I wish the TV show would have had this conversation..........it would have been great.
Hope this gang can take care of Tess in fine fashion.
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There is a lot the show could have done and one being bringing in the parents in on the secret. Then they wouldn't have to sneak around, they would have adult guidance and support plus their own skills as a lawyer and everything. I like the idea of Jeff being an alien, but I like the idea of Liz being pure human even more. I also don't think Nasedo truly died because when he died as the agent there was a body and than the second time he was blasted and turned into the dust seemed far fetched. good chapter
I also didn't like the show catering to Tess as being all powerful than even max and the others as weaklings when they weren't.
I also think Serena would be a powerful alien and genius and knows how to kick butt
I also didn't like the show catering to Tess as being all powerful than even max and the others as weaklings when they weren't.
I also think Serena would be a powerful alien and genius and knows how to kick butt
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L-J-L 76 The Evans did take the news rather well. Well did you expect Amy to take the news clamly? 
Carolyn Yes the parents are finally in on the secret! The show really should have brought them in a lot sooner. I mean at the end of the series the Evans found out when the army was trying to break down their door!
Midnightdreamer I agree that the parents should have been brought in. I have always wondered who this Serena that Future Max mentioned was.
Part 22
Tess stood in the shadows of the UFO center. She knew that she had to do something. Kivar wasn’t going to be happy if she didn’t get her part of the deal done. If she didn’t she was good as dead. There was nothing that she could do right now she knew it and if she knew Max and the others they wouldn’t leave the humans alone until they found her.
“Yo dumb ass. You know Kivar wants you dead if you don’t get Maxi boy to screw you.” came a voice from behind her.
Tess turned around to find Isabel’s dupe Lonnie standing there with Michael’s dupe Rath not far behind.
“You think that I don’t know that? Lonnie the thing is Max and them in there hate my guts and it doesn’t help that human bitch has Max wrapped around her finger.”
“You know red in there looks like someone I met once.” said Rath
“Well from what I hear her name is Serena. She is half-human and half-antarian. Other than that I know nothing.” said Tess
“You said Serena? You in deep shit now. Serena is very powerful from what I hear, she is also known as the keeper of the granalith. She is the key needed to work it.” said Lonnie
“Great and from what I can tell she hasn’t let Liz alone unless she is with one of the others.” said Tess
“You just do your job dumb ass. We will come up with a way to deal with red.” said Rath
Tess watched as Lonnie and Rath walked off. She knew that they were up to no good but she didn’t care. If they could help her get Liz Parker out of Max’s life forever then she didn’t care what they did. She knew that there was nothing she could do for now so she walked way while she worked on a plan to get Max Evans to have sex with her.
*****
Serena stood by the windows of the Crashdown she knew that someone was watching them. She had a good idea of who it was too. But she wouldn’t be doing anything today. Not with everyone here right now. She could make out two shadows behind the spy and had an idea they were too. But lucky for them they, they out numbered them and they were also much strong then they were as long as they worked together.
“You ok Serena?” asked Liz coming up to her.
“We are being watched.”
“I bet it’s that tramp Tess.”
“She’s not alone.”
“Who could be with her? Is it Kivar?”
“It’s not Kivar. I believe that it’s Lonnie and Rath.”
“Why are they here?”
“They are on Kivar’s side. They want to go back to Antar but what they don’t know is Kivar will still kill them no matter what. They may be rejects but they are still part of the Royal Four.”
“Just our luck.”
“Liz I want you to be careful. They are all very dangerous. Kivar is the most dangerous of all of them. He will stop at nothing to get what he wants, and he wants Max dead.”
“There has to be away to stop him.”
“We will find it. I want to stop him as much as you do Liz.”
“Serena I’m scared.”
“I know you are. So am I. But the fact is we have to take care of a few other things too.”
“What do you mean?”
“Well there was something else on the ship with the pods. It could be very dangerous to Earth if it’s not destroyed.”
“How do we stop it?”
“I’m going to take care of it.”
“What do you mean take care of it?”
“Liz don’t worry about it. I know what I have to do.”
“Serena if you want us to be close then you have to be honest with me.”
“Liz there is enough for you to worry about. This is something that I can take care of.”
“I want to trust you but I find it hard.”
“Because I haven’t always told you the truth.”
“Yeah.”
“Liz, I wanted to tell you for a long time that I was your sister. But the fact is dad didn’t want you to know. I had to do what I could to keep you safe anyway I could. But the thing is I couldn’t stop the shooting if I had you would never have followed your heart to Max. You know that long before he healed you that you had feelings for him. But you wouldn’t act on them because you were scared he didn’t feel the same.”
“You will be careful right?”
“I always am.”
Liz watched as Serena when up to their father and said something before leaving out the back. It wasn’t long before everyone else started to leave. Liz had to smile as Amy grabbed Michael and dragged him out most likely to question him some more.
“Liz I got to go and talk with my parents. You will be ok here with your dad and Ava right?” said Max
“Yeah. Besides Serena will be back after she takes care of whatever she is doing.”
“I know. Don’t worry none of us will let Tess get her hands on you.”
“I know. Night Max. See you tomorrow.”
Max and Liz kissed then Max left with his family. Kyle and his dad left and then Liz was alone with her parents and Ava.
“So Cornball how about I crash in your room? You know so my dupe don’t try nothing tonight.” said Ava
“Fine with me. Come on I’ll show you around upstairs.”
Liz and Ava when upstairs and Nancy turned to Jeff.
“Liz is going to be ok isn’t she?”
“Nancy, trust me when I say this. When the time comes Liz won’t go without a fight. She may not have a lot of control yet. But she is very strong. Besides Serena will be back in a couple of hours. She just has to pay a visit to someone.”
“I don’t like the idea of our daughter in this much danger.”
“She has always been in danger. From the day she was born. If that Special Unit were to find out that she isn’t fully human then they would stop at nothing to get their hands on her and kill her. They would want you too. Because you are her mother.”
Nancy knew her husband had a point but it didn’t stop her from worrying about her daughter.
TBC
Carolyn Yes the parents are finally in on the secret! The show really should have brought them in a lot sooner. I mean at the end of the series the Evans found out when the army was trying to break down their door!
Midnightdreamer I agree that the parents should have been brought in. I have always wondered who this Serena that Future Max mentioned was.
Part 22
Tess stood in the shadows of the UFO center. She knew that she had to do something. Kivar wasn’t going to be happy if she didn’t get her part of the deal done. If she didn’t she was good as dead. There was nothing that she could do right now she knew it and if she knew Max and the others they wouldn’t leave the humans alone until they found her.
“Yo dumb ass. You know Kivar wants you dead if you don’t get Maxi boy to screw you.” came a voice from behind her.
Tess turned around to find Isabel’s dupe Lonnie standing there with Michael’s dupe Rath not far behind.
“You think that I don’t know that? Lonnie the thing is Max and them in there hate my guts and it doesn’t help that human bitch has Max wrapped around her finger.”
“You know red in there looks like someone I met once.” said Rath
“Well from what I hear her name is Serena. She is half-human and half-antarian. Other than that I know nothing.” said Tess
“You said Serena? You in deep shit now. Serena is very powerful from what I hear, she is also known as the keeper of the granalith. She is the key needed to work it.” said Lonnie
“Great and from what I can tell she hasn’t let Liz alone unless she is with one of the others.” said Tess
“You just do your job dumb ass. We will come up with a way to deal with red.” said Rath
Tess watched as Lonnie and Rath walked off. She knew that they were up to no good but she didn’t care. If they could help her get Liz Parker out of Max’s life forever then she didn’t care what they did. She knew that there was nothing she could do for now so she walked way while she worked on a plan to get Max Evans to have sex with her.
*****
Serena stood by the windows of the Crashdown she knew that someone was watching them. She had a good idea of who it was too. But she wouldn’t be doing anything today. Not with everyone here right now. She could make out two shadows behind the spy and had an idea they were too. But lucky for them they, they out numbered them and they were also much strong then they were as long as they worked together.
“You ok Serena?” asked Liz coming up to her.
“We are being watched.”
“I bet it’s that tramp Tess.”
“She’s not alone.”
“Who could be with her? Is it Kivar?”
“It’s not Kivar. I believe that it’s Lonnie and Rath.”
“Why are they here?”
“They are on Kivar’s side. They want to go back to Antar but what they don’t know is Kivar will still kill them no matter what. They may be rejects but they are still part of the Royal Four.”
“Just our luck.”
“Liz I want you to be careful. They are all very dangerous. Kivar is the most dangerous of all of them. He will stop at nothing to get what he wants, and he wants Max dead.”
“There has to be away to stop him.”
“We will find it. I want to stop him as much as you do Liz.”
“Serena I’m scared.”
“I know you are. So am I. But the fact is we have to take care of a few other things too.”
“What do you mean?”
“Well there was something else on the ship with the pods. It could be very dangerous to Earth if it’s not destroyed.”
“How do we stop it?”
“I’m going to take care of it.”
“What do you mean take care of it?”
“Liz don’t worry about it. I know what I have to do.”
“Serena if you want us to be close then you have to be honest with me.”
“Liz there is enough for you to worry about. This is something that I can take care of.”
“I want to trust you but I find it hard.”
“Because I haven’t always told you the truth.”
“Yeah.”
“Liz, I wanted to tell you for a long time that I was your sister. But the fact is dad didn’t want you to know. I had to do what I could to keep you safe anyway I could. But the thing is I couldn’t stop the shooting if I had you would never have followed your heart to Max. You know that long before he healed you that you had feelings for him. But you wouldn’t act on them because you were scared he didn’t feel the same.”
“You will be careful right?”
“I always am.”
Liz watched as Serena when up to their father and said something before leaving out the back. It wasn’t long before everyone else started to leave. Liz had to smile as Amy grabbed Michael and dragged him out most likely to question him some more.
“Liz I got to go and talk with my parents. You will be ok here with your dad and Ava right?” said Max
“Yeah. Besides Serena will be back after she takes care of whatever she is doing.”
“I know. Don’t worry none of us will let Tess get her hands on you.”
“I know. Night Max. See you tomorrow.”
Max and Liz kissed then Max left with his family. Kyle and his dad left and then Liz was alone with her parents and Ava.
“So Cornball how about I crash in your room? You know so my dupe don’t try nothing tonight.” said Ava
“Fine with me. Come on I’ll show you around upstairs.”
Liz and Ava when upstairs and Nancy turned to Jeff.
“Liz is going to be ok isn’t she?”
“Nancy, trust me when I say this. When the time comes Liz won’t go without a fight. She may not have a lot of control yet. But she is very strong. Besides Serena will be back in a couple of hours. She just has to pay a visit to someone.”
“I don’t like the idea of our daughter in this much danger.”
“She has always been in danger. From the day she was born. If that Special Unit were to find out that she isn’t fully human then they would stop at nothing to get their hands on her and kill her. They would want you too. Because you are her mother.”
Nancy knew her husband had a point but it didn’t stop her from worrying about her daughter.
TBC
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 22 7/12
all caught up. i missed so much. i wish serna didn't do it all by herself
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 22 7/12
Great part!
And the one listening? It is Tess of course...
EVE
And the one listening? It is Tess of course...
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- Les jouissances de l'esprit sont faites pour calmer les orages du coeur!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
- On reconnaît le bonheur au bruit qu'il fait quand il s'en va!
- L'amour vous rend aveugle et le mariage vous redonne la vue!
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Tess is on a mission........I just hope Ava, Serena and the others can protect Liz.
No wonder Nancy is worried.
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No wonder Nancy is worried.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 22 7/12
Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. I'm glad that the parents know. I like the way Amy dragged Michael out to talk to him more. I'm glad Serena realizes that Tess, Rath and Lonnie are watching them. Hopefully whatever Serena has planned will work. I can understand Nancy being worried about Liz. I would be too if I was her mom. I'm glad that Ava, Jeff and Nancy are there for Liz. So Serena is the key of the granolith. I wonder what Tess, Rath and Ava are up to. I wonder who and how will Liz be safe. Will Tess, Rath and Lonnie try and attack Liz? When will Tess, Rath and Lonnie try and hurt Liz? What will Tess, Rath and Lonnie do to Liz? Will Ava, Jeff and Serena keep Liz safe? Will Serena help Liz practice her powers? What other powers does Liz have? When will Kyle start his powers? What powers do Kyle have? Who will keep Liz safe? Will the FBI come for Liz? Will Kivar come after Liz? Will Tess try and kill Liz? how will the talk go with Max and Isabel's parents? With Amy? Will the parents be OK? Will Max and Liz spend time together? Will Max and Liz kiss? Will Max, Liz. family and friends live through the war? Will Max, Liz, family and friends have a happy ending all together? So sorry for all the questions I was just wondering Please please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz, family and friends.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 23 7/13
Natalie36 Serena doesn't have to do it all herself. But she is stubborn and won't ask for help.
Eve Of course Tess is spying! Thanks!
Carolyn Nancy has always worried about Liz.
L-J-L 76 That was such an Amy move to drag Michael off wasn't it? We will see what Serena is up to in this part.
Part 23
Serena stood outside of the room of Grant Sorenson. She knew what she had to do. But didn’t know if she could go through with it. She had to kill a man. One that she had to kill or the world would be doomed. She took a deep breath and walked up to the door and knocked.
“Can I help you?” asked Grant opening the door.
“Well it’s more like I can help you. May I come in?”
Grant took a step back and Serena walked into the room.
“Now how is a lovely young lady like you going to help me?”
Serena walked up to Grant until she was only inches from him. She reached up and pulled him down into a passionate kiss. When she had him where she wanted she placed her hand on the back of his head and he fell to the ground. He was out cold. She then when out to her car and grabbed the airtight clear box and moved Grant into the bathroom. She then turned on the water and put the plug in the tub. Once she had enough water in the tub she move Grant until he was in the tub and held him under until he stop breathing. It wasn’t long before a blue jellyfish type thing came flying out of him. She then used her power and forced it into the box and sealed it. While it tried to free itself Serena pulled Grant from the water and tried to get him breathing again. But it was hopeless. She realized then that the Gandarium queen had already killed him. She knew that she would have to get out of there. She grabbed the box and then used her powers to wipe the place clean of fingerprints after placing Grant back in the tub. Once she was a safe distance away she phoned in a tip to the police. She had driven out to the desert and looked at the box. The queen had stopped moving so she knew that it was dead. So she then placed it on the ground and sent the most powerful blast she could at it blowing the box and queen up. When the smoke cleared there was nothing left. Earth was safe from the Gandarium now. But she knew that she should have tried harder to save Grant’s life. It was too late now. She slowly drove back into town.
*****
Liz and Ava were in Liz’s room playing cards when Serena walked in three hours after Grant had died. Serena didn’t say anything when she entered the room she just sat on the floor lost in thought. Liz noticed that something was wrong right away.
“What’s wrong Serena?” asked Liz
“Nothing you can help with.” said Serena
“Yo Rena you want to talk about it?” asked Ava
“Not really.” said Serena
“You never said what it was you were going to take care of. Did something happen?” asked Liz
“I killed a man Liz. I didn’t have much of a choice. If I hadn’t then the Earth would have been doomed.” said Serena
“Who did you kill?” asked Liz
“A man named Grant Sorenson I had no choice the Gandarium queen had infected him if a person who had the right flaw in their genes had become infected the most deadly virus Earth has ever seen would be unleashed. I am talking about a virus that would make HIV look like the common cold.” said Serena
“Serena you did what you had to do.” said Liz softly
“But I murdered someone!” said Serena crying.
“True but the fact is if you didn’t the whole world would have been doomed. You had to make a choice one life or the life of billions of people. Sometimes we have to do things that we don’t like in order to help the greater good.” said Liz
“Yeah sure. Liz I still don’t know how you can look at me the same way.” said Serena
“Because I have decided that you have to do things that once in a while that you have to do something you don’t like. You may have killed Grant Serena. But you did it to prevent him from unknowingly killing the whole planet.”
“I guess your right. I think I’m just going to try and get some sleep. See you in the morning.”
Serena walked out of the room and across the hall to the guest room and laid down on the bed.
TBC
Eve Of course Tess is spying! Thanks!
Carolyn Nancy has always worried about Liz.
L-J-L 76 That was such an Amy move to drag Michael off wasn't it? We will see what Serena is up to in this part.
Part 23
Serena stood outside of the room of Grant Sorenson. She knew what she had to do. But didn’t know if she could go through with it. She had to kill a man. One that she had to kill or the world would be doomed. She took a deep breath and walked up to the door and knocked.
“Can I help you?” asked Grant opening the door.
“Well it’s more like I can help you. May I come in?”
Grant took a step back and Serena walked into the room.
“Now how is a lovely young lady like you going to help me?”
Serena walked up to Grant until she was only inches from him. She reached up and pulled him down into a passionate kiss. When she had him where she wanted she placed her hand on the back of his head and he fell to the ground. He was out cold. She then when out to her car and grabbed the airtight clear box and moved Grant into the bathroom. She then turned on the water and put the plug in the tub. Once she had enough water in the tub she move Grant until he was in the tub and held him under until he stop breathing. It wasn’t long before a blue jellyfish type thing came flying out of him. She then used her power and forced it into the box and sealed it. While it tried to free itself Serena pulled Grant from the water and tried to get him breathing again. But it was hopeless. She realized then that the Gandarium queen had already killed him. She knew that she would have to get out of there. She grabbed the box and then used her powers to wipe the place clean of fingerprints after placing Grant back in the tub. Once she was a safe distance away she phoned in a tip to the police. She had driven out to the desert and looked at the box. The queen had stopped moving so she knew that it was dead. So she then placed it on the ground and sent the most powerful blast she could at it blowing the box and queen up. When the smoke cleared there was nothing left. Earth was safe from the Gandarium now. But she knew that she should have tried harder to save Grant’s life. It was too late now. She slowly drove back into town.
*****
Liz and Ava were in Liz’s room playing cards when Serena walked in three hours after Grant had died. Serena didn’t say anything when she entered the room she just sat on the floor lost in thought. Liz noticed that something was wrong right away.
“What’s wrong Serena?” asked Liz
“Nothing you can help with.” said Serena
“Yo Rena you want to talk about it?” asked Ava
“Not really.” said Serena
“You never said what it was you were going to take care of. Did something happen?” asked Liz
“I killed a man Liz. I didn’t have much of a choice. If I hadn’t then the Earth would have been doomed.” said Serena
“Who did you kill?” asked Liz
“A man named Grant Sorenson I had no choice the Gandarium queen had infected him if a person who had the right flaw in their genes had become infected the most deadly virus Earth has ever seen would be unleashed. I am talking about a virus that would make HIV look like the common cold.” said Serena
“Serena you did what you had to do.” said Liz softly
“But I murdered someone!” said Serena crying.
“True but the fact is if you didn’t the whole world would have been doomed. You had to make a choice one life or the life of billions of people. Sometimes we have to do things that we don’t like in order to help the greater good.” said Liz
“Yeah sure. Liz I still don’t know how you can look at me the same way.” said Serena
“Because I have decided that you have to do things that once in a while that you have to do something you don’t like. You may have killed Grant Serena. But you did it to prevent him from unknowingly killing the whole planet.”
“I guess your right. I think I’m just going to try and get some sleep. See you in the morning.”
Serena walked out of the room and across the hall to the guest room and laid down on the bed.
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Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max, Liz and friends. Wow I can't believe Serena killed Grant. But I can understand that she did it to save the world. I'm glad that Liz and Ava didn't think of Serena any different. That must have been the hardest thing Serena ever had to do. I'm glad that Liz and Ava understand why Serena did what she did. I just wonder if Serena will be able to move past it and help Max, Liz and friends.
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Re: Saving the World (AU, M/L, Mature) Pt 23 7/13
So much for Grant and gandarium.....one problem taken care of.
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