Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 2:05 am
HI mareli
Thanks for the feedback ... right now there is a lot of violence on Antar especially as they slide downhill into a period of chaos. One man in his desire to take the throne and destroy the dynasties of Thardan and Rath is fueling this hate. In the end, justice and righteousness will prevail but the road is long and hard. There is even hope for our pod people to have some peaceful times coming in the near future. Thanks to all for hanging in there.
s_e_r
Book 2: Section 3: Chapter 2: Part 1 of 3
The Past Returns: Book Two of the Chronicles of Antar
Section 3: Temple of the Shadow Moon
Chapter 2: The Prophecy Revealed
Timeline: Seven Years after Rath’s Birth
~ Contemplation ~
"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel. Every one sees what you appear to be, few really know what you are." The Prince by Niccolo Machiavelli
At this very moment, far up on one of the foothills adjacent to the Dandler Mountain range, a small Antarian boy, only seven years old, was lying naked upon a boulder, staring at the sky, wondering who he was, why he was, and what he was. In the distance, herders of those domestic animals, needed for food and clothing, could be heard calling for their property in the hot afternoon sun. Tymin closed his eyes looking up at the sun through his eyelids as reddish designs danced across in his sight. The weather was warm; a gentle breeze stirred the trees nearby, whispering ancient songs of past battles. Over his shoulder and down the small embankment a creek babbled on, contradicting the stories of the wind and instilling its own version of ancient lore. He wiggled his toes in the air and stretched his body, it was getting late and he would have to return soon to the temple. He took a deep breath, the fruit trees were flowering, their fragrance drifted over him, he cold stay here all day cradled on this boulder, letting the sun warm his body and soul.
Soon he was asleep, he dreamt of a palace encased in vines covered with thorns and a purple silver tipped flower, an ancient yet alien intrusion into their world. He was standing at the top of a tower, a bloody sword in his hand, the ground was full of blood and it was rising like a swollen river during flooding. Far away he heard an indistinguishable noise, faint at first, growing louder with each passing second, finally the noise became audible to the ears, it was the rhythmic metallic beating of a drum. His gaze pierced the fog, which covered the landscape, to see ancient warriors dressed in battle accruements, beating their spears on the chest, their armor shimmering in the sun. There were hundreds of them in perfect ceremonial formation, they were paying homage to their heroes, men that died in battle; they were magnificent, invincible, the ultimate army of a warrior King. Then one came floating up to Tymin, removed his crested helmet and bent one knee down in a salute. “We await your return.” When he looked up his eyes were not Antarian, they were not black or silver: they were a light brown in a sea of white.
Tymin screamed as he fell off the rock. He jumped up quickly looking all around, half expecting to see the ghost army at his feet. Instead what he saw was the sun was about to set; Tymin knew he would be late for dinner, and if that happened he would starve that night or would have to risk being punishment to steal some food later that night. He put on his clothes and ran down the hill, his legs were quick as he jumped over varmint holes, small boulders, and ruts in the ground. He was soon at the temple; ‘good no one as usual saw me’ thought Tymin, proud of the fact that no one had ever caught him sneaking in or out of the complex. He was invisible to their naked eye, when he wished to be, all you had to do was be quiet and watch.
Master Galawen watched the boy sneak back onto the temple grounds. His platinum blonde hair shimmered in the fading sun, as his lithe body jumped effortlessly over the retaining wall; he was like fluid water in his movements. His legs were strong for such a young child and his muscle coordination was incredible. His face was red from the heat of the sun, he knew Tymin had been up in the foothills, it was forbidden for students to leave the complex, but Master Galawen never punished him or scolded him for his quests. Something about the boy puzzled him, the child was unnaturally gifted, brilliant for his age, wise far beyond his years and naturally intuitive. Truly this one was blessed by the ancients, for what purpose Master Galawen did not know. Being an orphan there was little hope for a future, why the ancients would bless and curse this child at the same time was a great mystery.
As Tymin approached Master Galawen he flashed him one of winning smiles, his silver eyes sparkled with a mischievous glint.
“Tymin be quick. The dinner bell is about to be rung. You need to be sitting.” Master Galawen said in his gruffest voice, smiling “Now hurry along."
“Yes Master Galawen.”
Tymin just barely made it to his seat with the bell rang. The food was simple but hearty. There was bread and soup, with some type of fish being the main meat for this evening. There were always lots of fresh vegetables and fruits, and for a small treat the students that night received a roll filled with a sweet spicy paste that had to be made by the hands of the ancients themselves, it was heavenly. Tymin had finished and was leaving the dinning hall when he heard Master Galawen call out, “Tymin. Come walk with me.”
The pair walked down the blue steps to the mediation forest. There they followed a cobbled path to a crystal spring that is said to bring visions to those who seek and clarity to those confused. An old tin cup was kept on a rock next to the spring. Master Galawen held the cup up to the water as it gushed forth from a crack in a rock and dropped into a pool below. “Here drink of the ancient spring and tell me what your vision was up in the hills today.”
Tymin looked up at the old man and smirked, he knew he had been caught. However, Master Galawen was different; he would listen instead of hitting or punishing. “And how do you know, Master, that I had a vision,” said Tymin as he drank the offering.
“Because I can sense you. Your emotions are strong, too strong, they overflow your body and vibrate outwards for others to pick up on. For those whose minds are weak and not condition like those of a master, you will find that beneficial in the future when you want to install the feelings of terror, panic, fear, and hysteria in your enemy. On the other hand you will be a blessing for a wife or confidant, for that person will feel love, lust, passion, or rapture.” Master Galawen looked at the child, so small he was now, in his heart, he knew this one had a destiny, he prayed to the ancients that he would live long enough to see what Tymin would become; would he fall to the Shadows or the Dark Waters.
Tymin snorted at the thought of marrying an icky girl, he saw the female students, most were weak and worried about heir hair and makeup rather than their stances or techniques with a weapon. The thought of taking a confident did not appeal to him either, no man would be his equal, he knew he could best the greatest warriors in time, the only one that would be match would be a king.
“Are you going to tell me your vision?”
Tymin was fidgeting with the cup, rimming its edge with his thumb, looking down at the ground. “It was nothing Master Galawen. I was on top of a tower of some palace covered in purple flowers with thorns. I saw ancient warriors coming toward me, one came close; I saw into his eyes, they were light brown with white surrounding them. He said ‘We await your return’ and then I woke up. That is all just a delusion from the sun.” Tymin shrugged his shoulder and handed the cup back to Master Galawen.
‘Could he be the prophecy?’ Master Galawen wondered as he took the cup and watched the boy walk away. Tomorrow he himself would retreat to the old library, far up in the northern suites to see if Tymin was to be their savior.
Thanks for the feedback ... right now there is a lot of violence on Antar especially as they slide downhill into a period of chaos. One man in his desire to take the throne and destroy the dynasties of Thardan and Rath is fueling this hate. In the end, justice and righteousness will prevail but the road is long and hard. There is even hope for our pod people to have some peaceful times coming in the near future. Thanks to all for hanging in there.
s_e_r
Book 2: Section 3: Chapter 2: Part 1 of 3
The Past Returns: Book Two of the Chronicles of Antar
Section 3: Temple of the Shadow Moon
Chapter 2: The Prophecy Revealed
Timeline: Seven Years after Rath’s Birth
~ Contemplation ~
"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel. Every one sees what you appear to be, few really know what you are." The Prince by Niccolo Machiavelli
At this very moment, far up on one of the foothills adjacent to the Dandler Mountain range, a small Antarian boy, only seven years old, was lying naked upon a boulder, staring at the sky, wondering who he was, why he was, and what he was. In the distance, herders of those domestic animals, needed for food and clothing, could be heard calling for their property in the hot afternoon sun. Tymin closed his eyes looking up at the sun through his eyelids as reddish designs danced across in his sight. The weather was warm; a gentle breeze stirred the trees nearby, whispering ancient songs of past battles. Over his shoulder and down the small embankment a creek babbled on, contradicting the stories of the wind and instilling its own version of ancient lore. He wiggled his toes in the air and stretched his body, it was getting late and he would have to return soon to the temple. He took a deep breath, the fruit trees were flowering, their fragrance drifted over him, he cold stay here all day cradled on this boulder, letting the sun warm his body and soul.
Soon he was asleep, he dreamt of a palace encased in vines covered with thorns and a purple silver tipped flower, an ancient yet alien intrusion into their world. He was standing at the top of a tower, a bloody sword in his hand, the ground was full of blood and it was rising like a swollen river during flooding. Far away he heard an indistinguishable noise, faint at first, growing louder with each passing second, finally the noise became audible to the ears, it was the rhythmic metallic beating of a drum. His gaze pierced the fog, which covered the landscape, to see ancient warriors dressed in battle accruements, beating their spears on the chest, their armor shimmering in the sun. There were hundreds of them in perfect ceremonial formation, they were paying homage to their heroes, men that died in battle; they were magnificent, invincible, the ultimate army of a warrior King. Then one came floating up to Tymin, removed his crested helmet and bent one knee down in a salute. “We await your return.” When he looked up his eyes were not Antarian, they were not black or silver: they were a light brown in a sea of white.
Tymin screamed as he fell off the rock. He jumped up quickly looking all around, half expecting to see the ghost army at his feet. Instead what he saw was the sun was about to set; Tymin knew he would be late for dinner, and if that happened he would starve that night or would have to risk being punishment to steal some food later that night. He put on his clothes and ran down the hill, his legs were quick as he jumped over varmint holes, small boulders, and ruts in the ground. He was soon at the temple; ‘good no one as usual saw me’ thought Tymin, proud of the fact that no one had ever caught him sneaking in or out of the complex. He was invisible to their naked eye, when he wished to be, all you had to do was be quiet and watch.
Master Galawen watched the boy sneak back onto the temple grounds. His platinum blonde hair shimmered in the fading sun, as his lithe body jumped effortlessly over the retaining wall; he was like fluid water in his movements. His legs were strong for such a young child and his muscle coordination was incredible. His face was red from the heat of the sun, he knew Tymin had been up in the foothills, it was forbidden for students to leave the complex, but Master Galawen never punished him or scolded him for his quests. Something about the boy puzzled him, the child was unnaturally gifted, brilliant for his age, wise far beyond his years and naturally intuitive. Truly this one was blessed by the ancients, for what purpose Master Galawen did not know. Being an orphan there was little hope for a future, why the ancients would bless and curse this child at the same time was a great mystery.
As Tymin approached Master Galawen he flashed him one of winning smiles, his silver eyes sparkled with a mischievous glint.
“Tymin be quick. The dinner bell is about to be rung. You need to be sitting.” Master Galawen said in his gruffest voice, smiling “Now hurry along."
“Yes Master Galawen.”
Tymin just barely made it to his seat with the bell rang. The food was simple but hearty. There was bread and soup, with some type of fish being the main meat for this evening. There were always lots of fresh vegetables and fruits, and for a small treat the students that night received a roll filled with a sweet spicy paste that had to be made by the hands of the ancients themselves, it was heavenly. Tymin had finished and was leaving the dinning hall when he heard Master Galawen call out, “Tymin. Come walk with me.”
The pair walked down the blue steps to the mediation forest. There they followed a cobbled path to a crystal spring that is said to bring visions to those who seek and clarity to those confused. An old tin cup was kept on a rock next to the spring. Master Galawen held the cup up to the water as it gushed forth from a crack in a rock and dropped into a pool below. “Here drink of the ancient spring and tell me what your vision was up in the hills today.”
Tymin looked up at the old man and smirked, he knew he had been caught. However, Master Galawen was different; he would listen instead of hitting or punishing. “And how do you know, Master, that I had a vision,” said Tymin as he drank the offering.
“Because I can sense you. Your emotions are strong, too strong, they overflow your body and vibrate outwards for others to pick up on. For those whose minds are weak and not condition like those of a master, you will find that beneficial in the future when you want to install the feelings of terror, panic, fear, and hysteria in your enemy. On the other hand you will be a blessing for a wife or confidant, for that person will feel love, lust, passion, or rapture.” Master Galawen looked at the child, so small he was now, in his heart, he knew this one had a destiny, he prayed to the ancients that he would live long enough to see what Tymin would become; would he fall to the Shadows or the Dark Waters.
Tymin snorted at the thought of marrying an icky girl, he saw the female students, most were weak and worried about heir hair and makeup rather than their stances or techniques with a weapon. The thought of taking a confident did not appeal to him either, no man would be his equal, he knew he could best the greatest warriors in time, the only one that would be match would be a king.
“Are you going to tell me your vision?”
Tymin was fidgeting with the cup, rimming its edge with his thumb, looking down at the ground. “It was nothing Master Galawen. I was on top of a tower of some palace covered in purple flowers with thorns. I saw ancient warriors coming toward me, one came close; I saw into his eyes, they were light brown with white surrounding them. He said ‘We await your return’ and then I woke up. That is all just a delusion from the sun.” Tymin shrugged his shoulder and handed the cup back to Master Galawen.
‘Could he be the prophecy?’ Master Galawen wondered as he took the cup and watched the boy walk away. Tomorrow he himself would retreat to the old library, far up in the northern suites to see if Tymin was to be their savior.