Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 5:28 am
hello, I'm back with a new chapter. If you remember well, Max tried to call Liz with his sister's help...What happened then? Follow me and you'll see.
I'll wait for your fbs, I'd like to know what you think about this part. That'll help me a little for the next parts.
OK, I want to thank you for your support and I hope that you'll be there till the end.
Bixie- THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP! Max is aware now that he needs Liz in his life and not Tess, but he doesn't know yet that she cheated on him since they were dating. And he won't know in this part too.......
Lizza- you'll see in a small part here, but it's not over!
begonia9508- I knew that you'd appreciate how he treated her!!
dreamer19- I hope you'll like this part, and Liz's attitude but it's the begining of....read and you'll see.
True Destiny 666- I'm proud that you leave a fb in my fics, you read another one of them no? I think I saw some other fb!!!!thank you!
Liz86000- I knew that throwing Tess out of his room would please you!!
g7silvers - That's TESS! a gerbil but deaf! and about Liz, browse again and you'll find.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH ALL OF YOU! IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN MY OTHER FICS, I'LL TRY TO UPDATE "MARRIAGE" AND "HATE" AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. I'LL DO MY BEST, WITH BIXIE'S HELP!
Chapter 20
"Hello?" Liz answered her phone.
But Max and Isabel startled when they heard the door opening violently and Hurrican Maria stepping in the appartment.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING? We've told you to not bother her again and what do you do, you came here to help him to call her again!" Maria yelled infuriated that Isabel fled here to call Liz.
"HELLO! Is that Maria that I hear screaming?" Liz asked. "HEY! You called me, so the least you can do is to talk to me when I pick up the phone! HEELLLLLOOOOO!" she screamed over the phone.
"Humm...Liz, it's me Isabel. Humm...I'm sorry to bother you. I thought that I could call you because we we're friends, but Maria decided other wise......" Isabel started to explain.
"What are you talking about? Of course you can call me, as much as you want, we're friends! Tell Maria to stop it's not her decision who can or who can't call me!" she replied.
"SHE DIDN'T TELL YOU THE WHOLE TRUTH! SHE CALLED YOU SO MAX CAN TALK TO YOU! DO YOU STILL AGREE?" Maria screamed for Liz to hear her.
There was a awkward silence in the room, and Liz was silent too. Max wanted to talk to her and Isabel made the call for him.. After a while, Liz heard that none of her friends were talking. "Isabel, I'd like to talk to Maria, please." she asked softly.
"Liiizzz!..........OKAY, if that's what you want! Maria, Liz wants to talk to you." she said looking sadly at Max while she handed the phone to her friend.
He shook his head *Damn Maria and the others! If they didn't come here, maybe I could have a chance to talk to Liz, to try to explain...but I lost my chance now!* he thought and went to his room slamming the door behind him.
"Liz? Chica, I'm sorry. I...WE warned Isabel and told her to stop bothering you, I'm..." she began but Liz cut her off.
"MARIA! Stop rambling, please! I want to talk with Max...." she said but Maria howled "NOOOO! LIIIZZZ! please don't do that!" she couldn't believe that Liz wanted to talk to the man who was responsible for her being in Harvard....Alone since all of her friends were here.
"Maria, listen to me. I need to talk to him...I need to hear what he has to say about Tess. I'm sorry if you're disappointed but it's MY LIFE, and I intend to manage it like I want. Sorry to be so rude. I don't want you to be upset, but you have to let me do what I've have to do, okay Ria?" she asked softly. She knew that Maria was worried about her, but she had to talk to Max if he wanted too.
"OKAY.. You're the boss, Chica!" she said resigning herself. "MARIA! MARIA!" she heard Liz calling on the other end. "Yeah, Liz?"
"Maria, tell the others that I want to talk to Max, alone. ALONE! Maria, promise me." she pleaded.
"Okay, I promise."
"Thank you Ria, you're like a sister to me. And please don't worry, okay?..Now give the phone to Isabel." she ordered.
"Isabel, Liz wants to talk to you." she said handing her the phone. " Oohhh I forgot..BYE LIZ!! I'LL CALL YOU LATER!"
"BYE RIA....Isabel, I want to talk to Max if he still wants to, but like I said to Maria, I want us to be COMPLETELY ALONE! So can you ask him and let him call me back, it's getting expensive to stay on the phone. I'll be waiting for his call." she said calmly, even if she was being far from staying calm.
"Okay, Liz. I'll tell them and I'm sure he'll call you back..Bye Liz." she said and hung up the phone..
She turned around to see that her friends were looking at her. "Isabel, Maria told us what Liz wanted. Even if I disagree, I've no choice than accept her decision. As she said, she has the right to manage her life like she wants. I'm sorry if she yelled too you but try to understand, honey." Alex said taking her hand in his.
"I understand Alex and I hope you'll understand Max as well." she retorted scrutinizing him.
"I know that Max is your brother and you want to help him. We have to let them talk and we'll see what's going to happen between them. I agree that it's their business, but we love them and we want the best for them." he said with a smile.
"You're right. Alex, she waiting for Max's call. Let me go, I will tell him and then I come with you." she said walking to Max's room. When she opened the door, she stopped in her tracks . Max was on his bed, his head buried in a pillow, sobbing.
She hadn't time to close the door behind her, so the others heard it to and came to the doorway. Even if Alex and Maria wanted to protect Liz, they couldn't be heartless hearing Max cry, they stood there in silence when Isabel approached the bed.
"Max...Max...Stop crying. She wants to talk to you. She's waiting for your call." she said softly but Max didn't respond. In fact, Max was crying so hard that he thought he was dreaming hearing Isabel's words.
"Max., come on, she's waiting for you...Maaxx, sit up and stop crying. Please, look at me." she said softly.
He did as he was told. "What did you say?" he asked with a hoarse voice.
"I talked to her, she agreed to talk to you, Max." she said.
He looked up and saw the whole gang in the doorway. "And you are okay with that? Maria, how do you feel about that?" he asked with anger in the voice
"I don't trust you Max, but it's Liz's decision and I promised her to stop interfering in her life. Let me just tell you something, Max. If you say something wrong.... or if you hurt her again....You better flee to another planet, because you won't be safe. We will hunt you down. Count on me, on us for that." she stated flatly and the others nodded.
"And you better stop playing with Tess, Max. I know that you wanted to get on my nerves, but don't try that another time, I won't believe you then." Michael said roughly.
"He threw her out of his room when she came earlier!" Isabel blurted out.
"WHAT?? TESS WAS THERE?" Michael yelled.
Max got up and stood beside him. "You didn't listen to what Isabel just said...I threw her out of my room. I told her that I've just wanted to irritate you and that I've no intentions to go out with her. I hope she understood. But believe me, I threw her out of my room. And even if it's none of your business, I'm madly in love with Liz. I'm sad that I didn't find this out long before, but that's life. I won't hurt her, Maria. I won't need to flee to another planet. I'll be safe being around you and being with Liz. That my biggest wish!" he said looking Michael straight in his eyes.
"Okay, let's go. She's waiting for Max. Can you call us when it'll be over?" Michael asked. Max nodded.
They left the room. Max was alone now, before he did anything, he checked the door, in case Tess would come back again. Then, he went to his room and took his phone. She was waiting for his call. After all this time, he was going to talk normally with his best friend... the woman he was madly in love with.
He dialed her number slowly....."Hello? Max?" hearing her voice, he felt tears starting in his eyes. "Liz." he replied softly. "I'm so happy to hear your voice."
"Me too. How are you?" she asked.
"Fine...I miss you, so much!"
"............................."
"Liz? Are you still there?...Listen, I want to apologize Liz, for all what I said to you, for all what I did to you. I know that you have the right to be mad at me..I understand that. I know that you're far away from us because of me, and I'm sorry. I was a fool, an idiot. Liz I'll understand if you don't want to forgive me. But I didn't want to talk to you to ask you for your forgiveness. I only wanted to apologize, to tell you that I love you and always will. To tell you that, even if you don't come back now, I'll wait for you."
"Max, what's about Tess? Michael told me...." she started to question him but he cut her off.
"I threw her out of my room earlier!" he blurted out.
"WHAT? She was in your room?" she screamed over the phone.
Max heard the pain in her voice. He had promised to not hurt her, and yet he did.
"Liz, she came earlier in my room without me knowing, but I threw her out of my room. I told her that I invited her in my room just to get on Michael and Alex"s nerves. I swear to you Liz, it's over with her." he said fervently.
"It's over for now, but Max, she isn't going to give up on you, ever. And are you forgeting that you've already been with her, so it's too late now." she said sadly.
"What do you mean, I've already been with her Liz?" he asked. He knew perfectly what she was meant, but he wanted her to say it. He wanted to tell her that no one had ever been with him the way she thought Tess was.
"Max, I know what a girl and a guy do when they date, most of all a girl like Tess who wants you so badly." she said angry to know that he thought she was more naive than she was.
"I know that. I mean, I know that you think that I've slept with Tess.... Liz, I've never slept with any girl.... I'm waiting for you! My heart, my soul and even my body is waiting for YOU! So just know this. I'm waiting for you, Liz."
TBC..IF YOU WANT IT................................
I'll wait for your fbs, I'd like to know what you think about this part. That'll help me a little for the next parts.
OK, I want to thank you for your support and I hope that you'll be there till the end.
Bixie- THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP! Max is aware now that he needs Liz in his life and not Tess, but he doesn't know yet that she cheated on him since they were dating. And he won't know in this part too.......
Lizza- you'll see in a small part here, but it's not over!
begonia9508- I knew that you'd appreciate how he treated her!!
dreamer19- I hope you'll like this part, and Liz's attitude but it's the begining of....read and you'll see.
True Destiny 666- I'm proud that you leave a fb in my fics, you read another one of them no? I think I saw some other fb!!!!thank you!
Liz86000- I knew that throwing Tess out of his room would please you!!
g7silvers - That's TESS! a gerbil but deaf! and about Liz, browse again and you'll find.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH ALL OF YOU! IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN MY OTHER FICS, I'LL TRY TO UPDATE "MARRIAGE" AND "HATE" AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. I'LL DO MY BEST, WITH BIXIE'S HELP!
Chapter 20
"Hello?" Liz answered her phone.
But Max and Isabel startled when they heard the door opening violently and Hurrican Maria stepping in the appartment.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING? We've told you to not bother her again and what do you do, you came here to help him to call her again!" Maria yelled infuriated that Isabel fled here to call Liz.
"HELLO! Is that Maria that I hear screaming?" Liz asked. "HEY! You called me, so the least you can do is to talk to me when I pick up the phone! HEELLLLLOOOOO!" she screamed over the phone.
"Humm...Liz, it's me Isabel. Humm...I'm sorry to bother you. I thought that I could call you because we we're friends, but Maria decided other wise......" Isabel started to explain.
"What are you talking about? Of course you can call me, as much as you want, we're friends! Tell Maria to stop it's not her decision who can or who can't call me!" she replied.
"SHE DIDN'T TELL YOU THE WHOLE TRUTH! SHE CALLED YOU SO MAX CAN TALK TO YOU! DO YOU STILL AGREE?" Maria screamed for Liz to hear her.
There was a awkward silence in the room, and Liz was silent too. Max wanted to talk to her and Isabel made the call for him.. After a while, Liz heard that none of her friends were talking. "Isabel, I'd like to talk to Maria, please." she asked softly.
"Liiizzz!..........OKAY, if that's what you want! Maria, Liz wants to talk to you." she said looking sadly at Max while she handed the phone to her friend.
He shook his head *Damn Maria and the others! If they didn't come here, maybe I could have a chance to talk to Liz, to try to explain...but I lost my chance now!* he thought and went to his room slamming the door behind him.
"Liz? Chica, I'm sorry. I...WE warned Isabel and told her to stop bothering you, I'm..." she began but Liz cut her off.
"MARIA! Stop rambling, please! I want to talk with Max...." she said but Maria howled "NOOOO! LIIIZZZ! please don't do that!" she couldn't believe that Liz wanted to talk to the man who was responsible for her being in Harvard....Alone since all of her friends were here.
"Maria, listen to me. I need to talk to him...I need to hear what he has to say about Tess. I'm sorry if you're disappointed but it's MY LIFE, and I intend to manage it like I want. Sorry to be so rude. I don't want you to be upset, but you have to let me do what I've have to do, okay Ria?" she asked softly. She knew that Maria was worried about her, but she had to talk to Max if he wanted too.
"OKAY.. You're the boss, Chica!" she said resigning herself. "MARIA! MARIA!" she heard Liz calling on the other end. "Yeah, Liz?"
"Maria, tell the others that I want to talk to Max, alone. ALONE! Maria, promise me." she pleaded.
"Okay, I promise."
"Thank you Ria, you're like a sister to me. And please don't worry, okay?..Now give the phone to Isabel." she ordered.
"Isabel, Liz wants to talk to you." she said handing her the phone. " Oohhh I forgot..BYE LIZ!! I'LL CALL YOU LATER!"
"BYE RIA....Isabel, I want to talk to Max if he still wants to, but like I said to Maria, I want us to be COMPLETELY ALONE! So can you ask him and let him call me back, it's getting expensive to stay on the phone. I'll be waiting for his call." she said calmly, even if she was being far from staying calm.
"Okay, Liz. I'll tell them and I'm sure he'll call you back..Bye Liz." she said and hung up the phone..
She turned around to see that her friends were looking at her. "Isabel, Maria told us what Liz wanted. Even if I disagree, I've no choice than accept her decision. As she said, she has the right to manage her life like she wants. I'm sorry if she yelled too you but try to understand, honey." Alex said taking her hand in his.
"I understand Alex and I hope you'll understand Max as well." she retorted scrutinizing him.
"I know that Max is your brother and you want to help him. We have to let them talk and we'll see what's going to happen between them. I agree that it's their business, but we love them and we want the best for them." he said with a smile.
"You're right. Alex, she waiting for Max's call. Let me go, I will tell him and then I come with you." she said walking to Max's room. When she opened the door, she stopped in her tracks . Max was on his bed, his head buried in a pillow, sobbing.
She hadn't time to close the door behind her, so the others heard it to and came to the doorway. Even if Alex and Maria wanted to protect Liz, they couldn't be heartless hearing Max cry, they stood there in silence when Isabel approached the bed.
"Max...Max...Stop crying. She wants to talk to you. She's waiting for your call." she said softly but Max didn't respond. In fact, Max was crying so hard that he thought he was dreaming hearing Isabel's words.
"Max., come on, she's waiting for you...Maaxx, sit up and stop crying. Please, look at me." she said softly.
He did as he was told. "What did you say?" he asked with a hoarse voice.
"I talked to her, she agreed to talk to you, Max." she said.
He looked up and saw the whole gang in the doorway. "And you are okay with that? Maria, how do you feel about that?" he asked with anger in the voice
"I don't trust you Max, but it's Liz's decision and I promised her to stop interfering in her life. Let me just tell you something, Max. If you say something wrong.... or if you hurt her again....You better flee to another planet, because you won't be safe. We will hunt you down. Count on me, on us for that." she stated flatly and the others nodded.
"And you better stop playing with Tess, Max. I know that you wanted to get on my nerves, but don't try that another time, I won't believe you then." Michael said roughly.
"He threw her out of his room when she came earlier!" Isabel blurted out.
"WHAT?? TESS WAS THERE?" Michael yelled.
Max got up and stood beside him. "You didn't listen to what Isabel just said...I threw her out of my room. I told her that I've just wanted to irritate you and that I've no intentions to go out with her. I hope she understood. But believe me, I threw her out of my room. And even if it's none of your business, I'm madly in love with Liz. I'm sad that I didn't find this out long before, but that's life. I won't hurt her, Maria. I won't need to flee to another planet. I'll be safe being around you and being with Liz. That my biggest wish!" he said looking Michael straight in his eyes.
"Okay, let's go. She's waiting for Max. Can you call us when it'll be over?" Michael asked. Max nodded.
They left the room. Max was alone now, before he did anything, he checked the door, in case Tess would come back again. Then, he went to his room and took his phone. She was waiting for his call. After all this time, he was going to talk normally with his best friend... the woman he was madly in love with.
He dialed her number slowly....."Hello? Max?" hearing her voice, he felt tears starting in his eyes. "Liz." he replied softly. "I'm so happy to hear your voice."
"Me too. How are you?" she asked.
"Fine...I miss you, so much!"
"............................."
"Liz? Are you still there?...Listen, I want to apologize Liz, for all what I said to you, for all what I did to you. I know that you have the right to be mad at me..I understand that. I know that you're far away from us because of me, and I'm sorry. I was a fool, an idiot. Liz I'll understand if you don't want to forgive me. But I didn't want to talk to you to ask you for your forgiveness. I only wanted to apologize, to tell you that I love you and always will. To tell you that, even if you don't come back now, I'll wait for you."
"Max, what's about Tess? Michael told me...." she started to question him but he cut her off.
"I threw her out of my room earlier!" he blurted out.
"WHAT? She was in your room?" she screamed over the phone.
Max heard the pain in her voice. He had promised to not hurt her, and yet he did.
"Liz, she came earlier in my room without me knowing, but I threw her out of my room. I told her that I invited her in my room just to get on Michael and Alex"s nerves. I swear to you Liz, it's over with her." he said fervently.
"It's over for now, but Max, she isn't going to give up on you, ever. And are you forgeting that you've already been with her, so it's too late now." she said sadly.
"What do you mean, I've already been with her Liz?" he asked. He knew perfectly what she was meant, but he wanted her to say it. He wanted to tell her that no one had ever been with him the way she thought Tess was.
"Max, I know what a girl and a guy do when they date, most of all a girl like Tess who wants you so badly." she said angry to know that he thought she was more naive than she was.
"I know that. I mean, I know that you think that I've slept with Tess.... Liz, I've never slept with any girl.... I'm waiting for you! My heart, my soul and even my body is waiting for YOU! So just know this. I'm waiting for you, Liz."
TBC..IF YOU WANT IT................................