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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 19 7/9

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Ah! :lol: Even with alien problems, the girls still act like girls! :lol:

They can't stop and make go-between with the Roswell's boys who still are available... dito Kyle!!
But it will need some works, because after what Tess did to him, I wouln't be so sure that he will be happy about Maria and Liz's choice... :roll:

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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 19 7/9

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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. I like how Ava was trying to get Liz to stop worrying about Max, Jeff, Serena, Isabel and Michael. Wow it looks like Madame Vivian was wrong about Michael and Maria. It looks like Michael and Maria are very happy together. I think it was good that Liz, Maria and Ava talked about anything to get their minds off worrying for Max and the others.


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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 19 7/9

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The girls will find the right person for Ava.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 19 7/9

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Just started reading and I like where you are going with this. I too believe what Tess told them was BS and stupid for them believing it without question or investigating it on their own. Same with dupes and nasedo. I also believe the Destiny book was a bunch of b.s. and catered to Tess didn't it seem odd everything was exactly as she said for her own needs when she couldn't remember her past in better than them? plus if max and tess were suppose to be together what would the point folks be? I always felt tess and nasedo were working with kivar. I also found it interesting that no one knew tess on sight and everything and she always was vocal about being queen and that there tells us something. I don't think her and max married and if did it wasn't consummated based on wordings of certain people. I also don't think she had max child, but implanted memories in him that he did because he was mentally vulnerable and guilt would eat at him that he wouldn't question too much. The reason I don't think the kid if there was one is because no seal, timeline and powers and such did not add up if he was pure human. I don't think any child of max would be pure human. There are a lot of inconsistencies that don't add up and also Alex dying and her mind warping is manipulative and did it because he figured her out.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 20 7/10

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Eve Yes they still are teenage girls! Kyle won't see Ava as Tess.

L-J-L 76 Thanks!

Carolyn Oh yeah they will.

Midnightdreamer That is true. That is why I am trying to set things right with this fic!



Part 20


Jeff looked over at the teens as they headed up to the pod chamber. He knew that they would all have to be careful. Kyle's life was in danger.


“Dad is something wrong?” asked Serena
“Its just we don't know what to expect from Tess. She is dangerous. We don't even know if she is alone.” said Jeff
“Mr. Parker I don't think that there is anyone with Tess. I mean she isn't the brightest bitch on the planet you know.” said Michael
“Well what do we have here?” asked Tess from the entrance to the pod chamber.
“Let Kyle go Tess.” said Max
“I'll let him go if you agree to return to Antar with me.” said Tess
“Like hell that will happen bitch.” said Isabel
“I wasn't talking to you Princess. Now Max you have a choice. Come with me and Kyle lives. Or he will die a slow and painful death.” said Tess
“I never did like you. You’re even worse than you were back on Antar Avadanta.” said Jeff
“Who the hell are you? I know for a fact that you’re not a protector.”
“Well I see that you don't remember everything. But that doesn’t matter. I remember you. You had been a sweet kid back on Antar, well that is until Kivar talked you into being a spy for him and he said he would spare your life. But he did kill you just like everyone else. You see there is a saying here on Earth. Those who don’t learn from the past are destined to repeat it. Tess once your usefulness has warn out you are going to die.” said Jeff
“You have spent too much time with humans. You have become like them. Weak.” said Tess


Tess sent a blast at Max and just as it was about to hit him Serena pushed him out of the way. Then fell to the ground in pain when it hit her.


“Serena!” yelled Jeff
“I’ll be fine dad. Just stop Tess and save Kyle.” said Serena wincing.


Isabel knelt down next to Serena while Michael and Jeff when after Tess. Max when into the cave and freed Kyle.


“What the hell is going on Evans?” asked Kyle
“Long story made short. Mr. Parker is an alien. Liz is half alien and has a half sister. Tess is nuts.” said Max
“I kinda knew that last part. So how are we going to get out of here?” asked Kyle
“I don’t know. Tess is stronger than I thought. She is very dangerous. Kyle did she say anything to you about her plans?”
“Other than going on about how you’re her destiny and that she was your wife? No. Oh she did call Liz stupid.”


Max was about to head out of the cave when he heard a crashing sound and saw a lot of smoke. As the smoke cleared Michael came into the cave.


“Tess got away. But I Mr. Parker and I both got good shots at her. She has to be hurt bad..” said Michael
“How is Serena?” asked Max
“She’s going to be fine. She healed herself most of the way already. Let’s get going. Mr. Parker needs to answer some questions when we get back.” said Michael
“What are you guys talking about?” asked Kyle
“Later.”


Everyone headed back to the cars and to the Crashdown. Valenti wrapped his arms around Kyle and hugged him.

“I thought that I was going to lose you son.”
“Dad can’t breath.” said Kyle
“Sorry.”


Serena limped in and sat in the booth that Liz, Ava and Maria were in.


“Are you ok?” asked Liz
“Will be. Just took a hard blast. I’m not easy to kill.” said Serena
“Max, Maria I think you should call your parents.” said Jeff.
“Mr. Parker you do know that if we tell my mother about this she is going to flip out right?” asked Maria
“Call her. We are going to need all the help that we can get.” said Jeff
“Fine but I hope that this is the right choice.” mumbled Maria as she headed to the back.


Isabel followed Maria and dialed her parent’s phone number on her cell phone.

“Hi mom. Max and I need you to meet us at the Crashdown. There is something that we need to tell you. Mom please? And bring dad too.”

Isabel hung up the phone and saw that Maria had already hung up.


“So is she coming?” asked Isabel
“Yeah. You know we might have to issue membership cards to the I know an alien club now.” said Maria
“I know what you mean. I never thought that it would grow this big. First it was just Liz, then you and Alex. Then Valenti and Kyle. Now the Parkers know. By the way Liz’s dad is going to have to answer some questions we have.”
“What do you mean?”
“He knew us on Antar.”
“Let’s go out and wait for the rest of the parents to show up. I don’t know about you but I don’t know if my mom is going to handle this very well.”
“We can only hope.”


Maria and Isabel when back out into the diner to join the others.




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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 20 7/10

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Tess tried blackmail on Max to save Kyle.......she never gives up.
Loved Max's long story short........right to the point.
Seems like they do need to print up more membership cards for "I know an Alien club"........
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 20 7/10

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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. I agree Liz is a crazy bitch. I'm glad that Serena was not hurt. I can't believe Tess won't die like a dog she is. So Jeff knew Max, Isabel, Michael and Tess on Antar. Now that is interesting. I love Max's short version of a story. Oh boy now the parents are going to be involved. I wonder what the parents will do when they find out the truth. What will happen when the parents get to the Crash Down? Who will start talking? Will Jeff, Max, Liz, Isabel, Michael, Serena show the parents their powers? What will the parents do when they see their powers? Will the parents be scared? Will the parents believe them? What will the parents say when they find out about Tess? Will the parents help Max and the others? How will the parents help? Will a war start? Who will win the war? Who is going to get hurt? Will Max, Liz, Michael, Maria Alex, Isabel, Kyle, Serena, Ava and parents win the war? Will Max, Liz, Michael, Maria, Alex, Isabel, Kyle and Serena, Ava and parents live a long and happy life in peace? Will Max and Liz spend time together? Will Max and Liz kiss? Will Max and Liz sleep together? Will Liz become pregnant? Will all the couple get married and have kids?
So sorry for all the questions I was just wondering. Please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz, friends and family.

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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 20 7/10

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I wonder if, in your story , all the Roswell inhabitants are aliens? Yes or no?

Waiting for more and thanks! EVE :mrgreen:
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 21 7/11

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Carolyn Tess is never going to learn. Yes Max's long story short was great! Yes the "I know an alien club" is going to be growing.

L-J-L 76 Well Serena wasn't badly hurt and will heal fast. Just wait and see what happens when the parents show up.

Eve Not everyone is an alien! There could be a few more lurking around though.






Part 21 Half an hour later.


Max paced while everyone stared at him. He knew that he had to tell them soon.


“Max honey why did you want us here?” asked Diane Evans
“Well there is some thing that you all should know. Mom, dad, Ms. DuLuca. You see there is something that you should know about Michael, Isabel and Me. We are aliens. Well hybrids really.” Said Max
“You have to be kidding me.” said Amy DuLuca
“Mom he’s telling you the truth.” said Maria
“How long have you known this Maria?” asked Amy
“Let’s see not as long as Liz. But longer than Valenti, Kyle and Alex.” said Maria
“MARIA!” yelled Amy
“Fine a little over a year. Since Liz was shot.” said Maria
“Liz you were shot?” asked Diane
“Uh yeah. Max saved my life. He risked everything to save my life.” said Liz
“How did you get here?” asked Philip Evans
“Well you know that so called crash that happened in 1947? Well it was real and that is how we got here.” said Michael
“How is that possible? That was over fifty years ago and your only teenagers?” asked Amy
“We were in these pods. The night mom and dad found us we kind of hatched.” said Isabel
“Ok that explains part of it. But who is this punk twin of Tess’s?” asked Philip
“I’m Ava and well you see there were two sets of pods. The ones here in Roswell and a set in New York City. I am from the New York set. I’m here cause Tess is evil and almost killed Alex and kidnapped Kyle.” said Ava
“Were you ever going to tell us this?” asked Philip
“We were scared we wanted to tell you before now but we didn’t know if it was safe to.” said Max
“Max we love you no matter what.” said Diane
“It wasn’t that mom. You see there is this secret part of the FBI called the Special Unit. They hunt down aliens on Earth and then torture and kill them. Last May they got Max. We were able to get him out before they killed him.” said Isabel
“Max you should have told us the truth a long time ago.” said Diane
“I understand that you needed to know the truth. But we need to come up with a way to keep everyone in this room safe.” said Serena
“Who the hell are you?” asked Amy
“Amy don’t talk to her that way.” said Jeff
“Jeff calm down. Amy, this is Serena she is Liz’s half sister. Jeff is her father.” said Nancy speaking for the first time.
“Why is it now we are just hearing about her?” asked Philip
“Liz didn’t know about her until a short time ago. Serena is half alien. She gets that from me.” said Jeff
“What?!” yelled both Evans and Amy.
“I am from Antar. Before you ask I am not here to protect Max and the others. That wasn’t why I came here anyway. But I will do everything I can to help them now. I did work for the Royal family on Antar. I was given passage on the ship that brought them here on the promise that if they ever needed my help that I would help them anyway that I can.” said Jeff
“Is that how you knew us on Antar?” asked Isabel
“Yes. I was a guard in the palace. But I wasn’t of the line that the Royal protectors came from. They were trained to be more rootless than I could ever be. I wanted to come to Earth to start a new life. I met Serena’s mother but I knew what I felt for her wasn’t the kind of love that I had been looking for. It wasn’t until I met Nancy that I found that kind of love. I care for Serena’s mother but I couldn’t bring her into this world any more than I had. I would visit Serena and be a father to her. I made some mistakes. I should have let Liz and Serena spend time together as children but I can’t change that.” said Jeff
“Dad you did what you thought was best for Liz and me. I understand that.” said Serena
“I may not be happy about it dad, but I understand too.” said Liz
“I need a sedative.” said Amy
“Mom it will get easier.” said Maria
“What are we going to do now? I mean Tess is still out there somewhere.” said Kyle
“We plan and get ready for when she comes back. There are still things she wants. One being Max’s kid. The other being me dead.” said Liz
“That is going to happen the day hell freezes over.” said Isabel
“Thanks.” said Liz


Everyone talked for the next hour. Unknown to them they were being watched by an enemy that had once been very close to all of them.




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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 21 7/11

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Great chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back andpost more really really really really soon. I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. Finally the parents know the truth. Philip and Diane seemed calm while Amy is flipping out. So know the parents know Serena, Jeff and Ava are a little different. They took the news good though. I like how protective Isabel, Serena and Ava are for Liz. I hope Max, Liz, friends and parents can up with a plan to protect Max and Liz from Tess. Oh no Tess is watching. I hope Tess will not find out what Max, Liz, parents and friends are up to. I hope Max, Liz, friends and parents will be able to stop Tess. Oh I know have Max and Liz sleep together! :lol:

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