Swing (L/Mi, teen, songfic)

[Amelia]

Swing by Amelia
Rating: teen
Disclaimer: I own nothing, and the song is Swing by Trace Adkins.
I would love reviews, but this is my first fic EVER so please be gentle.
You can see the music video at ... http://youtube.com/watch?v=XgAfRX_jdJw
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Walking into the bar, Liz pauses to look for Maria. She tries to ignore the stares coming from every guy in the Probe. Spotting her in the back with Billy, she makes her way over to them.

Hey!
Swing batter batter swing batter batter swing batter batter swing
Yeah

A very drunk Max Evans, who happens to be her very anal lab partner, grabs her arm. Before she has time to react, Max starts coming on to her, hard. While his buddies cheer him on, which of course makes him think he's getting somewhere. Shaking her head in disgust she quickly dismiss Max with her best glare. Before she pulls her arm out of his grasp and starts walking toward Maria again.

Strike One: "Hey baby do you come here often?"
Strike Two: "Hey baby now what's your sign?"
Strike Three: "Hold on, now where ya goin?" - He is out!
Jimmy's out, next in line...

Swing batter batter swing batter batter swing batter batter swing
Yeah

I almost reached the table when, my path is blocked by a smirking Alex. Normally, I would have loved to seen him, but something in the way he's looking at me turns me off. I give him a shy smile, because we were once good friends. Well, at least before he stopped talking to me, when I was dating Sean. It's hard to believe but that was more than six years ago. The smirk on his face grows, and he now reminds me of the Joker form Batman. Then he starts to mumble in a drunken rant, about how he always wanted to be a doctor. And I smile at him, happy to hear that he is doing so well, Then he says that it was way too much work and he had to get out of there. I frown when I hear this, he never would have done that when we were friends. His friends irrupt my musing, encouraging him to kiss me and quickly I say I have to go before things get weird.

1st Base: "Why yes, I went to Harvard" - Safe!
Big Lead: "I majored in pre-med" - He's gotta big lead!
Picked Off: "...just stayed for one semester" - It's gonna be close - He's out!
Tom's out, who's next?

Swing batter batter swing batter batter swing batter batter swing
Swing it now


I finally sit down next to Maria and start drinking one of the beers. Maria and Billy are laughing at my expense and it looks as if they won't let up for quite some time. So I look aroung the bar again and see Mikey G. I don't know how I could have missed him. He must have felt my stare, because he turns around and our eyes lock. He gives me the most adorable smile I have ever seen. I glance away, overwhelmed by the feelings he invokes without even trying.

Everybody strikes out 9 times out of 10,
But you gotta step up to the plate son,
'cause every now and then...

After another two hours the bar is pretty empty. Only Michael's group and mine are left. I finally build up enough courage to go over to him. He looks at me with his intense star of his and I melt. I ask him if he would go home with me. The most gorgeous smile/smirk graces his face, as he nods his head in agreement. I smile the biggest smile I'm sure I ever given, and take his hand. We walk out of the bar and into our happily ever after.

Fastball: " She walked right up to me" - Here's the pitch...
Smack: : Said can I take you home?" - There's the drive!
Could be: "Hey boys, I'll see you later" - It could be, its headed...
Going going going GONE!

Swing batter batter swing batter batter swing batter batter swing (repeats)

That night Michael and I realized that we would never part from each other.

hahaha
Holy cow!

That night was the best night of our lives, because it resulted in you my darlings. Now go to sleep. I tuck them into bed with a hug and a kiss. I smile as the love of my life turns on the night-light and shuts the door behind us. We make our way to our bedroom, while ripping the clothes off of each other. Four years and we're still going strong.

The end
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