Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 8:50 am
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guelbebek
kelly13
Earth2Mama
Sweet Liz
Behrsgurl*87
dreamsatnight
begonia9508
BehrObsession
Timelord31
Jason's Lover
AmorporML
pandas2001
Morning Dreamgirl
orphyfets
ForeverADreamer
ShatteredDreamer
believer_evans
L-J-L 76
RoninBehr
bluesands
clueless
RASaero611
Eleven
Take me downtown
It's where the people rock,
Three hundred sixty five cos we never stop.
Take me downtown
Cos' peoples runnin' wild.
See how we kick it in a brand new style.
Max couldn’t take his eyes off her. Liz was dancing in front of him in a tight black dress, a dress he had never seen before. It was short and it showed off how gorgeous her body actually was.
Max had taken her to dinner at a pretty upmarket restaurant during which Liz had word a very stylish jacket over the top. Once they arrived at the club though she removed it and Max hadn’t been able to stop staring ever since.
Take me downtown
It's where I wanna go.
Everyone I know is going to my show-
Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum cause,
“Max” Liz purred as she moved closer and pressed her body against his.
“Fuck you look hot Princess” Max leaned down and whispered which earns him a grin from Liz.
I see you watching me watching you,
and now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
Max groaned as he listened to Liz sing the words of the song to him. She had no idea how fucking right she was. He wrapped an arm around her tiny waist, and hauled her body against his as he matched the movements of her hips so that their bodies grinded against each other.
Take me downtown
Cause baby wants to rock.
I need a little edge with my electro pop
Take me downtown
So everybody sees
I know my moves like my ABCs
“You certainly do” Max whispered.
Liz threw her head back and laughed. She couldn’t remember the last time she had, had such a good time. Max had been full of surprised that night taking her to a beautiful restaurant and then bringing her to the club and so far he had been a perfect gentleman, something that planned on changing very soon.
Take me downtown
It's time we made it right
This show ain't going nowhere we'll just party all night
Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum.
Liz leaned up on her tiptoes and wrapped her arms around Max’s neck.
She looked him straight in the eyes before she leaned in slowly. They were out in public and she knew that what she was about to do was probably against the rules but she didn’t care.
Max quickly closed the distance between them and sucked Liz’s lower lip into his mouth.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be
The kiss turned passionate very quickly and soon there was no space left between them as they continued to grind their bodies together.
“Liz” Max moaned when they pulled apart, his mouth trailing over her jaw and down on her neck where he sucked on her pulse point.
Liz threw her head back in pleasure, her small hand rubbing up and down Max’s chest.
Baby rock, never stop,
Round and round the clock.
Lover's rock, give it up,
Never, never stop.
Baby rock, get on top,
Take it take it all.
I'm not the kind of girl, who's scared of you at all cause,
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching ? ROCK!
Max cupped Liz’s ass in his hands and pulled her more snugly against his hard cock, which was throbbing with want.
“Oh god, Max” Liz moaned in pleasure her mouth seeking out his again.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
Max knew that they were out of control, and it was only the abrupt song change from fast to slow that broke through their sexual fog.
Reluctantly, Liz pulled back and looked around to see if anyone had been paying attention to them. Luckily it appeared that they hadn’t, and as of yet, neither Max or Liz had run into anyone they knew.
"Lets get a drink?" Max suggested slipping his hand into Liz’s and leading them towards the bar.
"What would you like?" he whispered as they found a couple of stools to sit on.
"Vodka, lime and soda," Liz replied.
Whilst Max turned and waited for his turn to order their drinks Liz took in the club around her. It was nice and new and there were quite a lot of people there, but if Liz were to describe it she would say that it was a classy club. It didn’t have a lot of young people, and most of the people there were in groups.
So focused on watching what was going on around her Liz failed to notice the arrival of the familiar blonde.
"Max," she purred happily as she pressed herself against him.
Liz turned when she heard the annoying voice and recognised her straight away as Tess, the girl who Max had fucked on several occasions before.
"Tess hi," Max smiled oblivious to Liz’s glare.
The barman approached Max then, and he placed their order before turning to Tess. "Can I get you a drink?" he asked.
"Sure," she agreed. "My usual," she told him, and to Liz’s surprise Max knew exactly what that was and ordered her a Tequila Sunrise.
When the barman returned with their drinks, Max turned his attention back to Liz and handed her, her drink.
"Liz this is Tess," he introduced.
Tess turned and eyed Liz suspiciously, "Hi, you’re Max’s roommate right?"
Liz grit her teeth as she flashed a fake smile, "Hi, yes I am."
"So what are you doing here, Max?" Tess asked turning her back and ignoring Liz.
"We just came to check the place out," Max shrugged.
Tess stepped closer then and her hand rose and pressed against Max’s chest. "I haven’t heard from you in a while," she told him, "I’ve missed you."
Max smiled at her and scratched his ear nervously. Before things had started with Liz’s lessons, Max had fucked Tess on average once a week. He was surprised it had taken her this long to comment.
"Yeah I’ve been busy," he replied.
Tess wasn’t buying it. She cast a glance at Liz who was looking away as she tried to rein in her anger over the blonde’s blatant slutiness. She decided then that it wasn’t Liz who was keeping Max’s attention.
Max was about to reply when Liz interrupted, "Max, I’m ready to leave."
Max looked at her surprised. He thought they’d been having a good time. "Um sure... ok, let me just finish my drink."
"I’m going to the toilet, I’ll meet you at the coatroom," Liz informed him stiffly.
"Gee, someone’s got a stick up her ass, how do you live with that?" Tess snorted as Liz walked away.
"She’s cool," Max nodded.
"I’ll just have to take your word for it," Tess fluttered her eyebrows. "But what’s say you put her in a taxi and come home with me?" she purred stepping even closer.
Max smirked at Tess, she hadn’t changed much. He thought about Liz’s date with
Kyle the next night, and he realised that it didn’t matter what he did, Liz wasn’t interested in him.
"Not tonight," he shook his head. It was his last night with Liz, he knew that after tomorrow night things would never be the same again. "Maybe tomorrow night?" there would no harm in that, Liz would be out with Kyle after all.
Tess’s disappointment quickly disappeared and she smiled. "Sure," she agreed, "Call me."
Max nodded and with one last small wave he made his way to where Liz was waiting for him.
***
It felt like ice in his car on the drive back home. Liz hadn’t spoken a word to him the entire time, and he had no idea why.
He sighed when they reached the apartment, and Liz got out and slammed the door in his face.
At least she was still waiting at the lift as he approached, but her hands were crossed over her chest and her back rigid.
Max waited until she had stormed into their apartment and he had shut the door before speaking.
"What’s wrong?" he asked.
Liz ignored him and walked into her bedroom and slammed the door.
Max sunk to the couch confused and stared at the door for a few minutes before he suddenly let his anger surface. What the hell was her problem? He had taken her for a nice night out, tried to show her that she was more than a fuck for him and she was acting like this.
Without another though he jumped off the couch and headed towards Liz’s room, opening the door without knocking.
Liz was standing in only a tiny black thong when the door lurched open and she squealed before she turned to shield herself.
"What’s your problem?" Max asked.
"Max, get out!" Liz cried.
"No, not until you tell me what I did?" he answered stubbornly, his arms crossed over his chest.
"Can I get changed first?" Liz cried angrily.
Max smirked as he watched her squirm, "It’s nothing I haven’t seen before Princess."
Liz’s anger spiked and she reached for her shoe and turned and threw it at Max as she screamed in frustration. Max only just ducked in time before it smashed against the wall.
"What the fuck!" he yelled at her.
"Fine!" Liz said annoyed, she dropped her hands and turned to face Max, her breasts naked and perky. "You want to talk? Talk!" she told him hands on her hips.
Max sighed finding it hard to be angry as she stood looking so sexy in front of him.
"I thought you were having a nice night," he told her. "Did I do something?"
Liz felt her anger fade as he flashed her the puppy dog eyes. She realised then that Max hadn’t really done anything wrong and that she was being unfair. He hadn’t invited Tess, or touched her inappropriately. Besides, as much as she hated to admit it, Max didn’t belong to her and he was free to talk to, and fuck who ever he wanted to.
"No," she whispered.
"Are you sure? Because you seemed pretty angry," he pointed out.
"I’m sorry," she whispered. "I was just angry that Tess came along and ruined our night," she admitted.
Max studied Liz trying to decide if what she told him was the truth. Was she jealous of Tess? Because if she was then she shouldn't be. Tess was merely a fuck whilst Liz was something completely better.
"I just can’t stand her voice," Liz smirked.
"We were just talking," Max informed her.
"I know," Liz nodded. "Its none of my business anyway," she pointed out. "We’re not dating, I mean I’m going out with Kyle tomorrow night."
The reminder of Kyle and her their date was like a physical blow to Max. "Right," he agreed.
"Yeah," Liz said looking up and seeing something in Max’s eyes she had never seen before. Was that regret? Or was he upset?
"Well I should let you get to bed," Max whispered pushing off the doorframe which he had been leaning against.
Liz looked at her bed and then Max. She hadn’t slept alone all week, and at the beginning of the night she hadn’t planned on sleeping alone that night either.
"So I’ll see you tomorrow," Max said backing away.
Liz could feel him back away from her emotionally at the same rate he was physically and it hurt like hell. He had almost disappeared when she rushed forward and called out to him.
"Yeah?"
"Thank you for tonight," she whispered. "It was wonderful."
Max nodded and smiled but it didn’t reach his eyes. "No problem," he nodded.
"Night," Liz whispered.
"Night," he replied before he disappeared behind the closed door.
Song uses is Watching You by Rogue Traders

guelbebek
kelly13
Earth2Mama
Sweet Liz
Behrsgurl*87
dreamsatnight
begonia9508
BehrObsession
Timelord31
Jason's Lover
AmorporML
pandas2001
Morning Dreamgirl
orphyfets
ForeverADreamer
ShatteredDreamer
believer_evans
L-J-L 76
RoninBehr
bluesands
clueless
RASaero611
Eleven
Take me downtown
It's where the people rock,
Three hundred sixty five cos we never stop.
Take me downtown
Cos' peoples runnin' wild.
See how we kick it in a brand new style.
Max couldn’t take his eyes off her. Liz was dancing in front of him in a tight black dress, a dress he had never seen before. It was short and it showed off how gorgeous her body actually was.
Max had taken her to dinner at a pretty upmarket restaurant during which Liz had word a very stylish jacket over the top. Once they arrived at the club though she removed it and Max hadn’t been able to stop staring ever since.
Take me downtown
It's where I wanna go.
Everyone I know is going to my show-
Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum cause,
“Max” Liz purred as she moved closer and pressed her body against his.
“Fuck you look hot Princess” Max leaned down and whispered which earns him a grin from Liz.
I see you watching me watching you,
and now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
Max groaned as he listened to Liz sing the words of the song to him. She had no idea how fucking right she was. He wrapped an arm around her tiny waist, and hauled her body against his as he matched the movements of her hips so that their bodies grinded against each other.
Take me downtown
Cause baby wants to rock.
I need a little edge with my electro pop
Take me downtown
So everybody sees
I know my moves like my ABCs
“You certainly do” Max whispered.
Liz threw her head back and laughed. She couldn’t remember the last time she had, had such a good time. Max had been full of surprised that night taking her to a beautiful restaurant and then bringing her to the club and so far he had been a perfect gentleman, something that planned on changing very soon.
Take me downtown
It's time we made it right
This show ain't going nowhere we'll just party all night
Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum.
Liz leaned up on her tiptoes and wrapped her arms around Max’s neck.
She looked him straight in the eyes before she leaned in slowly. They were out in public and she knew that what she was about to do was probably against the rules but she didn’t care.
Max quickly closed the distance between them and sucked Liz’s lower lip into his mouth.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be
The kiss turned passionate very quickly and soon there was no space left between them as they continued to grind their bodies together.
“Liz” Max moaned when they pulled apart, his mouth trailing over her jaw and down on her neck where he sucked on her pulse point.
Liz threw her head back in pleasure, her small hand rubbing up and down Max’s chest.
Baby rock, never stop,
Round and round the clock.
Lover's rock, give it up,
Never, never stop.
Baby rock, get on top,
Take it take it all.
I'm not the kind of girl, who's scared of you at all cause,
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching ? ROCK!
Max cupped Liz’s ass in his hands and pulled her more snugly against his hard cock, which was throbbing with want.
“Oh god, Max” Liz moaned in pleasure her mouth seeking out his again.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
Max knew that they were out of control, and it was only the abrupt song change from fast to slow that broke through their sexual fog.
Reluctantly, Liz pulled back and looked around to see if anyone had been paying attention to them. Luckily it appeared that they hadn’t, and as of yet, neither Max or Liz had run into anyone they knew.
"Lets get a drink?" Max suggested slipping his hand into Liz’s and leading them towards the bar.
"What would you like?" he whispered as they found a couple of stools to sit on.
"Vodka, lime and soda," Liz replied.
Whilst Max turned and waited for his turn to order their drinks Liz took in the club around her. It was nice and new and there were quite a lot of people there, but if Liz were to describe it she would say that it was a classy club. It didn’t have a lot of young people, and most of the people there were in groups.
So focused on watching what was going on around her Liz failed to notice the arrival of the familiar blonde.
"Max," she purred happily as she pressed herself against him.
Liz turned when she heard the annoying voice and recognised her straight away as Tess, the girl who Max had fucked on several occasions before.
"Tess hi," Max smiled oblivious to Liz’s glare.
The barman approached Max then, and he placed their order before turning to Tess. "Can I get you a drink?" he asked.
"Sure," she agreed. "My usual," she told him, and to Liz’s surprise Max knew exactly what that was and ordered her a Tequila Sunrise.
When the barman returned with their drinks, Max turned his attention back to Liz and handed her, her drink.
"Liz this is Tess," he introduced.
Tess turned and eyed Liz suspiciously, "Hi, you’re Max’s roommate right?"
Liz grit her teeth as she flashed a fake smile, "Hi, yes I am."
"So what are you doing here, Max?" Tess asked turning her back and ignoring Liz.
"We just came to check the place out," Max shrugged.
Tess stepped closer then and her hand rose and pressed against Max’s chest. "I haven’t heard from you in a while," she told him, "I’ve missed you."
Max smiled at her and scratched his ear nervously. Before things had started with Liz’s lessons, Max had fucked Tess on average once a week. He was surprised it had taken her this long to comment.
"Yeah I’ve been busy," he replied.
Tess wasn’t buying it. She cast a glance at Liz who was looking away as she tried to rein in her anger over the blonde’s blatant slutiness. She decided then that it wasn’t Liz who was keeping Max’s attention.
Max was about to reply when Liz interrupted, "Max, I’m ready to leave."
Max looked at her surprised. He thought they’d been having a good time. "Um sure... ok, let me just finish my drink."
"I’m going to the toilet, I’ll meet you at the coatroom," Liz informed him stiffly.
"Gee, someone’s got a stick up her ass, how do you live with that?" Tess snorted as Liz walked away.
"She’s cool," Max nodded.
"I’ll just have to take your word for it," Tess fluttered her eyebrows. "But what’s say you put her in a taxi and come home with me?" she purred stepping even closer.
Max smirked at Tess, she hadn’t changed much. He thought about Liz’s date with
Kyle the next night, and he realised that it didn’t matter what he did, Liz wasn’t interested in him.
"Not tonight," he shook his head. It was his last night with Liz, he knew that after tomorrow night things would never be the same again. "Maybe tomorrow night?" there would no harm in that, Liz would be out with Kyle after all.
Tess’s disappointment quickly disappeared and she smiled. "Sure," she agreed, "Call me."
Max nodded and with one last small wave he made his way to where Liz was waiting for him.
***
It felt like ice in his car on the drive back home. Liz hadn’t spoken a word to him the entire time, and he had no idea why.
He sighed when they reached the apartment, and Liz got out and slammed the door in his face.
At least she was still waiting at the lift as he approached, but her hands were crossed over her chest and her back rigid.
Max waited until she had stormed into their apartment and he had shut the door before speaking.
"What’s wrong?" he asked.
Liz ignored him and walked into her bedroom and slammed the door.
Max sunk to the couch confused and stared at the door for a few minutes before he suddenly let his anger surface. What the hell was her problem? He had taken her for a nice night out, tried to show her that she was more than a fuck for him and she was acting like this.
Without another though he jumped off the couch and headed towards Liz’s room, opening the door without knocking.
Liz was standing in only a tiny black thong when the door lurched open and she squealed before she turned to shield herself.
"What’s your problem?" Max asked.
"Max, get out!" Liz cried.
"No, not until you tell me what I did?" he answered stubbornly, his arms crossed over his chest.
"Can I get changed first?" Liz cried angrily.
Max smirked as he watched her squirm, "It’s nothing I haven’t seen before Princess."
Liz’s anger spiked and she reached for her shoe and turned and threw it at Max as she screamed in frustration. Max only just ducked in time before it smashed against the wall.
"What the fuck!" he yelled at her.
"Fine!" Liz said annoyed, she dropped her hands and turned to face Max, her breasts naked and perky. "You want to talk? Talk!" she told him hands on her hips.
Max sighed finding it hard to be angry as she stood looking so sexy in front of him.
"I thought you were having a nice night," he told her. "Did I do something?"
Liz felt her anger fade as he flashed her the puppy dog eyes. She realised then that Max hadn’t really done anything wrong and that she was being unfair. He hadn’t invited Tess, or touched her inappropriately. Besides, as much as she hated to admit it, Max didn’t belong to her and he was free to talk to, and fuck who ever he wanted to.
"No," she whispered.
"Are you sure? Because you seemed pretty angry," he pointed out.
"I’m sorry," she whispered. "I was just angry that Tess came along and ruined our night," she admitted.
Max studied Liz trying to decide if what she told him was the truth. Was she jealous of Tess? Because if she was then she shouldn't be. Tess was merely a fuck whilst Liz was something completely better.
"I just can’t stand her voice," Liz smirked.
"We were just talking," Max informed her.
"I know," Liz nodded. "Its none of my business anyway," she pointed out. "We’re not dating, I mean I’m going out with Kyle tomorrow night."
The reminder of Kyle and her their date was like a physical blow to Max. "Right," he agreed.
"Yeah," Liz said looking up and seeing something in Max’s eyes she had never seen before. Was that regret? Or was he upset?
"Well I should let you get to bed," Max whispered pushing off the doorframe which he had been leaning against.
Liz looked at her bed and then Max. She hadn’t slept alone all week, and at the beginning of the night she hadn’t planned on sleeping alone that night either.
"So I’ll see you tomorrow," Max said backing away.
Liz could feel him back away from her emotionally at the same rate he was physically and it hurt like hell. He had almost disappeared when she rushed forward and called out to him.
"Yeah?"
"Thank you for tonight," she whispered. "It was wonderful."
Max nodded and smiled but it didn’t reach his eyes. "No problem," he nodded.
"Night," Liz whispered.
"Night," he replied before he disappeared behind the closed door.
Song uses is Watching You by Rogue Traders