Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult)12/11/08 chpt16 & 17*Complete*

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Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult)12/11/08 chpt16 & 17*Complete*

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Title: Cry of the Heart

Disclaimer: I own nothing Roswell and no infringement is intended.

Author: Hunter

Summary: Takes place on Heart of Mine episode, instead of Liz pushing Max away that night something else happens..

Pairing: M/L and CC.

Rating: Adult

Author's note: This is going to be a short story..shorter than what I usually write. I may also use lines from the episode Heart of mine. And I owe a HUGE thank you to Pijeechinadoll (Ping) for helping me out with photoshop. Thanks so much hun! I'm dedicating this story to you ping. Hope you like it! :D

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Chpt one..

"Max...I just want to say that I feel really weird." Liz began during the middle of their dance. She wanted to forget about it, about seeing him with Tess before and get lost in dancing with Max but that scene kept coming back, haunting her. She needed to confront Max about it.

"What do you mean?". Max asked, starting to panic. This was his one last chance of making things better between him and Liz. He feared she had something bad to say, something he didn't want to hear and yet anticipation was killing him for him to find out what was on her mind.

"I mean I saw you with Tess." Liz blurted out all of a sudden, not knowing why she was continuing with the Tess subject. Everything was a blur right now.

"Saw me what with Tess?". Max asked, feeling a bit nauseas. He hadn't given Tess a second thought, being with Tess was not something he wanted to brag about. He just needed a friend and she was just there to fill in the gap but he knew no one could take away the void that had him locked in darkness. And on top of everying, Tess was making him see weird things, things he never wanted to see and never wanted to happen.

When Liz mentioned the Tess subject, he froze and thought not again. Why did Tess have to come between them all the time?? Tess this and Tess that. He was growing sick of the blonde girl as much as he was getting tired of Liz mentioning her all the time.

"I saw you with her. I came by your house yesterday to talk to you about something and you were with her." Liz told Max, trying to unburden herself.

"We were just trying to find out things about where I came from, that's all." Max responded, trying to clean the air between them of the smoke that had intensified. He needed to make sure Liz got a few things clear.

"I know, I know, I mean, you know, you keep saying that. but you um, keep on leaving out this really pertinent fact. That you were married to her. I feel like my whole life for the past year has been waiting for some really bad news. Oh, you know, by the way Liz, I remember Tess, and I love her. It's really paralyzing." Liz babbled, unsure of how to phrase her feelings right now.

"Listen Liz.." Max sighed, rolling his eyes. "There is nothing going on between me and Tess. Okay?" He said angrily, why didn't Liz get it that he could not love anyone else? Why was she so bothered if he did anyway? She was the one who was so desperate to get him with Tess in the first place. "And besides..I thought that was what you wanted." He said in a sharp tone. "You faked sleeping with Kyle so you..." Max stopped midsentence..did he say what he thought he said. "You faked sleeping with Kyle?".

Liz froze and took her hands off Max. How did Max know that? "Max...what are you saying..?". She gasped, taking a step back.

"You didn't sleep with Kyle?". Max flicked his eyes to Liz, unsure of whether to be freaked out on this information which hit him for some odd reason, happy that she was still intact or angry that she had lied to him. Disbelief was written over his face.

"I..ugh..." Liz muttered, she had no idea what to say or how to respond to Max. How had he found out? She never told him. "Did Kyle tell you this?". Was her first question.

"No." Max answered and stepped forward. "So it's true." He slowely said, studying Liz's facial expression very carefully. The look in her eyes told him everything. She was avoiding direct eye contact with him and she was biting her lip. "You never slept with Kyle and all this time you lied to me." He stated bluntly.

"Oh god." Liz gasped, looking around and searching for an exit. She wasn't prepared for this. This wasn't the way she wanted Max to find out. And god knew if he was going to lash out on her right here, in front of everyone.

"I gotta go." She dismissed herself.

Before he could, she turned back and pushed past the dancing couples to get towards the exit. Max growled. Liz Parker wasn't going to be getting away from him this time round. In long strides, he followed, determined to have that talk with Liz Parker.

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Trembling, Liz climbed on her cold steel ladder with both her high heels sandals in one hand as she gripped the ladder and manoevered herself onto her balcony. Stepping onto her balcony she ran down and slipped through her window and into her bedroom. She threw her shoes on the floor and rested against the window.

How did Max know? How did Max know? She asked herself.

"Liz." Max's voice came from behind her, Liz jumped up. He followed her!

Liz turned around and backed away from the window. "Max what are you doing here?". She asked, eyes widening as he helped himself in.

"You really thought I was going to let you get away again?". He asked, half surprised. She fell onto the bed and he turned around to shut the windows. It was cold and chilly in here, more than it was outside.

Liz quickly sat up on her bed. "Max..you're...I...can..I can explain." She quickly said, fearing that he was going to shout at her. She was scared at this moment. "I'm so sorry."

Max sighed, he took off his shoes and placed them next to Liz's sandals and decided to take a seat next to Liz on the bed. He knew she was frightened of his reaction and he tried to control his anger. He didn't want to scare her away so he decided to take it easy, let the conversation flow.

"Liz.." He said, sitting beside her as she tried to move away inch by inch but found herself unable to as Max took hold of one of her hand and laced his fingers with it. "Please don't shut me out?" He pleaded, tears shining in his eyes. And that's when Liz saw his pain, the tears of hurt shining in his beautiful molten golden eyes.

"Oh I'm ever so sorry Max!". She cried, feeling guilty. "I never meant to hurt you...I messed up pretty bad..it's...I was...I felt like I had no choice." She sighed in defeat. Today was the day she was going to tell Max everything.

"You were forced into this?". He gasped, terror and anger taking over. Someone had forced his Liz to do something against her will?

"Well..kind of strongly persuaded." Liz admitted. "I'll be honest with you...when it happened..it felt like it was the right thing to do..I couldn't walk away from it...I was intimidated."

"Who was it?". Max's vocie rasped, shutting his eyes. Whoever that bastard was, he'd hunt him down and kill him for forcing his Liz to do something she never wanted.

Liz sighed. Here goes nothing she thought..."It was you Max..the future version of you."


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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 9/12/08 chpt 1 & Chpt 2

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Lol true ping :D Thanks for the fb!

Chpt two


"Where is Max?". Tess asked, she had scanned the whole gym room more then twice and he was nowhere in sight.

"Why do you even care?". Kyle asked, raising an eyebrow.

Tess was growing more and more obsessed with Max each day. It worried him that she was becoming this over obsessed alien and when aliens became obsessed..he didn't know what to expect.

"I'll be back." Tess excused herself and quickly left the room in haste. When she got into the girl's toilets, she shut the door and took out a communicator out of her small bag, she pressed some buttons and held it to her ear. "We have a problem..Max is...gone." She hesitated.
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When Tess came back to the gym, she looked rather gloomy and dull. "What's wrong with you Tess?". Kyle asked, noticing she had gone even more paler and looked awfully sick. Tess clutched her stomach.

"Kyle...I'm feeling sick..I think I had something gone off." She moaned, shutting her eyes in pain.

"Oh you look it too." Kyle groaned in disgust. The last thing he needed was Tess to sick on him in public. "Come one..let's take you home.." He wrapped an arm around her shoulder.

"Promise me something Kyle." Tess forced out in a weak voice.

"What?".

"You won't ruin your prom night because of me."

And that's when she manipulated him with her words, she had him to drop her off at his place and made him go back to the prom alone. Jim Valenti was snoring upstairs, deep in his sleep. Tess got into a pair of trousers and a top before she snuck out to find Max.

And she will not relent. Max was going to come with her tonight.
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When Liz told him everything, Max was still. "Max?...say something?". Liz asked, worrying. "Please? say anything? Anthing at all?".

"You. Beleived. Him. Over.Me". Max said in a trance, pain etched on his face. "You should have come to me Liz." He said in a stoic voice.

"Oh.." Liz gasped, fearing Max was really going to shout at her now. "I guess I should have." She added, looking down on the floor.

"All this time....wasted because you tried to be noble...you know it'll hurt me if you get hurt!". He raised his voice slightly, Liz flinched a little. "I can't beleive you'd do that Liz..for me..for us.." He said softly. "I guess our love is limitless."

Liz was confused. "Max? you're not angry with me?".

"Angry? Of course I'm angry." He snapped. "But I'm happy too." He said softly and leaned in closer. "Because I know how we both feel now about each other..and everything is so clear.." He breathed before capturing her lips with his own.

Surprised, Liz shut her eyes and let herself go into the kiss. Oh how she longed to feel Max's lips on hers! It felt like a century since she kissed Max. Max used one hand to cradle her head, fingers threading through her perfect soft silky hair. She shifted into a comfortable position and wrapped her arms around Max as he lowered them both down onto the bed, him over Liz while deepening the kiss.

Liz moaned as Max's tongue begged for entrance and she complied by parting her lips and allowing his tongue to acess her mouth and tease her tongue. Max's hands were at her hips, resting dangerously near the edge of her dress, slowely lifting it up.

Their connection was in full mode again, back to when it was given life when they first started to have the flashes. They both knew that somehow it was always there, waiting to be sparked. They were meant for each other, no matter far they had been, they were always drawn back together, needed each other because their hearts beated for one another.


Their love could no longer be denied.

"Oh Max.." Liz moaned when he slowely pulled away so both of them could get some air and he worried he was taking too much advantage of her.

"I'm so sorry..I shouldn't have.." He began, feeling ashamed that he couldn't control his urges.

"Max." Liz smiled and held him from pulling back. "This is supposed to happen. You and me, together..forever."

She traced his lips with one finger. "And I don't think I can stand being apart from you any longer." She admitted, blushing. "In one moment..you got me addicted to you."

"I did?". Max teased, watching Liz with emotions.

"More then addiction..I need you like I need air to breathe Max." She said. "But you already know that...you've been going through that for months now."

"Yes." Max nodded, both of them noticed how strong their connection was getting. "I love you so much Liz and I won't ever stop loving you. You're the only one I love."

"And you know I feel the same way about you Max Evans. I love you so much and you're the only one I love too." She whispered.

Max kissed her forehead. "I love you so much." He repeated, kissed her eyelids, nose, cheeks and lips. "God. I missed you so much."

Liz gasped at the burning sensation that begin to stir between her thighs. God...she was getting aroused, deeply aroused by Max's love. She needed more, she needed skin contact with Max.

Seeming to sense her thoughts, Max pulled away and took his jacket off, along with his tie and unbuttoned his shirt to stop Liz from frowing in dissapointment. "Skin contact huh?". Max smiled, taking off his shirt. "Beautiful..I can do anything for you." He teased and hovered back over Liz again, kissing her some more.

"I need..." Liz gasped in between their kisses.

"What do you need beautiful?".

"I need you to feel me." Liz gasped, taking his hand and placed it across her left breast where her heart was beating. "Feel me Max..I live for you."

Daring himself, he cupped her breast and she moaned, arching herself up. He kissed his way down her jawline to her collarbone and very close to the top of her breast. He rested his head against her breasts and listened to the sound of her heartbeats which sounded very much like his own.

And he heard what she needed, what she yearned for, what they both needed...

His other hand reached underneath her dress and trailed torturously up north where he made an encounter with her panties and pushed it aside. Liz's eyes shot open when his thumb brushed her clit. Liz's heart beat accelerated. This was...amazing..she wasn't expecting that but whatever was happening right now..she didn't want it to stop. She had waited too long, spend so long being alone and the same for him.

Liz's leg's trembled as Max toyed with her wet folds. "Shit.." She hissed, when his fingers touched a sensitive spot.

"Liz?". He asked when he noticed her body jerk at his touch.

"Max..please don't stop.." She panted and gasped at the sensation when Max pushed two fingers in her. She had no control over herself. Shamelessly, she pushed back down onto his fingers which were surging in and out of her. She needed more wanted more as her first orgasm washed over her, Max's fingers coated with the sweetness of her release.

When he took his fingers out, he wanted more..the juices of his beloved were on his fingers, tempting for him to have a taste. He licked his fingers and hunger shone in his dark gold eyes.
"Maax?". Liz noticed the desire in his eyes.

He felt an overwhelming desire to slid down, pushing her dress up further and unhooked her panties off her, he discarded her panties and before she knew it, his head was buried between her creamy thighs and his tongue lapped up the juices around her folds.

Liz hissed in pleasure, grabbing hold of the sheets as Max worked his magic on her. She didn't know what was happening but she had no will to stop it either. By now, Max's tongue thrusted into her, tasting her, devouring her and making her come undone again and again with her screaming his name on her fifth orgasm.

And it was too late to go back to being just friends..it was time to become what they were destined to become.
And was it time for them to accept that they were bound to each other.
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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 9/16/08 chpt 3 p. 2

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Thanks for the fb!

pijeechinadoll - You're welcome ping! Hope you love the story so far :D Love it that you're here! You make ma day :D

Nikki04 - lol..thanks! I hope you enjoy the next part too

Natalie36- thanks for the awesome comment! You'll get more hotness in this part!

Roswell4life- aww your words mean so much to me! I really hope this part makes you happy! Aww you poor thing! I hope you're okay! Be safe! same goes to anyone else whose having the same situation. I'll be praying for ya'll safety. Thanks!!

kitten88- Lol you may need ice lol..the next part just gets hotter..hopefully. Thanks for being here! :D

garcia88- You know I'm very happy to see you here Kris! I hope you like this story! thanks for the comment! :D

kissme4ever123- thanks! I'm posting another chapter now. Hope you enjoy this part too!

jake17-
I always felt that he should've felt through their "connection" that she never slept with Kyle!
Yeah me too..I always thought they should know about each other through the connection and it was messed up because in season two they knew shit about each other. I got well angry with the whole Future Max thing and then Max sleeping with Tess in the show. Well pissed off. This isn't going to happen in my fic thought but you know that. I can't bear to see Max and Tess together ever. And I'm going to focus more on their connection in this story. I feel it had been abused in the show. Thanks for the comment and about the banner! My second attempt at using PS. lol. Love it that you're here. :D

bella_svetlana - I hope I did it justice then. Thanks for the comment! :D

cocogurl - thanks! Love seeing you here! You're awesome! :D

begonia9508 - Hot it is lol! I'll take that as a compliment..I usually struggle with hot scenes to be honest. Thanks Eve!

cindy50 -
You handled the Max/Liz hotness so well
I did? Aww thank you! Always tried to think of ways to handle their romance! Thanks so much! your comment made me so happy!
And Alex dying, please tell me you're re-writing that?
And Alex isn't going to die..I'm so rewriting that part. That made me cry. :cry: I was so sad. I hope you like the next part :D

keepsmiling7- I wish the show did something like this too..how I longed for Max and Liz to get back together before it was late. And I don't trust Tess neither.

maxandlizforever - Lol I don't think you're the only one! Thanks for the comment!

smith82- I hope you like where this goes and hope it keeps you interested, thanks :D

destinyc- you know your comment had me thinking alot about chapter three. I've changed it so you won't be left dissatisfied lol. I hope I made it more interesting and better. And I really hope you enjoy reading the next part as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks!


So happy to see you guys here! Each and everyone of you! Love all your comments! Thanks so much.

A/N: right guys the next part may be a bit confusing but I'll have you know that Max and Liz did go beyond..but Tess doesn't know that and you'll find out why during the next few updates hopefully. I really hope this part isn't confusing. Enjoy!! :D


Chapter three..

"Make love to me Max.." Liz suddenly said, causing the sensual pleasures from his tongue on her folds to stop. Max looked at her wide eyed.

"Are you sure?". His husky voice send shivers down her spine. Her legs were shaky from the intense erotic sensations Max was delivering upon her and she needed to feel him, to be joined with him.

"Yes.." She said in a shaky breath. "Take me. Make me yours."

Having heard that, Max raised himself further up Liz's body and lifted her up cradling her in his arms. Liz slightly got up in a comfortable position to face her Max so she could take his shirt off. "I think you're overdressed Max." She said while unbuttoning his shirt. Max watched silently with desire heating up in his eyes.

She undid Max's shirt and let it slip away, marvelling at the sight of her Max..golden bronze chest..muscular chest which had taken her breath away. He was perfect. Just so perfect.

Running her fingers on his chest, remembering the last time she had done that, trying to evoke some light on his skin like he had done with her. Then she remembered the time when she came into his room when "Future Max" came to her spewing shit about the end of the world and how her being with Max would cause that. All of it was lies. How could she not see that being with Max was the most powerfullest thing she had ever known. They completed each other. They'd have a better chance of saving the whole universe if they were together. Love was stronger then hate right?

And that night, she had terribly hurt Max. She felt his pain through their connection and it stabbed her heart a million times.

"Liz...what's wrong?". Max asked, kissing her forehead and noticing that she was silent and very still.

"I'm so sorry for the pain I caused you Max." She said altogether without breathing. "I...was so stupid." She began to move from him.

"Liz..wait.." Max began as he felt her legs being removed from his waist...her core being removed from his arousal. "Liz don't go."

"I'm not sure..if we..can..make love when you're still upset with me." Liz began slowely, pushing her dress down and standing up. She still could feel tingly down there, Max's tongue leaving an imprint on her sex.

Max got up from the bed only in his pants and walked to the door to lock it with his powers. "Liz..there's a lot going on right now...but we can't deny this any longer. You want me..I want you. Let's join together." He said and unbuckled his belt. "I only want you." He let his pants drop and then took his socks off and daring himself..he took his boxers off.

Liz gasped at what she saw. "Oh Max.." Her eyes zereod in on his jutting organ which was huge and ready to fill her. More heat pooled between her thighs. She was getting more and more aroused at the minute.

And as for Max..he was showing a part of himself..a really private part of himself that he had not shared with anyone before. He was really making himself vunerable but it all was for Liz. Just for Liz.

"Aren't you going to let me please you Liz?". He growled, his desire taking over. He wanted her so bad.

"I do." She said, following her heart. Right now all she wanted was to have Max inside her, filling her to completion.

In no seconds, he was already facing her and his hand was on her back, undoing her zipper. The dress fell off and Liz stood there in front of Max..shamelessly naked.

Both were in a trance like state, their bodies taking over..the desire..the awaiting pleasure. Liz and Max took each other's hands. They had this night to love each other.

She was already on the bed and he was on top of her, back to being between her legs. "Take me Max." She whispered as he placed open mouthed kisses on her neck.

And then he entered her.

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Tess guessed that Max would be at Liz's place. She had to get there fast before they could consummate their relationship. She knew Max was weakened whenever it came to Liz. Liz had him wrapped around her little finger.

He was totally besotted by her and Tess knew that. All those efforts to install those fake memories in his brain, she had worked hard to push memories of Liz back into his subconcious but she knew nothing could wipe out those memories.

The best she could do was to control circumstances and manipulate them all to her desires.

She used the ladder on Liz's balcony which she had seen in Max's head so many times and it made her sick on how many memories of Max and Liz were attached to this simple boring balcony. Tess envied her so much. She wanted such memories of herself with Max. Tess got on the balcony and bent down. What she saw wasn't a good sight. She really felt like pucking. Max's head was nestled between Liz's legs..and Tess guessed Liz was enjoying every moment of it.

More jealously stabbed her. How she wished she was the one being tasted by Max right now...

She mindwarped. She couldn't exactly get in there could she? and raise their suspicions?

Mindwarping was easy for her. She could mindwarp with her eyes closed. She made Liz think she was asleep after seeing Max and her kiss at the prom and she made Max think he kissed Tess instead of running off with Liz. Slowely they drifted off to sleep. Max got up and away from Liz and lay on the space beside her.

Both of them suddenly drifted off to sleep. Tess smiled. Too bad Liz didn't get Max to make love to her tonight, she thought with a smile.

She used her communicator to contact a certain alli. "Hey you, I need a favour."

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The next morning..Liz woke up to find herself in her prom dress. Her head was ringing in pain. She groaned. She slipped out of bed and went straight to the bathroom to clean herself up. When she returned, she sat on the bed in her towel, trying to remember last night's events..

(First Flash)
"Max...I just want to say that I feel really weird." Liz began during the middle of their dance. She wanted to forget about it, about seeing him with Tess before and get lost in dancing with Max but that scene kept coming back, haunting her. She needed to confront Max about it.

"What do you mean?". Max asked.

"I mean I saw you with Tess." Liz blurted out all of a sudden, not knowing why she was continuing with the Tess subject. Everything was a blur right now.

"Saw me what with Tess?". Max asked.

"I saw you with her. I came by your house yesterday to talk to you about something and you were with her." Liz told Max, trying to unburden herself.
"We were just trying to find out things about where I came from, that's all." Max responded.
"I know, I know, I mean, you know, you keep saying that. but you um, keep on leaving out this really pertinent fact. That you were married to her. I feel like my whole life for the past year has been waiting for some really bad news. Oh, you know, by the way Liz, I remember Tess, and I love her. It's really paralyzing." Liz babbled, unsure of how to phrase her feelings right now.
(End of Flash)


Then Liz could recall Max kissing Tess at the prom, her leaving and crying her eyes out in her bedroom. No wonder her eyes were red and puffy this morning. Tears filled Liz's eyes. She had lost Max. She was grieving at her loss..but why did her heart tell her something else?

She looked back at the bed and a sharp flash ripped through her mind, her lying on the bed, eyes closed, her biting her lip in anticipation and then it was gone. Liz was dazed.

Whatever that was, it was confusing.

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Max didn't wake up to a pleasent start either. His eyes were wearing as he remembered kissing Tess at the prom last night. It was awful. He didn't even want to remember it.

He brushed his teeth and took a shower and changed. He went downstairs to have his breakfast as usual and resume his normal boring life. He was on autopilot. Nothing was new just eating, dealing with parents and friends, going to school and going home, more eating and then sleeping and not to mention his unrequited pining for Liz who keeps pushing him away and away. He just about had it, being pushed away.

"I'm off to school mom!". He grabbed his bag and headed for the door.

"It's saturday Max!". Dianne answered, coming down from the stairs and Max froze before he could turn the door handle. "God knows what planet you live on." She chuckled

"Mom..? It's saturday?". Max frowned. Why hadn't he noticed?

"Of course silly, unless you plan on doing saturday schools." She smiled as she gripped the laundary basket closer to her hip. "Anyway..make yourself useful and help me out with these clothes." She told him and walking into the kitchen.

Max looked around, dumbfounded and a sharp pain ripped in his mind...Liz's beautiful face eteched into his mind...what was going on?

TBC...
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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 9/22/08 chpt 4 & 5 p. 4

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Thanks

Pijeechinadoll- aww thanks! :D Wasn't my intention of being evil anyway ping! But glad you loved it!

Natalie36 - I know. Yea Tess, she's so evil. Thanks :D

kitten88 - You know I love seeing your comments!!
I love your Max!
Thanks so much!!
This part definitely required ice, lots of it!
lol I hope it worked. Wow, I tried to understand Tess's POV a lot from the show but it didn't justify in murdering Alex or sleeping with Max. I just didn't like it. She knew how Max and Liz felt about each other but...anyway thanks for your lovely comment kitten! Hope to see more of you soon! :D

keepsmiling7- Your comments are so hilarious! I love it!! Tess is a wiked witch! She'll get what's coming to her though. Don't worry. Thanks.

begonia9508 - Nah no way in this fic is Tess gunna rape Max. Hell no. In my world that's forbidden. She can try but she ain't gunna get anywhere lol. I know. You can't expect the worst from Tess.

smith82 - I know me too! I hate Tess too. You'll probably end up hating her more in the next updates. Thanks :D

maxandlizforever- okay, here's what happened. Liz and Max made love. Tess doesn't know that. She sees them not making love somehow and mindwarps them to forget about last night and she made them think Max kissed her instead of Liz. So Tess, Max and Liz don't know what really happened last night. I hope that cleared everything up. Thanks for the fb! :D

garcia88 - A lot of Tess hating lol! I know me too. It was Liz and Max that night for real, they made love as they should have in the show. :D

Cocogurl- I can say the same to you. I always check for a Love and War on Antar update. It's one of my favourite stories Cocogurl. :D
Can I beat her up please?!
Do you even need to ask lol? Ohh, how about I pin Tess down while you knock the shit outta her lol, Thanks! I love your comments! Thanks for being here!! Oh and Cocogurl I hope you enjoy chpt five especially because I was inspired by a show we both like watching. I think you might guess what show I'm talking about lol. :wink:

nikki04 - Thanks!! Hope you enjoy the next part! I'm so happy you loved it :D

jake17- aww you so sweet. :D who doesn't love Max? lol. Thanks Carrie. And you're right Tess is a bitch! I'm surprised, I ain't ever heard you swear before lol.

destinyc- Course it's not your fault! Lol. You helped me in a way. I like hearing thoughtful fb. :D Thanks! I will fix this in due time.

roswell4life- I know! I do to. Lol that was funny!! She should have innit? So glad and releived you're okay. Hope you settle back home okay. I know, generators are cool! :D Thanks.

A/N: Woo I just got back from uni and loved it!! I'm so happy. Gunna be real busy though! Thank god I pre write all my chapters in the summer holiday. Saves me from working lol.

Enjoy!!

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Chpt four

"Tess are you sure you're okay?". Kyle called, tapping on the bathroom door and grimaced when he heard Tess retch again down the toilent.

"Peachy!". Tess forced in a weak voice, on the other side of the door she was faking to be sick so Kyle and his father would buy the story that she had some sort of a stomach bug. She felt sick to pretend to be sick, she had to fake those sounds of being sick.

Tess flushed the toilet and washed her face before dragging herself out from the bathroom. Kyle was so shocked to see her, she looked awful. Her heard was in a messy ponytail and her face seemed lifeless.

"Don't look at me Kyle." She croaked. "You won't think I'm pretty."

"Of course I think you're pretty Tess.." Kyle began, taking in her thin form. "Even when you're ill."

Tess slumped on the couch. "I don't think my legs can carry me to the bed Kyle..I feel so ill.." She moaned, resting her head on the arm of the sofa.

Kyle walked over and crouched. "It's okay. Me and dad will take care of you."

"Do human medication work on aliens?". Tess rasped, rolling her eyes. She hated this. This was pathetic.

"I don't know..do they?". Kyle shrugged.

"Maax..maybe Max can heal me". Tess suggested. "I hate feeling like this."

"Yes..Max can!! friggin great idea Tess." Kyle shot up. "Why didn't I think of that before?". He asked himself as he trotted off towards the phone. Tess wore an evil smile. How easy that was, convincing Kyle to call Max for her, maybe she'd never need to call Max herself. Kyle could do it for her. Her dirty work.

And she assured herself..Max would be here shortly, at her service.

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Max arrived at the Valentis, half an hour since Kyle had called him. His mind was elsewhere today, he felt like he wasn't driving at all..he was being made to drive. The feeling of being someone's robot made him question his own actions. Shutting the engine off, he hopped out of the jeep and went to knock on the door. Kyle ran to open the door.

"Max! thank god you're here" Kyle began, talking breathlessly.

"How's Tess?". Max asked politely, glancing around the room and noticed a small figure slumped on the sofa. Kyle stepped aside so Max could walk in and he shut the door after him.

"She's not doing good." Kyle strached the back of his neck with two fingers. "She's getting paler and paler by the second and she fainted like twice.."

Max walked upto the sofa to see what exactly was going on. He grimaced at the sight of her. Her blonde hair was matted and her lips were dried and her eyes were..

"Max.." Tess moaned, happy to see him.

Max flinched when she called his name in her weak raspy voice. She didn't look good either. "Tess...what happened to you?".

"I...feel really sick." She groaned, holding onto her stomach. "Really awfull." She had to convince him that was the truth, she needed him to connect with her so she can put some more fake memories into his brain, stronger fake memories.
The last thing Max wanted to do was see Tess after that unexpected and unwanted kiss at the prom but she wasn't feeling well and he felt bad seeing her in this condition, after all she was one of them.

"She thinks it's a stomach bug." Kyle told Max, watching them from the doorway.

Max looked at Tess' stomach. "Okay.." He said and bent down on his knees. "I've never done this before..Isabel and Micheal never were affected by these kinds of things." Max said. "I'll try though." Max said and placed a hand on Tess' stomach. Taking a deep breath and casting his fears aside, he shut his eyes and concentrated.

Instantly he was pulled in the mind of Tess' deciets...

(Flash)
Antar
He caressed her upper lip with his finger first and then his tongue, both of them were naked in his bed, robes discarded onto the floor. "So beautiful you are." He gasped licking her lips and tracing his fingers on her bare shoulders. "Ava..." He called her name when she sucked in her breath as he found her swollen breasts.
"My king.." Ava gasped, tilting her head back, her long blonde tresses falling back as he leaned in to kiss her neck. "Let me have you my king." She moaned, grabbing a hold of his shoulders. "Give me you."
"You shall have me." He whispered, using his arms to hold her body close to his when he entered her.
"You're mine Zan..you're mine.." She panted.
(end of flash)


Max pulled away instantly, in shock, terror and disgust. He backed away from Tess, with fear in his eyes. Tess struggled up to see what was going on with Max, the color had returned but she was still a little "weak". Max was crawling backwards away from Tess.

"What's wrong Max? Did you heal her?". Kyle asked, noticing the terror on Max's face.

Max was unable to say a word. Forcing himself he stood up. "I have to go." His voice trembled and before either Tess or Kyle could say anything, Max ran out of the house, jumped into his jeep and drove off.

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"So is that what really happened?". Isabel asked her brother who was lying face down on his bed and hid his face. He was sick to the stomach.

"Yess." He mumbled. "When I tried to heal her, I got a rush of images and this was the one which was the most clearest for some reason." He groaned. "I never felt so sick. I just cannot bring myself to be him. I don't want to be him."

Isabel sighed and sat on the bed where her brother lay. "This had got to stop now Max." Isabel warned. "I'm not liking this. It's not fair that you should suffer because of your past memories or whatever it was. You're Max Evans, son of Phillip and Dianne Evans..you live in Roswell, New Mexico and you're eighteen. End of. I'll have to have a word with Tess." Isabel snapped. She wasn't very happy about the idea of Tess making Max revive unwanted old memories.

She was starting to beleive Tess was really desperate to have Max. And it worried her.

"Don't get involved." Max warned Isabel. "I don't want you going through the same thing either." The thought of Isabel being haunted of intimate memeries with his friend Micheal made him even more sick.

"But Max..she has no right making you see things that you don't want to see. Either you tell her or I will." Isabel said, trying to give Max no choice. "And don't forget..whoever you were in the past life..King Zan or Ava's Zan or whatever..you're Max Evans now and I really really don't beleive in that destiny fortune cookie crap. I think there's more." Isabel told
Max. "There's so much more that we don't know yet."

"What do you mean?". Max turned over to face his sister Isabel. Now he was curious.

"Don't you ever think there's something else out there? Something we've never come across before but it's right in front of our eyes?". Isabel suggested, she had a feeling there was more to her destiny, something that wasn't mentioned by Nasedo and Tess.

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Chpt five

"Maria I am telling you..I think it's really over between me and Max." Liz said, toying with loose strands in her hair. Maria was busy cleaning up the cafe and listening to Liz too.

"Chica..you have got to stop giving up hope." Maria told her, frustrated. "Just because you saw him in a lip lock with Tess doesn't necessarily mean he loves her or he's with her. You, me, Max and everyone else knows how much you guys love each other. You cannot stop loving each other." Maria pointed out. "That's why you're so affected on seeing him kiss Tess. You fucking love him still."

Liz let Maria's words sink in. She had a point. "You think he really feels the same way about me?". Liz asked, hopefully.

"Yes." Maria hissed. "Now go and get gone to Max. Sort out your differences..do whatever!". Maria protested, wanting Liz and Max to be back together sooner rather then later. "I want my favourite couple to be back together and blissfully happy."

"Yeah I wish I was with Max too but apparently it's just not meant to be." Liz sighed sadly, running her fingers through her hair. "Since the day he's saved me..all I've given him is pain, destruction and more pain. He's better off without me. Infact the whole world is better of without me..see all the mess I cause?". Liz shrugged sadly and lowered her eyes.

Because of her, Max was taken by the special unit, because of her, the world had ended according to Future Max. Liz felt useless. She felt like her life had no purpose and only made people hurt.

"Liz..don't go all suicidal on me." Maria warned, for a minute there it looked like Liz was considering to commit suicide.
"No." Liz looked up with determination. "Come what may but I am leaving this town for good." She made her up mind and walked through the doors. Maria followed.

"What?!" Maria gasped in disbeleif. "You can't do that Liz. You're not thinking straight".

Liz spun around and faced Maria. "I think you guys will be better off without me." She said.

Silence.

"Liz." Maria's attention diverted onto the pendant she was wearing. It was glowing.

"What?". Liz rolled her eyes and sighed before following Maria's gaze. She gasped sharply when she saw the pendant which Max gave to her was glowing. "Oh my god.." Liz took the locket into her hand, feeling it's hum. She had worn this since the day he had given it to her...when she had went to Riverdog to find out about it's origins and this had never happened before.

"Liz what is happening?". Maria's faint voice could be heard as Liz was pulled into another world....far away from reality...

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Liz found herself getting up from the balcony floor. One minute she was standing face to face with Maria downstairs and the next she found herself magically appearing on the balcony. She remembered the pendant glowing. She held it in her hand and wondered if this was some sort of teleporting device.

Her thoughts were interupted when she heard a soft whimpering followed by a louder sobbing. She moved near the window and bent down to see what was happening. Both her parents were sitting on her bed, looking at her photo.

Her mother was trying to comfort her father. "Jeff...she's in a better place now." Nancy hugged her sobbing husband. "God is taking care of our little girl for us...and one day we'll meet her again." She tried to say and ended up sobbing harder.

"Oh Nancy..she was too young to go." Jeff sobbed in his wife's arms.

Liz frowned. What was going on? She stepped into her room to ask her parents about the situation. "What's going on?" She asked her parents.

Jeff wiped his eyes and looked at Nancy. "Fate is so cruel to take away our only child."

"I know." Nancy croaked as her husband placed the photo down. "I can't bear it anymore." They sobbed some more.

"Mom...Dad...I'm right here?". Liz said with uncertainty, she was standing right before them..couldn't they see her? "Mom?". Liz bent down to look at her parents. She waved her hands in front of their faces but they didn't seem to notice. She touched her mother's cheek but gasped when her hand went right through.

They couldn't hear her, they couldn't see her and they couldn't touch her...Before Liz could react..the images blurred before her eyes and changed.

Her parents were gone but she was still in the same position, crouched at the foot of the bed. What the heck just happened?

Liz heard the doorknob turn and froze. The door opened and a boy entered the room, he looked thin and around five feet. He had a backpack on his bag. Liz couldn't recognise him. He had black hair and blue eyes. His skin was pale. He walked to the bed and dropped the backpack down onto it.

He looked like a regular school kid. Possibly one or two years younger then Liz. But what was he doing in her room.
A woman walked into the room. "Sandra's on the phone Kevin." She said and left abrubtly. Liz got up and watched the boy walk to the phone.

"Heard you mom!". He hollered and picked the phone up. "Hey Sandra..wanna go out tonight?".

Liz was confused. Who were these people and what were they doing in her house? "No..the UFO centre is so crap. The guys who own it..Sean somehing and Brody...they're so dull. A pair of homocidal freaks. You don't wanna spend your time there." Kevin said as Liz tiptoed out of the room. She opened the door, thankfully she could touch objected.

"Whoa..." Kevin said, causing Liz to freeze halfway through as she got out. "The door just opened by itself. This place really needs a good fix up. I've been telling my mother this house is like a hundred years old. It's been twenty years since she bought it and still hasn't got round to fixing it." Kevin said down the phone.

"Twenty years?". Liz gasped. She turned around and Kevin shut the door behind her. She jumped but realised she couldn't be seen.

She wondered about the halls, like a lost soul and luckily found a calender on the wall. "July the fourteenth, two thousand and twenty one?". She almost stumbled back.

That meant she was in the future...twenty years ahead?

TBC...

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 9/26/08 chpt 6 p. 5

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Just a note attached to this chapter. I don't want to confuse anyone. I want to entertain. So Liz is in this different world but none of it's real as you know, the present is still there. Don't worry about everyone dying or Max not existing. Because they do. But everything's different in this world where Liz is visiting. The characters had different roles. Liz is someone who can observe from the start, no one can see her in this world. She's like a ghost. But soon everything will change and the truth will fall into place about that Tess. And those who want more Max and Liz love scenes..well don't worry They're coming!

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Chpt six

Liz dashed out onto the open road, dodging past the cars. She ran straight to the UFO centre, she had heard Sean and Brody had worked there. She was assuming Sean Deluca worked there, Maria's cousin. Hopefully she could get some answers.

She walked straight into the computer room and sat down at a computer. No one was there. She sighed in releif and opened up the archives. Somebody was already logged on..Sean Deluca was the user name. Perhaps her friends were around once and for all. She wondered what happened to them in twenty years time. She knew what happened to her. She was dead and buried.

She decided to look for Alex first but found nothing. No dental records, no passport details..nothing. It was like Alex had never existed. She began to panic and her fingers trembled when she typed in Maria's name.

Something came up..a bar called Red Ribbon...which was a strippers club in New York? Maria's photo came up..it was a nude photo of Maria wearing nothing but high stilletos and she was in a dirty position with her tongue hanging out. Her eyes looked tired and dull.

Liz winced and scrolled down, hiding the photo away from her innocent eyes. She read the article about Maria. "Stripper Maria Deluca gives birth to five boys in five years, all boys were given away to the adoption agency and has had ten abortions..." Liz felt sick. What had happened to Maria? Her best friend who always had a passion for singing?

Liz decided to type in Max's name when all of a sudden someone entered the room. "Oh man that's sick." Sean sighed, holding a cup of tea in his hands.

Liz moved from the computer chair and backed away to see Sean sit down were she had sitten and click on the computer screen. He put the mug down and got rid of the article about his cousin Maria. "These sicko's like to rub it in my face." He muttered. "Brody! get your ass down here!". Sean hollered and Liz noticed a very tired out Brody walk in.

"What?". He asked, rubbing his eyes.

"Some punk got in the computer room..I dunno how and put up my cousin's article as a sick joke. We need to get security..I swear man."

"We have nothing Sean." Brody said in his british accent. "Nothing. People don't come down here no more. We aren't making enough money to even bring home the bacon and you're going on about security?". He asked in disbelief.

"I just want peace in my life Brody." Sean sighed, turning away from the computer. "My cousin is a whore. But to me she'll always be my Maria. I hate it when people like to play sick jokes."

"I know." Brody sighed. "But look." He picked up a newspaper. "We're putting our money and all we got into this.." He showed Sean the paper. "To bring down this bitch of a president and her evil plans."

"I hope we can make it." Sean said, rubbing his stubble. "I lost my life because of her. I could have married and have a dozen kids. But no..I'm here as a lone male spinster, working my ass off to bring her down."

"It'll all be worth it." Brody said, throwing the newspaper on the table next to Liz.

Liz looked at the front page of the news paper and gasped at what she saw. Tess's picture and apparently she was the president of the United States...

(Lol..I know everyone's nightmare to have Tess as the president of US :lol: )
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Tess was the president of the US, Liz was still trying to digest that fact. Tess was evil apparently. She had read a copy of the Roswell Herald. She felt sick on hearing what Tess had done. Contining on the slave trade and making child labour legal and ridding of old people?

It was a nightmare.

Liz's next stop was Kyle's house. She wanted to see if they were okay first before she went to find her Max. Somthing told her, seeing Max again would break her heart and she'd fear what she see.

She noticed the fresh smell of baked bread wafting around and it was delicious. She walked into the house which had changed a lot. The worn out sofa was replaced with black leather sofas, the boring coffee table which Kyle loved to put his feet on alot had been replaced by a clean and polished dark wood coffee table and the television was much bigger..a flat thiry eight inch tv instead of the small old television. And they finally had a dining table in the house with six chairs. The walls had photos on them. Photo's of a happy family.

She heard laughters of children. Two little boys ran into the room. They looked about six years old. Both of them. Liz guessed they were twins. She smiled when she saw them. They looked really cute. Both had sandy blonde hair and dark blue eyes.

A girl walked into the room. She was slim and looked older..around in her early teens. She had curly dark hair and light blue eyes. "You guys better behave. I don't want you breaking anything okay like last time." She said as the two little boys raced to the sofa and cheered as the girl went over to the TV and decided to play Shrek for them.

"Yaay! Shrek!". The boys cheered in unision.

Liz couldn't help but noticed how much they looked like Kyle apart from the eyes. They must have had their mother eyes..whoever their mother was.

Kyle walked in the room. He was wearing a light blue shirt and greay pants. "Hey everything going okay Liz?". He asked.
Liz turned around to see him. He called her? Could he see her? "Kyle...".

"Dad everything is going great." The girl spoke and hugged her father. "I'm so glad you could make it home."
Liz watched in awe. Kyle named his daughter after her? "Well look at the time Liz..I gotta go get changed. Your mother would want me to wear that lovely outfit she has laid out for me won't she?".

"Of course dad." Kyle's daughter smiled before he went to get changed.

Liz remembered about her relationship with her own father. They were close like that. A single tear collected in her eyes and slid down her cheek. She was so happy for Kyle. Atleast something good came out of from this mess. He was happily married and had three healthy looking children.

Kyle's wife entered the room with two big bowls in her hands. She was pretty with long straight black hair and dark blue eyes. Kyle did well for himself.

There was no alien business involved.

"Your father came home late didn't he?". The woman asked her daughter.

"Well.." She shrugged. "Atleast he's here mom."

In no time, Kyle was already down stairs, wearing a stunning outfit that his wife had picked out for him. "Miss me honey?". Kyle winked.

"Oh don't you go all Mr showoff on me." She laughed, chucking the dish towel on him.

"Mom..why don't you go get changed and I'll fix dinner." Their daughter ushered the woman out of the room. "Be quick! Can't wait to see that dress on you mom!".

Liz smiled and decided to watch them for a moment. Kyle's daughter ran in the kitchen to bring the food to the dining table, Kyle had offered to help but his daughter refused any help, worried he might ruin his outfit. Liz missed her parents so much when she saw them. She glanced over the two twins watching Shrek.

"You know..that movie was out before your big sister Liz was born." Kyle told his two sons.

"Daaad..this is like the best movie ever." One of them protested.

"Yeah." The other one agreed.

"Well if ya say so." Kyle rolled his eyes.

All of a sudden there was a knock on the door. Kyle got up and went to answer the door. "Yes can I help you?".
Without the courtesy to answer back politely, the intruder just walked in as if it were their own house. "Hey you can't do that?!". Kyle protested, looking at the blonde woman.

She pulled out a bagde and flashed it to Kyle. "I'm working for the US goverment." She said. "Where's your wife?".
Liz couldn't beleive her eyes. There stood Isabel in a grey blazer and skirt with a white blouse with her hair tied up in a neat bun...

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 9/27/08 chpt 7 & 8 p. 6

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Chpt 7

Isabel was working for the government?

"Your wife is under arrest for hacking into restricted sites." She said as she began to move around the room in haste. Kyle's daughter finished setting the table up and the two boys had turned their attention away from the TV to look at Isabel.

"Where is she?". Isabel demanded.

"I..d-dunno." Kyle spluttered, unsure of how to answer this woman.

"Honey is everything okay?". The dark haired woman asked, walking down. She was dressed in a nice black sparkly top and grey jeans.

"You!". Isabel pointed at the woman who froze. She shot glances at her children who stood by together near the TV and her husband who was next to Isabel and then proceeded to dash upstairs but in a flash Isabel ran up and took her, ripping her back downstairs again, she pulled out handcuffs and handcuffed the woman.

"You're under arrest for tampering and hacking into many sites that belong to national security." She said before taking her towards the door.

"Hey! This is my house! You can't arrest her! I'm the sheriff!". Kyle snapped angrily, following Isabel who took his silent wife.

"And I am government material. Much of a higher rank then a mere sheriff of a small town." Isabel threw back in his face before taking his wife away.

Kyle ran out of the house. "Where are you taking her?!". He demanded as Isabel put her in the black car. There were many security guards for Isabel's backup and stopped Kyle from going any further.

Kyle's wife peered out of the window. "Kyle go back to the children and tell them everything's gunna be fine. I have it all under control. I'll be back." She said.

"But.." Kyle protested.

"I love you". She said and Isabel got in the car, sitting next to Kyle's wife.

"Drive." Isabel ordered the driver.

And then they drove off, leaving a worried Kyle.

Liz watched in shock. She had no idea what just happened.

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Kyle's daughter had put the two boys to bed which was Kyle's old room. Liz noticed that they had an extension built to the house which was the bedroom of Kyle's daughter. Kyle and his wife now had his father's room. Liz wondered what did happen to Jim.

Liz sat down on one of the sofa and watched Kyle sob, he had in head down in his hands, sobbing. His daughter walked upto him and sat next to him, placing an arm around him. "Don't worry daddy." She whispered, trying to hold back the sobs. "Everything will be okay."

"Nothing's going to be okay." Kyle cried bitterly. "Not when that woman...is still the president." He growled. He hated Tess..everyone innocent did.

She rested her head against her father's shoulder. "Mom will find a way. I know it. No matter how bad the situation seems, we will pull through this together."

Kyle removed his hands from his face and patted his daughter on the back. "She was trying to find a way to save us all..your mother." Kyle began. "I don't blame her."

"Neither do I."

He chuckled. "You know..for a fourteen year old..you're quite mature Liz." He wiped the tears from his eyes and then looked at his daughter who removed her head from his shoulder. He took a deep sigh.

"I am?". She asked, surprised.

"You know.." He sighed again. "I don't think my future is going to be very bright either." He told his daughter. "But if anything happens to me or your mother...or the both of us..I want you to be strong and take care of your two little brothers. I trust you can do that Liz."

"Dad..don't speak like that." Her voice trembled.

"I want you to know something." Kyle ignored her. "Your name...where it came from..."

"What about it?". She asked curiously. Even Liz was engaged at this moment.

"I dated a girl..well it was more of a summer thing. I saw her more as a good friend."

"Yeah?".

"She was nice, petite, dark brown hair, dark brown eyes...her name was Liz. She was a good girl. I really wanted to be her friend just the way her two close friends were, she seemed like a really nice person but at that time I was a jerk. A stupid jock jerk. I wanted to impress my friends because I had a good girl as a girlfriend. Anyway..we started school after the summer, a week later..she got shot at her parent's cafe..the crashdown...the ambulance came too late and she died on the way to hospital.." Kyle chocked. "And everyone cried so much after that.." He began to sob again. "I never got the chance to tell her how I really felt. I never got the chance to be her good friend. I really miss her you know..and when you were born...I was so happy."

"Wow." The girl gasped.

"Yeah...I named you after her because I knew from the moment you were born..you'd just be like her. I don't know how..but an instinct kicked in. And I was right. You take care of all of us. You're sweet and you're so kind hearted." Kyle sniffed. "I just wanted to tell you everything before anything bad happened."

"Dad...nothing bad is going to happen." She said in a firm tone. "Remember you said before that good things will happen to good people? Well we're all good..and good things will happen to us." She wiped her father's tears away.

They hugged each other and began to cry.

Liz watched with her very own tears...

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The night was cold. Liz shivered. People couldn't see or hear her yet the blistering cold could. She didn't have a coat either. She left the Valenti's house. From a happy atmosphere to a nightmare. It was like whatever Tess touched, turned rotten and broke down.

Liz had a feeling Kyle's wife was also one of the rebels, looking for a way to stop Tess's reign of terror. She made her way to the Evans' residence. Luckily for her the lights were still on. She peered into a window and noticed a very old Dianne knitting a scarf.

Liz decided to sneak into Max's room. She was at the window and surprisingly it was open. She easily got in and closed the windows behind her. Max's room was still the same. Untouched belongings of Max, his bed was done and she opened his cupboard and pulled out a sweater of his. She sniffed it, inhaling her Max's scent. It still smelt of Max, musky notes.
She missed Max so much and hugged the sweater close to her body as if she was embracing him. "Oh how I miss you so much Max."

She didn't know which world she was in, she didn't know if she'd ever get back but she realised whatever this world was..it was a whole lot worser in the world she was living in. So MUCH worser. Everything seemed so simpler back then. But now...things were unknown...they were all alone and Tess was even a bigger threat because she had the utmost power, being the president meant she had control over legal matters and could get away with a lot of stuff.

Liz sat on Max's bed. "Where are you Max?". She looked at his photo and noticed a picture of her was fixed in next to his. She gasped as she took the photoframe in her hands.

This was the same photo on the Roswell school website which she had taken. Every student had one. Max printed one off and treasured it. He really must have loved her so much and to keep it hidden must have made him suffer but to know the love of his life was dead, gone forever must have killed him.

Liz was surprised that her photo was there, she feared Max may have been married to Tess or someone and already with children but it didn't seem that way.

Then she heard Dianne's cries and Phillips shouts. "I HAVE TRIED EVERYTHING YOU STUPID WOMAN! I CALLED THE BEST DOCTORS IN TOWN AND OUT OF TOWN AND ALL OVER ACROSS THE GLOBE BUT NOTHING. MAX IS GONE. HE IS CRAZY DO YOU HEAR ME WOMAN!, MAX WILL NEVER BE NORMAL AGAIN!" Phillip roared and Dianne whimpered.

"FOR FUCK'S SAKES! STOP YOUR WHINGING WOMAN AND GET ON WITH LIFE!". Phillip yelled harder, Liz opened the door and walked down the hall to watch them.

The scarf Dianne was working on was on the floor in tatters and so was she. She was in tears, crying so much as her husband was standing, heaving with anger. They had even more wrinkles on their faces, Phillip was bald and a bit beefier, Dianne looked so thin and her hair was thinner too.

Liz assumed a fight had broken out, resulting in Phillip tearing up the scarf which Dianne worked so hard on. "Max will be okay..he will." She croaked, gathering the scarf in her arms and holding it close to her.

"NO." Phillip yelled and almost wheezed. "He's not. Consider Max dead!". He spat and then left. "You stupid woman..you'll die still beleiving Max can be healed." He threw over his shoulder as he made his way in their bedroom and slammed the door shut.

Liz didn't know how much heartache she could bear. She wanted to shout at Mr Phillip Evans for being such a bad husband to Mrs Evans when she needed him the most. And for Max...he needed to be healed?

Liz wondered what was wrong with Max.

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Chpt 8

Present day
Approximetly 30 minutes later after Liz fainted.


He froze when he landed on the balcony. Was this a good idea? Whenever things went down for him he'd always think of turning to Liz, his one and only. He craved her so bad it was killing him.

He slipped into her bedroom and hoped he would find her there. The images he was seeing so far was disturbing, very disturbing and he guessed if he was with Liz they'd stop.

He didn't care if she slept with Kyle although he suspected that was nothing but a hoax, Max had never accept the fact that she slept with Kyle because he was still no convinced, the reason why he had backed off was because of Liz's constant lies. It wasn't what she said, it was how she did it. How she could keep pushing him away.

But he knew somehow or the other, he'd come back to her. It was inevitable.

Like for today. He was going to pour his heart out to her. He wanted to. He needed to.

Lucky for him she was there but she was lying asleep on the bed. Max froze and kept quiet, making sure he wasn't making a sound. Was it wise to wake her up when she looked so peacefull lying there content in her slumber??

He waited for some moments against the window, watching her bed. The very same bed she had slept in. Something was bugging him about that bed. Like an invisible pull. He didn't know what it was. Something was drawing him towards it, a mythical energy of some sort as if something happened here right on that bed..something very important.

"Oh my god! Max what are you doing here?". Maria exclaimed loudly, she had a wet flannel in her hand and just emerged from Liz's bathroom with Alex towing closing behind her.

"I came to see Liz." Max said in confusion, wondering why Alex and Maria were here when Liz was sleeping. "Is this a bad time?".

"Actually no." Maria sighed in releif. "Infact I was about to call you." She said as she wheeled over to Liz's side and placed the flannel on her very hot forehead which didn't go unnoticed by Max.

"What's wrong with Liz?". Max's protective side was in function.

Alex hovered around at the foot of Liz's bed as he dug his hands into his pockets. "Liz..umm..kinda passed out like half an hour ago before you came."

"What?!". Max exploded, shock shattering him. "What happened to her?". Max asked, in a swift motion he was already at Liz's side, taking her hot hand in his. Max felt the heat radiate of her, she was too hot. "Feels like she has a fever."

Max rubbed Liz's hand with his own hands. "How did this exactly happen?". Max asked Maria.

"Well..one minute she was fine and she was talking to me and all of a sudden the pendant was glowing. You know the one Isabel got from the dome building that day..and then Liz passed out." Maria said. Max held Liz's hand with one hand and then used the other hand to softly brush her hair away to reveal the pendant she wore on her neck, Max clasped the locket in his hand.

"This pendant was glowing?". Max asked, tempted to take it off. If that weird necklace was hurting his Liz then he would destroy it, even if it was a way home.

"We tried a lot to take it off but it won't go." Alex said. "You can try since you're an alien." He sniffed.

Max tried to rip the pendant off Liz's neck but all he could do was a gentle tug. The pendant was firmly in place and attached itself to Liz's neck.

"Oh god..it's not coming off." Max whispered, frightened. He wasn't used to failing to protect his loved ones. So he tried to heal her. When that didn't work, he began to panic.

"It's not working is it?". Alex asked, afraid of the answer already.

"No." Max replied sadly, almost inaudible.

"I don't understand what the hell is going on. How do we help Liz?". Maria hyperventilated.

"Maybe Riverdog can help?". Alex tried to be helpful in suggesting solutions.

"No. I doubt it." Max said. "If I can't do anything, what can Riverdog do?".

"Well Max..he helped us save Micheal that day remember when Micheal was ill?". Maria reminded Max.

"This is different." Max sensed. "Whatever is happening to Liz, none of us have been through before." He told them, eyes zeroing on the symbol on the pendant.

He wondered what was going on in Liz's mind right now...

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Back to the parrelell world...

The black clouds hovered over the extended town of Roswell...Liz had picked up on so many changes, it was much bigger then before and there were new houses, new buildings...more then half the town was new.

The thunder rolled and roared as a warning before it would lash with rain. Liz wrapped her arms around as the breeze battered against her soft skin. She felt like a lost soul in search of something...as if she still had unfinished business or something.

She had no idea where to go or where to turn. Being in Max's room was starting to haunt her. He wasn't here and she wanted to find him him. She couldn't exactly go around the Evans' house, searching every nook and cranny to find any clue about Max's location.

She crawled back into the alley near her house and waited in the shadows. Usually she'd climb up her ladder and go to her bedroom but her house had belonged to another in this nightmare...she wasn't sure where she was and she just wanted to be back home..back with everyone in the normal timeline.

Was this even a timeline?

"It's not safe scurrying around in the darkness for a young girl such as yourself." A gruff male voice could be heard.
Liz spun around to see her intruder. She could make out someone with a hooded cape, stepping out the shadows. He pulled his hood back and Liz gasped.

Althought the lines of his face clearly marked his age, the tired eyes and the cracked dry lips, she could recognise him. "Alex?".

When she whispered his name, he shrank back, drinking in the sight of her. "Liz?".

He could recognise her also. Just as the last time he saw her...which was twenty years ago right before her death.. "You're alive?".

Her smooth soft cheeks showing her youthness and her lovely dark brown eyes full of soul..she hadn't changed a bit. "You can see me?".

Alex nodded. "You're alive Liz?!". He gasped, happy to see her.

Liz wondered if Alex was the only one who could see her..she was invisible and all of a sudden she wasn't? Liz studied Alex. "What happened to you?". She asked softly.

"I..." Alex began "I think I should be asking you that. You died like twenty years ago." His voice changed back to how he sounded when he was in high school. Young and vibrant.

"I got shot in the crashdown but..I'm..I mean I'm from somewhere else..I'm from the timeline where I didn't die." Liz began, wondering if her words made sense.

"You must have come to save us all." Alex whispered. "I knew it would work". A smile spread across his face.

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 3/10/08 chpt 9 & 10 p. 7

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Thanks for the feedback everyone!!

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Chpt nine

"So I went into hiding after she became president." Alex told Liz as they sat on the lawn chairs on the balcony. Lucky for them the family who now owned Liz's house went out every friday night for a meal.

"How did Tess become the president?". Liz curiously asked. She would have never guessed Tess and politics would be linked, but then again, Tess grew up in the field of being power hungry.

"She had either killed her rivals or threatened them." Alex said.

"How do you know that?". Liz whispered, scared.

"Because my mother was standing against her in the elections, she was the most challenging rival for Tess. And then Tess killed her....I witnessed the murder and she had set Micheal after me. I faked my death so I could avenge them." Alex said sadly.

"Wait..Micheal?". Liz asked, wondering if it was the Micheal she had known.

"Yes Micheal...Guerin. Tess's right hand assasin and brother..." Alex answered grimly.

"So that explains why every detail about you was wiped out. It was like you had never existed."

"Yeah. Tess was more then happy to dispose of my existance to the world. She didn't want anything to get in the way of her perfectness." Alex said.

"I still don't understand why she's doing this. I can't beleive what Tess is upto." Liz shook her head and wondered if she was like this in the real world.

"Because she want's the utmost power Liz. She wants to conquer us all. By getting rid of the people who she considers a burden and by keeping her special selection of people, she wants her world, a world where she can enjoy ruling. Consider her as the modern day Hitler."

"Where can I find her?". Liz asked. "I need to stop her."

"She lives in the huge black building which replaced the dome. I'll drive you there."

"Okay. Thanks". Liz said and got up.

"But be carefull Liz. Because Micheal is always on patrol." Alex warned her as he got up.

"Don't worry. I will." A determined Liz answered.

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A/N: I'm going to include part of a song which isn't in English so I had to get the translations, it's so beautiful and matched the situation which Liz finds herself in.

"I have her locked up." Isabel told a wondering Tess. "Can I go home now?".

Tess smirked and looked at Isabel. "Of course not Isabel. You belong here now."

"Last time I checked, I was under contract." Isabel spat with hatred. Tess had manipulated her in doing things she had not wanted to do. Micheal was obsessed with Tess, beleiving that she could bring him home but Isabel had her suspicions. At first she beleived Tess because her family was in dire need of help and Tess seemed like the most comforting thing but as time progressed, she had been under strain and it was the one night where Tess wanted a favour from her that changed everything.

She had gotten her to marry Jesse Ramirez fifteen years ago, as Jesse was a sucessfull senator. Then Tess used her and became the president through her own manipulative conniving ways.

"You're family Isabel." Tess lips curled as she brought the dated liquer to her lips.

"You're no family to me." Isabel muttered.

"Unless you plan on sharing that cold awful cell with that woman you locked up." Tess said, sensing Isabel's anger.

"No." Isabel answered. "I don't plan to." She said in a more formal tone.

"What was that?". Tess challenged, enjoying winding Isabel up.

"I said I don't want to." Isabel seethed.

"Good." Tess smiled. "You are dissmissed now."

Isabel rushed out of the room and muttered curses for Tess under her breath, these days she was helpless. Tess had everything because of her foolishness.

Meanwhile Alex had dropped Liz off not very far from the dome but a safe distance. Liz had managed to dodge past Micheal's range of fire. He stood guarding the dark castle like building by marching up and down with his huge rifle. Liz could imagine him as a soldier but could never dream of Micheal being a ruthless cold murderer working for Tess. He was blind and didn't know it.

Liz found a secret passage way and ran like the wind, making sure her movements were smooth and swift. She grabbed hold of the bars to support herself as she walked over the railings and then collided against the door by accident but however she slipped through the door and ended up inside the room.

It was dark and gloomy and Liz got up wondering how she slipped through the door without a scratch. Did she have powers now or something?

She looked at her hands as the electricity crakled from the tips of her fingers to her palms. It must have been an effect of being in this dimension or whatever place she was. She just hoped this was just a nightmare that she'd wake upto.

She noticed a tall broad figure among the whiteness of the padded room. It was quite bright and the whole room was just white. A dark haired male was facing towards the wall, he was very still and sat unmoving. Not aware of his surroundings.
Liz's eyes focused on the back of him. "Max??". She gasped, she could recognise him anywhere, his figure was distinct as his scent was...but that was part of the connection package they shared.

She walked up towards him carefully and placed her hand on his shoulder. She moved slightly to see his face. "Max." She whispered when she saw him.

His face was always beautiful, the strong defined jaw, the masculine shape of his nose and chin...but there was pain, confusion concealed on his face in the name of silence. His eyes were dark amber, hollow and no hope floated in them. It was like the gateway to his soul.

Empty. Cold. Alone.

Her Max in this world was alone.

Liz stroked his cheek, forgetting about all the pain and astrocities they had been through. "I miss you so much Max." She said.

Max barely seemed to noticed her, he kept staring at the wall. Ever since that incident twenty years ago when Liz died, he had never spoken a single word, never shed a single tear and never did the things a normal person did, eat, drink sleep. He had required assistance to live. But he had no feeling in his body. No desire to go on. His mind had shut down and his body was just going along for the ride.

Everyday they performed tests on him, putting wires on him, injecting him and even electricuting him. But he had never responded...not even once. His life was gone ever since the day his love..his soulmate died.

Liz had a rush of feelings from Max through their connection. She felt what he had kept sealed in his broken heart for twenty years and almost felt like crying her heart out.

She kissed his lips. "I love you." And she wrapped her arms around him as she sat on his lap.

For many minutes she held him in her embrace, never letting go. How could she be so stupid? Max had always loved her, Max would always love her no matter what. All this time she wasted....she hated herself for it.

Max stiffened as he felt hot breath on his face. He hadn't felt things for years. He had been so alone in this white room, waiting to die...waiting to join his beloved in the next life.

Liz gently rested her head on his shoulder and began murmering a soft song to him. A song which reminded her of their love.

As you walk along, remember my song,
Never say goodbye,
while crying or laughing, simply sing quietly to yourself,
Never say goodbye
Never say goodbye,

While loving each other we will dissapear
Like sleeping in the gently blowing wind of the season,
In the dream world you keep calling me,
Never say goodbye,
Never say goodbye,

If we get lost by chance,
And quiet calm feelings creep on your life's wall,
I shall return..
You just keep calling me,
Never say goodbye
Never say goodbye.


Several tears slid down Liz's cheek when she finished the song. Max hadn't moved a bit. She moved her head from under his chin and kissed him again with trembling lips. "Please forgive me." She whispered. "I love you so much."

All of a sudden the doors opened and in walked in Tess, smartly dressed in a blouse with a blazer and a very very short ass skirt followed by several of her gaurds including Micheal. All of them were armed. Doctors followed after her and they surrounded Max.

None of them seemed to notice Liz as Liz froze for a moment, holding onto her Max and refusing to let go...would they kill her if they saw her?

"Get started." Tess ordered the doctors who charged at Max with their medical equipment. Liz panicked. They couldn't see her but they would hurt Max.

"No Max." Liz whispered at she almost fell off him when they stood him up. His body was limp and he wasn't in control of his own muscles.

They lay Max down on the long seat and strapped him down. Max hadn't protested. Liz made her way towards him. She held Max's face in her hands. "I won't let them hurt you." She promised.

He looked at her direction, dazed.

They injected him with something. "Max!". Liz screamed.

The doctors whizzed past and began getting ready for the tests. Tess did this every night to make sure her mate..her destined mate would finally wake up to realise her..what her value was and then get her with child so they could pass on their kindgom to their heir. It had been twenty long agonising years and Tess' biological clock was ticking. She knew the procedures of artificial insemination but she wanted Max to get her pregnant himself, of his own will and she was one obsessed bitch.

Liz looked around to find something.

"He has been asleep for too long." Tess said softly as she stepped up towards him and stroked his hair. "It's time for him to wake up."

They pressed the button after they linked the wires to him and then increased the voltage level.

The electric currents shot through Max's veins, running through his entire system and became stronger that he began to scream in pain. It was a reflex action, something they had managed to acheive. But that was all. His screams of pain.
He wished for death and nothing else. Death..

"OH Max!". Liz sighed pushing past the doctors and then picking up a heart moniter. She had enough of this, she could no longer tolerate Max's screams of pain.

So she hauled the heart moniter at Tess. Wanting to shatter that bitch's head in pieces. Tess turned around to receive a flying object hit her face. She staggered back and the doctors turned off the equipment.

"What was that?". One of them asked as Tess fell on the floor with the machine burning up on her face.

Micheal cocked his gun. "I think somone is here." He said, getting in his protective mode. Ready to attack. With one simple wave, Tess removed the machine from her face and cleaned her face as if nothing happened.

"You idiots." She screeched, pointing at the doctors who cowered. They knew she had powers which could kill so they had no choice but to obey her.

"We're sorry." They apologized.

"You better be." Tess said as Micheal helped her up. She then threw blasts at the doctors. "Dumb humans!".

"I think it wasn't them." Micheal said, looking at Liz's direction. He couldn't see her, but his assasin skills was sharp. He traced the direction from where the heart moniter was thrown at.

He aimed the gun and fired. Liz jumped out the way so the bullet hit the wall but in defence she sent a blast which had them all on the floor. She had powers?

But there was no time to waste, she ripped the things off Max and then helped him up with all her strength. Micheal got up and aimed again. "You're going down!". He sneered and fired but then Liz managed to teleport so the bullet didn't hit neither her or Max.

Max and her were outside in the chilly dark night. Well away from the black building which was Tess's home.

"There you are." Alex voice came from behind her. He wasn't alone. Brody and Sean were standing with him.

"We need to get Max to safety." Liz answered and they all rushed to support her and Max.

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Chpt ten
Present day.

Max kissed Liz's forehead when Maria and Alex left the room to call Riverdog. He, Maria and Alex were debating about what to do. Riverdog seemed to be the last resort.

She had still kept that pendant he had given to her, she loved him. Wearing the pendant was proof of that. He didn't need any other confirmation. His heart leapt with joy but at the same time he was scared sensless.

He was so frightened...he had never been so scared in his life like this before. It worried the crap out of him. "Please wake up Liz..please?". Max silently begged his soulmate to open her eyes.

Now she was cold, her skin was a little paler. Max was getting worried by the minute. "God..Liz...I know you must be hating me right now but I'd rather have you hate me then not wake up ever again." He truthfully told her. "Because if you don't ever wake up...I'll die Liz. I'm going to die if you don't wake up."

He rubbed her hand. "I'm not going to stop trying." He promised her. "Even after everything we've been through, I'll have my arms wide open for you, waiting for you to step inside my arms." He brought her fingers to his lips and softly kissed them.

"I love you."

Something happened. He had a feeling it happened last night. He had a sense of Deja Vu...had he been in this room last night? Something in his heart was telling him he was in this very room last night. With Liz...

Whispers of love floated into his mind, like the sea waves meeting the tide. It was inevitable.

"Max." Liz smiled and held him from pulling back. "This is supposed to happen. You and me, together..forever." She traced his lips with one finger. "And I don't think I can stand being apart from you any longer." She admitted, blushing. "In one moment..you got me addicted to you."
"And you know I feel the same way about you Max Evans. I love you so much and you're the only one I love too." She whispered.
"I need you to feel me." Liz gasped, taking his hand and placed it across her left breast where her heart was beating. "Feel me Max..I live for you."


Then nothing. It was all ripped away again into a huge black void. Max tried to force his mind to think..to recall those moments which were locked away in his pysche. He sat on that same spot where he had been last night night and put his hand on the place. Think Max..think! He forced himself.

Sqeeezing his eyes shut..he tried hard to remember...

And then the flashes came one by one...

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Back to the parrallel world..

"Something needs to be done about that Tess." Liz growled in anger.

"Yeah you're right..let's kill her." Sean rubbed his hands.

Liz covered Max with the comforter and kissed his lips. He lay silently, eyes closed and shivered. He hadn't spoken a word much to Liz's dismay.

Lucky for her that Alex, Brody and Sean came in time to take them to a safer place. The UFO centre, beleive or not, she actually would never have imagined hiding out in the UFO centre which was now Brody and Sean's home. They had their own fitted bedrooms in the building including a guestroom which Liz was more then happy to share with Max.

"Killing Tess is not that easy." Brody told them. "She has delevoped her powers over the years as she aged."

"We need to combine our powers together to take her out." Liz forced. "I'm not having her ruining everything." She seethed. She was livid. Never had she seen such a villian in her life and it surprised her that Tess could even be so bad having no mercy even for the blatant innocent who had never caused her any harm at all.

"Still...she knows our weakeness. She's been studying Max as well as "healing" him." Alex said, gesturing the healing with two fingers of both hands.

"Bitch." Liz muttered. "Well...in this world I seem to have powers." Liz revealed. "From the timeline I'm in, I am human. I have no powers."

The three men exchanged glances and Brody looked at Liz, raising an eyebrow. "Must be the effect of crossing into our world or something has awakened in you."

"I think it's just an effect of being here. Just the static." Liz said. "Sometimes people can see me, sometimes they can't."

"That's the static effect." Alex told her. "From time to time, your visibility will be affected because you're underneath our sky. But the powers...they can either be awakened from within you or something more..I don't know." He shrugged. "Because you're right. You died a human here."

"So you're saying I'm some sort of superpowered ghost?". Liz suggested, finding the idea strange, odd and thrilling at the same time.

"Kind of but not exactly." Sean chimed in. "But you do look hot as either a human or a superpowered ghost." He teased.
"Sean." Liz rolled her eyes smiling. There was the Sean from her timeline, cheeky ass Sean.

"Anyway let's get some sleep." Brody said. "It's late and we need all the energy we can get if we're going up against Tess tommorow."

If she managed to defeat Tess, then maybe she would be able to get home Liz assumed. Maybe this was her mission, to realise what Tess really was and to stop her in this world so she could gain the abilities to stop her in her world. It began to make sense now.

And to do that, she needed to conserve energy. She was tired from all the wondering and running around for today.

"Yeah." Liz nodded taking off her shoes and slipping under the sheets next to her Max. "Let's get some sleep."

They put the light off and left her room, closing the door behind them. Liz wrapped her arms around Max and snuggled
closer to him.

"Let's hope you wake up tommorow Max." She kissed his cheek before falling into a deep slumber.

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Present day..

"So that's it..you know nothing about it?". Max asked Riverdog.

"I know nothing more then that." Riverdog spoke wisely. "The symbol on the pendant signifies protection and spiritual guidance in your alien world."

"But if it's supposed to be protecting her then why is she unconcious still!". Max yelled. "What the hell is it doing to her and why?".So many questions were running through Max's head right now and all of them concerned Liz, was his Liz going to wake up? Was she going to wake up being the same Liz he had loved and known?

"I beleive she is going through a little journey right now." Riverdog answered. "She is at the stage where she is confused..where she requires a lot of help to understand her surroundings and to battle evil.."

"Battle evil?". Maria snorted. "Please, she's just a human..we all are apart from Max. Why Liz?".

"Because she wears the pendant. She is the bearer of the pendant." Riverdog answered. "The pendant had chosen it's owner and since it's Liz, only the pendant can decide what to do and when to do it. There's nothing more we can do except sit and wait till Liz's journey is over."

"No." Max answered stubbornly. "I'm not going to wait till something bad happens to her. Who knows what the pendant is doing to her!, I have to connect with her! I have to bring her back!".

"There is a way.." Riverdog told them. "But it requires a lot of strength and your mind may be heavy after it all."

"I'll willing to do whatever it takes to bring Liz back." Max said, now that he knew the entire truth, he was even more fuelled to save his Liz from whatever darkness she was pulled into.

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 7/10/08 chpt 11 p. 8

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Thanks

garcia88- Hey Kris! Love seeing you here! So happy you like the way Liz got Max out of that white room!
This was just so great and I absolutely loved it
:D Aww thanks, your words mean a lot to me :D

Pijeechinadoll- My sweet lovely ping!!! Here I am updating after such a hard day only because you can make me smile.
aww i nearly cried at the scene with max and liz. sad
Oh sweetie I hope you didn't cry! I even shed a few tears lol. Love it that you're here hun!! :D

keepsmiling7 -you will wake up soon from this bad dream. I promise. Thanks for the fb!

Natalie36 - Thanks!
hope mike can get his head out of his ass
Me too. lol.

destinyc-
Tess needs to die, and quickly
. you're funny destiny!! Don't worry she will get her punishment! Thanks!

cocogurl -
And seeing Liz with powers like that is awesome. I always thought that they should talk more about Liz getting powers in the series she would be such a bad ass with powers. And I can't wait to see Liz use her powers to kick Tess's pretty, blonde ass!
Don't you worry cocogurl..that will soon happen, very soon I promise you! Thanks for being here!! Love your comments! :D

begonia9508 -
and there is certainly a way to kill Tess: what about a cannon fire and with it burn her little and nasty brains
hehehe, you funny woman Eve! you make me laugh!! Thanks for the fb!

maxandlizforever -
Maybe you should bring her max to Liz in the alternate reality to help her
! - what a great guess! How did you know I was going to do that? Did you read my mind or something lol. Thanks for the fb! :D

Enjoy!!
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Chpt Eleven

Present day

Max seethed with anger, Everything they had been through was complete lies. How could he not see the lies, utter fake crap that was put right before his eyes. All this time, he had beleived and accepted things as they were thrown at him. Like Liz sleeping with Kyle, His so called destiny with Tess and most importantly, Tess' fake friendship. How he always would confide in her whenever she was there...she was always there.

Constantly with her fake shit in his face. He guessed she never really gave a toss about anyone but herself. Faking smiles and all. He should have known being friends with someone like Tess had a heavy price to pay.

It all made sense now. Why Liz would back away from him, because Tess was there. The sickening fake illusions of him with Tess intimatly cut his and Liz's heart in pieces.

He was hurt and in deep pain.

How that bitch Tess would pretend to care, he was hurt because he failed to change her into a good person. Him, the responsible king, their dependable leader could not teach love to the heart hearted.

He felt like such a failure and then there was Liz. The woman his heart knew was the one for him. The woman his heart beated for.

He failed her.

All those months of pain and frustration, he hadn't been the only one to go through that. Why oh why did he let her go?
Tess had mindwarped them, parted them and made them forget that beautiful night they had last night.

He looked down onto Liz and sighed in sadness. "I'm responsible for everything." He whispered and brought her hand to his lips, kissing her knuckles softly. "When you wake up, I hope you can forgive me Liz."
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In the parallel world

"Max?". Liz mumbled as she reached out to the space next to her only to feel it was empty. Max wasn't there. "Max?". She repeated, sitting up. What time was it?

Liz turned to the digital clock and it read five thirty. She sighed and then noticed Max standing infront of the window in silence, just staring blankly ahead.

Liz said nothing and got out of bed. She walked upto Max and wrapped her arms around his waist from behind and rested her chin on his back. "What are you thinking Max?".

Max felt as if someone's presense was around him. His eyes were still trying to paint the picture before him and his senses were just awakening. The sweet scent of strawberries and vanilla filled his nostrils, he felt...happy and releived when that scent touched him.

It had been so long since he felt like this. But it was even better if that made any sense...

"Max." He heard his name and that sweet voice which was like music to his ears. Could it be?

He noticed a pair of smaller hands on his abs and felt a small warm body pressed against his. He was begining to feel again.
But he was afraid. He didn't want to feel.

"It's time." Sean said, opening the door and Liz imediatly removed her hands from Max as she turned around to come face to face with the three men.

"We should get going." Brody said.

Liz looked at them and then looked at Max. Max was staring right back at her with tears shining in his eyes as she noticed the confused look on his face.

"I'll be right there, wait outside." She told them and then obeyed, closing the door as soon as they left.

Max blinked and looked at Liz. "Tell me this is a dream?". He whispered. "Because if it is, I don't ever want to wake up."

"Max?". Liz smiled, breathlessly relived. She stepped closer to him and took his hands in hers. "It's no dream. I'm here. I'm here with you." She insisted, hoping he'd beleive her. "I'm Liz."

"Liz?". His voice croaked with emotion. He looked deeply into her eyes as if he was searching for her soul and then gasped when he realised this was Liz.

He reached out to touch her hair first, something he had always wanted to do and never had a chance to. "So soft.." He murmered, so happy he finally got the chance to touch her silk chocolate hair. "You're so beautiful".

Liz blushed. He was just like her Max. "What happened to you?". She curiously asked. "Why did you stop living?".

"Because you died." Max said. "You died and I died too." He said. "I must be dead because I'm seeing you right now." He was happy as long as he was with her. Twenty years of agony and pain went passed and it was better if he was dead and his soul was with Liz's soul in the afterlife.

"I'm not dead and neither are you." Liz explained. "We're alive."

"Wait...then....it's impossible...I saw..." He stammered. Liz looked exactly like the last time he saw her, young and beautiful with flawless skin. During the last twenty years, she hadn't aged a bit.

"I know but I'm from another timeline Max." She revealed.

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Present Day

"Are you absolutely sure you want to do this Max?". Alex asked him. "We already have one of us that's knocked out cold, we don't need another." He reasoned. "Plus we have no idea how to bring you back."

"That's my job." Max said. "And yes I'm sure I want to do this." He said with urgency.

"You have to connect with her and go into her mind deeply." Riverdog said. "This will result in your mind leaving your body do you know that?".

"What the hell does that mean?". Maria asked, needing more clarification.

"Max will end up like Liz, and it may be possible he may too get lost." Riverdog explained.

"How long should he be then?". Alex asked.

"If by midnight he does not return, then I'm afraid they could be lost forever." Riverdog whispered, terrified himself.
Max thought about it.

Just him and Liz in some world together didn't seem bad but then again it could be a nightmare that Liz was trapped in.

He dreaded what he'd see.

But he had to save his Liz.

He could not leave her alone in some nightmare world. He needed to bring her back. Back to the people who loved her.

"I'm ready." Max said, lying next to Liz as he took her hand into his larger one.

"Okay." Riverdog said. "Focus and connect deeply."

Max nodded and took a few deep breathes before listening to Riverdog's words...and within moments he was sucked into a world he had never come across before...

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In the parallel world

Liz had left Max with Alex. She couldn't risk Max's safety. She, Sean and Brody had gotten ready to face Tess. Today Tess would get her punishment.

When they reached the black building, Liz had teleported them inside away from Micheal's line of fire. He was already there, guarding the building like a black dragon.

Isabel was wondering in the halls and Liz stepped out, leaving Sean and Brody to run elsewhere so they could cover some ground.

"Isabel." Liz stated bravely as she made her way towards her. Isabel turned towards Liz. "I need.." Liz stopped as the doors opened and a screeching Maria was thrown out of Tess's office.

"I can't understand why you!-" Maria screeched as the guards threw her out and then she gasped on seeing Liz. "Liz?".

"Maria?".

Maria's red heels clattered on the ground as she helped herself up. Her hair was longer but messy and she was wearing a very short red dress and had a denim jacket over it. Maria's makeup was also smudged.

Isabel looked back at Liz again. "Impossible." She whispered. She knew Liz Parker, heck the whole town knew her. The girl who died in a tragic accident in the Crashdown twenty years ago. Then what the hell was she doing here, alive and walking?

"Oh my god Liz is that you?". Maria asked, a smile and a gasp breaking from her lips. Since her best friend's death, Maria had lost her way. She had no direction and didn't know where to go. Her rock was gone and she was forever falling into the unknown...

"Yes it's me." Liz nodded, tears pooling in her eyes. Arms outstretched ready to hug her bestfriend. Maria ran into Liz's arms and hugged her.

"I must be dreaming." Maria said. "Because.." She pulled back. "I saw your dead body Liz. Twenty years ago."

"What the hell is going on." Isabel demanded looking straight at Maria and Liz. "Who the hell are you!?". She pointed at Liz and wondered if this was a shapeshifter. According to Isabel, Liz Parker was dead. Dead.

"I'm Liz." She said.

"No you can't be because Liz died twenty years ago. I was at her funeral." Isabel said. "We all were."

"I'm not dead." Liz stepped infront of Maria. "I'm alive and I need your help."

"You're a shapeshifter aren't you?". Isabel asked and wondered why a shapeshifter would pose as Liz. Unless she had something to do with Max's dissapearence last night. Max was always in love with Liz. And perhaps being Liz would awaken Max....

Isabel raised her hand to throw a blast at Liz who thew up a shield and the blast was consumed.

Isabel gasped. "You're alien."

"You're an alien?". Maria asked, shocked but releived. Now her best friend would be able to defend her against the bad guys.
"I'm Max's other half." Liz corrected. "The other half to his soul."

"Don't give me the soul shit". Isabel snapped. "So you were the one that took him last night?". She tried to throw another blast. "Give my brother back."

"I need your help. He needs your help!". Liz protested.

"Well you're getting in the way aren't you!". Isabel threw another blast and Liz teleported, rushing to Isabel and pinning her against the wall.

"Listen Isabel, we don't have much time. Today is the day Tess release that infection on the world. The ganderium I'm guessing." Liz remembered the time when they all had come across the blue crystals that infected humans. She still remembered the name and the whole dupree thing.

"How do you know about the ganderium?". Isabel gasped.

"Because they were used to mix alien and human DNA Isabel. When you were sent on Earth in 47, your essense was cloned and mixed with human DNA and the ganderium could only do that because normally alien and human cells don't mix very well." Liz said, remebering each and every word spoken about this matter.

Isabel looked at Liz. Now she was convinced about Liz. "You're right but I thought Tess is using it to turn people into aliens?".

"No." Liz shook her head. "Tess is marking the people she consideres as failiures and is going to use the ganderium on them to infect them...which will eventually kill them." She repeated the words that Brody, Alex and Sean had told her not long ago.

"Oh my god." Isabel said. "But how do you know that?".

"I'm from another world Isabel. A world were I didn't die...because Max Evans healed me on the day of the crashdown."

"You're lying..." Isabel gasped. "It can't be true." She had to be skeptical. There's no way other timelines could exist. "You know what you're saying....it goes against the laws of nature."

Liz chuckled. "And your existance doesn't?".

Isabel bit her lip. Liz had a point there.

Liz realised she still had Isabel pinned against the wall. "Sorry.." She said, letting go of her. Where had this newfound strength came from?

"What is going on?". A curious Maria asked.

"We're going to sort Tess out, that's what." Isabel said, straightening her clothes.

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 10/15/08 chpt 12 p. 9

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Thanks to everyone

pijeechinadoll- hey my wispa buddy!! Gunna buy some soon aren't we? lol. :D

jake17-
This is so good sweetie!!
Thanks :D :D
Love the different timelines how clever of you!!
Thanks! you're so nice!
Love this so much!
I love your comments so much. :D

Natalie36 -
wow another great part
I hope you think even better for the next part . Thanks!

futuremrsmcdreamy - Wow a new feedbacker! Is my story really that good! Thanks for being here! I hope you enjoy the next part :D

garcia88 - Kris, you know I love your comments :wink: Thanks!

crazedearthgirl - wow another new feedbacker! Thanks so much! You're making me very happy :D

maxandlizforever-
Your going to bring max to her!
yep, you guessed right. That's what I'm gunna do. :D

destinyc- lol, naturally Tess must die. Love your comments. Thanks.

begonia9508 -
maybe she was the one who killed her twenty years ago!!
You cracked that case. :roll: Thanks for the fb!

dreamerfiend - thanks for the fb! Hope you enjoy this next update just as much! :D So happy you love it.

cocogurl -
This story is absolutely wonderful and you are such a talented writer.
The feeling is mutual lol.

Coming from a very talented writer herself, I shall take those words as a compliment. :D Thanks!

I hope I didn't miss anyone..I'm so tired after writing up so many updates.

Enjoy!! :D

Chpt twelve

In the Paralell world..

Max fell on the floor when he was sucked into an alien world. He quickly gathered himself and stood up to familiarize himself with the surroundings. Small blurry circles hovered right before his eyes, twinkling before fading into the scene laid out before him.

He was in the UFO centre, it was dark and gloomy and odd strange feeling lingered from the shadows. He didn't feel welcome.

Everything was different. The last time he stepped into the UFO centre, everything was in it's original place. The information booth, the pictures about spaceships on the walls and the models of stuffed little three feet green aliens.
Alex walked in holding his cellphone in one hand as he was speaking to a worried Brody on the other line. "You know what to do...." Alex stops when he saw Max.

Max turns around to see Alex. "Alex?".

This Alex was more aged, mature looking and his hair line was receding a little. "I'll talk to you later after you did the deed". Alex said into the phone before disconnecting. "Hey." Alex waved. "You woke up already? I swore I just saw you alseep..."

"Wait...there's another me?". Max asked innocently.

"There's two Maxes?". Alex piped, surprised. "Wow...so you're from Liz's timeline?".

"Was Liz here?". Max asked, getting straight to the point.

"She was." Alex stepped into the light. "But she left with Sean and Brody to take Tess down. You'll find her where the dome used to be..it's a big black bulding...Tess is the president of United States." Alex revealed and he couldn't miss the look of shock, horror and disbelief on Max's face.

Max felt like a bucket of icy cold water had been splashed on him. Tess the president of America? That meant she had an incredible amount of power and control...she didn't need her powers to take Liz out. She'd have security guards to simply shoot her and could get away with it.

This was horror. Actually worse then any horror movie he had ever seen or heard off.

"I need to get there." He said.

Alex tossed him his car keys. "Well you're in luck because we have an extra car."

Max caught the keys.

"Thanks. Alex."

"And one more thing Max." Alex said, taking out a piece of crystal from his back pocket. He had found this many years ago and had kept it hidden along with his existance.

Hoping that some day it'll come to use.

"What's this?". Max asked as Alex handed him a seven inch long, two inch wide crystal.

"It's the key to the granolith."

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Isabel pushed the two doors open as she barged in with Liz and Maria behind her. Tess was on the phone to one of her workers and the sudden intteruption could not be simply ignored.

"I'll speak to you later." Tess said quietly down the phone before clicking it off. "Isabel..did you forget to knock or something?".

Clearly she wasn't very happy on Isabel just barging in whenever she felt like it. "Save it." Isabel snapped. She wasn't going to have anymore shit from Tess.

"Who are your new friends Isabel?". Tess curiously asked looking at Liz and Maria but her eyes focused on Liz the most.

"Some people who actually have a heart." Isabel answered coldy as she stepped in front of Tess's desk with Liz on one side of her and Maria on the other.

"How nice of you but shame they're going to die very soon too." Tess scoffed. "Such a pretty face too". She said, looking directly at Liz. "Very young and beautiful but then again...I don't have time to know what else you're good at apart from flashing your beauty..you could as as good as nothing like that whore standing right there." Tess pointed at Maria who frowned.

"I won't let you kill these innocent people Tess." Liz growled, stepping infront of the other two women. "I will stop you".
Tess smiled. "Try all you want. Micheal!".

Micheal stepped into the room with breifcase. "Yes Tess?".

"Briefcase now." Tess said as he approached her and handed her the breifcase. Tess opened it with her powers.
"What's that?". Maria asked.

Micheal looked at Maria and Liz. "Liz?".

It may have been twenty years but no one could forget the girl who died in the crashdown. It had been the biggest tragedty to ever befall on Roswell.

Tess took the gun out of the box and ran her fingers over the shiny cool metal. "Wow..this is perfect."

"What the hell is that?".

"Tess you can't kill these people." Liz said and before she could react, Tess aimed at Isabel and shot her in the stomach.

"Oh my god!".

Isabel let out a gasp and fell to the floor. Micheal rushed to her. "Tess what did you do?!". He cried, holding Isabel in his arms. Liz and Maria gasped as they caught sight of a bleeding Isabel.

"She's no good to us anymore Micheal. She's siding with the humans."

Liz looked at Tess and then blasted her. The window smashed in effect Tess hitting it. The gun fell to the floor. Maria took off her denim jacket and handed it to Micheal. "Here..press this against her wound." She offered out of compassion

Micheal thanked Maria and then pressed the wound. "I need Max. I need Max." He chanted.

Sean and Brody ran into the room. "What the hell happened?".

"Go get Max!". Liz cried out to them. She looked back to the broken window assuming Tess had fell out. She went to investigate and before she knew it, Tess hauled herself onto her from the window and sent Liz falling onto the desk with a wild Tess trying to choke her to death.

Brody dialled his cell phone and began to call for Max. Sean decided to run over and help Liz. He ripped Tess off her and Liz kicked her in the shins. "Let me handle the bitch!". She roared and grabbed Tess' hair and pinned her against the wall before using her left hand to throw some punches.

Tess laughed as blood formed in her mouth. "You're never going to stop me! Kivar might have stopped me gaining Antar but no one can stop me from having the world".

Liz threw Tess on the floor and shot a blast to her.

Tess went limp and didn't moved. Liz was about to check if she had knocked Tess out but a scream from behind her distracted her.

Nasedo was behind Sean and had done something to him. Sean screamed in pain and dropped to the floor lifelessly as Nasedo finished. A ball of light was in his hand before it disapeared. Nasedo looked at it in fasincation.

"Amazing....how one touch can do a lot." He commented.

"Nasedo?". Liz gasped.

Nasedo was involved too?

"Nasedo we need to save Isabel!". Micheal snapped at the man who taught him the hunting skills. The man he considered as his father.

"Let her die." Nasedo shrugged.

By then Isabel's shirt was soaked with her blood. She was getting more and more paler by the second. Micheal saw her as his sister, his family...and now she was dying.

"You sick fuck!". Micheal cried. "Where is Max!".

"He's supposed to be on his way." Brody intervened but Nasedo grabbed the breifcase and put his hand on the scanner. The machine was operated and he recited the code.

"Missiles now ready for take off." The machine said in a monotone.

Liz blasted Nasedo and Brody ran to take care off him. "Find out how to turn the thing off!". Liz yelled at Brody and then went back to check on Tess who was wide awake and held a gun in her hands. The same gun she fired a bullet at Isabel.

"I had you killed." Tess snorted. "You should have been dead!". She grabbed the gun that was on the floor and fired..
But before the bullet could reach Liz, Max came out of nowhere and stepped infront of Liz. "Nooo!". He yelled and used his shield to stop the bullet.

"Max!". Liz cried as everything went in slow motion.

And then both of them felt a pull...

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In the present world..

Both Liz and Max gasped as the air entered their lungs. They sat up as their souls were thrusted back into their bodies again. Maria and Alex stood up. "Hey..that was quick!".

Liz gasped and turned around to see Max. She didn't need words to know what had happened. "You brought me back." She realised through their connection.

Liz threw her arms around Max and hugged him tight. "I'll never neglect you again."

She was so worried about what had happened in the alternate timeline that she had changed her ways. Never again was she going to throw her Max away. Life was too short.

"What happened?". Riverdog asked the most important question. "What did you see?". He looked at Liz.

"I saw disaster." Liz answered, looking back. "Total disaster."

Minutes after explaining to the three what had happened, they all were shocked. "I knew there was something up with that Tess all along." Maria growled. "She would be a murderer wouldn't she?".

"This is very shocking." Alex said, pacing up and down the room.

"We must do something about this." Riverdog announced. "A threat like that cannot be simply ignored."

"What do we do though?". Alex asked the obvious question. "We can't just kill her."

"What's that Max?". Liz asked, noticing the crystal Max still had in his hands.

Max looked at it and remembered Alex had given it to him from the other timeline. "It's the key to the granolith." He answered.

"I have an idea." Liz said, as the thoughts finally were put into place in her mind.

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When they left Liz's room. Liz was alone in the room with Max who was all too quiet. "Max...you haven't said much since the whole episode of this horror." Liz rolled her eyes as she shut her curtains. "Ah it's good to be back home".

"Liz I'm worried". He began. "I may have only been there for a short time but I've been here...felt things and known things that were hidden...or rather stolen from us both."

Liz turned around. "What do you mean stolen?".

Max licked his bottom lip and walked to Liz, he cupped her soft cheeks in his hands. "Last night...we...we made love." He said, blushing. He still couldn't beleive that had happened.

"We made love?". Liz raised an eyebrow. As soon as the words left Max's mouth, she remembered what future Max had told her...warning her about how things got cemented between them...

But she had a feeling Future Max wasn't real, and Max was talking about stolen moments like their lovemaking which she didn't seem to remember...it was painful.

"When you left at the prom, I followed you home..here...and I sort of knew about the future me thing. Our connection...I just picked it up...and then...we just surrended to our hearts and made sweet love."

Sweet love.

Liz had to be in awe of that. "She raped us of our memories didn't she?". Liz bit her bottom lip. "Bitch." She rolled her eyes. "Should have known she was playing us all along."

"I'm so sorry Liz..I should have known this...I should have stopped it." Max said, taking the blame on himself.
"Max it's not your fault." Liz snapped. "You did everything you could to keep us together. You might have been king but you need your own personal space too."

"Liz.."

"No Max. All of us should have known who Tess really was." Liz corrected. "You're not alone and you'll never be." She declared and then pressed her lips to his, pulling on heated passionate kiss full of promise, love and commitment.

Max couldn't resist and wrapped his arms around Liz's waist and she parted her legs as he lifted her up in his arms. Liz fell a rush of emotions run through her body as she wrapped her legs around his waist, pulling her heated core closer to his hardness.

Liz pushed her tongue into Max's mouth, showing him the rhythm of how she'd like him to take her again. Max moaned as Liz's tongue caressed his tongue and he cupped her bottom, grinding her closer to his obvious erection. He carried her towards the bed and lay her down.

"We made love right here Liz. Right on this bed." He said breathlessly.

"Will you...make me remember?". Liz whispered. Wanting to re enact the scene of their lovemaking.

Max took his shirt off.

"Yes." He answered.

They'd make use of this short time they had left before all hell went loose.

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Re: Cry of the Heart (M/L, Adult) 10/23/08 chpt 13 p. 10

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thanks to..

pijeechinadoll - lol sorry to leave it there pingu! You know me, lol, I try but life has other plans for me lol.

keepsmiling7- yes, it sure is nice to have Max helping Liz to remember their night! Actually, keepsmiling7...I looked back and remembered one of your comments so I write the last update, thinking about what you said before lol. :D

begonia9508- Oh Eve, wouldn't we all go back and change some things in our lives if we had the chance? I certaintly would lol. :D

garcia88- Aww thanks Kris! Means so much that this was your fav part. I loved writing it. :D Yess Tess is gunna get a lot of ass kicking soon hopefully. They should have done that in the show. Thanks for your lovely fb!

maxandlizforever - Yeah! lol, I hope that was what you wanted to see lol. Hope you enjoy the next part!

crazedearthgirl - Yeah I know, But don't worry, it's gunna get more hot! :D

cocogurl - I know, I agree with you cocogurl. I wish they hadn't killed Alex off the show either. Love seeing you here, you must get sick of me saying that lol. But it's true :D

jake17- Carrie! Hi! :D

dreamerfiend - Thanks for the nice fb! Hope you enjoy the next part too :D

natalie36- And it's about to get hotter if you think that was hot already lol

XYZ - enchanting story?! I love the word Enchanting! Omg,! Thanks for the compliment! I am really happy now! :D
Thank you so much. Here's another chapter, sorry for the delay.

Enjoy peeps!

Chpt thirteen

"Oh god yes Max!" Liz cried as he thrusted into her, making her come again and again.

This was beautiful. This was perfect. As her lover filled her to completion, flashes of their first time together sparkled right before her eyes. The waves of emotion, the sensual pleaure and the sweet adoration of each other's souls was perfect...

Stars exploded right before both of their eyes as they both felt their realease emerging from loving each other's bodies. Hearts thumping into one beat. Max cried out as he filled her body with his seed.

They groaned as Max carefully slid out of her and lay on the space beside her.

"Wow..that was..." She breathed out, smiling.

"Perfect." He finished, turning to face her. "I'm so happy I made you remember."

"I'm so happy you did." She turned on her side to face him.

Max caressed her cheek with his finger. "I love you so much you know that?".

"Mmm-hmm." Liz nodded. "And you know I love you so much too."

Max kissed her forehead. "And you surprise me Liz. Everyday. You don't stop loving me."

"You know I never will stop loving you." Liz smiled, rubbing her nose against Max's.

"I should have told you the first day I saw you." He said all of a sudden.

"You were only in third grade Max." Liz pointed out.

"Yeah you're right. You wouldn't have beleived me." He sighed.

"Of course I would." Liz answered. "Our connection would have made sure of that."

Silence.

"I hope this thing is going to be over." Max told Liz. "I want to be with you everyday and not to have it stolen from me ever again."

"She's going to pay Max." Liz said angrily. "Of all the unecessary pain and anguish she had caused us. She had no right to violate us like that and I'm afraid if we just ignore it it's only gunna get worse."

"You're right."

Liz got up. "Right, I'm going to have a shower. Care to join me Max Evans?". She teased, flashing her eyes and wiggling her eyebrows at him.

Max sat up. "You know I will."

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Tess waited until Kyle left his ex room. She needed to convince him that she needed to sleep alone when she'd use this as an opportunity to check up on Max and try to fuck him tonight. She was horny as hell tonight and wanted to take what he was going to give Liz.

His priceless virginity and his child.

All she had to do was phone him, arrange a meeting place or the place of where she'd fuck him sensless and conceive the heir to Antar.

She shut off the lights and then slipped out the room through the window. Into the darkness she ran and pulled out a cellphone to call Max.

He never answered.

"Dammit!". Tess said, cursing. Max never answered her calls.

She decided to check up on him at his place. But he wasn't there either. There was only one place he'd be...
Liz's place...

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After moments of touching her soapy body in the shower, Liz had forced him to rinse his own body and finish the shower. They dried each other's bodies and Max was tempted to take her again but Liz had a feeling they didn't have much time. He pulled a face when he saw her get dressed.

"Max later okay?". Liz laughed. "You have to behave." She told him. "Now get dressed. You don't want to be caught naked do you?".

"Of course not." He answered, pulling on his boxers. "But I do want to be naked with you." He teased.

"Oh Max." Liz rolled her eyes in amusment. She couldn't wait to have more moments like these when they sorted out the Tess problem.

When they both got dressed, Liz gave Max a quick kiss. "Now I'll meet you later. You know what to do." She ushered him out of the room. Instead of taking the balcony, Max took the stairs so he could sit in the crashdown. "I'll be right down if you need me." He pressed his lips to Liz. "Love you."

Liz smiled as she watched her soulmate decend for the stairs. "See ya Max." Liz smiled and shut the door. She went out to the balcony and hung the towels on the line she had pinned up.

Tess had just reached there and was on the ladder, spying on Liz. She had just missed Max. Liz was alone.

Tess didn't really want to talk to Liz but the glistening crystal that sat on the lawn chair had her attention. She knew what it was. And she wanted it real bad.

"Tess? What are you doing here?". Liz asked, noticing that the blonde was spying on her.

"Urrrr.." Tess gasped and then stepped onto Liz's balcony. "I came to see how you were doing." Tess lied, brushing her curls away from her face.

Liz knew what Tess was upto. Even a fool would able to work out what she wanted. "Why?".

"Because you know after last night at the prom...me kissing Max...I guess I should have told you about this..." Tess said. "Me and Max...well we kissed because we beleive we're both single." Tess began looking at Liz as she played with her fingers. "So you can't really be mad at Max for kissing me." Tess rolled out her point.

"And?". Liz raised an eyebrow. "You think I'd be mad at Max for 'kissing' you." Liz asked. She didn't have to use physical gestures to indicate what she meant but she knew what she was saying. She knew that Tess hadn't picked up the subtle sarcasm in her words.

"Yeah." Tess nodded, wishing Max had really kissed her that night.

"Hmm..okaaay." Liz rolled her eyes. "I am so not interested in any of this so I'd rather you leave." Liz told Tess, restraining herself from breaking. They had a plan to take her out and if Liz stepped out of line, Tess would get away.

"Right." Tess mumbled thinking of what to do now and then looked at the crystal. "What is that Liz?".

Liz bit her lip. "I found it." Liz told her. "Near the cave."

"The cave?". Tess said, acting more interested.

"Yeah." Liz nodded, faking a smile. "When I came back to roswell after three months. You know the whole destiny thing?". Liz lied, thinking if Tess could lie so could she.

"Oh. Oh right." Tess nodded, thinking it was odd. All her life she was made to search the key to the granolith and now it was there, in the hands of her nemisis. Her love rival, Liz Parker.

"I don't know what it is but I didn't want to be clumsy and let it fall into the hands of the FBI so I kept it. I was having problems with Max at the time and we didn't talk much...Isabel was too busy with her things and Micheal...well". Liz pressed her lips together. "He's Micheal. So I just sorta took care of it."

"Can I have it?". Tess asked, hoping this would be easy.

"Can you-?" Liz asked, acting as if she didn't hear right. "You want it?".

"Yeah, Can I have the thing?". Tess asked a little louder.

"Do you know what it is?". Liz said, picking up the thing and waving it in front of Tess.

"It belongs to us." Tess answered. "It's the key to the granolith."

Liz wondered why Tess was telling her the truth. "Really? and that'll take you home?".

"Yeah..but no one wants to go home so I might as well destroy that key." Tess shrugged, lying again. She wanted that key and then she'd manipulate Max into getting her pregnant so she'd be able to complete that deal with Kivar. Delivering the three aliens and the baby to him.

Liz smiled and handed it to Tess. "Well it's yours. You can have it." Liz said. "I'm so glad to get that sorted out. I just had enough of being in the alien abyss."

"Well, this won't bother you again.." Tess said gleefully, holding the key in her hands. Finally!

"Okay. So you can go now. I have work to be getting on with." Liz said to Tess.

"Bye Liz." Tess's smile grew as she left. Liz watched her carefully before pulling out her cellphone and dialling Maria's number.

"She's got the key now." Liz said as soon as Maria picked up. "Time for the next part of our plan."

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