Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:46 am
Thank you again for the wonderful feedback. I love to hear what you think. I'm not sure if I liked how that chapter turned out but I tried several different ways to do that chapter and this one seemed to be the most believable.
Roswell3053- Hey your the one that is married to that family not me. And your niece and nephew are just fine. Tell Cowgirl thanks for the feedback.
RhondaAnn-Thanks for the reminder and as for the Kyle thing I don't think you are going to like him in this story.
lab6651-you will find out in a few chapters
Sternbetrachter-thanks and no
Timelord31-thanks this is my first fic and I am having trouble getting it to come out the way I had originally intended.
On with the story...
Chapter 11
Liz and Max are dancing to a slow song and are dancing close. Liz is grinding against Max and they are both starting to get turned on.
"Liz, baby I think if you don't stop we are going to end up getting kicked out." says Max in a husky voice.
"Uh-huh" is all she says as she takes he hands from around his back to put them around his shoulders. She hears him groan from the way that simple move made them become closer together only intensivying the feel of her grinding against him.
"Liz, honey, princess, really I mean it." he moans in her ear only turning her on even more.
"Oh, poor baby, now you know how I feel." she says as she lowers her hands to his cock to feel how hard he is becoming.
"Stop baby I'm begging you." he groans.
"What if I don't want to?" she asks.
"Okay, that's it were leaving." he says as he grabs her hand and pulls her over to the table to get her purse.
"Hey, guys were just gonna go on home now. It's getting a little hot in here." Max tells the rest of the gang as she is getting her purse and jacket.
"Yea, sure thing Maxwell." says Michael with a sly grin on his face. He saw the way the two of them were dancing and he felt slightly jealous that he didn't have that with Maria. Sure he had passion, but not the kind that turns every eye in the room.
"Bye guys. Call ya' tomorrow." says Liz. Then she turns and heads to the door before Max can say anything else.
He quickly turns and watches as he is walking behind her. "I just love the way she shakes her ass when she walks." He says to himself.
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When they get to their apartment. The heat only seems to intensify as they stumble through the door in a lip lock.
Their hands seem to be fondling each other without even thinking. They are so lost in the moment that they don't seem to notice the eyes that are staring at them through the window.
"Oh, Max baby I can't wait baby Please." whines Liz as she is unbuttoning his shirt to pull it down his arms.
"Just a few more minutes." he tells her as he picks her up and carries her to the bed. All the while he is kissing her and touching her in places that he never thought he would touch on her.
"Yes, Max right there. Just like that." She moans.
They are now ripping each other clothes off and trying to get to skin as quickly as possible. In the process Liz is pulling at his shirt and hits herself in the lip. It instantly gets fat.
"Oh, baby are you okay?"asks Max. "Do you need some ice?"
Liz looks up at him and shakes her head no, just before she kisses him with everything she has in her.
That's all it takes for them to go back to ripping clothes and kissing like there is no tomorrow.
"Max, I want you baby, now!" says Liz.
"Just one second" he tells her as he puts a condom on from his wallet.
He lifts her gently and wraps her legs around his waist as he sinks into her wet folds. This earns him a moan. He lays her down on the bed as he goes with her.
"Oh, yes Max, I love the way you love me. You are so thick and you know just what to do."she tells him.
As he is pushing in and out he starts to go deeper and deeper into the space that he gets pulled to everytime he is with her. It's his turn to see flashes this time though.
"Oh, Zan, baby your going to make me cum."
"Yes, Baby let it go. I want to feel your juices on me baby. I need to feel you cumming."
"Oh, Yes!" he hears her scream.
"That's it baby let it go! Oh Yes let it go!"he moans as she is cumming around his hard cock.
"Yeeessss! Oh Zan! Yesssss!"she releases just as he hits his climax and he thrust into her one last time deep as he lets his seed go in her.
Just as the flashes ended they begain and at first he thought he was imagining things until she looked up at him with shock in her eyes.
"What the hell was that?" he asked
"Well, what did you see?" she askes in answer to his question.
"I saw you with someone who looks so much like me we could be twins, only his name was Zan."he says.
"Did it feel like a memory and not a dream?" she asks.
"Yea, it felt like me, like I was the one you were calling Zan."
"Well, then dear I think it is safe to assume you are now having flashes. Welcome to a very exclusive club. We just happen to be the only members so far that I know anything about."says Liz barely able to keep from laughing at the look on Max's face.
"So, that is what it feels like? Wow, now I know why you say it hard to describe." he says looking at her with a new found respect. He never knew that he could feel so much about one person in such a short time.
He kisses her like he has never kissed her before and then he finishes what he started with her the first time. Only this time he concentrates so that he doesn't get "pulled" into that place again. He just wants to enjoy the feel of the woman he loves. He wants to show her how much he really feels for her.
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Isabel is waiting for Alex to open the door and she is looking at him in a new found light. She can't believe that there is someone out there that loves her for who she is and not what she is. It also helps that he is an alien too. She is snapped out of her thoughts when she hears Alex's voice.
"Penny for your thoughts?"he asks.
"Yea, I was just thinking how lucky I am to have a sweet, caring boyfriend like you."she replies.
Alex blushes slightly and leans over to kiss her gently on the forehead.
"I love you Iz, that is enough for me to want to give you the earth and our home planet if I knew where it was." he says causing her to laugh and the last part of his statement.
"That's another thing I love about you Alex. It's that you always know how to make me laugh." she tells him as she walks past him and in to the apartment.
"Well, isn't that what boyfriends are for?"he asks.
She reaches up and grabs his face in both her hands and says"I'll show you what boyfriends are for."
She then kisses him like there is no tomorrow. Just as he thinks he is going to die from lack of oxygen she pulls back.
"Well, then let me show you what girlfriends are for." he says as he quirks an eyebrow at her and nods to the other room.
"She follows his lead and they disappear into the bedroom.
Roswell3053- Hey your the one that is married to that family not me. And your niece and nephew are just fine. Tell Cowgirl thanks for the feedback.
RhondaAnn-Thanks for the reminder and as for the Kyle thing I don't think you are going to like him in this story.
lab6651-you will find out in a few chapters
Sternbetrachter-thanks and no
Timelord31-thanks this is my first fic and I am having trouble getting it to come out the way I had originally intended.
On with the story...
Chapter 11
Liz and Max are dancing to a slow song and are dancing close. Liz is grinding against Max and they are both starting to get turned on.
"Liz, baby I think if you don't stop we are going to end up getting kicked out." says Max in a husky voice.
"Uh-huh" is all she says as she takes he hands from around his back to put them around his shoulders. She hears him groan from the way that simple move made them become closer together only intensivying the feel of her grinding against him.
"Liz, honey, princess, really I mean it." he moans in her ear only turning her on even more.
"Oh, poor baby, now you know how I feel." she says as she lowers her hands to his cock to feel how hard he is becoming.
"Stop baby I'm begging you." he groans.
"What if I don't want to?" she asks.
"Okay, that's it were leaving." he says as he grabs her hand and pulls her over to the table to get her purse.
"Hey, guys were just gonna go on home now. It's getting a little hot in here." Max tells the rest of the gang as she is getting her purse and jacket.
"Yea, sure thing Maxwell." says Michael with a sly grin on his face. He saw the way the two of them were dancing and he felt slightly jealous that he didn't have that with Maria. Sure he had passion, but not the kind that turns every eye in the room.
"Bye guys. Call ya' tomorrow." says Liz. Then she turns and heads to the door before Max can say anything else.
He quickly turns and watches as he is walking behind her. "I just love the way she shakes her ass when she walks." He says to himself.
*************************************************************
When they get to their apartment. The heat only seems to intensify as they stumble through the door in a lip lock.
Their hands seem to be fondling each other without even thinking. They are so lost in the moment that they don't seem to notice the eyes that are staring at them through the window.
"Oh, Max baby I can't wait baby Please." whines Liz as she is unbuttoning his shirt to pull it down his arms.
"Just a few more minutes." he tells her as he picks her up and carries her to the bed. All the while he is kissing her and touching her in places that he never thought he would touch on her.
"Yes, Max right there. Just like that." She moans.
They are now ripping each other clothes off and trying to get to skin as quickly as possible. In the process Liz is pulling at his shirt and hits herself in the lip. It instantly gets fat.
"Oh, baby are you okay?"asks Max. "Do you need some ice?"
Liz looks up at him and shakes her head no, just before she kisses him with everything she has in her.
That's all it takes for them to go back to ripping clothes and kissing like there is no tomorrow.
"Max, I want you baby, now!" says Liz.
"Just one second" he tells her as he puts a condom on from his wallet.
He lifts her gently and wraps her legs around his waist as he sinks into her wet folds. This earns him a moan. He lays her down on the bed as he goes with her.
"Oh, yes Max, I love the way you love me. You are so thick and you know just what to do."she tells him.
As he is pushing in and out he starts to go deeper and deeper into the space that he gets pulled to everytime he is with her. It's his turn to see flashes this time though.
"Oh, Zan, baby your going to make me cum."
"Yes, Baby let it go. I want to feel your juices on me baby. I need to feel you cumming."
"Oh, Yes!" he hears her scream.
"That's it baby let it go! Oh Yes let it go!"he moans as she is cumming around his hard cock.
"Yeeessss! Oh Zan! Yesssss!"she releases just as he hits his climax and he thrust into her one last time deep as he lets his seed go in her.
Just as the flashes ended they begain and at first he thought he was imagining things until she looked up at him with shock in her eyes.
"What the hell was that?" he asked
"Well, what did you see?" she askes in answer to his question.
"I saw you with someone who looks so much like me we could be twins, only his name was Zan."he says.
"Did it feel like a memory and not a dream?" she asks.
"Yea, it felt like me, like I was the one you were calling Zan."
"Well, then dear I think it is safe to assume you are now having flashes. Welcome to a very exclusive club. We just happen to be the only members so far that I know anything about."says Liz barely able to keep from laughing at the look on Max's face.
"So, that is what it feels like? Wow, now I know why you say it hard to describe." he says looking at her with a new found respect. He never knew that he could feel so much about one person in such a short time.
He kisses her like he has never kissed her before and then he finishes what he started with her the first time. Only this time he concentrates so that he doesn't get "pulled" into that place again. He just wants to enjoy the feel of the woman he loves. He wants to show her how much he really feels for her.
*************************************************************
Isabel is waiting for Alex to open the door and she is looking at him in a new found light. She can't believe that there is someone out there that loves her for who she is and not what she is. It also helps that he is an alien too. She is snapped out of her thoughts when she hears Alex's voice.
"Penny for your thoughts?"he asks.
"Yea, I was just thinking how lucky I am to have a sweet, caring boyfriend like you."she replies.
Alex blushes slightly and leans over to kiss her gently on the forehead.
"I love you Iz, that is enough for me to want to give you the earth and our home planet if I knew where it was." he says causing her to laugh and the last part of his statement.
"That's another thing I love about you Alex. It's that you always know how to make me laugh." she tells him as she walks past him and in to the apartment.
"Well, isn't that what boyfriends are for?"he asks.
She reaches up and grabs his face in both her hands and says"I'll show you what boyfriends are for."
She then kisses him like there is no tomorrow. Just as he thinks he is going to die from lack of oxygen she pulls back.
"Well, then let me show you what girlfriends are for." he says as he quirks an eyebrow at her and nods to the other room.
"She follows his lead and they disappear into the bedroom.