'Some Enchanted Evening' Epilogue
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:59 pm
Well, here it is! The epilogue!!!
Thank you all for sticking with me:
Lurkers
Spray - Oh, you
Augustus Snodgrass
Lorastar
Behrluv32
Rowedog
Begonia9508
Clueless
Maya
Ms_BuffyAnneSummers
Nirvana
Dreamerlaure
Alien_Friend
Omwf
Emz80m
Heavenli24
Natalie36
Katydid
Roswell3035
Kristy
Cocogurl
Roswelldreamer4life
Beautiful86
Michelle17
BehrObsession
Martine
Alien614
Daydreamer23
Erina
Evans3
crc1228
dreamsatnight
jamy21
In a weird twist of symmetry, I'm actually posting this, the first story I've ever finished, on the same day that I'm posting the first story I ever started, a one-parter over in CC.
It's a bit strange to post this ... this story's shorter than most of my others, but I've become very fond of it. Thank you to everybody - to my readers, my beta, and to Poison_Ivy for trusting me with her challenge. You guys are great.
Some Enchanted Evening
Epilogue
Max threw a baby blanket over his shoulder and then reached down to pick up his daughter, who was crawling towards him on the hotel bed. She was dressed in a white dress with a gold-colored sash around the waist. Her shoes were white with gold bows, and her hair – what little of it there was – was tied in on top with a white and gold ribbons.
“All right, princess! It’s a big job you have today. Think you can handle it?”
She gurgled in response.
“Well, if it gets too tough for you, your cousin will be there too, and you guys can share.”
She bounced her arms up and down and gurgled again, with a big smile on her face. Max didn’t know how, but somehow whenever his daughter heard the word “cousin”, she became all happy and excited, as if she knew what it meant already.
Max couldn’t believe how much his life had changed in the last eighteen months. His work now was so much more fulfilling than business contracts had been; though his present suit was time-consuming, it gave him a sense of purpose and made him feel like he was making changes that would benefit many people for years to come. Though the lawsuit was years away from being over, he was already being approached to take on other cases, large and small. Max thought that maybe after working such a huge case, it might be nice to work on a few smaller ones for a while. It’d be trickier trying to keep several different clients happy at the same time, but it wouldn’t require as many hours.
And then there was his family, which had grown to include an old one-night stand from two Christmases ago, someone he thought he’d never see again, someone he lived with now. The day after they’d met again, Max suggested that they look for an apartment that they could share somewhere between where he was living in Half Moon Bay, and where she was living in Monterey. Liz agreed without hesitating. As if by luck, they found a three-bedroom apartment in their price range in Santa Clara. It wasn’t right on the water, but no more than a few miles away. Max handled the move entirely for both himself and Liz. By the time Nancy came for her visit, Liz’s apartment was filled with boxes, bubble wrap and packing tape.
And then, of course, there was his beautiful daughter, who hadn’t stopped amazing him since the moment he learned of her existence ...
*flashback*
“You’re having a baby …” Max forced the words out. Suddenly he felt monumentally stupid for having held on to his dreams of her for so long. It had never been particularly realistic, since he’d been on the opposite side of the country from where he’d met her, but he couldn’t stop his thoughts from turning to her every so often. And now that she was here in front of him, he’d give anything to be 3,000 miles away again.
Liz couldn’t seem to remember the English language. Not a single word. Well, besides ‘Hi’, that is. But now she’d exhausted that great arsenal of eloquence and could only continue in what she imagined had to be a dead-on impression of a goldfish, opening and closing her mouth without managing to make any sound come out.
Meanwhile, Max couldn’t seem to stop himself from doing a quick bit of math in his head. If she was about to give birth, that meant she’d been pregnant for about or around 40 weeks (having a pregnant sister had made Max much more familiar with the ins and outs of pregnancy than he’d ever wanted to be), and if he’d met her in December, then that meant … oh, God. He’d made love to this woman when she’d been carrying another man’s baby.
He had to get out of there.
“Well, um, congratulations.” Max began to step back into the hallway. “I’ll let you go, I’m sure you want to—”
“No!” Liz’s voice returned just in time to keep him from walking away. “No, please don’t leave me!”
She sounded so small, so scared. “Isn’t there someone here with you?” he asked, dreading the answer. Liz shook her head no.
He was at her side in an instant.
Liz started to cry. The events of the last hour were catching up with her; her baby, her impending C-section, seven months worth of loneliness … she just couldn’t help the tears that began to fall.
“Hey,” Max wiped away her tears with his hand. “It’s okay. It’s okay.”
“No, Max, I,” Liz tried to speak through the choking sobs. “I have to te-tell you …”
“Tell me what?”
“It-it-it’s your … your…”
Max’s eyes grew wide. “Mine?”
Her eyes gave him his answer.
“Christ, Liz, why didn’t you tell me?”
“I tried. I-I went back to th-the building…”
“I moved out,” he said.
“No, the office building … with the elevator.”
“I didn’t even work--”
“Okay, Liz,” Max was interrupted by the return of Dr. Amajoyia and a sea of green scrubs. “The nurses are going to take you to the OR, and—”
“Wait, wait!” Max stood up, instinctively trying to keep the new arrivals from taking Liz and his baby – his baby – away from him. “Where are you taking her?”
“She’s about to go have her baby.”
“She’s not having it here?”
“No, she needs to have a C-section. Who are you?”
Max just looked back down at Liz. “You’re having a C-section?”
“Max, she said … the baby can’t get out safely, and her heart rate’s bad … they have to …”
Max shuddered. His baby was in danger? Surely he hadn’t found Liz and his baby just to have the one - or heaven forbid, both - taken away again.
“I’m going with you,” he said firmly.
“Excuse me,” Dr. Amajoyia was tired of being polite. “But who are you?”
“I’m the father, and I’m going with her,” Max told her loudly.
Dr. Amajoyia turned to Liz. She’d never even mentioned a father before, but if Liz wanted him in there, he would go. Liz was going to need all the help she could get. “Liz?”
Liz nodded to the doctor and squeezed Max’s hand.
“Well, okay, let’s get you guys scrubbed in.”
Just as they wheeled Liz out the door, Alex exited from Isabel’s room. “Hey, Max, I was just coming to look for … Liz?”
“Alex?”
“What are you doing here?”
“What are you doing here?”
“Isabel’s water broke. Are you all right?”
“I’m having a C-section.”
“Yes, one that we really have to get going for,” Dr. Amajoyia interjected and signaled to the nursing team to keep moving.
“I’ll come find you after, Liz. Max, you coming?”
Liz looked up at Max. “You know him?”
“He’s engaged to my sister. Alex, I’m going with her, I’ll see you later. And tell Izzie to … keep her knees together or something!”
Liz’s eyes glazed over. “You’re Isabel’s brother?”
“Yeah, you know her?”
Liz nodded. “Alex and I grew up together in Atlanta.”
“You’re the friend who moved here?” Max couldn’t believe it – all this time, they’d been so close to each other, and they’d never even known it.
Liz’s tears started flowing again as she realized they’d been so near, and yet so far.
*end flashback*
“Having fun?” a voice said from the doorway to the bathroom. Max turned to see Liz looking radiant in a champagne-colored V-neck halter dress with thick straps and an asymmetric hem that showed off her beautiful legs and the sexiest strappy gold shoes he’d ever seen.
His daughter hit his face lightly and gave a laugh, and Max suddenly realized he hadn’t said anything since Liz had come out of the bathroom.
“That good, huh?” she said, and did a little twirl.
Max growled and moved closer to put his arm around her waist. “We don’t really have to go to this thing, do we?” he suggested in a low voice.
Liz pushed him away. “Max! It’s your sister’s wedding, and it’s the first time my dad has seen you and Aimee. I’d really like to not have to explain to either of them where we were during the ceremony.”
That did the trick – Max was terrified enough of Jeff Parker, who was proving much more difficult to charm than most parents Max had encountered in the past. He never spoke to Max if he could avoid it, and tended to refer to him as “that boy”. Even getting Liz to explain what had happened and using Alex as a character witness had not managed to get Jeff to change his opinions.
“Besides,” Liz continued as she grabbed her purse and headed towards the door, “You’re the best man, I’m the maid of honor, and Aimee’s a flower girl. It’s not as though they wouldn’t miss us.”
“Fine. But afterwards, ... you’re mine, Parker.”
Liz looked over her shoulder at him. “Looking forward to it, Evans. Now get moving.”
Max grabbed the diaper bag from the floor. “You got a room key?” he called.
“Yeah!” Liz yelled back. With that, Max carried his daughter out into the hallway and closed the door behind him, then headed towards Liz, who had already called an elevator.
~*~*~*~
Posted in 2 parts due to length
Thank you all for sticking with me:
Lurkers
Spray - Oh, you
Augustus Snodgrass
Lorastar
Behrluv32
Rowedog
Begonia9508
Clueless
Maya
Ms_BuffyAnneSummers
Nirvana
Dreamerlaure
Alien_Friend
Omwf
Emz80m
Heavenli24
Natalie36
Katydid
Roswell3035
Kristy
Cocogurl
Roswelldreamer4life
Beautiful86
Michelle17
BehrObsession
Martine
Alien614
Daydreamer23
Erina
Evans3
crc1228
dreamsatnight
jamy21
In a weird twist of symmetry, I'm actually posting this, the first story I've ever finished, on the same day that I'm posting the first story I ever started, a one-parter over in CC.
It's a bit strange to post this ... this story's shorter than most of my others, but I've become very fond of it. Thank you to everybody - to my readers, my beta, and to Poison_Ivy for trusting me with her challenge. You guys are great.
Some Enchanted Evening
Epilogue
Max threw a baby blanket over his shoulder and then reached down to pick up his daughter, who was crawling towards him on the hotel bed. She was dressed in a white dress with a gold-colored sash around the waist. Her shoes were white with gold bows, and her hair – what little of it there was – was tied in on top with a white and gold ribbons.
“All right, princess! It’s a big job you have today. Think you can handle it?”
She gurgled in response.
“Well, if it gets too tough for you, your cousin will be there too, and you guys can share.”
She bounced her arms up and down and gurgled again, with a big smile on her face. Max didn’t know how, but somehow whenever his daughter heard the word “cousin”, she became all happy and excited, as if she knew what it meant already.
Max couldn’t believe how much his life had changed in the last eighteen months. His work now was so much more fulfilling than business contracts had been; though his present suit was time-consuming, it gave him a sense of purpose and made him feel like he was making changes that would benefit many people for years to come. Though the lawsuit was years away from being over, he was already being approached to take on other cases, large and small. Max thought that maybe after working such a huge case, it might be nice to work on a few smaller ones for a while. It’d be trickier trying to keep several different clients happy at the same time, but it wouldn’t require as many hours.
And then there was his family, which had grown to include an old one-night stand from two Christmases ago, someone he thought he’d never see again, someone he lived with now. The day after they’d met again, Max suggested that they look for an apartment that they could share somewhere between where he was living in Half Moon Bay, and where she was living in Monterey. Liz agreed without hesitating. As if by luck, they found a three-bedroom apartment in their price range in Santa Clara. It wasn’t right on the water, but no more than a few miles away. Max handled the move entirely for both himself and Liz. By the time Nancy came for her visit, Liz’s apartment was filled with boxes, bubble wrap and packing tape.
And then, of course, there was his beautiful daughter, who hadn’t stopped amazing him since the moment he learned of her existence ...
*flashback*
“You’re having a baby …” Max forced the words out. Suddenly he felt monumentally stupid for having held on to his dreams of her for so long. It had never been particularly realistic, since he’d been on the opposite side of the country from where he’d met her, but he couldn’t stop his thoughts from turning to her every so often. And now that she was here in front of him, he’d give anything to be 3,000 miles away again.
Liz couldn’t seem to remember the English language. Not a single word. Well, besides ‘Hi’, that is. But now she’d exhausted that great arsenal of eloquence and could only continue in what she imagined had to be a dead-on impression of a goldfish, opening and closing her mouth without managing to make any sound come out.
Meanwhile, Max couldn’t seem to stop himself from doing a quick bit of math in his head. If she was about to give birth, that meant she’d been pregnant for about or around 40 weeks (having a pregnant sister had made Max much more familiar with the ins and outs of pregnancy than he’d ever wanted to be), and if he’d met her in December, then that meant … oh, God. He’d made love to this woman when she’d been carrying another man’s baby.
He had to get out of there.
“Well, um, congratulations.” Max began to step back into the hallway. “I’ll let you go, I’m sure you want to—”
“No!” Liz’s voice returned just in time to keep him from walking away. “No, please don’t leave me!”
She sounded so small, so scared. “Isn’t there someone here with you?” he asked, dreading the answer. Liz shook her head no.
He was at her side in an instant.
Liz started to cry. The events of the last hour were catching up with her; her baby, her impending C-section, seven months worth of loneliness … she just couldn’t help the tears that began to fall.
“Hey,” Max wiped away her tears with his hand. “It’s okay. It’s okay.”
“No, Max, I,” Liz tried to speak through the choking sobs. “I have to te-tell you …”
“Tell me what?”
“It-it-it’s your … your…”
Max’s eyes grew wide. “Mine?”
Her eyes gave him his answer.
“Christ, Liz, why didn’t you tell me?”
“I tried. I-I went back to th-the building…”
“I moved out,” he said.
“No, the office building … with the elevator.”
“I didn’t even work--”
“Okay, Liz,” Max was interrupted by the return of Dr. Amajoyia and a sea of green scrubs. “The nurses are going to take you to the OR, and—”
“Wait, wait!” Max stood up, instinctively trying to keep the new arrivals from taking Liz and his baby – his baby – away from him. “Where are you taking her?”
“She’s about to go have her baby.”
“She’s not having it here?”
“No, she needs to have a C-section. Who are you?”
Max just looked back down at Liz. “You’re having a C-section?”
“Max, she said … the baby can’t get out safely, and her heart rate’s bad … they have to …”
Max shuddered. His baby was in danger? Surely he hadn’t found Liz and his baby just to have the one - or heaven forbid, both - taken away again.
“I’m going with you,” he said firmly.
“Excuse me,” Dr. Amajoyia was tired of being polite. “But who are you?”
“I’m the father, and I’m going with her,” Max told her loudly.
Dr. Amajoyia turned to Liz. She’d never even mentioned a father before, but if Liz wanted him in there, he would go. Liz was going to need all the help she could get. “Liz?”
Liz nodded to the doctor and squeezed Max’s hand.
“Well, okay, let’s get you guys scrubbed in.”
Just as they wheeled Liz out the door, Alex exited from Isabel’s room. “Hey, Max, I was just coming to look for … Liz?”
“Alex?”
“What are you doing here?”
“What are you doing here?”
“Isabel’s water broke. Are you all right?”
“I’m having a C-section.”
“Yes, one that we really have to get going for,” Dr. Amajoyia interjected and signaled to the nursing team to keep moving.
“I’ll come find you after, Liz. Max, you coming?”
Liz looked up at Max. “You know him?”
“He’s engaged to my sister. Alex, I’m going with her, I’ll see you later. And tell Izzie to … keep her knees together or something!”
Liz’s eyes glazed over. “You’re Isabel’s brother?”
“Yeah, you know her?”
Liz nodded. “Alex and I grew up together in Atlanta.”
“You’re the friend who moved here?” Max couldn’t believe it – all this time, they’d been so close to each other, and they’d never even known it.
Liz’s tears started flowing again as she realized they’d been so near, and yet so far.
*end flashback*
“Having fun?” a voice said from the doorway to the bathroom. Max turned to see Liz looking radiant in a champagne-colored V-neck halter dress with thick straps and an asymmetric hem that showed off her beautiful legs and the sexiest strappy gold shoes he’d ever seen.
His daughter hit his face lightly and gave a laugh, and Max suddenly realized he hadn’t said anything since Liz had come out of the bathroom.
“That good, huh?” she said, and did a little twirl.
Max growled and moved closer to put his arm around her waist. “We don’t really have to go to this thing, do we?” he suggested in a low voice.
Liz pushed him away. “Max! It’s your sister’s wedding, and it’s the first time my dad has seen you and Aimee. I’d really like to not have to explain to either of them where we were during the ceremony.”
That did the trick – Max was terrified enough of Jeff Parker, who was proving much more difficult to charm than most parents Max had encountered in the past. He never spoke to Max if he could avoid it, and tended to refer to him as “that boy”. Even getting Liz to explain what had happened and using Alex as a character witness had not managed to get Jeff to change his opinions.
“Besides,” Liz continued as she grabbed her purse and headed towards the door, “You’re the best man, I’m the maid of honor, and Aimee’s a flower girl. It’s not as though they wouldn’t miss us.”
“Fine. But afterwards, ... you’re mine, Parker.”
Liz looked over her shoulder at him. “Looking forward to it, Evans. Now get moving.”
Max grabbed the diaper bag from the floor. “You got a room key?” he called.
“Yeah!” Liz yelled back. With that, Max carried his daughter out into the hallway and closed the door behind him, then headed towards Liz, who had already called an elevator.
~*~*~*~
Posted in 2 parts due to length