Red Shift Part 1 Chapter 10
Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 2:56 pm
Hi everyone...
Things sure look bleak, huh? Well.. All I can say, is please stay with me. Okay?
Thanks for you great feedback. Especially when things aren't really worth commenting on.
Jen11Star - well, that will teach you to go away for a few weeks then.
Nice stiryline... but it doesn't quite match mine.
LOL
Liz PArker Evans - Yes. Please remain calm. And maybe what doesn;t feel right is that someone is killing our friends.
Timelord31 - Hmmm.... Could be.
omwf - No trick. Liz was killed in a crash. Jesse was killed in a street crime. Kyle appears to have been killedin an industrial accident.
dreamerfiend - Torturing Tess will make you smile more that Liz coming back?
Ellie - OOps. Seems as t hough I have.
Well, the Bambi eyes wouldn;t have worked in any caSE. 
kay_b - Revenge? Perhaps. Maybe, as Isabel suggested, she's under orders. Ah yes. The Why question again.
aurorasky - Oh, but please hang on in there, huh? It WILL be worth it. I promise.
AJK001 - Nope. Not lost my touch. In fact, honed it a little.
RoswellScripter - If they are, what good is a fourteen year old Liz to Max? Let alone the fact that she has blonde hair and green eyes.
su-lyn - Yup. I decided to play Tess to the full with this one. Evilness.
NorafanofMaxandLiz - Somehow, I just knew that you would want to kill Tess.
But yeah, woth Liz, Jesse and Kyle now in the tally, she is definately due. Please remember that Max believes (knows) the whole time travelling Max from the future to be a hoax, so he's unlikely to think of using the Granolith in that way. Besides, didn't Tess already go back to Antar in the Granolith? And that lame plan... you can bet it was Maria's 
tequathisy -
Thank you. New part coming up.
Roswelllostcause - I am Evil.
Guilty as charged. LOL. Told me dozens of times.
frenchkiss70 - It certainly seems personal, doesn;t it? Except for Kyle.
BehrObsession - Can I take that as a compliment?
smokie - LOL. Classic when the people who leave feedback get bumped off in a story too!
Not a dream. BTW. And thanks for the compliment. 
mareli - Well, all will become clear... eventually.
Evans3 - Are you sure about that?
LovinGuerin2Much - Okay. I won;t say that Kyle is underneath that car. He;s underneath the ramp that the car is in.
roswellluver - It will all end in tears!
cherie - Relax. I still have loads of characters to carry on with. Loads of them.
Red Shift
Part I
Chapter 10
When Zan stepped into the Senate the number of people already crammed inside the building surprised him. As well as Kathana, Sero, Hanar and Larek, sitting in their usual places, it seemed that each man had brought another dozen or so representatives with them. Khivar was there, too, also accompanied by a number of followers, though he stood to one side, as if declaring some kind of neutrality. The visitors' stands were packed to the gills. The stairs and passageways were crammed with people. And not a single person was listening to anything the other said. It was total and complete chaos. They were all trying to speak at once, each one shouting his opinion over the voices of the next. With no sign of his Father, Zan knew that someone had to take charge. Someone had to bring organization from this chaos. Someone had to take control. Zan prepared to step forward.
The doors at the rear of the Senate room - the ones that the king always used to make his grand entrance - crashed open. A double file of soldiers dressed in deep crimson uniforms marched in and formed a defensive ring around the seat upon which the king normally sat. More soldiers formed a kind of corridor back to the doorway. Each of them held a small, dangerous looking weapon to his chest. The room fell silent, save for the awed whispers.
"Bloodguard."
The Bloodguard was a body of soldiers who answered only to the king. Every man stood at six feet or more, their loyalty unswerving. So good was their training that one Bloodguard was worth three of the top soldiers from the normal ranks. It had long been rumored that those who volunteered to serve in the Bloodguard had been somehow 'modified' by the Granolith, making them stronger, faster, more deadly. It was also this rumor that lent strength to the claim that a Bloodguard never missed anything he... or she shot at. Clearly, members of the Bloodguard were being guided and controlled by the Granolith, which was guided and controlled by the King. The sight of so many of these dedicated soldiers in any one place was enough to claim anyone's attention. The King had restored order with a vengeance. The room smelled of fear, now.
"What is the meaning of this?" King Deryn demanded from his throne, his voice calm and soothing but sounding oh so dangerous.
Zan almost jumped out of his skin, he was so startled by his father's sudden appearance. Like everyone else, his mind had been so fixed upon the tall warriors' entry that no one had noticed the King enter behind the protective wall. Zan took some comfort from the fact that everyone else appeared to have been affected in the same manner.
"We are here," Larek stepped up, looking around at his fellows, drawing strength from them, "to discuss this current situation. Now that you are here, we demand that you rescind the new level of taxation."
He did not sound as confident as he was trying to portray. The Bloodguard's presence had shaken everybody.
"Demand?" the king raised a single eyebrow.
"Furthermore, we demand that you reinstate the Senate and agree never to discount our vote again." Larek's voice had gained in strength.
"You demand, do you?" Deryn looked around the room. "Just who is it that makes these demands?"
"I do, for a start," Larek nodded. "And I speak on behalf of all Torania."
"Many of whom I see you have brought for support," Deryn sneered.
"I didn't bring them, my lord," he bowed. "They insisted on coming. They wanted to see for themselves the way you have been behaving of late."
"Out of deference to our years of friendship," Deryn's voice was a whisper. "I will let that insult pass, Larek."
"Then out of friendship, Deryn," Larek spoke up. "Turn away from this dangerous path. You threaten the very alliance!"
"Do you all feel this way?" Deryn rose.
"We do," Hanar nodded. "As do countless hundreds of Antarans."
"Countless hundreds?" Deryn smirked.
"I have this," Larek lifted a very large book. "The signatures of over one million Antarans. There are other such books on the other planets, with even more signatures. It's a petition, sire. A petition against the unfair taxation we face so that YOU can build another palace."
As Deryn was about to speak, a small man scurried to his side and whispered in his ear. Deryn looked around the room with a face like thunder and nodded at the little man.
"Very well," Deryn moved away from the throne. "I will consider this matter. I will talk with my advisors and see what they have to say."
"Do so, your Majesty," Larek bowed. "And please. Make the right decision here, ere you bring a chaos that none of us wants."
Deryn stormed out of the room, a few steps ahead of the little man. Once they had left, the soldiers made their orderly withdrawal, all while, their fingers on their triggers and their faces on the crowds.
"Come, Prince Zan," one of his bodyguard whispered above the sudden din. "We need to leave now, in case someone decides to take matters into their own hands and force your father's decision by holding you for ransom."
"Agreed," Zan nodded. "In any case, I want to hear what my father has to say."
* * *
"What do you mean, things are tense?" Deryn demanded.
He was surrounded by his advisors and two of his three General. Everyone was voicing their concerns, and their opinions.
"Khivar!" he bellowed when his Senator entered the room. "Why didn't you warn me about that damned petition?"
"Because I did not know of it, sire," Khivar balked before finally approaching the gathering.
"He had signatures!" Deryn had spittle forming in the corners of his mouth. "How could you not know that he was gathering Antaran signatures?"
"He..." his eyes darted around the room. "Larek is not one to be trusted, sire," Khivar stood more upright. "It's entirely feasible that he forged those signatures. Or perhaps he tricked the people into signing it."
"That makes sense," Troyka, one of Deryn's more sycophantic toadies simpered. "I believe Khivar speaks the truth."
"Yes," the king started to nod. "Yes. That's it. Why else would someone from Antar disagree with their King? Because they had been tricked."
"That's not what happened, sire," Nonor, another advisor shook his head. "I filed a report the other day that there was a petition in circulation, calling for you to accede to the will of the Senate." He glared at Troyka. "I was told that you would see it immediately."
"So there really are Antarans who oppose my rule?" Deryn was astounded. He turned to Troyka. "So it seems there are people on Antar who would oppose their king. What do you suggest we do?"
"Arrest the ringleaders!" Troyka clenched his fists. "And their families, too. Make examples of them all. Execute them. And arrest all those involved in tonight's rebellion. Execute them all."
There was a murmur around the room. While some agreed with Troyka, others were outraged by the mere thought of it.
"You can't do that, Father," Zan stepped forward.
"You are not the King yet, Zan," Deryn's eyes narrowed as he looked at his son. "Learn from this that you might better deal with an uprising when you are ruling and I am in my grave."
"You are not a butcher," Zan shook his head. "Don't become one."
"Traydn?" the King turned to the General of his Second Battalion. "What do you think?"
"Well, sire..." Traydn seemed trapped . "I am not really qualified as a politician. I am a soldier. Show me a target and I will attack it. As for arresting ringleaders..."
"Nickolas?"
"I could plant spies, my lord. But like Traydn, I know nothing of the machinations of civilians. Give me an order, and I will carry it out, as would General Traydn. But these tasks fall within neither of our remits. We are trained to attack enemy units and defended positions. It is General Dray who sees to the pacification of Antar's surface."
"And where the heck is Dray?" Deryn demanded, looking around the room. "Someone find me Dray!"
"Sire," Rath stepped forward. "I regret to inform you that General Dray's whereabouts are unknown at this time. He was investigating a report of bandits in the mountains and has not yet returned. I... I fear for his safety."
"You mean that you fear General Dray and his huge army might have been defeated by a handful of bandits?" Deryn's face fell in astonishment. "I find that hard to believe."
"The report suggested that the... bandits numbered nearly twice his own."
"Rebels, then," Nickolas shook his head.
"Well," Troyka nodded. "That pretty much settles it. Dray has been ambushed and killed, along with however many soldiers he took with him."
"Then we must act at once," Deryn nodded. "This must be stamped out before it can go anywhere. And the best way to deal with a snake is to remove its head. Rath!"
"Yes, sire," Rath snapped to attention.
"I want you to take two squads of men. I want you to find and arrest Larek. For the crime of High Treason. If he resists arrest, he is to be executed on the spot."
"But..." Rath started.
"Then, I want you to arrest every fiftieth signature on that petition. I want them hung from the nearest convenient place to their home. Make sure everyone knows why it is being done. Then arrest their families and have them taken to a place where we can decide their fate. I will not stand for treason on my own planet!"
"But, sire..." Rath was shaking his head in disbelief. "The men... they won't..."
"Execute any man who refuses to obey an order, Colonel Rath. On the spot."
Rath stood still, staring at the king while Troyka whispered in his ear.
"Their families, too," Deryn completed.
Rath's mouth opened and closed but no sound came out.
"Do I have to start with you, Colonel Rath?"
Rath snapped to attention again, saluted, spun on his heel and marched out of the room.
"Now," Deryn continued. "The rest of you. Here's what I want you to do."
* * *
Things sure look bleak, huh? Well.. All I can say, is please stay with me. Okay?
Thanks for you great feedback. Especially when things aren't really worth commenting on.

Jen11Star - well, that will teach you to go away for a few weeks then.


Liz PArker Evans - Yes. Please remain calm. And maybe what doesn;t feel right is that someone is killing our friends.

Timelord31 - Hmmm.... Could be.

omwf - No trick. Liz was killed in a crash. Jesse was killed in a street crime. Kyle appears to have been killedin an industrial accident.

dreamerfiend - Torturing Tess will make you smile more that Liz coming back?

Ellie - OOps. Seems as t hough I have.


kay_b - Revenge? Perhaps. Maybe, as Isabel suggested, she's under orders. Ah yes. The Why question again.

aurorasky - Oh, but please hang on in there, huh? It WILL be worth it. I promise.
AJK001 - Nope. Not lost my touch. In fact, honed it a little.

RoswellScripter - If they are, what good is a fourteen year old Liz to Max? Let alone the fact that she has blonde hair and green eyes.

su-lyn - Yup. I decided to play Tess to the full with this one. Evilness.

NorafanofMaxandLiz - Somehow, I just knew that you would want to kill Tess.


tequathisy -

Roswelllostcause - I am Evil.


frenchkiss70 - It certainly seems personal, doesn;t it? Except for Kyle.

BehrObsession - Can I take that as a compliment?

smokie - LOL. Classic when the people who leave feedback get bumped off in a story too!


mareli - Well, all will become clear... eventually.

Evans3 - Are you sure about that?

LovinGuerin2Much - Okay. I won;t say that Kyle is underneath that car. He;s underneath the ramp that the car is in.

roswellluver - It will all end in tears!

cherie - Relax. I still have loads of characters to carry on with. Loads of them.

Red Shift
Part I
Chapter 10
When Zan stepped into the Senate the number of people already crammed inside the building surprised him. As well as Kathana, Sero, Hanar and Larek, sitting in their usual places, it seemed that each man had brought another dozen or so representatives with them. Khivar was there, too, also accompanied by a number of followers, though he stood to one side, as if declaring some kind of neutrality. The visitors' stands were packed to the gills. The stairs and passageways were crammed with people. And not a single person was listening to anything the other said. It was total and complete chaos. They were all trying to speak at once, each one shouting his opinion over the voices of the next. With no sign of his Father, Zan knew that someone had to take charge. Someone had to bring organization from this chaos. Someone had to take control. Zan prepared to step forward.
The doors at the rear of the Senate room - the ones that the king always used to make his grand entrance - crashed open. A double file of soldiers dressed in deep crimson uniforms marched in and formed a defensive ring around the seat upon which the king normally sat. More soldiers formed a kind of corridor back to the doorway. Each of them held a small, dangerous looking weapon to his chest. The room fell silent, save for the awed whispers.
"Bloodguard."
The Bloodguard was a body of soldiers who answered only to the king. Every man stood at six feet or more, their loyalty unswerving. So good was their training that one Bloodguard was worth three of the top soldiers from the normal ranks. It had long been rumored that those who volunteered to serve in the Bloodguard had been somehow 'modified' by the Granolith, making them stronger, faster, more deadly. It was also this rumor that lent strength to the claim that a Bloodguard never missed anything he... or she shot at. Clearly, members of the Bloodguard were being guided and controlled by the Granolith, which was guided and controlled by the King. The sight of so many of these dedicated soldiers in any one place was enough to claim anyone's attention. The King had restored order with a vengeance. The room smelled of fear, now.
"What is the meaning of this?" King Deryn demanded from his throne, his voice calm and soothing but sounding oh so dangerous.
Zan almost jumped out of his skin, he was so startled by his father's sudden appearance. Like everyone else, his mind had been so fixed upon the tall warriors' entry that no one had noticed the King enter behind the protective wall. Zan took some comfort from the fact that everyone else appeared to have been affected in the same manner.
"We are here," Larek stepped up, looking around at his fellows, drawing strength from them, "to discuss this current situation. Now that you are here, we demand that you rescind the new level of taxation."
He did not sound as confident as he was trying to portray. The Bloodguard's presence had shaken everybody.
"Demand?" the king raised a single eyebrow.
"Furthermore, we demand that you reinstate the Senate and agree never to discount our vote again." Larek's voice had gained in strength.
"You demand, do you?" Deryn looked around the room. "Just who is it that makes these demands?"
"I do, for a start," Larek nodded. "And I speak on behalf of all Torania."
"Many of whom I see you have brought for support," Deryn sneered.
"I didn't bring them, my lord," he bowed. "They insisted on coming. They wanted to see for themselves the way you have been behaving of late."
"Out of deference to our years of friendship," Deryn's voice was a whisper. "I will let that insult pass, Larek."
"Then out of friendship, Deryn," Larek spoke up. "Turn away from this dangerous path. You threaten the very alliance!"
"Do you all feel this way?" Deryn rose.
"We do," Hanar nodded. "As do countless hundreds of Antarans."
"Countless hundreds?" Deryn smirked.
"I have this," Larek lifted a very large book. "The signatures of over one million Antarans. There are other such books on the other planets, with even more signatures. It's a petition, sire. A petition against the unfair taxation we face so that YOU can build another palace."
As Deryn was about to speak, a small man scurried to his side and whispered in his ear. Deryn looked around the room with a face like thunder and nodded at the little man.
"Very well," Deryn moved away from the throne. "I will consider this matter. I will talk with my advisors and see what they have to say."
"Do so, your Majesty," Larek bowed. "And please. Make the right decision here, ere you bring a chaos that none of us wants."
Deryn stormed out of the room, a few steps ahead of the little man. Once they had left, the soldiers made their orderly withdrawal, all while, their fingers on their triggers and their faces on the crowds.
"Come, Prince Zan," one of his bodyguard whispered above the sudden din. "We need to leave now, in case someone decides to take matters into their own hands and force your father's decision by holding you for ransom."
"Agreed," Zan nodded. "In any case, I want to hear what my father has to say."
* * *
"What do you mean, things are tense?" Deryn demanded.
He was surrounded by his advisors and two of his three General. Everyone was voicing their concerns, and their opinions.
"Khivar!" he bellowed when his Senator entered the room. "Why didn't you warn me about that damned petition?"
"Because I did not know of it, sire," Khivar balked before finally approaching the gathering.
"He had signatures!" Deryn had spittle forming in the corners of his mouth. "How could you not know that he was gathering Antaran signatures?"
"He..." his eyes darted around the room. "Larek is not one to be trusted, sire," Khivar stood more upright. "It's entirely feasible that he forged those signatures. Or perhaps he tricked the people into signing it."
"That makes sense," Troyka, one of Deryn's more sycophantic toadies simpered. "I believe Khivar speaks the truth."
"Yes," the king started to nod. "Yes. That's it. Why else would someone from Antar disagree with their King? Because they had been tricked."
"That's not what happened, sire," Nonor, another advisor shook his head. "I filed a report the other day that there was a petition in circulation, calling for you to accede to the will of the Senate." He glared at Troyka. "I was told that you would see it immediately."
"So there really are Antarans who oppose my rule?" Deryn was astounded. He turned to Troyka. "So it seems there are people on Antar who would oppose their king. What do you suggest we do?"
"Arrest the ringleaders!" Troyka clenched his fists. "And their families, too. Make examples of them all. Execute them. And arrest all those involved in tonight's rebellion. Execute them all."
There was a murmur around the room. While some agreed with Troyka, others were outraged by the mere thought of it.
"You can't do that, Father," Zan stepped forward.
"You are not the King yet, Zan," Deryn's eyes narrowed as he looked at his son. "Learn from this that you might better deal with an uprising when you are ruling and I am in my grave."
"You are not a butcher," Zan shook his head. "Don't become one."
"Traydn?" the King turned to the General of his Second Battalion. "What do you think?"
"Well, sire..." Traydn seemed trapped . "I am not really qualified as a politician. I am a soldier. Show me a target and I will attack it. As for arresting ringleaders..."
"Nickolas?"
"I could plant spies, my lord. But like Traydn, I know nothing of the machinations of civilians. Give me an order, and I will carry it out, as would General Traydn. But these tasks fall within neither of our remits. We are trained to attack enemy units and defended positions. It is General Dray who sees to the pacification of Antar's surface."
"And where the heck is Dray?" Deryn demanded, looking around the room. "Someone find me Dray!"
"Sire," Rath stepped forward. "I regret to inform you that General Dray's whereabouts are unknown at this time. He was investigating a report of bandits in the mountains and has not yet returned. I... I fear for his safety."
"You mean that you fear General Dray and his huge army might have been defeated by a handful of bandits?" Deryn's face fell in astonishment. "I find that hard to believe."
"The report suggested that the... bandits numbered nearly twice his own."
"Rebels, then," Nickolas shook his head.
"Well," Troyka nodded. "That pretty much settles it. Dray has been ambushed and killed, along with however many soldiers he took with him."
"Then we must act at once," Deryn nodded. "This must be stamped out before it can go anywhere. And the best way to deal with a snake is to remove its head. Rath!"
"Yes, sire," Rath snapped to attention.
"I want you to take two squads of men. I want you to find and arrest Larek. For the crime of High Treason. If he resists arrest, he is to be executed on the spot."
"But..." Rath started.
"Then, I want you to arrest every fiftieth signature on that petition. I want them hung from the nearest convenient place to their home. Make sure everyone knows why it is being done. Then arrest their families and have them taken to a place where we can decide their fate. I will not stand for treason on my own planet!"
"But, sire..." Rath was shaking his head in disbelief. "The men... they won't..."
"Execute any man who refuses to obey an order, Colonel Rath. On the spot."
Rath stood still, staring at the king while Troyka whispered in his ear.
"Their families, too," Deryn completed.
Rath's mouth opened and closed but no sound came out.
"Do I have to start with you, Colonel Rath?"
Rath snapped to attention again, saluted, spun on his heel and marched out of the room.
"Now," Deryn continued. "The rest of you. Here's what I want you to do."
* * *