Roswell Re-vamped (AU/CC Mature) Thread #1
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- DaisyMae24
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*Isabel*
I'm waiting tables and talking to my best friend Maria when two men come and sit in my section and I hate to say it but something about them makes me nervous.
Maria gives me a reassurring smile and moves to take their order and that's when I catch sight of the glint of metal. I open my mouth to warn Maria but by then it's too late.
The fumble for control of the gun and I vaguely hear someone yell to get down. I duck to the floor just as the gun goes off and when I stand back up I notice Maria on the floor.
"Maria." I scream running for my friend
I'm waiting tables and talking to my best friend Maria when two men come and sit in my section and I hate to say it but something about them makes me nervous.
Maria gives me a reassurring smile and moves to take their order and that's when I catch sight of the glint of metal. I open my mouth to warn Maria but by then it's too late.
The fumble for control of the gun and I vaguely hear someone yell to get down. I duck to the floor just as the gun goes off and when I stand back up I notice Maria on the floor.
"Maria." I scream running for my friend
Jessi Mae


- FaithfulAngel24
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*Kyle*
Stopping in The Crash for a quick bite I smile as I see Izzy and Ria busting about the crowded diner. Ahh busines as usual. I take a seat at the bar and swing my chair around to face my fiesty friend. Maria gives Iz a secret smile before taking care of some rather unruly looking customers. Taking the menu out I pretend to read. I've been coming here for years I have the paper well memorized by now. Watching my girls cautiously my fears are justified when the dudes start arguing. Isabel's eyes grow large diverting my attention to the sight just to the right of me. Beavis and Butthead have now brought a gun into the mix. I dive to the side hoping to reach her in time ,but it's too late.
"Maria!"
Isabel's high pitched scream brings me back to reality. There in the middle of the floor lies my best friend in a pool of her own blood.
Stopping in The Crash for a quick bite I smile as I see Izzy and Ria busting about the crowded diner. Ahh busines as usual. I take a seat at the bar and swing my chair around to face my fiesty friend. Maria gives Iz a secret smile before taking care of some rather unruly looking customers. Taking the menu out I pretend to read. I've been coming here for years I have the paper well memorized by now. Watching my girls cautiously my fears are justified when the dudes start arguing. Isabel's eyes grow large diverting my attention to the sight just to the right of me. Beavis and Butthead have now brought a gun into the mix. I dive to the side hoping to reach her in time ,but it's too late.
"Maria!"
Isabel's high pitched scream brings me back to reality. There in the middle of the floor lies my best friend in a pool of her own blood.

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- Fehr'sBear
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Michael
Alex pulls Liz down, and I duck as well, but then the guy pulls the gun in a sort of defense tactic, and it goes off. Over the sound of the blast, I yell to the people in the restaurant, my voice nearly drowned out by the commotion. "Get down!!"
Everyone around gets on the floor, but one of the waitresses doesn't move in time. I try to yell to her; to get her attention, but it is then that I see the look in her eyes and the red stain on the front of her uniform. She falls, and I hear another girl, a tall blonde yell her name. "Maria!"
Even as I make my way towards the fallen girl, the guy with the gun runs out. I get behind the counter, where the girl; Maria, fell, and kneel next to her.
"You're gonna be okay, just stay with me," I say loudly, trying to get her to keep her eyes open. Ripping open the front of her uniform, I place my hand on the wound to try to stop the bleeding. My hands starts glowing, and then I start to see images, images that aren't from my life.
*flash*
A little girl on the playground, sitting by herself.
An argument between a girl and her father, things turn ugly.
An arm, bruised, but then a hand covers it.
The same girl as before, older, smiling and with friends.
*end flash*
I'm brought back to reality in what seems like an eternity, only to find that the blood has disappeared, and Maria's eyes are opening. Bringing my hand up to my face, fear takes over. Oh god. Someone knows. "Listen to me, this never happened," I whisper into the girl's ear, getting up quickly.
I grab Liz and Alex and get them out of the restaurant, no longer thinking. All that I can see in my mind are those images, and the look on her face as I ran off.
(hope the flashes and stuff are alright
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Alex pulls Liz down, and I duck as well, but then the guy pulls the gun in a sort of defense tactic, and it goes off. Over the sound of the blast, I yell to the people in the restaurant, my voice nearly drowned out by the commotion. "Get down!!"
Everyone around gets on the floor, but one of the waitresses doesn't move in time. I try to yell to her; to get her attention, but it is then that I see the look in her eyes and the red stain on the front of her uniform. She falls, and I hear another girl, a tall blonde yell her name. "Maria!"
Even as I make my way towards the fallen girl, the guy with the gun runs out. I get behind the counter, where the girl; Maria, fell, and kneel next to her.
"You're gonna be okay, just stay with me," I say loudly, trying to get her to keep her eyes open. Ripping open the front of her uniform, I place my hand on the wound to try to stop the bleeding. My hands starts glowing, and then I start to see images, images that aren't from my life.
*flash*
A little girl on the playground, sitting by herself.
An argument between a girl and her father, things turn ugly.
An arm, bruised, but then a hand covers it.
The same girl as before, older, smiling and with friends.
*end flash*
I'm brought back to reality in what seems like an eternity, only to find that the blood has disappeared, and Maria's eyes are opening. Bringing my hand up to my face, fear takes over. Oh god. Someone knows. "Listen to me, this never happened," I whisper into the girl's ear, getting up quickly.
I grab Liz and Alex and get them out of the restaurant, no longer thinking. All that I can see in my mind are those images, and the look on her face as I ran off.
(hope the flashes and stuff are alright


- DaisyMae24
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I watch as one of Alex's weird friends gets up and goes to Maria kneeling down next to her and then does something to her before standing up and grabbing Alex and the girl they were sitting with, running out the door.
I run over to Maria, my eyes wide and face pale.
"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?" I cry
I watch as one of Alex's weird friends gets up and goes to Maria kneeling down next to her and then does something to her before standing up and grabbing Alex and the girl they were sitting with, running out the door.
I run over to Maria, my eyes wide and face pale.
"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?" I cry
Jessi Mae


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*Maria*
"You're gonna be okay, just stay with me," Alex's band mate says as my eyes flutter open. Ripping open the front of my uniform, he places his strong hand over my wound in an attemot to stop the bleeding. I feel myself fading away that is until his hand starts glowing. My eyes shut abruptly trying to avoid the brightness.
Next thing I hear is the boy's deep breaths coming out in raggad pants.
My eyes come open to see the beautiful stranger raise his hand to his face. His expression shows fear and worry.
"Listen to me, this never happened," he whispers into my ear sending chills down my spine.
He jumps up leaving me clasping my uniform closed standing there in awe. His piercing gaze leaves me entrapped within this world I have created for myself.
I am forced out of this world byt the voice of my best friend.
"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?" she cries rushing to me.
"I fell." I stammer.
"You're gonna be okay, just stay with me," Alex's band mate says as my eyes flutter open. Ripping open the front of my uniform, he places his strong hand over my wound in an attemot to stop the bleeding. I feel myself fading away that is until his hand starts glowing. My eyes shut abruptly trying to avoid the brightness.
Next thing I hear is the boy's deep breaths coming out in raggad pants.
My eyes come open to see the beautiful stranger raise his hand to his face. His expression shows fear and worry.
"Listen to me, this never happened," he whispers into my ear sending chills down my spine.
He jumps up leaving me clasping my uniform closed standing there in awe. His piercing gaze leaves me entrapped within this world I have created for myself.
I am forced out of this world byt the voice of my best friend.
"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?" she cries rushing to me.
"I fell." I stammer.


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- aliensister
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TESS
ooh i love this song, the metallic sounds of the guitar blares from my black desoto's radio as i sing along.for some reason the song has been in my head all day.
I've been drivin' all night,
My hand's wet on the wheel
There's a voice in my head
That drives my heel
It's my baby callin',
Says: I need you here
And it's a half past four
And I'm shifting gear
My hairs being whipped around by the wind coming in through my open window. About 2 miles and approaching fast is the sign i have been driving across country to see 'welcome to roswell' i have to smile. I look down at myself blue jeans, bare feet and a two sizes to big Guns'n' Roses shirt on.My long Blonde Hair blowing every which way and *sniff* i so need a shower hows that saying go 'cleanliness is next godliness' *snort*
No more speed, I'm almost there
Gotta keep cool now, gotta take care
Last car to pass, here I go
And the line of cars drove down real slow
i have just entered roswell city limits , new start here i come!
(lyrics belong to Golden Earring-Radar Love)
ooh i love this song, the metallic sounds of the guitar blares from my black desoto's radio as i sing along.for some reason the song has been in my head all day.
I've been drivin' all night,
My hand's wet on the wheel
There's a voice in my head
That drives my heel
It's my baby callin',
Says: I need you here
And it's a half past four
And I'm shifting gear
My hairs being whipped around by the wind coming in through my open window. About 2 miles and approaching fast is the sign i have been driving across country to see 'welcome to roswell' i have to smile. I look down at myself blue jeans, bare feet and a two sizes to big Guns'n' Roses shirt on.My long Blonde Hair blowing every which way and *sniff* i so need a shower hows that saying go 'cleanliness is next godliness' *snort*
No more speed, I'm almost there
Gotta keep cool now, gotta take care
Last car to pass, here I go
And the line of cars drove down real slow
i have just entered roswell city limits , new start here i come!
(lyrics belong to Golden Earring-Radar Love)
- DaisyMae24
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*Isabel*
I stare at my friend knowing that's not really true but I'm not going to press it while we're standing here in the middle of the resturant.
I know the Sheriff and his deptuties will be here soon and then we'll have to worry about what we're going to tell them.
I look over at Kyle and see him looking back at us concern in his eyes.
I stare at my friend knowing that's not really true but I'm not going to press it while we're standing here in the middle of the resturant.
I know the Sheriff and his deptuties will be here soon and then we'll have to worry about what we're going to tell them.
I look over at Kyle and see him looking back at us concern in his eyes.
Jessi Mae


- FaithfulAngel24
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*Kyle*
Alex's odd friend rushes to Maria's side. Someone should call an ambulance! He must be applying pressure to the wound. Isabel and I are both startled when sheslowly raises up while he runs out the door.
She appears unharmed. How can that be? We all saw the blood.
Iz reaches her before I do and asks,"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?"
Not batting an eyelash she simply responds, "I fell."
I take her shaking hand in mine. " We thought..." i trail off uneasily. Had my eyes been playing tricks on me? No. I know what I saw. Maria was shot, but then how is she standing here in an apparent daze.
Alex's odd friend rushes to Maria's side. Someone should call an ambulance! He must be applying pressure to the wound. Isabel and I are both startled when sheslowly raises up while he runs out the door.
She appears unharmed. How can that be? We all saw the blood.
Iz reaches her before I do and asks,"Oh my God. Ria are you okay?"
Not batting an eyelash she simply responds, "I fell."
I take her shaking hand in mine. " We thought..." i trail off uneasily. Had my eyes been playing tricks on me? No. I know what I saw. Maria was shot, but then how is she standing here in an apparent daze.


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- aliensister
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*TESS*
i pull up to the apartment block that iam now calling home, its not the Ritz or the Hilton but hey it'll do...and i can cheat and use my powers to re-decorate *smile* .I turn around as to cop cars go whizzing past me ,wow here i was thinking Roswell was going to be a sleepy little town but ive only been here two minutes and im already seeing police,I shake my head and start unloading all my boxes from the old car ..wait i put down the box im carrying. theres this niggling little feeling of fear in the pit of my stomach ,something seems wrong but im putting it down to nerves of being in a new town and a new school nothing unusual. I tie my hair up into a loose bun and resume carrying boxes.
i pull up to the apartment block that iam now calling home, its not the Ritz or the Hilton but hey it'll do...and i can cheat and use my powers to re-decorate *smile* .I turn around as to cop cars go whizzing past me ,wow here i was thinking Roswell was going to be a sleepy little town but ive only been here two minutes and im already seeing police,I shake my head and start unloading all my boxes from the old car ..wait i put down the box im carrying. theres this niggling little feeling of fear in the pit of my stomach ,something seems wrong but im putting it down to nerves of being in a new town and a new school nothing unusual. I tie my hair up into a loose bun and resume carrying boxes.
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~Alex~
"Michael that was fucked up...you just put us all in danger!" I yell as I climb into the jeep.
Is he nuts....he is the one who made us all promise not to tell anyone but here he is healing some chick. Just great. Glad to know what he would do if he had to choose between the saftey of his own sister and some girl we barely know.
"Michael that was fucked up...you just put us all in danger!" I yell as I climb into the jeep.
Is he nuts....he is the one who made us all promise not to tell anyone but here he is healing some chick. Just great. Glad to know what he would do if he had to choose between the saftey of his own sister and some girl we barely know.