Re: Angel Of Silence (AU, M/L, ADULT) Cpt 20 07/Mar/10
Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:50 pm
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Ellie
Courtney
XAF RU208
Carolyn
Ginger
Zaneri1
Eve
Natalie36
AvalonRose
Drogyn
Carrie
Chapter 20
It had been a few weeks since Max had returned to the hospital after visiting Kyle; they still hadn’t heard any news from the police about the attack. He had stayed by her bedside that night while Jeff and Nancy went home to freshen up and grab something to eat before heading back to stay with Liz.
Max had kept his promise to Liz and her parents. He made sure that he went to visit her as soon as college was finished. He would spend most of his time talking to Liz. Explaining what classes he had that day and any dramas that had played out. He also completed most of his assignments in the hospital room instead of going home to do them.
Since Liz had that awful seizure Max didn’t want to leave her side but he knew that when she woke up, she would have a lot of work to catch up on. He arranged for all of her friends in the group to obtain the class notes she would need.
Any classes that Liz had on her own, Max managed to find one of her classmates that were willing to help. By now, everyone at the college had heard of the attack on Liz. To say that the majority of them were shocked was an understatement. Although they hadn’t gotten to know her personally, she seemed like a nice person, so it wasn’t hard for Max to get the extra help he needed.
As he quietly entered her room, Jeff and Nancy turned to look at him.
“How is she?”
This was the question he always asked them when he entered the room.
“Still the same,” replied Jeff, in a sad tone.
“The doctors say that she should be awake by now. They’ve done more tests, given her a brain scan but don’t really understand why she hasn’t woken up,” explained Nancy.
“So the scan showed up normal?” asked Max.
“As far as they can tell but they have to wait for her to wake up to make a full assessment.”
“How long have you been here?” asked Max, they both looked exhausted.
“Since you left last night,” replied Jeff.
This was their usual routine. Max would arrive and the Parkers would leave for a while to get some much needed rest and freshen up.
“Max, we can’t keep asking you to do this every day. What about your school work? Surely that is suffering?” said Nancy.
“No, I have it all under control. Don’t worry about that. I do most of my assignments when I’m here with Liz. I think that it’s the only thing that’s keeping me sane right now.”
Nancy got out of her chair and walked over to Max. She engulfed him in a hug that would have crushed his bones if he wasn’t as fit as he was.
“I can’t thank you enough for everything you’ve been doing Max. I don’t know what Jeff or I would have done without you being here.”
Max’s face turned several shades of red before Jeff managed to wrestle his wife away from him.
“You’re embarrassing the poor lad Nancy,” laughed Jeff, at the uncomfortable look on Max’s face.
Nancy had a sheepish look on her face, patted Max on the cheek and apologized.
“Well, he is practically part of the family,” said Nancy, with a sly smile on her lips and walked out of the room.
Jeff just laughed at the look on Max’s face. It was the first time he had laughed since this whole tragic event had happened and it felt good. He knew what Nancy was up to. She would be picking out wedding dresses before Liz was fully recovered. Once Nancy had made up her mind, not even Jeff could change it and he knew that Nancy wanted no other man for her daughter, except Max. Oh yes, the poor lad was in trouble.
Max moved his chair next to the bed and gently took Liz’s hand in his own.
“You are a very special person Liz Parker. You have a lot of friends that are helping you right now, even if you don’t know it yet. People who don’t even know you as well as we do. Once you get better we’ll go somewhere and rest before you have to go back to college. I’m hoping that you will wake up before our two week break. We could go away then, have some fun. What do you say?”
He always felt a fool talking to Liz like this, because it felt as if he was just talking to himself but the doctors said it would help so he buried his feelings and just got on with it.
“M ... Max?”
Max’s head whipped around to look at Liz’s face. He could have sworn he’d just heard her talk, but then, he didn’t actually know what her voice sounded like. God was he finally going insane with worry? Was his mind now making its own reality? He watched Liz for a while but there was no movement what so ever. Yep, he was finally losing it.
He decided that he would have to get some much needed rest. He’d been burning the candle at both ends lately, trying to split his time between Liz, his friends and college.
“Max, h ... help me Max.”
The voice came out more as a croak than a whisper but he knew that his mind had definitely not made that up because he also felt her hand slightly squeeze his own. He jumped up with such force that his chair made an awful loud scraping noise in the quiet room, and then clattered to the floor.
Max had never moved so quick in his life. He raced from the room and ran down the corridor, getting annoyed glares from the nurses. He could see Nancy and Jeff just about to turn the corner when he shouted.
“Jeff, Nancy, come quickly!”
They stopped dead in their tracks, turned to look at Max and when they saw him, broke out into a run. Max turned around and started to run back towards Liz’s room.
“Max, what is it?” shouted Nancy.
“No time, come quickly,” he panted, as he broke into a full run. He charged through the door and skidded next to Liz’s bedside. He gently grabbed her hand.
“Liz, it’s Max, if you can hear me, try to squeeze my hand.”
Jeff and Nancy came barrelling into the room both getting lodged in the door as they tried to enter at the same time. Nancy was the first to break free and went to the other side of the bed.
She looked up at Max.
“What is it Max?”
“Nancy, I know you are going to think I’m nuts but I KNOW I’ve just heard Liz speak my name.”
“That’s not possible Max,” said Jeff, “She hasn’t spoken since the accident.”
“Jeff, I know that. I swear to you I’m not making this up.”
He turned his attention to back to Liz. He put gentle pressure on her hand.
“Liz, it’s Max. Please, come back to us!”
“M...Max?”
Both Jeff and Nancy stared at each other in shock. That had definitely come from their daughter.
“Liz, give my hand a squeeze if you can hear me,” said Max, never taking his eyes off Liz.
That’s when he felt her hand gently squeezing his own. Tears of joy sprang into his eyes.
Nancy ran out of the room and grabbed the nurse at the station.
“Mary, can you please get Liz’s doctor right away!”
Nancy knew the names of all the nurses and doctors who had seen Liz over the last week.
“What’s wrong?” asked Mary.
“She’s, she’s talking,” said Nancy.
“What?”
Mary had gotten to know the Parkers well since she was Liz’s main carer. She knew all about the tragic accident when she was just four years old and she also knew that the girl hadn’t been able to talk since then.
“I’ll go and get Dr Radcliffe right away,” said Mary, dialling a number on her desk phone.
Nancy ran back into the room and stood by Jeff.
“Mary is getting the doctor now.”
“She’s not said anything else since you left,” explained Jeff, “but she has responded to Max’s voice and squeezed his hand a few times.”
********
Liz was stuck in that dark cold place again. She could smell the foul stench of death all around her and she wondered if this is what hell was like. Then the bodies started to claw their way across the ground, making an awful sound as their bones scraped along the cold concrete floor.
The charred remains of her parents came into view and she automatically backed away from them. Why did they keep doing this to her? Why couldn’t they leave her alone? Were they trying to make her insane?
As the body, she knew as her father’s reached out to touch her, she heard the comforting voice of Max surround her soul.
“M ... Max,” she said in awe, as she looked around trying to find him. If he was here, she knew he would help her.
When she didn’t hear him respond she started to lose hope. So she did the only thing she could think of.
“Max, h ... help me Max.”
She knew it was impossible that this was her own voice but if she could latch on to his voice maybe he could get her out of this place. Maybe it was her mind trying to break free from the darkness.
As she spoke her plea, the body of her parents started to retreat back into the darkness, but something strange happened. There was a slight shimmer around the bodies and she could see that some parts of their bodies now appeared to have flesh on them, as if that part had never been burned.
All of a sudden she could feel his hand holding hers. She gently squeezed it to reassure herself that she wasn’t dreaming.
When she felt him squeeze hers back she knew that somehow this was real. She couldn’t quite understand what was happening but she didn’t want to lose her hold on him. She was just about to hold on to his hand for dear life, when she felt it ripped from her.
She couldn’t understand what was happening and was completely terrified.
“No! Max! Come back!”
But her cry went unheard as Max had already left the room and was halfway down the corridor getting Nancy and Jeff.
She felt the warmth leave her soul and the bodies of her parents started towards her again. The perfect flesh that was there a second ago was now a mangled mess of bone and skin again.
Liz shook her head trying to understand what was happening to her. This must be one of her nightmares again, one that she couldn’t quite wake up from. Then she felt his hand in hers again and his voice pleading her.
“Liz, it’s Max. Please, come back to us!”
“M...Max?”
Although she couldn’t see him she knew that if she let go of his hand again, she would be lost in this darkness so she stood and waited to hear his voice again.
“Liz, give my hand a squeeze if you can hear me.”
She followed the voice; it was coming from the small pinpoint of light that was up ahead. With his hand in hers she wasn’t afraid anymore so she made her way towards it.
The next thing she knew her eyes shot open and she could see the blurred image of Jeff, Nancy and Max all staring at her in shock.
“Welcome back,” said Max, as his shocked face turned into a huge smiling one.
Ellie
Courtney
XAF RU208
Carolyn
Ginger
Zaneri1
Eve
Natalie36
AvalonRose
Drogyn
Carrie
Chapter 20
It had been a few weeks since Max had returned to the hospital after visiting Kyle; they still hadn’t heard any news from the police about the attack. He had stayed by her bedside that night while Jeff and Nancy went home to freshen up and grab something to eat before heading back to stay with Liz.
Max had kept his promise to Liz and her parents. He made sure that he went to visit her as soon as college was finished. He would spend most of his time talking to Liz. Explaining what classes he had that day and any dramas that had played out. He also completed most of his assignments in the hospital room instead of going home to do them.
Since Liz had that awful seizure Max didn’t want to leave her side but he knew that when she woke up, she would have a lot of work to catch up on. He arranged for all of her friends in the group to obtain the class notes she would need.
Any classes that Liz had on her own, Max managed to find one of her classmates that were willing to help. By now, everyone at the college had heard of the attack on Liz. To say that the majority of them were shocked was an understatement. Although they hadn’t gotten to know her personally, she seemed like a nice person, so it wasn’t hard for Max to get the extra help he needed.
As he quietly entered her room, Jeff and Nancy turned to look at him.
“How is she?”
This was the question he always asked them when he entered the room.
“Still the same,” replied Jeff, in a sad tone.
“The doctors say that she should be awake by now. They’ve done more tests, given her a brain scan but don’t really understand why she hasn’t woken up,” explained Nancy.
“So the scan showed up normal?” asked Max.
“As far as they can tell but they have to wait for her to wake up to make a full assessment.”
“How long have you been here?” asked Max, they both looked exhausted.
“Since you left last night,” replied Jeff.
This was their usual routine. Max would arrive and the Parkers would leave for a while to get some much needed rest and freshen up.
“Max, we can’t keep asking you to do this every day. What about your school work? Surely that is suffering?” said Nancy.
“No, I have it all under control. Don’t worry about that. I do most of my assignments when I’m here with Liz. I think that it’s the only thing that’s keeping me sane right now.”
Nancy got out of her chair and walked over to Max. She engulfed him in a hug that would have crushed his bones if he wasn’t as fit as he was.
“I can’t thank you enough for everything you’ve been doing Max. I don’t know what Jeff or I would have done without you being here.”
Max’s face turned several shades of red before Jeff managed to wrestle his wife away from him.
“You’re embarrassing the poor lad Nancy,” laughed Jeff, at the uncomfortable look on Max’s face.
Nancy had a sheepish look on her face, patted Max on the cheek and apologized.
“Well, he is practically part of the family,” said Nancy, with a sly smile on her lips and walked out of the room.
Jeff just laughed at the look on Max’s face. It was the first time he had laughed since this whole tragic event had happened and it felt good. He knew what Nancy was up to. She would be picking out wedding dresses before Liz was fully recovered. Once Nancy had made up her mind, not even Jeff could change it and he knew that Nancy wanted no other man for her daughter, except Max. Oh yes, the poor lad was in trouble.
Max moved his chair next to the bed and gently took Liz’s hand in his own.
“You are a very special person Liz Parker. You have a lot of friends that are helping you right now, even if you don’t know it yet. People who don’t even know you as well as we do. Once you get better we’ll go somewhere and rest before you have to go back to college. I’m hoping that you will wake up before our two week break. We could go away then, have some fun. What do you say?”
He always felt a fool talking to Liz like this, because it felt as if he was just talking to himself but the doctors said it would help so he buried his feelings and just got on with it.
“M ... Max?”
Max’s head whipped around to look at Liz’s face. He could have sworn he’d just heard her talk, but then, he didn’t actually know what her voice sounded like. God was he finally going insane with worry? Was his mind now making its own reality? He watched Liz for a while but there was no movement what so ever. Yep, he was finally losing it.
He decided that he would have to get some much needed rest. He’d been burning the candle at both ends lately, trying to split his time between Liz, his friends and college.
“Max, h ... help me Max.”
The voice came out more as a croak than a whisper but he knew that his mind had definitely not made that up because he also felt her hand slightly squeeze his own. He jumped up with such force that his chair made an awful loud scraping noise in the quiet room, and then clattered to the floor.
Max had never moved so quick in his life. He raced from the room and ran down the corridor, getting annoyed glares from the nurses. He could see Nancy and Jeff just about to turn the corner when he shouted.
“Jeff, Nancy, come quickly!”
They stopped dead in their tracks, turned to look at Max and when they saw him, broke out into a run. Max turned around and started to run back towards Liz’s room.
“Max, what is it?” shouted Nancy.
“No time, come quickly,” he panted, as he broke into a full run. He charged through the door and skidded next to Liz’s bedside. He gently grabbed her hand.
“Liz, it’s Max, if you can hear me, try to squeeze my hand.”
Jeff and Nancy came barrelling into the room both getting lodged in the door as they tried to enter at the same time. Nancy was the first to break free and went to the other side of the bed.
She looked up at Max.
“What is it Max?”
“Nancy, I know you are going to think I’m nuts but I KNOW I’ve just heard Liz speak my name.”
“That’s not possible Max,” said Jeff, “She hasn’t spoken since the accident.”
“Jeff, I know that. I swear to you I’m not making this up.”
He turned his attention to back to Liz. He put gentle pressure on her hand.
“Liz, it’s Max. Please, come back to us!”
“M...Max?”
Both Jeff and Nancy stared at each other in shock. That had definitely come from their daughter.
“Liz, give my hand a squeeze if you can hear me,” said Max, never taking his eyes off Liz.
That’s when he felt her hand gently squeezing his own. Tears of joy sprang into his eyes.
Nancy ran out of the room and grabbed the nurse at the station.
“Mary, can you please get Liz’s doctor right away!”
Nancy knew the names of all the nurses and doctors who had seen Liz over the last week.
“What’s wrong?” asked Mary.
“She’s, she’s talking,” said Nancy.
“What?”
Mary had gotten to know the Parkers well since she was Liz’s main carer. She knew all about the tragic accident when she was just four years old and she also knew that the girl hadn’t been able to talk since then.
“I’ll go and get Dr Radcliffe right away,” said Mary, dialling a number on her desk phone.
Nancy ran back into the room and stood by Jeff.
“Mary is getting the doctor now.”
“She’s not said anything else since you left,” explained Jeff, “but she has responded to Max’s voice and squeezed his hand a few times.”
********
Liz was stuck in that dark cold place again. She could smell the foul stench of death all around her and she wondered if this is what hell was like. Then the bodies started to claw their way across the ground, making an awful sound as their bones scraped along the cold concrete floor.
The charred remains of her parents came into view and she automatically backed away from them. Why did they keep doing this to her? Why couldn’t they leave her alone? Were they trying to make her insane?
As the body, she knew as her father’s reached out to touch her, she heard the comforting voice of Max surround her soul.
“M ... Max,” she said in awe, as she looked around trying to find him. If he was here, she knew he would help her.
When she didn’t hear him respond she started to lose hope. So she did the only thing she could think of.
“Max, h ... help me Max.”
She knew it was impossible that this was her own voice but if she could latch on to his voice maybe he could get her out of this place. Maybe it was her mind trying to break free from the darkness.
As she spoke her plea, the body of her parents started to retreat back into the darkness, but something strange happened. There was a slight shimmer around the bodies and she could see that some parts of their bodies now appeared to have flesh on them, as if that part had never been burned.
All of a sudden she could feel his hand holding hers. She gently squeezed it to reassure herself that she wasn’t dreaming.
When she felt him squeeze hers back she knew that somehow this was real. She couldn’t quite understand what was happening but she didn’t want to lose her hold on him. She was just about to hold on to his hand for dear life, when she felt it ripped from her.
She couldn’t understand what was happening and was completely terrified.
“No! Max! Come back!”
But her cry went unheard as Max had already left the room and was halfway down the corridor getting Nancy and Jeff.
She felt the warmth leave her soul and the bodies of her parents started towards her again. The perfect flesh that was there a second ago was now a mangled mess of bone and skin again.
Liz shook her head trying to understand what was happening to her. This must be one of her nightmares again, one that she couldn’t quite wake up from. Then she felt his hand in hers again and his voice pleading her.
“Liz, it’s Max. Please, come back to us!”
“M...Max?”
Although she couldn’t see him she knew that if she let go of his hand again, she would be lost in this darkness so she stood and waited to hear his voice again.
“Liz, give my hand a squeeze if you can hear me.”
She followed the voice; it was coming from the small pinpoint of light that was up ahead. With his hand in hers she wasn’t afraid anymore so she made her way towards it.
The next thing she knew her eyes shot open and she could see the blurred image of Jeff, Nancy and Max all staring at her in shock.
“Welcome back,” said Max, as his shocked face turned into a huge smiling one.