Roswell Fanatics

chapter 9

Ok so it’s been a week a Max has been avoiding me! I don’t know what it is? He just won’t look at me. A girl can get a complex, I swear one time I was at my locker and I looked up and he ducked around the corner. Everyone else has been great we go to the pizza pan after school and just talk. Schools great I mean we actually have debates and discuss literature!
But I can’t do that when I know he has been avoiding me and it gets on my nerves…..


“Hey shnuckoms Maria and I have a date tonight so…”
“ohhh hot date Michael?”
“Sort of Maria jumps on my back unless I do things with her, like dates and stuff but there is more….”
DA DA DA DUMMMM
“More what’s up?”
“Alex and Isabel are going to some concert two towns over soooo”
“soooo what we cant do anything together? Is that all Mickey sweetie honey sugar its fine darling I can be all alone on this cold empty kind off scary Friday night!!!”
“Liz I just feel bad I just didn’t want to think we were ditching you?”
“I can survive all by my lonesome! (dramatic sigh) oh is that a storm forming?”
“Shut up look you don’t have to be alone Maximus has no plans?”
ohhh my face must have dropped cause Michael is looking at me funny.
“What??”
“It’s nothing I just think Mr. Max is avoiding me!”
And nothing I look up at him and I know! Man these guys are bad at hiding there emotions! Michael here is trying to hide something.
“Michael dearest is there something you want to tell me?”
“me no nothing I have nothing to say at all oh look is that the time class I have yes me takes class around now! Bye Liz seeya after when I see ya ok bye!!!”


Ok that was a little weird special considering Michael’s urgency to get to class and the fact its lunch time! No time to think cause here comes miss gutter trash herself oh no she has some gunk on her arm oh whoops sorry that’s Kyle. We haven’t spoken since my first day! But I can see Kyle wants to say something, but all I get from them is a turned up nose and the view of there backs! Not that I’m complaining.


Ok so now I need to know what’s up with max! And speaking of tall and Tasty there he is. Looking fine in his dark jeans and olive green top that I just want to rip off and throw him down on the ground and….. I’m getting away from myself! Where was I?
Oh yeah that’s right Max and he hasn’t noticed me his head is in a book. He is engrossed in what he is reading giving my time to sneak up and give a surprise attack! Oh he looked up and I move to hide and smack straight into a door and proceed to fall flat on my back.


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Chapter 10

“Liz Liz OMG are you ok?
Yeah well this is another way to get his attention trip up and give my self a concussion! Well he is in front of me with that little worried wrinkle he gets when he is concentrating. You know the one where your eyebrows squish together! Ok I think I must have hit my head to hard.
“LIZ???”
“Yeah I’m right here you don’t have to yell!”
“Oh My god are you alright can you stand? Should I get the nurse?”
ohhh flustered Max leaning over me this is not so bad well except for the throbbing pain in my head.


“Why have you been avoiding me?”
He looks a little lost! Well why I have him here I may as well ask him!
“What???I I do you need an ice pack? Is there a bump? You hit your head on the ground pretty hard!”
“No Max dontttaugh don’t change the subject! Why have you been avoiding me?”
ok that little ‘dontttaugh’ is actually a word I spoke its ment to be ‘don’t’ but Max put his hands in my hair gently checking for a bump and my speech sort off left me for a moment.


“You are one strange girl Liz?”
And it’s obvious he isn’t going to answer me. Now I’m just pissed
“Just help me up please I think I need and ice pack for the massive bump I’m going to grow!”
“Sure Liz I ….”
“Just help me up Max!”
And I don’t want to deal with it. If he can’t respect me enough to answer my question I have no time for him. I have been screwed around with enough and if you can’t be honest no matter how cute you are, there is no room for you in my life.


He takes me to get an ice pack and the bell rings for the end of lunch. He gets up to go to class while I sit there with a wet drippy ice pack on my head! Augh what a week!
“Liz what are you doing tonight?”
“Sitting at home knitting sweaters for my cats and drinking whisky out of hand made pottery mugs!”
“Ahhh do you want to maybe come out with me instead? I thought we could have dinner or something?”
Is Max asking me out on a date???? He looks so cut with his hands in his pockets looking anywhere but at me.
“ummm I don’t know Mr. whiskers need his coat and I still have half a bottle of watered downed whisky left?”
“ha ha your are joking right cause I never know with you?”
“Sure Max sounds good when and where?”
“I thought maybe we could just take a walk and get a pizza or something? We need to talk?”
“Sounds nice, id love too happy”


And he breathes a sigh of relief, why is he relived and he just smiles and turns to walk away?
“Is this a date?”
Did I just say that? Bad mouth bad mouth what is wrong with me???? oh yeah that’s right head injury!
“Yeah I yeah seeya tonight Liz”
“Bye”
and as soon as the door closes I jump up and do a little happy dance oh yeah look at me go me woooohhhhhoooo owwwwwwwww ok to fast head spin need to sit before vomit.
Lying back I realize I have a date with Max Evans!

chapter 11

I get sent home early with my little head injury and took a nap before my big date. I can’t believe I have a date with Max Evans! Lying in bed I woke before my alarm to excited nervous. He said he wants to talk how sweet is that? or maybe ‘talking’ is a code word for making out??? Either way I’m happy!
Jumping out of bed my head doesn’t hurt that much just a huge dent in the back of my head which is nothing cause I have a date with Max Evans I have a date with Max Evans I have a date with Max Evans I have a date with Max Evans I have a date with Max Evans. That is what it sounds like in my head!


Ok ok first things first clothes!!!! Ok walking and pizza so flat shoes and casual look! He hasn’t seen me in anything but my uniforms! So I think my low rider jeans and red halter top! Casual but just enough skin to make him go gaga. Sneakers and hair down!
Putting on my killer outfit I strut in front of the mirror just checking for any flaws and well just checking! Oh yeah Max you are going to die tonight cause I am looking hot!
Ok I’m not up my self but hey I work with what I got! Confidence is the key.


“Hot date”
No god please no what did I do in my previous life to deserve this?
“You know Lizzy I’m not your real mother…”
Damn straight you little tramp
“But I am here for you and I know what boys can be like? They might try things with you……
Oh god what the hell is she crapping on about oh hell no
“But you Lizzy are a lady and don’t have to do anything your not ready for! Just say no and if boys don’t respect that they are not suitable suitors…
Oh god next she will be giving me the sex talk with the banana and condoms
“Boys are predators and want….well some expect certain things certain things we won’t get into but lizzy girl just say no I’m not ready its ok to say no…..
I swear I must have been a mass murder or a leader of some evil cult in a previous life.

DING DONG

“Well thanks for that Justine and I know Max will respect me, must dash before he thinks I’m tardy”
“Ok Liz you should put a jacket on though you don’t need to give him any ideas now would we?”
That’s the idea bitch he sees my skin and wants to jump me why else would I wear a damn halter neck at night?
“Thanks Justine good idea”


And I’m out the door before she can say anything else, screaming to my dad that I will be home late I see Max and we run to his jeep. Once we are in I look at him and smile
“Sorry Justine was getting to me”
“No problem should we head off?
“Where we going?”
“I don’t know?”
Smiling he just starts driving and I don’t care as long as I’m with him I don’t care were we go.
“You look beautiful in red”
“Thanks”
I have never blushed so hard from a compliment before! There is just something about him that makes me I don’t know? Glow.

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chapter 12

Ok im pissed my stupid alarm clock didn’t wake me up I have a killer headache from the growth on the back of my neck!!! And now I have to work!!!! My life happens to suck right now!


Ok I missed a little bit, one minute I’m in the car with Max beginning our date the next I’m waking up a cranky bitch. Let’s just say last night was???? Well surprising eventful unexpected???? Ok ok it’s like this we were having a great time talking laughing I have never laughed so much in my life!!
We just clicked, its like finding a pair of great shoes and going in trying them on and there even better on and I’m getting away from myself I’m just not good with analogies! We just fit.


Aughhhh I hate this uniform! Why does the sun have to be this bright? God people are so loud I hate people aughhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Sorry I did it again scatter brain today so where was I??? Oh yep that’s it my date with Max Evans well I guess you can say those shoes were too expensive and leave it at that!
Ewww who can eat a pizza 9.50 in the morning yuck! People augh I hate them. Did I say that Max made me glow??? Jesh what was I sniffing! I’m just glad I don’t have to deal with that this hell of a morning! Its time to deliver this pizza and I spoke to soon cause there he is in all his glory sitting at table 6.


“One pizza,anything else sir?”
Keep it formal just ignore the pretentious bastard!! No eye contact
“I would like it if you would join me?we didn’t get a chance to get pizza last night sooo”
ha cute I scoff and he seems genuinely upset…
“At least look at me Liz I’m sorry if I insulted you last night it wasn’t my intention! I really like you…”
“Oh you like me Max that’s why when we first met you were a rude bastard then you tell me your gay when your not! You want to be my friend so you ignore me I hurt myself and then you ask me out! When we go out its great we have a great time until you are ashamed to be seen with me!”
“It’s not like that Liz I I”
“What is it like what Max? because from what I remember you where leaning in to kiss me when you saw your parents and pushed us in an alley! That’s what its like!”
“Liz its not you it’s my parents if they caught me out with someone like you?
Ohh hthats it he is wearing the pizza in a minute
“Someone like me? What wrong with someone like me? I m a smart funny women I know I’m not the sexiest women but I’m no but ugly hoe!!! I never thought you would be like that….”
And we are drawing looks from everyone but I don’t care I’m so angry and my voice is loud but I don’t care.
“I actually thought you liked me we were having a good time right??? I don’t know and I don’t want to know. Max you are to confusing you know that!”
“Liz I do like you I didn’t mean it to sound superior to you I I …”
“You what max couldn’t let your parents see you slumming it? Why did you even ask me out? You can’t even answer me can you? Well I don’t have enough money to be seen with you! Your not man enough to be seen with me!”


And with that I walk away he just sits there with his head down and I just walk to the bathroom and cry. I have never felt so inadequate so ashamed in my life.
“Lizzy hon are you there? I told you didn’t I… hmmm I said that boys are only after one thing. And rich boys like that are only after one thing with middle class like you! And you know now…..”
“Shut up justine just go away”
How does she do it always get to me when I’m at my lowest. Why do I keep setting myself up with these worthless guys?




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chapter 13

I looked in the mirror gave myself a pep talk. It will be ok you don’t need him anyway you have your own life and aspirations to live up to he would just complicate them. Take a deep breath stand up straight and deal with this. More like I will cry later over a big bowl of ice cream and throw my pillows around m room in pathetic anger!


With a shake of my head I’m back on the floor, I walk passed him and all my reassurance is in a puddle on the floor.
“Her name was Sarah she broke my heart and my trust fund.”
I look back confused; ready to question him when I see the look on his face he looked beaten
“She used me basically, my parents are rich but not that well known and I guess I was
An easy target”
“How did she do that?”
“Photos she was already pregnant and trying to pass the kid off as mine, we never slept together but she had compromising photos and fake letters. We were also a well known couple, my fathers a lawyer and cant have his only son getting a senators daughter pregnant at 16 its complicated and stupid I I really don’t want to get into its part of my life I just don’t want to remember… I m not ashamed of you Liz its just my parents now don’t trust my instincts they think everyone’s out for there money. They think I can’t handle my life? I mean I screwed up big time….

I sit across from him and take a minute for all that to settle in

“I was quiet at school never talked to anyone except Brendan who was older and Ava but she moved to New York. I lost my grandma 2 years ago and I lost myself for a while. Brendan had finished school and I was basically alone so guess you can say I was vulnerable but I like to think of my self as naive.
I saw Kyle crying his eyes out one day after school he told me rumors were going around that he was having an affair with a teacher but he blatantly denied it.
I felt bad and he offered to take me out for crying on his shoulder, I was lonely I guess. He asked if I would pretend to be his girlfriend to get the others of his back, I thought I was helping a friend. We got closer and sort of started seeing each other for real. I defended him till I caught him.”


We are both silent our sob stories so depressing we cant look at each other. He shared a part of him I did the same. I get up to leave
“See ya at school Liz?”
“Yeah se ya at school”




Wow was that depressing more to come soon……

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chapter 14


So it’s Monday and I’m officially freaked to see Max? What did he mean see ya at school? Was he going back to ignoring me or what? And is he weirded out by what we have cause it sure is complicated? Are we friends? Are we more then that? Is he hesitant about what comes next? Confused on how we are now? I’m I using too many question marks???


Or is he standing by some blonde bimbo’s locker laughing his ass off! Ok now I’m pissed what the hell is that? I don’t get this guy, he needs to find a personality and stick to it cause this chop changing thing is really messing with my head…..
“Hey sugar plum how was your weekend?”
Michael and Maria welcomed distractions.
“Yeah Liz I tried calling you on Sunday?”
“Sorry Maria I was working and having spaz attacks”
“spaz attacks?? Ohh I get it! It’s a boy? I’m I right??? Yeah Aunty Maria knows all and plus you have men sux plastered on your face girl!”
“And that’s all you have to say I’m out of here! See ya babe by sugar plum”
“Come on petunia we have some boy talk to do”
“It’s complicated Maria”
“Hun it’s always complicated”


I feel a little uncomfortable with telling her about my Max issues and half way through I felt someone looking at me. Well well well if it isn’t Mr happy him self.
“Babe don’t want to freak you out but Max Evans is looking at you!”
“aughhhh Maria this is sooo confusing I don’t know where we stand?”
“Just go up and ask him, Max may be all ‘hot man on campus’ but is really shy and that Sarah chick really messed him up!”
“I just hate things that are uncertain you know I like to know where I stand”
“well right now your standing in the way of your destiny! Listen hun you and Max have both been hurt and are cautious with your hearts”
“I have been hurt Maria Kyle really screwed with me I just not sure if I can you know…:”
“open your heart? Listen babe you have to take a chance there are no gaurentees that you wont get your heart broken again ok. But if you don’t open up you might miss out on the love of your life?”


I look over to Max where he quickly averts his eyes; he is leaning against his locker and trying to look inconspicuous. I can’t help the smile that creeps on my face I look back at Maria’s smug face, I just hug her.
“Thank you Maria you hardly know me and your so sweet to me!”
“oohhhh girl stop your going to make me cry!”
We stop hugging she looks me directly in the eyes with her hands on the side of my face
“You will always regret it, I’m not trying to tell you what to do but obviously you and Maxie are perfect for each other. Just treat his heart like yours you both have had them trampled on.”
“Thanks Maria”
“Don’t be afraid Lizzy”
“I don’t know fear makes you do crazy things”
and I’m about to do something wild!



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chapter 15

Ok I was about to do something wild! Ok here is how it went I siked myself up the comfort from a new friend the shy glances he was giving me gave me the confidence just to take it!
I threw my shoulders back locked my eye on the target, go up there and blow him away with my sheer honesty and desire to be with him. I strut my stuff closer to him he was so close now and hasn’t looked up yet but I couldn’t do it….

I ended up running in to the ladies and avoiding the whole encounter. Yeah I know big ass chicken! Alright what is it about this guy??? Why can’t I just talk to him??? Why does this have to be so difficult? Stupid pathetic dumb ass me!!!! aughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh god he is just a guy! Just a guy! Why I’m I being so stupid it’s not like I’m falling for Max or anything???? No I can’t fall for him cause I have already fallen...
Great the one person who annoys the hell out of me! Confuses me with his feelings, insults me and ignores me is the guy I fall for! Yes ladies and gentleman Liz Parker is an idiot because this annoying, insulting, elusive guy is the one.
I’m in love with Max Evans…… ohhhh crap!!!!!



Ok ok ok no big deal this is probably just infatuation NOT love I repeat not love! Yeah I just want something I can’t have. It’s a psychological thing like I only want him because I can’t have him thing! Yeah that’s what it is!
Of course I could be having a mental breakdown; I am sitting in the toilet cubicles listening to the voices in my head! Yep that’s it I’m crazy I’m officially a crazy person who is in love with Max Evans!I’m never leaving this cubicle.


sorry its so short and been so long i have just had some major personal issues, new part soon and longer i promise love ya hope you still read me ChanniBella

chapter 16

I need to get to class class with the love of my life aughhhhh. Ok o just ignore him just pretend like nothing is different. This of course equals me becoming a total spaz!
“Liz are you ok?”
“Yep Max I’m ok Max everything is great Max”
“Why do you keep saying my name and you’re all jittery?”
“Oh um too much caffeine makes me go all nutso Max I mean man!”


Yeah Parker real nice save! Ok he knows something is up what to do? Just get through the next class and run for your life. Just listen to the teacher and not the fact that you can feel his large muscley arm next to your our smell him. Ok ok need to concentrate and not notice his hand on mine or look up in his soulful eyes. I jump out of my seat
“Miss. Parker is everything alright?”
“Um yes no I got to go”
And I run without looking back. What’s wrong with me? I run to the ladies where I find a crying Isabel.


“Isabel are you ok well that’s stupid obviously your not…”
“Liz I I ….. It’s Alex”
“Did he do something to you?”
“No no it’s just my parents they don’t think he is suitable and they think I should stop seeing him..”
And she cries Isabel is nothing like her image she looks and acts strong willed but she is just like any vulnerable teenage girl.
“That so unfair.. Wait haven’t you and Alex been dating awhile”
“yeah and my parents loved him but something changed they said he was after our money… and he wouldn’t do that Liz he is a good guy with money of his own and he wouldn’t do that to me he loves me….”
I’m not sure what to say to this hysterical girl crying on the floor of the ladies so I just sit next to her…
“I don’t know Alex that well but I have seen you two together and you both are in deep. No matter what you r parents say or what anyone thinks you are in charge of your own destiny… talk to Alex tell him what happened”


“LIZ”
“AHHH Maxwell Evans this is the ladies bathroom”
“Isabel? Yes I know that I just come to find Liz but what’s wrong?”
“Just the Hardings. Why did you come to find Liz?? What’s with the charging the WOMENS bathroom??”
“I well I thought Liz might be upset or angry??”
“Hey I’m sitting right here you know don’t talk about me like I’m not in the room”
“I didn’t mean oh crap Liz what the hell is going on?? One minute you hate me the next we are friends sharing and now your acting all wacky?”
“Wacky??? listen Mr. happy I’m not wacky this is the way I’ am and if you don’t like it….
“WHAT IS GOING ON IN HERE?????”
Ok I guess it doesn’t look good me yelling, Isabel on the ground with her mascara running and Max red faced in the ladies. Mrs. Jonas had a reason to be a little confused and huh I thought that the academy was going to be boring.



ok ok more soon im having trouble finishing my other story "breaking the habit" and well lets just say i have 3 possible endings and they all sux... plus my life is a real bitch at the moment i also started writing another story! i know i know but i cant help it..... so feedback please, tell me what you think and thanks for reading more soon i promise luv ya ChanniBella

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kittens- Max is an only child and Tess and Isabel are sisters sorry for the confusion....
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chapter 17

Ok so I figured Mrs. Jonas is a bitch! We all got detention after school for being out of class and inappropriate behavior. So not only do I have a mark against my record in my first few weeks at a new school! But I have to spend the afternoon with him.I can deal with this I’m strong I’ am! But if he keeps looking at me with that look, like someone kicked his puppy.


It’s just us three sitting in a room with alone, the teachers across the hall doing some after school class or club or something. He keeps staring at me he sitting to seats away from me and I have to say he looks mighty fine in his school uniform. I haven’t seen it on him yet all the boys get away with wearing there sports tracksuits all day everyday. But today we have grey pants with a white shirt and can I say yummmmmmmmm.
Of course his shirts untucked and his sleeves are rolled up his arms all James Dean like…. Not that I notice or anything! I’m looking at the corner of my eye ok so sue me..


“That’s it I can’t take it any more what the hell is going on Liz?”
“I don’t know what you mean Max I’m just sitting here?”
With an air of innocence around me looking any where but at him cause damn that boy is fine… but I can’t help it when he jumps right in front of me and looks right into my eyes.
“Damn it Liz I like you ok I LIKE YOU A LOT and I want to take you out cant you just forgive me please and except my apology for last time??? I really like you and and just let me take you out again and we can start over…
“No”
“No what I I…..”
You know before when I said he had kicked puppy face. Well now he has ‘I ran over his dog and threw its puppies out the window’ face.


“No, we can’t start over but you can take me out again?”
And he stands there all flustered his face is all red and he is looking at me like I grew another head. I’m the image of calm but inside I’m all swirly that is until he smiles at me and it’s so beautiful I melt.
“YOU GUYS WENT OUT ON A DATE?????”
Whoops forgot about Isabel.



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chapter 18

“Liz Liz you and Max? whoa that’s you know what I like it you to are yep I just like it…..”
that’s Isabel she has been babbling to me ever since Max’s little outburst. He is just sitting behind us and I can tell he has one of those pretentious little grins on his face. He’s acting like he won some big prize, its cute- ughhhh I must be in love cause I just said that! When did I become so sickly sweet that his know it all grin became cute instead of annoying? Shoot me now!
So I’m dying to get out of here Isabel is getting to me a little bit, I don’t want to talk about my very new and fragile relationship with a smirking Max behind me just waiting for more information to swell his egotistical head.
“I mean I never saw it coming you guys hardly talked and when was this so called date? When was it ohhh it was on Friday night when we all had our date night!! I’m right aren’t I??? Looks like we all had dates that night????”
I had to roll my eyes what is up with this girl she is bordering on Maria right now. I guess they all are good friends. And Mr. happy is still back there smirking his ass of at me……bastard.


“Lizzy bear been a bad girl?”
“Brendan, babe what are you doing here?”
My savior my best friend to get me away from the million questions and Mr smirky face.
“Got some news for ya kitten and a big surprise? Got plans tonight cancel them cause me and you gots places to be!”
“Bren what are you up too?”
“Nothing it’s a surprise gotta jet pick u up at 7? Liz we are takin a trip on my solider”
“Bren where are we going Bren????”
And he is out of the door and I cant chase after him because detention remember. But its all helped Isabel is silent and drooling, leather pants on that man should be illegal. I look back at Max and he is frowning, ohhh looks like someone’s eyes are turning green?.


“Ok you three detentions up go home”
finally gathering up my bag and the book I was reading Isabel is out the door shouting her goodbyes. And Max is looking at me with a sullen expression.
“So…. That Brendan guy like your friend? Is he seeing anyone I mean?”
“What Max why you interested”
what a way to get a guy worked up!
“no no I just he I’m just…?”
“Spit it out Max”
“Is he gay?”
“No he isn t ! I just said that to get to you!”
“So you’re going out with him tonight not after 10 minutes ago you said you would give us a chance?”
“Max we are friends! And how dare you insinuate that im like that!”
“ I didn’t mean It to sound like anything, I just… he was all over you at the crashdown the other night and what the fricken heck was this riding the soldier business what does that mean???”
“You just have a habit of sticking your foot in your mouth? Look Brendan is my best friend who happens to be a guy? That’s it we are close yes but that’s just the way we are I love him he is like family to me and his soldier is his bike ya idiot”


“He doesn’t have feelings for you?”
“No not at all we are just friends been that way ever since we were 10 years old!”
“Are you sure he doesn’t like you like that!”
“Max I’m positive Brendan and I are like you and Isabel or Maria just friends, the only difference is that it was only us and well Ava but the we were close are close. I done like him like that and he doesn’t feel that way for me?”
“How can anyone not feel that way towards you?”
Ok I’m stuck for words, he is just looking at me. Not searching in my eyes looking for some emotion something deeper he is just looking at me and it’s nice.
“Umm Brendan isn’t picking me up till seven want to walk me home maybe get some free fries?”
“mmmmm free fries sounds really good right now”
And we smile things have changed now it like it just clicked into place. He swings his bag over his shoulder and grabs my hand. He is holding me hand eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! That’s a little noise I make when I’m excited sorry.



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