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Parisienne Walkways - Part 10

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Hi everyone...

So thanks you to all those who came to chat to me about (mainly) this story. Even if we did egt a bit ... erm, sidetracked. :wink: I had a real blast and look forward to doing it again soon. :)

Roswell 10/2/00 - It seems I REALLY need to work out some deal with the Paris Tourist Board! All these people heading for the city to find their Max Effance. :wink:

begonia 9508 - Glad you enjoy it :)

FSUMSW94 -
There is no man in America who will ever come close to this experience Liz is having in Paris!
Okay, sorry, but LOL!!!!! Max would never have picked up an American man who was crying at a table in a bar. :wink: Interesting that the WHERE was one of the most asked questions. That and what razors I use. :wink:

Earth2Mama - He he he. Okay, two types of warnings. Never read more that one chapter a night, and Never drink red wine at the same time. LOL

AJK001 - YOu mean you believed me? LOL

g7silvers - Well... maybe Liz decides that she doesn;t want an annulment? :wink: Seriously, who thinks of things to be done at home when they have all THIS going on? LOL

vampyrax - LOL - I have a passion quota to fill??? :wink:

roswellluver - :) YOu're welcome.

SmileeUK - Oh yes. And there's still so much time left. :wink:

lazza - Thank you :)

omwf - Forget the other shoe droppinf and enjoyt the ret of the clothing that keeps dropping. :wink: That shoe will fall in it's own good time. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Heh heh heh - but what a way to go, huh? :) Ah, so you can see the very spot Max and Liz made love at, right? :wink: Did I do a good job describing the park? :)

Erina - Well... not quite public, but almost. :wink:

sox - I had to check you name twice :wink. And just FYI - It's not all imagination. :wink:

martine - Uhm... :blush: :wink: I'm so glad you are enjoying it all. :)

Ellie - Thank you :)

Behrsgirl - Yep, that chat was a riot. :wink: It was even more funny being there. LOL

BehrObsession - Hmmm.... Didn't someone else once ask if Paris was burning? :wink: And I take you comments about images as a huge compliment. :)

Shadowlynxbehr - Thank you :) I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - You know, the idea of all this passion is NOT to kill you. :wink: I kind of envisaged a different reaction. LOL. Having his Cake and Eating it, Max paid thr Concierge to order the croissants from the bakery so he wouldn;t have to get up and leave Liz alone in bed again. ;) Voila!

Gater101 - Sweet mother of Jason Behr? Is this a new religious movement? :wink: I'm sure you'd get loads of new devotees. LOL

clueless - More on it;s way :)

cherie - My guess is... they won;t cope. The prologue gave a hint of that. :wink:

MamaDee52 - Well... I thought you could do with a change of pace. It seems I'm killing everyone so I need to tone it down a tad before I run out of readers. :wink:

Leigh - I hope that was a compliment! :wink: (Thank you :))


Running Authors Note.
When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!


Parisienne Walkways
By WR

olde.worlde@btinternet.com
http://www.olde.worlde.btinternet.co.uk



Part 10 - Music of th Night


Friday - July 8th, 2005

The sun was once again shining when Liz woke up. The day had already begun. The first thing she saw when her eyes fluttered open was the dark hair of Max, still sleeping beside her. Waking up next to Max was a feeling that Liz found herself wishing she could experience for the rest of her life. As her eyes moved down his body, she wished that she could be married to this amazing young man, that he would be with her as she tried to come to terms with Cambridge and college life. With Max by her side, she could face anything. But what would he say if she asked him to move back to the States with her? Did he feel the same way about her? Liz looked back up to his face to find that he was now watching her. Feeling so safe, so loved, Liz moved in and kissed him. She thought that he did return her love; at least, it sure felt that way. Or was this just La Vie en Rose.

"Bonjour, mon bel ange," he smiled after their kiss.

"Bonjour," she grinned back.

"J'aime me réveiller à côté de toi," he sighed, kissing her nose. "Je pourrais vivre ça tous les jours, pour le restant de ma vie."

"Me too," Liz nodded, smiling that she could not understand a word he said.

Max started to laugh, his head falling back.

"And just what is so funny, Monsieur Max?" Liz uncurled herself and twisted so that she was on her hands and knees.

Scarcely believing that she was acting so boldly, she crawled above Max like a deadly feline. This was so not like her, yet it felt so... right. And so good.

"Ah, ma chérie," he murmured as she crawled over his body, leaning down to place a kiss on his lips. "Si tu savais l'effet que tu me fais."

As she suckled at his lips. She could feel his manhood growing, rising up to nudge her core. Grinning, Liz leaned back. If she had been hoping to feel him enter her, she would have been disappointed. Instead, she pushed his manliness down flat, her wet lips resting along its length.

"This is feeling so good, no?" he smiled at her as his hands caressed the outside of her thighs.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "Mmm, Max." She started to rock her hips back and forth. Because she was so aroused, she easily slid along his length. "So you like this, huh?"

"Ah, mon amour," he nodded, his glassy eyes gazing into hers. "C'est fantastique."

His hands left her thighs and found her breasts. As he started to caress her, teasing her rock hard nipples, she leaned into his touch. She couldn't help it. As the feelings built up inside her, Liz's eyes fell closed. She forced herself down harder onto the stiffness beneath her. Breathing heavily, she rolled her hips further, pressing her own hard button against him.

"Max," she gasped when he started to rock his own hips, pressing against her in time to her movements.

She was close, so close. She leaned forward, into his thrusts that split her soaking wetness. She could feel the firm tip of his erection stroking her smooth flesh. Lost in her pre-orgasmic bliss, Liz reached forward and mashed her lips against Max's. The sudden knocking on the door broke them apart. Liz groaned and dropped her head beside Max's, still close to her orgasm.

"Who's stupid idea was it to order those freaking croissants?" she gasped. Liz rolled off of Max and stood up from the bed. "You answer the door," she shook her head. "There's no way I'm answering feeling like... like this."

Max was still laughing when she closed the bathroom door on him.

* * *


"I don't see why we couldn't have finished what we started, Max," Liz pouted as they rode the Metro.

They were sitting down, barely aware of the throng of commuters that surrounded them.

"Because Paris, she will be gone by the time I have satisfied you, mon amour," Max chuckled. "And was it not you who told me the other morning that we have to get up and see Paris?"

"What are you saying?" she turned to try and glare at him, but she couldn't stop her smile. "Can I help it if I wanted to stay in bed today? A girl can change her mind you know. And can I help it if you have corrupted me into something that wants only for you to make love to me for the rest of my vacation?"

"What?" Max gasped. "And have you remember me only as the one who made love to you all of this time? No, no, no, no. I want for you to remember me as someone who enjoyed the lovemaking as much as he enjoyed the rest of the time we are spending together."

"Fine," Liz turned to face forward again. "But don't blame me if I just explode with all of this frustration."

"Ah, mon amour," he chuckled. "Then tonight, I will make sure that you are left in no fit state to do anything." He leaned over, placing his lips next to her ear. "Not even to explode."

Liz shivered.

"You know," she started to laugh. "When I tell them, my friends will never believe even half of all this."


* * *


They left the train at a station called Place Monge.

"It has been so named," Max informed her, "after Gaspard Monge. He was a famous French mathematician who invented descriptive geometry."

"Do you like have a huge encyclopedic brain or something, Max?" she frowned at him. "I mean, how do you remember all this stuff?"

"I am not remembering that, Liz," he grinned. "It says so on the plaque back there.

Liz just rolled her eyes and shook her head.

"Now," he grinned as they emerged into the daylight of the Quartier Latin. Their hands were firmly linked and Liz leaned against him. "We have the tradition of first a coffee and a pastry, no?"

"You're the boss," Liz shrugged, smiling up at him.

Their coffee and cake was purchased from a lovely small place called Café Delmas. Inside, all of the comfortable looking arm chairs were filled with locals and tourists. There was not even a single chair free. Liz wouldn't have minded sharing a chair, sitting in Max's lap, maybe even teasing him a little, but she did not get her wish. He led them outside to the terrace.

"What am I going to do when I go home, Max?" Liz shook her head as she ate another piece of her rich pastry. "I mean, I'm getting used to this mid morning snack and at home I won't be walking everywhere and I won't be having... uh, any other exercise."

"For real?" Max looked up. "You will not be finding yourself immensely popular with the other boys now that you will have the glow of a woman who has taken a lover?"

"Does it show?" Liz turned to look at her reflection in the window. "I mean, can you tell?"

That was when she realized he was teasing her.

"For your information, bub," Liz sighed. Her voice fell to a whisper. "I don't think anyone could... I mean, I don't think anyone will touch me like you have. And I don't just mean physically."

"It is the same for me, Liz," he sighed. He reached over and placed a hand on hers. "I do not want for you to go home."

"And I don't want to go, either," she sighed. "But I have to."

"The Spanish," Max gave a gentle smile. "They have this saying. Que sera, sera. What will be will be."

Liz gave a slow nod.


* * *


After leaving the café, Max led Liz to the Rue Mouffetard, a narrow but lively street.

"This is a fact I do know," Max nodded. "She is named after the mofette, the smell that there used to be here, when the street was the home of the tanners and the dyers along the river Bièvre, which has long ago been covered over."

"I'm glad we can't smell that now, Max," Liz wrinkled her nose. "I went to a tanners once, near Roswell. It wasn't very pleasant."

"But here now, it is very pleasant, no?"

"It's lovely, Max."

"And the Rue Mouffetard, she is so very old. During the Roman times, Rue Mouffetard was a major thoroughfare and the principal road between Paris and Rome by way of Lyon. In fact the stones of the old Roman road still lie several meters down under the current pavés.

But it wasn't only history that brought people to Rue Mouffetard. It was the particularly French, village-like feeling that had survived here. At the heart of the 'quartier' was the outdoor produce market, whose color and energy seemed to bind the neighborhood together. Max and Liz wandered around the market stalls, sampling the sights, the sounds and the vibrant colors.

"If you are worried for getting fat," Max smirked, "then perhaps we should not proceed."

"Why is that?" Liz twisted her head to look at him.

"Here it is an oasis for food from tous les pays. Greek, Indian, Japanese, French, which is including the crepes and fondues, Chinese, Italian and Mexican . Perhaps we might even find for you the New York Hot Dog, no?"

"No," Liz shook her head, wrinkling her nose. "I can eat American any time."

It was then that she started to smell the aromatic pointers of the world's cuisine. Liz couldn't help chuckling though. As good as it smelled the tourist like décor of the various buildings were every bit as tacky as the Alien themed establishments back home.

Max stopped outside of a store. It was called Filles à La Vanille

"She is also known as the "bazaar of dreams"," Max indicated the window. It was decorated with romantic, gauzy dresses in floral prints, along with exotic perfumes and stuffed teddy bears. "Come," Max led her inside.

"As lovely as it is, Max," she was looking around as he continued toward the back. It's not really me. Any of it."

"But what do you say to this, uh?" Max indicated a small sterile looking room at the back.

"What is it?" she frowned.

"Well, I think the girls they come here to have their ears pierced, no?"

"So I already have pierced ears, Max."

"This I know," he nodded. "But perhaps you might like something that you will see and forever be reminded of me and our time together here in Paris."

"Like what?" her eyes narrowed with suspicion.

"I was thinking that you might have a piercing..." he pointed his finger at her breast but before she could refuse, he dropped it to her navel.

"Will it hurt?" she couldn't believe she was considering it. But how thrilling it would be to show Maria.

"Not in ze slightest," an Oriental woman appeared. Her English was even more accented than Max. "I use ze ancient Chinese methods. You will feel nothing and ze pain, she will be gone tout suit."

"Really?" Liz turned to Max. "I don't know. What do you think?"

"I am thinking," he smiled, "that this will be a big step toward the new you."

"Okay," Liz smiled.

Twenty minutes later, and completely pain free as promised, Liz wore a jeweled pin in her navel.

"I feel so..."

"Très sexy?" Max raised an eyebrow.

"Decadent," Liz laughed. "And what about you?"

"I am not thinking that many men have the navel pins, no?" Max smirked.

"What about here?" she placed her finger over his nipple. "Remember?"

"I am doing mine when you are doing yours," Max laughed.


* * *


They stopped for a cup of tea at the Institute du Monde Arabe.

"She is Paris' new favorite building," Max nodded toward it.

"Why is that?" Liz took a sip of her tea.

"This I do not know," Max shrugged. "Perhaps it is because she is new, no? Like when the children get a new toy, it becomes their favorite until another new one comes along."

"That's quite a big toy, Max," Liz smirked.

"Speaking of the new toys," Max smiled. "How is your one? Are you perhaps experiencing any pain?"

"No," Liz shook her head, looking down at her navel. "No pain whatsoever. She was right."


* * *


Following the streets north, back toward the Seine, Max took her to a small park. Surrounding a garden, a soccer field and a boules pitch was the remains of a Roman amphitheater. This was the Arènes de Lutèce.

"It could originally have seated here 10,000 people," Max read from a large board just inside the gate. "Which was half of Lutetia,,, uh, this is the Roman name for Paris, half of the population of Lutetia. They could come here to see the gladiators as well as other forms of the entertainment less brutal, no? But during the dark ages, the people are coming here to take away the stone to fortify the Ile de la Cité."

Just outside of the gate was another, smaller plaque.

"What does this one say, Max?"

"This was placed here in 1951," Max informed her, reading from the display. "To commemorate for the city, her second millennium. It says 'Passer-by, dream before the oldest monument in Paris. May the city of Paris also be the city of the future and of your hopes."

"Well," Liz gazed up at Max with a soft smile. "Paris has certainly had an impact on my future, my time here has been just like a dream and I have a whole new set of hopes now."

"The same is for me, jolie Liz," Max nodded. "But sometimes, life is too big an obstacle."


They crossed the river on the Pont de Sully, on the tip of the Ile St-Louis. Half way across, Liz stopped and leaned against the wall, just staring at the Parisienne skyline.

"It's such a beautiful view," Liz's voice was soft and dreamy. "It's all just so romantic."

"This is why there are so many romantic films that like to put in them a scene where they have a kiss on a Parisienne bridge."

"I'll have to take your word for that, Max," Liz looked up and smiled. "I only have the film versions to go by."

"This I can fix," he grinned, turning her to face him.

With one hand holding her waist, the other held the nape of her neck, tangled in her dark chocolate tresses. His lips brushed hers. Lightly at first and then again with more purpose. Usig his lips, he started to nibble hers. Liz returned the compliment, wrapping her arms around him and molding her body to his. Their tongues entwined as they started to undulate together. The kiss deepened, became more and more passionate. The sounds of the traffic vanished. The people vanished. It was just the two of them, on the bridge in the middle of Paris, bathed in the la vie en rose.

"Max!" Liz gasped, breaking away from the searing kiss. Their foreheads leant against one another. She struggled to catch her breath. "Yeah. I guess those directors knew what they were doing. Although I have to say, I doubt that any of them have done it justice."

"You liked that, then, no?"

"No," Liz rolled her eyes.


* * *


They stopped for a late, light lunch at small bistro called La Galoche d'Aurillac

"This is an authentic Auvergnat bistro," he told Liz as they sat down amid the other hungry diners.

"It's look wonderful, Max," Liz was looking at everything, including the wooden clogs and the hams that were hung around the room. ""But what is 'Auvergnat' anyway?"

"Ah," he smiled. "Forgive me. This is a district of France. Like your New Mexico, no? She is called Auvergne. She is far to the south of here. Not too far from the Côte d'Azur.


* * *


"That's better," Liz held Max's hand and pressed herself against him as he led her from the bistro. "All this walking makes me hungry."

"And it was not too long ago that you were complaining at all the cake we are eating, no?" Max raised his eyes.

"I wasn't complaining about 'eating' the cake, Max," Liz chuckled. "Only at the weight I was going to put on."

"But you see," he shrugged. "Without the cake, you are like the car without the gas, no?"

"You have such a way with words," Liz shook her head. "Where are we going now?"

"Now," he smiled, "we are going to visit the Viaduc des Arts and the Promenade Plantée."


* * *


"The Viaduc," Max explained, "was once an abandoned, crumbling, decaying 19th-century railroad viaduct. She was scheduled to be demolished. But, instead, it has been transformed into a rich 21st-century combination of the stores and the parkland. The stores, as you can see, are tucked into the arches that support the viaduct. And the park is she is above and follows the old train tracks, up on top of the arches."

"So you get the life of commerce and the peace of greenery in the same place," Liz grinned.

"Exactement," Max beamed. "In fact, the people of Boston, they have come here to see for themselves what can be done, because they are having similar problems now that their 'big dig' is finished."

The shops recalled the history of the neighborhood, which was once the blue-collar home of artisans, craftspersons, and antiques shops. The shops, therefore, displayed the arts and crafts of today, some of them being made on the premises. Each shop occupied a single arch of the old viaduct. The arches had been refaced in a handsome orange-red brick that deliberately recalled another historic icon, the famous Place des Vosges not far away. Parking was tucked almost invisibly underground. The shop fronts themselves were elegantly detailed in glass, metal, and wood in a taut, minimalist architectural language that is very much that of today and becomes a kind of modern craft in itself.

"The stores though," Max continued, "as wonderful as they are, they are less than half the story, no? The rest is the park upstairs. It's called the Promenade Plantée. There are three miles of the old track bed that have been converted into a linear park, a kind of aerial nature walk in the city."

The landscaping was a botanist's dream. A visitor never got bored, the path was endlessly varied. Some of the plants rippled in the wind like natural marshland. Others resemble formal parterres. In places, the park spread out into playing fields and strolling parkland. At other times it narrowed to a tight file edged by dark trees. Or it became a courtyard where elderly people, sipping their wine, watched kids playing games. Sometimes the walk passed through a trellised arbor. In one place, there was a cave-like hideaway. In still another, the park sheared its way through a new building, splitting it in half.

There was no commercial activity along the Promenade Plantée, no cafes or flower markets, no newsstands or museums and no cultural attractions. But the life of the street below was always available. There was easy access by handsomely landscaped stairs and the odd elevator or two. Most importantly, the planners had built modern apartment blocks of maybe eight or ten stories along the length of the Promenade Plantée.

"Even in January, the shops and the Promenade are alive with the people," Max steered Liz through one of the many arbors.

It was in the shade of one of these arbors that they stopped for another - for there had been many - kiss. They had just broken apart, smiling at one another when they were distracted by the arrival of a French couple, perhaps a year or two older than themselves. Liz watched the couple stroll hand in hand among the dappled sunlight and looked up at Max with a smile. Did the two of them look as in love as that other couple? She reached up for another soul healing kiss when the man started shouting. Liz did not understand the words, but she recognized the emotion. He was angry with his girlfriend. She looked over at them. The young man's face was red as he was yelling at the woman, her head bowed to the floor as her shoulders shook with her crying. She whispered something to him, looking up at him. He shouted some more and stormed off. He paused and turned to face her again. He shouted again, punctuating his comments with his hands before he turned away and vanished among the greenery. The woman remained where she was for a while, crying, before she too moved away.


"What was that about, Max?" Liz's head leaned to one side as she tried to puzzle out what had just happened.

"As you are seeing," Max waved in the direction they had been standing. "They were the lovers, no? But he is angry with her because she has lied to him."

"Oh," Liz nodded in understanding.

"No, no, no," Max shook his head. He had a pained expression. "It was just a white lie and one that I cannot understand why he is so angry for it because they seemed so happy together. She has just confessed to him that she has no job. And he is angry because he has told her that he never dates the people who have no job. She told him that this she knew and that she said she had the job because they might never have got together otherwise."

"She still lied, Max," Liz frowned.

"But he was happy in her presence, no? We have seen this." Why did Max seem so saddened by this? "And he has turned her away because she lied so that she could be with him, making them both happy? Yes, she lied to him, but surely, such a love can take a little lie like that. She is still the same person, no?"

"I don't know," Liz started to feel a little uncomfortable. After all, was hiding her marital status from Max a kind of lie? A deceit? But Max had never asked her status and neither had she told him she 'wasn't' married. It was all semantics. She was living a lie. She decided to some clean. "Max?"

"Let us go for the coffee," he sighed, leading Liz by her hand towards some steps.

Her nerve vanished.


* * *


On the wide sidewalk in front of the shops, teenage in-line skaters performed acrobatically, bothering no one while entertaining the shoppers with their skills. Or an occasional mime artist would perform a series of comedic moves. Here and there, other street performers plied their trade, performing sketches for whatever change the passers by would drop. Up above on the Promenade, groups of school kids enjoyed outings in the fresh air and studied the plants. Smaller children and their parents and dogs came out of the apartments to the playgrounds and benches. The young lovers descended from the Promenade to a café below where they sat and watched a troupe of dancers.

After they had finished their act, taken their applause and collected the money thrown to them by the audience, Liz soon found that Max was again looking at her. She liked that he was always looking at her. He made her feel like she was something more than just an American tourist from small town USA.

"Did you do anything like this?" he asked her. "Dance? Sing? Perhaps you have acted in a play, no?"

"Maria's the singer, Max," Liz smiled. "She has an incredible voice and she likes to write her own songs, you know? As for acting, uh, no. I'm not into that. But I do like to dance."

"Really?" Max smiled.

"Maria and I have been taking lessons since we could walk," Liz nodded.

"And you perhaps dance on the stage in front of a huge audience?"

"No," Liz shook her head. "Sorry. I love to dance, and my teacher told me that I was really, really good, but I, uh... I don't like to dance in front of people. I mean, I had all the lessons, but I never took part in the pageants and stuff. I don't like being the center of attention. I guess it's the thought of all those people. I'm kind of afraid that they'll all be looking at me."

"Is it like your science, no?" Max smiled. "You dance with all of your passion?"

"Perhaps," Liz shrugged.

"And now," Max looked at his watch. "We must return to your hotel to make ourselves ready for tonight."

"What have you got planned?" Liz finished her coffee.

"Ah, ma chérie," Max grinned. "If I am telling you that, the surprise would be no more, ah?"


* * *


"Mais non, Liz," Max shook his head. "As much as I am loving you, we do not have the time to make the love just now. You must be patient, mon amour."

Her frustration, ever present throughout the day had threatened to explode when she watched Max strip naked for his shower. She had not made love to Max all day.

"We can be really quick, Max," she blurted. "Please?"

"Quick?" Max's eyes widened. He had a look of mock disgust. "Quick? No, no, no, no, no. Liz, making love to you is not something to be done quick. It is to be savored, enjoyed. And it is to be done properly. And we are not having any time to be doing that. We must leave soon and you have already showered. You would need another afterwards."

"You're such a spoilsport," Liz poked her tongue at him.

This I know," Max laughed as he disappeared into the bathroom. "But I will make up for it soon, n'est pas?"


* * *


Clothed as elegantly as she was in her shimmering gold wrap around dress, Liz couldn't help feel over dressed as she and Max stood in the corner of the crowded Metro carriage. They were on their way back from the outskirts of Paris where they had dined at an exquisite restaurant called 'La Forêt'. But at least she wasn't the only one so dressed. Other young ladies were dressed as glamorously, while a few were dressed far more daringly in their short clinging dresses with the low necklines, obviously destined for some club or other. She still felt as though she were on show, in spite of the fact that few people seemed to notice, or to care. And Max's commanding presence did seem to ward off any unwanted attention. So, with Max leaning against the back wall, Liz leaned against him, her back pressing against his torso while the crowded carriage continued to fill. One hand was holding the leather strap above her head.


Max's hand, ever present as it lightly rested on her hip, slid across her stomach. It held such a warmth that she couldn't help her soft moan of pleasure. The touch served to remind her that she and Max had not properly made love that day. When he started to rub her, soft gentle circles of his palm over her shimmering dress, her heart began to pound as her pulse raced. Amid the crowded commuters, a red flush crept over her face. She cast furtive glances around the carriage, looking to see if anyone was watching. His fingers played with the shape of her navel pin as they brushed across her.

Max's caresses grew and his hand dipped lower, stroking the top of her smooth mound, still over the material. Liz stood tense to the point of trembling, biting the inside of her lip as she concentrated on the feelings he was invoking within her. Was he even aware that he was doing this, she wondered? When his hand vanished, Liz couldn't be sure if she was disappointed, or relieved. But then his touch returned, causing her to squeal as her eyes widened. He had not replaced his hand on her belly but on her bottom instead. He was massaging her buttocks, through her dress. It was hard to ignore the hands that squeezed and caressed her like that.

"Max!" What was intended to be a scolding complaint sounded more like a plea.

The hand vanished in any case, only to reappear lower down, on her thigh below the hem of her dress. His other hand appeared on her stomach. Both started to caress her. The hand on her thigh inched upwards, slowly inspecting the soft skin sheathed by the silk stocking. The hand on her stomach slid across and vanished inside the fold of her dress, soon discovering the firm, warm flesh.

"Ma magnifique Liz," Max's low voice rumbled in her ear. "You are so warm, so sexy."

She couldn't believe it. Max was seducing her in a crowded train compartment. Her heart was pounding so loudly, she could not understand how the people around her had not turned to see what the noise was. No one seemed to even notice them.


The hand on her leg disappeared beneath her dress, or rather, it continued its' journey and pulled the dress up with it. Max was soon teasing her naked skin above her stocking top. The hand on her top half moved upward, slowly, gently encompassing her breast, over the silky smooth material of her bra. She could feel her hard nipple pressing against his palm. Liz was glad that the noise of the carriage and the surrounding buzz of conversation hid her whimper of pleasure. She tried to turn to face him, so that she could kiss him, but as he had the other night on her balcony, he prevented her. All she could do was to hand there from the strap while one hand kneaded her breast and another snaked up her thigh and across to her panty covered mound. Still no one seemed to notice a thing.


Max's fingers dipped first inside her bra, teasing her nipple, and then inside the small lacy panties, finding he wet and ready for him.

"Max," Liz closed her eyes and groaned. "What are you doing?"

"Do you not like it?" his voice seemed to laugh in her ear.

"No," she murmured. "I mean, yes. But, Max? Here?"

"Did you not dance in the rain, completely naked, mon amour? In the middle of a public park?"

Liz gulped while Max's fingers continued to play havoc with her, driving her on toward an orgasm. He stopped only when the train did, to allow passengers on, and off the compartment. As soon as the train started again, so too did Max's ministrations. Each time, Liz knew that someone must surely see them. But if they did, no one gave any indication. Liz could hardly believe that she, Perfect Parker, was turning into such a brazen exhibitionist. What would the people who knew her back home think?

"Oh, god," she gasped. "Max!"

Liz leaned back, pressing against his body. She felt a sense of satisfaction when she felt his hard erection pressing back against her. He was not unaffected, and he was getting no satisfaction.

Suffer, Liz grinned to herself as she braced herself for the approaching rush of her orgasm.


It never arrived. The train stopped and Max's hands disappeared from her body. She felt cold for their loss. Liz twisted her head to see why he had stopped.

"We are here," he winked at her. "We must get off now."

"Yes," Liz groaned. "We must. Only you won't let me."


* * *


"So where are we?" Liz was looking around at the grand buildings.

"Down the street there," Max indicated, "is the Louvre."

"Okay," Liz could just see a part of the building.

"And this," Max pointed to a huge, ornate building. It was all arches, stones carvings and collonades. Huge golden angels guarded the corners. About 1 third of the way down, large golden letters spelled out 'ACADEMIE NATIONALE DE MUSIQUE'. "... is the Opera."

"Opera?" Lis face shone. "I've never been to a real Opera. Which show are we seeing? La Boheme? Carmen? Rigoletto?"

"None of the above," Max shook his head with a smile. "The other day, when you are making free with your credit card in the store, I am going to the booking desk where they can obtain for you the tickets to the shows here in Paris. I was seeing that a very famous show is in Paris for a very special performance. The show is 'The Phantom of the Opera'."

"Really?" her eyes widened as Max led her inside the amazing building..


Liz was stunned by the beauty and the elegance of the building. The statuary, the sculpture, the friezes were all just so totally amazing. Inside, there was the white marble staircase with a green and red marble balustrade that curved along the edges of the Grand Foyer. The floors were polished marble while sumptuouse décor proclaimed that this was a very grand, very important building. The Auditorium itself was magnificent, too, with sculptures, more friezes and a Chagall ceiling.

She clutched Max's arm as he guided her to their seats high up toward the 'Gods', but close enough to see the stage clearly. She was falling in love with him more and more every day but this, this was too much. Everything had been so perfect. Their meal had been amazing enough; with lobster medallions, fine wine, and delightful pastries. And now, the Opera. To see the performance of a play that her friends back home could only dream of watching... And later, she would be alone with Max in her room at the Hotel. Could her life get any better?

But the opera, the play was the thing; a special performance of "The Phantom of the Opera," with Sarah Brightman reprising her role as Christine Daiae and Andrea Bocelli as The Phantom. A special performance at THE Opera! Liz loved Brightman and Bocelli, especially Bocelli.


This truly was a special night, and Liz was glad that she had taken special care in getting ready. Black silk thong panties, a matching quarter cup bra, black silk stockings and black high heeled sandals under a gold satin wrap around dress, held in place by a single clasp on her hip. A touch of the perfume he loved... Actually, five touches. Behind her left ear, on her throat, between her breasts, on her belly below the navel pin and one final one on her hip. All places she had noticed that he loved to kiss. All the places but one; only natural perfume there.

She looked good and she knew it. She knew it because he had told her so already this evening. Frequently. Good enough to fire his desire, she knew. She had already felt first hand how he had been affected and if her treatment on the Metro was anything to go by, she could hardly wait until they would be at home, in bed. Together. Naked.

Max looked wonderful, too: his dark hair, the faintest hint of designer stubble, deep honey colored eyes. And god! Did he look good in a tux! She had never seen anyone she knew in a tux; at least, not a proper tuxedo. The ones Kyle and his groomsmen wore were nothing like the one that was currently fitting Max like a glove. Dark pants and a dark jacket, with a gold cummerbund and a gold bow tie.

They settled into their seats and the lights dimmed. She took Max's hand, ran her fingernail across his palm and his wrist. Teasing. She wanted to tease him, to build his passion over a long period of time. He had played her mercilessly all day and now it was her turn. She was going flirt with him during the performance, letting him catch a glimpse of her flesh as she moved in her seat. She was going to surreptitiously touch him, caress him, building his passion... and her own. When they finally made it to their room later, there would be fireworks.

Already, she was thinking about later tonight, when he would kiss those five places, and others, and finally make love to her. The day had seemed so long. She knew that he liked to take her softly, sweetly, teasing her with slow strokes until she was ready, and then... But tonight, she wanted passion. She wanted it to be totally animalistic. Tonight, Liz wanted Max to fuck her.

The orchestra began. The overture came first, starting with the haunting strains of the organ and then, the softer melodies of "The Music of the Night." And at last, the play began, with Christine - Sarah Brightman - singing so beautifully. Captivated, Liz held Max's hand in her lap just above the heat of her liquid core.


Liz was loving this play. It had long been an ambition of hers to see the Broadway production, even going so far as to make plans with Maria and Pam to take a trip from Boston, but to finally see it in Paris, with Sarah Brightman and Andrea Bocelli - it was just perfect. Seeing it with Max made it even more so. This made it special.

The Phantom appeared on stage. Andrea Bocelli, in a white mask, and a black tux exactly like Max's. He started to sing, and it sent shivers down Liz's spine. Her whole body was buzzing. Clutching Max's hand tighter against her hot loins, she just knew that her small panties were soaked through. She really hoped that her dress wasn't.

She found herself transported to another wortld where make believe seemed reality. Down to the dungeon, down to the subterranean lake, the Phantom took Christine. Liz was right there with them. There were candles everywhere; candles even appeared to be floating on the lake. A small boat took them across the water

"Sing for me, sing for me my Angel of Music," the Phantom commanded

And Christine sang. Tears were welling in Liz's eyes.

"Sing for ME!" the Phantom commanded, and she sang.

"Ahhhhh!" her voice rising higher and higher as The Phantom commanded her again and again.

Liz felt goosebumps.

The song climaxed and Christine hit and held the piercing high note.

"AHHHHH!"

To Liz, it was erotic, almost orgasmic, and she felt her body respond. She wondered if anyone else saw eroticism in Christine's cries, her submission to the Phantom. Sing for me. Come for me. Liz was wet. It wasn't Bocelli. Well, it wasn't just Bocelli; it was the Phantom. A mysterious man who had appeared from nowhere to take her to untold heights. Liz squeezed Max's hand. He squeezed back.

Before Liz could regain her composure, Bocelli launched into an incredibly beautiful rendition of "The Music of the Night." When Bocelli sang, 'Silently the senses abandon their defenses', she was entranced.


The rest of the first act was a blur, until the Phantom cried "GO!" and the chandelier flew across the theatre and crashed to the stage, shaking Liz from her trance. The lights came up for the intermission. Liz was breathless.

"You need some air," Max whispered into her ear.

Liz nodded and helped by Max, they rose from their seats. Her legs were very shaky.


Max led her out to the hallway while "The Music of the Night" ran through her head. The narrow hallway that led to the main foyer was blocked by the passage of the rest of the audience. No one seemed to want to let the couple slip into the crowd. There was a door to the right, with a sign that probably said staff only, but Liz couldn't read it. Max drew her to it anyway. He opened the door and she saw a dimly lit stairway, spiraling down.

"Where are we, Max?" Liz wondered if they were taking a short cut to avoid the crowds.

"Sing for me," Max smiled at her, dropping his voice to mimic Bocelli's. "Sing for me my angel of love."

"Max," she grinned at him as he pulled her into him.

Wordlessly, Max placed a finger to Liz's lips. He dropped his hand to the clasp at her waist and Liz felt her dress come loose. With a quick sweep of his hands across her shoulders, Liz was standing on the other side of a door that people were walking past, naked but for her wet panties, her bra and her stockings.

Their bodies crushed against one another. Their mouths open allowing their tongues to meet and dance together. They were both breathing heavily, their breath sawing in and out through their noses. Liz could feel the soft bite of Max's tux against her hot, needy skin. His hands were roaming across her back, tantalizing touches of his warm, firm fingers. Her bra became unfastened and fell to the floor with her dress. Maz's hands dropped from her shoulders, across her waist, over her hips and finally, teasing the globes of her firm backside. He teased her from behind which made her writhe against him, pressing herself against his raging erection.

She slid her hands to his groin and unfastened his flies. Unceremoniously, she pushed his pants to his knees. His manhood was quickly enveloped in her small hands. He groaned into her mouth, a counterbalance to her own higher pitched whine.

She felt pressure from Max as he guided her down to the carpeted floor. She surrendered herself totally, eagerly positioning herself on her back, without once breaking contact from him.

"Sing for me," he whispered again, breaking from the kiss.

"Max!" Liz begged when she felt the hardness at her wet core.

"Sing for me!" he demanded, pulling the wet cloth from her opening.

And then with one firm thrust, Liz cried out as he entered her.

"Sing for ME" he grunted as he started to give Liz what she was so desperate for.

Liz sang. Her cries of excited passion echoed down the empty stairwell as Max pounded into Liz with as much desperation as she had been feeling all day. Their climax came together. An explosion that dazed them both and left them motionless on the floor, gasping for breath.

"Max," Liz finally managed to murmur. "That was fantastic."

"Oui," Max nodded against her neck where his face was nuzzling. Kissing the spot at which she had placed a dab of perfume. "It was incroyable. But now, we must return to our seats, no? I would hate for you to miss the rest of the play, and the phantom, he has the second half to perform."

"Yeah," Liz panted, her eyes closed with the shear pleasure that Max was giving her. "And 'my' phantom has a second half to perform, too."

"And a third," Max nodded. "And si tout va bien, a fourth."

"And don't forget," she giggled. "I'll want an encore."


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Parisienne Walkways - Part 11

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Hi everyone!

As an FYI, I recieved the followint pm earlier this week.

The Following stories made it to the voting round at Memories.

Memories


Parisienne Walkways
Best Adult Fiction

Of Cabbages and Kings
Best use of a Song or Songs in a Fic
Story You Would Like To See A Sequel For
Best Alien Mynthology

Red Shift
Best Use of Aliens in a Fiction

The Christmas Angel
Best Holiday Story

Blue Remembered Hills
Best Future Story


I don't think I've ever had so many nominations! So please please please get on over to memories and cast your votes. Even if you don;t vote for me. Well... as long as some of you do. :wink:

I thought you might like to know. I have started a New Company. "WR's Parisienne Walkways." It's a personal guided tour of Paris. There are two services you can hire me for. Deluxe and DeluXXXe. :twisted: Itinerary is pretty self explanatory. :lol: Think it will succeed? :wink:


ANyway, I'm glad you are enjoying the rather different sides to Liz and Max. :) As I am sure THEY are. :wink:

Gater101 - he he, Glad you are enjoting the erm... steamy nature. :)

Behrsgirl1230 - Well... all he has to do is sing, and make Christine sing for him. ;) I could do the latter half with my eyes closed, LOL

Shadowlynxbehr - Oh yes. Lots of flavors for Max and Liz to try. :)

Heavenli24 - Did you enjoy Paris? Okay, Disneyland. :wink: Any Max's about? :lol:

begonia9508 - As long as you enjoy it, and of course, being closer to the action than the rest of us... I hope I am pretty accurate. :)

MamaDee52 - It's nice that my words can transport (Smac?? Any news on the teleporter?) people to far away places so they SEE it. :)

lazza - LOL - yes. Max sure did seem upset that a white lie destroyed a love like that.

smokie -
Not to worry, I am in the process of remedying that situation.
Inquiring minds want to know...?

dawnuk - As a regular visitor, how many places have I written about that you have been to? :) I sent a pm about where I live. Been having problems with pm lately, so just in case, I live near Winchester, in Hampshire. How about you? :)

Smac - Forgiven. :wink: LOL - Well... It pleases me that you, uhm... get satisfaction from my story lines. :twisted: :wink:

Ellie - The cult grows! Who's the Grand PooBah?


roswelllluver - You're welcome :)

salcombe_girl - Thank you. And I hope you enjoy the rest of my work. You know where my website is, right?

vampyrax - Max corrupted her? Or did he just discover her? :wink:

Earth2Mama - LOL - I have no idea. Maybe the omission of red wine was a mistake. Maybe it's something else that contributes to the high temperatures. Clothing, perhaps? :wink:

BehrObsession - Well... I erm... just think a little, and uhm {cough} {cough} remember... uhm... You know what? Let's just leave it that I have a good imagination. K? :wink: :blush:

"ma cherie" :wink: - I think lots of people were singing this week. :wink:

Alien614 - And now, if you see it for a fourth time... it will never be the same! :wink:

Roswell10/2/00 - Oh my! I hope I have not corrupted your memories! :wink: And I sent you that form. How come you haven't returned it yet? :wink: Glad you enjoyed the Chat. I will be doing another in March or in April. :)

txndreamer06 - Thank you. Glad you are enjoying it. :)

FSUMSW94 - Whats so great about coherent anyway? :wink:

frenchkiss70 - You know, I think my greatest triumph with this story is that you have not pointed out any inacuracies in my descriptions of Paris. :) Glad that you are enjoying it. :)

clueless - You're welcome. :)

g7silvers - I'm sure she is thinking the same thing. :wink: Max was upset becaue a white lie broke the lovers up. No idea why that would be. :twisted:

Cathy - Bonjour!

Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!



Part 11 - Saturday Night Fever


Saturday - July 9th


"Sometimes," Liz leaned back into her chair in the quiet garden of the Hotel. After breakfast, they had gone out to sit in the sunlight and just enjoy one another's company. "I really think that the mornings are the best part of our day."

"Pourquoi?" Max studied her over the top of his steaming cup of coffee.

"It's just the intimacy of it," she smiled, taking note of anyone who might be able to hear her. "You know, waking up next to you, watching you as you start to wake up. The uhm, incredibly... steamy showers." She leaned forward to whisper. "You shaving me." She sat back again. "I uh, love it when we eat our croissants together, and how you just have to finish every last crumb, even the ones that have fallen on me."

"Those are the best bits," Max grinned. "And I am thinking that you like the crumbs that fall on me also."

"True," Liz smiled. "And then we have to have another shower."

"You say that like it is a chore," Max narrowed his eyes. "Perhaps you would prefer to shower alone, n'est-ce pas?"

"No!" Liz looked momentarily panicked. "No, I wasn't complaining. And I really do love having those showers with you."

"This I know," Max laughed. "And for me, this is a part of the day I enjoy also. But I also take great pleasure from moments like this," he waved his hand to indicate the small garden. "When we just take the pleasure from each other's company and talk."

"I know," Liz nodded. "I'm so glad that I met you, Max. I'm so glad that I had a great teacher as well as a great experience for my first time."

"You cannot be good all by yourself," Max smiled. "The student, she must be good too, no? And you, mon bel ange, are very good."

She smiled and took a sip from her coffee cup.


* * *


"So what is it about this place?" Liz was eating a Caesar salad at a pavement table outside of Gaston's bar. "I mean, it's not like it's a fashionable place, and you could clearly afford to eat almost anywhere in the city, yet I found you here in this small café."

For lunch, Max and Liz had taken a short stroll around the corner from the hotel to the café at which they had met, a few short days ago.

"I am thinking," Max smirked, "that it was I who am finding you."

"Yeah, yeah, yeah," Liz laughed. "Little did you know that you fell victim to the oldest ploy in the book. You know the one, play the damsel in distress and see what knight in shining armor rides up?"

"Ah, I see," Max chuckled. "So you tricked me into revealing my knightly honor, ah? Or was I perhaps the only one who fell for this trick?"

"Oh, no," Liz shook her head. "I trapped the one I wanted. No one else even saw me pretend to be upset."

"This is good," Max nodded. "Because this is one knight who does not know how to joust."

"So why were you here?" she ate another leaf of lettuce along with a crouton.

"It is very hard for me to be myself," his demeanor changed. He looked serious, now. "My family, she is very old. And while we are not as famous as some, we must take care of our identities, no? If the paparazzi, they learn that I am in Paris with a beautiful young woman, then everything we do would be in all the papers, tu comprends ?"

"Oh," Liz blushed. "No, I don't think I would like that."

"No," Max shook his head. "You must understand, I have no shame for being seen with you. And neither do I have any shame for the things we have done, you and I, at least, not for myself. But for you. I would not like your family to see these things in the paper and think, who is he who has corrupted our little girl? I would not like for your friends to ask why it is you do not play in the park for them?"

"Would they even find out in America?"

"Perhaps," Max shrugged. "But it is perhaps better not to find out, n'est-ce pas?"

"Oui," Liz nodded.

"And it is not just because of you that I am here at Gaston's," he smiled. "I like to visit with my friends. I like to take a walk around the city. I do not spend enough time here. And if I had to always watch what I was doing, where I was going, always making sure that I did not do something that might cause my family the embarrassment... then I might as well not come here at all."

"Well, I for one am glad you did, Max," Liz placed her hand over his. "But this doesn't explain why you were at this café."

"When I come to Paris, I live with an old friend. In Montmartre. Close to the Sacré-Coeur. He is an artist, you understand. And so that I can visit with my family from time to time, we pretend that Gaston here is my Uncle. And I work for him and sometimes make deliveries to my home. And Gaston gets lots of business for when we need food brought in for the important guests, so he wins, and we win. The best arrangement. It helps that Gaston and his wife are such amazing people. It also helps that Gaston's mother and my grand-mère were nurses together before the war."

"Really?" Liz's face lit up. "My grandmother was a nurse, too. She was stationed at the American Hospital, here in Paris, just after the war."

"My grand-mère worked there for a while, too," Max grinned. "Perhaps they were friends, no? Le monde est petit."

"Maybe," Liz smiled.

"So you see," Max continued. "If someone was to perhaps discover who I really was, then I would not be able to be your guide for Paris, at least, not without someone to be watching us all the time. And I would not be able to visit you in your room, because then you would become a célébrité, and not for the right reasons."

"So you're pretty important, huh?" Liz smirked.

"Not especially, no," he shook his head. "But enough to let someone build up their reputation, no?" Max looked at his watch. "Ah, mon dieu! Tu as vu l'heure ! We must return to our room to get changed."

'Our' room, Liz thought. How wonderful that sounded.

"What's wrong with how I'm dressed now?" she asked as they walked back the hotel.

She thought she looked lovely in her mid length patterned dress. Classy, chic yet with a hint of alluring.

"As always," he smiled. "You are looking très sexy. But this afternoon is the one time that I think I will be preferring to see you in your jeans." Max playfully smacked her bottom.

"Why?" she raised a single eyebrow. "Where are we going?"

"I have a surprise for you," he smiled. "One that I am hoping you will enjoy. But if you are not enjoying it, you will tell me, no? And then we can leave."

* * *


Liz was completely turned around by the two changes of trains as Max led her through the tunnels of the Metro. She remembered the names 'Saint-Denis Universite' and 'St. Denis-Porte de Paris', but everything else was a confusing blur. When they finally stepped out into the sunlight again, they were facing what to Liz, looked like a large, modern sports stadium. It looked kind of futuristic to her, resembling something that might be found in Roswell. Almost circular in shape, with broad staircases leading up between pillars and fences, it did actually resemble a kind of space ship.

"This is the Stade de France," Max told her.

Wordlessly, Liz just nodded.

"She was completed in 1998," he continued, "in time for the World Cup."

"Uh..." she blinked. "Which sport was that?"

"The Americans call it soccer," Max chuckled.

"Are we here to see a game of soccer, Max?" Liz was looking around at all the people. Many wore dark blue shirts, or wore dark blue and white scarves around their necks. Many others, looking Hispanic to her, were wearing sky blue shirts and sky blue scarves.

"No," Max smiled at her. "We are here to see a game of Rugby. France is playing Argentina. Do you know this game?"

"No," Liz shook her head.


Inside, the seats were filling fast. Surrounding them, excited French families were talking rapidly, discussing, Max had told her, the probable outcome of the game.

"Argentina is improving all of the time," he informed her. "And although France should win with few problems, it should still be a very good game. Both like to play a fluid, attacking game."

"So how do you play it?" he eyes were trying to make sense of all of the strange white lines on the field. It looked nothing like the football field back at West Roswell High. "What are the rules?"

"The rules," he smirked, "would take me a lifetime to explain. But I will try to tell you enough to let you enjoy the game, no?"

"Please," Liz nodded with a smile.

"It is a little like your football, your gridiron. Like in your gridiron," Max leaned close to her so that she could hear him above the roar of the crowd, "the idea is to carry the ball across the line at the end of the field. However, just crossing it is not enough. You must place the ball down on the ground. This is called a try and she is worth five points. And if the kicker kicks the ball between the uprights afterwards, this is worth two more points."

"Got it," Liz nodded. "Kind of like a TD with a successful PAT."

"Oui," he chuckled, shaking his head. "And teams can be awarded penalty tries if the other teams breaks any of the rules. And then there is also the penalty kick. This is worth three points and can often determine who will win the game. Oh, and we have the drop goals, too. This can be kicked from open play and is worth the three points also."

"How about I just watch, and you explain the things that happen that I don't understand."

"This sounds like the good plan."

"So seeing as Argentina comes from the same hemisphere as me, I should be rooting for them, no?" Liz grinned.

"If this is what you want," Max smirked. "But then you should be sitting over there." He pointed at the cluster of sky blue on the opposite side of the stands.

"Vive la France," Liz cheered.


* * *


"Where are his receivers?" Liz yelled at the men on the field as the man with the ball ran headlong into a mass of pale blue.

"No, no," Max shook his head. "In this game, we have no receivers. The ball, she is never thrown up the field. Only backwards."

"Backwards? How can you ever score by moving backwards?"

"By running forwards," Max shrugged.

"Not like that you don't," Liz rolled her eyes as another man ran headlong into a couple of defending Argentineans. "Doesn't anyone know how to block?"

"That is not allowed," Max started to laugh. "And the man with the ball... when he is tackled, he is supposed to let go of the ball."

"Oh, man," Liz shook her head. "This is one confusing game!"

Both teams played well, and it was not the overwhelming victory that the French fans had hoped for. They did win, however, 26 - 18 and they at least went home happy. As they passed a group of Argentinean fans who were discussing the game amongst themselves, they did not look too disappointed.

"They played well," Max shrugged. "And they scored 18 points. They should be happy. It would be like France losing to your Football team by only one touchdown and one field goal."

"Like that would ever happen," she rolled her eyes. "No one knows how to block, no one knows how to pass a ball forward..."

"You did not enjoy it?"

"I did," she chuckled. "I was only teasing. It was really exciting, Max. I liked how it just seemed to flow, you know? I mean, no delays while we went into a commercial break and no wardrobe malfunctions during half times. Unless you count that poor Argentinean losing his shorts in the... what did you call it?"

"Scrum."

"Such funny names," Liz shook her head.

"What can I say?" Max shrugged. "The game was invented in England."

"Do you play, Max?" she looked up, her eyes wide.

"I do," he nodded. "I play for my school, although I am nowhere near as good as any of the players you have just seen."

"I'd like to see you play, one day."

"I would very much like that, too," his face sported the biggest smile.


* * *


"Are we doing anything special tonight?" Liz looked up from Max's chest to his face just above her. They were relaxing on her bed, still naked from their lovemaking.

"Anything I do is special," he smiled. "As long as I am doing it with you."

"You know what I mean," she smirked.

"This I know," he chuckled. "And to inform you. Yes, we are doing something special tonight."

"Dinner," she gave a mischievous wink.

"Of course," he started to laugh. "At this amazing restaurant I know. But then afterwards... we shall see."

Liz remembered only too well what had happened the last time they ate at an amazing restaurant. Liz wondered if the taxi driver would ever forget them.

"So... I guess I should go and have my shower then.

"This is a good idea," Max nodded. "Otherwise I might want to make love to you again and then we would be missing our reservation, no?"

"Oh," she shrugged. "Far be it from me to be the cause of missing a reservation. I guess you would rather eat food than me, huh?"

"Mais non!" Max gasped. "But then, how am I to keep up my strength when I am not eating, ah? And I will be doing so poor a job, you will find yourself someone who has been eating well, while I have been loving you well, no?"

"No," Liz shook her head. "You're all I want." She kissed him on his lips. "All I need. I'll go shower, d'accord ?"

"Bien," Max kissed her as she started to climb from him.


* * *

Already naked from relaxing with Max on their bed, Liz slipped into the shower stall and allowed the water to cascade over her body. The hot water felt good after the long day. As she washed, caressing the soap into her taut skin, her hand snaked down between her thighs where she checked for any stubble. It was still smooth, but she was also very wet. And not just from the shower. But that was hardly a surprise to her. She had, after all, spent the whole day with Max. With a low, sensual sigh, Liz slid her fingers between her wet folds. Just being near to Max made her wet.

"I wonder," she speculated, "Is it possible for a woman to be wet twenty-four hours a day? And if so, how many days could she go?"

The scientist in her suggested that she start to keep a record in a journal. But then the realist in her shook away the thought.

"How embarrassing would that be?" she blushed in the shower. "Publishing my paper on how I performed that experiment."

But the fingers that teased her hard little button were feeling so good right now.

"What am I doing?" she shook her head with a smirk. "I don't have to do this myself. I have my very own Max just outside."

The desire Liz was constantly feeling was such a delicious sensation to her, one that she had never truly felt until Max made her feel it.

"Liz?" Max called from the door.

"Max," she gave a guttural moan, not at all embarrassed that Max had caught her touching herself. "You have such great timing."

"Your phone," Max gave her an apologetic smile. "She is ringing. It is your friend, Maria, no?"

"Unlike 'some' people," she groaned.


With a towel wrapped around her, Liz stomped from the bathroom to the side of her bed where she picked up the phone.

"What do you want, Maria?" she barked.

"Well hello to you too, best friend in the whole world."

Maria sounded upset at Liz's reaction. Liz regretted her outburst immediately.

"I'm sorry, Maria," Liz sighed, sitting on the small chaise lounge. "I'm just a bit..."

"Frustrated?" Maria finished.

Smiling at her, Max knelt on the floor in front of her.

"You could say that," Liz rolled her eyes.

"What's up?" Maria giggled. "Monsieur Max not the lover you hoped for?"

"Maria!" Liz gasped, blushing a scarlet color.

"Lighten up, Liz," Maria chuckled. "Jeez. Anyone would think you wanted to remain a virgin."

"I never said that," she grinned at Max and his manhood just starting to grow.

Max lifted up her foot.

"Do you still see him?"

"From time to time," Liz jumped as Max started to lick and nibble at her toes. "Ticklish!" she whispered, her hand over the mouthpiece.

"What have you been doing since our last convo?"

"Uh... we had a picnic in the park," Liz's eyes widened when Max lifted her leg a little higher and started to kiss the inside of her shin. "It rained."

"So you got a little wet, huh?" Maria laughed. "It's a start, I suppose."

"Yeah," Liz couldn't help wriggling a little as Max used his tongue against her skin. Liz was glad her legs were still smooth, too. "Actually, I got a lot wet."

"What else?" Maria continued. "You been up the Eiffel Tower, yet?"

"Not yet," she giggled. Max was kissing her knees. "I'll definitely go there though. I've seen it, from a distance."

"So how are you feeling, now?"

"Incredible, Maria," Max's hot breath was working on her inner thighs. Her towel had already gaped open revealing her wet core to him. She gave a soft sigh of pleasure. "Absolutely incredible."

"What did you do today?" Maria was unaware that at that moment, Liz had pressed back against her shoulders to lift her backside, freeing the towel for Max to pull from her. Liz was now naked, with Max.

"Max took me to a rugby game, actually."

"No way," Maria chortled. "You never once went to any of Kyle's games. I thought you hated sports."

"Well... I decided it was time to check them out."

"You know what I think?" Maria giggled.

"What?" Liz hid her gasp with that question. Max had spread her thighs as wide as they would go. His eyes were dark, yet they still sparkled with incredible mischief.

"I think that this Max is bringing you out of your shell a bit."

"You can say that AGAIN!" Liz cried out the last word as Max's tongue ran from her perineum to her clitoris in one fast swoop.

"Liz? Are you okay?"

"Yeah," Liz glared at Max. "I just got out of the shower and I'm all wet. I nearly slipped."

Stop it, she mouthed, placing her spare hand over herself.

"You better sit down before you fall down, babe,"

"Got it," Liz nodded.

If Liz thought that Max would give up, she forgot that Max was stronger than her. He easily pulled her hand away. The fact that his mouth had fully enveloped her nipple and was now suckling at her helped.

"Oh," Liz moaned.

"Liz? You're acting awfully strange."

"Sorry," Liz closed her eyes to the feeling. "You should see some of the fashions that go walking by." She rolled her closed eyes at her bare faced lie. "How about I call you back in a few moments?"

"No," Max murmured in a soft, husky voice. "I want to make love to you while you talk to your friend."

No, Liz mouthed again, shaking her head.

"Aww, Liz," Maria pouted. "You can stand being a little wet, right? I mean, how bad can it be? Wait... are you naked?"

"Yes," Liz smirked.

She was shaking her head though, as Max moved himself between her spread thighs. He had the look of the devil in his eye.

"T M I, Liz. What do you think this is? Some fricken sex line chat or something?"

"No!" Liz gasped as Max eased his hardness into her wet chasm.

"You are acting so weird," Maria laughed. "I kind of like this new you."

"Uh huh," Liz was biting back her desire to cry out as Max filled her completely.

"You going out to dinner tonight?"

"Liz looked up at Max, and then down at her tummy.

"I'm a little full right now," she started to laugh.

"And you're getting a weird sense of humor," Maria chuckled. "As long as you're having a good time."

"The best, Maria," Liz nodded, feeling pure pleasure as Max slid out and then eased himself into her again. "I so love it here. I am so glad that I came here now. And you know what?" She started to giggle. "I'm coming here again."

"Do I detect a little something something with a certain amorous Frenchman?"

"I think there's something there, Maria," Liz nodded, sighing with pleasure.

"Sounds like you are really into him."

"And he really is into me," Liz purred.

"Sounds very interesting," Maria laughed. "You realize of course, I'm gonna have to speak with him."

"Nuh uh, Maria," Liz shook her head with a groan. She was fighting the feelings of her orgasm. There was no way she could come while she spoke to Maria.

Sensing her resistance, Max reached his hand between their bodies and his fingers found her button. He started to stroke her in time to his body's movements. This made Liz rock her hips in time.

"I really need to go," she told Maria. Her eyes started to go wider. She was losing her battle. She REALLY needed to come.

"No, wait," Maria called, afraid that she would just hang up. "Your Mom and Dad send their love."

"Oh!" Liz cried out. She pulled her free hand to her mouth, pulling the towel with it. She crammed as much of the towel into her open mouth as she could. She came. Hard.

"Liz, what on earth is going on with you?"

"Nothing," Liz was now fighting to control her breathing. "Give them my love, too."

"You interested in what's been going on with anyone else?"

"Only with you," Liz reached out and caressed Max's face with a smile. "How are your compositions coming along?"

Still inside her, Max smiled at her, resting his head in the crook of her neck while planting soft kisses.

"They're great," Maria was grinning. "I think I'm a shoe in."

"That's terrific, Maria. I'm so happy for you."

"Anyone else? Kyle?"

"Nope." Liz rocked herself against Max's body, wondering if she could get another rise out of him. "I am so totally not interested."


"You are so bad," Liz grinned after she had finally hung up.

"And you are just so tempting," Max smiled. "How can I resist when mon bel ange is sitting there looking so wet and sexy."

"God, Max," she rolled her eyes. "You made me come in front of Maria. Do you have any idea how wrong that is?"

"No," he grinned, licking his lips.

"Forget it bub," she smirked, reading his thoughts. "I don't share well."


* * *


An hour later they were ready to go. Liz loved how Max was looking at her, as though he couldn't believe his eyes at how beautiful she looked. She hoped she looked hot and that he was finding it very difficult to keep his hands to himself! She relished the idea of being his next meal.

Liz was wearing a short, red dress, which clung to her body and glittered when it caught the light. It fell from two tiny shoe string straps on her shoulders and was slit to the thigh on one side revealing just a hint of lace at the top of her sheer stockings. She wore matching red high strappy sandals and had Max's black shawl draped around her shoulders. Her dark hair was caught up and she wore a diamond necklace and earrings to finish off the look. Max in turn looked so handsome and sexy in his Armani. She loved how he looked in an Armani. She still couldn't believe her eyes every time she looked at him. Of all the people he could have chosen, he chose her. His golden eyes and the way he looked at her always made her heart leap.

As they stepped through the ornate front doors of the hotel, Liz couldn't believe her eyes when a limousine with darkened windows pulled up in front of them.

"Oh, Max" she gasped her eyes shining, "Oh wow!"


To Liz, it seemed only a short drive through the main streets, including a short stretch along the Champs Elysees. She was enjoying her first ever ride in a Limo. Max looked completely at home, and Liz actually wondered if maybe the Limo belonged to Max's family.

"The restaurant where we will eat is, in my opinion, the best in all of Paris," Max smiled. "If it is at all conceivable to call perhaps the best restaurant in the world a 'Home away from Home' then Taillevent deserves this title. Regarde."

As the Limo turned the corner, Liz expected to see an ornate and expensive looking building with brightly lit windows and an olde worlde charm. She didn't expect to see a horde of photographers. Neither, it seemed, did Max. Max leaned forward and opened the window that closed the driver from them.

"Please drive past," he told the driver. "Let's go to Maxim's on Rue Royal instead."

"It's probably just as well,[/i]" the driver nodded. "When Paris Hilton comes to our city, you can be sure the paparazzi will follow."

"Paris Hilton is here?" Max exhaled. "Thank god for that. I thought they wer here for..."

"Maxim's it is, sir."


* * *

"It is not so great, perhaps," Max told Liz as the driver changed direction. "But Maxim's is still a famous restaurant here in Paris. It is known for its art nouveau interior décor, as well as for the food. It is better I think that you see it now before it becomes to much of a tourist attraction."

"I'm sure it's lovely, Max.

Lovely seemed totally inadequate. Ornate, rich, vibrant... even avant garde sprang to mind. It was as though someone wanted to show off with their décor skills and built a restaurant as a side line. It was just...

"Incredible," Liz breathed.

They walked hand in hand into the restaurant, and were shown to their table, turning many a head as they did so. Liz wasn't sure whether she was relieved or disappointed when the only table they had available turned out to be one in the middle of the room, even if the room was so very full. Also, Max was sitting across from her, not next to her. The waiter arrived with the menu and as always, Liz found that Max's eyes were on her, and on her alone. She loved how they hovered not only on her face and on her lips, but also on the plunging neckline of her dress which showed her small amount of cleavage to perfection. She could tell that he wanted her as much as she wanted him.

Liz playfully ran her leg alongside his under the table as they ate their meal. Her eyes were dancing with impishness and she saw the look in his face that she was coming to know so well. Payback could be such a bitch. Smiling cheekily at him, she excused herself to go to the rest rooms. She could feel his eyes on her every step of the way as she swayed seductively across the room in time to the music. She also felt other eyes on her. It pleased her to know that while Max was undoubtedly feeling very tight in his groin right now, he was also feeling the green eyed monster, too.

Several minutes later, she re-emerged and again, performed her sensuous walk across the room. She rejoined him at the table and pressed her hand into his.

"A present for you, Max," she winked at him.

Max's eyes flared as he realized what he held in his had. Desire was burning through every molecule of his blood as he partly opened his hand to show that she had given him her tiny thong panties that she had put on less than an hour ago. They were warm and damp. As his thoughts turned to the fact that she naked under her dress, he started to shift in his seat with a lot of discomfort. Oh yes. She knew how to make him suffer, too.

"What are you grinning at?" she smirked as she ate another profitta roll.

"Thank you for my present," he gave her a lust-filled look. "And can I say... with where we are going after in mind, it is without a doubt, the best gift I have received since the other night."

"Why?" she felt less confident now. "Where are we going?" Not up the Eiffel Tower, she hoped.

"You really are a little minx, are you not?" he smiled at her with affection. Max placed her thong in his jacket pocket and reached over to take her hand. "I am so glad that I have met you. You surprise me all of the time. All of the time."


* * *

Max placed her shawl over her shoulders and wrapped an arm around her in a very possessive manner before guiding her out of the restaurant. The chauffeur was already holding the door open for them and Liz was more then a little careful when she climbed inside. Her panties were still inside Max's pocket and she wasn't ready to expose herself to the chauffeur, let alone the line of people outside the restaurant, waiting to go in.

When Max climbed in beside her, Liz snuggled into his arms. She giggled when he produced a bottle of champagne from the car's refrigerator.

"Mmmm," she purred as they sipped their sparkling beverage. "Can the driver hear us or see us back here, Max?"

"No," he grinned at her.

"Then maybe you should tell him to take the long way home?" Liz smiled.

"But we are not going home, ma chérie," he smirked. "I am already telling you this."

"I thought you were joking," she looked up. "Uhm... Could I have my panties back, please?"

"Absolument pas," he shook his head with a smirk. "Is it a custom in America to take back your gifts?"

Not waiting for an answer, Max turned her face and his lips met hers. They shared a soft, slow and very passionate kiss that melted Liz right down to her toes. Who needed panties anyway? She started to run her hand up and down his thighs. Her hands stopped at his pant's buttons and with a deft flick of her fingers, she had them unfastened. She had him unzipped nanoseconds later and her hand teased inside, barely touching his firm manliness. She had forgotten that it was she who was supposed to be tormenting him tonight.

"Ah, Liz," he sighed when her hands pushed inside his boxers and she wrapped her slim fingers around his pulsating erection. It felt kind of amazing to feel it pulse in time to her own pounding heart. With soft and sensuous strokes, she started to caress him.

No matter how much she planned to take control, she had forgotten that Max was not one to lie back and take what was coming to him. Easing from their kiss, Max started to kiss down her chin, under her throat and down her neck. Soft and wet kisses. His hands eased the thin straps down over her shoulders and let them fall down her arms. His kisses traced a line down her chest until his lips started to push the red cloth away, revealing her firm breasts topped by her magnificent, erect nipples. Hungrily, he pulled them, one at a time into his mouth where his tongue laved them, leaving her burning with want. All the time, she felt his hardness in his hand while she worked him. As she grew wetter and wetter, if that was at all possible, she could feel his excitement rise, too. Already, there was a copious trail of wetness around the soft tip of his iron rod, leaking down his shaft and over her fingers.

Max groaned out loud and dragging himself from her breasts for a moment, he kissed her again on the mouth.

"Bébé," he panted. "Je t'aime. Je t'aime, Liz."

His hand ran along the top of her thigh, slipping beneath her dress and finding the tops of her stockings. All thought of making him suffer was lost now. She was suffering as badly herself. She needed him as much as he needed her. As his fingers teased across her shaven mound, she gasped and arched herself into him, increasing her pace on his cock. She opened her legs for him, a silent invitation. He accepted and his fingers danced along her wet channel, sliding through her lips, swollen and glistening wet from her own arousal. He dipped his fingers into her, feeling how ready she was and then he brought them to his mouth, tasting her. She couldn't help shudder, wishing that he would cut out the middleman and use his talented tongue directly on her.

"Oh, God, Liz," he moaned as her hands continued to stroke him. "God, I want you. I want to fuck you."

"Yes," she hissed as his fingers found her aching clitoris again and started to stroke around it.

They lay against one another for a while, each one bringing the other pleasure while they kissed. Finally, he pulled away from her, his obvious need for her overpowering. As if reading his mind, her eyes smiled lovingly into his, she crossed her arms, grabbed the hem of her dress and pulled it over and off of herself.

"Magnifique," Max shook his head in awe as he pushed his pants and boxers down his thighs.

Wasting no more time, Liz swung her leg over Max's and sat astride him, gazing into his adoring face. With their eyes locked upon each others, watching their reactions, Liz slowly but eagerly lowered herself down upon his throbbing erection. Both of them gasped with widened eyes as the tip of his cock entered her. Liz couldn't help closing her eyes in pure bliss as she pushed herself down his full length, feeding the whole of his erection into her. She knew, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that Max had ruined her for anyone else. He arched into her, wanting to impale her, driving himself into her hungry depths. He buried his face into her breasts again, licking, biting and sucking ravenously at her nipples.

Liz's head was leaning against his, her hands running through his soft, dark hair, caressing and stroking his face. She rode him slowly, both of them laughing with extra pleasure every now and then when the limousine went over a bump. Liz wondered if Paris had any cobbled streets. He felt so good inside her, like he had been purpose made for her. She could feel her lips being stretched as he plunged deeply into her. His hands were kneading her backside, caressing her as she continued to ride him. His finger, still slick from her wetness started to gently probe her tight little rosebud, pressing against her until her eyes widened with shock when she felt his finger slip through and into her. She didn't know whether to die of embarrassment or scream in pleasure.

"Oh, god, yes!" Liz screamed, oblivious to the driver, the passing citizens or anything else other than Max, his erection, his finger and their hunger for one another. Max continued to finger fuck her as she pushed herself harder and faster onto his cock. As she pushed down hard, both his finger and his hard rod pressed deeper into her. She could feel herself being pushed closer and closer to the edge. When she felt him thrusting harder into her, she knew they were both close. She reached down and kissed him, hard, sucking his tongue into her mouth. Liz went crazy as she exploded into the most intense orgasm she had ever had. Accompanying her own ear splitting cries, she was vaguely aware that Max too was calling her name. She could feel him filling her up with his seed. Their bodies continued to shudder and buck against each other as wave after wave of their orgasms crashed around them.

Gasping and panting, they lay still, Max still embedded inside her, his one free hand caressing her back, and just reveled in their post orgasmic glow. She could feel their combined fluids seeping from inside her, down onto their thighs. All the time, her head was on his shoulder, her face buried into the side of his neck.

"I love you, too, Max," she murmured. "Oh, god, how I love you."


* * *


"We should have gone home," Liz pouted after Max sat back from the window after giving the chauffeur his instructions. "Yes, it was very clever of you bringing those moist wipes so we could clean up... but god, Max. We must reek of sex. I bet it really smells in here."

"The smell of notre amour, belle Liz," Max cupped the side of her face. "And you do not need to worry. No one will know anything where we are going."

"Yeah," she rolled her eyes. "Unless someone looks up my dress. Can you even imagine what I must look like under there?"

"Why do you think I am still so hard?" Max smirked.

"You're insatiable," she grinned.

"Where you are concerned?" he kissed her. "Always."

There was another large crowd of people waiting when the limo started to pull up. Liz thought that it was the paparazzi again, until she realized they were all standing in a line. As though they were patiently waiting to gain entrance to somewhere very popular. The limousine pulled up in front of the doors. A large set man in a suit opened the door for them and offered his hand to Liz. But Max moved across and climbed out first. He then turned to help Liz out, allowing her to move in such a way as to not expose her secret to the gathered masses. Linking her arm into his, Max handed the man two tickets and moved toward he door.


Inside, the nightclub was filled to capacity. Holding tightly to Max, Liz followed him through the crowds toward a brightly lit bar on one side.

"You will have a drink?" he leaned close to her ear but he still had to shout.

"One of those looks good," she pointed to a frosted bottle with red writing.

Max turned to the bar and leaned over, speaking loudly to the young lady who was serving him. Liz was glad that she did not have to work in an establishment like this. Max returned with two identical bottles and smiled, handing her one.

"Salute!" he grinned, clinking his bottle to hers.

"Salute!" she smiled at him.

The liquid burned in her mouth.

"Oh my god!" she bellowed. "What is this?"

"It is flavored vodka," he laughed at her reaction. "It is Swedish. You like it, no?"

It did indeed taste nice, now that she had got used to the fiery sensation.

"Yeah," she nodded, taking another sip. "It kind of grows on you."


With their drinks in hand, they made their way to a corner furthest from the loudspeakers through which pumped a loud array of modern dance music. In the middle, illuminated by flashing, swirling and spinning lights, men and women of all shapes and sizes, many wearing clothing that made Liz look conservative, were writhing in time to the music. And Max had been right. In such a melting pot of aroma's, there was no way that anyone could have detected that they had recently made love. All around them, people were dancing.

"Do you come here often?" Liz reached up to shout into Max's ear.

"Liz," he laughed. "That is not a good line to be using to pick me up, ah?"

She slapped his arm.

"No," he shook his head. "I have not been here before. But I have been to a dance arranged by Gilbert before. And he arranged this one also so..."

Liz just shook her head. A club was a club, wasn't?


Leaning against a pillar, Liz pressed her back to Max as they both sipped their drinks and watched the dancing in front of them. The heavy beat of the music pounded through her body and Liz started to sway and twist to the rhythm. Every now and then, one of the many dancers would sway a little too far and brush up against her. She didn't mind though. Everyone seemed to be on such a high induced by the atmosphere inside the club. All too soon, though, she felt something that had she thought about it, she would have expected. Max was erect and she was rubbing her ass against it. Max's hands brushed against her hips, lightly holding her in place, his fingers dancing against her in time to the music.

The feeling was incredible. Her nipples hardened and she felt a slow tingling warmth start to grow again as she was herself reacting to him reacting to her. She turned to face him, amazed to see his eyes looking at her with a dark lust burning. She melted as she felt her own desire flare up. Max took her bottle from her hands and placed both drinks on a small ledge. He pushed away from the wall and after a few steps, the writhing dancers swallowed them up.

They danced together, pressing their needy bodies against one another, moving up and down in what could only be described as simulated sex. He was definitely a good dancer, she decided. A very dirty dancer. The feeling was electric. It was as though they were making love in a public room. And then the music changed. A slow number came on and the lights dimmed.

Max's arms slid around her waist and she rested her arms lightly upon his shoulders. Their pelvises connected and they moved together, rhythmically. Feeling his hardness pressing against her, she rocked herself against him. But Max was no passive participant. His own hips were rocking, pressing himself against her. Without the protection of her panties, she could feel herself opening up. She squealed when she felt his hands dipping from her hips and against her backside.

Liz could feel his fingers dancing against the firm globes of her flesh. It wasn't until those fingers brushed against naked skin that she realized what he was doing. With a startled cry, she looked around to see if she was now the center of attention. No one seemed to notice. Everyone was preoccupied with their own partners. Liz knew that the lower part of her cheeks would be visible, but only from below. And with all the people pressing close to them, no one had a direct line of sight at her. She relaxed a little. She could feel herself growing more wet as she started to wonder just how far Max was going to take her tonight. Surely, he would not do anything more than this?

Max kissed her neck, his lips sliding down the sensitive skin beneath her ear. Those points again. She shivered when he continued down to her collarbone.

"Mmmm," he smiled. "You taste good."

"Oh, Max," Liz could only imagine his tongue teasing her.

Her whole body was a mass of nerve endings awaiting his next touch.


One of Max's hands slipped lower. Feeling his fingers teasing the valley between her buttocks, Liz couldn't help the automatic parting of her thighs. She gave a soft moan as his fingers moved past her rosebud but then they started to slip in between her nectar laden lips. She rolled her pelvis, trying to make her burning clitoris available to him. Max slid his fingers back and forth through her silky fold until Liz started trying to impale herself, her warm cavern desperate to feel him inside. When he finally slipped two finger into her, she moaned out loud, her voice drowned by the music. To reciprocate, Liz moved her own hand between them and soon worked her way inside his boxers, rubbing him in time to his own fingers thrusting.

How long they stood like this, bringing one another to the brink of an orgasm, she couldn't say. All she knew was that she wanted Max to take her home and fuck her. But while his lips continued to dance up and down her stretched neck, Liz came. Surrounded by hundreds of other dancers, and no one knew a thing about it.

She couldn't help feeling a little freaked by the whole scene, but the sheer exhibitionism of their act turned her on, more than she could ever remember. The orgasm he had just given her wasn't enough. Holding her heaving body against him, her nimble fingers freed his own raging erection, quickly swallowing it beneath her dress. She held it to herself and rising on tiptoes, grateful for her high heels, she gave out a hiss of pure pleasure as she felt him fill her up. Who was she, she wondered?

"Mon dieu, Liz," he growled. "Si sauvage!"

Her task was complete. She was in no state to do anything, now that she was impaled upon Max's burning erection. She was, after all, shorter than him, even in her heels. After quickly checking to make sure she had not been spotted performing her act of sheer depravity, she buried herself into Max's chest and groaned with pleasure.

Max took control. Holding her firm backside, he no longer moved from side to side with the music. Instead, he rolled his hips, thrusting himself into her warm, inviting depths. Liz was burning up and she was whimpering into his chest. He wanted to speed up, but knew that to do so would only draw attention to themselves. So in and out he moved. Always in time to the music.

Liz was moaning incoherently. She was being driven crazy by Max's slow, but still delicious movements. She wanted, no, needed it faster, harder. She thanked all of the gods she had ever heard about when the song changed and missing barely a beat, burst into a fast and lively piece. She threw herself upwards, locking her thighs around Max. She locked her mouth to his and while everyone was throwing themselves around energetically, Max was pounding into Liz just how she wanted it. Fast and hard. Her scream of ecstasy as her orgasms exploded around her was lost in the whistles of the dancers, the pound of the bass and loud wailing of the high pitched music.


If Liz had been worried about her condition before, then she was in real trouble now. As they worked their way through the crowds to the exit, she could feel the moisture rolling down her inner thighs. Max had already informed her that the Limo would have been parked a few blocks away

"I guess," she smiled as they stepped out into the night, praying that no one would pay her any attention, "that I finally know what real dirty dancing is."

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Parisienne Walkways - Part 12

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Hi everyone,

Thank you all so very much for reading my story, and an even bigger thank you for taking the time to post me some feedback.

It might amuse you to know that I was so worried about posting this story that I discussed the possibility of posting under a None de plume with J9. But I am glad that I didn't. :) And it's so great to see so many people who normally don;t leave me any feedback. :) I'm glad that I pushed the boat out and wrote this story, now, and I am especially glad that I posted under my own name. :):)

Also, I am plaes to announce that "Parisienne Walkways" has won an award. It won "A Roswellian Fantasies All Around Best Dreamer Recommendation of the Season Award"

Thank you if you took the time to vote for it. Which reminds me. If you have not already done so, how about popping over to Memories and voting for your favorit stories. :)

BehrObsession - Hope you are having/have had a great time. Did my story give you any ideas? :wink:

Maxssoulmate - I think Liz had other things on her mind other than being embarassed. :wink:

AJK001 - Well... just sit back and enjoy the good times. Worry about the bad when we get there. :wink:

lazza - But what a way to go! :wink: Yes, it sure seems that Max has turned Liz into a teeny bit of an exhibitionist. LOL

Ellie - Not so much as come out of her shell as smashed it to smitherines. :lol:

anonymousarfan - I'm sure there are a few more 'good time' chapters left in me, :wink:

xsuper_novax - I'd like to show them talking more... but then I would have to divulge inofrmation I'm not ready to have divulged yet. :) But I'm glad that I AM portraying a balance.

txndreamer06 - Thank you :)

roswellluver - I'm sure they can. :) Unless THATS what happens to...

frenchkiss70 - They sure do. Well... you will be pleased to know... you learn a little bit more about Max this evening. :wink:

vampyrax - Well... I'm sure Max had something to do with it too. :wink:

Erina - As it seems to be that in the Prologue, it was Liz who was angry at Max, I think it was something different than Max finding out she was married.

SmileeUK - Well... as broken hearted as this will leave you, I fear the story WILL end one day. But not for a while yet, so ... :)

Emz80m - Thank you :)

Gater101 - 6 Nations! Woo Hoo! Swing Low, sweet chariot! :wink: Glad you enjoyed that. How well was that chapter timed? :wink:

Behrsgirl1230 - :) Glad you enjoyed it. :)

salcombe_girl - Thank you :)

begonia9508 - LOL - There's a thought. I'll get Max to pop into a book store and buy a copy. :wink:

martine - It's good that I can accurately depict somewhere that makes people really see it. 'Caurse, it helps that I have actually been there myself. I am really enjoying writing this story. :ooops: :wink:

Earth2Mama - LOL - Another product endorsement I should look into. :D

omwf - Thank you. :)

clueless - Thank you :)

MamaDee52 - It's okay. They are eating planty of cake to keep their strength up. :wink: And now we know Max plays Rugby, we know he's fit enough to cope. LOL You crack me up, Dee. :wink: Thanks you. :)

Roswell 10/2/00 - Glad to hear it. :) Although, it makes me think that I could have sent Max and Liz on a European jaunt. Lets see... there's the Castle at Heidleburg, the bridge over the Lake in Lucerne... the battlements above Salzburg... the list could go on. :wink: LOTS of memory enhancements. :wink: I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story. :) BTW - I sent it back. Let me know if you didn't get it, okay? (I'm having problems with my PC and PMs. Sometimes they work, sometimes they don't. Grrrr)

VeronicaB - As much fun as Liz is having, as so different she is behaving, do you think that Kyle would ever have seen that side to her? Max gives her the confidence to try these things. :) Glad you are enjoying it.

Leigh - Need a guide for Paris? Good rates. :wink: LOL I'm sure you will have a blast! It's funny you mention Max and Liz in the Riviera. I nearly sent them there. :wink:

cherie - Hmmm... I wonder how well known they really are. I wonder if I should tell you yet?

behrlyliz - Thank you :)



Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!


Part 12 - On Top Of The World


Sunday - July 10th



"Hold still or I'll end up cutting you," Liz giggled at Max's antics.

He was sitting on the bench in the large shower stall, while Liz sat on his thighs, facing him, shaving his face. Max's erection was bobbing up and down so that it came into frequent contact with her sex.

"You would still love me anyway, huh?" Max winked at her.

"Who says I love you?" she smirked.

"You did, mon petit chat sauvage," Max grinned. "Last night. I am hearing you."

"Oh, yeah," she nodded with a twinkle in her eye. "Well... I was a little distracted. I would have said anything."

"And what was it that was so distracting you?" he asked, feigning innocence.

"It was no big deal," she laughed, leaning forward and kissing him on his nose. "Hey, you know what? I could shave you, here." She reached down and tweaked his curly hair.

"Maybe when you are more experienced with the razor," Max chuckled. "And when I do not have to share a changing room full of my team mates. Then I might be tempted."

"Fair's fair, Max," her eyes twinkled. "Maybe I won't let you shave me down there anymore. I might let it start to grow back."

"This is fair," Max smirked. "But remember that I do not want to have my face scratched, no?"

"What do you mean?" she looked puzzled.

"I mean," he laughed as he leaned forward and licked Liz's neck from her collar bone to her ear.

Liz's eyes widened with understanding.

"Here you go," she handed him the gel and the razor. "Your turn."


They traded places. Liz sat on the edge of the bench with her thighs spread wide while Max kneeled between them. Carefully, yet with firm and confident strokes, Max ran the razor blade smoothly over Liz's pubic mound, leaving nothing behind. When he finished, his fingers danced lightly over the silky soft skin, making sure that he had not missed anything. His fingers slipped insider her, easily parting her soaking lips.

"You didn't shave me 'inside', Max," she groaned with pleasure. "Hair doesn't grow there, you know."

"It is better to be safe that sorry, n'est pas?" he grinned.

Liz leaned forward, her hands pressing against Max's shoulders. He moved with her as she continued to push him backwards. He sat down, his legs stretched outward but still Liz continued until he was laying the full length of the stall and she was on her hands and knees above him. She prowled until her face was directly above his. She dipped her lips to his, kissing him softly and sensuously while the warm water cascaded down on them. While the kiss deepened, Liz pressed her naked breasts to his chest. Her swollen lips pressed down against his hard flesh. She started to slide her body up and down his. Her hard nipples burned where they caressed his firm torso. Her pierced navel scratched him. Her wet lips coated him with her secretions. Liz reached between their bodies and she took his manhood in her hand. She guided him back and up into her, allowing him to fill her while she engulfed him in her velvet trap.

Like a human piston engine, Liz continued to slide her body back and forth, maintaining complete contact with Max along her whole length, and rode him to a gentle but still fulfilling climax. All the while, they never once stopped kissing.

"Ah, ma belle Elizabeth," Max murmured. "Tu es l'amour de ma vie!"


* * *


"This is Le Marché aux Oiseaux," Max waved his hand at the market which was now a mass of cages rather than flower stalls. "The market of the birds."

After they had shared lunch and wandered around some more streets close to the hotel, Max took Liz back to the Ile de la Cité, to where the Flower Market had been. On tables, on the sides of open vans, on the backs of large trucks, and even on the walls and floor, cages of all shapes and sizes held birds from around the world.

"Budgerigars," Liz nodded at the green, yellow and blue birds. "Parrots, Toucans, Macaws... I've never seen so many birds all in one place. Aren't they beautiful, Max?"

"Yes, they are," Max smiled, his eyes burning into her. "And you deserve to be surrounded by such beauty because you are beautiful too."

She smiled at him.

"Oh, look!" she scurried toward a stand that had a cage with a different types of animal. "German Shepherd puppies. Aren't they adorable? But I thought you said this was a bird market."

"It is not just birds that can be bought here," Max waved. He pointed to a glass case that held a large snake. "Animals and the reptiles, too."

"Kyle's here?" she looked up and grinned.

"Who?" Max frowned.

"Sorry. It's a joke. Not very funny. Oh, look at that! Isn't he just adorable?"

Liz had spotted another dog. Still a puppy, it was a huge ball of white fur.

"Ah, yes," Max grinned. "This is a mountain dog from the Pyrenees. You have heard the story, Belle and Sebastian?"

A piece of music played in Max's pocket. Frowning, he pulled out his cell phone.

"Merde!" he shook his head as he read a text message. "Liz, I am so sorry." His eyes filled with disappointment. "I have been summoned. We are having some kind of family crisis."

"Oh," Liz nodded in understanding. "So... you have to go home?"

"I do. But I should not be gone for too long. We will have dinner tonight. I will come to our room at eight o'clock, bien?"

"I look forward to it," she nodded. "I should probably call home in any case. And Maria, too. I think I better talk to her again without someone distracting me."

Max gave her an easy smile, and pulled her into an embrace. He kissed her soundly.

"Come," he smiled. "I will take you back to the hotel."


* * *


One thing that Max had grown accustomed to was Liz's presence at his side. It felt strange to be moving through the Metro without her hand in his. It felt even more strange to hurry past famous landmarks and not stop to point them out to the fascinated and fascinating young woman. With time pressing, Max ran through the streets of Montmartre and through La Place du Tertre. Instead of using the roads, he used the narrow stairways that ran between the houses. He hurried through the doorway of the large building that had been converted into flats, and up the six flights of stairs that ran around the inner courtyard. At the top of the steps, he fumbled for his key and entered his flat.

"Well, well, well," another young man spoke from a table in the corner of the room. He was drinking coffee and looking over a newspaper. His oversized shirt was splattered with paint and a half-finished painting sat on an easel nearby. "You look a lot like my friend, Max Evans. Only I haven't seen him in ages so I can't be sure."

"Why? Have you missed me?" Max smirked. All trace of his accent vanished.

"Not particularly," Michael Guerin, Max's best friend shrugged. "What can I say? I met my soul mate, and I just had to paint her."

"Is that what they call it these days?" Max laughed. "Paint?"

"I painted her first," he leered. "And then I, uh..."

"TMI, my friend," Max smirked. "So how many soul mates is that you've painted?"

"Who's counting?" Michael shrugged and took a gulp of coffee. "So you spent this past week with the 'rents? Nicole has a friend, if you're interested."

"Uhm, no thanks," Max started to grin.

"Listen, Max. I'm getting worried about you," Michael's eyebrows knitted together. "You do know the rumor that's going around campus, right? Not that I care if you are... it's just..."

"Well," Max gave a goofy smile. "You can take it from me. That particular rumor is definitely false."

"Share, Maxwell," his friend narrowed his eyes.

"I met this girl last week," Max's eyes were burning bright. "Saturday, in fact. A tourist, from New Mexico. We went out on a date that night. We've been out on a few more dates since then. And uh... I've sort of moved in with her."

"Is she pretty?"

"She's gorgeous."

"Are you fucking her?"

"Michael!"

"Thought not," shook his head.

"We're making love, actually." Again he smiled. "A lot."

"Okay," Michael peered at him. "Now I know you're not really Max Evans. You're some evil clone or something, right? Because the Max Evans I know, the Max Evans who falls apart and stutters and stammers any time a pretty girl so much as remotely catches his eye... 'that' Max Evans does not ask a girl on a date. Not until he's known her like, forever. That Max Evans takes seven months of watching from a distance, of plucking up the courage to say hi to her and stammering when he does, and then forgets the reason he was talking to her in the first place because he's suddenly confused when the girl has been giving him the signal from the day they met."

"So I have confidence issues," Max grumbled.

"Confidence issues?" Michael snapped. "You are the only person I know who took seven months to ask Haley Norris out, and we're talking about the girl who slept with almost every guy in class, and openly admitted she wanted to jump your bones. Seven months to date a sure thing? That's a confidence issue, all right."

"So I don't sleep around. Sue me. And for the record... I never... did it... with Haley."

"So you really asked a girl out after meeting her on the same day?" Michael widened his eyes and nodded. "And not only have you moved in with her, you're fucking like bunnies? Color me impressed. So how did you beat your fear?"

"I was at Gaston's. Last Saturday. Having lunch. And this girl arrived. Michael, she was... she was gorgeous. My heart started pounding, and my stomach went all flip floppy..."

"You have such a way with words," Michael snorted.

"Anyway," Max glared at the interruption. "This girl was really upset. She was crying her heart out. It was heartbreaking. She was so lovely, so beautiful but she was so sad about something. I kind of fell in love with her, right there and then."

Max ignored Michael's roll of his eyes.

"I was kind of watching her, yeah, like I do, knowing I would never have the courage to speak to her. So anyway, she was struggling to read the menu, and she even ordered a café. Not a grande."

"Yech," Michael grimaced.

"She didn't like it either," Max smirked. "But it was like the last straw or something, because that was when she broke into tears. So she pulled out her cell phone and calls her friend, wanting to go home 'cause she can't understand anything. I was going to offer her my help, well, I wanted to, if I could have plucked up the courage. But then she calms down and she tells her friend that she's fed up with dating American boys. So I kind of put on my French accent," Max reverted to his accent, "and I offered to help her order her lunch, no? And when we are talking, I offer to her to be the guide and to show her la belle ville de Paris."

"And she bought that horse shit?"

"She did," Max nodded sadly. "But don't you see? With that accent, it was like I was someone else, only I was still me. I treated her like I treat Isabel, and Mom, only I was confident and I flirted with her. A little. A lot, actually."

"Kind of like being an actor, then," Michael nodded. "Hiding behind a persona."

"Yeah, kinda," Max sighed. Then his face fell. "Oh, god. She's going to hate me when she finds out that I'm really just an American boy after all."

"You're hardly a boy, Max," Michael sighed. "You're twenty one years old and a Major in Law at Harvard University. Did I mention the minor in Political Science? And you are half French, so it's not completely a lie."

"So what do I do?" Max looked defeated. "If I tell her, she'll hate me. If I don't tell her, I'll hate me."

"You said she's here on holiday?"

"Yeah," Max nodded collapsing into a seat.

"Then, carry on as you are, Max. Give her a wonderful time. Treat her like I know you like to treat people and make her feel like she's the most precious thing in your life. Then, when she goes home, she will have all these memories of an amazing Frenchman who showed her Paris. In years to come, she'll have some amazing stories to tell her friends and her grandchildren. What's the harm?"

"The harm is, Michael..." He sat forward on the edge of the bed and stared at the floor. "I think I've fallen in love with her. Truly... deeply... hopelessly." He looked up. "I don't want to let her go."


* * *

Humming to herself, Liz walked through the doors of the hotel and made her way to the elevators, ignoring the glances she knew that the men staying and working in the hotel were casting. Her head was held high and she moved with confidence.

"You can look all you want," she smirked. "But you can't touch."

She was missing Max. Even though she felt so wonderful, she couldn't help miss his tremendous presence. But she was, in a way, glad that he had urgent family business to attend. This gave her the chance to return Maria's call as well as placing one to her Mom and Dad. A call she should make without him nearby if only because she would die if Max tried to pull the same stunt he had pulled while she was on the phone to Maria, if her Mom or Dad was on the other end.

"They should just be waking up in Roswell, she glanced at the clock, grateful for the fact that her parents were early risers.

Maria was the easiest call.

"I'm really missing you babe," Maria pouted down the line.

"I'm missing you too, Maria," Liz nodded. "But you know, I'll be home soon."

"You certainly sound more normal," Maria chuckled. "I mean, what had gotten into you?"

"Oh, well," Liz blushed. "You know. It's the atmosphere here."

"You know, maybe we could make a trip over there for spring break or something."

Liz broke into a huge smile. Maybe Max would be here.

"So how's things back in Roswell?"

"Boring," Maria shrugged. "But then, I've been kind of busy. I've finished my compositions, and I really think I've made it, Liz."

"Yeah," Liz smiled a huge smile. "Maria, that's so great!"

"So when you come back, you and me... we can fly up to Boston and start our search for digs. You and me in Cambridge together. Inseparable. Those Harvard seniors aren't going to know what hit them."

Maria never once mentioned Kyle, or Pam and Liz never once asked. They kept the conversation light, and fun. Her parents, however, would be a different matter.


* * *


"Hi Dad," she smiled when her father answered with a gruff 'Hello?'

"Lizzie?" he exclaimed, his voice filled with excitement. "Oh my god, Lizzie! Nancy! It's Liz! Hang on Liz. Let me put you on speakerphone so both your Mom and I can talk."

"Hi baby!" her mother's soft voice called out. It was filled with concern, as thought she were still walking on eggshells. "How are you, sweetheart?"

"I'm fine," she giggled, unable to hide her huge smile. "I'm really good."

"Glad to hear it," Jeff seemed to relax at the sound of Liz's happiness. "We were kind of worried about how you would cope... you know..."

"Well, I was really upset on the first day, but since then, I've been having such a wonderful time."

"Are you getting out and about?" her mother asked.

"Are you seeing the real Paris?" her father added.

"Yes, and yes," Liz giggled. "I've seen so much of the place." And it's seen so much of me, she smirked. "I've been on a cruise along the Seine, I saw the cathedral... I've eaten in some fancy restaurants. Oh, and Mom. The cakes over here are to die for."

"What about friends, honey?" Nancy inquired. "Have you made any friends? You're not too lonely, are you?"

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "Don't worry about me. 'Kay? I really have been having such a great time. I am so not looking forward to coming home."

"Gee, thanks," her father grinned.

"Dad," Liz wheedled. "You know what I mean."

"Yeah," Jeff chuckled. "But it will be good to have you home again."

"Only until Maria and I head up to Boston," Liz reminded her.

"We'll talk about what you're going to do, when you get home," Jeff's voice turned serious. "You know, about you and Kyle. 'Cause I hear they are both still going."

"I can tell you this," Liz sighed. "There is no me and Kyle. Not anymore, okay? Neither will there ever be. That part of my life is so over. I'm sorry if you don't like that but I could never, ever go back to a kind of life that makes me just a... No. Can you start looking into what we need to do to end that so called marriage?"

"Of course, honey," Nancy was nodding. "But from what I've been hearing, I think that the Valenti's will contest it. Well... Kyle will. I think he wants to stay married to you."

"Of course he does," Liz rolled her eyes. "Kyle's losing all my money he was hoping to blow on parties and stuff. But if he won't agree to it, tell him I'll stay married in name only and then when he's a mega star earning big bucks, I'll divorce him for half his fortune. That should scare him off."


* * *


"So what are you doing here then?" Michael eased off the teasing. "Shouldn't you be with this... girl."

"Liz," Max nodded. "Her name's Liz Parker. She's from Roswell. She's over here on holiday. And yeah, I should be. But I got the 'Dad' summons."

"Shit!" Michael gasped with widened eyes. "What does he want?"

"Until I get there, I won't know," Max smirked. "I only dropped by to pick up my ID," Max held up his card. "Listen... I'd like you to meet her. Can I trust you not to spill the beans?"

"Sure," Michael nodded. "I want to meet the girl who finally brought Max Evans out of his shell. I mean, come on. I've never seen you with a girl, so I want to see this with my own two eyes. I can be home tomorrow night. I'll invite Nicole and I'll get some food delivered in. When?"

"Tomorrow night? Eight?"

"Sounds okay by me. I'll text you if there are any changes."

"Ditto."


* * *


Twenty minutes later, Max was once again showing his ID to the armed guards outside of the ornate looking building. As before, he made his way to the side entrance and used his security number to enter the building.

"Bonjour, Maman," he crossed the room to give her a kiss on her cheek.

"Bonjour, Max," his mother smiled. "Comment ça va?

"I am well, mother, thank you," he grinned. "Any idea what's up with the boss?"

"Well," she grinned at his remark. "I do know that something made him angry this morning. And I also know that we are expecting guests, soon. I suspect that the latter is why he has asked you to drop by."

"Asked?" Max raised an eyebrow. "You mean summoned. I hardly think 'Get you butt over here' is a polite request, do you? Who's coming over?"

"The Hardings," she smiled.

Max's face went white.

"They're arriving on Tuesday, on their way home from Berlin. I thought it would be nice for you to spend some time with Tess. You know, get to know her better."

"Like this time's going to be any different to the last?" Max shook his head.

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"You keep doing this, Mom. Every year, you force me to spend time with her. And every time I detest her more. I swear, Mom. I'll end up killing her one day."

"Well, you're father and I expect you..."

"Sorry," Max interrupted with a shake of his head. "Can't. I've made plans."

"Then unmake them, Maxwell," she gave him a stern look. "Cancel them. I'm sure that Li..."

"Mom, you know I love you, right? But I'm twenty one years old and I have been practically living on my own since you sent me to boarding school in Washington when I was sixteen. You can't order me around like I'm your servant. Yes, I'm busy with Liz. Someone I actually enjoy spending time with."

"We didn't send you to boarding school," his mother defended. "We sent you to live with the Hardings. You decided on boarding school six months later."

"Well, you'd have chosen it too, if...[]" Max trailed off.

"If what?" Diane looked at him.

"Forget it, Mom," Max waved it away.

"Max," his mother tried. "We only want what's best for..."

"Then trust me to know what that is," Max took his mother's hand in his. "Tess Harding is not best for me. Not now, not ever. Liz may not be in my future but she is in my present. I intend to enjoy every day that I can with her. Now. I better go and see Dad. Does he know about Liz?"

"No," Diane shook her head. "I never got around to telling him. You know how much he wants... hopes..."

"Not going to happen," Max shook his head. "Not even if I had never met Liz."


* * *


Max stared at the sign on his father's office door before he knocked firmly. Such a grand title for a father.

"Enter!" his father called from inside the room.

Taking a breath to steady his nerves, he opened the door and stepped inside.

"Maxwell," he looked up and then returned to his paperwork. "How are you enjoying your holiday?"

"I'm having a great time, actually," Max smiled, thinking of Liz.

"I know you are," Philip looked back up with a hard look in his eyes. "I've seen."

Philip tossed a small stack of photographs enlargements across the desk. Max walked up and looked at them. His heart missed a beat. Several beats, actually. Although the pictures were too blurred by the falling rain to make out any identifiable features of the young couple who were still some distance away, the picture was unmistakably of him with Liz in the Jardin du Luxembourge. She was on her knees in front of him, and it was obvious what was going on. Max didn't know what to say.

"The photographer who took them came to me and asked how the Ambassador of the United States of America felt about his delivery staff cavorting with young American girls in public parks. Fortunately, he owes me a favor so I've quashed the story. God only knows what would have happened if he knew you were my son and not the delivery boy."

Max still remained silent. His mind was spinning. He hoped no one had followed him to the club last night.

"How did he know she was American?" his voice was quiet.

"Does it matter? How stupid can you be, Max? How long will it take someone to work out that you shaved off that damned goatee beard and lost the fake facial jewelry? Someone could have recognized you. And you know who's going to have to take the heat over this? What in the hell were you thinking?"

"I guess I wasn't," Max shrugged. "I was just... caught up in the moment."

"The Hardings are coming, Max. Do you have any idea how embarrassing it would be if photos of you and this tart were plastered all across Europe? Do you have any idea what Ed might say to me? Have you even considered what Tess might think?

"She's not a tart," Max's voice was soft but dangerous. "And I'll thank you not to refer to her as one."

"Not a tart?" he growled. "What kind of girl pulls this kind of shit? In public?"

"That," Max waved his hand, "was entirely my fault. She pulled that kind of... stunt because of me. She'd never done anything like that before in her life. She's... she's probably the nicest, most honest caring girl I've ever met."

"Girl?" Philip's face lost its color. "Tell me you mean that figuratively, Max."

"Relax," he rolled his eyes. "She's eighteen."

"No matter," Philip shook his head. "It's time to end your little game with her. You've got what you wanted from her, now it's time to face the future."

"Excuse me?" Max narrowed his eyes. "What's that supposed to mean. I still have another two years at Harvard. I have plenty of time to decide what 'I' want to do with my life."

"Don't be so naïve," Philip snapped. "Do you really think that the son of the American Ambassador to Paris has a say in his future?"

"Funny as it may seem... yes."

"As you are probably aware, the Harding's will be in town," Philip watched as Max picked up the photos and started to feed them through the shredder. "This is a good opportunity to set the wheels in motion. Ed has good contacts. Put yourself in his hands and you might one day be sitting in the White House. And you would be doing your parents a favor, too." He stood and looked out through the window at the Eiffel Tower in the distance. "You know that they are looking into making sweeping changes in the Embassies over here in Europe. Ed is leading the team that's making the report. It's time you asked Tess to marry you."

"Who are you," Max yelled, unable to contain his fury. "My father or my pimp?"

"You will speak to me with the respect I deserve, young man," his father hissed. "I did not become the Ambassador to France for nothing, you know."

"Two things, 'Dad'," Max sneered. "Respect is earned, not deserved. You taught me that one, remember? And yes, I am a young man. I am twenty one years young and even though my Mom is French, I am a citizen of the United States of America. Home of the free. And I believe that as a free citizen, I can make my own decisions about who I see, who I don't see, who I marry, who I won't marry and where I will work." Max turned to face his father. "Or are you saying that some are more free than others? Now, unless you have something constructive to say, something that doesn't involve the Hardings, I have an important date tonight, with a young woman I actually care about."

"I'll cut you off," his father glared. "Don't think I don't know how much it costs to keep you at Harvard. You'll soon find out just how 'free' things are. What do you say to that, huh?"

Max thought about his response before he spoke in a light, easy manner.

"I have a full scholarship," he shrugged. "I'm not afraid of hard work. I could manage, if I had to. But you forgot that Grand-père D'Aurlieau left me something in his will last year. You now what? I don't need your money."


* * *


Max's thoughts were in turmoil as he rode the Metro back to Liz's hotel. First and foremost was the fact that he could no longer take chances with Liz's reputation. If a photographer was following him, then he could not afford to let him take a photo of them in any situation that might cause Liz or her family any embarrassment. He should really prevent any to his own family, too, but seeing as they were politicians, they expected to be under public scrutiny. Liz was just a normal young woman who just happened to fall into a holiday romance with a liar.

There was also the fact that his father was serious when he said that he wanted Max to propose to Tess. Max knew that his father was not above manipulating situations to get what he wanted. Many a political opponent had been lured into some compromising position that had removed him from whatever competition he posed toward his father. Max wondered what stunt his father might pull to ensure that he spent 'quality' time with Tess. Drastic times called for drastic measures, he decided and as Max walked from the Metro station to the hotel, he made a couple of telephone calls.


* * *


"Are you okay?" Liz looked at him from the seat beside him as they drove through the Parisienne streets in the taxi Max had flagged down outside the hotel.

"Of course," he smiled at her, pulling her closer to him. "Porquoi?"

"You just seem... I don't know," she gave a soft shrug. "Off. Have I done..."

"No, no, no, no," Max shook his head, his eyes locked onto hers. "Certainement pas! This is nothing to do with you. It is mon pere. He is being... how you say, overbearing?"

"Probably because he loves you, Max," she smiled and reached a hand out to stroke his face. "Parents always want what's best for their kids."

"This I know," Max nodded. "And do your parents always want what's best for you even when they do not know what that is?"

"No," she shook her head. "My parent's are great, actually. Once they know how I really feel, they back me up one hundred per cent."

"I am glad," he smiled. "And I wish that my parents were more like yours. But because they are in politics... Everything is about making the right... connections. But this I know. I will take our connection over any my parents can come up with."

"Really?" Liz's heart was in her eyes.

"Really," he reached down and placed a tender kiss on her lips. "Regarde! Nous sommes ici."

'Ici' happened to be La Avenue Gustave Eiffel, right at the base of the famous tower.

"Wow!" Liz exclaimed as she stood next to the taxi, staring up into the evening twilight sky at the rising spire of iron, already illuminated with the golden glow from thousands of light bulbs.

Max exchanged a grin with the taxi driver while he paid the fare.

"Are we going up, Max?" Liz turned to look at him, her eyes sparkling.

"That we are, ma cherie," he smiled. "And not only are we going up, we shall be dining up there, too."

"Really?"

"Really," he smiled, gently pushing her mouth closed.


When they entered the elevator, Max took Liz and stood right at the back, nestled in the corner. From where they stood, they could see everyone's backs as they all turned to face the door. Max's hand rested on the small of her back, idly stroking it. His gaze fell upon her again, moving from her long, deep brown locks, to her peach colored dress with the pleated skirt, to her bare thighs, knees and calves. His eyes lingered over the curve of her calf before moving on to her small feet enclosed in a pair of peach, high-heeled sandals. He knew that she wore no bra this evening, and she wore only a tiny thong beneath her dress. The thought that only he knew the secrets her dress concealed pleased him. The thought that he alone, of all the men in the world, had shared her body made him feel... special.

"Tu es très belle," Max murmured in her ear. "Très sexy."

"You don't look so bad, yourself," she looked up smiling, brushing an imaginary spec of dust from the lapel of his jacket.

His hand slid lower, caressing the gentle swell of her curvaceous buttocks. Pressing his body closer to hers, his hand continued until it touched the back of her naked thigh. She gave a little squeak and jumped at his touch, bringing a smile to his face. With slow, teasing circles, he started to crawl up her thigh.

"Max!" her complaint was soft and low, and not too determined.

I shouldn't be doing this, Max berated himself. But he couldn't help it.

His hand reached higher until he felt the crease formed where her thigh met her beautiful backside.

"Max," Liz tried again. "What are you doing?"

It was far too bright in this elevator.

"Trying to see if you are aroused, ma petite fleur."

"Trust me," she was pressing herself against his hand. "I am."

"I want to feel it," Max's hot breath teased her ear.

"No!" she groaned, slightly parting her legs to grant him access.


She turned her body slightly, moving her face to meet his own hot gaze. Her liquid chocolate eyes challenged his molten amber ones. Her dilated pupils and her full lower lips gave evidence that she was indeed aroused and he responded with a further tightening of his groin. It was getting warm in there.

The elevator jolted to a stop. The doors slid open and the people started to get out. Liz held Max's gaze, daring him to continue. To all outward appearances, the couple were standing close together, holding on to one another. No one could see that Max's fingers were stroking between her legs, teasing her tiny rosebud. When the new passengers started to get onto the lift, the spell broke between them and smirking, Max led Liz out and onto the first level observation deck of the tower. Outside, in the cool evening air, and amid the low light conditions, only the two of them knew that Max continued to stroke her bare buttocks as they spoke softly, admiring the iron arches and whorls of the Eiffel Tower as they made their way to an unoccupied corner of the observation deck.


"Are you cold?" he had noticed her shiver.

"No," she shook her head. "Well, just a little. It's more windy up here than I thought."

"I should have considered this," Max berated himself. "Here, allow me."

Max slipped off his jacket and placed it over Liz's shoulders.

"Now you'll be cold," she pouted.

"Mais non," he shook his head. "Trust me when I say that I am overheating, no?"

"Serves you right," Liz giggled as she turned to look out across Paris, losing herself in the grassy park below, now bathed in shadows..

Max stepped behind her, wrapping his arms around her, holding her across her tummy. He toyed with the small pin that now adorned her navel. With his chin, he moved the dark curtain of hair so that he could nuzzle against her smooth neck.

"I thought the view from our room was good, Max," Liz enthused, leaning into Max. "But this is just..."

"Breathtaking," Max sighed, placing little butterfly kisses to her warm skin just beneath her ear.

"Yeah," she nodded as she aimed the camera at a part of the view.

"Max?" Liz turned in his arms to face him. There was a shadow of sadness in her eyes. "Why is this happening? I mean, why was it that fate put us together that day, and let me sample what real love is all about, only to take it away from me again when I have to go home?"

Max looked at her, sadness settling in his own look.

"Le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne connaît point," he sighed heavily, gently pulling Liz's head to his chest "Blaise Pascal wrote that in his Pensées. A man more famous for his mathematics, I think."

"What does it mean?" she leaned back to look up at him. "Something about a heart?"

"The heart has its reasons which reason knows nothing of."


* * *


They traveled up the south elevator to the famous and prestigious Jules Verne Restaurant on the second floor of the tower. The young couple remained silent as they rose, holding one another for comfort. During the fabulous meal, they exchanged only small talk. Afterwards, they wandered around the second floor's observation deck taking in the most wonderful views. Max pulled Liz to him and placed a soft and sensuous kiss on her lips. He leaned back and smiled at her. When she smiled back, he kissed her again. This time, she reached up and threaded her hands behind his head, holding him there. Their kiss was long, passionate and filled with love.

"I'm sorry I've been so quiet," she sighed, holding on to him.

He kissed her again.

"Que mes baisers soient les mots d'amour que je ne te dis pas," he gave her a smile filled with his feelings for her. "Kisses are the unspoken words of love."


* * *


"I'm going to take a shower," she told Max when they returned to their room after the meal.

It had bothered Liz that after her moment of sadness on the tower, their intimacy had been lost. True, Max still kissed her as passionately as ever, and it was clear that he was as aroused around her as she was around him, but she was surprised when he had not tried to seduce her in spite of the near privacy in which they had found themselves. She was determined to show Max that she still wanted him, that she enjoyed their intimate and daring moments.

"Oh?" Max raised his eyebrows in surprised disappointment. "Es-tu fatiguée?"

"Fatigué," Liz considered. "Tired? No," she shook her head. "No, I'm not tired at all. Indulge me, Max," she smiled. "You wait here for a moment, okay? This won't take long."

"Of course," he nodded, stepping out onto the balcony.

Smiling to herself, Liz picked up a chair and sat it in the middle of the room. Smiling at it, she turned to her wardrobe, selected a couple of items of clothing and hurried into her bathroom to take her shower.


"Max," she called from the slightly opened bathroom doorway. "Are you still on the balcony?"

"Not anymore," he replied, coming back into the room. "Is everything okay?"

"Sure," she giggled. "Could you do me a favor?"

"Ask of it," he nodded, "and it shall be done."

"Can you turn on the radio, something fast, you know, rock and roll. And then can you sit down in that chair?"

"Porquoi?" he frowned, looking at the seat she had placed there earlier. "Liz, what is it you are doing?"

"Huh," she huffed. "You said to ask and you would do it."

"Okay," he smiled, holding his hands up in surrender.

A few moments later, Liz heard the current song fade away. This was it, she swallowed. She hoped the next song would be a good one.

"Et maintenant," she heard, "ici sur Radio Paris, c'est 'J Geils Band' jouant 'Centerfold'."

Liz couldn't help giggling. How perfect was that?

Does she walk? Does she talk?
Does she come complete?
My homeroom homeroom angel
Always pulled me from my seat

She danced into the room, wearing one of Max's white shirts, a pair of thigh high stockings and her incredibly high, black stilettos. She had styled her hair a little more wildly than normal, and her make up was a little over the top. She was sure she looked positively... slutty. She knew he was trying to make out what she had on beneath the shirt because he could see the darker outline through it.

She was pure like snowflakes
No one could ever stain
The memory of my angel
Could never cause me pain

As she danced in front of him, she teased him by undoing the buttons of the shirt, not quite letting him see through the opening gap to what she wore underneath. Max's eyes were bulging at the sockets as she danced closer to him. He reached up, leaning out of the seat, but with a firm hand, she pushed him back down, dancing out of his reach. He seemed to get the message and placed his hands on the chair, underneath his backside.

Years go by I'm lookin' through a girly magazine
And there's my homeroom angel on the pages in-between

Still in time to the heavy beat, Liz swayed her way behind him, allowing her long brown hair to cascade onto his face and then pressing her breasts into the back of his head. Unable to resist, he pulled his hands out and reached behind him. When Liz easily danced away, Max let out a deep groan of frustration.

My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centerfold
Angel is the centerfold

Back in front of him again, Liz started to ease the shirt from herself. She revealed the tops of her bare shoulders, then the swell of her breasts and then the top edge of a black brassier. But as the shirt descended, the bra didn't stop. Liz was wearing a sexy black corset. As Liz threw the shirt to one side, she revealed that the stockings were holding themselves up and she was wearing a tiny black thong, Max gasped out loud.

My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centerfold
Angel is the centerfold

Liz danced closer to Max, and then again moved behind him. She repeated her earlier action with her hair and with her breasts, this time pressing them to his shoulders, too. He could feel her hard nipples poking into him.

"You tease," he accused.

"Don't you like it?" her hot breath tickled his ear.

"Too much," Max nodded with another groan.

Slipped me notes under the desk
While I was thinkin' about her dress
I was shy I turned away
Before she caught my eye

She stepped in front of Max and noticing his bulging erection, she straddled his thighs, pressing her core directly against him. When he again reached up to touch her, she slapped his hands away. In time to the music, she swayed her head to that her hair brushed his face while she unfastened his shirt buttons. She alternately kissed his chest and brushed her hair against it. All the while, she was writhing on top of his pulsating rod of iron. She wondered if he could smell the strawberry body spray on her?

I was shakin' in my shoes
Whenever she flashed those baby-blues
Something had a hold on me
When angel passed close by

Reaching behind her back and thrusting her velvet encased breasts into his face, Liz unfastened the corset. Pulling it away, she now started to rub her bare breasts against him. Max was panting. Her hips continued to saw against Max. The girls in the locker room had called this dry humping. Not once had she imagined it would feel this good.

Those soft and fuzzy sweaters
Too magical to touch
To see her in that negligee
Is really just too much

Lifting one leg high in the air, she spun a full one hundred and eighty degree turn, right on top of Max's hardness. She almost made herself come with that little movement, not realizing the friction it would cause. She pressed her back against his bare chest and continued to press her own swollen sex lips against poor Max's aching manhood. This torture cut both ways. Max reached around and captured her nipples between his finger and thumb. He pinched and pulled them. Liz liked it so much that she didn't slap his hand away.

My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centerfold
Angel is the centerfold

Liz quickly moved away, before he brought her to a thundering orgasm. Away from his reach, she turned and faced him. His eyes fell to her thong, now saturated and pulled between her smooth, engorged petals. Her thighs had a wet sheen to them.

It's okay I understand
This ain't no never-never land
I hope that when this issue's gone
I'll see you when your clothes are on

She walked up to him, her feet either side of his legs, bringing his face almost level with her smooth womanhood. As she continued to rock with the music, her hips swaying brought fleeting touches to his face and his lips. She knew the moment to back away when he poked his tongue out and momentarily caught her hard clitoris as it moved past him. Reaching behind herself, she unfastened a clip and her thong fell to the floor.

Take your car, Yes we will
We'll take your car and drive it
We'll take it to a motel room
And take 'em off in private

It was a low guttural moan that Max emitted when Liz sat her naked, wet glory on top of his bursting cock. She was saturated by now, she was aching and she wanted him inside her. She reached down and started to unfasten his pants while she continued to grind herself harder and harder against him. The strange high pitched whining she heard had nothing to do with the radio. Max reached in to help but they ended up getting in one another's way. They were almost fighting one another when they both suddenly paused for a split second, before letting out loud and satisfying cry, both at the same time.

A part of me has just been ripped
The pages from my mind are stripped
Oh no, I can't deny it
Oh yea, I guess I gotta buy it!*

Collapsing into one another, they lay there, trying to recapture their breath.

"I'm sorry, Max," Liz giggled, looking at the dark, wet stain she had left over Max's still erect manhood. She could feel that they were wet through. "I've kind of ruined your pants."

"It's not just you," Max blushed, running his hands through her hair.

"You mean...?" Liz leaned back to look at Max.

"Uh huh," he nodded with a shy smile.

"Oh," she raised her eyebrows. She started to giggle some more. "I don't think I've ever done that to anyone before."

"You could earn yourself a fortune with that dance," Max chuckled. "But I beg of you. Promise me you will not do it for another man as long as you live. Comprendez?"

"As long as you never let another woman do that to you," her eyes twinkled.

"This I can live with. D'accord?"

"Mais oui," Liz nodded. "Now get out of those pants and make love to me before I go find someone else to dance for."


* * *

*Centerfold by J Geils Band.
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Parisienne Walkways - Part 13

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Hi everyone!

A big thank you to everyone who voted over at Memories, and an even bigger thank you to those of you who voted for me! :) I don't write to win awards but it's so nice when I do :)

Parisienne Walkways walked away with Best Adult Fiction.

Of Cabbages and Kings musseled in on the Best Use of Alien Mythology as well as Best Use of a Song or Songs in a Fic as well as a tied runner up spot for Story You Want a Sequel To.
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The Christmas Angel delivered the Runner Up spot for the Best Holiday Fiction.

All in all, five lovely new banners to add to my stories. Thank you everyone! It's your comments and your feedback that keeps me writing stories that you enjoy reading. :)

A very good friend of mine is off to Paris this weekend and she had promised to bring me home some macaroons from Laduree! :) This, of course, is the restaurant where Max... and Liz... with the icecube... :wink:

Okay, so you all know that Max is not only a VIP, he is an American VIP. Yes, he is sort of lying to Liz. He is, after all, half French. But Liz too has her secrets, so why would she split up with Max before she goes home? All will be revealed... eventually. :)

YOu also know that his Father is a bit of an ass. Okay, a lot of an ass. I think he wants to live a haigher ranking political career through Max. And he knows that the right political connections can make or break any path to athe White House.

So I won't bother with comments on Max's nationality or his father. :) It's all out there now. :wink:


Erina - Makes you wonder WHY he chose boarding school over living with the Hardings, huh? :wink:

Maxssoulmate - Well... Max is AT Harvard, and Liz is GOING to Harvard... :wink:

FSU/MSW-94 - Could you please use light colorsfor your fb? My background is black, and I had to select your feedback to read it. :wink: I sure enjoyed dreaming up the striptease. I came up with so many songs to put with it, but as soon as Centerfold popped into my head... I kept thinking of Kyle back in Roswell. :wink:

AJK001 - Thank you :)

Gater101 - Thank you. Glad you enjoy my characterizations for this story, Same... but different. :)

Earth2Mama - Thank you :)

Shadowlynxbehr - I have a great mental picture of you and a spring loaded chair! :wink:

clueless - Thank you :)

Maxsgurl - Thanks for the great banner, :)

behrlyliz - Ah yes... what indeed? Did you really think I would let everything be over for one of my Max and Liz's? :wink:

anonymousarfan - Thank you :)

Ellie - Well... Max is taking steps to make sure his father's 'skullduggery' will come to nothing.

Emz80m - Thank you :) :ooops:

smokie - :) I have a car, myself, you know. It might not be a limo, but... :wink: Okay, just let me know when you need my DeluXXXe service. You can get a discount! Just bring Jack with you! (Does this have anything to do with your... preparations?) Warnings? Awww... where is the fun in that? :wink: Did anyone notice? :wink:

lazza - Heh heh heh - Oh yes. Passion and phony accents don;t work well together! :wink: Good job Liz was too busy herself to notice. :wink:

roswellluver - Thank you :)

Alien614 - Well... we know that pain IS caused, eventually. :)

Thanette - :) I remember that you made that guess. :wink:

vampyrax - Well... Max does seem rather experianced for someone who is normally an unconfident person. Hmmmm.....

MamaDee52 - WoW! That bad, huh? :wink: At least he genuinely loves her. And he doesn;t know that she's Harvard bound. Yet.

begonia9508 - Maybe fate will be kind to them... after it has been unkind to them. But how will they act around one another in Harvard?

BelevnDreamsToo - LOL - Go on. Tell them all how long you knew about Max's true heritage... and why you knew. :wink:

martine - Yes, MAx is as good for Liz as Liz is good for Max. :) They were made for one another. Unfortuneately, it is a misunderstanding that is between them. Do you really think Liz would have rejected Max had he introduced himself as American?

janesdilemma - Wow! You mean you read all 11 chapters in one sitting? And you didn;t spontaneously combust? :wink: Welcome!

Michelle in Yonkers - Well... Liz seems to be adjusting well to the oooh-la-la :wink: And yes, what stories she will have. Hmmm... like the Stoops to Conquer aspect. I wonder how many writers have grabbed that idea now? :wink: Oh, and do you really think Max was virgin? He has already confessed to Liz that she was not his first. But we know he didn't sleep with the slut from school.

frenchkiss70 - Well... I'm sure the secrets will play a bog part, but as they both hold a secret, the secret can be forgiven. So something else must be a catalyst to breaking them up.

VeronicaB - Yes... that couple. Max saw him and Liz. :)

BehrObsession - Yup. The last few days are upon us and the clock is ticking towards disaster.

NorfanofMaxandLiz - In the prologue, Liz seemed to be in that Hell you mentioned. :wink: Liz is going to Harvard. LOL - YOu really are blushing? How do you think I feel? :wink:

cherie - Well... I don't think Max wanted to decieve. He fell in love, but heard that American boys were out, so...

txndreamer06 - Thanks you :)

Smac - The good thing is that Max has striven to hide who he really is, so the papparazzi don;t have an interest in HIM. Once they find out who he is though, I'm sure then that Liz will not be ana anonymous small town girl anymore.

Can I just take this opportunity to again thank not only my great beta team of Jen and Jeannine, but xmag for her help with my French phrases. :)


Parisienne Walkways


Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!


Part 13 - Friends Will Be Friends


Monday - July 11th


Liz woke up to the feel of a pleasant breeze billowing her curtains from her verandah door. The sun was still struggling to break into the morning sky. Glancing at her wonderful French lover beside her, still between the states of sleep and consciousness, she couldn't help marveling at his fine, almost chiseled physique. Liz had seen many statues of what classical artists had considered perfection, but not one came close to the perfect body that lay naked in her bed. She reached out and started to lightly brush her hand over his taut abs and his tight pectorals.

Still in a dream like state of mind, not sure if he was dreaming or if it was indeed real, Max's face curved into a gentle smile as a soft sigh slipped from his lips. Liz moved her body closer to his, allowing her soft, silky curves to press against his manliness. She slipped her hand through the small gap left between his shoulders and the pillows, curling her arm so that both hands could now tease him. Her fingers found each other and interlocked over his chest while Liz leaned in and placed a soft kiss on his shoulder. She continued to plant wet, delicious kisses all over his shoulder and upper arm while Max just lay there and continued in his dreamlike state. He seemed to be enjoying the feelings that he was experiencing.

Her fingers released from their interlock and while one hand slowly drifted down, feeling the tight cords of his sinewy muscles, her other remained close to his nipple, gently caressing it. She couldn't help her giggle when she felt it harden beneath her touch. At his navel, her fingers slipped in and out of his depression. His smile tightened as he struggled to suppress his own giggle.

Rolling her body slightly, an act that caused her arm to pull back from Max's chest, Liz lifted her head above his shoulder and she started leave her warm, moist kisses over his collarbone, and lower. Her other hand, meanwhile, had left his belly button and was even now teasing at his tightly crinkled hair. Her fingers splayed out so that they slid beneath his manhood, nesting as it was, a sleeping giant.

She heard him give a soft groan when her hand continued its journey, leaving the heat she had found for the cooler regions - although they were not much cooler - of his upper thighs. Liz smiled to herself, knowing that the sleeping giant would soon wake up and he would be demanding attention. She loved giving Max's wakeful giant all the attention it needed. And he had taught her many ways to please it. Many ways indeed.

Liz's lips parted a fraction to allow her tongue to join in with the teasing. With soft yet firm strokes, her small pink tip brushed against the firm texture that was Max's skin. Across his collarbone and to the depression at the base of his throat. She started to kiss and lick her way down Max's chest.

Her hand completely free from beneath Max now, she was raised over him, kissing him around the ridge of his pectoral muscles. Liz couldn't help emitting a soft squeak when she felt Max's hand on her back, as he joined in with his dream. Or was he awake now? Liz loved the way Max seemed to know exactly where to touch her to make her feel so vibrant, so sensual. Anywhere. His hand drifted along her spine until it started to tease the start of the cleft between her buttocks. She knew he was awake, then.

Reaching back, Liz took his hand from her and brought it back to lie above his head. This was her show, after all. She returned to his body, kissing his chest again as she moved upwards, if only to whisper a 'Good Morning' to him. She left more wet kisses along her path.

Liz's hands, meanwhile, were not idle. She continued to caress and stroke his thigh, to tease his groin by brushing across the top of his growing hardness, touching his stomach and then brushing his manhood again as she dipped once more to his thigh. His breathing was a little deeper now. Apart from his hand's earlier short lived adventure, he remained still. Perhaps Max had decided that if this was just a dream, he didn't want to wake up. Or perhaps he was awake and was just lying there, enjoying the feeling. Liz didn't spend too much time worrying about it. Instead, she placed her hand over his now fully firm erection and wrapped her fingers around it. The sound that slipped from his lips was clearly a moan of pure delight. Her hand started to slide up and down the shaft as she smiled to herself. Liz loved it when she gave Max pleasure.

Her lips danced up the side of his neck, under his chin and across his jaw until she was able to place a kiss on his smiling lips. As her tongue danced to brush across them, his own trap sprung and he captured her bottom lip and her pink appendage between his own lips. He released them just as quick as he sought to deepen their morning greeting. Little shivers of excitement tingled up and down her body. Liz wondered if he really was awake, perhaps coming to realize that this was not a dream, that she really was doing this to him? When a single eye popped open to look at her, she knew.

His other eye popped open and he was looking into hers. She hoped that when he looked into her deep brown pools of languid love, he saw that she was pleading with him to let her continue. He smiled at her and then allowed his eyes to flutter shut, giving out a long deep sigh that gave Liz her permission to continue unimpeded. Liz just smiled back.

"Bonjour, bébé," Liz smirked. "As-tu bien dormi?"

"Très bien dormi, ma belle âme soeur," Max grinned back at her, arching his back into her light touch on his manhood as he stretched his body to wake up his other muscles. "Et toi?"

By way of reply, Liz dipped her head onto his lips and started to kiss him again.


She laid down next to him, turning so that her breasts pressed against his side. She knew that he could feel them, firm and round... He moved his hand across to touch her while the arm she had placed above his head snaked down and slipped beneath her body so that he could cradle her into him.

"Mmmmm...." He moaned.

When she lifted a leg over his thigh and started to draw her knee up, running her smooth skin against his more coarse texture, he lifted his head to watch her. Liz smiled at the sensation caused by the hairs on his legs as they tickled against her silk like surface. Max's hand left the teasing of her breasts to find the thigh that was driving him crazy. The hand that was beneath her found her long dark locks and started to run his fingers through it. Max's head turned and he was breathing in the strawberry aroma of her shampoo, a leftover from last night's shower when they washed away the residue from her wild appearance for her striptease. She already knew that Max loved her hair and that he adored her strawberry scent.


But Max was to be disappointed when Liz pulled her hair away from him as her head leaned over to once more start kissing his chest. The disappointment lasted only until he realized that Liz had not stopped at his chest but was now uncurling herself from him to allow her journey to take her lower still, toward her hand that was now driving him more than a little crazy. She deliberately allowed her hair to splay out across him, knowing how the fine sensation added to his pleasure. His hands relaxed on her back, rubbing slowly with his strong fingers. He sighed when her lips finally reached his hard cock and she ever so gently placed a soft kiss on the firm dome. When her hand performed the downward stroke, Liz used her lips to moisten the large tip that had given her so much pleasure.

His hips bucked with the sudden sensation and she could feel that he was very excited now.

"Je suis désolé, bébé," he gasped, grabbing Liz with his strong hands and flipping her over on the bed so that she was now lying on her back. "Mais je ne peux plus me retenir."

Liz couldn't help her shriek of laughter. Sitting up, Max straddled her, his muscular legs stretched on either side of her body, his erection waving in the air as he sat lightly on her stomach. His eyes burned into hers. Liz knew what he was seeing. They were filled with love and sensuality. His eyes dropped to her lips, perhaps thinking of the times that she had wrapped their warmth around his hard manliness, or maybe of the many kisses that they had shared... the long and passionate ones that had filled them with such warmth and passion. Perhaps he too was thinking the same as her, that they were meant to be together, that everything they had suffered in the past was just so that the two of them would meet at that pavement café that day. Liz could not believe how open she felt around Max. He had definitely brought out a side to her that she would never have discovered had she not met him.

And then his eyes moved. Downwards. He was looking at her smooth shoulders but then his hands joined his eyes in appraising her. Max ran them lightly along her shoulders and down her arms, all the way to her wrists. He lifted her arms up and moved them so that both were above her head. A thrill coursed through Liz as she wondered if he might hold them there while he made love to her. But his hands left hers and with his eyes fixed on the rosy buds at the top of her breasts, his hands moved in to stroke and caress them. They moved easily over her firm yet soft swells and over her collarbones, then down her sides and around again to just below her breasts. Another upward journey and his hands cupped her as he raised them.

"Max," Liz moaned, her eyes locking with his. "Please... don't tease me anymore."


Max broke the stare and leaned over to kiss her. His tongue plunged into her mouth as they kissed madly, passionately... breathlessly. Liz grabbed Max's head and held him tightly while Max's hands still caressed her breasts. His grip, however, was tightening. Liz breath was becoming more and more shallow as her arousal grew to the heights she was becoming so used to. Their wrestling tongues became one, the sexual excitement building.

"I want you!" she moaned into his mouth, though how Max could have understood a word of it was beyond Liz. She broke from the kiss, gasping. "Make love to me, Max," she begged. "Please!"

Max raised himself to look at her. Her skin was tinged with the blush of her rising passion. His eyes reflected her desire, and she knew that to him, she was so beautiful right now. Always. He gave her a smile and as his hands lowered to her stomach, his head bent to press his lips against her breasts.

He started by kissing around the sides and then down the middle. Through her cleavage. Slowly, he started to lick up the slope of her breast with his tongue, working along the roundness and to the hard little tip. His lips captured her nipple and she could feel him licking her softly.

"Max!" she cursed, pressing her breasts harder against him. "Please!"

His lips pressed harder and then released her. She couldn't help crying out when his teeth appeared and softly bit down. His fingers sought out her other nipple and he launched a double assault on her sensuality. If this was a war, she surrendered quickly as a small orgasm coursed through her body.

"Max!" she begged in a deep, throaty groan.

Max slid lover down her body, moving his legs so that his knees pressed between hers, nudging her so that her thighs parted. Liz's breath started to saw in and out as she desperately wanted to feel him fill her. Max slid his arms beneath her knees and lifted her thighs upwards and outwards. Her eyes widened as she realized what he had just done to her. She was completely open to him. She could feel her aroused lips open up for him. She was not afraid, however. She continued to beg him. He placed the tip of his hardness to the center of her core and with a slow and gentle pressure, he slipped easily inside her. Max couldn't help his own deep groan as her velvet vice seemed to almost suck him inside her. Liz let out a long steady moan of pleasure.

Once fully inside her, all restraint was lost. His arms came away from her legs and wrapped themselves around her shoulders. He started to pound into Liz while she thrust herself forward at him, eager to feel him, feel all of him as he entered her depths again and again. She grabbed his head by the hair just behind his ears and pulled him to her. Their mouths mimicked the actions of their sexual appetite and their kiss was every bit as hot, urgent and wet as their lovemaking.

"Oh, god, Max!" Liz screamed as her orgasm took hold and tore through her body like a stampede of a thousand wild stallions.

"Oh, god, Liz!" Max echoed as he came, filling her with all the love that he had.

They came together and it was quite some time before either of them could move. Even when they could, they didn't. Max lay on top of Liz, kissing her softly while Liz lay beneath him, reveling in the feeling of his semi hard staff still inside her, while she caressed his body, leaving small glowing trails of love where she brushed.

"I love you, Max," she whispered. "I really, really love you."


* * *


Max and Liz emerged from the Metro, hand in hand, into the bright sunshine of another day in Paris. Liz looked around to get her bearings. Across the road to her left was the river, and on the far bank, she could see the large open space that led to...

"Isn't that the Louvre, over there?" she pointed.

"Oui," Ma nodded. "And the park there is La Jardin des Tuileries. Over there we have had our lunch one time, no?"

"I remember," Liz nodded. "And then we went to that old shopping Mall. So where are we going now?" She looked at the building ahead of them. "It looks like a railway station."

"Yes," Max nodded. "And once, that is exactly what it was. But now it is a museum. La Musée d'Orsay."

"So what do we get to see inside, Max?"

Always the scholar, Liz enjoyed museums.

"Do you like nineteenth century art, Liz?" Max cast a worried glance.

"I guess," she nodded. "I mean, it's not something I've really studied or anything."


Inside the entrance, and in the nave, there were a couple of sculptures. Rude's 'Le Genie de la Patrine' and a lion by Barye were just inside the doors. Further in was another Rude, 'Napoleon Awakening to Immortality', commissioned by the little egomaniac's Grenadiers. Other statues accompanied them. Some with semi erotic themes, either bound or twisted and given classical names for respectability while others showed some form of suffering.

Through the entrance and on into the main rooms themselves, paintings of some very famous people adorned the walls of the old station. Manet, Monet, Renoir, Degas, Van Gogh, Cezanne... the list went on. And as the list went on, so too did the time.

"Hungry?" Max turned to Liz after they had finished looking at a strange painting of a tomato.

"Yeah," Liz nodded, tilting her head one more time to try and see what it was she felt she should be seeing.

"Come," he chuckled at her antics. "We can go to the museum restaurant. We will only be needing a snack, because tonight I am having a surprise for you."

"I like surprises," she giggled, jumping next to Max. "What is it?"

"If I am telling you," he rolled his eyes. "Then it will not be the surprise, no?"

"No," she pouted.


* * *


"So," Max used his napkin to wipe the crumbs from his mouth. "Have you had enough of the art museum yet?"

"Yeah," Liz nodded, leaving half of her baguette unfinished. "Do you think we could just spend the afternoon... I don't know... walking? I mean, we don't have to go inside a building or anything. It would be nice to just go for a walk."

"I know the very place," Max nodded with a smile. "No visit with Paris would be complete without the walk along Champs Elysées.

That sounds very bien, Max," Liz nodded.

Smiling, Max rose and held out his hand to Liz. She reach up, placed her hand in his and stood up. Together, they made their way through the amazing old railway station and back out onto the Quay d'Orsay.


"Oh look. It's another bridge in Paris," Liz smiled as Max turned left to cross the Seine over the La Pont De Solferino. "You're just looking for an excuse to kiss me, aren't you?"

"Ah," Max grinned as he stopped and turned Liz to face him. "I am uncovered and you have seen through my evil plans for you."

"Max?" Liz looked him in the eye with a stern gaze.

"Oui?" Max raised an eyebrow.

"Shut up and kiss me."

"This I can do," Max smiled, dipping his lips to hers while he closed his eyes.

He started off with a tentative brush, the merest whisper of contact. Tenderly, as though he might be picking up a dainty piece of finest porcelain. As he pulled back gently, she could feel her lip being gently tugged. She gave a soft sigh and kissed him back, just as gently. As their lips played, their tongues teased. She reached her hands behind his neck, holding him to her. She could feel one of his hands tease her long hair while his other held her tightly against the small of her back. She felt him harden and start to press against her. Liz couldn't help rocking herself against it. It seemed such a natural thing for her to do. All too soon, her senses were working overtime and she felt so overwhelmed by it all. She felt Paris spinning around her, her spirit soaring up into the air until it was as though she was looking down at Paris from high above. Her mind started to coalesce again and soon, she finally felt complete.

"Max," Liz gasped, leaning her forehead against his chest. "Why is it always so incredible? I seriously doubt anyone will ever kiss me the way you do."

"I seriously doubt I will again kiss anyone like you," Max nodded, holding her to him. "In fact, if it is you who is the last person I am to ever kiss, then I will die a happy man, no?"


* * *


As a shopping expedition, the Champs Elysées would have been a disappointment. Yes, the salons and boutiques were beautiful, but they were few and far between. There were more café's, bars and restaurants than there were stores. And many of the stores seemed to be offices for airlines and car dealers. They stopped outside the window of the Renault offices and looked at the Formula One racing car inside. A large sign above it proclaimed that the car had been driven in a Grand Prix race.

"It's smaller than I thought," Liz looked at it closely. "I only ever saw them on TV, you know? Not that I'm really into it or anything. I mean, who wants to watch cars driving in circles as fast as they can all day?"

"You do not like Le Grand Prix?" Max's eyes widened with shock.

"There is one I like," Liz smirked.

"Wrong pronunciation." Max shook his head with a wry smile.


They found a few galleries that sold local artist's paintings, and some craft stores where a woman dressed in sixties clothing bent pieces of silver wire into all manner of shapes, such as bicycles and jet planes.

At every bar and every café, tables lined the pavement. People sat at the tables, all nationalities, sipping their coffee, their cognac or their wine, and talking to their companions while they watched the world go by.

Wandering through the throng of tourists, dark skinned Africans dressed in traditional robes tried to sell their wares. From bright colored carpets slung over their shoulders, through large 'hubble bubble' pipes to large hand carved animals from the Serengeti. Some even carried suitcases filled with cheap watches, many of them Rolex rip-offs. They were hard to shake off and as soon as someone appeared to show an interest, half a dozen more appeared, as if by magic, each trying to persuade the hapless tourist that theirs was the better bargain.

All the while, Liz marveled at the broad, tree-lined avenue with its amazing architecture and the special feel of the place, a feeling only the Champs Elysées possessed.

When they decided to take a break from walking and looking, Max guided Liz into a free table at one of the many pavement cafés.

"Would you like a coffee, perhaps?" Max asked. "Or you would prefer a little wine?"

"Coffee's good," Liz nodded. "You know, like how I like it, not those... little cups."

"Of course," Max started to laugh.

He turned and called to a passing waiter. Moments later. They had two cups of frothy coffee in front of them.

"I love it here," Liz looked around at her surroundings. "I'm really glad I came now. I was kind of apprehensive at first, you know? Being in a strange place by myself." She looked at Max and grinned. "I mean, what if I fell into the hands of a white slave trader?"

"And who says you have not?" Max's eyes started to sparkle with amusement.

"And who says I didn't want to?" she laughed back.

"So is it that you are saying you are my slave?" A look of unbridled lust flashed across Max's face.

"What do you think?" she gave a gentle, yet shy smile. "Max, you can do practically anything to me. Haven't you figured that out yet?"

Max looked at her in silence for a moment.

"As you are my slave, ma chérie," he smiled, reaching across the table to caress her cheek, "so it is that I am your slave also."

"I like that," Liz nodded. "We are slaves to one another."

"D'accord," Max nodded.

The moment was broken when two young children appeared at their table and started to sing a song in a strange language. The smallest of the pair had her hand outstretched.

"Non," Max reached out and prevented Liz from taking her purse. "Anything you give to them will be handed over to the men who make them work. And they will use the money to buy their wine, not their food. You must not encourage them."

"They're just kids, Max."

"Yes," he nodded. "And sadly, they are already being exploited. If you give them any money, then more will appear, and they follow you until you give them more money. And then more will appear, no? Trust me, Liz. It is better that you give them no money so that more people from their country do not think they can come here and live like this. It is so sad, no?"

Sensing that they were about to lose what they thought was a certainty, the kids started to sing louder. Seconds later, a man from inside the bar ran out waving a broom and shouting. The kids ran off. The barman made some comment to Max, who merely shrugged.

"C'est la vie," Max sighed.


* * *


"We were here the other night, weren't we?" Liz looked at the restaurants with their brightly colored canopies that lined La Place du Tertre. "Are we going to eat at the Bistro place again?"

"No," Max shook his head. "Tonight, we dine in the most exclusive place in all of Paris. You can eat there by invitation only."

"Really?" her eyes widened. "Wow. Somewhere like that must really cost a lot of money. This is my treat, okay, Max? Tonight, I pay for dinner."

"This, I can live with," Max nodded. "Tonight, I will give the bill to you."

Just past the restaurants, Max led Liz up a flight of steps that zigzagged through a small garden between two tall buildings. In the distance, and accordion player was pumping out the bars to "La Vie En Rose." With the aroma from the flowers, the sights and smells of Paris and the distant music, Liz doubted that she had ever been in a more romantic place in her life. Not that Roswell could boast many romantic spots. Somehow, Frazier Woods just did not seem the same.

"We are here," Max indicated the plain, nondescript building.

"This is an exclusive restaurant?" Liz frowned while she looked up and down the building.

"No," Max shook his head with a smile. "This is my home."

"Oh my god!" Liz's eyes widened in panic. "I'm meeting your parents?"

"Ah," Max smiled, wrapping an arm around her waist and pulling her in tighter. "Not tonight. Tonight, you will be meeting my best friend in the world. He is my room mate."

"Oh," Liz started to breath again. "Do I look okay?"

"You look très jolie," Max stepped back to look at her. Liz was wearing a short, lavender colored dress with a collar and short sleeves. Her legs were bare and she wore white high-heeled sandals. "Just do not let my friend try to seduce you away from me."

"You know there's no chance of that," she caressed his jaw line. "But would he even try, if he's your friend?"

"Pretty girls have often come between the best friends, mon bel ange," he smiled. "I do not think Michael will try anything. But you are beautiful and you never know."

Hand in hand, they climbed the stairs to the room at the top.

"And so," Max opened the door. "When I am not with you, this is my other home."


Liz stepped into the room and looked around. It seemed very Spartan, considering that Max clearly had money. There were a few chairs, a table, a couple of armchairs, and in the corner was a small kitchenette. Everywhere, pictures of Paris, and of very attractive girls, scantily clad, adorned the walls.

"Michael is a painter," Max indicated the paintings that Liz was looking at.

"Michael's your room mate?"

"And my best friend, too," he nodded. "And he appears to not be here."

"No," a voice surprised them from the open door behind them. "He appears to have just got back from getting our dinner."

"Ah, Michael," Max grinned, turning back to Liz. "Allow me to present my best friend, Michael. Michael, this is Liz."

"Hey," Michael nodded, extending his hand from the large bag he was carrying.

"Hi," Liz accepted the invitation to shake. "Nice to meet you. You're American?"

She seemed surprised.

"Yeah," he nodded. "I like it in Paris because I get great inspiration here."

"So I see," Liz turned to look at the near naked women hanging on the wall.

"Ah," Michael blushed. "Sorry. Should have taken them down."

"No, no," Liz shook that away. "It's fine. Just... don't ask me to pose, okay?"

"Got it," he smiled. "You gonna give me a hand with this or what?" Michael turned to Max.

Max took the bag from Michael and placed it on the table.

"No Nicole?" Max noticed that Michael was alone.

"Nah," Michael shrugged as he took some plates and cutlery to the table. "She met some other guy at the bar last night. I haven't seen her since. You square things away with your pops?"

"Oui," Max nodded as he started to take the hot serving boxes from the bag. "Usual problem. The Harding's are coming, and he wants me around to make nice with-know-who."

"Merde!" Michael spat. "When?"

"Tomorrow."

"So that's why you want the spider?"

"Yes," Max nodded while Michael started to lay the table for three. He turned to Liz. "Forgive me for speaking French, ma chérie. Sometimes, it is quicker to say it so than it is in English."

"That's okay," Liz nodded. "Is there anything I can do to help?"

"Could you bring three glasses for the wine?" Max indicted a set of glasses on a shelf behind her.

"Shit!" Michael spat, reaching for his wallet. "I forgot the wine. I drank the last bottle this afternoon."

"No," Max shook his head. "I will go. You already got the dinner, no? You can stay and talk to Liz."

And then he was gone.

"So," Liz looked around at the room, feeling a little awkward.

"I hear you're from Roswell," Michael seemed uneasy himself.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "Alien capital of the world."

"They should have crashed here," Michael smiled. "No one would even have noticed."

"It does seem to be quite the mixing pot," Liz nodded. "Do you like living here?"

"Love it," Michael nodded. "Max likes it here, too, but he's always glad to get home."

"Where does..." Liz started.

"How about you?" Michael interrupted. "You like Paris?"

"Only 'cause I'm with Max," Liz smiled.

"Listen," Michael's eyes narrowed. "He really likes you, Liz. I can tell. This isn't just some fling for him, okay? I want you to remember that however he's treating you, however he is with you... that is no act, okay? That is the real Max."

"Why would I think otherwise?" Liz narrowed her eyes.

"Because, uhm..." Michael was stammering. "Because maybe you're thinking that to him, this is just some kind of... I don't know. Summer fling."

"Got it!" Max announced his return, carrying three bottles of wine.


* * *


"So Michael seems..."

After they had eaten, Liz had helped the boys clean up. They sat together talking mainly about Liz and about Paris. Every time she asked Michael about his past, or about Max's, the subject seemed to suddenly change. It was getting late and Max decided that it was time to take Liz home. Everyone was feeling slightly buzzed from the wine.

"Guarded?" Max raised his eyebrow.

"Yeah," she nodded. "Like he has these walls around him."

"That is just the way he is being," Max shrugged. "When he is knowing you more, the walls, they are coming down."

"How long have you known him?"

"Since I am sixteen and went to school with him," Max turned them onto the zigzag path that would lead them into La Place du Tertre.

"He went to school in Paris?"

"Ah, listen," Max stepped at one of the corners of the twisting path. It was a darkened corner where one of the street lamps had blown. "They are playing our song."

Liz could hear the accordion music again. It sounded closer this time, as if the artist was nearer. She wondered if the musician ever tired of playing 'La Vie En Rose'?

"Our song?" she smiled at him. "You really think that this is our song?"

"Of course," Max nodded. "Did we not first make love after we are dancing to it in your room? Will you not think of me every time you are hearing it? I know I cannot hear this song without the thought of you popping into my head."

"I guess that makes it our song then," Liz nodded.

"Then in that case," he turned to face her. "May I have this dance?"

"Here?" Liz looked around with widened eyes. "In the middle of a staircase in Montmartre?"

"Think of the stories you can tell," Max winked. "When your friends are talking about the most romantic place they have danced, you can tell them of the night you danced under the moon on the stairs in a small garden in Montmartre. Who can top that?"

"Well," Liz shrugged stepping into Max's arms. "I guess you'll have to go pretty far to beat that one."

Together they danced, while the musician pumped out his music on the squeezebox. From around her waist, Max's hand slid up her body and over her shoulders. They inched up the sides of her neck to cup her cheeks, his fingers splitting either side of her ear.

"Tu es tellement belle," he murmured, his lips inches from her ear.

Liz responded by twisting into one of his hands and kissing the soft flesh that was stretched between his thumb and his forefinger. It was a soft and lingering kiss. Looking back at Max, his eyes were like molten balls of liquid fire. Their lips met each other in a soft and sensuous touch. Gentle at first, they parted and then met once more, more fierce this time. Lips sucked at lips, tongue teased tongue. And then they were locked together. As they moved together with the music, their lips and their tongues danced with them, an ages old ritual of passion and hunger that had been enacted throughout history, everywhere in this famous city. But Liz didn't care about that. All she cared about was that she was dancing with Max while they kissed together, and to her, it was heaven. Pure bliss.

Max's hands appeared to be everywhere at once. One moment, they were caressing her bare arms and the next they were stroking the inside of her breast. One hand slid down her back to tease her buttock while the other played with her hair at the nape of her neck. When one cupped the side of her breast with his thumb stroking her erect nipple, the other slid low onto her thigh.

And Liz was not idle. Her own hands joined his in an exploration of pleasure. She teased his hairline, touched his broad chest. His face was stroked, his thighs caressed. Even his firm buttocks received the warm brush of her small hands. And all the time, she was pressing her soft core against his hardened rod.

"Liz!" Max gasped.

Her reply was to kiss him harder and press against him harder still.


Max pushed closer to her warm, welcoming body. She couldn't help but yield to his greater size and moved backwards, taking a step up before she felt herself press against the wall. She could give no more ground, even if she wanted to. And because she didn't want to, she was glad that the wall was there. She had no escape now, not that she needed any. Instead of retreat, Liz chose to attack. Her hand snaked in between them and easily found its way into his pants, and his boxer shorts. She had his throbbing erection exposed to the elements while she started to rub him.

"Liz," he whimpered. "What are you doing?"

"Making you feel good, Max," her hot breath seared him. "Are you feeling good?"

"Oh, god," he nearly choked.

He couldn't do this. Not here. He had to think of Liz. But then she brought out the big guns and the battle had been won. Or lost. She pulled his hard manhood under her skirt and pressed it against her own swollen sex, still encased in a layer of soaking wet lace. In total and unconditional surrender. Max's fingers found her panties and he started to push them down. They easily fell to the floor where a step to one side exposed everything to a final assault, which would give Liz her victory. But Max, thoroughly consumed by his desire for her had one last trick up his sleeve that might earn him a tie.

Electing not to plunge into her burning chasm, Max took her by the shoulders and turned her, so that she was now facing the wall.

"Yes," she groaned, throwing her head back to stare through closed eyes at the sky.

She pushed her backside into Max, telling him to finish the battle now. And finish he did. With a slow deliberation which brought a high pitched mewling from Liz's opened mouth, Max eased himself into her. Unlike this morning, which was fast and furious, Max took his time. With one hand holding her hip, his other slipped to her belly and gave her ring a sharp tug. He them dipped lower and found her hard little button. In and out, up and down, Liz was singing with the accompaniment of the accordion.

"Yes... yes.... yes!" She chanted in time to his strokes.

With a final deep thrust. Liz could feel him explode inside her. She exploded herself soon after. A deep, rolling orgasm that felt like it might never stop. With his hardness still throbbing deep inside of her, Liz felt like nothing could spoil this moment.

"Get a room," an American accent demanded as an older woman pushed by them, her red face showing that she had witnessed everything. Liz didn't know whether to laugh or die of embarrassment.


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Parisienne Walkways - Part 14

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Hi everyone!

Boy, these past two weeks have been so busy for me! I have only 'just' managed to complete these last two chapters on time. But complete thay are and I would like to thank my beta team of BordersInsanity, BelevnDreamsToo and Xmag for the last minute work they put in because I only send them the file on the thursday night! :)

Thank you all so much for your feedback because it's helping to keep me going through what is quite a stressfull time for me. Two jobs and two major interviews!

But, here we are. Another long chapter that I'm sure seems too short for you. :wink: I just how you like it. :wink: :oops:

Now, last week... :oops: Well, remember that in the prologue, Liz was remembering the time they got caught. And she certainly never mentioned any photographs... so I don;t think you need worry about the photographer.


FSU/MSW-94 - Yes, Michael knows that for MAx, this is as real as it gets, and he's hoping that Liz will be worth it and see past Max's white lie.

AJK001 - I hope tonight's treat is as enjoyable as all the others. :D

clueless - Thank you :)

roswellluver - If I wrote this story with them staying in their room for the whole two weeks, don;t you think you would get bored with the constant sex? :wink:

smokie - Poor Liz??? :wink: Okay, I have this visual of you and your sisters... rolling on your chairs with laughter... and a an ice box filled with... No! Bad Wayne! Bad! :wink:

Shadowlynxbehr - Well... (heh heh) If you're ever in London... :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Lol - That spider, huh? Of, and what a stunt Max has planned with that! You guys are going to remember the little stunt Max plays with that spider for weeks! :wink:

POM - Who says they tell each other the truth? :wink:

begonia9508 - Well... are they lying? They both love each other, they do not lie about their feelings. Liz has not told Max she is married, but does she truly consider herself so? And Max has a French mother, speaks fluent French and knows Paris like the back of his hand... His only lie is that he can speak in an American accent too. And Liz's only lie is that there is a meaningless piece of paper that 'says' she's married. :wink:

Erina - While you might be right, it was Liz who sent Max away, and not the other way around.
prologue wrote:But he had taken her at her word and stayed away.
Yes, Liz hates lying, but remember Max's reaction to that other couple and their breakup?

Emz80m - Thank you :)

MamaDee52 - That hand of doom is not spoiling your enjoyment of the story, I hope! :wink: Glad I'm warming your cockles up! (carefull pronunciatioon there. :wink:) As for you discombobulated sexes... let's not even go there! PS - How is the longest skating rink in the world? Yes, been there, done that! :)

Ellie - Its Tuesday. Liz leaves Sunday... I'm sure they can have a little more fun before the whatsit hits the doo-dah. :wink:

Alien14 - You're welcome :)

vampyrax - Thank you :)

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Heh heh heh - Blushing? Really? :wink: The whole point of Liz's adventure is that she is doing things she would never have done with Kyle. And one of them is making love in such a public place. :)

VeronicB - Well... as Liz heads for the airport alone, looks like no time for explanations. :(

Jull_ana - Hello and welcome. I hope your boss disappears from time to time and you get to pop in more often. And you will have to let me know if my PAris Guide leads you well. :) Now, how's this for wierd. I know someone who went to Paris at the end of Jan, to work. Wouldn't it be a small world if it was you? :wink:

maxssoulmate - Glad you enjoyed it. :)

txndreamer06 - Thank you :)

BehrObsession - Well, Liz did not mention any photos in the prologue, so IF any photos exist, then they weren't the cause of the breakup. ANd it was dark where they were, and Max did turn her to face the wall...

Earth2Mama - LOL. How long did the sentance forming disability last? :wink:

cherie - Ah, ma cherie. :wink: Fear not. Max seemes to have a plan involving a spider. :wink:

suicide_rath_eagle - Wow. Thank you. Nice words indeed. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. :)

Okay. Todays the day! The Hardings come to town. They will be here all day. Maybe overnight, too. But Max seems to have something planned involving a spider. I wonder if it's poisonous?



Parisienne Walkways


Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!



Part 14 - When the Going Gets Tough...


Tuesday - July 12th

Liz Parker started to stir, waking up to another day in Paris with the man of her dreams. Her eyes flickered open and looked to the side of the bed that had become his that night just a few days ago when he made her a woman. His woman. Her eyes widened with a sense of panic when she saw that he was not there. Rolling onto her back, she sat upright in bed, to try to find him. She had sensed a difference in him the last two days, a kind of guardedness that she had never felt before. Had he had enough of her and left her?

Her eyes scanned the room for any evidence that he was still with her. The bathroom door was open but she could hear no shower running. There was, however, a small bag opened by the wardrobe. Inside, she could make out that some clothing had been packed into it. Her first thought was that he was moving out. A shadow moved by the bathroom door, and fully dressed, Max stepped into the main room, carrying a bulging toiletry bag.

She was about to ask him the question that she didn't really want to hear the answer to, but he beat her to it, speaking first.

"Bon," he smiled. "You are awake at last. Come, take your shower. It would be better if we can leave early rather than later."

"What's going on, Max?" her voice showed her nervousness.

"I thought that perhaps you would like to see a little more of France besides Paris, no?"

"But... but what about breakfast?"

"We can easily find something once we are out of town," Max shrugged. "I have already told the concierge not to be bringing us the croissants this morning."

"Okay, uhm..." her whole body was flushing. "But what about..." She was wondering if her forthright boldness last night, and the fact that they had been caught by that woman had made Max feel disgusted with her. "Max? Don't you want to make love to me?"

"All of the time," Max nodded with a huge grin. "And right now, it is no exception because as always, you are looking so good to me. But I would really like to get away because the traffic, she can get quite bad. And the sooner we leave... the more we can see."

"Will you shower with me?" her eyes took on the look of a small puppy dog.

"Ah, Liz," Max shook his head, reaching for the buttons of his shirt. "I must learn how to say no to you."

"No you shouldn't," Liz smiled, feeling better in herself. Max still desired her after all. "It's more fun this way."

"This is true," Max reached out for her hand to lead her into the shower.


* * *


Hand in hand, they stepped out of the lift and into the hotel foyer. Max was wearing a pair of his smart pants and white button-down shirt. Liz wore a sleeveless summer dress, quite low in the front and quite short. It was buttoned up the front. She felt very summery. In his other hand, Max was carrying the bag in which he had packed a change of clothing for them. Liz wondered what he was up to. As they approached the reception desk, Max turned toward it and stopped in front of it while he moved the bag so that it hung over his shoulder.

"Est-il arrivé?" Max asked the Concierge.

"Oui, monsieur," the Concierge nodded, handing something that Liz didn't quite see to Max. "Il est arrivé il y a une demi-heure."

"Merci, monsieur," Max exchanged the item for a folded bill. "And now, we are ready," he turned to Liz with a smile. "Come. I have a little surprise for you."

Max led her to the doorway and they stepped out into the early morning sunshine.

"Voila," Max waved his hand at a row of cars. "What do you think?" He had a huge smile on his face.

"Which one?" Liz wondered out loud. There were a couple of Renault's, a Peugeot or two and a few Japanese cars. There was also a very sleek looking sports car with the top down.

"This one," Max indicated the electric blue sports car. "What do you think?"

"Wow," Liz's eyes widened. "What is it?"

"She," Max emphasized, "is a Ferrari Spider, F360."

"She's beautiful, Max." Liz grinned. "But I thought Ferrari's were, like, red, or something."

"Not all Ferrari's are red, although this is their natural color. But I think this car looks better in this color."

"How fast can... 'she' go?"

"As fast as you," Max winked. "Come. Let us go and find out, no?"

Together, they approached the car. Max put the bag in the well behind the passenger seat and held the door open for Liz. She stepped inside and attached her seat belt. While Max hurried to his door and stepped in, Liz was tracing the white writing on the glovebox. After fastening his own belt, he produced two pairs of sunglasses. He handed one to Liz and put the other on himself. Placing the key into the ignition and turning, Liz was surprised when nothing happened. Max grinned at her and placed his finger on a small panel on the dashboard. A deep throaty growl emerged from beneath the car. Reversing from the car park, Max then drove forward and merged with the morning traffic.

"Michael is bringing this for me this morning," Max told her while they waited to turn onto the Quai des Grandes Augustines. "I am not usually having much time to be driving her in Paris anymore. Perhaps I will have her sent home, no?"

"If you enjoy driving her," Liz was smiling at him. "Sure."

He turned and flashed her a big smile.


The traffic was slow, but moving at a steady pace. Max turned left onto the Boulevard St Michelle where the traffic seemed to be moving a little better.

"You recognize this place?" Max grinned at her.

"Uh," Liz was looking around at the scenery. "Yeah. Oh wait, I know. The Sorbonne!"

"Yes," Max nodded. "And look here." He was pointing at some gates.

"That's where we... in the rain," Liz turned to him again, smiling shyly.

A few moments later, Max pointed to the left.

"Just down there," he looked at her, "is the Military Hospital. Our grand-mères worked there after the war, no?"

"Wouldn't it be funny if they knew one another?" Liz nodded.

"That would be a coincidence most incredible."

An hour later, Paris had been left behind and they were racing down the auto routes with the wind blowing in their hair.


"Are you hungry now?" Max smiled at her.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "We did skip breakfast, after all."

"Bien," he smiled. "We will come off at the next junction. We will find a little café to eat."

Fifteen minutes later. Max pulled into the parking lot in the center of a very small village. Heads turned as they watched the sports car pass them by. More heads turned when the attractive young couple climbed from the car. Perhaps feeling a little protective, Max pulled Liz into a tender embrace, stroking her cheek with his hand before he kissed her. Still feeling a tingling throughout her body from the car and from his touch, Max guided her toward the sleepy little café bar at the heart of their audience's little world. Next to the café, a group of old men were throwing sliver balls on a stony strip of ground.

"Pétanque," Max saw Liz looking at the game with narrowed eyes. "I think it is close to your game of horseshoes, no?"

"Oh," Liz nodded, smiling at the men who were glancing at her.

Inside the café, two more old men were staring at a chess board on which the pieces were arranged in the middle of a game. From the way they glared at one another, Liz couldn't help thinking of that short cartoon she had once seen. A few other men sat at tables, drinking coffee and discussing something from the daily newspaper. There was a timeless quality to the air.

"Bonjour," Max announced to the room, as though he had known these people all his life.

"Bonjour," everyone nodded and returned to their own business.

"Deux petits déjeuners nous satisferont," Max called to the portly man with the huge smile behind the bar. "Café Grande, s'il vous plaît?"

"Oui monsieur," he nodded "Vous voulez le prendre à l'intérieur, ou dehors sur la terrasse?"

"La terrasse," Max smiled at Liz.

'La terrasse' was a small patio that overlooked the old men playing petanque. When the young couple had sat down, Liz looked around at her surroundings.

"It's different... but the same," she smiled. "I mean, it's not as busy, but it still has that... I don't know, feeling."

"I know," Max nodded, caressing the back of Liz's hand with his. "I like it out of the city. Out here, nobody cares who you are."

"Why should they?" Liz raised her eyes.

"Exactly," Max grinned. "I have been to places where people cannot be who they are because everyone is watching them, no? I mean, take your Los Angeles. Do you think Brad Pitt can take Angelina Jolie for a midnight stroll and make love to her on the stairs in a local park? No. It would be headline news around the world."

"Are you saying that you are Brad Pitt?" Liz smirked.

"Only if you are Angelina Jolie," he started to chuckle.


* * *


Back on the open road, Max was driving along a broad avenue of tall, narrow trees. Liz found it amusing the way he kept checking his rear view mirror. She sat at a slight angle so that she could watch him.

"Napoleon had these trees planted," Max nodded at them. "So that his armies could march in the shade.

"Wasn't he the guy who invented canned food?" Liz grinned at Max.

"Bien!" he smiled at her. "You are knowing your history. Although it is not Napoleon personally. And in fact, it was not in cans, but in bottles. It was the English who started to use cans. They used 'that' particular trick against Napoleon at Waterloo."

"There is so much history over here," Liz shook her head. "And so much beauty, too." Although she was referring to the scenery, she was looking at Max with a dreamy smile on her face. "So, where exactly are we going?"

"A small town," Max nodded up the road. "We should be there for lunch."

"Is that all you think about?" Liz giggled. "Food?"

"No," Max smiled, placing his hand on Liz's knee. "I am thinking of making love with you a lot, too."

"Just so you know," Liz placed her hand on top of his. She pushed it along her leg to her thigh. "I think of making love with you just as often."

The day was bright, and warm. The swiftly moving car allowed the cooling breeze to blow over them. But Liz was feeling a different kind of warmth altogether. It was one that had been simmering since waking that morning. She was addicted to Max and had not yet had her fix. While one hand held Max's to her thigh, her other unfastened the bottom two buttons. The rest she left to Max. The wind started to whip the corners of her dress, exposing more of her legs to him.

"Liz," he shook his head, groaning. "What are you doing to me?"

"Why, Max," Liz grinned. "I'm doing nothing. Is something bothering you?"

"Only this," Max looked down at his groin.

She started to laugh, a silvery peal above the deep growl of the engine.

His fingers started to stroke her leg. Soft, gentle motions, up and down. With a pleased sigh, Liz laid her head back against the head restraint and allowed her thighs to part. She encouraged his hand to explore higher up. The touch of his fingers on her inner thighs sent shivers through her. Sure that he had taken the hint, Liz let go of him and reached her hand across to his lap, running it up his leg and onto the bulge in his pants. She felt it twitch in response.

"Liz!" Max jumped. She felt the car slow down a little. "Do you want to have the accident?"

"What a way to go," she smiled, her eyes closed behind her glasses. "But I'm sure you're a good driver. Just keep your eyes on the road."

"Impossible," Max snorted.

She gave a squeal and her own body jumped when she felt his fingers reach the swell of her mound.

"You are so wet," Max seemed surprised.

"I've been soaking all morning, Max," she groaned as his fingers pressed against her wet panties. "I hope you packed me enough underwear."

"Maybe you should just do without, no?" she could sense him smirking at her.

"Do you think you could bear that?" she grinned.

"No," Max shook his head. "I think I would be in a state of... erm... things would be hard for me all of the day."

"Mmmmm..." Liz purred. "Perfect. Can I make a plan or what?"

Max's hand vanished. Liz felt the car make a turn, her body pressing against the door. When she heard the steady hum of the asphalt beneath the wheels change to a crunching sound, and feeling the car slowing, Liz looked up. Max had turned onto a side road and was now driving through a small copes of trees. When his hand reappeared on her thigh, she jumped again but she slid forward in her seat and opened her thighs when he started to tease her core through her panties. Grinning, Liz lifted her hand from Max's bulge to the button on his pants. It popped open easily and she slid his zipper down. Max gasped when Liz's hand released his hard erection to the daylight. She felt decidedly wicked. When her hand started to run up and down his shaft, Max pressed the brake pedal to the floor and put the stick into neutral.

"Come," Max's voice was low, and husky.

He climbed from the car and started to hurry to Liz's door. She couldn't help laughing at the spectacle as he clutched his pants to prevent them from falling while his erection bobbed up and down.

"Perhaps I will not make love to you, after all," Max tried to sound hurt but his eyes were laughing.

"Don't pout, baby," Liz grinned, stepping out from the car when he opened the door for her. She made a big show of presenting herself to his hot gaze. "It doesn't suit you."

Standing on a large grassy patch amid the sun dappled light through the trees, Max pulled her to him and started to kiss her. Deeply, hungrily. Her breasts were pressed hard against his chest while his fingers slid beneath her dress and found her wetness. Liz found his erection again and started to pump him. Her breath quickened as his fingers slipped beneath the edge of her soaking panties and inside her hot, wet cavern. His thumb found her hard little button and while his fingers plumbed her depths, his thumb rubbed her clitoris. Her nectar coated his digits in next to no time.

She whimpered into his mouth when his hand vanished from her burning core. Then she felt him lifting her dress above her head. She was now wearing just her high heels and a wet thong. Seconds later, the thong was lying on the grass at her feet.

"Max," Liz started to pull Max's shirt over his head, ignoring the buttons. "Take it off!"

While Max pulled his shirt off for her, she was sliding his pants and his boxers down his thighs.

Kicking up his shoes for her, Liz knelt down and pulled his legs free of his clothing, including his socks. Staying on her knees, her face was inches from his erect cock. She gazed at it, licking her lips in anticipation. She then looked up at Max, her dark eyes burning with need.

"Ah, bébé, oui," he groaned. "Sil te plaît!"

Kissing him along his shaft, Liz started at the bottom and worked her way up. Her lips moved over his hot dome and slowly pushed against it, allowing Max to enter her mouth. Her tongue started to snake along the underside, driving Max into a series of short sharp gasps. His knees buckled as she continued to take him, as deeply as she could, swallowing to fight against the gag reflex she felt. Max's knees started to buckle.

"Oh, Liz," his voice was a near whisper. "I have to lay down. You are too much for me."

Maintaining contact with his erection, Liz allowed Max to kneel down and then twist to lay on his back. She found herself kneeling to his side, and not in between his thighs. She pulled her head back so only his tip was nestled between her lips. She started to turn to correct her position but Max stopped her. Instead, he took her leg and gently pulled her to him. Her eyes widened when she realized that he had pulled her in such a way that she now had her own sex just above his face.

"Oh, god!" she cried, his cock falling from her lips when she felt his tongue snake from her smooth, bald mound, over her clitoris and along her soaking pussy.

Taking his erection in her hand, she brought it to her lips again. Once more, she started to make love to him by bobbing her head up and down, using her tongue to apply an amazing sensation to him while his tongue and lips teased the folds of her flower, drinking deeply of her nectar. All the while his finger teased a tiny circle around her throbbing love button.

Liz had never felt anything like it. She had heard of sixty nine -she liked the sound of 'soixante neuf' better - she had never once thought it was something she would even try. But here with Max, it was wonderful. The hotter the sensation inside her grew, the harder she sucked at Max's erection, the harder she pressed her tongue. This in turn seemed to enflame Max as his tongue and his lips worked upon her with more and more passion. His tongue ran lightly over and around her clitoris while his fingers stimulated inside her.

She could sense his imminent climax and knew that hers would not be far behind. When she felt him tense, she knew that he was going to come before her for once. And then his little finger pushed into her tiny rosebud, already wet from her own juices. As Max exploded into her hot, enveloping mouth, she was unable to swallow. She was far too busy crying out while her own orgasm wracked her body.

They lay there for a moment, Max's hot breath on her thighs while her breath bathed his withering erection, slick with his fluids.

"I hope you brought some wipes," she climbed up on all fours above him and peered between their naked bodies at Max.

"Oui," he was still gasping. "In the glove box."

Standing up, Liz felt Max's eyes on her all the way to the car, while she opened the glove box to get the pack of moist wipes and all the way back.

"You are like the mythical creature of nature," he smiled up at her. "You are beautiful, Liz. You are so beautiful."

"You are too," Max. Liz looked down and smiled. "Though I have to say... you look kind of gross just now."

"All through the fault of yours, ma jolie fleur."


* * *


The town that Max had been aiming for was perhaps a quarter of the size of Roswell, Liz decided. There were a few churches, a couple of large stores, a dozen or so cafes and bars and they had even driven past a small industrial area that provided the town with employment. They had found a wonderful little hotel right on the town square where Max parked the eye catching Spider in the bays along the front.

Taking their bag from the car, they entered the small foyer where an elderly woman booked them in under the name of Monsieur et Madam Smith. Liz thought it was really wonderful being married to Max, even if she didn't have a ring. And if the woman noticed, she made no comment.

Their room was at the front of the hotel on the second floor. While the view was in no way comparable to her room in Paris, it was still very picturesque. The bed was lumpy, it squeaked when they sat down on it, but Liz looked forward to spending her 'honeymoon' on it.

After a long shower during which they had made love again, Max changed into a pair of dress shorts and a pale yellow polo shirt. Liz elected to wear a white wrap around mini skirt that tied up on her hip and a white halter-top that buttoned up the front and tied behind her neck. She chose to wear her white high-heeled shoes, knowing that they were unlikely to do much walking. Liz fully expected to have Max in bed within an hour of lunch.

Hand in hand, and looking all the world like newly-weds, the young lovers walked out of the hotel and across the foyer to the small restaurant opposite to where they were staying. They sat at a table out in the sun, where they could watch the people pass by, and be admired by the same people.

"Are you very hungry?" Max glanced up from the menu, which was all written in French.

"Yeah," Liz nodded with a smirk. "But let's have lunch, first."

Max could only chuckle while he shook his head.

"And what then, would my little nymphomaniac like to eat for lunch..." Max started to grin. "Apart from me. And bear in mind that tonight, we are eating in a restaurant not far from here that serves the best food in all of France."

"Just a sandwich, Max," Liz nodded. "Uhm... Cheese, I guess."

"Bien sur," Max nodded. "I will join you. Perhaps you would like a little wine?"

"Sure," Liz nodded. "Why not? When in Rome..."

"But we are not in Rome," Max kept a straight face.

Liz gave him a perplexed look before she rolled her eyes with a smile.

"I am warning you, though," he called the waiter over. "I have still to do some driving so I can only have one glass."

"That's okay. I'll just have one glass, too.

But the wine was not ordered by the glassful. Instead, it came out in a small carafe, which held enough for Liz to have three glasses.


* * *


"So where are we going now?" Liz looked around at the narrow lane that Max had driven down.

He had left the main road some way back, and Liz wondered if he wanted a repeat of their open air love making earlier that day. But he had passed several appropriate places.

"There is something I wish to show you, before I am no longer able to show it to you," he smiled cryptically.

The trees gave way to a gate, and beyond the gate was a cluster of very old looking buildings. Max pulled the Ferrari up in what appeared to be a forecourt.

"This was once an old riding stables," Max waved at the buildings. "Until five years ago, there were here, all the horses and people would come to learn to ride them, and to buy them also." He had a far away look in his eye. "But then, my grand-père died and we had to close the stables and sell all the horses."

"Oh, Max," Liz laid a hand on his arm. "I'm so sorry."

"He would have liked you, Liz," Max gave her a smile. "He would have liked your joie de vivre."

"I'm sure I would have liked him, too," she nodded, squeezing his arm.

"It is a tradition that the eldest son takes over the business," Max continued. "But grand-père had no sons, only my mother. So instead, he left all of this to me."

"So you own all this, Max?" she looked around again with new eyes. "Wow."

"But I know nothing of running stables, and besides, with my education, I am never being here," Max shrugged. "So, rather than let it fall apart, I am selling it to a man from the next village. His father was a good friend to my grand-père and so I know that he will making a good job of it."

"So you are going to be pretty rich, huh?" she smirked. "Look, Max. You know that I don't care about your money, right?"

"This I know," he nodded. "And yes, selling this will make me rich. But as grand-père also left me some money, I have been rich all of this time, too. I bought the car with his money. He told me that I am to use it to enjoy life to the full. And I intend to do this. My grand-mère would have wanted this for me, too. So... I try to enjoy my life, but she is hard when I am not finding the right woman to enjoy it with."

He looked like he wanted to say some more. His mouth opened and closed a few times.

"Come," he opened the car door. "I will show you around."


The main house, although a little dusty, was in good condition, and completely habitable. It was readily apparent that someone had been looking after the place.

"There is a man further up the road," Max was looking around the room with a far away look in his eyes. "I pay him to come in once a month and check on things. He fixes whatever needs fixing while his wife cleans up a little."

"I bet this was a wonderful home, Max," Liz was looking at everything very carefully. "Did you live here?"

"Only for holidays, sometimes," Max shook his head.

Across the back courtyard, Max led Liz into a set of stables. The smell of fresh straw and horses surprised Liz. She was more surprised when she saw a few horses still in some stalls.

"I let some people in the village keep there horses here," Max shrugged. "In return, they help to keep the buildings in repair. It is a good arrangement. I hope they will find somewhere else to go when the sale is made.

"What's through there?" Liz pointed at a solid door to the back.

"Ah," Max smiled. "That was my grand-père's workshop. As well as training horses and teaching people how to ride, he was a leather worker and made for people, the saddles. Come," he nodded at the door. "I will show you."

Upon pushing the door open, Liz could smell the leather before they even went in. Although it had not been used in years, it still retained the smell of leather and linseed oil. Along one wall was a series of square window panes, each one yellowed by the fumes of the trade that had long been practiced here. Tools were hung on the wall, a place for each one and each one in its place. Leather straps of many differing lengths and sizes hung on racks on the wall.

A series of metal loops had been fixed into small notches in the stone floor, while high above them, fixed to a long, wide timber beam, long leather straps with buckles hung.

"I have not been in here since he died," Max looked around. "Look, here," he pointed to the straps. "My grand-père would attach the sheets of leather to the straps, and then to the bottom rings. Then he would tighten them to keep the leather taut, no? But not stretched. Then he could work the oil in to make the leather soft and supple for the making of saddles, no?"

Liz looked around the room, nodding.

Grinning wildly, Max stepped up behind Liz. He placed his mouth a hair's breadth from her ear.

"That is not all it can be used for. I remember one summer, I came home from school early, but my grand-père and my grand-mère were not around. I came to look for them but instead I found Alain, the apprentice to my grand-père was in here. And it was not the leather he had tied up. It was his girlfriend. She was... secured... to the straps and the rings. And he was... making the love to her, no?"

Liz shivered. The sudden image of her being tied up and under Max's complete control taking immediate root.

"Of course, I hurried away because I did not want Alain to see me and give him the excuse to hit me. But I remember that she was enjoying herself. Very much."

Liz's mouth went dry as she nodded, her eyes fixed to the straps. She wondered how it would feel. She was suddenly aware that Max was standing right behind her. His breath was hot in her ear.

"Would you like to try it?"

Liz's eyes went as wide as her face was red. Was Max reading her mind?

"You mean..." she swallowed while a strange surge ran through her. "You want to, uhm... secure me?"

"I am asking," Max started to step around her. "If 'you' want 'me' to secure you."

"Uh..." Liz was already nodding, her face burning red.

"Hold up your arms," Max urged in a soft and gentle voice.

While her arms were raised above her head, Max wrapped the leather straps around her wrists and secured them with the buckles.

"Too tight?" he looked at her.

She shook her head, staring at the leather that was fixed around her wrists above her head.

"Have you ever done this before?" Liz's voice was hoarse. Her heart was pounding wildly. Her nipples were already fiercely hard, pressing against her this halter top.

"No," Max shook his head. "Not even to any sheets of leather. You will be the first. The first I have... secured. You will tell me when you have had enough, no?"

He pulled on a strap and Liz squeaked as it pulled her upwards, leaving her to stand only just comfortably on the ground.

"Oh, god," Liz groaned. But she did not ask Max to stop.

Taking some straps from the wall rack, Max fastened them to Liz's ankles. Each one was then fixed to a ring, pulling her legs apart, leaving her almost suspended from the ceiling, resting on her tiptoes.

"What are you thinking?" he was standing right behind her.

She could feel his heat through her clothing.

"I'm thinking," she swallowed, "that this is all too conveniently placed to have just been used on leather.

"I am thinking this, also," Max leaned in and started to nibble her earlobe. "But I am preferring to thinking that perhaps my grand-père did not know of this particular use."

"Not if he was anything like you," Liz was smirking.

"It was not me who wanted to be tied up, my little slave. Was that not what you said to me? That you were my slave?"

"Yes," Liz nodded, her body aching with desire. "Oh, god, Max. You have to touch me."

"No, no, no," Max shook his head. "You do not have this concept of being a slave quite right. It is not the slave who gives the commands. It is your Master. I will do what I want to do when I want to do it, no?"

"Just hurry up and do it, then!" she barked. "Max, I'm burning up."

"Is this a good burning?"

"Yes," Liz nodded frantically.

"I think," Max stepped to her front, "I shall remove this."

He started to unbutton her top, untying the halter behind her neck. It was soon discarded on the floor, her bare breasts exposed to the soft light of the window. Standing behind her, pressed up against her, Max ran his hands over her warm, firm globes of flesh, caressing them with a soft yet firm stroke. Liz sighed with pleasure. His fingers homed in on her hard nipples, scissoring them with his strong fingers. With Liz pressing against his hands, Max took her nipples between his thumb and his forefinger.

"Do you know," he smiled at her yearning plea, "I can do anything I want to you?"

"Yes!" she nodded. "Please?"

Max squeezed, gently pulling her nipples away from her.

"Ahh!" Liz cried. "Oh, Max! Yes. That's good. That feels so good."

Max continued to pinch her and then, when it became apparent that she liked what he was doing, he started to twist her nipples. Still gently yet with firmness that seemed to give her pleasure. As her orgasm rapidly approached, Max removed his hands from her.

"No!" Liz whined, pulling at the straps. "Don't stop!"

"I like this," Max smirked as he walked around her again. "I am in complete control, no?"

"Yes," Liz nodded, trying to thrust her aching breasts at Max when he was in front of her again.

"But I think you are still overdressed for a slave girl. I am thinking that slave girls should not wear the skirts for her master, no?"

"No," Liz nodded. "Max, please hurry."

"Max?" he grinned. "Am I not your Master?"

"M... Master," Liz gave a shudder of pure passion.

Max reached out and quickly flicked open the buttons of her skirt. It fell away, leaving her in her soaking thong. She glanced down, passed the ring in her navel that was glittering in the subdued light, over her smooth mound to her wet, lacey panties. She wondered how Max would remove them without untying her.

"Mmmmmm, bébé," Max's voice sounded a little choked. "Do you have any idea how good you look to me right now?"

He stepped from her view and she tried to turn her head to watch him. But she could not see him. She heard him take something from the wall. She felt something cold move against her hip. She quickly looked down to see a sharp knife cutting through the waistband. It moved to her other hip and with a quick flick, her ruined panties now lay on the stone floor. She was totally naked and completely under the control of her French lover. Liz was loving every second of it.

"You have been a naughty little slave, have you not?" Max walked around the front of her. He had something in his hand behind his back. Liz couldn't see what it was. "Questioning my autorité, n'est pas."

"Yes, Master," Liz nodded in a hoarse voice, playing along.

"And your master must punish you, n'est pas," he stepped around behind her again.

"Yes, Master," Liz bit her bottom lip. Punish her? As in...

The sudden sting on her backside make her cry out loud. He had slapped her buttock with his hand. It wasn't that it hurt that badly, although from the stinging sensation, she knew that there would be a perfect red handprint there, it was more the shock of it. The totally pleasant shock. Her whole body leapt at the stinging sensation and she hoped that he would not take her sudden cry as her request to talk.

"Oh, Max... I mean, Master..." she sighed her pleasure.

"This is incorrect," his breath was right by her ear again. He placed a gentle kiss at the base of her neck. "You must count them and say, 'Thank you, Master.' Compris?"

"Je comprends," Liz nodded.

"Bien," he stepped back. "And you will tell me if it is too much, okay? We begin again, no? There will be ten."

This time, she was expecting to feel his hand against her. Her body welcomed his touch.

"One," she cried out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. "Thank you, Master."

Another smack echoed through the room. Followed by another, and then another. Liz took them all, each one seeming to drive her passion to higher heights.

"Ten!" Liz cried out, straining against her bonds. She could feel the cool air against her wet thighs. "Thank you, Master."

"Have you had enough?" Max's voice was soft and caring.

"Yes Master," Liz nodded. "Now shut up and just fuck me... then you can untie me."

Standing behind her, Max eased his erection into her. Liz strained every muscle against the leather and cried out loudly as he filled her completely.

"Oh, God, Max!" she screamed as the first of many orgasms rode across her. "Fuck me!" Fill me! Oh, god! Max! Fuck me hard!"


* * *

After he untied her, Max held her while his soft hands caressed her glowing backside.

"You know what I am thinking right now?" he asked.

"No," Liz shook her head.

"How incredible that made me feel," he smiled. "How much power I felt I had."

"I trusted you, Max," Liz looked up and smiled at him. "I enjoyed it too. Does that make me a slut? Oh god, I'm not a slut am I?"

"Absolument pas," Max shook his head. "And even if it does, then what does that make me?"

"My Master?" Liz grinned.

"Bien," he smiled. "Always."

"Mmmmmm." Liz purred, snuggling into his caress.

"Do you want to know what else I am thinking right now?" he asked.

"What's that?" Liz murmured.

"I am hoping that the owners of the horses do not choose to come by today and saw me doing to you what I saw Alain doing all those years ago."

"Oh, god, Max!" Liz burned a bright red color.


* * *


Dinner was in an old converted castle in a small town further down the road from the hotel in which they were staying that night. Liz had dressed up in a mid-thigh length dress and she chose to wear stockings that evening. Max wore his white linen suit. They ate a delicious meal of fish, served with a delightful white wine under the evening sky on what was once a battlement that overlooked the small valley town. They lingered over the table long after the sun had set. When the restaurateurs put on some soft music, Max and Liz danced on the stone dance floor at the back of the battlement. When they finally returned to their car, Max moved closer to Liz, wrapping his arm around her shoulder and holding her close to him.

The bright headlights illuminated the roads and the hedges that lined them. Max had turned the radio up so that they could listen to the music. Every now and then, two tiny pin pricks of light showed that an animal had been disturbed. Smiling at the strange view, for she had never seen anything like it, so much green, she leaned back against the head restraint, and glanced up through the trees at the night sky.

"Beautiful," she sighed. "The stars."

"You like them?" Max looked over at her.

"Mmmmmmm" she nodded.

"You would like to see them better?"

"Yeah," Liz looked at him. "From out here? Where there's no light pollution?"

Max responded by slowing down and turning into a field through one of the many gaps in the hedge. Driving a little way away from the trees, Max parked the car and leaving the radio on, switched off the engine. He too looked skyward.

"Come," he leapt from his car.

Liz joined him just as he produced a blanket from the trunk. Hand in hand, they walked a few paces from the car and Max spread the blanket on the ground. A slow song started to play from the car. Without even thinking to ask, Liz stepped into Max's arms for a dance.


As the stars and the moon watch them dance, Liz laid her head against Max's shoulder tilting her face upward. As they danced, their eyes met and then their lips pressed together. As they always did between these two, the kiss deepened. When they finally eased themselves apart, a shooting star flashed over head.

"Vite," Max urged. "Make a wish."

"Already have," Liz nodded. "Already came true."

"Really?" Max smiled at her.

"Careful Bub," Liz's eyes sparkled in the moonlight. "I was promised a spanking for asking that."

"Ah ha," Max nodded. "Perhaps you would like to take me back to the workshop of my grand-père, no?"

"We could always take it in turns," Liz suggested with an impish smile. "I kind of liked having you as my Master."

"And I enjoyed being your Master, Liz," he pulled her into a hug. "But I am glad that you are not always subservient. I like that you have such spirit."

Melting into one entity, the two of them moved to a comfortable sitting position on the blanket where they gazed up at the stars.

"When we get back to the Hotel, Max," Liz's voice came out strange. "Will you make slow and tender love to me, like you did that first night we made love?"

"Liz?" Max turned to look at her. A tear ran down her cheek. Max reached out a finger and caught it. "What is the matter? Are you okay?"

"My holiday is coming to an end," she was fighting back a stream of tears. "And when I go home... I'm never going to see you again, am I?"

"Never is such a long time, Liz," Max's own voice sounded a little raw. "And who can say? Perhaps... perhaps we can try to remain together even though we are so far apart?"

"Do you think that might work?"

"It is something we can try," Max nodded. "And for now, it is only tomorrow Wednesday. We have four whole days before you must fly home to America on Sunday. And before that... Liz... there is something I should tell you."

"Not now, Max," Liz pressed her fingers to his lips. "Like you said, we have four days. It will keep. And why wait until we get to the Hotel? Make love to me now, Max. Here. Under the stars. I really, really want you to make me feel so special right now, Max."

"This I can do," he nodded.


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Parisienne Walkways - Part 15

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Hi everyone!

Well... you all seemed to enjoy that part, huh? Well, I am glad that you like what I am writing, and appreciate the 'variety'. I didn;t want to make this repetative. It's working, huh?

Thank you so very much for your kind works and your feedback. It;s no secret that this story had me worried about how you would react to it. I'm so glad that you like it. :)

Martine asked a question that I think might be better answered here. The Hardings were dues to arrive Tuesday, and spend the day in Paris. Max decided to avoid any ploy his father might concoct by getting out of Paris entirely. So he has missed the Hardings.

clueless - Thank for the thought :wink: Glad you are enjoying it :)

FSU/MSW-94 - Oh yeah. If only it was like this on the show, huh? :wink:

maya - Well... women have been able to divert mens minds for centuries. :wink:

AJK001 - Well, it has to end, if only because I'm running out of ideas! :wink:

Roswell 10/2/00 - Glad to see you back. YOu sure had some adventures recently. Thanks for the photos of Shiri. I'll see what I can do with them. :) I have something else to say, but best to save it for the end of this part.

roswellluver - Only four more days. :(

Ellie - They're so bad, they;re good! :wink:

txndreamer06 - Thank you :)

begonia9508 - Thank you. And naughty is good, right? :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Oh yes. Hot was what I was after. :wink:

martine - Sorry I never specified where they went but my knowledge of what lies outside of Paris is limited, Now, if the story had been based in Strassbourg, I know that area well. :wink: La Route du Vin! :)

ananymousarfan - Well, it had to end eventually, right? :( I'm pretty sure that the marriage will be annulled. There is definately no room for Kyle in her life now.

salcombe_girl - YOu've missed part of my story???? Shame! Shame! :wink:

Emz80m - Well... it's hard to say how Max will react. But we have a clue how Liz does. :wink:

smokie - I would love to be a fly on the wall for one of your meetings. :wink: Be sure to let me know how they react to tonight;s adventure. :wink:

VeronicB - Wow. I seem to be the cause of so many coild showers lately. :wink: Just happy that you're enjoying it.

vampyrax - Thank you :)

BelevnDreamsToo - Thats right! Show that I have an unconfident side to me! :wink:

Alien614 - Thank you :)

BehrObsession - Well.... :oops: Part of it is my imagination (oh my) But some of this is from, uhm.. YOu know what? It's all imagination. All of it. Okay? :wink:

Kristy - Fourteen chapters in one sitting? Phew! :wink: Thanks for reading :)

cherie - Sadly, just four days. But I'll take those four days and... Oh. Someone already used that line. :wink: I'm sure everyone will sort out their own demons. :wink:

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Well... as long as you enjoy the story even through your blushes. :) Thank for reading, and thanks for all your great words to keep me going. :) As for taking Max home... we already know she leaves Paris alone. :(

Erina - Well. sometimes, the perfect moment is so quickly passed that there is just no opportunity to take it. :wink:

Michelle in Yonkers - Well, the purpose of leaving Paris was to escape Daddy and the Photographer. Max is confident he wasnlt followed and while they sleep, the Hardings should be homeward bound. Its a win win situation for Max. :)

Shadolynxbehr - Reality may intrude a little earlier. :wink:


Parisienne Walkways

Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!



Part 15 - The Bubbly Stuff

Wednesday - 13th July.


The sounds were different when Liz awoke in the small hotel bedroom that morning. Everything seemed different. The most amazing difference, however, was that the old, lumpy mattress that sagged in the middle had forced the young couple's bodies close together. Their legs were entwined while Max's thigh was pressed against her damp core. Max's arm was wrapped underneath her shoulders and his hand was playing through her long, dark locks. His eyes were open, glued to her face.

"Bonjour, ma belle fleur," he leaned over and placed a soft and sensual kiss on her lips.

They laid in each other's arms, taking pure pleasure in one another's company and their close proximity. This was how it was supposed to be, she decided. Liz loved this old, lumpy mattress.


"This is a lovely old place, Max," Liz murmured a little huskily. "Such an old hotel. It's beautiful."

"There is, I fear, one drawback," he was smiling.

"And what's that?" Liz didn't care. This was close to perfection.

"We have not ordered for the croissants to be brought to our room," he sighed. "We will have to get up to go out for the breakfast."

"Oh," Liz's face fell into a pout. "That's something I've come to enjoy. I love it when we tease each other by licking off the errant flakes that fall to our skin."

"Errant?" Ma raised a single eyebrow.

"Not so cocky when I use big words, huh?" Liz smirked.

"Cocky?" Max laughed. "I'm sure you are loving it just fine with me being cocky. And you are right. I enjoy the licking of your skin... even when we do not have the croissants."

To emphasis this point, Max nuzzled his face into the crook of Liz's neck and licked her, pushing his tongue hard and flat against her taught sinews.

"Oh, Max," she sighed, moving to give him free reign.

"I am knowing something else that is not quite right with this room," his voice rumbled against her throat.

"What's that?" Liz was moving her lower body against his thigh.

"The shower, she is not big enough for the both of us, mon amour," he reached down to caress her mound. "I am afraid that it will be most difficult for me to help you in the making of your skin so soft and smooth."

"My day just doesn't seem right unless we start it by sharing a shower," Liz sighed.

"Then, ma belle ange de la pluie," he gave a mysterious smile, "I shall just have to find for us, a shower that is big enough for two. No? We cannot have you starting your days not right, n'est pas?"


* * *


Max was able to shave her, as had become one of their little rituals, but as Max had said, the small shower was just too small for the two of them to shower together. Fresh and clean, and wearing light summery clothing, Max and Liz left the hotel, hand in hand and walked the short distance along the square to a small pavement café that had the sun beaming down on the tables. While they ate croissants and drank hot chocolate, a first for Liz who had never had chocolate at breakfast, they watched the village people making their way to work. Once that crowd had vanished, the local teens started to congregate, calling out greetings to friends, and discussing what could be done with their day.

"Except that they're speaking a different language," Liz indicated the teens, "they're just like the kids back home."

A burst of laughter from a table behind them drew their attention. A group of middle-aged men were drinking small cups of coffee and discussing something that was clearly amusing to them. From the glances their way, Liz started to suspect it was them. This was confirmed when one of the men started to say, in a high pitched voice, "Max, Max!" Another man followed with a low "Liz, Liz." They all fell about laughing.

Seeing that Liz was now mortified, Max placed some money on the table, took her hand and pulled her up. Before he left, however, he turned to face the men.

"Have you ever seen anything so exquisite?" Max smirked. "And I get to make passionate love to her all night long. All you can do is visit Madame Palm and her five sisters, listening to us do what you can only dream, about, and then make jokes about what you hear in the morning. I know what I would rather do."

"What was that about?" Liz finally found her voice when they were out of earshot from the grumbling men.

"I asked that they show our visitors some respect," Max shrugged. "And I suggested that they get a life."


Back at the hotel, they packed their belongings into the bag that Max had brought. Liz couldn't help feeling a little sad as she placed her clothing on top of Max's. In just a few short days, she would be packing to return to America, where she would have to face the music, and the fallout from her disastrous wedding. One that she had every intention of getting annulled just as fast as she could. She glanced at Max, making one final check in the bathroom. She would make sure she had both his address and his telephone number before she left. But there would be plenty of time for her to get that from him, later. Right now, she wanted to enjoy his company, and live the last few days of her fantasy come true to the fullest.


* * *


It felt great to be back in the Spider again. She really did enjoy the feeling it gave her as they moved along the roads like they owned them. She could see why men liked to own them, and why women liked to ride in them. Liz felt untouchable. Her hair was wiping in the wind, and although she knew she was going to pay for it later, it just felt too good, too free to care.

As they passed a large road sign, Liz spotted that they were driving away from Paris. She knew that yesterday, they had driven southeast. Today, it seemed they were driving northeast.

"Where are we going?" she asked him above the growl of the engine and the roar of the wind.

Not that she really cared. Liz had long ago placed herself into Max's hands and he had not led her astray so far. Not unless you call being turned into a wildcat nymphomaniac exhibitionist 'being led astray'. Or, as Max would no doubt describe her, a sensuous woman who was not afraid of her sexuality any more. Either way, it was a journey she had enjoyed. One she would never have experienced had she not suffered that terrible day two weeks ago. Kyle had been good for her in one aspect, at least. She only hoped that she could slip back into being Liz Parker again. Somehow, being an exhibitionist in Roswell, or in Boston did not seem to be the image she really wanted to portray. Someone might get the wrong idea about her.

"We are in the region known as Champagne," Max smiled. "You have heard of it, no?"

"Where they make Champagne, right?"

"Right," Max nodded. "Well, I have the friend who owns a small vineyard. And he is making his own Champagne. He tells me, and I of course, have to agree because he is my friend, that he makes the best Champagne in all of France. And you, I am afraid, being my guest, must also tell him this."

Max's smile suggested that he did not disagree with his friend, too much.

"Regarde!" Max pointed at a hill sloping up to their left.

Liz could see that the hill was covered with long, straight lines of vines.

"The vines that produce the grape for the Champagne," he smiled. "And you can only call it Champagne if the grape has been grown here and it has been made here."

"Is there anything you don't know?" Liz cocked an eye at him.

"My father and me," Max grinned at her, "we know everything in the world."

"Yeah, yeah, yeah," Liz rolled her eyes.

"You do not believe me?" he smirked. "Ask me something. Anything."

"Okay," Liz narrowed her eyes with a wicked grin. "In New Mexico, there was this tribe of Indians. Hundreds of years ago. They were called the Anasazi. Where did they come from and where did they go?"

"My father," Max laughed. "He is knowing the answer to that one."

Liz looked at Max for a moment before shaking her head.


At long last, Max turned through the gates of a large house. Behind the house, nestled against a hill was a small barn-like building, made out of some kind of corrugated metal, finished off in green. No sooner had the Ferrari come to a halt when a man of about forty years emerged from the house.

"Max!" the man called, heading for his door. "Bonjour, mon ami. C'a été un long temps."

"Vous avez raison," Max was nodding as he climbed out of the car. "Je suis désolé. Mais vous savez les choses sont."

The two men shook hands and then hugged in a fierce embrace.

"You should not be staying away from here for so long," the man continued. "The vines, they pine for you."

"I used to work here when I was smaller," Max helped Liz from the car. "Liz, this is my good friend, Armand. Armand, this lovely, lovely young lady is Liz. She has come from America to visit Paris and I am for her, the guide."

"And something a little more if I am not mistaken, ah?" he was grinning. "Enchantez, Liz," he took her hand and kissed the back of it. "And now you are fed up with Max and wish to be with the real man, no?"

"Armand," Max's voice had an edge to it. "Any more of this flirting with my girlfriend and I will speak with Monique."

Liz's eyes moved at once to Max, her heart in her throat at his words.

"Ah," Armand shrugged. "Monique will be too thrilled that you have paid us a visit to notice if I take your friend here for a tour of the vineyards."

"You can show us the winery," Max shook his head. "I am planning to show the Vineyard to Liz myself."

"It is good to see you again, mon ami," Armand slapped Max's back. "And it is good to see you with a pretty girl at last. Monique was getting a little concerned. You still haven't told her your not French?"

"I tried last night," Max sighed as Liz took his hand. "The moment passed."

"It will work out, Max," Armand smiled, looking at Liz. "Anyone can tell that she is as besotted with you as you are with her. Now come. Monique has prepared for us a nice luncheon."


Armand led the pair around the side of the house, rather than through it. In the backyard, in the shade provided by some very old vines, a woman in her late thirties was placing plates on a table that was heaving with all sorts of food. There was bread, cheeses, meats, olives, sun dried tomatoes, sliced peppers, apples, grapes and slices of melon as well as various sauces and dips that reminded Liz of the Salsa that Senior Chow used to serve up. Carafes of wine were interspersed among the food.

"Monique!" Armand called. "Viens voir qui est venu nous rendre visite. Et regarde ce qu'il a apporté avec lui."

The dark haired woman with graying temples turned to greet the couple.

"Max!" she cried, wiping her hand on an apron. "Tu es enfin arrivé. Pourquoi as-tu attendu tellement longtemps pour nous rendre visite?"

She hurried over to him and pulled him into an embrace. After a short while, she pulled back and looked at Liz.

"Et qui est-ce ? Elle est belle, Max."

"Monique," Max smiled, taking Liz's hand again. "Voici Liz. D'Amérique." He turned to Liz. "This is Armand's wife. Monique. She says that you are beautiful."

"Thank you," Liz smiled, extending her hand. "Pleased to meet you."

"Enchantée," she shook Liz's hand and smiled back at her. "D'Amérique, ah?" she winked at Max. "Perhaps you can still see her when you return to Boston?"

"America is a huge place, Monique," Max shook his head. "And if Liz is on one coast while I'm on the other..."

"What does love care about distance? she shrugged. If you're in love, you're in love. Come. Liz looks like she's wasting away.

"Why does everyone want to fatten her up?" Max demanded while Monique led Liz toward the table.


While they helped themselves to the food and wine, and sat eating in the shade provided by the vine leaves, they continued to talk. Monique could only speak a little English so she stuck to French and relied on Max and Armand to translate for her.

"So where are the children?" Max looked around, suddenly noticing that something was missing.

"Children?" Armand raised an eyebrow. "Gabrielle is already eighteen years old and is studying at the Sorbonne next year. And Marcell, he is sixteen already. But as to where they are, Marcell is playing the football with his friends and Gabrielle... she decided not to see you." His eyes indicated Liz. "My daughter has always had the crush on Max, no? And to see him with another girl..."

"She is just a child," Max looked a little embarrassed.

"She's the same age as me," Liz pointed out.

"This I am forgetting," Max chuckled. "But the last time I am seeing Gabby, she was only thirteen, no?"

"Thirteen, oui," Armand nodded. "And it is perhaps better that she does not know that Liz is the same age as her. She will be crushed."

For the first time ever, Liz was seeing Max feeling decidedly uncomfortable.


"This is good," Liz indicated her half-filled plate. "La nourriture est bonne."

"And after we have eaten," Armand smiled. "Would you like to see how the Champagne is made?"

"That would be great," Liz was nodding.


* * *


"Today," Armand explained to Liz as they entered the large, green building, "we are using the same methods to make Champagne that were pioneered by Dom Perignon in the 17th century. Yes. Dom Perignon was a person and the most famous of all Champagnes is named after him."

They first stopped at some large, empty vats.

"The first step that will be involved is quite similar to the process involved in making regular wine. At the end of the growing season, which is early Fall, the grapes, they are harvested and pressed in to what we call a 'must'. This must is placed in an open container where it is added, the yeast. This begins the process of fermentation that will convert the sugar to the alcohol. Champagne is traditionally made from a blend of grapes, Chardonnay, Pinot Meunier and Pinot Noir. Chardonnay is a white grape, while the other two, they are both dark. All three are growing here in my vineyards. Oh, and yes. The grape skins are removed before we create the grape must. That was Max's job, no? He had to peel all of the grapes."

For a moment, Liz actually believed him.

"After the first fermentation is completed, we are trading some of our vats with some of the other growers. We blend these to produce our ideal mix of flavor, sugar level and acidité. It is this blending where the real art of world class Champagne making occurs, for the ultimate balance, the complexity and flavor of the final creation depends on it. It requires not only the skill, but on the intuition and instinct because Champagne is meant to age well, no? The wine maker... me... I must create a blend that will still be wonderful when it is opened many years down the road."

"So... how can you tell which vats will go well with which vat?" Liz pondered. "And how do you know who's vats will work well with yours?"

"That," Armand tapped the side of his nose, "is where this comes in very handy. Of course, tasting it helps also."

"How do you get the bubbles in?" Liz asked. Then she realized something. She started to grin. "And don't tell me 'that' was Max's job."

Armand started to laugh.

"When the wine maker is satisfied with the blending, then he is adding another round of yeast and other nutrients to the wine. Then, it is sealed and corked in the glass bottles. Very thick, no? This is then stored in a cool cellar, which I have buried under the hill behind us. This is where the second fermentation takes place and more alcohol as well as the carbon dioxide are produced."

"Only the carbon dioxide can't escape from the bottle because it's sealed," Liz grinned. "And so then it's trapped in the wine, right?"

"This is correct," Armand nodded with a huge grin. "Perhaps you are wanting a job with me?"

"Ah, no," Liz shook her head.

"This carbon dioxide that is produced," he continued, "is a process that is slow. It will eventually be leading to an increase inside the bottle to six atmospheres."

"That's a lot," Liz nodded.

"During the second fermentation," Armand nodded in agreement, "the yeast will eventually use up the available supply of nutrient and sugar and die. This is marking the end of the second fermentation and the beginning of the... uh, the maturation process. Champagne is aged anywhere from nine months to several years. I age my Champagne for five years which is why mine is among the highest quality. This is when the true aromas and flavor of the Champagne come together. The decomposition of the dead yeast cells can add the interesting flavor nuances... including one of the 'toastiness' that is often associated with quality Champagne.

"And here it is that we are faced with our toughest challenge, no? How do you remove the dead yeast cells, in order to prevent the Champagne from being cloudy when it is opened? If it was cloudy, you could not be seeing the bubbles rise to the top of the glass, no? This is an important part of Champagne! This could also have the detrimental effect on the flavor also. This is a job not easy because the wine maker must be sure to retain the carbonation within the bottle. And we do this by storing the bottles with the neck tilted down" he indicated the angle with his arm, "and rotating it often so that the yeast collects just under the cork. And then, the bit most clever. We 'flash freeze the tip of the neck and then we pop the cork. The dead yeast is removed, along with a small portion of the wine.

"That's quite clever," Liz grinned.

"We think so," Armand grinned. "Thank you."

"We have here the little scientist who will one day cure cancer," Max spoke from behind Liz.

"Ah, a scientist?" Armand grinned. "Maybe you could invent the better way to remove the yeast, no?"

"And ruin all those years of tradition?" Liz shook her head. "Listen, it was a tradition that got me started with Max. Far be it for me to ruin traditions."

"And what tradition is that?" Armand looked at Max who was fidgeting nervously.

"He took me to see Rodin's, The Kiss," she told him. "You know, the one about having to kiss the person who showed it to you?"

"I have not heard of this one," Armand narrowed his eyes.

"So what is happening now you have the cork off," Max glared hard at Armand.

"Ah, yes," he nodded. "The Champagne. Now that the cork is off, and some wine removed, we must replace it, no? Each individual Champagne producer has a secret formula that is used to create the replacement liquid. It is typically made from certain types of sugar and old wine. This process is called 'Dosage' and will dictate whether the Champagne is Brut, very dry, or Doux, very sweet. I make them both. The final product is then re-corked with traditional Champagne corks, and not those plastic... things! We then cage them up and they are ready to be sold. And there you have it."

"Thanks you Armand," Liz was smiling. "I never realized that there was so much to it. So the bottles you sell this year, you actually made five years ago?"

"This is true," he nodded.

"And Max last worked here five years ago?"

"Alors!" Armand grinned broadly. "You are right. The bottles I am ready to be selling now were the last ones that Max helped me with. Un moment!"

Armand almost ran to a cabinet at the far end of the barn. When he returned, he was carrying a sheet of paper.

"You will write your address here, Liz," he handed her a large label. "I will wrap for you a case containing both types of my Champagne and have them sent to your house in America. Then, perhaps for some big party in years to come, you can use the Champagne that Max made to celebrate, no?"


* * *


When they returned from the tour, they discovered that Monique had already cleared away the table. All that remained was a large pitcher and four glasses. The pitcher contained chilled grape juice, that Liz found very refreshing.

"We would have helped clear up," Max told Monique.

"I only carried everything indoors," she shrugged. "The kitchen in a total mess."

"Then we will help," Max finished his drink and put his glass down."

"No you won't," Monique shook her head. "Why don't you take Liz out for a walk through the Vineyards. It's lovely out there this time of year. I know you want some alone time with her anyway. Armand can help me here."

"Would you like to take a walk?" Max rose and held out his hand to Liz.

"Sure," she nodded with a smile. "Where to?"

"Just out among the vines," he smiled back.


The rows of vines began almost at once. Each row ran up the hill, following the slope. In between the tended earth were wide, grassy strips. Although the sun was hot, the tall vines provided enough shade to stop them from overheating. Liz couldn't help studying the condition of the soil.

"It doesn't look anything special," she remarked. "I thought it would be... I don't know. Darker than that. Richer."

"It may surprise you to know," Max stopped and picked up a dry clump. "Bad soil actually makes good wine."

"Why is that?" Liz frowned.

"Because the poor soil, she is low in organic and mineral content that will the vine to thrive. This makes the vine direct nearly all of its resources toward ripening the fruit rather than causing the lots of green leaves and shoots. And in the same way, the vine must work hard for its water. The reason being the same. The vine will direct the resources to the ripening of the fruit."

"That's rather clever," Liz grinned.

"You see," Max smiled at her, "the less... yield from each vine is a good indication of higher quality. And it is this that Armand works hard to control. I have spent many long and hard hours out here, controlling the pests, the weeds and making with the pruning. And always, it is hot, no?"

"Poor baby," Liz purred, a mental picture of Max in nothing but a pair of shorts and with his muscular torso tanned and glistening from his day's toil. "How did you cool off?" She glanced up at the clear blue sky with the sun beating down on them. She was already hot and all they had done was walk.

"I took a shower," Max grinned, his eyes lighting up. "At lunch time and then again when I am finished."

"But it's quite a walk back to the house," Liz turned and looked down the large slope that ran back to the house. She looked around to see the extent of Armand's Vineyard. It looked huge. "And what if you were... say... all the way over there?" She pointed off to the distance.

"There is too much here for just one person," Max smiled at her. "I am not the only one who was working here. I only had to look after the vines from that pole over there," he pointed to a tall red pole that was perhaps half a mile away. "As far as that pole over there." Across the other side of them was another red pole. This one was slightly further away. "Every day, I would begin my work down there and make up and down, up and down. By the middle of the day, I would try to be here so that I would be in the right place for to have my shower."

"Wouldn't it have been better to take your break closer to the house?" Liz looked back down the hill.

"Come," Max pulled her by her hand.

They rose above the crest of the ridge to reveal that behind this hill was a series of rocky outcrops. A small ravine split into the side of one of these. A worn track led down into the ravine. As soon as she stepped onto the path, behind Max, she could hear the faintest rumbling sound. Holding his hand tightly, Liz followed him, knowing he would not let any harm come to her but curious as to where he was taking her. The sound grew with each passing moment.

"Voila," Max announced as he stepped into a huge opening. The walls were sheer and rose a hundred feet into the air. Below them was a small pool, perhaps twenty feet in diameter. The pool was fed at one end by a waterfall that had sprung from the rock face, perhaps twelve feet up and cascaded onto a flat stone, where the water then trickled into the pool. It was drained by another fall that vanished beneath some boulders. "This... is my shower. And as you can see, she is plenty big enough for two, no?"

"Won't it be cold?" Liz eyed it nervously.

"Oh, yes," Max nodded with a huge smile. "And it is just what is being needed on a hot day when you have been working hard. Will you take your shower with me?"

"Uhm..." Liz glanced over her shoulder back up the path. "What if someone comes?"

"As you saw," he stroked her arms, "there were no workers here today, and Armand... he will not come in case he is seeing something he would rather not see."

"So they know..."

"No," Max shook his head. "They suspect. It is something they might be doing themselves, so there is no need to be worrying."

Without waiting for her reply, Max started to unbutton his shirt. As it fell to the ground, he was already kicking off his shoes. His pants and his socks followed, leaving him standing in his boxers.

"Are you not coming?" he looked at her with a raised eyebrow.

"I'm only wearing my panties under this, Max," she informed him.

"So?" he grinned, peeling off his boxers. "I am wearing nothing, now."

"So you want me to go skinning dipping," her eyes were drawn by the beginnings of his erection. "Here."

"We are almost in the middle of nowhere, Liz," Max pointed out. "We have already made love in the middle of a park in Paris, in a limousine, in a crowded night club and on the steps beneath the Sacre Coeur. And it is now, when there is no one to see, you are finding your modesty?"

"When you put it like that..." Liz slipped her dress from her shoulders, and then hooked her thumbs into her panties to push them down her legs.

"No matter how many times I am seeing you," Max shook his head, his voice low and almost reverential, "I am always finding you so beautiful."


The pool wasn't deep. As they waded into the pool, hand in hand, all the while, Liz raising herself on tiptoes from the cold, it only reached as far as her mid thighs. Max just allowed himself to dunk down, completely immersing himself in the water.

"Ah," he sighed when his head broke the water's surface. "It is good, no?"

"No," Liz shook her head. "It's freezing."

Max stood up and quickly wrapped himself around Liz's warm body.

"Oh my God!" she squealed, trying to break from his grasp. "Max! You're all cold and wet!"

Max smiled, and fell backwards, pulling Liz with him.

"No!" she screamed just before they both fell into the water together.

When they emerged again, they were still embracing.

"I'll get you back for that," she smiled at him.

"I am hoping so," he nodded, reaching to place a kiss on her cool lips. "Come. Let us take the shower."

As they waded to the cascade, their hands kept touching one another as they stayed as close together as possible. Climbing onto the rock, they stood beneath the falling water. Liz gasped at the coldness, but soon grew used to it. Standing in front of him, facing him, Liz pressed her lips to his, while she wrapped her hand around his manhood, not yet risen from its cold shock. Beneath her touch, however, it started to grow in her hand, a feeling she found rather pleasant. The kiss deepened as their lips began their ages old wrestling match. When she felt Max's hand on her hip, she parted her thighs invitingly.

Her wet hand gripped tightly around his ever expanding erection, moving softly up and down its length. While his hand remained frustratingly on her hip, his other hand reached between them to play with her firm nipples. Max then broke from their kiss and still teasing her breasts, he started to kiss down her chin, over her neck to the back of her ear, a spot he had learned long ago was sensitive to her. She was warming up rather quickly.

Moving down from her neck, Max's lips - and his tongue - caressed a path over her collarbone, up the slope of her breast to the peak of her erect nipple. As he laved her, placing soft nips with his teeth as well as pulling it with his lips, she started to rub him harder, an indication that she was very, very aroused now."

"Max," she sighed when his lips started the journey downward again.

He paused for a moment to play with her navel, his tongue and teeth finding the pin that now pierced her. And then his tongue traced a line straight down, over the smooth skin of her shaven sex and along side her warm and very wet lips. He teased the entrance to her honeyed cavern and then inched back up to brush over her little button. Holding his head, both for support and to make sure that he did not abandon his task, Liz quickly rose to the height of her passion. As she came, she called out Max's name, the cry lost amid the roar of the waterfall.

Smiling, he looked up at her.

"Your turn," she pulled against the side of his face, lifting him up.

When he was standing, she knelt down at his feet and cupped his manhood, including the sac that hung beneath him, tightened from the cold. She breathed against him, a gentle blast of warm air against his already hard rod. Kissing the tip and then swirling her tongue around the circumference, Liz soon took him as deeply into her mouth as she could. She wrapped her arms around his buttocks to hold him place and started to use her mouth, her lips and her tongue to make love to Max..

"Mon dieu!" Max was gasping. "Liz... incredible... amazing..."

He was babbling.

"Alors!" he called out. "Liz, I am coming.

She had worked him as best as she knew how, and it had paid dividends. Max came and she clung to him, determined that she was not going to spill a single drop.

"You liked that?" she looked up with a huge smile.

"Liz," Max smiled down at her through lust laden eyes. "I cannot tell you how much knowing you has meant to me. I liked that as much as I like you. And I loved it!"

Liz broke into a huge smile and climbed to her feet. She wrapped her arms around his neck and pressed her lips to his. They kissed long, hard and passionately as they slowly melted to the rocks, still under the pounding sensation of the falling water. She did not feel at all uncomfortable as Max rolled so that he was on top of her. Who said that it would be uncomfortable to be caught between a rock and a hard place? Obviously, they had never met Max.

With one arm under her head, cushioning her, his hand was playing with her breast. As she was crying out with the pleasure his squeezing her nipple was causing, Max eased his hard manhood into her, slowly, gently, allowing her to feel each and every passing millimeter. Her purr was long, low and loud.

"Max!" she hissed with pleasure when he had filled her completely.

She wondered if she would ever feel as full or as loved as this ever again.


While Max rained kisses on her wet face, he started to pump himself in and out of her using long, slow strokes. As with every completed revolution, Liz was rising to a mighty crescendo. He started to quicken his thrusts. Only by a little bit but enough for Liz to notice. With each step up in tempo, so the volume of Liz's cries rose in accompaniment. It was not long before Max was working at a fast pace and Liz's cries echoed of the rock walls.

"Yes, Max!" she called. "Yes! Coming! Oh, god! I'm coming!"

And then she came. And Max came with her.


"Max?" Liz lay panting beneath him. "Is it me, or does this just keep getting better?"

"I cannot speak for you," Max was gasping for breath. "But for me, it is getting better."

"Do we have to get back or anything?"

"We are in no rush," Max shook his head and kissed the tip of her nose.

"Can we just stay here?" she smiled. "Soak up the sun and... just relax?"

"Of course we can," Max nodded.

There was a little swimming, too. And another bout of lovemaking, slow and gentle and just as fulfilling as the first time. But the sun soon moved beyond the high walls and cast them in shade. Hand in hand, still naked, they climbed the path up into the sunlight and allowed the day's warmth to dry them before they could get dressed again.


* * *


The sun was already low in the sky when Max parked the Spider in front of L'Hôtel du Vieux Paris. With their bag over his shoulder, they made their way through the foyer, passing by the front desk.

"Mon ami viendra les récupérer," Max handed the Concierge the keys to the Ferrari, along with a number of Euro notes. "Est-ce que pourriez-vous arranger pour qu'une pizza soit livrée dans notre chambre ? Moitié margurhita, moitié pepperoni. Et pouvons-nous prendre notre petit-déjeuner dans la chambre ?"

"Oui monsieur," the Concierge nodded, placing the keys and the money in his pocket. "Avezvous pensé à."

"Ah, et une bouteille de l'eau et une bouteille de Pepsi-cola," Max looked back as they walked toward the lift. "Des bouteilles d'un litre et demi."


Their meal that night was the shared pizza out on the balcony as they watched Paris come alive in the night. They fed one another, holding the triangle up for the other to bite morsels from, while getting cheese and tomoato sauce all over themselves.

"Shower," Liz grinned after they had sat in one another's arms for long enough. "You go first," she extricated herself from Max's arms. "I'll take mine after."

"Not together?" Max looked surprised.

"If we do, we'll end up making love in there. And I have plans for you tonight, mister."

"Okay," Max nodded. "If you are having the plans, who am I to spoil them."

She grinned as he disappeared into the bathroom. As soon as she heard the spray, Liz crosses to the drawer, and pulled something out.

"Oh yes, Monsiuer Max," there was a gleam in her eye. "I have plans indeed."

She glanced at her watch just as there was a knock at the door.

"Perfect timing," she grinned.

She opened the door.

"Merci," she thanked the bellboy who had given her a large box.

From inside the box, Liz took out a dozen or so fat, dark pink candles. She placed these around the room and lit them one by one. After dimming the lights to make sure she had achieved her desired effect, she smiled. She slid the box, still with something else inside, under the bed. She did not want Max to see that just yet. The scent of warm strawberries was filling the air. The fragrance and the warm glow was already filling her with anticipation and desire.

When Max emerged from the bathroom, Liz just knew that he would be wondering what she was up to, that he would remember her lap dance the other night. But this was better. When she heard the shower stop, she knew that Max would soon be out. A huge smile spread across her face. This was going to be good.


"Just lay on the bed," she smiled as his eyes looked around the room in wonderment. "I won't be long."

"If you insist," Max nodded, smiling at her.

She knew that he loved the smell of strawberries. He had told her earlier that he would always associate that smell with her, and that it would make him all aroused. Liz wanted him all aroused, ready for when she emerged from her own shower.

Taking no chances, Liz used her strawberry scented shower gel her strawberry scented shampoo. She fervently wished that they made strawberry scented shaving gel, because she even shaved herself, all over, wanting to be as smooth as silk for Max.

Once she was dry, and ready to face him, Liz pulled on a small, sheer, white teddy. Even though the mirror was all steamed up, Liz knew that she looked hot. Liz knew that she would have Max wanting her as soon as she stepped through that door. But he would have to wait. As she had said, Liz had plans.

"Liz!" Max gasped with awe as she emerged from the bathroom.

He was already starting to sit up from where he had been lying on the bed.

"No," Liz shook her head as she climbed onto the foot of the bed and started to crawl with the grace of a large cat over his legs. Taking his outstretched hand in hers, she started to push them away.

"But I am wanting to touch you," he pouted.

"I know," she smiled at him. "But not yet."

She continued to push him so that he had to lay back down. She now had his hands spread out above his head. She lifted herself and reached over to one hand. This placed her shaved haven, covered by the sheer white lace, just above Max's face. As he reached up to press a warm wet kiss against her lips, he did not notice what she was doing. Then she twisted to his other hand, letting out a soft sigh as his tongue teased her button through the mesh. She almost gave up, then. But she stuck to her guns and Max complained when she moved back down his body to straddle her sex over his throbbing erection.

"Liz?" he frowned when his hands would not respond to his wish to reach out to her.

She had tied his wrists to the bed corners. Looking up at each hand, he started to chuckle.

"You should have me the other way if you are wanting to spank me, Liz," he grinned.

"It's not a spanking I have in mind," she smirked. "But hold that thought."

Moving off of him, she turned to his feet.

"Resistance is useless," Liz droned in her best Vogon voice.

"You are watching too much of the Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy," Max shook his head while she fastened his ankles.

"What can I say?" her eyes sparkled. "I never had a life till I met you. Now shut up and enjoy this."

"Is this an order?" he raised an eyebrow. "Am I supposed to say Yes, Mistress?"

"If it makes you feel better," she shrugged. "But I have a different torture planned for you."

"Do you?" Max was smiling. "This should be fun, no?"

"Oh, yes," Liz nodded. "Definitely."


Reaching beneath the bed, Liz slid the box out. She lifted up a bowl of strawberries and placed them on the bed, next to Max, just by the hollow of his underarm. Then, she took out another bowl, this one with warm, liquid chocolate, and placed it on his other side. Max raised his eyebrows in a questioning look.

Choosing the plumpest strawberry that she could find, Liz dipped it into the liquid confection and held it over his chest. She allowed the chocolate to drip onto his nipples, down his stomach and watched as the sweetness filled his belly button. Max moaned, expecting her to lick it off, now. Instead, she placed the big berry in his mouth. Max took it, crushing it between the roof of his mouth and his tongue.

"Nice?" Liz smiled.

"Très bon," Max nodded. "Now I will be thinking of you and this night even when I see the strawberry."

"That's a good thing, then," Liz smiled, picking up another piece of fruit.

Liz began to play; more fruit and more chocolate, each piece dripping with warmth, each drip creating frantic anticipation and heightened desires. From his groin, where Liz was again sitting right on top of his bulging erection, all the way up his stomach, his chest, over his nipples, even around his mouth and chin, Max was being painted with sweet chocolate. Then, she slid back so that she was perched between his thighs, leaving his manhood exposed. With another piece of fruit, Liz dribbled chocolate from the base, all the way along its length and up to the tip. Allowing a few drops to polka dot the tip, she then traced her way down again.

"Liz," Max was panting now.

His erection was quivering. After eating the berry, Liz took another. She used this one to add more chocolate to his manhood.

"Make love to me, Liz," Max was gasping.


Starting at his mouth, she kissed him, allowing him to share the strawberry that she held between her teeth, each one crushing and sharing the pink pulp. She licked the juice and the chocolate from around his lips, and from off his chin. Realizing what she was about to do, Max's body seemed almost as though it would burst. Down his neck, across his chest and over his nipples, Liz licked, sucked and in some cases, used her teeth to devour the chocolate from Max's skin. Down his stomach to his navel, she used her tongue to lap the chocolate like a cat would lap cream. When that was done, she started again, heading over Max's lower abdomen.

"Ah, mon Liz," Max was gasping. "What are you doing to me?"

He cried out when her tongue started to lick the base of his pulsating cock. He writhed on the bed as she continued to work up his length and when she surrounded him with her warm, wet mouth, Max exploded. She drank all he had to offer, mixing with the strawberry and the chocolate taste in her mouth.

Liz was not finished, however. Raising herself up so that Max could see her, she again straddled him. She reached for her own sex, and pulled at the catches of her teddy. The whole thing sprang up and Liz took the edges and pulled it from her and over her head. Walking on her knees, she placed her hot, wet sex over Max's face, but just out of his reach.

"Is this what you want?" her fingers slid between her lips, moving over the top of her own clitoris. She couldn't help sighing.

"Yes," Max strained to reach her again, but couldn't. "I want to taste you."

"You do?" she gave him a sultry smile. "Let's see what we can do about that."

Liz pushed two of her fingers into herself. Pulling them out, she offered them to Max to clean them with his tongue and his lips.

"You like that, big boy?" her whole voice oozed sex.

"Yes," Max licked his lips. "I want you."

"Just as soon as you're hard enough," she reached back and started to stroke his manhood, still not fully recovered from his earlier orgasm. "Will you be long, do you think? 'Cause I'm getting kind of hot myself."

She started to rub herself again, her finger drawing a lazy circle around her button.

"I'd hate to have my orgasm and decide that I had had enough for one day," she gave him another stroke as she pushed a finger inside herself. "Wouldn't that just be awful for you?"

"I have trained you too well," Max again tried to reach for her.

"Do you think you're hard enough for me now?" Liz fingers danced from her clitoris to the entrance of her chasm where her nectar was flowing freely.

"Yes," Max nodded. "Yes. Fuck me, Liz."

"I don't know," she shook her head and gave his cock a squeeze. "You know how much I like a hard cock in my pussy. Your hard cock. I wouldn't want to be disappointed."

"Trust me," Max's voice was strained. "You fuck yourself on my cock and you won't be left wanting."

"I'm going on a lot of faith here right now, Max," she grinned as she slid backwards, rubbing her wetness against his chest. "You better not leave me high and dry."

"Dry will not be a problem for you, I think," he was watching her progress with urgent eyes.

As the wet folds of her flower came into contact with the angry, purple head of Max's monster, his eyes closed and he started to groan. But Liz moved away again.

"Maybe it is hard enough."

"Try it and see," Max bit through clenched teeth, as he tried to raise his hips and force himself against her again.

"If you say so," Liz pushed against him, allowing his tip to just slip inside her.

With an evil chuckle, she moved off again.

"I think you might be right, Max," she nodded, leaning down to kiss his nose. "I think you might be hard enough after all."

"If you don't fuck me now," he growled, "I'm going to give you such a spanking..."

"Careful, Max," she smiled. "I'm the one in control right now."

"Things change," Max lowered his hips.

Liz again pressed herself against him, but she failed to realize how far Max had dropped his hips. As soon as he was inside her, he struck. Whatever control she felt she had was lost. She collapsed onto Max while he repeatedly speared her from below. Both were crying out, both wanted to come. And they did. Their passions boiled over. The anticipation that was simmering just below Liz's surface boiled over faster than she had anticipated, and even though he was still bound, Max had all the control after all. She was just there for the ride. Together, again, they sang out into the night, crying out their love for one another, wishing that this night could last forever.

If either one of them knew what was just around the corner, they would have wished harder.


* * *

Okay, Erin... dangit! Did I telegraph Bastille Day or something? :wink: Well spotted on that one. LOL.
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Parisienne Walkways - Part 16

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Okay...

I cannot apologise enough for the delay you guys have experienced with this story. Real life really hit me hard just recently, so I can only say that things appear to be getting back to some form of normality for me, and with it, comes the time I need to continue writing.

I hope you don't mind me not responding individually this week, as there are rather a lot of comments and well wishes, not to mantion the bumps, and hopes for a new part soon.

So without further ado, let me get this next chapter up, 'cause I am sure you are all anxious to get your teeth into this new chapter. :)


Parisienne Walkways


Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!


Part 16 - Let Them Eat Cake

Thursday - 14th July.


While it had been really fun staying overnight in that small and rather rustic Hotel out of Paris the other night, Liz really had missed her hotel room here in the City. Not least because of the shower, and the croissants delivery but because the bed was a lot more comfortable. It had been a complete pleasure waking up wrapped up in Max where it had been the mattress that had pushed them together. So when she woke up in her newer, more comfortable bed again with Max holding her and their limbs totally entwined, Liz felt that her life simply could not get any better.

He was still sleeping as the morning light flooded their room. She watched him, the ways his eyelids flickered, the way his nostrils rose and fell with his breath, and the tiny smile that told her that not only was he really awake but that he was all too aware of the fact that she was studying him.

"The scarves are still there, you know," she whispered, pressing her wet sex against his morning rise.

Max's eyes popped open.

"Is it my turn to tie you up and cover you in the chocolate, perhaps?" he raised a single eyebrow.

"Well," Liz shrugged, pulling herself closer to him, his manhood nestling against her feminine folds. "The chocolate would be cold by now, but you know... if you want to, uhm... tie me up..."

"You enjoyed that?" he gave her a gentle smile.

"Yeah," she nodded, her face turning pink. "The knowledge that you could do anything to me and I couldn't stop you. It was kind of hot."

"Perhaps we will do this again, later," Max winked. "But for now, if I am tying you up then the boy will be here with the croissants and he will see that you are my slave, no?"

"I think they already know," Liz grinned at him. "But there's something we can do."

"And what is that?" he raised both eyelids.

Pushing herself up a little, she felt the tip of Max's erection slip into the entrance of her liquid core. Max gave out a soft moan when she eased herself onto him, filling her.

"I love the feeling of you inside me," Liz buried her face in his neck. "I'm so glad that I waited for you."

"I have said it once," Max started to move with a slow and gentle rhythm. "I will always be blessing the day that I am meeting you."


* * *


The croissants arrived shortly after they had exploded together. Liz had suggested that they shower first, seeing as they were both somewhat sticky from both bouts of love making: the night before and this morning. Naturally, when Max finished shaving her, he had to test his handiwork by running his tongue over her mound, looking for anything he might have missed. And of course, his tongue eventually found her swollen lips, and her hard little button. After he brought her to another climax, she had to reciprocate and took him in her mouth, bringing Max to another orgasm. After that, of course, they made slow and tender love.

Back in bed, naked, and still showing signs of their mutual arousal, they ate their breakfast, as always, licking the pastry flakes that fell to one another's body. A post breakfast shower was inevitable but this time, they made love to each other using their hands and their fingers only. Their burning desire for one another sated - for the moment - they finally dressed and stepped out into the Parisienne late morning sunshine.

"What's the plan for today," Liz looked up from beside him. "Or is that a surprise?"

"There is a small art gallery," Max smiled at her. "It holds the work of the best amateur artists in Paris. And one can go there and see the paintings and the sculptures from the talented people who come to Paris to find their inspiration. As soon as one piece is sold then another is put in its place. Sometimes, it is quite good. But there are times when it is not so good, no?"

"That sounds great, Max." Liz nodded. "But not all day, right?"

"No," Max shook his head. "We will visit the gallery later. This morning, I have something else planned. Are you knowing what today is?"

Liz had to think for a moment.

"Uh, Thursday," she gave a slow nod of her head. "The fourteenth."

"This is correct," Max chuckled.. "But do you know what is so special about today?"

"Ten days since you took my virginity?" she grinned.

"And that is special enough," Max gave her a huge smile. "But that was that day that is special. No, today is special for another reason. Today marks the anniversary of the storming of the Bastille. This was the beginning of the French Revolution, no?"

"That's right," Liz's face lit up. "When the people of France broke down the gates and freed all the prisoners."

"Well... that is not exactly what happened, no," Max gave her an indulgent smile. "That I think, is a myth that has grown up in the telling. A little like your Paul Revere, no?"

"Huh?" Liz frowned. "Are you saying that Paul Revere was a myth?"

"No," Max shook his head. "But his story, it has become twisted in the telling. He set out to warn the militia at Concord that the British were coming. But Paul Revere, he was captured at Lexington, and it was another man who delivered the message. And who is it who remembers him?"

"Uhm..." Liz blushed. "It was William Dawes."

"And you are accusing me of being a know all," Max smirked.

"So why did the people storm the Bastille if it wasn't to free the prisoners?"

"The people who were protesting about... many things, were afraid that the Kings soldiers would come and attack them," Max told her. "Kings do not like people complaining. So they decided that they would fight back. Earlier in the day, the people, they had already broken into the Tuilleries prison and taken a large number of guns. I forget how many. Thousands. But they had no ammunition, no? No bullets. But then the rumor, the crowds hear that there is ammunition at the Bastille. This was a hated symbol of the Monarchy, for the brutality, the symbol of totalitarian power. When the crowds arrived, the governor refused to surrender, even though he had only one hundred or so soldiers. When the citizens found out that the feared cannons were not loaded... that was when they stormed the Bastille."

"But prisoners did get freed, right?" Liz gave a mocking smile.

"I believe it was seven only," Max shrugged. "And many of them belonged there. But it was not the prisoners that was making this event important. Nor was it getting the ammunition. It was the fact that they had captured such a hated monument to a hated regime. When the King heard of this, he asked if it was a revolt. He was told, 'No, it is a revolution.'"


* * *


As they emerged from the Metro Bastille, Max and Liz were immediately caught up in a procession of people, many dressed in old style peasant clothes, as they reenacted the march on the Bastille itself. Everyone was laughing and chanting slogans such as "Vive la revolution," and "Liberté, Egalité, Fraternité." The young couple couldn't help joining in with the chanting, as well as with all the gaiety and laughter.

The red white and blue Tricolor of France was everywhere. Flags, bunting, ribbons, rosettes... Everywhere you looked, the three colors blazoned proudly. Max had bought two rosettes so that he and Liz could truly feel a part of the celebration.

"This feels strange, no?" Max smiled as he pinned the tricolor rosette to Liz's dress. "Celebrating the overthrow of a King."

"It happens," Liz shrugged. "This country, America, even England. Kings are always being overthrown. I bet on distant planets, they have kings that get overthrown."

"The way of kings," Max nodded. "Who would want to be one? Come. Let us join with the fun."

Hand in hand, they meandered with the crowds through the streets that surrounded the area where the prison once stood. A new and very modern looking Opera house, La Opera de la Bastille stood in its stead, the original prison having been raised to the ground after the revolution. Where once the citizens came to be punished, they now came to be entertained.

The streets were packed, not only with locals and tourists, but with vendors and pavement artists as well. There were mime artists, jugglers, singers, dogs that danced on their hind legs while their owners played an accordion and budgerigars that walked tightropes and rode small bicycles. There were even strangely garbed people, completely cloaked in strange white, green, black or brown colors and who stood motionless on oil drums looking all the world like statues until a tourist deposited some coins in their tins after which they came alive and performed some robotic moves.

"I've never seen anything like this," Liz's eyes were everywhere at once. "Back home, we have this Crash Festival where people dress up as aliens and we recreate the infamous crash, but that's only in the evening. And out at an old quarry. Even on Independence Day, nothing happens until the firework extravaganza at night."

"You like the fireworks?" Max raised a single eyebrow.

"Who doesn't?" Liz shrugged her shoulders.

"Then tonight, you are in for the special treat, no? We shall be having the amazing firework display."

"I like fireworks," Liz looked up at him with a gleam in her eye, and shivered with anticipation.

"I am meaning the real ones," Max chuckled.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "Them too."

"All of Paris will be illuminated by them," Max smiled. "And then afterwards, I shall illuminate you with our own fireworks."

"You hungry?" Liz tilted her head to one side and looked up at Max.

"A little," he nodded. "Why?"

"I'll buy us a croissant," Liz pointed at a man standing behind a small, wheeled table who was selling pastries.

She joined the small line, waiting for her turn.

"Max!" she called out to him when it was her turn to be served. "He says he doesn't have any croissants."

"Then let us eat cake," Max grinned.


* * *


When it was time to have their lunch, Max led Liz away from the Bastille district because there were too many people competing for the tables at the places to eat. Instead, they went across to the Montmartre area again, away from the crowds. After their light meal, they made their way to the Galerie des Artistes d'Amateur.

"Amateur artists?" Liz raised an eyebrow.

"One day," Max smiled, "one of these may be famous, no? And you can tell everyone how you are seeing their work before they were famous. And besides. Michael has some work on display here and I promised him I would pay a visit."

"You really like Michael, don't you?" she smiled at him.

"He is my best friend," Max nodded. "He... he has been a great help to me when things were not going so well for me."

"Things not going well for you?" Liz chuckled. "I can't even imagine such a thing."

"Sometimes," Max's voice fell quiet, "things are not always as they appear."

"It's like me and Maria, I guess," Liz nodded. "She's been a great friend for as long as I can remember. Without her... I don't know where I would be. She gives me the confidence that I sometimes lack."

"You do not lack the confidence," Max shook his head. "All you are needing is the right people to help you to express yourself."

"Like you," Liz pressed herself against him. "I don't think I have ever expressed myself as much as I have around you."

"And this is a good thing, no?"

"Well," Liz smirked. "I doubt I could ever be as expressive back home in Roswell."

"Of this I am sure," Max grinned. "But now it is time for us to see how these new artists are expressing themselves."


The Gallery was an old building. It seemed to be a maze of interconnecting rooms and was more like a warren than a public building. Each room played host to a different theme. Although the different styles were kept together in wings, each style had it's own genre; portraits, landscapes and so on. Although there were not many people inside, those there were tended to stay together in an informal group. When Max spotted some of Michael's work in the portraits section, their enthusiasm was infectious and everyone was paying close attention.

"That's you," Liz frowned at a portrait of a young man, perhaps sixteen years old, looking very troubled. "I don't think I have ever seen you looking so..."

"Miserable?" Max raised an eyebrow.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "To me, you're this guy with a towering self confidence and... just always happy."

"I am now," he nodded. "But it was not always so. But that is another tale for another day. Come. We have more paintings to be seeing."


Because she felt that she had in some way made Max feel a little less happy, Liz started to pay closer attention to him. She held him more tightly, she pressed herself against him at every opportunity and she kissed his cheek as often as she could. When she saw how dark his eyes had become, she knew she was having the desired effect. Too much so, perhaps.

The very next room that they visited was darkened. Huge, ornate statues made from everyday items and painted with fluorescent paints were dotted around the room. What little light source there was made the paint glow, lending an almost ethereal quality to the strange shapes. One structure, a long and low tableau, gave the impression of some kind of Viking ghost ship. Max wandered around to the far side of this structure, studying some minor detail. From the other side, Liz watched his face, illuminated by the reflected luminescence. When he looked up at her, the mischievous expression was unmistakable. Biting her lip, Liz turned and saw that the group they had been attached to was making their way into the next room, leaving them alone. She had two choices. She could follow the group and leave Max high and dry... or she could surrender to her own desires and see just how far Max would go in so public a place. An answer to which she already knew. He would take her all the way. Grinning, she turned away to the exhibits in the corner and started to carefully study a strange shape that might have been a caricature of the Statue of Liberty, safely ensconced in a glass cabinet.

Slipping through the darkness, Max crept up behind her and pulled her close to him, spooning her back against his front. She could feel his erection pressing against the folds of her backside.

"Max..." she started.

When his open mouth descended upon her neck and he startled to nuzzle her, she found that she was suddenly speechless. She responded by pressing back against him and raising her hand above her head to stroke Max's hair. His hands slipped from her waist and up to her chest, lightly cupping her breasts. She let out a low, throaty moan and tilted her head to give him access to her neck. His fingers started to tease at her budding nipples.

"We shouldn't," she whispered, though she did not attempt to stop him.

She could feel his hardness pressing into her, an arousal that she knew was mirroring her own. A hand slipped from her pressed and moved over her stomach, toying for a moment with her new belly button ring, and then continued until her was pressing against her sex. Liz could not help pressing back, in both directions.

His other hand vanished from her breast, but she soon heard the soft sound of a descending zipper.

"Max!" she gasped, reaching behind her to find and to hold his exposed erection.

When she found what she sought, her fingers wrapped around his thick shaft and pulled against it, feeling him slide through her hand. When she reached his silky tip, she could feel a little wetness, a little bead of his pre-cum. Liz could not help the licking of her lips in anticipation of feeling him inside her.

Max pulled up her skirt and started to ease down her tiny panties, exposing her to the interior of the darkened room.

"What if someone comes?" Liz was moaning softly.

"I am hoping," Max chuckled in her ear, "that it will be us."

His fingers slipped between her thighs and explored her soaked lips, easily sliding into her warm, satin chamber. She exhaled deeply, her moist breath fogging the glass case in front of her.

Max's fingers continued to tease Liz, plunging in and out of her while his mouth kissed up and down her neck. His other hand reached to her front and a finger started to draw slow, compact circles around her hardened clitoris. She clung to the edges of the case, holding on for dear life as he teased her to within a hair's breadth of an orgasm.

His fingers vanished, but before she could complain, she felt him pressing against her, his hard shaft ready to enter her. He paused, as if to ask her permission to continue. Liz slammed herself backwards against him, a low moan of pleasure filling the silent hall. He started slowly, easing in and out, allowing her to savor him, savor the feelings of his erection sliding in and out of her feminine bower. She could feel every inch of him as she used her muscles to grip him. As pleasant as the feeling was, Liz wanted him to fuck her, hard. She wanted him to ram himself into her as hard as he could, but still he teased.

"Max," she begged.

She froze at the sound of footsteps entering the room. By the light from the door, Liz could see two elderly gentlemen had entered the room. Max froze, his hardness still buried to the hilt inside her. Liz stared in embarrassment, hoping that the two men would not come this way as they moved from one exhibit to the next, each discussing the displays. Although Max remained motionless, his fingers found their way to her clitoris again and busied themselves by keeping Liz at the edge of her orgasm.

"Look at the detail," Max spoke in a soft voice, pretending to be interested in the art.

Liz was surprised that he was drawing attention to themselves, but she realized that as they were still fully dressed, in the gloom they would look only like an embracing couple. She chewed her lip, not daring to speak. If she opened her mouth, the only words she would be able to form were going to be 'Fuck me, damn you.' She listened intently instead, as Max continued to admire the strange sculpture, all the while moving ever so slightly within the confines of Liz's hungry depths.

While the two men continued to slowly move toward them, and with Max continuing to point out odd little details about the artwork, Liz could only grit her teeth. One of two things were going to happen. Either they would be caught, which would totally kill the mood and she would be left frustrated, or she was going to explode in a very public orgasm and completely humiliate herself.

"Please, God," she whispered to herself. "Make them leave."

She wiggled her hips against Max and squeezed his hardness inside her. He pushed back, making Liz grip the side of the case even harder.

At last, the old men wandered out of the room and they were alone again in the darkened room. Liz could not help her sudden release of the breath she was not aware she was holding.

"Finally!" she thought.

But to her great disappointment, Max pulled out from her, leaving her with an empty feeling. She swore under her breath, cursing the old men for killing the mood. Her disappointment was short lived, however. Max turned her around and dropped to his knees before her. Wrapping his arms around her thighs, he pressed his mouth against her wet sex lips and started to devour her. Liz could barely breathe. The wet heat of his mouth against her molten core was almost too much for her to handle. She was so tense, so ready to explode into a thrashing, screaming, earth shattering orgasm.

Max, it seemed, was only too happy to oblige and his tongue scored a direct hit on the rock hard button at the top of her lips. It sent Liz over the edge almost instantly, shaking her body from top to toe with a wild orgasm. It was good that Max was holding on to her thighs so tightly because she would have fallen otherwise. Her legs had turned to jelly as her whole body went into meltdown. Had he not been holding her, she would either have collapsed into a gibbering puddle on the floor, or she would have fallen backwards into the display case.

Her body shook with electric pulses of white hot intensity that sent her careening into orbit. Even if she hadn't been in public, trying like hell to be discreet, she wouldn't have made a sound. The blinding sweetness of her release had engulfed her completely and she couldn't have made a sound if she wanted to. Only as she began to come back down to earth did a barely audible moan slip out.

Max continued to lap at her lips, flowing freely with her nectar. His tongue dove in and out of her tight confines while his nose pressed hard against her. Liz knew that her clitoris was now super sensitive and she was thankful that Max seemed to be avoiding for the moment. Just feeling his tongue slipping and sliding between her lips was enough to make her tremble, however. She didn't bother to tell him that a woman had entered the room. His mouth was occupied, so he wouldn't be able to say anything in any case. He was out of sight anyway. Liz, on the other hand, had to struggle just to stay upright.

Unaware of the audience, Max started to flick his tongue around Liz's electrified clitoris again, and she barely caught the whimper of sudden pleasure as it rolled off of her lips. The other woman looked at her from across the room. Liz was certain that the woman considered her to be some kind of basket case, or way into the strange sculptures. Either way, she didn't say anything as she left the room. Not a moment too soon, either, because just as she went out of sight, Liz collapsed against Max and surrendered to absolute ecstasy.


When he was certain that she could hold herself up, Max climbed to his feet and planted a deep kiss on Liz's mouth. She was hot, so hot that she did not even think of the fact that she was tasting herself. She just wanted Max inside her again. There was no need for any more foreplay, and she did not care if the President himself walked in right then.

"I want your hard cock slamming into me!" she demanded. "And I want it now!"

Max did not object a bit. He grabbed her hips and plunged his hard erection into her throbbing depths in one simple, fluid movement. Liz stifled her cry of pleasure by biting the soft part of her hand as Max fucked her. That was the only word that could describe their lovemaking., Hard, fast and frantic. He was driving himself into her as far as he could go, and Liz was pushing herself to meet his every thrust. Each drive knocked the breath right out of her and the glass case rocked as she leaned back against it for support. It was a good thing that it was more sturdy than it looked.

Max pulled her away from the case and pushed her up against the wall. Liz could hardly believe it when he started to drive himself harder and harder, pounding into her until he was on the edge himself. He bucked against her, driving his shaft deep within her and shivered as he exhaled huskily against her neck. Through her own orgasm, Liz rolled her hips and squeezed him while he climaxed, keeping him coming and coming until he was completely spent.

"Oh, Liz," Max managed to gasp between heavy breaths. "What you do to me."

They lingered in the dark ship room for a while, catching their breaths and letting their bodies recover, as well as cleaning themselves up as best as they could. Liz fumbled about on the floor until she found her discarded panties and put them back on, knowing that they would be soaked through soon in any case. They left the room hand in hand, grinning like a couple of high school kids. Liz winced as the brutal fluorescent lights illuminated that regularly scheduled world.

"Our timing could not have been any better, no?" Max whispered with a devilish grin just before that left the gallery.

He nodded over Liz's shoulder. Filing through the doorway to their secret little haven, eager to see the museum's awe inspiring collection of strange statues and completely oblivious to Max and Liz's little tryst was an entire busload of Japanese tourists, complete with cameras and bright flashguns.


* * *


"You are so bad, Max Effance," Liz grinned from across the dinner table. "Not only have you turned me into your personal sex toy, you have me eating at the strangest of hours."

They were at a small café in the Latin Quarter, sitting at an intimate table for two on the pavement. It was already nine o'clock.

"It's going to be so hard to get back into some kind of routine that's normal."

"You would prefer normal to this?" Max laughed. "You would prefer not to return to your room after making love in an art gallery, and make more love until you are finally too hungry to continue?"

"Not when you put it like that," she smiled. "I think I prefer your version of normal to mine."

"As do I," Max nodded.

"Max," Liz's smile faded. "Is there any way you could visit me in America? I mean... like Thanksgiving, or Christmas... or even Easter. I don't want to lose you, Max. You mean more to me than some... summer affair.

"Liz," Max took a deep breath. "There is something I should tell you that perhaps you will like. You see, I..."

"Well, well, well," an American female voice laughed. "Who do we have here?"

Liz turned to look at a small blonde woman, no older, nor bigger than herself approaching them. She was immaculately dressed. By her side was a man who looked twice her age. Not recognizing her, she looked at Max and was surprised to see that his face was drained of all color.

"If it isn't Max Evans."

Liz turned her head back to the newcomer and smiled.

"Why do we do that?" Liz laughed.

"Do what?" the blonde turned to her, looking her up and down with a glance of contempt.

"I've noticed that we Americans keep on pronouncing foreign names like we would if they were English."

"Excuse me?" the blonde looked confused.

"You called him Evans. It's pronounced Effance, you know, being a French name."

Liz was puzzled by Max's sudden wince. The normally calm, collected and totally confident young man was looking more like a schoolboy who had been caught stealing.

"Effance?" the blonde blinked. "French?" She looked at Max and started to laugh. "Is that what he told you?"

"Tess..." Max managed to gurgle.

Liz was surprised at the strangeness to Max's voice.

"Uh, yeah," Liz nodded. Confusion was descending like a thick fog. "Isn't he?"

"Max, French?" Tess laughed. "No more than any other son of an American Ambassador."

In the middle of July, Paris seemed to have descended into the grip of an Arctic freeze.

"What's up, Max?" Tess smirked. "Cat got your tongue?"

No one spoke a word.

"And you thought he was French?" Tess laughed at Liz. "Don't tell me, he spoke with some corny accent and you bought it? What backwoods state do you come from?"

"New..." Liz squeaked. She cleared her throat. "New Mexico."

"That explains everything," Tess shook her head.

"Max?" Liz turned to look at Max again.

He was staring at the floor as though he was wishing it to open up and swallow him. Tess was hooting with laughter.

"What a dumbass hick you must me," Tess started to laugh harder. "What a freaking moron."

Confusion, hurt and then anger burned through Liz's veins.

"I can see you two have a lot to talk about," Tess continued to laugh. "She turned to leave, pulling her friend along with her. Tess looked over her shoulder and called to him. "Call me."


"Is it true?" Liz finally broke the silence, once she had regained some modicum of composure.

"Yes," Max's hoarse voice accompanied his nod.

Liz swallowed and took a deep breath.

"Was it all some kind of game?" Her calmness belied her inner turmoil.

"What?" Max looked up, an intense light burning in his eyes. "No, of course not. I meant every word I said."

"Even when you told me that you were French?"

Max's face dropped to the ground again.

"You don't sound nearly as nice talking how you really talk."

The air froze around her words.

"I'm sorry, Liz," Max mumbled. "It's just... that day..."

"It was all a lie, wasn't it?"

"No!" he exclaimed. "No it wasn't."

"Yeah, right," she nodded. "Let's see how fast we can seduce the little virgin from the sticks, huh?"

Liz rose from her seat and turned away from the table, leaving. Max hurriedly pulled some money from his wallet and threw it down on the table, chasing after her.

"Liz!" he called as he wove through the crowds. "Liz! You don't understand."

"Leave me alone, Max!" she screamed with pure hatred.

"Liz..." Max's voice was softer, pleading.

"Can't you get it through that thick phony French skull of yours? It's over. You stay the hell away from me. Just..." She waved her arms in frustration. "Just stay away." There was a taxi parked on the street next to her. Liz pulled the door open and started to climb in. "Just stay the hell away from me," she ordered again. "I don't want to see you again for as long as I live!"

She slammed the door shut and spoke a few words to the taxi driver. It pulled away, leaving Max watching her as it disappeared into the streets of Paris.


* * *


"Oh dear," the Concierge shrugged as he watched the young woman hurry through the lobby to the elevators. It was clear that she was upset and crying. "I guess she has found out that the Frenchman is really some poor joe with a wife and three screaming brats, uh?"

The young bellboy started to straighten himself up, smoothing back his hair with the palm of his hand.

"Perhaps she might need some comfort," he ran his fingers over his top lip.

"You can go up and try," the Concierge nodded. "I'll get you a big bucket of ice.

"What do I need the ice for?" he gave his boss a puzzled frown.

"To keep your testicles in when she rips them off," he smirked. "You do want the surgeons to sew them back on, don't you?"

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Parisienne Walkways - Part 17

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Hi everyone,

Okay, after standing helplessly by and watch poor old (young) Liz take a pasting, can I just say that she recently was at the end of a really nasty betrayal, and as soon as she realised that it appeared that Max had done the same...

Yes, she overreacted - especially since she has her own undiscovered secret. No, she didn't give him a chance to explain. But she is young, hurt, in a strange place and did not know how to handle the situation. So she reacted the only way she knew how. She ran... after a few harsh words.


roswellluver - I always planned on making it Tess who spilled the beans. :wink:

Morning Dreamgirl - As a history buff, I tend to find these little snippets out. I always thought that it WAS Paul Revere who warnd General wotshisname that "The British were Coming" until I visited Boston a few years ago and saw the stone out near Lexington that said "Paul Revere was capyured here, on his way to warn..." So I wondered who DID warm them. And found that it was Bill Dawes. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - I have had practice. :wink: (at breaking hearts) But you KNEW this was coming. Oh, you said that. :wink: How long will I take to fix it? How long is a piece of string? :wink:

maya - Well, it had to be Tess, really, right? I mean, his Father approaching her in the streets and telling her would not have the same impact.

Behrgirl77 - But over quick, huh? :wink: Thanks for delurking. :)

Jason's Lover - Yup. Good ol' Tess. :wink:

Emz80m - Liz? Calm down after a second betrayal? Heh Heh Heh. :)

FSU/MSW-94 - Yes, Max did allow Tess to rant... but see POM's feedback for why he did.

Erina - Yes, Max was going to tell her everything, but Tess arrived.

begonia9508 - But she didn't have to be so demeaning. And yes, Max has been lying, but about one thing only. His accent. He never said he was 100% French. He never said he went to school in France. His father is in politics, his mother IS French. He does know Paris like the back of his hand. He does Love Liz. So all Max did wrong was to allow Liz to believe he was French by using his accent. I know it was still a deciet, but was it really a bad one if they were both so happy?

Heavenli24 - Looks like the end of their communication in Paris. We know Liz does not see him again up to the point where she is about to board the plane.

SmileeUK - Yes, it was. Poor Max. Poor Liz. Wicked Wayne. :wink:

omwf - Well... wait no more! (till you finish this part. :wink: )

Behrystrwbry - Yeah, it was obvious that as soon as he met someone who knew him...

Alex Balex - Well... until my little hiccup a while back... I WAS updating regularly. But I have alreasdy written NEXT weeks chapter, so you know that there's an update next week. :)

sox - Will do. See above comment. :wink:

POM - Did you enjoy the game? How are my Blue Jays doing? Don't answer that. I know. :( Not many people know that I LOVE baseball and play an awesome First Base! :) But hey! Go Sens!!!! You nailed it. Max used that accent a a mask and grew in confidence, WITH Liz's help. too. They are good for each other. All Max had to do was lose the Mask and voila!

martine - I thought everyone would ewnjoy the first part of that chapter. He he he. And then of course... POW!

VeronicB - Yeah. *sigh* Even though you knew this would happen, it still seemed to have come as a shock. And Erin even predicted heartache on Bastille Day. Yeah, I guess she won't have any good souvenirs to take back to Roswell.

BelevnDreamsToo - Interesting points. :wink: I have the next chapter ready. Will send it tonight. :) (and I bet everyone is now totally jealous!)

Alien614 - Well... we suspected Tess, but most thought it would be Dad. :wink:

clueless - It had to happen soon, because Liz goes home on saturday (according to the Prologue)

Mawrter4 - I'll make you wait one week! :wink:

Earth2Mama - I guess Liz just had a quick resurfacing of some haunting demons. Kyle in bed with Pam?

NorfanofMaxandLiz - I thought you might (want to hurt Tess) :wink: Max would have told her everything. The truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. But Tess... Aw, Nora. You KNOW I will fix this, right? Eventually. :wink:

Shadowlynxbehr - LOL - great mental image I had there :wink:

OmegaRam1 - Hmmm... I did put Liz on the contraceptive pill... so I hope that she's not pregnant. :wink: But you never know.

paper - Like POM said. Max was fighting an inner battle, and this time, he lost. His confidence was taken away from him.

BehrObsession - Max tried, many times, and failed. He should have tried harder.

Michelle in Yonkers - As I said above, Liz is still scarred from her wedding day, in the same way that whatever the cause of Max's loss of confidence still scars him. Both need to confront them. Or perhaps realize that what they had was worth fighting for. Max has started to stand up to his father... but is that the only cause of his problem?



No one appreciated my "Let us eat cake" joke? :(



Parisienne Walkways


Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!

Part 17 - Lonely Hearts Club Band

Friday - 15th July.


Midnight had come and gone. Liz was still sitting on a chair on the balcony with a blanket wrapped around her shoulders, where she planted herself in a flood of tears a few hours earlier. Her only movement had been her heaving shoulders and an occasional swipe of her hand across her tear-laden eyes. All around her, the night sky was still being illuminated by a brilliant firework display. Although she was not really paying them any attention, she couldn't help being reminded how much the fireworks were like her affair with Max. Sudden, bright, loud, colorful, even, and then, just as abruptly, it's finished. This brought on another flood of tears to eyes that were as red as any firework and as wet as the Seine.

At first, she had wailed about his betrayal, how everything he had said and done, everything about him had been based on a huge lie. When she had pursued that line of betrayal as far as she could, when she had raked over it as many times as she could stand, she considered how he had just sat there and let a complete stranger - at least to her - insult her like she was nothing. Which she knew now that she was. Like Kyle before him, Max had let her down.

At long last, the firework bonanza was over. The sky fell dark once more and below, the streets were falling quiet again. When she no longer heard the people chanting, singing or just having fun, Liz rose from her chair and moved into the bedroom. It seemed somehow bigger, now. Empty. With her lights still off, she stepped out of her clothes and into the nightdress that had hardly been used.

Liz hardly slept at all that long, lonely night. She was constantly tossing and turning in her bed, always looking to the space where Max should have been. Perhaps she had over reacted, she considered. Maybe she should have at least given Max a chance to explain why he had deceived her, for that was what he had done. Even though she had kept her own secret from Max, she certainly had not told him that she wasn't married. She did not pretend she was anything other than what she was. And even if the paperwork still said otherwise, she was a free woman, free to pursue a relationship with anyone she chose. Preferably someone who would not lie about himself.

A memory drifted across her troubled mind. An incident from a few days ago, when Max had taken her along the old viaduct. They had witnessed the breakup of that young couple, one that had strangely saddened Max.


"What was that about, Max?" she had asked him.

"As you are seeing," Max waved in the direction that they had been standing. "They were the lovers, no? But he is angry with her because she has lied to him."

"Oh," Liz nodded in understanding.

"No, no, no," Max had shaken his head. He had a pained expression. "It was just a white lie and one that I cannot understand why he is so angry for it because they seemed so happy together. She has just confessed to him that she has no job. And he is angry because he has told her that he never dates the people who have no job. She told him that this she knew and that she said she had the job because they might never have got together otherwise."

"She still lied, Max," Liz had frowned.

"But he was happy in her presence, no? We have seen this." She understood now why he had seemed so pained. "And he has turned her away because she lied so that she could be with him, making them both happy? Yes, she lied to him, but surely, such a love can take a little lie like that. She is still the same person, no?"


* * *


Darkness started to pass, giving way to the rising dawn. Paris was waking up, welcoming another morning. Liz couldn't understand why the birds were still singing. Did they not sense her misery? She wanted so badly to scream out to them to shut up. Instead, she reached out a hand to where Max's warm body once was. To where it should have been. She started to cry a little more.

Taking her morning shower was a strange event that she had to face. It had been the first shower she had taken alone, truly alone, for such a long time. She still shaved herself, however, hoping against hope that Max would prove his love for her, ignore her warnings to stay away and appear at her door. After toweling herself dry, she stepped into a pair of panties and snapped on a matching brassiere. She then pulled on a pastel pink sundress. If he had truly meant just one thing he had said to her, then Max would come.

The sight of Max's clothes, still in her wardrobe, and his items still lined on the shelf in her bathroom served only to remind her of what she had lost. She tried not to look at them, tried not to think of them. But at the very least, he would have to return for them.

The knock at the door was loud, sudden and shocked her. She could hardly believe it. Max had come back. With a huge smile on her face, she danced to the door as fast as she could. She pulled open the door to greet Max, but her smile fell away when she saw the bellboy holding a tray.

"Je prends votre petit déjeuner, mademoiselle," he smiled, holding up the tray that held croissants and coffee.

"Oh," Liz shook her with a sad frown. She had forgotten all about them. "No thank you. I'm not really in a breakfast mood. Can you take them away, please? Non, merci."

"It is because you do not wish to eat the breakfast alone?" he looked at her with sympathy. His English was broken, and disjointed. "Perhaps I am joining you, no?"

"Uh, no," Liz shook her head. Why would he think that she would welcome his attention? Was this what they thought of her? That she was easy? "Just leave, please."

She started to close the door, but the bellboy reached out his hand to stop her.

"But, mademoiselle..." he gave her a smile.

"Just leave!" Liz screamed, throwing her body against the door, slamming it shut.

Turning to press her back against the door, Liz started to cry. She continued to cry as she slid down the door until she was sitting on the floor, with her knees pulled up to her chest, sobbing her heart out. Not only had she lost Max, now it seemed that everyone considered her to be a slut.

It took Liz some time to compose herself. When at last her tears dried, she climbed from the floor and returned to the bathroom where she washed her face, hoping to remove the signs of her tears. She promised herself that even though her heart truly was broken now, she would not break down like that again, that she would not allow the deep depression that threatened to overwhelm her to return. After straightening herself up, she took a deep breath, stood tall and stepped out into the hallway. The lift seemed to take forever to descend to the ground floor but when it did, she walked with her held head high to the Concierge behind his desk.

"Would you please cancel the order for croissants and coffee for my room?" she glared across at the bellboy. "And I don't want to see him near my room again until it's time to collect my bags."


* * *


Leaving the hotel, Liz stood at the top of the steps and looked across to the road. Where should she go? What should she do? Making her way to the river and the Quai des Grands Augustins, Liz crossed over to the Ile de la Cité by way of the Pont Michel. Working her way through the streets, she crossed the large plaza in front of the cathedral, and entered Notre Dame. The darkened interior was strangely comforting. She first lit a candle, asking that Max would find his way back to her, would return to her and her heart. Finding a seat at the back, she sat down and looked up into the darkened rafters. This was the first place that Max had brought her to, the first place she had started to feel happy after Kyle's betrayal. She sat and just thought about all of the good times she had shared with Max. Because whether he had lied to her not, he had shown her how to live, how to enjoy herself, and she had done both.

Liz knew that she could not remain there all day, however, and she soon went back out into the sunlight. After the cathedral, there was only one place to go. She made her way to the Place Louis-Lepine that was currently playing host to the Marché aux Fleurs. She meandered amongst the displays of the bright, colorful and fragrant flowers. Max had brought her here. He had seemed so enthusiastic to be with her as she had been to be with him. In spite of her promise to herself, she could not help feeling sad and lonely. She bought a single white rose to cheer herself up.

Crossing back over the river, back to the Quai des Grands Augustins, Liz stopped and sat at a pavement table at Gaston's. The streets were filled with tourists and she felt lucky to have found an empty table. The portly waiter emerged with a big smile on his face, wiping his hand on his apron, ready to take her order.

"Bonjour, Liz," he smiled at her. "Est-ce que je peux vous obtenir quelque chose?"

"Grande Café au lait," Liz remembered Max's first words of advice to her.

She really couldn't face eating anything. Her stomach was in too many knots just now. While she sat waiting for her coffee, she couldn't help looking up and down the street, looking at the people. She was hoping that Max would come by. She had decided that she would tell him that she was so sorry, that she had over-reacted and not allowed him to explain. She wanted to clear the air with him, to tell him everything. Liz wanted above all else to forgive him, and then to ask him to forgive her. But she saw no sign of him.

"C'est pour vous," Gaston placed the coffee in front of her and smiled. "Gratis."

"Merci, Gaston," Liz nodded. "Avez vous vu Max?"

"Je suis désolé, non," he shook his head. "Pas pendant quelques jours maintenant. Mais j'ai ces derniers pour vous."

From his apron, he handed her an envelope stuffed with the photos he had printed for her.

Merci," Liz tucked them into her bag. She just could not bring herself to look at them.

As she sat back up, a song started to play over the radio. It was a song she had already heard a few times that morning as she wandered the streets of the Ile de la Cité. It sounded so sad, unlike 'La Vie En Rose', which she had not heard at all today.

"Quelle est cette chanson?" she asked. Liz was surprised by how much French she had managed to pick up.

Gaston twisted his head to listen. He started to smile.

"C'est Edith Piaf. Elle chante 'Non Je Ne Regrette Rien.'"

"Vous savez assez anglais pour le traduire pour moi?"

Gaston paused, and looked at Liz for a moment.

"My English, she is not good," he shook his head. "Max is better at speaking English than I am."

"That's because he's American," Liz's voice was dry as she stared at the table.

"Certainly," he shrugged. "But he is French also. His mother, she is Parisienne."

At least he hadn't lied about that. And if his mother was French, then technically, at least, he could claim French citizenship. But he did not naturally speak with a French accent.

"But I can try," he nodded, noticing Liz's sad expression. "She is singing that there is nothing and that she is having no regrets. Neither good, nor bad, she does not care, it is all the same to her. I am sorry, it does not make much sense in English. Then she is singing that she has no regrets and she is moving on one day at a time. Her souvenirs only remind her of the good things they have been sharing... I am thinking that she is singing of breaking up with someone. She is repeating the first verse but is extra that life will begin again and always will her old lover be part of her. This I think."

"What is it with this Edith Piaf?" Liz asked with tears in her eyes. "Why is she always singing about my life?"


* * *


For the rest of that day, Liz ambled morosely among the nearby streets, just allowing the time to pass. Not once did she stop thinking of Max and not once did she see him. A part of her hoped she would bump into him. She returned to her hotel having eaten nothing all day. She did not feel hungry at all. Just empty. When she arrived at her room, she felt the change straight away. In a panic, she ran to the wardrobe and pulled it open.

Max's clothes were gone. So too were his toiletries in the bathroom. She knew now that it was truly over. He would not be coming to find her; he would not be trying to explain why he had lied to her. Max had never loved her in the first place. If he had thought as much of her as she did him, then he would not have given her up so easily. He had taken what he wanted from her and was probably even now seducing some other unsuspecting tourist. She had been nothing but a temporary toy to him. She sat on the balcony again until it grew dark, her thoughts always on the wonderful time he had shown her and how easily he had fooled her. When the brightly lit paddle steamer, "La Belle Vallée" floated by, she could no longer hold her tears. Her forlorn hope that he would return gone, Liz returned to her bedroom to pack, crying once more. She was going home tomorrow, to face the music, to face a life without Max.


* * *


Max stared at the taxi's taillights as it vanished among the Parisienne traffic. Everything had happened so fast, he hardly knew what to do. One moment he was about to confess everything to Liz and the next, she was gone. Although he had no one to blame but himself, he could not help wondering what Tess Harding had been doing still in Paris, and how it was that she had just happened to walk past the table he was eating dinner with Liz at. And her appearance had struck him dumb. She had blown his façade, which was bad enough, but her mere presence had frozen his tongue and he had sat in silence while she had insulted Liz. Why did he always react like that around the Hardings? Why did he allow them to push him around like that? This was one demon he really did have to exorcise.

But not tonight. Tonight, he had to talk to Liz. There was no way he was going to let her drive out of his life like that. She may have ordered him to stay away, but Liz was no Harding. She was a Parker, and whether she knew it or not, she was his soul mate. And he would be damned if he was going to give her up without a fight.

As he turned to hail the next taxi, Max had already formulated his plan of action. He would march into her room. He would tell her that she could order him to stay away from her but that was like ordering the tide not to come. Someone else tried that and it failed too. He would tell her that he was in love with her and he would not give her up. Then, he would grab her and kiss her senseless until she squeaked in surrender. Then, he would spend the rest of his life making it up to her. He raised his hand as a free taxi appeared.

A black limousine swerved toward him, instead. Frowning at the way the limo swerved in front of the approaching taxi, Max was taken completely by surprise when two large dark suited men appeared from nowhere to grab him by his arms and pinning him immobile. Before he could cry out, the back door of the limo opened and a pair of arms reached out. He was soon inside the dark interior with three heavyset goons sitting almost on top of him. He felt hands dipping into his jacket, relieving him of his wallet, and of his phone.

"You bastards," Max spat when the pressure was relieved, allowing him to sit up. "You doing my father's dirty work now? Is this how he resorts to getting dates for Harding's daughter?"

"Sorry, Mr. Evans," another heavy man in the front seat turned to him. "This is a bug-out. CIA picked up some intel that suggested there is a plot against an unknown VIP target in a foreign country. They believe it to involve kidnap and extortion. Because of your unrestrained freedom, and your rather public appearances, your father suspects that the target is you. We're simply following orders and bringing you in."

"And who told you this information?" Max rolled his eyes. "I bet it didn't come from Langley."

"No, sir. Langley informed your father directly."

"And just how long is this bug-out going to last?" Max demanded, his anger only just being held back. "I have some unfinished business that I need to take care of."

"Then your business has to remain unfinished, Mr. Evans," the man chuckled. "The summer is over for you, I'm afraid. You're on the next diplomatic flight out of here."

"Being Secret Service doesn't give you immunity from kidnapping, you know," Max narrowed his eyes. "And taking a free citizen against his will is kidnapping in pretty much any country."

"You'll have to take that up with the Ambassador," the man laughed. "And seeing as he gave the order..."

"Can I at least make a phone call?"

"Sorry, sir," he shook his head. "We have to maintain total comms silence until we have you out of the country. Can't let the unfriendlies know that we're on to them, can we?"

"Course not," Max's voice was dry as he turned to look out at the passing Parisienne scenery. "God forbid."


With no way to speak to Liz, she would return to the U.S. convinced that she meant nothing to him. She would return to her home, and with her new found confidence, she would easily find a boyfriend. And she would depart for college. On campus, she would be like a bright beacon, attracting all the guys. He forced down the pangs of jealousy that he felt.

"Liz," he whispered, staring out into the dark night and fighting back his tears. "I'm so sorry."


The car drove through the huge ornamental gates of the American Ambassador's residence on the Place D'Concorde. It slowed as it moved into the compound, stopping at the base of the wide steps that led to the colonnaded doorways. The same two men who had grabbed him, stepped out of the car and surveyed the scene around them, their hands theatrically inside their jackets. With a nod to the man on the inside, Max was allowed to exit the limo. Someone threw a blanket over his head before he was pushed up the steps.

"Was that really necessary?" Max snapped when they removed the blanket, once they were indoors.

"Max!" his mother called, rushing from the interior.

"Hi, Mom," Max allowed her to embrace him. "It's good to see you too."

"I was worried when I heard," Diane leaned back to look at him.

"Probably for nothing," Max shrugged. "It's just one of Dad's little tricks to get me to fall in line."

"Max, you are far too suspicious of your father," Diane chided. "He is only concerned for your well being."

"Uh huh," Max nodded. "And of his own."

"Maxwell," his father announced his arrival from the top of a long staircase. "I'm glad to see that you're safe, son."

"I bet you are," Max sneered. "You could at least have let me say goodbye."

"From what I heard, she already said it," Philip chuckled.

"Have you been spying on me?" Max sounded outraged.

"Someone has to," his father smirked. "Someone has to protect you from yourself."

"How long has this been going on?"

"Well, actually, today was the first time we were able to catch up to you. When you came out from the art gallery, actually. Anyway, it looks like it's all over which is good. You can start to concentrate on the important things now. There's a diplomatic flight scheduled to leave around noon. Better go pack."

Max's heart fell.

"But I still have some stuff over at our place in Montmartre," Max shook his head. "And I've left a lot of things with Liz."

"It will be taken care off," Phillip informed him.

"This doesn't change anything you know," Max shook his head. "I will not date Tess Harding, and I will not enter into politics. Especially not now."

"We'll see," he shrugged. "Better get a move on."

Max started to climb the steps.

"Oh, and Max?" Philip continued. "The internal phones have all been disabled."

"Have I ever told you what an asshole you are?"

"You'll thank me for this one day, Max," Phillip called after him.

"In your dreams, old man," Max called back from the top of the stairs. "In your dreams."


* * *


Looking through the window at the passing French countryside far below him, Max's mind was back in Paris, wondering how Liz was, and if she hated him even more for not trying to come and explain to her. He let out a heavy sigh. Maybe he would be able to find her in Roswell, but would she even want to listen to him by then? Would too much water have passed under the bridge? He didn't even know her address, but then, how big could Roswell be?

"When do I get my wallet back?" Max turned to one of the men assigned to escort him back to the USA. "And my passport."

"In good time, Mr. Evans," the goon informed him. "But you realize that you are prohibited from leaving the U.S."

"I'm a free citizen," Max objected. "You can't stop me."

"We can't, sir," the man nodded. "But there are others who can. Take it up with your Congressman."

"Well, you know that if my Dad has his way, I'm likely to be your boss one day. And guess who I'm going to fire first."

"I doubt that will be something I have to worry about, Mr. Evans," his escort laughed. "Even the President has his bosses. And in your case, my orders come from him."

"Oh, no," Max shook his head. "You can bet that as soon as I am in a position of any power that either my Dad or Ed Harding is responsible for, they're the first one's to go. Can I at least have my wallet back? "

"You won't be needing it sir," the man shook his head.

"Why the hell not? I do need to eat, you know." Max gaped. "I'm going to need to get groceries and stuff for my apartment. I've been away for three weeks."

"All been taken care of," Max was told. "You won't be returning to your apartment until the investigation is over."

"So where am I going? You going to lock me up in Leavenworth or something?"

"You'll be staying with friends, sir," the goon smiled.

"And what friends would those be?" Max narrowed his eyes.

He already had a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach.

"Hello Max," Tess Harding announced her presence from the aisle. "I hear you're going to be spending the rest of your summer with us in Washington. Won't that be fun?"

"A regular riot," Max groaned, his stomach falling to the floor. The fricking Hardings!


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Parisienne Walkways - Part 18

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Boy! Talk about regretting I started this individual responses. Look at all the pages of feedback I have to wade through and respond to! Oh well. Suck it up, Mister!


guelbebek - Glad you enjoyed it, oh, and Wilkommen, :)

Morning Dreamgirl - Did you manage to stay awake for the update? :wink: It seems that Philip is trying to live his dreams through his son, and has more resources at his disposal than most overbearing parents. As for Liz, what else is she supposed to think? :wink:

FSU/MSW-94 - Yes, she will go home to Roswell, and believe that perhaos Kyle wasn;t so bad after all, move to Boston with him and live a miserable life. :( :wink:

Strawberry88 - Well, his father does have such grandiose plans for him! :wink:

Alien614 - Thank you :)

Michelle in Yonkers - As always, your feedback is so thought provoking. YOu are very good at nailing characteristis. :wink: When writing, it;s so hard to try to keep a real life slant on how people would and should react, and sometimes, it's so easy to fit the reactions into the story line. I honestly think that someone in Liz's opinion would conveniently forget her own little lie, at least until she has wallowed in her misery long enough. She knows she overreacted, she knows she had her own secret, but Max is no longer with her, and he appears to have just let her walk away. Oh. I am sorry about your own 'situation', and I hope you don't think that I am in any way trivializing any kind of situation in which one partner has lied to another. Erk... No, I am not going down the Oedipus road with Max. :wink: As for MAx turning tables... Max is not about revenge. He wants to live his own life and marry his own girl. He just needs to find a way to persuade his father to forget those plans of his. Thanks for your awesome feedback :) BTW.... Tiny?

Alex Balex - Just what the doctor ordered, huh? :wink:

Earth2Mama - Hmmm... Difficult. Maybe he's just going to sit back and let Tess do whatever she wants? :wink: Not! LOL

mezz - It's only a matter of time before SOMEONE thretens with the Harvard angle...

Ellie - Well, Diane is probably not too aware of the full story. She knows that her husband hopes Max and Tess will marry, and perhapos she sees this as a good match? But I think deep down, she knows that Max is unhappy and hopes he will stand on his own two feet instead of hers.

Emz80m - Shoudln't be able? You're right. But he is in a position of power, so he can. Doesn;t make it right though. Max needs to grow a backbone and stand up to everyone once and for all.

paper - LOL - I suspect there's only one Deep Throat Max cares about. O-er. Let's not go there. :wink:

frenchkiss70 - Remember that Liz doesn't know about Max;s family situation. He did kind of paint her a little bit of a different picture. So she only sees that he never came to say goodbye, or anything. As for remorse for her own lie, it was not that that broke them up. She now feels abandoned, and... It's like that old saying. When you are up to your ass in aligators, it's hard to remember that you are there to drain the swamp. :wink:

BelevnDreamsToo - Well... I know YOU commented on it, but then, you always comment on each line individually. :) What do you mean sleep? YOu mean that I sent you the next part and you chose to sleep???!!!

omwf - Please remember that this part was written before your comments regardng passports.okay? :wink:

begonia9508 - You are right. Who really believed that there WAS a situation? :wink:

roswellfan4 - Like someone (smokie?) said. Stripped of his mask, Max was that little boy again. But he needs to regain his confidence, and quickly.

Kittens - I'm sure that once she gets home, Liz will sort out the situation with Kyle. Maybe she will even forgive him.

L-J-L 76 - Glad you are enjoying it. Posting on a weekly basis (normally. Just that things went a little pear shaped for me for a while :wink: ) I am sure that Max will try to stay away from Tess. The thing is, will she let him? :wink:

VeronicaB - Yes, Lis is feeling really low thinking Max doesn;t want her, while Max is afraid she will move on... Time is not on their side.

martine - Max's father has big plans. Sadly, these plans have come to dominate his life.

Jason's Lover - Glad you enjoyed it. :)

lazza - Sometimes, you can't see the wood for the trees. :wink:

SmileeUK - You are quite right. But how, with Max under practical house arrest, without his wallet and passport?

BehrObsession - That is, if Max is allowed back to Harvard. Who knows what these people will pull?

clueless - Thank you :)

smokie - As much as MAx tried to stop the more public exhibitionism (remember how he tried to hide Liz in the shadows on those stairs?) he just can't help it arounf her. As for Max and his situation, well... he just needs the right motivation to stand up.

Shadowlynxbehr - Oh... I am sorry if this chapter bothered you. But I know what you mean about creepyness. Because of the work I have been involved with, I have had friends and relatives visited by 'suits' asking questions about me. And old friends call up out of the blue to ask me whats going on. :wink: Spooky.



Parisienne Walkways


Running Authors Note. When you see text in Italics, please assume that the speaker is talking in French. This saves me providing you with a translation. :wink: For those phrases that appear in French, if you really want to know what they mean, then I can recommend using http://babelfish.altavista.com/tr Select the "French to English", copy the text, press translate and voila!



Part 18 - Leaving On A Jet Plane

Friday - 15th July.



"We'll have so much fun, you and me," Tess had replaced the goon in the suit sitting next to Max. She had hardly stopped talking for the whole flight. "It's been so long since you were at our place in Washington. This time, I'll get to show you around."

"Whatever," Max sighed with resignation.

He was staring out through the window. If he didn't look at her, perhaps he could pretend she was not really there. Instead, his mind was on Liz, and how he hadn't even checked what flight she was on. He had been so dreading her departure that he had not once even considered it.

"We're nearly home." Tess checked her watch. "Mummy and Daddy will be there to meet us at the airport," she continued. "I don't know about you, but I'm not tired at all. So we could even go out tonight, couldn't we? Dinner... and there's this amazing club I know."

"What do you mean, your parents will meet us at the airport?" Max started to look around him for the first time. "Aren't they on the plane?"

"No," Tess shook her head. "Your Dad suggested I stayed until it was time for you to come home. Then we could fly home together."

"Of course," Max nodded with a groan. "How foolish of me to think that just 'cause I'm an adult now, I get to make my own decisions and choices."

"Well, of course you do," Tess gave his arm a playful punch while she giggled. "And you 'would' choose me. I mean, who wouldn't? Your Dad told me how you've been in love with me since the day we met."

"Tess..." Max started.

"Time to return to your seat Miss Harding," the goon returned. "We'll be landing soon, I have orders to escort Max safely into the arrivals lounge."

"Oh," Tess pouted. "I was hoping he could hold my hand while we land."

"Sorry," the large man shrugged, standing back to let her out.

"But as soon as we get inside..."

"Yes, Ma'am," he smirked. "He's all yours."

"Why does everyone live in a dream world where I'm concerned?" Max asked his guard. "Call me naïve, but I do believe that no one can force me to date someone I don't want to."

"That's not my concern, Mr. Evans," he shook his head. "I just do what I'm told to."

"Get a life," Max shook his head.


* * *


Below him, the fields of Virginia drew ever closer as the plane descended. As the buildings of Fairfax grew, Max felt a feeling of foreboding grow with them. He was sixteen years old all over again. With a bump, and the sudden juddering of the heavy duty brakes that slowed the lumbering hulk, they had landed at Dulles, Washington. The large plane taxied to the small area close to the airport terminal. A small truck with a set of stairs sped in and parked itself by the doorway before the engines had even stopped. By the time the flight attendant had the door open, a limousine was parked at the bottom of the steps.

"Come on, Max," Tess was back at his side, wrapping herself around Max's left arm. "The sooner we get inside and collect our luggage, the sooner we can get home. We have a date tonight, remember."

"As if I could forget," Max closed his eyes and shook his head.

He tried to drag his feet. He really tried to slow down the inevitable moment that he had been dreading since the moment he discovered that they would be staying with the Hardings. But however he tried to delay the inevitable, he was kept moving by the constant pulling of both Tess and his guard.

At the bottom of the stairs, he was practically manhandled into the limo. He breathed a sigh of relief when he found that it was empty. But the moment he was dreading was rushing at him like an oncoming train, and he had no way to get out of its path.

"Come on, Max," Tess enthused, pulling her close to him. "I can hardly wait."

The limo sped away from the plane, and headed for a small gate half way along the airport's main, futuristic building. The gates opened and without even slowing, the limo passed between them. Pulling up at the glass doors, a man was already there to open the car door for them.

"Welcome to Washington," the man greeted them.

Max glanced at his watch and calculated that it was eight o'clock in the evening over there. He hoped that Liz would not give him up so easily, and go out to enjoy her last night of Paris on the arm of another man.

"Je serais plutôt à Paris," Max sighed.


* * *


"Mummy!" Tess squealed, leaving Max's arm and scurrying towards an oddly matched couple that stood by a cluster of seats in the small room. "Daddy!"

Ed and Catherine Harding were a strange couple. Ed was already in his late fifties, and what little hair remained was already a steely gray. He was tall, and thin, although his potbelly gave evidence for his penchant for good food and his favorite tipple, malt whiskey. His face was always serious and Max could not ever remember once seeing him smile unless it was to greet his daughter. Catherine, on the other hand, was a relatively young and beautiful woman. At only thirty five, she was not Tess's natural mother. She had died giving birth to Tess, and Catherine had taken over the role of surrogate mother when Tess was just seven and Catherine was only twenty. The strikingly beautiful blonde woman was the proverbial trophy wife.

Both Stepmom and Dad greeted Tess as though they had not seen her for ages, rather than the day or two she had remained behind. Then the attention was turned on Max.

"Maxwell," Ed greeted him by trying to wrap him into a familial hug. Max spun away like a fullback breaking a tackle.

"Mr. Harding," Max nodded, moving away from his father's mentor.

"We haven't seen you in a while, son," Ed ignored Max's reaction. "We've missed you."

"Oh," Max didn't know what else to say.

"But we'll have plenty of opportunity to talk now you'll be spending some time with us, but..." He paused and looked at his wife and daughter, both watching Max. Ed moved him a dozen paces away to stand near a window. "I have to tell you, son," he continued. "You have been really foolish while you've been in Paris."

"In what way?" Max felt his blood start to warm up.

"Your Dad showed me those photos."

"What an asshole!" Max spat. "Get a good kick out of them did you?"

"There's no need to talk like that Max," Ed Harding growled. "Not when I can do so much for you. Do you even realize how hard your father and I have been working to pave your way into politics?"

"Something I asked neither of you to do," Max sneered.

"You really do need to learn a few lessons, Maxwell," Ed shook his head. "And one of those lessons is that no matter how much you like to play with the sluts, you never do it where you can get caught, okay?"

Max had to bite his tongue not to reply. This was not the time to fight this particular battle. There was a far more important one to fight. And then there was another, even more important than that.

"If you want to be the youngest president in history, then your rise to the top can ill afford any kind of story that might come back and bite your ass. You can't afford any kind of indiscretion to ruin your reputation, especially when it could cost you so many votes in important areas like the bible belt. That's where the votes can win or lose you your election. And all for what? Pussy?"

"Did they cast you and my Dad in the same mold?" Max rubbed his temples.

"Tess tells me that the two of you are going out tonight. That's good." Ed had a faraway look in his eye. "I'll arrange for a few photos of the two of you to appear in the press tomorrow. That should get you some great publicity. Maybe drop a few hints of an impending engagement."

"There's just one problem," Max finally found his voice.

What if Liz saw that announcement? What if she believed it?

"I can't see any," Ed started to peer at Max. "This is great PR."

"There's no way in hell I'll be proposing to you daughter," he shook his head. "Tonight, or any other."

A feeling of empowerment swept through Max. This was the first time he had ever stood up to Ed Harding. And he had done it because the thought of really losing Liz was far more frightening than a rabid Ed Harding at his worst. If Liz would not let him back into her heart... life really would be over.

"What?" Harding's angry voice echoed through the chamber. "You listen, and you listen good, you little shit. Your father and I haven't busted our balls for nothing, you know. You will tow the line and marry my daughter, even if I have to chain the two of you together."

"That's going to look good in the press," Max chuckled. "Presidential don't wannabe forced to marry a woman he doesn't want to work for. They abolished slavery, you know. And I do believe that even the son's of politicians are covered by that law."

"Think you know it all?" Ed Harding glared. "We'll see how you are feeling after a few months without our help behind the scenes. We got you into Harvard. We can get you kicked out."

"Like I told that miserable excuse for a father," Max glared back, standing at his tallest. "I don't need his money, and as I recall, it was my GPA that got me into Harvard. And even if you did pull some strings and got me kicked from there... that will pretty mush remove me from your plans for office, right? It's not like you could hush something like that up." Max thought about it for a moment. "You know what? Do it. Get me kicked out. If that's what it take to remove me from your plans for my life, then that's a small price to pay."

"This isn't over," Ed turned to his family and smiled at them, masking his fury at Max. "You guys sit tight. I have a situation to take care."

His sideways glance at Max left no one in any doubt that the situation had everything to do with him. Ed Harding pulled a cell phone from his pocket and headed for the main doors. Max knew that he would be calling his father in Paris. This was going to be a fun stay. Max watched him with narrowed eyes until he was gone from sight.


"Hello, Max."

Max froze when he heard Catherine Harding's soft voice behind him. This was Max's greatest demon.

"Hello, Mrs. Harding," his voice was shaky.

"Oh, come now, Max," she traced a line up his arm. "You can call me Catherine. Especially as we were once so..." She appraised him before leaning close to his ear. "Close," she whispered.

"Where's..." his voice squeaked while his face burned. "Where's Tess?" He had noted her absence.

"I sent her to fetch some drinks," Catherine smiled, walking in a slow circle around him. "So we could talk. It's been such a long time since I saw you last. Oh, my. You have filled out well. Matured nicely. I think I'm beginning to regret my actions in letting you go."

"I'm not," Max shook his head and swallowed.

"You know," she smiled, her hand lingering on his chest. "I'm sure we will get some alone time at home. Tess has her friends she needs to maintain contact with... and Ed has his schemes. We could easily pick up from where we left off."

"I'm..." he cleared his throat. "I'm not interested, Mrs. Harding."

"Oh, come on now, Max," he hands drifted to his buttocks, making Max flinch and move away. "You were madly in love with me. I really did think you were going to commit suicide when I ended our affair."

"I was sixteen," Max was barely holding in his contempt. "I was sent away from my family to live in a strange country, in a strange house with total strangers. I was alone and vulnerable. You seduced me, Mrs. Harding. You seduced me, you used me and then dumped me three months later when you thought I was getting too... 'clingy' was the word you used. Do you even know what that did to my self esteem?"

"You were a little... demanding," she smiled. "And you were so head over heels in love with me."

"It took me four years to recover," Max ignored her. "But I did recover. And two weeks ago, I might have jumped at your offer. But now? I'm awake now, and you disgust me. Everything you did to me... That was..." Max shook his head. "But I am glad that I was able to put all that I had learned to good use. With someone my own age."

"The slut in the park?" she raised an eyebrow. "I bet she can't please you anything like I can."

"You don't even know the half of it," Max smirked.

"There's no need to be like that. Max," she faked a pout that made it clear where Tess had learned her mannerisms. "You're going to be staying with us for the rest of the summer, and you'll be almost house bound. There's no need to be unpleasant, and we could even make each other feel a lot better."

"All summer?" Max raised an eyebrow. "Housebound? You really don't know me very well now, Mrs. Harding. I did grow up. My Dad and Ed are so afraid of bad publicity... What do you think the press would make of our little tryst?."

"No one would believe you!" she gasped. "It would be my word against yours. And you would ruin your reputation."

"Think I care?" Max chuckled. "And as for my word against yours... It would hardly matter because every time I was mentioned, so to would my allegations. And your rep would suffer just as bad. All those 'friends' with teenaged sons would suddenly have other business to attend to. And all those teenage sons would suddenly want to visit you."

"I don't think you have the balls," she shook her head. "You never did have a backbone."

"I found a backbone," Max. "Her name is Liz. And right now, I plan on using that backbone." Max picked up his carry-on bag and headed for the door that Ed had disappeared from.

"Where are you going?" she sounded less sure of herself.

"Leaving," Max called over his shoulder. "I have a plane to catch."

"Oh?" Catherine started to laugh. "Do you think you can buy a ticket with shirt buttons?"

"No," Max turned and looked at her one last time. He no longer felt anything. This demon had been exorcised. "Everyone seems to forget that I have money of my own. The wallet my Dad's goons took from me? Full of Euros. Totally useless, now." He reached into his bag and pulled out another wallet, along with a small red booklet. "This wallet, however, has my credit cards, my bank cards, my U.S. ID card and a stash of dollar bills." He didn't bother to tell her that the little red booklet was actually his French Passport. Keeping his dual nationality was probably the best idea, he had ever had. Other than plucking up the courage to talk to Liz. "Do you think I won't have learned by now, never to keep all my eggs in one basket?"

"Ed will stop you," she yelled at him. "He'll just send someone to pick you up."

"He can try," Max laughed. "And then I will press charges. That would be kidnapping, and a criminal offence. What chance does he think he would survive that kind of scandal, especially when I hint that the kidnapping had sexual undertones? How long do you think you would last then, eh?"

"You wouldn't!"

"Try me."

With a final grin of satisfaction, Max looked at his watch. It was only nine o'clock in the evening in Paris. Liz's flight was the next day. He had time, didn't he? He hoped he did. Max took of at a sprint, heading for the main part of the terminal, and the ticket offices. He only hoped he would not be too late. His bridges were well and truly burned now. If he had to go crawling back to them, he would never be his own man again. Without Liz, he was nothing. He hoped that he meant as much to her as she meant to him. Everything.


* * *


Saturday - 16th July.


It had come at last. The end of her vacation. Liz sat in the comfortable chairs near the departure gate at the Charles de Gaulle airport, her eyes staring into space, and wondering what Max was doing at that moment, whose bed he was waking up in. What she had found most distressing was that so soon after Kyle's betrayal, she had been so easily fooled by another man who was not really interested in her at all. What would she do when she got home? Was this her fate, now? To be betrayed by every man she meets? If that was going to be the case, then surely, it was a case of better the devil you know. Perhaps she should call Kyle as soon as she got home. When they called her flight, Liz picked up her few belongings and joined the line of people to board her flight. and before she entered the tunnel that led to her plane, she took a last look around. Paris had been a terrible idea for a honeymoon.

Settling into her aisle seat, Liz tucked her magazine into the pocket in front of her and placed her bottle of water in the empty seat beside her, the one next to the window that should have had Kyle sitting there. She fastened her seat belt and leaned back in her upright seat, waiting to take off and leave Paris behind her. Time passed and soon they were mobile. With a great roar, the engines leapt to life and the plane hurtled along the runway. There was a change in the pitch as the plane left the ground and then climbed steeply into the air. It felt strange, looking up the plane knowing that they were pointed up into the air. The pilot started to level off and soon after they had passed through a layer of thin, wispy clouds, the seat belt signs were turned off and all around her, the sound of metal clinking reverberated through the cabin.

Unsure what to do, Liz picked up the in-flight magazine and started to leaf through it. She was paying no attention to it other than the fact that it was passing time.

"Excuse me," a man's voice appeared at her side. He was older than her, perhaps by as much as ten years. He was a very handsome man, and he exuded total confidence. "I couldn't help noticing that you have an empty seat next to you," he nodded at the seat. "And I was wondering if someone as lovely as yourself would like a little company to help make the long flight pass a little faster."

"Oh," Liz started to shake her head. "That's not necessary, thank you."

"It might not be necessary," he continued to smile, placing his hand on the armrest to support himself. Liz could see the pale band of skin where he had removed his ring. She couldn't help smiling at the particular memory. She had learned so much from Max. "But it's certainly no bother. In fact, I think we might both find it mutually enjoyable. What do you say?"

"I say that maybe your wife wouldn't be too impressed," Liz smiled back at him. "And neither would I. Now, if you don't mind, I would like to return to my magazine."

Recognizing defeat, the man moved away, leaving Liz to find ways to pass the time on her own.


After the flight attendants had served breakfast, Liz switched on the little TV set in the back of the seat in front of her, and flicked through the in flight channels. She watched some news for a while, finding out what had been happening back home while she had been away. She then settled on the movie, a dreary tale about a couple of people stranded on a desert island, and a tired plot involving a love triangle. She wondered why no one in Hollywood could think of anything new. It was just a rehash of any number of old films. When the end credits rolled, she to freshen up in the small bathroom.


There was a man sitting in the empty seat next to her when she returned. He was twisted away from her, peering through the window at the ocean below.

"Excuse me," she stood in the aisle. Why did people assume she wanted anything to do with them? "That's seat's not free. Could you leave please?"

"I thought it was you," the young man turned to look up at her. "I saw you earlier but couldn't be sure. But when I saw you head for the bathroom, I knew it was. Thought I'd drop by and say hi."

"Well, you said hi," Liz shook her head. "Wait..." she looked again. "I know you. You're Michael. Ma... " her voice caught. "Max's friend."

"Yeah," Michael nodded with a smile. "Best friend, actually. Come on. Sit down. I don't bite."

"What?" she gaped. "You think that now Max has finished with me, I must be so easy that you would have a stab at me?"

"I just said that Max is my best friend," Michael glared. "I would never try anything so low as to try something on with his girlfriend. Besides..." he started to smile again. "You're not my type."

"In case you hadn't received the telegram," she was no less placated. "I'm not his 'girlfriend'. He dumped me."

"What?" Michael frowned. "Max dumped you? I don't believe you."

"Well..." she felt less sure of herself. "As good as."

"Sit down, Liz," Michael indicated her empty seat. "What happened?"

"He was lying to me," Liz groaned as she sat down. "Which you know all about. Are you really American? Or are you French?"

"I'm really American," Michael smiled. "I couldn't pretend to be French if my life depended on it. But Max... he... he is half French, and until a few years ago, he really did talk like that. Living in the States gave him his American accent. Max lived in Paris with his French mom until he was sixteen. Then he was sent to school in America."

"He still lied," she stared at the TV screen showing the latest situation in the middle east.

"Well," Michael sighed. "If it's any consolation, I told him to. Jeez, Who knew that the two of you would fall in love?"

"Yeah, right," Liz sneered. "He fell so much in love with that he never once tried to explain. He never once came to me to apologize or anything. That doesn't sound like he was too bothered, to me."

"Until recently," Michael sighed. "Max was not what you would call a ladies man. He was really shy around girls, he kind of avoided them. There was this girl at college... she put out for everyone. And she wanted Max. But he wouldn't go near her. So for him to be like he was with you... I don't know what it was that made Max abandon all of his fears with women to take a chance with you, but he did. But..."

"Nice try, Michael," Liz shook her head. "But I don't believe you." She started to blush. "There is no way that someone you just described could know so much about... uhm... sex."

"You could if you were seduced by an older woman when you were only sixteen and then dumped like some piece of garbage."

"What?" Liz gasped.

"When Max first went to America, he was seduced by an older woman. Max was alone, and frightened. He was an easy target for this particular predatory woman. But when she grew tired of him, she dumped him. It destroyed his confidence, it destroyed him. I made him move out of the house and board at school. He needed to be away from that woman. I tried setting him up on dates, but apart from one success when I got him so drunk he didn't know what he was doing, he was not a very active socializer."

"So that's why he's so good..."

"I guess," Michael nodded. "And it's also why he's so shy around women. He told me about meeting you, how he fell in love with you right away. He said you were so sad. But then he heard you tell someone that your would never date an American boy again. So Max just..." Michael shrugged. "Look, I understand that you're hurt, Liz. I understand that you only see the fact that he lied to you. But was it such a bad lie?"

"Why didn't he try to explain to me then? Why did he leave me alone?"

"Because he's been taken back to the States."

"What do you mean, taken?" Liz frowned.

"Because Max is a family member to an Ambassador, he has a certain level of security around him. To enable to let him move freely around Paris, a city he loves, he pretends that he only works at the Embassy. You know all about Gaston, right?"

Liz nodded.

"Well, my guess is that there was some kind of security issue going on. I came home yesterday morning to find two goons packing up Max's things. When I asked where Max was, they told me it was none of my business. I called his cell phone, but there was no answer. The only explanation is that they grabbed Max off the streets and took him home. My guess is, they grabbed him the night before last."

Right after their argument, she realized. Which would explain why he did not come to her.

"I've blown it, haven't I?" Liz looked down at her lap.

"With Max?" Michael started to laugh. "No way. If he loves you even half as much as I think he does, then he'll come looking for you. He does know where you live, right?"

"Only that I live in Roswell," Liz nodded. "Area 52."

"Pardon?" he frowned.

"Sorry," Liz smiled for the first time in ages. "Private joke." Then her face fell. "But I'm leaving almost immediately. Me and my friend... we're going to look for somewhere to live for college."

"Give me your address," Michael reached into his pocket for some paper. "And your telephone number. I'll pass it on. That is... assuming you want Max to find you."

"I don't know," Liz's heart was pounding. "I mean, what if he decides I'm not worth it? What if he calls and after a day or two, he says he's had enough?"

"I'll take that as a yes," Michael rolled his eyes.


* * *


"Her flight landed on time," Maria observed as the 'landed' label appeared next to flight AA764 from Chicago.

All around them, the hustle and bustle of the Albuquerque International Airport's arrivals lounge heaved too and fro. Maria, along with Jeff and Nancy Parker sat in a cluster of chairs with a cup of coffee on the table in front of them, waiting for the arrival of one Elizabeth Parker, on her way home from the strangest honeymoon any of them had ever known.

"I can't wait to see her again," Nancy looked up at the board, willing it to say that they were in the baggage claim area.

"Me neither," Jeff smiled. "I want to hear all about her vacation."

"I want to hear all about Max," Maria grinned. "I want all the dirt."

"Maria!" Nancy gasped. "You know as well as I do that Liz is not that kind of girl. While I'm sure that she had a nice time with this Max, I'm sure that there's no... 'dirt'."

"Relax, Mrs. P." Maria rolled her eyes. "You're right. Liz isn't that kind of girl. But she can't hide the truth from her best friend. Every time she spoke about this Max, she was someone different. Max has had a big impact on her."

"Do we know anything about this Max?" Jeff frowned.

"By 'we', do you mean me?" Maria smirked. "Other than the fact that he's French, no. But Liz likes him a lot, so don't be surprised if she doesn't seem too happy to have left him behind, okay? No questions about him."

"You make it sound like you're the adult here," Nancy rolled her eyes.

"No, I make it sound like you're the overprotective parents," Maria stated. "I know you're worried about her and that you care for her. But let her talk about Max in her own time. Don't force the issue."

"They're in the baggage claim," Jeff pointed up at the board that had changed. "We should make our way to the entrance."

To prevent the crowds of people waiting for friends, colleagues or loved one blocking the doors, a barrier had been set up that allowed the travelers to emerge through the doors and make their way safely into the large hallway. Maria, Nancy and Jeff found a gap close to the end of the barrier and kept their eyes glued to doorways. Every time the opened, their hopes raised, only to fall when it was not Liz that came through.

They didn't recognize her at first. A confident, lovely young woman had replaced the small, broken, timid little girl who had left them. When Liz walked through the doors, wearing a short, pale pink dress with a flared pleated skirt and with a plunging neckline that hinted at her cleavage as well as the lacy edges of her brassier, they could scarcely believe it was their daughter. She walked with such an air of confidence in her high heels. Her eyes were bright and she had a big smile on her face. All around her, men's heads were turning. This woman was as far removed from the Liz they had last seen two weeks ago as you could get. Three jaws dropped open.

"Liz?" Maria gaped. Was this really her best friend.

Liz was smiling broadly as she walked up to them, her heels clicking on the polished floor.

"Oh my god, Liz!" Maria squealed, ducking under the barrier and rushing to her friend.

"Maria!" Liz exclaimed.

The two girls rushed into one another's arms and it was with a genuine hug of friendship, love and devotion that they met one another.

"I have so missed you girl," Maria leaned back to look at her again. "And look at you... You're..."

"I missed you too, Maria. And this is the new me. Do you like it?"

"I totally love it," Maria nodded. "We are going to be such hot property in Cambridge."

"You got in?" Liz's eyes went wide with excitement.

"I got in!" Maria confirmed with a squeal.

The two girls hugged again and started to jump up and down in time together, both crying out in excitement.

"Mom! Dad!" Liz spotted her parents and left Maria's arms to greet them.

Their hugs and kisses were emotional and filled with joy.

"Wow," Maria mouthed at Jeff while Liz was with her Mom.

Jeff just nodded.

"Liz, honey," Jeff looked around. "Where's your luggage?"

"My luggage?" Liz looked around. Her eyes suddenly lit up even brighter. "Oh, you should see the souvenir I brought home with me. It's going to totally remind me of what a great time I had in Paris."

"So where is it?" Jeff chuckled. "Did you leave it behind?"

It was then that he noticed a young, dark haired man wearing a dark suit, with a white, open neck shirt and pushing a trolley with two suitcases, and a large hold all, straight toward them, his eyes fixed on his daughter.

"Mom, Dad, Maria," Liz smiled at the young man, standing next to him and linking her hand into his. "This is my souvenir of Paris. Max. Max, this is my Mom and Dad, and my best friend, Maria."

"Enchanté," Max gave a polite, but curt nod before stepping forward. He grasped Jeff by the hand and shook it. "You have raised the daughter most exquisite," he congratulated him. "And Liz?" he smiled at her while he took Nancy's hand in his. "You did not tell me you have the sister, no?" He kissed the back of Liz's mother's hand and winked. "I can see from whom it is that Liz is getting her beauty," he smiled at the blushing women. "And Maria," he turned to her. "Although Liz is telling me that she has a friend most good looking, she is unable to do you justice, no? You are très belle, mon amie."

After their initial shock, Maria, Nancy and Jeff could only stare at the young couple who now only had eyes for each other. The threesome then turned to gape at one another, their mouths flapping like fish out of water.


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Parisienne Walkways - Part 19

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Hi everyone!

I am sorry that we missed the chapter last week, but not only am I very busy right now, but so is my whole beta team! But here we are at last, with the latest chapter, which will explain Liz's dream... or why Michael would pretend to be Max... or whatever other theory was lined up. :wink:

LairaBehr4 - Thank you, :)

guelbebek - Veliecht, meine nachste gesicht wird in Berlin sein! :) Max kann "Ich bin ein Berliner" sagen. :wink: Danke Schon.

Gaby7tvm - Hope all becomes clear with this explanation. :)

FSU/MSW-94 - Yes, Max was abused, but at least he gained something good out of it. :wink:

Behrsgirl1230 - Ah yes, why indeed? Maybe he's trying to persuade Liz that he really is French... IF that;s really Max. :wink:

MorningDreamgirl - Simple. She fell in love with Michael and is passing him off as Max. :wink: kidding.

clueless - Why would Liz introduce Michael pretending to be Max?

BelevnDreamsToo - Good save. :wink:

AJK001 - I doubt I could write any other way. :wink:

Alex Balex - Yes, definately out of the stormy water. :)

paper - Yup. Seems he figured Max would give in to the lure of regular sex... just didn;t figure it would come from another woman in that house, not that his sone actually has a pair. :wink:

POM - That's okay. "I" don;t mind people missing a week or two. :wink:

Smac - You keep threatening me with this transporter, but do you ever follow through??? No!. :wink:

smokie - Seeing as I had completed All of Part 2 or Red Shift months ago... that would be kind of hard. Reminds me. I had better start on Part 3 soon. And yes. I just couldn;t have Liz fly home alone. Someone had to tell her that Max loves her.

Thanette - Which Dad? Would Dad Evans try to stop a divorce? I doubt he would have that kind of clout. Would Dad Parker? Why?

frenchkiss70 - What Max (it is IS him) knows at the point of introduction to the parents is not known by us, yet. :wink: And I think Liz was more concerned with whether or not there was a chance with Max. Truths can come later and Michael is certainly not the person to discuss them with.

lazza - Ah yes. The miracles of fiction writing. :wink:

begonia9508 - I love how people loved that chapter. :wink:

SmileeUK - As someone already observed... dual nationality can be such a blast. :wink:

omwf - Of course you can say 'huh' :wink:

Roswell 10/2/00 - Well, there are plenty of people who qualify for the #1 Fan mantle. And as yet, no one has succesfully interviewed for the 'Overseas GF' role. Still vacant, if you're interested. :wink: Glad your bor liked Paris. Did you get him to check on the accuracy of my 'facts'? :wink:

BehrObsession - Glad you liked how Max grew some resolve. :)

martine - How that all came about is expklained... :) You'll like it. :)

Ms_Capeside - As long as you enjoy the story, do not be sorry for lurking. I'm glad you left me some fb though . :) When I started the story, I resolved to not repeat the sex scenes. Thats too easy to do and would soon grow boring, It had toi be about Liz growing into a sexual being with Max. As for the language... I have help. And yes, I have visited Paris many times. As for different... I try to make sure that ALL my stories have a unique idea to them. If it's not unique, I won't write it. Good to see you. Hope you enjoy the rest of my story, as well as all my others. :)

Alien64 - Left? Left? Are you suggesting that I didn;t know what I was doing? :wink: I figured you would prefer the good bit, knowing that they WERE back together, than how it came about. :wink:

Erina - LOL - No, it's a random stranger Liz brought home to save face. :wink: kidding. Read and see for yourself. :wink:

confusedfool - All explained in this part. :)

VeronicaB - Good to know that I'm not hated. And I hope that it will be at the far ened of that scale after tonight. :wink:

Michelle In Yonkers - When Max was 'brought' home, he went upstairs to pack. He had some cash, etc, in his bedroom at home. Probably where I would keep it. :wink: And as Max is 21, how can Dad stop his credit cards? Max is financially independant. If Max uses a French bank, and a French card, I doubt they would be too impressed with an "American" diplomat making demands on French soil... :wink:

Smokie - Technically, Max is not protected by the Secret Service, and especially not on American soil. So any 'goons' looking after Max would need to be 'private' and thus any attempt to detain him would be construed as kidnapping. So if Max walked, they had no legal grounds to detain him. Michael came home because he knows that Max has been 'brought' home. After a quick visit with 'relatives', he will probably hope to be meeting with Max in Boston.

behrluv32 - Even if you haven't posted before, you are still welcome. :)

littlewind - Thank you :)

polar vixen - NO, in the prologue, Liz was sad that she had spent her last night alone... that "He" had taken her at her word and stayed away.

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Well... details of their reunion are coming right up...

bluesands - Je suis desolet! :wink:

IluvMaxEvans - LOL - I hope it wasn;t 3 SOLID days! The story isn't THAT long. :wink: Tell me... should I post a health wrning that the story should be read in small chuncks? :wink:

YES! It's Friday! And YES! You get a new part! :)



Parisienne Walkways

Authors IMPOTANT note. Because we are back in the US now, italics no longer indicates French. Okay? :)



Part 19 - Kodak Moments

Saturday - 16th July.



Max had never really been a good player of football, but the way he ran at full tilt through the wide foyers of the busy International airport would have made any self respecting (self-respecting) running back proud. He jinked, he weaved, he dodged and he bobbed. With a feint to the left, followed by another feint to the right, he opened up a gap through a whole party of tourists, on their way to catch a bus to see the historical sites if the capital. In the distance, the large blue letters that spelled out the words Air France seemed to mock him.

"I need the next flight to Paris!" he barked, panting heavily. "Charles de Gaulle."

The smartly uniformed woman raised her eyebrows with a light smile before she started to tap the keys of her keyboard with nimble fingers.

"The next departure leaves at eleven fifteen tonight," she looked up at him. "We have plenty of seats in all classes."

"Eleven fifteen," Max's mind was in a whirl. "Seven hour flight, call it six... six thirty in the morning. That makes it eleven thirty there. I have to find her... and then I'll have to buy a ticket..." Max looked down at the woman behind the desk. "That's too late," he frowned. "She could have an earlier flight. I could miss her."

"Oh," the sales woman raised an eyebrow. "Uhm..."

"How do I get from Roswell to Paris?"

"Excuse me, sir?" she was really confused now. hehe!!

"I'm sorry," Max sighed. "I'm, uh... babbling. I need to meet someone. She's in Paris right now, but she's flying home today... I mean, tomorrow. And I don't know what time her flight is. And I really, really need to meet her. I love her. And if I miss her, she won't know that and it might be too late."

"Ah," she nodded in understanding. "And does she live in Roswell?"

"New Mexico," Max nodded. "Yeah."

"Well, in that case, she would probably have flown from Albuquerque." She typed out some more words, and moved her mouse around the screen, clicking at various intervals. "Yes," she nodded. "Albuquerque is the nearest major airport."

"I could meet her there, I suppose," he nodded. "Albuquerque, I mean. It's not ideal. I mean, I expect her parents, and her friends will probably be meeting her there. I kind of want to tell her that I love her before I can't get anywhere near her. I expect the international arrivals will be separate from domestic arrivals, huh?

"Probably," she nodded. "But I can tell you that there are no direct flights to Albuquerque from Paris," she looked up after scanning the screen. "They all have a stopover."

"Where?" Max's looked up sharply.

"Dallas," the woman checked the screen again. "Or Boston, or Miami or Chicago."

"What?" Max closed his eyes and sighed in frustration. "She could come in through any one of them?"

"I'm sorry, sir," she showed genuine concern.

"So I need to choose, right?" he took a deep breath. "And if I make the wrong choice... I might never see her again."

"Unless you look her up in Roswell."

"Yeah," he nodded. "I suppose if I flew directly to Albuquerque, I might be able to talk to her before she meets her family. Or maybe I could sort of follow her home." He thought hard. "I've never been to Miami," he considered. "Or Dallas or Chicago for that matter. Boston, on the other hand..." Max closed his eyes and muttered something under his breath. A prayer. "Okay... Can I get a ticket to Chicago?"

* * *


Liz was glad of Michael's company during the long flight. And she felt comfortable with him. Not once had he given any indication that he saw her as anything other than a friend. As far as he was concerned, she was with Max and that was where it ended. Michael really was a good friend to him. And he had also told her everything that he could about Max and his complicated life.

"When you get to Albuquerque," he told her, "don't be surprised if you see him there, waiting for you."

"Do you think he will be able to get away from the Hardings?" she frowned. "I mean, if they managed to practically kidnap him from Paris..."

"Harding and Max's dad underestimate Max. They think that just because they have practically bullied him all his life, he's going to just fall into line and do what they want. They don't realize that he can actually think, and act for himself. But I saw how Max was looking at you when you came 'round the other night... I saw how he was with you. Max is not going to give you up without a fight. And his grandfather left him a lot of money that his dad just can't touch. So any threat they can make, Max pretty much knows that they're hollow. But until now, he's had nothing to fight for. And I think that he will fight tooth and nail for you."

"I hope you're right," Liz fastened her seat belt as the light illuminated above their heads.

"I know I am," he grinned.


"Michael?" Liz was frowning again. "Is it always going to be like this? I mean, everywhere Max turns, is he going to have someone trying to force him into a relationship with this girl, or make him do something he doesn't want to do? I mean, you hear all these stories. What if they drugged him and made him..." she swallowed. "Made him have sex with this Tess... What if she was to end up pregnant?"

"I certainly wouldn't put it past them," Michael nodded, his face filled with sympathy. "I guess... I guess Max needs to do something to put him out of any future plans for office. What Max needs is his own Chappaquiddick. Minus a fatality, of course."

"It's a shame we never got caught by a newspaper reporter, then," Liz grinned.

"Excuse me?" Michael raised a single eyebrow.

"Nothing," Liz shook her head, blushing. "Maybe Max could tell someone about this other woman. You know, seducing him and that."

"In the eyes of some people," Michael smirked, "that might make him a more attractive proposition. And he hardly did anything wrong. It was all her."

"Michael, I really don't want to have Max always looking over his shoulder. I want him looking to the future. I hope that it will be 'our' future."

"If Max has anything to do with it, it will be. All I want to know is that you see Max as something more than just a bit of fun while you were on holiday." His eyes suddenly narrowed. "Why were you in Paris on your own, anyway?"

"It's a long story," she shook her head. "And one I should tell Max, first. Someone was supposed to be coming with me but something came up. It's complicated."

"Fair enough," he shrugged. "So what are you plans after we land?"

"I have to catch my connecting flight to Albuquerque," she sighed. "But that's like in three hours or something. I suppose I could always try calling Max. Though if what you say is true, then the Hardings will have taken his phone away."

"That's why I haven't offered Max's number to you. First chance he gets, he'll have a new one, and I won't know the number till he calls me. I'd like to stay and keep you company," Michael nodded. "But I'm being met at the airport. Sorry."

"A girl you're going to paint?" Liz gave him a wry smile, remembering the pictures Michael had around the apartment.

"No," he chuckled. "Family. Sort of. I haven't seen them since Christmas. Will you be okay on your own?"

"Yeah," she nodded. "Now I know that Max didn't really abandon me, I guess I can cope. I'm sure the time will just fly by."

The plane finally landed, and taxied to a halt. As before, Liz was terrified as the plane made all those strange noises and sounds. Her knuckles were white as she clutched the armrests when the plane bounced along the runway before juddering to a slow speed to taxi to its' gate.

While the plane emptied, Michael had to retrieve his bag from the seat he had been allocated, but Liz waited for him and together, they left the plane and entered the arrivals lounge of Chicago's O'Hare airport.

"Well," he said, as they approached the passport control desk. "I guess this is it. It's been a pleasure, Liz. I can see why Max fell for you. You're just what he needs. And I really hope that I at least hear lots more about you over the coming years."

"You too, Michael," she nodded, shaking his extended hand. "Thanks for being a friend. And to Max, too."

"He's been a good friend to me, too, you know. Oh, you never did tell me where you were going to college."

"Oh," Liz smiled. "I got into Harvard."

"Really?" Michael's smile was mysterious. "You must be some kind of brainiac, then."

"I guess," Liz smiled.

"Well, I'll be seeing you, Liz Parker," he turned to leave.

"I hope so, Michael," Liz called after him. "'Cause that means I'll be with Max."

A wave of his hand showed her that he agreed with her.

* * *


The transit lounge had to be one of the most boring places Liz had ever encountered. After only ten minutes, she could scarcely stand it any longer. She decided that she would rather wander out in the main concourses, with their stores and boutiques, and a lot of other things making it a more interesting place. At least, more so than the transit lounge. She had after all, hardly spent any of her money - Max having paid for almost everything they had done together. While she was looking through some familiar sounding perfumes, she heard the first strains of an all too familiar tune. Over the airport's P.A. system, she could hear an accordion playing the into to "La Vie En Rose." She couldn't help the smile that played on her lips.

"Would Miss Elizabeth Parker, from Roswell, New Mexico, recently arrived Paris, France, please make her way to the information desk in area 'C'."

She blinked, at first believing that the call had been for someone else. She looked around to see if anyone else might have responded. Spotting a large black 'E' on a yellow box near to her position, Liz looked up and down the concourse, spotting a large 'D' in the distance. With her small bag in tow, she made her way to the 'C' she could make out beyond some advertisements for car rentals.

"Excuse me," she spoke to the lady behind a bank of colored telephones. "My name is Elizabeth Parker. Uhm... did someone just put out a call from me?"

"From Roswell?" the lady asked.

"Uh, yeah," Liz nodded. "And I, uhm... just got in from Paris."

"I was asked to give you this," the lady handed her an envelope.

Liz ripped it open, her eyes immediately falling upon the handwritten words.

"My darling Liz.

"Please forgive me. I am so sorry that I lied to you. But I want you to know, that I fell in love with you from the very first moment that I saw you, crying at that table in Gaston's. It was never a game, it was never some kind of trick. It was the only way I could summon the courage to speak to you. And like all little white lies... it just grew out of hand. The accent may have been false, but my feelings never were.

"I didn't know what it was that had upset you that day, Liz. And I didn't want to know. I only wanted to bring a smile to your beautiful face... and to be allowed the privilege of getting to know you. I tried so hard to tell you the truth about me, but every time the time was right, the words just wouldn't come. I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me. I hope that you can give me a second chance, because you're worth everything I have had to endure in my life. And without you, then my life means nothing.

"If you want nothing to do with me, Liz, then just walk away. I promise that I will leave you alone. But if you forgive me, even if you could no longer love me, then do as the song says. You just hold out your hand, and you know wherever I am, I'll come running.

"With all my love, and all my hopes,

"Max."


Liz wiped the tears from her eyes and as she looked up from the letter, she did the only thing she knew how. She held out her hand.

It was immediately enveloped in a larger, warm and gentle hand. Liz turned to see Max standing slightly behind her. Her heart soared.

"What are you doing here, Max?" She mentally slapped herself for such a lame question. There was so much more she would have preferred to say. Preferred to do.

"I meant every word, Liz," his eyes were filled with longing. "I am totally in love with you."

"You hurt me, Max," she blinked away her tears and looked into the eyes she thought she would never see again.

"I know," he nodded. "And you will never know how truly sorry I am for that. But I'm not sorry that I used every means I had to get to know you. You see, Liz... I was never what you would call... one for the ladies, you know?"

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "I know. I know all about what happened to you when you were sixteen."

Max's eyes widened with surprise before they narrowed in thought.

"Who told you?" his eyebrows were almost knitted together. "The only other person who knows about that is... Was Michael on the plane?"

He started to look around.

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "But he had to run. And he kind of told me everything. Your shyness... and stuff."

"Oh," Max's voice sounded small.

"Uhm..." Liz started to blush. "Can I ask you...? You once said that you thought you were in love. But then you found out what real love was." She hesitated. "You don't have to answer this... but was it this... that uhm, woman?"

"Yes," Max nodded a little sheepishly. "I thought I was in love with her. It wasn't until I fell in love with you that I realized it could never have been love I felt with her. She never made me feel alive the way you do. Around you, Liz, I believe anything is possible. I believe that I can do whatever I want. As long as I have you with me. I know, Liz, beyond a shadow of a doubt. I know that I am in love with you."

"Uhm, Max?" Liz started to feel small. She looked down at the ground. "Can we go get a coffee? We need to talk."

In his chest, Max thought his heart had just stopped beating. This couldn't be good, could it? Conversations that began with 'We need to talk' usually ended with that well worn phrase, 'We can still be friends.' What a fool he had been to pour his heart out like that. She was breaking up with him again, only properly this time.


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The coffee cups sat on the table between them. Max was staring intently at the small head of froth that was still spinning where he had stopped stirring it.

"Are you going to tell me that it really is over, Liz?" he didn't look up at her. "Are you going to tell me that you can't get over my... uh, lie?"

"Uhm..." Liz sounded a little surprised. "What makes you say that, Max?" She was confused. She just needed to tell him the truth about her own past, and he was worried that she wanted nothing to do with him?

"Isn't it what this is about?"

"Did you mean what you said in that letter?"

"Of course I did," Max looked up at her at last.

"When I got back to m... our room, Max... when I thought about what had happened... I guess I realized I that I over reacted. I was mad... not only at the fact that you had... you know, but because... well, because that girl totally humiliated me and you never said a word."

"I..." Max started.

"No," Liz shook her head. "Let me finish. I was really mad about that, because, well, it looked like you really weren't that bothered. I understand now. I mean, I guess you were feeling a little..."

"Naked," Max nodded.

"And then I just started hoping you would come to me, apologize, kiss me and everything would be all right again. Because I would know then that you really do love me."

"I do, Liz," Max had hope burning in his eyes. "The only lie I ever told you was my accent. And even that wasn't totally faked. Just... I just talk like a normal American now."

"Not normal," Liz shook her head with a smile. "There's nothing normal about you at all, Max Evans."

"So..." Max swallowed. "So does this mean that everything is all right now?"

"No," Liz shook her head.

"Oh," Max nodded with a sad frown.

"See, you came to me," she counted on one finger. "You apologized," she counted on another. "But so far..." she looked up. "No kiss."

"You want a kiss?" Max looked surprised. "You want me to kiss you now? Here?" He looked around the cafeteria.

"We made love in the middle of a crowded dance floor, Max," Liz rolled her eyes. "And you're balking at kissing me in a diner?"

Max changed seats, drawing himself to Liz's side.

"You want a kiss?" he smiled, his voice soft and tender.

"Please," Liz nodded. "I've really missed you, Max."

The kiss started off tenderly. Their lips brushed and teased one another. Max started to pinch her bottom lip between his as she moved closer and wrapped her arms around him. Mouths opened and tongues met one another in a dance of true love. The buzz of the crowds around them faded out, and they were not in the cafeteria of Chicago's O'Hare airport, but thousands of miles away, on an old bridge that spanned the River Seine, beneath the shadow of the Eiffel Tower. Edith Piaf was singing in the background.

"Max," Liz gasped, her eyes glazed and her lips swollen.

"Heaven," Max smiled, moving in for another kiss.

"Wait, Max," Liz tried to stop him. "There's something I need to tell you."

"It can wait, Liz," Max shook his head. "It's been days since we last kissed. I'm suffering withdrawal symptoms."

"No," she giggled at his attempts to kiss her. "I really need to tell you this."

"Okay," Max sighed. "What do you need to tell me?"

"Oh my god!" she suddenly exclaimed. "Look at the time!"

"What?" Max was confused. "Where?"

"My flight! Max, I have to check in for my flight! I can't miss it. My parents... Maria..."

"What flight are you on?" he leapt to his feet, reaching for his wallet.

"American Airlines," she told him. She sounded a little more sad. "AA764 to Albuquerque. Will you come to see me off?"

"No," Max shook his head. "You go to the check in desk and wait for me there. I'll be with you as soon as I can."

"Where are you going?" Liz frowned as Max hurried up the concourse.

"Albuquerque!" he called back.

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They sat in their allocated seats, the ones by an emergency exit. Max had asked for them because of the extra legroom that it afforded him. Because he was a young, fit, healthy male, they let him have them, knowing that he would easily be able to open the door should the need arise. Being the gentleman that he was, he let Liz go in first. With the wall to first class directly in front of them, and several rows of empty seats behind them, they could have been forgiven for believing they were the only people on the plane.

"I can't believe you're coming to Roswell with me," Liz was leaning against Max and smiling broadly.

She had waited for him at the check in desk, keeping an anxious eye on the clock. Her smile was bright and wide when she saw him running toward her with his hand held aloft, clutching his ticket. And of course, they had sat together, with Max holding her hand and giving her his support through the take off.

"After everything that's happened," he smiled back. "Neither can I."

"Listen," she turned in her seat to face him a little more. "Before we get there, there's some things I should explain."

"Are you cold?" Max reached to place a hand on Liz's arm. "Doesn't it seem a little cold in here?"

"A little," Liz blinked. "Um, Max?"

"I'll get us a blanket," he leaned out into the aisle, raising his hand to attract the flight attendant who was just inside the doorway.

"Yes, sir?" the stewardess smiled at him. "How can I help?"

"Can we get a blanket?" Max smiled back, a winning smile. "It's getting a little cool in here."

"Ah, yes," she nodded. "I'm sorry about that. I'm afraid that we're having a few problems with our cabin controls. It's nothing to be concerned about, but it does mean that the temperature is a little low."

"It's not a problem," Max shook his head. "As long as we can have a blanket."

"Of course you can," she continued to smile, a little envious of the young lady at his side.

She handed Max a large blanket, who proceeded to unfold it to cover both he and Liz.

"Better?" Max lifted the armrest between them and placed his arm over Liz's shoulders. He pulled her against him.

"Much," she nodded, love in her eyes. "Max..."

"How long has it been since we kissed?" Max was grinning.

Talking could wait, Liz decided.


Max's lips were like heaven to her. She could hardly believe that after everything that had happened to them, after he had been brought back to the U.S., he had managed to find her. And here he was, on the flight back to Albuquerque with her. She was going to be able to introduce him to her parents, and her best friend as her new boyfriend. Maria was going to kill her. Not to mention what her father would do to Max if he ever found out even a fraction of what they had been up to in Paris. She idly wondered if he had any security guards to look after him, still.


Max's lips found hers, and they were soon doing what they did best, what they had missed these last, painful few days. Their lips fused at once, pressing against each other, teasing each other, tasting, testing... loving. Liz didn't even care that they were on a plane when she felt Max's firm hand slip under the blanket, where it started to tease along the edge of the 'V' neck of her dress, teasing her exposed skin. She couldn't help the shiver, and it wasn't from cold. She was a little startled, but not surprised, and definitely pleased when his hand moved to gently cup her breast. She knew that she should have asked him to stop. Instead, she purred and pressed herself against him. It had been too long.

Her breathing started to grow erratic as his hand caressed first one, and then the other breast, teasing her nipples through her dress, and her bra, which she now regretted putting on that morning, back in Paris.

Paris.


Liz could scarcely believe it. This time two weeks ago, she was alone and miserable in that city. And here she was, on her way home with a man she(who) completely loved her, whom she completely loved, and in between, she had taken part in the most amazing adventure of her young life. And judging by the way Max's hands were driving her toward the peak of passion once again, that adventure was far from over. How she would love to tell 'what's-his-name' all about the their honeymoon.

"Max..." she managed to gurgle through his lips. It was supposed to be an admonition. So why did it sound like a plea for more? "We can't!"

"We can," Max's throaty reply was almost laughing. "You give me the desire to do these things, so who am I to resist?"

"We have to stop," she gasped when his fingers managed to trap a nipple through the two layers of cloth.

"We have to get you out of this bra," Max's hand was snaking down her back to find the catch.

"It's in front!" she could hardly believe that she was encouraging him. Who was she kidding? Of course she wanted him to continue. "The catch is at the front."

Max's fingers stopped their caressing of her nipple just long enough to expertly unfasten the catch between her breasts. Soon, they were back, dipping down the front of her dress where his fingers found her exposed skin. Liz slid down lower in the seat, her mouth starting to devour Max's in the hope of keeping quiet. She knew an orgasm was imminent.

Before she could climax, however, Liz was dismayed when Max's hand vanished. She whimpered into his mouth, pulling him harder against her to try to transmit her need to him. Her hand moved to Max's groin where she started to caress his erection through his pants.

His hand returned. Not to her breast, like she wanted, needed, but to her thigh, slipping underneath her dress. Her eyes widened. He wouldn't, would he? Max's hand continued on a slow and tender journey up her thigh, convincing her that he would. The sensation was pure bliss and Liz could not even begin to find the desire to stop him. She wanted him to continue, even though they were on board a plane, bound for home. Her thighs parted, as if they had some mind of their own.

But Max's hand didn't dip inside, like she wanted it to. Instead, it kept rising on the top of her thigh. It didn't even head for the damp folds that wanted to feel his touch. Instead, it continued until it met with her panties. Fingers curled around the band and started to ease them down. Understanding at once, Liz lifted her hips and used her spare hand, temporarily removed from Max's erection, to help him to pull her panties down her legs. How on earth was she going to explain her behavior to her parents?

Her hand back in Max's lap, he was now moving his fingers in circles above her wet lips, over her smooth pubis. Liz couldn't help the way she moved her hips, trying with desperation to persuade Max to touch her. She wanted her release.

"Please, Max," she broke from the kiss to beg.

Max smiled into her eyes as his fingers lightly brushed her clitoris. Her eyes closed and her whole body gave a small shiver of pleasure.

"More!" she gasped.

"You need to use the bathroom," Max murmured into her ear.

"No," she shook her head. "Please, Max. Touch me."

"You need to use the bathroom," he repeated, emphasizing the word, need.

Liz eyes widened in realization. Her whole body froze for a moment as she looked into his face to see if he was being serious. She practically spontaneously combusted when she saw that he was. Her head nodded up and down.

Max rose, adjusting himself as he did, and stepped out into the aisle. Her face burning, Liz could not look back up the plane to see if anyone was watching them. Keeping her head down, in case anyone saw the burning desire on her face, Liz ducked into the corridor, and one of the free bathrooms. Seconds behind her, Max followed, closing the door and locking it.

"There's not much room," she noticed.

"I hadn't really considered that," Max checked out their confines. "I just needed you so bad... I figured..."

"How are we going to do this, Max?" she voice was low and husky. "'Cause I need you just as badly."

"Turn around," Max grinned.

Liz turned to face the back wall and knowing exactly what Max had in mind, she placed her hands against the wall to support herself. Her legs parted.

"Hurry, Max," Liz begged, looking over her shoulder.

She heard Max's zipper and the rustle of his pants as they fell to his knees. While on hand slid to her breast, she could feel his erection prodding at her lips..

"Yes," she hissed as he eased himself into her.

It was a supreme effort to not cry out. She knew that any sound she made would give the game away, and Liz was far too close to home to be arrested. That would prove too embarrassing. While Max made love to her, surprisingly tender considering he was as needful as she was, Liz leant against only one hand for support. The other was in her mouth, stifling her cries of passion. They came together in pleasant climax, yet both only too aware that they still needed more.

After allowing their pounding hearts to calm down, if only a little, they cleaned up as best as they could, and left the bathroom, together. Fortunately, no one was there to see them. As Liz slid back into her seat, she could see her panties, still on the floor.


"I can't believe we just did that," Liz smiled, pulling Max into an embrace.

"Can't you?" he smiled. "After everything we've already done?"

"Not so close to home," Liz shook her head. "I mean, Paris is so far away, you know?"

"No it's not," Max shrugged. "In here," he placed his hand on his heart. "It's always Paris. And it's always with you. So whenever you are with me, I have all I need."

"You are going to stay in a hotel, right?" Liz gave him a thoughtful look. "I'd love to have you stay at our house, but there's no way I'll be sleeping on my own, and there's no way my Dad would let that happen... and I really want to hold you tonight."

"Me too," Max nodded. "So of course I'll stay at a hotel. But won't your parents notice you gone?"

"My bedroom has a balcony," Liz grinned. "With a fire escape ladder."

"Really?" Max raised an eyebrow. "Then it's lucky for you that I never grew up in Roswell."

"Why is that?" she frowned.

"Because if I lived there, and knew that there was a ladder that led up to your balcony, and your room, there was no way you would have even reached sixteen still a virgin."

Liz started to chuckle.

"I was different back then, Max," she rolled her eyes. "I don't think we would have gotten together."

"Ladies and gentlemen," a flight attendant's voice came out through the speakers. "We will be landing shortly in Albuquerque. Please observe the fasten seat belts sign, and return your seats to the upright position. On behalf of the captain and crew, we hope that you have enjoyed your flight and would like to wish you a safe journey onward."

"Max," Liz had an impish grin on her face. "Could you do me a favor?"

"Anything," Max clasped both of Liz's hands together. "You only have to ask, and if it's within my power, consider it done."

"When you meet my parents and Maria... could you..." she hesitated.

"Yes," Max raised a single eyebrow.

"There's no denying that Max Effance was sexy as hell. Could you put on your French accent to greet them with, please?"

"But Liz..." Max frowned. "That got me into a lot of trouble last time, and..."

"Just to say hello," Liz was grinning. "As soon as I've introduced you, I'll tell them the truth, that you're really American and not French at all. It's just a joke, Max. Not a lie."

"If you're sure it will be okay," Max nodded. "Then of course I'll do it."

"Don't worry, Max," Liz was smiling brightly as the undercarriage came down. "They'll love you just as much as I do."

"I hope not," Max smirked. "Somehow, I don't think you're into sharing."

"Max," Liz rolled her eyes, slapping his shoulder as the plane was bumping along the Albuquerque runway. "I can't believe you just said that."

Liz was home. And Paris had been such an inspired idea for a honeymoon.


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