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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 10:32 pm
by candycane14
This is the part you never see in the movies. In the movies this would have ended right after she was aloud to keep her form and they would have lived happily ever after. Great part! So great you accidentily posted it twice! Update soon!

chapters 9,10

Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 10:49 pm
by ken_r
Candycane thanks for catching my mistakes you are like a girl i used to have in my class that helped me to not make lasting mistakes for which i was grateful as I am to you.

Begonia 9508 She is not a spirit. we don't know what she is. Kyle was an expert in paranormal and he couldn't tell. We need to wait til next time and ask the Gypsy.

When my son was a senior he told us to bring the camcorder to his concert. We had no idea of why. it was a total surprise when he, a young lady that was in first chair and an assistant teacher played the Anderson piece, Bugler's Holiday. I still cry when ever i hear the recording we have.

Chapter 9

Elizabeth quickly stood aside, “Oh yes Mr. and Mrs. Evans this is Max’s house. Please come in. He will be home shortly.”

Philip and Diane entered. As she passed the young woman, Diane raised her eyebrows. “You are who?” she was looking right at Elizabeth.

“I am Elizabeth. I am a friend of Max,” Elizabeth explained.

“Do you live here?” Diane asked.

“Yes, I do not have anywhere else to live and Max takes care of me.”

Now both parents were studying her like she was a specimen. Max walking up his walk saw his parent’s car. He quickly called Isabel, “Iz, I need help. You have got to come over and take Liz out of the house. Mom and dad are here and I am going to have to talk to them. It is going to be difficult enough with out Liz hearing what is being said. I will wait until you get here and take her away before I go into the house.”

It was less than ten minutes when Isabel arrived. She and Max walked up to the door and entered his house. Isabel showed the proper respect as she hugged both of her parents and then she went over to Elizabeth and said something in her ear. Elizabeth and Isabel went to the door and Isabel called out that she would see everyone in a couple of hours. Isabel hurried because she was sure things were going to get noisy inside Max’s place soon.

Philip stood up, “Max, who the hell is that woman and what is she doing living with you?”

“Dad, her name is Elizabeth and I think I love her,” Max was trying to be straight forward.

“Think you love her! Where the hell did you find her? What is her last name? What does she do? Is she a student? When did you let her move in with you?” Mr. Evans expected all questions to be answered even if he did not leave any time in between them to receive an answer.

“I call her Elizabeth. She doesn’t know her real name and, of course, neither do I. I just found her. It is very complicated. We think she was once a student. When I found her, she sort of became dependent on me, so she lives with me now,” Max was explaining. “I am playing at a small jazz club tonight. Would you please accompany us and hear my music? Then, tomorrow I will try to explain everything as best as I can.”

It took some more arguing, but finally, the Evans decided to meet Max at the club. Isabel and Alex would accompany them. Max called and reserved tickets for them to get in.

That night, Max and Elizabeth arrived. Mrs. Evans was now sure that Elizabeth’s clothes definitely had the mark of Isabel. They had a drink before them as Max escorted Elizabeth to the little table right beside the bandstand. Klaus was there. He was just back up piano since he had expended all of his creativity in the work he turned into his Jazz professor for his grade. Max stood up to the microphone. “I would like to introduce my folks, Philip and Diane Evans.” This was followed with applause. Max started out playing a Henry Mancini version of Peter Gunn. This song lacked tone, but it did have guts as Max belted it out. He then switched to “My Funny Valentine.” This, again, was a piece that a trumpet could get around. It was a sad piece the way Max played it and James, the sax player, answered him in a fugue-like manner in a slightly higher key. They were working up a strong emotion by the time they were through. Philip was just watching, but Diane was listening carefully. She had listened to Max practice for years. She knew that he was good, but this music almost had a life of its own. Diane also watched the small woman sitting near the bandstand. As Max played, Diane could swear that she saw Elizabeth becoming stronger. Elizabeth closed her eyes and seemed to be breathing in the music. Isabel was watching her mother. She saw that her mother was softening towards Elizabeth. She looked at her father. He liked music, but he in no means understood it like her mother did. He was proud at the expression the audience was showing toward his son. Yes, he agreed that Max was playing well, but he wasn’t sure about Max’s future. He was not in a frame of mind that he could, yet, accept Max in a musical career. Max wasn’t accepting himself as a professional musician yet, either. They played music Herb Alpert style with James on his sax imitating the brass. Up to the break, Philip saw that the club was filled and they all seemed to be there to hear the little band.

At the break, Max took Elizabeth’s hand and they went over to the table where his folks were sitting with Alex and Isabel. Diane looked carefully at Elizabeth, “You look lovely tonight, my dear.” She was pleased that Elizabeth blushed at the complement.

“Isabel helps me choose my clothes,” Elizabeth murmured.

Philip’s eyebrows were raised at that comment. Apparently, Isabel was accepting the woman as Max’s girlfriend.

Diane turned to Max and stated, “Max, your sound was better than I have ever heard it.”

About that time Tony, the owner, came by, “Mr. and Mrs. Evans I want to tell you your son is one mucho horn player. When that girl is present, he plays better than is heard even in Las Vegas. We are very lucky to have him.”

They talked for a while then the break was over and Elizabeth was, again, by the bandstand while Max was playing. When the night was over, the audience was congratulating Max and some were pressing Elizabeth’s hand. Some of them stopped to speak to the Evans family. Max and Elizabeth, with his parents, Isabel and Alex all stopped at an all-night coffee shop to talk about the playing and happenings at college. When they left to go home, the Evans needed to talk to each other and Max wanted to hold Elizabeth. Isabel was just glad that her relationship with Alex wasn’t under any question.

Max held Elizabeth that night. “Max, is it correct that your parents don’t like me?” Elizabeth asked.

“No, Elizabeth, they don’t know you and what they do not know they are afraid will destroy their plans for the future.” Max tried to sooth her, but when he was through it didn’t sound soothing, even to him.

The next morning, Philip and Diane called Max. Diane and Isabel wanted to go shopping and they wanted Elizabeth to go with them. Philip would stay with Max. As soon as they left, Max opened two beers and sat down with his father.

“Dad, I want to tell you a story and I need you to keep an open mind. It is hard to believe, but just hear me out and then we can talk about it.” Max took out his trumpet and began his story. He started with Micah Lieberman and Melinda Smith. He told of their love for each other and the many trumpets Micah had collected. He told of the car wreck and of Micah’s death and Melinda’s coma. Then, he told of buying the trumpet. Twice max had to lift his hand to Philip and signal him not to interrupt. Max told of buying the Bach. He explained that a Bach Stradivarius was a superior trumpet and it did make a difference in his playing. Then, he looked at his father and started to tell him about the visions of Elizabeth during the morning and evening concerts. This was where credibility was waning. Max told of her growing stronger and becoming more real. Philip was sure that Max was in the midst of a breakdown. Then, Max told of talking to Mr. Lieberman and Calvin Smith. Philip was not convinced, but he did think that Max was not trying to lie. There had to be some explanation.

When Isabel and Diane came home with Elizabeth, Diane was holding onto Elizabeth’s arm like she really was part of the family.

Chapter 10

Mr. Lieberman called Max that afternoon. The next Friday, he wanted to bring Calvin Smith to hear Max at the club. He would also have his grandfather with him. Max’s mother and father would still be in town, so Max got tickets for all five of them. He figured that Mr. Smith and Mr. Lieberman might bring some belief to his folks. Max called Klaus and asked him to write music for trumpet, sax and piano for LeRoy Anderson’s piece, Bugler’s Holiday. If you have heard this, it usually is a trumpet trio, but with piano, sax and Max’s trumpet, it was really different. Max played My Funny Valentine again in memory of Micah Lieberman. This was almost getting to be a trade mark because every time he played it, he felt he was dedicating to the dead couple. During the break, Mr. Lieberman explained to the Evans about his son. Grandpa Lieberman insisted that Max and the trumpet were magic. Calvin Smith was quietly crying as he looked at Elizabeth. He explained how much she reminded him of his Melinda before her accident.

Logically, none of this made any sense to Philip Evans. Diane was moved because of the grief the two families had faced. She felt so strongly for Calvin as he talked about the long time he had to watch his Melinda slowly die. She felt sympathy for Mr. Lieberman for the loss of his son and the memories the trumpet brought back. Grandpa Lieberman was a different story. He kept muttering that he knew that Max was the one to play the trumpet and congratulating himself for finding him. Grandpa leaned over to Diane and whispered, “Micah and Melinda will live forever in the music of the horn.”

Diane wondered. The logic of Elizabeth existing had failed badly in so many ways, maybe Grandpa was right in some way. Diane listened to Calvin as he talked about Melinda following Micah for so many years and how she had contributed her savings to help Micah could buy the horn. Calvin kept looking at Elizabeth, but he admitted that, although she resembled Melinda, she wasn’t the same person.

When the evening was over, Max packed up his trumpet and approached his family and new friends. It was Elizabeth who held Calvin as he continued weeping. She whispered something into his ear and he pulled away, gazed into her eyes and embraced her again.

“Max, grandpa was right, you are the person for the trumpet. Micah’s life was cut short before he could attain excellence, but as long as you play we know what he would have been capable of doing,” Mr. Lieberman said as he shook Max's hand. Grandpa was still smiling at his personal genius in placing the horn in Max’s hands.

Max and Elizabeth went home that night arm in arm. Mr. and Mrs. Evans retired to their hotel room. “Philip, I do not think we have much choice. Max played better than he ever did growing up. I don’t just mean better as he would with age and practice, but he was putting something into the music that is indefinable. He was putting some of himself into his songs,” Diane sighed as she was undressing and getting ready for bed.

Philip sighed as he sat down, pulling off his shoes and pants, “There was something else, when he was playing. I saw a drive that I have been searching for in him since he entered college. I am not sure it is toward music or toward what he sees in Elizabeth.”

Max and Elizabeth met his folks for breakfast at the hotel. Max noticed, as always, that Elizabeth seemed charged after every music session. Max had discontinued, at least for the moment, the early morning and evening concerts at the bleachers. He wanted to get himself straight with his folks. Max also knew that to support Elizabeth, he was going to have to make some decisions about his own college career. His parents were still supporting Isabel, but she was doing what they had intended in finishing college and then either starting a career or going on to graduate school. Max, now, was taking on the support of a strange woman who he could not fully explain and he was about to make his college plans second in his life.

Mr. and Mrs. Evans were waiting for them when they arrived at the dining room. Mrs. Evans took Elizabeth’s hands in her own and complemented her on how beautiful she looked. The maternal feeling she was receiving from Diane was something she did not have anywhere in her matrix. There were so many things about life that she just took for granted and there were many that she seemed to have no experience with. Elizabeth, not knowing what she really was or where she came from, could not explain either to her self or to others. There was this drive to be in school. Why would she have this? Why did she have this predilection toward taking Biology courses? Elizabeth didn’t even have any understanding of how she seemed to have a high school education without any memories of where it came from. Elizabeth did know that the feeling she was receiving from Diane was warm and comfortable.

Philip was still trying to be logical. He was questioning Elizabeth gently but she didn’t seem to know any of the answers. She was not being devious. She just didn’t know the simplest answers like where she came from and anything about her past. Philip was beginning to see the problems Max was facing. The problems of money had many solutions, but there were things about Elizabeth that needed to be explained or contrived for her to survive the legal-cultural system. Philip was no longer questioning the fact that Max was connected to Elizabeth. Now, he was concentrating on what he could do to validate her existence. At some point, Philip believed he was going to have to cross the line, or help Max cross it, into the darker world to get Elizabeth an identity.

Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 3:46 am
by begonia9508
Yeas, that's true! Never thought about her identity and her "I am" for the world...

Great writing as ever - EVE :wink:

Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 3:11 pm
by candycane14
Well, at least the parents are on board...sort of. I'm not sure what they can do, but at least there is some parental support. Great part! Update soon!

ooriginal story

Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:15 pm
by ken_r
The Slave Girl

this is an attempt at an original story. it is very long. and in four parts. let me know if you like it

chapter 11

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:30 pm
by ken_r
Stories by ken_r

Chapter 11

All the while, there was another person from Max’s past who was listening and watching the developments of Max’s success and of Elizabeth’s presence. Max had publicly rebuffed Tess. At first, she was so mad that she felt good riddance to the abolition of their relationship. As Max’s reputation increased both musically and socially, and also as talk of most parties was of the mysterious woman, Tess felt she had been cheated of her rightful place by Max’s side. Recently, one of Tess’s bed partners was a young officer in the campus police. She decided to concentrate on him. As he felt himself more and more drawn to her charms, he became more amendable to her requests. So when she asked for a small favor, he was more than willing to comply. “Russ, I need to have a background check on a girl named Elizabeth. She is living with Max Evans. I think there is something illegal about her.” Tess was sure that, as he uncovered more and more about Elizabeth, his investigation would take on an impetus of its own. There would be no reason, if he found something wrong, for Tess to be involved at all.

At first, Russ had to be very careful in his investigation which he had no Legal right to be doing. Whenever he had questions, he faced them at night, while Tess was bringing to his body thrills and ecstasies it was never designed for. A night with Tess assured him that anything he did to accomplish her wishes was correct and justified. Russ spent time in the Student Union talking to students about Max and his playing. This, naturally progressed to a discussion of the mysterious woman seen by his side. Russ’s practical and non-analytical mind dismissed anything regarding para-normal references to magical realms. If he couldn’t explain it, he justified it as illegal. The fact that she had only been seen at first with Max, indicated that Max was, in some way, instrumental in bringing her to the campus. The only thing in Russ’s mind was illegal immigration. He tried to get her fingerprints by watching as she ate in the Union with Max and retrieving her utensils. He was able to run them without authorization by calling in a favor. They came back with no known match, but this didn’t prove anything since most people are not in the system, meaning the fingerprint database. Russ obtained a picture from the campus paper. They had done a story on Max’s concerts during the fall. Russ distributed the picture among different departments and labeled it as a person of interest. With the current terrorist scare, he was able to accomplish this without much question. His actions were still off the radar of his superiors.

Russ, with encouragement from the ministrations received from Tess decided to take a bold step. He waited until he saw Elizabeth alone before he confronted her, “Let me see your identification please.” He was delighted when he saw the fear on her face. Like a trapped animal, Liz dropped everything and fled with Russ right behind her. Russ caught her and quickly handcuffed her. He transported her to the holding room that had held Max so many months ago. Russ contacted emigration authorities and requested they take custody. Elizabeth was denied a phone call to Max. Russ announced to her that she would take this up with the emigration authorities. All of this was illegal, but Russ, still under the influence of Tess, was sure Elizabeth would be too scared and too naive to see through the situation until she was in the hands of emigration. Then he hoped the fear of terrorism would preclude even then her receiving help.

Never doubt the power of music. The phone operator at the campus police building was a regular at the club where Max played. She was in a room alone so no one could see what she was about to do. She called Max and explained what had happened. Max called his father and Philip quickly called a powerful attorney in town, as well as booking a flight from Roswell to the university town.

Emigration was slow in sending their people to pick up Elizabeth. Max made it to the campus building in under ten minutes. He demanded to see Elizabeth. Russ met him as he entered and tried to do all that was in his power to detour Max from his quest. Max pushed Russ aside and demanded at the desk to see a sergeant. Russ was, all the time, trying to discourage Max from taking this further. “You have been harboring an illegal alien and we probably will be coming for you next,” was Russ’s comment.

Max just glared at him. Max was the son of a lawyer, and if maybe he didn’t listen to his father as well as he should, he at least knew when his rights were being threatened. He also knew bullshit when he saw it and Russ’s determination was beyond normal reason.

Edmond Vicinti had been at law school with Philip Evans and they had collaborated several times since. Philip had sounded excited when he called Ed. Vicinti had become a criminal lawyer. This was very different from Philip who was doing only small town law and mostly caring for families and small businesses. Edmond presented his card at the desk. He was directed to the Sergeant’s office where Max was already sitting. Edmond cleared his throat and walked up to Max taking his hand, “Your father called me. Now let’s see about getting the young lady cleared.”

Sergeant Lewis was present when they had brought Max in for trashing the sorority house. He saw then that those charges didn’t hold up and he was not clear why Russ had gone so far out on a limb.

Edmond had a way of looking over his glasses. It gave him the air of condescension when he was facing his opponents, “This young man and I want to see the young lady in question. Now, in a private room!”

Russ was pushed aside as the campus police rushed to fulfill Vicinti’s demands. Elizabeth was brought in and she rushed to Max’s arms. The matron who was with Elizabeth was standing by the door. Edmond turned and glared. She quickly faded behind the closing door. Max and Elizabeth sat holding hands. Edmond again cleared his throat. This was as good of an attention getter as polishing your glasses or packing a pipe. “The problem is that the officer has charged Elizabeth with being an illegal alien. Does she have identification and if not why?” Vicinti asked.

Elizabeth was so scared that she could barely talk. Max addressed the lawyer, “Elizabeth has no identification. We know almost nothing about her. I have been caring for her for the last few months.” Max related the story with the caveat that the story he had was pretty unbelievable. Edmond was a lot easier to talk to than Philip had been. He remained quiet until Max was through.

“What we have is a woman who has lost her past and memory. It is ridiculous for the police to assume she is not a citizen,” Vicinti smiled as he stated the problem the way he was going to see it. He bade the young couple to wait. Edmond walked down the hall to the sergeant’s office. He could hear the sergeant yelling.

“What the shit did you think you were doing?” the sergeant sounded as if he might need medical help himself if things got any worse.

“Sarge, I had it on good authority that the woman living with Max Evans was an illegal alien and I was following protocal as I saw it,” Russ’s quivering voice declared.

“Who the fuck was your ‘good authority?’” the sergeant shouted.

“A student that knows Mr. Evans stated she was sure that the woman living with him was not legal,” Russ tried again.

“Do you mean that blonde bimbo you have been banging every night? She is the same stupid bitch who caused the other complaint against Max Evans. It was bogus also. Turns out she had stolen property from him and he was just recovering it. She is lucky the Evans’ family didn’t press charges and put her in the slammer,” the sergeant said wearily. Where did they get these horny recruits? How was he going to reach retirement dealing with them?

About that time, the emigration authorities arrived. They had an order to pick up one unidentified female and transport her to their holding at the county jail. Edmond stepped in, “Gentlemen, you do not have an emigration problem, but rather a medical one. The lady in question, in no way, indicates herself to be an alien. She is a poor lady who has suffered some sort of trauma and lost her memory. If you take her, you are going to have to provide medical staff for her care.”

Vicinti was known by the police departments as a high-powered attorney who took on high-profiled cases. If he was defending Elizabeth then there might be more than meets the eye to this scared little lady. Emigration had cells filled at county. They did not want to pay for more unless there was good reason. They, likewise, did not need to exercise themselves againse Edmond Vicinti. Everything was taken under advisement. Elizabeth was left with Max Evans. They went home.

Philip arrived. He went directly to Edmond’s office. “Philip, your son “shore” spins a good yarn,” Vicinti said to Philip as he poured an ounce of bourbon. The bourbon was of good quality. It had been brought from the hills of Oklahoma by one of Edmond’s clients.

Philip slowly sipped the strong drink that had a smoky taste of vegetation. “Trouble is Edmond, it is the only story we have about her origin.”

“Well, we sure can’t take a tale like that to a court,” Edmond stated.

“We need to get her some sort of identification,” Philip mused.

“Is there any chance there might be legal ID somewhere?” Edmond sighed as he took another sip of the very smooth liquor. They didn’t make liquor like this commercially. The hill people had been at this for hundreds of years.

“If you had seen those families, the Liebermans and Calvin Smith. You would almost believe what he was telling you,” Philip put down his empty glass and looked at Edmond.

Well, we will probably win this one, but if I were you I would get a detective to talk to some people about getting identification soon,” Edmond like wised put down his empty glass. There was nothing like good “shine” among friends to stimulate thought. “On the way out, the phone operator handed me a card to that club your son plays at. I think I will go there and hear the music this beautiful phantom inspires.

Edmond had a vice. He was a closet bone player. Much like Max he had played the trombone when stress in law school became too much. He liked Jazz when his busy schedule allowed. The best Jazz in his mind was that played in small clubs just for fun. He had been looking forward, for sometime, to this evening. Just for fun he had put his instrument in his car before leaving his home. At the little club mentioned on the card, Edmond found a long line of people waiting to get in. He patiently stood in line until it opened. Inside, it could be any of thousands of small jazz and drinking clubs. There was a bandstand and right beside the band stand was a little table with two chairs. The band entered and Edmond noticed that the small woman, Elizabeth, was sitting at the stage side table. Edmond also noticed that the band played everything from dixieland to big band and then to cool jazz, but most of it was from years ago, music written and played during the greatest years of jazz. Edmond understood then. These musicians were playing by ear and they had learned their craft by listening to the greats of the past. He then saw that they were improving the songs of the past. They were making the songs fit the instruments they had. They were only playing a woodwind player, who changed from sax to clarinet, a string base, a piano player, the drummer and then there was Max. No one was a star. They each took turns, letting theim selves be immersed into the music. Their individuality gave their music its heart or its soul. At the break, Max came over to Edmond and shook his hand. Max made the obligatory thanks for his help in Elizabeth’s case. “Do you think you would have room for a bone player?” Edmond couldn’t tell if he, himself, was joking or pleading.

Max looked at the boys and they shrugged. “If you have your weapon, go get it. Max signaled the door bouncer to let Edmond out and back in with his instrument. During the remainder of the break, Edmond warmed up his horn. He enjoyed playing, but it had been sometime since he had jammed with a group.

The leader, Bob on string bass, nodded at everyone and suggested Dixieland. Bob pointed to Klaus, “let’s try that Firehouse Five arrangement of “Canal Street Blues.” Klaus nodded and started off. Canal Streets Blues played Dixieland usually is fast with a beat, but this arrangement was about feeling and crying which is exactly what they did. Once Edmond caught on to what they were doing, there is nothing that can wail like a trombone. As Klaus kept the song going, Edmond would play his moaning cry only to be answered by Max. Klaus finally started to snap his fingers faster and faster until they began to play like a fugue. This kept on until Max, getting red in the face, waved his hand to stop. The audience was laughing and Edmond was bent over trying to catch his breath. This was what Edmond missed about not playing in a small band. Having fun and entertaining at the same time. They went on to some slow Dixieland that ended each time in a fast two-step march. When the night was over, Edmond had not had so much fun since law school. He had also had a chance to study Elizabeth. As they were having fun, he saw color rise in her cheeks. She seemed to come to life as the evening went on. Tony came over and shook Edmond’s hand. Max introduced Edmond as his lawyer. “If you want to quit your day job you will always be welcome,” Tony said as Edmond finished putting his horn away.

Edmond and Philip had lunch together the next day. “I am beginning to believe you, Philip. Elizabeth is connected to the music. Maybe, Max is right and there is magic. Our problem is to come up with a real, non-magical Identification for the girl,” Edmond said.

The Slave Girl
this is an attempt at an original story. it is very long. and in four parts. let me know if you like it. All of the parts will be posted at:
Writers Cave at Roswell Heaven

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:27 pm
by candycane14
Great part! I'm glad Tess was thwarted once again! Update soon!

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 6:43 pm
by begonia9508
Great part! EVE :wink: :roll:

Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:42 pm
by flyawayraven
This is such a heart warming story...I love the mystery of it all. Please come back soon with another part.

Jess :D

chapter 12

Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 6:15 pm
by ken_r
Stories by ken_r



Chapter 12

“Max said you had a good time last night,” Philip Evans laughed.

“To see her face as we were playing was enough encouragement for me. I am making a note to self, ‘Play more music and work less.’” Edmond chuckled.

Philip raised his hand, “After we do something about Elizabeth.”

Edmond was thoughtful, “Do you remember when Durriken was in school with us?”

Philip scratched his chin, “Yes, but I haven’t heard from him since he went home to Romania. I still don’t know why he was allowed to be in college here by our government or by his.”

“That is what I mean, he knew how to do strange things. I remember he got away with several things in school because of his silver tongue,” Edmond mused. “You know, he really believed in the magic of his old people. I think they were Roma,”

Philip frowned, going back was hard sometimes, “Yes he was a Gypsy.”

Edmond leaned back, “Exactly, and now he is also a diplomat with diplomatic immunity. I, also, understand he is still a master manipulator when it comes to bending rules.”

Philip leaned back. This was something to think about. There was danger in the two of them becoming involved with Durriken if they were still representing Elizabeth. Edmond’s obligation was only with the emigration call at the time when Elizabeth had been picked up. Max could get another lawyer if any other trouble came up.

“Let us go to Washington,” Edmond suggested.

Philip and Edmond made an appointment at the Romanian embassy. They were ushered into a room lavishly appointed and they waited. Soon a man their age entered. He was wearing an Italian suit. His black hair was streaked with gray. The gray showed up even more than it did in either Philip or Edmond. “Ah, two men of business wanting a poor Gypsy to tell their fortune. Perhaps this child of Roma knows where fortunes and loves can be found,”

Edmond spoke, “Can it, you damned Gypsy or we will recall your passport.”

With that, Durriken embraced his two college friends. “And what can this poor Gypsy do for his rich American school mates?”

Philip chuckled, “We have a story to tell you. We can’t swear it is true, but we have to live with it, anyhow.” With that, they sat and related the whole story of the Liebermans, Calvin Smith, Micah and Melinda and finally Max, Elizabeth and the trumpet. When they were finished, Philip and Edmond sat back and looked at Durriken.

“My skeptical American friends. If I had told that story, you would have said I was returning to the ignorance of the hill people. I, on the other hand, find your story completely believable. A tortured soul, a magical spell, perhaps the belief of the elder Jewish grandfather. Yes, the soul creating for itself, its own existence fueled by love and artistry. I would like to meet the old man. I imagine we would have a lot of understanding between us. There are many stories like this among the old people,” Durriken said. I find it amusing that you, Philip, one of the most rational persons of our class, should have your only son as the target of this tale.”

Philip just shook his head, “There is no way I would have believed to if it had happened to any one else.”

“Yes, other than coming to the only person you would know that would unequivocally believe you, what can I do for you?” Durriken smiled as he spread his arms open to his friends.

Edmond spoke, “We also remember that Gypsy who challenged the rules at the law school and argued them into a complete revision.”

With this, Durriken laughed, “But for what other reason would a prestigious institution create such abominations of jurisprudence, than to tempt a young, aspiring lawyer to challenge them. You have to admit that the administration was running back to its roots trying to find precedence for such rules.”

“Well, we need your agile and slightly warped mind to help us. Maybe with some sort of international, diplomatical le jour d’main.” Philip requested.

Durriken threw back his head and laughed, “Like in law school, except we would be wooling over the heads and eyes of governments, eh no?”

Edmond handed Durriken an envelope. Here is a description, some photos including an old one, of Elizabeth. We have included all that either she or my son know about her.

Durriken smiled. There is one price, he grinned more, “When we are through, I want to bring my baritone sax and with you, my brother, I want to play a night with the of band of Philip’s son.”

Philip and Edmond laughed, “We even promise you billing as the Jazz king of Romania,” Philip said

They spent the rest of the day with Durriken talking and telling tales that happened so long ago that none of them clearly remembered, so what ever they said was accepted. After that Edmond and Philip returned to their homes.

It was seven O’clock in the morning. The phone rang as Philip Evans was getting out of the shower. Diane had already gotten up and was fixing breakfast. She answered the phone then calling, “Philip, its for you.”

Philip, with a towel still draped him and still dripping from just getting out of the bathroom, picked up the bedroom phone. “Yes,” was about all the greeting he had this early.

“Philip, turn on the national news channel. This is Edmond.”

Philip reached over to the bedroom TV and turned on NBC news, the morning news he always watched as he got dressed. There, looking at him, was Durriken. Philip, for a minute, remembered when they had been caught doing some prank or the other in college. It was always Durriken who stood up, and with great verbosity, would talk until the authorities would just throw them out of their offices in disgust. “…and as I was saying, my ward, Estell Williams, has been declared missing. She was traveling on a private yacht. She was to have landed sometime this summer in Florida. From there, she was to travel through the southwest and meet me just before Christmas here in Washington DC.”

One of the reporters shouted, “Minister, was there any report of her landing in Florida?”

Durriken raised his hands and shrugged, “We are checking on this, but we have not been able to find any record of her ship landing in Florida. The port authorities have no record of an Estell Williams ever going through their offices.”

“Minister, why are you just now sounding the alarm. Weren’t you worried when you didn’t hear from her for so long?”

Durriken just shrugged, “Young people to day, we had an argument when she left. She said she was able to handle her own affairs. This is not the first time something like this has happened.”

“Her name doesn’t sound Romanian. How is she related to you?”

“She isn’t Romanian, although she has never before been out or Romania. She was born of American parents during the dark ages of my country under the late dictatorship,” Durriken shed a tear as he answered this question. “Her parents were killed by the government. I rescued her and raised her as my own daughter. No notice of this was made, like so many things during that time. I was bringing papers so her citizenship could be established. She wanted the freedom of traveling on her own before completing college here in the United States.”

Philip, still holding the phone, “Well we did ask him to help us. I guess, we always knew that he would do it up big.”

Edmond chuckled, “Philip, I think a new trip to Washington is now due.”

Diane had been listening to the television. She came up to the bedroom, “Philip wasn’t that the Romanian we all knew in college? The one that always called himself a poor Gypsy?”

Philip was just sitting on their bed. The towel was still draped around his body, “That is him. I hope we always come out of this as well as we did in college.”

“Why, Philip? What does his ward have to do with you?” Diane queried.

“He thinks he is helping us. He is setting up an identity for Elizabeth,” Philip just sat there holding his head while Diane went back down stairs shaking her’s. She well remembered the things Durriken did back in college.

Edmond Vicinti and Philip Evans arrived at Washington D.C. the next day. The first thing they saw in the paper was a picture of Elizbeth as she must have looked when she was younger. The paper had an article about the Romanian/American who had disappeared. They had contacted the Romanian government, but even now, there is not complete trust between the Gypsies and the non-Gypsies in Romania. The Government could neither confirm nor deny the story. Durriken had added more information. The couple, Williams, had been killed in an attemp to start government unrest. There was no record of their little girl, but that was no surprise stnce she had been taken by the Gypsies to be raised. They referred the news authority to various Gypsy bands, but they made it clear that they didn’t want anything to do with the problem. Durriken, for the first time, added some very poorly defined pictures of Estell.

By the time Philip and Edmond arrived at the Romanian embassy, Durriken was feeling right well about himself. Durriken had filed his papers with the United States Social Security System and was well on the way to obtaining a workable birth certificate. It required notarized letters from people who had knowledge of her birth and of her birth parents. Durriken easily obtained these, mailed from Romania by his second cousin. It was his first cousin, who was a PhotoShop artist, that had sent the pictures the day before of Estell growing up. Philip asked, “What about the parents you claim were killed?”

Durriken just shook his head. “They were born of the flower children of the sixties. They were out to right the wrongs of the world. No one knows how he or she got into Romania, but it is documented that they were shot trying to foment a revolution in a totally totalitarian state.” Durriken shrugged, “They made it hard for those of us who were really ready to set up a revolution.”

Philip and Edmond returned to their homes. It was almost three days before someone on the university campus saw the similarity in Elizabeth to the mysterious ward of the deplomat. Then the Romanian embassy was flooded with calls.

Max and Elizabeth got up about nine o’clock that morning. They looked out their window and they saw news trucks, a crowd of cameramen and reporters. They quickly dressed and opened their door. The noise was deafening. The reporters, who had been a discrete distance from their apartment, crowded close with the invitation of the open door around the couple standing on the step.

“Estell, do you remember anything about Romania?” one reporter shouted.

“Estell, do you remember anything about arriving in America?” another requested.

Elizabeth was frightened and Max was confused. About that time, a black limousine with flags on the fenders and a motorcycle escort drove up honking to scatter the crowd in the street. An immaculate man about the age of Max’s father got out. He had clothes that definitely were expensive and imported. He strode up the walk maneuvering expertly among the crowd of reporters, supporters and just lurkers. He walked up to Elizabeth and put his arm around her. Turning to the crowd, he proudly announced, “I have found my beloved ward, Estell. Please give us time and we will have an announcement about what has happened to her. With that, he shepherded the couple from the step back into their apartment.

Max’s mind was still filled with sleep. He wasn’t clear what had happened or who was this “take charge” man who had entered their home with them. “Max Evans, you are the son of one of my best friends in college. Perhaps, if he hadn’t been so suave, I would have won your mother and you would have been my son. You my dear,” turning to Elizabeth, “are the child of magic. No, no, my children, to a child of Roma, magic is not an anathema. We are here to establish a real, non-magical, history so you can become a legal personage to this mundane, unbelieving world.”

If Max’s father had been present, he would have been transported to the Dean’s office so long ago as Durriken stood before officials of the university and confusticated them with his circulatorias logic. As it was, Max just sat wide-eyed as Durriken explained, “Philip and Edmond, my closest friends in college, have asked me to solve Elizabeth’s identity for the world. For me, I believe you are conjured by love and music into a living, breathing woman of extreme beauty and grace. It is the philistines in the world, those without imagination, those without love for either a beautiful woman or the excellence of music, that we must satisfy.

God, Max wished this man would speak straight English! He was worse than a politician. It was obvious that he enjoyed immensely, hearing his own rhetoric.

Durriken was going through some papers, “My child, your real name is Estell Williams. Your parents were killed right after you were born. They were children of the flowers. The sixties, was the time of awareness in America, but, alas, not of the rest of the world. You were raised by children of Roma, or Gypsies, to you. You disappeared while traveling to America by private yacht. The yacht also has disappeared, More than likely, taken by drug pirates when you were approaching the American coast. We know nothing of what happened to you until yesterday when your name and picture were forwarded to the Romanian embassy and, thus, as your guardian, to me.” Then Durriken dropped into perfect English, “Between you, me and the fence post, this is a pile of crap, but it is the best fiction I could write, given the timeline your father requested.”

Max and Elizabeth sat on the couch looking at this much “greater than life character.” Max looked at the papers Durriken was laying out on the coffee table before them. The first was decorated with all sorts of formal embossing. Max could not read the language it was written in. He did see the words Estell Williams. Durriken pointed to the paper, “This is Estell’s Romanian birth certificate.” He pointed to the next, “This is a sworn to birth certificate presented to Estell Williams stating she was born of American parents on foreign soil, that of blessed Romania. This is a copy of an application for a social security number. It would have been so much easier if we could have just asked my cousin to make one, but somewhere you have to be in the legal system. We, the children of Roma, are a minority in Romania, but they want to keep us happy so here is your Romanian paper of citizenship. Again, your own country will be a little slower getting your American citizenship papers to you.” Durriken leaned back and smiled. He hadn’t had so much fun since law school.

Max and Elizabeth just looked. “Why would you do all of this for us?” Max asked unbelieving in their good fortune, if this worked.

“Philip and Edmond and your mother put up with more shit from me when we were in college than I could ever repay. Your mother was always sure that I was going to get both of them kicked out of college. I enjoy a challenge and bilking an entity as big as a government makes the challenge that much better. Finally, I was promised a place playing bari-sax in your band for the time I was in town,” Durriken’s personality was so infectious that Max could well understand the friendship and fear his parents must have had being in school with him.

He had to chuckle at the most important payment Durriken wanted, that of playing in the band for a couple of evenings.

They went back outside to face the reporters. Here Durriken’s verbosity caused the tabloid reporters to write faster than they had ever done and still they knew they had missed most of what was said. Those with pocket recorders would spend hours trying to unwind the phrases recorded to make sense of what was said. To the cameras, Durriken should have received an ‘Oscar.’ He was in tears as he hugged Elizabeth now known as Estell. He proclaimed his joy at finding his lost ward and when asked about what happened to her, he loudly cried, “The fact that she is returned is enough. We will sort out what happened much later.” Durriken then turned to Max and embraced him, “This young man has cared for my precious Estell and I think they are in love. I bless them both in any search for happiness they can find.” With that, Durriken returned and pushed the three of them back inside. The reporters ate this up. It had romance, mystery, intrigue and everything else that sold news, but the local college kids were still remembering when Elizabeth now Estell was just a whisp and how she got stronger from the power of the trumpet.

“I will return in three weeks. Maybe then, you can arrange for our concert or better our ‘jam session,” Durriken then left.

Elizabeth and Max sat for a time. They were still broke and Max had about used up all of his credit. Elizabeth was now a legal entity and that should help. Tony heard about the “jam session.” He was considering how to cope with it. Two of the members of the band were in grad school. Klaus, the piano player, would get his master’s this spring. James, the winds player, would also graduate with a Master’s in Engineering. Bob, the string bass player and the nominal leader of the band, was a senior and would graduate with a business degree. Ernest, the drummer, was on the extended five, six or until his money ran out program. Durriken would be back before spring semester started, but the band needed to think about what they were going to do this next semester.

Max’s sister and his closest friends came by. Maria, was blown away by the press they had been getting. She knew something was not right, but she also knew that getting legal status for Elizabeth would make things much easier for Max. Michael knew that this man from somewhere was probably full of bull, but if it worked and made Max and Elizabeth happy, he would be satisfied. Truthfully, Alex would have preferred the story told by Durriken to have been true. It would have satisfied his mind with its logic but he still remembered Elizabeth being here all of a sudden and just as quickly disappearing. Isabel just wanted her brother to be happy. She was demanding and sometimes rude to him, but really, all she wanted was for him to finish school, get a job, get married and hang out like old marrieds with herself and Alex. Was that too controlling or too much to ask for?

Max told them about the future concert, “Maria would you bring some scores by and maybe sing a couple of torch songs with us?” Max wouldn’t have to ask Maria twice to do this.

Tony was trying to figure how to make the most of this concert. He finally decided that he would not use the club. He would rent a hall and bill this as the Graduates Band with Max and his magic trumpet, the Gypsy Jazz King, the Golden Bone of the Law School and the torchy voice of Miss Maria DeLuca. Then Tony got one more idea. He called a friend who did a lot of recording and asked if he would like to record this session. It was decided that they would play on two nights, a Friday and a Saturday. The ticket sales were set up and advertising was established. Max bought tickets for both nights for his parents and his friends. It was understood that the small table would be set up on stage for Elizabeth. The band was excited because their share would be enough to offset a considerable part of their spring semester expenses. Max was excited because his cut would sustain him until he and Elizabeth found a more lasting solution.

Diane and Isabel Evans took Elizabeth shopping. There was a certain amount of notoriety as they entered the dress shop. It took Diane and Isabel almost an hour to find something they could present to Elizabeth. For herself, Elizabeth would have been happy with almost anything in the shop. Nowhere in her present experience, nor in that of her barely remembered past, had she had an experience like this.

On the night of the concert, the hall had been sold out. The college kids were the first to grab what they could in tickets and then the locals who knew about the small club. Finally, when the press heard of it, they arrived in droves. The college kids who didn’t really care about music were in the crowd scalping with the best of them. Max’s parents and friends all had seats together, so Michael was with his friends as he heard the love of his life sing.

Although Ernest was made to get a clean denim shirt, they couldn’t make him tuck it in. Klaus appeared in a new black suit. James and Bob both wore turtle neck sweaters with dark slacks. Max wore dark slacks with a dress shirt. His kerchief that he used to hold the trumpet was tucked in his shirt pocket. When Max walked Elizabeth onto the stage, there was applause both for the band and for Elizabeth. Diane and Isabel discreetly gave each other a high five. The dress was a light blue that stopped well above the knees, but there were layers of netting, and finally, the outer shell of silver lace which made it much longer. The discrete length was off set by the translucent netting, adding a sexiness or innocence depending on how you looked at it. Durriken and Edmond came onto the stage wearing their law school blazers, although both having been let out a bit to account for time.

They opened with St. Louis Blues. Durriken’s guttural baritone saxophone leading, to be answered by Max an octive above. James, on clarinet, took the melody with Durriken and Max battling each other. The whole time Edmond’s trombone was wailing an answer at each phrase. Klaus and Bob were keeping up the beat with chords. Even Michael thought it was good. The rest of the audience were thrilled. Then Maria walked on the stage. She was wearing a floor length black gown, which emphasized her blond hair. Her deal with the band was that she could sing two of her own original songs, then she would sing the rest of their choosing. She started off with a song she had written. Her smoky, whisky voice came across to the audience. It was surprising how quiet they became while listening to her. The band played softly in the background, except for a break for her to catch her breath, then back to her singing at the end. The audience gave her a standing ovation, except for Michael who whistled and hurrahed. Maria retired to sit with Elizabeth at the small table. Elizabeth held Maria’s hands across the table as she said her appreciation to the young singer.

Next, they performed some traditional Dixieland pieces featuring Edmond’s trombone and Durriken’s baritone Sax.

The night went that way. They tried to feature every player and support each other. Maria had promised to do her best in exchange for displaying her own creations. Durriken had been promised a good time. Everything had been achieved beyond everyone’s expectation.

Around the hall Tony had placed several signs advertising that this band regularly played at his club. The recording man came to him and stated that he wanted to record again tomorrow.

Max and Elizabeth made their way home. At home, they lay in their bed and were talking, waiting for their adrenaline to recede. “Elizabeth, we have come a long way since that day in the pawn shop. Old Ibrum was right when he said you were magical,” Max whispered to her.

“Max, I am not sure that is quite what he really said. He said I would be part of something magical. At that time, it was assumed he was talking about Micah and Melinda. I think he all along knew that something beyond them was going to happen. He, also, was so sure that you were going to be part of it that he worked to make you buy Micah’s trumpet,” Elizabeth was lying against Max’s chest, her head on his arm.

Max sighed, “All of this because people love people and also music. We have been so blessed to have so many friends who have enjoyed music.

The second night was a repeat of the first with different songs. Max also had obtained three tickets for Mr. Lieberman, grandpa and Calvin Smith. Again, though he enjoyed the concert, Calvin watched Elizabeth thinking all the while about his absent Melinda. Elizabeth had told Calvin that she was not Melinda, but she contained what was best in Melinda. Calvin would remember that Melinda was gone, but the best of all of her essence would live on in Elizabeth. Calvin understood none of this, but he treasured the thoughts.

Durriken flew back to D.C., but he promised to return to check on his ward from time to time. Tony was working on a deal to present to the band. The recording company wanted to produce the recording of live music if they could reach an agreement with everyone concerned. When he presented this proposal to the band, along with the proceeds from the concert and royalties they realized they would all be able to finish the rest of their college semesters without worry. Max found that he would have enough to handle tuition for both himself and Elizabeth along with their expenses. The band talked it over and they agreed to play at Tony’s club on Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays. They would make this a regular thing and it would give them enough money to see their semesters through as well as provide a start for the graduates to begin their lives. The three days a week with careful scheduling, could be arranged to not interfere with their studies.

A news agency turned up the Williams family who were related to Estell. They weren’t very nice when interviewed. They all said that the woman their boy had married had a sullied reputation. They did not think Estell was their son’s child. Elizabeth felt bad about even her surrogate parents being spoken of in this way. It took Durriken to straighten her out. As he hugged her to him he said, “if you were seen as pure, there would always be questions about your heritage. As it is, they imply that your pretend mother had an affair with a child of Roma. That makes you even more precious to my people, who definitely do believe in magic, and to the press it makes you a figure to be supported. Since your supposed relatives denounce you thus, they will support you.

Sometimes Elizabeth really wished that Durriken was her guardian and a person who had brought her up. On his part Durriken reminded her that for the public he would remain so and since she had been brought up by magic, she was special.

Epilog
Eventually, Max and Liz were married, two times. Once in a Presbyterian church and again by a group of gypsies residing in the United States. Liz found that her interest in biology was real and she went on to get several degrees in biochemistry and then molecular biology. Liz went by Elizabeth when she was among friends but among her adopted people and with Durriken, she went buy the name Estell.

Max finally graduated and took his business management degree on to manage a hospital. He became a patron of healers. Isabel and Alex married and started their own company in marketing. Maria, from the exposure she received from the infamous concert, got a chance to go on tour. It was always noticed that at various stops during the tour, she was met by a strong handsome young man who was reported to be an executive in a construction company. Eventually, she tired of travel and she settled down to be the wife of the executive, but she to write music for a publishing company. Tess allowed her self to be humped by the captain of the football team, and for a short time, she gloried in his achievements. Later, she settled down to work in an insurance company. Kyle drifted for a time after college. Then while studying in India, he met a Ballywood starlet. They married once he became a security consultant in the Far East. No matter where they started, it was as if they were destined to travel certain paths.

By the way, Max and Liz named their daughter Melinda. Calvin Smith was her godparent. They traveled several times to Romania where Max was instrumental in setting up several hospitals there.

Once a year, until the death of Edmond, they played as the Gypsy king of jazz and the magic trumpet in Tony’s little club along with the current college combo that played there regularly.


I have finished my fairy tale. I did this in remembrance of my son the Macintosh programmer and the jazz trumpeter who never got to finish his life. Thank you for walking with me as I spin this yarn

Ken r

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