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chapter 18

I don’t know how long I have been here, Just sitting here on my bed. My CD players skipped on to the next CD. All I hear is evanescence my immortal. So I didn’t notice Max walk in calling my name. He kneels down next to me.


“Liz baby I’m sorry I left I had to clear my head I I know it was stupid I just needed to take it in and I know how selfish that is…. I m sorry beautiful i'm sorry.”
He sounds sorry I can hear in his voice that he is crying. I just stare ahead of me; he rests his head on my legs and cries. I let him cry over me I notice but I can’t move.



Eventually I run my fingers through his hair. He stops and looks up at me I can’t look at him yet I can’t! He looks down and inhales sharply.
‘Liz what happened to your feet?”
I don’t answer I didn’t even notice the shards of glass imbedded or the blood on my feet. He gets up and for a second I have a deep fear he is leaving me. But he goes into the bathroom and has a wet towel and tweezers. Then my heart beats a little normal because he is back and gently he cleans up my feet.
With this one act I realize that he will hurt me, but I have to be hurt disappointed to feel the opposite. Take the good with the bad. It’s just going to take awhile.




chapter 19

I don’t know when I fell asleep or how I got in bed, come to think of it it’s all a little hazy. I look around a little and see Max asleep on a chair next to my bed his hand in mine.
“Max Max wake up, hey good morning”
My voice is a little scratchy and I have a monster of a head ache. But those amber eyes on me and that messed up sleepy look makes it all bearable.
“Morning I would kiss you but morning breath”
“I don’t mind”
And his lips are on me before I finish and I don’t, mind that is I just love him with me kissing me.
“max why did you leave?”
“Liz I have no excuse there is no reason I freaked I mean how could this happen to you? I just panicked I needed to think it through and I lost time. I ….”
“Max this is me! I’m difficult my mood swings are frequent I had a messed up childhood and I’m not an easy person to deal with I’m insecure I’m lonely, I’m just complicated. Sometimes I can be so incredibly happy and something small meaningless can turn my emotions! I have issues and if you want me you have to want the complication of dealing with me.”
“I love you Liz Parker all of you completely entirely all that you are is what I want in my life.”


I believe him he is sincere and I can’t help but feel embarrassed by it. Self conscious of his directness, I blush.
“How can you be so strong willed one minute and blush so hard the next??”
“Just because I’m a complex creature that’s why you love me”
“ohh is that right???”
“Yes and I love you…”
He looks at me seriously and just looks right at me like he is trying to see inside me.
“Say it again please”
“I Liz Parker I’m madly in love with you Max Evans”
And I’m thanked with a passionate kiss.
“Max this isn’t going to be easy you know that, its not all fixed now”
“I know but let us bask in it a little please”
“Well…..”
“pwease pwetty pwease lizzy”


That little innocent face and cutsie voice gets to me and I let it. I want this to be happy for a while I can’t do depressed again just yet. Let me have this moment because my mum is in town and the crap will hit the fan.





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CHAPTER 19


It’s been four weeks and it’s like nothing happened. I never heard from my mum again and my friends never brought it up. My friends that sounds so weird but ya got to love it. So I’m ok now I’m disappointed that she never came back and relived all the same. God it’s so confusing in head but least here in the outside it’s ok.
So we are all working me Michael and Maria. So it’s back into routine.


“So it’s officially 5 months since space boy and I have been dating and nothing and no indication of anything to come??”
Maria and Michael bickering ahhh is there anything sweeter! I stand corrected because right now the hottest guy is coming up to me with a single white rose.
“For me?”
And he just nods that beautiful head
“What’s the occasion?”
“No reason”
And he just smirks kisses me on the cheek and leaves giving me good view of that cheeky boys butt. Ohh got to thank Levis.
“What????? no reason! That is soooo I mean greasy never ever gave me flowers and just because its soo its soooo”
“Beautiful romantic wonderful”


I finish for her because it is the sweetest most romantic and wonderful thing. I just smell my flower and place it in my pony tail.
“Damn it Max why did you have to do that! Maybe I can ask him to give Michael some pointers???? I want a rose just because!!!!!!”Maria’s rant can be heard through my daze and I remind myself to talk with Michael about that. Every one deserves to be loved like this.


The day was busy and extra long with a cranky couple to work with. Walking upstairs I take the flower from my hair smell it gently and place it in my room. I need to get ready we are having a bbq at Maria’s and Alex is bringing his camera, he is a budding photographer and musician well lets just say he is and artist!


I guess I should wash out the hamburger grease from my hair. I don’t take long in the shower. I walk through my room in my red bra and purple lacey panties, I think I will wear my new denim mini I bought shopping with Isabel and Maria, and a black sweater top as it’s a nice night. Trying to find the skirt I realize I dropped it by the front door so when I go get it I hear this noise like a bump
“owww”
“Max is that you? Are you ok?”
I run to were he has fallen over the couch. And I notice him on the ground blushing hard and looking sheepishly avoiding me at all costs.
“Max what are you doing? What wrong?”
“Nothing I just went and well you see is I oh god purple and I….”
“Max what is it your not making any senseeeeaaaaaaughhooohhhhmyyyyygodddd”
That is when I put my hands on my hips and I discovered my undress and ran into my room.
Behind my door back to it thinking this didn’t happen this didn’t happen. I heard him speak
“I’m sorry Liz I was early and I didn’t see anything! Well I I didn’t see much…. I just you were there and I didn’t see everything I ……”
and I couldn’t help it the absurdity of it all or Max’s inane ramblings I just started laughing so hard. I heard Max call my name but then I heard him join in with my laughing.


I ran to my bed but on my sweater and asked max for my skirt by the door. When I was finally dressed and composed, with my rose back in my hair. I came out to find my boyfriend in only his little black boxers.
“Well it’s only fair I saw you in your underwear so here I’ am”
He must have mistaken my hungry look for confusion. I just nod and appreciate the view.
“Can I get dressed now?”
I just go up hug him close loving the feel of his skin and kiss him passionately
“Not yet”


WELL?????????????

chapter (steamy)20

We are kissing and I have never felt this alive and hot in my whole life. It’s amazing that this one person can stir up all these emotions inside of me. He just has to touch me or be near me and I feel weightless like I could do anything.

Now here with him in a place I call my home as well as my hell I feel complete. I never believed in mushy stuff before I always thought things over to much because the reactions he is causing in me are impossible unrealistic. But without in logical thought without the possibility of reason I know Max Evans is my soul mate.


I can’t breathe but I don’t want this connection to end. My body is on fire but I feel Goosebumps rise were his fingers leave. His arms are around me on my neck and around my middle.


His fingers through my hair and my hands are on his beautiful bare arms rubbing them up and down, across his shoulders. I can feel heat radiating of our bodies. My face becoming flustered I can imagine the redness on my neck and face but all I can feel is his heart beat beating hard against mine.

“liz”

And I cant help but moan at he way he just said my name. I don’t think I have ever loved hearing my name more then I did with his breathy tone. My lips are numb as he kisses down my neck and I cant help but move closer if possible to him breathing in his musky scent. And I cant control myself I kiss his chest just under his collar bone and I hear his intake of breath. He buries his face in my hair and I know it’s my turn to taste him. I never been this intimate with someone the feeling of his dark smooth skin underneath my lips has taken control and I kiss up to his ears. Feeling naughty I put a playful smile on my lips and take a little nip and bite his earlobe.


He just jumps and attacks my lips again and I know that he must have liked that they way he kissed me like I was his last meal.
I feel his hands wondering up the back of my top I want his hands all over me just like mine on him. I run my hands down the center of his back and when I hit those silky black boxers I cant help the little gasp that escapes my lips.


We stop kissing looking at each other our heads together. We are both out of breath and flushed.
“Max what’s wrong”
“I can’t believe I’m saying this but maybe we should slow down”
I look embarrassed for a second and whisper without looking at him
‘I don’t want too”
he just looks at me and scoops me up in his strong arms and heads for my bedroom.
“That’s all the encouragement I need”
And he smirks as he whisks me away in his arms like a scene in a movie.


hmmmmmmm how did it go????????????????

chapter 21

Once we get to my room I start to panic the screen isn’t going to fade away we are not just going to see the morning after here, this isn’t a movie!
“Liz baby are you ok you’re shaking???”
“I’m just..... Max I love you I’m just scared”
and I feel stupid I cant help but look down because not ten minutes ago I was all over him. He just looks me in the eye and smiles

“Liz I want you, all of you but I its ok to be scared! We will take it slow we just do whatever your comfortable with - see what happens.”
“Ok Max, Max Have you ever…. I mean I don’t know about you and Tess but she implied…..”
“She implied what she actually said something to you? What did she say damn that gerbil she is always….”
“Max its ok can we not talk about her now!”


And he sits up. One minute I’m laying with a half naked Max on me all hot and now I feel the air pushed in the room and my whole body shivers.


“When we were 14 Tess and I well she offered and I was just a hormonal teen and I didn’t realize what I was loosing…”
“So you and Tess made love?”
“No! we never made love… it was just sex horny little kids not knowing what they were doing?”


For that split second when he started talking I was relived but when he finished and I understood what he was saying I felt ill.
“Liz baby I don’t even… I m sorry I just if I meet you all those years ago I I don’t know how to fix this?”
“Max you don’t need to apologies I asked and you were truthful I just…”
I did'nt know what to say I couldn’t help but feel betrayed even though I dint know Max then,
“I’m not angry at you Max but I think maybe we should go to the barbeque now!”
“Liz I do love you and wan t you only you”
And I know he does so I just kiss him gently on his frowning mouth and its a sweet gentle touch.


“I know it’s just right now we were taking a step, and I’m ready to be with you Max but I don’t know much about you still. Sooo I I want to be with you but could we wait I need time I just can you wait?
“Liz I would wait till the end of this world and if I could take back the past I would in and instant!”
I just smile because I know he is sincere and look at the clock even though max was early now we are 2 hours late!!
“We better go before they send a search party? So get dressed”
“Yes mam I love it when you get all demanding!”
And as he stands I can’t help but smack his cute little butt.


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Chapter


We went to the BBQ I tried to have fun it was hard watching Tess all over Max. Knowing now what they have shared makes it harder. I know I can’t hold it against him, but I can help but be upset.
Not by purpose at all I have avoided time alone with him. I don’t know what’s wrong with me. I’m upset that we can’t lose our virginities to each other. I’m angry that Tess took that away from me and that he gave it away so easy. And I’m angry and upset at myself that I can’t get over this!
Its not like this is some story a lonely girl wrote on the internet, this is real life my life. And no ones perfect. So why I’m I scared of someone I was so comfortable with? Was it getting to intense and I’m using the sex thing as an escape not to get attached?
I should stop asking so many questions and guilt ting myself into all theses disillusionments and just face up to the man I love!!!!


I’m lying in bed three days after the “sex thing” in my pj’s wondering why he hasn’t confronted me. When not two second ago I was writing in my journal I should just go to him.
So I get dressed and head over to Maria’s. I’m on the doorstep, to scared to knock. I have been here over 5 minutes I still can’t bring myself to knock when it opens for me!


“Isabel Alex hi”
“Whoa Liz hey, Isabel and I are just about to go on a walk and Maria and Michael are at work…
“My brothers in the spare room Liz!”
“Thanks guys see ya later.

And they walk of hand in hand. So obviously in love I can’t help but watch them walk out in the perfect day. How Isabel presses her body to Alex’s how he tucks her hair behind her ear and they just work like they are ment to be together like that.


I shut the door on the perfect picture of happiness and creep down to Max. I don’t know if he is asleep should I leave now? No no be strong and deal with this you want this to be fixed I want us to work!
I walk to his door ready to smile to tell him how much I love him and I cant because I’m on the ground trying to breathe, tiny harsh breaths I cant breathe oh god I cant catch myself I just need to focus.


Everything spins out of control I can hear my sharp gasps trying to get air; my eyes filled with unshed tears my chest hurting with every movement. My heart beating rapidly and breaking all at the same time.
I can’t breathe I don’t want too because there in bed is Max and Tess. I don’t want to breathe....


well????????????? stupid?????????? tell me

chapter 23

It’s just a buzzing sound that’s all I hear and I can’t feel anything but the burning in my chest. It’s soft all around….. I’m in a bed; how the hell did I get into bed?
“Liz Liz open your eyes baby can you hear me oh god are you ok?”
Max its Max its ok everything will be ok he loves me he will look after me. I hear someone crying, who the hell is crying? Tess Tess is crying Tess and Max in bed together…..
It jumps me awake I look around in a mad panic and see Tess in a chair crying and max next to me hysterical.


“Liz are you ok should I call and ambulance I don’t….. Beautiful I she was just there when I woke up I you know I love you right. Nothing happened I swear it was just I don’t know I was asleep and….. I’m sorry nothing happened but I’m sorry”
I look around I believe him its stupid but I do. I just smile and look at him. He holds me close to his chest I hate being like this week and pathetic.
“Max I’m tired can you take me home?’
“yeah sure anything!”
So he takes me home he walks with his arm around me and I’m grateful because my legs feel heavy. What just happened? How I’m I supposed to deal with this?
“I just need to sleep I’m tired”
And I’ am tired of being thrown around emotionally and my body can’t take much more of this. I’m sick of being the lonely pathetic one who can’t control her life. I just need to sleep.


“Do you want me to stay with you?”
“Could you …. Could you stay until I fall asleep just so I … well till I fall asleep”
“Always”

And I leave it for now. Max and Tess having sex, finding them in bed together how to deal with my screwed up life! I just need to sleep need to forget even for a little while.
“Max do you love me?”
“I love you with all my heart and soul, I have never felt this way about anyone and its scares me?”
suddenly I’m not tired any more I want to get this out hash it out not bury it and sit on it another day.
“I scare you?”
“No Liz I just what we have its so intense and beautiful so emotional I cant keep track”
“Did you have sex with Tess last night?"
“No no I was asleep, I haven’t been sleeping properly I keep thinking you hate me for what I told you the other night!!! But I swear I went to bed alone thinking of you and I woke up with Tess next to me and you on the ground”
“So nothing happened she just snuck in?”
“Nothing”
“That bitch, I can’t believe she would do that she is such a dirty ho I mean you don’t want her! You told her that and I’m your girl sooo ohhh someone needs to straighten her out….!”
“Would it be wrong of me to say you’re really hot right now?”
“Max, you can’t just say something cute and it will all be better!”
“I know Liz, I do love you though with every part of me”

And this is what it’s like one minute I can’t function and I need to shutdown inside, the next I want to hold him to I die. He is soo hot when he is being naughty…
“stay with me tonight Max?”
“every night”
I don’t know what will happen? I know I can trust him and I believe he wants me. I see it when he looks at me, like there is no one else around nothing that matters except me. It’s been so hard -real highs and devastating lows but I think this is love.
I just know now as I lie down next to the man I love that I have experienced more emotion in these past weeks then I have in my whole life.

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chapter 24a
He spent the night nothing happened. I don’t know if I should be disappointed by this or not. Yes it’s been an emotional time and no time for nookie but a girls got to feel sexy some how. Ok I’m just being silly I know that… ohhh spongebob


“Did you just say spongebob?”
Whoops I must have said that out loud, I woke him up I didn’t want to do that i’m not ready for that. There is no big drama to talk about now. Now it’s just me and him in bed together like a normal couple!
“Uh yeah I have a cartoon obsession”
And I think he is not much of a morning person but damn is he a good looking morning person. Its awkward now with nothing looming. No I slept with Tess to deal with or finding him in bed with Tess discussion it’s just us now and i'm totally stuck on what to say?
Do we keep talking about the Tess debacle or forget it today and throw caution to the wind and be a normal couple for a day. Hold hands see a movie eat ice-cream….


“Max do you want to…..”
And that’s when I noticed his eyes were closed. All that over processing in my head sent him back to sleep. But its ok good even cause there is this strange peacefulness watching him sleep! His dark lashes against his skin, his hair all messed up, how he needs to shave. The way his mouth quirks o one side and his ears stick out a little not to much. He is perfect to me.


bbbrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiinnnnnnngggggg bbbbbbbbrrrrrrrrringggggggg


It makes us both jump me toward s the phone and Max towards the floor. I just laugh at his stunned face from the floor.
“Hello”
“Elizabeth”
And with that one word that one voice I feel the colour leaving my face and my smile disappearing
“Daddy?”
And with that one word Max is still he looks at me curious and cautiously.
“Just calling to let you know I won’t be coming home for awhile”
“Why not?”
“Because I have things that are more important here!!! Elizabeth we are getting married Jenny Is pregnant and have decided to stay here for awhile”
“Ohh congratulations umm when’s the weddin...”
“I don’t have time to talk Mr. Ferguson has the details on my return, till then.”

Then dial tone.......
He is getting remarried having a baby. What about me what i’m I? He is starting this whole new family without me and he sounded sorry like he wasn’t coming back, like I would never see him, again. In a way I guess it would be good I wont have to be scared in my own home anymore I just cant help but feel abandoned unwanted.
“Liz?”
And I just let go. I cry it hurts and I know in some deep weird way its for the best, that next year I would have left that who knows what may happen? But now it just hurts I feel alone left behind not good enough. And I just want to cry.

give it to me please........................

chapter 24b

And I did I cried for ages I cried it all out of me till there were no tears left and the pain of my mother leaving the pain of my father leaving me. All that emotional baggage gone and I’m free and light.
My real family is Michael and Maria my new friends Isabel and Alex and my soul mate the man holding me through my pain. Even in his sleep he is holding me close protecting me. I have never felt this safe never this beautiful never this loved.


I pull myself away from him and look at his sleeping form. I can’t stop the physical reaction in me from his love radiating even in slumber. Plus he is absolutely gorgeous, in shirt and boxers. I’m there in my singlet no bra and panties and I realize if any was to walk in they would get the wrong idea.
That alone sends shivers down my spine. My lips are dry and I can feel my breath coming out in harsh puffs, I’m excited and turned on its bad but oh so good. I can’t look at him I turn over and bite my lip, but I can still feel him behind me still hear him breathing.


I couldn’t help my self I ran my hands down my front between my breasts the feather light touch just heating me up even more. I feel the sweat on the back of my neck as I reach the top of my panties. Dare I… unconsciously I rub my thighs together biting my lip in anticipation and thrill of being caught I dip under the waistband and surrender to the temptation.


Closing my eyes in pure delight I bury my head in the pillow to soften my moans. I can feel my body coming alive with my not so innocent touch but I almost jump out of my skin when I feel his hand on my arm.
Shocked but to excited to care I feel his breathe on the back of my neck as his hand trails down my arm the anticipation and anxiety of it all nearly makes me loose it right there.


His trail is seductively slow and when he reaches my wrist he stops kisses my neck in silent permission. I throw my head back as I feel his hand over mine, his fingers touching my inner most private place, I’m hot all over I feel his breath hard against my neck and I moan freely now. I bite my lip so hard and can’t control my breathing I don’t care cause this feels sooo good sooo right.
I bite the pillow to stop from screaming. Never have I felt something so emotional so wonderful that I feel my whole body just shake
“MAX”
I think I just experienced my first orgasm.


well more naughtiness to come.....

chapter 24c

I should be embarrassed but all I feel is well pure bliss. I can’t open my eyes in case it was all a dream but my body exploding like that- I don’t think so. I can still hear Max behind me breathing heavy close to me and his hand is in my stomach now.
I turn around and face him; I can’t believe we just did that. Looking at him he looks flushed and he’s not smiling but I can see happiness shining through his eyes and all I can say is
“Wow”


And he smiles that complete unadulterated smile as he leans in a kisses me. I can feel his hands roam my body more freely. Under my top never the front but my stomach ohhh the back of my neck just my back in general. Touching me with such passion, like he can’t get enough of me. My hands aren’t exactly idle either. My hands creep up and touch his heated skin I feel the softness of his muscles and the way they move under my touch.


We are lying face to face in the center of my bed half naked touching in such wonderful ways and it’s not enough, I want more.
I kiss my way down his neck trying to understand how much more I want, but with his hands on me I can’t seem to focus on anything but the pleasure and the feel of his skin. Its like all my brain function has gone out the window and I’m driven by instinct, by lust. I don’t care I want to let go if this is anything like that damn….. I want it.


As I’m biting his neck I feel his thumb brush against the underside of my breast and cant help but moan loud in pure delight. It shocks him and he looks right at me with his swollen lips his flushed face and messed up hair. He looks right at me and I sit up.


“Liz I’m sorry it was an accident I didn’t mean to take this so far its just you taste so good and I can’t keep my hands of you but if you want to stop…..”
And he stopped talking because I straddled his waist took a deep breath and took off my top. I hate my body and showing Max is one of my biggest fears but life is all about risks. I’m shaking and I cant see him he is looking at me with sheer wonder and he takes index finger touches my belly button lightly and traces is it up my stomach between my breasts and under my chin and he kisses me , with such passion and acceptance.


Kissing him I grab for his shirt and we part only for a second to whip away that most annoying item of clothing and our skin comes into contact and we both stop kissing and moan together, the feel of his bare skin on mine is like nothing I can explain.


He lays down looking at me I lay on top of him and I can feel him through is boxer shorts I can feel he is excited. It gives me that confidence knowing that I did that to him, I made him happy like that.
Everything moves in slow motion after that, all I can hear is our breathing all is see is the love and desire in his eyes all I feel is his hand running up and down the hollow of my spine and in that exact moment I knew tonight I would lose myself To Max Evans.


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chapter 25

“Maxxxxxx I I want I”
“What do you want baby?”
“I want yo BRRRRRIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG BRINGGGGGGGGG”


What the fricken hell stupid ass phone nah uh ain’t gonna happen. We both spring apart when we hear the phone, breathing heavily we are both a little shocked and confused. But it doesn’t take long for me to notice his swollen lips little teeth marks on his neck or his wondrous chest moving rapidly. I brake out of my trance and need his lips on mine suffocating me completely with his mouth and his body!


BRRRRRRIIINNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG BRINGGGGGGGGGGG


FRICKEN PIECE OF CRAP PHONE WHO THE HELL WANTS ME NOW!!!
We keep kissing but I can tell he is distracted
‘Liz ohhh ahh baby think you might mmmmmm want to the phone”
“Machine”
And that’s all I have to say we never broke our embrace but now I feel him take me all in no more distractions for us.
“Liz hey its Tess you know Max lover…..
Well I spoke to soon I look at the phone that damn beaaaatch
“What is it baby?”
He didn’t notice her annoying voice penetrate our sexual haze! Yea me


“I’m just calling to say that little fainting thing wont work Max is mine always will be so stay away you ugly ass…. Loser no one would ever want you!!! Max is just using you cause your easy yeah he is using you to pop that cherry of yours he always has a thing for virgins he never took mine so he needed to see the difference that’s all because I took away his V card….. Beep


And I’m stunned I don’t know what to think I know all she said is a lie but I don’t know if I can go through with this anymore! Just not right now.
“Fucking bitch!!!! I’m sorry Liz I it’s not true at all I just oh shit”


And he has his face buried in his hands and I think screw Tess!!!!!!!
I jump him I’m on top of him and grind myself into his erection
“Take me Max make me yours”
And he just stares at me his eyes unblinking I think he was shocked. Nope I’m sick of being interrupted I’m sick of being little innocent lizzy watch out I want this man and I’m going to have him……
I kiss him and he still is in a little shock I think till I work my way to his nipple and swirl my tongue around it and just bite it slightly, that’s when it happens.


He brakes out of his stupor and grabs me roughly pulls me underneath me and devours my mouth. His hands aren’t shy now they are pulling and needing my breasts my hands are all over him when he works his way down my neck to my chest.
He looks at me and both my hands are on his neck now and he takes my breast in his mouth and I can feel it all through my body tingling at my neck between my shoulder blades runs down my spine to the back of my knees that bend without warning travel up my knees to between my legs were I feel Max hardness rubbing so delightfully against me. There is no way to describe the sensation.
Feeling bold as he takes on my next breasts giving it all the same attention I wrap my legs around him and feel him press and rub deeper into me. I need him inside me I need my panties of I think they are soaked through.
“oooohhhhhhGOD LLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIZZZZZZZZ”
And I need it now moaning my name touching me tasting me I need him inside of me.


I pull him up for a kiss and venture down to the edge of his boxer shorts and cant resist but slide my hands underneath and squeeze that cute ass. Inside his boxers I move them to the side gently inching them down and they seem to be stuck.
“I ....can’t .....get off”
He just giggles at my struggle. What my frustrations are funny ok I just realized what I said.
“I must be doing something wrong then?”
He just smirks and lifts his lower body so I can remove them and I realize how much I want him and how big he is when he put on the condom woah
“Your turn”
And I smile up at him I take my hands and place them above my body like I’m tied up
“Hmmm Lizzzz baby”
And he slowly sooooo slowly he kisses his way until he reaches my panties he grabs them with his teeth and I think I just lost it there I buck my hips and he takes them of my hips with his teeth
“ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh goooooooooooooooddddddddddddd mmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaxxxxxxxxxxx”

Yep I think he is ready to cause he ripped my panties of with his hand and positioned himself at my entrance.
“Liz I need you now I.”
“Max please…
And before I finish he is inside me filling me completely it hurts a little I lie it hurts a lot but the satisfaction the completeness of it all is indescribable. Its like the pain is masked by completeness and I feel whole.
He is looking right at me and we are one there are no distractions any clothes to hide us just us. We are together in such away that I can’t help but cry at the situation.
“You are so beautiful”

He has tears in his eyes as he slowly thrust inside of me taking a small part of me and leaving a small part of him as we make love to each other. He tells me I’m beautiful all the time but now I actually feel it inside of me.
We move together slowly Its so emotional word scant describe how it feels I wrap my arms around him and he buries his face in my hair. I run my fingers down his back I start to felt he passion in me rising and in an instant he feels it to because we are connected.


I feel myself lifting my hips in rhythm with him and he fastens his pace.
I feel the tension in the back of my neck growing and I grab on digging my nails into his back. Lifting his head and hissing he moves faster and faster but it feels incredible.


I can taste the sweat dripping of my face the sweat of both our bodies it’s not gross but it makes us glisten its wonderful.
And I loose it right there and the tension from my neck is gone it shot straight down to my legs and now I cant feel them I scream with the force of it.
“MAX”
He looks right at me and looses himself there I feel his body tense and him explode inside of me. He collapses on top of me his face in my hair again and I hear him muttering out of breath as I am
“ohhh Liz soooo beautiful”
And I know now nothing will ever be the same because I have found my soul and shared it with my soul mate.


ok well wat do you think???? thanks sooo much for the feedback and iam recovering slowly from the weekend Strawbehrry Shortcake thanks babe keep reading more soon... i'am i draging this out to long???
luv ya ChanniBella