liz?" Isabel asked, holding up a very small halter. It was a deep, wine red, but it was also cropped. I'm not to sure about this.

"Isn't it kind of...missing a piece right about here?" I asked, pointing to the part where the shirt ended.

"No, silly, that's the way it's supposed to be," Isabel said with a roll of her eyes.

"Oh."

"Here, Liz, try these on with it," Maria said, handing me a pair of low rise jeans in my size. It turns out that I didn't have to do any work on this little shindig!

"Okey doke," I said, heading into the back to change. Easier said then done, my friends.

The jeans were so damn tight that I was wriggling on the floor, slamming into walls, and squatting to get them on. The people in the dressing rooms next to me must think that a couple is in here having wild sex. That, or doing a fabulous rendition of slam dancing.

About 15 minutes later, I finally got the jeans on. Now, on to the top. Well, let's see, this is the top and this is the bottom. Ok, this isn't so hard now.

After I got the halter on, I turned around to view myself in the mirror. My mouth dropped open from shock. I looked hot! I looked like a slut, but a hot slut! Yes!

The jeans fit me nicely, even though it was so damn hard to get them on. The shirt ended an inch above my belly button, showing off a nice expanse of tan stomach. Well, at least I know that those 20 crunches every night before bed weren't for nothing.

"Liz, are you about ready to come out here and show us?" I heard Maria calling from outside the dressing room.

"Yeah, I'm done," I said as I opened the door and stepped out into the waiting room. Maria and Isabel pretty much had the same reaction I did.

"Wow, Liz, you look sexy!" Isabel said, circling around me for a better view.

"Hot mama!" Maria called. A few older ladies that were walking into the dressing room gave us suspicious glares as they walked past us.

"What do you think? Please, don't do anymore catcalls because unlike you, I don't want to be viewed as a lesbian," I said, receiving a slap on my shoulder from Maria.

"Max is going to die when he sees you," Isabel said with a smirk.

"Yeah, but isn't it kind of...slutty?" I asked, chewing my lower lip worriedly.

"Of course!" Maria said. Oh, well thanks for soothing my worries there, Maria. "I mean, we all have a slutty side buried deep inside, and as girls, we have a right to expose it every now and then!" I wonder where Maria learned all this logic from. First, she goes on and on about blind receivers and now, she's saying we're all sluts inside.

"Well, I guess I'll buy them then," I said, heading back into the dressing room to change back into my t-shirt and jeans. I don't know about this, though. I don't want Max thinking I'm some cheap slut. Damn those morals that were drilled into me since birth.

"Now, Iz and I have to find something to wear," Maria said after I purchased my outfit. Oh, goody.

~ * ~ *

An hour and a half later, Maria and Isabel still hadn't found anything to wear. They did, however find about 5 pairs of shoes. Each.

"Can you guys just pick something?" I whined as we walked into our fifth store.

"Stop whining, Liz," Isabel said. Nice friends I have.

"Well, if you would just pick a freaking outfit, I wouldn't have a reason to whine!"

Just as we were walking down the aisle between the racks of clothes, some punk ran right into us, sending all our bags flying. I crashed into a mannequin, knocking it over whilst Maria and Isabel knocked into a clothing rack.

I looked in the direction the punk was running and almost yelled out "Watch where you're going, jerk!" but I didn't because the guy was about 6'5''. He could take my petite self down with a backhand.

"What the hell is going on here?" I heard someone yell as I stumbled to get up from my position on top of the mannequin. Well, this is just great.

"Some kid just ran by and crashed into us," Maria explained to the person as she picked up our bags that were strewn all over the floor.

"Was he about 6'5'' with long, brown hair?" the voice, who was apparently a saleswoman, asked.

"Yeah," I answered because I was the only one who got a good look at him.

"Oh, hold on then. Let me call security. You three need to stay here so he can get your statements," she said, walking away. And this shopping trip just keeps getting better and better. On the bright side, maybe we'll get to ride in the police car with the siren on and everything.

"Ok girls, the officer will be here shortly. In the meantime, I'd like to apologize for that. It's not a common occurrence for our customers to be knocked down by some random kid," she said, clasping her hands together. I bet.

"Someone called about a disturbance?" a masculine voice said from behind me. I turned around only to find one sexy piece of man. He gets an eight on the hottness scale.

"Yes. That kid who robbed Victoria's Secret was in here, and he knocked these young ladies down," the saleswoman said. Hold on. Back up the party bus for a minute.

"Did you say he robbed Victoria's Secret?" I asked.

"Yes," Officer Sexy answered, looking at me confusedly.

"You're telling me that Mr. Can't-Run-In-A-Straight-Line robbed Victoria's Secret?" I asked with a snort.

"Yes. Is there some kind of problem with that?" he asked.

"Well, I'm just wondering how he could pull off a heist in Victoria's Secret of all places. I mean, those salesladies are all over you like grease on a pizza," I said with a snort.

"That's what we're trying to figure out," he said. "Now, I want to know what happened here, and if you three are all right."

"Well, now that you mention it, I've sort of got this annoying headache right abo-" I started but was cut off by a quick jab in the ribs by Maria. No one gets my humor. Huh.

"This is not a laughing matter young lady," Mr. Friendly said. Jeez, the guy is getting his panties in a jumble because of one punk.

"Do you know the young man that knocked you down?" he asked. I snorted at the absurdity of his comment but turned it into a cough when Iz and Maria shot me a glare. I was tempted to tell him that he was my best friend named Bob, but I didn't. See, I do have some self control.

"No, sir," Iz said, flashing him a perfect smile. Well, at least I'm not the only one who thinks he's hot and sexy.

"Ok, I don't think that there's much else to say here. No one's hurt, and nothing's stolen, so I'll just let you ladies get back to shopping," he said. "But, if any of you see him again, I want you to take him down to security."

Oh, yeah, like me at 5'2" could take down Rico Suave at 6'5". In your dreams., buddy.

"Okey doke," I said, flashing him a smile. He gave me a stern look and walked away. Hmpf.

"Well, that was interesting," Isabel said as she went back to looking at skirts.

"You know, Liz, if your dad ever got wind of you being such a smart ass towards an officer, you'd be in some deep shit," Maria said as she grabbed five skirts from the racks to try on.

"That's why he won't," I said pointedly.

"Yes, yes, we won't tell him anything," Isabel said with a wave of her hand.

Whew, that was a close one. Maria certainly wasn't exaggerating when she said I'd be in some deep shit. I'd be drowning in it. Ew...that's a disgusting mental image.

"Now, back to shopping!" Maria cried gleefully. Yippee.
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Ok, I'm back with a new part! I'm not to happy with this part because it doesn't have that much M/L and it's just...blah. When I was writing it, I couldn't think of anything to put so I just used something that happened to me.

Same thing happened with the last part. Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I was bowled over by a Victoria's Secret robber. That is the craziness some call my life.

Also, I can't even remember the names of the Roswell teachers. I know, what kind of Roswell fanatic am I that I can't even remember the teachers' names?! I have memory problems, and I'm too lazy to go watch my Roswell DVDs. I just used some of my old teachers' names.

Anyway, I hope someone likes this next part cuz I sure don't. Next part is the party, and I've got tons of things to write for it!! ~Kristen


PART 5. . . Carnage

As I sat in my Chemistry class on Friday morning, tapping my pencil on the black table top, I pondered my life. Well, kind of.

"Alright class, put your books away, it's time for that pop quiz I mentioned last week," our teacher, Mr. Slinger said. The pencil I was tapping snapped in half in my hand. Oh shit.

I knew about this test, I really did. I even planned on studying for it last night. The thing is, I got kind of sidetracked.

It's not my fault, really. No, I wasn't daydreaming about Max again. Jeez, one would think that you think I'm obsessed or something. Anyway, I was studying in my room when my mom came barging in. She started rifling through my stuff for some unknown reason, and she found the negligee that Maria bought me as a gag gift. To make a long story short, I ended up skipping the homework and sitting through a long, and I mean long, talk about how stripping is not a respectable job.

I swear, my family is nuts. Some would think that I would have to sit through the birds and the bees talk, but no, my mom thinks I'm becoming a stripper. I must be adopted.

Where was I after I so rudely interrupted myself? Oh, that's right we were about to have a pop quiz. After I broke my pencil, Max gave me an odd look.

"Are you ok?" he asked.

"Uh, yeah. Can I borrow a pencil?" I asked, a flush creeping up my cheeks.

"Sure," he said, trying to stifle his laugh. That's right, yuk it up.

"Thanks," I replied.

"As soon as I hand the tests out, there will be absolutely no talking," Mr. Slinger said as he walked between the rows of lab tables, placing two tests on each table.

"Liz, are you alright?" Max asked in a whisper.

"Yep. I'm cool," I lied.

"Really? You're muttering under your breath about being a stripper and stupid tests," Max said with an amused smile on his face. Jeez, now the guy thinks I'm nuts. Well, who can blame him?

"Oh, well, I didn't study for this test, and now I'm two mutters away from flipping a gasket," I whispered back. Max looked at me incredulously.

"Elizabeth Parker didn't study for a test?" he asked with a soft laugh.

"I'm so glad that you take glee in my misery," I said, rolling my eyes. Max just chuckled away as Mr. Slinger dropped two tests onto our table. I handed, or more like threw in the general vicinity of his head, Max his paper and placed my own in front of me.

I started to tap my pencil on my desk out of nerves as I read the test over. I'm going to fail. I'm going to be grounded for a long, long time, and it's all my stripper-obsessed mother's fault.

"Can you stop that?" Max asked as he placed his larger hand on my own to stop my movements. My hand froze in mid-tap as my eyes zeroed in on our hands. Am I desperate or what? The correct answer to that would be yes.

"Mr. Evans, Miss Parker, is there something wrong?" Mr. Slinger asked. The whole class turned to stare at us, and Max quickly let go of my hand.

"Nope, no problem back here," Max said.

"Actually, I kind of have a problem," I started, as Max threw me a glare. Oh, suck it up buddy, you're not the one who is in danger of failing.

"And what would that be, Miss Parker?" Mr. Slinger asked in a tired voice.

"Well, I kind of didn't study for this test. Now, before you start to blame me, I'll have you know that it's not my fault. Blame it on my mother. Anyway, if I take this test, I'll end up failing which will eventually lead to my grounding. I can tell that you wouldn't want that happening to a young, vivacious woman like myself, so if you could just let me take it tomorrow, I'd forever be grateful," I said. The entire class stared at me in silence after I finished. I'm just speaking my mind, people.

"Let me put this simply...no," Mr. Slinger said with a smile.

"It was worth a try," I said, shrugging my shoulder.

"Ok, the tests are out, so there will be no talking," Mr. Slinger said as he sat down at his desk in front of the classroom.

I looked down at my test and heaved a sigh. Well, here goes nothing. Question number one.

1. What is the atomic symbol of the element Rubidium?
A. Rd C. Ru
B. Rb D. Rm


Ok, this isn't too bad. I circled the letter B and moved on to the next question.

2. What is the atomic weight of the element Tungsten?
A. 182.85 C. 183.5
B. 183.45 D. 184.75


And now I know I'm screwed.

~*~*~

"That test wasn't so hard," Max said in a chipper voice. I just glared at him as we continued down the halls.

"Whatever you say, bud," I replied. My head still hurts from all that mental exhaustion.

"As long as you payed attention in class, I'm sure you'll pass the test," Max said.

That would be my problem because I haven't been paying attention in class. Well, I have but not to Mr. Slinger. Instead, I pay attention to my lovely lab partner, Max. Did I not say I was a desperate woman?

"I'll see you later," Max said as he walked off in the direction of his locker. I headed over to where Maria, Isabel, and myself all had a locker. I found them already there, reapplying makeup.

"Where's the funeral procession?" Isabel asked as I stood in front of my locker.

"You know, this is probably the last time you'll see me, so you shouldn't waste it by making idiotic remarks like that," I said glumly as I spun my combo on my lock. Isabel and Maria just looked at me blankly. Figures. "I failed my Chem test."

"Oh," they replied knowingly. We all know how my parents get about grades. We call them the Fun Nazis.

"Well, look at it this way," Maria said in a cheerful voice. Oh, great. More valuable Maria logic. "At least you can use the time to learn something new, such as juggling," she said as she flipped open her compact and pouted at her reflection.

"Maria, why in the name of Mr. Slinger's drab sense of humor would I want to learn how to juggle?" I asked as I finally got my locker open.

"I don't know," she said as she closed her compact with a snap.

I'm not even going to respond to that. That's how upset I am.

"Just don't show your parents your test," Isabel suggested. If only it was that easy, my friend.

"My parents know when I bring home a test. It's like they have ESP or something," I answered as I pulled out my English book. The whole gang had it together, and believe me, we made the most of it.

"Did you guys finish the English homework?" Maria asked worriedly. Looks like someone forgot. Again.

"Yep," I answered gladly because I did it before my mom decided to become Miss Inquisitive.

"Ditto," Isabel said as she shut her locker.

"Want to hook a sista up?" Maria asked.

"Were you by any chance learning how to juggle instead of doing your homework?" I asked as I shut my own locker.

"No," she answered.

"Ok, then you can borrow mine," I said, slipping the paper out from my textbook and handing it to Maria.

"Thank you, Lizzie! For payment, I'll bring you some sushi tomorrow," Maria said.

"As appetizing as that sounds, I'm going to pass on that," I said as we started down the hall to English class.

"Your loss," Maria said as she looked over my homework.

"So, are we all going in Maria's Jetta to the party tonight?" Isabel asked. I nodded my head as I noticed that Max, Micheal, and Alex were walking down the hall from the opposite direction. They saw us and waved. "And how are we all supposed to fit in there?" Isabel asked.

"I don't know, Isabel. Maybe you can ride in the trunk," I said irritably. The girl was interrupting my Max staring.

"Well, excuuuuse me," she said with a toss of her hair.

"If you could take your eyes off Max for one second, could you look this sentence over. Does it say poop or coop?" Maria asked.

"It's poop of course because I write about that often," I said with a roll of my eyes.

"It's not my fault that you write like a demented kindergartner," Maria said.

"That would be Isabel's writing," I said. It's true. She had the biggest writing I've ever seen.

"Hey!" Isabel cried angrily.

"Fighting again, ladies?" Alex asked as we all reached the door to the English room at the same time. We all gave him a look and brushed past the guys into the room. "Did anyone just feel that blast of cold air, or was it just me?"

We headed to our seats in the very back. Maria, Isabel, and I all sat in the desks against the wall, and Max sat in front of me, Alex in front of Isabel, and Micheal in front of Maria.

With Max sitting in front of me I get maximum Max staring because no one catches me at it. Plus, it warrants me plenty of big headed/big eared jokes.

"Hey, Max if I threw you off the roof, do you think your ears could keep you up?" I asked with a smile. I couldn't resist.

"Do you think that you could fit in a locker if I stuffed you?" he asked back with a grin. See, I make fun of his abnormally large ears, and he makes fun of my vertically challenged self.

"You two act like five-year-olds," Micheal pointed out. Already knew that one, buddy.

"Can you guys shut up so I can finish copying Liz's homework?" Maria asked as she bent over a piece of paper and furiously scribbled words onto it.

"Pardon us for interrupting your cheating. It won't happen again," I said, rolling my eyes.

"That's all I ask," Maria answered.

"Ok, people, close your mouths and focus your attention on me," Mrs. Hagstrand said as she walked into the classroom.

"Today we will be studying A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens. First of all, I know that some of you will become incredibly bored with this book, but it's in your best interest to pay attention. If you don't you'll be lost in no time. Now, A Tale of Two Cities contains many coincidences. All of the main characters are somehow connected. If you take a look..." Mrs. Hagstrand started only to be tuned out by me. I read this book in the 7th grade. Yes, I am a super nerd.

I looked over to find Maria and Isabel with their heads in their hands, and their eyes closed. I'm not the only one.

I looked around the room for a bit and noticed all the hippy posters Mrs. H had. She is definitely a flower child. More power to ya sister.

Suddenly, an abnormally large fly flew straight at my head. I swatted it quickly because we all know that flies are dirty, disease infested insects. Two seconds later, Gigantor was back with a vengeance. He kept up kamikaze attacks on my head, and let me tell you, you could actually feel it when he hit.

I got the attention of Maria and Isabel as I waved my hands around like a maniac. They looked at me a bit confused before they saw the fly attack me again. Maria giggled and reached down in her bag for something. She popped back up with a small book.

I shook my head wildly at her because I didn't want her to hit me. She somehow knew what I was thinking, and she shook her head. We spend way to much time together.

Finally, the fly discovered the window, and in an attempt at freedom, it took off for it, only to crash into it. It kept slamming into the window for some unknown reason, so I was just about to lift the window to let the little guy go. However, Maria motioned for me not to.

She looked back at the fly with a wicked glimmer in her eyes before she threw her book right at the window. It made a huge bang, and the whole class, including Mrs. H. Turned to stare at us. Jeez Louise.

"Miss Parker, what in God's name are you doing?" Mrs. Hagstrand screeched. Me?! I did absolutely nothing!!

"Nothing, Mrs. H," I replied. She gave me an unconvinced look.

"Well, then why did a loud bang come from your general direction?" she asked. Good point.

"Uh...bang? I didn't hear a bang," I answered, shrugging my shoulders. I didn't want to sell Maria out because there was some rule written about not selling your best friend out. At least, I think so. Whatever.

"Maria killed a fly," Isabel piped up. I guess she never heard of that rule.

"What?" she asked angrily.

"Maria. Killed. A. Fly," I said, leaving space between each word. She just glared at me. Huh. Well, that's what I get for trying to be helpful.

"Then all three of you can stay after class," Mrs. Hagstrand said. What?! What?!

"But I didn't do anything," I said.

"I know you, Miss Parker, and I know that you are always up to something," she said with a scowl. Hmpf!

~*~*~

After the bell rang to end class, Maria, Iz, and I stayed in our seats. As the guys got up, they threw smirks and grins in our direction. Thanks, guys, it's good to know you suffer when we suffer. Not.

"Come here, ladies," Mrs. H. said angrily.

We slowly walked up to her desk like we were walking up to the gallows.

"I'm very disappointed in you three. I expected better. I try to conduct a simple lesson, and you three are in the back throwing things around. Now, I expect a written apology, and I'm warning you now that there will be no more carnage in this room," she said.

Hold on just a second there.

"Carnage?" I asked.

"Yes. Carnage is mass killing," Mrs. Hagstrand answered as if it was so freaking obvious.

"I know what it means, but that's not went on back there," I said. Did she really think that we were killing people in her classroom?

"Did you not kill a fly?" she asked.

"Yeah, we did, but-," I started but she cut me off.

"Carnage," she said simply. I just stared at her dumbly, not even knowing where to begin. "You are dismissed," she said after she saw us still standing there and staring at her. We all walked out of the classroom slowly.

I cannot even believe this. I got in trouble for killing a frigging fly! I thought we'd get in trouble for almost breaking her window, but no. What has public school come to when they allow hippies to teach.

"Did we just get in trouble for killing a fly?" Maria asked confusedly.

"Yes we did, my friend," I answered.

I was tempted to go back to Mrs. Treehugger and plead my case, but I knew I wouldn't win it with her. I mean, come on! The thing dies in twenty-four hours anyway! Dang, we cut it's life short by a few minutes. We should be thrown in jail.

Even though I just suffered from an unfair situation, the only thing I could think of was how much trouble am I going to get into now.

No silver lining to this cloud.

Yeah, I know that wasn't so good. Eh, I'm too tired to change it, so it's staying lol. Can you believe that the whole fly story actually happened to me?! I can't even believe it. I got a week of detentions for killing a friggin fly. Freaking hippies.
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Hey! I am back again with a new part. Yay for me. Thanks for the fb guys, I love to read it. Hehe, I'm glad you guys find me as funny as I find myself.

Anyway, here is the next part for you all to enjoy. It's the party (finally) but I'm not to happy with it. I guess it's ok, but the ending got all mushed together. Yeah, you probably have no idea about what I'm talking about. I'ma shut up now. ~Kristen


PART 6. . . Embracing My Inner Slut

"Oooh, Lizzie, you look hot!" Maria cried as she came barreling into my room later that night. I had just changed into my outfit for the party.

"I look like a slut," I said, eyeing my reflection in the mirror.

"So?" Maria asked, giving me a blank look. I sighed and turned to view my profile in my floor-length mirror.

"So, I don't want people thinking that I'm some cheap ho," I answered.

"Oh, people know that you're not a cheap ho, Liz. They all know you as a super nerd." Thanks Maria, I'm glad to have a friend like you to remind me that I'm a nerd. "Stop worrying about what people think. You're going to this party to have fun, remember?" Maria said, plopping down onto my bed.

"I guess," I said with another sigh as I laid on my back next to Maria. We were leaving for the party in 30 minutes. "Why aren't you dressed yet?" I asked as I noticed her SpongeBob Squarepants t-shirt and jeans.

"I don't want to spill anything on it or put any wrinkles in the skirt, so I brought it with me," Maria answered, pointing to a garment bag hanging on my door handle.

"Well, we should leave pretty soon, so get to getting," I said, pushing her off my bed. I guess she wasn't expecting it because she landed on the floor with a thump.

"Ouch," she whined, standing up. I just looked at her as she stomped over and grabbed her garment bag and stomped to my bathroom.

I'm not really liking this outfit anymore. I mean, I do look like a spicy senorita, but I just don't feel comfortable. I can't even sit in these jeans and expect to be able to breathe. Looks like it's standing for me.

At least I can still go. When I came home, my parents were out, so I didn't have to face their wrath. I hid up in my room all afternoon until Maria came over. The last thing I need now is to rehash the whole fly killing incident.

My parents think that all my teachers hate me. Well, they certainly have good reasons to, don't they? One thinks that I'm some kind of serial fly killer, and the other thinks that I don't know when to shut my mouth. Good reasons, indeed.

Twenty-eight minutes later, Maria finally came out of the bathroom dressed in a mico-mini black skirt and an off the shoulder gold top. It did look good on her, and she certainly had the legs to pull off that skirt.

"Ok, chica, let's hit the road," Maria said, helping me off of the bed. I think I'm going to have welts from these jeans. Good grief.

I slipped on my strappy red heels as Maria slipped on her gold ones. Ok, everything is good to go.

After a long 15 minute drive of me begging Maria to turn around so I could get some actual clothes on, we arrived at the Evans' house. We were going to pick up Max, Isabel, Micheal, and Alex there.

How are we going to fit six people in a Volks Wagon Jetta, you might ask? Good question.

"Liz, you have got to calm down. You look great!" Maria said as she honked the horn, signaling for everyone to get their asses out here and into the car.

"Ok, I'm good. I'm calm, cool, and collected," I said, trying to regain normal breathing as everyone walked out of the Evans' house, Max in the lead.

If I thought he looked sexy in everyday clothes, he certainly looked oober hot tonight. He had on loose jeans with a tight black t-shirt that showed off his muscles beautifully. I tried to wipe the drool off my chin before they all got into the car.

Maria and I got out so that we could figure a seating arrangement. As soon as I stepped out, all of the guys' jaws dropped. Well, that was a good reaction!

"Who are you, and what have you done with our shy, sweet Lizzie?" Alex asked, looking me up and down. I blushed profusely and looked at the ground.

"Oh, come on, Alex. Liz looks sexy," Maria said, rolling her eyes.

"No one's denying that," Alex replied. Isabel slapped him hard on the arm. Oh jeez. If I get Alex acting like this, I can guess what will happen at the party.

"Can we just get into the car?" I asked, finally bringing my eyes up. I looked over at Max, and I noticed that his eyes had become darker. Well, this is certainly new.

"Ok, well Isabel, Micheal, and Alex sit in the back, and Liz can sit on Max's lap in the front seat," Maria said with an evil grin.

And now things get interesting. I looked over at Max who had an uneasy look in his eyes.

"Is that ok with you, Max?" I asked softly. I didn't want to put the guy in an uncomfortable position. Well, actually I did if it means me sitting on his lap, but I was trying to be a good friend.

"F-fine with me? Yeah, yeah," he stuttered. I gave him an odd look before I held the passenger door open for him. I saw him swallow before he got in.

There's nothing to be worried about right? I mean, this is Max. We've been friends forever, and there are no secrets here. Ok, well I should probably get in the car instead of standing out here muttering to myself.

I quickly got in and plopped down on Max's lap. He gave an oof as I landed right on top of his...oh shit.

I jumped out of the car once again, blushing furiously. Ok, that was embarrassing. Let's see if we can try this again.

Slowly, I sat down on his lap, hiding my face, as I pulled the door closed. I didn't bother to look at everyone else in the car because I knew that they'd be smirking and/or grinning at me. If this is a sign for how the night is going to go, I'm might as well die right here and now.

And then there was silence.

I turned my head to the side and regarded Max out of the corner of my eye. He was staring intently out the window. One of his hands was wrapped around my bare stomach to keep me from falling, and the skin to skin contact sent tingles up my spine.

"So, this is awkward," Alex piped up from the back. I rolled my eyes at him.

"Thank you, Captain Obvious," I said, turning around to regard him. Max groaned softly. "Did I hurt you?" I asked with worry.

"No, no," he said, swallowing again. Ok, then. Max was acting really strange tonight.

"Okey doke," I said.

"So, Liz, what the hell happened to you? You look hot," Micheal said with a smirk. Maria turned around and hit him, which seemed difficult, considering that she was the driver. Not for Maria, though.

"Hey, I have an idea! How about we stop talking about Liz's outfit and start a new topic of conversation?!" I said in mock excitement. I really was trying hard not to blow a fuse again, but they were starting to piss me off.

"So, how about this heat wave?" Alex asked with a chuckle. Leave it to him to say something idiotic like that. I decided to tune out as the guys talked around the girls in two different conversations.

Well, this wasn't so bad. I mean, I am sitting on Max's lap, but the fact that I hit his...uh...anyway, it wasn't so bad. Except that the handle to roll down the window is digging into my back. That's kind of uncomfortable, but I don't want to move because...well, you know.

"Something wrong, Liz?" Maria asked with a grin. I guess she noticed that I was sitting very straight and very still. Dang her and her knowing ways.

"Nope. Nothing wrong here. How about you?" I asked. Jeez, I was rambling. I've just got to breathe and stay cool.

"Nothing, nothing," she replied knowingly. Again, I wonder why I stay friends with these people. How many times have I been made fun of tonight 'cause I've lost count?

"Max, do you mind if I...just...," I started, trying to shift. The stupid handle was killing my back. I moved to sit mostly on his right leg, but Maria chose that moment to take a sharp left. I ended up slamming back against the window and sliding to the floor of the car. Great.

"Oh, Jesus, Liz, are you ok?" Max asked. These jeans didn't make it any easier to breathe down here. I was caught between the glove compartment and Max's legs.

"I'm so sorry, Liz!" Maria yelled, looking down at me instead of at the road.

"Eyes on the road, Maria. I'm fine," I said through gritted teeth as I tried to get out of my scrunched position. Once again, easier said then done.

"Need help?" Max asked me. He grabbed my hand and pulled me back into his lap. Whew, that wasn't so bad.

"Thanks," I said with a smile.

"Anytime," he said, returning my smile. He is really cute when he smiles. His eyes light up and everything.

"We're here!" Maria called excitedly.

I got out of the car, Max behind me, and we went into the fraternity house. Whoo, I feel all jittery inside. What the hell?

"Uh, Liz, you kind of have to twist the knob to open the door," Micheal said. I snapped out of my daze and looked at my hand resting on the doorknob. Whoops.

"Right," I said. As soon as I pushed the door open, blaring music hit us as did the smell of smoke and beer. Ugh.

"Woohoo!" Maria yelled as she pushed past me and walked inside. I stared at the dim interior and decided to follow her in. Okey doke, this isn't so bad.

As soon as I got in, five guys turned and stared at me. Ok, I lied. This is bad.

"Well, look who we have here," one of the guys said as he came up to stand beside me. I looked around for one of my crew but lo and behold, they weren't around. Again, I wonder why I'm still friends with them.

"Excuse me," I said politely, pushing past him. He grabbed my arm before I was able to make it by him.

"Where do you think you're going?" he asked, getting right in my face. His breath smelled of alcohol and breath mints. Not a good combination, believe me.

"She said excuse me," I heard a guy's voice say behind me. I whipped around only to find Max. At least one of my home skillets cares about me.

"Sorry, dude, didn't know she was taken," the jerk who grabbed my arm said. He let me go and held his hands up in surrender. Yeah, that's right. You better run.

"You ok?" Max asked, or more like yelled because the music was so freaking loud, as he came to stand next to me.

"Peachy," I said, giving him a smile. "Do you know where Maria went?" I yelled up to him.

"What?" he yelled back.

"Do you know where Maria went?" I yelled even louder. It would've worked too if the DJ hadn't chosen that exact moment to turn the song off. Everyone turned to look at me. Well, at least now I have everyone's attention. "Maria DeLuca you better get the hell out here!"

"Jeez, Liz, I'm right here," Maria said as she came to stand behind me.

"Oh, ok. You all can go back to your drinking, dancing, and making out now," I said as I noticed that everyone was still staring at me. Didn't anyone learn that it's not polite to eavesdrop? Sheesh.

"What did you want me for, or do you get some perverse pleasure in screaming my name out at the top of your lungs?" Maria asked impatiently. Looks as if I interrupted some Maria/Micheal bonding time.

"Actually, I wanted to know where my friend was so I could kick her ass for leaving me all alone at this stupid party!" I cried angrily. She shouldn't be getting smart with me. She is, after all, the one who forced me into coming.

"You aren't alone. Max is right next to you. And I thought I didn't pay attention," Maria said, rolling her eyes. The girl makes me want to pull her hair out at times.

"Never mind, Maria. Go back to your Micheal make out session," I said with a wave of my hand.

"Okey doke," she said as she cantered off to God knows where.

"So," Max said when we were all alone. Well, technically, there were about 20 people surrounding us, but you can't be picky in these situations.

"So," I replied. If Max didn't think I was an idiot before, I'm sure to change his mind with my brilliant conversation skills.

"Wanna dance?" he asked as a slow song came on. Oh! Oh!

"Yeah," I replied shyly as I took his offered hand. He led me out to the dance floor, which was basically a stretch of tile that people were dancing on. Not my fantasy of where I wanted my first dance with Max to be, but I'll take what I can get.

Lying in my bed I hear the clock tick
And think of you
Caught up in circles
Confusion Is nothing new
Flashback warm nights
Almost left behind
Suitcase of memories
Time after


Oh, this is so cliche. I mean, this song has been used in every single teen movie in the slow dance scenes since the dawn of time. I thought about saying that out loud, but I remembered just in time where I was and who I was with. Instead, I laid my head against Max's shoulder as we swayed to the beat.

Sometimes you picture me
I'm walking too far ahead
You're calling to me, I can't hear
What you've said
Then you say go slow
I fall behind
The second hand unwinds


This was nice. Max and I danced slowly, and the world of alcohol and marijuana smoke faded away. Well, faded away the best it can when some geezer is puffing the stuff right in your face. I felt Max's hand rub up and down my bare back soothingly as we swayed.

If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I'll be waiting
Time after time
If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I will be waiting
Time after time


Slowly, I raised my head to look into his eyes. His eyes locked on mine, and we drifted even closer, if that was possible. I licked my lips self-consciously, and Max's eyes zeroed in on them.

After my picture fades and darkness has
Turned to gray
Watching through windows
you're wondering If I'm OK
Secrets stolen from deep inside
The drum beats out of time


Our heads drifted closer as our bodies swayed in a continuous motion. That is when I realized that Max was going to kiss me. What do I do, what do I do?! Kiss him, you fool!

If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I'll be waiting
Time after time
If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I will be waiting
Time after time


I really should stop talking to myself in my head because as soon as I focused back in on Max, I realized that his lips were mere centimeters from mine, and his eyes were closed. Not really knowing what to do anymore, I closed my own eyes and met his lips in a slow kiss.

You said go slow
I fall behind
The second hand unwinds


We pulled back briefly and looked into each other's eyes. Without even thinking, I pulled Max's head back down to mine and fused our lips together in a heated kiss. Max's arm around my waist pulled me flush against his chest as one hand snaked up into my hair.

If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I'll be waiting
Time after time
If you're lost you can look and you will find me
Time after time
If you fall I will catch you I will be waiting
Time after time


The next song started, and it was an upbeat song, but I could care less. I was finally in Max Evans' arms, attached to his lips, and not even Adam Brody could tear me away from this moment. I know, however, that things are going to get really complicated between us. Except, at this point in time, I don't care.


Ok, I know, this part kinda sucked. I really wanted to write a kiss in and what not, but I got sidetracked, and it all kinda mushed together. Oh, and I don't have any rights to the song Time After Time by Cyndi Lauper. Haha, I couldn't help but put that song! ~Kristen
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I've decided to make a list and write personal thanks because I want to be nice. I started the list a couple posts back because I meant to do this before, I really did, but we all know that I have memory problems. So, here we go...
  • Maxsgurl ~Thanks so much for all the fb! I'm glad you're liking my story! I'm very happy you didn't think that it sucked so much.
    taressa05 ~Hehe, thanks for telling me that it didn't suck so much. Thanks for finding me as funny as I find myself, and thanks for the fb!
    funkeldunkel ~I gotta tell you that I laugh everytime I read your fb. It's so funny! Thanks for reading my story and leaving me some fb!
    Grace52373 ~I laughed so hard about your 'Burial at Trash' idea. Damn, I wish I had that when I got in trouble. Pure genius. Thanks for the fb!
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    RASaero611 ~Thank you for soothing my worries, my friend! I'm glad you liked the car part cuz I found that particularly funny myself. I gave a chortle here and there while writing it lol. Thanks for the fb!
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    RoswellRulz ~Aw, thanks! I'm glad you don't think that it was lame. Damn my insecurites! Thanks for the feedback!
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Oooh, pretty colors. Okey doke. So, I'm sorta-kinda happy with this part. I wanted to explain more about Max and Liz's relationship, but then I got another idea. The explaining went out the window after that, but I did put a little talking in there. A little action too! ~Kristen

PART 7. . .Awkwardness All Around

"So, I saw that you and Max had a good time last night," Maria said with a smirk on Saturday morning as we worked our shifts at the Crashdown. I threw her an icy glare as I wiped down the counter for the twentieth time.

Things got really confusing last night after we kissed. We started this heavy make out session only to be pulled out of it when some jerk bumped into us. When we broke apart, Max took on the deer-caught-in-the-headlights look, made some excuse, and scampered off. He left me standing there, confused as hell, and slightly dazed.

"I'm so confused, Maria!" I whined as I dropped the rag and turned to face her.

"What's to be confused about? You and Max made out. It's about damn time too," she said as she placed an order on the wheely thing at the opening to the kitchen.

"I realize that, Maria. In case you didn't notice, but I was there too," I said rolling my eyes. I decided to elaborate because knowing Maria, she probably hasn't had her 6 cups of coffee yet. "Some guy bumped into us and then Max ran away like a frightened rabbit."

"Why?" she asked.

"How am I supposed to know?! If I did, would I even be asking you now?" I yelled in exasperation, throwing my hands up. God, it's hard to deal with Maria this early in the morning.

"Excuse me for trying to help," she said angrily as she brushed past me to retrieve her order.

"Look, I'm sorry I got mad. It's just...I thought we were finally getting somewhere, then Max decides to go M.I.A. on me," I said in a somewhat apology.

"Just give him time. He probably got scared. I mean, who would've thought that you guys would be standing in the middle of the dance floor, kissing the life out of each other," Maria said as she trotted off to deliver the couple at table 10 their order. I certainly didn't, that's for sure.

Just then, the bells over the front door rang, signaling a new customer. I looked up to see who it was only to find none other than Max Evans.

He looked up at me, and his eyes widened slightly. Then, he took purposeful strides in my direction. I was about to run away to the back room because I don't do well with confrontations, but he stopped me by grabbing my wrist.

"Can I talk to you for a second?" he asked gruffly.

"Well, actually, I've got to go help Micheal do the inventory," I lied. Anything to get out of a confrontation. Yes, I am a chicken.

"Micheal's not working today," he said. Ah, good point.

"Oh, well then there must be some spiky-haired imposter in there because I could've sworn I sa-" I started only to be cut off by Max.

"Please?" he asked, giving me the puppy dog eyes. Damn, he was almost as good as Maria!

"Alright," I said with a sigh. I walked into the back room, Max trailing behind me.

"I haven't been back here in awhile," Max said, looking around. I just stared at him, waiting for him to continue since he insisted to talk to me.

"Look, Max, if we're only back here to exchange decorating tips, I'm going to have to get back to work," I said irritably. I had to stay strong! I'm the one who deserves to be mad at him!

"Actually, I wanted to talk about last night," he started. I waited for him to continue that train of thought, but he just took interest in his shoes.

"What about it?" I prompted.

"The kiss," he replied softly. He brought his eyes up to mine before speaking again. "I'm sorry I bailed on you, but I was so confused. I mean, you're my best friend, Liz, and all of a sudden, we're making out in the middle of the floor!" he exclaimed. What, am I a bad kisser or something? No, I've got to stay angry! No one bails on me!

"Ok," I said slowly.

"I...I wanted to know how you feel about it," he said slowly. Isn't that just the million dollar question?

"To tell you the truth, Max, I liked it," I said softly. Dang this. I'm crumbling like the Berlin Wall. His eyes snapped up to mine. "Yeah, we're best friends, but who says we can't be more?"

"Wouldn't it be strange, though?" Max asked as he moved closer to me.

"Why? We already know everything about each other. Unless, you don't like me that way or something. I'm probably a really horrible kisser. Now, you're just back here trying to tell me that you want me and my lips as far away from you as possible. Insensitive bastard," I rambled on. Someone shut me up.

"Liz, your babbling," Max said softly as we inched closer still. He must take pointing out the obvious lessons from our dear friend Alex.

"I realize that," I replied. Our faces were very, very close now, and I could count all the freckles on his nose. Ooh, aren't they cute?!

"I think I know of a way to stop that," he said huskily.

"Really?" I asked quietly. He nodded his head before covering my mouth with his own in a passionate kiss. My arms wrapped around his neck as one of his cupped my face and the other ran through my hair. I guess Isabel was right about the hair fetish.

Max's tongue ran along the length of my bottom lip, and I opened my mouth to him. His tongue plundered inside, tangling with my own. I moaned softly as Max walked us back to the grungy couch.

Before we took it any further, I pulled back breathing very heavily. I know, I'm an idiot for breaking a kiss like that, but I need to get a few things straight!

"Look, Max, before we take this any further, I need to get a few things straight," I said, speaking my mind as I so often do. He nodded briefly before collapsing back onto the couch. I took my seat next to him and took a deep breath before continuing.

"Ok, I know we've been best friends since the good ole sandbox days, so basically, there are no secrets between us. I've felt...more than the best friend vibe for you since Junior High. Now, before you go and freak out on me, I'm not really expecting anything from you. Yeah, I want there to be more between us, but I also don't want to loose you as a friend. Although, our friendship is probably destroyed after K.D.F., but we cou-" I started but Max cut me off.

"K.D.F.?" he asked with confusion.

"Yeah, Kiss on the Dance Floor," I answered. He nodded with an amused smile. "Anyway, don't interrupt me again or fear for bodily harm. I don't want to pressure you into anything, but I also don't want to scare you away from anything," I finished because I didn't really know what else to say.

"You done?" he asked with a smile. I nodded and looked down at my clasped hands in my lap. Now is when he's going to tell me that he doesn't like me or that I am a horrible kisser. Figures.

"Now, it's my turn. I've felt differently towards you too," he admitted quietly. My eyes snapped up to his face, but he was studying his shoes. "I think things changed in High School for me. I saw you talking to Tommy Jackson, and the way you smiled at him made me see red," he confessed with a soft laugh.

Tommy who?

"Anyway, after that day, I realized that I wanted you to myself, and it wasn't just a best-friend-being-over-protective thing either. Yeah, I may sound like a possessive oaf, but it's the way I feel. It was kind of the way I felt when I saw you in that outfit last night. I didn't want all those other guys looking at you because you were absolutely stunning," he said, finally looking up at me. I smiled softly at him.

Yes, that outfit got a good reaction! At least those welts weren't for nothing! Score!

"I didn't think you felt the same way about me. I mean, you kind of acted indifferent towards me. I didn't really know how to get you to understand that I liked you more because it's not like I can prance around in unbelievably short shorts and skirts like you can without people questioning my sexuality," he said with a laugh. I laughed along with him, mostly out of nerves. Who would've thought this clearing the air thing would be so nerve-wracking?!

"That kiss, or K.D.F. as you call it, was...amazing. I've wanted that to happen for so long," he said softly, turning toward me. I turned toward him until we were sitting facing each other.

"Yeah, it was really...explosive, for lack of a better word," I said with a chuckle.

Explosive doesn't even begin to describe that puppy. I thought I had literally died and gone to heaven.

"Remember last week when you wore that really short jean skirt to school?" Max asked as we inched closer still. Why do we always have to inch? Enough with the inching!

"Yeah," I replied even though I hadn't a clue about what he was talking about. Do I even own a really short jean skirt?

"The only thing I could think of during biology was the many ways I could take you on that table top," Max said.

Whoa! Down boy. And I thought I spoke my mind. I'm certainly not complaining, though.

"Hey Max?" I asked in a whisper.

"Yeah?" he asked, staring at my mouth the whole time. He was pretty close to my mouth so he either loves the smell of my strawberry lip gloss, or he's going to kiss me. Knowing Max, though, there's a possibility for both. I know for a fact that the boy has a secret fetish for strawberries.

"Would you just shut up and kiss me?" I asked with a smile. Max just nodded before he pounced on me.

And I mean pounced. I ended up laying on my back on the icky couch with Max over me in a heated lip-lock. He threaded a hand through my hair as his tongue slipped into my mouth. I tangled my own with it, moaning slightly.

"Hey, Liz, do you happen to kn-oh my God!" I heard my mother screech at the top of her lungs as she came into the back room from our apartment. Max leaped off of me like a salmon, and I quickly sat up and wiped my mouth.

"Uh, hey Mom, what brings you by?" I asked casually. Max looked extremely uncomfortable as he stood by the couch with his hands shoved deep in his pockets.

"I was going to ask you if you knew where the newspaper...hold on, I should be asking you the same thing! Except that it was more than obvious," she said with a snort. Dang, I thought I could outsmart her, but no. "Upstairs now, Liz. Max, I believe that you should be heading home. You can call Liz later, but I'll have you know that her window will be locked so don't bother coming up the ladder to finish the little quickie you two started down here," my mom said.

Max blushed a really deep crimson, almost matching the red shirt he was wearing, and I put my face in my hands. God, why are parents so damn embarrassing?!

"Mom!" I yelled in embarrassment.

"I'll see you later, Liz. Mrs. Parker," Max said politely before he galloped out of the room, leaving me and my mother alone. Well, this is going to be fun.

"Since when have you been dating Max?" my mother asked, crossing her arms over her chest.

"We're not dating," I mumbled, my face still in my hands.

"Ok, upstairs now, Miss," she said, pointing to the stairs that led to our apartment. Did I not express the joys of living above a diner?

"Actually, Mom, I need to take a shower real quick because...well, just because," I said and ran like the wind into my bathroom. I quickly stripped off my uniform, which reminded me that I just left my shift...whoops. I was about to take a shower, but I decided to take a bath for two reasons. 1.) I was slightly stressed about the whole Max thing and the talk with my mother that's soon to come, and 2.) It takes longer, effectively postponing the talk with my mother.

When the water was warm enough, I pinned my hair up and sunk into the tub. Now, let's see how long I can stay in here without becoming a human prune or having my mom barge in here demanding to speak to me.

"Elizabeth Parker, when I ask to talk to you, you do not come running up into your bathroom!" my mother yelled as she burst through my bathroom door. Well, that was a new record for how long it takes for my mother to barge in on me.

"Trying to take a bath here, Mom," I said in an annoyed voice, gesturing to the bubble filled water. You just got to love bubble bath.

"Oh, I was the one who changed your diapers at one in the morning. I've seen you naked before," she said with a wave of her hand. Why does my family have to be so weird?!

"What do you want then?" I asked through gritted teeth.

"Don't take that tone with me, Miss. I want to talk to you without you scampering off as you so often do," she said, giving me a pointed look. Well, I can't really argue with you there.

"Ok," I answered in a neutral voice. Best not to annoy the hell out of her, or this could be a long talk.

"First of all, the back room of the Crashdown is not to be used as your own private make out center. Secondly, I think it's time to have the talk again," she said in a very motherly tone. OhmyGod, not the talk. God, take me now.

"Mom, we've already had that talk before," I said in a somewhat pleading voice.

"I know, sweetie, but now that you are starting to have sexual relationships with boys, I think that it's time to have it again," she said in a concerned voice.

"We were just kissing!" I screeched out. Yep, I'm flying off the handle once again.

"Of course, dear," she said in an unconvinced voice.

"Hey, Nancy, have you seen my blue tie?" my dad asked, walking into the bathroom. Well, isn't this cozy?

"Why don't we just invite some tourists up here so they can take pictures of Liz in the bathtub and get it over with?!" I yelled angrily.

"Sorry, sweetie, I didn't know you were taking a bath. I'll just be leaving," my dad said awkwardly. So, he finds this awkward too?

"Look, Mom, we'll have the talk later, I promise. I need to get back down to my shift before Maria flips out."

"ELIZABETH PARKER, YOU BETTER GET YOUR PETITE ASS OUT HERE!" I heard Maria yell from my bathroom.

"Or before she runs up here, yelling like a fool," I mumbled sarcastically, rolling my eyes.

"She's in here, Maria!" my mom called out helpfully. I shot her an angry glare, but she just shrugged. She took a seat on the toilet as Maria came barging into the bathroom.

The thing is, she didn't come alone. Nope. Maria was holding tightly onto Max's wrist, dragging him along behind her.

"Hey guys," I said casually. Max's eyes widened as he noticed that I was completely naked in the tub. Thank goodness for bubble bath.

"Liz!" Max said in an abnormally squeaky voice.

"Oh, jeez Liz, I didn't know you were taking a bath. When you didn't come back, I thought that Moondogie had done something again," Maria said, dropping Max's arm. We all sat around in silence, me playing with the bubbles in my tub.

Well, this is awkward.

"Well, not that I don't like to provide a peep show for you all, but if you'd all get out, I'd greatly appreciate it," I said with a smile. Max's blush deepened, and he mumbled something before tearing out of the room.

"You hit the nail on the head when you described him running off like a scared rabbit," Maria observed as we all stared after Max. She gave me a wink and a smirk before taking off after Max.

"We will talk later, Liz," my mother said as she got up from her seat on the toilet and headed out.

Finally, I can take a bath in peace.

"YOU BETTER BE OUT HERE IN FIVE MINUTES, LIZ, OR I'M COMING BACK IN THERE!" I heard Maria's voice yell out. I sighed before I stepped out of the tub and wrapped a towel around myself. I guess taking a bath in peace is way too much to ask in my life. Jeez Louise.

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  • Maxsgurl ~Lol, the whole gang in there would constitute for a rip-roaring party. Hehe. Thanks for the fb!
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    taressa05 ~When I read your fb, I hadn't added THE talk into my story, but after I read yours, I went back and added it just to add more hilarity to my story hehe. Thanks for the fb!
    RASaero611 ~Aw, thanks so much! I like the squeaky voice Max myself lol. Thanks for the fb!
    begonia9508 ~Hehe, thanks for liking it! I think that last part was one of my favorites so far 'cause it was just easy to write, and it was funny, if I do say so myself! Thanks for the fb!
    Emz80m ~I'm glad you found it funny! I try to add humor, but sometimes it just doesn't work out. Thanks for the fb!
    kismet ~Hehe, i've had times like those when you laugh out loud at something and everyone shoots you the wtf? looks. Good times, good times. Thanks for the fb!
    hazz ~I'm so happy you like it! Thanks for all the fb!
    Grace52373 ~Yes, Liz has very little privacy. I was thinking to myself how it really is unfair to her, but then I was like I can change it!! Still, no privacy makes it funnier! Thanks for the fb!
    poisoned_muffin ~I'm glad you like it. Don't we all just love a sarcastic person?! Lol, thanks for the fb!
    funkeldunkel ~Hehe, I have been quite busy with the updates. I'm glad you got all caught up again! Thanks for all the fb!
    RoswellRulz ~Let's all just take a moment to fully appreciate the fact that Max and Liz got together...ok, that's good. Lol, thanks for the fb!
Woo, thanks for all the lovely fb, guys! Man, this is an early post for me! I usually post late, but not today!! So...the next part is mostly an explainer part. A little action here and there, but I wanted to just clear up some things, for myself mostly because I get confused. Here y'all go, and I hope you like it! ~Kristen

PART 8. . .Adventures in the Eraser Room

"Did you and Max have a good talk?" Maria asked on Monday morning as I got into the Jetta.

"Well...it's really confusing. I mean, we did talk about the kiss and what not, and Max admitted that he has feelings for me. Then, we started making out again, and my mother walked in on us," I said. Maria laughed out loud but stopped after I threw her an icy glare.

I didn't get to see Max the rest of the weekend because my mother had the house on lock down, and Max is too big of a chicken to attempt to see me.

I'm still trying to get over that horrific talk I had with my mother. God, it was really, really bad and embarrassing.

Saturday evening, 8:10 p.m.
Elizabeth Parker's bedroom


"Mooommm, Max and I are not having sex," I said for about the hundredth time. God, this is embarrassing. I've already endured about 20 minutes of this.

"Well, at the rate you two are going, it'll probably be soon," my mother said disapprovingly. I let out a muffled groan as I hid my face in my hands. Please let it end soon.

"Just go on with whatever you want to say so this can end!" I told her.

"Sex is a beautiful thing. I know, you just want to do it for the pleasure you'll get, but it should be for much more than that. I want you and Max to do it because you're in love. If you don't fall in love with Max, then wait until you're in love with someone else," my mom said. I didn't bother to tell her that I've been in love with the guy for four years now because I knew she just wouldn't understand.

"If you do decide that Max is the one you want to give yourself to, then I want you to be careful. If you want, I can schedule an appointment with Dr. Pankratz to get you on the Pill," my mom continued as if this wasn't going to eventually scar me for life.

"No!" I yelled at the mention at having to go to the doctor to go on the Pill.

"Ok, then, I want you to take these condoms," my mom said, shoving a few condom packets in my hand. Oh God, take me now.

"Are we done?" I asked quietly, not even daring to hope that the end was near.

"Yes," my mother said, standing up. I gave a short thanks to God before I shut the door after my mother. I leaned against the door after it was closed and heaved a sigh. Thank God that was over.


"Are you guys going out?" Maria asked. I snapped out of my recollection of the horrid talk at Maria's question. Hmm...I've been asking myself the same thing all weekend as I laid in my room, staring at the ceiling.

"I have no idea," I answered truthfully as Maria drove down the streets to West Roswell High. It was a good thing that we weren't picking up Max and Isabel because I don't think I could take the awkwardness.

"But even if we do go out, I'm afraid that we're only going to have a physical relationship. I mean, we ended up in a make out session twice just in the back room!" I said, finally confessing my fears to someone.

"Oh, come on, Liz, you don't really think that?" Maria asked, throwing a glance in my direction. I nodded seriously, so she continued. "This is the same Max that you can spend hours on end talking about the vast wonders of Biology!"

That is true. Turns out that Max likes Science just as much as myself. I know, you must think I hate it after the whole Chem test disaster, but I don't! I was just unprepared for that.

"Well, you got a point there," I said with a sigh. Why do things have to be so complicated?! Argh!

"Don't I always?" she asked with a smirk.

Resist the urge to hit her. Resist the urge to hit her.

"Ouch, Liz, why do you always have to hit me?!" Guess I have trouble listening to my inner self.

~*~*~

"Hey, Liz, do you know what's wrong with Max?" Isabel asked me at our lockers before 1st hour.

"Uh, is there something wrong with him?" I asked, feigning ignorance. Actually, I wasn't feigning 'cause I had no idea what was up with him. I told you that I hadn't seen him all weekend. Not even a call.

He is such a wuss. So what if my mother has about 8 different personalities, and Olga, the prison guard, shows herself when I'm grounded? At least he could make an effort.

"Well, this morning he was so jumpy. Plus, he made me leave really early for some reason!" Isabel replied angrily. Looks like someone didn't get her proper eight and a half hours of beauty sleep. You should see the girl go on eight hours!

"What makes you think that I would know?" I asked casually, spinning the combo on my lock.

"You're kidding right? I think everyone at that party saw you and Max practicing your CPR moves on the dance floor Friday," she replied, laughing. Figures that when I finally kiss Max, every single person in the tri county area knows about it.

"Well, I don't know what's up with him. I haven't talked to him all weekend," I replied honestly. I always say honesty is the best policy. Well, except when the truth hurts someone. Or gets you in trouble.

"I think that you can ask now because he's coming right this way," Maria said a little loudly. Let the whole school know, Maria. Jeez.

Max, Micheal, and Alex were heading our way. They walked toward us side-by-side, which reminded me of Charlie's Angels. Wouldn't it be oober cool if they made a Charlie's Angels with guys? Max, Micheal, and Alex would be perfect.

"Hello ladies," Alex said, snapping me out of the mental image I had conjured of the three posing as Charlie's Angels. He leaned in to give Isabel a kiss on the cheek, and she giggled girlishly. I resisted the urge to roll my eyes at their antics because they were my best friends after all. Why, I don't know.

"Hey, Alex," I replied as I shut my locker. Or more like slammed it really hard because I was getting nervous again.

"Damn, Liz, you don't need to slam the thing that hard," Maria said, raising her eyebrow at me. I just glared at her.

"Hey, Liz, do you think that I could talk to you in private for a second?" Max asked rather nervously. Well, at least I'm not the only one here.

"Of course," I responded with a smile, ignoring the smirks Maria and Isabel had.

Max took my hand, which sent shivers up my arm, and led me to the Eraser Room. Wait...the Eraser Room?! OhmyGod, it's time to start panicking!

Sure, Max is a fantastic kisser, but what if I'm not? He must not think I'm that bad if he's dragging me into the Eraser Room, West Roswell High's very own make out room. Plus, I really need to talk things out with him. Does he really want to talk? Damn my insecurities.

Sure enough, by the time I stopped rambling in my mind, we were already at the Eraser Room. Max looked around before opening the door and pulling me in with him.

"Uh, Max, maybe we shou-," is all I got out before Max covered my mouth with his own. I stood stiff as a board for a second before I gave into the kiss. I wrapped my arms around his neck as his came around my waist. Suddenly, Max pulled away. I made a small sound of protest and tried to pull his head back down to mine.

"You were saying?" he asked with an amused smirk. What? Was I saying something?

"Shut up, Max," I said as I pulled his head back down to mine for another heated kiss.

~*~*~

15 minutes later, I finally realized why I wanted to talk with him so badly. I still had no idea what we were. Were we together, as in a couple? Or were we friends with benefits?

"Max, we really, really need to talk," I said semi-breathlessly as Max trailed open mouth kisses down my neck. God, he was an awesome kisser.

"Yeah," he said as he pulled away from me entirely. He took a step back and stared at my lips longingly.

"Don't do that, or we'll never get out of here," I said teasingly.

"Fine with me," Max said with a sly smile as he took a step closer to me. I held out my arms and kept him at a safe distance. I swear, this guy is hornier than Hugh Hefner. Who would've guessed that under the shy, brooding exterior lied a mini Hugh?

"It's time to talk," I said. Except when I said it, I made it sound like we were going to the gallows. Max took on this worried look and collapsed on a box behind him.

"Ok," he said quietly.

"Ok," I repeated. Why do I always have to start out these talks?! "I just want to know what we are now. I mean, are we just friends? Friends with the occasional make out session? Boyfriend and girlfriend?" I asked quickly. I didn't want to look at Max, so I looked at the eraser-cleaner. Huh, I didn't even know one was in here. Go figure.

"What do you want to be?" Max asked softly. Good question.

"I'd really like to be 5 pounds lighter," I joked lamely. I start saying these lame jokes when I get nervous. Next thing you know, I'll come out with a good ole knock-knock joke.

"I'm serious, Liz," Max said. Serious. Right.

"I'd kind of like to be a...couple," I said really, really quietly. Max must of heard me though.

"Me too," he replied in a whisper. Did my ears deceive me?

"Really?" I asked skeptically.

"Yeah," he nodded.

"You do know that I said couple. Couple as in the hold hands, I'm your girlfriend, you're my boyfriend, showing PDA couple," I clarified. No way could this be happening. I mean, this is Max Evans.

"Yes, Liz," he said smiling. Max and I are a couple!

This is majorly major. I've got to tell Maria! Wait, we just skipped 1st hour. I'm going to be grounded before Max and I even get a chance to go out on a date. Dammit. Still, it was well worth it.

"You still with me, Liz?" Max asked as he waved his hand in front of my face. Whoops, zoned out again.

"Oh, sorry. I just realized that we skipped 1st hour. Now what are we going to do?" I asked with a frown. It's not like we could just go waltzing into class this late.

"I have an idea," Max said slyly as he walked closer to me.

"Are you trying to seduce me, Mr. Evans?" I asked with a grin.

"Is it working?" he asked.

"Maybe," I replied as he leaned in to kiss me. I held my breath when his lips were a hairs width away from mine.

"How 'bout now?" he asked, his lips brushing against mine with every word.

"I think so," I replied, pulling his head down to meet my lips with his. One of his hands automatically wrapped around my waist as the other cupped my face. His tongue ran along the length of my bottom lip, and I opened my mouth eagerly. Max thrust his tongue inside, exploring every inch of my mouth.

He walked us backward, stumbling slightly over a box, until I was pressed against the wall. Max removed his arm from my waist, and my legs wrapped around his waist. We kissed furiously as all thoughts of missing class fled from my mind.

Suddenly, the door to the Eraser Room was thrown open. Max and I squinted at the person through the bright light that came in. Like a bucket of cold ice water being dumped over us, we realized that the principal was standing there, sternly looking at us. Freaking wonderful.

Max jumped about a foot away from me as I slid down the wall.

"Uh, hey, Mr. Vincent," I said as casually as I could, running a hand through my hair.

"Miss Parker, Mr. Evans, my office now," he said in a very stern voice. I shot Max a panicked look, but he was to busy staring at his shoes to notice. Figures.

"You know, I kind of have to get to class, so if we could possibly reschedule...?" I asked casually.

"You don't even want me to answer that, Miss Parker," Mr. Vincent said angrily. Well, it was worth a try.

"Right. Well, we'll just be heading to your office now," I said, maneuvering my way through the boxes and walking out the door, Max right behind me.

As we walked to a certain doom, I furiously thought of ways to escape the wrath of my mother. Max was giving me CPR? No, no, that's the oldest trick in the book. He tripped, and my lips broke his fall? Well, we weren't necessarily on the ground. This is hopeless.

~*~*~

"Elizabeth Parker!" I heard my mother screech from outside Mr. Vincent's office Max and I were sitting in. I cringed slightly at the furious tone of her voice.

"In here, Mrs. Parker," Mr. Vincent called out helpfully. I didn't even bother to look at Max 'cause we all know how much the boy loves his shoes.

My mother came barreling through the door, knocking over a flustered secretary on her way. This is not looking good.

"What the hell is going on here?" she asked angrily. I didn't look up at her for fear that her glare would burn me on the spot.

"Max and Liz were caught making out in the Eraser Room," Mr. Vincent supplied. I could just hear my mother's anger seething within.

"Making out?!" she yelled. I winced at the loudness of her voice, wondering vaguely how much sound windows could take before shattering.

"Yes," Mr. Vincent answered. "Now, Max and Liz are both honor students, and I'm sure we'd all like to keep it that way. They will receive a detention for tonight, but that's all the punishment that needs to be dealt out."

"Oh, there's going to be more at home," my mother mumbled.

"Maxwell Phillip Evans!" I heard Mrs. Evans screech out, in a voice much like my mother's, from outside the office.

"In here, Mrs. Evans," Mr. Vincent said. I took a quick peek at Max to see him looking quite pale.

Mrs. Evans rushed into the room, handbag swinging wildly. She bumped into the same secretary my mother charged into, and the woman bent down again to retrieve her scattered papers. I bet she just loves working here, having to deal with seething parents who have just found out that their children are exploring their sexual urges.

"What in God's name is going on here?" she asked. The similarities between Max's mom and my own are quite remarkable.

"Max and Elizabeth were caught making out in the Eraser Room!" my mother supplied for Mr. Vincent. He didn't seem at all upset, though.

"Making out?! I can't believe that Maxwell would do something like that!" Mrs. Evans squawked angrily.

"They also cut their first period," Mr. Vincent added. And now the fun starts.

"CUT CLASS!" our mothers yelled at the exact same time. They started yelling angrily, making threats here and there. Max and I shared an exasperated look.

"You will be home straight after detention, Elizabeth," my mother told me. I nodded silently, too afraid to speak.

"Same goes for you Maxwell," Mrs. Evans added. Don't you just love how we suddenly went from Liz and Max to Elizabeth and Maxwell. You just got to love a mother's wrath.

"Now, I think that Liz and Max have some classes to attend to, so if you ladies would just stay after to have a small conference with me," Mr. Vincent said. Max and I quickly leapt from our seats and hauled ass out of the room.

"God, that was bad," Max said as we slowed our pace into a slow walk after hitting that poor secretary again. I'm really starting to feel bad for her, but no time for that now!

"Understatement," I told him. He nodded mutely as we parted our separate ways to go to our lockers and head to the rest of our classes, preparing ourselves for a grim fate when we got home.

T.B.C...
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  • Maxsgurl ~See, this is why I love the fb you guys leave me. I always end up adding more parts that I forget to add because someone said something about it. In this case, you said something about wanting to see the friends' reactions to M/L's new found couple status, which I had forgotten to add. But, I did add it after I read your post! Thanks for the fb!
    hazz ~I am a bit worrisome over my make out sessions, so I'm glad you liked it! Getting caught in the midst of a liplock is pretty embarrassing, to say the least! Thanks for the fb!
    begonia9508 ~I'm glad you found it funny! I certainly did, but I am the one writing it, after all lol. Thanks for the fb!
    taressa05 ~I certainly know the feeling of wanting the floor to open up and swallow you. Too many embarrassing moments to count. Thanks for the fb!
    anonymousarfan ~Well, I am certainly glad that you liked the last couple of parts. It's always nice to hear that people appreciate your stuff! Thanks for the fb!
    Emz80m ~Liz can certainly be a pessimist at times, yet aren't we all? Well, not everyone is because you do have those chosen few that are determined to see the bright side of everything. Too bad we all can't be like that. Thanks for the fb!
    dreamer destiny ~Hey, welcome to the story! I know what you mean about typos. I certainly am anal about them. I think I read each part I write about 4 times to check for errors. Thanks for the fb!
    Lizza ~Well, I am certainly glad you left me a little somethin somethin to read and that you like it! Thanks for the fb!!
I have come to the conclusion that reality sucks. I have also realized that moving can be a real pain in the ass. Especially when you're moving from an apartment to a house, and said apartment is severely lacking in the space department. I nearly killed myself tripping over a box. Ok, I'm done complaining.

Anyway, the next part is so-so in my book. Nothing life-altering or anything. Just some fun stuff. Hope you all like anyway. ~Kristen


PART 9. . .Flying The Eagle Into The Coop

"So, are you grounded?" Maria asked me later that day after I told her the whole Eraser Room fiasco in the Crashdown as we worked our shifts. Detention had gone pretty uneventful because Max and I weren't even allowed in the same room. Figures.

"Oh yeah," I replied. When I got home, my mother forced me to have another talk with her, and this one included my sentencing. "I'm grounded for the rest of the week."

"Well, that isn't too bad," Maria said. I just looked at her.

"I'm not allowed to speak to Max at all," I told her glumly. She gave me a sympathetic look before trotting off to get table 4's order.

"What if he comes in here?" Maria asked me as she placed their order in that wheely thing that I still don't know the name of.

"You have to take his order," I told her. My mom was very strict about these orders. Under no circumstances am I allowed to talk to Max while he is in the Crash.

"What if I'm lying dead on the ground?" Maria asked me as she filled a cup with cherry cola. Aww...Max's favorite drink is cherry cola. Jeez, I'm already obsessing over a drink. Pathetic should be my middle name.

"Then I'll dance around you singing 'Happy Days Are Here Again'," I told her sarcastically, rolling my eyes. She looked kind of hurt, so I added, "I'm kidding, Maria."

"Yeah, I knew you were," she said, her happy smile back on.

"What if some maniac comes in here and holds me hostage?" she asked.

"Do you think that we'd still be taking peoples orders if someone held you hostage?!" I demanded angrily. Maria never really thinks things through very well.

"Well, you never know," she replied, shrugging.

Oh for goodness sake. Why do I even bother asking Maria's opinion of things? Oh, that's right. She's one of my best friends.

"What if I'm swamped with customers, and suddenly, a large, scaly, green monster appears in the middle of the street. Everyone is screaming, people are running. It's pandemonium!" Maria exclaims dramatically.

"I'm not even going to respond to that," I murmured.

"Well, you just never know," she repeated.

"How about we stop with the 'what if's' Maria? This is Roswell, New Mexico. Nothing like that is going to happen," I said. Just then, the bells over the door rang, and Maria and I both looked up to see who had come in.

"Speak of the devil," Maria mumbled as Max's amber eyes locked on mine. This is pretty amazing. I mean, before, he didn't even bother calling. I'm surprised he's not grounded.

"Are you two together, together?" Maria asked, snapping me out of my daze.

"Yep," I sighed dreamily.

"Oh my God! I'm so happy for you!!" she exclaimed, grabbing my hands and jumping up and down. Half of the restaurant was staring at us, and Max was grinning at me from his usual booth. Well, if the lesbian rumor was out before, this will certainly spark it back up again.

"You better go take his order," I told Maria as we ended our jumping scene. "Oh, could you tell him that I'm grounded, and under no circumstances am I allowed to speak to him in this place of business?" I asked. Maria nodded her assent before walking to Max's table. I watched them talk for awhile before I went to go get table 8's order.

"What can I getcha?" I asked the elderly couple.

"Is there anything in here that has low cholesterol?" the woman asked. I was momentarily blinded by the incredibly bright blonde of her hair. What is it with the elderly wanting to dive back into their youth by dyeing their hair? It just doesn't look good.

"Well...um...not really," I admitted honestly. My dad's going to be upset that I said that, but honesty is the best policy. He should care more about my morals than business.

"Nothing?" she asked, looking utterly scandalized.

"This is a diner after all," I pointed out not unkindly.

"It would be more appealing to our senior citizens if you had things on your menu that didn't have so much fat and cholesterol in them," she told me in a haughty voice.

I looked to the counter, and I saw that Maria was there. I was dieing to ask her if Max said anything, but this woman wouldn't shut up.

"Look, ma'am, this diner has been in operation for nearly 20 years, and we've had great business. The thing is this is a DINER. Not a vegan restaurant, a diner. I'm sorry if you don't find anything appealing on our menu, but if you're not going to order anything, then I'm asking if you need my assistance any longer?" I asked rather impatiently.

"It looks as if our business isn't wanted here, Henry," she said snootily. Her and her husband stood up and tottered on out. Good riddance I say.

"Scaring customers off again, Liz?" Maria asked me as I walked behind the counter.

"They just don't like to hear the truth," I told her, waving my hand in dismissal. "Did Max say anything?" I asked her impatiently.

"Yeah, he asked for a cherry cola and a Will Smith burger," she replied, filling a cup with said soda.

"I meant for me," I said. It's like talking to a monkey.

"Oh, yeah, he said to tell you to leave your window open tonight," Maria said, squinting her eyes in concentration.

"When you go back over there, will you tell him that may not be the best idea, considering the situation?" I asked her. She sighed in exasperation but nodded all the same.

"Order up," Jose said from the kitchen. Maria walked over there and grabbed Max's Will Smith. She gave me a conspiratorially wink before she skipped off to his table with the cherry cola and Will Smith. I watched them converse for a bit before taking a rag and wiping off the counter.

"Ok, he said that he doesn't care because he really wants to see you," Maria told me, squinting her eyes again. He wants to see me! Not just wants, but really wants! "This is so Romeo and Juliet. Except for the fact that you're parents are best friends with his."

"When you go back over there, tell him that the eagle can fly into the coop," I told her excitedly. She gave me a confused look.

"Why would you want an eagle in your coop? Do you even have a coop? Why does this concern Max?" she asked in confusion. Oh good Lord.

"Maria, Maria, I meant that the window will be open," I said, grasping her by the shoulders.

"Ooh," she said, nodding her head. "Why didn't you just say that, then?"

"Because it's more fun to act like this is a covert operation."

"No it's not, it's just more confusing," she said, staring at me. I sighed.

"Never mind, Maria. Can you just tell him that?"

"Why would I go over there again?" she asked me. Jeez Louise.

"I don't know, bring him some ketchup or something!" I said in exasperation.

"But he already has ketchup," she said, pointing at his table.

"So what, Maria?! Pretend like you didn't notice!" I yelled. She is making this ten times more difficult than need be.

"How can I not notice, Liz? I'm his waitress," she pointed out, raising her eyebrow at me.

"Fine, Maria, bring him some mustard," I said, resisting the wild urge to smack her.

"Why would he need mustard?" she asked as if this was a difficult thing to comprehend. As I said before, it's like talking to a monkey. Except a monkey wouldn't talk back, it'd just do it.

"You know what? I'll do it!" I exclaimed impatiently.

I took a quick look around for parental units before I strode over to Max's booth. He looked up and smiled at me.

"The eagle can fly into the coop at 1900 hours," I whispered as I passed by his booth. He looked at me blankly.

"Huh?" he asked.

"Oh for the love of God, YOU CAN COME TO MY WINDOW AT 7:00!" I yelled quite loudly. I turned on my heel and stalked back behind the counter, leaving behind a bewildered Max.

"He didn't understand it either?" Maria asked with a smirk. I pretended I didn't hear her as she went chortling on by herself.

~*~*~

At exactly 6:55, my mother decided that she needed to do some laundry. I figured that was an excuse, because pretty much everyone in the county heard me tell Max to come to my window at 7:00. My mother came bustling into my room, laundry basket in hand.

"Anything that needs washed?" she asked me as she looked around suspiciously.

"Nope, I did my laundry yesterday," I told her, looking down at my open Chemistry book. She stood in the doorway for a little longer.

"You sure, sweetie? Maybe I could just wash your sheets for you," she said, walking over to my bed. She started to tear off all the blankets, checking them over for any sign of sexual activity, I'm sure.

"Ok, Mom, is that all?" I asked impatiently.

"Do you want some dessert?" she asked me out of the blue. I nearly snorted at the way she was trying to get me out of the room.

"No, thanks, Mom, I already had some ice cream," I told her in a pleasant tone. I looked up from my book and watched as she looked around the room again. I turned around in my desk chair to face her. "Anything else, Mom?"

"Didn't you say that your bathroom cabinet door was squeaky? Maybe I could get your father in here to fix that," she said, walking out of my room. I sighed and regarded my book once more.

"What is it, Nancy?" I heard my father ask as my mom shoved him into my room.

"Liz wants you to fix that cabinet door of her's," she said, walking my father into the bathroom. I heard them mumbling in there about something, probably me.

Suddenly, I heard the squeak of the fire escape outside my window. I looked up with panic as Max's head appeared over the edge of my balcony.

"Liz, can you go get my tool box?" my father asked me, coming back into my room. I heard Max cough, so I disguised it as one of my own. "You alright, sweetie?"

"You know, Dad, EAGLES really AREN'T ALLOWED to FLY INTO THE COOP after they leave FOR LONG PERIODS OF TIME," I told him quite loudly, trying to get the point across to Max that he couldn't come in yet.

"What?" my dad asked in confusion. I looked over his shoulder to see Max frozen in mid-step. He caught my eye, and his eyes widened. He started to silently back into a dark corner, and I gave a small sigh of relief.

"Um, nothing, Dad," I said, looking back at my dad. "What did you ask me?" I asked him, my attention darting back to my open window. My dad noticed, and he looked over to my window.

"What's out there that has you so interested?" he asked, walking to it. I jumped in front of him, putting my hands on his chest to halt him.

"I saw a really pretty butterfly," I told him, giving him the innocent smile. He nodded, still looking out the window. I prayed that Max was out of sight. "What did you want me to do, Daddy?" I asked him again, playing the ?daddy' card. It always gets him.

Sure enough, he looked down at me, his face softening.

"I just wanted you to get my toolbox, sweetie, but I can do it," he said, turning around and walking out of my room. I leaned against the wall, giving a small thanks to God for small miracles.

"Where's your father?" my mother said, startling me. I sprang from the wall, nearly tripping over a book in the process.

"Um, he went to get his toolbox," I told her, standing in front of the window.

"I thought you were going to do that. Oh, you called him daddy, didn't you?" she asked me with a smile. I nodded, giving her my own smile.

Just then, a crash came from the balcony. I closed my eyes briefly as my mother looked out there in alarm.

"What was that?" she asked, trying to look around me outside the window.

"Uh...what was what?" I asked her, feigning ignorance. She looked at me briefly before pushing me out of the way.

"That crash. It came from out here," she said, sticking her head out the window and looking around.

"What crash?" I asked.

"That really loud crash," she told me.

"Oh, I didn't hear anything. You know what, I just found something that you can wash for me," I said, trying desperately to distract her as I pulled a random shirt out of my closet.

Too late. She was already hoisting herself out onto the balcony. I dropped the shirt and raced after her. Once I got onto the balcony, I saw my mom checking the corners like a sniffer dog.

"Mom, what are you doing out here? It's really cold," I told her, adding a shiver for effect. It really wasn't that cold, but I was desperate.

"I want to know what that crash was," she said, still poking around.

"It was probably just one of my plants being knocked over by the wind," I told her. Sure enough, she stooped down to pick up the pieces of a broken pot. I looked to wear she was bending down and saw a hint of Max's blue button up behind my lawn chair. Oh holy freaking crap.

"Uh, I can do that, Mom," I said, rushing over and picking up pieces of the shattered pot. If I wasn't so scared for Max and myself, I'd be really irritated because this was one of my favorite pots. I got it when we went to the Bahamas.

"It's ok, sweetie, I don't want you getting cut," she said, pulling the pieces out of my hand. I straightened and looked to where I thought Max was standing. A strip of light from my window was on his face, and I could see his panicked expression. I gave him a small smile of reassurance even though I figured that we were doomed.

"Where is everyone?" I heard my dad call from inside my room. I was about to go in there and keep him inside, but my mom beat me to it.

"Out here, honey. One of Liz's plants fell over," she yelled to him. My dad's head popped out of the window as he came out onto the balcony. Oh for Pete's sake.

"Want me to get the broom?" he asked, eyeing the dirt on the ground.

"You guys can just go inside. I'll get this later," I told them, hoping against hope that they'd listen to me.

"Well, if you're sure," my mom said, straightening and clutching a few pieces of my ceramic pot. I nodded with a smile as they walked over to my window. As soon as they went in, Max slowly came out of his hiding spot.

"That was extremely close," he said, wrapping his arms around my waist.

"Aren't you grounded?" I asked, looking up in his eyes.

"Not sure. I got the lecture, and I got a bunch of privileges taken away. Nothing was said about grounding," he replied. Lucky him.

I nodded mutely, placing my head back on his chest. Suddenly, I remembered that he broke my pot, so I pinched on the arm. Hard.

"Ow! What was that for?" he asked, rubbing his arm.

"You broke the pot I got from the Bahamas!" I told him angrily.

"Oh, sorry about that," he apologized, his hands going back around my waist.

"At least it wasn't you that broke," I told him with a shrug, referring to my parents vengeance if they ever found him up here.

"Amen to that," he said as I rested my head on his chest. One of his hands rubbed my back soothingly, and I shivered at the feeling. "Still cold?"

"A little," I lied.

"Let me warm you up," he said seductively, leaning down to place his lips on mine.

"Elizabeth, I need you to tell me what you want washed!" I heard my mom yell from my bedroom. Max jumped in fright and pulled away from me. I mouthed an apology to him and pointed to the ladder. He nodded sadly before he walked to it and went down it.

How sad is that? Max went through all that trouble to get up here and see me only to be able to spend 2 minutes alone! 2 minutes!

"Elizabeth?" my mom asked, popping her head out the window. I stopped looking at the ladder and regarded my mom.

"Sorry, Mom, I'm coming," I told her, looking at the ladder once more. We really are like Romeo and Juliet. Well, except that our families aren't feuding. In fact, they're best friends. Still, in essence, we are Romeo and Juliet.

"Hurry up, Elizabeth, I haven't got all night!" my mother yelled, snapping me out of my daze once again.

"Coming, mother," I muttered as I stalked to my window, not even bothering about the broken pot still on the ground.

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Alrighty, first a little thanks to all the feedbackers...
  • dreamer destiny ~Lol, parents can bring you down at times. I'm glad someone finds "my" Max adorable. Thanks for the fb!
    Lizza ~ I base Liz's parents on my own who had an incredible knack of laying on the punishment very thickly. Thanks for the fb!
    taressa05 ~Lol, Liz can be a dork at times, and Maria is slightly ditzy...at least that's how I tried to make them. Thanks for the fb!
    hazz ~Lol, a mini cuddle is better than nothing at all! Thanks for the feedback!
    Maxsgurl ~Hehe, we all love to see a Max/Liz warm up scene. It's too true that parents aren't to appreciative about it. Thanks for the fb!
    anonymousarfan ~I am certainly glad you think it's funny and that you like it! Thanks for the fb!
    RASaero611 ~Well, Liz's parents are certainly overprotective in the extreme. I guess I'm the only one who had parents that doubled as guard dogs lol. Thanks for the fb!
    poisoned_muffin ~Lol, they certainly are Romeo and Juliet!! Thanks for the fb!
    Emz80m ~Thank you very much, and thanks for the feedback!!

    Ok, now this part is insanely long. I didn't even realize how long it got when I was typing it. It's 14 pages in WordPerfect with 12pt. font. I meant to break it up into different parts, but it just didn't go together. Anyway, I hope you like this part...next part is oozing with M/L goodness. ~Kristen

    PART 10. . .High-Tech Digital Cameras + Night-Vision Binoculars = Undercover Operation

    "Can you not do that?" Max asked me, staring at my lips. Huh? What was I doing?

    "Do what?" I asked innocently. He rolled his eyes like it was so damn obvious.

    "You nibble your lip, and it's irresistible," he told me, reaching across the table to grab my hand. Our fingers laced together automatically.

    It's quite startling that we feel so comfortable around each other. I thought that it'd be awkward for awhile. Instead, here we are, sitting in Study Hall on Wednesday, holding hands and flirting.

    "You mean like this?" I asked, playing dumb as I nibbled on my lower lip. Max gave a low groan and gripped my hand tighter.

    "You're going to get me in trouble," he whined, staring at my lips.

    "How so?"

    "I'm going to end up having to kiss you breathless in this library, and I'll get in trouble," he answered. Always the charmer, that one.

    "Oh, so it's all my fault," I said wryly, rolling my eyes at his silliness.

    "It is," he replied, an adorable pout marring his features.

    "Mr. Evans, Miss Parker, please get back to work!" Ms. Lynder, the librarian who has a major stick up her ass, said irritably. We quickly pulled our hands back and pretended to concentrate on our books.

    Why do we even have a Study Hall? The only use it has is that Max and I can be alone for a bit. Granted, we're not allowed to talk or kiss, but you just can't be picky in these situations.

    "LIZ!" I heard Maria shout at the top of her lungs. About 5 different SHH's! came from all different directions as Maria ran over to me like a woman on a mission. I rolled my eyes heavenward, hoping that this wouldn't be some stupid thing.

    "OhmyGod, Liz, you'll never guess wh-" Maria started in an excited voice as soon as she reached the table Max and I shared but was cut off by the shushing once again. She turned around and glared at everyone angrily before turning back to me. "Excuse me, but this is a private conversation."

    "What, Maria?" I asked quietly. Hey, if she wants to get in trouble, more power to her. I, however, am under constant watch, so I'm going to stay quiet.

    "Isabel and Alex are fighting!" she exclaimed, pulling a chair up to the end of our table and sitting down. My head shot up from my History book, and my mouth dropped open. This certainly was big news.

    "Oh, my God! What happened?" I asked quickly. I briefly saw Max roll his eyes at our gossiping, but this was urgent.

    Alex and Iz never fight. And I mean never. If Iz ever gets pissy, Alex just agrees to whatever she says to pacify her. It's quite amazing, actually.

    "I'm not sure. Iz came into the bathroom, and her eyes were red and puffy. I asked her what was wrong, but she brushed me off, as usual. You know, I hate it when she goes into Ice Princess mode. It's quite frustrating," Maria huffed.

    "Get on with the freaking story, Maria," I said impatiently. I swear, she has severe ADD. One minute, she's obsessing over the fact that Micheal didn't buy her something-or-other, and the next it's 'ooh look at the pretty colors'.

    "No need to get pissy. Anyway, I cornered her into telling me what was up, and she said that she thinks Alex is cheating on her!" I gasped in utter shock. That is so not something Alex would, or could for that matter, do.

    "No!" I exclaimed. Maria nodded her head solemnly.

    "Can you two stop gossiping? This is Study Hall, after all, and I would appreciate if you'd let me study in peace," Max declared haughtily. Maria and I both threw him angry glares.

    "Oh, yeah, study my ass. I saw you nearly devouring Liz with your eyes when I came in," Maria said, rolling her eyes.

    Max had the decency to blush and look back down at his book. I may be hopelessly in love with him, but sometimes he can be such a guy.

    "Besides, Max, this is your sister we're talking about. Shouldn't you feel bad for her and offer to comfort her in some way?" I asked pointedly. Max glanced up at me briefly before snorting.

    "Yeah, and get my head bitten off by El Bitcho?" he asked. Good point.

    "What do you think we should do, Liz?" Maria asked worriedly. Ah, now there's a good question.

    "I don't know. I mean, shouldn't someone at least ask Alex if this is all true? Why does Iz think he's cheating anyway?" I asked curiously.

    "She said that she saw him linking arms with Tiffany Banks. Plus, she said that she's seen them together so many times before. Walking to class together; him helping her out after school." Oh dear. This is pretty bad. Tiffany Banks isn't even Alex's type. She's such a skank; way below Alex's standards.

    "That girl is such a skank!" I commented distastefully. Max snorted but quickly turned it into a cough after Maria and I shot him another glare.

    "True, but what can we do about it now? Iz is all freaked out that Alex only went to her for a bump in the sack. She thinks Alex is unhappy with her...performance, so to speak," Maria said. Max started choking on his spit. I sent him a worried glance.

    "Are you ok?" I asked.

    "I so did not need to hear about my sister's sex life," Max said with a shudder. I rolled my eyes at his immaturity and refocused back on the conversation at hand.

    "That's so unlike Alex, though," I said. Maria nodded thoughtfully. "Why don't we just go ask him?"

    "Iz would totally hate us if she found out," Maria pointed out. True. It's another one of those unwritten laws. Something about not taking your friend's boyfriend's side if an argument breaks out between them, even if said boyfriend is one of your best friends. Or something like that.

    "Who says she has to find out?" I asked. Maria and I both swiveled around to face Max. He slowly looked up from his book when he realized he was the center of our attention.

    "I'm not going to tell her anything," he said, rolling his eyes.

    "Thanks, Max," I said, leaning over and kissing his lips softly. "Now, back to the Alex-Isabel-crisis."

    "Ok, here's the plan," Maria said, going into undercover operation mode. "We'll corner Alex during History and ask him about it. If he doesn't fess up to the crime, we set Plan B into motion."

    "What exactly would Plan B be?" I asked, slightly worried about the things that go on in Maria's mind. Who would blame me?

    "It will involve the use of high-tech digital cameras and night-vision binoculars," she whispered secretively. Should I even ask? Ah, what the heck.

    "What exactly are we going to use those for?"

    "Spying on Alex and the hussie, of course," she replied, rolling her eyes.

    "Oh come on, Maria. This is Alex...one of our best friends," I told her. She just looked at me blankly. "It's not right to spy on a best friend."

    "Oh, morals, schmorals!"

    "I'm grounded still," I told her. She paused a moment to think.

    "Aren't your parents going out to dinner with some friends tonight?" Maria asked. Oh hey, that's right.

    "Yeah," I responded mulling over the possibility.

    Strangely enough, I find the prospect very appealing. I really shouldn't, considering that this is Alex, but there is something about doing an secret operation that excites me. It's such a risk. And I, Elizabeth "Perfect" Parker am not a risk taker...except when it comes to Max.

    "I'm in," I said after a slight pause. Maria squealed happily, receiving more shushes from the shushing crowd.

    "Ok, Plan A goes into operation before the bell rings for History," Maria said before she got up and walked out of the library.

    "I can't believe you're doing this," Max commented, pulling his chair around the table to sit next to me.

    "Well, believe it, buddy. Your girlfriend is just as much as a risk taker as the next gal," I told him.

    "Don't come to me if things go bad because I'm only going to tell you I told you so," he replied. Figures.

    "Oh, don't worry, that won't happen," I responded with a sly smile.

    "I thought we could hang out since the parentals won't be around," Max said, nuzzling my neck. I let out a giggle, inwardly rolling my eyes at myself.

    "Wellll, you could always wait at the Crash for me and Maria."

    "Yeah, I'll probably have to since Iz will want to hear the results of your spying mission as soon as possible," Max said, rolling his eyes.

    "Then it's a date," I smiled at him.

    Just then, the bell rang, signaling the end of Study Hall. Max and I gathered our things and headed out of the library, hands clasped.

    "I'll see you at lunch," I told him, giving him a quick kiss, before I made my way to my locker. Isabel and Maria were already there. Isabel's eyes were really red and slightly puffy.

    "Hey Iz," I said tentatively.

    "Hi, Liz," she responded, giving me a shaky smile. I really feel for her. I mean, this is so unexpected, especially from Alex. "I hear you and my brother finally got together. It's about damn time."

    What is it with people and their need to say that? It didn't take us that long. Sheesh. Still, I will not remark to that because she is suffering through a crisis of her own.

    "How are you doing?" I asked softly, ignoring her comment about Max and I completely, as I leaned against the locker next to her's. I already had my book for History, so I didn't need to get into my locker.

    "Not so good," she replied with a half sob/half chuckle.

    "Well, Iz, Liz and I have to go to finish...a project in History," Maria said, giving me a comical wink. Oh, real subtle, Maria. I nearly rolled my eyes at her, but I figured that it would give it all away so I resisted.

    "Yeah, we'll see you later, Iz. Stay strong," I said, patting her back softly. She nodded mutely, gathering her books out of her locker, as Maria and I headed to History.

    "She's not doing too good," Maria pointed out.

    "Thank you, Captain Obvious. I really hope Alex just tells us what's going on."

    "Yeah, and I wish that I was married to Brad Pitt," Maria said sarcastically, rolling her eyes. "All men are the same, sweetie. They're all lying, cheating, man-whores."

    That's not really true, but I don't bother to point that out to Maria for she is a woman on a mission. No one better stand in her way.

    I realized with a start that we were already in front of the History classroom, and Alex was standing right out front. With Tiffany Banks.

    "The nerve of him!" Maria exclaimed in a whisper.

    We strode up to Alex, Maria slightly ahead of me. I didn't want to knock her off of her power high because that could end up harmful to me.

    "Alex!" she exclaimed in an overly-cheerful voice. Alex nearly jumped a foot away from Tiffany when he saw us.

    "H-hey, Maria. Liz," he said. I merely narrowed my eyes at him whilst Maria grabbed his arm.

    "You don't mind if we steal Alex away for a sec, do ya Tiff?" she asked with a fake smile. Tiffany just shook her head, probably too afraid to speak. I don't blame her there. Maria can be quite intimidating when she's on the warpath. Kudos to Micheal for putting up with her.

    "Damn, Maria, you're going to leave a bruise!" Alex yelled, ripping his arm out of Maria's grasp as we dragged him to a secluded corner.

    "Cut the crap, Alex, we want to know why you were all over Skankarita over there," Maria said, crossing her arms over her chest. I just stood silently, watching the match play out in front of me.

    "I wasn't all over her. She was helping me with something!" Alex whispered angrily. That actually seemed convincing.

    "A likely story," Maria countered. Alex glared at her.

    "It's the truth. I would never cheat on Isabel," he declared, and I could see the truth shining in his eyes. Maria, however, was not so easily convinced.

    "Then why were you with her?" she asked.

    "None of your business!" Alex answered angrily as he stalked into the classroom. Well, that went well.

    "Well, that went well," I said aloud. Maria turned on me.

    "Ok, Plan B goes into action tonight."

    "Maria, I think he was telling the truth," I said, however, I doubt she heard me as she went over the supplies we would need for later.

    "I'll meet you at the Crash at 8:00."

    "I don't really want to do this anymore. I don't want Alex to hate us," I told her.

    "I'll bring the supplies," she continued on as if I was a mere insect buzzing in her ear.

    "I said I'm not continuing this little escapade with you."

    "We'll have to stop by Micheal's to borrow his camera."

    "I'm not doing this."

    "And doesn't Max have those nifty binoculars?"

    "You're going alone."

    "You need to dress in black so we blend in better."

    "I'm not going."

    "Ok, it's settled. I'll pick up everything and meet you at the Crashdown. Be prepared in your black clothing," she said as if I had said nothing at all as she strolled into the classroom. I watched her go as the bell rang, not even attempting to protest.

    "Class is not out in the hallway, Miss Parker," Mrs. Hayes said, ushering me into the classroom. I heaved a sigh, wondering what trouble Maria had gotten herself into.

    One thing I know for sure is that I am not going on her little undercover operation.

    ~*~*~

    "Be quiet, Liz! I'm sure people in Utah heard you clunking around back there!" Maria exclaimed in a whisper.

    "Well, pardon me for tripping," I whispered back sarcastically.

    Somehow, I found myself arriving downstairs in the Crash, dressed in black. I still don't know how that happened, but now I realize that it was a really big mistake to be following Maria around. Plus, she stuck me with all the equipment because she had to "navigate". I did point out that this was Roswell, and nothing is more than 5 minutes away from anything else, but she won't hear it. Freaking typical.

    "Stop complaining and be quiet!" I didn't bother to respond because I didn't want to get caught. Instead, I hoisted the backpack containing all the supplies higher on my back and trudged along like a good little soldier.

    We walked in silence for about 3 minutes, and then we reached Alex's house. Luckily, his bedroom was on the first floor, so we didn't have to climb any trees.

    "Ok, we'll set our stuff back here and take the binoculars and camera with us to his window," Maria commanded as we stepped behind a large Oak Tree.

    "Why do I need the binoculars if we're going to be at his window?" I asked warily.

    "Just bring 'em!" No need to get your panties in a bunch.

    I let the bag down with a thud, receiving a glare from Maria, and pulled out the binoculars Max let me use. Actually, I snuck them from his room because I didn't want to hear an hour long lecture. Maria pulled out the camera, and then, we were off.

    Quietly, we slunk from tree to tree to get to Alex's window. When we got there, we crouched down in the bush that was right beneath the window. Unfortunately, the bush happened to be very thorny.

    "Ouch, why do we have to sit in a friggin' bush?" I whispered to Maria after a thorn stabbed my eye.

    "So he won't see us, but he will hear us if you keep whining!" Maria whispered back. I sent her a glare, which was utterly pointless because it was as dark as Max's black button up out here.

    Carefully, Maria and I raised on our knees to see into Alex's window. He was sitting at his desk in a swivel chair facing his computer, and Tiffany Banks was sitting cross-legged on his bed. Maria gasped and mumbled something about a dirty ho as we watched.

    Maria raised Micheal's digital camera slowly and snapped a couple pictures of the scene in front of us. I watched silently as Alex swiveled around in his chair to face Tiffany. They talked about something, but I couldn't hear them at all. Too bad the window wasn't open.

    We watched as Alex got up and crossed to his bed to sit next to Tiffany. He reached out and grabbed her hand. I felt like closing my eyes because I certainly did not want to be the one to tell Isabel what we saw. Do I look like I want pain inflicted on my person?

    "I can't believe this!" Maria cried in an outraged whisper. I nodded silently as I watched Alex drop Tiffany's hand as they stood up. Maria and I quickly dropped down into the bush when they turned towards the window.

    Cautiously, we poked our heads out and peered into the room. Alex and Tiffany weren't even in there.

    "Where'd they go?" I asked.

    "No idea," Maria replied, shaking her head.

    Suddenly, we heard voices coming from Alex's porch which, coincidentally, was located right next to the bush we were in. Once again, Maria and I both dropped back down into the bush.

    "Thanks for all your help Tiffany," I heard Alex's voice say.

    "Oh no problem, Alex. I hope it all works out for you!" I heard Tiffany say in her sugary-sweet voice. There was the sound of heels clicking on pavement as Tiffany walked away, and then I heard the front door close.

    Maria and I took the opportunity to do a James Bond roll out of the bush and sprint back over to the tree that our stuff was under. Grabbing the bag and swinging it onto my back in one swift motion, we ran like the wind on out of there.

    ~*~*~

    "I can't believe he would do this!" Maria exclaimed in outrage as we reached the Crashdown 5 minutes later.

    "We don't really know what he did, Maria," I pointed out. She just shot me a ?like-you-don't-know' glare. "We didn't see him do anything besides hold her hand."

    "And he thanked her for her services! What did I tell you, Liz? That girl is one step away from becoming Pamela Anderson's mini-me," Maria said as we walked into the Crashdown. Isabel and Max were sitting at a booth in the back, but besides that, there we're no other customers in the place. I rolled my eyes at her.

    "He did not thank her for her services, he thanked her for her help."

    "Oh come on, sweetie. I know, you're slightly naïve about the inner workings of a male, but help in man language help is sex," Maria said, patting me sympathetically on my arm. I shot her a glare as we walked up to Max and Isabel's table. I slid in next to Max and Maria sat next to Isabel.

    "So, what did you two find out?" Isabel asked tensely. Maria and I shared a look.

    "It looks like Alex is doing the bedtime bump with the bleached blonde skank," Maria said bluntly. So much for not wanting to hurt her feelings.

    "We don't know that for sure," I said when I saw that Isabel was on the verge of bursting into tears.

    "Liz, he thanked her," Maria pointed out. This time, Isabel did burst into tears, leaning on Maria's shoulder. Maria wrapped her arms around her in a comforting hug.

    "Are you sure?" Max asked me in a whisper, wrapping an arm around my waist. I took a moment to soak in the feel of being pressed against his rock hard side. Oooh, that's nice.

    "I'm not, but Maria is," I replied quietly as we watched Iz cry her eyes out across from us.

    "I really hope this isn't going to blow up in our faces," Max commented.

    "Not our faces, Maria's," I told him. No way am I taking the blame when we find out that Alex's nighttime excursions are nothing of the sort.

    "True," he said, nodding his head.

    "I c-can't b-believe he would do this to m-me, to us," Isabel said in between sobs.

    "We don't know for sure, Iz," I said, but Maria came in being the voice of happiness, once again. Not.

    "You just need to dump the scheming, two-timing, man-ho flat on his ass, girl!" she cried.

    "Maria, this could all be a misunderstanding," I tried again. Of course, Isabel would only side with Maria on this.

    "No, no, I think Maria's right. I should d-dump him," Isabel declared, rubbing her red, puffy eyes with her sleeve.

    "I'm serious, Isabel, you should talk to him first," I said.

    "Let her do what she wants, Liz," Maria said.

    "Oh yeah, because she knows what she wants when you're whispering plots of revenge on Alex in her ear," I replied angrily.

    "Ok, ladies, how about we stay out of this and let Isabel handle things on her own," Max suggested, squeezing me comfortingly closer to him.

    "Let's go give the man what he deserves!" Maria declared as if our protests weren't not said. She grabbed Isabel's hand and dragged her out of the booth. Max and I watched as the two walked out of the diner. This is not going to be pretty.

    "Do you think he's cheating?" Max asked when we were alone. I shook my head.

    "Alex wouldn't do that to Isabel," I replied.

    "Yeah, I figured that. Plus, I'm not really in the mood to kick his ass if it is true," Max said with a cheeky grin. I smacked his arm playfully. At least he acknowledges the fact that he is Isabel's older brother. "Want to go upstairs and do some...studying?" Max asked suggestively.

    "And how much studying would we get done?" I asked as I leaned my head on his shoulder.

    "Depends on how much making out there is."

    "Well, in that case, let's blow this popsicle stand," I said as I pulled Max out of the booth with me and upstairs to my room.

    ~*~*~

    "Max, I think the phone is ringing," I said slightly breathlessly as I pulled away from Max's warm, inviting lips. He looked slightly dazed as the phone rang again. I reached across my bed and grabbed it. Hitting the Talk button, I put the phone against my ear.

    "Hello?" I answered as I sat on the edge of my bed.

    "Liz?" I heard Maria ask on the other end. She sounded slightly panicked, but I forgot all about her as I felt the bed dip, and then, Max wrapped an arm around my waist and placed hot, open-mouthed kisses down my neck and collar bone.

    "Y-yeah?" I asked, panting slightly.

    "Liz, we have a major problem," she said, the panic rising in her voice. I should be freaking out, but all I could think about was Max's mouth on my skin.

    "Uh, Maria, I...I can't really talk right now," I said, gasping slightly as Max sucked on the hollow of my neck. Have I mentioned what a great kisser he is?

    "Liz, Isabel and Alex had a major fight," Maria continued.

    "Uh huh," I said, nodding even though she couldn't see me through the phone. Max slid his tongue up my neck, stopping to nibble slightly on the underside of my jaw.

    "Well, Alex is totally pissed at us because we told Iz about Tiffany."

    "I figured that much," I replied, giving myself props for being able to hold up my side of the conversation while Max continued his ministrations on my neck.

    "Well, it turns out that Tiffany was helping him out with a present for Isabel," I heard Maria say. I gasped again as Max lightly sucked my ear lobe.

    "Hang up the phone," he breathed in my ear. I nodded my acceptance quickly.

    "Uh, Maria, I've...really got to go," I said as Max licked the outer shell of my ear. I shivered slightly at the feeling.

    "Are you ok, Liz?" Maria asked, a hint of worry in her voice. God help me, but I just can't seem to care.

    "F-fine...I'm just...really tired, and the phone sort of woke me up..." I trailed of as Max placed his lips on mine for a quick kiss.

    "Liz, we have a situation here! Alex is angry at us! Isabel is in tears because her and Alex had a major fight, and all you can think about is your beauty sleep?!" Maria asked angrily.

    "It's not that...I'm just t-tired," I said, faking a yawn. I put my hands on Max's chest and gave him a stern look. He just wiggled his eyebrows at me as he flopped back down on his side of the bed.

    "Well, what are we going to do about this, Liz? Alex and Iz are going to hate us," Maria said. Now that she had my undivided attention, I realized what she was talking about.

    "Maria, I seem to remember someone telling you that your little delusions of Alex having a woman on the side were idiotic. Now, who was that? Oh, that's right. Me," I said as I laid down next to Max. He slid his hand down my arm, grasping my hand in his own. Our fingers intertwined automatically, and he lifted my hand up to kiss my knuckles. Aww...he is just the sweetest guy ever.

    "I know, but what are we going to do about it now?" Maria asked in a whiny voice.

    The correct term is I as in you," I told her. No way am I getting dragged into this when all I did was try to tell her that Alex wasn't cheating. Sure, in the beginning I was against Alex, but I changed my mind pretty quickly.

    "Liz, you've got to help me out here! They're going to absolutely hate me!" Maria cried.

    "Hold on a second while I muster up the energy to care...nope still don't care," I told her. Max tapped me lightly on the side, so I looked over at him. He gave me a stern glare, but I just stuck my tongue out at him.

    "Please, Liz. I'll do anything if you help me out!" Maria pleaded. Well, this could certainly have it's benefits.

    "I don't know how to help you out, Maria. You got yourself into this mess, and look what happened. Alex and Iz are at each other's throats, and you're begging me for my help."

    "I did not beg," she grumbled in response.

    "Just try not to let them kill each other, and we'll sort this all out at school. Now, I really have to go," I told her.

    "Thank you, Lizzie!" Maria cried happily.

    "Yeah, yeah...bye, Maria," I said, hanging up the phone. I looked over to Max and gave him a roguish grin. "Now, where were we?"

    "Right about...here," Max said as he pinned me to the mattress and pressed his lips against mine. I sighed at the contact, and Max took the opportunity to slip his tongue in my mouth. Our tongues caressed each other's as I wrapped my arms around Max's neck, pulling him closer.

    Suddenly, the phone rang again.

    "Don't answer that," Max pulling his lips from mine to take a quick breath.

    "What if it's important?" I asked, panting slightly.

    "Don't care," Max replied, planting his lips back over mine. The phone kept ringing, however. This really is a mood killer. I slightly pushed Max off of me and reached to get the phone.

    "Hello?" I asked irritably.

    "L-Liz?" I heard Isabel ask on the other line. She sniffled a little, and I could definitely tell she was crying. Looks the fight didn't go so well.

    "You ok, Iz?" I asked with concern. Max rolled off of me with a sigh and wrapped his arm around my waist, pulling me closer to his side.

    "Not really. Alex just broke up with me," she replied with a sob. "What am I going to do now?"

    "I don't know, Iz. I tried to tell you not to go off with General DeLuca, but you just weren't hearing it," I told her. I know, I shouldn't be doing this knowing how upset she is, but I just love it when I'm right.

    "I know, I know, I should've listened to you," she said with a groan. That really is nice to hear.

    "Well, I don't know what to say," I told her quite honestly.

    "Do you think maybe you could talk to Alex?" she asked, sniffling again.

    "I could try," I said with a sigh. I seriously am to nice to my friends.

    "Oh, thank you!" she cried. Yeah, yeah.

    "No problem. We'll sort out this mess tomorrow," I said. We said goodbye and I hung the phone up again. Laying back down next to Max, I placed my head on his shoulder.

    "When are your parents getting home?" he asked, running his fingers through my hair.

    "In a few minutes. You should probably go," I said with a sigh.

    "Yeah," he responded, not moving.

    "Yeah," I parroted. We really are a pair.

    "When does your grounding end?" he asked a beat later.

    "Friday," I replied with a sigh.

    "Want to come over for dinner and go to the movies Friday night?" he asked me softly, idly stroking the back of my hand with his thumb.

    "Of course," I responded with a grin.

    "Good."

    "Yeah." Oh, here we go again.

    "Ok, well, I'll see you tomorrow then," he said, sitting up. I nodded, looking down at the comforter. I've got to stay strong. I will see him tomorrow. I will not ask him to stay. I will let him leave.

    "Can I get a kiss goodbye?" he asked, and I could hear the smile in his voice. Ok, a quick kiss, and that is it. No dilly-dallying. Just a small kiss.

    I looked up into his eyes, and I soon realized what a big mistake that was. I lept from the bed like a gazelle and pounced on Max, kissing him long and hard.

    "Elizabeth," I heard my mother's voice call out from the entry way. I heard the rustling of coats and shoes being taken off, so I pulled my lips away from Max's. Drat, foiled again by the parentals.

    "You've got to go now," I told Max regretfully, resting my forehead against his. He nodded causing his bangs to tickle my forehead. I sighed and pulled away from him. Max walked over to my window and hopped out, only looking back to give me a quick smile. Parents always have the worst timing.
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