Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 11:34 am
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Yeah, I know. The title for this part sucks, but Max and Liz never really say anything that interesting, at least not the dialogue I’ve given them here.
And I happen to think that this part isn’t particularly good, but you’re getting what you want, even if it is short
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Next part, I guarantee some M&M action!
Erina- They’re just in the early stages, give them time. Plus, Liz is still quite shy, it’s not like she can just turn it off.
Jessibelle47
Natz
Behralicious87- Thank you! Glad you like it.
Eve
Steph
Spray-
Natalie36- Lol, feel free
Clue
Addicted2AmberEyes
Cassie- I’m afraid you may have to make your own hat and badge. I’m too lazy you see.
Roswell4life
Alien_Friend
Aruwin
Emz80m
Aussietrueblue
Stars at Night10
Mica
Blink1lit
Katydid
Tequathisy
Elci
The week went quickly despite Max’s illness, when Liz couldn’t come over they’d talk on the phone and during one of these conversations she’d awkwardly reaffirmed their plans for the weekend. Max was feeling much better; his cold completely gone after enforced bed rest, and the thrill of a date coming up had helped him get rid of his sickness. Saturday came and Max couldn’t wipe the grin off of his face, Isabel had commented not so kindly on it, but was secretly thrilled to see her brother so happy.
As soon as her shift finished Liz raced upstairs and threw on what Maria had picked out for her last night. It was a little more revealing than what she was used to wearing but if it made Max want to kiss her more, then she was all for it.
As she made her way downstairs at six she found her Mom talking to Max this time. By reading all of her mother’s signals, she could see that her Mom was very impressed by him.
A creaky step heralded her arrival and as Max looked at her his mouth went dry and his head went blank. Liz didn’t often wear a skirt, but when she did Max couldn’t take his eyes off of her.
Her legs drove him to distraction and that top she was wearing didn’t reveal much, but suggested everything. She was so beautiful.
“Hey Max. Hey Mom. Hope you weren’t interrogating him too hard.”
Nancy faked an innocent look and replied, “Moi? Never!”
“Well that’s good to know. We should be home by twelve. I’ll see you later!” called Liz as she hurried Max out the door.
They reached their picnic destination and spent most of their time talking about their friends and family. Max spent a lot of time listening to Liz discuss Maria’s and Michael’s relationship all the while thinking about how sexy her legs were.
He used half of his attention on Liz and her topic of conversation and the other half was imagining what her legs would feel like.
Liz sat up from her position where she had been lying down but as she put her hand down to steady herself, she accidentally grabbed Max’s hand.
‘Sor-’
Liz’s apology was cut off as Max clasped her hand, pulled her towards him and kissed her.
Liz responded quickly and losing her balance, she fell slightly forward.
Grasping her head between his two hands, gently but firmly, Max steadied her and kissed her far harder than he had on their last date.
Liz’s senses went on the fritz and she grabbed one of his shoulders to stop the head whirling, dizzying feeling that was coursing through her. It felt like she was about to fall over.
Max knew he was acting like a crazy man, but he couldn’t help it. She had made him crazy. Her legs and her hair and the way her nose scrunched when she laughed. The accidental touch of her hand when she had almost fallen had driven him over the edge.
He had to kiss her, right then and there. Good manners be damned.
Max’s thoughts slowly caught up with his actions. He eased off the pressure and ended the kiss.
Panting slightly, he apologised.
“I’m sorry Liz. I’m certain I have more control than that usually.”
Liz frowned slightly in her dazed state and answered, “Don’t be sorry. I’m not sorry that it happened.”
Max smiled at her shyly with a boyish grin, “Really?”
Still dazed, Liz didn’t consider her next words too well. “Well, I’ve liked you for a long time and have been wishing that you’d kiss me like that for ages, so I don’t see why I’d object now.”
Max stared at her in disbelief and Liz gasped as she realised what she’d said.
“You’ve liked me for ages and have thought about me kissing you?!”
Liz looked at him sheepishly. “I suppose it would be too late to for me to take that back now?”
Max nodded. “You suppose correctly. Are you telling me, that you liked me and I liked you and we’ve only gotten together now?!”
“Pretty much… wait! You liked me?”
Max looked at her like she was insane. “Of course I like you! You’d have to be insane not to! Why do you think all those jocks asked you out? You’re perfect, Liz Parker, completely perfect in every way.”
Liz sat silent for a second then launched herself at Max, wrapping her arms around his neck and kissing him wildly.
Max kissed back, after a moments astonishment, with equal fervour and then breaking off the kiss gasped out, “Liz, I know this is moving really fast, but I really like you and I think we could make this work. Will you be my girlfriend?”
Liz stopped her feverous kisses that she had been dropping all over Max’s face and neck, long enough to gasp out “Yes!” before attacking him again.
Max dropped her off at her house five minutes before her due time and spent the next four minutes making out with her by her back door.
Realising the time Liz pulled herself free from Max’s embrace and giggled out a “Goodbye!”
Max watched her disappear inside her door and groaned at the speed they were travelling. He had meant to take things slowly with her but it just seemed so impossible to go slow when he was with her.
He grinned as he thought of Monday at school. He hoped things wouldn’t change, that she’d still be as affectionate towards him in public as she was by herself. Obviously he didn’t expect her to make out with him against the lockers, but hand-holding would be good.
He thought of all the guys at school who were going to be jealous of him and almost laughed for joy. He had somehow, out of all the guys that were interested in her, wormed his way into her affections. He still wasn’t sure how he did it but he wasn’t going to look a gift horse in the mouth. He was dating Liz Parker. His dream girl was his girlfriend.
Life couldn’t be better.
Yeah, I know. The title for this part sucks, but Max and Liz never really say anything that interesting, at least not the dialogue I’ve given them here.
And I happen to think that this part isn’t particularly good, but you’re getting what you want, even if it is short

Next part, I guarantee some M&M action!
Erina- They’re just in the early stages, give them time. Plus, Liz is still quite shy, it’s not like she can just turn it off.
Jessibelle47
Natz
Behralicious87- Thank you! Glad you like it.
Eve
Steph
Spray-
No you’re not. I’ve decreed it. You won’t have to wait too long for your prediction though, sometime in the near future. Hint, hint, *cough*Next Part*cough* And it's probably not as bad as you're thinking.Hey, I’m allowed mind reading powers, too!!
Natalie36- Lol, feel free
Clue
Addicted2AmberEyes
Cassie- I’m afraid you may have to make your own hat and badge. I’m too lazy you see.
Roswell4life
Alien_Friend
Aruwin
Emz80m
Aussietrueblue
Stars at Night10
Mica
Blink1lit
Katydid
Tequathisy
Elci
Part Eleven: Will You Be My Girlfriend?
The week went quickly despite Max’s illness, when Liz couldn’t come over they’d talk on the phone and during one of these conversations she’d awkwardly reaffirmed their plans for the weekend. Max was feeling much better; his cold completely gone after enforced bed rest, and the thrill of a date coming up had helped him get rid of his sickness. Saturday came and Max couldn’t wipe the grin off of his face, Isabel had commented not so kindly on it, but was secretly thrilled to see her brother so happy.
As soon as her shift finished Liz raced upstairs and threw on what Maria had picked out for her last night. It was a little more revealing than what she was used to wearing but if it made Max want to kiss her more, then she was all for it.
As she made her way downstairs at six she found her Mom talking to Max this time. By reading all of her mother’s signals, she could see that her Mom was very impressed by him.
A creaky step heralded her arrival and as Max looked at her his mouth went dry and his head went blank. Liz didn’t often wear a skirt, but when she did Max couldn’t take his eyes off of her.
Her legs drove him to distraction and that top she was wearing didn’t reveal much, but suggested everything. She was so beautiful.
“Hey Max. Hey Mom. Hope you weren’t interrogating him too hard.”
Nancy faked an innocent look and replied, “Moi? Never!”
“Well that’s good to know. We should be home by twelve. I’ll see you later!” called Liz as she hurried Max out the door.
They reached their picnic destination and spent most of their time talking about their friends and family. Max spent a lot of time listening to Liz discuss Maria’s and Michael’s relationship all the while thinking about how sexy her legs were.
He used half of his attention on Liz and her topic of conversation and the other half was imagining what her legs would feel like.
Liz sat up from her position where she had been lying down but as she put her hand down to steady herself, she accidentally grabbed Max’s hand.
‘Sor-’
Liz’s apology was cut off as Max clasped her hand, pulled her towards him and kissed her.
Liz responded quickly and losing her balance, she fell slightly forward.
Grasping her head between his two hands, gently but firmly, Max steadied her and kissed her far harder than he had on their last date.
Liz’s senses went on the fritz and she grabbed one of his shoulders to stop the head whirling, dizzying feeling that was coursing through her. It felt like she was about to fall over.
Max knew he was acting like a crazy man, but he couldn’t help it. She had made him crazy. Her legs and her hair and the way her nose scrunched when she laughed. The accidental touch of her hand when she had almost fallen had driven him over the edge.
He had to kiss her, right then and there. Good manners be damned.
Max’s thoughts slowly caught up with his actions. He eased off the pressure and ended the kiss.
Panting slightly, he apologised.
“I’m sorry Liz. I’m certain I have more control than that usually.”
Liz frowned slightly in her dazed state and answered, “Don’t be sorry. I’m not sorry that it happened.”
Max smiled at her shyly with a boyish grin, “Really?”
Still dazed, Liz didn’t consider her next words too well. “Well, I’ve liked you for a long time and have been wishing that you’d kiss me like that for ages, so I don’t see why I’d object now.”
Max stared at her in disbelief and Liz gasped as she realised what she’d said.
“You’ve liked me for ages and have thought about me kissing you?!”
Liz looked at him sheepishly. “I suppose it would be too late to for me to take that back now?”
Max nodded. “You suppose correctly. Are you telling me, that you liked me and I liked you and we’ve only gotten together now?!”
“Pretty much… wait! You liked me?”
Max looked at her like she was insane. “Of course I like you! You’d have to be insane not to! Why do you think all those jocks asked you out? You’re perfect, Liz Parker, completely perfect in every way.”
Liz sat silent for a second then launched herself at Max, wrapping her arms around his neck and kissing him wildly.
Max kissed back, after a moments astonishment, with equal fervour and then breaking off the kiss gasped out, “Liz, I know this is moving really fast, but I really like you and I think we could make this work. Will you be my girlfriend?”
Liz stopped her feverous kisses that she had been dropping all over Max’s face and neck, long enough to gasp out “Yes!” before attacking him again.
Max dropped her off at her house five minutes before her due time and spent the next four minutes making out with her by her back door.
Realising the time Liz pulled herself free from Max’s embrace and giggled out a “Goodbye!”
Max watched her disappear inside her door and groaned at the speed they were travelling. He had meant to take things slowly with her but it just seemed so impossible to go slow when he was with her.
He grinned as he thought of Monday at school. He hoped things wouldn’t change, that she’d still be as affectionate towards him in public as she was by herself. Obviously he didn’t expect her to make out with him against the lockers, but hand-holding would be good.
He thought of all the guys at school who were going to be jealous of him and almost laughed for joy. He had somehow, out of all the guys that were interested in her, wormed his way into her affections. He still wasn’t sure how he did it but he wasn’t going to look a gift horse in the mouth. He was dating Liz Parker. His dream girl was his girlfriend.
Life couldn’t be better.
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