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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 8:50 am
by Emz80m
A/N: Hi everyone, thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate hearing from you guys :D

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Eleven

Take me downtown
It's where the people rock,
Three hundred sixty five cos we never stop.

Take me downtown
Cos' peoples runnin' wild.
See how we kick it in a brand new style.


Max couldn’t take his eyes off her. Liz was dancing in front of him in a tight black dress, a dress he had never seen before. It was short and it showed off how gorgeous her body actually was.

Max had taken her to dinner at a pretty upmarket restaurant during which Liz had word a very stylish jacket over the top. Once they arrived at the club though she removed it and Max hadn’t been able to stop staring ever since.

Take me downtown
It's where I wanna go.
Everyone I know is going to my show-

Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum cause,


“Max” Liz purred as she moved closer and pressed her body against his.

“Fuck you look hot Princess” Max leaned down and whispered which earns him a grin from Liz.

I see you watching me watching you,
and now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.


Max groaned as he listened to Liz sing the words of the song to him. She had no idea how fucking right she was. He wrapped an arm around her tiny waist, and hauled her body against his as he matched the movements of her hips so that their bodies grinded against each other.
Take me downtown
Cause baby wants to rock.
I need a little edge with my electro pop

Take me downtown
So everybody sees
I know my moves like my ABCs


“You certainly do” Max whispered.

Liz threw her head back and laughed. She couldn’t remember the last time she had, had such a good time. Max had been full of surprised that night taking her to a beautiful restaurant and then bringing her to the club and so far he had been a perfect gentleman, something that planned on changing very soon.

Take me downtown
It's time we made it right
This show ain't going nowhere we'll just party all night

Take me downtown
Where the city hum,
Then get your head numb to the beat of the drum.


Liz leaned up on her tiptoes and wrapped her arms around Max’s neck.

She looked him straight in the eyes before she leaned in slowly. They were out in public and she knew that what she was about to do was probably against the rules but she didn’t care.

Max quickly closed the distance between them and sucked Liz’s lower lip into his mouth.

I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.

I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be


The kiss turned passionate very quickly and soon there was no space left between them as they continued to grind their bodies together.

“Liz” Max moaned when they pulled apart, his mouth trailing over her jaw and down on her neck where he sucked on her pulse point.

Liz threw her head back in pleasure, her small hand rubbing up and down Max’s chest.

Baby rock, never stop,
Round and round the clock.

Lover's rock, give it up,
Never, never stop.

Baby rock, get on top,
Take it take it all.

I'm not the kind of girl, who's scared of you at all cause,

I see you watching me watching you,
I see you watching me watching ? ROCK!


Max cupped Liz’s ass in his hands and pulled her more snugly against his hard cock, which was throbbing with want.

“Oh god, Max” Liz moaned in pleasure her mouth seeking out his again.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.
I see you watching me watching you,
And now you see just where you gotta be.


Max knew that they were out of control, and it was only the abrupt song change from fast to slow that broke through their sexual fog.

Reluctantly, Liz pulled back and looked around to see if anyone had been paying attention to them. Luckily it appeared that they hadn’t, and as of yet, neither Max or Liz had run into anyone they knew.

"Lets get a drink?" Max suggested slipping his hand into Liz’s and leading them towards the bar.

"What would you like?" he whispered as they found a couple of stools to sit on.

"Vodka, lime and soda," Liz replied.

Whilst Max turned and waited for his turn to order their drinks Liz took in the club around her. It was nice and new and there were quite a lot of people there, but if Liz were to describe it she would say that it was a classy club. It didn’t have a lot of young people, and most of the people there were in groups.

So focused on watching what was going on around her Liz failed to notice the arrival of the familiar blonde.

"Max," she purred happily as she pressed herself against him.

Liz turned when she heard the annoying voice and recognised her straight away as Tess, the girl who Max had fucked on several occasions before.

"Tess hi," Max smiled oblivious to Liz’s glare.

The barman approached Max then, and he placed their order before turning to Tess. "Can I get you a drink?" he asked.

"Sure," she agreed. "My usual," she told him, and to Liz’s surprise Max knew exactly what that was and ordered her a Tequila Sunrise.

When the barman returned with their drinks, Max turned his attention back to Liz and handed her, her drink.

"Liz this is Tess," he introduced.

Tess turned and eyed Liz suspiciously, "Hi, you’re Max’s roommate right?"

Liz grit her teeth as she flashed a fake smile, "Hi, yes I am."

"So what are you doing here, Max?" Tess asked turning her back and ignoring Liz.

"We just came to check the place out," Max shrugged.

Tess stepped closer then and her hand rose and pressed against Max’s chest. "I haven’t heard from you in a while," she told him, "I’ve missed you."

Max smiled at her and scratched his ear nervously. Before things had started with Liz’s lessons, Max had fucked Tess on average once a week. He was surprised it had taken her this long to comment.

"Yeah I’ve been busy," he replied.

Tess wasn’t buying it. She cast a glance at Liz who was looking away as she tried to rein in her anger over the blonde’s blatant slutiness. She decided then that it wasn’t Liz who was keeping Max’s attention.

Max was about to reply when Liz interrupted, "Max, I’m ready to leave."

Max looked at her surprised. He thought they’d been having a good time. "Um sure... ok, let me just finish my drink."

"I’m going to the toilet, I’ll meet you at the coatroom," Liz informed him stiffly.

"Gee, someone’s got a stick up her ass, how do you live with that?" Tess snorted as Liz walked away.

"She’s cool," Max nodded.

"I’ll just have to take your word for it," Tess fluttered her eyebrows. "But what’s say you put her in a taxi and come home with me?" she purred stepping even closer.

Max smirked at Tess, she hadn’t changed much. He thought about Liz’s date with
Kyle the next night, and he realised that it didn’t matter what he did, Liz wasn’t interested in him.

"Not tonight," he shook his head. It was his last night with Liz, he knew that after tomorrow night things would never be the same again. "Maybe tomorrow night?" there would no harm in that, Liz would be out with Kyle after all.

Tess’s disappointment quickly disappeared and she smiled. "Sure," she agreed, "Call me."

Max nodded and with one last small wave he made his way to where Liz was waiting for him.

***

It felt like ice in his car on the drive back home. Liz hadn’t spoken a word to him the entire time, and he had no idea why.

He sighed when they reached the apartment, and Liz got out and slammed the door in his face.

At least she was still waiting at the lift as he approached, but her hands were crossed over her chest and her back rigid.

Max waited until she had stormed into their apartment and he had shut the door before speaking.

"What’s wrong?" he asked.

Liz ignored him and walked into her bedroom and slammed the door.

Max sunk to the couch confused and stared at the door for a few minutes before he suddenly let his anger surface. What the hell was her problem? He had taken her for a nice night out, tried to show her that she was more than a fuck for him and she was acting like this.

Without another though he jumped off the couch and headed towards Liz’s room, opening the door without knocking.

Liz was standing in only a tiny black thong when the door lurched open and she squealed before she turned to shield herself.

"What’s your problem?" Max asked.

"Max, get out!" Liz cried.

"No, not until you tell me what I did?" he answered stubbornly, his arms crossed over his chest.

"Can I get changed first?" Liz cried angrily.

Max smirked as he watched her squirm, "It’s nothing I haven’t seen before Princess."

Liz’s anger spiked and she reached for her shoe and turned and threw it at Max as she screamed in frustration. Max only just ducked in time before it smashed against the wall.

"What the fuck!" he yelled at her.

"Fine!" Liz said annoyed, she dropped her hands and turned to face Max, her breasts naked and perky. "You want to talk? Talk!" she told him hands on her hips.

Max sighed finding it hard to be angry as she stood looking so sexy in front of him.

"I thought you were having a nice night," he told her. "Did I do something?"

Liz felt her anger fade as he flashed her the puppy dog eyes. She realised then that Max hadn’t really done anything wrong and that she was being unfair. He hadn’t invited Tess, or touched her inappropriately. Besides, as much as she hated to admit it, Max didn’t belong to her and he was free to talk to, and fuck who ever he wanted to.

"No," she whispered.

"Are you sure? Because you seemed pretty angry," he pointed out.

"I’m sorry," she whispered. "I was just angry that Tess came along and ruined our night," she admitted.

Max studied Liz trying to decide if what she told him was the truth. Was she jealous of Tess? Because if she was then she shouldn't be. Tess was merely a fuck whilst Liz was something completely better.

"I just can’t stand her voice," Liz smirked.

"We were just talking," Max informed her.

"I know," Liz nodded. "Its none of my business anyway," she pointed out. "We’re not dating, I mean I’m going out with Kyle tomorrow night."

The reminder of Kyle and her their date was like a physical blow to Max. "Right," he agreed.

"Yeah," Liz said looking up and seeing something in Max’s eyes she had never seen before. Was that regret? Or was he upset?

"Well I should let you get to bed," Max whispered pushing off the doorframe which he had been leaning against.

Liz looked at her bed and then Max. She hadn’t slept alone all week, and at the beginning of the night she hadn’t planned on sleeping alone that night either.

"So I’ll see you tomorrow," Max said backing away.

Liz could feel him back away from her emotionally at the same rate he was physically and it hurt like hell. He had almost disappeared when she rushed forward and called out to him.

"Yeah?"

"Thank you for tonight," she whispered. "It was wonderful."

Max nodded and smiled but it didn’t reach his eyes. "No problem," he nodded.

"Night," Liz whispered.

"Night," he replied before he disappeared behind the closed door.

Song uses is Watching You by Rogue Traders

Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 7:53 am
by Emz80m
A/N: Hi everyone. Thank you so much for your patience waiting for this update. I had an incident last week with my computer and i lost a lot of writing i had done for this fic. Now i've had to re-write and i'm not as happy with the results as i was the orginal, but unfortunetely that can't be helped.

Thank you so much for you great feedback, i love hearing from you guys and are glad that so many of you are enjoying this fic.


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Twelve

Max knew he was the world’s biggest idiot. That was the only reason he could explain why he was still in the apartment while Liz was getting ready for her date with Kyle Valenti.

After getting next to no sleep the night before, he had gotten up early and left the apartment because he didn’t want to run into Liz. But for some reason he couldn’t bring himself to leave before she emerged from her room tonight. He wanted to see what she looked like, to see if she got as dressed up for Kyle like she did for him.

He sucked in a breath when he heard the doorbell ring knowing that it was Kyle.

"Max are you still here?" he heard Liz call from behind her closed door.

"Yeah," he replied.

"Can you get that?" she asked.

Max sighed and stood up. He did his best to hide a glare when he opened the door for Kyle.

"Hey Max, good to see you again," Kyle greeted him.

"Yeah," Max nodded and stepped aside.

"Is Liz ready yet?" he asked.

"Not yet, she’ll be out in a minute."

"MAX!"

Kyle and Max both turned in the direction of Liz’s voice.

"Excuse me," Max said shutting the door and striding off towards Liz’s room.

He knocked lightly. "It’s me."

"Come in," she replied.

Max opened the door hesitantly and walked in. He sucked in a breath when he caught sight of Liz sitting on the edge of her bed in only a bra and pair of panties.

Max was so caught up in eating up the sight of her, that it took him a few seconds to realise that something was wrong.

"What’s wrong?" he asked worried.

Liz looked miserable as far as he was concerned.

"I don’t know what to wear," she frowned.

Max saw a pile of clothes on her bed and looked at her confused.

"Where are you going?" he asked.

"Not sure, I think dinner and a movie."

"Well that’s sounds fairly casual, I’m sure you have something in that pile."

God couldn’t she see that she was killing him? He didn’t want her to go out with Kyle, and the last thing he wanted to do was help her look good for the night.

Liz sighed, "You’re a big help."

"What do you expect me to say?" Max snapped.

Liz looked up startled. It was the first time she had seen Max since their argument the night before, and it was as clear today as it was last night that things had changed between them, and she hated it.

"I’m sorry," she whispered.

"Shit," Max cursed. "No I’m sorry. Look, why don’t you wear your new hipster jeans and that green shirt with the beads and stuff," he suggested. It was an outfit she had bought the week before and had modelled for him. Max had enjoyed peeling it off her body before making love to her, and although he hated the idea of helping her pick something for Kyle, it was worse seeing her look so lost. Why had he agreed to help her again?

"Ok," Liz smiled. "Thanks."

"No prob," Max stated and turned for the door.

"What are you doing tonight?" she asked then.

Max suspected she wanted to know where he would be in case she decided to bring Kyle home.

Although he hadn’t planned on actually calling Tess, at the moment he decided it probably wasn’t such a bad idea after all. He needed a distraction or else he would end up spending the night at home stewing on what Liz and Kyle were doing.

"I’m heading out in a little while," he shrugged.

"Ok, have fun," Liz tried to hide her disappointment.

"You too," Max nodded.

Kyle stood up when Max walked back into the lounge room.

"She’ll be out in a minute," he advised. "I’m just going to grab a shower and get ready," he informed Kyle and strode back out of the room again.

Kyle frowned, there was definitely something strange going on with Max Evans.
Kyle had heard a lot about the most popular man on campus, he got all the babes. Kyle had even seen him with Tess Harding, one of the hottest and richest girls on campus. So why was it that no one had seen or heard of Max in weeks?

***

Liz checked herself one last time in the mirror before she stepped out of the room. Why wasn’t she excited about the night? She asked herself. She had wanted another chance with Kyle for as long as she could remember, so why was it that all she cared about was the fact that things with Max seemed to be over?

"Wow," Kyle whistled when he caught sight of her.

Liz blushed, "Thank you," she told him.

"Are you ready to go?" he asked.

"Yep," Liz smiled.

With his hand on the small of her back Kyle guided her towards the door, Liz hesitated when they reached it and wondered if she should say goodbye to Max, but one glance at his closed bedroom door gave her, her answer.

"So," she said trying to be cheery. "Where are you taking me?"

***

The date went off without a hitch and Liz had to admit that she was having a fairly good time.

They were now back in Kyle’s mustang on the way back to the penthouse and Liz could feel her anxiety growing.

Should she invite Kyle in? and if she did what would she say it was for? Coffee? Also, did she even want to sleep with Kyle. It was one thing to sleep with Max, but Liz wasn’t sure if she was ready to take that step with Kyle.

"We’re here," Kyle announced.

"Oh," Liz said shocked.

"You ok, you’ve been quiet?" Kyle asked.

Liz turned and smiled. "Fine. I had a good time tonight."

Kyle grinned and began to lean in towards her. "Me too," he agreed.

Liz closed her eyes and started to move towards Kyle’s lips as well. The first touch was soft but that didn’t last for long. Kyle fisted his hand into her hair and dragged her closer to him so he could plunder her mouth. Liz’s first thought was that his kisses were a lot rougher than Max’s, but at the same time they felt ok.

When Kyle finally released her Liz’s lips were red and puffy.

"Do you want to come up for a coffee?" Liz asked.

Kyle grinned. Jackpot, he thought to himself. "Id love too," he agreed pulling the car into park and putting the hand break on.

He followed Liz up to the apartment and waited patiently as she used the key to open the door.

Once inside the apartment, which appeared to be empty, Liz placed her bag and keys down on the table and headed towards the kitchen.

"What would you like?" she asked Kyle.

"A coffee sounds good."

Kyle watched her as she moved around the kitchen, he couldn’t take his eyes of her tight little ass and his thoughts turned to how good it would feel in his hands.

"Take a seat in the lounge room and I’ll bring it in," Liz suggested. She had felt Kyle’s eyes on her as she moved around the kitchen and it was little unnerving.

Reluctantly Kyle did as he was told knowing it would put him in a better position when she joined him. The lounge sounded like the second best place to her bedroom for him to be right now.

Liz entered the room carrying two mugs of steaming hot coffee and placed them on the coffee table in front of where Kyle was sitting. She was just about to take a seat next to Kyle when he grabbed her hand and pulled her down into his lap.

"You’re gorgeous," he whispered.

Liz blushed and tried to look away but Kyle wouldn’t let her. He guided her face back to his and leaned in and kissed her.

Just like the kiss in the car it wasn’t soft, it was hard and passionate and Liz was a little shocked when she felt Kyle’s tongue thrust into her mouth without any warning. Liz kissed Kyle back surprised, but slightly aroused at his boldness. Soon Kyle had her turned around so she was straddling him and his hands rubbed up and down her back sensually as he continued to kiss her.

That was how Max found them when he and a drunk Tess stumbled into the apartment.

Despite his drunkenness, Max stopped abruptly a scowl clouding his features.

"Oh excuse us," he said angrily.

Liz jumped off Kyle’s lap with lightning speed at the sound of Max’s voice. She had been too caught up with Kyle to hear the door opening, or Max and Tess entering.

"You have a bedroom you know, why don’t yo use it next time," Max snapped.
It didn’t take a genius to see he was drunk, but Liz wasn’t going to let him speak to her that way.

"Don’t worry," she replied just an angrily. "We will."

Max snorted and if Liz wasn’t mistaken she thought she heard him mumble something along the lines of, "Didn’t take you long," under his breath.

"Don’t worry about it Max," a drunken Tess whined. "Lets just go to your room," she suggested moving closer and rubbing up against him.

Kyle’s eyes went wide as he watched Tess’s nipples harden making her already big tits look twice as tempting.

Fuck what he would give to be Max Evans. He knew he was just about to take her to his room and fuck her brains out.

While Kyle stared at Tess hungrily, Liz glared at the girl she was beginning to despise. Her very tight white tank top did nothing to hide the fact she wasn’t wearing a bra and Liz thought she looked like a slut.

Max looked down at Tess with what you could only describe as a bored expression. He’d been putting up with the same shit from her the entire night, and he was over it. His expression changed quickly though, and before any of them could blink Max was taking off towards the bathroom at lightning speed.

"Shit," Liz cursed rushing after him without a second thought to Kyle.

"Oh you’ve got to be kidding me," Tess whined and sunk drunkenly into the couch, her legs falling open invitingly for Kyle.

Kyle was not fazed by Liz or Max’s abrupt departure though, and continued to stare at her. "I could take you home?" he suggested.

Tess looked at him through blurred vision. He wasn’t Max, but she doubted she would be getting what she wanted from Max tonight.

"Sure," she agreed.

Kyle stood up then and with a feral grin said, "Let me go tell Liz and Max we’re leaving."

When Kyle walked into the bathroom he found Max hunched over the toilet with Liz knelt over him, rubbing his back.

"Hey Liz," he said to get her attention.

Liz turned at the sound of Kyle’s voice. "Oh god Kyle I’m so sorry," she apologised having completely forgotten about her date.

"Its cool," Kyle smiled. It fact it was better than cool because thanks to Liz he was getting a shot at a drunk Tess Harding. "I can see Max needs you more right now so I’m going to take off."

"Are you sure?" Liz asked.

"Yeah, I’ll see you Monday," he told her. He turned to Max then who wasn’t looking at him. "I’ll give Tess a lift too Max."

Liz stiffened at the mention of Tess. "Thanks for that," she replied grateful that Kyle would be taking a problem off her hands.

"Sure," he said. "Hope you’re feeling better Max," he said cheerily before he walked out of the bathroom and the room with a skip in his step.


Also, I post a new fic on the Au without aliens board tonight. It's not something that i will update a lot but if you're interested check it out. It's called Love of the Land.

Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 7:31 am
by Emz80m
A/N: thank you everyone for taking the time to leave feedback on the last part, i really appreciate hearing from you guys :D I hope you enjoy this part.

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Thirteen

Liz walked into Max’s room and placed the glass or water and two aspirin on the bedside table before she walked to the blinds and with one swift tug, pulled them open.

"What the hell," she heard Max mumble as he squinted against the light now filtering into his once dark room.

"Get up," she demanded.

It was close to mid-day and after having hours of time to think about the events of the night before, Liz was pissed as hell at Max. Not only had he ruined her date because he had come home drunk, but he had brought home a drunk Tess too.

"Go away Liz," Max groaned.

"No I will not go away," Liz told him.

Max groaned and rolled over. It was obvious that Liz wasn’t going anywhere anytime soon so he might as well let her get it out of her system that way he could go back to feeling sorry for himself and wallowing in his severe hang over.

"Fine," Max sighed. "What do you want?"

"Want?" Liz snorted sarcastically. "You can’t give me what I want Max," she told him oblivious to Max’s wince at her words.

Putting on a brave face he attempted to answer her. "Oh boo hoo, is that what you wanted to hear? Will you leave me alone now?"

Max rolled over after his statement and that move only angered Liz even more. She just couldn’t believe that after everything they had been through, and knowing how much Liz wanted to go out with Kyle that Max would do that to her. Sure her date with Kyle had pretty much been over by the time Max had arrived but it wasn’t the point. One night, why couldn’t he stay away from the apartment for one night?

"No I wont." Liz cried. "You ruined my date with Kyle."

"Hardly," Max grunted. "It was like midnight, and besides no one asked you to help me you could have stayed with Kyle."

Liz shook her head and crossed her arms over her chest. "You’re an asshole," she told him.

Offended and now very annoyed Max rolled over and looked at her.

"If it makes you feel better, by the way he was groping you, he would have fucked you," Max told her.

The satisfaction that he normally would have got at hurting someone didn’t come after his comment. He watched as Liz’s eyes filled with tears and her attempts to shake them away.

"That’s not what it was about," she whispered hurt by his comment.

"Well then if you don’t want people to think that then maybe next time you’ll rethink going at it on the living room couch," Max continued.

He had no idea why he was lashing out at Liz. He guessed it was because deep down he was hurt. Somewhere along the way Max had developed feelings for Liz, feeling that he had never had for another girl before and it hurt like hell that she didn’t feel the same. That she was only with him so she could get another guy, a guy who in Max’s opinion didn’t deserve her.

This time though Liz couldn’t shake off her tears at Max’s words and a few fell down her face.

"Go to hell Max," she whispered before she turned and stormed out of his room and into her own, slamming the door hard behind her.

***

It felt like an ice age had hit in the apartment. Well close enough as far as Max was concerned.

Since his confrontation with Liz the morning before things had been cold between them. Liz refused to speak to him, doing her best to ignore him and had even gone as far as placing labels on all the food in the fridge that was hers, which coincidentally was all of it.

It was like they were back to the beginning, the way things were when they first moved in together and Max hated it.

He approached her room hesitantly and knocked. It didn’t surprise him when Liz didn’t answer so taking a deep breath he opened the door anyway.

"I don’t remember inviting you in," Liz snapped not even bothering to look up from her laptop screen as she typed away.

"I come in peace," Max replied and held out the tub of double chocolate fudge ice cream he had gone out to get. It was Liz’s favourite and the only thing he could think of to attempt to apologize for his horrible words to her.

Liz looked up at him then.

"I’m really sorry," he said.

Liz pushed the laptop off her lap and crossed her legs. She didn’t want to accept his apology so easily but one look at his wounded puppy dog’s eyes and she felt her heart melt.

She wondered how he could manage to turn her into mush with just one look.

"I hope I didn’t ruin things between you and Kyle," he added then. It was a hard task to get the words out of his mouth and he felt like he might choke. The last thing he wanted was for Liz to date Kyle but he also didn’t want to hurt Kyle so if he was what Liz’s wanted then Max would learn to respect it, and hopefully eventually get over it.

"You didn’t," Liz assured him, "and thank you," she added referring to his apology.

"Oh," Max tried to smile. "Well that’s good."

"Yeah he invited me to a party next on Friday night."

"Well that’s good, I guess."

"Yeah," Liz nodded unenthusiastically.

Parties weren’t normally Liz’s thing, but she had accepted Kyle’s invitation hoping that being on the arm of one of the most popular guys on campus might make the party more fun. Also, it was the biggest party of the year and Maria and Michael would also be attending.

"I don’t want things to be like this between us," Max said then. "I hate that you’re hiding in your room."

He stepped forward then and handed Liz the tub of ice cream and a spoon.

"Me too," she agreed.

"Well I’ll just leave you to your ice cream," Max said awkwardly. He took a step back towards the door then.

"Thank you Max, this was really sweet of you," he heard Liz say.

"Your welcome Princess," Max whispered before he quietly stepped out of the room closing the door behind him.

***

Liz was surprised when Max emerged from his bedroom dressed up on Friday night. He was wearing a nice black shirt and a pair of tight blue jeans and Liz thought he looked sexy as all hell.

"You look nice," she told him.

Max jumped at the sound of her voice.

"Liz," he said. "What are you doing here?" he wondered.

Wasn’t she supposed to be heading to the party with Kyle?

"Just waiting for Kyle," she replied with a small smile as her eyes wandered over his form, drinking him in.

She had been waiting for Kyle for over an hour now, apparently he didn’t think punctuality was a big thing on a second date.

Max looked at his watch and frowned. It was close to 9pm and the party would be well and truly underway by now and he wondered where the hell Kyle could be. Max himself was planning on a late and fashionable arrival whilst at the same time hoping that Tess was already drunk and had picked up for the night, therefore leaving him alone.

There was only one reason that Max was attending his first party in over a month and that was to watch out for Liz. Through the week he had come to the conclusion that acting like a petulant child when it came to Kyle wasn’t going to get him anywhere with Liz. So he had resolved himself to playing the role of protector, looking out for Liz, which was what he was doing tonight.

His plan had been simple. He would show up when the party was really living up, slip into the corner, and observe all night from the shadows. Liz was never supposed to know he was there.

"You’re running a bit late aren’t you?" he pointed out.

"Um yeah, a little," she shrugged avoiding his gaze so he would see how unsettled he was making her.

She stood up then and Max’s eyes almost popped out of his head. Sure she looked gorgeous sitting on the couch but now that she was standing up Max was blown away.

"Wow," he whispered.

Liz was wearing a short black mini shirt, one he had insisted she buy along with a red silk camisole.

Liz looked up at his comment.

"You look gorgeous" he told her, his eyes displaying every emotion he was feeling.
Liz blushed. "Thank you," she told him.

"I feel a little naked…" she chuckled then. "Do you think this will be ok?"

"No, you look perfect, the outfit is perfect," he assured her.

God Kyle Valenti was a lucky guy he thought and he wondered if the guy even realised it.

"Are you going out?" she asked him then wondering if was getting dressed up for a date and envious of the women that would have his attention for the night.

"Um yeah, I was going to meet up with the guys at the party," he told her nervously.

"OH," Liz smiled, "maybe I’ll see you there," she added.

"Yeah," he nodded knowing she wouldn’t. There were usually so many people at these types of things you didn’t see the same person twice if you didn’t want to, and if you didn’t want to be seen you wouldn’t be.

"Do you want me to wait? Just in case Kyle doesn’t come?" Max asked then hopefully.

"You wouldn’t mind?" Liz asked with a happy smile.

"No, not at all," Max grinned unconsciously taking a step toward her.

He reached out and pushed a piece of hair behind her ear, "You really look gorgeous you know," he whispered.

"Max…" Liz whispered.

Ding

Max knew that if he had super powers he would use them to rip that bell out of its place right now.

The moment was gone and Liz took a self-conscious step back.

"That will be Kyle," she said.

"Yeah," Max nodded.

He watched then as Liz picked up her small bag and jacket and made her way to the door. For a few seconds he contemplated calling out for her to stop and walking towards her and kissing the daylights out of her but in the end he knew it was stupid.

Liz wanted Kyle, not him and he was just going to have to get used to it.

Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:50 am
by Emz80m
A/N: hi everyone. As usual you're wonderful feedback blows me away. I really appreciate hearing from you guys and I'm glad that you're liking it so far.

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Fourteen

Max sighed as he searched the dance floor again for Liz. He had arrived at the party about a half an hour ago and so far he hadn’t spotted her.

He was standing in a dark corner, beer in his hand doing his best to blend into the
shadows so that no one spotted him.

He knew Tess was around somewhere, a few of his mates had warned him that she had been asking about him and the last thing he wanted to do was be found.
He moved slightly when he caught sight of long brown hair and his face broke out in a smile when he finally spotted Liz on the dance floor with Maria. Kyle was nowhere in sight and Max suspected that he was probably off drinking with his mates.

Max sipped his beer and leaned back against the wall content to enjoy watching Liz for the time being.

***

Kyle stood with his friends off to the side of the dance floor. He could see Liz dancing with Maria and was glad that she had someone to occupy her so that he didn’t have her hanging on him all night.

"Man Parker looks hot tonight," Kyle’s friend Pauly commented as he watched Liz shake her hips.

"I’d fuck her," Tommy added.

"Sorry guys but I already beat you both too it," Kyle spoke up.

Tommy and Pauly both looked at him.

"Liz came with me tonight," he said.

"Bullshit," they laughed at him knowing that Liz Parker definitely wasn’t Kyle’s type.

Kyle shrugged. "Don’t believe me, but Liz has been after me for years and I’ve finally decided to have some fun with her."

"What’s she like is the sack?" Tommy asked.

"She’d be a spit fire I bet," Pauly spoke up.

Kyle smirked. "I’ll tell you guys tomorrow," he said before he walked off and headed towards Liz.

***

Max frowned and pushed off the wall as he watched Kyle approach Liz from behind and wrap his arm around her.

A few seconds later he watched Maria leave assuming she was going to find Michael rather than have to watch Liz and Kyle together.

Max was distracted in watching the interaction between them as Liz turned around and started to dance with Kyle that he didn’t notice the drunken blonde who had approached him.

"Maxie!" she cried when she finally spotted him.

Max groaned when he heard her voice and when he pulled his eyes away from Liz sure enough Tess Harding was standing in front of him.

"I’ve been looking for you everywhere," she purred stepping closer and rubbing her hand up and down his chest.

Max groaned. It was obvious right away that Tess was drunk like usual, and he had too look away from her since the top she was wearing had a neck line that plunged so low he could see Tess’s naked breasts.

***

Liz felt strange as she danced with Kyle. They’d been at the party for over an hour and as soon as they had arrived he had helped her find Maria and Michel and taken off to find his mates. She wondered why he had bothered to invite her if he hadn’t had any intention of spending any time with her so she was surprised when he approached her and wanted to dance.

She did her best to move with him to the music but every movement just felt awkward and she wasn’t sure why. It wasn’t that Kyle was a bad dancer, nor was she, but they just didn’t seem to fit.

Liz was even more surprised when Kyle pulled her closer and one hand had slid down to cup her ass bringing her against him.

Kyle started to grind his obvious erection into her then, and Liz was surprised that the his arousal really didn’t do anything for her, and she cursed Max Evans knowing it was all his fault.

Unconsciously she had bee keeping an eye out for Max for the past half an hour but hadn’t seen him at all, she was starting to think that he had decided not to come when she caught sight of what she knew was his muscled chest out of the corner of her eye.

"Why don’t we take this somewhere a little more private," she heard Kyle whisper suggestively in her ear. He grinded himself against her again leaving no room for doubt about what he wanted to do with her in private.

Liz continued to stare at Max, a frown marring her features when she noticed the familiar blonde pressed up against him.

"Ok," she agreed.

Kyle grinned at her as he released her from his grasp. He took her hand in his then and led her towards the stairs.

***

Max looked from Tess back over to Liz and Kyle and was alarmed when he couldn’t see her.

"Shit," he cursed.

"I wanna fuck Max," Tess purred.

"I’m not interested, go away Tess," Max answered his eyes searching for Liz.

"You don’t mean that Max," she continued her hand reaching down and cupping his cock.

The minute her hand touched him Max’s eyes snapped down, a deathly glare on his face. He snatched Tess’s hand away quickly.

"Don’t fucking touch me," he said. "Listen to me carefully Tess, I’m not interested so FUCK OFF!" He said loudly getting the attention of the people standing around them.

He caught sight of Liz’s long brown hair then being led by Kyle towards the stairs.

His first instinct was to go after her but he realized that Liz wouldn’t be very happy about that.

"She’s a big girl Max," he reminded himself.

"MAX!" Tess yelled.

"Haven’t you left yet?" he groaned.

He watched as Tess’s face grew red from rage before she turned and fled.

***

"Where are we going?" Liz asked Kyle as they reached the top of the stairs.

Kyle didn’t answer her at first, just led her into one of the rooms at the end of the hall, closing the door and locking it behind them.

Once in the room Liz looked around and realized that it was a bedroom, which she assumed belonged to one of the frat guys who lived in the house.

Kyle approached her like a tiger stalking its prey. Liz watched wearily wondering if she had made a mistake agreeing to come up stairs with Kyle. She knew it had been a knee jerk reaction to seeing Max with Tess again.

Kyle wrapped his arms around her and pulled her to him joining their lips together.
Soon they were lying on the bed kissing passionately. Kyle’s hands roamed Liz’s body coming to rest over her breasts, rubbing them with his large hands.

Liz realized that things were getting out of hand but she couldn’t deny that she was enjoying Kyle’s touch and pushed her thoughts of stopping things away. The whole plan had been to lure Kyle in with sex appeal, which had apparently worked a treat; she wasn’t going to get the reputation of becoming a cock tease though.
Kyle rolled onto his back and pulled Liz with him until she was straddling him. Liz’s began to trail kisses down Kyle’s neck while his hands found their way under her shirt.

***

Max glanced up the stairs again and sighed. He turned and walked up them slowly knowing the only way of truly knowing for sure what Kyle and Liz were doing upstairs was to go up there. That way he would know for sure or not if he stood a chance with Liz. If she was with Kyle like he suspected she was, then that was it, if not there was still a small glimmer of hope for him.

***

Liz wasn’t sure how it happened but soon both her and Kyle had their shirts off and Kyle was pushing on her head gently to indicate he wanted her to blow him.
Liz hesitated for a second before she crawled down his body and opened the button and zip on his jeans. Kyle was wearing briefs so he lifted his hips so Liz could push his jeans and briefs down over his cock.

His size was average from what Liz could tell. It was a little thinner than Max’s and slightly shorter.

Liz like a seasoned expert enclosed her hand around Kyle’s cock and stroked it a few times before she leaned in and took it in his mouth.

"Yeah that’s it babe," Kyle encouraged.

***

Max peaked in all the rooms where the doors were open and couldn’t see either Liz or Kyle anywhere.

There were a few doors that were closed and although he was tempted to press his ear against one of the doors to listen, he didn’t.

"Wake yourself up Max!" He cursed himself. "You know she’s with Kyle behind one of those doors."

Deciding the last thing he wanted was to stick around and wait for them to re-emerge he headed back down the stairs and out of the house towards his waiting car.

***

"Ahh yeah fuck," Kyle moaned as he jerked and came in Liz’s mouth without warning.

Liz swallowed, as much as she could a little annoyed that he hadn’t warned her.

"Fuck that was good, Liz. Exactly what I needed," Kyle grinned pushing his hips off the bed and pulling his jeans back up.

"Yeah?" Liz smiled crawling back up his body and leaning in for a kiss. Kyle turned his face and Liz ended up kissing his cheek instead.

"Thanks for the gesture babe but I don’t really want to taste myself," Kyle chuckled.

"Oh um sorry," Liz frowned. Max had never had a problem with it; it did come from his body after all.

"It’s cool," Kyle said sitting up.

"Well maybe you could return the gesture and then we’d be even," Liz suggested.

"Oh," Kyle frowned. "Um I don’t do that sorry, it grosses me out."

Liz’s mouth fell open in shock at the audacity of him. Did he really expect her to suck him off and get nothing in return?

"But you know I could…?" he suggested wiggling his fingers.

The way he did it was the most unappealing thing in the world but there was no way Liz was going to let him get away without at least making her cum, so lying down she pulled him on top of her and allowed him to reach between her legs and underneath her panties.

He stroked her a couple of times before he plunged two fingers into her depth. Liz did her best to thrust against him so that he would finger her at the rhythm that she liked but Kyle didn’t seem to be able to take the hint.

Feeling bad Liz threw a few fake moans in, she also hoped that it would encourage Kyle but instead his thrusts became more erratic and eventually Liz had to fake an orgasm just to get him to stop and leave her alone.

***

Max pulled the ice cream, chips, and a six-pack of scotch and coke out of the kitchen and took them with him to the lounge room. He flicked play on the remote and watched as his replay of that nights games flashed on the TV.

"Should have just stayed home and watched them live," he grumbled to himself.

That’s how Liz found him when she stormed into the apartment an hour later. Except he had cleaned up the six-pack, and the pint of ice cream was now empty.

"You’re home," Max slurred as he saw her.

"Max!" Liz yelped surprised to see him. She was even more surprised when she took in his appearance and the mess that surrounded him. She expected him to be fucking Tess’s Harding’s small brain out by now.

"What are you doing here?" she asked.

"I live here remember," he told her.

"What are you doing here?" he asked.

"I just had the date from hell," she cried moving towards the lounge and slumping next to Max.

"Really," Max replied sarcastically.

Obviously Liz didn’t pick up on it though and decided to share her experience with him.

"Kyle is such an asshole," she raged. "Firstly he just dumps me for like an hour and then he has the nerve to take me upstairs, expects me to blow him and wont return the favour."

Max’s eyes went wide. Why the fuck was she telling him this? Didn’t she know this was the last thing he wanted to hear?

"So after refusing to eat me, do you know what he does? He offers to finger fuck me and he can’t even do that right," she continues to fume.

Max shakes his head and then begins to laugh. This is the guy he’s spent the last few weeks envying and he can’t even make Liz cum.

"What are you laughing about?" Liz asks.

"Your plan was to lure him in with sex and Kyle’s going to turn you off with it," he continued to laugh.

Liz didn’t appreciate his humour though and stood up. "You’re a great fucking help aren’t you," she said before she walked out of the living room headed for her bedroom.

Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 7:33 am
by Emz80m
A/N: Hi everyone. Thank you so much for all your feedback i love hearing from you guys. I have a feeling that you're all going to love this part. Welcome to the new readers and a big hi to the people that came our of lurkdom :D

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Fifteen

Liz tossed and turned again before sitting up and looking at the clock. The red numbers glared three am back at her and she groaned before flopping back down against the pillows. She had been trying to sleep since storming into her room hours earlier but the fact was that she couldn’t sleep because she was frustrated.

Liz Parker was sexually frustrated and she knew it had very little to do with Kyle Valenti, and a lot to do with Max Evans.

She kicked the covers back with her feet before sitting up in bed again. She wondered if Max was having trouble sleeping. It was doubtful after the empty six-pack of scotch and coke she saw on the lounge room floor earlier.

Deciding to go and check she hopped out of bed before quietly making her way to Max's room.

The door was closed, but not locked so she opened it quietly. It wasn't as dark as it usually was inside because apparently Max had forgotten to draw his blinds before going to bed.

She could see Max lying in the middle of the bed. He had a sheet slung low on his hips and she licked her lips as she contemplated whether he was wearing boxers underneath.

"What am I doing?" She whispered to herself as she took a step forward. It was like she had no control over her feet. Her body ached for Max, and she was contemplating doing something about it.

Liz was half way towards the bed when Max moved in his sleep. His movement caused the sheet on his body to move lower revealing that he was in fact naked under the sheet after all. Liz froze, her eyes riveted to his toned body.

It had been two weeks now since Liz had, had any type of sexual contact except for the fumbling mess with Kyle earlier that night. She had never expected when she had first started fooling around with Max that she would turn into the type of women who couldn't go a couple of days without getting off. But she learned quickly that she was, and in the end had invested in a trusty vibrator, the only thing that had gotten her off during that time.

It also hadn't passed her attention that Max hadn't gone back to his old ways during that time either. Except for the few times she had seen him briefly with Tess, she hadn't seen him with any women, and she knew for a fact that he hadn't slept with Tess in their apartment recently.

God she wanted him.

Liz wondered if he would refuse her if she pulled off her clothes and crawled into bed with him for some no strings attached sex.

She bit her lip contemplating whether he would reject her and how she would feel if that happened.

"Liz," her head snapped up when she heard her name.

"Max?" She whispered back.

When he didn't answer she peered closer which revealed that he was actually still sleeping.

Is he dreaming about me? She asked herself.

Deciding to take the plunge Liz pulled her satin slip up her body, leaving her naked, before pulling up the sheet and crawling into bed with Max.

Her small hands rested on his chest as she snuggled in close against him and began to kiss him lightly against his neck. One of her hands kept creeping lower until she was holding his flaccid cock in her hand, which didn't stay flaccid for long. Liz stroked it a few times before disappearing underneath the sheets and taking it into her mouth.

Max was having one of the most erotic dreams of his life. Liz had come to him in his bed and was riding his cock. The dream felt so real that he could almost feel how hot and wet her pussy was.

"Oh god Liz," he moaned.

Liz pulled the sheet away and looked up when she heard Max, but his eyes were still closed and she couldn't be sure but she thought he was still asleep. She took him back into her mouth, moaning as he filled her up and she began the rhythm he had taught her weeks ago.

Max shook his head as his dream began to fade into the background, his consciousness registered the feel of the warmth surrounding his cock and his eyes snapped open and down to his groin where he found his dark haired Princess blowing him.

"Fuck," he hissed.

Liz's brown eyes looked up at him then. She could tell that he was enjoying what she was doing, so she increased her suction on him and her hand cupped his sac. Liz was determined for Max to cum hard in her mouth.

Max had other ideas though, and his hands swiftly stopped Liz and pulled her up his body.

"Max, what?"

"I want to eat you," he declared huskily. "Let me show you how a real man makes you cum Liz," he said.

Liz shivered.

"Straddle my face," he demanded.

Liz did as she was told, turning and straddling Max's face before leaning down and taking his cock back in her mouth.

Max attacked her like a starved man. He was determined to make her cum so hard, to show her how much better things were with him than they were with Kyle.

He thrust his hips against her mouth as he fucked her pussy with his tongue. His hands rested on her thighs, rubbing circles and encouraging Liz to fuck his face by thrusting her hips with him.

Soon it all became too much for Max, he felt himself getting ready to cum so he pulled back from Liz's pussy and thrust two fingers inside of her.

"Fuck yes Princess...............ahh YES!" He moaned as he came in her mouth, never once stopping his thrusts.

As soon as he had his breath back he buried his head between Liz's thighs again, his mouth latching onto Liz's clit as he added a third finger to her dripping wet pussy. Like an expert he pushed her buttons perfectly until Liz was writhing above him.

"Oh god yes Max, ahh fuck, Yes, Yes, Yes!" She screamed out as she came against him.

Max wasted no time rolling them over until Liz was on her back, "Not that this wasn't a nice surprise, but to what do I owe this pleasure?" He asked huskily.

He thought he was dreaming that was how unexpected Liz being naked in his bed was to him. He thought she was with Kyle, that she was in love with Kyle, and he was wondering what had changed.

"I wanted to make you cum," she whispered as she moved, so that she was lying at the same end of the bed as Max.

"Don't you mean you wanted to cum?" Max smirked.

"That too," she agreed. "You always make me cum so hard," she purred leaning up and licking the shell of his ear.

"I know," he said smugly. "Unlike some other fuckwits, I know how to get my girls off," he whispered as he reached to cup one of Liz's breasts in his hands. "With my cock, my fingers and especially with my tongue," he added.

Liz moaned as she felt her juices pool between her legs.

"I've missed being in your bed, feeling your cock between my legs," she admitted.

"Your welcome in my bed anytime Princess," Max smirked.

It occurred to him then that he'd been playing this whole thing wrong. He had told Liz to lure Kyle with sex and the whole time he should have been taking his own advice. It was obvious to him that Liz was only going to get what she needed from him, and if he had to sit back and watch Valenti dig his own grave, he would. In the end he knew Liz was going to come back to his bed, and eventually she would realize that what was between them was a lot more than sex. He would make sure of it.

"Do you want me to show you how a real man would have fucked you by now Liz?" He whispered huskily taking another jab at Kyle's manhood.

"Yes," Liz shamefully begged.

Max didn't take her straight away. He leant down first and took a rosy nipple into his mouth and sucked on it until it was rock hard before moving to the other.

"Max, please," Liz begged again wanting to feel him inside of her.

He entered her in one smooth stroke and Liz cried out in bliss making Max grin like a fool. He wrapped her legs high on his waist and began to pump in and out of her hard, but not too fast to start with.

"Oh god Max, yes," Liz moaned.

"Does that feel good?" He asked.

"Yes," Liz cried and he rewarded her with a deeper thrust.

He reached between then and began to stroke her clit then. He built her up until she exploded around him and all the while he kept thrusting in and out of her.

"Your pussy is so tight Liz, you feel so good," he whispered huskily.

"So good," Liz agreed.

"Don't stop," she pleaded.

"I won't. Not until you come again Princess," he assured her.

"Oh yes Max fuck me harder," she pleaded then, and Max pulled out and thrust into her harder and faster. Slamming into her with every stroke of his hard cock until neither of them could take anymore.

"I'm going to fucking come so hard inside of you," he panted.

"Are you gonna cum for me?" He asked.

"Y-Yes," Liz cried. She was so turned on by this side of Max that she was witnessing.

"Come around my hard cock Liz," he ordered.

Liz's walls began to flutter around him, her breath shortening as she felt her orgasm coming.

"Scream for me," he told her then, "I want to hear how good I make you cum."

"Oh Fuck Max!" She cried out.

Max jerked once, twice and three times into her before he blew his load inside of her. At the same time Liz cried out as she also fell over the edge with her most powerful orgasm of the night.

"AHH.........MAX..........FUCK!" She screamed.

Max collapsed against Liz's body, panting form the exhaustion before he rolled over onto his back.

"Oh fuck I needed that," Liz grinned.

Max chuckled, "Me too," he agreed. It had been weeks since he had gotten off like that.

Max pushed up off the mattress and stood to walk to the bathroom to clean up.

"Where are you going?" Liz asked.

"Bathroom," he replied. A few minutes later he returned handing Liz a washcloth.

"Thank you," she smiled. He never ceased to amaze her with the little things he did sometimes. One minute he was fucking her brains out and talking dirty to her, and then next he turned around and did something like that for her.

Max pulled the sheet up over them when he hopped back into the bed and rolled over so he was facing Liz.

Liz smiled at him before she shifted to get closer to him. "I hope you didn't mind waking up to find me in your bed," she whispered.

Max smirked at her. "Feel free to wake me up like that anytime," he assured her. "I was surprised though."

"I know," she nodded. "I guess I missed being with you," she added.

Max smiled. "Missed being with me or missed having sex?" He asked, interested in her reply.

"Both," she answered without hesitation.

"Good," he smiled, "Because I missed you too."

Liz smiled shyly surprised by Max's answer, "You did?"

Max pulled Liz closer and kissed her forehead. "Yeah," he whispered.

"Does that mean you want me back?" She asked.

"Like I said, your welcome here anytime," he assured her. "But I don't think Kyle would like that," he pointed out.

"Probably not," Liz agreed.

Max wondered then whom she would choose if that's what it came down to.

At the same time Liz was wondering how Max would react if she told him that she didn't want Kyle anymore, that she wanted him.

Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 8:25 am
by Emz80m
A/M: Hi everyone .Posting this a little early. Thank you to everyone for leaving feedback, i hope you like this next part. :D

Sixteen

"You look exhausted chica," Maria commented as she sat across from Liz in the quad.

Liz took a sip of her tall coffee before smiling at her friend. "Yeah didn’t get much sleep last night," she told her.

The truth was she had spent the weekend in bed with Max. Sleep had come in second, next to the mind-blowing orgasms he gave her.

"What happened to you on Friday night? One minute you were on the dance floor and the next you were gone," she asked.

Liz bit back the urge to groan about the reminder of her horrible date with Kyle on Friday night.

"I went home," she informed Maria, "It wasn’t really my thing."

"How did you get home?" She asked concerned.

Maria knew for a fact that Kyle hadn’t gone home and he had been Liz’s ride to the party.

"I caught a taxi,” Liz shrugged, “Kyle wasn’t ready to leave, and I wasn’t prepared to stay."

Maria studied her friend and knew that she wasn’t telling her something.

"What happened?" She asked.

"What do you mean?" Liz asked.

"Obviously something happened between you and Kyle," she said.

Liz sighed. "I think you were right," she admitted to Maria.

"About Kyle?"

"Yeah," Liz nodded. "I don’t think he’s the guy for me."

"Can I ask what made you come to this conclusion?"

"I guess it’s a combination of things," Liz shrugged, "Kyle likes to party with his mates and I’d rather stay at home."

Maria shook her head. "There’s something you’re not telling me," she accused.

"You’re right there is, lets just say that I don’t think Kyle and I have any chemistry."

Liz always thought that her and Kyle would be great together. Until her experiences with Max, Liz had thought all you needed was to have feelings for someone to have chemistry but she knew now how wrong she was.

"Oh," Maria said, "So the two of you….?"

"No we didn’t, but we kind of fooled around a little bit and I just don’t think we worked well together."

Maria broke out in a fit of giggles then. She couldn’t believe that her virgin best friend was rejecting her playboy stepbrother because of poor performance in the bedroom. She knew that if Liz told Kyle that was the reason she wasn’t going to go out with him again that it would be a major blow to his ego, and she wanted to be there to witness that.

"So what are you going to do?" Maria asked when she calmed down.

"Nothing," Liz said.

"You’re not going to tell him?" Maria asked disappointed.

Liz shook her head. "Nah I doubt he’ll even ask me out again," Liz decided. She figured that Kyle had probably had just as bad a time as she had and wouldn’t ask her out again.

Liz would soon find out how very wrong her assumptions were.

***

Kyle walked in the quadrangle and looked around to see who he knew. He smiled when he saw his sister and Liz sitting at their usual table and made his way towards them.

"Hey babe," he grinned sitting down next to Liz and throwing an arm around her shoulder.

Liz turned and looked at Kyle shocked.

"Um hi Kyle," she replied, shifting slightly in her seat which turned out to be useless with Kyle’s arm around her shoulders.

"Hey sis," he smiled at his sister then.

"Kyle," Maria replied frowning as she watched her brother manhandling her best friend.

"What are you doing?" She asked him.

"Not much just in between classes and I saw Liz and wanted to come and say hi," he said turning to Liz and flashing a typical Kyle Valenti grin. On most girls, and at one time Liz, that smile would have melted them in a puddle of mush, but now Liz saw it for what it was. A play.

Liz watched frozen as he leaned in then and kissed her on the lips.

"Well you can say hi without touching," Maria pointed out.

"What’s your problem?" Kyle asked Maria, "Can’t I kiss my girlfriend hello?"

"Girlfriend?" Liz blurted out confused.

Kyle turned and smiled at her. "Yeah," he said like he thought he was making Liz’s day.

"Um Kyle…," Liz started. She was planning on telling Kyle that she didn’t really think that they had gone out on enough dates to be considered a couple but she never got the chance.

"I have to jet, I have practice and it’s on the other side of the campus," Kyle said ignoring Liz and standing up.

He leaned in again to kiss Liz, but this time she was too fast for him and turned her face so he got her cheek instead.

"See ya babe," he said and then took off.

***

Max checked his watch as he entered the quad. He was meeting up with one of the guys from his classes so he looked around trying to spot him when he caught sight of Liz sitting with Maria.

He smiled as he watched the way Maria waved her hands around in the air as she said something to Liz, but his smile disappeared as he watched Kyle approach their table.

He clenched his fists as he watched Kyle lean in and kiss Liz. He couldn’t see much from how far away he was but enough to know he wanted to knock the guys block off.

"Max!" He looked away in the direction of the voice and found Matt waving at him.

With one last look over at Liz, who was sitting with Kyle’s arm wrapped around him he walked over to meet Matt, his good mood now completely gone.

***

Liz glared at Kyle’s back as he walked away from the table. "Asshole," she muttered.

Maria heard her though and giggled in response.

Liz smiled at her friend’s reaction and rolled her eyes.

"Well looks like you’re going to have to have the talk with Kyle after all," Maria pointed out.

"Yeah," Liz groaned.

"What should I do?" Liz asked. Her experience with guys was limited to Max. She knew if she asked him he would tell her to just tell Kyle that he didn’t please her in bed and that she was going to find a real man. Liz knew that she was going to have to be a bit more tactful than that.

"Something’s up with Kyle," Maria told her. "A couple of weeks ago he wouldn’t give you the time of day and now he’s calling you his girlfriend!" Maria pointed out.

Liz knew exactly what was up with Kyle. He thought he was going to get her into bed, and until the night before he probably would have.

"I don’t know what’s going on with him but there is no way I’m his girlfriend, we’ve only been on two dates and you could hardly call giving me a lift to a party a date," Liz replied.

"Well you should just talk to him. Tell him you had fun but that’s all it was," Maria said.

Liz nodded. "Your right. I’ll go and see him tomorrow," she told her.

"So what are your plans for Thanksgiving?" Maria asked then.

Liz shrugged. "Going home," she said. "What about you?"

"Yeah the same," Maria frowned.

Liz looked at the time then and sighed. She had a class in ten minutes so she stood up.

"I better go, I have a class in ten minutes," she told Maria.

"Ok chica, give me a call and let me know how it goes with Kyle," she said.

"Sure thing," Liz smiled.

***

"Hey," Liz greeted as she entered the apartment and found Max in the lounge room.

"Hey," Max replied looking up from the television.

Liz placed her bag and books down on the table and walked towards Max, plopping herself down in his lap.

"How was your day?" Max asked.

"Long," Liz replied.

Mondays were her long days and she was always glad when they were over.

"You?" She asked.

"Yeah ok," he replied. On the other side Max only had a couple of classes on
Monday.

"I actually saw you in the quad today," Max told her.

"Why didn’t you come over?" Liz asked as her small hand stroked Max’s neck.

"I was meeting Matt but I saw that you were busy with Kyle," he replied.

"Uh yeah," Liz sighed her head falling against Max’s shoulder.

"What’s going on with you guys?" He asked. Max was doing his best not to seem too annoyed, or interested in the status of Liz and Kyle’s relationship but on the inside he was very anxious.

Liz snorted, "He called me his girlfriend," she said.

"Oh," Max frowned.

"I guess I’m going to have to speak to him," she sighed, "Set him straight."

"So you’re not going to go out with him again?" Max asked hopefully.

"I don’t think there is really any point," Liz replied.

"Good," Max smiled.

Liz turned and looked at him after his comment. "It’s good?" She asked.

Max wrapped his arms around Liz tighter as he smiled at her.

"Of course it is," he whispered.

Liz leaned in then to meet his kiss. Max tangled a hand in her hair in an effort to pull her closer to him and his other hand cupped her face.

Liz’s eyes closed as Max made love to her mouth, gently and lovingly and they stayed closed for a few seconds after Max pulled back.

"He doesn’t deserve you," Max whispered.

Liz opened her eyes slowly and when they met Max’s blazing amber one’s she gasped.

"Who does?" She asked praying and hoping that he was going to tell her that he thought he did.

Max smiled. "Just make sure whoever you choose Princes, does," he said.
Liz smiled, it wasn’t the exact answer she wanted, but it was close enough for now.

She leaned in again slowly then until she could feel Max’s breath on her lips.
"Kiss Me," she requested.

"Oh I’ll more than kiss you," Max promised as he fused their mouths together.

Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 7:46 am
by Emz80m
A/N: Hi everyone. Sorry to keep you all waiting for so long. Thanx for all your feedback and bumps. I hope you like this new part :D

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Seventeen

"You can do this Liz," she coached herself as she pulled up to Kyle's dorm.

There were people everywhere, typical for a few days before Thanksgiving. Most people were busy getting organized to leave for the week.

Liz was nervous as she walked along the hallway towards Kyle's room. Guys leered at her as she passed, so she put her head down and did her best to ignore them.

"Liz, hi!" She looked up when she heard her name.

"Um, hi?" She replied looking at the guy confused. She recognized him as one of Kyle's friends, but she had no idea what his name was.

"What are you doing here?" He asked.

"Oh, I just came to see Kyle," she explained.

Tommy frowned, "Oh."

"Yeah," she replied.

"Well he's inside so head on in," he told her then.

Tommy was Kyle's roommate and Liz missed the evil smirk on his face as she passed him and headed towards Kyle's room.

"You're going down Valenti," Tommy smirked as he headed off in the opposite direction. He was sick of Kyle always being on top. He was the captain of their baseball and football teams, and he always got the girls. Well if Tommy had his way he wouldn't be getting this one.

When Liz approached the door to their room it was already opened. She could hear the music coming from one of the rooms and assumed it was Kyle. There was no way he would hear her knock so he walked in and headed towards Kyle's room.

Liz had only been to the dorm once before with Maria, but it was just as she remembered. She knocked gently on the door but after a few seconds she realized that Kyle couldn't hear her so she hesitantly opened the door.

What she saw inside caused her to gasp and take a step back.

***

"Max!" Isabel cried as she ran into her brother arms.

"Hey Iz," Max greeted as he hugged his sister back.

"Max man," Alex grinned as he finally caught up with Isabel.

Max released Isabel and pulled his best friend into a hug.

"Its so good to see you both," he told them.

"So where is she?" Alex asked.

"Who?" Isabel asked not sure what her boyfriend was talking about.

"Liz," Alex grinned.

Max blushed which didn't go unnoticed by Isabel. Alex knew all about Liz. He got weekly updates from Max on what was going on and it was obvious that his friend had fallen hard for her. He just couldn't wait to finally meet her, to see the woman’s face who finally captured Max Evans heart. Because in all the time Alex and Max had been friends he had never seen Max so into anyone as he was with Liz.

"Liz Parker?" Isabel questioned.

"Yeah," Max nodded. "Come on lets go get your bags. Mum can't wait to see you," Max said.

Isabel and Alex were home from Boston for Thanksgiving.

"So is she here?" Alex asked.

"Um no," Max shook his head.

"Well when will we get to meet her?" Alex asked ignoring the glares Max was shooting him telling him to drop the subject.

"Well we usually have Thanksgiving every year with the Parkers so in a couple of days I guess," Isabel told Alex.

Max froze. "The parkers are coming for Thanksgiving?" He asked Isabel. That was the first he had heard of that.

"Yeah," she shrugged not seeing the big deal. It happened every year.

"Well that's good," Alex grinned triumphantly at Max.

"What's the big deal with Liz anyway?" Isabel asked. As far as she knew Liz and Max did not get along. Isabel remembered well; the way Max used to taunt Liz to the point that she would barely say a word all through dinner before excusing herself to hide out in some room.

"Nothing," Max said quickly.

"Ok," Isabel said.

***

Liz couldn't believe what she was seeing and despite the fact that she had decided she didn't really want to be with Kyle, it still hurt like hell.

"Oh yes, like that, harder," she heard him moan oblivious to the fact that she was watching.

Blonde hair flew everywhere as Tess Harding sat astride Kyle obviously riding his cock. He had her tits cupped in his hands and he seemed to be enjoying her work much like Max had in the past she assumed.

"Oh Yes, Ah Yes!" She heard Tess cry.

Liz began to back out of the room slowly, tears filling her eyes.

All this time she had through she had finally snagged Kyle and he was most likely still fucking everything that moved behind her back. How stupid was she? Everyone probably knew too, she was most likely the laughing stock of Kyle's friends. She put her head down to hide her tears as she reached the hall and she walked as quickly as she could until she reached her car. When she was safely inside she let her tears of humiliation fall.

***

"So what have yo got planned for us while we're here?" Isabel asked as Max drove them to her parent's apartment in the city.

"What did you want to do?" Max asked. They were only in town for a few days and Max assumed most of that time would be used shopping.

"Well obviously I'll be hitting the shops with Mum the day after Thanksgiving, but we have a few nights up our sleeves."

"There are some parties and clubs we could check out," Max offered.

"Excellent!" She cried.

"Great," Alex groaned.

They were stuck in thick traffic and going bumper-to-bumper when Max's cell went off. He shifted in his seat to pull it out of his pocket and smiled when he saw the called ID.

"Hey," he answered it.

"M-Max?"

"Liz? What's wrong?" He asked panicked.

"Where are you?" She asked.

"On my way back from the airport," he said.

"Can you come get me?" She cried.

"Where are you?" He asked.

"Outside Kyle's dorm room," she explained.

Max's eyes scanned the surrounding traffic and signs searching desperately for an exit or something that could get him to Liz faster, but he knew it was useless.

"What happened?" He asked.

"I-I," she sobbed.

"Ok stay put, I'll be there as fast as I can," he promised.

"What's wrong?" Isabel asked alarmed.

"Liz, she's upset," he frowned. "I have to go pick her up," he said then.

The traffic started to move a little then but it was still ten minutes before Max reached his parents place.

"I'll come with you," Alex offered after helping Isabel out with their things.

"You don't have to," Max replied.

"I'm sure you'll need someone to drive or something if she's upset."

"Ok," Max agreed.

It took another ten minutes for Max to get back across to where Kyle's dorm was and he pulled up next to Liz's BMW.

He jumped out of the car and rushed around to the driver's side, flinging the door open.

Liz fell into his strong arms, her cries heavier now that he was there.

"Oh Princess, what happened?" He whispered.

"I-I went to talk to him," she cried. "He was fucking her."

Max's eyes went wide. "Who was he fucking?"

"Tess," Liz exclaimed.

Max frowned. Why on earth would Kyle be with Tess? He wondered. Firstly he didn't think they even knew each other, or that was the impression they had given him. Max remembered then the night of Kyle and Liz's first date, and how Kyle had offered to take Tess home. Max knew what Tess was like. When she wanted a fuck she wanted it and he assumed then that it had probably been going on since then.

"Why are you so upset?" He asked Liz then.

Alex watched on as Max talked quietly to Liz. Even with tears all over her face he could see that she was gorgeous. The small wisp of a girl had Max's complete attention.

Max's heart fell as he thought that Liz must have changed her mind about Kyle and realized that she still had feelings for him, and that she was still in love with him.

"Why her, Max?" She sobbed.

"Why do all the people I have feelings for go to her?"

"Do you have feelings for Kyle?" Max asked.

"No," she cried.

"Who are you talking about Princess?" He asked. It was obvious that it wasn't really the fact that Kyle was with someone else that was upsetting Liz; it seemed to have more to do with Tess.

"You. First you prefer her over me and now him," she cried.

Max's eyes went wide, "Oh Princess you think I prefer her over you?"

"You went straight back to her the minute you were done with me," she sobbed.

Max looked around and realized they had drawn a small audience now.

"Alex, would you drive my car and follow us back to our apartment?" He asked.

Alex nodded and walked around and got behind the wheel of Max's Mercedes.

Max lifted Liz's face until she was looking at him. "I'm going to take us home, ok? We'll talk about this there."

Liz nodded and allowed Max to help her out of the driver's side and into the passenger side of her car.

Fifteen minutes later they were pulling in to the underground car park of their apartment complex.

"Thanks Alex," Max smiled.

"No problem," Alex nodded.

"You can take my car to get to my parents," Max offered.

Alex laughed. "Thanks man but I'd have no idea how to get there. I'll just take a cab."

"Are you sure?" Max asked looking between Alex and a still very upset Liz who was waiting for him by the elevator.

"Yeah it's cool. I'll catch up with you later."

"Thanks man."

"Max?" Alex called.

"Yeah?"

"Tell her," he said.

Max looked at Alex confused.

"Tell her how you feel," he smiled at his friend, "It's obvious that she has feelings for you too."

A small smile lifted at the corner of Max's mouth, "Thanks," he nodded.

Alex headed for the street to hail a taxi as Max walked over to Liz. He wrapped an arm around her as he pulled her into the waiting lift. He knew as soon as they got inside the apartment that they were going to have a long awaited talk about everything.

Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:41 am
by Emz80m
I'm back with a new part for you all, I hope you enjoy it.

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Eighteen

Liz felt cold as Max's arms left her.

He placed his wallet, phone, and keys down on the table before he walked to the lounge.

"Come here," he whispered to her.

Liz walked towards him slowly and let him pull her onto his lap.

"Tell me what happened," he said.

"I went over to talk to Kyle," she began more calmly this time. "To tell him that I didn't think things were really working between us. I ran into his friend in the hallway and he told me to just head in. The music was blaring when I got there so no one heard me knocking. I opened the door and I saw them."

"So Tess and Kyle were having sex?" Max frowned.

How could that bastard Valenti do that to her, and especially with someone like Tess? Didn't he realize how special Liz was? Girls like Tess would come and go, they were sluts, but Liz was a treasure that you held onto for the rest of your life.

"Yes," she nodded tears emerging again.

"Are you upset?" He asked her.

"Yeah," Liz told him.

"Because Kyle cheated on you?"

"Of course," Liz said. "Just because I was going to break up with him doesn't change the fact that it hurt to find out he didn't even like me enough to be faithful."

Max nodded in understanding.

"But it upset you more because it was Tess?" He asked.

Liz looked away then.

"Why?" He asked reaching up and grasping her chin forcing her to look at him.

"Why her?" She whispered to Max then. "What is it about her that you guys can't stay away from?"

"Is that what you think?" He asked her. "That I thought she was special and that's why I slept with her?"

Liz nodded.

"Liz, that is so far from the truth it's not funny. God, Tess is one of those girls that you would only ever think of fucking. You wouldn't date her, or take her home to meet your parents and you certainly don't make lover to her," he explained.

"Then why sleep with her at all?"

"Because it's a no strings attached arrangement," he told her.

Liz looked away again, "Is that what we have?" She asked him.

"Not for me," he whispered.

Liz turned her face back towards him, her shock at his words evident on her face.

"God Princess, don't you know that it could never only be sex between us?" He asked. "When I'm with you my world feels so complete."

Liz felt tears spring to her eyes again, but instead of being sad tears this time, they were happy tears.

"You make me feel like no one has ever before, and it's scares the crap out of me," he continued.

"Why?" She whispered.

"It scares me that you might not feel that way about me." As soon as Max said the words he felt as though the world had been lifted off his shoulders. The truth was he knew he didn't deserve someone as pure and true as Liz, but if god were to bless him with her love then he wouldn't turn her away. He would hold onto her and love her back with everything he had.

"You're certainly not what I expected," she admitted, "But you're everything I want."

"What?" Max gasped not quite believing her words.

"The minute you kissed me that first time, I was yours," she told him embarrassed.

"Then why date Kyle?" He asked.

"Because I thought you were sick of me and wanted to be with Tess again," she told him. "I thought the whole thing was just a game to you."

Max thought back to the night of their first real date and running into Tess. It was the night everything turned bad between them.

"Never," he told her. "I only went out with her again because I needed something to distract me from thinking about you going out with Valenti."

Liz giggled a little then. "We're quite a pair aren't we?"

"I think we are," Max grinned.

"What does this mean?" Liz asked with a happy smile.

Max cupped her face in his hands as he smiled back at her. His thumbs pushed her tears aside. "I'm not really experienced in being in a relationship but I want to learn," he said.

"Well I think you have the bedroom part down, and you certainly know how to take a girl on a good date. So I think you're going to do okay," Liz teased.

"Yeah?"

Liz nodded.

"Does that mean you'd possibly want to be the other person in said relationship with me?"

"Definitely," she smiled. "Because I kind of really like you, a lot"

"Just kind of?" Max teased.

"I told you a lot," she laughed.

"I kind of like you a lot too," Max whispered as he leaned up until he was only a breath away from her lips.

"Plus," he answered. "Making love to you is so much better than anything else on this world."

"Oh Max," Liz moaned quickly closing the distance and sealing their lips, and in effect sealing the deal.

They kissed passionately, their hands roaming over clothes in an effort to try to find some skin.

Frustrated Max ripped his mouth away from Liz's and stood up taking her with him.

"What are you doing?" She panted.

"Bedroom," he grunted before he fused his mouth with hers again.

Max stumbled into his bedroom. Liz's hands worked at pushing his shirt over his head and unbuttoning his jeans as he walked, and Max's clothes almost fell off as he threw Liz on the bed.

They then worked quickly to free her of her clothes before they tumbled onto Max's bed naked.

"You're so beautiful," he whispered as he caressed her cheek.

"So are you," she blushed her own hands rubbing up and down his back.

Liz rolled onto her back and pulled Max on top of her so that every part of skin was touching.

"I'm going to kiss every inch of you," he whispered.

"I like the sound of that," Liz sighed huskily.

He started with her mouth and worked his way down her jaw while his hands cupped her breasts and teased her nipples. He then covered her mounds with his mouth, licking and sucking until she was crying out.

He kissed a trail down her stomach, stopping at her navel to dip his tongue inside until he was settled between her creamy thighs. Liz opened eagerly for him and when Max leaned in and pressed his mouth against her swollen sex she arched into him wantonly.

"Oh God Max!"

"Oh Princess you taste so good," Max moaned as he licked at her.

With his mouth and fingers Max worked Liz into a frenzy before he finally took her clit between his teeth and bit down gently.

Liz cried out in bliss and came against his mouth, her juices spewing out and into Max's welcoming mouth.

After he had his feast Max crawled back up her body. "My turn," she grinned before she managed to flip Max onto his back and crawl on top.

She kissed him passionately enjoying the taste of herself on his mouth. It never ceased to amaze her the things he would do her to body and how shamefully she would beg him for it. She hoped that it was always like this between them.

Her hands caressed his stomach moaning into his mouth when she felt the strong six-pack on his abdomen. "You are the hottest man I have ever met," she whispered.

"Yeah?" Max grinned proudly.

"God yes!" She replied. "And your mine," she pointed out then.

Max cupped her ass in his hands and grinded her against his hardness. "Yes I am Princess and don't forget it."

Liz couldn't hold back anymore. "Take me Max," she told him. "Take me hard and fast."

"How?" He asked huskily flicking his tongue against her ear.

"On your knee's in the middle of my bed?" He suggested.

His plan was to make sweet torturous love to her but he would do that next and give in to Liz's pleas if that was what she wanted.

"Oh yes," Liz moaned.

She moved off Max and onto all fours, her ass stuck out and she wiggled it in front of Max's face in invitation.

"No one has ever excited me as much as you," Max told her honestly. He had been with a lot of women and none of them turned him on as much as Liz's innocence did.

"Hard and fast Princess?" He asked as he lined his cock up and teased the head against her wet lips.

"Yes Max, please," she cried.

He entered her in one powerful thrust and she cried out in bliss. Liz shamelessly bucked against him as he began a slow rhythm. Max slipped in and out of her with ease she was so wet and ready for him.

"Harder baby," she cried, "Fuck me!"

Max groaned in delight and threw his head back before he started slamming into Liz. She met every one of her thrusts with a backwards one of her own. Her screams bounced off the walls and Max swore he had never seen her so out of control before.

He pulled her up until her back was against his chest and he cupped her tits as he continued to pound into her.

"Oh god yes Princess, you're the best fuck," he whispered knowing that she loved the dirty talk. "Your pussy is so fucking tight."

"Yes Max fuck me with your big dick," she replied. "Make me yours," she added then.

Her words sent fire through Max's loins. Something primal clicked and soon Liz found herself on her stomach as Max fucked her harder and faster than he ever had before.

Liz cried out her delight at being ridden so hard. It felt like Max was going to split her in two.

"Yes Max!" Liz cried. She felt her release begin to wash over and soon her walls were contracting around Max almost painfully.

"MAX!" she cried.

Max felt her climax and with one final hard thrust he let go as well before collapsing exhausted on top of Liz.

"Baby that was amazing. You're wild," Liz said when she caught her breath.

Max laughed at her as he rolled off her. "So were you," he agreed.

"But next time, I'm going to make soft slow love to you and you better not complain," Max warned her.

Liz curled up against him and smiled. "I'll never complain unless you stop," she replied.

"I won't stop," he promised leaning in and kiss her head, "I'll never stop."

Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:12 am
by Emz80m
Thanks everyone. I'm totally flanked down with the terrible flu at the moment so there isnt much writing getting done. Here is the next part, and i have a few more up my sleeve but i will probably only updated once this week.

Anyway enjoy! :D


Nineteen

"Oh honey what are you doing here?" Nancy asked as Liz entered their family home.

The Parkers lived outside the city in a beautiful five-bedroom home. Even though Liz was an only child their houses and cars had always been much larger than they required, an obvious show of how much money her parents had.

"For Thanksgiving," Liz told her mum.

It was the day before Thanksgiving and Liz had finally left her apartment and Max to come home.

"Oh honey you didn't have to come home to travel with us, you should have just driven your own car," Nancy said then.

Liz scrunched up her nose as she tried to remember where it was they were going again.

"Where are we going?" She eventually asked.

"We're having Thanksgiving with the Evan's silly," Nancy laughed at her daughter. She should have know that Liz hadn't been listening to a word she said last time they talked.

"Oh!" Liz eyes went wide. How could she forget the traditional Thanksgiving lunch with the Evans family? They had been hell every year for her as long as she could remember.

"We thought it would be best to just stay there this year and watch the parade," Nancy smiled.

"We're spending the weekend at the Evans'?" Liz asked wide-eyed.

“ Yes," Nancy nodded eyeing her daughter concerned. She knew that Liz and Max didn't get a long very well and the last thing she wanted was to make her daughter feel uncomfortable.

"Great," Liz smiled. Inside she was jumping for joy. She had thought that she would be apart from Max for the weekend and now she finds out that she's going to be staying with him.

She wondered why Max hadn't said anything to her when he had left yesterday. As much as they had wanted to stay inside their apartment and get lost in each other and their newfound relationship they couldn't. Isabel and Alex had come home for Thanksgiving and Isabel would never forgive Max if she had ignored him, so like a good brother he had packed his bag and gone to stay with his parents and sister for the weekend.

"You forgot didn't you?" Nancy asked.

"Yeah," Liz shrugged, "But it doesn't matter I'll just follow you and Daddy back into the city."

"Well we're not leaving for a few hours so come into the living room and tell me what's been going on with you. I heard you were dating Kyle Valenti."

Liz bit back the urge to groan as she followed her mother. How was she going to explain this one?

***

"Max can you please make sure the sheets on your bed have been changed and a fresh towel is placed in there," Dianne yelled out to her son from the kitchen.

Dianne and Phillip Evans had sold their family home outside the city when their children had left for college, and bought an apartment instead. It cut down on the commute for Phillip and being in the city gave Dianne something to do now that her house was empty.

It had been hard for Isabel and Max to adjust at first but now they loved the apartment as much as their parents. The only part neither liked was that along with the house their parents had gotten rid of having a maid to do the chores.

Max groaned from his seat on the lounge and went into the kitchen.

"Didn't you already change the sheets when I arrived last night?" He asked confused.

"Yes, but you can't expect the Parkers to sleep on used sheets," Dianne replied.

"The Parkers?" Max asked.

"Yes," Dianne nodded and shot a look at the clock, "And hurry because they'll be here soon."

"They're coming here tonight?" Max asked.

"I swear you never listen to a word I say," Dianne sighed.

"I told you all last night that the Parkers were coming here for Thanksgiving this year."

"Yeah but Thanksgiving isn't until tomorrow," Max pointed out.

"They will be staying for the weekend," Dianne answered.

"Just Jeff and Nancy?" Max asked curiously. Liz hadn't mentioned anything about this to him; he only expected to see her tomorrow for lunch.

"No, I believe Elizabeth will be with them," Dianne replied. "So I want you to be nice to her."

Max smirked at his mother then, "I think you'll be surprised to find how well Liz and I get along these days."

Dianne looked at him disbelievingly. They all knew how he liked to push Liz's buttons and Dianne had already heard from Nancy that Liz hadn't been happy about having to move in with Max at the penthouse apartment.

"So why do I need to change the sheets? We have a spare room last time I checked," Max asked as he leant in and pinched a piece of cheese that his mother was chopping.

Dianne slapped his hand away when he attempted to steal another piece. "Yes, and Nancy and Jeff will be staying in there," she said. "Liz will be staying in your room."

Max's smile grew bigger, "Excellent."

"So you need to make sure the sheets are clean for her, and that she has a fresh towel. I've already put sheets on the pull out bed in the study for you."

Max's smile fell, "The study?"

"Yes, since Liz will have your room you'll be sleeping in the study," she told him.

Like hell I will, Max thought. He'd be sleeping in his comfy queen size bed with Liz. He was tempted to tell his mother that too but he didn't think that was the way Liz would like their parents to find out about them so instead he went and did as he was told.

He found the black satin sheets he had bought for the bed, that his mother hated with a passion, and placed them on the bed before picking out a large fluffy yellow towel for Liz.

"Ok, who are you and what have you done with Max?" Alex asked from the doorway to Max's room. He had seen his friend rushing around his room fussing over it being tidy and paying extra attention to the bed.

"Huh?" Max looked up.

"What's the go with the sheets and towels?" Alex asked.

"Oh, well the Parkers are staying so I had to change the sheets for Liz," Max grinned.

"Liz is staying here tonight?" Alex asked surprised.

"Yep," Max grinned. He had never been more thankful that his bedroom was on the other side of his parent's apartment than he was right now.

"Your parents don't know about the two of you yet do they?" Alex asked then.

Max shook his head, "And I don't plan on telling them either until I get some quality time with my girl."

Alex smirked at his best friend, "This is going to come back to bite you in the ass you know."

Alex was happy for Max. This was the first time he had ever seen Max so ga ga over a girl in all the years he had known her and Alex just hoped that she felt the same way about Max.

"Alex man, believe me when I tell you that the only thing that's going to bite me this weekend is Liz," he grinned.

Alex shook his head, "Hasn't your mum set up the study for you?"

"Yeah, so?"

"Well, the study is on the other side of the apartment. How are you going to explain why you're on this side instead?" Alex asked.

"I never said my plan was foolproof," Max said.

"Obviously," Alex laughed.

"Good luck man," he said then. If Liz was anything like Isabel then Alex knew Max wouldn't be getting any, anytime soon. There was no way Isabel would have sex with Alex in his parents house she thought it was totally disrespectful. Luckily for Alex she didn't have that problem in her own.

"I can't wait to meet her," Alex added then.

"You're going to love her," Max told him.

"Maybe we should all go out tonight?" Alex suggested.

"That's a great idea," Max smiled.

"We'll check with the girls and decide from there," Alex said.

"Sounds good."

***

"Jeff, Nancy," Dianne exclaimed as she opened the door, "Come in."

Dianne shared a kiss with both Jeff and Nancy as they passed her. "Elizabeth sweetie, its so nice to see you," Dianne greeted her.

"Hi Dianne," Liz smiled back. Dianne Evans had to be the only person that Liz knew that called her Elizabeth and it annoyed the crap out of her.

Dianne led her guests into the living room where Phillip, Max, Isabel, and Alex were all waiting expectantly.

"Jeff, Nancy, Elizabeth this is Isabel's boyfriend Alex Whitman," she introduced. Jeff and Nancy shook hands with Alex and when it was Liz's turn she was surprised to find him grinning at her as he took her hand.

"It's nice to finally meet you Liz," he grinned at her.

Liz blushed remembering the way she looked when they had met the day before. "You too," she replied.

"Hi Isabel," Liz smiled then.

"Hi Liz," Isabel replied stepping forward and hugging Liz quickly. The two of them had never really been close but they certainly got a long better than Liz and Max had in the past.

"Hi Max," Liz grinned then.

"HI Liz," he grinned back, "Fancy seeing you here."

“ Yeah funny that hey?" She chuckled shooting him a 'you could have told me' look.

"Hey it was new to me until this afternoon too," he answered.

"Max why don't you show Liz where she'll be sleeping," Dianne said.

"Sure," Max nodded. He picked up Liz's bag that her father had carried in for her before turning back to Liz.

"This way," he smiled leading her to the opposite side of the apartment than where her parents were going.

Once inside his room Max placed the bag down before shutting the door.

Liz looked around curiously. "So whose room is this?" She asked.

"Mine," Max grinned as he walked up behind her and wrapped his arms around her.

"I'm sleeping with you?" Liz moaned as he began to kiss her neck while his hand travelled up her body until they were cupping her breasts.

“ Uh huh," he nodded.

"So you told your parents? Because I haven't told mine yet," she said.

"No," Max replied.

"Then why?"

"Well technically I'm supposed to be sleeping on the pull out in the study," he whispered huskily. "But I think this bed is big enough for the two of us don't you think?"

Liz looked at the bed briefly before nodding. "Definitely," she agreed as she arched her head to give Max better access to her neck.

Suddenly Liz turned in Max's arms and sought out his mouth with her own. They kissed passionately allowing their hands to wander over clothes as they slowly started moving towards Max's bed.

"God I want you," Max groaned as Liz's hand brushed against his straining cock.

"Then have me," she smirked at him, her small hands moving to the hem of her shirt ready to remove it.

"Max, Elizabeth!" Dianne Evans called out.

Max groaned and Liz closed her eyes as she slumped down on the bed.

"Later?" Max suggested huskily.

Liz looked up at him and smiled. "Oh you better believe it," she told him.

Max offered Liz his hand then and helped her off the bed. Liz looked in the mirror and fixed her clothes whilst Max re-arranged himself in his jeans.

"Ready?" He asked.

"Yep," Liz nodded. "Let the torture begin," she smiled.

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Twenty

"So you and my brother?" Isabel chuckled as she sat next to Liz.

They had all decided to head to the bar around the corner from the Evans apartment for a few drinks.

Liz watched Max as he stood at the bar with Alex barely listening to what Isabel was saying.

"Yeah," she smiled.

"Who would have thought?" Isabel continued to laugh.

Firstly, Isabel couldn't believe that her brother had kept it a secret from her, let alone that it was Liz Parker he was dating. They were complete opposites and she found it interesting to watch them interact with each other. So far they had both been struggling to keep their distance from each other so that they didn't make it obvious to their parents that something was going on. Isabel suspected that if they hadn't gotten out of the apartment and away from the parentals that they would have been caught sooner or later.

"I know," Liz nodded. "Believe me it wasn't all sunshine and roses in the beginning," she told her. In fact it had only been sunshine and roses the past couple of days. Before that, at times it had been hell, but Liz didn't feel comfortable sharing that with Isabel just yet.

"It never is," Isabel pointed out remembering just how much crap her and Alex had gone through at the start of their relationship too. First it was trying to have a long distance relationship then it was arguing about college. Now though they were extremely happy and Isabel had no doubt that they would get engaged after graduation. The truth was, Isabel couldn't see herself with anyone else and would be forever thankful that her brother had bought Alex into her life.

"So is it serious?" She asked.

Liz turned at her last question and eyed Isabel before answering. "For me yeah," she told her hoping that it would be ok.

"What about Max?" Isabel asked. Isabel knew that Max had always shied away from relationships, which was another reason she was surprised about him and Liz dating.

"I think so," Liz said hesitantly.

"So are you going to tell our parents this weekend?" She wondered. Isabel didn't see the point of hiding things like that. She knew both families would be thrilled with the news so she couldn't see any reason for Max and Liz to keep it a secret.
It was a different situation though if things weren't serious.

"Probably," Liz nodded. Liz knew she wanted to tell her parents but she wasn't completely sure about Max.

Alex and Max returned to the table then and took their seats next to their girlfriends and handed them their drinks.

"What are you guys talking about?" Alex asked.

"Whether Max and Liz are going to tell our parents about their relationship this weekend," Isabel replied.

Max looked straight to Liz then. "What do you want to do?" He asked her.

"I'd like to tell them, that's if you want to," she replied.

Max smiled. "Yeah, I want to too," he told her reaching for her hand underneath the table.

Liz gave him a brilliant smile as a reward.

"Well I guess it's settled then."

The local bar was fairly quiet that night and after a few drinks the group left to head back to the apartment. Liz and Isabel both knew that Thanksgiving would be a long day as both were expected to get up early to help their mothers in the kitchen whilst the boys would join Phillip and Jeff watching football all day.

To their surprise, their parents were still up, talking in the living room when they returned. There was an empty bottle of wine of the coffee table in front of them and it was obvious they had enjoyed the quiet night.

"Hey kids," Diane smiled, "Did you have a nice night?"

"Yeah it was great," Isabel replied for them all.

"Well, we were just about to turn in for the night," Nancy told them as she stood up.

"Yeah I think we might call it a night too," Liz agreed with her mother.

"Night everyone," Nancy said as her and Jeff made their way to the spare room after kissing Liz goodnight.

"Elizabeth, do you have everything you need?" Diane asked as her and Phillip also stood up.

"Its fine Mum, I'll make sure she knows where everything is," Max spoke up glaring at Isabel and Alex when they laughed.

"Ok then, goodnight," Phillip nodded.

Alex and Isabel soon followed everyone else to bed and Max and Liz headed towards Max's room.

Once inside Max closed and locked the door before turning to Liz.

"Alone at last," he grinned.

"Yep," Liz nodded, "and now that you've got me alone Mr Evans, what do you propose to do with me?" She wondered.

"I plan on loving you all night," Max whispered as he approached her.

They undressed each other slowly before sliding under the satin sheets. Liz wanted Max badly but she could tell that he wanted to take things slow this time so she let him.

"I'm so glad you're here," he whispered against her lips as he kissed her. His hands were running up and down Liz's back pulling her closer against his body.

Liz moaned when she felt Max's hard cock press against her stomach. She felt her juices pool between her legs and prayed that Max wouldn't go too slowly.

"Me too," she agreed. "I want you so badly, Max," she added.

Max slid a hand in between her legs and rubbed her wet lips. "You do don't you," he groaned loving how wet she was for him.

Max rolled Liz onto her back and pressed himself on top of her as he started at her mouth, kissing her until she was breathless before he moved the kisses down her body. He started at her jaw and worked south until he reached her mounds. Liz's nipples were already erect and begging to be sucked, which Max eagerly did.

He took one nipple into his mouth while his hand massaged Liz's other breast.

"God Max that feels so good," Liz moaned.

"You like that?" He smirked.

"Yeah," she agreed.

Max took his time loving her breasts before moving down her body. He kissed all over her flat abdomen, paying special attention to her belly button.

"God yes, don't stop," Liz moaned knowing where he was going and already growing wetter with anticipation.

Max chuckled as he settled in between Liz's wide-open thighs. He traced her slit with his finger and grinned when Liz cried out. He teased her for a few seconds longer before he leant in and licked her.

"Yes!" Liz hissed.

"Oh baby you're so wet for me," Max moaned.

"You make me feel so good," she told him.

"I'll make you feel a whole lot better soon," he promised before he leant back in and thrust his tongue in Liz's wet pussy. He stabbed his tongue in and out like a small penis, and when he felt Liz nearing her orgasm he replaced his fingers with two long fingers and covered her clit with his mouth.

"Oh Fuck!" Liz cried shoving a hand in her mouth to stop herself from crying out any louder than she already was. It was a good thing they were on the other side of the apartment or they would have already been caught.

Max felt her pussy contract around his fingers as her juices eagerly flowed, and he licked them up happily before he climbed back up Liz's body.

"God, I love making you cum," he whispered huskily as he nipped at her throat.

"I love it when you make me cum," Liz giggled.

Liz small hand enclosed around Max's cock then and she began to stroke him gently.

"Hmm," Max moaned and shut his eyes.

"Have you ever slept with someone in here before?" Liz asked.

Max opened his eyes at her question. "Um no," he swallowed.

Liz smiled slightly then. It wouldn't have really made a difference, but it was nice to know that she was the first person to be with Max like this in his room.

"Would it have mattered if I had?" He asked then.

"No," Liz shook her head. "Its just nice to share a first with you," she told him.

She had shared many firsts with Max but this was the first one she he was sharing with her.

Max smiled, "Well how about tomorrow we tell our parents about us and that will be another first," he told her.

"How so?" Liz asked.

"You'll be the first girl I've ever brought home to my parents," he said.

Liz grinned at him before she leant in and captured his mouth. They kissed passionately and soon Max was lying on top of Liz again but this time his cock was nestled against her wet folds and Liz was bucking her hips in an effort to get it closer.

Max reached down and rubbed the tip of himself against Liz a few times before he thrust inside of her in one smooth stroke. Their eyes locked as he started a steady rhythm.

Liz knew she would never tire of the feel of him inside of her, filling her up.

Max's strokes were long and hard and Liz wrapped her legs around his waist allowing him to sink deeper inside of her.

"God Liz Yes," Max moaned.

"I'm so close," she moaned back.

"Me too," he agreed but before either of them could fall over the edge Max pulled out.

"What!" Liz gasped, "No come back."

Max shook his head and rolled onto his back. "Not yet babe," he told her, "I want you to ride me."

Liz eagerly straddled his body and wasted not time sinking down on his hard cock.
She felt more full at this angle.

She started to ride Max slowly at first but soon she was bucking against him harder and faster whilst Max fondled her breasts in his hands.
He pinched her nipples and Liz cried out and threw her head back.

"Help me," she begged and Max moved his hands to her hips to help her ride him harder.

Soon Liz's walls began to tighten around Max and he knew he was close. He reached between them and rubbed her clit a few times.

"Yes Max..." she began to cry out and Max reached up and covered her mouth with his own drowning out her cries. A few more thrusts and Max flew over the edge too, emptying himself inside of Liz.

"Oh god," Liz groaned as they collapsed against the bed.

"You're so loud, you naughty girl," Max chuckled.

"I'm sorry," Liz apologised knowing that If Max hadn't of reacted so quickly a few minutes earlier, she would have woken the house with her cries.

"Its ok you know, I love to hear you scream my name," he smirked. "Just not when your dad can hear," he added.

"Next time I'll try to be more quiet," she promised.

"Next time?" Max smirked.

Liz grinned, "I saw you had a hot tub in the bathroom."