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CHAPTER 41










MAX P.O.V

I hear the door bell ring and run to answer it …

DING DONG

I hear Liz’s foot steps behind me as she tries to keep up.

I told her not to run so she doesn’t anymore … she just walks very fast.

… Too fast if you ask me.

“Ohh Max honey” my mum says as she throws her arms around my neck.

“Max” my father says politely as he shakes my hand.

Everything has been going smoothly since dad told me the truth….

… How he felt.

…Why he feel it.

Liz is hugging my mum when we hear the door bell ring again.

“I’ll get it” she says as she runs off and I shout out.

“HEY WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT RUNNING?”

“SORRY” she screams back and I shake my head while sighing.

“Max” Liz’s mum says as she walks up to say hello.

“Hey, hows everything going?” I ask wondering.

It’s been a while since they got back.

… I wonder if everything is ok...

“Everything is just perfect” Liz’s father Jeff says as he looks at Liz proudly.

I look at Liz to see her smiling at me and I smile back.

I swear these last few weeks she has been ticking me off with her hormones … but when it all comes down to it … I love her and I would do anything for her...

… She’s my angel.


… … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … …


We sit down to eat and I must say that everything is going just fine.

Liz is sitting opposite me and has her feet up on my chair resting.

While my parents sit next to me and Liz’s next to her.

“I’ll go get desert” Liz says as she gets up and we all nod.

“Ow” Liz moans as she leans against the table.

Suddenly we are all by her side and she looks up at me.

“I’m fine…” she starts to say but I don’t take that for an answer.

“Liz…”

“Max, I said I’m fine … just a little tired”

“I don’t believe you” her father says and she smiles at him sweetly.

“I’m ok… “She states as she continues to stand and make her way to the kitchen.

“I’ll be back in a sec with your desert” she says and everyone nods as they sit down.

I feel a hand on my shoulder and look back to see my father standing behind me with a reassuring glance.

“Ok” I say as I sit down and I look over to see Liz disappear into the kitchen.

“It’s going to be fine” my father says and I nod.

“I just worry” I say and he nods.

“We all do” he adds and I smile up at him.

…SMASH…

The sound of glass smashing breaks my thoughts and we all run into the kitchen…

TBC…








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CHAPTER 42













LIZ P.O.V

I rush into the kitchen and lean against the counter.

That wasn’t normal….

That was different…

Something is wrong…

Why am I feeling this way…???

All these thoughts rush threw my head and I feel a sudden I feel nauseous and I move to the end of the kitchen and try to run for the bathroom.

I feel a sharp pain in the pit of my belly and I freeze.

“Ouch…oh god” I say and I feel the sweat on my forehead.

I want Max …

The pain is too much that I can’t handle it …

I try to cry out but everything goes black…


*********************************************************************



MAX P.O.V

I run into the kitchen and what I see scares the shit out of me…

LIZ…

She’s lying on the floor unconscious with her hand on her stomach … in pain.

“Liz” I hear her mum say as she kneels next to her…

… But she doesn’t wake up.

“Elizabeth” …

I stand … my heart sore as I watch our parents try and wake her.

What is there is something wrong …???

What about the babies…???

“Max…” My father says and I look at him.

“It’s going to be ok… Jeff called 911 their on their way” he says and I just look back down at Liz.

She isn’t moving and I start to remember …

… How I feel … what happened …Everything…



A WHILE AGO

“Max I haven’t told anyone this … the only person that knows is my mother and my cousin Tara...” she says as she looks down at her hands that are resting in her lap.

“I was in a car accident when I was 16 years old” she says and I look at her shocked.

“What happened?” I ask wanting to know more.

“My cousin Tara was driving and she crashed… she didn’t get injured but I did” she says and I nod.

“That’s why I hate her so much … because she keeps shoving it in my face” she adds and I nod in understanding.

“Max I can’t have children” she blurts out and I freeze.

“What?” I say…

How can that be …???

She’s pregnant with my child…???

“The doctor that took care of me … he said that it would be impossible to have children, that’s why I didn’t think that it was possible… why I really want to have this baby” she says and I see the tears in her eyes.

“I was really, really hurt and … and every thing I had wanted my whole life I couldn’t have” she add and I hold her closer to me.

“This baby is a miracle and this may be the only one I have” she says and I feel the tears run down my cheeks.
….


What if she can’t have children …???

What will happen to my babies…???

What will happen to Liz…???

TBC…



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CHAPTER 43













MAX P.O.V

We are at the hospital …

Nothing has changed since we left the house.

Liz is still unconscious and when they picked her up to put her on the stretcher they found a small cut on the back of her head.

They said that it must have happened when she fainted …

I just want her and the babies to be ok…

I can’t wait to be a father and … I’ve been looking forward to it for around 7 months now.

I haven’t seen Liz in nearly half an hour.

I feel scared and afraid and I need her here with me, I need to know that she’s ok.

Our parents are here with me as well as Michael and Alex.

The Parkers followed the ambulance to the hospital … and I know that this must be just as hard for them as it is for us.

Liz is their only daughter.

I look over to see Nancy with tears in her eyes as she waits anxiously to know if Liz is ok.

I look to Jeff then and see him with his arms open supporting his wife.

I feel a hand on my shoulder and look over to see Alex looking straight back at me with sad eyes.

He left a very pregnant Isabel at home to come and be here to support me … and I really respect that.

That’s right Isabel is nearly full term and is one angry woman.

I must admit …. Alex has lots of patients.

I smile at him slightly but it doesn’t reach my eyes.

I look over to Michael…

“She’ll be fine” Michael says and I nod.

“I hope so” I say as I look down at my hands.

Just then the doctor comes out of Liz’s room and we all stand and wait…

Please let her be ok…

TBC…





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CHAPTER 44












MAX P.O.V

“Mr Evans” the doctor says and I nod my head…

Oh God, please let her be ok…

…I don’t know what I would do if I lost Liz …or my babies.

They mean the world to me…and I love them so much already.

“How is she?” I ask in an anxious tone.

“Well, she’s doing fine” he says.

The look on his face says different.

“What is it?” ….

“What’s wrong?” …

I hear everyone ask in panic.

I guess I wasn’t the only one, who saw the look on the doctor’s face.

“Well, it seems as though Liz is going into labour” …the doctor starts to say and my heart skips a beat.

“What?”…

“How?”…

“It’s too early” I say, saying what everyone was thinking.

“Well, apparently it’s not impossible” he says as he looks at me with sad eyes.

“Can I see her?” I ask, wanting to make sure that she is ok.

“Yes, of corse” he says as he sends me a slight smile ….though it doesn’t reach his eyes.

I look back at everyone and give them a reassuring smile before making my way to Liz’s room.

I look in and what I see breaks my heart…

TBC…









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CHAPTER 45















MAX P.O.V

“Liz” I say as I walk into the room.

“Max” she says with tears in her eyes.

“Baby…” I say as I walk up to her and grab her hand.

“It’s gonna be ok”

“No, it’s not”

“What do you mean….sweetie everything is going to be fine” I say as I duck down and kiss her cold cheek.

“Max, I’m so sorry that I hurt our baby” she says as the tears start to roll down her cheeks.

Now it all makes sense…

Liz thinks that it is her fault…

How could she feel that way…???

Why would she feel that way…???

“Liz, baby this isn’t you fault…things like this happen” I say as I try to calm her down.

“No, I’m the one to blame…what if the baby is not ok? What if it is hurt because of me?...why do you still love me?” she asks through her sobs and it breaks my heart.

“Sweetie, do you even have to ask why I love you?” I say as I look down at her.

I feel the tears forming in me eyes too.

“I love you because you’re the best thing that ever happened to me….and you are going to be a great mother…and you know what?” I ask as I smile down at her and she looks up at me with a slight smile.

“What?”

“I’m going to be there with you every step of the way” I add and the biggest smile crosses her face.

“You won’t leave my side?”

“No, I won’t leave” I say as I smile.

Just then Liz’s hand falls to her stomach and she lets out the loudest scream….

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”…


TBC…


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CHAPTER 46














LIZ P.O.V

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” I yell as I feel the worse pain in my abdomen.

I look to Max to see concern written all over it…

“Oh God” I say as I let out another piercing scream.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”…

“Baby what wrong?” Max asks as he stands by my side and I see him tremble.

Oh god…I have never loved him more…

He is the best thing that has ever happen to me and I can’t wait to be his wife…

“Well, thankyou baby” he says and I look into his eyes to see him lovingly smiling down at me…

I said it out loud…

Hmmm…old habits die hard.

“The babies their coming” say and I see Max’s face fall.

“You mean now?”…

“Yes” …

“Right now?”…

“Yes baby right now, do you think you could go and get the doctor?” I ask as I look at him.

“Doctor…right” he says as he runs out of the room.

I smile…even though I feel like killing him right now…

…well I feel like killing anything that I see…

…I guess that’s just hormones…Hmmm.

Max comes running back into the room with the doctor and he comes and stands by my side again.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh” I scream …

…so this is how it feels…

Maybe we should wait a little longer till baby number 3.

…hopefully by then Max can be having the babies…

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”…

Ok, call me stupids but that wasn’t me….

I turn to my right to see Max’s face in pain.

“Baby, what’s wrong….AHHHHHHHHHHHH” I ask and Max, unable to speak points down to our joined hands.

“Too tight” he says in a squeaky voice and I loosen my grip.

“I’m soo sorry baby” I say as the tears rush to my eyes…

“Oh no it’s ok” he says as he tries smiles.

I feel another contraction coming on and I hear Max say “PUSH”…

“DON’T YOU TELL ME WHAT TO DO” …I scream and I see Max back away.

“Push” the doctor says.

“OK DOCTOR” I say as I push ….

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”…


TBC…









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CHAPTER 47













LIZ P.O.V

I feel another contraction coming on and I hear Max say “PUSH”…

“DON’T YOU TELL ME WHAT TO DO” …I scream and I see Max back away.

“Push” the doctor says.

“OK DOCTOR” I say as I push ….

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”…


LATER …

“You did it baby” Max says as he comes and stands by me, with our son Alvie in hand.

I have tears in my eyes as I look down at my baby girl, and Alvie’s little sister…Ally.

“Their so beautiful” I cry out and Max sits down next to me.

Max just smiles as he looks down into Alvie’s eyes….lovingly.

“I’m a dad” he says with tears in his eyes.

“Yes you are” I say as I smile at him.

“So, Miss soon to be Evans…when do we make baby number 3” Max jokes but I see the seriousness in his eyes.

“Hhhhmmm…I think we need more practice Mr Evans” I say as I smile at him.

“I think you’re wrong, but it’s a good idea” …


THE END







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