Roswell Fanatics

Title: Love or Money ???

Author: Franny

Category: M/L

Rating: Teen

Authors note:
hey guys, I’m new to the site and don’t really know my way around but I just had an idea for a story and wanted to see what everyone thought ... so what do u think ???

Declaimer:
i do not own any rights to roswell...

Summary:
Liz is a small town girl with big dreams ...
Max is a hot shot millionaire with his eye on the prize...
but will he tell her the truth & if he does will she choose money or love ???


Money or Love ???

CHAPTER 1



LIZ P.O.V


" Liz" Maria shouts straight into my ear.

"What" i say just in time to see her coming into the backroom with a tray of plates.

"i need you to do me the biggest favour" she say while placing the tray on the sink for me to wash ... like i would.

"What" i say rolling my eyes, lets just say this is not the first time she has asked me for a favour... no, unfortunately there was that time back in high school when Ben Shepard, captin of the football team kept hitting on her and she was too shy to go and say " Fuck Off " so of course being the best friend that i am i had to do it.

Lets just say Mr. Brayon, my year 12 english teacher wasn't so fond of my new language ... 3 weeks detention.

"Liz are you even listening to me?" Maria screams while looking at me in a weird way.

NO ... i wanna say but decide to save myself the headache.

" Yes, what is the favour you so desperately need from me?" I say once again deciding to be sarcastic.

" Well, seen your parents are going out on the weekend i just thought ... "

"Thought what?" i say cuting in, i love the girl but sometimes she can get on my nerves.

" Well, iwannahaveaparty " she says so fast a normal person would not be able to understand, but me ... well lets just say i'v known the girl since i was 3 and i know everything.

" NO WAY MARIA " i shout at the top of my lungs.

" Come on Liz you finally get the house all to yourself, you have to do this, for me" she says and does puppy dog eyes, but i can see behind them. i see the evil that lies beneath.

" NO" i say.

There is no way i can have a party here ... even if i wanted to.

I mean i'm 21 years old and i still live with my parents, might i add IN A ALEN THEMED RESTAURANT. Did you just say patetic... well i know.

I tried my best to get into university but you see something happend and i guess it scared me for life ... well i droped out in the last days of year 12 and never looked back.

" Lizzzzzzzz PLEASE " I turn from the counter in the backroom kitchen and look at her... I mean honestly what does she think the fake tears are gonna do ... NOTHING.

I grab my order pad and leave the kitchen, going through the swinging door and into the restaurant.
I look behind me and see Maria still following me and think ... WILL THAT GIRL EVER GIVE UP.

I hear the jingle of the bells and know that theres a costomer, i turn around and i am shocked.

" Wow" i say under my breath just as Maria comes up behind me.

"You can say that again" she mumbles to me as i continue to look at the gorgeous young man who just sat down at booth 5.

" Well, i'll take spiky over there, but you can have mister tall, dark and handsom" says maria as she strides over to their table doing her best cat walk.

I snap out of my daze to see mister tall, dark and handsom looking my way. He smiles and i melt ... 'God he is sooooo sexy' I think to myself as i make my way over to their booth praying that i didn't just say that aloud.

" Why thankyou, you not to bad yourself" says his friend who is checking out Maria and turned to wink at me.

I freeze ... Oh My God, i did just say that aloud.

I stop in front of them and look over to spiky ( as Maria called him ... i guess it suit him, i mean he has brown hair and it is spiked up asif he just got electrocuted ).

" H-hi, can i t-take your order?" i ask like an idiot who doesn't know how to speak.

" My names Michael, but you can call me Mikey" he say while looking at Maria and licking his lips.
I turn to see Maria blushing like a idiot and i fell grateful that i am not alone in this world.

" So what can i get you Michael?" I say once i find my voice.

" How about a number?" he saiy still looking at Maria who was now turning purpal.

I turn to see mister tall, dark and handsom looking at me again.
He blushes and says "Sorry bout my friend, his sick ... literally".
He rolls his eyes and then focuses on me again only to see me blushing and sighing.

'Not only is he extremly gorgeous but his voice is soo sexy' i think and then realise i just said it out aloud.

I see Maria looking at me with a ' hahahaha' look on her face and i make a note to remember to kill her later.

" I like your voice too" he says and i turn around stund.

" Hey Maxwell, we gotta go" Michael say while looking at his watch.

I see Marias disappointed look and turn to her with the same expression.

Just when the're about to leave Maria say " Why don't you guy come back saturday night at around 7 o'clock" she says looking at me

" We're having a party and it should be fun, maybe you could bring your friends with you ... you know?" Maria says all while smiling and being calm while i am a nervous wreck.

" Sure sounds like fun " Michael say looking at Max ( as he called him before ... which i think is a perfect name for a perfect guy )

" Yeah, we'll be there" Max says looking in my direction and i suddenly feel a cold chill ran down my spin.

" So i guess i'll see you later" Max says as Michael drags him away.

" Yeah, i guess " i wisper under my breath.

I turn around to see Maria with a smile on her face and i'm guessing its because of the 'party' i'm having.

' What am i going to do ??? '

TBC








Thank you to every one who has read my story and replied ... hope you like Chapter 2, and plzzzz reply ...





CHAPTER 2



MAX P.O.V

I woke up to the sound of my alarm ringing in my ear … god I hate Michael for suggesting to get one.

Michael … his my best friend and if you’d ask I would say we’re more like family.
I’ve known him since I was 5 years old. His always been like the little brother I never had. The thing I love about the kid is that he doesn’t care that I’m rich and he didn’t care that my father was a total bastard.

My father … now there is one word I never want to say ‘FATHER’.
The thing about my dad is the money got to his head, but every kid loves his father… right.

Sometimes I think the only thing keeping me from ever seeing him again is my older sister Isabel, my dear mother and my job.
Yep that’s right I work in his million dollar company.

Sometimes I wish we weren’t as rich as we are maybe then I could have a normal relationship with a girl, and know that I don’t have to be worried that my bank book is going to go increasingly down.

My last relationship was about a year ago … yeah I know ridiculous, but what is even more ridiculous is that it was arranged but my father.
You see one of his ‘billion-dollar clients’, Ed Harding has a daughter and unfortunately I was too blind to know that she was a ‘ money- hungry Bitch’ … the first time I saw her my dad told me to get close to her and I did, but I fell for while she fell head-over-heels for a another guy.
Who … lets just say my cousin Kyle. That’s right don’t trust anyone.

If you saw me on the street you would think that I’m a rich millionaire with everything in the world … but I’m missing something and that’s love.

‘RING RING’

The sound of the phone ringing breaks my thoughts. And I roll over my king- size bed and lift my pillow over my head wishing whoever it is would just hang up.

“Maxwell, wake up” I hear Michael shouting.

Damn, I hate answering machines…

“MAXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX”

I lean over and grab the cordless phone.

“What do you want Michael” I say still trying to wake up.

“Just wanted to call and make sure we’re still going tonight, you know to the party that those hotties invited us to” he says and I swear I can see the grin on his face.

When we left that café ‘The Crashdown’ the other day, he couldn’t wipe the smile off of his face. All week he has been looking forward to it, even if he doesn’t say it.
I saw the way he was looking at that blond, and I have never seen that look before, even when he and Isabel were dating for a little while … might I add that it was very weird to see my sister with my best friend.
But its all cool now they decided to be friends … ‘THANK GOD’.

But all week long I haven’t been able to remove the thought of the cute brunette that kept saying her thoughts … I have never felt this way before and I am so glad that they invited us to the party tonight, so I can see her again … and maybe this time get her name and number.

“MAXXXX, are you even listening to me?” Michael begins to shout into the phone.

“Yes, I am and yes we are still going tonight.” I say as I put my thoughts of the very sexy brunette aside.

“Great, so you can cancel your meeting and pick me up at 6 o’clock” he says and I almost die … ‘My meeting’

“Ohh no, Michael I gotta go” I say as I hang up, while Michael is still trying to talk to me.

‘I have to go to work and cancel the meeting’


TBC




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CHAPTER 3




LIZ P.O.V

It’s Saturday morning and I am totally freaking out, I mean I’m having a party in my parent house but you could also say café without them knowing ... Oh My God their going to kick me out.

The party is 9 hours away and I’m already scared …

I see Maria come through the swinging door and into the backroom of The Crashdown, I don’t believe how calm she is … its like there’s nothing to hide.

I see Maria look at me and start to walk over top me and I remember yesterday when my parents left …

FRIDAY AFTERNOON

“Lizzie…” Nancy Parker said as she came into her daughters room with her bags packed and ready to go to Europe for their annual get together.

“Lizzie, honey are you sure you don’t want to come… its going to be fun” Nancy said while looking at her daughter who was lying on her bed.

Liz turned so that her feet were on the floor and she was facing her mother.

“No mum, I’ll be fine really” Liz said.

Liz didn’t want to go to the annual get together, infect she hated them… having to hear how well all her cousins are doing in university and how they all want to be someone later in live.

But the thing that bothered her the most was her cousin Tara Parker …
2 years ago Tara Decided to bring her boyfriend to the get together, were he proposed to her.

Ever since then when ever Liz goes to the get together everyone just has to ask when she will tie the knot and get married.

One year, Liz’s anti Marly invited her co-worker to their annual get together to try and get he and Liz together but it did not work and it was so bad that Liz has never gone to another get together since.

“Lizzie I can understand why you don’t want to come, but honey they are dieing to see you and to see how beautiful you are now” Nancy Parker continued to say as she watched her daughter dress for work.

“Well, I guess they can continue to wait” Liz said being rude.

“Well I will tell them you said hi, and Lizzie please call us everyday…and no parties” Nancy added as she left the room closing the door behind her.
“Hey chika” Maria says as she comes to stand beside me.

“What’s up?” she asks continuing to look at my dazed expression.

“Nothing, I was just thinking” I say as I walk into the kitchen and grab the pot of sugar and start to pour them in-one and out-the other.

“Liz is something wrong?” Maria asks Eyeing me suspiciously.

“Well not really, it’s just that Tara was right Maria, I am going no where in life and I just want that to change, I want to meet someone and I want to go to uni” I say finally getting it all out into the open.

“Liz, Can I ask a question?” Maria asks looking down at her hands and I begin to wonder.

“Sure” I say giving her to go for it.

“Why did you drop out of high school, when there was only 2 days left?” she says looking at me straight in the eyes.

“ Maria I don’t want to talk about it … ok” I say as I smash down the sugar containers and storm out of the kitchen and into the restaurant, to go a serve customs and pray that nobody will ever ask that question to me again.


TBC

Coming Soon





Title: Could Be Family

Summary:
Max and Liz met on the beach and it was love at first sight ...
But when its time to meet her parents, what happend when her father is your boss... and you ' Could Be Family' ???

Hey everyone, thanx for the replys ... and yes something seirous did happen to Liz to make her not want to continue school ... even if it was 2 days, but i wouldn't know eveything about what happens senior year.... hope you like the next chapters...



CHAPTER 4

MAX P.O.V

Its 6 o’clock and I’m on my way to Michaels, I have to pick him up because he has no car.

I can’t wait to get to the party and see my brunette angel.

I need to know her name and I need to know if she will be different. As I drive on I keep thinking if she has given this any thought, if she even felt anything that day at the café … and then I remember her speaking her mind and blush.

I pull up in front of Michaels and see him already outside and smile at how happy he looks, I know that smile is because of that bubbly blond we meet at the café and I hope things work out for them.

“Hey Max-a-million” he says as he jumps into my car and I glare at him.

“You know I don’t like that name” I say

It can get pretty annoying because its true.

“Sorry bro, so are we going or what?” he asks as I pull out of his drive way and head towards The Crashdown.

“So I take it you cancelled the meeting” he says as he looks at me and I cant help but think back to the meeting I had with my dad in order to cancel.


EARLIER TODAY

“Mr Evans, your son is here to see you” said the Mr Evans’s sectary.

“Send him in” Mr Evans said as he sat up at his desk wondering what this meeting could be about.

Mr Philip Evans was rich, very rich and he enjoyed to use it to the disadvantage of others.

He knew his son despised him but he didn’t really care, as long as he had his money he was powerful and he thought that his son Maxwell was very ungrateful.

“Maxwell” Philip said as Max came into his office and sat on the leather seat.

“Philip” Max said knowing it would piss him off.

“To what do I deserve this meeting?” Philip asked being very rude and obnoxious.

“I can’t come to the meeting later on today, so your gonna have to cancel” said Max looking anywhere but into his fathers eyes.

“Going to Max” Philip corrected

“And NO” he added smiling like an immature idiot.

“ Well I guess you’ll have a couple members less then” Max stated as the began to rise but stoped when Mr Evans said.

“Ohh No Maxwell, you are going to be there and if your not then your fried”

Max turned to him with a grin on his face and said.

“You wouldn’t fire me dad you don’t have the balls” Max said as he walked to the door before turning around and smiling before saying “oh and say hi to mum and Izzy for me”

“So are you looking forward to seeing that brunette?” Michael asked while looking at me with a smirk on his face and I just wanted to slap it off.

“Not as much as you want to see that bubbly blond” I say, lying… yes I want to see her and I’m dieing.

We pull up to The Crashdown and I start to get nervous …


TBC...





CHAPTER 5A

LIZ P.O.V

It’s 7 o’clock and The Crashdown is already full of people … I can’t believe I agreed to do this.

I look around for no reason … ok, fine I’m looking for mister tall, dark and handsom, I don’t see him and I begin to wonder maybe he isn’t coming, maybe he didn’t feel anything the other day and maybe he has a girlfriend.

Here I am bored at a party and 20 minuets ago I was so excited that I might actually se him again.

‘Well maybe I’ll just have to settle with telling Maria thankyou for the outfit but
… No’ I think as I look down at my clothes.

I am wearing a tight black mini skirt with a huge split and a cute red singlet top with open black high heels.

Just as I turn around to leave I hear …

“Hey babe, looking good” I turn around to see some guy talking to me holding his beer an eyeing me out.

“Thanks” I say as I begin to walk away, but he grabs me by my arm and drags me through the swinging doors …

TBC ....



I should be able to post a chapter everyday ... so i hope you enjoy the story and keep in mind that its my first ... ~Franny~

CHAPTER 5B

LIZ P.O.V

‘Oh My God … not again, please not again’ I think to myself as he ripps my singlet open and throw’s it to the flour.

“Hhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmm” I try to scream but his hand covers my mouth and I can barely breathe.

I bite his palm and kick his groin and scream as loud as I can but all I can hear is the music from the other side of the swinging door.

Ha ha ha
Pump it
Ha ha ha
And pump it (louder)

I try to make my way to the door hoping someone will see me, but I feel a hand grab me again and once again I am pinned on the work lockers, trying to fight back.

Turn up the radio
Blast your stereo
Right

I kick and scream praying that I would hit him hard enough to make a getaway, but it doesn’t work … I feel everything around me start to grow louder…

wanna hate on us (who)
wanna be envious (who)
And I know why they hatin' on us (why)
Cause that’s so fabulous (what)
I’ma be real on us (c’mon)
Nobody got nuttin' on us (no)
Girls be all on us, from London back down to the US

I feel his hand travel under my skirt and I feel the first of many tears run down my face.

We rockin' it (contagious), monkey business (outrageous)
Just confess, your girl admits that we the sh*t

Just as I am about to pass out a dark figure enter through the swinging door and sees what is going on … I try to scream again.

“Hmmmmmmmmmmm” I manage to get out.

F-R-E-S-H (fresh)
D-E-F, that’s right we def (rock)
We definite B-E-P, we rappin' it
So, turn it up (turn it up) [3x]
C’mon baby, just

The figure grabs him from behind and knocks him out before kicking the shit out of him … serves him right.



Pump it (louder)
And say, oh oh oh oh
Say, oh oh oh oh
Yo, yo
Turn up the radio
Blast your stereo
Right now
This joint is fizzlin'
It’s sizzlin'
Right

The figure come close enough for me to see his face and I notice mister, tall, dark and handsom … Max, before me looking at my injuries.

(Yo, check this out right here)
Dude wanna hate on us (dude)
Dude need'a ease on up (dude)
Dude wanna act on up
But dude get shut like flavor shut (down)
Chicks say, she ain’t down
But chick backstage when we in town (ha)
She like man on drum (fool)
She wanna hit n' run (errr)
Yeah, that’s the speed
That’s what we do
That’s who we be
B-L-A-C-K -E -Y-E-D-P to the E, then the A to the S
When we play you shake your ass
Shake it, shake it, shake it girl
Make sure you don’t break it, girl
Cause we gonna


“Are you ok there beautiful?” he asks with a concerned voice and I can only sigh.

“I don’t want to stay here” I say with a sob.

“Ok … you wanna come with me?” he asks with a hopeful look and I cant resist… even if I’m not in the best mood or situation.

Turn it up (turn it up)
C’mon baby, just
Pump it (louder)
And say, oh oh oh oh
Say, oh oh oh oh
Yo, yo
Turn up the radio
Blast your stereo
Right now
This joint is fizzlin'
It’s sizzlin'
Right
“Come on” he says while helping me up and I can’t help but feel his muscles from under his shirt.

Apl. de ap. from Philippines
Live and direct, rocking this scene
Waiting on down for the B-boys
And B-girls waiting, doin' their thing
Pump it, louder come on
Don't stop, and keep it goin'
Do it, lets get it on
Move it!


He helps me walk to through the back door but stops at the door and hands me my singlet, it riped so he takes off his jaket and says.

“You might get cold” while helping me put it on.

‘How can he be sweet and sexy all in one???’ I think to myself.

“Don’t know guess its just how I am” he says with a smirk knowing that I just spoke my thoughts.

La-da-di-dup-dup die dy
On the stereo
Let those speakers blow your mind
(Blow my mind, baby)
To let it go, let it go
Here we go
La-da-di-dup-dup die dy (c'mon, we're there)
On the radio
The system is gonna feel so fine
ya ya ya ya uh uh
Pump it (louder)
We make our way out of the back room and into the alley to his car…

TBC

Hope you like this chapter... i will be posting chapter 6 and maybe 7 tomorrow !!!

CHAPTER 6



MAX P.O.V

“Wow nice car” she says as we stop in front of my silver SUV.

“Thanks” I say as I look at her and smile.

When I walked into The Crashdown and didn’t see her I was scared that she wouldn’t show up, but as I started to walk around I heard noises coming from behind this swinging door and I saw her crying as some guy was touching her …trying to rape her.

I didn’t really know what to think but when I saw her try to get free I had to do something … like I said I have never felt this way before.

“Thankyou, you know for what you did back there” she says as she looks down at her hands as if she were ashamed of what happened.

“It was no big deal, what happened in there it wasn’t meant to and whatever he said or did it’s not your fault” I say and she looks at me with tears in her eyes and I want to kiss them away.

“I didn’t even know who he was and I shouldn’t have had that party” she said as she starts to cry again and I pull over so I can comfort her.

“What’s your name, or should I just call you beautiful?” I ask trying to help the situation.

“Liz …L-liz Parker” she says looking at me and I cant help but look back.

“Well Liz you’re the sweetest thing I’ve ever seen” I say and she blushes before asking me a question.

“What’s your name or should I just call you mister tall, dark and handsom?” she says and this time I don’t think it was an accident that she spoke her thoughts.

“Max, Max Evans” I say, praying that she wont run when she remembers that I am a millionaire.

“That’s a very nice name” she states and I look at her and she blushes lowering her head.

I think about telling her that I’m rich but I don’t instead I just continue to look at her and admire her beauty.

‘I think I’m falling in love’

TBC...


i hope you like the chapter... i might be posting chapter 7 later today, thankyou for all the reviews its gwd to know people like my story!!!
P.S. hey nessa, ronnie & teresa.

CHAPTER 7



LIZ P.O.V

Max pulls the car over and I look up to see where we have stoped. When I look up I see the most gorgeous park I have ever seen.

“Wow” I say as I continue to stare.

“Yeah wow” I hear Max say and I turn to see him looking at me and blush.

“You’re beautiful Liz” he says and I can’t believe it.

He turns and opens his door before stepping out and jogging around the car to the passenger side to help me out.

He holds out his hand for me to take and says “My lady”

I take his hand and we walk over to the swings, still hand-in-hand.

“Do you come here often?” I ask as I sit on a swing and feel his arms come around me and shiver.

“Yeah, I come her when I need to think” he states as he slowly begins to push me.

“Its beautiful” I say as I look around at the beautiful flowers and trees.

“Your beautiful” he says and I feel my heart start to race as his hand trails along my arm as he continues to push me.

“What do you do for a living, Max?” I ask trying to change the subject before I blush my head off.

“I’m in law” he says and I get up to look at him.

“How old are you?” I ask thinking that he is probably not my age and signing in defeat.

“23, how old are you beautiful?” he asks

“21” I say hoping he does not have a problem with 2 years.

He leans down and looks at my lips and I can’t help but do the same. My heart starts to race and my hands get sweaty as he leans down to capture my lips in a sweet kiss.

“Mmmm” I sigh

‘I take that as a no I don’t have a problem with 2 years’ I think

“No, I don’t have a problem with 2 years” he says looking at me with a sly grin because he can tell that I just spoke my mind.

“You must think I’m some kind of idiot, saying what I’m thinking all the time” I say as I lower my eyes in embarrassment.

“Actually no, I think its very cute …” he wraps his arm around my waist and adds “and sexy”

I lean up and capture his lips, this guy is driving me crazy and I barely know him.

‘I think I’m falling in love’


TBC ....

CHAPTER 8



MAX P.O.V

“So ummm … do you want to talk about it?” I ask as we walk hand-in-hand around the park.

“About what?” Liz asks me looking at me with a raised eyebrow.

“About what happened at The Crashdown” I say while stopping and looking in her direction.

I see her start to shuffle and it almost looks like she’s nervous.

“Liz is everything alright?” I ask in concern, I mean the look on her face at the moment is saying ‘catch me as I faint’.

“Its just a hard subject to bring up … you know?” she says looking down at her hands, I can tell that she is trying not to make eye contact with me, so I grab her hand and bring it to my lips.

“You can tell me anything, you can trust me” I state while kissing her hand and looking at her directly in the eyes.

“All I can say is this isn’t the first time, and I am very grateful that you were there to save me” she says and I feel a tingly feeling inside.

She starts to move forward so I take the opportunity to wrap me arm around her trim waist.

“My hero” she says before her lips crash to mine in a passionate kiss.

‘RING RING’

“Damn it” I scream as I pull away from Liz, trying my hardest to concentrate and answer my phone, while also trying to catch my breath.

I look at Liz and see her smile, and I cant help but smile back.

“Hello” I say into my phone impatiently.

“Max hey, how are you?” I hear Isabel my older sister … by 2 ½ minuets might I add.

“Hey Izzy” I say with a smile, its been a while since I last heard my sisters voice.

“So what are you doing Little bro?” she asks and I can just picture her with a smirk on her face as she calls me her ‘little bro’.

“I’m kind of busy right now Izz” I say and I hear a shocked sound come from the other end of the phone and dread my last words.

“You’re with a girl aren’t you?” she asks with a hint of excitement.

“Yes Izz, I’m with a girl” I say while looking at Liz and seeing her smile at my embarrassment.

Not to self … kiss that smile off her face.

“What’s her name?” I hear Izzy ask from the other end and I try to concentrate on our phone conversation and not the Beautiful brunette in front of me.

“Liz, her name is Liz and I have to go now Izzy” I say but I freeze when I hear her say “can I talk to her?” in a calm manner and I have no idea what to do.

I turn to see Liz standing in front of me with her hand out waiting for my mobile.

“I can handle this” she says with a smirk and I can’t help but chuckle at how cute she looks.

I hand Liz the mobile and regret it straight away … what happens if Izzy says something about me and all my money, what would Liz do?

“Hello” I hear Liz say into the phone and turn to see her sitting on a bench near by.

“Hi is this Liz?” I hear Izzy’s loud voice through the phone.

“Yes, this is” Liz says as I come and sit next to her, while joining our hands.

“You must be Max’s sister” Liz says as she squeezes my hand and gives me a sweet smile.

“Yes I am, I’m the older sister” I hear Izzy say while laughing and I see Liz crack up out of the corner of my eye.

“Well I should let you guys get back, to whatever it is your doing… it was nice talking to you Liz, you never know maybe someday I’ll get to meet you” I hear Izzy say before they say bye and Liz hands me my mobile.

“I told you I could handle it” she says with a cocky smile.

‘God I’m falling and I’m falling hard’



TBC...

Thanx for all the replies ... i would love to know if you like my story and if i should continue !!!

CHAPTER 9




LIZ P.O.V

“Thankyou for the lift” I say as he pulls up to The Crashdown.

I peer inside to see Maria and Max’s friend Michael cleaning and I thank god.

“It was no problem” he says while looking down at the wheel.

“Liz …”

“Max …”

We both say at the same time, we both let out a chuckle and stare at each other before he says.

“Liz I want to see you again” he says while taking my small hand in his large one and squeezing it.

“Are you asking me on a date Evans?” I ask as I look up into his eyes and see him looking back at me with hopeful eyes.

“Yes I guess I am” he says and I blush.

“Well the answer is yes” I say and I see him sigh in relief.

“Great umm, should we say Wednesday at 7 o’clock” he says with a proud smile and I can’t help but think that my expression is exactly the same.

“Sure” I say as I lean over and kiss his sweet lips one last time before hoping out of the car.

“Wait” I say as I turn around and see him looking at me in concern.

“What is it?” he asks and I cant help but smile poor thing probably thinks I’m going to cancel.

“Where do we meet?” I ask, and once again see him sigh in relief.

“I’ll pick you up here and just in case heres my number” he says before pulling out a card from his pocket and handing it to me, smiling he on the engine.

I walk up to The Crashdown to see Maria waving to Michael as he hopes into Max’s SUV.

“Where were you tonight Missy?” I hear Maria ask and know that I got some explaining to do.

But all I can do is sigh …

TBC...

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