Re: The One Left Behind (SN,XO,UC,Mature) Ch 7 2/11 pg11
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 2:19 pm
A.N. Thank you so much for the fantastic feedback. Hmm, so many people think it’s Dean that was in the beginning of chapter 7. I will tell you that it’s none of the Winchester boys, they don’t come into the story for a while. Originally I had another paragraph in that part but it gave too much away on who it was and I want to keep it a surprise for a while longer.
Chapter 8 A
4:00 p.m.
Liz pushed the door to the hotel room open. In her arms was a bag full of alcohol. And it wasn’t any of that beginner’s alcohol, like beer, maybe a wine cooler. No, it was honest to God alcohol that could get her shit-faced in a matter of minutes.
Tequila, vodka, whiskey, and ouzo, she bought that last one on a whim. She wanted to drown and dammit she was going to do it in style.
Earlier she bought a few items of clothing, enough to last her for two days. At the store some people noticed her and pointed at her. She honestly couldn’t have cared less. Sure she looked like she had gone a couple rounds with a boxer and all right so the bags under her eyes, chapped lips, slow movements and dull stare made her seem like a zombie…or drug addict. Didn’t give them the right to stare at her and point.
Once she went back to the hotel room she changed as fast as her injuries would allow her and went back out to the liquor store across the street. While there she saw the guy at the front counter stare at her oddly and when she put the alcohol in her basket he picked up the phone.
From his quick glances back and forth between her and the door she had a good idea about who he was calling. News vans and reporters would be outside his store in no time looking for her, the girl who had no parents.
She grabbed a couple more drinks and hurried up to the counter. He tried to stall her by taking his time ringing up her items, when he asked for her ID he looked at it very closely and carefully. When he looked into her eyes though he stopped stalling.
Maybe he saw something inside her that pulled at his heartstrings. Gave him a brief moment of caring and warmth towards her. Liz rolled her eyes, he probably saw she was within a hairs breath of ripping his spleen out through his throat.
Finally after five minutes he finished ringing her up, she paid and left the store in a hurry. As she crossed the street and made her way up to her room she saw the news vans pulling up to the store. Just like she thought, she was the story of the minute and dammit they’d give her their full attention until something better came along.
Once she set the bag on the table, Liz slowly began emptying it. The bottles were lined up in a row; she grabbed the first because it was the closest to her. With angry pulls she unwrapped the plastic that kept people from tampering with it and unscrewed the top. The burning whiskey set a flame of fire down her throat, it warmed her belly; it wasn’t nearly as nice her mother’s embrace would have been but it would have to do for now.
Swallow after swallow cascaded down her throat. Eventually she didn’t feel the burning sensation but her body warmed as more and more alcohol entered her system. She walked over to the bed and sat down, only taking small sips as she made herself comfortable.
July 8; 10:00 a.m.
Bam! Bam! Bam!
Liz wrinkled her nose. “What?”
Bam! Bam! Bam!
Her mouth was dry and she was facing down on the bed. Where was she? Liz lifted her head a bit and she groaned at the pain in her brain. She turned over to look at the lamp. “Hey…stop moving.” She stammered out.
“Miss. Parker!” A loud voice came from the other side of the door but it sounded like it was right in her ear.
Not feeling the screaming of her ribs from lying on them for a couple hours she rolled from the bed. She turned and turned laughing as she went until she landed hard on the floor. “Ow.” Liz giggled crazily.
Bam! Bam!
“Open the door Miss Parker, it’s Detective Malone and Redding.”
She popped up from the floor with gusto. “Company.” The bottles next to her bed clanked together as she struggled to her feet. Standing proved a difficult task all by itself, her feet refused to cooperate, and her legs weren’t working to well either.
Once she made it to her feet she couldn’t walk without the room moving on her. “Stop moving!” She yelled to the furniture. “It’s not nice.” She scolded.
On the table she noticed she still had one full bottle left of alcohol. She felt bad about ignoring the bottle. It looked at her as if to say ‘Don’t I mean anything to you?’ Nodding to it she said, “I’ll drink you later.”
Finally after much huffing and puffing she made it the door and unchained the top of the door and twisted the deadbolt then she opened it to the two Detectives. “Guests.” She smiled.
“Miss. Parker? Are you all right?” Redding stepped forward into the hotel.
Liz stood straighter and stared at the man in front of her. “Whoa personal bubble.” She stared up at him and almost fell back but he caught her before she could topple over. “You’re really tall.” She giggled again.
Detective Malone stepped in behind her partner and saw the full alcohol bottle on the table and the three empty ones on the floor. “She’s plastered.”
“What was your first clue?” Redding carefully lifted the intoxicated young woman up in his arms and carried her to the bed.
“Elizabeth?” Malone stood next to the bed leaning over her. “Where did you get the alcohol?”
Liz stared at her oddly, where did she get it? “The Alcohol Fairy brought it.” She laughed and tried to turn over onto her side but Malone kept a hand on her shoulder. In her inebriated state it was enough to keep her from moving too much.
“Was it the Liquor Store across the street?”
“Well, where else would I—“ Oh she didn’t feel good. With little warning she turned toward the detectives and vomited on the floor right at their feet.
Malone stood up shocked and disgusted, but she quickly got over it and grabbed the wastebasket shoving it under the sick girl.
“I’ll get some towels.” Detective Redding hurried to the bathroom and grabbed two large towels and a washcloth. He wet the washcloth and hurried back out. Elizabeth was still losing the stomach full of alcohol into the trashcan.
A few minutes later she stopped and was laying face up on the bed with the wet cloth on her forehead. She felt awful. During the night she had forgotten about her problems, everything was fine and great, she found everything funny and nothing sad. Guess she knew what kind of drunk she was, a happy one.
“What time is it?” She mumbled out. Were there cotton balls in her mouth? She felt around the inside of her mouth but didn’t find cotton balls. Liz cringed at the gross taste she had though.
Squeezing her eyes shut she wished to go home. She wanted her Mommy and Daddy. They’d hold her and whisper their love into her hair. She’d cry but the tears would subside quickly with her parents comforting her. Flashes of their bodies raced through her mind.
Nausea threatened to take over her again but she managed to keep what little she had in her stomach down. The pictures in her head of the creature that took them away from her snarled at her, as if it didn’t like being at the forefront of her mind.
“It’s about ten in the morning.” Malone spoke with authority but softly.
Groaning Liz eased up. “And the day?”
“July eighth.” Redding told her. He watched as she wiped her face with the small towel then pushed her hair back.
“Jose’s coming today.” Liz whispered more to herself then anyone else. Swallowing hard she looked at the two cops standing in her room. “Why are you here? Did you find who killed my parents?”
“No. We stopped by to check on you and take you to lunch.” Malone revealed. It would be the perfect time to get some information about her. A casual meal could open many doors that Elizabeth wanted to keep closed.
Liz glared up at her. “Do I look like I want to go to lunch with anybody?” She stopped the rest of the sentence from leaving her mouth; did it look like she wanted to eat lunch with them?
“You need to eat.” Redding smiled a little at her.
Immediately Liz went on the alert, she tensed a bit. She was use to guys smiling at her, she had her fair share of admirers but being apart of the Alien Abyss tended to make one suspicious of even the most innocent of smiles.
Reluctantly she nodded. “All right.” Sniffing she scooted toward the end of the bed. “Let me take a shower.”
Having very little personal effects she grabbed her purse from the end table…how did that get there. Hadn’t she left it on the other table by the window? She must have moved it when she was drunk. Standing on shaky legs she shuffled toward the bathroom, along the way she picked up the shopping bag filled with the clothes she bought earlier. With a soft click of the door Liz was out of their view.
TBC
Next Chapter: Liz and the detectives go to lunch. But it's not smooth sailing.
Also I'll be apart of the Support Stacie Chatathon/Author Chats that's going on this weekend at Roswell Heaven. I'm going to be on at 2 p.m. (Central Time) on Saturday, May 10th. There are going to be a lot of great authors there to chat with. Hopefully I'll see some of you there.
Chapter 8 A
4:00 p.m.
Liz pushed the door to the hotel room open. In her arms was a bag full of alcohol. And it wasn’t any of that beginner’s alcohol, like beer, maybe a wine cooler. No, it was honest to God alcohol that could get her shit-faced in a matter of minutes.
Tequila, vodka, whiskey, and ouzo, she bought that last one on a whim. She wanted to drown and dammit she was going to do it in style.
Earlier she bought a few items of clothing, enough to last her for two days. At the store some people noticed her and pointed at her. She honestly couldn’t have cared less. Sure she looked like she had gone a couple rounds with a boxer and all right so the bags under her eyes, chapped lips, slow movements and dull stare made her seem like a zombie…or drug addict. Didn’t give them the right to stare at her and point.
Once she went back to the hotel room she changed as fast as her injuries would allow her and went back out to the liquor store across the street. While there she saw the guy at the front counter stare at her oddly and when she put the alcohol in her basket he picked up the phone.
From his quick glances back and forth between her and the door she had a good idea about who he was calling. News vans and reporters would be outside his store in no time looking for her, the girl who had no parents.
She grabbed a couple more drinks and hurried up to the counter. He tried to stall her by taking his time ringing up her items, when he asked for her ID he looked at it very closely and carefully. When he looked into her eyes though he stopped stalling.
Maybe he saw something inside her that pulled at his heartstrings. Gave him a brief moment of caring and warmth towards her. Liz rolled her eyes, he probably saw she was within a hairs breath of ripping his spleen out through his throat.
Finally after five minutes he finished ringing her up, she paid and left the store in a hurry. As she crossed the street and made her way up to her room she saw the news vans pulling up to the store. Just like she thought, she was the story of the minute and dammit they’d give her their full attention until something better came along.
Once she set the bag on the table, Liz slowly began emptying it. The bottles were lined up in a row; she grabbed the first because it was the closest to her. With angry pulls she unwrapped the plastic that kept people from tampering with it and unscrewed the top. The burning whiskey set a flame of fire down her throat, it warmed her belly; it wasn’t nearly as nice her mother’s embrace would have been but it would have to do for now.
Swallow after swallow cascaded down her throat. Eventually she didn’t feel the burning sensation but her body warmed as more and more alcohol entered her system. She walked over to the bed and sat down, only taking small sips as she made herself comfortable.
July 8; 10:00 a.m.
Bam! Bam! Bam!
Liz wrinkled her nose. “What?”
Bam! Bam! Bam!
Her mouth was dry and she was facing down on the bed. Where was she? Liz lifted her head a bit and she groaned at the pain in her brain. She turned over to look at the lamp. “Hey…stop moving.” She stammered out.
“Miss. Parker!” A loud voice came from the other side of the door but it sounded like it was right in her ear.
Not feeling the screaming of her ribs from lying on them for a couple hours she rolled from the bed. She turned and turned laughing as she went until she landed hard on the floor. “Ow.” Liz giggled crazily.
Bam! Bam!
“Open the door Miss Parker, it’s Detective Malone and Redding.”
She popped up from the floor with gusto. “Company.” The bottles next to her bed clanked together as she struggled to her feet. Standing proved a difficult task all by itself, her feet refused to cooperate, and her legs weren’t working to well either.
Once she made it to her feet she couldn’t walk without the room moving on her. “Stop moving!” She yelled to the furniture. “It’s not nice.” She scolded.
On the table she noticed she still had one full bottle left of alcohol. She felt bad about ignoring the bottle. It looked at her as if to say ‘Don’t I mean anything to you?’ Nodding to it she said, “I’ll drink you later.”
Finally after much huffing and puffing she made it the door and unchained the top of the door and twisted the deadbolt then she opened it to the two Detectives. “Guests.” She smiled.
“Miss. Parker? Are you all right?” Redding stepped forward into the hotel.
Liz stood straighter and stared at the man in front of her. “Whoa personal bubble.” She stared up at him and almost fell back but he caught her before she could topple over. “You’re really tall.” She giggled again.
Detective Malone stepped in behind her partner and saw the full alcohol bottle on the table and the three empty ones on the floor. “She’s plastered.”
“What was your first clue?” Redding carefully lifted the intoxicated young woman up in his arms and carried her to the bed.
“Elizabeth?” Malone stood next to the bed leaning over her. “Where did you get the alcohol?”
Liz stared at her oddly, where did she get it? “The Alcohol Fairy brought it.” She laughed and tried to turn over onto her side but Malone kept a hand on her shoulder. In her inebriated state it was enough to keep her from moving too much.
“Was it the Liquor Store across the street?”
“Well, where else would I—“ Oh she didn’t feel good. With little warning she turned toward the detectives and vomited on the floor right at their feet.
Malone stood up shocked and disgusted, but she quickly got over it and grabbed the wastebasket shoving it under the sick girl.
“I’ll get some towels.” Detective Redding hurried to the bathroom and grabbed two large towels and a washcloth. He wet the washcloth and hurried back out. Elizabeth was still losing the stomach full of alcohol into the trashcan.
A few minutes later she stopped and was laying face up on the bed with the wet cloth on her forehead. She felt awful. During the night she had forgotten about her problems, everything was fine and great, she found everything funny and nothing sad. Guess she knew what kind of drunk she was, a happy one.
“What time is it?” She mumbled out. Were there cotton balls in her mouth? She felt around the inside of her mouth but didn’t find cotton balls. Liz cringed at the gross taste she had though.
Squeezing her eyes shut she wished to go home. She wanted her Mommy and Daddy. They’d hold her and whisper their love into her hair. She’d cry but the tears would subside quickly with her parents comforting her. Flashes of their bodies raced through her mind.
Nausea threatened to take over her again but she managed to keep what little she had in her stomach down. The pictures in her head of the creature that took them away from her snarled at her, as if it didn’t like being at the forefront of her mind.
“It’s about ten in the morning.” Malone spoke with authority but softly.
Groaning Liz eased up. “And the day?”
“July eighth.” Redding told her. He watched as she wiped her face with the small towel then pushed her hair back.
“Jose’s coming today.” Liz whispered more to herself then anyone else. Swallowing hard she looked at the two cops standing in her room. “Why are you here? Did you find who killed my parents?”
“No. We stopped by to check on you and take you to lunch.” Malone revealed. It would be the perfect time to get some information about her. A casual meal could open many doors that Elizabeth wanted to keep closed.
Liz glared up at her. “Do I look like I want to go to lunch with anybody?” She stopped the rest of the sentence from leaving her mouth; did it look like she wanted to eat lunch with them?
“You need to eat.” Redding smiled a little at her.
Immediately Liz went on the alert, she tensed a bit. She was use to guys smiling at her, she had her fair share of admirers but being apart of the Alien Abyss tended to make one suspicious of even the most innocent of smiles.
Reluctantly she nodded. “All right.” Sniffing she scooted toward the end of the bed. “Let me take a shower.”
Having very little personal effects she grabbed her purse from the end table…how did that get there. Hadn’t she left it on the other table by the window? She must have moved it when she was drunk. Standing on shaky legs she shuffled toward the bathroom, along the way she picked up the shopping bag filled with the clothes she bought earlier. With a soft click of the door Liz was out of their view.
TBC
Next Chapter: Liz and the detectives go to lunch. But it's not smooth sailing.
Also I'll be apart of the Support Stacie Chatathon/Author Chats that's going on this weekend at Roswell Heaven. I'm going to be on at 2 p.m. (Central Time) on Saturday, May 10th. There are going to be a lot of great authors there to chat with. Hopefully I'll see some of you there.
