The Kindness of Strangers (AU, ML / Mature) (Complete)
Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2004 8:04 pm
Winner - Round 9

Liz and Max see each other in the rain outside Maria's house.
Winner - Round 6


Diane

Winner - Round 5





Best Author of a Dreamer Fanfic
Best Author of an Alternate Universe Fanfic
Author Who Should Have Written for the Show

The Kindness of Strangers
Rating: Mature for now
Category: M/L AU
Summary: The kindness of a stranger gives Liz Parker a chance at a new life, but secrets from her past and the suspicions of an infuriating man threaten to ruin everything she has rebuilt.
Disclaimer: Don't own any of the characters, but this ain't like Roswell, so don't sue.
Author's Note: This is my back-up story that I work on when I am frustrated with everything I am writing. It started purely as a tension-releaser, and I've never written anything like it before. Can't promise when it will be updated, and I make no apologies for that, but I do have twenty parts written already and will post those regularly (once, maybe twice a week). But I warn you, after twenty, updates may be once a month, depending on my level of frustration with my other stories. It's completely outlined from beginning to end, but finding the time to update it is another story. I do so when I am inclined.
Safe and Sound - Sheryl Crow
Maybe this is forever
Forever fades away
Like a rocket ascending into space
Could you not be sad?
Could you not break down?
After all, I won't let go
Until you're safe and sound
Until you're safe and sound
There's beauty in release
There's no one left to please but you and me
I don't blame you for quitting
I know you really tried
If only you could hang on through the night
Cuz I don't want to be lonely
I don't want to be scared
And all our friends are waiting there
Until you're safe and sound
Until you're safe and sound
There's beauty in release
There's no one left to please but you and me
Until you're safe and sound...
Feel like I could've held on
Feel like I could've let go
Feel like I could've helped you
Feel like I could've changed you
Feel like I could've held you
Feel like I could've hurt you
Feel like I was a stranger
Feel like I was an angel
Feel like I was a hero
Feel like I was a zero
Feel like I could've cured you
Feel like I could've healed you
Feel like I could've touched you
Feel like I could've saved you
Feel like I should've heard you
Feel like I could've moved you
Feel like I could've changed you
Feel like I could've held you
Feel like I could've kept you
Feel like I should've told you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I really loved you
*******
I promise...I will protect you with all that I have and all that I am...
PART ONE
Liz Parker sat up as straight as the bindings that slashed her hands behind the chair would allow. She tried not to sway as her body fought against her will, wrought with pain and exhaustion.
Her throat was cracked and parched, and her left eye was swollen shut, evidence of their impatience. Dried blood caked around her nostrils, and her cheek throbbed painfully. Her hair was caked with dirt and her own blood, and she felt as if her right shoulder had been ripped from its socket. And it probably had. She was pretty sure it was dislocated.
She was trapped, and she knew it, but she would not show fear.
She'd been caught red-handed with the stash, and would surely be sent to a South American prison. Her mission was critical, and she failed.
A Federale paced back and forth in front of her in impatience, and she knew her time was growing short. First they'd tried to lie to her, telling her that if she gave up her source, they would let her go, but she knew better. She was trapped either way, but if she gave up her source, she'd surely die a mysterious and suspicious death, and that wasn't even the worst of what she was worried about.
She wasn't stupid. There was no way they were going to let a gringo go, and extradition was out of the question. She doubted that the embassy had even been informed of an American citizen being detained. She was on her own, and she knew it. She had accepted that long ago, and knew that the consequences were grave, but she'd had no choice. These men did not want to apprehend her source to stop the drug trade. They wanted a piece of the action.
She'd been tied to this chair for two days, and she was tired and in great pain. She knew that this time, there was no escape.
"Mírelo ramera pequeña, nosotros podemos hacer las cosas la manera fácil o la manera dura. Si usted habla, nosotros nos cercioraremos a los guardias no tienen su manera con usted antes nosotros lo cerramos arriba para el resto de su vida. Si usted hace no, yo no puedo prometer seré tan comprensión."
Look you little bitch, we can do things the easy way or the hard way. If you talk, we'll make sure the guards don't have their way with you before we lock you up for the rest of your life. If you do not, I can't promise I will be so understanding.
"Somos de la paciencia pequeña, así que usted habla o llamamos a los guardias aqui."
We are of little patience, so you talk or we call the guards.
"I don't speak Spanish, for the hundredth time," Liz grated, lying through her teeth.
Liz stared at him defiantly with her good eye, and the Federale lost the little patience he had left and slapped her resoundingly across the mouth. She felt blood well in her mouth and she leaned over slightly to spit it out, before raising her head again.
The Federale slammed his hand down in violence on the table before her, causing her to jump in involuntary response. His eyes narrowed and he looked at her.
He relented.
"Don't think I don't know you know every word I am saying. You've been here long enough, two years in fact, isn't it?" he said in a lilting accent.
She blanched, seeing that they knew more about her than she had anticipated. What else did they know? Her heart clenched in fear.
"I see I have your attention now," The Federale said, with a malicious chuckle.
This was worse than she had thought.
"Yes gringa, we know more about you than you can imagine, and we know whose buttons we have to push to get what we want. It's amazing what a little torture will do to open the mouths of your confidants," he said.
Liz felt tears spring to her eyes as she thought of Felipe.
"What did you do to him?" she yelled in outrage.
The Federale clucked in mock sympathy.
"It was very sad, really. But you can take comfort in the knowledge that he screamed your name as my guards slit his throat," he said.
"NOOO!!!" Liz cried in anguish, trying to yank her hands from the unforgiving wire, not feeling it as it dug into her flesh.
The other guard held her down as she struggled, and after a time her movements ceased in defeat.
"He was just a boy," she whispered in hatred, no longer able to meet the man's gaze.
"A boy who knew what he was into. Who knew the consequences," he answered, unconcerned.
"He had to feed his family!" Liz grated.
The man shrugged.
"Enough of this," he said. "You talk, or you meet the same fate."
"No," she said with quiet force.
Liz kept her head lowered, and a rough hand grabbed her hair and yanked it back to expose her tear-stained face.
"I see," he said and raised his hand to strike her.
The door flew open, saving her the blow. The man looked at the officer in impatience.
"¿Qué es?" he said in irritation.
"Señor, algo necesita su atención inmediatamente," the officer said.
Sir, someone needs your attention, right away.
The Federale laughed in contempt.
"Es el Comandante," he said to Liz, reverting again to Spanish.
"Ahora usted deseará que usted habrá hablado a mí. El no es paciente como mí."
It must the Commander. Now you will wish you had talked to me. He is not patient like me.
Liz watched the man walk out of the room, and tried to prepare herself for whatever fate might become her.
She barely listened to the arguing in the hallway. Everything hurt from being tied into the chair for such and extended period of time. She felt the hot slicing of the cables embedded in her wrists that had gone unnoticed before.
She winced in discomfort, knowing that this would seem like a walk in the park once they were done with her.
She looked up to find the remaining guard leering at her, and she glared at him.
They could take her body. They could beat her until she couldn't see straight, but they would never get the information out of her. Her source held the key to everything, and she would die keeping his location a secret, as much as she hated it.
It was the hard life of a smuggler, and she had accepted it when she had been accepted into the fold. She hadn't had a choice. She'd become hardened, seen things too horrible to imagine, too monstrous to comprehend, and yet she had gone on, because there was nothing else for her to do, but bury it somewhere in her head. She'd always thought that someday it would all crash around her, choking her with the sheer cruelty and senselessness of the things she'd witnessed, but she had prayed that it would be long after she had paid her dues and was safe.
Her imagination often when into overdrive when she came across the atrocities. She couldn't stand leaving the innocent dead desecrated and did what she could to make it right. But sometimes when she buried them, it made it all the more real for her. Looking at their faces frozen in terror or pain, made thoughts of the last moments of their life more real to her, and without bidding, her mind would create horrible scenarios that stayed with her long after she had buried the body and moved on. It was as if her subconscious was creating a horrific memorial to all she had witnessed.
The argument in the hall grew louder, and she heard the Federale shout in indignation.
A sharp slam erupted from outside the door, and the voices lowered in volume instantly.
She didn't care what the disagreement was about. It did nothing to change her situation, but to postpone the inevitable.
She said a silent prayer that someone would have mercy on her soul and would make it quick, if it had to be painful.
At that moment, the door swung open again, and another guard came in with the Federale.
"Desátela," the Federale said in a gruff tone, and Liz's head snapped up.
Untie her?
What the hell was going on?
The guard who had been leering at her walked behind her chair and with unnecessary roughness, pulled the cables from her skin. Liz bit down to keep from crying out as the blood immediately started to rush to her fingers, causing a razor-like pain to shoot into her hands.
"Levante," the Federale barked, ordering her to get up.
She stumbled to her feet, and her left arm was grabbed tightly by the new guard, warning her not to make any sudden moves.
The Federale jerked his head toward the door, and the guard shoved her toward the door, pushing her though it. Liz hit the wall and her hands rose to it automatically, staining the beige paint with blood from her wrists.
"Obténgala fuera de mi vista," the Federale grumbled.
Get her out of my sight.
The guard led her purposefully to the door, propelling her toward an old squad car, or more specifically a small, old VW Rabbit that had a light-bar installed on its roof.
He pushed her into the backseat, and she cried out as her shoulder hit the dirty vinyl seat covering, sending bright sparks of pain shooting through her arm. She struggled to maintain consciousness, eyeing the door.
He slammed the door and got into the front seat. Liz reached for the handle on instinct, hoping it would be open.
"Don't bother," the guard said in English. "It doesn't open from the inside."
"Where are you taking me?" Liz asked, her voice cracking.
"It is not for me to say," the guard answered. "You will see, soon enough."
The small automobile took off with a lurch and threw Liz against the seat back, causing another paralyzing jolt of pain to run through her body, and she mercifully lost consciousness.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
Some Time later, the Rabbit jolted to a stop in front of a beautifully maintained villa overlooking the gorgeous mountain forest of Fazenda das Posses.
The guard got out of the car just as a well-manicured matured gentleman opened the intricately carved wood doors that decorated the front entrance to the large abode.
"All went well?" he asked, as he watched the guard walk around the car to the back passenger door.
"There was a little resistance Senor, but nothing that I couldn't handle," the guard replied with a nod. "And your offer was too tempting to refuse. She is unconscious."
"Probably just as well for the moment," the man replied, as the guard opened the door and lifted the young woman out of the back seat.
"Be careful with her," the man said.
"Of course," the guard said, careful not to jostle the small figure he held. "She is injured."
He nodded, noting her appearance. She had been beaten badly as a result of the interrogation.
Her eye was swollen shut, broken blood vessels discoloring the area around it. Her wrists were bloodied, and he imagined she had other injuries not visible to his eyes. But it could have been much worse.
"I would have thought as much, after being in the Federales' custody for two days. I wish we had known sooner. It would have saved us all a lot of trouble, but there's nothing we can do about it now," the man said. "I'll have Carolina tend to her."
The man stepped up onto the landing with the girl.
"Yes," the man commented appraising her. "We'll help her. From everything I've read, she is a crafty one. I am surprised they were able to capture her at all."
"I have heard it was more luck than anything Senor," the guard said.
"It turned out to be lucky for me as well," the man smiled.
She is a brave and fascinating young woman."
Manuel looked at the man with a curious expression, but new better than to ask any questions. His employer would volunteer the information if he saw fit.
"I'll take her upstairs now, Senor," the guard said, and the man nodded.
"Well done Manuel," the man said with approval, running his hand through his graying hair. "If you would bring her to the guest quarters please."
"Of course, Senor," the guard assented and walked through the front door, still ajar.
Yes, she was an interesting girl, who had led a harrowing and dangerous life. He had much respect for her, and with any luck, he would turn her life around.
To Be Continued.....

Liz and Max see each other in the rain outside Maria's house.
Winner - Round 6


Diane

Winner - Round 5





Best Author of a Dreamer Fanfic
Best Author of an Alternate Universe Fanfic
Author Who Should Have Written for the Show

The Kindness of Strangers
Rating: Mature for now
Category: M/L AU
Summary: The kindness of a stranger gives Liz Parker a chance at a new life, but secrets from her past and the suspicions of an infuriating man threaten to ruin everything she has rebuilt.
Disclaimer: Don't own any of the characters, but this ain't like Roswell, so don't sue.
Author's Note: This is my back-up story that I work on when I am frustrated with everything I am writing. It started purely as a tension-releaser, and I've never written anything like it before. Can't promise when it will be updated, and I make no apologies for that, but I do have twenty parts written already and will post those regularly (once, maybe twice a week). But I warn you, after twenty, updates may be once a month, depending on my level of frustration with my other stories. It's completely outlined from beginning to end, but finding the time to update it is another story. I do so when I am inclined.
Safe and Sound - Sheryl Crow
Maybe this is forever
Forever fades away
Like a rocket ascending into space
Could you not be sad?
Could you not break down?
After all, I won't let go
Until you're safe and sound
Until you're safe and sound
There's beauty in release
There's no one left to please but you and me
I don't blame you for quitting
I know you really tried
If only you could hang on through the night
Cuz I don't want to be lonely
I don't want to be scared
And all our friends are waiting there
Until you're safe and sound
Until you're safe and sound
There's beauty in release
There's no one left to please but you and me
Until you're safe and sound...
Feel like I could've held on
Feel like I could've let go
Feel like I could've helped you
Feel like I could've changed you
Feel like I could've held you
Feel like I could've hurt you
Feel like I was a stranger
Feel like I was an angel
Feel like I was a hero
Feel like I was a zero
Feel like I could've cured you
Feel like I could've healed you
Feel like I could've touched you
Feel like I could've saved you
Feel like I should've heard you
Feel like I could've moved you
Feel like I could've changed you
Feel like I could've held you
Feel like I could've kept you
Feel like I should've told you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I could've loved you
Feel like I really loved you
*******
I promise...I will protect you with all that I have and all that I am...
PART ONE
Liz Parker sat up as straight as the bindings that slashed her hands behind the chair would allow. She tried not to sway as her body fought against her will, wrought with pain and exhaustion.
Her throat was cracked and parched, and her left eye was swollen shut, evidence of their impatience. Dried blood caked around her nostrils, and her cheek throbbed painfully. Her hair was caked with dirt and her own blood, and she felt as if her right shoulder had been ripped from its socket. And it probably had. She was pretty sure it was dislocated.
She was trapped, and she knew it, but she would not show fear.
She'd been caught red-handed with the stash, and would surely be sent to a South American prison. Her mission was critical, and she failed.
A Federale paced back and forth in front of her in impatience, and she knew her time was growing short. First they'd tried to lie to her, telling her that if she gave up her source, they would let her go, but she knew better. She was trapped either way, but if she gave up her source, she'd surely die a mysterious and suspicious death, and that wasn't even the worst of what she was worried about.
She wasn't stupid. There was no way they were going to let a gringo go, and extradition was out of the question. She doubted that the embassy had even been informed of an American citizen being detained. She was on her own, and she knew it. She had accepted that long ago, and knew that the consequences were grave, but she'd had no choice. These men did not want to apprehend her source to stop the drug trade. They wanted a piece of the action.
She'd been tied to this chair for two days, and she was tired and in great pain. She knew that this time, there was no escape.
"Mírelo ramera pequeña, nosotros podemos hacer las cosas la manera fácil o la manera dura. Si usted habla, nosotros nos cercioraremos a los guardias no tienen su manera con usted antes nosotros lo cerramos arriba para el resto de su vida. Si usted hace no, yo no puedo prometer seré tan comprensión."
Look you little bitch, we can do things the easy way or the hard way. If you talk, we'll make sure the guards don't have their way with you before we lock you up for the rest of your life. If you do not, I can't promise I will be so understanding.
"Somos de la paciencia pequeña, así que usted habla o llamamos a los guardias aqui."
We are of little patience, so you talk or we call the guards.
"I don't speak Spanish, for the hundredth time," Liz grated, lying through her teeth.
Liz stared at him defiantly with her good eye, and the Federale lost the little patience he had left and slapped her resoundingly across the mouth. She felt blood well in her mouth and she leaned over slightly to spit it out, before raising her head again.
The Federale slammed his hand down in violence on the table before her, causing her to jump in involuntary response. His eyes narrowed and he looked at her.
He relented.
"Don't think I don't know you know every word I am saying. You've been here long enough, two years in fact, isn't it?" he said in a lilting accent.
She blanched, seeing that they knew more about her than she had anticipated. What else did they know? Her heart clenched in fear.
"I see I have your attention now," The Federale said, with a malicious chuckle.
This was worse than she had thought.
"Yes gringa, we know more about you than you can imagine, and we know whose buttons we have to push to get what we want. It's amazing what a little torture will do to open the mouths of your confidants," he said.
Liz felt tears spring to her eyes as she thought of Felipe.
"What did you do to him?" she yelled in outrage.
The Federale clucked in mock sympathy.
"It was very sad, really. But you can take comfort in the knowledge that he screamed your name as my guards slit his throat," he said.
"NOOO!!!" Liz cried in anguish, trying to yank her hands from the unforgiving wire, not feeling it as it dug into her flesh.
The other guard held her down as she struggled, and after a time her movements ceased in defeat.
"He was just a boy," she whispered in hatred, no longer able to meet the man's gaze.
"A boy who knew what he was into. Who knew the consequences," he answered, unconcerned.
"He had to feed his family!" Liz grated.
The man shrugged.
"Enough of this," he said. "You talk, or you meet the same fate."
"No," she said with quiet force.
Liz kept her head lowered, and a rough hand grabbed her hair and yanked it back to expose her tear-stained face.
"I see," he said and raised his hand to strike her.
The door flew open, saving her the blow. The man looked at the officer in impatience.
"¿Qué es?" he said in irritation.
"Señor, algo necesita su atención inmediatamente," the officer said.
Sir, someone needs your attention, right away.
The Federale laughed in contempt.
"Es el Comandante," he said to Liz, reverting again to Spanish.
"Ahora usted deseará que usted habrá hablado a mí. El no es paciente como mí."
It must the Commander. Now you will wish you had talked to me. He is not patient like me.
Liz watched the man walk out of the room, and tried to prepare herself for whatever fate might become her.
She barely listened to the arguing in the hallway. Everything hurt from being tied into the chair for such and extended period of time. She felt the hot slicing of the cables embedded in her wrists that had gone unnoticed before.
She winced in discomfort, knowing that this would seem like a walk in the park once they were done with her.
She looked up to find the remaining guard leering at her, and she glared at him.
They could take her body. They could beat her until she couldn't see straight, but they would never get the information out of her. Her source held the key to everything, and she would die keeping his location a secret, as much as she hated it.
It was the hard life of a smuggler, and she had accepted it when she had been accepted into the fold. She hadn't had a choice. She'd become hardened, seen things too horrible to imagine, too monstrous to comprehend, and yet she had gone on, because there was nothing else for her to do, but bury it somewhere in her head. She'd always thought that someday it would all crash around her, choking her with the sheer cruelty and senselessness of the things she'd witnessed, but she had prayed that it would be long after she had paid her dues and was safe.
Her imagination often when into overdrive when she came across the atrocities. She couldn't stand leaving the innocent dead desecrated and did what she could to make it right. But sometimes when she buried them, it made it all the more real for her. Looking at their faces frozen in terror or pain, made thoughts of the last moments of their life more real to her, and without bidding, her mind would create horrible scenarios that stayed with her long after she had buried the body and moved on. It was as if her subconscious was creating a horrific memorial to all she had witnessed.
The argument in the hall grew louder, and she heard the Federale shout in indignation.
A sharp slam erupted from outside the door, and the voices lowered in volume instantly.
She didn't care what the disagreement was about. It did nothing to change her situation, but to postpone the inevitable.
She said a silent prayer that someone would have mercy on her soul and would make it quick, if it had to be painful.
At that moment, the door swung open again, and another guard came in with the Federale.
"Desátela," the Federale said in a gruff tone, and Liz's head snapped up.
Untie her?
What the hell was going on?
The guard who had been leering at her walked behind her chair and with unnecessary roughness, pulled the cables from her skin. Liz bit down to keep from crying out as the blood immediately started to rush to her fingers, causing a razor-like pain to shoot into her hands.
"Levante," the Federale barked, ordering her to get up.
She stumbled to her feet, and her left arm was grabbed tightly by the new guard, warning her not to make any sudden moves.
The Federale jerked his head toward the door, and the guard shoved her toward the door, pushing her though it. Liz hit the wall and her hands rose to it automatically, staining the beige paint with blood from her wrists.
"Obténgala fuera de mi vista," the Federale grumbled.
Get her out of my sight.
The guard led her purposefully to the door, propelling her toward an old squad car, or more specifically a small, old VW Rabbit that had a light-bar installed on its roof.
He pushed her into the backseat, and she cried out as her shoulder hit the dirty vinyl seat covering, sending bright sparks of pain shooting through her arm. She struggled to maintain consciousness, eyeing the door.
He slammed the door and got into the front seat. Liz reached for the handle on instinct, hoping it would be open.
"Don't bother," the guard said in English. "It doesn't open from the inside."
"Where are you taking me?" Liz asked, her voice cracking.
"It is not for me to say," the guard answered. "You will see, soon enough."
The small automobile took off with a lurch and threw Liz against the seat back, causing another paralyzing jolt of pain to run through her body, and she mercifully lost consciousness.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
Some Time later, the Rabbit jolted to a stop in front of a beautifully maintained villa overlooking the gorgeous mountain forest of Fazenda das Posses.
The guard got out of the car just as a well-manicured matured gentleman opened the intricately carved wood doors that decorated the front entrance to the large abode.
"All went well?" he asked, as he watched the guard walk around the car to the back passenger door.
"There was a little resistance Senor, but nothing that I couldn't handle," the guard replied with a nod. "And your offer was too tempting to refuse. She is unconscious."
"Probably just as well for the moment," the man replied, as the guard opened the door and lifted the young woman out of the back seat.
"Be careful with her," the man said.
"Of course," the guard said, careful not to jostle the small figure he held. "She is injured."
He nodded, noting her appearance. She had been beaten badly as a result of the interrogation.
Her eye was swollen shut, broken blood vessels discoloring the area around it. Her wrists were bloodied, and he imagined she had other injuries not visible to his eyes. But it could have been much worse.
"I would have thought as much, after being in the Federales' custody for two days. I wish we had known sooner. It would have saved us all a lot of trouble, but there's nothing we can do about it now," the man said. "I'll have Carolina tend to her."
The man stepped up onto the landing with the girl.
"Yes," the man commented appraising her. "We'll help her. From everything I've read, she is a crafty one. I am surprised they were able to capture her at all."
"I have heard it was more luck than anything Senor," the guard said.
"It turned out to be lucky for me as well," the man smiled.
She is a brave and fascinating young woman."
Manuel looked at the man with a curious expression, but new better than to ask any questions. His employer would volunteer the information if he saw fit.
"I'll take her upstairs now, Senor," the guard said, and the man nodded.
"Well done Manuel," the man said with approval, running his hand through his graying hair. "If you would bring her to the guest quarters please."
"Of course, Senor," the guard assented and walked through the front door, still ajar.
Yes, she was an interesting girl, who had led a harrowing and dangerous life. He had much respect for her, and with any luck, he would turn her life around.
To Be Continued.....