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Title: Room Mates
Author: Emma
Disclaimer: I don’t own Roswell or it’s characters.
Rating: ADULT
Category: M/L
Summery: This is a fluffy Max and Liz piece. Enemies from childhood, how will play boy Max and uptight Liz Parker survive when they’re forced to move in together.

One

“Father, Mother please,” Liz begged her parents.

“I don’t understand what the problem is Liz. You don’t want to live on campus and the penthouse is a suitable option,” Nancy Parker explained to her daughter.

“He lives there!” Liz cried.

“Elizabeth the Evans’s have been family friends for years. You and Max practically grew up together. He will be a suitable roommate and that is the end of this discussion.” Jeff Parker replied, his voice leaving no room for argument. And Liz dropped into the lounge in defeat.

Liz Parker was what you could describe as the perfect daughter. She was an only child, and her father was a very successful businessman. Liz didn’t consider herself spoiled, however she did realize that she had access to things that a lot of other people didn’t.

***

“So you’re moving into the penthouse?” Maria asked excitedly.
Liz sighed, “Yes.”

“Why don't sound happy about this?” Maria asked. “You’ve wanted this since we started college,” she pointed out.

Liz attended NYU with Maria, Maria’s boyfriend Michael and her brother Kyle. For the first year she had lived on campus and shared a room with Maria but now that they were second year they could choose to live off campus if they liked.

Ever since Liz had been accepted to NYU she had dreamed of moving into the penthouse apartment her parents shared with the Evans, but when she found out that Max Evans lived there too, she changed her mind. Her parents however refused to pay for her to live somewhere else, and now it was too late to get a room back on campus.

“I know but I have to share with someone,” Liz told her.

“Oh really, who?” Maria asked intrigued.

“Max Evans,” Liz informed her.

On the other side of the phone Maria Deluca’s eyes had gone wide. Max Evans was famous at NYU, he was a bona fied hottie and most girls would chew off their right arm to be sharing a bed with him let a lone an apartment. It didn’t surprise Maria though that her best friend would be the one woman who wouldn’t fall for his charms. Liz was what most people would call a prude. She rarely dated, she was a virgin and Maria knew for a fact that Liz had it bad for her brother Kyle, who unfortunately didn’t know she was alive as anything more than a friend.

“Oh My God!” Maria squealed. “You get to live with Max Evans?”

Liz snorted at her friend’s excitement. It was obvious that Maria didn’t know Max Evans or she wouldn’t be saying the things she was. “You don’t know what he’s like Maria,” she pointed out. “The guy is a first class pig.”

“Liz he can’t be that bad, he wouldn’t have all those girls hanging all over him if he was.”

Liz scoffed. “He’s a pig Maria, he uses women. Those girls don’t know him, I do. I grew up with him.”

The memories of all the family get togethers where Max ignored her came flooding back. When they were smaller they used to be friends and play together. But soon after that, the Evans sent Max off to boarding school. It wasn't until he was 14 when Liz saw him again. After that he had never given her the time of day and sometimes had even gone out of his way to be rude or to embarrass her in front of people.

“So what are you going to do then?” Maria asked.

“Nothing,” Liz sighed. “My parents wont pay for me to stay anywhere else and it’s too late to move back to campus.”

“True,” Maria agreed. “So when do you move in?” she asked.

“The end of the week,” Liz informed her.

***

Max frowned as he watched more and more suitcases and boxes being delivered to his apartment. That’s right, it was his apartment. He had lived there for the past year by himself and that’s the way he wanted it to stay. To say that he was less than impressed when his mother had informed him that Liz would be moving in was an understatement. He had shouted and objected until he was blue in the face, and in the end his father had informed him to either suck it or up or to look at paying the bills himself. But if Liz Parker thought he was going to change his lifestyle for her then she had another thing coming.

He made no move to help when they asked where he wanted the stuff, instead he would just point to the spare room next to his own. If he was going to have to put up with Liz Parker living with him then he was going to make her life a living hell.

“Hello?” Liz called out as she entered the apartment.

Max watched as she looked around the apartment and then scrunched her nose up.

“What is that smell?” she asked.

Max smirked, “That is the smell of wild sex, but you wouldn’t know that now would you prude?”

Liz frowned when she heard his voice and his scathing comment.

“Hello Max,” she said through gritted teeth.

Max took in her appearance from his spot on the couch. She had changed since the last time he had seen her. Her hair was longer and her clothes a little trendier and if he wasn’t mistaken her tits looked a bit bigger too.

“Are you alright there?” she snapped.

Max smirked, “I’m fine!” he said, “You?”

“Fine,” she replied.

“Which room is mine?” she asked.

Max pointed to the room where all her stuff had been taken and Liz nodded.

“Where’s your room?” she asked.

“Already planning a midnight visit sugar?” he asked.

Liz resisted the urge to walk over and slap his face. “You wish,” she mumbled.

“Actually no,” he smirked. “And my room is the one next to yours.”

“What!” Liz said. “Why on earth would you do that when this place has like four bedrooms?” she objected.

Max smirked, “Obviously Ma and Pa didn’t let you in on a few things,” he told her.

“That,” he pointed to other half of the penthouse. “Is off limits. It’s closed off in case they need to use it for something.”

“What!” Liz shrieked.

“Yeah I know,” he nods. “It sucks.”

“Well if we’re going to be sleeping in such close proximity then I think we need to put some ground rules in place,” Liz started.

Max laughed at her, “Yeah right. Just stay out of my way and we’ll be fine,” he told her before he stood up and walked into his own room and closed the door.

Liz walked towards her room and looked at the all the suitcases and boxes that she had to unpack. She kicked off her shoes and got straight into it. She was only working twenty minutes when she heard a knock on the front door. She heard Max’s bedroom door open and assumed he was going to answer it, it had to be for him since no one knew where she lived yet.

The door to Max’s room closed again, and Liz sighed in relief until ten minutes later someone started banging on the wall.

“Oh god Max, yes right there!”

“Oh god,” she groaned and covered her mouth. He wouldn’t dare would he?

“Yes Max, oh fuck me harder!” she heard the women cry as the banging against the wall got louder and harder.

Liz pulled her ipod out of her bag and turned it up before putting the ear plugs into her ears. It drowned out the sound of Max and his friend’s activities enough that Liz could get back to work.

Two hours later Liz had pretty much finished unpacking most of the stuff she had brought with her. She pulled the earphones out of her ears assuming that by now Max would have worn himself out, but to her surprise and disgust they were still going at it.

“Oh Max!” she heard the women moan.

“Oh, Oh, Oh. I’m coming!” she squealed and Liz wondered how Max could concentrate when the whiny voice never stopped.

Frustrated she walked over to the wall and banged on it a few times and was relieved when it quieted down. She grabbed her stuff and moved to the bathroom, thankful once again that a bathroom was one thing that she didn’t have to share with Max. All of the bedrooms in the penthouse had their own bathrooms.

After a nice long hot shower where she washed and conditioned her hair, as well as shaved her legs and under her arms Liz returned to her bedroom where she was thankful it was quiet. She crawled under the crisp sheets of her bed and flicked the television on quietly as she tried to wind down. Her peace was short lived though, and soon the banging against the wall started up again.

“Oh Max!” the women cried.

“Ah, oh!”

Liz gritted her teeth and turned the television up in an effort to down out the sound. It didn’t work.

***

Liz sighed as she sipped the strong coffee. It had been an extremely long night, and on top of that she had an early class on Monday mornings.

Max walked into the kitchen in only a pair of boxer shorts whistling.

Liz bit her tongue from making a scathing remark.

“Morning,” Max smiled.

“For some maybe,” Liz replied as she continued to read the paper in front of her as she sipped her coffee.

“Didn’t sleep well?” Max asked.

Liz placed her mug of coffee down calmly and turned to him. “Your kidding right?” she asked.

“No, is the bed uncomfortable?” he asked.

“No!” Liz snapped. “The bed was quite nice actually, it had more to do with the constant banging against the wall and the incessant Oh Max, yes Max’s!”

Max scratched his ear and did his best to play innocent. “So you heard that huh?”

“Yes!” Liz snapped.

“I’ll try to be quieter in the future,” he smiled.

“Your not the problem!” Liz cried.

“Ok, ok,” Max chuckled. He knew exactly what she was talking about but he also had no intention of stopping either. He was living here before Liz, and he figured that if Liz complained enough to her father that eventually he would agree to let her move out, or have the other half of the penthouse.

Liz was already having similar thoughts and planned on discussing her living arrangements with her father that afternoon.

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Two

The talk with her father hadn’t worked. Jeff Parker refused to pay for Liz to live anywhere else, almost accusing her of being a liar when she complained about Max’s dating habits. He also refused to open the rest of the penthouse to her.

It turned out that wasn’t the only talk that Liz had, had that day which had been pointless. She had been living with Max for three weeks and nearly every night he had women over. Sometimes it was the same women from a few nights before but it was never the same women two nights in a row. Some of them were quiet while others were screamers, either way Liz was frustrated.

“Morning,” Max greeted as he sat down across from her at the table with his cereal and coffee.

Liz looked up at him surprised. Last night had been the first night in three weeks that he hadn’t brought someone home.

“Morning,” she replied.

“You finished with that?” he asked referring to the paper in front of her.
Liz handed him the paper and got up to rinse out her bowl and mug.

“I wanted to ask a favor,” Liz said then.

Max looked up from the paper and smirked. “Yeah?”

“I want to have some friends over for dinner and a movie on Friday night and I was hoping that you could go out.”

“Oh,” he said. “Anyone I know?”

“No, just my friends that’s all. I want to show them where I live.”

“Ok, its not like I’d normally be home alone on a Friday night anyway,” Max shrugged. But the tone of his voice said something different to Liz and she has to bite her tongue to stop herself from biting back.

“Thanks,” she replied before she turned and walked out of the apartment.

***

“So how’s the new room mate?” Alex asked Max.

Alex was Max’s best friend from boarding school. In reality they were like chalk and cheese. Whilst Max was a playboy, Alex had been dating Max’s sister Isabel, seriously for the past year.

At first it had slightly bothered Max, but after a while he saw how much Alex loved his sister and how happy he made her. Alex had never been a casual dater like Max to begin with, so that eased his mind knowing that he had the best intentions towards Isabel.

Max snorted, “Its like she has no life, she goes to school and comes home. She’s always here.”

“I’m sure she’s not that bad, Isabel said she’s lovely,” Alex tells him.

“Yeah if you like your women uptight and virginal.”

Alex chuckled, “Ahh which you don’t.”

“Exactly,” Max replied.

“Well I’m looking forward to meeting her anyway,” Alex says.

“You guys are coming for a visit?” Max asked hopefully. Whilst the Evans family lived in New York, Isabel had moved to be closer to Alex who was studying at MIT.

“Yeah, we’ll see you guys at Thanksgiving,” he told him. It was still a few months away but it was something to look forward too. It would also mean that Alex would meet Liz, since most years the Parkers and Evans had Thanksgiving dinner together.

***

When Friday night finally rolled around Liz was excited. She had invited Maria, Michael and Kyle over for a pizza and movies, in hopes that the couple atmosphere, combined with the appeal of her own apartment might prompt Kyle into noticing the feelings she had for him.

Kyle and Liz had actually been out on a date once before. Liz thought it had gone great, she considered it the best date of her life but at the end of the night Kyle had simply kissed her cheek and thanked her for coming with him. It had been a ball for his football team.

After that he hadn’t called her to ask her out again. Liz had been bitterly disappointed until Maria pointed out that maybe Kyle had never considered it a date to begin with. For some reason Kyle always dated these bimbo’s who couldn’t put a sentence together. Liz was an A+ student, and she considered herself relatively cool.

Max was watching from the kitchen as Liz fluffed the pillows on the lounge for the third time.

“Geez, who’s coming tonight, the Queen of England?” he asked with an eye roll.

Liz turned and sent him a glare, “Why are you still here?”

“I live here,” Max smirked.

Liz shook her head at his comment; she wouldn’t allow him to rile her up. “I know that but you said you would make other arrangements for the night,” she reminded him.

“Well I have made other arrangements,” Max replied sarcastically, mimicking her proper words. “But my other arrangements haven’t started yet.”

Liz just rolled her eyes and prayed silently that he would be gone before the others arrived. Her prayers weren't answered. A knock sounds on the door, and so she straightens her shirt before going to answer it.

“Hi guys,” she smiles when she opens the door to find Michael, Maria, and Kyle.

“I’m so glad you could come,” she adds but her happiness is short lived when she catches sight of the small red head on Kyle’s arm that she didn’t notice to begin with.

Her gaze narrows. “Kyle, I didn’t know you were bringing a friend.”

“This is Wendy, Wendy this is my friend Liz. I knew you wouldn’t mind Liz,” Kyle replied.

Liz managed a fake smile and greeted her, “Hi Wendy.”

Max had to bite his lip to keep from laughing as he listened to Liz trying to be polite to the girl who she apparently wished never existed. Assessing the group, he watched as her friends enter and look around their apartment, and determines that they look interesting, not at all the type of friends he expected.

The girl Maria is a pretty blonde, a bit taller than Liz but her clothes are retro and bright taking the appeal away from her rounded breasts and pretty face. The guy she’s with, Michael, is tall with shoulder length scruffy hair that looks like it hasn’t been brushed in a week. And his clothes, a pair of torn jeans and a black metalica shirt didn’t hide the fact that he apparently doesn’t care what people think of him.

Then there’s Kyle. Who Max already pegged as the guy Liz has a thing for. He's pretty short with sandy blonde hair, good looking he assumes, and his physique screams jock, which surprises Max. The chick on his arm is a knockout. With big tits and a small waist, and Max surmises as dumb as a doorknob as well. The night was getting more interesting by the second.

Max chose that moment to make his appearance.

“Hi everyone,” he smiles.

He watched in pleasure as Liz grits her teeth at hearing him.

“Everyone this is my room mate Max,” she introduces. Her apparent dislike dripping from her tone.

“This is Maria, Michael, Kyle,” she points to everyone, “and Wendy,” she adds.

“Hi,” Maria smiles warmly.

“Hi Max,” Wendy purrs while she looks him up and down which makes Max grin.

“Hey,” Michael grunts, but politely offers his hand, which Max shakes.

Kyle eyes Max before offering his hand, which Max too takes and shakes.

“Max won’t be staying, he has plans. Right Max?” Liz says pointedly.

“Right,” Max smiles. “But they’re not till later,” he replies.

He sits down on the lounge as Liz takes the group on a tour of the penthouse. When they return Maria is gabbing about how wonderful their apartment is, and Max can’t help but mumble under his breath about how much better it was before “Miss Uptight Parker' moved in.

“So Max, what do you do?” Maria asks.

“I’m studying Political Science at NYU,” he replies.

Maria’s eyebrows rise in surprise. “Interesting,” she says.

Michael sits next to Maria on the lounge and Kyle and Wendy take the other spare two seater leaving Liz nowhere to sit.

Max pats his lap when she looks at him.

“Oh Liz, you can squeeze on with us,” Maria offers moving over.

“Its ok. I might go order the pizza what would you guys like?”

“Pineapple,” Max speaks up first.

Liz glares at Max. “But you’re not staying remember,” she says.

“I’ll probably be here for dinner,” he replies with a teasing smile.

“Pineapple sounds good, can we get one with pepperoni,” Maria says.

“Sure,” Liz smiles. “You like olives don’t you Kyle?” she says then.

“I’ll eat anything on my pizza,” Kyle shrugs. “But Wendy doesn’t like anything but cheese so can we get a straight cheese pizza?”

Liz bites her lip from yelling no. She’s hurt that Kyle doesn’t remember how much she hates cheese pizza. “Fine.”

Without another word she turns on her heel and heads toward the kitchen where the phone and menu are.

“I’ll see if she’s needs help,” Max offers as he hops up and follows her.

“What are you doing?” Liz hisses when he enters. “You promised,” she reminds him.

“I know and I was going out, but then I saw your friend Kyle had brought a friend, and I didn’t want you to be the fifth wheel,” Max answers smugly.

“I’m not the fifth wheel,” Liz spits.

“Sure looks like it from here,” Max tells her.

Liz sighs, “Fine you can stay but just don’t do or say anything to embarrass me.”
Max smiles, “I wont.”

For the rest of night Max watched in silent humor as Liz constantly tried to get Kyle to pay attention to her. Kyle is completely oblivious though; in fact halfway through the movie Mr. & Mrs. Smith he and Wendy started making out and Max had to bite his lip from laughing when Liz stormed out of the room.

It’s a relief when the night comes to an end. Max says goodbye to everyone and goes to his room until everyone else leaves. He comes out twenty minutes later dressed to go out, while Liz is out cleaning the living room.

“You ok?” he asks.

All of sudden his earlier amusement is gone. He can tell by looking at Liz that she's been crying and he instantly feels sorry for her.

“I’m fine, why wouldn’t I be?” she replies, but she never looks at him.

“Well the fact that Kyle flaunted his girlfriend in your face all night tells me that maybe you aren’t.”

“What do I care about Kyle and his girlfriend?” Liz tries to laugh off.

Max smiles at her gallant effort, and admires her for being so brave.

“Come on Liz its obvious that you like Kyle,” Max points out.

“Apparently not,” she points back.

“No offense, but did you really think a movie night was going to get his attention?” Max asks.

Liz looks up angrily, “Look, just leave me alone!” she snaps.

“Ok, ok,” Max says holding up his hands in surrender. “I was just going to offer you my help but if you don’t want it that’s fine,” he replied.

Liz snorts, “The last thing I need is Max Evans help.”

Max shakes his head as he watches her picking up the drinking cans and pizza boxes. He bites back the urge to respond and instead walks out the front door without another word.

Once he’s gone Liz sinks on to the couch and lets her tears fall wondering why Kyle Valenti can’t see her.

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Three

Over the next few weeks Liz did everything she could possibly think of except blatantly coming straight out and telling Kyle that she liked him. Although nothing she did seemed to be working. And on top of that, to add insult to injury, Wendy was still in the picture. She didn't know what Kyle saw in her, Liz found her to be completely annoying, and she was constantly telling Maria how she felt. But apparently Maria didn't see it her way.

“Move on chica,” she said to Liz.

“No,” Liz shook her head, “Not until I know for sure that I don’t have a chance.”

***

One word described how Liz was beginning to feel, it was desperate. She was getting desperate, and that is why she found herself sneaking glances at Max, as he was reading the paper and eating his cereal the next morning.

“What?” he barked as he looked up for the third time catching Liz staring at him.

“N-Nothing,” Liz said surprised, sinking back in her chair from his harsh outburst.
Max sighed. He had, had a shit night and he wasn’t in the mood this morning, but he new he shouldn’t be taking it out on Liz. “No, spit it out Parker what is it?” he said softer.

“Were you serious the other day?” she asked hesitantly.

“You’re going to have to be more specific. I know we don’t talk a lot, but what are you talking about?”

“About helping me,” she clarified.

“With?” Max asked again, still clearly confused.

“Kyle!” Liz exclaimed flushing with embarrassment.

“Oh,” Max smirked remembering. “I didn’t think you needed my help?” he teased.

Liz frowned at the smirk on his face, and wondered why he got so much pleasure out of torturing her. “Well apparently I do since nothing I seem to do is working,” she says, her eyes downcast so he couldn't see how desperate she was for his help.

Max sighed, “What’s the big deal with this guy? I’m sure there are plenty of guys out there that you could go out with that you wouldn’t have to chase this hard.”

“I love him,” Liz whispered pathetically.

Max’s eyebrows rose in shock. Sure he didn’t really know Kyle, but Max was confused as to how Liz thought she could be in love with him. The guy was shallow and pretty much only thought with his dick. Actually come to think of it, he was a lot like Max.

“How far are you willing to go?” Max asked.

“What do you mean?” Liz replied her nose scrunching up in confusion, and Max had to smile at how cute she looked.

As soon as the though entered his head he quickly shook it away. “Well I’ve got to be honest with you Liz, Kyle seems like the sort of guy who has a pretty short, but impressive dating strategy.”

“Meaning?”

“Gorgeous, nice tits and a sure thing,” he smirked thinking about how that was pretty much the same system he used.

Liz’s mouth fell open in shock. “He is not like that!” she defended.

Max chuckled, “Fuck off he isn’t! Do you honestly think he’s dating Wendy because she intellectually challenges him, Liz?”

Liz’s mouth flapped open and shut as she tried to think of how to reply to that. “She’s got big tits and she probably fucks his brains out,” Max continued.

Eventually giving up Liz slumped against the table, “I’ve got no chance.”

Max looked at how defeated she was and sighed, for some reason he hated to see her put herself down. “Look with a few little changes you’ll knock his socks off.” Max replied.

Liz sat up feeling a little brighter by his words, “Like what?” she asked.

“Firstly, a mini make over,” he tells her. “You’re gorgeous but you don’t know how to show it," looking her over, he continued, "A few little new additions to your wardrobe couldn't hurt either.”

“Ok,” Liz nodded eagerly feeling flattered that Max had called her gorgeous and not even sure why.

“You also need some sexual education,” Max pointed out.

“What do you mean by that?” she frowned.

Max smirked, “Kyle’s experienced, the only way you’re going to win him over is by luring him into bed. It's once you’ve got him there that you’ll use your other qualities to keep him.”

Liz blushed red, “I wouldn’t know what to do,” she admitted.

Max’s smirk brightened, “Leave it to me doll, you’re in capable hands.”

Unsure of what he meant, Liz doesn’t respond as he walked away. She also didn’t notice the grin on Max’s face as he thought about all the ways he was going to deflower 'Prude Parker'.

***

When Max walked through the apartment door a few hours later, he headed straight to Liz’s room. Seeing her sitting on her bed typing away at her laptop he said, “Get up, we’re going shopping.”

A bit confused, Liz pulled the pencil from her mouth, “What?”

“We’re going shopping. Its makeover time,” he said again before walking out to wait for her in the living room.

Five minutes later Liz, looking a little more presentable, walked out of her bedroom.

“Where are we going?” she asked as Max led her to his mustang.

He didn't answer her so she asked him again.

Max turned the car on and looked over at her, “Ok here’s the deal. If I’m going to help you then you have to trust me. No 20 questions about what we’re doing, no complaining, and no second-guessing. Deal?”

Liz hesitated for a second. “This isn’t a prank to embarrass me is it?” she whispered. Beginning to recall some of the awful things that Max used to do to in the past just to make a fool out of her.

As soon as the words came out of her mouth, Max instantly began to feel guilty, knowing exactly what she was thinking. “No,” he replied, shaking his head.

“Ok then,” Liz nodded and turned to look out the window as Max started the car and headed towards the city.

A half an hour later Max lead Liz into one of New York's most well known hairdressers, 'Jon Pierre'.

“Max!” an extremely gay man exclaimed as soon as he saw them walk through the door.

Max smiled, “Jon, how are you?”

“Amazing, you?”

“Good,” Max replied.

“And the beautiful Isabella?”

“She’s great, I know she misses coming here to get her hair done,” he informed him knowing that flattery was the best way to get him what he wanted.

Jon turned his attention to Liz then, and appraised her. “And who is this beauty?” he asked Max.

Max smiled, “This is Liz Parker.” He stepped away from Liz and gestured for Jon to follow him, “I want to do something special for her, do you think you could help me out with a little mini makeover?”

Jon looked back to Liz and looked her over again, “What did you have in mind?”

“Hair, needs trimming and some highlights, but don’t cut it too much. And then her eyebrows need some work, and whatever else you think would help. I trust your judgment,” Max shrugged. He knew he should feel embarrassed about how much he knew about women’s styling, but other men didn’t have Isabel Evans for a sister, and so knowing this stuff was survival.

“She is already very gorgeous,” Jon pointed out. “But you are right her hair is definitely in need of some 'Jon Pierre' magic,” he said with a smile.

“Excellent!” Max smiled in return.

Jon led Liz to a chair, and she took a glance back at Max with a worried expression marring her face.

Jon began to snip here and there even playing with her hair a bit before dying portions of it and securing it with foil. Liz wasn't sure about any of the things he was doing, but didn't question him, and in return he never asked her opinion. Instead he would turn to Max, which annoyed her.

“You’re a lucky girl being spoiled by Max,” Jon told her as he led her into the beauty section to get her eyebrows shaped.

“You must be very special to him,” he continued.

“Oh no,” Liz shook her head, “Not at all. We’re just friends, room mates actually.”
Jon smirked at her denial, “If you insist.”

An hour later, brows shaped, hair colored, cut and dried Jon presented Liz to Max.
Max smiled immediately and had to applaud, “You really are the best Jon!” He told him as he handed over his credit card.

“Max no!” Liz started to object once she saw him attempt to pay.

“I can pay,” she whispered as she approached him.

“Its fine,” Max smiled, “Its worth every cent,” he grinned. It wasn’t like Jon did a lot of work but the layered style and the blonde highlights through her hair just looked beautiful.

After thanking Jon Pierre again, Liz and Max left and headed towards a hip little boutique that Isabel frequented when she lived in New York. Max knew from some of the clothes that Isabel used to buy from there, that it was the perfect place for Liz.

Liz scrunched her nose up as she looked around the shop, “Max, I don’t think this place is really me.”

“Exactly,” Max smirked back.

A sales lady approached them almost immediately, and Max asked for her to show Liz to a fitting room. Again, not so much asking, but telling Liz that he would get started finding outfits for her in her size. Ten minutes later, the sales woman handed Liz an array of mini skirts and see through tops that Max had picked out.

Max was waiting when Liz came out in a black pleated mini skirt that barely covered her ass and a black tube top. “I can’t wear this!” Liz screeched at him.

“You can and you’re going to look fucking hot doing it,” Max grinned as he eyed her. “I’d fuck you,” he added.

“Gee, that’s reassuring,” Liz grumbled but blushed regardless. “Is this really what you guys want?” she asked then gesturing to the clothing.

“Like I said, you need something extra to lure him in, and then you keep him by being yourself,” he told her again. He doubted that Kyle was really interested in anything more that a good fuck but he knew that Liz didn’t want to hear that.

“Ok,” she sighed.

In the end Liz bought all the things Max suggested, and again he tried to pay but she wouldn't let him. Afterwards they headed to 'Victoria’s Secret', and the minute they walked through the doors Liz began to blush.

“Ok, now the perfect fuck me out fit isn't complete until it has the perfect fuck me underwear,” he whispered to her as he fingered a small lace thong.

“Don’t think I’m showing you,” Liz warned him.

Max smirked, “I’ll see it soon enough,” he whispered swatting her butt as he walked by. He picked up a hot little red set and handed it to Liz, which surprised her because she found that she too liked it. She gave the set that he handed her back to him, and went over to pick up the right size in not only red but in black too. As well, she also found a sexy white teddy that she thought Kyle would love. On her way to the fitting rooms a black bustier and matching thong set had caught her eye and for some reason she found herself picking it up and taking it with her.

***

When Max and Liz reached the apartment they both sank down onto the lounge in exhaustion. They had been shopping for close to four hours, and several hundreds of dollars later Max finally decided that Liz had purchased enough to lure in Kyle.

Liz picked up all her bags and took them to her room, and when she came back out Max was still sitting on the couch. “Thank you,” she said awkwardly.

“It’s cool, it’s a start. But you’ve still got a bit to go,” he reminded her.

“I know,” was all she said.

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Four

It was late the following night when Max walked into Liz’s room, and he was surprised with himself at how much he was looking forward to the second step in his plan. Liz was asleep, but that didn't deter him. He pulled the sheets off her body and perused her almost naked body. She was only wearing a tank top and a pair of panties, and he couldn’t help but react, and found himself getting instantly hard.

He climbed onto the bed and wedged himself in between Liz’s open legs. He began running his hands up and down her thighs before he leaned in and started leaving lingering kisses up her leg, from her tiny ankle until his nose was buried against her heat.

Liz stirred slightly and instinctively her legs opened wider for Max’s invasion. He kissed the other leg then and this time when he reached the top he kissed her over the fabric of her panties.

Liz jumped at the feeling, her eyes snapping open and instantly they met smouldering amber eyes.

"What are you doing?" she cried as she tried to push him away.

Max wouldn't be deterred though, and he slid a finger under the fabric of her panties. "Relax Parker, I promise you’re going to enjoy this," he smirked in the dark.

Liz quickly got lost in the feelings that his fingers were stirring in her. He stroked her lips and her juices started to pool, which Max used to stimulate her as his finger continued to tease her.

Liz laid back and her hands began to fist the bed sheets, but almost as soon as Max had started he stopped.

"What?" she questioned.

"Don’t worry," he assured her as his hands hooked into the sides of her panties. "I’m not stopping."

He pulled the fabric down her slim legs and settled back between them.

Before Liz had a chance to react he had replaced his earlier finger with his tongue.

"Oh my god!" Liz cried out, her hips lifting off the bed.
Max pushed her back down to the bed before he rhythmically started thrusting his tongue inside of her.

"Ahh," Liz moaned.

Soon Max’s tongue was making its way towards her bundle of nerves as he slipped a finger into her depths.

"Yes, oh god yes!" Liz cried out.

She could feel her end nearing and Max also sensing it, slipped another finger inside of her. He used his fingers to fuck her as his tongue worked it's magic on her clit. Liz began to thrust her hips up against his face, and right before her climax took hold, Max thrust his tongue inside of her again.

"AHH………Yes, Yes, Yes!" Liz screamed, as she orgasmed.

Max stayed between her legs as she came down from her high, and greedily gulped down her juices.

When he pulled back his face glistened with her essence and she blushed when he licked his lips.

"Was that your first orgasm?" he asked.

"N-No," Liz shook her head.

Rephrasing the question he asked again, "Was this the first orgasm someone else has given you?"

She nodded and looked away in embarrassment.

Max crawled up her body until his face was inches from her ear; grasping her chin he turned her face till she was looking at him.

"Did you enjoy that?" he whispered.

"Uh huh," Liz nodded biting her bottom lip. Unable to help himself Max pounced, covering Liz’s mouth with his own and he sucked the bottom lip she was torturing into his mouth before thrusting his tongue into hers.

Liz instantly responded, and wrapped her arms around his neck pulling him closer to her and his obvious arousal settled between her legs. In the back of her mind she knew she shouldn’t be so turned on by the taste of her essence on Max’s tongue but the fact was, that she was.

What felt like only seconds later but was rather actually minutes, Max pulled back panting. He was so hard and he wanted nothing more than to bury himself inside of Liz, and by the way Liz was rubbing herself against him he could tell that she was having similar thoughts. But he knew it was too soon, and that Liz would definitely need to be worked up into going all the way.

"I think that’s enough for tonight," he whispered.

Liz moaned in protest but she didn't try to stop him when he pulled away from her and off the bed.

"What about you?" she asked her eyes drifting down to the tent in his boxers.

"I’ll be fine," he assured her as he began to walk towards the door leaving a very confused and aroused Liz.

***

Liz peered out her bedroom door and into the kitchen the next morning wondering whether or not if Max was up yet. She hadn’t heard him yet, and she couldn’t see him, so assuming the coast was clear she wrapped her robe tighter around her naked body and hugging herself walked towards the kitchen.

"Morning."

Jumping about five feet in the air at the sound of his voice, Liz turned around slowly to see his grinning face sitting on the recliner in the living room, in front of the TV.

"M-Morning," she replied nervously, unconsciously pulling her robe around her tighter. Just as quickly as she stopped though, she turned on her heels and fled to the kitchen.

Liz didn't hear Max walk into the kitchen until he was standing behind her and pressed his practically naked body against her. His actions caused her to bite down on her bottom lip to try and stop the moan that threatened to escape.

"How are you this morning?" he whispered, his mouth dangerously close to Liz’s ear.

"Good, you?" she replied quickly, while trying to move away from him. Which was useless because the bench they were pressed against wasn’t moving.

What Liz didn't realise thought was the fact that Max had a tempting view of her breasts from his height advantage above her. And to his pleasure, he now knew that she wasn't wearing anything underneath her robe.

He reached up and began caressing Liz's arms as his lips pressed gently and quickly against her neck.

"I’m glad, I was worried you would be having second thoughts after last night," he whispered.

"About what?" she replied her eyes closing, enjoying the feel of Max’s lips on her rapidly heating skin.

"Our plan," he replied, while his arm closed around her waist and his hands worked on releasing the cord holding her robe together.

"Um plan? Oh, no," she moaned out.

With one flick of his wrist, the robe parted open making way for his greedy hands. Since the night before, he hadn’t been able to stop thinking about her. He had returned to his room after their little encounter and jerked off to the image of her cumming in his arms, a long cold shower later he was still thinking about her, and was still hard as hell. Needless to say, it had been a long night.

"Good," Max replied. One hand cupped a breast and playfully massaged it while the other rubbed sensually low on her abdomen leaving no doubt as to where it was heading.

Liz threw her head back against Max’s shoulder as he rolled a nipple between his fingers.

"God Max," she moaned.

His hand dipped lower and he smiled when he felt her already wet for him. He then began to tease her lower lips, tracing them with a finger.

"Please," Liz whimpered, while her own small hand crept behind her and made its way to Max’s cock.

"Please what?" Max whispered. He loved how far gone she was and knew that right now if he wanted, he could have his way with her on the kitchen bench, and that she would let him.

"Finger me," she panted, making Max grin.

"You want me to shove my fingers inside you princess?" he asked.

She nodded eagerly, so Max obliged. His fingers slid in easily because she was so wet, and Liz instantly began trying to ride his digits.

Max's eyes widened when he felt Liz’s small hand slide inside his boxers through the slit, and close around his cock.

"Liz," he groaned out.

"More," she whimpered so Max slid another finger inside of her.

Feeling completely gone, Liz's hand erratically jerked Max off at the same pace as she was moving against his fingers, which were pistoning in and out of her.

Max buried his head in her neck and sucked on her pulse point feeling completely torn by the turn of events. A few minutes ago he was in complete control, and now here Liz was taking him over the top with her.

"You want to come again?" Max groaned out, knowing that he himself was very close.

"Yes, yes make me come!" Liz cried and her fist tightened almost painfully around Max's cock.

He added a third finger and was delighted when Liz screamed out in pleasure. He pinched her nipple hard and did his best to swipe his thumb over her clit. It all proved too much for Liz, who screamed out in pleasure as her orgasm washed over her. And with a final jerk of her hand, Max came too in her hand.

Max was slightly embarrassed when he realised what had happened but it was quickly short lived when Liz turned herself around in his arms and began kissing him and pulled him passionately against her small body.

Max responded back instantly, but the feel of his cock hardening again convinced him to pull back.

"Wow," Liz said when she finally recovered her breath. "What was that for?"

"Just part of the lessons," Max winked. "And I’ve gotta tell you Parker, A+ so far."

Liz blushed at his words, she looked down then and reality set in when she realized that she was standing in front of Max naked, her robe now pooled at her feet.

Completely embarrassed she bent down to pick it up but Max stopped her.

"You want to pull this off you gotta get used to being naked," he told her as he looked her over and licked his lips.

"Is this your way of telling me you want me to walk around the apartment naked?" Liz asked.

Max smirked. , "I have no problem with that if you think it’s going to help."

Liz shot him a glare, "Do you really think all this is going to help?" she asked.

Max looked at her hot little body again and felt his cock get harder. He nodded, "Who wouldn’t want to fuck you Parker? You’re fucking hot," he told her before he turned and walked towards his bedroom when he planned on taking a cold shower to take care of business. One release just wasn't enough.

Unable to stop herself from checking him out Liz watched, her face red with embarrassment as, his tight ass and back muscles until he disappeared from sight.

TBC..... see you soon

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Five

Maria was sitting in the quad with Michael, Kyle, and Wendy when she spotted Liz coming towards them.

"Is that Liz?" Michael asked, his face clearly showing his shock.

Instead of being dressed in her usual jeans and t-shirt, Liz was wearing a pair of tight hipster jeans and a red midriff bearing top.

"Um yeah," Maria replied.

"Hey guys," Liz smiled when she reached them.

Michael couldn't help but stare at her and Liz's smile brightened a little, she had been getting the same reaction from the guys on campus all morning. Turning slightly she noticed that Kyle was too involved in groping Wendy to notice her.

"Hi Kyle... Wendy," she said a little louder to get their attention.

Kyle raised his head when he heard her this time. "Hi Liz," he said but did a double take when he finally saw her, and his eyes went wide.

"You look nice!" Kyle commented. Wendy glared at him for his comment, and didn't like the way he was staring at Liz one bit.

"Thank you," Liz blushed.

Maria smirked as she watched the whole thing unfold. "Lets go to class Liz," she said, giving Michael a kiss, then linking her arm with a grinning Liz and leading her off.

"Ok spill," she said the second they were out of earshot.

"What?" Liz asked innocently.
"Don't 'what' me, this is a new look and I like it, but it's so obvious why you're doing it and I don't like that," she told her.

Liz sighed, "So what? It kind of worked didn't it?"

Maria smiled sadly at her best friend. "Yeah it did, but Liz you know you could do so much better than my bone head step brother right?" she told her.

Liz shrugged, she'd heard this from Maria a thousand times before, but it didn't change the fact that she was in love with Kyle. And she would do anything to get him, including making a deal with the devil.

***

Liz fidgeted as she watched the front door that night while she was waiting for Max to come home. She wanted to tell him all about her progress with Kyle that day, and couldn't believe how much Max's tips had helped. She hadn't needed to even pull the mini skirts out, because the new top and tighter jeans had certainly got Kyle's attention.

When Max entered the house with a blonde on his arm Liz's excitement was short lived. He didn't even acknowledge her as he led the girl into his bedroom, shutting the door behind him.

***

After two sessions with Liz, Max was more than ready to fuck the life out of someone and he knew that Liz herself, wasn't ready for that yet. So after class he had gone to the bar on the hill, one of his usual hang outs and had run into Tess, a girl he'd done a few times before. She was more than willing to accompany him home and he knew he wouldn't be sorry for choosing her.

He wasted no time on preliminaries, he knew that he needed release first and fast, and soon Tess was moaning from underneath him as he hammered into her.

Liz continued to the turn the volume of the TV up in the living room in an effort to drown out the whiny calls of the blonde Max was doing, whilst at the same time trying to put a lid on her growing anger. She kept telling herself that it was natural to feel that way, and that she was really angry because Max had ignored her, and not because she wanted to be the one moaning his name.

***

The next morning Max was woken to loud sounds coming from the living room.

After being kept up for hours while Max was getting off and she wasn't, Liz decided that a little pay back was in order. So that morning, she turned the radio up loud as she made pancakes in the kitchen.

"Do you have to have that so loud?" Max opened his door and yelled, but Liz didn't hear him and continued to sway her hips as she stood over the stove.

Max stomped into the kitchen prepared to tell Liz off for all the noise, but stopped short at the sight that greeted him. Liz chose that very moment to turn around and caught him staring at her in shock.

"Oh I didn't wake you did I?" she asked sweetly.

His eyes roamed over her scantly clad body, she was only wearing a white tank top which Max could see her nipples though and very short shorts.

"Yes!" He finally snapped, as he tried to compose himself. He didn't like the way he found himself reacting to Liz every time he saw her.

"Oh I'm sorry," she replied sarcastically.

Max was unable to move, his eyes were completely focused on Liz's round bottom, which had gone back to swaying to the music.

Liz took a deep breath and tried to ignore the feelings that were bubbling up, and it didn't help that her skin felt like it was on fire every time Max's eyes roamed over her. She could feel herself growing wetter by the second, and all the sexual frustration that had built up from the night before had returned.

"What's for breakfast?" Max asked.

Liz resisted the urge to turn around, knowing already that he was only standing inches behind her. And with one look at his naked chest, she new she would be a goner. Liz wasn't sure what he did to her the other night but she didn't like the way her body was responding to him one little bit.

"Sorry, I thought you would be sleeping most of the morning," Liz said in a singsong voice. "There's only enough for one," she lied.

"What am I doing?" She screamed to herself. "You cooked pancakes because you know they are his favourite," she berated herself.

"I'm sure there's enough," Max said eyeing the mounting pile of pancakes on the plate. He moved closer to Liz then, "I know for a fact you hardly eat anything, that's why you look so good," he purred in her ear.

Liz cleared her throat. "Don't you even dare put those lips near me!" she warned. The images of what he was doing with the skank in his room the night before began re-emerging in her mind.

"You know you want it," he whispered. "I can smell you, and you smell almost as good as these pancakes," he teased.

Liz turned and smiled sweetly, "Breakfast is ready," she announced and side stepped Max and his comment.

They sat in their usual seats across from each other. Liz with her legs locked tightly together and Max sitting back in his chair so that she had a nice view of his naked chest.

"These are good," he mumbled with his mouth full.

"Thank you," Liz replied.

"They'd taste even better if I was eating them off you," he teased her again.

Liz snorted, "Gee she must have been pretty shitty last night," she commented knowing it would rile him up.

"Huh?"

"The blonde," Liz smirked. "The two of you went at it for hours yet here you are just begging to take me for a ride."

His eyebrows rose at her comment. "Hmm you're learning fast, Parker," he smiled.

"She was a good fuck," he shrugged, "but I like working you up and watching you come."

"Well considering where your mouth and cock were last night, I don't think so," Liz told him bluntly, standing up and taking her empty plate with her.

"You know you want it," he smirked.

"Yeah I do, but maybe I can get it somewhere else," she said.

"Really?" Max chuckled. "Making progress already?"

"Lets just say that I've moved a little, and I just might be registering on his radar now," she smiled proudly.

"All with a new haircut and clothes," Max pointed out. "Just think how much progress you'll make when he realizes your willing to fuck him."

"That's not what this is about," Liz frowned.

"Sex is what its always about. Look at you, a couple of orgasms and gropes and your dressing in half the amount of clothes you used to," he told her, his eyes gazing up and down her body again. "God I can't wait to see what happens when I fuck you," he smirked with glowing eyes.

Liz gasped, "You are not fucking me!" She cried.

"You don't want me to?" He asked innocently.

"No!" Liz yelled.

"Who else is going to teach you how to ride cock, Liz?"

"Maybe I don't want to be some slut who uses sex to get a guy," she pointed out.

"Then find a new guy to be in love with," Max told her, as he stood up and walked to the sink with his empty plate.

"You signed up for this, we can stop now if you want but I think deep down you don't want to," Max whispered approaching her from behind again.

"I think deep down you love the sexual person I've brought out in you, and you're so horny for me right now you can't even think straight. I can give you want you want Liz. And I can teach you to get who you want, when you want them, but you have to let me have full access," he whispered, while his hands began caressing her shoulders.

The truth was, fucking Tess was nothing in comparison to the verbal sparing he was having with Liz right now. He knew that when she finally gave in, and would let him fuck her, it was going to be explosive!

"What do you mean?" Liz asked in a breathy moan.

"When we're in this apartment, there are no rules. You want to crawl into my bed and suck my cock then that's great, and if I want to make you cum in this kitchen, then let me. Don't fight what you want," he said.

"This is just a ploy by you to get some whenever you feel like it," Liz said.

Max moved away from her and walked around the table until he was looking at Liz. "Liz, I think you and I both know that I don't need you. I have no problem getting it whenever I want. You asked me to help you, and I'm trying to, but if you don't want to continue then tell me now and I'll leave you alone."

Sighing, she admitted, "I feel used."

"And I don't?" Max asked. "There has been no personal gain for me yet remember?" he pointed out.

Liz blushed, "I offered the other night," she said weakly.

"Its not about that, but if you want I'll show you how to make me feel good," he said.

"Ok," Liz nodded.

She didn't think a sexual person like Max could understand how she felt. She understood what he had said about being the kind of person that appealed to Kyle, and it was obvious that he was right, but now Liz was wondering if she really wanted to be that person. Sure, everything Max had done to her was wonderful but it was making her feel things, and want things that she wasn't prepared for.

"I have one condition," Liz said then.

"Ok," he nodded.

"I don't feel comfortable with you coming out and trying to be with me after you've been with someone else all night," she told him.

Max smiled, "Fair enough."

"Its bad enough that I have to listen to it," she said annoyed.

"Ahh' someone a little frustrated?" He teased.

With that, Liz moved away from her chair and glared at Max. "Make sure you load the dishwasher, I'm going to take a shower," she told him before stalking off to

Six

Liz watched as Max moved about the kitchen. They had developed a good pattern over the past few weeks where one of them would cook, usually it was Liz, and then Max would clean up. Right now though, it was Max who was cooking a homemade pizza for them.

"How are things going with Kyle?" Max asked.

It had been a week since Liz had talked about the progress she believed she was making with Kyle.

Liz smiled, "Good, I think he's getting sick of Wendy," she informed him.

Max arched an eyebrow, "What makes you think that?"

"I heard him complaining to Michael about her being too clingy," she smiled.

"Well that's good," he said.

Taking a deep breath, Liz hopped up out of her seat and walked towards Max. At first it had been hard to accept Max's no rules idea but after a week it was starting to appeal to her. Max had already crawled into her bed a couple of times during the week and made her cum with his mouth and hand. Liz hated to admit it, but she loved it, and wondered how she had gone as long as she had without it.

But it was also frustrating too. Because Max would pleasure her, but she had no idea how to pleasure him. And if this plan to win Kyle was ever going to work, she would need to know how.

"Max..." She purred.

Max looked over his shoulder at Liz who had pressed her body against his.

"Yeah?" he smirked.

"I want to do something for you," she whispered, her hands rubbing up and down his back. The tight shirt he wore did nothing to hide his muscles from her.

Max froze, "Like what?"

"I want to make you feel good, like you make me feel," she replied.

"Um ok," Max gulped. An image of Liz taking his cock into her mouth flashed in his mind and Max groaned as he felt himself stir to life.

"After dinner?" he suggested.

Liz smiled against the back of his shirt and nodded before she returned to her seat.

After dinner Liz cleaned up, and when she was finished she went looking for Max. She entered his room only to find it empty, and as she was about to walk out she heard the shower running.

Liz hesitated for a second before she made her way to the bathroom door. She opened it quietly and peered inside, she could see Max's glorious naked body through the clear door and knew she didn't want to wait a second longer to touch it. As quietly as she could, Liz removed her jeans, panties, shirt, and bra before she walked towards the shower.

Max jumped when he heard the shower door open, "Liz?" he asked shocked when she stepped inside.

The sight of her naked body was all Max required for his cock to surge to life.

Liz watched as it hardened quickly and sprung upright, and she licked her lips in anticipation.

When Max saw what Liz was looking at he groaned. "Come here," he whispered and reached a hand out to pull her towards him. He was completely turned on by her visit to his shower, he never expected her to be so bold.

Liz went to Max eagerly and moaned when she felt her body pressed against his and the feel of his cock against her stomach.

"This is unexpected," Max whispered as his hands cupped her breasts and he lowered his mouth to hers.

Liz instantly responded and wrapped her arms around Max's neck.

Max rolled Liz's nipples with his fingers, while her small hand wrapped around his hard cock and began to stroke it.

"God Liz," he groaned.

"Does that feel good?" she asked unsure.

"Yeah stroke it a little harder though," he whispered and guided his hand over hers to show her the rhythm he liked. When he thought she had it down he let go and let her jerk him off.

"Yes Liz," he hissed when her small hand rubbed over the tip.

Max leaned forward and kissed Liz's neck then.

"I'd love for you to suck me Princess," he whispered huskily.

Liz gulped, "You want me to blow you?" she asked.

"Uh huh," Max nodded. "I bet your hot little mouth would feel so wonderful."

"O-Okay," Liz agreed nervously. "Here?" she asked.

"No, lets get out of here," Max suggested.

He guided them out of the shower and they dried off before Max took her hand and led her into his bedroom. They crawled onto the bed and Max took Liz's mouth passionately while his hands caressed her breasts.

Liz laid down on top and enjoyed the feel of his hands on her. When she finally felt ready, she started kissing a trail down Max's body until she was between his legs, she eyed his massive member for a few seconds before she leant in and licked the head.

"Jesus Liz," Max hissed.

Liz looked up to make sure that she hadn't done something wrong but one look in Max's lust full eyes and she knew she hadn't. So instead she leant in again and this time licked his cock from top to bottom before taking him completely into her mouth.

"Oh yes Liz baby don't stop," Max moaned as she began to thrust his cock in and out of her mouth.

Liz continued to take him doing her best to tighten the suction.

Max knew he wasn't going to last much longer and he didn't want to come without Liz realizing.

"God baby that feels so good," he told her.

Liz then took his balls into her hand and palmed them, and that was all it took for Max.

"Fuck Liz I'm coming," he warned.

She continued to blow him. "Baby let go or I'm going to come in your mouth," he moaned.

Liz decided that if she was going to do this, then she was going to do it the whole way and so she shook her head at Max.

With one last thrust, Max groaned and shot his seed into Liz's warm mouth. Liz swallowed as much of it as she could, but there was so much of it that some of it spilled out the sides of her mouth.

After she had swallowed all that she could, she let Max's flaccid cock go with a pop.

"Fuck that was good," Max moaned.

"It was ok?" Liz asked unsure.

Max handed Liz some tissues so she could clean up her face a little bit.

"I can't believe that was your first time," he grinned. Sure her technique could do with a little work but Max knew she would get better as she felt more comfortable.

"Well I'm glad it was ok," Liz smiled.

Max reached for her then and pulled her up his body until she was lying on top of him. He ran his tongue along her bottom lip until she opened and then he thrust his tongue in.

“ Hmm Max," she moaned.

Max's hands were massaging her round bottom before one made it's way between her legs, running up the length of her slit.

"M-Max," Liz moaned.

"God Liz your so wet," he groaned.

Liz was sopping and Max could feel her essence coating her thighs.

Liz rubbed shamelessly against Max's fingers. Just being naked with Max was a total turn on.

"Please Max," she pleaded.

"What do you want?" he asked. He realized that Liz was really worked up tonight.

"You," she cried.

Max was a little shocked at her words but despite that he felt his cock harden.

"You have no idea how bad I want to slid inside you Princess," Max groaned out, but he knew that it wasn't the time.

He thrust two fingers inside of her and Liz cried out. "More," she demanded as she writhed against him.

Max rolled them over until Liz was on her back and crawled down her body, he thrust another finger inside of her and at the same time he bent down and latched onto her clit with his mouth.

"Yes Max, Yes, Yes!" Liz screamed out as she came against Max's mouth and hands.

Max licked up her juices that flowed out of her before he removed his fingers and then licked them clean too, all the while Liz watched him with hooded eyes.

He could see she was still turned on and his cock was also still very hard. He wanted nothing more than to bury himself inside of her and right now he didn't think Liz would have any objections either, but it just seemed to be a little fast.

"Max," Liz purred reaching up and pulling him down on her.

Liz opened her legs and Max's cock settled against her pussy. She wrapped her long legs around his waist and began to grind against him.

"Oh fuck Liz," Max hissed, his head buried in her neck as he tried to regain some composure.

"Fuck me, Max," Liz whispered huskily.

As soon as the words left Liz's mouth Max knew he was in big trouble. If any women uttered those words to Max whilst lying underneath him Max wouldn't have hesitated in fucking her brains out. But something inside of him stopped him from doing that with Liz. It might have started out as a plan, a game even but Max just couldn't do it, Liz deserved better than that for her first time.

"Not tonight," he whispered.

"Why not?" Liz asked all of a sudden feeling a little insecure. "Don't you want to?" she asked.

Max chuckled at her question and pressed himself harder against her. "Believe me I want too," he assured her.

"Then why wont' you?" she asked.

Max reached up and caressed her face and for the first time since she moved in, he noticed how truly beautiful Liz was. "I just think its too soon, you don't need to rush it," he told her.

Liz was touched by his consideration and nodded.

Max rolled off her body then and onto his side and Liz began to move away from him and off the bed but Max reached out and stopped her.

"Why don't you stay?" he suggested.

Liz hesitated for a second and then nodded before she climbed back on the bed. Max wasted no time pulling her closer to him and Liz turned so that Max was spooning behind her. Soon they were both fast asleep.

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Seven

When Liz reached the quad she looked around for Maria and Michael but couldn’t find them anywhere. Eventually she spotted Kyle, and before walking towards him she did a double check on her outfit. She was wearing a three quarter black skirt and a red sweater, it was nice, and the slits up the side of the skirt showed off just enough leg. Making her way over, she added a little extra swing to her hips.

"Hi Kyle," she smiled.

Kyle looked up at the sound of Liz’s voice, his eyes scanning over her, something she had become accustomed to lately.

"Can I sit down?" Liz asked.

"Sure," Kyle nodded.

"So how are you doing Liz?" he smiled.

"Oh I’m great," Liz grinned back.

"Where’s Wendy today?" she couldn’t help but ask.

Kyle shrugged, "Not sure."

"Oh," Liz replied.

"We broke up," he confirmed.

Inside, Liz did a little happy dance. "Oh I’m sorry, Kyle," she faked.

Kyle shrugged, "Its cool I broke up with her."

Liz nodded and smiled slightly, "Still it must be hard."

"Yeah I guess," he replied.

"If you want to, maybe we could go out on Saturday night?" Liz suggested. "Hang out and stuff."

She had her fingers crossed under the table in hopes that he wasn’t going to reject her. This wasn’t part of her plan, but she hadn’t expected Kyle and Wendy to break up so quickly, and she didn’t want to take the chance that Kyle might ask someone else out.

"Yeah that sounds good," Kyle replied. "We could catch a movie and get something to eat," he suggested.

Liz smiled brightly. "Sure that sounds fine. What time?" she asked.

"How about I pick you up around seven?" he offered.

"That would be fine Kyle," she agreed.

Kyle stood up then and gathered his things, "Well I have to go, but I’ll see you Saturday night Liz."

"Yep, see you then," Liz waved. She waited until she was sure Kyle was out of sight before she jumped out of her seat and pumped her fist in victory. Kyle Valenti was going down and she was the woman that was going to take him.

***

"Liz, what the hell?" Max groaned when Liz jumped on top of him and began to pepper kisses all over his face.

Liz had gotten home from classes to find Max in bed and she couldn’t curb her excitement.

"Guess who has a date with Kyle for Saturday night!" she smiled proudly.

Max’s eyes widened, "Really? When did this happen?"

"Today," she grinned as she sat up so that she was now straddling him.

"He just came up and asked you out?" Max asked not quite believing it.

"Not exactly, I saw him in the quad so I went over and he told me that him and Wendy had just broken up so I asked if he wanted to hang out on Saturday night," Liz explained.

"You sure it’s a date?" Max asked her. He didn’t want to see Liz set herself up only to get let down.

"Well if it isn’t in the beginning it will be by the time the night is over," she winked thinking about all the things she wanted to try with Kyle.

Max sighed, "You're not ready."

"Of course I am," Liz objected.

"Liz, a guy like Kyle isn’t going to be happy with a bit of foreplay for very long. Two dates at the most, and he’ll expect to hit home," Max told her.

"Who said I wasn’t planning on letting him hit home?" she asked annoyed.

Max was supposed to be helping her, so why wasn’t he happy about this? And better yet, why wasn’t he trying to help her rather than blowing holes in all her plans?

Max snorted, "Yeah I’m sure Kyle will find breaking your virginity real fun."

"I thought guys liked popping cherries?" Liz asked.

"Some of us do," Max grinned and let his hands slide up Liz’s body and grasp her tiny waist.

Max’s hands continued to creep up Liz’s body until he was cupping her tits in his hands.

"Are you one of those guys?" Liz asked huskily.

Max nodded, his eyes never leaving Liz’s.

"I thought you said I wasn’t ready," she whispered.

"Well you could have done with a few more weeks of foreplay, but if your really insisting on going on this date on Saturday night, then we can move things along," he replied as he tweaked her nipples between his fingers.

"Yes," Liz hissed.

Max let one tit go and cupped Liz’s mound. "You want me to make you cum with my hard cock?" he asked.

His cock was hard and he ground his hips against Liz's to make his point.

"Ahh Max, yes," Liz moaned as she started to grind against him. Max smirked and slid a finger under her panties to see how wet she was.

"When?" Max asked then.

"Now!" Liz demanded. Max somehow managed to turn her on fire with the smallest of touches.

"How about tonight?" He suggested instead.

Liz nodded enthusiastically.

"Why don’t you go get ready," Max suggested. "I’ll organize a nice dinner and you can wear something sexy," he told her.

Max was still rubbing her mound and all Liz could do was moan, "Yes Max."

"I’m going to rock your world tonight, Princess," he said and with one more stroke of her mound and a pinch of her nipple he removed his hands.

It took Liz a few seconds to get herself back together.

"Something sexy... right," she said as she crawled of Max’s body and made her way out of his room.

Somehow, the whole planning of losing her virginity seemed a very 'Liz' like thing to do, and the total opposite of what she expected of Max. Eventually she had given into the idea of being with Max, he always made her feel so good and she came to the realization that he was probably the perfect person to have sex with. He would teach her to be an accomplished lover, and ensure that she had all the tools to pleasure someone, to pleasure Kyle.

Going to her room, Liz started to raid her lingerie drawer to find something sexy. When she saw the black leather bustier set with matching thong she knew she had hit the jackpot. This was exactly what she had in mind the day she bought it; she knew that it was a Max type of thing.

So taking Max’s advice, she decided to take a shower where she planned on washing, conditioning and curling her hair. Shaving her legs, under arms and bikini line. She wished she had gone ahead and gotten that Brazilian she had been working up the courage to get, but in the end decided she’d do it before her date with Kyle at the end of the week.

Meanwhile Max had also taken a shower and was now in the process of changing his sheets. He pulled out the new black silk sheets he had purchased a week ago and placed them on his king size bed in preparation of tonight. Then he took a few candles from the lounge room and placed them around his bedroom hoping it would add something special to the room later. He still wanted Liz’s first time to be special, and for a second even contemplated if he was doing the right thing.

Maybe he should let her share her first time with Kyle. Max didn’t really know the guy, he only suspected his intentions, and they probably weren’t far off from his own when he had started this whole thing. After all, Liz was only sleeping with him to get experience so that she could please Kyle... wasn’t she? She wasn’t attracted to him or had feelings for him.

"You don’t have feelings for her either," Max reminded himself, but it sounded empty even to his own ears. "Get real Evans, admit it to yourself, you like her!"

Max wasn’t sure when it happened or how, but he had come to enjoy Liz’s company and he couldn’t deny that he was very attracted to her. But who wouldn’t be? Liz was gorgeous and sexy as hell, he couldn’t believe that this Kyle guy hadn’t seen it before.

"But neither did you," the little voice in his head reminded him.

He was also nervous as hell about tonight, he hadn’t had sex in weeks. Ever since Liz had begun to return his advances and reciprocated the pleasure, he hadn’t really felt the need, that and his usual girls weren't really doing anything for him lately. Max knew that after Saturday night everything would change. Liz would be with Kyle, most likely having sex, and she wouldn’t need or want him anymore.

Max sighed and shook away his thoughts. "Better go organize something for dinner."

***

"Wow!" Liz gasped when she walked out of her bedroom and into their living area.

The table was set for two and the lights were dimmed, with candles set in the middle of the table.

"Hey," Max greeted.

"Hey," Liz smiled shyly and tucked a piece of hair behind her ear, a sign of how nervous she was feeling.

Max took in her appearance and smiled, she was only wearing a simple black slip dress, but she looked gorgeous.

"You look beautiful," he said before he could stop himself.

Liz blushed. "Thank you. You look very nice too," she acknowledged.

Max was wearing a pair of black pants and a tight black sweater, which showed of his perfectly toned body.

"Thanks," he smiled. "I ordered Thai," he informed her. "I hope that’s ok."

"My favourite," she informed him with a smile.

They sat down and took turns serving themselves from the selection Max had ordered. There was an awkward silence between them so Max shovelled food in his mouth.

"This is really nice, thank you for doing this," Liz told him.

"Um, your welcome," Max said. "It’s your first time and I want you to enjoy it."

Liz grinned. "I have a feeling I’m going to more than enjoy it," she told him knowing that what he would do to her body later would be nothing short of wonderful.

"You will, but I wanted it to be a little romantic for you," Max replied smugly.

Once they were finished with dinner Max quickly rinsed their dishes and cleaned up whilst Liz visited the bathroom for a final check.

She looked at herself in the mirror and smiled. God she couldn’t wait for this, she knew she was ready and she was even glad that it was Max, which surprised her the most.

Max waited in his room for Liz. He lit the candles and put on some sexy music hoping to set a comfortable mood. He was doing a double check so he didn’t notice when Liz had approached the door.

Liz smiled when she saw the room and she took a deep breath before she stepped in.

"Max," she whispered.

Max turned, startled by the sound of her voice and his eyes went wide.

"Liz, wow," he whispered.

Liz was standing before him looking sexy as hell in the leather bustier and tiny thong.

"God help me," Max mumbled.

A/N: Wow thank you guys so much, i don't think i've ever gotten so many bumps before on a fic. Thank you also for your feedback. Welcome to all the new readers and lurkers, stop by and say hi.

I'm sorry I'm not updating more than once a week. RL has just been so hectic lately and I'm not getting enough written. I hope you enjoy this new part

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Eight

With confidence that she never knew she had Liz began to walk sexily towards Max.

Max’s eyes never left hers once, and it was only when Liz was standing inches in front of him that he raised them to meet hers.

"You like?" she whispered.

Max pounced then. Instead of answering Liz verbally, he attached his mouth to hers and showed her with every caress of his lips, and swipe of his tongue just how much he liked her, and her sexy little outfit.

Liz was surprised when she felt herself fall onto his bed. When she looked up, Max was standing above her pulling the tight black sweater over his head and revealing his gorgeous toned body.

His hands moved to the buttons on his pants then, but before he could get them open Liz’s small hand covered his.

"Let me?" she requested. Max nodded and removed his hand.

Liz rubbed her hand teasingly over the evident bulge as she lowered the zipper on Max’s pants, and afterwards she popped the button. The pants fell down around Max’s ankles, leaving him in only his black boxer briefs.

"We match tonight," Liz murmured as she licked her lips whilst she stared at the evidence of his arousal.

Max stepped out of his pants and crawled onto the bed. "We certainly do," he murmured, his own eyes devouring her almost naked body.

Liz laid back down on the bed and Max quickly covered her small body with his own.

His hands and mouth were everywhere, starting with Liz’s mouth. Max paid special attention to it, kissing her hard and passionately doing his best to devour her with every stoke of his tongue.

His mouth then moved to her ear, taking the small lobe into his mouth he sucked on it while his hand rubbed sensually up and down her sides until he felt goose bumps form on her skin.

"God Max!" Liz moaned as his kisses headed south. The kisses were wet on the skin of her neck until Max reached her pulse point. From there he buried his face in her uplifted breasts and nuzzled them with his nose.

"God you look hot," he whispered huskily as he pulled back to get a better look at her.

"Max please," Liz pleaded as he continued to just stare at her.

"Please what?" he asked.

"Touch me," Liz cried.

"Where?" Max smirked.

"Here?" he asked as he cupped a breast over the leather bustier.

"Or here?" he asked as his other hand cupped her mound over her thong.

"Oh don’t stop!" Liz cried.

"Which one first?" Max asked.

"Suck my tits first," Liz whispered.

Max nodded and lifted Liz off the bed until she was straddling his lap. His hands quickly and expertly unfastened the bustier at the back until it was loose enough that he could lift it over Liz’s head.

Once the bustier was gone Max leant in and took a ripe nipple into his mouth, he swirled his tongue around it before he bit down gently causing Liz to cry out.

While his mouth worked magic on one breast Max cupped the other, his fingers pinching the nipple until it was hard and ready for his mouth.

"God Max that feels so good," Liz moaned her approval.

"It’s about to feel better," Max promised as a hand slid down Liz’s body and beneath her legs.

Liz immediately bucked when Max’s finger glided along her slit underneath her thong.

Max groaned when he felt how wet and ready she already was for him. Sometimes he couldn’t believe that this was really the same girl that had moved in with him only a few months ago. The girl who was so unsure of herself and had no idea how to score the guy she had been crushing on for years. Now she could bring him to his knees with just one look, just one touch.

"Max please," Liz begged again.

"Lie down," Max ordered and Liz wasted no time obeying him.

Once Liz was settled Max hooked two fingers into the sides of her thong and pulled it down her legs, throwing it onto the floor. He settled between her legs but he didn’t touch her right away, much to Liz’s frustration.

"Do you want me to eat you?" he asked huskily, his eyes locked on Liz’s.

"Max…" Liz pleaded.

"Tell me Liz, do you want me to eat your pussy?" he asked.

"Yes!" Liz cried.

Max smirked as he settled between her legs. He loved hearing Liz beg for his touch, for the feel of his mouth on her but he was also aware that she could easily turn the tables on him too. He used two fingers to open her up before he thrust his tongue inside her as hard and deep as he could.

"OH YES!" Liz cried as her hips lifted from the bed to meet Max’s eager mouth.

He continued to use his tongue to fuck her for a while before he replaced his tongue with two fingers and moved his mouth over her clit.

"Oh god Max I’m cumming!" she cried as she thrust her hips against Max’s face and hands.

When Max felt her walls begin to flutter around his fingers he replaced them with his tongue again and when Liz came, she came in Max’s mouth, her juices flowing freely.

Max didn’t give Liz the chance though to come down from her high. He slipped his boxers off his body before he slid up Liz’s body and settled between her legs.

Liz immediately wrapped her legs around his waist, when she felt his cock against her. Her hips began to move slowly against him, she wanted him inside of her so badly.

Max took her mouth again, but this time it wasn’t fast, it was soft and sensual. He coaxed her tongue into a duel, and he didn’t pull back until he had needed air.

"Are you sure?" he asked Liz.

Liz nodded eagerly and then watched as Max pulled back and reached for something on the bedside table. He used his mouth to rip the foil package, and Liz watched wide-eyed as he took the latex and rolled it down his long hard cock.

Once it was on, Max settled on top of Liz again and guided his cock towards her pussy. He rubbed the tip of it teasingly against her before he slipped it inside.

"Max," Liz moaned.

"This is going to hurt Princess," Max warned in a strained voice. It was taking every bit of will power not to thrust inside of her in one smooth stroke.

"Make it quick," she whispered and Max checked her face and her eyes, to make sure she was serious. When he saw that she was, he pulled back and plunged inside of her, breaking her barrier and taking her virginity.

"Ahh!" Liz cried out.

"I’m sorry," Max whispered over and over again as he peppered her face with kisses.

Liz felt tears spring to her eyes but to her surprise it wasn’t from the pain it was because Max was being so sweet. The pain subsided quickly and she moved against Max experimentally.

When Max felt Liz move he rocked inside of her gently.

"Max," Liz moaned. The small movement felt so good and she wanted more.

Max pulled back and began to thrust inside of Liz gently. It didn’t take long for Liz to begin to move with him and soon she had her legs wrapped around his waist.

"God Princess, you feel so good, so tight," Max groaned.

"Yes Max!" Liz cried as he hit a particularly sensitive spot.

Liz could sense her orgasm approaching and she began to thrust against Max harder.

"Harder Max!" she cried.

Max granted her plea eagerly, thrusting inside of her harder and deeper and he was soon rewarded with the sweet sound of Liz’s voice as she came. Her walls contracted around him and Max groaned as Liz’s already tight walls hugged his engorged cock even tighter. He didn’t know how much more he could take.

"Yes Max! OH GOD YES!" Liz cried.

With one more powerful thrust Max’s own orgasm was triggered, and with a strangled cry, "Ahh Liz!" he jerked and emptied himself.

"God Max," Liz whispered as Max collapsed against her. "That was amazing."

Max chuckled as he nuzzled his nose in the crook of Liz’s neck. "You liked that?"

Liz smiled, "Yeah I did," she whispered. She had liked it more than she ever dreamed and she couldn’t wait to do it again, and she couldn’t wait to do it again with Max.

"Your right about one thing," Max told her as he pushed off her body and slid out of her depths. "It was pretty amazing," he grinned at her.

Max had honestly expected their first time together to be awkward since it was Liz’s first time, but it was the total opposite. She felt so good against him, he fit inside of her so perfectly, and he knew that it wouldn’t take long before the sex got even more explosive.

Max rolled on to his side then and discarded the full condom before he opened his arms and welcomed Liz back into them.

"Do you feel ok?" he asked, concerned that he might have hurt her.

"I’m a little sore but it will pass," she replied as she ran a hand up and down his chest.

Max felt his cock begin to stir again to his surprise, and he leaned down and captured Liz’s mouth.

Liz climbed onto his body and returned his kiss eagerly.

Her small hands rubbed his toned chest wherever she could touch as her small body moved over him.

"Hmm that’s enough tonight," Max whispered regretfully when he pulled back.

"No," Liz whispered her hand moving down Max’s body until she had cupped his balls.

"Princess we have plenty of time," Max argued. He knew that she might feel ok at the moment but he knew she would be in too much pain to make love again that night.

"I have plenty of positions I have to show you yet," He whispered huskily. "I’m going to teach you to ride cock like a professional."

"Max," Liz moaned as she felt herself grow wetter. Her hand moved to his cock and she began to stroke it. Liz wanted him again and she wasn’t prepared to take no for an answer.

"God Liz," Max groaned. Any will power he had to stop her was disappearing quickly.

Liz rolled onto her back and pulled Max with her. In seconds Max had slid inside of Liz again.

"Fuck me Max," she begged. She was feeling a little bit of discomfort but the pleasure out weighed that 100 to 1.

Max thrust inside of Liz hard and fast while his mouth feasted on her breasts.

"Let me on top," Liz pleaded.

"God yes!" Max moaned completely excited about the idea of Liz’s astride him. He rolled on to his back taking Liz with him. She slid down his cock a little hesitantly and began to rock slowly and unsurely until Max began to thrust up into her.

Max placed his large hands on Liz’s waist and helped her to rise up and down on top of him.

"God Max, I feel so full!" Liz cried out surprised at the difference in positions.

"Do you like it?" Max smirked.

"Yes!" Liz cried.

Max reached between Liz’s legs and began to rub her clit and was soon rewarded by the feel of her walls tightening around him.

"Yes Max! YES, YES, YES!" she cried out as she came, before collapsing exhausted on top of him.

Max raised his legs and thrust into Liz a few more times before he felt his own release trigger.

"God Liz…..Ahh!" he cried out.

They both lay collapsed on the bed entangled around each other.

"We didn’t use anything then, is that ok?" Max asked as he slipped from Liz’s depths.

"Um yeah," Liz replied too exhausted to open her eyes.

Max new that Liz would be asleep with minutes so he pulled the sheet over their cooling bodies and pulled Liz back into his arms.

"Hmm thank you," Liz whispered with a smile on her face.

Max smiled back and kissed her gently, "You’re welcome Princess."

A/N: HI guys, thanks so much for your wonderful feedback

It's funny how many of you mentioned the "they didn't use protection second time around" thing. Over at Write On we had a discussion about the whole should you or should you not worry about talking about using protection. I'll have to let everyone know that people do notice lol.

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Nine

"So, you and Kyle?" Maria questioned Liz while they looked through clothes at their favourite clothing shop the next day.

Liz shrugged, "We’re going out on Saturday night," she replied.

Liz really wanted to confide in her best friend about the previous night. Sex with Max had been fantastic, actually it had been better than fantastic. And it would be great if she could tell Maria about her first time, but Liz knew that she wouldn’t approve.

"What are you doing?" Maria asked her.

"We’re just going to hang out," Liz informed her.

"Ok," Maria sighed. Personally she didn’t see what Liz saw in her boneheaded stepbrother. Maria saw the way he treated the girls he dated and she didn’t want Liz to be one of those girls. Liz was a special person, she was innocent, and Maria knew that a bad experience with Kyle could shatter her best friends heart.

"You could do so much better that Kyle," Maria pointed out.

"Like who?" Liz asked. Maria always said stuff like that, but it wasn’t like there was a long line of quality guys chasing her down.

"Well your room mate for one," Maria pointed out.

Liz frowned at Maria. "Why him?" she asked.

"Cause he’s the hottest guy I’ve ever met," Maria replied.

"Don’t let Michael hear you say that," Liz told her.

"Like he’d care," she shrugged.

"You don’t know Max, Maria. How do you know that he’s any better for me than Kyle?" Liz asked. She was intrigued as to what Maria would say.

Liz hated to admit it but she had started to develop feelings for Max. The other night when they had made love it had been so much more than Liz had ever expected. Max had been so caring and sweet and he made her feel so good. She knew it was stupid. Max obviously just felt sorry for her and that’s why he was helping her out. But she wouldn’t let herself get caught up in her feelings for Max, instead she would focus on Kyle.

"You’re right. I don’t know him but I do know Kyle and if you think your going to be the one who snags him and tames him, then you are sadly mistaken," Maria warned her knowing exactly what Liz was thinking. She thought her clothes and flirtiness would win Kyle over, and then he would realize how special she is. Maria knew better.

Liz stopped and stared at Maria. "I might be," she told her.

Maria scoffed, "Sweetie, I know you like him but trust me, Kyle isn’t ready to settle down and not you or anyone is going to make him until he is. Find yourself a nice guy, not a player."

Liz shook her head and walked off on Maria not wanting to hear her opinions any longer.

***

Max was sitting on the lounge in boxers eating cereal when Liz stormed into the apartment.

He raised an eyebrow at her entrance. "Hi," he said.

Liz’s face softened when she noticed him and she smiled. "Hi," she replied back.

Max placed the bowl on the ground beside him and opened his arms for Liz, and she eagerly fell onto his lap.

"How was shopping?" he asked.

Max had been a little disappointed when Liz had hopped out of his bed that morning to meet Maria to go shopping. They had made love three times, but if he had his way they would have stayed in bed all day until they had exhausted each other all over again. He couldn’t get enough of Liz and it scared the crap out of him.

"It was ok," Liz told him.

Max stroked her arm innocently a few times until Liz lifted her head and crushed her mouth down against his.

Her small hands traced his sculpted stomach muscles for a few minutes before she turned so that she was straddling his lap.

"Did you miss me today?" she whispered as she kissed his strong jaw.

Max began to grind his hardness into her, "Can’t you tell?" He smirked.

"Oh yes, yes I can," Liz moaned.

Max’s hands worked frantically to move her top aside and then popped her tits out of her bra. He leaned in and took a rosy nipple into his mouth and sucked on it.

"Oh Max Yes!" Liz cried out, applying pressure to the back of his head so that he didn’t let her go.

Max took more of her sweet mound into his mouth before swapping to the other and doing the same.

"I want you," He told her grinding his hips against her again.

"Yes," Liz moaned.

Max rubbed his hands up Liz’s thighs and inched her short shirt up even higher until he could see her panty-covered mound. He rubbed a finger over her teasingly.

"I want you to ride my cock," he told her.

"Yes," Liz agreed.

Max helped her up and Liz quickly pulled her panties down her legs, whilst Max pulled his boxers off before they resumed their earlier position.

Max stroked Liz a few times to ensure she was ready for him before he helped her rise above him and slowly inch down on his hard cock.

"Oh fuck yes," Max groaned.

"Your so fucking tight Liz," he told her.

"Oh Max, Yes!" Liz cried as he filled her up completely.

They rocked against each other slowly for a few minutes before Max placed his hands on Liz’s hips and helped her rise off him, till only the tip of Max’s cock was still inside her before she sunk back down.

"That’s it Princess," Max encouraged. "Ride my cock," he added huskily.

"Your cocks soooo big, Max," Liz purred. "You fill me up and make me feel so good," she moaned.

Max began to thrust his hips against Liz’s in return. Liz was riding him with more confidence now and her tits were bobbing in front of his face turning him on even more.

Liz threw her head back as she began to lift herself up and down Max’s cock faster.

"That’s it Liz," Max moaned. "Own my cock," he encouraged her.

"Fuck it so good," he continued.

Max cupped her breasts in his hands and played with her nipples as Liz continued to bring them closer and closer to the edge.

"Does that feel good Liz, do you like riding me cock?" Max asked her.

"God yes, I love your cock Max," Liz replied.

She arched her back further changing the angle of penetration slightly, so now every stroke felt deeper and she chanted Max’s name like a mantra.

"That’s it baby!"

"Oh god Max, I’m coming, Yes,Yes, Yes!" Liz screamed out as her walls fluttered around Max’s cock.

Max thrust into her hard before he jerked and emptied himself inside of her too, collapsing against the lounge with Liz against his chest.

"Does it just keep getting better and better?" Liz asked a few minutes later, after they had both recovered slightly.

Max chuckled, "Well it gets better with practice, and trying different positions and places adds to it too," he told her.

In the two years he had lived in the penthouse this was the first time that Max had had sex in the living room, or on the lounge but he made a mental note to do it a lot more often and hopefully with Liz.

"So you liked that?" Max asked her.

"Ah huh," Liz nodded. "It felt so different."

"Yeah," he agreed as he pushed a piece of stray hair out of her face.

"What other positions are good?" Liz asked then.

"Well there is doggy, where I take you from behind whilst your on all fours, a particular favourite of mine," Max whispered huskily. "Or a variation that I like, I could also bend you over something and fuck you from behind."

Liz moaned as she felt Max harden inside of her again.

"God I can’t get enough of you," Max groaned right before he attacked Liz’s mouth again and a few seconds later he lifted himself and Liz out of the chair and marched towards his bedroom where he planned on fucking her all night.

***

Liz looked around the bar as she entered trying to find a familiar face. She was supposed to be meeting Maria and Michael here for a drink but the place was packed and she was having a hard time trying to find them.

She got shoved from behind when a group of guys tried to enter the club and she would have fallen if two strong hands hadn’t appeared out of nowhere and grabbed her. The hands pulled her against a hard body and Liz let out a sigh of relief.

"What are you doing here by yourself Princess?" the voice whispered in her ear.

Liz smiled when she recognized the voice.

"Meeting friends," she replied, still not turning around to face him.

There were hundreds of people in the bar but none of them were paying any attention to them.

"Kyle?" Max questioned, his back stiffening.

He had come to the bar to have a few drinks with some of his mates when he had seen Liz enter. When he saw her getting shoved out of the way by a herd of guys his first instinct was to get up and punch one of them, but those thoughts quickly disappeared when he realized Liz was on the verge of falling, so he rushed to her side to catch her.

Liz thought she sensed a change in Max when he mentioned Kyle, but then shook the thought away as being stupid.

Shaking her head she answered, "No Michael and Maria."

Max let her go slowly and Liz spun around to face him, "Have you seen them?" she asked.

"No sorry," Max shook his head.

Liz bit her lip as she took another look around the packed out room. She didn’t know what to do, she was running a little late so maybe they had left? Or maybe they were also running late.

"Why don’t you come and sit with me?" Max suggested and gestured to the table he had come from.

"Are you sure?" Liz asked. The table was full of guys that Liz recognised from around campus but didn’t know.

Max took her smaller hand in his and began leading her back to the table.

"Positive. Come on," he said.

The guys all looked up when Max helped Liz into the booth they were occupying, some of them ever raised an intrigued eyebrow at Max.

"Guys this is Liz, Liz these are the guys," Max introduced with a boyish grin.

"Hi," Liz waved.

"Hey Liz," they all chorused in return.

Three Beers later Liz was like one of the guys enjoying a joke. Inside Max was over the moon that Liz was getting along with his mates so well, and he couldn’t help himself from resting his hand on her thigh under the table, and since Liz didn’t remove it he assumed she was okay with it too.

***

"God I hope Liz is ok," Maria mumbled as she rushed into the crowded bar. Somehow Michael had convinced her that they had enough time to go home to their apartment for a quickie before meeting Liz.

A half an hour later they were late and Maria was furious with Michael.

"Would you hold on Blondie, she probably would have gone home when she realized we weren’t here," Michael told her.

"For your sake Space boy, I hope your right," she warned.

Maria looked around frantically when she entered and was surprised when she spotted the long brown tresses of her best friend.

She rushed over with out a thought. "Oh god Liz, there you are. I was so worried about you, I’m so sorry we’re late it was all Michaels fault," Maria rambled.

All the people at the table stopped surprised at the blonde.

"It’s ok Maria," Liz assured her.

"Hi Maria," Max spoke up.

Maria turned and noticed her best friends room mate for the first time. "Max, Hi," she smiled. She noticed immediately how close Liz and Max were sitting and she winked at her friend in approval.

"Why don’t you join us?" Max suggested.

"Oh, Michaels with me," she replied as she gestured over her shoulder to Michael who was making his way over to them after finally catching up with her.

"He can join us too," Max told them.

"Are you sure?" Maria asked.

"Positive."

In the end most of the guys Max and Liz were sitting with had to take off anyway so Maria and Michael joined Liz and Max in their booth. Liz was surprised at how well Michael and Max actually got along once they started talking, and also because of how happy it made her.

Liz knew she was developing feelings for Max but now she was starting to wonder if it was more than that. Was it possible that she was falling for him?

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Ten

When Max woke up the next morning he was in bed alone. After they had left the pub the night before he had spent hours fucking Liz all over the penthouse before they ended up in his bed. He had never been like this with any women before but the more he had Liz the more he wanted her. He hated to think about the upcoming date she would be going on with Kyle in a couple of nights.

Max rolled out of bed and pulled on a pair of boxers before he went in search of Liz. It was Friday so he knew she didn't have an early class today.

He poked his head out into the living room and kitchen and found it empty, so he made his way towards Liz's room. He smiled when he heard the shower running and the boxers he had just put on found their way down his legs again as he slipped into Liz's bathroom naked and into the shower with her.

Liz was startled when Max's arms wrapped around her from behind, his hard body pressing against hers showing her how much he wanted her already.

"Morning," she sighed as her head dropped back against his shoulder.

Max leaned forward and kissed her before he pulled back and smiled, "Morning."

"You're up early," he added.

"I have a lot to do today," Liz informed him. "I can't lie in bed with you all day," she added with a smirk.

"Who said anything about lying?" Max whispered. His large hands then crept up her body until he was cupping her breasts. He reached forward with one hand and squirted some of her coconut body wash into his hands before he began to massage the suds into her breasts.

"OH Max!" Liz moaned.

Her nipples puckered easily as Max's hands worked them like magic. "Does that feel nice?" He asked her.

Liz's eyes were shut and her breathing was short and ragged. Max slid a hand down, caressing her abdomen until he found his goal. Tracing her lips with a single finger, he dipped it gently inside and both Liz and Max moaned at the same time. Liz from arousal and Max because of her arousal.

"Take me Max," she begged, her bottom rubbing against his growing cock.

Her words shot through Max's veins spurring him on. With one swift movement he turned Liz to face him, and pushed her against the wall with the weight of his body.

Both their mouths sought out the other. They kissed passionately until it became too much for both of them. Max cupped Liz's ass with his hands and hauled her up the wall until he could wrap her legs tightly around his body. His mouth trailed to her breasts and took her aching nipple into his mouth and sucked on it until Liz was crying out in bliss.

"Please Max, now!" She pleaded desperately.

Max nodded and pulled back slightly so he could line up his throbbing cock with Liz's waiting heat. He thrust inside of her in one powerful stroke, enjoying the sound of Liz's cry.

"Oh fuck, MAX!" She cried out over and over again as Max pounded into her against the wall.

Max was out of control, he was pounding into Liz as hard and deep as he could and he was ready to go out his mind with want. He could feel his release approaching fast but he didn't know if his legs would hold him up that long.

Reaching between them he began to stroke Liz's clit.

"Oh god, Max!" Liz cried out.

Liz was helpless. All she could do was hold on and enjoy the ride Max was giving her as he pounded into her. She felt her walls flutter before she harshly contracted around Max and let go.

"MAX!" She screamed out in pleasure.

Liz's walls tightening around him was all Max required, and letting go he thrust into her a few more times before he jerked and emptied himself harshly inside of Liz. A loud groan of approval falling from his lips.

Seconds after coming, Max released Liz slowly and allowed her to slide to the ground before he collapsed to the floor in exhaustion. The muscles in his legs burning from the intensity.

Liz slid down beside him, and eventually into his lap where she wrapped her arms around his neck, her legs around his waist, with their chests pressed together.

Neither knew how long they sat there but once the spray of water turned from warm to cold Max slowly disentangled himself and helped Liz out of the stall.

They both dried off quietly.

"Are you hungry?" Max's voice startled Liz, it felt like hours since he had spoken.

Liz smirked, "Starving!" She informed him.

"I'll fix us something for breakfast while you get changed," he told her before he made his way of the bathroom and into Liz's room where he left his boxers earlier.

After he left, Liz slowly dressed for class. For some reason she wasn't in the mood for her normal clothes of late and decided on a pair of jeans and a plain baby tee instead.

Max was surprised when she emerged. He had gotten used to the view of her long tanned legs in her little skirts. Today her hair was pulled back and she wasn't wearing any make up either.

Liz sat at the table and watched as Max made them scrambled eggs and toast. He was so gorgeous and she couldn't help but stare at him, something she was conscious of Max noticing.

"Here you go," he said quietly and placed the plate and a glass of juice in front of her.

"Thanks," she smiled.

Max sat across from her and met her stare back. Something had changed between them since yesterday and he couldn't quite put his finger on it.

"What are you doing tonight?" he asked her.

Liz shrugged, "Not much, why?"

Max placed his fork down and studied her. He knew this could either be the smartest move of his life or the dumbest and he assumed he would find out soon.

"I thought we could do something," he said.

"Like what?" Liz asked.

"Dinner maybe," he said. "And then hit this new club that just opened."

Liz smiled, it had been forever since she had been dancing. She and Maria used to go often but Michael hated it and so they went less and less now.

"Sure, " she smiled.

"Great," Max replied his smile matching hers.

He stood up then. "I'll see you tonight, Princess," he told her before he swiftly made his way out of the kitchen and into his room.

Liz smiled as she watched him go, not quite sure what was happening but glad all the same.

***

Liz had been so preoccupied with what was happening with Max for the past day or so that she completely forgot about her date with Kyle.

"Hey Liz," he greeted as he sat down across from her.

"Kyle!" She said surprised, "Hi!"

She hadn't seen him since they had made the date, and suddenly she wasn't as excited about it as she was at the time.

"We still on for Saturday night?" He asked with a smile.

Liz found her self nodding and smiling back. God she loved that smile, it could melt ice, she thought.

"Yeah," she told him.

"Great, any idea what you want to do?" Kyle asked her.

"I'm not really worried, you decide," she told him.

"Ok," he agreed. "I'll think of something good," he added then with a wink. He never thought he'd be taking Liz out on a date but she had certainly changed lately and he couldn't resist the temptation. He knew he had to be careful though because she was Maria's best friend, and if he hurt her Maria would kill him.

"Hey guys," Maria greeted as she joined them.

"What are we talking about?" she asked curious.

The night before had been a real eye opener for Maria. It was the first time she had spent any time with Liz's mysterious roommate, and the first time she had ever seen Liz behave the way she had. Liz was so care free and confident around Max, and the way the two of them looked at each other made Maria feel like she was intruding on something.

"Our date," Kyle told her.

"Oh," Maria frowned.

It was obvious to Maria that there was something going on with Liz and Max. Or at the very least, they had feelings for each other and just wouldn't admit it, so why the hell was Liz going on a date with Kyle?

"Where are you going?" she asked.

"Not sure yet," Kyle advised her and quickly gathered his stuff.

"Right," Maria rolled her eyes. More likely Kyle had no idea where to take a girl like Liz, and would be hounding her about it later.

"So Liz, what are you doing tonight?" Maria asked. "I thought maybe we could have a girls night," she smiled.

It had been a while since they had done something like that, and it seemed like a great way for Maria to get gossip on Liz's very hot roommate.

"Oh," Liz frowned. "I can't, sorry."

"Oh ok," Maria tried to smile. "I should have realized you'd be busy."

"Its not that," Liz said feeling awkward. Sure she had plans with Max, and she didn't want to break them but she didn't want Maria to think that she wasn't important.

"I'm just hanging out that's all," she said.

Maria's eyes narrowed, "Who with?"

Liz shot a look at Kyle and then a pleading look to Maria, "You know I'm just hanging around the apartment and stuff."

Kyle frowned. "That sounds really boring Liz," he told her.

"Yeah Liz," Maria grinned. She had caught on to what Liz was saying.

"No I mean I'll probably watch a DVD or something," Liz shrugged.

"By yourself?" Maria asked.

Liz sent a glare at Maria. "Why don't you come to a party with me instead?" Kyle offered.

"No, thanks Kyle, but I'll really be fine. I'm just hanging with Max and stuff," she admitted.

"Your roommate?" Kyle frowned.

Liz shifted in her seat. "Yeah," she nodded.

"I didn't think you two got along?" he seemed confused.

"Yeah me either," Maria smirked enjoying watching Liz squirm.

"We get a long ok now, which is why we're hanging out tonight. So I'm sorry Maria, maybe next week?" Liz suggested.

"Sure," Maria smiled.

Besides, Maria liked Max and she wasn't going to get in the way of their hang out time.

Liz gathered her stuff then desperate to get away from Maria and Kyle before they could ask any more questions.

"So I'll see you tomorrow night Kyle?"

"Yeah around seven," Kyle replied with a nod.

"Talk to you later Maria," Liz added.

Both Maria and Kyle stared after Liz's retreating figure both with very different thoughts.

Kyle was determined to find out what the go was with this Max guy that Liz was living with. He didn't like the way Liz had acted when she was talking about him. Whilst on the other hand, Maria was just praying that Liz could see how much better Max was for her then Kyle.