thank u so much, i took a real pleasure to read ur fbs
extingman- thank u for taking ur time to analyse that fic but i just want to add that Max is a spoiled actor, i mean no one dislikes him, no one has the yearning to say something wrong to him, they adore him. but when it comes to Liz, he really loves her but he doesn't know how he could make her believe it and he is frustrated...hence the scene in the car.
and don't worry i won't be offend
dreamer19- like i said he's frustrated and u're completely right they just saw each other after a very long absence
QTgirl- don't worry i was just kidding.
roswellluver- thank u for ur fidelity
0megaRam1- good analyse too, i'm pleased to have surprised u

and let me tell that u did it back when u said that u want Liz and Max lock in a room, i was relieved to read that that was for fixing things between them
i'd like to say to all that if Liz couldn't do the lovemaking scenes, it's not necessary because of Max, she didn't know herself why, but she said that she didn't get used to shoot that....
here's another part, i hope u'll enjoy
Chapter 8
Liz was breathless when she reached Jake's office, everyone was looking at her when she entered and Jake's assistant ran to her boss's office to announce him Liz Parker's here.
Jake went to welcome her but stopped when he saw her. She was dishevelled, her eyes red and black because of the make up and she was breathing very hard...
Jake- Liz! What happened to you? Someone tried to attack you?
Liz- In a c...cer....tain ....way.....yes! please....give....me....some...t...time...
Jake- Of course! come on in and take a seat....Shany, can you bring a glass of water for Liz, please?
She drunk silently, trying to gather her thoughts...she was still furious against Max but first she had to recover her breathe, she admitted that running like that in the streets was not so smart....
Liz- Sorry, Jake...i didn't want to scare you, i ran along the streets to come here that why i'm in that state...i hope i'm not too awful!
Jake- You could never be awful....That's the opposite, now that i see you dishevelled, you look great like this!
Liz- Are you kidding! Great? you're very kind for me....
Jake- Do you feel better now?
Liz- Completely, thank you...
Jake looked at her, without knowing where to begin...Max had called him this morning to tell him that they wanted to talk to him. As he gave them the script, he was sure that she was here to discuss about it, but where was Max...he dare not to ask to her afraid to bother her. He wait until she was ready to talk.
Liz- Jake, i'm sure you're wondering where is Max and why i am here....
Jake- You're right but i didn't want to bother you with my questions.
Liz- Thank you.........Jake, we had a big argument with Max earlier................. and i don't think he will be there....
Max- You're wrong, my dear Liz....i'm here, i've promised to come and i always hold my promises.
Jake- Max....happy to see here..........................Look, Max i'd like to talk with Liz first, not that i don't want to talk to you but i think that i'll be gallant for once. I'm sure you don't mind?
Max was staring at Liz, he didn't intend to come but after reflecting he decided to come and fix things with her. He agreed that he overreacted earlier in the car and he wanted to apologize to her... the sooner will be the better.
Max- Jake, i don't mind if you let me talk to her one second before. I need to do something immediatly.
Jake turned towards Liz to see if that bothered her...
Jake- Liz? Do you agree?
Liz- I don't know what Max could have to say but i'll let him talk...
Jake- Ok, i'm outside in the next office, when you'll finish come and tell me.
Max- Thank you Jake...
Jake- I don't think you'll thank me after your conversation.
Jake went out leaving the 2 actors in an awkward silence. Max was trying to see what damages their previous conversation had had on her...But she refused to let him look at her, she gave him her back.
Max- Liz....please....i need you to look at me...
Liz- It's the same for me, i can hear what you have to say like this.
Max- I'm sure...but I can't...
Furious, Liz turned round.....her eyes were shining with anger....without caring about people who could hear them, she yelled on him...
Liz- What? The famous Max Evans needs to have people fascinated by his little person? You can't stand to see someone indifferent to you? Ok, i'm looking at you now...so what do you have so important to say that i didn't already know. Cause, remind me, you let me walk here?
Max- Liz....please.....
Liz- Stop Liz me and please me! will you? ok, talk i'm listening...even if....but go ahead!
Max- Thanks....
For the first time since long, Max didn't know how to act before someone...but Liz was not someone....she was Liz, the woman he was waiting for since he ended the Art School...since her....In the car, alone, he has realised that he was loving her since the Art School and he wasted his time with some others instead of confessing his true feelings to her.
Max- Liz...i behave like the worst jerk with you and i'd to apologize to you. You didn't deserve what i did earlier, but i was so hurt.....no, you've touched at my pride, and me, you're right, the famous Max Evans, i didn't tolerate that. But i was wrong...i'm wrong Liz. I could give up everything for you, if you wanted. I'm not playing Liz....i don't try to manipulate you, that's not my nature.................I love you Liz.....
Max stopped there a while to see how Liz was reacting to his word...but she was the same, wrapped in her anger, closed....he just saw her gasp when he said that he loved her and that's what gave him the courage to continue....
Max- Liz, look at me...
But Liz was looking straight before her and was not ready to surrender.
Max- Ok, if you don't want to look at me, it doesn't matter....Liz, i want us to return to what we were at the Art School, when we were hanging out, laughing.....talking for hours about our future... I couldn't have a future if you're not with me to live it...I don't care about Tess...i've decided to break up with her, she was not my girlfriend....just a woman when i was boring with myself i guess...
Liz made him startled when she cried out about that last phrase.
Liz- You're really a jerk, you know. So that's it, you take that woman when you're boring and now you want to throw out like a garbage...She's human, you have no right to use her like this for your pleasure. What kind of people you are? Do you think that you can take everything for granted...get down from your throne, Max, now before you fall..Continue like this, and you'll be alone without anyone to love you.
Max was in a complete shock...Whatever he did, whatever he said, that turned against him.. she hated him that much?
Max- You hated me that much, Liz? Why?
Liz- I've told you Max, the world is not turning around you and only you. I don't hate you, i'm don't feel anything for you.
Max- That's worse!
Liz- Sure, for someone like you.
Max- For anyone, Liz. If you don't feel anything for people, you're dying....
Liz- I've never said that i didn't feel anything for people....we were talking about you.....are you so full of yourself that you think that you're representing all the people on the world?
Max- Liz, i see that whatever i say, whatever i did, i'm wrong in your eyes. I don't know what i could do for you to forgive me. Even if i'm here, apologizing to you, that's not enough for you. And you said that i'm full of myself...Geez, look at you for once, and you'll see who is full of itself....
Liz- Let me remind you that you threw me out of your car and you didn't take a look to see if i was ok or not...I've told you, i'm not a garbage, i'm not a whore...if that's the kind of women you're used to know, i'm sorry, i'm out of your pleague.
Max- Liz we're going to work together, please, we're compelled to make the peace...
Liz- Sorry but you're wrong! if you weren't arrived, i'd have talked with Jake and seen with him what we could do with that film. He counts on us and i'm not used to let people down.
Max- That means that you agree to shoot that film?
Liz- That means that i've to talk with Jake first and you'll see.
Max- Maybe i deserve how you're treating me.....
Liz- Come on Max, i'm sure you're not the kind of man who gave the second cheek to be slap...
Max- I've nothing more to say to you, you destroyed each of my apologizes..But, i repeat to you that i'm sorry for my behavior with you and i hope that some day, you'll be able to forgive me.
Liz- I don't think that you'll stop yourself from living while you're waiting for my forgiveness. I'm not worried about you, you're a big boy with a lot of women around you. I'm sure you'll replace Tess easily. Ok, now that we talked, could you please go and tell to Jake that i'm ready to talk to him.
Max- Sure....and Liz....
Liz- I'm fed up of that Max, stop it.
Max bent his head and went out to look for Jake. He lost the only woman he ever loved and he felt like if he had lost a part of himself...
TBC............if you want it....
the way he looks into her eyes.....