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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 6:29 pm
by francesca
CHAPTER 40B






LIZ P.O.V

I’m at home on my couch crying my eyes out.

I don’t believe he lied to me!

I don’t believe he didn’t trust me!

But most of all, I don’t believe he thought I would be after his money!

I get up off of the couch and walk over to my freezer; I grab a tub of ice-cream and a big spoon.

RING RING

I hear the phone ring.

It’s been ringing for an hour now, and I know its Max.

It’s been about an hour since I’ve come home and I haven’t answered it once.

I just don’t think I’m ready to talk to him right now.

RING RING

I trusted him, and I got the biggest shock of my life when I read that article.

Was he ever going to tell me?

Was he just going to keep on lying?

If he just told me I would have taken it better, I wouldn’t have freaked.

But seeing my picture in the paper and reading what Tess said, I just can’t believe it.

RING RING

I get up and unplug the phone.

“Chika” I hear Maria call as she barges through the door and into the lounge room.

“Hey, I heard what happened I’m so sorry” she says as she grabs me in a hug.

“I can’t believe he lied to me” I say as I sob into her shoulder.

She guides me to the couch and I lay down with my head in her lap.

“So are you ever going to talk to him again?” she asks and I wish I new the answer.
“I don’t know” I say honestly.

“Chika, Michael explained it to me and it’s understandable, just give him another chance” she says and I nod my head.

“When I’m ready” I say as I dig into my ice-cream again…


TBC…


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Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 1:06 am
by francesca

CHAPTER 41





MAX P.O.V

It’s been two days since Liz found out the truth and I’ve been calling her everyday, about 100 times but she won’t answer.

I’m such an idiot I should have told her the truth from the beginning.

I love her and now I’ve lost her.

I drove by the Crashdown today and I saw her working.

She looked so beautiful in her uniform, I just wanted to go in and lift her off of her feet.

But I can’t.

She looked better then when I last saw her, at least she was smiling.

But I could see that she was still sad, and I know it is my fault.

DING DONG

I hear the door bell ring and can’t be bothered getting up to open it.

“It’s open” I shout from the couch.

“Hey bro” I hear Isabel say and i break down.

“I screwed up big time Izzy” I sob.

“Hey it’s going to be ok” she says as she rubs my back.

“Listen, just give her time I know things will get better” she says and I look up at her.

“Liz loves you Max, I see it in the way you guys look at each other” she adds and I smile as I think of Liz.

“I love her Izzy, and I don’t know if she still loves me back, it hurts” I say.

“I know but it will fix it self up” she says and I look up to her and thank her for trying.

“Have you tried calling her?”

“Yes, she disconnected the phone”

“Have you gone to see her?”

“I tried but I couldn’t do it”

“She hates me Izzy, I just want her to be happy and if that’s without me then, I guess that’s how the cookie crumbles.

“Listen, she works at that restaurant ‘The Crashdown’ right?” she asks and I nod my head.

“I’ll go see her Max, I’ll talk to her” she says and I thank her.

“Thanks but, you don’t have to” I say.

“Max, I’ve never once seen you happy before you were with Liz, I’m not letting her get away” she says as she stands and leaves.

I start to think about what Izzy said.

‘Maybe I should go and see her’ …

TBC…





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Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 12:57 am
by francesca

CHAPTER 42






LIZ P.O.V

It’s 9.30 at night and I’m working the late shift at the Crashdown.

I hear the bells jingle, signalling that there is another costumer.

Since I’ve been back home, which has been close to 5 days I have been opening the Crashdown in the morning and closing it late at night.

I’m either up stairs moping around eating ice-cream or crying my eyes out, and if I’m not there then I’m here, working and waiting tables.

My parent’s still aren’t back from the family gathering and I must admit I am grateful.

Mum called me yesterday from the airport, apparently they are all going on a trip around the world and wont’ be back for close to a month.

Mum called yesterday to see if I wanted to meet them in Italy but I refused saying that I didn’t feel good and just wanted to stay home.

I could hear my cousins in the background asking how my sex life is and wanted to snap their heads off.

But I guess working all this time takes my mind off of everything.

“Hi can I take your order?” I ask as I look down at my order book.

“Liz” I hear a voice say.

I look up to see Isabel smiling up at me.

“Hi” she says and I smile back.

“Hi” I say back.

“What can I get you?”

“Liz I actually came here to talk to you” she says as she gestures to the seat across from her.

I take a seat and wait for her to begin.

“So how have you been?” she asks and I smile slightly.

“I’ve been ok” I say, but to tell you the truth I’ve been miserable.

I’m missing Max like crazy and I just want him to come and take me in his arms.
“That’s good” she says and I cant help but ask.

“How’s Max?”

“His miserable” she says and looks down at her hands.

“Liz, it was a mistake, he wanted to tell you but he was afraid that you would think he was like our father, that he was a money hungry bastard” she says and i look into her eyes.

“I could never think of Max that way” I say.

“That’s what I told him” she says.

“Listen his been trying toi call you, but your line is disconnected, maybe what you should do is call him, see what he has to say, I’m not saying it wont be hard cause it will, but give it a try” she says as she stands to leave.

“I’ll see you around” I say and she nods.

She bends down and hugs me before leaving…

After my shift I sit in front of the phone thinking about what she said, maybe I will just call him.

TBC…


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Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 1:05 am
by francesca
CHAPTER 43






MAX P.O.V

It’s pretty late and I’m at a club that the guys insisted I go to.

I’m not drunk yet but I’m considering it…

I wonder how she is?

I wonder if she’s ok?

I wonder if she’s moved on?

And the last thing I wonder is if I’m too late.

I think I’m going to go to her house tomorrow and tell her how I feel, tell her why I did it, why I lied.

I just want all of this to be over, I want Liz back.

“You ok there Maxwell?” I hear Ted ask and I nod.

“I’m fine” I sigh back.

“Well hello stranger” I hear a irritating voice say and pray he would go away.

“What do you want Tess?”

“I want you Max, why do you think I sent the photographer after you guys?” she asks and I’m shocked.

If she were a guy, I would …

“I did it so that she would leave, your father agreed that it was a great idea” she says and I feel my blood boil.

“You better get out of my way” I say as I get up and walk past her.

I just want to go home.

I just want to be with Liz …. I want to know that everything is ok, and that she’s mine again.


TBC






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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 1:32 am
by francesca
CHAPTER 44






LIZ P.O.V

I pick up the phone and dial his number.

I hear it ring a few times before he answers.

RING RING

“Hello” I hear the voice say and I know it’s not Max’s.

“Hello, whose this?” I ask.

“My names Philip I’m Maxwell’s father” he says and I feel like screaming at him for all the pain he has caused Max.

“Is Max there?” I ask.

“No Max has gone out” he says and I sigh.

“Do you know when he’ll be back?”

“No, but do you mind if I ask whose calling?” he says and I hear the slyness in his voice … I don’t like it.

“Liz” I say.

“Ohh so you’re Max’s Ex girlfriend?” he asks and I hear the smile in his voice.

“Something like that” I say back.

“Well, then I suppose it’s ok to tell you to stop calling, I mean Max doesn’t want you anymore in fact I think his with Tess right now” he says and I feel a tear roll down my cheek.

“That’s right, and you know why his with her?”

“Why” I say with a sob.

“Because they belong together, you’re not in his class” he says and I hang up.

I don’t know how much more I can take of this.

I still love Max and I just wish things could go back to normal.

I don’t care if his a millionaire, that’s not the part that I hated.

The part I hated was that he didn’t trust me, that he lied to me.

But we can work past it I know we can …

But all I keep thinking now is.

‘What if his father is right, what if I’m not his class?’

‘What if I’ve lost him already?’ ….

TBC…



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Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 1:33 am
by francesca
CHAPTER 45





MAX P.O.V

When I got home yesterday from the bar, I saw my father in my house hanging up my phone.

I asked him who it was and he said wrong number.

I have a feeling he was lying and I wanted to slap the smile off of his face.

When I asked what he was doing here, he just replied.

“I’m just checking how you are”

But I know he was lying.

I make my way out of bed and into the shower.

I barely got any sleep last night.

My pillow still smells like Liz and I could only think of her and how she is.

I still love her and according to Isabel she still loves me to.

But I need to know that for myself that’s why I have planned to go over to her house today and surprise her.

I have planned it all out and I can only wish for the best.

I love Liz with all my heat and I wish that things will get better.

I get out of the shower ten minuets later and wrap a towel around my waist as I make my way into my bedroom.

I decide to wear simple blue jeans and I black button up shirt.

I grab a jacket from my closet and put it on, it’s pretty chilly outside.

I run down the stairs and into the kitchen.

I grab a cup of coffee and drink it quickly before rushing out of the door.

This is the moment I have been waiting for all week.

And I can only pray it goes as planned….

TBC…


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Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 8:09 pm
by francesca
CHAPTER 46






LIZ P.O.V

I’m lying down on my couch watching television.

I just keep thinking about last night.

I keep thinking about hat Max’s father said and I just want to crawl into a whole and die.

DING DONG

I hear the door bell and get up to answer it.

“Delivery for Ms Parker” I see a delivery guy say.

“I’m Ms Parker” I say wondering what’s going on.

“Sign her Miss” he says and I do.

I see 12 other men with black suits walk in and place 12 bundles of white roses all over the place.

I feel tears stinging my eyes.

Then I turn to see the 12 guys start singing.

Oh My God … I listen as they sing.

There used to be a greying tower alone on the sea.
You became the light on the dark side of me.
Love remained a drug that's the high and not the pill.

But did you know,
That when it snows,
My eyes become large and,
The light that you shine can be seen.

Baby,
I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
Ooh,
The more I get of you
Stranger it feels, yeah.
And now that your rose is in bloom,
A light hits the gloom on the grey.

There is so much a man can tell you,
So much he can say.

You remain,
My power, my pleasure, my pain.
Baby, to me you're like a growing addiction that I can't deny
won’t you tell me is that healthy, baby?

But did you know,
That when it snows,
My eyes become large and the light that you shine can be seen.

Baby,
I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
Ooh, the more I get of you
stranger it feels, yeah.

Now that your rose is in bloom.
A light hits the gloom on the grey,

I've been kissed by a rose on the grey,
I've been kissed by a rose
...And if I should fall, at all
I've been kissed by a rose

There is so much a man can tell you,
So much he can say.

You remain
My power, my pleasure, my pain.

To me you're like a growing addiction that I can't deny
Won't you tell me is that healthy, baby.

But did you know,
That when it snows,
My eyes become large and,
the light that you shine can be seen.

Baby,
I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
Ooh, the more I get of you
Stranger it feels, yeah

Now that your rose is in bloom,
A light hits the gloom on the grey.

Yes I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the grey.
Ooh, the more I get of you
stranger it feels, yeah.

Now that your rose is in bloom.
A light hits the gloom on the grey,

As the song finishes I feel all the tears running down my face.

The singers turn to leave just as I see Max step out from behind them.

“I hope I did well, I heard you say it was your all time favourite song” he says and I nod.

“It is” I say wiping the tears.

“I thought you would be with Tess” I say looking up at me as he stands in front of me.

“Why would you think that?” he asks.

“I called you yesterday and your father answered the phone, he told me to stop calling because you had moved on with Tess and that was the way it’s suppose to be, he said that I’m not in you class and that you should be dating someone with money” I manage to get out with a sob.

I didn’t know he says as he closes the door.

He looks pretty pissed and I wouldn’t like to be his father.

“Liz, I’m not back with Tess and I wasn’t with her last night I was with the guys, they took me to the bar so I could take my mind of off you, but it didn’t work” he says and I look up at him.

“I saw Tess there and I left straight away” he adds and I sigh in relief.

“Liz, I came here because I need to explain to you why I didn’t tell you that I was rich” he says and I nod.

Not really knowing what to say.

“I didn’t tell you that I was a millionaire because when I was with you I didn’t feel like I was, I felt like I was normal, like I belonged” he starts.

And I feel myself start to tear up again.

“I didn’t want you to think that I was some rich bastard like my dad, I wanted you to see the real me, and not to jump to a conclusion because of my bank book” he says.

I nod wanting him to continue.

“I never once thought that you were after my money, I knew you were different Liz but I was scared that you would hate me” he says and I see a single tear slip from his eye.

“I never wanted to hurt you, because I loved you and I still do” I sigh in relief.

When I hear him say that he still loves me I feel myself live again because I know that I still have a chance and I didn’t loose him.

“Liz the day you found out was the day I was going to tell you, I never wanted this to happen, I never wanted to loose you” I see another tear followed by another.

“But if you don’t want me back then …” that’s all I need to hear before I jump into his arms and kiss him.

“Max I love you too, I’m so sorry I over reacted, but you don’t ever have to lie to me again, I’m here and I’m not going anywhere” I say and I see him smile as he kisses me again.

“So we’re all good, no more lonely nights?” he asks and I smile as I nod.

“No more lonely nights”

“So I guess all we have to do now is tell your father” I say as I pull away slightly.

“Yeah I guess” he says as he lifts me up and I wrap my legs around his waist as he carries me to my bedroom, where we spend all night making love and making up for lost time…


THE END


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