Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2004 3:24 pm
Thank you all for the great feedback. I'm glad I'm back to post. So, without further ado. Here's Part 2 of Chapter 87
Chapter 87: Part 2
[Maria]
“A joke?” I wondered. “Max Evans made a joke?”
He chuckled again with a raised eyebrow. “What?” he said. “I make jokes, ask Liz.”
We quickly stopped laughing because although we were making light of a serious situation, it was still a serious situation and we couldn’t just pretend like it wasn’t a big deal. I didn’t want to admit it out loud, but Max was right, there was that possibility that Liz was hurt. I pressed down on the gas pedal a little harder once we reached the highway.
“Why don’t you try her cell again?” I suggested.
We still had about a ten minute drive. Max nodded in agreement and pulled out his cell and dialed only a few numbers since Liz was on his speed dial. He listened intently to the ring tone, which I could clearly hear. It rang only a few times—maybe only two or three—before that recording of a woman came on stating that the number Max was dialed was not within reach.
He sighed heavily and snapped his phone shut angrily. “We won’t be able to get to her if she’s still in the cave.”
“She’ll be ok,” I assured him. “If she’s in the cave, Tess can’t hurt her as long as that thing’s on. I mean, there’s no reason for her to turn it off.”
Max slowly turned to me.
“Right?” I asked.
“Can we go any faster?” Max said hurriedly.
The car was probably going to explode if I went over 100, so I accelerated while keeping my speed near the 90 mph mark. I sped through the desert with my mother’s Jetta jumping whenever we hit a small bump.
Two minutes into the desert and we could see the Chevelle in the distance. Max kept his eyes glued to the car as we drove nearer and nearer. After shaking nearly every single loose engine part out of my mom’s car, thanks to the not-so-smooth-ride, I skidded to a stop at the foot of the rock formation.
I didn’t even bother shutting the car off, Max and I just sprinted up the hill as fast as we could. As we expected, it was opened, and inside we could hear Tess speaking, but in a whisper and in pain. We didn’t doubt for a second that Tess was talking to Liz. So Max quickly climbed in first and I followed closely.
Tess was sitting on the floor and Liz was gradually lowering her arm.
“You made a big mistake, Liz,” Tess said, and slowly she lifted her arm.
“NOOOOOOOO!”
Max ran forward but a bright light in the shape and form to the same likeness of Saturn’s rings split the cave horizontally. The spirals contained in the image of the rings were all hues of blue and purple. They shot out from Tess’s hand so quickly that it only took a split second to reach me and Max who were way across the cave from her. It knocked us off our feet, and knocked Liz farther away from our reach.
Like a bomb thrown at her feet, Liz was blasted across the room. I watched in horror as she hit the wall like rag doll, dropping to floor so limply like nothing. She held her eyes closed tightly and as soon as she hit the stone wall, her expression died and her face expressed nothingness.
In the time it took Max and me to get to our feet, Tess had stared at the wall and I witnessed it crumble and collapse on Liz. My jaw dropped down in horror as a bullet of pain hit my chest.
“Max!” I cried.
Pieces of the wall from the size of peas to chairs blanketed Liz. We couldn’t see her and I couldn’t even see the mound of rocks through my tears. All there was was the brightness of the sun seeping through the hole newly created in the former wall.
Tess stood on her feet, but not for long. Max hit her with such force without making contact with her. He sent her through the hole she created just moments earlier. I didn’t care if there was a cliff on the other side of the hole or not. I was just happy that in order to get out through the hole, Tess broke through, having to make the hole big enough for herself.
Once she was done and taken care of, Max ran to Liz, throwing rocks off of the top of the mound. I couldn’t move, frozen in shock at what I had just witnessed. Max fell to his knees in front of the mountain rocks and began throwing manageable pieces to the side, trying to uncover Liz.
“MARIA!” Max shouted. He paused to look over his shoulder at me. He was already covered in sweat and tears. “Maria, help me!”
I rushed right over and joined Max by getting on my knees. We worked together to pull large pieces of debris off the mound. There was too much of it and not enough of us. Sweat began to form on my forehead almost immediately.
Max took care of the large rocks while I did what I could. He was now on his feet, delicately removing large rocks at the top of the hill. He was careful not to send everything tumbling down. Otherwise, Liz might be crushed if she wasn’t already. We tried to work as fast as we could to release the hundreds of pounds of rocks that covered her.
I grabbed a fragment of the wall, ready to hurl it over my shoulder, but when I picked it up and moved it away, Liz’s lifeless hand dropped to the floor. “Max…” I said. I stared at in horror. It was limp and just lying there on a rock. There were few cuts and bruises scattered around it.
Max quickly tossed aside the boulder he carried and brought his attention to me, then to the pale hand protruding from the mountain of rocks. Max grabbed at my arm and pulled me to my feet. “Step back,” he ordered.
“Wait, what are you going to do?”
“It’s taking us too long to move these rocks,” he started. “Liz is under there and we won’t get her out soon, but we can if I just blow these rocks off her.”
He took a few steps back himself and then raised his arm, his hand open and pointed it at the rather large pile of rocks. I patiently waited as Max breathed deeply, concentrating.
“Maria?” Max called.
I took a step forward. “Yeah?”
“Duck.”
I dropped to the floor, covering my head and protecting my vital organs as another bright flash exploded into the cave. There was a loud crackle that occurred when the light was emitted and then an explosion. Sand and rocks blew all over the cave, several hitting me. When the rain of debris subsided, I opened my eyes and found an unburied Liz lying on the ground.
Her body was strewn about the floor in an awkward position. It was a horrible sight. Crimson red blood trickled out from the corner of her mouth and poured onto the floor. Although she laid in the shadow of the remnants of wall and rock, I could see the paleness of her skin, which was covered with sot. Scrapes, cuts, and bruises decorated her face, which expressed no emotion, no life. As she lied on the cave floor, her foot was now positioned near her butt in an unusual matter. One of her arms became the thickness of her lower leg. Her body was turned to one side while her face was turned in the opposite direction. A silver stream of tears remained on her cheek.
“Is she…?” I started to cry.
Max had froze at the sight of Liz’s body, because that’s what it was, just a body. What we were staring at held no life, not our Liz’s life.
“No,” Max refused to believe. “NO!” He crouched down to Liz’s side and reached towards her head to take her pulse.
“Stop!” I commanded. “D—Don’t touch her!”
Max hooked his eyebrow and stared at me. “What?”
I stared down at Liz and observed the way her head was turned. “Don’t touch her,” I repeated. “Her…neck, it—it might be broken.”
Max snatched his hand back as if some dog snapped at it. “Oh my God,” he whispered to himself. “I—I didn’t think about that.”
He wasn’t thinking straight and it was completely understandable. In my mind, memories, thoughts, ideas, feelings, and facts were running amuck. It must’ve been the same way in Max's head, most likely, worse.
“What do we do?” I wondered, sweeping the tears away with my fingers.
Max shook his head from side to side. “I don’t know,” he said softly. He studied Liz’s body as he gradually stopped shaking his head. When he stopped, he stopped abruptly. He came to a realization. “I’ve got to heal her,” he said.
“Do it,” I insisted eagerly. There was no doubt in my mind. I wanted him to heal Liz. I wanted him to bring my sister back.
“If she’s…” Max began, gulping loudly. “If she’s…” He couldn’t say it. “I can’t heal her.”
“Just do it,” I ordered.
Max widened his stance. He spread his knees shoulders length apart and awkwardly moved his hand from Liz’s leg to her abdomen to her chest, never resting at each spot for long. “I—I don’t know where to…I—I have to put my hand on her head and neck, Maria.”
I nodded obediently, scared to approach Max in fear that I might disturb him or distract him as he carefully placed his hand under Liz’s neck and head.
“Be careful,” I warned.
I walked to the opposite side to observe Max. He closed his eyes and bit down hard. The sweat on his forehead increased. More beads of sweat formed and his face turned a reddish hue. Currently, there was no evidence of Max's healing. So we didn’t know whether or not Max was really healing Liz or trying to bring her back from…which is something he didn’t have the ability to do.
Max struggled for air, stumbling slightly forward. I cringed as he did, worried that he might hurt Liz more than she already was, but he didn’t. Liz was still safe in Max's hands.
However, the time passed and Liz hadn’t woken up. I stood and watched for a good ten minutes as Max slowly ran out of energy. He didn’t care about himself, he wasn’t going to stop until he healed Liz.
“Max…” I warned.
He didn’t stir. To him, I wasn’t there, only Liz. He had blocked me and everything out.
Then Max stumbled a little more. This time, his hand slipped and the crack was loud and clear.
TBC
Chapter 87: Part 2
[Maria]
“A joke?” I wondered. “Max Evans made a joke?”
He chuckled again with a raised eyebrow. “What?” he said. “I make jokes, ask Liz.”
We quickly stopped laughing because although we were making light of a serious situation, it was still a serious situation and we couldn’t just pretend like it wasn’t a big deal. I didn’t want to admit it out loud, but Max was right, there was that possibility that Liz was hurt. I pressed down on the gas pedal a little harder once we reached the highway.
“Why don’t you try her cell again?” I suggested.
We still had about a ten minute drive. Max nodded in agreement and pulled out his cell and dialed only a few numbers since Liz was on his speed dial. He listened intently to the ring tone, which I could clearly hear. It rang only a few times—maybe only two or three—before that recording of a woman came on stating that the number Max was dialed was not within reach.
He sighed heavily and snapped his phone shut angrily. “We won’t be able to get to her if she’s still in the cave.”
“She’ll be ok,” I assured him. “If she’s in the cave, Tess can’t hurt her as long as that thing’s on. I mean, there’s no reason for her to turn it off.”
Max slowly turned to me.
“Right?” I asked.
“Can we go any faster?” Max said hurriedly.
The car was probably going to explode if I went over 100, so I accelerated while keeping my speed near the 90 mph mark. I sped through the desert with my mother’s Jetta jumping whenever we hit a small bump.
Two minutes into the desert and we could see the Chevelle in the distance. Max kept his eyes glued to the car as we drove nearer and nearer. After shaking nearly every single loose engine part out of my mom’s car, thanks to the not-so-smooth-ride, I skidded to a stop at the foot of the rock formation.
I didn’t even bother shutting the car off, Max and I just sprinted up the hill as fast as we could. As we expected, it was opened, and inside we could hear Tess speaking, but in a whisper and in pain. We didn’t doubt for a second that Tess was talking to Liz. So Max quickly climbed in first and I followed closely.
Tess was sitting on the floor and Liz was gradually lowering her arm.
“You made a big mistake, Liz,” Tess said, and slowly she lifted her arm.
“NOOOOOOOO!”
Max ran forward but a bright light in the shape and form to the same likeness of Saturn’s rings split the cave horizontally. The spirals contained in the image of the rings were all hues of blue and purple. They shot out from Tess’s hand so quickly that it only took a split second to reach me and Max who were way across the cave from her. It knocked us off our feet, and knocked Liz farther away from our reach.
Like a bomb thrown at her feet, Liz was blasted across the room. I watched in horror as she hit the wall like rag doll, dropping to floor so limply like nothing. She held her eyes closed tightly and as soon as she hit the stone wall, her expression died and her face expressed nothingness.
In the time it took Max and me to get to our feet, Tess had stared at the wall and I witnessed it crumble and collapse on Liz. My jaw dropped down in horror as a bullet of pain hit my chest.
“Max!” I cried.
Pieces of the wall from the size of peas to chairs blanketed Liz. We couldn’t see her and I couldn’t even see the mound of rocks through my tears. All there was was the brightness of the sun seeping through the hole newly created in the former wall.
Tess stood on her feet, but not for long. Max hit her with such force without making contact with her. He sent her through the hole she created just moments earlier. I didn’t care if there was a cliff on the other side of the hole or not. I was just happy that in order to get out through the hole, Tess broke through, having to make the hole big enough for herself.
Once she was done and taken care of, Max ran to Liz, throwing rocks off of the top of the mound. I couldn’t move, frozen in shock at what I had just witnessed. Max fell to his knees in front of the mountain rocks and began throwing manageable pieces to the side, trying to uncover Liz.
“MARIA!” Max shouted. He paused to look over his shoulder at me. He was already covered in sweat and tears. “Maria, help me!”
I rushed right over and joined Max by getting on my knees. We worked together to pull large pieces of debris off the mound. There was too much of it and not enough of us. Sweat began to form on my forehead almost immediately.
Max took care of the large rocks while I did what I could. He was now on his feet, delicately removing large rocks at the top of the hill. He was careful not to send everything tumbling down. Otherwise, Liz might be crushed if she wasn’t already. We tried to work as fast as we could to release the hundreds of pounds of rocks that covered her.
I grabbed a fragment of the wall, ready to hurl it over my shoulder, but when I picked it up and moved it away, Liz’s lifeless hand dropped to the floor. “Max…” I said. I stared at in horror. It was limp and just lying there on a rock. There were few cuts and bruises scattered around it.
Max quickly tossed aside the boulder he carried and brought his attention to me, then to the pale hand protruding from the mountain of rocks. Max grabbed at my arm and pulled me to my feet. “Step back,” he ordered.
“Wait, what are you going to do?”
“It’s taking us too long to move these rocks,” he started. “Liz is under there and we won’t get her out soon, but we can if I just blow these rocks off her.”
He took a few steps back himself and then raised his arm, his hand open and pointed it at the rather large pile of rocks. I patiently waited as Max breathed deeply, concentrating.
“Maria?” Max called.
I took a step forward. “Yeah?”
“Duck.”
I dropped to the floor, covering my head and protecting my vital organs as another bright flash exploded into the cave. There was a loud crackle that occurred when the light was emitted and then an explosion. Sand and rocks blew all over the cave, several hitting me. When the rain of debris subsided, I opened my eyes and found an unburied Liz lying on the ground.
Her body was strewn about the floor in an awkward position. It was a horrible sight. Crimson red blood trickled out from the corner of her mouth and poured onto the floor. Although she laid in the shadow of the remnants of wall and rock, I could see the paleness of her skin, which was covered with sot. Scrapes, cuts, and bruises decorated her face, which expressed no emotion, no life. As she lied on the cave floor, her foot was now positioned near her butt in an unusual matter. One of her arms became the thickness of her lower leg. Her body was turned to one side while her face was turned in the opposite direction. A silver stream of tears remained on her cheek.
“Is she…?” I started to cry.
Max had froze at the sight of Liz’s body, because that’s what it was, just a body. What we were staring at held no life, not our Liz’s life.
“No,” Max refused to believe. “NO!” He crouched down to Liz’s side and reached towards her head to take her pulse.
“Stop!” I commanded. “D—Don’t touch her!”
Max hooked his eyebrow and stared at me. “What?”
I stared down at Liz and observed the way her head was turned. “Don’t touch her,” I repeated. “Her…neck, it—it might be broken.”
Max snatched his hand back as if some dog snapped at it. “Oh my God,” he whispered to himself. “I—I didn’t think about that.”
He wasn’t thinking straight and it was completely understandable. In my mind, memories, thoughts, ideas, feelings, and facts were running amuck. It must’ve been the same way in Max's head, most likely, worse.
“What do we do?” I wondered, sweeping the tears away with my fingers.
Max shook his head from side to side. “I don’t know,” he said softly. He studied Liz’s body as he gradually stopped shaking his head. When he stopped, he stopped abruptly. He came to a realization. “I’ve got to heal her,” he said.
“Do it,” I insisted eagerly. There was no doubt in my mind. I wanted him to heal Liz. I wanted him to bring my sister back.
“If she’s…” Max began, gulping loudly. “If she’s…” He couldn’t say it. “I can’t heal her.”
“Just do it,” I ordered.
Max widened his stance. He spread his knees shoulders length apart and awkwardly moved his hand from Liz’s leg to her abdomen to her chest, never resting at each spot for long. “I—I don’t know where to…I—I have to put my hand on her head and neck, Maria.”
I nodded obediently, scared to approach Max in fear that I might disturb him or distract him as he carefully placed his hand under Liz’s neck and head.
“Be careful,” I warned.
I walked to the opposite side to observe Max. He closed his eyes and bit down hard. The sweat on his forehead increased. More beads of sweat formed and his face turned a reddish hue. Currently, there was no evidence of Max's healing. So we didn’t know whether or not Max was really healing Liz or trying to bring her back from…which is something he didn’t have the ability to do.
Max struggled for air, stumbling slightly forward. I cringed as he did, worried that he might hurt Liz more than she already was, but he didn’t. Liz was still safe in Max's hands.
However, the time passed and Liz hadn’t woken up. I stood and watched for a good ten minutes as Max slowly ran out of energy. He didn’t care about himself, he wasn’t going to stop until he healed Liz.
“Max…” I warned.
He didn’t stir. To him, I wasn’t there, only Liz. He had blocked me and everything out.
Then Max stumbled a little more. This time, his hand slipped and the crack was loud and clear.
TBC