Re: Polar Moments (UC, Mi/L, Mature) 10/18
Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:25 am
Sundae: Yeah, I usually go subtler on Michael's jealousy, less obvious, but I think in this instance it was more that it was Rath, who in essence is kind of his twin and I could see that it would make him act out little more than say...Max or Kyle. But I did in the last drabble have him admit that he loved her. Thanks!
K - Yeah, I know. I would love to make this happy for them all, but this is they way it worked out. Can't always make everyone, all the time. At least not yet. Maybe later....
AN: So this isn't the next in that series but I promise it will come soon as I have the dialogue written and just need to fill in the scene. This is a set of drabbles I did tonight based on RH prompts and they are each exactly 100 words, each of them leading into the next and creating a little story. Beware Max lovers, I'm not outright mean or bashing on him, but I don't portray him in the best light in this series.
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Broken Vow
Hollow. That’s how he made her feel every time he looked at her absently, smiling benignly, not even kissing her cheek, but the air next to it as he left.
As if she was substance-less, a ghost, a wisp, nothing more than a curl of smoke, nothing more than a faded dream; clenching her eyes, tears rained over golden cheeks as she wondered when this chasm developed.
Cold reality setting in – the useless lies, the great promise tarnished, the sacred vow broken as he hurried to his new love, making new promises and dreams, leaving her to face the void.
Based on the prompt: empty
*~*~*~*~*
Don’t Let Go
Breakable, fragile, brittle – they were not the words he would have associated with her all those years ago when she stood before him, eyes glowing with fierce bronze light despite the way her body trembled.
She had been so alive, flushed cheeks, red lips, glowing skin and the bright shine of innocence still clinging to the soft curve of her cheek - beautiful in heart and mind and body.
Still was despite the other man’s systematic destruction of her life and confidence; but so delicate, weightless, broken, he was afraid she’d blow away; she’d disappear before he could save her.
Based on the prompt: shell
*~*~*~*~*
A Taste of Freedom
She looked around the room once more, the echo of anger, tears, heartaches filling her ears, taunting her as she shut the bag with a decisive snick, moving it to the door with the rest of her luggage.
He had berated, accused, cried, begged and then closed down as he always did when he couldn’t accept the truth right in front of him. Once it would have moved her until she cajoled, pleaded, tempted, beguiled and then caved, promising to repent.
But pretty words no longer touched her; she didn’t care for supposed romantic, grand gestures. She was finally free.
Based on the prompt: limit
*~*~*~*~*
Blue Notes
He studied her quietly from the shadows, bathed in blue moonlight, as she stared idly out the window, the soft lighting casting a halo over her hair and sighed as his eyes danced away, fixing blindly on the wall.
She came to him ten nights ago, seeking sanctuary, deep mourning yet firm resolve etched in chocolate eyes, water trails drying to her cheeks as she announced she was through wasting her tears on a man that deserved none.
Leaning against the door, he turned caramel irises to her, wishing he had a clue what was running behind that cool façade.
Based on the prompt: Blue
*~*~*~*~*
Not So Shining Armor
He didn’t wear white, didn’t carry a sword or a lance, although she could easily picture him in armor; just not of the shiny variety as he would say it would attract too much attention and defeat the point of stealth.
He never flew to her rescue unnecessarily, or tried to slay her dragons; he didn’t coddle or treat her like glass or trap her in a tower, but handed her a weapon and told her to march, forced her to stand on her own two feet.
But despite the rough edges, in her eyes, he stood above the rest.
Based on the prompt: Champion
*~*~*~*~*
Music To My Ears
It was music to his ears, that light, sweet lilt spilling over the edge of the sofa where she’d curled up, the notes creeping over his skin like a caress, teasing a smile over full lips.
It’d been far too long since he’d heard that laugh, unrestrained, unfettered and full of joy as if reverberating out of her very soul; not the strained, broken chuckle that he’d become used to over the months they’d shared an apartment.
Eyes twinkling, he teased her foot again, just to hear it once more, his grin deepening as two gazes met in shared mirth.
Based on the prompt: Melody
*~*~*~*~*
Quiet Moments
She stared idly over his arm, leaning lightly into his side as he sketched the scene before them, his face a mask of concentration as fingers flew over the page, in complete awe of the beauty that emerged from those powerful hands.
Licking her lips, her breath stuttered and she blushed as intense whiskey irises lifted from the sketchbook momentarily, meeting her own for a moment before she looked down, embarrassed to be caught watching him again, missing his quiet smirk.
Looking up, her heart pounded and nose scrunched as he smeared charcoal onto it, laughing heartily at her expression.
Based on the prompt: Heal
*~*~*~*~*
Unfulfilled Desires
Drops chased over golden hills and settled into bronzed valleys, places he shouldn’t be observing, but couldn’t help himself, as she rose from the water, unaware that he’d accidentally walked into the room.
Breath caught in his throat, he ripped covetous eyes away and clenched a fist, fire rippling over his senses as he quickly backed out of the room five seconds too late and leaned a damp brow against the cool wood barrier, heart pounding as a low groan ripped through his throat and tore away, swearing to put it out of his mind.
It was; they were impossible.
Based on the prompt: Water
*~*~*~*~*
Beautiful Mystery
Lying on their blanket, she watched him through sable lashes, her heart thrumming as he closed his eyes and tipped his face to the sun, tawny waves tumbling over his shoulders, lighting with golden fire. Beautiful.
Wetting parched lips, she closed her eyes, mind a confusing cacophony that churned violently inside, taunting and confounding her usual logical thought patterns.
He was a delicious enigma - bold yet modest, brusque yet gentle, fearless yet cautious – a puzzle that tempted yet terrified, making her stomach jump, her blood pulse and left her nerves unsettled.
When had she fallen in love with him?
Based on the prompt: Mysterious
*~*~*~*~*
Flash Point
Fire rippled over his senses, searing its way over raw nerves and heated his blood to near incineration as her lips descended, crushing against his, her damp mouth moving over his sweetly, softly at first, then picking up in intensity as he dragged her into the cradle of his body.
Devouring the moist, pink flesh hungrily, he gripped her tightly, flipping her over onto her back, pinning her deeper into the couch cushions, sweat-kissed curves melting into firm, muscled plains as he rocked against her, his mind whirling at the implications of her actions.
God, could this really be happening?
Based on the prompt: Flame
*~*~*~*~*
Sweet Treat
She stared at the tiny, twine-wrapped box sitting on her desk and opened it, a smile breaking across her face to find it filled to the brim with the decadent candies that had become her favorite treat, and obsession, since their first kiss.
Plucking one out, she ripped into the clear cellophane gleefully and popped the salted caramel into her mouth, eyes closing in bliss as the flavors burst over her palate. Sucking on the confection, she moaned softly as it slid down her throat and he chuckled, replacing the sweet with her true addiction – his soft, full, warm lips.
Based on the prompt: Candy
*~*~*~*~*
New Beginning
Pulling a black velvet box from his jacket pocket, he flicked the lid back, staring at the bauble that was about to change his life indefinitely and heart pounding in his ears, blood pulsing, he sunk to one knee and staring up into bright ebony eyes, he took her hand in his. Licking his lips nervously, he took a deep, shaky breath and stomach swirling; he smiled tremulously.
“I love you, marry me?” he whispered, throat clogging with the emotion.
“Yes,” she replied giddily, swallowing thickly and smiling as he slid the ring on her finger, eyes shining with happiness.
Based on the prompt: Charm
*~*~*~*~*
I Thee Wed
Smoothing down the thick, creamy fabric, she stared at herself in the full length mirror, this dress so different from her first, its simple, elegant lines and smattering of lace and beading more suitable for who she was today; a woman grown, not a child bride.
Picking up the gauzy veil, she smiled radiantly, her eyes sparkling with life, cheeks tinted pink, red lips glistening and her skin glowing, this time with love instead of innocence as she sank onto her stool gracefully and tilted her head as her mother pinned it in place, heart fluttering in anticipation and joy.
Based on the prompt: Lace
*~*~*~*~*
Pink and Blue
Whiskey eyes misted, shining with wonder as he slid his hand over the delicate curve of her stomach, the bump smooth and warm under his hand; his hand glowing softly as he connected to his children for the first time, their faint humming buzz of life rippling over his senses. Swallowing thickly, he tipped his face to hers, a wide smile spreading over his face as curious chocolate eyes met his.
“Well?” she asked, nudging at him impatiently, huffing when he pretended to think it over, a teasing light in his eyes.
“Two,” he whispered. “A boy and a girl.”
Based on the prompt: Balance
K - Yeah, I know. I would love to make this happy for them all, but this is they way it worked out. Can't always make everyone, all the time. At least not yet. Maybe later....
AN: So this isn't the next in that series but I promise it will come soon as I have the dialogue written and just need to fill in the scene. This is a set of drabbles I did tonight based on RH prompts and they are each exactly 100 words, each of them leading into the next and creating a little story. Beware Max lovers, I'm not outright mean or bashing on him, but I don't portray him in the best light in this series.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Broken Vow
Hollow. That’s how he made her feel every time he looked at her absently, smiling benignly, not even kissing her cheek, but the air next to it as he left.
As if she was substance-less, a ghost, a wisp, nothing more than a curl of smoke, nothing more than a faded dream; clenching her eyes, tears rained over golden cheeks as she wondered when this chasm developed.
Cold reality setting in – the useless lies, the great promise tarnished, the sacred vow broken as he hurried to his new love, making new promises and dreams, leaving her to face the void.
Based on the prompt: empty
*~*~*~*~*
Don’t Let Go
Breakable, fragile, brittle – they were not the words he would have associated with her all those years ago when she stood before him, eyes glowing with fierce bronze light despite the way her body trembled.
She had been so alive, flushed cheeks, red lips, glowing skin and the bright shine of innocence still clinging to the soft curve of her cheek - beautiful in heart and mind and body.
Still was despite the other man’s systematic destruction of her life and confidence; but so delicate, weightless, broken, he was afraid she’d blow away; she’d disappear before he could save her.
Based on the prompt: shell
*~*~*~*~*
A Taste of Freedom
She looked around the room once more, the echo of anger, tears, heartaches filling her ears, taunting her as she shut the bag with a decisive snick, moving it to the door with the rest of her luggage.
He had berated, accused, cried, begged and then closed down as he always did when he couldn’t accept the truth right in front of him. Once it would have moved her until she cajoled, pleaded, tempted, beguiled and then caved, promising to repent.
But pretty words no longer touched her; she didn’t care for supposed romantic, grand gestures. She was finally free.
Based on the prompt: limit
*~*~*~*~*
Blue Notes
He studied her quietly from the shadows, bathed in blue moonlight, as she stared idly out the window, the soft lighting casting a halo over her hair and sighed as his eyes danced away, fixing blindly on the wall.
She came to him ten nights ago, seeking sanctuary, deep mourning yet firm resolve etched in chocolate eyes, water trails drying to her cheeks as she announced she was through wasting her tears on a man that deserved none.
Leaning against the door, he turned caramel irises to her, wishing he had a clue what was running behind that cool façade.
Based on the prompt: Blue
*~*~*~*~*
Not So Shining Armor
He didn’t wear white, didn’t carry a sword or a lance, although she could easily picture him in armor; just not of the shiny variety as he would say it would attract too much attention and defeat the point of stealth.
He never flew to her rescue unnecessarily, or tried to slay her dragons; he didn’t coddle or treat her like glass or trap her in a tower, but handed her a weapon and told her to march, forced her to stand on her own two feet.
But despite the rough edges, in her eyes, he stood above the rest.
Based on the prompt: Champion
*~*~*~*~*
Music To My Ears
It was music to his ears, that light, sweet lilt spilling over the edge of the sofa where she’d curled up, the notes creeping over his skin like a caress, teasing a smile over full lips.
It’d been far too long since he’d heard that laugh, unrestrained, unfettered and full of joy as if reverberating out of her very soul; not the strained, broken chuckle that he’d become used to over the months they’d shared an apartment.
Eyes twinkling, he teased her foot again, just to hear it once more, his grin deepening as two gazes met in shared mirth.
Based on the prompt: Melody
*~*~*~*~*
Quiet Moments
She stared idly over his arm, leaning lightly into his side as he sketched the scene before them, his face a mask of concentration as fingers flew over the page, in complete awe of the beauty that emerged from those powerful hands.
Licking her lips, her breath stuttered and she blushed as intense whiskey irises lifted from the sketchbook momentarily, meeting her own for a moment before she looked down, embarrassed to be caught watching him again, missing his quiet smirk.
Looking up, her heart pounded and nose scrunched as he smeared charcoal onto it, laughing heartily at her expression.
Based on the prompt: Heal
*~*~*~*~*
Unfulfilled Desires
Drops chased over golden hills and settled into bronzed valleys, places he shouldn’t be observing, but couldn’t help himself, as she rose from the water, unaware that he’d accidentally walked into the room.
Breath caught in his throat, he ripped covetous eyes away and clenched a fist, fire rippling over his senses as he quickly backed out of the room five seconds too late and leaned a damp brow against the cool wood barrier, heart pounding as a low groan ripped through his throat and tore away, swearing to put it out of his mind.
It was; they were impossible.
Based on the prompt: Water
*~*~*~*~*
Beautiful Mystery
Lying on their blanket, she watched him through sable lashes, her heart thrumming as he closed his eyes and tipped his face to the sun, tawny waves tumbling over his shoulders, lighting with golden fire. Beautiful.
Wetting parched lips, she closed her eyes, mind a confusing cacophony that churned violently inside, taunting and confounding her usual logical thought patterns.
He was a delicious enigma - bold yet modest, brusque yet gentle, fearless yet cautious – a puzzle that tempted yet terrified, making her stomach jump, her blood pulse and left her nerves unsettled.
When had she fallen in love with him?
Based on the prompt: Mysterious
*~*~*~*~*
Flash Point
Fire rippled over his senses, searing its way over raw nerves and heated his blood to near incineration as her lips descended, crushing against his, her damp mouth moving over his sweetly, softly at first, then picking up in intensity as he dragged her into the cradle of his body.
Devouring the moist, pink flesh hungrily, he gripped her tightly, flipping her over onto her back, pinning her deeper into the couch cushions, sweat-kissed curves melting into firm, muscled plains as he rocked against her, his mind whirling at the implications of her actions.
God, could this really be happening?
Based on the prompt: Flame
*~*~*~*~*
Sweet Treat
She stared at the tiny, twine-wrapped box sitting on her desk and opened it, a smile breaking across her face to find it filled to the brim with the decadent candies that had become her favorite treat, and obsession, since their first kiss.
Plucking one out, she ripped into the clear cellophane gleefully and popped the salted caramel into her mouth, eyes closing in bliss as the flavors burst over her palate. Sucking on the confection, she moaned softly as it slid down her throat and he chuckled, replacing the sweet with her true addiction – his soft, full, warm lips.
Based on the prompt: Candy
*~*~*~*~*
New Beginning
Pulling a black velvet box from his jacket pocket, he flicked the lid back, staring at the bauble that was about to change his life indefinitely and heart pounding in his ears, blood pulsing, he sunk to one knee and staring up into bright ebony eyes, he took her hand in his. Licking his lips nervously, he took a deep, shaky breath and stomach swirling; he smiled tremulously.
“I love you, marry me?” he whispered, throat clogging with the emotion.
“Yes,” she replied giddily, swallowing thickly and smiling as he slid the ring on her finger, eyes shining with happiness.
Based on the prompt: Charm
*~*~*~*~*
I Thee Wed
Smoothing down the thick, creamy fabric, she stared at herself in the full length mirror, this dress so different from her first, its simple, elegant lines and smattering of lace and beading more suitable for who she was today; a woman grown, not a child bride.
Picking up the gauzy veil, she smiled radiantly, her eyes sparkling with life, cheeks tinted pink, red lips glistening and her skin glowing, this time with love instead of innocence as she sank onto her stool gracefully and tilted her head as her mother pinned it in place, heart fluttering in anticipation and joy.
Based on the prompt: Lace
*~*~*~*~*
Pink and Blue
Whiskey eyes misted, shining with wonder as he slid his hand over the delicate curve of her stomach, the bump smooth and warm under his hand; his hand glowing softly as he connected to his children for the first time, their faint humming buzz of life rippling over his senses. Swallowing thickly, he tipped his face to hers, a wide smile spreading over his face as curious chocolate eyes met his.
“Well?” she asked, nudging at him impatiently, huffing when he pretended to think it over, a teasing light in his eyes.
“Two,” he whispered. “A boy and a girl.”
Based on the prompt: Balance