Re: Escape (DA,XO,UC,Mature) Seq Ch 9 4/8 pg11
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:35 pm
Thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback. Who the female is won't be revealed yet, although I will say that it's not someone from Max and Jondy's old unit.
A.N. Not entirely happy with this chapter but I’ve sat on it a couple days and changed a couple things so I’m as happy I’m going to get with it. Originally Liz’s reaction at the end was going to be the complete opposite of what I put, but I couldn’t do that to Maxie or Liz.
Chapter 10
“How—“ Max couldn’t seem to speak.
“Right there with ya Max.” She kept her arm around Alec’s waist but turned so they were both facing Zack and Ben. Zack had shot himself in the head to save her and Maxie, now he was there but he certainly didn’t look normal.
Metal made up one side of his face, his exposed eye was red, and his arm was incased in shiny metal frame. In the one normal eye there was no warmth as he looked toward her and Max. It was like he didn’t recognize them.
Ben on the other hand seemed to know who they were. His gaze would switch from Max to her then back again. He couldn’t take his eyes off her and Alec for long though. Her brother noticed how close the two of them were.
“This is all fine and dandy but can we get out of here?” The female that was huffing behind the others made her presence known. Much to her displeasure she was ignored.
Maxie was the first to break ranks but she stepped cautiously toward the two brothers she thought were dead. “This is impossible. You were both dead.” She whispered.
“What?” Jondy whipped her head around and looked at Max. “Ben was dead? When? How?”
Maxie turned and faced Jondy. “He was killing people, I couldn’t let him—“ She swallowed passed the lump in her throat. Blue Lady telling Jondy was going to be difficult. Jondy and Ben were so close growing up. Just like Max and Zack were. Where one was the other wasn’t too far behind.
“So you killed him?” Couldn’t there have been another way to stop him? Why hadn’t Maxie gotten a hold of Zack? He could call her and she’d go up there and help him. Hell Max even had her phone number, she could have called her.
“He asked me too. We had gotten in a fight and I injured him. Badly enough so he couldn’t walk without further injuring himself. Lydecker was coming—he didn’t want to go back.” Tears misted in her eyes but they didn’t fall. “So I snapped his neck.”
There was nothing in Jondy’s world at that moment except her and her sister. Alec who was pressed to her side giving her all the comfort he could didn’t register in her mind.
“You just…” She looked down at the ground not wanting to say the words. “You snapped his neck.”
“He wanted me too.” Max hated the way Jondy was looking at her. “Ben didn’t want to go back there, can’t exactly blame him on that.”
“How long did you know what he was doing?”
Maxie tightened her jaw and stared at her. “What does that matter?”
“Tell me.” Neither sister rose their voices above a loud whisper, always aware that too much noise could bring hell raining down upon them.
“A couple days.” She whispered to her.
“Why didn’t you call me? You know I would have come up and helped--”
Max stepped forward her fist clenched tightly. “Don’t you think I know that? When Ben showed up in Seattle—“
“What? What was so important in my life that you couldn’t call me and let me know what was happening?” She had given her cell number to three of her siblings, Zack, Max, and Tinga. Zack said it was too dangerous to give his or her numbers out to everyone in their unit. He didn’t like that she gave her number to two of her sisters, instead of just him. Complained it would compromise them.
“Because you had just lost Alex. How could I put you through more pain?” Max tilted her head in sympathy. Seeing her confusion at her knowledge of Jondy’s friend’s death she explained it to her. “Zack called to let me know.”
Zack had come to Roswell the afternoon after Alex’s death. He found her wandering around the desert her hands bleeding dripping blood onto the dusty ground. She had run out there and took her anger out on a rock; she got the worse damage.
Jondy breathed deeply Max had been protecting her. It cracked her heart; one sibling killed her other sibling. Both she was close too; she didn’t know whether to be angry or sad, hurt or sympathetic. So she decided to do the only thing that would make them okay again.
She eased away from Alec and brought Maxie into her arms. “I’m sorry I wasn’t there to help you.”
TBC
Next Chapter: Two people come upon the blazing inferno.
A.N. Not entirely happy with this chapter but I’ve sat on it a couple days and changed a couple things so I’m as happy I’m going to get with it. Originally Liz’s reaction at the end was going to be the complete opposite of what I put, but I couldn’t do that to Maxie or Liz.
Chapter 10
“How—“ Max couldn’t seem to speak.
“Right there with ya Max.” She kept her arm around Alec’s waist but turned so they were both facing Zack and Ben. Zack had shot himself in the head to save her and Maxie, now he was there but he certainly didn’t look normal.
Metal made up one side of his face, his exposed eye was red, and his arm was incased in shiny metal frame. In the one normal eye there was no warmth as he looked toward her and Max. It was like he didn’t recognize them.
Ben on the other hand seemed to know who they were. His gaze would switch from Max to her then back again. He couldn’t take his eyes off her and Alec for long though. Her brother noticed how close the two of them were.
“This is all fine and dandy but can we get out of here?” The female that was huffing behind the others made her presence known. Much to her displeasure she was ignored.
Maxie was the first to break ranks but she stepped cautiously toward the two brothers she thought were dead. “This is impossible. You were both dead.” She whispered.
“What?” Jondy whipped her head around and looked at Max. “Ben was dead? When? How?”
Maxie turned and faced Jondy. “He was killing people, I couldn’t let him—“ She swallowed passed the lump in her throat. Blue Lady telling Jondy was going to be difficult. Jondy and Ben were so close growing up. Just like Max and Zack were. Where one was the other wasn’t too far behind.
“So you killed him?” Couldn’t there have been another way to stop him? Why hadn’t Maxie gotten a hold of Zack? He could call her and she’d go up there and help him. Hell Max even had her phone number, she could have called her.
“He asked me too. We had gotten in a fight and I injured him. Badly enough so he couldn’t walk without further injuring himself. Lydecker was coming—he didn’t want to go back.” Tears misted in her eyes but they didn’t fall. “So I snapped his neck.”
There was nothing in Jondy’s world at that moment except her and her sister. Alec who was pressed to her side giving her all the comfort he could didn’t register in her mind.
“You just…” She looked down at the ground not wanting to say the words. “You snapped his neck.”
“He wanted me too.” Max hated the way Jondy was looking at her. “Ben didn’t want to go back there, can’t exactly blame him on that.”
“How long did you know what he was doing?”
Maxie tightened her jaw and stared at her. “What does that matter?”
“Tell me.” Neither sister rose their voices above a loud whisper, always aware that too much noise could bring hell raining down upon them.
“A couple days.” She whispered to her.
“Why didn’t you call me? You know I would have come up and helped--”
Max stepped forward her fist clenched tightly. “Don’t you think I know that? When Ben showed up in Seattle—“
“What? What was so important in my life that you couldn’t call me and let me know what was happening?” She had given her cell number to three of her siblings, Zack, Max, and Tinga. Zack said it was too dangerous to give his or her numbers out to everyone in their unit. He didn’t like that she gave her number to two of her sisters, instead of just him. Complained it would compromise them.
“Because you had just lost Alex. How could I put you through more pain?” Max tilted her head in sympathy. Seeing her confusion at her knowledge of Jondy’s friend’s death she explained it to her. “Zack called to let me know.”
Zack had come to Roswell the afternoon after Alex’s death. He found her wandering around the desert her hands bleeding dripping blood onto the dusty ground. She had run out there and took her anger out on a rock; she got the worse damage.
Jondy breathed deeply Max had been protecting her. It cracked her heart; one sibling killed her other sibling. Both she was close too; she didn’t know whether to be angry or sad, hurt or sympathetic. So she decided to do the only thing that would make them okay again.
She eased away from Alec and brought Maxie into her arms. “I’m sorry I wasn’t there to help you.”
TBC
Next Chapter: Two people come upon the blazing inferno.