Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:17 pm
hey, i wrote a long chapter 1000% DREAMER this time, i hope u'll like it.
before i let u read it, i'd like to thank my faithful readers
dreamer19
Michelle17
roswellluver- it's longer this time
0megaRam1- i'm sure u'll think that i'm obeying u
no, i stopped there previously cause i want to try to write the nookie. (i didn't know that word!)
hope u'll like that part and sorry if it sucks, i'm not really good to write a NC-17 scene...
i talked too much
fb demanded this time!!!
I'VE UPDATED ALL MY FICS NOW, HOPE U'LL ENJOY THEM...
Chapter 21
While Max and Liz were going to the hotel, Serena had called her friend Kyle and now he called her back with a lot of juicy news about Ron and Tess.
"Serena, it's me Kyle"
"Kyle, you found something about Tess?" she asked anxious
"A lot! And not only about Tess, i've found also about Ron...and you know what they are involved together in sex with minors, she risks a lot cause she provided young girls." he explained
"WHAOU! Ron involved with Tess, i understand now why she had this power on him, i guess that if someone found out their schemes, he could have a lot of troubles." she asked reflecting at the situation.
"Serena, i've found out and i'm working in the Vices Squad, let me tell you that we're going to harass her and i'm not sure, if she's guilty as i suppose she is, that film will be her first and last in the same time." he informed her.
"Kyle, i'm glad you found so many things against that witch, but Max has to know before you could do anything against her, or even both of them." she said deciding to call Max as soon as she hung up with Kyle. She was sure he will be happy to hear those news.
"Serena, tell everything to Max and call me back. I've no intention to arrest her for the moment, if they planed to have her in their film, she'll be able to do before we could do anything against her. BUT, i want you to say to Max or everyone involved in that affair, that they have NO RIGHT, you hear me, NO RIGHT to tell her about us, i mean about the searches i'm doing on her or on the producer. It's very important for us, if we want to stop them and free those young girls" he stated.
"I understand Kyle, it's very important to catch her or at least to question her for the Vice, you have my word, no one will interfere in your job. I'm going to call Max to tell him about her, that's all. Count on me and thank you for your help." she said
"Thank you too, Serena, cause you helped me too. By the way, what do you think if we go out one day...i think that we form a good team, we should see if we can go further, huh?" he inquired.
"You're asking me out, Kyle?" she said a smile in the voice.
"It's a good idea, no?"
"Let me see with Max and i'll call you back, ok?"
"I'll be waiting, Serena...Have a good day..." he wished her.
After that conversation, Serena wanted to call Max, but she had clients in her restaurant and she postponed her call.
OK, I'M TRYING TO WRITE THAT NC-17 SCENE BUT IT'S HARD TO ME, NOT BECAUSE I'M SHY BUT MY ENGLISH IS NOT RICH ENOUGH TO USE THE RIGHT WORDS, SO I BEG YOU TO BE FAIR AND NOT SUE ME.....
Good idea, cause Max would be unable to talk.
They arrived at the hotel and went to Liz's room, they didn't talk in the elevator and Max get more nervous, and Liz more shy.. When the doors of the elevator opened, Max took her hand and led her....ran with her to her room. She had just the time to open the door before Max caught her and swooped down on her lips and devoured her mouth.
Shy at the begining, Liz slid her fingers in his hair and pulled him toward her, she forgot her objections, her fears, everything but Max, his hands, his lips on her. She didn't know that the passion could be so overwhelming and Liz felt herself out of the depth by the events but how to resist to such a fire?
His mouth was making love to hers since his hands were everywhere on her body.
Like blinds, they reached the bed, and he fell on it. Excited she removed his jacket and opened one by one the buttons of his shirt...here he was, in front of her...bare chest and she felt bolder..she caressed him slowly, bent and took a nipple in her mouth and sucked it with her tongue...Max was in agony but decided to let her do what she wanted with his body even if he was going to explode.
Even more slowly, her little hand lowered to his pants..she unzipped them brushing his erection.
"Liiiiiiiiiiiiizzz, i'm dying baby..." he cried huskily
"No Max, i want you alive...i want you to make love to me, you're not going to dye or we'll do it together" she said giggling. She pushed his pants down and he threw them away. When he looked at her, he found her staring at his erection with such a hunger in her eyes that he felt he would come right away "Liz, please don't look at me that way, baby, it'll be over before we could begin" he said kissing her breathlessly and in the same move he made her fall on the bed and rolled above her "Now, you're are my prisonner Liz, i'm going to torture you the same way you did it to me"
And he began to undress her, he wanted to do it as slowly as she did to him without stopping to kiss her.. he removed her shirt inch by inch and his mouth was following the same path than his hand, he kissed her stomach at the edge of her jeans and he was electrified to sense her quivering.
He helped her to take off her shirt and kissed her deeply, passionately. His tongue was duelling with hers and Liz couldn't help but moaned driving him crasy. He let her mouth and descended to her neck...the hollow of her throat...and before he continued he looked up to see her while he was pleasing her.
Her hair was spread on the pillow like a halo....her lips swollen by their kisses...he stared at her like a starved wolf in front of a tasty sheep and he was craving to eat her alive..but that was Liz...the love of his life here beneath him and he swore to lead her to the heaven, to make that day unforgettable.
He continued his path to her small and firm breasts, he sucked a nipple through the white lace bra until he hardened and did the same to the other. Liz was finding out some sensitive areas she never knew she had and was amazed to see what Max was able to do to her with his tongue when it was on her navel. "Liz" he called her softly "open your eyes love, i want you to look at me" he said while he was unbuttoning her jeans...
She lifted herself to help him to get rid of it and didn't stop to look at him "You're so beautiful....gorgeous...amazing....there are no words to describe you Liz." he said huskily.
He couldn't help but shiver, Liz was here in his arms almost naked and she's offering her body and her soul to him.. "What did i do to deserve you Baby, i love you so much Liz." he said.
"Me too, Max...i can't wait to be yours." she said locking her eyes with his, Max smiled and bent to kiss her, he put all his love in that kiss, he wanted to proof her that he couldn't help to be hers too.
Then he removed her bra and panties and stayed there looking at her...amazed. Her tiny body, slender and so fragile...he was afraid to hurt her...
Seeing him speechless, Liz misunderstood his silence and crossed her arms on her breasts, reddening."Liz, no....i want to see you, all of you...you're so beautiful! you don't have to be ashamed, you're amazingly beautiful." he said brushing her nipples with his thumb and she gasped when he pinched one of them before he bent and took it in his mouth. He sucked it as if he was a starved and thirsty man in front of a feast....she was his feast and he couldn't get enough of her.
Hearing her moaning, he looked up and felt a real joy to know that it was him who gave her that pleasure and he felt more aroused. "Max, stop teasing me, i need you" she said hoarsly.
"Not yet honey, i want our first time together be the most incredible you never had" he said while his hand was lowering until her heat. He felt her thrill under his hand and with a smile, he continued to drive crasy with want...he slid his finger inside her and started to move them in and out, needing to hear her crying his name in ecstasy. "MAAAAAAAAXXX.....AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH" she screamed
"Honey, you're so hot....so we.....come for me baby" he said continuing to please her until she climaxed...then, he looked at her...so beautiful with her hair all around, her eyes closed....He kissed her softly whispering words of love in her ears....She opened her eyes and he stayed there unable to say a word, his breath caught in his throat.....there was so much love in her eyes...she talked softly..
"Max....that was so amazing....that's the first time i felt this...the first time." she repeated.
TBC.....IF YOU WANT IT
before i let u read it, i'd like to thank my faithful readers
dreamer19
Michelle17
roswellluver- it's longer this time
0megaRam1- i'm sure u'll think that i'm obeying u


hope u'll like that part and sorry if it sucks, i'm not really good to write a NC-17 scene...


fb demanded this time!!!
I'VE UPDATED ALL MY FICS NOW, HOPE U'LL ENJOY THEM...
Chapter 21
While Max and Liz were going to the hotel, Serena had called her friend Kyle and now he called her back with a lot of juicy news about Ron and Tess.
"Serena, it's me Kyle"
"Kyle, you found something about Tess?" she asked anxious
"A lot! And not only about Tess, i've found also about Ron...and you know what they are involved together in sex with minors, she risks a lot cause she provided young girls." he explained
"WHAOU! Ron involved with Tess, i understand now why she had this power on him, i guess that if someone found out their schemes, he could have a lot of troubles." she asked reflecting at the situation.
"Serena, i've found out and i'm working in the Vices Squad, let me tell you that we're going to harass her and i'm not sure, if she's guilty as i suppose she is, that film will be her first and last in the same time." he informed her.
"Kyle, i'm glad you found so many things against that witch, but Max has to know before you could do anything against her, or even both of them." she said deciding to call Max as soon as she hung up with Kyle. She was sure he will be happy to hear those news.
"Serena, tell everything to Max and call me back. I've no intention to arrest her for the moment, if they planed to have her in their film, she'll be able to do before we could do anything against her. BUT, i want you to say to Max or everyone involved in that affair, that they have NO RIGHT, you hear me, NO RIGHT to tell her about us, i mean about the searches i'm doing on her or on the producer. It's very important for us, if we want to stop them and free those young girls" he stated.
"I understand Kyle, it's very important to catch her or at least to question her for the Vice, you have my word, no one will interfere in your job. I'm going to call Max to tell him about her, that's all. Count on me and thank you for your help." she said
"Thank you too, Serena, cause you helped me too. By the way, what do you think if we go out one day...i think that we form a good team, we should see if we can go further, huh?" he inquired.
"You're asking me out, Kyle?" she said a smile in the voice.
"It's a good idea, no?"
"Let me see with Max and i'll call you back, ok?"
"I'll be waiting, Serena...Have a good day..." he wished her.
After that conversation, Serena wanted to call Max, but she had clients in her restaurant and she postponed her call.
OK, I'M TRYING TO WRITE THAT NC-17 SCENE BUT IT'S HARD TO ME, NOT BECAUSE I'M SHY BUT MY ENGLISH IS NOT RICH ENOUGH TO USE THE RIGHT WORDS, SO I BEG YOU TO BE FAIR AND NOT SUE ME.....
Good idea, cause Max would be unable to talk.
They arrived at the hotel and went to Liz's room, they didn't talk in the elevator and Max get more nervous, and Liz more shy.. When the doors of the elevator opened, Max took her hand and led her....ran with her to her room. She had just the time to open the door before Max caught her and swooped down on her lips and devoured her mouth.
Shy at the begining, Liz slid her fingers in his hair and pulled him toward her, she forgot her objections, her fears, everything but Max, his hands, his lips on her. She didn't know that the passion could be so overwhelming and Liz felt herself out of the depth by the events but how to resist to such a fire?
His mouth was making love to hers since his hands were everywhere on her body.
Like blinds, they reached the bed, and he fell on it. Excited she removed his jacket and opened one by one the buttons of his shirt...here he was, in front of her...bare chest and she felt bolder..she caressed him slowly, bent and took a nipple in her mouth and sucked it with her tongue...Max was in agony but decided to let her do what she wanted with his body even if he was going to explode.
Even more slowly, her little hand lowered to his pants..she unzipped them brushing his erection.
"Liiiiiiiiiiiiizzz, i'm dying baby..." he cried huskily
"No Max, i want you alive...i want you to make love to me, you're not going to dye or we'll do it together" she said giggling. She pushed his pants down and he threw them away. When he looked at her, he found her staring at his erection with such a hunger in her eyes that he felt he would come right away "Liz, please don't look at me that way, baby, it'll be over before we could begin" he said kissing her breathlessly and in the same move he made her fall on the bed and rolled above her "Now, you're are my prisonner Liz, i'm going to torture you the same way you did it to me"
And he began to undress her, he wanted to do it as slowly as she did to him without stopping to kiss her.. he removed her shirt inch by inch and his mouth was following the same path than his hand, he kissed her stomach at the edge of her jeans and he was electrified to sense her quivering.
He helped her to take off her shirt and kissed her deeply, passionately. His tongue was duelling with hers and Liz couldn't help but moaned driving him crasy. He let her mouth and descended to her neck...the hollow of her throat...and before he continued he looked up to see her while he was pleasing her.
Her hair was spread on the pillow like a halo....her lips swollen by their kisses...he stared at her like a starved wolf in front of a tasty sheep and he was craving to eat her alive..but that was Liz...the love of his life here beneath him and he swore to lead her to the heaven, to make that day unforgettable.
He continued his path to her small and firm breasts, he sucked a nipple through the white lace bra until he hardened and did the same to the other. Liz was finding out some sensitive areas she never knew she had and was amazed to see what Max was able to do to her with his tongue when it was on her navel. "Liz" he called her softly "open your eyes love, i want you to look at me" he said while he was unbuttoning her jeans...
She lifted herself to help him to get rid of it and didn't stop to look at him "You're so beautiful....gorgeous...amazing....there are no words to describe you Liz." he said huskily.
He couldn't help but shiver, Liz was here in his arms almost naked and she's offering her body and her soul to him.. "What did i do to deserve you Baby, i love you so much Liz." he said.
"Me too, Max...i can't wait to be yours." she said locking her eyes with his, Max smiled and bent to kiss her, he put all his love in that kiss, he wanted to proof her that he couldn't help to be hers too.
Then he removed her bra and panties and stayed there looking at her...amazed. Her tiny body, slender and so fragile...he was afraid to hurt her...
Seeing him speechless, Liz misunderstood his silence and crossed her arms on her breasts, reddening."Liz, no....i want to see you, all of you...you're so beautiful! you don't have to be ashamed, you're amazingly beautiful." he said brushing her nipples with his thumb and she gasped when he pinched one of them before he bent and took it in his mouth. He sucked it as if he was a starved and thirsty man in front of a feast....she was his feast and he couldn't get enough of her.
Hearing her moaning, he looked up and felt a real joy to know that it was him who gave her that pleasure and he felt more aroused. "Max, stop teasing me, i need you" she said hoarsly.
"Not yet honey, i want our first time together be the most incredible you never had" he said while his hand was lowering until her heat. He felt her thrill under his hand and with a smile, he continued to drive crasy with want...he slid his finger inside her and started to move them in and out, needing to hear her crying his name in ecstasy. "MAAAAAAAAXXX.....AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH" she screamed
"Honey, you're so hot....so we.....come for me baby" he said continuing to please her until she climaxed...then, he looked at her...so beautiful with her hair all around, her eyes closed....He kissed her softly whispering words of love in her ears....She opened her eyes and he stayed there unable to say a word, his breath caught in his throat.....there was so much love in her eyes...she talked softly..
"Max....that was so amazing....that's the first time i felt this...the first time." she repeated.
TBC.....IF YOU WANT IT