From Rags to Princess (M/L, AU Adult) Pt 42 Complete 10/12

[L-J-L 76]

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. Ok first of all I really hate the maid with blue eyes. The maid and Kivar need to be put to death. I'm glad that Liz got put on birth control. I think it is a good thing that Max and Liz are going to mental bond. Hopefully that will help Liz with her visions. Will Max and Liz bond really soon? Will Max and Liz spend some alone time together? Will Max and Liz bond before Kivar and his men attacked? Will Max protect Liz from danger?


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L-J-L 76

[begonia9508]

Great part! So Tess is there... not for good I hope!

EVE

[max and liz believer]

great part!

Really looking forward to the next one

- Jo

[keepsmiling7]

I love that the Prince finally officially asked Liz to be his wife.
And it is good that Liz is ready for the mental bonding.
But I am very afraid of this blue eyed maid.........that spells trouble!
Thanks,
Carolyn

[Roswelllostcause]

L-J--L 76 Hate the blond blue eyed maid? She hasn't done anything yet!

Eve If the maid proves to be Tess then no she is not there for anything good.

Jo Thanks!

Carolyn Yes it is good that Prince Max finally asked Liz to marry him. It is good Liz is going to mentally bond with Max. You don't like this maid either?





Part 18

Liz took a deep breath and looked right into Max's amber eyes. It didn't take long for their breathing to even out and become matched. It didn't take long for the connection to form. Then the memories started to fly through each of their minds.

Liz playing with a German Sheppard.
Max and Isabel playing in the garden.
Liz holding a young Serena as she cried.
Max attending his first formal dinner.
Liz looking at Lord Trayer knowing even before her father said anything that she had to go with him.
Max talking to his mother about something.
Liz bearly holding it together as Kivar touched her.
Max walking through the market and seeing Liz for the first time.
Liz looking at him and knowing he wouldn't hurt her.
Max fighting the urge to grab her and throw her down on a bed to have his way with her.

Both could everything the other felt during each of the memories that flew through them. Max broke the connection, but could still feel a part of Liz in the back of his mind. He looked into Liz's eyes and could tell that she could still feel him as well.

"You OK Liz?" Asked Max
"Yeah."
"Ok that's good."
"Max, is something wrong?"
"I feel like I forced you into this."
"You didn't."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes. Max, I love you. I am happier than I have ever been in my life."
"Love you Liz."

Max pulled her into his arms and gave her a very passionate kiss.

*******

The blond blue eyed maid watched from her hiding place. This wasn't good. Lord Kivar was not going to be happy about this. Not only will that poor half breed be stronger now so will the prince. But she knew that Kivar would still come out on top. When he finally took down the royals she would stand at his side. He promised her that he would reward her for all her hard work. She slipped out of her hiding place and went to send her message to Kivar.

*******

Serena watched as the young blond maid leave her hiding place. There was something that she didn't like about that girl. She didn't know why but she had a bad feeling about that maid. She knocked on the study door then walked in. She had to smile when she saw her sister jump back. Anyone could see that Liz had just been sitting on Max's lap.

"Am I interrupting something?" Asked Serena
"Rena did you need something?" Asked Liz
"Actually there is something. Max how much do you know about that one maid? The short young one with blond hair and blue eyes?" Asked Serena
"Uh not much. She has only been here a couple months. I don't really know much about the hired help." Said Max
"I think she is up to something. She was spying on the two of you." Said Serena
"I will find out more about her. You maybe right. She should of had some kind of work to do. She had no business spying on Liz and me." Said Max
"I know it's not my business. But what were the two of you up to just now?" Asked Serena

Max looked at Liz who nodded her OK.

"Serena, your sister and I have started the bonding. We have just done the mental part of it." Said Max
"Good, I know that Liz will be happier and much better off this way." Said Serena
"Thanks Rena." Said Liz
"Love you big sister." Said Serena

Liz pulled her sister into a hug.

"Love you little sister."





TBC

[L-J-L 76]

Great Chapter!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please come back and post more really really really really soon? I can't wait to read what will happen next for Max and Liz. As you said yet. But she up to something. That is why I'm hating the maid. I'm so glad that Max and Liz mentally bonded. Hopefully Max will be able to keep Liz safe. I'm so very glad that Serena told Max and Liz about the maid. Hopefully Max will do something about her like find out what she is doing and then put her in prison and later killed with Kivar. Who will find out about what the maid is up to? Who will put her in prison? Will Max and Liz bond really really soon? Will Max and Liz get married? Will Max and Liz have kids? Will Max, Liz, Serena, Michael, Isabel, Jeff, Diane and Philip all fight Kivar, his men? Will Max, Liz, Serena, Michael, Isabel, Jeff, Diane and Philip Liz through Kivar's attack? Will someone kill Kivar before he attacks Max, Liz and others? Will Max, Liz, Serena, Michael, Isabel, Jeff, Diane and Philip have a long and happy life together?

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L-J-L 76

[begonia9508]

I guess the blond maid never thoughts that she could be spy on too! Payback is a bitch!

Thanks - EVE

[max and liz believer]

That was such a sweet part! And it's a good thing that Serena spotted what that blue-eyed maid was up to...

Thanks!

- Jo

[Natalie36]

hope they get to the maid before she gets to kivar

[Roswelllostcause]

L-J-L 75 It is a very good thing that Liz and Max now have a mental bond.

Eve No the maid has no clue she was being spied on!

Jo Yes it was good that Serena spotted the maid.

Natalie36 Well I don't think that will happen.







Part 19

Jeff looked around his house one last time. As much as he hated leaving the home that he had watched his girls grow up in. He knew that taking this job at the palace was what was best for him. We was looking forward to seeing his girls again. It had only been a little over a month since Serena left. But more than a year since he had seen Liz. Just then there was a knock on the door. He opened it and found the same young captain who had visited him a couple days earlier. But there was also a lieutenant with him.

"Mr. Parker this is Lieutenant Kyle Valenti. He was on leave in the village and will be returning to the palace with us. He will take your bags." Said Michael

Jeff smiled at the young man. He looked different then he remembered.

"It had been a long time Kyle." Said Jeff
"Yes it has sir." Said Kyle
"So you know each other?" Asked Michael
"Yes sir. I was in school with both his girls. Mind you I was a few years a head of them." Said Kyle
"Good. Get his bags lieutenant." Said Michael

Kyle picked up the two bags and they headed out to the transport.

"Kyle, how is your father?" Asked Jeff
"Very good sir. Really enjoys being the village magistrate." Said Kyle
"I am sure he does. He has always been a good man." Said Jeff
"Yes, he is courting Amy DeLuca, the woman baker." Said Kyle
"She has a daughter doesn't she?" Asked Jeff
"Yes sir. I believe she is the same age as Liz."

*******

Kivar picked up the communicater to get the report from his palace spy.

"What do you have for me?" Demanded Kivar
"That fool of a prince has started to bond with his half breed slut."
"Why is that a problem? It will just be more painful for the slut when I killed the stupid prince."
"What do you want me too do?"
"Just keep watching and let me know what is going on. Very soon it will be time to start taking out the stupid royals. We will start with the king. Though I plan to keep the princess around for a while. If she refuses to be my wife then she will make a very nice whore. But I plan to keep that half breed around for a while too."
"You will give me what you promised my lord right?"
"Of course."

The communication was cut off and Kivar girned. Oh yes his spy would get what was coming to her. She will end up with her thourt slit just like her mother had when his father was through with that human slut. Tess had no clue that she had a human mother or that his father had sired her with that human slut. She would never know that that she was in fact his half breed sister. No one was ever going to find that out.

*******

Liz watched from a balcony as the transport came through the palace gate. It wouldn't be long now that she would see her father again. She smiled when she felt him wrap his arms around her waist. She leaned back into him feeling safe in his arms.

"My father is having a dinner tonight to welcome your father." Said Max
"That is nice."
"Yes, I think that you should take some time to get cleaned up."
"Good idea. Love you my prince."
"Love you always and forever my lady."

Liz turned around and kissed Max with all the passion she was feeling.

"Liz go get ready for dinner before a cold shower won't be enough to take care of a little problem I am having."

Liz looked down and could see a blodge in Max's pants. She raised an eyebrow at him. Max just grinned.

*Yes this is what you do to me beautiful.*

Liz blushed then headed into the palace with a smile.




TBC