Age Doesn't Matter (M/L & M/M Adult) COMPLETE

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Age Doesn't Matter (M/L & M/M Adult) COMPLETE

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Title: Age Doesn't Matter

Author: Franny

Category: M/L & M/M

Rating: Teen/Adult

Authors Note:
Hey guys this is just a story that i'm delicating to my best friends Nessa and ronnie. They begged me to write a story... so i would like lots of feedback, thankyou !!! :D :P :D
P.S nessa this is the way things are meant to be...

Declaimer:
i do not own any rights to roswell...

Summary:
Liz meets her new history teacher Mr Max Evans.
but theres something that the two cant get over ... and thats the chemistry between them ... but if something happens will 'Age Matter'?



Age Dosen't Matter





LIZ P.O.V


“So who’s the new teacher?” Maria asks from beside me.

“Mr. Max Evans” says Pam while licking her lips seductively.

Maria rolls her eyes.

“That girl is the biggest slut I have ever seen” she says and I cant help but agree with her.

Pam Troy … how could you describe her Ummm …. As a bitch and a sex addictive tramp.

I look up from my history book to see the hottest guy I have ever seen walk in.

“Who the hell is he?” I say as my mouth begins to water.

“Hello, did you not here me tell you … that’s our new history teacher Mr Evans” she says looking at me with a funny expression.

“Hello everyone I’m Mr Evans your new history teacher, but you can call me Max” he says and I can’t seem to get the smile off of my face.

Now when I said he was hot that was an understatement.

He is delicious … he has the most amazing amber eyes and think dark hair.

His lips are so perfect and I can just picture myself ki ….

“Liz … Liz are you listening to me?” I hear my best friend Maria shouts in my ear and I look at her expression.

“I was thinking” I say trying to get back to my day dream, but she insists on talking to me.

“So this morning I was walking to school and I saw the most handsom guy, he was tall and has spiky hair and I tried and tried to get him out of my mind but it just didn’t work” she says looking up at the ceiling with a dazed look.

I roll my eyes and look to the front to see Mr hot ass … I mean Evans, writing on the board.

“So what do I do?” I hear Maria ask.

“What school does he go to?”

“I’m not sure but I think he comes here”

I see the smile on her face and think ‘this guy has to be hot’…
“So I’m just going to go through the role and then you can continue with excise 1.3 in your text book” I hear Max say.

“Sarah waters”

“Here”

“Pam Troy”

“Here hottie”

“Ok … Maria Da’luca” he asks rolling his eyes.

“Here”

“Matt Russel”

“Yo”

“Michael Garuin”

“Here sorry I’m late” says this cute guy with spiky hair.

I don’t think I’ve seen him before he must be new.

“Oh my god” I hear Maria sigh beside me.

“That’s him” she says.

“Who?”

“The guy, I cant get out of my mind” she says while staring at him.

Just then Michael turns around and sees us looking, he winks at Maria and she blushes.

I’ve never seen her this way.

“Isabel Ron”

“Here” says Isabel.

Now let me tell you a bit about Isabel …. She is beautiful and powerful.

We have been friends since kindergarten and even when she became popular she never blew us off.

“Liz Parker”

“Here” I say in my sweetest voice.
I see him raise his eyes off of the role and we make eye contact.

God he has great eyes …

“Alex Whitman” he says with his eyes on the role again, but he glances up every once in a while to look at me.

So I have something on my face …?

Do I have a weird rash on my face …?

Why is he looking at me…?

“Ok so now just excise 1.3 and just the remember questions” he says as he stares at me.

And I swear it is not just my imagination.

“What are you crazy that’s only 3 question and we still have a whole period left” says Vicky Maleny the geek of our class.

“Well you better hurry then you don’t want them for homework do you?” he asks and everyone burst out laughing.

You should see Vicky’s expression she looks like she’s just seen a ghost.

5 minuets after I’m finished my work and looking at Maria who is writing on a piece off paper that Michael just throw at her.

Once again I look up to see Mr Max … what a name … looking at me.

I blush.

Just then Maria hand me the paper and I read it.

“Hey baby

Hey

What you doing after school?

Don’t know what you doing after school?

I’m a be with you!!!”

That’s sweet I think to myself and I like his slang language its sooo cute.

I look at Maria and hand her the paper back.

“His sweet, don’t let him go that easy say yes and go out with him” I say and she raises her eyebrow.

“I don’t know what has gotten into you … but I like it” she says and she smiles and looks back at Michael with a nod.

“So I take it that everyone is finished” Max says and we all nod.

“Great so it looks like you aint got any homework” he adds.

“So how about since I’m new you guys help me out a little, I’ll let you ask questions to get to know me better and then I can ask questions to get to know you better” he suggests and everyone agrees.

“I have a question” says Pam.

“Ok” says Max back politely but we can see the irritation in his eyes.

“How old are you?”

“32”

“Are you married?” Sarah asks.

“No, not married” he replies.

“Do you have a girlfriend?” I find myself asking everyone’s question.

“No” he replies looking at me in the eyes and grinning.

I must be dreaming.

“What about you … Liz right?” he asks and I’m a bit shocked.

“Have you got a boyfriend?” he asks and I open my mouth to answer but Tommy Joans, caption of the football team breaks in.

“Of cause she does she’s with me” he says while looking at me while licking his lips.

“Keep dreaming” I say with a look of disgust on my face.

I’m a shy girl but I am very popular … what can I say I hang out with Isabel after all.

But the difference between me and a popular girl like Pam Troy is that I know how to keep my legs shut and I don’t let my popularity get to me.

“Looks like you just got dumped” I see Max ask while looking at Tommy and then grinning at me.

God he has the cutes smile…
“Do you have a brother?” one of the girls behind me says.

“Yes, I do” he says.

“What’s his name?” another says.

Damn he is really popular already…

“Zan” he says and I think that, that is a really good name.

“Are you twins?” Pam asks and I can’t help but feel like covering up at her seductive tone.

“Kind of, well we look alike” he says and I smile … two of him.

God women must be going crazy with the two of them walking this earth.

“How old is he?”

“23” he replies and you can tell by the look in his eyes that he is proud of his little brother.

“See we look identical until he decided to get all the tattoos and earrings” he says.

“Did you just say earrings?” Pam asks.

“Yes”

“That so turns me on” she says and I thank god when I hear the bell ring.

BEEEEEEEPP

I get up with a still dazed Maria and grab my bag on my way out I see Max looking over at me one last time and I wave.


*************************************************************


It’s 11.30 at night and I just got off the phone with Maria.

She told me about her date with Michael and it sounded great.

First they went to The Crashdown a local alien themed restaurant with the best hamburgers.

And yes I only say that because I work there … but it could be true…

After eating she said that they went for a walk in the park … how sweet!!!

She said that she got to learn a lot about him and that she feels really bad.

You see Michael was adopted when he was 3 by his parents the Garuin’s.

But he says that his father Hank beats him up and tells him to do the house work, but he also says that he understands why.

Apparently Michael mother died when he was 5 years old because of breast cancer and his father took it bad and developed a drinking problem.

I just don’t think anyone should have to put up with that pain.

I think he should leave…

Well anyway … after the park he took her home and they had a passionate goodbye kiss.

I would go into detail but this is my best friend I’m talking about … its gross.

I continue to lay in bed looking up at the ceiling thinking about Mr Max Evans, he was so great today I mean no homework and you could tell he hates Pam Troy.

Could age really matter ….


*************************************************************


It’s 8.30 and I stroll into school.

I’m wearing my favourite yellow dress, it’s a creamy yellow colour and it finishes at mid thigh, its low cut but it doesn’t show too much cleavage.

I see Maria and Alex run up to me.

Alex his my other best friend, we have been friends since … well forever and he has a big time crush on Isabel and to tell you the truth I think she likes him back even though she would never admit it.

“Hey” Alex says lifting me up and spinning me.

“Alex put me down” I say while giggling, he places me on my feet and I hear Maria start to talk.

“So chika, there’s this party in the hall tonight are you in?” she asks and I would normally say no, but a party in the hall would mean teachers supervision which means I’ll see Max… what the hell...

“I’m in” I say and see the shock on Alex’s face.

“Since when do you party?” he asks and I just pinch his checks and say.

“Since I fell in love” he knows I’m joking and drops the subject.

“Why don’t you come Alex I’m sure Isabel will be there?” I hear Maria ask as we start to walk to our period one class which we all have together.

And no it is not history … not that I would mind…

********************************************************************


Its lunch time and I have not seen Max anywhere I’m starting to think that he didn’t come to school today.

What a bad boy … I’ll have to punish him later…

I walk over to our usual table and see Maria and Michael sitting down.

I place my tray on the table and sit down.

“Hey love birds” I say and they both blush … how cute.

“Hey” Michael says.

“Hey chika” Maria says just as Isabel and Alex come and suit down.

“So I take it that we’re all going to the dance later today” Michael say while looking at Maria.

How cute his trying to ask her out on a date…

“Yeah, well I know I am” she says looking up at him.

“So how bout we go together?” he asks with a hopeful smile.

“Sure sounds great to me” she says back.

“How bout you sugar want to go to the dance with me?” Alex asks Isabel with a deep voice trying to act cool.

“How about no, geekest” she tells him but you can see she is trying not to laugh.

“Nice way to win a girl” I hear a voice from behind me say and turn to see Max standing there.

“You mind if I join the cool kids table?” he asks and I see him smile at me.

“Take a seat” I say while moving over making room for him to sit next to me.

“so you guys going to the dance tonight?” he asks.

“Yeah are you?” Maria asks.

She has that look in her eyes and I know that she knows how I feel about Max … wait did I just say how I feel about Max.

How do I feel about him?

I think I love him …

“Yeah, I got asked to go but I think I’ll be there alone” he says while glancing at me quickly before turning his glaze to everyone else.

“Who asked?” Maria asks the question I was dieing to know.

That girl is a genius when she wants to be…

“Pam Troy” he says and I see him shake with disgust next to me.

“At least you go asked” Alex says.

“I got turned down” he adds and I giggle.

I see Max smile beside me and I suddenly feel self conscious.

“What about you Liz did you get asked?” Isabel asks and I know that she too knows my little secret.

“Yes, but I said no” I say shyly.

I see Max sigh in relief and I begin to question myself … could he feel something for me???

“Well I got to go, I have a class in 5 minutes and I got to get ready” Max says standing up about to leave.

“I guess I’ll see you at the dance” he says while looking down at me and then turning his glaze to everyone.

He walks away and I admire the view.

“I guess so” I whisper…

*************************************************************


Its 7 o’clock and Maria and I are walking into the hall … she picked me up ten minuets ago and we had a little talk about Max and Michael.

What can I say the girl knows me to well.

I decided to wear a short black skirt and a pink boob-tube, with these hot light pink boots that match my top that Maria got for me Christmas last year.

Maria is wearing a short red dress that fits her perfectly with open high heel shoes.

We walk into the hall and I hear the music roaring out of the speakers.

Maria grabs my hand and pulls me over to the dance floor where Isabel and Jacky my other best friend are already dancing.

Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha
Ha, ha-ha, ha
Ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha
Ha, ha-ha, ha

I look near the end of the hall and see Max making his way towards the tables.

It's funny how a man only thinks about the "beep"
You got a real big heart, but I'm looking at your " Beep"
You got real big brains, but I'm looking at your " beep"
Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at your "Beep"

He stops when he sees me and looks at me with a sly grin on his face.

I don't give a " beep"
Keep looking at my " beep"
'Cause it don't mean a thing if you're looking at my " beep"
I'm a do my thing while you're playing with your " beep"
Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha

We start to dance sexier trying to turn him and Michael on … its Maria idea.

Every boy's the same
Since up in the seventh grade
They been trying to get with me
Trying to (Ha, ha-ha, ha, ha-ha)
They always got a plan
To be my one and only man
Want to hold me with their hands
Want to (Ha, ha-ha, ha, ha-ha)
I keep turning them down
But, they always come around
Asking me to go around
That's not the way it's going down

I look over at Max and see him with his mouth open.

“I think its working” I say to Maria.

“I know” I hear her say and turn to look at Isabel shaking her thing while Alex who is in the corner of the room has a heart attack.

'Cause they only want
Only want my ha, ha-ha
Ha, ha-ha
Only want what they want
But, na, ah-ah
Na, ah-ah

We start to get a big audience and I see Pam Troy out of the corner of my eyes getting the shits at her loss of attention.

It's funny how a man only thinks about the " beep"
You got a real big heart, but I'm looking your " beep"
You got real big brains, but I'm looking at your " beep"
Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at your...

I see Pam get up with her ‘gals’ and make her way over to where we’re dancing.

I don't give a " beep"
Keep looking at my " beep"
'Cause it don't mean a thing if you're looking at my " beep"
I'm a do my thing while you're playing with your " beep"
Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha

“I know she aint doing what I think she’s doing” I hear Maria say.

Do you know that no
Don't mean yes, it means no
So just hold up, wait a minute
Let me put my two cents in it
One, just be patient
Don't be rushing
Like you're anxious
And two, you're just too aggressive
try to get your (Ahh)

“Oh hell she is Maria” I hear Isabel say.

I look over to see Pam Troy and her best friends Lydia Maya, Julian Holl and Micky Ray standing there with their hands on their hips.


Do you know that I know?
And I don't want to go there
they Only want
Only want my ha, ha-ha
Ha, ha-ha
Only want what they want
But, na, ah-ah
Na, ah-ah

“You girls want to put it to the test and see who the best dancers really are?” they ask us.

It's funny how a man only thinks about the"beep"
You got a real big heart, but I'm looking your..."beep"
You got real big brains, but I'm looking at your..."beep"
Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at your.."beep".

I look around and sure enough our audience has turned into the whole school.

I don't give a..."beep"
Keep looking at my..."beep"
'Cause it don't mean a thing if you're looking at my.."beep".
I'm a do my thing while you're playing with your..."beep"
Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha

I look over my shoulder and see Max staring at me with a grin on his face and I know that there is no way I am losing this dance.

Boomp-boomp, Omp-omp
Boomp, boomp-boomp
Boomp-boomp, Omp-omp
Boomp, boomp-boomp

I hear the girls talking and sure enough we are going to have a show down…


Ooh, you've got it bad I can tell
You want it bad, but oh well
Dude, what you got for me
Is something I
Something I don't need

I look up and see Pam, Lydia, Julian and Micky getting ready for our little dance.

It's funny how a man only thinks about the..."beep"
You got a real big heart, but I'm looking your..."beep"
You got real big brains, but I'm looking at your..."beep"
Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at your..."beep"

I don't give a.."beep".
Keep looking at my..."beep"
'Cause it don't mean a thing if you're looking at my..."beep"
I'm a do my thing while you're playing with your..."beep"
Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha

I walk over to the Dj and give him the song that we are going to dance to.


It's funny how a man only thinks about the..."beep"
You got a real big heart, but I'm looking your..."beep"
You got real big brains, but I'm looking at your..."beep"
Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at your..."beep"

I walk back over to the girls and nod, the song starts to finish and we watch as Pam and her ‘gals’ make their way over to us.

I don't give a."beep"..
Keep looking at my..."beep"
'Cause it don't mean a thing if you're looking at my..."beep"
I'm a do my thing while you're playing with your..."beep"
Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha

The song finishes and we stand and wait for the song that we are all going to have a show down to.

The dance floor is completely empty with just Me, Maria, Isabel and Jacky on one side and opposite from us there’s Pam, Lydia, Julian and Micky standing there while looking like tarts.

Sorry for the language but it’s the truth … we are always in completion with them to see who is better.

Why do they insist on losing …?

“You ready?” I hear Maria say.

“Hell yeah” we all scream back.

Let the show down begin ….

*************************************************************


"Thong Song"

This thing right here
Is lettin all the ladies know
What guys talk about
You know
The finer things in life
Hahaha
Check it out

We see them come to stand in front of us willing to dance first and give us the spot light after them.


Ooh dat dress so scandalous
And ya know another ni**a couldn't handle it
See ya shakin that thang like who's da ish
With a look in ya eye so devilish

We step in and start to dance all crazy, but it works because we hear the whole hall roar up with applause.

Uh
Ya like to dance at all the hip hop spots
And ya cruise to the crews like connect da dots
Not just urban she likes the pop
Cuz she was livin la vida loca

We both start to shake our thangs on the dance floor and out of the corner of my eyes I see Michael and Alex screaming like crazy for us.

She had dumps like a truck truck truck
Thighs like what what what
Baby move your butt butt butt
Uh
I think to sing it again
She had dumps like a truck truck truck
Thighs like what what what
All night long
Let me see that thong

It start s to get hot when we see them start to get on top of each other and that’s when we start to move our hips a little faster.

I like it when the beat goes da na da na
Baby make your booty go da na da na
Girl I know you wanna show da na da na
That thong th thong thong thong
I like it when the beat goes da na da na
Baby make your booty go da na da na
Girl I know you wanna show da na da na
That thong th thong thong thong

We start to do a rhythm dance moving to the beat and making sure we all did the same song.

That girl so scandalous
And I know another ni**a couldn't handle it
And she shakin that thang like who's da ish
With a look in her eye so devilish

I glaze over at them and see that they look out of breath.

Uh
She like to dance at all the hip hop spots
And she cruise to the crews like connect da dots
Not just urban she likes the pop
Cuz she was livin la vida loca

Even though they start to slow down we continue to dame after all I did say I was not going to lose this dance … did I not?

Whoaaa
That dress so scandalous
And I swear another nigga couldn't handle it
See ya shakin that thang like who's da ish
With a look in her eye so devilish

(Whoa)
Uh ya like to dance at all the hip hop spots
And ya cruise to the crews like connect da dots
Not just urban ya like the pop
Cuz she was livin la vida loca

I know that the best part of the song is getting ready and I sneak a look at Max to see him cheering us on.

She had dumps like a truck truck truck
Thighs like what what what
Baby move your butt butt butt
(Ooh)
Uh think to sing it again
Cuz she had dumps like a truck truck truck
Thighs like what what what
Baby move your butt butt butt
Uh think to sing it again
Come on
Come on
Come on
Come on

Yeahhhh yeah

We start to shake our asses as best as we came for the climax of the song and I see Pam trip over Lydia and they walk off the stage arguing and screaming at each other.

Whoa
Uh alright
Uh whoa yeah
Ooh
Whoa
(Like it when the beat goes da na da na)
(Baby make your booty go da na da na)
(Girl I know you wanna show da na da na)
Baby
(That thong th thong thong thong)

The whole hall begins to scream as everyone shouts out how good we were dancing and I look over to Max and see him wink at me and to tell up the truth just seeing him wink at me is worth the pain that is in my ass from shaking it to hard.

(I like it when the beat goes da na da na)
(Baby make your booty go da na da na)
(Girl I know you wanna show da na da na)
(That thong th thong thong thong)

The song finishes and we move to get a drink.

I turn around with my glass in hand and see Max walking my way, but before I can make it over to him Tommy steps in front of me and kisses me.

I pull away shocked and quickly look in Max’s direction to see the disappointed look on his face.

Please I pray … don’t make him think that I’m with Tommy.

I look over once again to see him gone… is it possible that he feels the same way as me…


TBC...
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hey everyone thanx for the feedback ... i hope you like the story and keep replying ! ! !
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LIZ P.O.V


Its 8 o’clock when I wake up and I rush out of bed and run into the shower.

RING RING

I hear to phone ring and turn off the shower, I make my way over to the phone

“Hello” I say.

“Liz, thank god your there” I hear Maria’s voice call through the phone.

Dame that girl has a loud voice.

“What wrong?” I ask

“I have to talk to you like right now?” she says and I start to wonder what is going on.

“Ok, I’m on my way” I say back to her.

“K bye” she says back before hanging up.

I get dressed while wondering what the hell is up with that girl.

I decide to wear black jean shorts with a white singlet and this cute ¾ jacket that Isabel gave me for my birthday.

I grab my keys and run down the stairs that lead to the door.

“Mum im going?” I scream before running out.

I start my black convertible and drive to Maria’s house to pick her up.

On the way there I can’t help but think what happened yesterday.

I hate Tommy … he is the biggest jackass in the school.

He thinks that because his the captain of the football team he can have any girl that he wants … but his wrong.

He can’t have me, because nim starting to fall in love with a certain history teacher with dark hair and amber eyes.

I pull up at Maria’s house and push the horn.

BEEP BEEP

I see her run out and get into the front seat.

“That was quick” I say.

While starting the car and pulling on to the road, to make our way to school.

“I told you I had to talk” she says

“What’s up?”

“You remember last night how Tommy acted like a total dick?”

“Yeah” I say back.

“Well apparently Michael heard him saying that you two are together …”

I slam my foot on the breaks and freeze.

“What!!” I scream.

“That’s not all chika” she says and I don’t know if I can handle anymore.

“What else?” I ask.

“He said that you guys have gone all the way” she says and I hear the car behind me blow its horn.

I continue to drive in silence, not knowing what to say.

When I come to a red light I look over at Maria and see her looking at me in concern.

I give her a reassuring smile, but I I know she can see straight through it…

I pull up to the student car park and park my car.

We get out and I make sure to lock it.

We start to walk to the school building; there are not too many people around since we’re early.

We walk into the building and the first person I see is Tommy and his making his way over to me.

‘God if he says anything I swear I will break his nose’ I think to myself.

“Hey baby” he says when his standing in front of me.

“Hey dickhead” I say back hoping he gets the message.

I hear his friends from behind him go.

“Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh”

Guys are so immature sometimes.

“What’s wrong baby?” he asks and I wish I could slap that smile off of his face.

“You want to know what’s wrong.” I ask with a high tone.

“Yes I do baby” he says.
“What’s wrong is that you are going around telling people that we’re together when we’re no” I scream.

“Baby I’m sorry, I know you didn’t want to tell anyone, but they asked” he said still acting like we are a couple.

“You immature dickhead I would never go out with you” I say back and I hear his friends again.

“Ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh”

“Will you shut up” he screams back at them and they just look at each other

“Sorry” they mumble while stalking away.

“Liz I know you like me, and I like you to” he says.

“Tommy I do not like you”

“Then how come you call me Tommy?”

“That’s your name you idiot”.

“Why don’t you say you don’t like me” he asks trying to prove that I like him.

This guy is crazy.

“Are you deaf I do all the time” I shout back.

“Well sweetie I know you love me, its ok you don’t have to say it” he says loud and I see all the people crowed around us.

I look behind me and see Max standing there, leaning against the door frame of his class room.

Just how much of this has he heard?

Instead of wasting my time talking to him I remember a little saying…

‘Actions work better than words’

I slap him as hard as I can before stalking off into the other direction with Maria by my side telling me how good that was.

I hope Max now sees that I’m not with Tommy…


TBC ...
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LIZ P.O.V

Its period three and you know why I’m happy …?

Guess what subject I have?

That’s right history …. --(“V“)

I make my way to room 3 to see that Max still hasn’t arrived.

I take a seat next to Maria who was early to class for once.

I look behind her and see Michael … well now I know why she was early.

I look up and see Max making his way over to his desk.

He raises his eyes and sees me.

He winks, and I think I just melted.

I look at the door waiting for everyone to arrive.

Once everyone is seated he begins the lesion.

“ok class today we are going to be doing some revision” he says.

I tune out … all I see is him all I hear is his sweet voice.

I’m falling for the teacher … the teacher.

“Ok so just excise 1.4 and just the revision questions” he says.

I can’t help but smile he has the best voice.

Just as Max and I make eye contact a hear Tommy from behind me bend over his desk and whisper in my ear.

“I’ll see you in the eraser vroom later baby” I can hear the smile in his voice and feel disgusted.

I look up the front to see Max looking over at us with a raised eyebrow.

I have a bad feeling … I don’t know if its from the way he said it or from the tone he said it in, but it scares the shit out of me.

I do my work which turns out to be 2 questions and I must add that I love the work he gives us.

I look up to see him looking at me again and I can’t help but smile back at him.

I have to talk to him… I have no idea what I will say but I need to say something.

When everyone is finished their work we get time to sit and talk to each other while Max goes around learning more about everyone.

To tell you the truth … I can’t wait till he gets here but either way I’m still looking at him and at his fin as…

“Liz” I hear Maria say from beside me.

“Hey” I say back.

“I just wanted to check if your ok” she says and I arch my eyebrow.

“Why wouldn’t I be?” I ask.

“Well you were looking over at max and I couldn’t tell if you were dead or if you were just day dreaming about a bed and…..”

I cut her off before she can continue her sentence.

How does she know what I think about, am I that obvious.

“I am alive” I say back with a smile.

“So tell me how is everything with you and Michael?” I ask.

“It’s absolutely great” she says and I don’t think I have ever seen her smile so bright.

“That great” I say back, just as Michael turns around from his conversation with Alex and wraps his arms around her.

“You guys are too sweet” I here Alex say.

“To bad I don’t have a girl friend” he says looking over at Isabel who is listening.

“I would be sweeter” he adds.

I smile, he will never give up.

He has liked Isabel since … forever and he has told her all the time.

We all know that she likes him back, she’s just too shy to say so.

But I have feeling that’s going to change pretty soon…

“So this is another little group” I hear Max’s soft voice ask.

“Yeah, we’ve all been friends since forever” Isabel say while shoving my shoulder.

I hate the way that they all know who I like.

Its sooo unfair...

“So what are you guys into?” he asks and I wish I could say my answer.

In to you Mister Hottie …. But I choose not to. ,

“Michael” I hear Maria say from beside me and I giggle.

That girl really speaks her mind.

“Computers” I hear Alex say, I also her Isabel sigh.

“How about you parker?” he asks and I freeze.

“Music” I say.

I hope that’s as good answer.

“Really what kind” he asks while taking a seat.

“Umm...” I start to say but Maria interferes.

“You know the slow kind that you dance with somebody and you grind your lower…..” she says but Michael shoves his hand on to her mouth.

“I like all music, except for country” I say.

“Same” he says back and I can tell his trying not to laugh at Maria’s statement.

“So what are you into Max?” Isabel says from my left.

“I’m into a lot of things” he says while looking at me for a brief moment.

“Are you into girls or guys sir” I hear Tommy say from beside me.

I shake my head that guy is such a dickhead.

“Sorry Tommy, but I’m into girls” he says and we all burst out laughing.

“What about you Liz, are you into me?” he asks and I look up at Max to see him looking at me.

“I’m into guys, sorry” I say back and I turn around.

I can hear him cursing behind me and I smile in triumph.

Just then the bell rings and people start to leave.

I pack my things slowly … very slowly.

When the classroom is empty except for Max I make my way over to his desk.

I can’t believe I am doing this…

“Excuse me sir” I say while walking up to his desk.

“Can I help you?” he says rasing his eyes off of the book he is reading and making eye contact with me.

I think I am going to faint.

“Ummm, I was just wondering if you needed any help with anything” I say and I wish it had come out better.

“You see if I help then it gets to go on to my report and it will help with my grads and all” I say hoping he’ll say yes.

“Sure, why not” he says with a smile.

“great so umm, if you need a hand with something just tell me” I say while turning around ready to leave.

I just made my self look like a dickhead.

“Liz, now that you reminded me I do have a job you could do if your not busy that is?” he asks and I shake my head.

“I have a free period” I say back.

“Great well so do I” he says and I smile.

“There some papers in my office that had to be filed but I never got the chance to file them” he says while we make our way down the hall and into his office.

Which may I add is very very private.

We walk in and he closes the door behind us…

God help me…

TBC…


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LIZ P.O.V


I sit down on the floor and pick up the files.

I start to place them were they belong; I look over to Max who is helping me.

God he is so hot … and I’m alone in a room with him.

I wonder what it would feel like to date someone who is older that you… could age really matter.

There’s not that much of and age difference is there.

I begin to count 1, 2, 3 …. Could 15 years be too much?

“So he seems nice?” I hear Max say all of a sudden.

“Who?”

“Your boyfriend, Tommy” he says while lifting his eyes from the file he was reading.

“No Tommy isn’t my boyfriend” I say.

“His not?” he asks, I love the way he seems so interested … it can really give a girl hope.

“No his not, you see Tommy is a guy who is used to getting everything he wants, including girls” I say as I look into his sweet eyes.

“But I’m one thing he can’t have” I add.

I see him smile.

“I’m glad to see you can fight his charms” he says and I giggle.

“I have my eye on someone else” I say before I can stop the words from leaving my mouth.

I see him raise his eyes.

Oh great now he thinks that I like some other guy…

“Who?” he asks with a questioned look on his face.

“Umm well his tall, dark and handsom” I say not wanting to say that it is him.

“Does he know how you feel?” he asks and I shake my head.

“I don’t think so” I say slightly embarrassed.

“Well you should tell him” he says and I don’t think that that is such a great idea.

“I don’t think that will work” I say back.

“Well don’t give up” he says and I look into his eyes.

“I won’t” I reply.

BEEEEEEPPPP

The bell rings for the end of fourth period and I get up to leave.

“It was nice talking to you” I say as I grab on the door handle.

“And I wont give up” I say before leaving.

He has to be blind if he can’t see that I love him…


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Its 7.30 and I’m at work… this place really packs out at night.

Did I mention I work at the local alien themed café called The Crashdown?

Well I do and unfortunately so does Maria which means I’ll spend all my time listening to her screaming in my ear.

Don’t get me wrong I love the girl but damn she has a mouth and a half.

I hear the door jingle signalling that there is another customer.

I walk over to table 5 without looking up from my order pad, knowing that it is the only free table at the moment.

“Hi welcome to The Crashdown can I take your order?” I ask still looking at my order pad trying to take down my other order.

“Liz Parker” I hear his smooth voice say and I look up shocked.

“Hi Mr Evans” I say.

Oh great now he saw me in my work uniform.

Honestly who invented these things there totally ridiculous.

I have to wear a short green button up dress with silver buttons and a sliver alien logo on it.

But no it doesn’t stop there … I have to wear antennas.

“I didn’t know you worked” he said while looking at me up and down.

Great now he thinks I’m an idiot.

“Yeah I’ve worked here for ages, with Maria” I say turning around to where Maria was watching us.

She waves at Max and turns away to make it look like she wasn’t looking.

“Hhhhmmm” I hear someone chough, and turn to look at his friend.

Which is a girl…

“Umm Liz I’d like you to meet Tess, Tess I’d like you to meet my student Liz” he says while introducing us.

His student … Oh My God.

That’s all he thinks that I am, I’m such an idiot.

“It’s nice to meet you” I say putting on a fake mile.

“Yeah I’m sure it is” she says back …. Wow she’s a bitch.

“And just for the record honey, I’m his girlfriend” she says looking at me then back to Max and smiling.

“So ummm, can I get your order?” I say, not wanting to stay here anymore.

“Sure we’ll have two alien Blasts and two cherry colas” she says talking to me as if I’m a baby.

“Ok it will be ready in a sec” I say turning around to leave.

“It was nice meeting you” I say as I disappear into the back.

I sit down on the worker couch that is there for breaks and I put my head in my hands.

“Hay chika” Maria says as she comes through the swinging door.

“You ok?” she asks me with concern.

“Yeah” I say smiling as best as I can.

“So who is she?” she asks and I know exactly who she’s talking about.

“His girlfriend” I say.

“I thought he was single” she says thinking.

“So did I”

“Listen Ria can you do me the biggest favour?” I ask.

“Sure what’s up?” she asks wanting to know the favour.

“Can you take the order I have to get some air” I say standing and making my way to the back door which leads to outside.

“Sure chika” she says with total understanding and I know I’m lucky to have such a great friend.

I make my way outside…




TBC…
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Once I’m outside I let the tears fall freely.

I’m such an Idiot...

I should have known someone as cute as him would have a girlfriend.

But why would he deny it, why would he say he was single if he wasn’t.

I hear footsteps coming from behind me and turn to see who is coming.

I look but there is nobody there, I quickly try to make my way back inside but I feel a chill run down my spine as I see a figure step out from behind the trash cans.

I want to go back inside right now and I would but whoever it is, is blocking the door.

I start to back away.

I see the figure run towards me.

I start to run as fast as I can but I trip over a rock and fall face first on to the hard alley floor.

I turn around to see the figure standing above me.

I try to scream but I feel like I have lost my voice.

I watch in shock as he raises his hand, I stay perfectly still not knowing what to expect until it comes.

He slaps me across my face and knees over my pushing my body to the floor.

I bring my spear hand to my face and feel the blood drizzling from my lip.

“You ready for me?” I hear the figure say… I know that voice I think to myself.

I try to struggle against his grip but he brings both my hand up and hold them in place.

I finally find my voice and try to scream for help but he pushes his lips to mines and I bite his top lip instead.

“HELP” I scream out.

But I see nobody coming to help me.

The figure punchers my stomach and tells me to shut up.

He removes a object from his back pocket and I don’t know what it is until he flicks it open and reveals the shape blade.

“Shut up or I’ll cut your throat” he says while placing the blade to my throat.

He undoes his zipper and all I can do is look down helplessly as he pushes up my dress revealing my legs.

He places the knife on my stomach and pushes the blade, cutting me slightly.

I start to whimper out as I see him dropping his pants.

Then all see is him falling of me and onto the floor.

I see someone attacking my attacker.

I see the person walk up to me and finally recognise who he was.

“It’s ok Liz, your going to be ok” he says

Then everything goes black ….

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LIZ P.O.V



I wake up in a strange place that I don’t recognise.

I feel a throbbing pain coming from my head.

I reach down to my stomach and feel a cut and wince at the pain.

“You’re going to be ok” I hear his sweet voice say.

“It hurts”

“I know” he replies.

“Thankyou, for saving me Max” I say back to him as I try to sit up back end up flat on my ass.

“Aahh” I call out in pain.

He rushes over to me and helps me sit up.

“Do you know who he was?” he asks and I shake my head.

“No, but his voice it sounded familia” I reply.

“Its ok, you’re ok now” he says placing his hand on my shoulder.

I can’t help it, I breakdown and cry.

“Liz its ok, we can go to the police they will help” he says and I shake my head.

“No, you can’t please I don’t want to go” I say crying harder.

“It will be ok” he whispers into my ear.

“I’m scared”

“I know, but you’re here with me” he replies and I notice that I don’t even know where I am.

“Where are we?” I ask trying to recover from my sobs.

“You’re at my house, but I can take you home and you can stay with your parents if you want” he says and I shake my head.

“My parents aren’t home, they left after I went to school, they had to go on a business trip, and they always do” I say with a little sob.

“We’ll you can stay here and tomorrow I’ll drop you of at home” he says.

“No, I don’t want to be an inconvenience, I’m sure your girlfriend wouldn’t like that” I say as I try to stand but collapse on top of him.

“Liz you’re staying and that’s finial, ok?” he asks and I nod my head.

What else can I do, I mean I can’t move.

“What happened to your girlfriend?” I ask interested to see where she went.

“I called her from the car, I told her to catch a taxi and go home” he says while brushing a strand of hair back behind my ear.

“I’m sorry I ruined your date” I say apologetically.

“I’m glad you did, if you didn’t I would have had to stay and listen to Tess talk about her self” he says and I smile slightly.

“Do you think he’ll come back?” I ask wanting to know what he thinks.

“Not if I’m around” he says smiling back at me.

“It’s getting late you should go to sleep and get some rest” he says while caressing my check.

“It’s only 10.30 and tomorrow is a Saturday” I say back with a pout.

“Cute, but it’s not going to work Parker, you need your rest” he says and he leans down so close that I think he is going to kiss me.

But instead he picks me up and carries me up the stairs and to his bedroom where he places me on his bed and say.

“Goodnight”

“Where are you going?” I ask, not wanting him to go just yet.

“I’m going to go sleep on the couch” he says like it’s the most obvious thing in the world.

But I don’t want him to go … I want him to stay.

“Stay with me” I say before I can stop the words from leaving my mouth.

“Are you sure, I tend to take up a lot of room?” he says with an unsure smile.

“I’m sure” I say moving over to the right side of the bed, patting the spot next to me and waiting for him to lie down.

“Ok” he says as he lays down beside me.

“Goodnight Max” I say.

“Goodnight Liz” he says back.

And as soon as I close my eyes I’m asleep.

And the last thought in my head is ‘I’m in love’ …

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I wake up in strong arm and turn around.

I see Max is still asleep, but we are not in the same positions as last night.

Last night I was on the right side of the bed and Max was on the left…

But now we are tangled up under the cover with our legs twisted together, our bodies are touching and our arms are wrapped around each other.

I feel like shouting out with joy, but then again I remember why I’m here in the first place and I begin to feel nauseous.

I start to recall everything that happened in the alley, as my eyes start to close …

Dream…

I look behind me but there is nobody there, I try to make my way back inside but I feel a chill run down my spine as I see a someone step out from behind the trash cans.

I want to go back inside right, but the person is blocking the door.

I start to back away.

I see the person run towards me.

I start to run but I trip over a rock and fall face first on to the hard alley floor.

I turn around to see the figure standing above me.

I try to scream but I feel like I have lost my voice.

I watch in shock as he raises his hand, but I stay perfectly still.

I think… this is only a dream, only a dream.

He slaps me across my face and knees over my pushing my body to the floor.

I bring my spear hand to my face and feel the blood drizzling from my lip.

“You ready for me?” I hear the figure say… I know that voice I think to myself.

Only a dream…

I try to struggle against his grip but he brings both my hand up and hold them in place.

I finally find my voice and try to scream for help but he pushes his lips to mines and I bite his top lip instead.

“HELP” I scream out.

But I see nobody coming to help me...


I wake up breathing heavily, I see Max, who is know wide awake holding me while whispering in my ear.

“It was only a dream, his gone Liz” he says and I feel the first of many tears roll down my check.

“I know him” I say.

“What?” I fear him say pushing me slightly away so he can look at me in the eye.

“I know who he is”.


TBC …



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After what happened in bed Max helped me down the stairs and onto the lounge room.

I shiver as I hear the same voice as last night ring through my ear over and over again.

“You ready for me?”

There is no way I could ever forget that voice.

But now that I think about it, I guess it was obvious.

“Here you go” Max says while sitting down next to me, while handing me a glass of water.

“Thanks” I say, not really having the energy to say more.

I wipe my eyes and sit up straighter, waiting for him to ask the one question I know he want me to answer, but he doesn’t ask it.

“You’re going to stay here today” he says while looking at me.

“No, I’ll go home” I say look down at my hands.

I don’t want to be an inconvenience, what would his girlfriend think of that.

“It wasn’t a question, it was a statement” he says.

“I can’t stay, I’m sure you have a lot of things to do”

“No, I was just going to stay home and catch up with a good old friend of mine, the television” he says and I giggle.

“Fine I’ll stay, but only cause I like the television idea” I reply.

LIE … I’ll stay because I am head over heels in love with you.

“Ok, but I know you can’t resist” he says with a smile, and man is it true.

We sit down till we’re comfortable, and he pulls out some DVD’s.

I look in the pile and choose one I like while he does the same.

I picked, ‘A cindarella story’.

Max picked, ‘House of wax’.

“Ok” I say.

“Ok to what?” he asks not knowing what I’m saying.

“I’ll watch ‘House of wax’, I would never pass a movie were you get to see Paris Hilton die” I say and I see him smile.

“I think she’s kind of hot” he says and I die.

“Really?” I ask wanting him to say that he was lying.

His supposed to think I’m hot not her.

“But I think your cuter” he adds and I blush.

“Cuter is soo babyish” I say with a pout.

“Well, I think cuter is sexier” he says while placing the DVD in the machine and turning on the television.

‘Did he just say that?’ I think to myself.

No he didn’t I’m still dreaming…

He turns around and sits on the couch again, while winking at me.

Oh My God…

“Thanks” I say not really knowing how to thank him.

“No problem cutie” he says while grinning.

I think I’m in heaven.

We make eye contact and we start to lean in…

Oh My God … this is not happening.

When we are mare inches from each other, I hear the sound of the movie starting and jump.

Why the hell do they have to put scary music?

He turns around and puts the music a bit lower.

This is going to be toucher…



TBC…

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When I said, that siting down through a whole movie with Max was going to be toucher.

That was an understatement.

The movie was scarier than I thought it would be.

So every 5 minuets I would find myself in his arms and we would be that much close to kissing.

Not that I’m complaining.

When the movie ended we decided to eat some lunch, since we woke up late and it was already 12.30.

I must admit I enjoy his company.

We are now sitting on the living room couch watching TV and eating.

“So tell me about your parents” I hear him ask and I don’t want to sound like a bitch but did he have to ruin the moment.

“What’s there to tell, I don’t like them and they don’t like me” I say.

“Of corse you like your parents, I mean how could you not?” he asks.

“I’m adopted, the Parkers aren’t my real parents and sometimes I think the only reason they keep me around is for an image” I say back.

I have never ever told anyone my secret, but I guess I trust Max.

“What do you mean for an image?”

“Like if they have me, and I have to be the perfect child, so everyone can see that they’re perfect and trust them” i say.

“But they shouldn’t” I add.

“Let’s just say that they’re bad people” I say and I really want to change the subject.

“Ok” he says while giving me a slight smile.

“How about your family?” I ask wanting to know more about him.

Spending all this time with him has made me forget about the fact that his my history teacher and that he is 15 years older than me.

“Ummm, well my dads a lawyer and my mums his sectary. I have a brother called Zan and his younger, but we’re a great happy family” he says and I wish I could have the same.

“That’s great” I say with a smile but it doesn’t reach my eyes.

“So who old are you again?” I ask praying that he will change his answer.

“23” he says.

Wait a second did he just say what I think he said.

“I thought you were 32?” I say raising my eyebrow in question.

“I-I am, w-what I meant is I-I was 23” he says.

“Why did you lie?” I ask, but don’t get me wrong this is great.

“You see I finished collage early and I became a teacher straight away, but some people don’t like that, they want more experience teachers” he says and I cup his face in my hands.

“I get it” I say while smiling slightly.

“You did it so you could get your job, but I knew there was no way you were 32, you look like your still 17” I add and I smile him smile in return.

He starts to lean down and I can only pray that we don’t get interrupted.

And we don’t…


TBC…




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I feel his soft lips on mine.

I sigh and I feel his tongue side in to my mouth.

This is a dream come true…

I start to think about that girl at the Crashdown who claimed to be his girlfriend, but I couldn’t care less as I feel him lift me up and place me in his lap.

We continue to kiss passionately and I soon lose all concentration as I feel his hand disappear under my shirt.

Did I forget to mention that I am borrowing his clothes, and I feel so safe in them.

He pulls away and I see him fighting for control.

“Liz we can’t” he says while shaking his head.

“We can” I say while nodding and cupping his face in both my hands.

“Liz I’m still 6 years older than you” he adds and I shake my head.

“I’m turning 18 next month” I add.

“5 years is a lot and not to mention the fact that I’m your history teacher” he says trying to convince me… and him self.

“Max, I like you” I blurt out before I can stop myself.

“I like you a lot and I don’t care what other people think” I add.

“I like you too” he says but I see the doubt in his eyes.

“But you should be with someone young, someone like Tommy” he say and I jump up off the couch and nearly trip over.

Max grabs me from around the waist and I see the concern in his eyes.

“No” I say and I feel uncomfortable again.

“Liz what’s wrong?” I hear Max ask as he try’s to still my movement.

I’m struggling to get the thought out of my heads and I feel the tears flow down my checks freely.

“Liz”

“Tommy tried to rape me” I scream out stopping and falling to the floor, cry.

“Tommy was the guy from last night” I add, and I look up to see Max’s shocked face.

TBC…


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