Unbreakable - A Beautiful Lie (AU M/L ADULT) COMPLETE 5/5/17 + A/N 5/5/19

[SmileeUk]

keepsmiling7 wrote
WAIT A MINUTE.........
You're leaving us with a cliff hanger....
A grandfather appears that we thought was dead......
Liz and Max's news........
However I'm very proud of the great boyfriend Max is demonstrating.

When is the sequel going to be here????

I can't agree more
You are so to leave us here! But glad the sequel is in the making

I really mean what I said 'What am I going to do without you??!!?? We are so lucky to have you writing these wonderful stories for us'. This place is my sanctuary. It always lifts up my spirit when I read a good story I cannot thank you enough
xxx (kisses)

[Natalie36]

sequel

[SmileeUk]

Well back to the last part....

Liz was pregnant and Max knew!!??!! Come on, it is not that I am not happy for them but for teenagers it is a big step They still have so much to do and enjoy as teenagers.... Poor Liz!

Well, if I were Liz I would have asked why Max could not temporarily stop his little guys coming out & looking out for their home?!?! He was a healer after all. He did not need human's primitive way of protection, did he?????

I love this Max. He could do no wrong - so caring, so loving, so considerate and so full of strength!

Grandpa was back from the dead?? How??? Was he waken up by this 'loving' force that had killed the evil aliens??? Does it mean Liz's and Max's mums will be knocking on the door soon??? So many questions

I am missing this story already Help

[SmileeUk]

Well back to the last part....

Liz was pregnant and Max knew. How!!??!! Come on, it is not that I am not happy for them but for teenagers it is a big step They still have so much to do and enjoy as teenagers.... Poor Liz!

Well, if I were Liz I would have asked why Max could not temporarily stop his little guys coming out & looking out for their home?!?! He was a healer after all. He did not need human's primitive way of protection, did he?????

I love this Max. He could do no wrong - so caring, so loving, so considerate and so full of strength!

Grandpa was back from the dead?? How??? Was he waken up by this 'loving' force that had killed the evil aliens??? Does it mean Liz's and Max's mums will be knocking on the door soon???

Or Granspa is the mayor in disguise?? But his aura would have given his ID away So many questions ......

I am missing this story already Help

[L-J-L 76]

Well back to the last part....

Liz was pregnant and Max knew. How!!??!! Come on, it is not that I am not happy for them but for teenagers it is a big step They still have so much to do and enjoy as teenagers.... Poor Liz!

Well, if I were Liz I would have asked why Max could not temporarily stop his little guys coming out & looking out for their home?!?! He was a healer after all. He did not need human's primitive way of protection, did he?????

I love this Max. He could do no wrong - so caring, so loving, so considerate and so full of strength!

Grandpa was back from the dead?? How??? Was he waken up by this 'loving' force that had killed the evil aliens??? Does it mean Liz's and Max's mums will be knocking on the door soon???

Or Granspa is the mayor in disguise?? But his aura would have given his ID away So many questions ......

I am missing this story already Help

All I can say is I totally agree with SmileeUk. Come back with the sequel really really soon???? Hope some day you will finish your story called Snap Shot.

From:
L-J-L 76

[max and liz believer]

Hope some day you will finish your story called Snap Shot.

From:
L-J-L 76

Hi

"Snapshot" was finished aaaaages ago (about 4.5 years ago ). It can be found here.

Thank you for your note See you in the sequel

- Jo

[L-J-L 76]

I hope you have more Max and Liz stories to come. Can't wait for the sequel. Hoping it is as good as this story. And sorry I forgot about you finished the story Snap Shot. I may have to read it again. But anyway I hope you got more Max and Liz stories to come.

From:
L-J-L 76

[max and liz believer]

I hope you have more Max and Liz stories to come. Can't wait for the sequel. Hoping it is as good as this story. And sorry I forgot about you finished the story Snap Shot. I may have to read it again. But anyway I hope you got more Max and Liz stories to come.

From:
L-J-L 76

You are very sweet <3 I have tried to stop writing fanfiction many times, but I doubt I'll succeed any time soon. In other words, you haven't seen the last of me for some time

And don't worry about forgetting about "Snapshot". I know that you read a lot of stories, so it's no wonder you forget <3

[SmileeUk]

........... And sorry I forgot about you finished the story Snap Shot. I may have to read it again. ......
From:
L-J-L 76

L-J-L 76, I have been re-reading Snap Shot too and you get a lot of comforting M&L moment. To keep me sane, I am re-arranging Snap Shot in the correct timeline and re-re-read again

max and liz believer, I hope you get my hint

[max and liz believer]

........... And sorry I forgot about you finished the story Snap Shot. I may have to read it again. ......
From:
L-J-L 76

L-J-L 76, I have been re-reading Snap Shot too and you get a lot of comforting M&L moment. To keep me sane, I am re-arranging Snap Shot in the correct timeline and re-re-read again

max and liz believer, I hope you get my hint

Hint noted