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Hey everyone,

Thankyou for all the replies and i hope you all like the next chapter and keep posting feedback!

:P ...cheka... :P









CHAPTER 22


LIZ P.O.V

“Hey Lizzy Poo” Isabel says as she walks over to me.

“Hey Izzy” I say excitedly.

We are on our way to P.E. prac…

“Why, aren’t you all smiles today” she states with a chuckle.

After that day in Max’s office, it seems as though my life has been turned up-side-down.

Max called later that night and we talked for hours about school and what I wanted to be when I leave here.

We talked about our Ex’s and our pains…

…Such as Tess…

RING RING

“Hello” I say into the phone praying it is him.

“Hey Parker” he says and I giggle.

“Hey yourself Evans”

“So I thought we could talk… you know one –on –one” he says with a chuckle.

“Why not” I say as I lay down and my bed and sigh.

“So, I umm…” he says unsure.

“You what?”

“Well, I noticed that you’ve been ignoring me” he says and I blink confuse.

“Ignoring you?” I ask.

“I haven’t seen you since our little meeting in your office today” I state honestly.

“Before that” he says and I sigh, remembering why.

“Yeah” I say.

“Why?” he asks.

“Well, I guess I was upset” I say not really wanting to talk about it, as I turn on my side and face the wall.

“Upset?”

“Yeah” I state as I continue, knowing that he has absolutely no idea what I am talking about.

“That girl, in P.E. the other day when we had a theory” I say and I hear him sigh in understanding.

“Tess?” he asks and I nod even though he can’t see me.

“Yes”

“You were upset coz she umm, acted …ahhh” he asks not really finding the words.

“like a big, fat, slut?” I ask and he chuckles.

“Yes, she acted like a slut” he agreed.

“Well, why would that upset you?” he asks and I sigh, knowing that I am about to tell him exactly how I feel about him.

“Well, she’s my cousin” I say and I hear his shock over the phone.

“She’s your cousin?”

“Yes”

“Then your lucky that bad looks don’t run in the family” he says and I chuckle.

“They do” I say and smile.

“I’m just lucky” I add and hear him laugh.

“So go on she’s your cousin and?” he says and I continue where I left off.

“And seeing how she acted all sluty, it just pissed me off…and I got jealous” I say and I can just picture him with a smile.

“Jealous?”

“Yes”

“Why would you be jealous?”

“Coz I like you” I admit and I can just picture that smile widen.

“Well Parker, I like you too” he admits and I giggle.

“You do?”

“Yes I do” he assures me and I sigh in content.

“You don’t know how hard it is to keep my hands off of you” he says and I smile.

“You don’t know how hard it is not to drool over you” I admit and he chuckles.

“Liz, what are we going to do?” he asks and I sigh.

“I dunno”

“I wanna be with you, I do…but we could both get in so much trouble … that’s why I think we should just give it a break for the rest of the semester” he states and I feel my heart break at that very moment.

“But I don’t want to” I say.

“Neither do I, but do you really want to risk it all?”

“I’d do anything just to be with you” I say before can stop the words from leaving my mouth.

“Parker, when did you become so cheesy?”

…If only I could tell him … ‘the day I fell in love with you’…

“Listen, I’ll think about it” he says and I sigh.

“Ok”

“Hey, don’t give up…we might be able to fool around till the end of semester” he says playfully and I smile slightly.

“I won’t give up”…

“So why are we all happy?” Isabel asks as she follows me.

“Coz, I’m in love with your brother” I think to my self…

…Aloud

Ooppps…

“You’re what?” she asks shock.

“I admit it” I say as I turn to her confident.

“I like him Isabel, I like him a lot…and I pray that he likes me too” I say as I turn the corner and enter the P.E. change rooms…

Knowing that he feels what I feel, but praying for more.

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

I hope you all like the new chapter and keep posting feedback! ... also i'd like to say thankyou to:


nessy - Hey, i'm thrilled you liked the chapter ... P.S. long time no see! :D
roswell3053 - i'm glad you liked the update and Isabel will help ... very soon.
veronica - LoL, you and your kissing ronnie!
candycane14 - Hmmm ... there is one Tess and she is Liz's evil cousin, i hope the story straightens its self out and is understandable :)
FrenchDreamer - LoL, yeah the thinking aloud could be a problem ... Ohhh and we all look forward to the P.E. classes, i'm sure that prac doesn't sound too bad anymore :wink:!
orphyfets - I totally agree with that statement ... but some people find it hard to say those three little words to that special someone, lets just hope Liz isn't one of those people!
Dreamer-laure - LoL, i'm sure the school would flip and it is getting a bit risky ... but some like to take a risk, they find it exciting
aliensister - Awww don't make me blush, i'm glad you liked the chapter and i hope you like the new post :P
madroswellfan - Yay! I'm back with more :D I'm glad you liked the chapter!
martine - Thankyou for your feedback, i'm glad you liked the new part and i hope you read on to find out wqhat will happen next between the two lovebirds!
Cocogurl - I agree! I'm sure Max won't be able to resist her ...Thankyou for your reply
L-J-L 76 - I'm thrilled that you like my story ... and i'm glad that you have so many questions, that will be answered very, very soon!
aussietrueblue - LoL, thankyou for your feedback! i hope you like the new chapter :D and thankyou for all your feedback

Thankyou to everyone who is reading, i hope you all read on to find out what might happen next!











CHAPTER 23


LIZ P.O.V

“I like him Isabel, I like him a lot…and I pray that he likes me too” I say as I turn the corner and enter the P.E. change rooms.

“Parker, Evans late are we” Max asks playfully as he waits around the corner.

I smile at him and he winks.

…Maybe fooling around won’t be so bad after all…

“Yes sir” Isabel says just as playfully as she winks at me suggestively and walks into the girl’s locker room.

“Miss Parker?” he asks as he looks me up and down.

I see him swallow and giggle.

I wore an ‘extra’ short skirt just for him.

“I’m afraid I won’t be doing sport sir” I say as a group of our class leaves the locker room and stops to look at us.

I bet their thinking ‘she’s back to her old habits’…

Since Max has come here I’ve only missed out on a couple of lessons and I haven’t sent him to a mental asylum …yet.

“Why not?” Max asks as he raises and eyebrow.

“Well, my ankle hurts” I say looking at him and he smiles.

“Your ankle?” he says remembering how I fell on my ass over 3 weeks ago.

“Yeah” I say and he smiles.

“That was a while ago now” he says as he looks at my ankle and then around at everyone staring.

“Listen Parker, I don’t know how your old teacher dealt with this but I think you’ve earned your self a detention” he says and I smile inward.

“Too bad…I guess I’ll just have to not do sport again next week” I shout at him and I see the spark in his eyes.

“1 week detention Miss Parker” he says and I’m not done yet.

“Is that all you’ve got?” I ask and I see Maria and Isabel out of the corner of my eye laughing and sharing a knowing smile.

“Do you want to Make that 2 weeks?” he asks and I smile mischievously.

“Why not 4 weeks?” I ask.

“That’s it Parker 4 weeks detention, now out” he screams as he point to his office and I walk into it welcomingly.

…Now that was fun.

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

YaY, I’m back with more! Thankyou to everyone who is reading and I hope you all like the story so far … I’d also like to say thankyou to:


madroswellfan – Ohhhh, I am so happy your loving it and Yay! I am back with more… :)

Behrsgurl*87 – Thankyou for your feedback I’m glad your reading the story and that you like the chapter!

L-J-L 76 – Hi, once again I must say I love the questions and to answer one of them … Yes, Tess will cause trouble … as always :lol:

roswell3053 – LoL, I am sure detention will be fun for Liz … if only real detention include Max and his office we would all show the devil inside ... :P … thanks for your feedback!

FrenchDreamer – I’m here with more! YaY … Ohhhh, if all temptations were as sweet! LoL, I’m delighted that you love the chapters and I hope you read on :P

Dreamer-laure – I’m glad you liked the update and thankyou for your reply!

veronica – Hey Ronnie, I wonder how she will cope too … ??? LoL, to answer your question they will kiss again … Well, now if you start reading! Go on read, LoL :P

Michelle17 – thankyou I’m glad you like the chapter and I hope you keep reading on to see what might happen next between Max and Liz

candycane14 – LoL no, Tess is just Liz’s evil cousin. Max’s ex fiancé is someone else who will be introduced in the sequel as well … sorry for confusing you

orphyfets – Hey, thankyou for your feedback, I hope you keep reading this story!

alizaleven – Hey no problem, I’m glad that you left feedback thankyou… and don’t make me blush … LoL, thanks for your complement!

aussietrueblue – Thanks for your feedback and yes if I was in Liz’s position I would want detention all the way through the holiday and maybe even when I graduate … but I think people might catch on … :wink: … LoL, Glad you like the chapter!

martine – Awww, I’m sure Max will make it very enjoyable for the both of them … but I think they would get enough excitement with just the thought of how risky it is to be fooling around in school grounds, we might have to take that party somewhere more lonesome … :wink: … Thankyou for your feedback!

aliensister – Yes, yes! Yay for detention! LoL, thanks for the reply, hope you keep reading on …

Cocogurl – LoL, yes we all love the flirting … it is cute! Thanks for your feedback and I hope you will continue to read on to see what might happen next!

nessy – Hey Nessa, thanks for the reply glad you love the update!

I’m glad you all left feedback, you make my day … … and I know how much you are all wanting to know just what might happen in detention, so here is a little preview …

~*~ cheka ~*~










CHAPTER 24

LIZ P.O.V

I walk into his office and take a seat while I wait.

Moments later the door flings opens and he steps in, turning and locking the door behind him.

“You’ve certainly been a bad girl Miss Parker” he says as he walks over to me, that’s when I see the mischievous sparkle in his eye.

“Yes I have” I say as he grabs me and pulls me flush against him.

“You know, I don’t think 4 weeks detention is enough” he says and I nod.

My breath is stuck in my throat and I am panting, trying to catch my breath…

Hmmm….

“Max” I moan as he comes even closer…

…If possible.

“That’s Mr Evans” he says and in one motion throws everything off of his office desk with his forearm.

Oh My God, those abbs and biceps and …

“Ohhhh” I cry out as he throws me on it as I attack his neck.

“Liz” he moans as I feel his hands slide up my shirt.

Have you ever felt that something was sooo good, but known that it was really, really bad?

Well too bad this is too good to stop now, but …

“Max?” I say as I pull away and he nods slightly.

“What is it baby?” he asks and I look up at his flushed face.

I’m a way I feel giddy inside knowing that I was the one that made his lips swollen and his cheeks a blushing pink.

“Do you think we’re moving to fast?” I ask unsure.

I mean ….we could be, but it just feels too good to stop now, like I said before soo bad but too good…

“No, do you?” he asks as he looks up to search my eyes for any sign of discomfort.

“No, it feels so right” I say as I kiss his mouth and slide my hand down his hard, muscular chest.

“Lizzzz” he moans as he attaches his lips to my neck and begins to nibble on it.

“Never stop” I moan out between sweet kisses.

“Never” he says as he places a trail of kisses down my neck, to my collar bone and to the top of my shirt while his hands fiddle with the hem.

“Wait” I pant out and he stops and looks up at me.

“What?”

“Shouldn’t you be teaching?” I ask in amusement.

He forgot all about his class…

…So did I

“Class?” he asks still stuck in his daze as he looks down at me … well my breasts.

“Yeah the one you’re supposed to be teaching P.E. to” I say as I nudge his chin towards me so we make eye contact.

“Ohh right” he says as he jumps off the desk and straightens himself up, trying to hide his rock hard erection from sight.

“I forgot all about that” he says as he offers me a hand, which I take welcomingly.

“Yeah well, I’m sure they’ll wait” I say as I straighten out my clothing.

“Yeah” he says and I look up to find him licking his licks seductively.

“So we better get out there” I say in amusement as I continue to look at his facial expression.

“Yeah, we should”…

“You know they might be under the impression that we are getting ‘Physical’ if we don’t get out there” I say and I see the small smile form on his lips.

“Now, why would they think that” he says as he scoops me up in his arms and once again we are lying on his desk in a hot make-out session.

“I have no idea”…

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

I hope your all enjoying the story so far and love the new chapter! Since it is officially the holidays now and I seem to have a lot of spare time on my hands, I am going to try writing much, much more … Yay!

Also I’d like to say thankyou to:


aliensister – Ok, I will try my best not to make you all wait too long for a update. I know ayyy … what a lucky girl, if only we could all be that lucky ‘sigh’ … I’ll be wishing for Max Evans in my Christmas stocking this year :twisted:

roswell3053 – If I had a teacher like Max at my school then my grades would be dropping for a reason :wink: , LoL … I’m thrilled you liked the update!

Behrsgurl*87 – Awww, I’m glade you love my fic and Yay … I’m back with more!

Dreamer-laure – Thanks for your feedback I’m glad you liked the chapter … Max and Liz really are a cute couple, Ohh and the beginning of relationships is the best part!

FrenchDreamer – I love your feedback, you always have a way of making me smile … :P … I’m sooo happy you liked the chapter and I hope you like the new part! I’m glad you’re happy about the sequel, I have actually been working on it for a while and it will be out as soon as this fic is finished. I agree they might get busted and it may not be a friend who catches them, but they only just got together and wanna have some fun, LoL … as we can see in that last chapter, Max was having ‘lots’ of fun! … :twisted:

alizaleven – I’m glad you liked the chapter and I hope you will keep reading … also thankyou for your kind feedback :)

L-J-L 76 – I’m glad you like my story and yes to answer one of your questions, Max and Liz will continue to see each other secretly … thankyou for your feedback!

orphyfets – I’m back with more … YaY… I’m glad you liked the new part and thanks for all your feedback! … Your too kind :D

aussietrueblue – LoL, here is more … I will try my hardest to make the chapters longer and of course it would not be like me if I didn’t add more cliff hangers so I will :twisted: ! I’m thrilled you like the chapter!

behr_able – I’m glad you started reading my story and I hope you continue to read to see what might just happen between the two love birds, LoL thanks for your feedback!

veronica – Hey Veronka! … LoL, I’m glad you like P.E and we all know how much we both like P.D.H.P.E. at school :wink: , LoL … they will kiss again very, very soon! You and your kisses Ronnie!

Michelle17 – Yes Max is very naughty … just the way we all like him :wink: LoL, I’m glad you like this story and I hope you will keep reading to find out what will happen next between Max and Liz, or as we all like to call them ‘the love birds’ … :D

Cocogurl – I’m back with another chapter and an answer to your question … No, Liz has not turned 18 yet that is why it is very, very risky for them … I’m glad you like my story and I agree 100% it is very hot already, but things can only get hotter! :twisted:

nessy – Thanks for your feedback, see you soon!

Thankyou to everyone who is reading and everyone who is posting feedback … I love reading all your comments, they always make me smile! I hope you all will keep reading to find out what will happen next between the two love birds … :P

Ohhhh … also the next time I post I will be posting the next 3 chapters as a Christmas present to everyone!

:P …cheka… :P







CHAPTER 25

LIZ P.O.V

RING-RING … RING-RING

I hear the phone ringing and instantly jogged out of the shower, knowing exactly who it is

“Hey” I say in a sultry tone.

“Hey yourself bub” I hear his hot voice reply and smile as I feel a tingle run down my wet spine.

“I didn’t interrupt you did I?” he asks apologetically.

…If he only knew what I was doing…

“No, of course not” I reply with a smile on my face as I walk across the room to find my pyjamas.

“What were you doing?,” comes his next question.

I feel as if my cheeks are on fire as I blush, not exactly knowing what to say and then I being to wonder …

‘Say the truth … or lie’…

“I was in the shower” I say turning deep red.

“What?” comes his shocked reply and I hear his breathing increase over the phone, and it brings a smile to my face.

“I was having a nice, hot shower” I reply in my usual voice, loving the way I am affecting him.

“Shower?”

“You know, you go in it naked…and rub soap all over you hot body to clean yourself of dirt …you know I’m a dirty girl, so I needed a shower” I reply having a little fun with him.

‘Ohh, great choice Liz, you should always follow your instincts and go with the truth’ I think to myself.

“I-i …I” he stutters out and I smile mischievously.

“You what baby?” I ask, loving how I call him that.

It has nearly been 3 weeks since we decided that we wanted to be together and that we could still fool around until I officially turn 18…and then after the end of school year we can be together without him losing his job or me getting kicked out, before graduation.

It was weird at first, but I mean I had feelings for him the first time I saw him walking down the hall at school and didn’t even realise he was a teacher…my teacher that day. But I never pictured us here as we are now.

Max admitted that he had feelings for me that he hid …because face it, it’s wrong to have feelings for your student.

But you can’t help who you fall in love with …

…Can you?

And that’s what we are…

Well at least that’s what I am … in love.

With Max.

“Sweetie?” I hear his voice ask over the phone and smile.

“Yes?”

“I was thinking” he says.

“Congratulations honey” I say in an amused voice and I can just picture him rolling his eyes on the other side of town.

“Hahaha, I forgot to laugh” he replies sarcastically.

“Ok, really Hun… what were you think about?” I ask interested in what he has to say.

“Well, we’re together right?” he asks and I blush.

“Yeah, we are”

“So, I mean …after this semester we could go public, right?” he asks and again I smile and blush.

“Yes” I say, but then something breaks my smile…

Does he not want our relationship to go out into the public?

“Max, you want to be with me right?” I ask, facing my greatest fear since I met Max.

“Yes, of course I do” he says in a hurt voice and I sigh in relief.

“Good, cause it’s to late to say you don’t know” I state with a pout.

“Why’s that?”

“Because, now I love you…and I’m never gonna let you go” I state with a serious voice.

“Well, don’t worry your pretty little head off…or should I say empty” he jokes and I huff.

“Not funny Max”

“Pay backs a bitch …aint it?” he replies and I chuckle.

“Why shouldn’t I worry?” I ask, getting back to the subject at hand.

“Cause I aint going anywhere… I love you too Liz” he states and I sigh and laugh as a thought comes to mind.

“That’s like the first time in a long time, that you’ve called me Liz and not Parker” I say with a bright smile.

“Well, I couldn’t keep calling you Parker… I mean that’s gonna change one day, right?” he asks and my eyes snap open and I look up at the ceiling why lying back on my bed.

Change one day?

“Right” I say in a day dreaming voice.

…Right

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

So a little change of plans, I am posting on Christmas Eve thats today! YaY... I hope you all like the next three parts and i hope you all have a very Merry Christmas!

I'd like to say a very special thankyou to:

nessy
behr_able
aussietrueblue
orphyfets
Kitten
veronica
Dreamer-laure
FrenchDreamer
Behrsgurl*87
roswell3053
L-J-L 76
aliensister
Cocogurl


You guys always find time to post replies and i know that there are many more. Thankyou for your feedback to the last chapter, its good to know that there are people who like the story!

Also i have a short Christmas story out that i just wrote today, it is called 'The Love Of Christmas' I hope you all give it a shot and see if you like it!

Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year! :P









CHAPTER 26

LIZ P.O.V

Guess what today is…???

Common guess…

…Hello…

Fine I’ll tell you…

!!!…MY BIRTHDAY…!!!

Yep, I am officially 18 and me and Max … we are officially legal.

…Not like it matters.

I’ve been thinking these last couple of days.

I mean we haven’t really thought much about what happens after.

I mean…

What happens after I graduate?

Do I go off to college and never see Max again?

I don’t want that!

But, that’s where the better part comes in…

I’ve been looking into this school, that is right here in Roswell and it seems really great.

If you don’t understand what I’m talking about, let me explain.

All my life I have wanted to be a writer, and up till now I always thought that I would be stuck living with my aunty and uncle in their home on top of a restaurant and that my life would consist of working and Tess stealing my pay check.

But that has changed now, because now I know what I want.

I want to be a writer.

I wanna write about me and Max … I wanna write stories for little kids.

And I wanna move out.

This program is great because it doesn’t cost too much and I will be here with Max.

And the best part.

Max and I can be together.

But the only thing is, if I start it I would have to start now.

This would mean having to leave high school.

I want to talk to Max first before I do anything…just to make sure that I’m doing the right thing.

BEEP BEEP

I hear Maria’s car beep and I run down the escape ladder and jump in.

Yes, today is just another school day.

“HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHIKA”…





CHAPTER 27

LIZ P.O.V

Its period 5 and I decided to skip history to go see Max, I know that he has a double period free and since I have period 6 free …well.

…Stuff period 5.

I knock on the door and hear him call out.

“Come in”

“Hey” I say as I walk in and lock the door behind me.

He is sitting in his desk chair with a book in front of him, reading.

He looks so hot today with his tight blue jeans and button up white shirt.

“I’m guessing you didn’t have a prac” I say as he sets his book down and walks towards me with a delicious smile.

“Hey baby” he says as he places a soft kiss on my lips.

“No, I didn’t have any prac’s today coz, today is a very special day for a very special little lady” he says as he looks me in the eye.

“Ohh, really?” I ask blushing.

“Yes, really”

“You see my girlfriend is officially an adult… and officially” he says slowly as his hand creep up my shirt.

“Officially?” I ask hating the long break.

“Mine” he says as he attacks my neck and I pull him away to attach my mouth to his.

“Happy birthday baby” he says as we pull apart and I smile into his mouth.

“This has been the best birthday ever” I say and look up at him with a single tear in my eye.

“Baby, it’s not over yet” he states and I chuckle.

“What more could there be?” I ask as I look up at him with a bright, teary smile.

“Oh, you aint seen nothing yet baby” …





CHAPTER 28

LIZ P.O.V

I am currently sitting in Isabel’s red convertible as she drives me to my unknown destination.

Well, its unknown to me but not to anyone else.

“We’re here” Isabel says happily as we pull up to a double story house.

“Where exactly is here?” I ask as I look out at the house and smile.

It’s beautiful.

There are two car spaces and you can see the pool in the backyard, through a little hole in the fence.

I smile when I see a cute little puppy run down to the gate and sit down patiently.

“Go on, get out” Isabel says and I turn to look at her and send her a look that says ‘have you lost your head?’

“You can’t leave me here” I say as she practically throws me out of the car and waves as she once again starts the engine.

“Bye” she says as she starts to leave.

“Isabel, how am I supposed to get home?” I ask but by the time I finish she is already gone.

I turn around to look at the house again and see the dog looking at me curiously.

I begin to walk up the steps and wait at the door before knocking.

Where am I?

Why am I here?

Why did Isabel leave me here?

How and I going to get home?

These are just some of the questions running through my head as I raise my hand to ring the door bell.

‘What if it’s some, crazy starker guy that opens the door?’ I begin to think to myself but then forget that thought as I think of Isabel dropping me off here.

Why would she drop me off at some, crazy starker guys house?

Moments later the door opens and I find myself staring into loving hazel eyes.

TBC…
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Hey everyone,

Thankyou roswell3053 for your reply. I hope you all like the new chapter and have a great New Year!

:P ...cheka... :P







CHAPTER 29

LIZ P.O.V

Why would she drop me off at some, crazy starker guys house…???

Moments later the door opens and I find myself staring into loving hazel eyes.

“Max?” …

“Liz” he says with a smile as he looks back into my eyes.

“Come in” he says as he offers me his hand which I gladly take with a bright smile.

“So, what exactly is this?” I ask referring to my surprise visit to his gorgeous house.

“This is my house” he state and I chuckle.

“I know that much silly” I say as I walk over to him and wrap my arms around his neck.

“I mean, me coming over here” I state and he nods.

“Well, this is what I meant when I said ‘you aint seen nothing yet’” he states and I smile.

“This is really sweet” I say as I look around to see the dinner table set with candles and rose petals surrounding us on the floor.

“I wouldn’t want to be anywhere else” I say as I kiss him firmly on the mouth.

He pulls away and looks at me lovingly.

“Dinner is getting cold, we better eat it” he says as he joins our fingers and leads me to the table.

He pulls out my seat and I sit down.

He then walks over to his side of the table and sits.

I look down to my plate to see my favourite, pasta with mushrooms and cream.

“Max, you shouldn’t have” I say as I reach for his hand across the table.

“It’s the least I could do” he says and I grab my spoon and take a mouthful.

“I made sure not to put the bacon” he states and I smile up at me.

One night on the phone we were playing 21 questions and I mentioned how I absolutely hate bacon.

…YAK.

It’s just too greasy.

“Thankyou baby” I say and he winks at me.

After dinner he gives me a tour of the house.

It is absolutely breathtaking.

He has two spare bedrooms and two toilets, a play room with a snooker table and a huge Olympic pool in the backyard.

I honestly do not see how someone who gets paid so little can have a house like this.

I mean unless what the teachers say is unfair is actually ‘awesome’.

“Max you have a really beautiful home” I say as we sit in each others arms in front of his television and watch ‘just like heaven’.

“Thanks baby” he replies as he brushes my hair out of my face.

“You’re welcome here anytime” he adds as he looks down at me with a sexy smile.

“Anytime?”

“Anytime” he returns as we lean forward till our lips touch in a hot kiss.

“Baby?”

“Hhhhmmm” he moans as he continues to kiss down my neck.

“I had a really great birthday, thanks to you… I don’t have any idea how to thankyou” I state while moaning as he continues his painful torture.

“Baby, there’s no need to say thankyou, I loved seeing you smile today” he says and he gives me one of his bright smiles.

“You really enjoyed it?” he asks and I smile at him lovingly.

“Yes, I loved it” I say and he gets back to kissing down my neck.

I start unbuttoning his shirt and he helps me push it off of his shoulders and it hits the floor unthought of.

I rub my hands up and down his rock hard chest, moaning at the feel of his hard abs underneath my finger tips.

No wounder why he teachers P.E.

He has a fine body!

And Fine is just an understatement.

I look at him in the eyes and smile.

“Max?”

“Yeah?”

“Let’s go upstairs” I state as I look into his eyes and I see the hesitant look in his eye.

“Sweetie, are you sure?” he asks as he looks at me with caring eyes.

The truth is … I couldn’t be surer of anything in my life.

Even while I am a little nervous … but that’s only because I’m a little scared of stuffing up big time …

…Think positive thoughts …

…Think positive thoughts …

…Think positive thoughts …

I tell myself as I look up at my patient boyfriend… and man you do not know how fan-fucking-tasic it feels to call him that.

And that’s exactly what I tell him before we make our way up to his bedroom.

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Hey everyone,

I hope you all like the new chapter and tell me what you think, have a wonderful day!

Thanklyou to:

L-J-L 76
FrenchDreamer
Michelle17
roswell3053
martine
nessy
veronica
orphyfets
Dreamer-laure
aussietrueblue
Cocogurl

Reading all your feedback truely makes my day, i hope you will all read to see what might just happen next...

:P ...cheka... :P








WARNING: The following text is for ADULTS and contains a sex scene.


CHAPTER 30

LIZ P.O.V

We make our way up to his bedroom, where he gently places me on the bed.

I look into his eyes to see pure love shining in them, at this moment all of my fears and worries fly out the door .

He lies down on top of me and I attach my mouth to his in a deep and passionate kiss.

His tongue traces the outline of my lips and I part them eagerly, while plunging my tongue into his mouth where they dwell together.

I spread my legs slightly so that he is settled between my thighs and moan inwardly as I feel his hard erection press into my wet core.

He looks into my eyes again and I smile sweetly… How did I get this lucky?

“Are you sure, sweetie?”

“Positive” I smile as I raise my hands in the air, watching closely as he slides my shirt above my head and pulls it to the floor.

He pushes his pants down and once again lies between my legs.

I feel his strong hands travel carefully behind my back, sliding up to my bra and undoing it slowly.

With his help, I remove it and it quietly joins the rest of our discarded clothing.

I run my hands up and down his muscular chest, enjoying the affect that my touch has on his toned body.

“You’re so beautiful” he sighs, while smiling up at me lovingly and stroking my hair back, softly.

I feel myself blush, suddenly feeling self-conscious.

“You’re not too bad you’re self Mr Evans” I tease, knowing that he loves it when I call him that.

Max chuckles, while sliding my skirt down my trim legs as I slowly remove his boxer shorts.

I see him look in my eyes again asking for permission and I nod while sending him a sweet smile.

I moan when I feel his ever growing erection press against my opening.

He enters slowly and my eyes fall closed in pain and pleasure.

“Ohhhh god” I moan as Max stops seeing the pain rushing over my features.

I look up to him when I am fully recovered and the pain is now transformed into waves of pleasure.

He continues to slide in and out of me in a fine rhythm.

“Liz” he moans and he starts to push harder, and I look into his eyes lovingly.

“Oh Max Harder” I cry out as I feel him hitting all of my walls.

He nods slightly as he begins to push harder, like I commanded.

He continues to push harder and harder as he picks up the pace and I feel the sweat start to form on my head and smile up at him.

“Oh Fuck Liz” he cries in pleasure and I see him shut his eyes tightly as he feels my walls clenching around him.

“DEEPER” I cry out, wanting to feel him deeper inside of me…needing to feel him deeper and Max pushes deeper.

“MAXXX” I cry out as I reach my climax.

“LIZZZ” Max cries out soon after as he reaches hers his peak and he collapses on top of me.

I breathe heavily until I recover.

Max rolls off of me slowly and gently, while pulling me into his embrace, holding me close to his heaving chest.

“I love you Liz” he says sincerely and I smile as I look up into his loving eyes, feeling the need for sleep take over me as I close my eyes and whisper my love for him softly...

I could not be happier …

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Hey everyone,

I hope you all like the new chapter and tell me what you think. So it was Liz's birthday but today its my brothers birthday so 'Happy Bithday Danny' :D

I'd like to say a special thankyou to:


Michelle17: Yeah, they are sweet! Thanks for your reply :D

roswell3053: I'm back with more, I hope you'll tell me what you think and thankyou for your feedback :P

aussietrueblue: Thanks for your feedback it's greatly appreciated, I'm glad you found the chapter sweet :)

orphyfets: LoL, dont we all want that for our birthday... In the future of course :wink: I'll be waiting a long while if its for my 23rd birthday. Thanks for your reply.

L-J-L 76: I'm glad their together too :P, hope you like the new part!

FrenchDreamer: Hot and Sweet, always a good mix :twisted: ... Now about the no protection i did that on purpose to see if onyone would pick up on it, so congrats! ...Yes, on purpose :roll: (totally forgot, but they did somehow) Thanks for your feedback!

martine: I'm glad you liked the chapter and i agree it was very risky if the didnt use protection, but like i told FrechDreamer they did use it I just ummm... wanted to see if anyone would, ahhh pick up on it. Congrats to you too for picking up on it :wink: ... Thanks for your reply :D

Cocogurl: I'm back with more, YaY. I hope you like the chapter and i agree with you 100% Liz is a very lucky girl.

behr_able: Awww thankyou I'm glad you think my story rocks :P, Hmmm something bad... maybe, maybe not :wink: wait and see. Thanks for your feedback.

Dreamer-laure: Thankyou for your kind feedback I'm glad you thought the sceen was perfect, but you know i wrote that chapter a while ago and i wasnt really sure how to write that kind of stuff, but i got a new story out that I'm posting real soon and its really smutty, i hope you'll read it and tell me what you think! LoL, i always knew it was you :wink:

nessy: Hey ness thanks for the feedback have a great time in Queensland!

veronica: Hey ronnie! Im glad you like my story and thankyou so much for you feedback! :P Yes i always think of him as the knight in shining amour... or the boy next door!

I hope you all have a great day filled with fun and excitment :P. One last thing I have a new story, Yes another one!

Its called 'Leave You Hanging' i have the summary posted on my authors page, but its coming real soon so keep an eye out for it, P.S. its very smutty!

LoL ... cheka







CHAPTER 31

LIZ P.O.V

I wake up and I feel his strong arms wrapped safely around me.

I look up to see that he is staring down at me with a grin and the thought of our previous night together makes me blush slightly as I remember the feel of him inside me…sigh …

“Morning sweetie” he says and I smile as I lean up and kiss his lips softly.

“Morning” I whisper sleepily.

“Did you sleep ok?” I ask worriedly.

I don’t know if I told you but I put the meaning of ‘sleeping like a baby’ to a whole new level.

I toss and turn and snore and talk and …

“No, did you know you are a complete motor mouth” he says as he looks down at me shocked.

“And I thought Daluca was bad” he says and then I see the glint of amusement in his eyes.

“That’s not funny” I reply with a small pout.

“It is to me baby” he says back while leaning down to kiss me.

“Max?”

“Yeah, baby?”

“I need to talk to you” I moan out.

“Right now?” he asks as he begins to trail hot open mouth kisses down my neck.

“Yes” I moan out.

“Ok” he says as he pulls away slightly and leans on his elbow facing me, his face is covered by one of his sexy smiles and it makes me feel so special to know that it is just for me.

“Max, I’ve been doing a lot of thinking” I say as a smile spreads across my face at the thought of becoming a writer.

“And I wanna be a writer” I say and he smiles at me warmly.

“I know sweetie, you’ve told me” he says.

“No Max, I wanna be a writer and there’s this whole program here in Roswell, they have all the things and then I’m there for like a year or two and then I go out on my own and I write and I mean of course I’ll have a job on the side, but I’ll be a writer and I’ll get my own place and we can be together and…” I continue to ramble on and I look at Max’s amused expression.

“Sorry” I say as I look down shyly.

… I swear, we just had … well you know what we just had ‘wink.wink’ … and hear I am blushing like an idiot!

“No sweetie, don’t be I like to see you all enthusiastic” he says as his hand reaches up to cradle my face.

“Max, I really want this” I say confidently and he smiles down at me.

“Then you should do it” he says and my smile fades as I begin to think of other things.

“Max, if I do it… I have to leave this term” I say and I see his facial expression fall in understanding.

“You have to?”

“Yes, I’ve already enrolled and I am paying for it with some money that I saved up…meaning money that I gave to Maria to hide from Tess” I say as I look down.

“Liz, I want you to be happy and if this school is going to make you happy then so be it” he says as he smiles slightly, but I’m no fool.

I can tell that, that smile does not reach his eyes.

“I thought you would be happy, coz I would stay here in Roswell…don’t you want me to stay here?” I ask my smile now a frown.

“Of course I do” he says in a raised voice.

“Liz, after what happened with Mr Dean… I was glad that I could still keep you safe …because I was there, he couldn’t do anything. But if you leave and go somewhere else how am I supposed to protect you” he asks in a sad voice and I look up into his eyes as I feel tears well up in mine.

“Max, you’ll still see me everyday…and I’m sure it will be less dangerous” I say as I wrap my arms around his neck.

I bring my face centimetres away from his and my expression turns serious.

“Max?”

“Yeah?”

“Why didn’t you tell?”

“Tell what?”

“About Mr Dean?” I ask as I look up into his eyes.

“Because, you told me in trust… you trusted me not to hurt you, and I didn’t” he says with a sweet smile.

“I love you” I say as I look deep into his eyes.

“You just made my day” …

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Hey everyone,

I hope you all like the new chapter, i know its short so i'll be updating very soon.

I want to say thankyou to everyone who has been posting feedback:


veronica: LoL, I'm here with more and yes it would be great to make Max's day! see you tomorrow :D

nessy: Thanks ness, I'm glad your liking the story!

Dreamer-laure: I'm glad your looking forward to the new fic, i cant wait to post it and thankyou for all your feedback, your so kind :P

roswell3053: Max plays the part of the protective boyfriend so well doesnt he? Thanks for your feedback I'm glad you liked the chapter!

FrenchDreamer: LoL, Max is adorable and we all deserve to have someone as sweet as him. Max is 24, so he is young. Thankyou for your feedback i always look forward to reading it :D

martine: LoL yes i know what i have to do and you will have to read on to work out which road i have taken :wink: ... I'm glad you thought the chapter was sweet, but isnt everything with Max and Liz sweet?, thanks for your feedback.

L-J-L 76: Thanks for your reply. I love all the questions and as much as i would love to answer them all for you, i cant because i love the suspence in making everyone wait :wink: .. :twisted: LoL.

flyawayraven: I'm back YaY! Yes it is Liz's 18th birthday which makes them legal with the exception of him being her teach and all :roll: .. but whose gonna let that stop them from having fun, LoL, thanks for your feedback!

aussietrueblue: LoL, everyone suspects Tess ... I guess you'll have to read on to find out, you never know it could be all happy sailing from now to the sequal or is it? :wink:, LoL I love doing that hehehe, Thanks for your feedback!

orphyfets: LoL yeah i guess it wont be that great if someone came along and messed it up. Thanks for all your feedback to this story, its greatly appreciated :P , 23 isnt old in fact i cant wait till i'm older... just its gonna be a while till i get there.

Cocogurl: Yes i agree why cant we all have someone like Max Evans, LoL thankyou for your feedback glad you like the chapter and hope you read on!

I hope you will all continue to read on. Have a great day and i will see you soon!

:D ...cheka... :D










CHAPTER 32

LIZ P.O.V

It’s 12.30 and we are up making breakfast in Max’s kitchen.

After our talk in the morning, Max said that he would be fine with me going to the Roswell School of Writers… as long as I promise to see him each day and we could make our relationship public, which I am totally open for.

“Here you go” he says as he places a plate full of pancakes in front of me and kisses my neck.

“Thankyou” I say sending him a smile.

“Max, there’s something that I’ve had on my mind a lot lately … but I just don’t know what to do” I say as I look down at my plate, hoping that he could help me.

“Sure, what is it baby?” he asks in concern and I look up to see his worried eyes.

“I want to move out” I say as I look him in the eyes.

“Move out?”

“Yeah, I wanna be free… I don’t want to have to see any of them ever again” I say as I look down in shame.

“Your uncle and aunty?” he asks in understanding and I nod.

“I don’t want to have to share…give my pay check away, I wanna have my own home” I say with a slight smile.

…My own home…

“I don’t think I can afford it, but I’ve been looking around and I’ve fond this crap old one …but it will do” I say with a hint of excitement in my voice, but the rest pure dread.

“Liz, to have you go off to another school with out me to protect you is one thing” he says as he looks me in the eye while walking over to me.

“But to have you in an apartment, not to mention a shit one …by yourself, it’s never going to happen” he says as he stops in front of me and helps me up.

“I love you…and I would love nothing more than you to move in here with me” he says and my heart falls into my chest…

What do I say?

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Hey everyone,

How are you all? I'd like to say a special thankyou to everyone who has been posting rerplies to my story and everyone who has been reading, I hope you all like it so far and continue to read on!

Thankyou to:


flyawayraven- Yes I agree, if it was me I would have said ‘hell yeah’ straight away but will Liz? Thanks for your reply :P

orphyfets- Congratulations on the engagement! He’s a really lucky guy.. :D .. I’m glad you liked the part and I hope you’ll tell me what you think of this new one.

aussietrueblue- LoL, Im back with the new part so we can see what she says …Yes or No? :? .. Thanks for your feedback!

L-J-L 76- Hey L, glad you liked the chapter and I love all the questions. There are only 14 chapters left till the sequel so there’s still a lot left to happen. Thankyou for all your feedback to P.E.!

Dreamerlaure- Im’m back with more, just like I promised.. Only problem is that it’s a bit short too, so I might post the next few chapters on a daily basis, maybe. I’m thrilled you liked the chapter and I hope you like this on too :P

roswell3053- I agree 100% it would protect her from horrible relatives, but do we know exactly what they would say if she were to move in with max, I mean it could be a good thing for them to finally get rid of her … or they might not like that idea at all, but then again that all depends on Liz’s answer. Thanks for your feedback!

FrenchDreamer- LoL yeah I’ll second that she is a bit of a ‘bombshell’ ayy? :wink: But then again maybe she’s trying to fix up her life and wants Max to be involved, every step of the way. I always thought of Max as the protective type I think it justs suits him so well, don’t you agree? I’m so happy that you liked the chapter and thankyou for all your feedback :)

anaïs- LoL so you agree with ‘flyawayraven’ too. I guess the answer lies within the new part, what will she say? Thanks for your feedback :P

Natalie36- If only she thought it was that simple, LoL thanks for your reply and I won’t disappoint :D

martine- Yes! … That’s what you want her to say right? LoL, you’ll have to read this chapter to find out.. :wink: I know he is wonderful isn’t he and any girl would be so grateful to have him, so I guess there really is only one answer. Im glad you like the part and I know it was short and so is this one but I will post another one real soon.

veronica- Hey Vronka, hehehe long time no see :( .. I can’t wait till the marathon either it should be fun. Im glad you liked the chapter and I hope you’ll read on to find out what her answer is. See you.. Tuesday?

Behrsgurl*87- Awww, don’t make me blush :oops: .. thanks for saying you love my fic you just made my day Max is a very understanding boyfriend and some guys wouldn’t be as patient as him, thanks for your feedback I loved it!

nessy- Hey Nessa, thanks for the reply I hope you read on to see what will happen next!

Your replies honestly make my day, so thankyou soo much! I hope you all like the new chapter. Now to answer the big question does she say: Yes or No? ...









CHAPTER 33

LIZ P.O.V

“I love you…and I would love nothing more than you to move in here with me” he says and my heart falls into my chest…

“Max” I say but close my mouth soon after, lost for words.

…Does he really want me to move in with him…???

“We can be together” he states confidently, with a smile.

“Max I would love to move in with you” I say with the exact same smile, but it soon falls.

“But I can’t”

“Why not?” he asks with puppy dog eyes and a pout.

“It would raise too much suspicion” I say as I look down sadly.

He grabs me in his arms and looks down at me with a slight smile.

“I don’t care” he states firmly.

“You wont be my student anymore, plus your of legal age which means that it’s not anyone’s business” he states with a now confident smile and I have to chuckle at his cocky look.

“You’re so cocky” I state with a grin.

“I would hope so” he says as he looks me in the eyes.

“So what’s it going to be Parker?” he asks as he raises one eyebrow.

“You really want me to move in with you?”

“More than anything” he states with those damn puppy dog eyes.

… I can’t say no to Max.

I can’t deny him anything he wants…

“I’ll move in” I say finally after a moment of silences.

“You will?” he asks in shock.

“Only if you want me to, that is” I add and he sends me a reassuring smile.

“I do” he says as I wrap my arms around his neck.

‘I hope that’s not the last time he say’s ‘I do’ around me’

“It won’t be” …

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