The Crush (AU,M/L,ADULT) Ch 5 - 02/24/04 [WIP]
Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2004 6:03 pm
This story is challenge #1 taken from LoveIsForever. Heres the link:
viewtopic.php?t=2676
Title: The Crush
Rating: ADULT
Couple: M/L
Summary: Go to link above. Everythings there.
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine, the idea isn't either. But the story itself is mine.
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The Crush
Prologue
She stared out into the crowd of kids. Some she knew from kindergarden, others she'd never seen before. Her small light brown eyes caught sight of dark brown hair.They made their way down to his face. His amber eyes grabbed hold of her, not wanting to let go. She felt a new feeling of warmth overcome her. It confused her, but at the same time she welcomed the feeling. Wanting to grab it and store it in a special box to make sure it never went away...
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says she can find
the things that make up a life
I bet she will
she stays behind, I could stay here all night
until theres nothing at all
no theres nothing at all
well theres nothing at all
to make her change her mind....
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Max
11:24am
I'm so alone. I need somebody to kiss and hold till all of my secrets go away. Sometimes I wish I was different. I wouldn't be scared of being close to somebody. Loving them.
I search the cafeteria for my friends. They always make me feel better. Not that I'm depressed or anything, I'm just so alone. I need to talk to them. Forget that I can never have anybody. Never be able to love anyone. I sit next to my best friend Alex. He knows about my secret. I feel normal around him.
"You look hungry" he points out, taking a huge bite out of his chicken sandwich.
"I'm fine"
"No, your not, here" he holds out a piece of the sandwich.
"Yes, I am" I push his hand away and reach for my headphones. He puts the piece of sandwich on a napkin in front of me. I give in and eat it.
"Whats up?" he looks at me concerned, I don't reply.
"Max, could you at least act happy for once?"
"No" I turn the volume up on the CD player. Why can't he just leave it alone?
I see Maria coming from the corner of my eye.
"Hey Max"
She wraps her arms around me and looks me in the eye. I smile back at her then turn away.
I look out the window at the group of girls running inside from the rain. My eyes land on a small dark haired girl. Liz. She pushes her wet hair away from her face, then walks toward our table. I watch as she pulls off her sweater. Her tan stomach peeking out from under her shirt. Her hips sway as she walks.
Jesus.
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TBC. Do you guys like it? I wish for lots of feedback so I can keep writing! Thanks for reading.
~Julia
viewtopic.php?t=2676
Title: The Crush
Rating: ADULT
Couple: M/L
Summary: Go to link above. Everythings there.
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine, the idea isn't either. But the story itself is mine.

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The Crush
Prologue
She stared out into the crowd of kids. Some she knew from kindergarden, others she'd never seen before. Her small light brown eyes caught sight of dark brown hair.They made their way down to his face. His amber eyes grabbed hold of her, not wanting to let go. She felt a new feeling of warmth overcome her. It confused her, but at the same time she welcomed the feeling. Wanting to grab it and store it in a special box to make sure it never went away...
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says she can find
the things that make up a life
I bet she will
she stays behind, I could stay here all night
until theres nothing at all
no theres nothing at all
well theres nothing at all
to make her change her mind....
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Max
11:24am
I'm so alone. I need somebody to kiss and hold till all of my secrets go away. Sometimes I wish I was different. I wouldn't be scared of being close to somebody. Loving them.
I search the cafeteria for my friends. They always make me feel better. Not that I'm depressed or anything, I'm just so alone. I need to talk to them. Forget that I can never have anybody. Never be able to love anyone. I sit next to my best friend Alex. He knows about my secret. I feel normal around him.
"You look hungry" he points out, taking a huge bite out of his chicken sandwich.
"I'm fine"
"No, your not, here" he holds out a piece of the sandwich.
"Yes, I am" I push his hand away and reach for my headphones. He puts the piece of sandwich on a napkin in front of me. I give in and eat it.
"Whats up?" he looks at me concerned, I don't reply.
"Max, could you at least act happy for once?"
"No" I turn the volume up on the CD player. Why can't he just leave it alone?
I see Maria coming from the corner of my eye.
"Hey Max"
She wraps her arms around me and looks me in the eye. I smile back at her then turn away.
I look out the window at the group of girls running inside from the rain. My eyes land on a small dark haired girl. Liz. She pushes her wet hair away from her face, then walks toward our table. I watch as she pulls off her sweater. Her tan stomach peeking out from under her shirt. Her hips sway as she walks.
Jesus.
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TBC. Do you guys like it? I wish for lots of feedback so I can keep writing! Thanks for reading.
~Julia