Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 6:45 am
A/N: Hi everyone, thank you so much for your feedback it was great to hear from you all! I hope you enjoy this next part
Sweet Liz
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Part 20
Max’s mouth fell open in awe as Liz descended the stairs.
He had never seen anyone or anything look so beautiful in his life. Liz looked like an angel as she walked towards him.
Liz smiled as she watched Max’s reaction. He looked so gorgeous in his black tuxedo with his short hair gelled so that it was spiky.
“Liz, you look so beautiful,” he whispered as he pinned the white lily corsage to her dress. There was a lot more that he wanted to say to her but he was speechless, and he didn’t think it would be a good idea to tell her how much he loved her in front of her mother.
“So do you,” she replied with a bright smile.
“Oh, look at you two,” Nancy Parker squealed. “Don’t you look darling? It’s almost like seeing Liz with Zan,” she said.
Max tensed beside Liz knowing exactly what Nancy was trying to say.
“No, Mum, it’s completely different,” Liz pointed out annoyed. “Max isn’t my brother.”
“I know that, but you know what I mean,” she replied as she started snapping pictures.
Over at the Evans’, Dianne was doing the same thing with Isabel and Alex, and Kyle and Serena. Zan had left earlier to pick up Tamara but he hadn’t escaped without posing for a few photos as well.
“So where are you kids all meeting for dinner?” Nancy asked.
“Chez Pierre,” Max answered for them.
“Oh that will be lovely,” Nancy smiled.
It was so nice to see Liz getting out. Nancy had been a little disappointed when Liz had told her that she was going with Max instead of some potential boyfriend. Nancy knew that Liz was lonely because all of her other friends had someone to share their time and heart with, and she wanted that for her daughter. Sometimes it worried her slightly how much time Liz spent with Max. Nancy knew that they had a lot in common and that they were best friends but it seemed unnatural to have such a close relationship with someone that was practically family.
“What about afterwards?” she asked. Nancy knew that there were usually a lot of after parties, Zan had already told her that he would be attending one, she trusted both of her children.
Liz shrugged. “I guess we’ll come home,” she looked at Max then. “Right?”
Max scratched his ear nervously not sure what to say. He had hoped they could be alone after the dance but he didn’t want to mention that in front of Nancy. “Its up to you. There are a few parties we could go to if you like?”
“Oh we should check them out. Is that ok?” Liz asked her mother.
“Of course,” she agreed. “As long as you ring and tell me where you are,” she replied.
Once Nancy had as many shots as she could, Max guided Liz out the front where the limousine was waiting. Liz gasped at the sight of the slick black limousine.
“Surprise,” Max leaned down and whispered.
“We’re going in that?” she asked.
“Yeah, all us guys pitched in. We wanted to surprise you,” he smiled.
Once in that limousine Liz discovered that Zan, Tamara, Maria, and Michael were already inside and she got even more excited.
The girls all commented on how beautiful they all thought each other looked and the guys agreed.
***
Dinner had been wonderful. At first it was a bit awkward with Tamara since she was such a good friend of Natalie’s. So far Natalie hadn’t taken the hint that Max wasn’t interested in being anything other than friends, but she was being nice to both Max and Liz.
The limousine was waiting when they finished dinner and it took them to the hall at school where the dance was already underway.
Liz and Max were last to get out of the limousine once it pulled up and Liz looked at Max in surprise when he took her hand in his own.
“Are you sure?” she asked.
“Yep,” he replied. “Besides what type of date would I be if I didn’t hold your hand?” he pointed out. Liz knew what he meant, it wasn’t like holding her hand would be a declaration to everyone that they were together, but it would be accepted.
The hall was decorated in the school colours. There were balloons and banners everywhere for the Roswell Comets who had in fact won their homecoming game the night before, led by Kyle.
“Oh wow this looks great,” Liz said.
“This is your first dance, isn’t it?” Max remembered then.
“Yes,” Liz nodded. “Thank you for making it so special,” she smiled at him.
Max wanted to kiss her so badly. Liz deserved everything in the world and he wanted to be the person to give her those things.
They found a spare table and the girls all placed their bags down on it before finding their way onto the dance floor.
Max stood and watched them from the side. Liz looked so beautiful as she danced with Serena.
“This thing isn’t going to end well, you know that right?”
Max looked at his brother confused. Zan had walked up behind him and had observed him watching Liz. He wasn’t stupid. He knew how they both felt about each other and from the looks he had observed them giving each other all night it was obvious they were over fighting their attraction.
“I know you like her, but the olds are going to flip,” he pointed out.
“We don’t care,” Max told him. They had already agreed to tell Zan and Serena the truth anyway.
“Ok, just be prepared, that’s all. It’s going to be weird for some people,” he shrugged.
Max sighed. “We know that, but it’s not weird for us. We love each other.”
Zan nodded. He should be happy that his sister had found such a great guy to take care of her. Zan and Max were like chalk and cheese, where as Zan would be trying to hit home tonight with Tamara. He knew Max would respect Liz and have her home by curfew, and he had to admit that it was a comforting thought. When Liz was with Max he didn’t have to worry about her, unlike when she was with someone like Troy.
“Well good luck,” Zan smiled. “Oh and just a warning, Natalie is on her way over.”
Max looked in the direction Zan’s eyes were following and sure enough Natalie was sauntering over to him. Max didn’t waste any time, he immediately walked off in the opposite direction not wanting to get caught by her.
Max made his way on to the dance floor and just as he reached Liz, a slow song came on.
“Will you dance with me?” he asked.
“I’d love to,” Liz smiled.
Max pulled Liz into his arms and she melted against him, fitting his body perfectly.
“I told Zan,” he whispered and was rewarded with a bright smile from Liz.
“And…?”
“He thinks it’s a bad idea but he’s going to support us,” he told her.
“Thank you,” Liz breathed out her eyes focused on Max’s lips.
“Liz,” Max whispered.
Liz shook her head. “I’m sorry,” she sighed.
“No, I’m sorry because I want to kiss you so badly too,” Max replied.
Liz smiled and buried her head against his chest.
I am color...blind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am
taffy stuck, tongue tied
Stuttered shook and uptight
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am...fine
I am covered in skin
No one gets to come in
Pull me out from inside
I am folded, and unfolded, and unfolding
I am
colorblind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am...fine
I am.... fine
I am fine
***
Natalie stood on the side of the dance floor searching for Max. She knew she had seen him standing there a few second ago with Zan.
“He’s on the dance floor.”
Natalie turned to find her best friend Tamara standing there. “Dancing with Liz,” she finished.
“Did he come with her?” she asked.
“Yeah,” Tamara nodded.
“Do you think there is something going on between them?” Natalie wondered as her eyes finally found Max and Liz slow dancing.
They were so close together you couldn’t have slid a hand between them. It was obvious from their body language that they were much more than friends and it made her so angry.
“I don’t know,” Tamara shrugged. Natalie might seem like a nice girl but her and Tamara had been best friends long enough that Tamara knew she had a mean streak, and Tamara really liked Zan and she didn’t want anything to go wrong because Natalie couldn’t accept that Max Evans wasn’t interested in her.
“I heard she was with Troy,” Tamara said.
“Well obviously that isn’t true or she would have come with him,” Natalie snapped.
“Look, Nat, you should just forget about him and move on. I don’t know if there is anything between him and Liz but its obvious he isn’t interested in you either,” she pointed out.
Natalie shook her head. “No, one way or another Max Evans is going to be mine,” she told Tamara before stalking off in the direction of the one person she knew would help her.
***
Two hours later Max and Liz had barely left the dance floor, or each other’s arms and it was obvious to most of their friends by now that there was something more than friendship going on between them, though no one commented on it.
“Let’s get out of here,” Liz whispered. She couldn’t stand being this close to Max any longer and not being able to touch and kiss him.
“You sure?” Max asked. There was still a half an hour or so of the dance to run.
“Yeah,” she nodded.
Max took Liz’s hand and with a glance over at the table his eyes met Zan and told him all he needed to know.
“Where are we going to go?” Liz asked.
“I-I hope you don’t mind but I got us a room,” he replied nervously.
Liz’s eyes widened. “A room?” she whispered.
“Yeah,” he nodded. “I thought we could spend some time alone, but if you don’t want to,” he told her hurriedly.
“No I want to,” Liz quickly assured him.
Max nodded and smiled and they walked the short distance to a nice motel where Liz knew most students went after prom.
“I already brought the jeep over,” he told her. “So we can leave whenever you like.”
Liz smiled at his thoughtfulness. When he had first mentioned the room, she was nervous and wondered what he expected but now she was excited because she knew what she wanted, but she could also tell that Max was very nervous and she wanted to help him forget about it.
Max was about to open the door before he faulted and turned back to her. “I want you to know that I don’t expect anything,” he blurted out. “I didn’t get the room to force you to do anything,” he added.
Liz smiled at him and then gently pushed him aside and entered the room.
“What happens if I want to do something?” she asks.
TBC – Colorblind by the Counting Crows

Sweet Liz
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Antarian Chick
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Maxsgurl - I'm trying but its hard sometimes because i have to rely on a beta to get it edited, but i did get a few parts written the other day so i might update early next week too.
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Ellie - no i jumped in time it will make sense why later in the story
orphyfets
sy-lyn
POM
Part 20
Max’s mouth fell open in awe as Liz descended the stairs.
He had never seen anyone or anything look so beautiful in his life. Liz looked like an angel as she walked towards him.
Liz smiled as she watched Max’s reaction. He looked so gorgeous in his black tuxedo with his short hair gelled so that it was spiky.
“Liz, you look so beautiful,” he whispered as he pinned the white lily corsage to her dress. There was a lot more that he wanted to say to her but he was speechless, and he didn’t think it would be a good idea to tell her how much he loved her in front of her mother.
“So do you,” she replied with a bright smile.
“Oh, look at you two,” Nancy Parker squealed. “Don’t you look darling? It’s almost like seeing Liz with Zan,” she said.
Max tensed beside Liz knowing exactly what Nancy was trying to say.
“No, Mum, it’s completely different,” Liz pointed out annoyed. “Max isn’t my brother.”
“I know that, but you know what I mean,” she replied as she started snapping pictures.
Over at the Evans’, Dianne was doing the same thing with Isabel and Alex, and Kyle and Serena. Zan had left earlier to pick up Tamara but he hadn’t escaped without posing for a few photos as well.
“So where are you kids all meeting for dinner?” Nancy asked.
“Chez Pierre,” Max answered for them.
“Oh that will be lovely,” Nancy smiled.
It was so nice to see Liz getting out. Nancy had been a little disappointed when Liz had told her that she was going with Max instead of some potential boyfriend. Nancy knew that Liz was lonely because all of her other friends had someone to share their time and heart with, and she wanted that for her daughter. Sometimes it worried her slightly how much time Liz spent with Max. Nancy knew that they had a lot in common and that they were best friends but it seemed unnatural to have such a close relationship with someone that was practically family.
“What about afterwards?” she asked. Nancy knew that there were usually a lot of after parties, Zan had already told her that he would be attending one, she trusted both of her children.
Liz shrugged. “I guess we’ll come home,” she looked at Max then. “Right?”
Max scratched his ear nervously not sure what to say. He had hoped they could be alone after the dance but he didn’t want to mention that in front of Nancy. “Its up to you. There are a few parties we could go to if you like?”
“Oh we should check them out. Is that ok?” Liz asked her mother.
“Of course,” she agreed. “As long as you ring and tell me where you are,” she replied.
Once Nancy had as many shots as she could, Max guided Liz out the front where the limousine was waiting. Liz gasped at the sight of the slick black limousine.
“Surprise,” Max leaned down and whispered.
“We’re going in that?” she asked.
“Yeah, all us guys pitched in. We wanted to surprise you,” he smiled.
Once in that limousine Liz discovered that Zan, Tamara, Maria, and Michael were already inside and she got even more excited.
The girls all commented on how beautiful they all thought each other looked and the guys agreed.
***
Dinner had been wonderful. At first it was a bit awkward with Tamara since she was such a good friend of Natalie’s. So far Natalie hadn’t taken the hint that Max wasn’t interested in being anything other than friends, but she was being nice to both Max and Liz.
The limousine was waiting when they finished dinner and it took them to the hall at school where the dance was already underway.
Liz and Max were last to get out of the limousine once it pulled up and Liz looked at Max in surprise when he took her hand in his own.
“Are you sure?” she asked.
“Yep,” he replied. “Besides what type of date would I be if I didn’t hold your hand?” he pointed out. Liz knew what he meant, it wasn’t like holding her hand would be a declaration to everyone that they were together, but it would be accepted.
The hall was decorated in the school colours. There were balloons and banners everywhere for the Roswell Comets who had in fact won their homecoming game the night before, led by Kyle.
“Oh wow this looks great,” Liz said.
“This is your first dance, isn’t it?” Max remembered then.
“Yes,” Liz nodded. “Thank you for making it so special,” she smiled at him.
Max wanted to kiss her so badly. Liz deserved everything in the world and he wanted to be the person to give her those things.
They found a spare table and the girls all placed their bags down on it before finding their way onto the dance floor.
Max stood and watched them from the side. Liz looked so beautiful as she danced with Serena.
“This thing isn’t going to end well, you know that right?”
Max looked at his brother confused. Zan had walked up behind him and had observed him watching Liz. He wasn’t stupid. He knew how they both felt about each other and from the looks he had observed them giving each other all night it was obvious they were over fighting their attraction.
“I know you like her, but the olds are going to flip,” he pointed out.
“We don’t care,” Max told him. They had already agreed to tell Zan and Serena the truth anyway.
“Ok, just be prepared, that’s all. It’s going to be weird for some people,” he shrugged.
Max sighed. “We know that, but it’s not weird for us. We love each other.”
Zan nodded. He should be happy that his sister had found such a great guy to take care of her. Zan and Max were like chalk and cheese, where as Zan would be trying to hit home tonight with Tamara. He knew Max would respect Liz and have her home by curfew, and he had to admit that it was a comforting thought. When Liz was with Max he didn’t have to worry about her, unlike when she was with someone like Troy.
“Well good luck,” Zan smiled. “Oh and just a warning, Natalie is on her way over.”
Max looked in the direction Zan’s eyes were following and sure enough Natalie was sauntering over to him. Max didn’t waste any time, he immediately walked off in the opposite direction not wanting to get caught by her.
Max made his way on to the dance floor and just as he reached Liz, a slow song came on.
“Will you dance with me?” he asked.
“I’d love to,” Liz smiled.
Max pulled Liz into his arms and she melted against him, fitting his body perfectly.
“I told Zan,” he whispered and was rewarded with a bright smile from Liz.
“And…?”
“He thinks it’s a bad idea but he’s going to support us,” he told her.
“Thank you,” Liz breathed out her eyes focused on Max’s lips.
“Liz,” Max whispered.
Liz shook her head. “I’m sorry,” she sighed.
“No, I’m sorry because I want to kiss you so badly too,” Max replied.
Liz smiled and buried her head against his chest.
I am color...blind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am
taffy stuck, tongue tied
Stuttered shook and uptight
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am...fine
I am covered in skin
No one gets to come in
Pull me out from inside
I am folded, and unfolded, and unfolding
I am
colorblind
Coffee black and egg white
Pull me out from inside
I am ready
I am ready
I am ready
I am...fine
I am.... fine
I am fine
***
Natalie stood on the side of the dance floor searching for Max. She knew she had seen him standing there a few second ago with Zan.
“He’s on the dance floor.”
Natalie turned to find her best friend Tamara standing there. “Dancing with Liz,” she finished.
“Did he come with her?” she asked.
“Yeah,” Tamara nodded.
“Do you think there is something going on between them?” Natalie wondered as her eyes finally found Max and Liz slow dancing.
They were so close together you couldn’t have slid a hand between them. It was obvious from their body language that they were much more than friends and it made her so angry.
“I don’t know,” Tamara shrugged. Natalie might seem like a nice girl but her and Tamara had been best friends long enough that Tamara knew she had a mean streak, and Tamara really liked Zan and she didn’t want anything to go wrong because Natalie couldn’t accept that Max Evans wasn’t interested in her.
“I heard she was with Troy,” Tamara said.
“Well obviously that isn’t true or she would have come with him,” Natalie snapped.
“Look, Nat, you should just forget about him and move on. I don’t know if there is anything between him and Liz but its obvious he isn’t interested in you either,” she pointed out.
Natalie shook her head. “No, one way or another Max Evans is going to be mine,” she told Tamara before stalking off in the direction of the one person she knew would help her.
***
Two hours later Max and Liz had barely left the dance floor, or each other’s arms and it was obvious to most of their friends by now that there was something more than friendship going on between them, though no one commented on it.
“Let’s get out of here,” Liz whispered. She couldn’t stand being this close to Max any longer and not being able to touch and kiss him.
“You sure?” Max asked. There was still a half an hour or so of the dance to run.
“Yeah,” she nodded.
Max took Liz’s hand and with a glance over at the table his eyes met Zan and told him all he needed to know.
“Where are we going to go?” Liz asked.
“I-I hope you don’t mind but I got us a room,” he replied nervously.
Liz’s eyes widened. “A room?” she whispered.
“Yeah,” he nodded. “I thought we could spend some time alone, but if you don’t want to,” he told her hurriedly.
“No I want to,” Liz quickly assured him.
Max nodded and smiled and they walked the short distance to a nice motel where Liz knew most students went after prom.
“I already brought the jeep over,” he told her. “So we can leave whenever you like.”
Liz smiled at his thoughtfulness. When he had first mentioned the room, she was nervous and wondered what he expected but now she was excited because she knew what she wanted, but she could also tell that Max was very nervous and she wanted to help him forget about it.
Max was about to open the door before he faulted and turned back to her. “I want you to know that I don’t expect anything,” he blurted out. “I didn’t get the room to force you to do anything,” he added.
Liz smiled at him and then gently pushed him aside and entered the room.
“What happens if I want to do something?” she asks.
TBC – Colorblind by the Counting Crows